- Apr 2014
it empowers the entire scientific community by enabling new advancements and tools for scholarly communication.
What kind of advancements?
science will produce improved results and better serve the community.
How will the results be improved and in what way will the community be better served?
I expect you explain how later in the document and provide examples, but to strengthen the intro and capture your readers give the a teaser of what's to come if they continue reading.