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  1. Sep 2019
    1. Initially, Chanel Miller did not want the world to know her name. If the world didn't know her name, it would mean that she had never been found half-naked behind a Stanford University dumpster "with her underwear six inches away from her bare stomach." It would mean that she had never been sexually assaulted by a stranger.

      Strong delayed lead. The writer chose to tell the story before she jumped into the news. This method grabs the reader and is very affective.