On 2017 Sep 18, Jennifer A Lyon commented:

I noticed a couple of very minor text editing issues in this article. I'm only commenting because the first one accidentally results in a rather amusing read.

In the results, across pages 4-5, note the sentence "Patients with confirmed bacteremia had a more severe respiratory affection than those with no bacteria identified in blood." I suspect the authors meant either 'infection' or 'affliction' rather than 'affection.' I doubt the patients' respiratory systems were more affectionate in response to the presence of bacteremia. Nothing vital here, but it did give me a quick laugh.

In the next paragraph on page 5 there's simple typo: simultaneously is misspelled as "simltaneously."

On 2017 Sep 18, Jennifer A Lyon commented:

I noticed a couple of very minor text editing issues in this article. I'm only commenting because the first one accidentally results in a rather amusing read.

In the results, across pages 4-5, note the sentence "Patients with confirmed bacteremia had a more severe respiratory affection than those with no bacteria identified in blood." I suspect the authors meant either 'infection' or 'affliction' rather than 'affection.' I doubt the patients' respiratory systems were more affectionate in response to the presence of bacteremia. Nothing vital here, but it did give me a quick laugh.

In the next paragraph on page 5 there's simple typo: simultaneously is misspelled as "simltaneously."