8 Matching Annotations
- Oct 2020
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The NFI article appears to be more focused on fatherhood as a topic, and is directed to a very particular audience. “My Girls and me” is aimed at Guardian readers who have interests beyond fatherhood.
Link- back to point
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Although this could function as a warning to parents, the purpose of the article tends to be more entertaining, giving insight into celebrity lives.
Explanation
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By contrast, the article in The Guardian, “My girls and me”, is used as an example to show the consequences of too passive parenting.
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intending to ‘invest’ through providing early and full emotional support to their child/children. This articles conveys a simple message, which is, “you get what you give”, which is a very fundamental and crucial concept to grasp when paying attention to parenting techniques.
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The article on the National Fatherhood Initiative assumes that readers have an interest in improving themselves
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Both the texts write for a similar audience,
Main point
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use of an extended metaphor, using “financial lingo”
Evidence- the writer points out specific evidence supporting his point that the purpose of the article is to convey the significance of emotionally investing in your children.
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conveys the significance of emotionally investing in your children when they are young and being a ‘present father’
Point- the writer states the point of the article
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