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  1. Apr 2017
  2. lti.hypothesislabs.com lti.hypothesislabs.com
    1. Why am I treated so bad

      This question is addressed in many rap songs, and even in some of Michael Jackson's pop hits.

    2. raw element in ourcultural expression precisely to remind us who we are, and to affirm that we do not ever want toforget or give up the fight against our condition of forced submission to alien conquerors

      Also, as my essay is about the mourning for the death of Michael Jackson, a great African American pop icon, this idea of the deeper meaning of his music could be worked into my argument of why it was hard for people to let him go. They were not only loosing a great singer, but someone who created music that might help them connect to their history and culture.

    3. retain our culture of resistance and alternativerather than be about submission and assimilation

      Therefore, rap and pop music is no just about fighting injustice, but retaining history.

    4. constrictions of enslavement and colonialism

      Just as Jazz and Blues, music which relies heavily on the nonverbal, was born out of the "constrictions of enslavement and colonialism," so rap and pop, music which is heavily word-based, emerges as African Americans gain a stronger voice in society.

    5. being the creative people weare, we not only developed our own approach to the master's tongue, but we went one better:

      This point about English not being their native tongue makes the genre of rap music all the more impressive as rap is about a mastery of the English language just as much as it is about the beat behind it.

    6. mere commercial diversion

      This makes me wonder if Michael Jackson, in choosing to write pop songs instead of jazz or blues, was ever accused of simply doing it for the money. Did people see his music as an expression of African American culture and history like that which is described in this article?

    7. poetically subversive core, an explosive essenceof irreconcilable revolt against the shameful limits of an unlivable destin

      This is a fantastic quotation. While it is discussing blues and jazz specifically, I think that it could fairly be extended to be true of all African American music. Thus this definition of the spirit of African American music could be used as either argument or motive. Argument for an essay centered around a discussion of Michael Jackson's works- possibly one that focuses on the deeper meaning, or beneficial elements to his music. It could also be motive for an essay on Michael Jackson as it does provide a meaning to African American music that goes beyond simple entertainment. Not only is this music a link to the past, but it is a present expression of revolt against all the injustices performed against them, and a promise to keep fighting towards an "unlivable destiny."

    8. blues and jaz

      Here, the article only references blues and jazz, but the spirit of African American music is definitely seen in hip hop and even some pop as well, as rap music continues to expose the truth of racism and songs like Michael Jackson's "Beat it" question the unfair exclusion of African Americans that continues today.

    9. naked word and the naked gesture

      For Michael Jackson, both the word and gesture were important as so much of the spirit of his music translated into his dance.

    1. who wouldn't dream of using the f-word

      I like how this is the description she chooses to use- it sharply contrasts the image of a mother with the young men who rap and constantly use such language. It points out that those words are not common place, despite their frequency in rap music.

    2. Rap music is essential to the struggle against sexism because it takes us straight to the battlefield

      We discussed this in class- how rap music attempts to address "real life" issues, no matter how messy.

    3. What you gonna do?" Perhaps it was because we were being acknowledged as a com

      While I personally like the term "ladies" (perhaps because of its use in "ladies and gentleman") I can see how it could be used negatively in song. Also, I like that she acknowledges that sometimes, it is just nice to be sung about, despite the context.

    4. d take rides in his fresh O.J. If we were being objectified (and I guess

      The non-committal nature of this seems to point to the fact that she still doesn't really care. And the continuing objectification of women in music is due to this apathy.

  3. Mar 2017
    1. Then I feel, Harry, that I have given away my whole soul to some one who treats it as if it were a flower to put in his coat, a bit of decoration to charm his vanity, an ornament for a summer’s day

      It is interesting that Basil can see some of Dorian's faults, yet still holds him up as kind of an infallible innocent that can do no wrong.

      Looking Back: I think this is explained later when Basil is talking to Dorian right before he is murdered. He professes that he has heard dreadful rumors about Dorian, but they can't possibly be true, because Dorian is still so beautiful. This goes back to the idea of people unjustly relating inner and outer beauty. (which I don't agree with, by the way, but the novel obviously does).

    2. I see things differently, I think of them differently. I can now re-create life in a way that was hidden from me before

      The way he writes about the effect of Dorian is almost like an encounter with the Divine, as if he has seen some great beauty that has redefined the world. The theme of Beauty being the ultimate power, I think is presented, then challenged throughout the novel.

      Looking back: The theme seems to be inner beauty contrasted with outer beauty. Throughout the novel, everyone seems to relate the two, thinking that someone so attractive cannot possibly be evil, and this is what causes Basil's ultimate downfall. So it is that people give power to attractiveness and beauty, not that it has its own power to affect change.

    3. No artist desires to prove anything

      Much of literature is to prove a point or to demonstrate an idea in story form. Like Atlas Shrugged or Anthem, or even Cesare's A Tempest, where Caliban is a symbol for colonialism. To not use art to express values and arguments is to miss an opportunity.

    4. moral or an immoral book

      I disagree with this. I think that a book can be immoral, not if it deals with immoral things, but if if it makes the reader think immoral thoughts or pushes the reader to immoral actions. People can be affected by literature in profound ways, and it is the authors responsibility to make sure that this is not a negative effect.

    5. He seized it, and stabbed the canvas with it, ripping the thing right up from top to bottom

      This kind of bugs me, that his death comes without him seeing it coming. I feel that he never really grasps the evil of his actions. I suppose that it can work, as he dies following a random impulse, just as random impulses and his inability to restrain them got him in so much trouble in life. I just think that if he was going to die by his own hand, he should know what is happening. Is anyone else displeased with the ending?

    6. He had no curiosity

      Yet Basil did have a "mysterious disappearance" once before, as mentioned in the first chapter. Was that ever explained? I think I missed it if it was.

    7. Alan Campbell’s suicide

      There is another death that Dorian is recently responsible for, yet he doesn't seem affected by it. Dorian seems to have lost all concept for good and evil, despite his talk of wanting redemption.

    8. I should have thought they had got tired of that by this tim

      Dorian speaks about such little acts as not completely ruining a random girl's life as if they are his redemption, yet he still has a murder hanging over his head.

    9. think I have altered

      It is going to take quite a lot for me to believe that.

    10. what a life that is

      Everyone else seems to realize the flaws in Dorian's life philosophy, and that in living in such a manner, he is missing out on so much and living in corruption, yet Dorian seems blind to the value of any other method of living, despite his study of the world. Is he incapable of doing good since he made his bargain, or is it simply his choices that drove him down such a dark path?

    11. indifferent

      Slightly random comment: indifference also seems to be a theme in the novel- Lord Henry's character is initially more indifferent to what people thought of him and that was what fascinated Dorian. Also, As Dorian became more like Lord Henry, he lost his boyish enthusiasm and became more cynical and indifferent to life in general. Basil, the noble character in the novel, never stopped caring deeply about things and he never lost his moral character, although it didn't seem to do him much good in the end.

    12. Ah! I was waiting for you to call me Dorian

      Again, the power of the name- this time the power comes in speaking it, not in secrecy, because using his first name denotes familiarity, which means he is more inclined to help. What is the novel trying to say about the value of one's name?

    13. Basil Hallward

      An odd bout of conscience that I didn't think Dorian was capable of. Still, it didn't

    14. But youth smiles without any reaso

      So he does still have the qualities of youth, more than just the appearance.

    15. Can’t you see your romance in it

      An answer to my earlier question! I wonder if Basil is correct in saying that there was "nothing evil in it, nothing shameful," as it is never truly just to worship someone to such an extent. It always ends up hurting either you or the subject of your affections.

    16. it was his own picture

      At the beginning, Basil stated that he put so much of himself into the painting. I wonder if any of that can still be seen?

    17. You have had more to do with my life than you think.

      Basil tried so hard to be a positive influence on Dorian and to keep him pure and innocent, yet in the end, with his painting, he unconsciously ruined him. How much of the events of the book are Basil's fault? Can he take any of the blame? All of it?

    18. I don’t know whether it is so or no

      Despite all the evidence, Basil is still dubious as to the evil of Dorian's character. Is this his affection for Dorian still lingering, or is it the power of his outward appearance?

    19. It cannot be concealed

      There seems to be a recurring theme of the power of secrecy. The secrecy of concealing one's name, the mystery of personality, and now concealing sins. Dorian has the unique ability to keep his sins from showing on his face and this gives him the power to instill trust in others and to keep a good name.

    20. ewels

      He is most certainly drawn to beauty, as all of his occupations- music, jewels, etc.- share that element in common. Perhaps he is looking for something that can inspire him as he inspired Basil.

    21. and from time to time strange rumors about his mode of life crept through London and became the chatter of the club

      Dorian is beginning to build a celebrity despite not displaying any particular talent. This lends credence to the belief one can be a true celebrity based only on their character and exploits that catch the public's eye.

    22. key

      Lots of talk about the key and locks in this chapter, Now that Dorian is no longer innocent, and has something to hide, secrecy and security now become essential.

    23. t would be always alive.

      It would always be alive, but would Dorian? Did he exchange the chance to live a true life for the facade of eternal youth, where he can experience pleasures, but never truly feel alive?

    24. even for an hour, in a room to which any of his friends had access.

      Hiding the portrait could represent how he now feels that he has sins to hide, something to be ashamed of.

    25. He was too clever and too cynical to be really fond of

      The death of Sibyl seems to have really changed Dorian. Before he seemed to look up to lord Henry as a sort of infallible giver of wisdom. Now, he doesn't even like him that much.

    26. “They don’t know my name

      Again, the connection between keeping your name secret and the power it provides.

    27. Sibyl dead

      Sibyl was the last thing that made him question the poisonous thoughts Lord Henry had planted, and when he rejected her, his last innocence and goodness died. Was this his last chance for redemption?

    28. of almost scientific interest.

      The lack of emotion is somewhat disturbing. Although if he truly lost his soul in the bargain, I suppose it is understandable.

    29. What have I to do with the puppets of a play

      Sibyl, when she finds someone she loves, is willing to give up fantasy and begin living in reality, but Dorian, true to form, refuses to awaken and is instead upset that Sibyl is interrupting his dream. Ever since he stopped aging and denied the realities of life, Dorian stopped truly living and instead moves vainly through the world in search of pleasure.

    30. She looked charming

      Just looking the part is not enough in the play, and in the end, Dorian finds that this is true for real life as well, as his increasingly foul character gets more and more noticed.

    31. I have known everything,

      Socrates would mark Lord Henry a fool for this remark.

    32. I am changed, and the mere touch of Sibyl Vane’s hand makes me forget you and all your wrong, fascinating, poisonous, delightful theories.

      Sibyl makes him want to be better, makes him feel young and alive and forget the "poisonous" words of Lord Henry. A comparison between true youth and love and the cynical, self-indulgent view of the world Lord Henry encourages.

    33. When is she Sibyl Vane?” “Never.

      Does Dorian truly love Sibyl if she is never herself?

    34. Romeo and Juliet

      Why Romeo and Juliette? Possibly because of instant love and a tragic end.

    35. hat is one of Harry’s views, isn’t it, Mr. Gray

      The first view Lord Henry imparted was that man should avoid being influenced by other men, yet Dorian has become a student of Henry to the extent that he has few original views. Yay, irony!

    36. Dorian Gray was reclining in a luxurious arm-chair

      We first see Lord Henry reclining in luxury on a divan, waiting for Basil and now, with this time jump, we come to Dorian reclining in luxury waiting for Lord Henry. Already, the similarities are showing.

    37. must go,

      The first time Dorian makes a conscious decision to pursue his new world-view.

    38. Before which Dorian?

      Is there a difference yet? Or is this foreshadowing the difference in the future?

    39. you are dry, you shall be varnished, and framed, and sent home

      Another reminder that it is just a painting, despite all of the meaning given to it by all of the characters.

    40. It is part of myself

      Again, the theme of Identity: both Basil and Dorian identify very closely with the painting that is nothing "but canvas and color."

    41. t is quite finished,

      The portrait of Dorian couldn't be finished until he had heard and accepted the words of Lord Henry. As Henry says later when Dorian shows acceptance of Henry's ideas: "It is the real Dorian Gray,—that is all"

    42. with wilful paradox in them

      Dorian realizes that Lord Henry is speaking nonsense, so why do they affect him so much?

    43. the world would gain such a fresh impulse of joy

      Self-contradiction- If the influence of others is bad, shouldn't this man's influence bring others further from their own self realization?

    44. To realize one’s nature perfectly,—that is what each of us is here for.

      Yet what is the point of truly coming to know and perfect yourself if you end up existing in a vacuum? According to Henry, you cannot realize your nature if you don't have human interaction, but what is the point of a perfect nature if you cannot use it to better the world?

    45. All the candor of youth was there, as well as all youth’s passionate purity.

      Youth seems to not only be associated with the vitality of young age, but also with innocence and good character. Dorian seems to act very much like a child in the way he talks to Basil and the reverence and respect for his elders and this is the personality that Basil so reverences.

    46. personality of Dorian Gray

      Why does Basil keep referring to Dorian's "personality" as his motivation when all his evidences point to him to be merely entranced by his beauty?

    47. You like every one; that is to say, you are indifferent to every one

      Wise words from Basil finally challenging Lord Henry's snarky remarks.

    48. mere personality was so fascinating that, if I allowed it to do so, it would absorb my whole nature, my whole soul, my very art itself

      Yet Dorian's whole personality and outlook on life is able to be changed with in one evening conversation with Lord Henry. This makes me doubt that it was very strong to begin with.

    49. Dorian Gray

      Here, I can more believe he would use a full name, as opposed to earlier when he referenced him in passing. Sorry, nitpicking. I will stop now.

    50. I can believe anything, provided that it is incredible

      This looks like a quote that would be on Pinterest. Lord Henry is full of them.

    51. I believe

      I would be more inclined to trust Basil's beliefs if he was not proved wrong so drastically in his beliefs about Dorian.

    52. Dorian Gray’

      Why did he use his full name? I mean other than to reveal his full name to us and Lord Henry. When I am talking about someone in passing, I would be more inclined to just use the first name. Minor plot convenience though, it can be forgiven.

    53. It is better not to be different from one’s fellows.

      Basil really seems to believe this philosophy, as evidenced by his not wanting to display his "best work" as Lord Henry put it so as not to draw attention to himself. While Basil himself may enjoy painting, he doesn't want his skill to be known to distinguish him from others.

  4. Feb 2017
    1. The peculiar simultaneity of malignancy and softness in the Byronic character type meant that women were able to place themselves in the role of Byron's benevolent reformer.

      This is the major claim of the paragraph. The persona Byron created in his writing is connected to Byron himself in the minds of his readers and the softness that underlies even his evil deeds draws women to him with the idea they can help.

    2. emotional investment

      Key term: The basis of the special relationship between Byron and his readers that made him more than an ordinary poet and turned his readers into fans. The emotional connection Byron's readers feel to him transforms him into one of the characters of his novels and bestows upon him a personality that his fans can connect to.

    3. letters demonstrate how the Byronic persona encouraged a deep emotional investment from Byron's readers.

      Main theme: There is evidence that Byron's fans thought they had a personal connection to him.

    4. Byron's melancholy

      Key term: Byron's brooding element that aids him in forming such emotional poetry and is at the basis of so much of his character. Throsby equates Byron's melancholy with his Rebel character stating that together, these draw women to him with the idea that they can help.

    5. reform

      Main theme: Many of Byron's fans feel that they would be able to impact him in a real way because they think that they know him through his writing. Key Term: Byron made many mistakes and discrepancies in England, and this added to his fame, yet many women were willing to forgive his faults because they believe they saw in his writing a desire for reform. The idea of reform permeated Byron's celebrity interactions because many people saw him as living in sin and put it upon themselves to change that.

    6. Byron's formation of what Dyer would call 'the Rebel' character type and its strong appeal to women.

      Main theme: the Rebel persona that Byron creates for himself, whether true or not, is what draws this female attention.

    7. he Rebel' character type

      Key term: A persona that attracts interest by not conforming. Dyer defines Byron's celebrity persona with "the Rebel" character type.

    8. Byronic persona

      Keyterm: The celebrity that Byron created that was his personality in public and that showed throughout his writings. Throsby connects the Byronic persona to Byron's social successes.

    1. . The opinion of Dr. Johnson on the Poems of a noble relation of mine,* “That when a man of rank appeared in the character of an author, his merit should be handsomely acknowledged,” can have little weight with verbal, and still less with periodical, censors, but were it otherwise, I should be loth to avail myself of the privilege, and would rather incur this bitterest censure of anonymous criticism, than triumph in honours granted solely to a title.

      In class exercise.

    2. Poetry, however, is not my primary vocation

      In class exercise.

  5. Jan 2017
    1. “to this sin;

      Byron seems very self-deprecating in this prologue and seems to see poetry as more of a distraction from living than anything very important. I wonder if this view of poetry and his poetic ability changed after his rise to fame, or if he was constantly doubting his skill even with all the confirmation.

    1. Lamb,

      While the movie shows Byron very affected by this liaison, it also mentions that he had many such affairs while abroad- the difference being that now there are more obvious consequences to his actions. However, this doesn't seem to influence his future actions, except for an effort to keep some of his affairs more secret.