make this "bestehen"

Very cool visualization!

make it "zeigen nicht"

Sounds a bit off. Maybe make it "Wo in Deutschland fahren die meisten E-Autos?"

use either Gebrauchtwagenmarkt or Sekundärmarkt in the entire article

see my comment above: private buyers actually do benefit form this but indirectly, as argued in this article. Change phrasing of this accordingly

this sounds very off, maybe more like "Der China-Faktor: Günstige Modelle und mehr Plug-in

in which year did they? and does this refer to the entire market or BEV?

make it "dasselbe Muster wie der alte Umweltbonus"

Earlier in the article, the opposite is argued: That private buyers actually do benefit from this, indirectly. Would change the phrasing here a bit to account for that

Add in the copy text of the graphic: BEV-Marktanteil bei Neuzulassungen in Ländern, ...

Again, wouldn't need the questions here

By what measurement? I would expect them to be No 1 or 2 by BIP

this number seems wrong, isn't it ca. 50 %? I would delete the sentence in any case because the prior sentence makes the point clear already

would give the percentages for Sweden and Finland here in parentheses

Very cool visualization!

Could delete this here because this statement has been made a couple of times already up to this point, it's a bit redundant

This is not entirely true, is it? The Steuervorteil is a form of staatliche Förderung, I'd say

make it "Die Erklärung liegt darin, dass der Übergang zum E-Auto in zwei Geschwindigkeiten stattfindet"

What exactly is the paradox? If 50% prefer a combustion engine, that means that 50% prefer a BEV or such? Do the actual numbers show "the opposite" as the next sentence claims? This needs to cleared up

Is this true for the German market or globally? I'm a bit surprised the number is supposed to be that low in Germany

as above, I personally wouldn't need these questions here and if anything, would prefer them as sub-headlines for the single section within this chapter

make this: "Doch die Dominanz des Firmenmarkts ist kein Problem, sondern möglicherweise der Wegbereiter einer echten Elektrowende."

what is this?

make this "Für Privatpersonen gilt dagegen:"

delete this, it's already explained earlier

make this "Seit Ende der Boni hat sich das Verhältnis nachhaltig verschoben"

After this, it first turned around because private buyers made use of the Umweltbonus before it ran out in December 2023. This should be acknowledged

Make this more precise: "Seit Ende der Umweltboni findet bei den ..."

make this "Das Förderprogramm der neuen Bundesregierung"

delete "neue" here to make it "Die Erholung"

make this "Letzterer"

make this "unterscheidet

make this "Unsere aktualisierte Projektion"

maybe add a link to it?

delete "neue" here

make it "die den vollen Listenpreis ohne Steuervorteile zahlen"

make it "bei Privatnutzung müssen nur 0,25 % des Bruttolistenpreises als geldwerter Vorteil monatlich versteuert werden"

use this the first time "BEV" is mentioned in the article so it is clear from the beginning what BEV stands for. after that you can also only use the abbreviation

Maybe that's just me but I find don't need this questions. They feel a bit much after just reading 8 chapter headlines in the content overview.

Does this number refer to BEVs or all cars?

make it make it "Das Basisszenario unserer Projektion geht bis 2030 von 4,5 Millionen BEV auf deutschen Straßen aus. Selbst im optimistischen Fall wären es nur 7,4 Millionen."

make it "das 15-Millionen-Ziel der alten Bundesregierung für 2030 unerreichbar bleibt"

use either "Neuwagenmarkt" or "Erstmarkt"

Use either "Gebrauchtwagenmarkt" or "Sekundärmarkt" everywhere in the article. "Gebrauchtmarkt" is not wrong but uncommon

The word "E-Autos" should be included in the headline, I think. For example: "E-Autos: Was keine Prämie geschafft hat, schafft jetzt der Gebrauchtwagenmarkt". That's solid. Also, try to find version that is a bit snappier and straighter to the point.

The "noch" implies that Privatperson used to make up for more than a third of the Neuzulassungen. Is that so?

Used cars are also sold in car dealerships, right? If so, this sentence doesn't work. I also wouldn't start with "warum" in this case but more like: "Der Durchbruch des E-Autos kommt – aber nicht über Neuwagen oder neue Modelle, sondern über den Gebrauchtwagenmarkt. Warum, und was Deutschland von Europas Vorreitern lernen kann, erklärt diese Studie."

make it: "Der Boom bei Neuzulassungen wird nicht von Privatpersonen getragen, sondern von Firmenwagen und Flotten und findet vor allem auf dem Gebrauchtwagenmarkt statt."

make it "Hinter den Zahlen steht ein interessantes Phänomen:"

make it "Trotzdem stehen heute erstmals mehr als zwei Millionen E-Autos auf deutschen Straßen."

make it "Die Neuzulassungen erreichten 2025 mit 545.000 BEV ein Rekordniveau."

make it "den staatlichen Umweltbonus"