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It reminded me of the larger issues beyond my immediate surroundings and taught me to focus on broader life goals rather than getting bogged down by the minutiae of daily challenges.
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In summary, the connections
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new connections
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The reliance on volunteers for operational tasks, while fostering community involvement, might lead to inconsistencies in the execution of events and programs if not properly managed. The structural frame helps to identify the need for clear roles, responsibilities, and training for these volunteers to ensure the efficient running of mosque activities.
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For the analysis of the Islamic Society of Central Florida (ISCF), I’ve chosen to use Bolman and Deal’s Structural Frame to dissect and understand the organization’s structure and leadership. This choice is based on the detailed description provided about ISCF’s organizational setup, which emphasizes its hierarchical and functional aspects. The Structural Frame focuses on how an organization arranges itself, its roles, responsibilities, and processes to achieve its objectives, making it a fitting lens through which to examine ISCF, given its clear hierarchical structure and division of labor.
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Reflecting on my experiences with ISCF during the preparation for Ramadan, three major insights about the organization’s leadership have emerged. Firstly, the alignment of values and actions, particularly during such a critical period, underscores the importance of congruence in effective leadership. Secondly, the collective effort to cater for the mosque highlights the power of collaboration and common purpose in achieving significant community goals. Lastly, the dedication and commitment displayed by everyone involved, from planning to execution, exemplify the profound impact of united community service on social change.
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Leadership and Service
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meaningly
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independent volunteering. I
asynchronous too.
could you re-write this paragraph to explain the strengths and weakness of Zooniverse's structure for volunteers?
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Due to Zooniverse having a plethora of projects constantly being added and evaluated, Zooniverse does not necessarily have one goal whereas something such as an animal shelter, does.
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Symbolic Frame
Reference Bolman and Deal for readers who don't konw what you are referring to.
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Collaboration is what Zooniverse is based off of.
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Advocacy Message
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The Gravity Wave Zoo asks volunteers to identify gravity waves, instabilities, and aurora in 10-second clips.
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orographic
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so anything that has to do with space and things that may be affecting our atmosphere I automatically get interested in
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identifying atmospheric gravity wave events
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My name is Megan Alexandra Almond and I am a student in LDR3950 at the University of Central Florida. I am a second-year studying Aerospace Engineering. This portfolio helps me to get across what I am doing throughout the course. Some of my short-term goals are to get summer internships and study abroad over the summer. Some of my long-term goals are to work in the field of aerospace engineering through companies such as Lockheed Martin, SpaceX, NASA, Boeing, and Blue Origin.
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I noticed there were a lot of other organizations
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Insight: There are many ways to volunteer and make a difference, even if you do not have money to donate
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other people were also able to see what I was mapping and validate them for me in case I made a mistake and didn’t notice it. I was able to see different communities all across the world and how different the landscapes were across each community. For example
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The next C is controversy, the thing that surprised me about my volunteer site was how it all worked; I didn’t know how intricate mapping was but also as the more I did it I got the hang of it. At first, I struggled on how to align the buildings correctly and how to label the land but the more I did it the easier it got. The next C is civility
c= controversy with civility
Consciousness of Self Awareness of the beliefs, values, attitudes and emotions that motivate one to take action. This is key to being able to develop consciousness of others.
Congruence Thinking, feeling and behaving with consistency, genuineness, authenticity and honesty towards others.
Commitment The motivational energy that drives the individual to serve the collective effort; implies passion, intensity and duration.
Collaboration Working with others in a common effort. It constitutes the cornerstone value of the group leadership effort because it empowers self and others through trust.
Common Purpose To work with shared aims and values; facilitates the group’s ability to engage in collective analysis of issues at hand and the task to be undertaken.
Controversy with Civility Recognizes two fundamental realities of any creative group effort: that differences in viewpoint are inevitable, and that such differences must be aired openly, but with civility. Civility implies respect for others, a willingness to hear each other’s views and the exercise of restraint in criticizing the views and actions of others.
Citizenship The process whereby an individual and the collaborative group become responsibly connected to the community and the society through the leadership development activity. To be a good citizen is to work for positive change on the behalf of others and the community.
Komives, S. R., & Wagner, W. (Eds.). (2017). Leadership for a better world: Understanding the social change model of leadership development. John Wiley & Sons.
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more you learn to map buildings and roads the easier it is.
using a new platform frequently definitely helps!
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each of the seven C’s
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The three big takeaways
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put a period and start a new sentence after each C.--perhaps bullet list them? Break out your text into smaller paragraphs.
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Insight: Leadership can help one create a positive influence in the world
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I learned to not tell the truth and be sneaky because of their autocratic leadership style.
do you really want to have potential employers read/know this? I wonder,...aren't a lot of kids are rebellous at some point?
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I want to inspire not control.
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this could possibly take a little bit of time considering I will be coming out of college
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four main goals in my vision board
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caringness
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My parents were very autocratic leaders meaning what they say goes.
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My
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so you can already imagine the countries I have been to.
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good
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Starting off with getting a degree in civil engineering which is what I am currently studying.
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As you can see,
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I believe communication is very important when being a leader because the people who follow you want to know why they are following you and how they should be following you.
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Where I am headed?
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One of the occupations, I don’t necessarily agree with is psychology, as I have trouble relating to people.
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I’ve always strive
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conventional.
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ccording to my Holland code which was IRC which stands for investigative, realistic, and conventional.
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This service learning course requires that I complete 40 hours of community service during the Spring 2024 semester
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Knights Pantry
link to their website: https://studentunion.ucf.edu/knights-pantry/
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https://vimeo.com/885368055
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We made a video,
you could embedd the video here
Upload a video file directly to Pressbooks and add it to a page: From the page editor, choose Add Media –> Select Files, and choose an MP4 video file from your computer to upload. This will add the video to the 'Media Library' for this Pressbook.
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5th image, where I am wearing light blue jeans, my fellow student volunteers and I are joined by an individual who had taken part in our services (free blood pressure, EKG, and visual acuity testing)
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Princess Diana has always been my motivating force when it comes to my leadership.
love her! I got to see Princess Diana in person when she visited the Northwestern Univ. campus where I was working at the time. I believe it was her last visit to the US. She was radiant and so personable with all the people she interacted with.
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(shown in image 6)
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or mentor.
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They host information panels but I feel that holding more (about 2 each month) could be very helpful.
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These individuals are UCF students
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the directors began urgently messaging people to carpool
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the organization could improve in terms of consciousness of self. Having a specific area where volunteers and clients could submit and receive feedback on our services would allow the organization to reflect and then improve on its weak areas.
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the individuals utilizing our services
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7 C’s of social change.
7C's of the Social Change Model of Leadership Development (SCM),
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Hearts for the Homeless Orlando
link https://www.h4horlando.org/
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our city
improve the lives of our citizens in need.
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Insight #2: You never know if you don’t try. Reach out to local organizations and businesses to see if they can support your non-profit’s cause.
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Hearts for the Homeless recently had a First Aid Drive among our student volunteers. This was a great idea, but I feel that we could get more donations if we sent some sort of message out to donation areas like local health care clinics and hospitals. Sometimes these materials can get expensive so asking a business/organization of some sort could work in our favor. In the message I crafted, I mentioned the prevalence of the homelessness issue in Orlando, stated a recent trend in the individuals using our services, and provided a way to address the aforementioned issue.
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Instructions: Step 1: Briefly summarize the “best fit occupations” results of the combined assessment (about 100 words). Step 2: Reflect on the combined results of your assessments as they relate to your current career interest (about 400 words). Consider responding to one or more of following prompts: In the Work Interest assessment, what is your Holland Code (please use the letters and descriptive titles)? How well do these three descriptors fit your current career interest? How might these descriptors help you select a better fitting career goal? In the Leisure Interest assessment, what are your top three leisure interests? How well do these three descriptors fit your current career interest? How might these descriptors help you select a better fitting career goal? What “best fit” occupation recommendations do you agree with? What recommendations do you disagree with? Why? Which of the five assessments (work, leisure, skills, personality, values) are most important to you personally? Select three assessments and run another combined report. Are the results any different? Did the results provide you with any new insights? You may also comment on the insights gained from the Focus 2 Career Assessment and how they relate to the results of previous assessment you have completed while in LEAD Scholars including True Colors, Strengths, and 16-Personalities. Step 3: Provide one personal insight about your career path gained from this learning activity.
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Zooniverse.
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project called “Seabirdwatch”.
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but with my commitment to this project,
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Kittiwake birds
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The 7 C’s of Leadership are Consciousness of self, Congruence, Commitment, Collaboration, Common Purpose, Controversy with Civility, and Citizenship.
According to leadership studies researchers (Komives, Lucas, McMahon, 2007), the 7C's of Leadership Development....
Komives, S. R., Lucas, N., & McMahon, T. R. (2007). Exploring leadership: For college students who want to make a difference (2nd ed.). Jossey-Bass.
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Nothing in life is to be feared, it is only to be understood
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Personal Reflection: To come up with the persuasive letter on Zooniverse, I had to dig deep and research the goals of Zooniverse as well as the scientific projects it contains. The main goal of Zooniverse is that it helps fuel new research projects and inspire future scientific breakthroughs. The collaboration between the experienced scientists and the public is what makes Zooniverse such a unique platform. I hope that this letter persuades the public to join universe and help uncover the wonders of our universe.
This is well done. I'm curious...Who would you send your letter to? Fellow LEAD Scholars? Perhaps through the Scholar Holler?
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ons: Step 1: Briefly summarize the “best fit occupations” results of the combined assessment (about 100 words). Step 2: Reflect on the combined results of your assessments as they relate to your current career interest (about 400 words). Consider responding to one or more of following prompts: In the Work Interest assessment, what is your Holland Code (please use the letters and descriptive titles)? How well do these three descriptors fit your current career interest? How might these descriptors help you select a better fitting career goal? In the Leisure Interest assessment, what are your top three leisure interests? How well do these three descriptors fit your current career interest? How might these descriptors help you select a better fitting career goal? What “best fit” occupation recommendations do you agree with? What recommendations do you disagree with? Why? Which of the five assessments (work, leisure, skills, personality, values) are most important to you personally? Select three assessments and run another combined report. Are the results any different? Did the results provide you with any new insights? You may also comment on the insights gained from the Focus 2 Career Assessment and how they relate to the results of previous assessment you have completed while in LEAD Scholars including True Colors, Strengths, and 16-Personalities. Step 3: Provide one personal insight about your career path gained from this learning activity. My best fit occupations included a Toy designer, an Architect, an Actor/Actress, and Funeral Director. I picked the top four to discuss. It’s interesting to me because the only occupation out of those four that have really interested me would be the architect. The Toy designer occupation seems very interesting, it has to do with arts and entertainment. I consider myself a very creative person so I could see why I got this occupation. It said that my values, personality, skills, and leisure all aligned with this occupation. The second one was an Architect. This occupation has to do with Architecture and engineering. This occupation has interested me before, because of the creativity it involves. It said that my values, skills, and leisures all aligned with this occupation. The third one was an actress. This one was very cool to see, but the last time I performed in a play was 7 years ago in middle school. I was never a theater kid or interested in being one. For this one it said my personality and leisure aligned. And lastly, a funeral director. I really did not know what to think about this one when I saw it. For this one it said work, personality, and skills all aligned. My current career interest is becoming a Pediatric Nurse Practitioner. I love to work with kids because they are so happy all the time, and I also love science and how the human body works. Lastly I want to do something in my life that is meaningful, like helping others. It was interesting to see how this assessment played out regarding my current career interest. In the leisure assessment, my top three leisure interests include Aesthetic (The creators), Correct (The Organizers) and Eager (The persuaders). I can 100% agree with these interests.It says The creators Tend to be creative and intuitive, enjoy activities like writing, painting, sculpturing, playing a musical instrument, performing, and more, enjoy working in an unstructured environment where they can use their imagination and creativity, and often described as being: open, imaginative, original, intuitive, emotional, independent, idealistic, and unconventional. It says that the The Organizers like to be involved in activities that follow set procedures and routines, like to work with data and details, have clerical or numerical ability, and carry out tasks in great detail, and often described as being conforming, practical, careful, obedient, thrifty, efficient, orderly, conscientious, and persistent. And lastly it says that The persuaders like to influence others, enjoy persuading others to see their point of view, like to work with people and ideas, rather than things, and often described as being adventurous, energetic, optimistic, agreeable, extroverted, popular, sociable, self-confident, and ambitious. All of these characteristics perfectly describe me. I don’t really think that any of the “best fit” occupations are for me. The only one I could see myself being in is an architect, but again that is nothing close to a nurse practitioner. The most important out of the five assessments to me would be values. I decided to run another report with just values, personality and skills to see what I would get. The occupation that fit me the most with those three was a clinical psychologist. Now this is more into the occupation I could see myself in. It’s more into the sciences which I liked. As I scrolled through the careers that matched, I realized the only one that was remotely close to a Nurse Practitioner was a Family Practitioner, which I would have to get a medical degree in. In conclusion, I very much enjoyed completing this assessment, and it made me realize other career options I could consider based on my personality, values, leisure, work interest, and skills.
delete the session on your best fit occupations--that info goes into your Career Ready Portfolio, not the SLJ.
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Children’s Home Society Organization
strong advocacy statement.
In a text box: Please preface your statement with the following (from the SLJ rubric): The journal entry includes a personal reflection how you developed the message and what you hope it's impact will be.
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Hello, my name is Jeremy, and I am a volunteer for the
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caused by simple miscommunication
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conflict.
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upcoming economic recession
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responsibility as model citizens, in particular, philanthropy.
so is the issue that people are not stepping up to make financial contributions or sacrificial donations (that is, donating to the point that they would do without some "wants or needs" that they have in American society, i.e., maybe forgoing the purchase of a new piece of technology right now so they could make a more substaintial monetary donation). Maybe be more specific here to help paint the picture.
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leeching off
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myself included.
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As a man whose family heritage and bloodline trace back to Palestine, carrying with it centuries of history and cherished memories, my heart aches for my loved ones who are enduring unimaginable suffering in Palestine today. In the face of this profound sadness and reflection, I find myself compelled to write this message in hopes that it will spread awareness of the struggles we are privileged to not have to endure. I initially posted this message to a discussion post last semester and received replies from students of all faiths empathizing with those who suffer from the conflict.
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My Resume
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My name is Virginia Koch and I am the course instructor for LDR3950 at the University of Central Florida. This course requires that I create a career ready portfolio during the Spring 2024 semester. This portfolio highlights my leadership and educational experiences and philosophies that will enable me to excel in my future career. The portfolio will help my target audience get to know me personally and professionally.
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www.linkedin.com/in/nadine-alur-461270286
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Resume-Nadine-real (1)
change the name of your resume link to you first and last name
regarding the resume--remove your home/street address for security reasons.
Bullet text under work experience like you did with service/volunteering activities.
With languages- are you fluent with spoken and written? perhaps specficy.
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here is no specific agency representative as it is co-founded by the American Red Cross and is led by a collective organization, they are accountable for the things publicized on the map and will change it if they are inaccurate. Each volunteer carries out their own mapping contributions working towards a shared goal. This is done with a street mapping software called The Tasking Manager which is a free software developed by the Humanitarian OpenStreetMap Team. It tracks the number of hours you have contributed. Its goal is to create an accessible and complete map of the world.
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This changes to help people get to certain places that they must get to every day. By having an organized structure those who volunteer are able to map these places whenever they want and work towards the common goal.
you repeated here what you wrote in the passion chapter. If you are going to use the same info, re-structure the sentences so that you don't plagarize yourself--and it's more interesting for the reader.
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etcetera
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volunteers are clear. They are to map buildings, roads, and other landscapes in order to achieve a common definite goa
can you imagine the maps that would get created if they were unclear?!?!?
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I selected this because my nonprofit organization that I chose is online therefore they have to have a very organized and easy to understand structure for people to be able to volunteer and contribute to the overall shared goal.
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Leaders create a common goal so others can help contribute.
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Online Service Mapper
great job Nadine! As a former cartographer, I really like this project a lot!
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up to date
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This interesting me
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Humanitarian OpenStreetMap
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There is no specific agency representative
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Hello
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https://youtu.be/b_VhTfVsnxw
please embed your youtube link. here's the instructions: https://webcourses.ucf.edu/courses/1447525/assignments/8357701
The Youtube link says it is private. please make it accessible to those with a link.
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Hello, my name is Nadine Alur
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University of Central Florida,
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remarkable increase in annual profitsduring my tenure
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leadership manifests itself in different ways
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when one has this sort of growth mindset, nothing is impossible to achieve.
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very appreciated
a big show a maturity!
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I welcome it because it allows me to improve my methods, making it easier to achieve my goals.
a great quality to have!
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I currently work at the University Writing Center along with many writing and rhetoric majors.
this sets you apart and give you needed skills for sure!
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I genuinely want to help emotionally unavailable little people become emotionally available big people.
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Then there’s the butterfly quote by Maya Angelou.
we can't see the quote in the image so please repeat it in your narrative.... “We delight in the beauty of the butterfly, but rarely admit the changes it has gone through to achieve that beauty.” ― Maya Angelou
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,I chose this color because it is important that we make something like this as much ours as possible
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the path I may take will never be in a certain order.
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instead of the title “Vision Board”, I chose the word map because just like a map theres
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AdventHealth hospitals
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If I ever do travel
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Italy this year,
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t’s a collage of my identity, the things that I love and the person I strive to become.
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closer and
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reminds me of “Your actions speak so loudly, I can not hear what you are saying.” ― Ralph Waldo Emerson
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These images all had to be completed in around a month and eventually I was able to receive a copy of the book, and have it published.
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7 C’s of leadership
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All of this relates to my leadership style because I am a very strategic leader.
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I struggled to find images encompassing my career goals and views about leadership
consider creating your own images (photos) in the future...
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In college, I have continued this interest, presenting research findings on related topics and promoting the value of engagement with various texts across many cultures.
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do not disrupt the lives of others.
or perhaps....do no harm?
https://medicalaid.org/the-hippocratic-oath-first-do-no-harm/
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As mentioned when analyzing my Focus 2 Assessment results,
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s a STEM major,
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These experiences have equipped me with the confidence and determination to pursue my career aspirations and make a meaningful difference in the lives of young people.
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my vision board
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I want to maintain a work-life balance. I want to be able to still have a family and maintain my health while achieving my career goals. I would also like to be successful enough to live where I thrive. For example, I would love to live near the beach.
excellent goal! :)
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I would also like to show young girls that they can also become lawyers.
another caring goal! Your blue is shining through!
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I would love to be able to fight for those who need it most. Going through a divorce, custody battle, or death of a loved one is hard enough. I want to be able to help those with the law that involves such emotional times.
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Insert an image of your vision board into your Vision Board Chapter. Using no more than 750 words, describe your vision board images in detail. Use APA-style writing. Your content should include: A description of your career aspirations or goals A description of your leadership style and the influences that have shaped it A description of any service and/or leadership experience related to your career interest
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I disagree with the athletic director recommendation the most because I am not interested in many sports.
although you my get clients who play outdoor sports...
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“self-belief and hardwork will always earn you success”.
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I love to work with others and help them when needed, enjoying being a positive influence on others, which are characteristics of being a leader.
again, this will set you apart!
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I aspire to combine the distinctive characteristics of someone in the medical field into the tech industry. This approach will help set me apart from other candidates
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But jobs like operations manager and financial analyst weren’t considered compatible because they didn’t match my hobbies and abilities in the arts.
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Knowing the relationship between one’s personality, hobbies, and job goals is essential for developing a solid career path as an aspiring artist hoping to work in the animation industry.
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I am a very analytical and logical person as well as very organized and timely.
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unstructured environment where they can use their imagination and creativity,
working with children will remind you to allow yourself to "play" at times--- a great qaulty for a PNP
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maginative, original, intuitive, emotional, independent, idealistic, and unconventional. It says that the The Organizers like to be involved in activities that follow set procedures and routines, like to work with data and details, have clerical or numerical ability, and carry out tasks in great detail,
these qualities could be helpful to NP
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kids because they are so happy all the time,
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Pediatric Nurse Practitioner
this probably requires the same level of human care and interaction that a funeral director requires....
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Toy designer, an Architect, an Actor/Actress, and Funeral Director.
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this assessment
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My brain identifies with people, emotions, history, and rules, more than numbers, calculations, or theories.
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. I feel emotions so intensely and feel so bad when people are sad or feel upset.
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What “best fit” occupation recommendations do you agree with? What recommendations do you disagree with? Why?
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went over a variety of things
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my focus on AI and tech, areas ripe with opportunities for growth, innovation, and global impact.
absolutely! Check out the AI learning options on Linked in Learning. They have dozens of course that may be of interest to you.
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My value for remote work and the flexibility to travel the world while engaging in my professional endeavors is a testament to the evolving nature of the tech industry. The assessment’s recommendations support this lifestyle,
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The focus of physical therapy to me was on helping to build somebody up not only physically but also emotionally through building a relationship with clients based on trust, and that really drew me to the field.
Shorter version: I was drawn to physical therapy because I want to build up my clients both physically and emotionally through positive, trusting relationships.
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https://www.linkedin.com/in/rollin-nolan-235aa9250/
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nice profile photo and background image good list of experiences, licenses, skills (25!), honors and awards, and organization looks impressive!
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NHartley Resume (LDR 3950)
I was able to open your resume. Please move the resume link to inside the box. Good job keeping it "readble" at one page.
Suggestions: Make your name larger font. Under selected honors, replace - with bullets Spell out CRU? or is it Cru? List consistently
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Just as much as physical therapy focuses on physical healing, it also relies on emotional healing, not only from the injury but overcoming any other mental hurdles that may make recovery difficult, such as doubt or attrition. These require a strong bond of trust between patient and provider. This also incorporates my personal style of leadership, which is servant leadership. Servant leadership focuses on meeting the needs of the people that are being served and are served alongside first and building them up to be better than where they are now, which is the focus of physical therapy. It also incorporates another important focus of leadership, which is being able to work with people from all walks of life, as patients can come from many backgrounds but deserve the same level of care. All of these practices are significant focuses in my own life and will be in my career.
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I feel these fit my current goal well as physical therapy involves connecting with and helping people through recovery, creatively finding ways to incorporate new strategies for recovery to reduce attrition, and, my personal goal, incorporating arts such as music into those therapy routines to help people find ways to enjoy the difficult and long recovery process.
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