s(boxes
spacing
s(boxes
spacing
. In the course of this essay,
delete
Hello everybody, my name is Brayden Anthony and today I will be showing you my vision board.
start with a broader introduction about what a vision board is.
Thank you all for listening!
delete this
my personality type. As a Consu
reference 16 personalities here...
occupations had been very different from what I thought
sometimes that happens....I 've seen other students have simliar experiences
Lead scholar’s academy,
LEAD Scholars Academy
college of business
Capitalize and add UCF, change FALL to Fall
Cumulative
move to next line
ive
typo--I'll highlight any others I notice.
servent
servant
I am Catholic and grew up catholic my whole life my relationship with God has been a roller coaster my whole life so I want to develop a better relationship with him because, for me, God has helped me get through really tough times so I want to grow closer again to him because I feel it makes my life better
love this! I'll be praying for you.
secotr
sector
be a CEO and I want to create a non-profit business that is more successful than anything anyone has seen.
awesome!! doing what?
Ive
I've
physic
physique
My vision board is a mixture of what I hope to accomplish this year and how some of the things I aspire to do this year
remove underline
Its nerve wrecking that none of the top results are what I want to be but maybe this showed me there are other things I can work on and do as well. I can talk to my advising office about it and see what they recommend for me on what to do. Everyone in college should take this assessment because it really does help you navigate what you want to do.
I think the expression is "nerve wracking"
don't change your career plans based on one assessment. It's food for thought but you do what you feel called to do!
because we mainly forget that we can have a life outside our jobs and that it’s important to give yourself time to still grow in other aspects
interesting to keep in mind
6
APA style-numbers under 10 are written out.
My vision board details a general description of my future career goals and leadership style, as well as what has influenced them
good intro!!
Leisure assessment is most important to me. I am a strong believer that work should be play. I want to enjoy the career I choose
excellent!
I was happy to see Aerospace/Aeronautical Engineer on the list.
yay!
Hello, my name is Olivia Ricca. I am a student in Dr. Koch’s LDR3950 Capstone class in the LEAD Scholars program at UCF. I am a second-year aerospace engineering student with the goals to develop my technical and professional skills during my undergraduate experience and eventually pursue my masters.
can you remove the white highlighting?
And that realization has kept me well rounded and versatile no matter where I go. All that said, I do have a major flaw. A flaw that cost me relationships. A flaw that made me a incompetent leader. A lack of patience, specifically with people. This lack has warped my leadership style into something that I can hardly verbalize, but I’ll give it a try.
you can always work on this!!
1
APA writing style, numbers under 10 are spelled out.
successfully being able to write every single day (even if it was a mere sentence).
great goal!
My vision board revolves around the goals I have for this year. I divided them into 5 sections: hobbies, work, exercise, travel and quality time. There’s at least 1 goal for each part that’s part of the vision board.
helpful intro
I really enjoy history – as a hobby. I enjoy studying ancient history, following lineages and documenting wars. However, I only see it as a hobby…nothing more.
you will be surprised how your interest in history will enhance your perspective on many things in life
7
Seven
Name: Jay Patel Course: LDR3950 w/ Professor Koch
delete
My name is Jay Patel and I am a student in LDR3950. I am a sophomore Biomedical Sciences major at UCF. A short term goal I have at the moment is to maintain my habits of writing everyday. A long term goal is to start a healthcare business, similarly to my parents.
remove the white behind the lettering.
because situations are always changing and a good leader should always be willing to adapt to the needs of the group.
true--and when the seas are rough, you will want to have some unwavering values, morals or ethical commitments that will guide you...
feel more accomplished when I can say that the people I am leading are content with my work.
be careful not to fall into "people pleasing"
Breanna Lenz 2-17-24
delete
More recently
new paragraph
In my vision board,
can you make the board bigger? it's hard to see...
personal
personality
While t
new paragraph
I had no careers that matched results from all 5 of my assessments and only 1 career that matched 4 out of the 5 assessment results. The highest recommended career for me is marine architecture. Most of the other highly rated careers were types of engineering and STEM-based careers such as biochemist and mathematician.
hmmmm....
My communication skills are weaker than my engineering skills and I tend to lack enthusiasm.
this is something to work on Noah. Your "lack of enthusiasm" can be misread by potential employers or co-workers.
I also know what my limitations
begs the question: what are they??
Working Genius of Tenacity,
glad you make note of this!!
For
can you make the board image larger? It's a ittle hard to seee
target audience
you
team leader was as a 13 year old,
that's a big deal at that age! :)
true colors
Captitalize
e. I first took the Myers Briggs type indicator test when I was 15 years old. Since then, I have taken it 3 more times
you probably don't need to take it again!
true color
capitalize
my target audience
you
Skendall, 2017).
see below re: your source
Sources Social Change Model of Leadership Development. Leadership. (n.d.). https://gels.ucsd.edu/hawaii/leadership.html
Komives, S. R., & Wagner, W. (Eds.). (2017). Leadership for a better world: Understanding the social change model of leadership development. John Wiley & Sons.
resiliance.
resilience
This is far from the stereotypical “accountant” who is boring and pessimistic.
true!!
The first picture
new paragraph
I was able to see how differently they live their lives.
say more about this...
The next image
Moving clockwise, ....
first picture
upper right corner
Vision Board 2024
can you make your board bigger? it's hard to see
A company’s culture is a reflection of the workplace, enclosing the company’s values, goals, and mission
did you copy this from somewhere?
company’s. culture.
typo
did you copy this from somewhere?
my hobbies: I care about myself,
I love that you stated this so plainly! :)
How to write your leadership philosophy Building on the reflection you did to complete your Leadership Vision Board, now is the time to develop your personal leadership philosophy, as it stands today. Keep in mind that this will be a living document that you can return to throughout your life and career and tweak as you enter different seasons of life. Do not use ChatGPT or other AI platforms to write your philosophy statement.
delete this
look for
identify
NMDP
spell out
first picture
bottom left
pro tip: number the vision board images so they are easier to refer to.
Erika Brandt LEAD Scholars Academy LDR3950: LEAD Capstone Dr. Virginia Koch February 10, 2024
you can delete this and make your vision board larger
P
physician could be lower case throughout your reflection
Note: If you want to learn more about how to write a reflective essay and see an example, please click on the following page link in Webcourses: How to write a reflective essay.
delete this.
REEL counselor, VENSA as the Treasurer, and NMDP
explain what these acronyms mean.
On the other hand,
replace with: In addition to my academic interests,
,
delete comma
E X T R A C U R R I C U L A R A C T I V I T I E SK E Y C O M P E T E N C I E S(In-Progress)MemberAmerican Red Cross
add years to your activities
Lead
LEAD
P R O F E S S I O N A L
work or employment
job
jobs? careers
knowledge.
sapace between paragraphs
www.umassglobal.edu. https://www.umassglobal.edu/news-and-events/blog/what-is-transformationalleadership#:~:text=Transformational%20leaders%20know%20how%20to,shape%20an%20organization’s%20future%20success.
make this a hyperlink to your source doc.
make sure that they are comfortable during their stay at in their rooms, and also act as a leader during arts and crafts activities that are hosted in the playrooms. I
love this!
As a Protagonist, I
nice 16 personalities image and reference-be sure to have permission to use it
th at
I think the image need to have text wrapped around it; there's an odd break here.
several students had mental health concerns and trouble getting good food and clothing. Th
maslow's hierarchy of needs...
transactional
check out the pros and cons list in this blog post: https://www.predictiveindex.com/blog/the-pros-and-cons-of-transactional-leadership/
She would constantly talk down to herself and say that she was not going to achieve the score she needed. I immediately put a stop to it and continued encouraging her because I saw her potential.
so helpful. Break the cycle!
communication. As a software engineer, you must be able to assist your teammates if they face any issues that can hinder their job performance.
communication is so important! If you can address the painpoints of your clients--they will be loyal to you forever!
believe that effective community building is the cornerstone of my leadership style, a trait that has been commended in my work and has contributed to our fellows’ and community organizers’ retention. Balancing professionalism with a sense of humor is a skill set I possess and value, bringing a dynamic element to any role I undertake.
start with this and have your next top 2 paragraphs support your claims
Before entry into LEAD, I had not considered many of these topics this deeply, but now they guide nearly everything I do.
love this!
BASIC.
very nice
ins
typo
Note: If you want to learn more about how to write a reflective essay and see an example, please click on the following page link in Webcourses: How to write a reflective essay.
delete these instuctions
this class.
explain
went
gone
7Cs of leadership
Komives, S. R., & Wagner, W. (Eds.). (2017). Leadership for a better world: Understanding the social change model of leadership development. John Wiley & Sons.
In honor of black history month (February), which is my first February with Children’s Home society.
revise this sentence
The LEAD Scholars Academy is one of the campus organizations
we are an academic service-learning program
braufitly
I hate to admit I don't know this word... :)
Sine
since
serviced
service
c tally
actually
I have overcome this challenge by reaching out to the leaders of the organization and offering my services to better
can you be more specfic here?
Distributed Proofreaders
Bolman and Deal's
Distributed Proofreaders
Bolman and Deal's
ones self
oneself
asses
assess
finical
financial?
or example, leaders facing budget constraints establish clear financial protocols and streamline processes. It is also possible for them to reorganize teams in order to mitigate conflicts. According to the human resource framework, people are of utmost importance. To empower employees and reduce power imbalances, leaders invest in training. In order to promote transparency, they facilitate open communication through coaching and mediation to resolve conflicts.
did the Y do these things? what's your analysis?
Instructions: Use two of Bolman and Deals four frames or “lens” to explore the dynamics you have observed or experienced while serving at your nonprofit organization. For instance, how are operational issues or concerns over power, conflict, or leadership addressed by organizational leaders?
Remove instructions
45
40 hours
chaning
changing
secretary
administrative assistant?
In this regard, I will be evaluating the leadership qualities of these individual nurses, as a team in the Emergency Department.
thanks for setting the context
out
our
my
may
anguishes
downturns
is often neglected.
can be overlooked
Not only did I have over 2,000 classification on my own with this research project, but we finished almost all of the 22 workflows!
nice use of numbers here
In Zooniverse I have worked on a project called “Seabirdwatch”.
in Journal 1 you said: The project I will be mainly working on through Zooniverse is called, “Killer Whale Count” ---did you switch?
My best fit occupations
the only thing missing her is a refernece to the assessment you took (for those who don't know)
a funeral director.
they have unique skills with caring for those who are grieving--I wonder if you you are high in empathy
The reason why I had decided to devote my time and effort into this service project has to do with my grandfather. He passed away just last year, and he was a huge sea animal lover. He would take me to the beaches in Puerto Rico where we would catch different sea creatures, and whale watch. The beaches surrounding Puerto Rico have long been important breeding habitat for humpback whales. He always taught me how it is important to take care of our planet, especially the creatures of the sea.
a great way to honor his legacy!
the seven C’s of social change model of leadership development
cite author and tell your reader (who's not familiar with it) what it is...
use APA style (author name, year) with citation
Komives, S. R., & Wagner, W. (Eds.). (2017). Leadership for a better world: Understanding the social change model of leadership development. John Wiley & Sons.
I wrote a thank-you letter to a supervisor who positively impacted me and embodies many of these insights as well!
What a great letter! I'm sure he will hold onto it for years to come.
sheapeading
is this the correct spelling?
have built long-lasting relationships
good job!
regluar
typo
I made a connection with the volunteer coordinator who handles volunteer events and scheduling, the secretary, the food pantry coordinator, the marketing manager, and many other regular volunteers.
good specifics
Whenever you see a successful organization, someone once made a courageous decision.
love this!
number of volunteers stay high, they must maintain a good and fast approach
what else keeps volunteers coming back?
strong rapport with their sponsors
very important!
yars
typo
they have you report to an entirely dedicated day to onboarding.
awkard wording
Human Resources Frame caught my interest since I was aware of how Hope Helps is associated with very compassionate and loving groups of volunteers
good choice and justification
Recently, the distribution of 150 Thanksgiving turkeys on Thanksgiving day is evidence to great planning and trust in us as her core competencies under her leadership.
last semester...
anything this semester?
O
our
By creating this poster, my intention is to raise awareness about the event and encourage participation. I plan to share the poster on my social media platforms to attract family members and friends, with the hope of increasing both volunteers and attendees for the event.
what's the update? now that the event passed-how did it go?
.
Your image is not showing up.
https://raider.pressbooks.pub/pressbooksguide/chapter/adding-images/
am choosing
chose
volunteer CEO of Project Gutenberg and DP, Dr. Gregory Newby
you should copy him on your email of appreciation.
Distributed Proofreaders Goes Social – Joy Louis
well done! Visually appealing and good information
this opportunity has afforded me the privilege of applying the leadership theory gained from past courses to real world examples, encouraging me to improve my leadership going forward.
great!
(as the Social Change Model for Leadership suggests).
good mention here!
hope to run for a director position,
I am so glad this interests you! I recommend you run!
Human resources focuses on what the organization does for its volunteers and how they offer opportunities and room for growth. I chose this aspect of the organization because it is something that I believe they do very well. They’ve taken many actions to reward the students who are contributing to the mission and therefore bettering the local community.
good rationale
Instructions: Use two of Bolman and Deals four frames or “lens” to explore the dynamics you have observed or experienced while serving at your nonprofit organization. For instance, how are operational issues or concerns over power, conflict, or leadership addressed by organizational leaders?
remove instuctions
different values.
than who? each other? volunteers? the org?
Hello! My name is Joheily Franco,
did you send this? if yes, where? any response?
s
(H4H)
It was so much more rewarding doing it with others who believed in the cause because they had the work ethic, I had to invest in working collaboratively.
This sentence is a little confusing
I learned that there is an opportunity to reach people in places you would never think of.
try not to end sentences with a preposition
donate to
extra space here
have given me
gave
work I am interested in doing in my career goals.
add more detail here...
but frankly was always really busy with other things but was able to connect me to activities and other volunteer events that helped me make valuable connections.
too bad!
free to give opinions
and what else?
overloaded workers
I wonder how this could be corrected. Her frustrations could bring volunteers down--not ideal! How could she channel her negative emotions differently?
The first thing
new paragraph
For example, the person in charge of the donations seemed to be overwhelmed and could not always answer questions we may have regarding delivery. She always sounded frustrated whenever she was asked questions because she indicated no one informed her of what and where things were going. I think if they provided her with more information, she would feel more comfortable answering questions as well as feeling more motivated to seek out the answers.
insightful observation
rely
relies
Instructions: Use two of Bolman and Deals four frames or “lens” to explore the dynamics you have observed or experienced while serving at your nonprofit organization. For instance, how are operational issues or concerns over power, conflict, or leadership addressed by organizational leaders?
delete instructions
7C’s in the social change model.
reference: Komives, S. R., & Wagner, W. (Eds.). (2017). Leadership for a better world: Understanding the social change model of leadership development. John Wiley & Sons.
00% of the families that complete their Healthy Families program remain together
that's amazing!
I am a nursing major student and I have a passion for working with children and families that are in need and this organization is truly a unique opportunity to bring awareness to issues that affect the communities in our area.
great tie-in
The most impressive
new paragraph
Instructions: This Journal entry will focus on the reasons you have chosen to devote 40 hours of service to the non-profit organization you selected. In short, what is your “why”? Describe your service organization including its mission, history, location(s), population(s) served, financial health, and other information you deem as important. The word limit range for this Journal entry is 350 and 450 words. Also, list one insight related to this reflection in the textbox at the bottom of this chapter.
remove instructions
meals on wheels
capitalize
Dear Mary and Darbi,
did you actually send this?
with Morgan and Morgan
a person there? be more specific
I plan to maintain this relationship
You are good at this! Drop her a line every few months at least. She will enjoy hearing from you!
thier
their
moral
morale
Instructions: Use two of Bolman and Deals four frames or “lens” to explore the dynamics you have observed or experienced while serving at your nonprofit organization. For instance, how are operational issues or concerns over power, conflict, or leadership addressed by organizational leaders?
delete instructions
.
here you could add a transition sentence mentioning the 7Cs and reference: Komives, S. R., & Wagner, W. (Eds.). (2017). Leadership for a better world: Understanding the social change model of leadership development. John Wiley & Sons.
From Mary
Here you could create a new paragraph and tell us this these are your three big takeaways.
however it is not one her strengths that shines through like the others. Sometimes she can get upset or overwhelmed easily and isn’t aware of how she acting.
another reason why this journal is private
collaborater
spelling
truley
truly
Dear Reader, I am a volunteer and intern at Make-A-Wish. Make-A-Wish is a philanthropy that grants children with a critical illness a wish. These wishes can be to meet someone, to get something, and more. Wish coordinators make sure that children get what they want. Make-A-Wish also has meetings with the families before and after, to make sure the children are alright. Due to donations and fundraising, Make-A-Wish can make wishes come true for children suffering from life threatening illnesses. Thank you, Emma Cassidy
it would be helpful to give some background about who would recieve the letter and where it would be posted.
childeren
typo
.
wishes
internships.
unpaid
Instructions: This Journal entry will focus on the reasons you have chosen to devote 40 hours of service to the non-profit organization you selected. In short, what is your “why”? Describe your service organization including its mission, history, location(s), population(s) served, financial health, and other information you deem as important. The word limit range for this Journal entry is 350 and 450 words. Also, list one insight related to this reflection in the textbox at the bottom of this chapter.
remove instructions
Instructions: In this chapter, you will introduce yourself with your name, role in the class, class standing, and major(s) at UCF. You may include anything else you want to say about yourself. Use my example below to guide your process.
remove instructions and box
the platform
this sounds great--could you show a screenshot (blur out names)?
I have been networking with other crisis counselors, and my supervisors.
could you tell us more?
I hope to maintain my connections that I’ve made since this is a great networking opportunity in the future.
yes!
I’ve went ahead and attached an email below of my appreciation letter that I’ve sent to the organization to thank them for my gratitude and thankfulness for giving me this opportunity.
good!
resilience
what about resilience?
Another great way this organization makes sure that we have good dynamic is by hiring supervisors to watch over us 24/7.
good suggestion
running low on crisis counselors especially when it comes to night shifts.
I'm sure that's a consistent struggle
get notifications about workshops
that's great! Good to see they are investing in volunteers with professional development!
right people who have acquired the right skills. The organization that I volunteer with does a great job of screening individuals
great connection here
one
lens
Consciousness of self
add a couple of sentences explaining the 7 Cs and referencing them be launching into them.
commit at least 200 hours
wow! in what period of time?
Dear Members of the Islamic Society of Central Florida,
I hope you actually sent/delivered this letter!
(Bonus Insight)
awesome!
This realization came as I noticed that by focusing on personal integrity and authentic actions, I inadvertently led by example. People are drawn to leaders who are confident in their direction and do not merely follow the crowd but forge their own paths based on their convictions and values.
what a gift that you've learned this at a young age... :)
Additionally, I served at Al-Malik Teen School, a nonprofit focused on teaching children about Islam and reading the Quran. My role involved hosting online sessions where I guided students through Quranic recitation, correcting them and providing tips to enhance their learning.
you didn't really add this in other parts of your journal