That link only leads to an excerpt. The full text can be read here: https://www.nap.edu/catalog/12956/the-future-of-nursing-leading-change-advancing-health

"These laboratories are staffed by medical technologists who are trained to perform various tests to samples of biological specimens collected from its patients. " is more understandable with a rewrite such as "These laboratories are staffed by medical technologists who test patients' biological specimens." Same meaning, less confusion. . "

"For example, speech therapists may help patients with the formation of words and speaking when they have an impaired ability to communicate with a deficit referred to as expressive aphasia" could simply be "For example, speech therapists may help patients with a deficit referred to as expressive aphasia."

the correct verb is liase, rather than liasion, but I find students are not familiar with the term. What about "work with patients with financial difficulties?"

Is it really necessary to list so many adaptive devices? The section on OT is noticeably longer than those of the other professionals in this section.

British spelling is used. Think we would go with licensed rather than licenced.

"Tertiary care is a type of care that addresses " means the same thing as "tertiary care addresses."Simplify.

" denying the granting of a license" means the same thing as "denying a license." Go with fewer words for these confused students!

It's 11 years old. Have they come out with a newer video?

extra word there in "and the Nursing" Remove the "the."

That leads to a review of the book, not the book. The book is here: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/books/NBK209880/

I’m not finding this article at the link provided (though I do find it here; https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4557413/)

I’m not finding this article at the link provided (though I do find it here; https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4557413/)

list them out or use a footnote here so readers can learn about them.

That sentence is a direct quote from the JC website. It should be quoted and cited.

I don't know how deeply we want to get into this in this textbook, but Nightingale has become a bone of contention regarding her actual role and influence in the last few years. Mary Seacole was a contemporary nurse of color who was forgotten by history. Many feel that Nightingale's genius was in her use of and visual display of stats (evidence based decision making!) (This is a reasoned article that is great reading: https://www.smithsonianmag.com/history/the-worlds-most-famous-nurse-florence-nightingale-180974155/).

And https://nursingclio.org/2020/11/05/the-racist-lady-with-the-lamp/

She is very important, but others were also important.

you don't "create" statistics. (Makes it sound like she was making them up!) How about "presented?"

I am on a soapbox recently about using plain language when possible, and am really rooting for differentiating this textbook as being more easily understood than others, from many recent conversations with our ASN students. Legalities means laws or legal issues. I'd pick one of those.

tell is not the right verb. I'd go with provide.