She looks back.
挑了挑眉
She looks back.
挑了挑眉
You said I won't pass? Then watch me pass.
挑衅地说道
HARPER turns and crosses to the Office Door. Behind her, CELESTE lifts the camel coat off the floor and lays it over her bare thighs.
Harper气冲冲地转身走向办公室的门。
CELESTE says nothing. 塞莱斯特一言不发。
避开学生的眼睛,沉默
Who is he? 他是谁?
哽咽地问道
Her eyes are red.
删掉
It rolls across the floorboards and stops against the Exam Envelope at the foot of the desk leg.
删掉,就说戒指沿着地板滚动
That whole line in the hallway watched me walk through that door. Not one of them saw me walk out.
删掉,改成Harper用手捂住了嘴,朝老师的方向乖巧地点了点头
That's Pierce. If she wakes up now and stops me, she has to report it to him. And I'm expelled.
加上 oh shit,是pierce,
A flush climbs the side of CELESTE's neck and disappears under her shirt collar.
删掉这句
哈珀微微扬起嘴角,将两根手指缓缓滑入体内,先是浅浅地,接着越来越深,再深一些。
改成harper边用嘴边用手
HARPER slips off CELESTE's right shoe
不要脱鞋
HARPER unbuttons CELESTE's slacks and lowers the zipper. She hooks her fingers into the waistband and the underwear beneath it and pulls. The fabric drags down to CELESTE's upper thighs and catches there, half pinned under her.
Harper小心翼翼地解开老师长裤拉链,她用手指轻轻勾住裤腰往下一拉。布料滑落到老师的膝盖上部,卡在那里。露出老师的冷白色肌肤和白色内裤
Last night that face lied to me without blinking.
咬牙切齿的inner monologue
and it turns on CELESTE's finger.
去掉这句
CELESTE reclines in the Office Chair, rolled back from the desk, asleep. Her gold-rimmed glasses sit folded on the desk's edge.
特写: 百叶窗的光一道一道落在Celeste身上。她仰靠在办公椅里,头微微偏向一侧,白衬衫最上面那颗扣子松开了。她的眉眼比在讲台上柔和。睫毛垂着,眼下泛着淡淡的青色,粉嫩嘴唇微张,呼吸又轻又匀。
I already have an F on her midterm. One more failed class and I'm out. I'm getting expelled anyway. So I'm taking you. Right now.
直接改成:I'm getting expelled anyway. So I'm taking you. Right now.
A sealed manila Exam Envelope, stamped MAKEUP EXAM, leans against the desk leg nearest the Office Chair.
删掉这句话
A line of students waiting for office hours runs along the hallway wall outside the Office Door.
这些学生背着书本、抱着书稀稀拉拉地在喧闹的走廊中
HARPER stares at the Oversized Ring. The pen snaps in two in her hand.
Harper死死地盯着那枚戒指,没注意手中的钢笔断成了两截
GIRL 女孩Wait. Is Professor Vaughn engaged?
女孩与身边的同学低声讨论
She lifts out the Gray Hardcover and opens it. Between the pages lies the Handwritten Letter, crumpled once and smoothed flat.
信纸曾经被撕碎过,现在那些碎片已经用胶布小心地粘好,还原出原本的模样,被书熨平。
HARPER (V.O.) 哈珀(画外音)That's twice now. And she still doesn't want me.
inner monologue;并且是受了情伤的语气
HARPER rounds the desk, crosses to the Office Door, and takes the knob.
Harper认命般地绕过办公桌,径直走向办公室门
Pierce told me that himself. And he reports anything between faculty and a student. She'd be expelled immediately. I'd lose my tenure.
删掉这句话
Still think I'm the one shaking, Professor?
Harper凑近老师的耳朵,将温热的呼吸尽数喷在老师敏感的部位,低声说道:
Her face lies. Her body doesn't.
脸上终于扬起玩味的笑容
CELESTE's face doesn't change.
celeste闭上眼睛,终于忍不住欲望呻吟了一声。哪知道这声呻吟对于harper来说简直是春药,harper的手速更快了,终于celeste猛地一颤,睁开眼睛,大腿受不住似的猛地夹住harper的手,将手禁锢住。
CELESTEYou're shaking. 你在发抖。
celeste的脸上仍旧平静无波,
HARPER slaps the paper face down on the desk.
之前加上:学生内心VO:为什么?老师,每次听你上课,都在心底渴望你,可是你那眼神从未注视过我啊
So why are you working so hard to destroy her?
语调略高
HARPER's nails dig into her palm.
学生低头不敢看老师的眼神,怕看到她眼中的失望
Your freshman paper. This is the Harper I know.
老师语重心长地说
CELESTE sets down the red pen. She folds the coat into neat thirds and lays it on the corner of the desk. The Probation Order lies bare again.
她见状停下了手头的动作,站起来将大衣整齐地折了起来
HARPER 哈珀Your coat. I didn't wash it.
傲娇地说
CELESTE sits behind the desk in the Office Chair, glasses on, a red pen in her hand.
celeste坐在书桌后的办公椅上,戴着眼镜,手里握着一支红笔在转,正在低头批阅试卷。
She smooths it on the Lectern, one crease at a time. She slides it between the pages of the Gray Hardcover and closes the cover over it.
将那些信封碎片塞进书本里,然后合上书本
CELESTE walks to the Trash Can, reaches in, and lifts out the crumpled Handwritten Letter.
掏出那些信封碎片
Two hundred students laugh at once.
没有那么多学生,此时是下课后,剩在教室里稀稀拉拉的学生
CELESTE looks down at the Handwritten Letter. She doesn't open it. Two fingers slide it back across the Lectern until it touches HARPER's hand.
celeste眼里的冰冷如遇暖春般消融,但她还是选择偏过头
Sunset pours through the tall windows. Every seat is full.
画面加上字幕介绍:一年前
TYLER 泰勒That's not— Whatever. 那不是——算了。
结巴、尴尬地说
HARPER holds the exam up where CELESTE can see it and crushes it into a ball in one fist. 哈珀把试卷举到塞莱斯特能看到的地方,然后用一只手将它揉成一团。
边挑衅地看着celeste
HARPER 哈珀Wow. You circled it. 哇。你给它画了圈。
好笑地说
CELESTEMidterms. 期中考试。
改成严肃地对全班人说:现在我把期中考试的试卷发下来
BOY 男孩I heard she wanted to sleep with a professor for a grade. 我听说她为了拿分数,想和一位教授上床。GIRL 女孩She's on academic probation. One more failed class and she's out.
两人是低声交头接耳地说,并且幸灾乐祸的语气
That's her. Harper Lane. Last year she confessed to Vaughn in front of the whole class, and Vaughn shut her down.
将Vaughn改成 Celeste
Youngest tenured professor in the department.
全校最年轻最美丽的终身教授
CELESTE stands at the Lectern at the foot of the steps. She wears her hair in a low bun, gold-rimmed glasses, and a camel long coat. She has no notes.
驼色长大衣里面是白衬衫,她把袖子半挽起,双手撑在讲台上,面向整个教室,低沉有力地说道
WREN looks down at her.
wren眼含春水
MARGOT slides out from under her and over the edge. She sinks to her knees on the Carpet in front of WREN.
Margot从她身下挣脱起来,跪在床上,朝着wren,浴袍已敞开大半,极致魅惑
WREN (V.O.) WREN(画外音)This time, she knelt on her own.
inner monologue
MARGOT (V.O.) 玛戈特(画外音)One photo to Bea. Wren loses her contract. Then Bea sues.
inner monologue:只要说出去,我就再也不用和wren在镜头前扮演恶心的闺蜜了!
MARGOT (V.O.) 玛戈特(画外音)Wildcat. What W calls M in bed. “野猫”。W 在床上对 M 的称呼。MARGOT (V.O.) 玛戈特(画外音)She knew. The phone. The nap. A trap. 她心里清楚。那通电话。那场小憩。是个陷阱。MARGOT (V.O.) 玛戈特(画外音)I wasn't hunting her. She was hunting me.
inner monologue
MARGOT (V.O.) 玛戈特(画外音)I knew it. You. 我就知道。就是你。
兴奋的inner monologue:
MARGOT (V.O.) 玛戈特(画外音)Got it. She'd never forget the night she lost.
inner monologue
MARGOT (V.O.) 玛戈特(画外音)No. Wait. Is it... March twelfth?
inner monologue
MARGOT (V.O.) 玛戈特(画外音)No. My birthday? 不。我的生日?
inner monologue
MARGOT (V.O.) 玛戈特(画外音)Her birthday? 她的生日?
inner monologue
MARGOT (V.O.) 玛戈特(画外音)Tonight I get proof you're Runner_Up. Something to shut you up.
inner monologue
MARGOT (V.O.) 玛戈特(画外音)You sold my left knee on a livestream. You dodged me behind the Curtain.
inner monologue
Give me a few minutes. I'm closing my eyes.
边打了打呵欠,边说:你随意,我先睡一小会,眼睛要睁不开了。
WREN (V.O.) WREN(画外音)Does she read it because she wants me? Or because she wants me ruined?
inner monologue
WRENYou don't read it, remember?
I don't think so
Who said you could squeeze my hand that hard?
改成:你刚刚夹地我好痛!
MARGOT (V.O.) 玛戈特(画外音)That was my test for her chapters. Now everyone knows.
改成inner monologue
MARGOT 玛戈特We're... colleagues. 我们是……同事
We're ...more than just colleagues.后紧接Margot 的inner monologue:当然了,我们是死对头
WRENCloser than you'd think. 比你想象的还要近。
神神秘秘地说道
WREN (V.O.) WREN(画外音)Does she know I'm the author?
inner monologue:难道她开始怀疑什么了吗?
WREN's grip tightens on her phone. WREN 紧握着手机。
wren握着手机的手紧了紧,并且吞了口口水
MARGOT 玛戈特Nobody knows this. The back of my left knee. That's where I'm most ticklish.
改成,对,我还告诉你一个小秘密,我左膝后侧那个地方最怕痒了
MARGOT 玛戈特Chapter seven. 第七章。
改成;It's chapter seven!
She turns slowly toward the Shared Wall.
狐疑地盯着那面墙
Her fingers glide down the bare skin of MARGOT's chest and hook the earring out.
她的手指慢慢沿着Margot傲人的胸脯滑下
MARGOT 玛戈特Keep reading. I don't read it. You read it to me.
抱胸,傲娇
WREN (V.O.) WREN(画外音)The author is right here, Margot.
改成Inner monologue
Let's hope it's nobody on this set. That's a fortune in infringement fees.
耸了耸肩
MARGOT touches her left earring.
不自然地摸了摸左耳上的耳环
They even wrote in your Diamond Earrings, Margot. The ones you wear to every award.
应该是他们甚至详细地描写了你的钻石耳环
BEAWho is this fanfic writer? You two hate each other. And the ship is exploding.
调笑揶揄的语气
Red climbs from MARGOT's ear down her neck.
改成Margot的耳尖泛粉
WREN stands behind her in a black men's shirt.
改成一套利落的黑色西装套裙,短发及至肩头
That Oscar was mine. It went to that idiot, Margot.
先是不可置信,后又咬牙切齿地说着
, MARGOT bites down hard on her lower lip.
夹紧双腿
MILOYou woke me up pulling away.
无意识地嘟囔
SEBASTIAN (V.O.) 塞巴斯蒂安(原声)That's the back he gave me. Ten years from now, at my window. 他就是这样背对着我的。十年后,在我窗前。SEBASTIAN (V.O.) 塞巴斯蒂安(原声)One tug. Me, naked in his bed. And he picks the younger me. 轻轻一拉。我赤身裸体地躺在他的床上。而他选中的,却是我年轻时的样子
Inner monologue
MILO (V.O.) 《米洛》(原声版)He's still dreaming my name. 他仍在梦中呼唤我的名字。MILO (V.O.) 《米洛》(原声版)One tug, and he sees who's in my bed. Tonight ends there.
我是在做梦吗?我的男朋友躺在这里,他只要一醒过来就能看到十年后的自己,我居然还......
SEBASTIAN 塞巴斯蒂安I came back so you'd look at me like that. One more time.
深情地乞求
SEBASTIAN 塞巴斯蒂安We got married. You stopped looking at me. 我们结婚了。你不再看我了。
可怜兮兮的语气
You stopped looking at me.
但是十年后我们并不幸福,你已经很久没有这样对我了。
The Bed creaks faster.
视野转移,但是可以听见床板吱呀作响的声音
still inside him.
删掉
MILO, eyes closed, braces both hands on SEBASTIAN's chest and sinks deeper with every stroke. His sweat-slick thighs clamp SEBASTIAN's waist. He's shaking at the edge.
改成两个激烈的缠吻,摩擦吧,然后颤抖
MILO sinks down onto him, slow, until there's nothing left between them. Then he rocks his hips, faster and faster. The Bed creaks with every roll.
在被子下,并且动作幅度不要那么大,唯美一点
SEBASTIAN (V.O.) 塞巴斯蒂安(原声)Forty hours awake. Nothing wakes him. 已经连续醒着四十小时了。无论什么都叫不醒他。SEBASTIAN (V.O.) 塞巴斯蒂安(原声)Except one tug on that sleeve.
inner monologue,并且改成:除非有人把他推醒
SEBASTIAN doesn't move. His thumb brushes the freckles on MILO's nose.
深情地做着这一切
SEBASTIAN (V.O.) 塞巴斯蒂安(原声)You should go. Now. 你应该走了。现在就走。SEBASTIAN (V.O.) 塞巴斯蒂安(原声)He hasn't slept facing me in years.
inner monologue
MILOI've never... Not like that. Not ever.
很爽的语气
Come home tonight. Before I fall asleep.
可怜兮兮地撒娇
MILO rests his forehead against YOUNG SEBASTIAN's. 米洛将额头抵在年轻的塞巴斯蒂安的额头上。MILOThe ceiling light at home's been dead for months. 家里的吸顶灯已经坏了好几个月了。
亲昵地依偎着
Beyond the Garage Window, SEBASTIAN's right hand clenches inside his hoodie pocket. The teeth of the Old Brass Key bite into his palm.
眼眶落泪
The Razor glides down over YOUNG SEBASTIAN's throat. He doesn't breathe.
剃须刀顺着S的下巴一直挂下去,直到刮完了所有胡子
MILOEyes on me. Swallow, and you bleed.
看着我,不要讲话,小心流血
YOUNG SEBASTIANOne more line of code.
应该是百忙之中抽空回复了他
MILOHold still. You scratched me all night. 别动。你整晚都在抓我。
认真亲昵地说
SEBASTIAN pulls open the Bottom Drawer. He lifts out a Faded Hoodie, washed almost white, and a Prototype Wristband stamped CRANE LABS. He shrugs off his suit jacket and pulls the Faded Hoodie over his head. 塞巴斯蒂安拉开最底层的抽屉。他取出一件褪色的连帽衫——洗得几乎发白了——以及一条印有“CRANE LABS”字样的原型腕带。他褪下西装外套,将那件褪色的连帽衫套在头上。He snaps the Prototype Wristband onto his left wrist. 他将原型腕带“咔嗒”一声扣在左腕上。SEBASTIAN (V.O.) 塞巴斯蒂安(原声)One day. Ten years back. That exact day. 某一天。十年前。就是那天。SEBASTIAN (V.O.) 塞巴斯蒂安(原声)Six a.m. sharp, it drags me home. 早上六点整,它把我拖回了家。His thumb presses down on the Prototype Wristband.
改成,S叹了口气,没看那份文件,拉开抽屉,取出连帽衫,穿上,将VO改成直接说出来的形式:回到十年前的那一天吧;回到我们最相爱的时候,我才能知道这些年我做错了什么
LDER MILO 年长的米洛Separation papers. I already signed. 离婚协议书。我已经签了。SEBASTIAN doesn't touch them. 塞巴斯蒂安不碰它们。OLDER MILO twists the wedding ring off and presses it down onto his own signature.
冷漠、无情的态度
burning in the Floor-to-Ceiling Window at his back.
应该是背后是整个城市的夜景
MILOBossy tonight. 今晚有点爱发号施令。SEBASTIAN sinks his hips lower. MILO arches off the Bed to meet him.
这时候milo可以光着膀子,穿着裤子,并且借位描述,不要描述成直接性行为。
In the pitch-dark Studio, a man's weight pins MILO to the Bed. One Strip of Light from the Window crosses the floor and stops at the edge of the mattress.
也不能完全漆黑,属于光线昏暗,只有窗外射进去的月光
LUCIAN (V.O.) 卢西恩(画外音)More than one man fishes in the dark. More than one man has a scarred wrist. 不止一个男人在黑暗中钓鱼。不止一个男人手腕上有疤痕。LUCIAN (V.O.) 卢西恩(画外音)
inner monologue
LUCIAN (V.O.) 卢西恩(画外音)The widower. His cuffs are always buttoned.
inner monologue,我上次好像也在那个鳏夫上看到了一道疤
LUCIAN reaches over the Fish Basket and clamps a hand around NOAH's left wrist.
改成,看到一道疤痕的影子一闪而过,仿佛发现了什么新大陆似的,抓住诺亚的左腕
LUCIAN does not let go. He stares at the black cuff, buttoned tight over the wrist. 卢西恩没有松手。他盯着那只紧扣在手腕上的黑色袖口。A servant passes the Kitchen Door. NOAH holds still. LUCIAN's eyes stay on the cuff.
他满怀兴趣地盯着,刚想抬手将袖口撩上去看看有什么,一名仆人此时却进来,Lucian才放下手
He lifts NOAH's left wrist off the burlap and presses his mouth to the scar. 他将 NOAH 的左腕从麻布上抬起来,将嘴唇贴在那道疤痕上。
很怀疑的神态
NOAH (V.O.) 《诺亚》(原声版)He hates the widower. He hates me.
inner monologue:不可能,你在想什么,他明明讨厌我!
Their thrusts turn faster, rougher, out of control. With each one, flour lifts off the sacks and drifts down over two sweat-slick backs.
不要直接描述成抽插,描述成接吻,亲脖子、喉结等亲密动作
stripped bare.
不要赤身裸体,改成衣衫不整,眼眸含春
NOAH (V.O.) 《诺亚》(原声版)He's talking about me. 他在说我。
他在说谎!
LUCIAN 卢西恩Last night I had a man in my mill. In the pitch dark. 昨晚,我磨坊里来了一个男人。当时漆黑一片。NOAH stares at the fish. 诺亚盯着那条鱼。LUCIAN 卢西恩He bit his lip rather than make a sound. He shook under me all night long. 他咬住嘴唇,生怕发出声响。整晚,他在我身下瑟瑟发抖。LUCIAN lifts a fish, inspects it, drops it back. 卢西恩捞起一条鱼,仔细端详了一下,又把它放回水里。LUCIAN 卢西恩Best night I've had in Ashcombe. 这是我在阿什科姆度过的最棒的一个夜晚。He finally looks at NOAH, from his buttoned cuffs to his black coat. 他终于打量起诺亚来,从他扣得严严实实的袖口一直看到那件黑色大衣。LUCIAN 卢西恩A poor widower like you, Mr. Fairley? You're not fit to touch him.
对话改成:LUCIAN 卢西恩 I had company last night. 昨晚有人陪我。
NOAH stares at the fish. 诺亚盯着那条鱼。
LUCIAN 卢西恩 A beautiful one. She bit her lip rather than make a sound. 是个美人。她宁可咬着嘴唇,也不肯出一点声音。
LUCIAN lifts a fish, inspects it, drops it back. 卢西恩拎起一条鱼,仔细看了看,又扔了回去。
LUCIAN 卢西恩 Best night I've had since London. 这是我离开伦敦以来最美妙的一夜。
He finally looks at NOAH, from his buttoned cuffs to his black coat. 他终于抬眼看向诺亚,从他扣得严严实实的袖口,一直看到那件黑色外套。
LUCIAN 卢西恩 And you? A year in black, and still sleeping alone. 你呢?穿了一年黑衣,还是一个人睡吧。
LUCIAN 卢西恩 Of course you are. Who would touch a widower like you? Not even in the dark.
NOAH (V.O.) 《诺亚》(原声版)One light, and it ends.
他要做什么?他不会也是......?
Strike a light, and you're gone from my nights.
再给你一次机会,不说话我就当你同意了
In the dark, no man hangs for this.
看来你也很饥渴呢
No names. No lamps. Gone before dawn. 没有名字。没有灯。天亮前就消失了。
不说话,看来是个小哑巴呢
NOAH (V.O.) 《诺亚》(原声版)That voice. Viscount Thorne. 那声音。索恩子爵。NOAH (V.O.) 《诺亚》(原声版)One word, and he knows who steals his eels. 只需一句话,他就知道是谁偷了他的鳗鱼。
改成inner monologue
NOAH slips through the Mill Door in his black coat. He feels his way across the floor toward the Wheel Race, both hands out in the dark.
加上一句inner monologue:都怪可恶的禁渔令,希望这里没人,不然我可糟了!
LUCIAN 卢西恩Every evening at dusk, bring a basket of fish to my back door. Carry it yourself.
施舍而不容置疑的语气
NOAHIt's one trout. 是一条鳟鱼。
眼眶泛红,楚楚可怜
NOAH stares up at him, the trout pressed to his chest.
防备地抬手盯着他
LUCIAN 卢西恩A widower ought to be in black. Not wet linen, showing himself off to any man who rides by.
轻蔑的语气
His gaze travels down NOAH's chest. It stops between his legs, where the wet cloth clings tight. It hides very little, and what it shows is large.
加了一句咽了下口水
A silver signet ring circles his little finger. His eyes are red-rimmed from wine.
不要写饮酒过量
Their thrusts turn faster, rougher, out of control. With each one, flour lifts off the sacks and drifts down over two sweat-slick backs.
改成两个人律动的动作,避开直接的抽插动作
He pushes into him from behind.
有从背后顶进去的动作
LUCIAN 卢西恩There you are. 原来你在这儿。
改成:你怎么才来!
LUCIAN, cravat loose, wine on his breath, hauls him against his chest.
不要写喝醉了
ELIA couple. 一对夫妇
a couple?
ETHAN 伊桑Good. Hold that tension. 很好。保持这个力度。
改成:很好,就是要这么气冲冲地对峙
ELIA mistake. 一个错误。
恼怒地说
ROWAN reaches into the inner pocket of his Suit Jacket. He draws out an Old Keycard printed 1708 and presses it into ELI's palm. 罗万把手伸进西装外套的内口袋,掏出一张印有“1708”字样的旧门禁卡,塞进了伊利的掌心。ELI's eyes never leave ROWAN's face. ELI 的目光始终没有离开 ROWAN 的脸。ROWAN slides the Old Keycard back out of ELI's hand. As it turns, the back shows a stamp: RENEWED JAN 05. He slips it into his inner pocket. 罗万从伊利手中轻轻抽回那张旧门禁卡。卡片翻转时,背面印着一个戳记:2005 年 1 月续期。他将卡片塞进了内口袋。
改成,Rowan想将门禁卡从口袋里掏出来,卡都快掏出一半了,看着Eli的脸犹豫片刻还是塞回去了。
ETHAN 伊桑Nobody knows how a jerk thinks better than him.
开玩笑的语气
ETHAN 伊桑To win back the guy who slept with you and ran by morning. 如何赢回那个和你上过床,却在天亮前就跑了的男人。
Ethan 戏谑地对Eli说:别以为我看不出来你想赢回那个睡完你就一声不吭地跑了的人!
ELIExcuse me? 什么?
改成Eli和Rowan异口同声地说
ETHAN 伊桑New plan. Before winter break ends, Dad gives you dating lessons. 新计划。在寒假结束之前,爸爸会教你约会技巧。
这里改成对他俩说,寒假结束前,爸,你必须得教会Eli约会技巧!
ELI (V.O.) ELI(原声版)
eli的inner monologue
Coffee sloshes over the rim and splatters across the Counter.
不要这么夸张,咖啡液轻微从杯沿洒出,洒得柜台到处都是
Earth to Eli. I said this is my dad. Just call him Rowan.
加上:刚刚说到哪里来着?对了,这是我爸
He snaps his right fingers in front of ELI's face.
这里删掉
ELI stands just inside the Kitchen Doorway, staring past the Kitchen Island. His right hand is jammed in his jeans pocket, fist tight around the Silver Cufflink.
前面加上画面引退,Ethan打了个响指,唤醒刚刚走神的Eli
ELI closes his fist around the Silver Cufflink. He doesn't move.
神情落寞而悲伤
ELI (V.O.) ELI(原声版)R. That's all I get?
自嘲地对自己说
The flame in the kerosene lamp flickers.
煤油灯的火焰映在窗户上闪烁
ETHAN 伊桑You're freezing to death. Stay down.
得意洋洋幸灾乐祸
ETHAN 伊桑Chase. Stay awake. 追啊。别睡着。
惊慌失措地说
He stares at it. 他盯着它看
表情先是迷茫,再是恐惧
No one will ever call you names again.
改成这个世界上再也不会有人骂你了,后面加:chase癫狂的内心独白: No one in the world will ever bully and be obsessed with you anymore
RICHARD 理查德Go outside. Kneel until you come to your senses.
愤怒地斥责
no.glasses.
改成你是 no. glasses?
ETHAN 伊桑I hate you too. 我也讨厌你。
无力地说
Blood from Chase's torn lip glistens millimeters from Ethan's mouth.
不要这么说,说问结束后,两个人的嘴唇中间拉丝
Ethan's hands stay flat against Chase's chest.
无力地贴在chase的胸口上
ETHAN (V.O.) 伊桑(画外音)Push him away. Push him away, you idiot.
伊森的inner monologue
Ethan bares his teeth and bites down hard on Chase's lower lip until the skin splits.
不要这样说,就说伊森紧闭上下唇,但是chase顽固地想要用舌头撬开
ETHAN 伊桑You piece of— 你这混蛋——
愤怒,仿佛被人戏耍了
CHASESay. Please. 说啊。拜托了。
这两个单词只见要有停顿,重音在say上
ETHAN 伊桑What did you just say?
不可置信,绝望地轻呼
Chase stops breathing. 蔡斯停止了呼吸。
chase动作一滞
Ethan raking his soaked bangs back under the desk lamp. The two faces overlap perfectly.
镜头前,伊森在暖黄暧昧的灯光下将刘海往后拨
Your dad hits people exactly the way you do.
还在做最后的抵抗
CHASEWhat did you see, four-eyes? Say it. Out loud.
眼神危险,阴贽,语气冰冷
The rigid metal bars dig hard into Ethan's lower back.
改了,伊森的下背部紧紧抵着身后坚硬的金属拉杆
Chase goes after him,
露出一个恐怖的笑容
I want to sincerely apologize to my classmate. What I did was cruel, and that's not who I want to be. I'm sorry.
装模做样地朝着台下所有人宣布
Richard sits with his legs crossed, hands resting on his knee.
应该是翘着二郎腿,双手交叉放置在腿上
He lowers his hand, pulls out his phone, and opens the burner account. He types: "Tomorrow's gonna be the worst day of my life."
后面加:chase的内心活动:"Tomorrow's gonna be the worst day of my life.
You will apologize. And you'll do it with a smile.
威严地说
I'm not apologizing to some nerd—
倔强地反抗
Press conference. Ten a.m. tomorrow. You'll apologize to that boy in front of the cameras.
不容置疑的威严
It was a little water. He's fine. Honestly, he's probably enjoying the attention—
死不悔改地说
Four point seven million views. My approval rating dropped six points overnight.
语气沉重,仿佛下一秒就要发飙
The message reads: "The chain is nice."
后面加:chase(内心独白):The chain is nice
Ethan stares at the single word. He bursts out laughing and buries his face in the pillow.
画面转到伊森宿舍
Then he types: "please."
chase语气很可怜的内心独白:please
Ethan's face instantly burns. He sits bolt upright, his hand flying to cover the chain at his waist. Gritting his teeth, he types: "Wanna see more? Say please."
画面转到伊森宿舍。后面加:伊森咬牙切齿的内心独白:Wanna see more? Say please
In the high-rise, Chase reads the reply and laughs through his nose, one corner of his mouth curling up. He types: "Shame. It'd look even better with someone pulling on it."
后面加:chase(内心独白):Shame. It'd look even better with someone pulling on it.
Ethan types: "Not for you, anyway."
挑了挑眉,后面加:伊森(内心独白):Not for you, anyway
The phone buzzes again: "Who do you wear it for?"
后面加:chase(内心独白):Who do you wear it for?
CHASEIt's a guy. 是个男生。
说服性地自言自语
He hits pause. His eyes suddenly clear. His brow furrows hard.
先充满情欲似的深吸了几口气
CHASE (V.O.) 《CHASE》(原声版)Who calls himself that? Who the hell is this?
疑问且兴奋
A waist. A thin silver chain swaying across it. A delicate, glasses-free face smiling into the camera, smiling at him.
手机屏幕上:
"Good puppy?
后面加一句:伊森(内心独白):Good Puppy?
No. No way. I actually got off on that?
不,不可能,那个蠢货对我做了这样的事情,我居然还爽了?
Ethan slides down the tiled wall to the floor, his hair still dripping. He stays there. A long beat.
伊森喘着气,仿佛劫后余生般
Good puppy. 好小狗。
调笑和羞辱性的语气
He wipes it dry on Ethan's soaked T-shirt, dragging it slowly from his chest all the way down.
他略带调戏+羞辱地这么做了
Ethan clamps his teeth down hard into Chase's invading thumb.
不要用力咬,咬住就行
Chase lunges, slamming Ethan hard against the cold tiled wall. Pinned against the tile, Ethan's head is wrenched back by a bruising jaw grip. Chase drags his bare thumb across Ethan's wet bottom lip and forces it deep into Ethan's mouth.
这里的动作是,左手拽头,右手拖住伊森的下巴,大拇指摩挲伊森的下唇,然后将拇指探进去,还在里面搅了搅。
Chase pulls it out chest-high.
chase先是很不耐烦地皱眉,停顿,掏手机
ETHAN (V.O.) 伊桑(画外音)Bitch. Idiot. Spoiled piece of trash. One day, I'm going to ruin you.
伊森的inner monologue