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Matt Farragher @FarragherMatt 12h12 hours ago More Copy link to Tweet Embed Tweet Mute @FarragherMatt Unmute @FarragherMatt Block @FarragherMatt Unblock @FarragherMatt Report Tweet Add to other Moment Add to new Moment New blogs up relative to the end of the semester! Check them out, link below! http://mfarragher.digstonehill.org 0 replies 1 retweet 3 likes Reply Retweet 1 Retweeted 1 Like 3 Liked 3 Direct message Thanks. Twitter will use this to make your timeline better. Undo Undo Matt Farragher @FarragherMatt Dec 4 More Copy link to Tweet Embed Tweet Mute @FarragherMatt Unmute @FarragherMatt Block @FarragherMatt Unblock @FarragherMatt Report Tweet Add to other Moment Add to new Moment Check out my recent blog post on my reflection of Thanksgiving break! http://mfarragher.digstonehill.org
I'm glad to see that you're being more specific in your tweets.
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The background image here makes me suspect an athletics related blog. You might consider reworking it to something similarly Stonehill related.
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Matt Farragher @FarragherMatt Follows you WRI 110 account | Check out my blog First Year Struggles! Link below!
Good use of bio to sell your project.
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If this is your final post, a team photo (or photo collage) would really help give it a bit more emotional payload.
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Recap
Can you be a bit more descriptive with this title?
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Again, I'll suggest cropping this image a bit to make better use of it and pair it with a team or profile photo.
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Link to recaps of Stonehill Soccer games: https://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=stonehill+soccer
Again, make this an active link and lose the HTML.
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All Photos taken by: Michael Brehm ( Team Photographer) via ShutterFly
Does he have a contact page you could link to?
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Check out my recent podcast with Kevin and Eben and let me know what you guys think!
Could you have given us a bit more detailed preview with some of the topics you discussed? How about a photo of the three of you in uniform?
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The banner image and profile really sell the idea of your project. Well done.
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WRI 110
Could you make your bio work a little harder and possibly promote your blog?
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Tough Times Don’t Last But Tough People Do.
Try to avoid cliche in your writing as much as possible. Though popular, can you find a more original way to convey this idea?
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Recent Posts Tough Times Don’t Last But Tough People Do. November 14, 2018 Putting Yourself Out There & What’s Ahead! November 8, 2018 When In Doubt Study Some More. November 5, 2018 Picking Your Classes! November 2, 2018 Creating Your Schedule. October 29, 2018 Archives November 2018 (4) October 2018 (8) September 2018 (2) Categories Athlete Introductions Student
Good use of recent posts, archives and categories, but I'd get rid of that "introductory category and see if you can diversify your subcategories a bit more.
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The black text on white background is extremely readable, but a bit static. You might consider a background image to add a bit of visual punch.
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I like the banner image, though I think you could easily recreate it yourself. You need a photo credit there. Also, this image only appears on the first page. Ideally, you want it to appear on every page/post as an easy way to get back to your homepage.
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Welcome to my blog. Posted on September 25, 2018 Hello, my blog will be an informative blog that gives advice to both high school students and parents mainly about the recruiting process. I will be speaking from personal experiences on how to reach out to coaches and colleges to hopefully get high school students’ scholarships. I will be highlighting how students can use resources…
Time to move this info to your about me page and nuke the introductory category.
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Hello world! Posted on September 25, 2018 Welcome to WordPress. This is your first post. Edit or delete it, then start blogging!
Time to nuke this placeholder.
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Get rid of this placeholder.
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About
About me? About the author?
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Uncategorized
Time to get rid of these uncategorized posts. We need a way to search your archives easily.
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There are
Try to avoid these sentence openers.
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pull? Proofread carefully.
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Next post will be about how I pulled my quad.
I like the preview, but use complete sentences.
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shamus @shamus22589418 Nov 12 More Copy link to Tweet Embed Tweet Mute @shamus22589418 Unmute @shamus22589418 Block @shamus22589418 Unblock @shamus22589418 Report Tweet Add to other Moment Add to new Moment New post check it out!! http://scochrane.digstonehill.org/uncategorized/trainers/ …
let us know what your posts are about.
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Double blog post! http://lduggan.digstonehill.org
Try to be specific with your posts so we know what the blogs are about.
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funds
Feeds, not funds. Sodexo is a contractor paid by the university.
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The UpHill Battle Saving Money On Meal Plan
Clear title/subtitle. Maybe make the font a smidge larger?
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Tip
awkward phrasing for the title.
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I'm afraid the images for your interview didn't quite work out. Check the links?
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It is November 12, 2018, and at this point, in the year I have had to add $50.00
You might consider tracking amounts week to week. Can you get "receipt" from food services?
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Meal Plan
watch your overuse of caps.
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The purple background with dollar signs is appropriate. Purple text on white background is easy to read, but not the prettiest combo.
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you know
Watch the informal language
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About About Saving Money On Meal Plan Podcast
Sort out this about section, and make the podcast one of your posts, with commentary.
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November 2018 October 2018 September 2018
Good use of archives, though reverse chronological order is a bit counterintuitive.
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Welcome to my blog about learning how to save meal plan money here at Stonehill College! This blog will focus on how to save every penny and will give you, the reader, tips and tricks on how to. This blog should help out incoming freshman who are new to spending a set amount of money on food. Enjoy.
You might consider expanding this section a bit more.
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The marker looks awful. I'll suggest editing the image to cut the bottom off entirely. You might consider an action shot of you in one of the cafeterias on campus.
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About
Again, about me? About the Author?
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Would it be possible to make this banner image a rotating gallery?
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Uncategorized
Getting rid of these uncategorized posts is long overdue We also need an easy way to navigate your archive.
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These posts are getting a little light on content. Consider bringing in some outside sources and perspective to support your position. A white heavy background is clean, but would benefit from some additional visuals to punch up each post.
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Welcome to my blog. I aim to use the resources available to me to enlighten some people on the life of a college basketball player. When I was young it was one of my goals to play basketball for free at a college, and now I wish to share my journey with others who have the same dream, or even those living out the same dream as me. I am happy to say that I will cover areas such as drills to get better, the status of my team, meals and sleep schedule, team gear, and much more. Thank you for checking out my blog, and I hope you enjoy.
Great photo. Anything else you could tell us about your journey? Maybe include an official team photo?
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Shamir Johnson @Shamir43109391 Nov 19 More Copy link to Tweet Embed Tweet Mute @Shamir43109391 Unmute @Shamir43109391 Block @Shamir43109391 Unblock @Shamir43109391 Report Tweet Add to other Moment Add to new Moment @TheHoopFocus I notice that you post a lot about the high - school basketball scene, and I wanted to know that I really enjoy the content on this site. If possible it'd be great to get some ideas for my own blog. http://sjjohnson.digstonehill.org/
Hold off on the business card until you get a reply.
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log post http://edaly1.digstonehill.org/uncategorized/balance/ …
Give us a preview of what your posts are about.
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Erin Daly @ErinDal69473976 Nov 8 More Copy link to Tweet Embed Tweet Mute @ErinDal69473976 Unmute @ErinDal69473976 Block @ErinDal69473976 Unblock @ErinDal69473976 Report Tweet Add to other Moment Add to new Moment @CompleteCookie what are the nutritional benefits of your cookies? 0 replies 0 retweets 0 likes Reply Retweet Retweeted Like Liked Direct message Erin Daly @ErinDal69473976 Nov 8 More Copy link to Tweet Embed Tweet Mute @ErinDal69473976 Unmute @ErinDal69473976 Block @ErinDal69473976 Unblock @ErinDal69473976 Report Tweet Add to other Moment Add to new Moment @Fabletics suggestions for making going to the gym a more enjoyable time? 0 replies 0 retweets 0 likes Reply Retweet Retweeted Like Liked Direct message Erin Daly @ErinDal69473976 Nov 8 More Copy link to Tweet Embed Tweet Mute @ErinDal69473976 Unmute @ErinDal69473976 Block @ErinDal69473976 Unblock @ErinDal69473976 Report Tweet Add to other Moment Add to new Moment @GNCLiveWell any supplement suggestions for someone who wants to gain muscle but lose fat?
These are good efforts! Keep trying!
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Fix that spelling error and keep trying.
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Monday: Legs/Lower Body Warm up: 1.) Stretch – quad pulls, toe touch, knee pulls, standing fours,eat 2.)Treadmill – around 10 minutes, some incline, steady paced walk Leg exercises: 1.) Dumbell/Kettlebell Squat 3×10 2.) Quad curl on machine 3×8 3.) Hamstring curl on machine 3×10 4.) Leg Press 3×10 5.) Weighted Calf raise 3×10 Core: 1.) Crunch 3×15 2.) Side crunch 3×10 (each side) 3.) Leg lifts 3×10 4.) Side plank 3×15 seconds (each side) 5.) Toe touches 3×25 Tuesday: Arms/Upper Body Warm up: 1.) Stretch- Quads, Hamstrings, Biceps, Triceps, Back 2.)Treadmill- walk at steady pace for around 5 minutes, some incline 3.) Treadmill- Increase speed to a sprint (6-8mph) for 30 seconds, Slow speed (1-3mph) until heart rate is around resting pace. Repeat 3-5 times. Arm Exercises: 1.) dumbbell curls 3×8 2.) overhead press 3×8 3.) cable tricep pulldown 3×8 4.) assisted chin ups 3×5 5.) single arm row 3×8 each arm Core: 1.) Toe touches 3×10 2.) Plank 3×25 second
This list is really cramped. Consider breaking it up to make it easier to read.
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This workout is not necessarily for everyone, the example I gave would be fitting for someone who wishes to tone muscles with a smaller focus on weight loss. The exercises I listed here are simpler motions done with dumbbells and machines. Using machines is great for beginners because they guide you through each movement and train you to perform correctly with proper form. I listed smaller amounts of reps because at the beginning it is best to work your way up to ensure you are not overdoing it. Most of these exercises can be found in videos online, I could create a list of links to videos that will help with them for next time. I might make one more post regarding working out but I will soon shift my focus towards the other aspects of fitness and living a balanced life.
This text is much easier to read. Break it up a bit and consider putting it before your regimen.
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3.) Russian twist (with medicine ball/dumbell) 3×20 4.) Bicycle kicks 3×15
Watch your formatting here.
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This is the kind of [post that might benefit from a bit more visual pop.
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This post is well organized, but a little light on content. Consider expanding on these points or offering resources to help.
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things
Try to avoid filler words like things. Keep your language specific.
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One other note on the sea of blue. I wonder if you could add a texture or subtle background image to give it a bit more visual pop.
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I'm liking your use of categories and recent posts, but you might consider using the acronym to organize your categories. This might also work well as a header. We need a way to navigate your archive easily.
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Posts
You still need to get rid of this.
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I'm finding the gray text on white background hard to read. Could you darken it a bit?
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About
About Me? About the Author? Still waiting to see you update this.
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These photos really emphasize the health/exercise portions of your project. What about wellness and nutrition?
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I thought that I
Try to minimize your use of first person in intros.
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Wentworth Recap This past Saturday, the mens rugby team played their final game of the fall season in a matchup with Wentworth, a team that the Skyhawks had already played previously in their season. In their last engagement, Wentworth outplayed the Skyhawks, beating them by 30. This time around, the Skyhawks weren’t so easily defeated, throttling Wentworth 47-29. With the season coming to an end, Stonehill played a more relaxed style of play, not forcing the ball down the field, but instead playing newer players to get them more experience. Many players who generally didn’t get too much playing time played for the majority of the game, proving that the younger and less experienced players on the Skyhawks can still get the job done. Going into halftime, Stonehill was trailing Wentworth by just a few points, but their season wasn’t going to end on a loss. When asked about the atmosphere in the halftime huddle, freshman Anthony Poente said “At halftime we were down, but we didn’t give up. We pretty much said that we weren’t ending our season this way and went out there to finish on a good note.” They did just that, coming out and outplaying Wentworth on both sides of the field.
You need to break up these massive walls of text. Can you go into more detail on the game and tell a story?
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Local College Rugby
You're pushing the limits of your theme, and it's risking a loss of cohesion. What about more player interviews? Coach interviews?
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wet
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Skyhawks Rugby Stonehill's #1 Rugby Blog
I'll suggest making the title of the project a bit larger for emphasis.
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Weekly
Weekly recaps?
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Meta Log in Entries RSS Comments RSS
Time to nuke this.
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About
About me? About the author?
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The purple on purple on purple is a bit much. What about a banner or background image to punch it up visually?
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One of the newest breakfast trends is overnight oats. Rather than your typical style of oats (which are usually thrown into some water and heated up), overnight oats give you oatmeal with more benefits. Basically they’re just rolled or old fashioned oats that absorb whatever liquid you put in a jar with them and make for the best breakfast the next day! How To Make Them Oats. The first obvious ingredient is oats. These can be of any brand or style (I prefer Quaker Oats, Old Fashioned). Throw a cup of oats into a container as the base. An option for a container could be a mason jar as it is clear so you can see what is in it and it’s a cute container opposed to a boring jar. Liquid. This can be a dairy liquid or substitute if needed. A healthy choice I usually opt for is almond milk. The sweetness and creamy flavor give the oats a nice taste! Any type of dairy works just as well, too.Fruit. Now is where you can have some fun with it. with the basics out of the way, add some fruit on top. This can range from any kind. I usually like blueberries, bananas, raspberries, and strawberries. Add-ons. To top it off, you can add some spices andmore flavorful items if you want. Some goodchices include cinnamon, peanut butter, coconut, chia seeds, almonds, and walnuts. Once your jar is made, cap that up and toss it into the fridge. You’ll wake up the next mornign with breakfast ready to go with you to class!
This post is a smidge content light, but has some useful info. The image definitely helps sell the recipe.
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LUX ET SPES LIGHT AND HOPE
This is a bit confusing. Is it the title of a post? Just a motto?
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Categories Around Campus Energy Fitness Nutrition Recipes Sleep
The categories and search bar are great, but you also need to start thinking about creating an easy way for your readers to navigate the archive.
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I wonder if the moving gif is a bit too distracting.
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stay healthy, be happy, go hill
This is good on the side, but you could also move the sign off to the end of each post and your bio.
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nutritional community? To give an overview of this blog, you can expect to learn about what a nutritious diet should look like, places to satisfy nutritional needs around the Stonehill
The photo is good. A photo of you on campus would be better still.
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Is there a way to turn the moving gif off? If not it gets a bit distracting.
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Turkey Time!
A very topical post and a good image. But does it need a photo credit?
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Writer of Skyhawk Sustenance, a blog about healthy living on the Stonehill College campus.
Excellent. This clearly promotes your project.
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at I will be using it and focusing on it today is because of its help with relaxation. Yoga is something that can be done almost anywhere. Although ideal, you don’t
Does ths image need a photo credit?
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Simple Remarks Make All The Difference Posted on October 23, 2018October 25, 2018 by admin Hello again! Thanks for coming back to my blog! Todays post is going to be about how to make someones day. To you, it may not mean much, but to someone who is struggling, it can mean the world. People who are struggling with mental health issues often find it hard to see the good. […] Category:Mental HealthLeave a comment Read more Alcohol – Coping Strategy or Detrimental?
Coping Strategy or Crutch?
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Categories Coping Strategy Mental Health Trichotillomania Weekly
Good use of categories. But you might also include an easy way for us to peruse your archives.
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What you’ve been missing…
A clever way to say recent posts.
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admin
Is there a way you could omit or replace with your name?
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Held Captive In Your Own Mind You Aren't Alone
The White text is a bit tough to read in spots. Maybe move it above or below the image? Consider a highlight color for the text to make it more readable. The subtitle would work well as a sign off and you could use the subtitle to give us a clearer sense of what your project is about.
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I like the link to outside resources. Consider what other resources you might include here.
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A Sensitive Subject… Posted on November 20, 2018November 20, 2018 by admin Category:Mental HealthLeave a comment
The title is a bit cryptic. Also, I"m not quite sure how the image relates.
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Introduction To My Story
Again, consider minimizing the sea of gray. and/or including a background image here.
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About the author admin
Was this supposed to connect to your about me page? You might even consider combining this page with your about me page.
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One comment https://truoctran.com/scotland-vs-israel-tip-keo-bong-da-hom-nay-21-11 says: November 20, 2018 at 12:14 pm What’s up friends, іts wonderful paragraph ｒegarding teachingand fսlly explained, keеp it սp all thе time.
Weed the comment garden.
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Who Am I?
Could you put your background image here as well? Or find a way to minimize this sea of gray?
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I'm still not seeing any attempts to connect with influencers. You need to be tweeting and looking to make those connections.
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More Copy link to Tweet Embed Tweet Mute @CollinFabbri Unmute @CollinFabbri Block @CollinFabbri Unblock @CollinFabbri Report Tweet Add to other Moment Add to new Moment New blog post up http://cfabbri.digstonehill.org/uncategorized/local-college-rugby/ … 1 reply 0 retweets 1 like Reply 1 Retweet Retweeted Like 1 Liked 1 Direct message Thanks. Twitter will use this to make your timeline better. Undo Undo Collin Fabbri @CollinFabbri Nov 12 More Copy link to Tweet Embed Tweet Mute @CollinFabbri Unmute @CollinFabbri Block @CollinFabbri Unblock @CollinFabbri Report Tweet Add to other Moment Add to new Moment New post up! http://cfabbri.digstonehill.org/uncategorized/rugby-vs-football/ … 0 replies 0 retweets 0 likes Reply Retweet Retweeted Like Liked Direct message Thanks. Twitter will use this to make your timeline better. Undo Undo Collin Fabbri @CollinFabbri Nov 7 More Copy link to Tweet Embed Tweet Mute @CollinFabbri Unmute @CollinFabbri Block @CollinFabbri Unblock @CollinFabbri Report Tweet Add to other Moment Add to new Moment new blog up! http://cfabbri.digstonehill.org/weekly/northeast-rugby-current-events/ … 0 replies 0 retweets 1 like Reply Retweet Retweeted Like 1 Liked 1 Direct message
Try to give us a sense of what each post is about.
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Collin Fabbri @CollinFabbri Follows you stonehill 22 Joined April 2015 Born June 18
Wouldn't be a bad idea to link you project here.
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options first don’t pick right away, be patient.
You've got a run on here.
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was way more cheaper.
You might bring some of these posts by the CWAA and tighten up your grammar a bit.
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Don’t Fear Traveling Don’t Overthink Traveling
Try to reframe these as positive and vary your language.
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Mistakes that many people make with traveling
Be consistent with your caps. I've mentioned this before.
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Unusual Place
Again, you might go back and tighten up some of these older titles.
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Your background image is very striking. A bit devoid of people, but very tranquil, certainly.
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I’m a Stonehill Student that blogs about traveling around the world while giving tips to the readers. Whenever my family and I travel there’s always a problem and I want to help reduce the problems to others. I love to help people be happy and feel satisfy with what they do. I will be talking about the cost of different cities and countries, how to be smart when traveling, and places where to explore!
I'm not seeing an easy link to this page. You might include a few photos of you traveling with your family, since that more closely connects with your audience. Consider expanding your about me to discuss places you've visited and how long you've been traveling.
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myAudit Hi everyone! Today I will be informing you all about a crucial spot on the myhill part of the Stonehill ...
You've got a missing image here. Fill it with something so the void isn't so noticable.
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Blog Posts
This is kind of a catch all tag, like uncategorized. Try to keep your tags specific.
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Skyhawk Academic Experience The Journey Through the Semester Menu
The title is a bit general, but it does clearly indicate what your project is about. I'm really liking your banner image. Does it need a photo credit?
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Eben @Eben99622743 Nov 10 More Copy link to Tweet Embed Tweet Mute @Eben99622743 Unmute @Eben99622743 Block @Eben99622743 Unblock @Eben99622743 Report Tweet Add to other Moment Add to new Moment http://edegbor.digstonehill.org/wp-admin/post.php?post=93&action=edit … New Post 1 reply 0 retweets 0 likes Reply 1 Retweet Retweeted Like Liked Direct message Thanks. Twitter will use this to make your timeline better. Undo Undo Eben @Eben99622743 Nov 6 More Copy link to Tweet Embed Tweet Mute @Eben99622743 Unmute @Eben99622743 Block @Eben99622743 Unblock @Eben99622743 Report Tweet Add to other Moment Add to new Moment New post is up! http://edegbor.digstonehill.org/uncategorized/talking-to-a-skyhawk-pt-1/ …
You need to clue us as to the post topics.
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http://geocafes.blogspot.com/2013/04/supreme-coffee-and-donuts_17.html
Just say Photo Credit and make this an active link.
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Will I be Able to Study there?
What are their hours?
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does not offer free WiFi to their customers,
That's a biggie.
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very reasonable price.
Specifics would help here.
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Pizza earned an impressive 4 out of 5 star rating from customers on Yelp.com,attesting to their delicious food.
If we want the yelp review we'll go to yelp. Try the pizza. Tell us how it is and compare to other places you've reviewed.
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https://www.westsidemenu.com/
The logo is good. A active link to their website would be better. Photos of the interior would be better still.
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https://www.panerabread.com/en-us/menu-categories/salads.html?utm_source=yext_pages#ancient-grain-arugula-salad-with-chicken
This is cumbersome. Make it an active link.
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https://www.yelp.com/biz/panera-bread-brockton
Yelp may not be okay with you borrowing their photos. Even if they're originally taken by the owner.
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https://www.westsidemenu.com/menu
Again, look at making this an active link.
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I'm really liking the background image you've chosen. Keeping it static was a good idea and it clearly sets up your theme.
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Now that the project is almost complete I'll suggest a final post that serves as a contact page for all of the places you've reviewed.
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Local Skyhawk Eateries & Study Spaces: Plans for the Future Hi everybody! I just wanted to let you guys know that I will be ending the blog at the end of this week, however I do have a very special final post for you guys. My final post will be a ten minute podcast covering the multiple eateries that could double as a study space! Tune in at the end of the week to check it out!
Good, previewing an upcoming special is a great way to build anticipation.
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Categories Breakfast Dinner General Lunch
General feels a bit like uncategorized. See if you can add some additional useful tags. Maybe reorder the other categories a bit more logically?
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“Local Skyhawk Eateries & Study Spaces”
You've changed your title, so you need to update this page.
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About
About me, about the author. Something more than just about, please.
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shamus Retweeted Building You Better @Samuel_K357 Nov 6 More Copy link to Tweet Embed Tweet Mute @Samuel_K357 Unmute @Samuel_K357 Block @Samuel_K357 Unblock @Samuel_K357 Report Tweet Add to other Moment Add to new Moment Replying to @shamus22589418 First, do your best to eat a healthy diet. Then focus on mastering the compound movements. Use a moderate weight until you lnow the movements, then go for heavy weight and light reps. Add plenty of protein and healthy fats to your diet. And realize it takes time.
You need to respond to this post with a link to your blog.
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n my personal experience I have found it best
Try to cut these wordy qualifiers.
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Meta Log in Entries RSS Comments RSS WordPress.org
If you're worried about saving space, I'll suggest cutting these links instead.
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Categories
The drop down categories saves space, but would be more useful if you had more categories/tags.
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Friendzy
Personal preference, but I've never been a fan of intentional misspellings in titles.
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Lifting Accessories
Some additional information that might be of use to your readers: Cost? Where to buy this equipment and not get overcharged? Any brands we should look for, or stay away from?
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About Me
A solid about me page, but a photo or two of you in action would definitely add credibility.
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ackground Image: url
Be careful, that image is from an existing fashion site. They may not be okay with you borrowing their material. Could you make something similar, but more focused on your audience?
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Some genuinely interesting points you have written.Helped me a lot, just what I was looking for :D. http://www.iamsport.org/pg/pages/view/40735440/
You need to weed the garden.
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Consider these images carefully. They'd be fine for most any other topic, but for a fashion blog your outfits should really stand out and make us take notice. You might have to stage a few photos to get what you need.
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This is a great about me page, but I'll suggest putting it in a link and featuring your most recent posts on your main page.
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Trend, Set, Go! A Guide to Fashion
You might consider making your title more prominent and your subtitle more descriptive.
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You had mentioned you wanted your page to appeal to men and women. I'm afraid that background image will scare some of your male readers away.
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Recent Posts
Recent posts and the search bar is good, but this will get cumbersome the longer your post count runs. Consider a way to navigate your archive.
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Categories Decades of Fashion Fashion Tips Holidays Seasons
I'm glad to see you making good use of categories.
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You've got a very topical post here, but all of your pictures are just the clothes. Do these need photo credits? Could you actually get a shot of a student wearing this ensemble?
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The Best Feeling in The World Time management can be a real stressor but once you get the hang of it then it actually becomes a stress reliever. The hard part about getting something done is right before you start. That feeling of knowing how much you do not want to get a specific task done is what always stops me from doing the task. What helps me get through it is that feeling of relief when you finally get it done. Use this tip as a way to start your task whether is be an essay or homework or even just a chore. After completing your tasks for the day then you get to enjoy your free time or you can get ahead for the next day(I recommend doing that). Managing time can be tricky for everyone, even if you think you have it down. It is also different for everyone because we all have different activities going on through out the day. One thing I am sure that everyone has in common with time management is the feeling of getting their tasks done. I feel such a lift off my shoulders and that what motivates me during the day, that moment I get in bed knowing I got as much of my tasks done in the day while using my time management skills.
This post isn't very informative. Make sure you're at least giving your readers some advice about how to make the most of that down time and destress.
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I'm glad to see you including photo credits, but there's no reason you couldn't have recreated this better yourself.
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http://revistas.ufasta.edu.ar/index.php/initinere/user/viewPublicProfile/39907
Careful. Your bot posters are getting clever.
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Are you a college Stonehill College student that is having trouble with time management? Then welcome to my blog! As a first year student, I understand the struggle of trying to manage academics, health and a social life. I have been able to teach my self how to be able to manage my own time so that I could fit everything into my busy schedule. Luckily Stonehill offers help with this topic as well. Trough out my blog, I will have many different tips on how to manage your time most sufficiently. My hope is that I can help Stonehill college students to be able to manage time in an efficient way in order for you to get work done and enjoy the college life. My blog will be different than a blog with a similar theme because it is about my experience and how I believe students should go about handling time management. I can also talk about what the campus has in order to help students with this issue.th e audience will be specifically any Stonehill college students that is struggling with balance and time management. Follow me on my twitter page @kstracqualursi
You're doing a good job selling yourself and linking to your twitter feed, but as we've discussed, a photo of you here might help personalize your page and connect to your readers.
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About
About me, about the author. Something more than just "about."
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Categories Decisions Help Stress
I'm glad to see there are no uncategorized posts.
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Your banner image and background scream stonehill, but not exactly time management. Is there a way you could work the theme into the image a bit more prominently?
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Time Management Getting Stuff Done On The Run
I like the subtitle, but the main title could still be punched up a bit. It does get lost in the corner a bit.
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Meta Log in Entries RSS Comments RSS WordPress.org
I'll suggest losing the meta links, as your reader is unlikely to need them.
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on The Start of Something SpecialKeto Kenetics Shark Tank on The Start of Something Specialtopis found on google on The Start of Something Special
You need to weed the comment garden.
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Thriller. Spellcheck carefully.
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@
I'm not a fan of shorthand symbols like this. "at" doesn't add too much to a title.
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The logo at the bottom could be punched up by working in the Stonehill logo at the center, or perhaps behind. It could serve as a great logo for your blog.
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Categories Uncategorized
You should have no uncategorized posts at this point. Start using tags and categories and back tag your earlier posts.
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Recent Posts Postseason Status Hopes for Playoffs still alive? Tough Loss @ Assumption Trip to New Haven Overtime Thirller Recent CommentsThrive Keto Diet on The Start of Something SpecialKeto Kenetics Shark Tank on The Start of Something Specialtopis found on google on The Start of Something SpecialCategories Uncategorized
This layout is a bit static. Consider reworking as a side panel.
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Keeping up with the Stonehill Men’s Soccer Team
This could work as a subtitle. Could you come up with a more concise title to highlight?
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The banner photo is very striking. Did you take it, or do you need a photo credit here?
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Keeping up with the Stonehill Men’s Soccer Team
Purple font?
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About Me
Awkward placement. Maybe move this down to the header next to the search bar?
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I'm not seeing any tweets yet.
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twitter.com twitter.com
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Where are your tweets to influencers?
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things
Try to avoid filler language like "things."
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Relax, it’s only first semster
Cap your titles consistently.
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Just Failed a Test
Your posts vary widely by topic. Consider adding links to resources on each topic with each post so that your readers can get more information than the overview you've provided here.
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Uncategorized
You shouldn't have any uncategorized posts at this point.
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First Year Struggles It gets better.
This title is a bit vague. The subtitle suggests a very different topic.
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The Skyhawk purple is fine, but this page would really benefit from a logo or banner image to draw our attention.
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Relax, it’s only first semster
Cap your titles consistently.
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تسديد قروض on Sleep DeprivationJona on Sleep Deprivation토토사이트 on Struggles of a Student-Athlete
You need to weed the comment garden. At least one of these posts includes a potentially harmful link.
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cap your categories consistently.
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Archives November 2018 (1) October 2018 (5)
Useful for navigating your archives. But where is your about me page?
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log post two
Make this an active link.
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the tragic event on campus.
Some of your readers may not know what you're talking about here.
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Bye week…
You need to plan for this downtime and have content ready to go.
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About Me
Maybe consider moving this off to one side? Otherwise it feels oddly placed.
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Today I will be discussing our status in the postseason
Try to punch up your intros a bit. While informative, this intro doesn't draw the reader's interest.
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You've got some good photos, but they're always small and posted at a distance. Think about how you could make better use of this content.
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admin
Replace with your name or omit.
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This is actually a fairly substantial photo. Why make it so small and from a distance? Consider giving yourself a closeup here.
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Link to recaps of Stonehill Soccer games: https://www.youtube.com/results?search_query=stonehill+soccer
Making this an active link would clean it up a bit.
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I am writing this blog as a Writing in the New Media project
This probably isn't info your readers need. Consider omitting.
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This page would benefit from a photo for credibility.
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About
About me? About the author?
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Until next week, -Lindsay Duggan
Try to be consistent with your sign offs. Many posts don't include it.
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Recent Posts Shin Splint Interview Shin Splints ACL Interview ACL Concussion Interview
Highlighting recent posts is good, but you'll need to give your reader a way to navigate the archives as the post count grows.
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Welcome Hi my name is Lindsay Duggan, and I am a freshman at Stonehill College. I am playing on the Women’s Lacrosse. Many of my friends and teammates have suffered from devastating injuries. This blog is going to be about different types injuries and how it can affect a persons day to day life. The types if injuries will change every other week, and will also have interviews from people who have or have had this injury, but also tip from the athletic trainers here at Stonehill, on how to prevent injuries from happening, but also what the recovery process is like.
This welcome text should be moved to an about me page and include a photo for credibility.
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This photo needs a credit.
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While this photo is useful, it needs a photo credit.
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an ache in the front part of the lower leg pain on either side of the shin bone muscle pain severe pain in your shin after a fall or accident pain in your shins even when you’re resting swelling in the lower leg
Does this really need to be a bulleted list? Could you rework it into paragraph format?
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Today’s topic is going to be shin splints.
Try to draw your readers in with a good hook. While straightforward, this intro falls a little flat.
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Meta Log in Entries RSS Comments RSS WordPress.org
As others have noted, cut the meta links your readers don't need.
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Uncategorized
Hopefully all of your posts have tags at this point, so there shouldn't be a need for uncategorized posts.
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Today I will be interviewing my sister, who had play DII women’s lacrosse at Southern New Hampshire University. She has suffered from since she was in high school. Question: “How long have you had shin splints?” Answer: “I have had shin splints, since I was a sophomore in high school” Question: “What is the worst experience with shin splints?” Answer: “My worst experience with shin splints is when I had to wear a compression boot on my leg for 2 months because I had stress fractures.” Question: “What was the recovery process like?” Answer: “The recovery process was just to rest and to wear the compression boot, but I still have shin splints.” Question: “Is there any tip on how to avoid getting shin splints?” Answer: “Stretching before exercising, make sure you have the right style of footwear for running, and to rest if your shin is bothering you” Next post will be about quads and hamstrings.
Try to avoid the QAQA format. Can you tell a story using the interview as a basis? Why not include a photo of your interview subject?
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Shin Splint Interview
Try to punch up your titles a bit. While informative, it doesn't entice us to read on.
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njured Athletes
Could you do a bit more with this title, and possibly a subtitle?
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About Welcome to my blog about learning how to save meal plan money here at Stonehill College! This blog will focus on how to save every penny and will give you, the reader, tips and tricks on how to. This blog should help out incoming freshman who are new to spending a set amount of money on food. Enjoy.
You might expand the description of your background and the text. How does the Koala reflect the nature of your project?
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About This is an example of a WordPress page, you could edit this to put information about yourself or your site so readers know where you are coming from. You can create as many pages like this one or sub-pages as you like and manage all of your content inside of WordPress.
You have an errant about page. Remove it and redirect the link.
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About This is an example of a WordPress page, you could edit this to put information about yourself or your site so readers know where you are coming from. You can create as many pages like this one or sub-pages as you like and manage all of your content inside of WordPress. Leave a Reply Cancel reply Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *Comment Name * Email * Website
You actually have an about page, but you've done nothing with it. We should see that intro text and an image here.
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Your main image doesn't scream academia to me. it looks like a hiring blog. Consider what kind of image might better suggest the nature of your project.
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The Debut
This post should be moved to an about me page and include a picture now.
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I'm not seeing an about me page or any navigational tools on your main page. While it creates a very clean look, navigation becomes very difficult. Where is your about me page?
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Latest Blog
Does this subtitle just match the heading? Consider omitting it or moving your title here.
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When In Doubt Study Some More. November 5, 2018 rudalini Post in Uncategorized In high school whenever someone would mention study I would just laugh because I almost never did it until thirty minutes before the test. I was simply too lazy to study and did not really set aside time for it either and sometimes I regretted it, but others I was able to pass just from paying attention. My favorite form of studying was using quizlet and I found it extremely helpful, but sometimes that just was not enough. After a while I found the study method that worked best for me and I still use it to this day. When I would attempt to study, I would always push it back until the night before, but I later discovered that cramming a bunch of information the night before the test is not good. In college I began studying for quizzes and tests at least a week before I immediately saw improvement. If I know that I have a quiz coming up I will try to study twice a day for the specific subject without picking up my phone or letting other things distract me. I have tried out multiple study methods and I recommend doing the same and once you find the one that works for you stick with it. Yes, I know studying is not the most entertaining thing to do in the world, but it has to get done in order to do well in school. If you are not picking up on the information, then I recommend studying a lot more until you can fully understand the information. Some things that I find helpful when studying are quizzing myself repeatedly, explaining the information to others to see if you know it well enough for them to understand, and going over the information because repetition is key especially when studying. The most important things when it comes to studying are finding the best study method for you and making sure you space out the studying instead of cramming it all into the night before.
This is an extremely general tip. You might instead offer some suggestions about how to get the most out of your study time, or strategies to study more effectively. Or even managing your time to get more opportunities to crack the books.
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Don’t Make The Same Mistakes I Did.
Try to avoid making this a diary blog. Keep your focus on the advice you're going to give, not on you.
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