"Ideation." Media Innovation & Entrepreneurship,
"Ideation," Media Innovation & Entrepreneurship, eds. Michelle Ferrier and Elizabeth Mays, (Pressbooks, August 23, 2017),
"Ideation." Media Innovation & Entrepreneurship,
"Ideation," Media Innovation & Entrepreneurship, eds. Michelle Ferrier and Elizabeth Mays, (Pressbooks, August 23, 2017),
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“Clark Atlanta University leveraging concept of inclusive competitiveness.” http://saportareport.com. April 25, 2016.
"Clark Atlanta University Leveraging Concept of Inclusive Competitiveness," Saporta Report, April 25, 2016,
https://blog.parse.ly/. April 20, 2015.
Pars.ly, April 20, 2015,
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“How to Create and Execute a Niche Content Strategy,”
https://www.americanpressinstitute.org. May 2, 2017.
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http://startupclass.samaltman.com. October, 2, 2014 published if available.
How to Start a Startup, October, 2, 2014,
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April 2013, “Using the Crowd as an Innovation Partner.” Harvard Business Review.
“Using the Crowd as an Innovation Partner.” Harvard Business Review, April 2013,
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https://hbr.org. March 11, 2016.
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“The Four Steps to the Epiphany.”
The Four Steps to the Epiphany: Successful Strategies for Products that Win,
“Forging the link between customer experience and innovation” Website. December 28, 2016.
"Forging the Link between Customer Experience and Innovation," IBM, December 28, 2016,
https://library.gv.com/. November, 13, 2012.
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https://library.gv.com/gv-guide-to-research-847cfb08fcef. July 17, 2012. https://library.gv.com/gv-guide-to-research-847cfb08fcef#.2sgz1dpd7.
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http://archives.cjr.org. March/April 2009.
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May 19, 2016. https://mediablog.prnewswire.com. May 19, 2016.
PR Newswire for Journalists, May 19, 2016,
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comScore Media Metrrix.
"Media Metrix," comScore,
Hubspot Marketing Analytics.
"Marketing Analytics," HubSpot,
“DNA of Change.”
“DNA of Change,” Hubspot,
https://www.behance.net. July 6, 2014.
Behance, July 6, 2014,
https://www.smashingmagazine.com. August 6, 2014.
Smashing Magazine, August 6, 2014,
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Vox, “Explainers.”
"Explainers," Vox,
Dan, Brown, “Personas.”
"Personas," Usability.gov,
blog.hubspot.com.
HubSpot, August 13, 2017,
American Press Institute.
American Press Institute, https://www.americanpressinstitute.org./
Consider replacing with a reference to the Metrics for News page, which is cited in the text.
“Metrics and Measurement,” American Press Institute, https://www.metricsfornews.com/.
Bureau of Economic Analysis.
“Regional Economic Accounts,” Bureau of Economic Analysis,
United States Census Bureau.
“American Fact Finder,” United States Census Bureau,
“eMarketer.”
eMarketer,
“Forrester.”
Forrester,
Blavity.com,
"About," Blavity, 2017,
“Create a succinct value proposition: 'Customer discovery” and the Customer Development Model.' http://www.marsdd.com. December 16, 2011.
“Create a Succinct Value Proposition: 'Customer Discovery' and the Customer Development Model," MaRS, December 16, 2011,
Jeff, Jarvis, “Ecosystems and networks: What now for news?— Part III.” https://medium.com. Feb 10, 2014.
Jeff Jarvis, “Ecosystems and Networks: What Now for News?— Part III,” Medium, February 10, 2014,
Learners.” Poynter.org. August 21, 2008.
Learners," Poynter, August 21, 2008,
Jay, Rosen, “Bio.” http://pressthink.org/bio.
Jay Rosen, “Bio,” PressThink, 2016, http://pressthink.org/bio.
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Jay Rosen, “The People Formerly Known as the Audience,” PressThink, June 27, 2006, http://archive.pressthink.org/2006/06/27/ppl_frmr.html.
Cuthroat Capitalism game[33]
“Cutthroat Capitalism: The Game”[33]
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"Cutthroat Capitalism" game[33]
The advantages for mass media publishers had shrunk dramatically. This created a fundamental shift in the balance of power between traditional media and its customer; traditional media was no longer the gatekeeper of news as new voices and niche content grew online (Figure 2). And as social media platforms and tools grew on the Internet, customers could talk back, talk to each other, as well as create, share, and alter information outside traditional media organizations (Figure 3).
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The advantages for mass media publishers have shrunk dramatically, creating a fundamental shift in the balance of power between traditional media and its customers. Traditional media is no longer the gatekeeper of news as new voices and niche content continue to grow online (Figure 2). Social media platforms and online tools have allowed customers to talk back, talk to each other, as well as create, share, and alter information outside traditional media organizations (Figure 3).
http://libguides.colorado.edu.
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May 7, 2015. American Press Institute,
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Alisa, Meredith, “How to Use Psychographics in Your Marketing: A Beginner's Guide.” https://blog.hubspot.com. “December 20, 2012. https://blog.hubspot.com/insiders/marketing-psychographics.
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“Create a Succinct Value Proposition: “Customer Discovery” and the Customer Development Model.” https://www.marsdd.com. December, 16, 2011. https://www.marsdd.com/mars-library/developing-your-value-proposition-an-overview-of-customer-discovery.
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https://www.slideshare.net/amikegreen2/inclusive-competitiveness-glossary-of-term.
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http://media-entrepreneurship-course-development.wikispaces.com. 2012.
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Game design: Smallbore Webworks, Visual design: Dennis Crothers
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Anna Jasinski, "5 Ways to Engage With Digitally Empowered News Audiences." Beyond Bylines. May 19, 2016. https://mediablog.prnewswire.com/2016/05/19/5-ways-to-engage-with-digitally-empowered-news-audiences/.
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Jasinski, "5 Ways to Engage.”
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Jake, Batsell, “Earning Their Keep: Revenue Strategies From the Texas Tribune and Other Nonprofit News Startups.” April 2015. https://s3.amazonaws.com/kf-site-legacy-media/feature_assets/www/nonprofitnews-2015/pdfs/KF-NonprofitNews2015-Tribune.pdf.
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Batsell, “Earning Their Keep.”
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Wall Street Journal Media Kit.
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“Social Media: Pedagogy and Practice.”
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“Are Traditional Media Dead: Can Journalism Survive in the Digital World,”
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Poughkeepsie Journal
Poughkeepsie Journal,
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Times-Herald Record
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the Philadelphia Inquirer
The Philadelphia Inquirer (no italics)
Ingrid Sturgis
Any changes to this bio should also be made to the bio in the previous section (the introduction to this chapter): https://press.rebus.community/media-innovation-and-entrepreneurship/part/customer-discovery-acquisition/
an entrepreneur and founder
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entrepreneur and founder
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an entrepreneur and the founder
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The Four Steps to the Epiphany. [41]https
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This article features seven tips for lean market research which helps to answer many questions
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Michael Mergolis’s article, “Seven Tips for Lean Market Research,” answers many questions
This website serves as a guide to design research, featuring GV Library articles and useful other posts.
Consider rephrasing:
The GV Library website serves as a guide to design research, featuring articles and other useful posts.
https://library.gv.com/gv-guide-to-research-847cfb08fcef#.2sgz1dpd7 [38]
This shorter link goes to the same page: https://library.gv.com/gv-guide-to-research-847cfb08fcef
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in a large room with your stakeholder
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Mapping
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The New York Times
Wall Street Journal
The Wall Street Journal
Washington Post
The Washington Post
fishermen
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fishers
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“Snow Fall,”
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“Snow Fall: The Avalanche at Tunnel Creek,”
the New York Times
The New York Times
Using advances in technology it has become easier
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Advances in technology have made it easier
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SCOTUSblog
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Off The Bus 2012
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the Texas Tribune
The Texas Tribune
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John S. and James L. Knight Foundation
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binge-watch on Netflix or engage in must-see TV?
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binge-watch television shows on Netflix or seek out “must-see TV”?
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Journalist as… diagram
Journalism as . . . This diagram
yoga or men
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yoga or seniors
yoga, that seniors
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According to Johnathan M. Holifield, diversity remains a strong economic driver and entrepreneurs must adopt a strategy that embraces diversity through inclusive competitiveness.
Source/citation needed
Suggestions:
Johnathan M. Holifield, The Future Economy and Inclusive Competitiveness: How Demographic Trends and Innovation Can Create Economic Prosperity for All Americans. (New York: Palgrave Macmillan, 2017)
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Holifield, The Future Economy and Inclusive Competitiveness.
“only member-supported, digital-first, nonpartisan media organization that informs Texans — and engages with them — about public policy, politics, government and statewide issues.”
Source/citation needed
Suggestion:
“About Us.” Austin, Texas. The Texas Tribune, https://www.texastribune.org/about/.
the Texas Tribune
The Texas Tribune
the Texas Tribune
The Texas Tribune
the Tribune
The Tribune
them
The Tribune
unique value proposition
Does this term need to be defined for the reader?
It is another useful source of information on potential customers to better understand their habits, needs, and consumption patterns
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It is another useful source of information on potential customers' habits, needs, and consumption patterns.
the Texas Tribune
The Texas Tribune
Earning Their Keep: Revenue Strategies From the Texas Tribune and Other Nonprofit News Startups
Earning Their Keep: Revenue Strategies From The Texas Tribune and Other Nonprofit News Startups
The users
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all seeking
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Media Kit
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gathered
2017
2017,
The Wall Street Journal online media kit
The Wall Street Journal Media Kit
Viafora
Viafoura
Hubspot
HubSpot
Google Analytics
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Psychographic profile of a young online magazine reader
Figure 6. Psychographic profile of a young online magazine reader.
Here is a very basic user persona based upon what we know about the ideal customer for a women’s magazine.
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