Make this match "Collections" in size; add to TOC

maybe parenthetical?

kind of add to have 2 levels of subheadings here.

I wouldn't link the word "announcement"

Could we use pattern or template? I feel like "route" is a programmer term, and we're speaking to technical users, but not programmers, here. (Picture your favorite medievalist.)

Adding appendix-y sorts of material after this will wrap up the page nicely, too.

How can you tell?

If the bottom of the collection has ""Page 2 of 4" then you have a paginated collection. Many IIIF viewers will ????

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Can we just say "we generate"

I'm against using "route" to non-programmers.

(and if we keep this, create needs to be created)

I'd change this to: A group of more than one IIIF manifests is called a collection.<br /> and then combine it with the following paragraph.

Otherwise it's sort of a technical concept hanging out by itself, which this isn't the place for -- folks reading this aren't creating their own collection manifests, they are using the collection manifests that are generated from IA's collecitons.

get rid of "the" and "page" to simplify this.

"Internet Archive collections" (to differentiate)

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Although I might mention this in the collections section as a "look, the entire internet archive is a collection" sort of thing.

I think this also belongs at the end; it's more of an appendix than an "important thing you really need to know"

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I'd be tempted to move this to the bottom, think of it as an appendix.

This looks weird in my browser -- URL formatting overlaps with the text above it.

Does this need the /3 ?

Or open an issue?

cut this.

Is this IA's way of referring to video?

So.... is Presentation after Image the right order? I know it's how we always do it, but if you're not an implementer, I'm not sure it's the right order. The manifest is really the thing most folks interact with.

And it sort of solves the image vs AV problem I pointed out in Getting Started.

add "e.g. pages in a book" ?

Could we link this to the right section?

And returns....

And returns a URL to the specified manipulated section of the image (?)

ok, I really hate where this one broke! Not on the hyphen, on a /, please.

true, but maybe "find" is friendlier?

Can we break this at a different point? I kind of like prefix on the first line and identifier on the 2nd.

(Wish it didn't have to be broken across lines at all.)

This whole section gets a bit confusing -- how much of it is about images and how much about AV? It's written to be about images, with AV tucked into the first paragraph...

Maybe differentiate in this Getting Started section, pointing AV users to the Items section below and book/image folks to the image api??

add an e.g. at the beginning?

item? Or "image, book, audio or video"

Can we simplify this? "now have a IIIF API URI"???

movie or video?

could we add a (colon) after ":" -- I know this stuff and I read that as a period not a colon!

simplify to "bugs or features requests can be added"

perhaps "adopted by the Internet Archive" ?

How about "see our Making IIIF Official at the Internet Archive announcement"

"fit with" sounds better.

I feel like either here or the previous section should mention "open source"

this is a bit too cute. :) perhaps acronym?

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