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The envirbnoment is melting, so get on your surf board
defined by the urge to visit endangered destinations or experience vanishing natural wonders before they disappear.
This is sad. Can't we work to save it?
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What is the benefit of using it? It’s free.
The value proposition for WordPress is cost. It's free, which provides great value to customers.
the biggest benefit they’ll give you
Quick definition of value proposition. Easy to understand terminology.
By engaging the store owners as teachers, the McDermotts were able to build a network of expert mentors who wanted to see the neophytes win.
Learn about the system and then go for it.
The McDermott sisters took advantage of their inexperience to learn all they could.
I think this example is about the celebrity of the sisters
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Cool way to ask for help!
They consciously exploit the power differential between pitcher and catcher by asking directly and boldly for help—not in a desperate way, but with the confidence of a brilliant favorite, a talented student seeking sage advice from a beloved mentor.
Mentorship is flattering
Neophytes score points for daring to do the impossible, something catchers see as refreshing.
Taking a big chance!
When it was Alan’s turn, he dumped four boxes of prototype cereal onto the mahogany conference table, to the stunned silence of the executives. Ignoring protocol, he began constructing an elaborate fort, all the while talking furiously about the qualities of the corn flour that kept the pieces and the structure together. Finally, he challenged the executives to see who could build the tallest tower. The executives so enjoyed the demonstration that they green-lighted Alan’s project.
Took a risk that worked!
He then proceeded to lead his catchers through an exciting, detailed narrative of his film, as a master storyteller would. At the end, the executives sat back, smiling, and told the writer they’d like to go ahead with his idea.
Passionately telling the story of the idea
He wore black leather pants and a torn T-shirt, several earrings in each ear, and a tattoo on his slender arm.
The look
Artists are particularly adept at conducting what physicists call “thought experiments,” inviting the audience into imaginary worlds.
Picture it: Sicily 1922
improvise, a quality that allows them to adapt if a pitch begins to go awry
Think on your feet
Catcher: I love it!
Connected to the Catcher's childhood
Showrunners tend to display charisma and wit in pitching, say, new design concepts to marketing, but they also demonstrate enough technical know-how to convince catchers that the ideas can be developed according to industry-standard practices and within resource constraints.
Showrunners defined
catchers to judge them as likable collaborators
From judge to collaborator
To avoid fast elimination, successful pitchers—only 25% of those I have observed—turn the tables on the catchers by enrolling them in the creative process
How do you do that?
Harry Potter’s Sorting Hat
Called it
When a person we don’t know pitches an idea to us, we search for visual and verbal matches with those implicit models, remembering only the characteristics that identify the pitcher as one type or another.
Trying to make connections to strangers
person prototypes
Moving away from the strereotypes
The Sorting Hat
Harry Potter?!?!?!
Showrunners come off as professionals who combine creative inspiration with production know-how. Artists appear to be quirky and unpolished and to prefer the world of creative ideas to quotidian reality. Neophytes tend to be—or act as if they were—young, inexperienced, and naive.
The three classifications, succinctly explained
showrunner, the artist, and the neophyte
Three categories
they are participating in an idea’s development.
Participation is key! How to include the audiene.
creativity
What is creativity?
In those environments, the results were remarkably similar to what I had seen in the movie business.
Adds validity when thinking across contexts, big projects to smaller ventures
I was able to discern just how quickly assessments of creative potential are made in these high-stakes exchanges.
Research base
they stereotype us
I'm not sure I would agree with "stereotype" as much as I would say they chunk or categorize us. Like "sports cars" is category of automobiles as well as "trucks"
pitcher’s creativity as well as the proposal itself
The pitch and the idea
seller’s traits
The importance of the pitch is as important as the idea
selling them to strangers is hard
Point of sale is where the idea gets actualized
communication such
communication - graphics, pictures... - to enhance, illustrate, ...
embedded
embedding
The Publication Manual of the American Psychological Association.
Somewhere else, it stated 6th edition. I think changing them all to the current APA manual is probably the best move, that way, we will not update the website when APA is updated.
30 pages in length
somewhere else, it listed 12,000 words
This section is typically by invitation only, however nominations of an individual who has demonstrated leadership in the field of online learning will be considered.
maybe make this a paranthetical
ation only, however
only; however, nominations...
conceptual work
and conceptual works...
Topics may include, but are not limited to: innovative learning and teaching practices, instructional design, and the use of technology and multimedia resources. Articles on online pedagogy, as well as examples of "mixed" online and conventional teaching are also welcome.
I feel like these should be included in the bulleted list, not in the paragraph.
of
about
on the part of
from
but not limited to
and example topics include:
Suggested topics
Make a subheading
We hope to become a forum
Our goal is to be the leading forum...
threatens
Again, is there another word that could b used here?
patterns
patterns is used twice here. Could themes be used?
face to fac
face-to-face
with
using
an alternative
alternatives
Our multiple delivery platforms represent collective vision and model present day innovation.
I'm not quite sure I understand this sentence. Is it needed?
but not limited to
but not limited to,
8-24 months.
This is quite the range. Should we revisit that?
two to four
2-4
with variables such as time of the year, reviewers’ workloads and availability,
with variables such as time of the year along with the reviewers’ workloads and availability,
and reviewers’ second review if a second review is needed.
the word "review" is used three times. Consider revisigin.
If a revise and resubmit - decision
If a revise-and-resubmit decision is made...
peer review
peer-review
Journal of Online Learning Research and Practice follows a rigorous double-blind peer review process where both reviewers’ and authors’ anonymity is preserved to ensure objectively that the journal publishes only the best quality pieces about research, theory, and practice.
Journal of Online Learning Research and Practice follows a rigorous, double-blind, peer-review process where the anonymity of both the reviewers and authors is preserved to ensure that the journal publishes the highest quality pieces about research, theory, and practice.
gures
coma after figures
6th
7th edition
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Update email?
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this coma is not needed
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Topics may include, but are not limited to, the following:
,
articles, and theoretical pieces
Also, not quite sure what survey articles are. Could we change that to empirical or something similar? Data-based...
of
being
is
are
an online environment
online environments across institutional, program, and course-level contexts. I'm not sure that is it, but I do think this sentence needs some tinkering. The back slashes and comas are a bit confusing in the same sentence.
We hope to
The Journal's goal is to become the leading forum for discussing current strategies for leveraging technology for teaching and learning in online spaces while attending to the larger issues of data collection, assessment, and the deployment of tools for online learning.
threatens to change
changes how... (I don't really like threaten because it has a negative connotation)
patterns
Patterns is used twice in this sentence. Consider using another word. Would themes work?
For the first time
We can now view classroom data...
now offered
resulted in
face to face
hyphenate
journal,
It should be "Welcome to the Journal of Online Learning..."
Formerly Internet Learning Journal
the banner from the journal edition's first page might look better here
JournalofOnlineLearningResearchandPractice@APUS.EDU
Should this be updated with our new email?
practical/best
evidence-based
theoretical
theoretical frameworks
research
empirical research
classroom
...School and professional settings
, from logistics, technology integration, to teaching to leadership,
I don't think comas are needed in this sentence
important middle phase
I like that ideation is in the middle because it allows us to more deeply understand our problem before jumping to responses to it.
five-step design-thinking process.
There is a five-step design thinking process, for sure. But, are there iterations with more or fewer steps? What about other models for innovation?
frame your creative challenge
I totally agree with this step. Making sure we have a deep understanding of the challenge will help ensure a quality use of time.
seven ideation techniques
Are these the only techniques? There have to be more than seven, right?
pick two broad and unrelated categories
How do we know if the broad, unrelated categories we pick will work? What if the categories stump us?
A good ideation session is hard work!
I totally agree. Ideation requires the purposeful thinking about a topic. Though ideation can be playful, it requires a lot of cognitive energy to brainstorm those ideas!
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I don’t know how to handle myself in the company of people that my close friends consider their “enemies.”
I have been in an awkward situation with my friend's old flame that he still liked when I bumped into her at a party! #awkward
private tete-a-tete
If something extreme or very heinous was done to your friend, you could understand how he/she might feel hurt to think you would befriend the “enemy.”
I totally agree. I would not be friendly towards someone who hurt one of my close friends.
We should go to Mars
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14 years
ride
I saw this today!
Potential
If you are interested in applying, check here!
Programs
This is where the academic programs are.
hletics
Adding a couple notes
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