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  1. Nov 2025
    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aim to interrogate the sets of intramolecular interactions that cause kinesin-1 hetero-tetramer autoinhibition and the mechanism by which cargo interactions via the light chain tetratricopeptide repeat domains can initiate motor activation. The molecular mechanisms of kinesin regulation remain an important question with respect to intracellular transport. It has implications for the accuracy and efficiency of motor transport by different motor families, for example, the direction of cargos towards one or other microtubules.

      Strengths:

      The authors focus on the response of inactivated kinesin-1 to peptides found in cargos and the cascade of conformational changes that occur. They also test the effects of the known activator of kinesin-1 - MAP7 - in the context of their model. The study benefits from multiple complementary methods - structural prediction using AlphaFold3, 2D and 3D analysis of (mainly negative stain) TEM images of several engineered kinesin constructs, biophysical characterisation of the complexes, peptide design, hydrogen/deuterium-exchange mass spectrometry, and simple cell-based imaging. Each set of experiments is thoughtfully designed, and the intrinsic limitations of each method are offset by other approaches such that the assembled data convincingly support the authors' conclusions. This study benefits from prior work by the authors on this system and the tools and constructs they previously accrued, as well as from other recent contributions to the field.

      Weaknesses:

      It is not always straightforward to follow the design logic of a particular set of experiments, with the result that the internal consistency of the data appears unconvincing in places. For example, i) the Figure 1 AlphaFold3 models do not include motor domains whereas the nearly all of the rest of the data involve constructs with the motor domains; ii) the kinesin constructs are chemically cross-linked prior to TEM sample preparation - this is clear in the Methods but should be included in the Results text, together with some discussion of how this might influence consistency with other methods where crosslinking was not used. Can those cross-links themselves be used to probe the intramolecular interactions in the molecular populations by mass spec? In general, the information content of some of the figure panels can also be improved with more annotations (e.g. angular relationship between views in Figure 1B, approximate interpretations of the various blobs in Fig 3F, and more thought given to what the reader should extract from the representative micrographs in several figures - inclusion of the raw data is welcome but extraction and magnification of exemplar particles (as is done more effectively in Fig S5) could convey more useful information elsewhere.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Besson et al. investigate how environmental nutrient signals regulate chromosome biology through the TORC1 signaling pathway in Schizosaccharomyces pombe. Specifically, the authors explore the impact of TORC1 on cohesin function - a protein complex essential for chromosome segregation and transcriptional regulation. Through a combination of genetic screens, biochemical analysis, phospho-proteomics, and transcriptional profiling, they uncover a functional and physical interaction between TORC1 and cohesin. The data suggest that reduced TORC1 activity enhances cohesin binding to chromosomes and improves chromosome segregation, with implications for stress-responsive gene expression, especially in subtelomeric regions.

      Strengths:

      This work presents a compelling link between nutrient sensing and chromosome regulation. The major strength of the study lies in its comprehensive and multi-disciplinary approach. The authors integrate genetic suppression screens, live-cell imaging, chromatin immunoprecipitation, co-immunoprecipitation, and mass spectrometry to uncover the functional connection between TORC1 signaling and cohesin. The use of phospho-mutant alleles of cohesin subunits and their loader provides mechanistic insight into the regulatory role of phosphorylation. The addition of transcriptomic analysis further strengthens the biological relevance of the findings and places them in a broader physiological context. Altogether, the dataset convincingly supports the authors' main conclusions and opens up new avenues of investigation.

      Weaknesses:

      While the study is strong overall, a few limitations are worth noting. The consistency of cohesin phosphorylation changes under different TORC1-inhibiting conditions (e.g., genetic mutants vs. rapamycin treatment) is unclear and could benefit from further clarification. The phosphorylation sites identified on cohesin subunits do not match known AGC kinase consensus motifs, raising the possibility that the modifications are indirect. The study relies heavily on one TORC1 mutant allele (mip1-R401G), and additional alleles could strengthen the generality of the findings. Furthermore, while the results suggest that nutrient availability influences cohesin function, this is not directly tested by comparing growth or cohesin dynamics under defined nutrient conditions.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors investigate how UVC-induced DNA damage alters the interaction between the mitochondrial transcription factor TFAM and mtDNA. Using live-cell imaging, qPCR, atomic force microscopy (AFM), fluorescence anisotropy, and high-throughput DNA-chip assays, they show that UVC irradiation reduces TFAM sequence specificity and increases mtDNA compaction without protecting mtDNA from lesion formation. From these findings, the authors suggest that TFAM acts as a "sensor" of damage rather than a protective or repair-promoting factor.

      Strengths:

      (1) The focus on UVC damage offers a clean system to study mtDNA damage sensing independently of more commonly studied repair pathways, such as oxidative DNA damage. The impact of UVC damage is not well understood in the mitochondria, and this study fills that gap in knowledge.

      (2) In particular, the custom mitochondrial genome DNA chip provides high-resolution mapping of TFAM binding and reveals a global loss of sequence specificity following UVC exposure.

      (3) The combination of in vitro TFAM DNA biophysical approaches, combined with cellular responses (gene expression, mtDNA turnover), provides a coherent multi-scale view.

      (4) The authors demonstrate that TFAM-induced compaction does not protect mtDNA from UVC lesions, an important contribution given assumptions about TFAM providing protection.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors show a decrease in mtDNA levels and increased lysosomal colocalization but do not define the pathway responsible for degradation. Distinguishing between replication dilution, mitophagy, or targeted degradation would strengthen the interpretation

      (2) The sudden induction of mtDNA replication genes and transcription at 24 h suggests that intermediate timepoints (e.g., 12 hours) could clarify the kinetics of the response and avoid the impression that the sampling coincidentally captured the peak.

      (3) The authors report no loss of mitochondrial membrane potential, but this single measure is limited. Complementary assays such as Seahorse analysis, ATP quantification, or reactive oxygen species measurement could more fully assess functional integrity.

      (4) The manuscript briefly notes enrichment of TFAM at certain regions of the mitochondrial genome but provides little interpretation of why these regions are favored. Discussion of whether high-occupancy sites correspond to regulatory or structural elements would add valuable context.

      (5) It remains unclear whether the altered DNA topology promotes TFAM compaction or vice versa. Addressing this directionality, perhaps by including UVC-only controls for plasmid conformation, would help disentangle these effects if UVC is causing compaction alone.

      (6) The authors provide a discrepancy between the anisotropy and binding array results. The reason for this is not clear, and one wonders if an orthogonal approach for the binding experiments would elucidate this difference (minor point).

      Assessment of conclusions:

      The manuscript successfully meets its primary goal of testing whether TFAM protects mtDNA from UVC damage and the impact this has on the mtDNA. While their data points to an intriguing model that TFAM acts as a sensor of damaged mtDNA, the validation of this model requires further investigation to make the model more convincing. This is likely warranted for a follow-up study. Also, the biological impact of this compaction, such as altering transcription levels, is not clear in this study.

      Impact and utility of the methods:

      This work advances our understanding of how mitochondria manage UVC genome damage and proposes a structural mechanism for damage "sensing" independent of canonical repair. The methodology, including the custom TFAM DNA chip, will be broadly useful to the scientific community.

      Context:

      The study supports a model in which mitochondrial genome integrity is maintained not only by repair factors, but also by selective sequestration or removal of damaged genomes. The demonstration that TFAM compaction correlates with damage rather than protection reframes an interesting role in mtDNA quality control.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper investigates the thermal and mechanical unfolding pathways of the doubly knotted protein TrmD-Tm1570 using molecular simulations, optical tweezers experiments, and other methods. In particular, the detailed analysis of the four major unfolding pathways using a well-established simulation method is an interesting and valuable result.

      Strengths:

      A key finding that lends credibility to the simulation results is that the molecular simulations at least qualitatively reproduce the characteristic force-extension distance profiles obtained from optical tweezers experiments during mechanical unfolding. Furthermore, a major strength is that the authors have consistently studied the folding and unfolding processes of knotted proteins, and this paper represents a careful advancement building upon that foundation.

      Weaknesses:

      While optical tweezers experiments offer valuable insights, the knowledge gained from them is limited, as the experiments are restricted to this single technique.

      The paper mentions that the high aggregation propensity of the TrmD-Tm1570 protein appears to hinder other types of experiments. This is likely the reason why a key aspect, such as whether a ribosome or molecular chaperones are essential for the folding of TrmD-Tm1570, has not been experimentally clarified, even though it should be possible in principle.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The researchers sought to determine whether Ptbp1, an RNA-binding protein formerly thought to be a master regulator of neuronal differentiation, is required for retinal neurogenesis and cell fate specification. They used a conditional knockout mouse line to remove Ptbp1 in retinal progenitors and analyzed the results using bulk RNA-seq, single-cell RNA-seq, immunohistochemistry, and EdU labeling. Their findings show that Ptbp1 deletion has no effect on retinal development, since no defects were found in retinal lamination, progenitor proliferation, or cell type composition. Although bulk RNA-seq indicated changes in RNA splicing and increased expression of late-stage progenitor and photoreceptor genes in the mutants, and single-cell RNA-seq detected relatively minor transcriptional shifts in Müller glia, the overall phenotypic impact was low. As a result, the authors conclude that Ptbp1 is not required for retinal neurogenesis and development, thus contradicting prior statements about its important role as a master regulator of neurogenesis. They argue for a reassessment of this stated role. While the findings are strong in the setting of the retina, the larger implications for other areas of the CNS require more investigation. Furthermore, questions about potential reimbursement from Ptbp2 warrant further research.

      Strengths:

      This study calls into doubt the commonly held belief that Ptbp1 is a critical regulator of neurogenesis in the CNS, particularly in retinal development. The adoption of a conditional knockout mouse model provides a reliable way for eliminating Ptbp1 in retinal progenitors while avoiding the off-target effects often reported in RNAi experiments. The combination of bulk RNA-seq, scRNA-seq, and immunohistochemistry enables a thorough examination of molecular and cellular alterations at both embryonic and postnatal stages, which strengthens the study's findings. Furthermore, using publicly available RNA-Seq datasets for comparison improves the investigation of splicing and expression across tissues and cell types. The work is well-organized, with informative figure legends and supplemental data that clearly show no substantial phenotypic changes in retinal lamination, proliferation, or cell destiny, despite identified transcriptional and splicing modifications.

      Weaknesses:

      The retina-specific method raises questions regarding whether Ptbp1 is required in other CNS locations where its neurogenic roles were first proposed. Although the study performs well in transcriptome and histological analyses, it lacks functional assessments (such as electrophysiological or behavioral testing) to determine if small changes in splicing or gene expression affect retinal function.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      While previous studies by this group and others have demonstrated the anti-inflammatory properties of osteoactivin, its specific role in cartilage homeostasis and disease pathogenesis remains unknown.

      Strengths:

      Strengths of the study include its clinical relevance, given the lack of curative treatments for osteoarthritis, as well as the clarity of the narrative and the quality of most results."

      Weaknesses:

      A limitation of the study is the reliance on standard techniques; however, this is a minor concern that does not diminish the overall impact or significance of the work.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have satisfactorily addressed my concerns.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study by Teplenin and coworkers assesses the combined effects of localized depolarization and excitatory electrical stimulation in myocardial monolayers. They study the electrophysiological behaviour of cultured neonatal rat ventricular cardiomyocytes expressing the light-gated cation channel Cheriff, allowing them to induce local depolarization of varying area and amplitude, the latter titrated by the applied light intensity. In addition, they used computational modeling to screen for critical parameters determining state transitions, and for dissecting the underlying mechanisms. Two stable states, thus bistability, could be induced upon local depolarization and electrical stimulation, one state characterized by a constant membrane voltage and a second spontaneously firing, thus oscillatory state. The resulting 'state' of the monolayer was dependent on the duration and frequency of electrical stimuli, as well as the size of the illuminated area and the applied light intensity determining the degree of depolarization as well as the steepness of the local voltage gradient. In addition to the induction of oscillatory behaviour, they also tested frequency-dependent termination of induced oscillations.

      Strengths:

      The data from optogenetic experiments and computational modelling provide quantitative insights into the parameter space determining the induction of spontaneous excitation in the monolayer. The most important findings can also be reproduced using a strongly reduced computational model, suggesting that the observed phenomena might be more generally applicable.

      Weaknesses:

      While the study is thoroughly performed and provides interesting mechanistic insights into scenarios of ventricular arrhythmogenesis in the presence of localized depolarized tissue areas, the translational perspective of the study remains relatively vague. In addition, the chosen theoretical approach and the way the data is presented might make it difficult for the wider community of cardiac researchers to understand the significance of the study.

      Comments on Revision:

      The provided revisions address some of the raised concerns, but they do not change my general assessment of the paper, including its strengths and weaknesses.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Petrovic et al. investigate CCR5 endocytosis via arrestin2, with a particular focus on clathrin and AP2 contributions. The study is thorough and methodologically diverse. The NMR titration data clearly demonstrate chemical shift changes at the canonical clathrin-binding site (LIELD), present in both the 2S and 2L arrestin splice variants. To assess the effect of arrestin activation on clathrin binding, the authors compare: truncated arrestin (1-393), full-length arrestin, and 1-393 incubated with CCR5 phosphopeptides. All three bind clathrin comparably, whereas controls show no binding. These findings are consistent with prior crystal structures showing peptide-like binding of the LIELD motif, with disordered flanking regions. The manuscript also evaluates a non-canonical clathrin binding site specific to the 2L splice variant. Though this region has been shown to enhance beta2-adrenergic receptor binding, it appears not to affect CCR5 internalization.

      Similar analyses applied to AP2 show a different result. AP2 binding is activation-dependent and influenced by the presence and level of phosphorylation of CCR5-derived phosphopeptides. These findings are reinforced by cellular internalization assays.

      In sum, the results highlight splice-variant-dependent effects and phosphorylation-sensitive arrestin-partner interactions. The data argue against a (rapidly disappearing) one-size-fits-all model for GPCR-arrestin signaling and instead support a nuanced, receptor-specific view, with one example summarized effectively in the mechanistic figure.

      Weaknesses:

      Figure 1 shows regions alphaFold model that are intrinsically disordered without making it clear that this is not an expected stable position. The authors NMR titration data are n=1. Many figure panels require that readers pinch and zoom to see the data.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In the manuscript "Identification and classification of ion-channels across the tree of life: Insights into understudied CALHM channels" Taujale et al describe an interdisciplinary approach to mine the human channelome and further discover orthologues across diverse organisms, culminating in delineating co-conserved patterns in an example ion channel: CALHM. Overall, this paper comes in two sections, one where 419 human ion channels and 48,000+ channels from diverse organisms are found through a multidisciplinary data mining approach, and a second where this data is used to find co-conserved sequences, whose functional significance is validated via experiments on CALHM1 and CALHM6. Overall, this is an intriguing data-first approach to better understand even understudied ion channels like CALHM6. However, more needs to be done to pull this story together into a single coherent narrative.

      Strengths:

      This manuscript takes advantage of modern-day LLM tools to better mine the literature for ion channel sequences in humans and other species with orthologous ion channel sequences. They explore the 'dark channome' of understudied ion channels to better reveal the information evolution has to tell us about our own proteins, and illustrate the information this provides access to in experimental studies in the final section of the paper. Finally, they provide a wealth of information in the supplementary tables (in the form of Excel spreadsheets and a dataset on Zenodo) for others to explore. Overall, this is a creative approach to a wide-reaching problem that can be applied to other families of proteins.

      Weaknesses:

      Overall, while a considerable amount of work has been done for this manuscript, the presentation, both in terms of writing and figures, still can use more work even after a first round of revisions. While they have improved their discussion to more clearly describe the need for a better-curated sequence database of ion channels, and how existing resources fall short, some aspects of this process and the motivation remain unclear, especially when it comes to the CALHM sequences.

      Overall, this manuscript is a valuable contribution to the field, but requires a few main things to make it truly useful. Namely, how has this approach really improved their ability to identify conserved residues in CALHM over a less-involved approach? And better organization of the first results section of the paper, which is critical to the downstream understanding of the paper, as well as some cosmetic improvements.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The manuscript by Ivan et al aimed to identify epitopes on the Abeta peptide for a large set of anti-Abeta antibodies, including clinically relevant antibodies. The experimental work was well done and required a major experimental effort including peptide mutational scanning, affinity determinations, molecular dynamics simulations, IP-MS, WB and IHC. The first part of the work is focused on an assay in which peptides (15-18-mers) based on the human Abeta sequence, including some containing known PTMs, are immobilized, thus preventing aggregation and for this reason provide limited biologically-relevant information. Although some results are in agreement with previous experimental structural data (e.g. for 3D6), and some responses to disease-associated mutations were different when compared to wild-type sequences (e.g. in the case of Aducanumab) - which may have implications for personalized treatment. On the other hand, the contribution of conformation (as in oligomers and large aggregates) in antibody recognition patterns was took into consideration in the second part of the study, in which both full-length Abeta in monomeric or aggregated forms and human CSF was employed to investigate the differential epitope interaction between Aducanumab, donanemab and lecanemab. Interestingly, these results confirmed the expected preference of these antibodies for aggregated Abeta. Overall, I understand that the work is of interest to the field.

      Comments on revisions:

      I have no additional recommendations.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper describes experiments with alpha-synuclein (aS) with acetylated lysines (acK) at various positions. Their findings on how to use non-canonical amino acid (ncAA) mutagenesis to generate aS with acetylated lysines are valuable. The paper then continues with a range of experiments to characterise the acetylated alpha-synuclein constructs at different positions, with the aim of providing insights into which sites are relevant to disease or their function inside cells. The paper concludes these experiments with the suggestion that inhibiting the Zn2+-dependent histone deacetylase HDAC8 to potentially increase acetylation at lysine 80 may have therapeutic benefit. However, the relevance of most of these experiments is unclear, mainly as the filaments that form from these constructs are different from those observed in human disease (but see below for more details). Moreover, using the recombinantly produced acetylated versions of alpha-synuclein to normalise mass-spectrometry data, the authors themselves report that acetylation of alpha-synuclein does not differ between individuals with Parkinson's disease or healthy controls.

      Strengths:

      The authors report difficulties with chemical synthesis, and then decide to make these constructs using non-canonical amino acid (ncAA) mutagenesis, which seems to work reasonably well (yields vary somewhat). In the Conclusion section, the authors report that they used these recombinant proteins to obtain quantitative insights into the levels of acetylation of lysines in individuals with PD versus healthy controls, for which they find no significant differences. This part of the work is valuable.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors then use circular dichroism to show that aSyn with acK at position 43 has less alpha-helical content. From this result, they deduce that "only this site could potentially perturb aS function in neurotransmitter trafficking", but no experiments on neurotransmitter trafficking were performed.

      Subsequently, they measure the aggregation speed of the variants in seeded aggregation experiments with preformed fibrils (PFFs) from WT aSyn, and conclude that acK at positions 12, 43, and 80 yields slower aggregation. They reach similar conclusions when measuring seeded aggregation in primary cultures. As far as I understand it, the seeding experiments in cells use seeds that are assembled from partially acetylated alpha-synuclein, but that are made of non-acetylated wildtype alpha-synuclein, and the alpha-synuclein that is endogenous in the cells is also non-acetylated (or at least not beyond what happens in these cells at endogenous levels). It is therefore unclear how the cellular seeding experiments relate to the in vitro aggregation assays with (partially) acetylated substrates. Anyway, both aggregation experiments ignore that the structures of aSyn filaments in Parkinson's disease (PD) or multiple system atrophy (MSA) are different from those formed in these experiments, and that, therefore, the observed aggregation kinetics are likely irrelevant for the speed with which disease-relevant filaments form in the brain.

      NMR and FCS experiments show that acK at positions 12 and 43 may reduce binding to vesicles, which then leaves only acK80.

      Finally, the authors describe the cryo-EM structure of mixtures of acK80:WT aSyn filaments, which are predominantly made of WT aSyn, with a previously described structure. Filaments made of only acK80 aSyn have a modified arrangement of this structure, where the now neutral side chain of residue 80 packs inside a hydrophobic pocket. The authors discuss differences between the acK80 structures and those of other structures from in vitro assembled aSyn filaments, none of which are the same as those observed from PD or MSA brains, nor are any attempts made to transfer observations from the in vitro experiments to the structures of disease. The relevance of the cryo-EM structures for human disease, therefore, remains unclear.

      The Conclusion on p.20 mentions an interesting and valuable result: the authors used the acetylated recombinant proteins to determine the extent of acetylation within human protein samples by quantitative liquid chromatography MS (SI, Figures S41-S49). Their conclusion is that "The level of acetylation was variable - no clear trend was observed between healthy control and patients - nor between patients of different diseases (SI, Table S4, Supplementary Data 1)" This result implies that acetylation of aS is not directly related to its pathogenicity, which again adds doubts on the disease-relevance of the results described in the rest of the paper.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study by Akita B. Jaykumar et al. explored an interesting and relevant hypothesis whether serine/threonine With-No-lysine (K) kinases (WNK)-1, -2, -3, and -4 engage in insulin-dependent glucose transporter-4 (GLUT4) signaling in the murine central nervous system. The authors especially focused on the hippocampus as this brain region exhibits high expression of insulin and GLUT4. Additionally, disrupted glucose metabolism in the hippocampus has been associated with anxiety disorders, while impaired WNK signaling has been linked to hypertension, learning disabilities, psychiatric disorders or Alzheimer's disease. The study took advantage of selective pan-WNK inhibitor WNK 643 as the main tool to manipulate WNK 1-4 activity both in vivo by daily, per-oral drug administration to wild-type mice, and in vitro by treating either adult murine brain synaptosomes, hippocampal slices, primary cortical cultures, and human cell lines (HEK293, SH-SY5Y). Using a battery of standard behavior paradigms such as open field test, elevated plus maze test, and fear conditioning, the authors convincingly demonstrate that the inhibition of WNK1-4 results in behavior changes, especially in enhanced learning and memory of WNK643-treated mice. To shed light on the underlying molecular mechanism, the authors implemented multiple biochemical approaches including immunoprecipitation, glucose-uptake assay, surface biotylination assay, immunoblotting, and immunofluorescence. The data suggest that simultaneous insulin stimulation and WNK1-4 inhibition results in increased glucose uptake and the activity of insulin's downstream effectors, phosphorylated Akt and phosphorylated AS160. Moreover, the authors demonstrate that insulin treatment enhances the physical interaction of the WNK effector OSR1/SPAK with Akt substrate AS160. As a result, combined treatment with insulin and the WNK643 inhibitor synergistically increases the targeting of GLUT4 to the plasma membrane. Collectively, these data strongly support the initial hypothesis that neuronal insulin- and WNK-dependent pathways do interact and engage in cognitive functions.

      In response to our initial comments, the authors mildly revised the manuscript, which did not improve the weaknesses to a sufficient level. Our follow-up comments are labeled under "Revisions 1".

      Strengths:

      The insulin-dependent signaling in the central nervous system is relatively understudied. This explorative study delves into several interesting and clinically relevant possibilities, examining how insulin-dependent signaling and its crosstalk with WNK kinases might affect brain circuits involved in memory formation and/or anxiety. Therefore, these findings might inspire follow-up studies performed in disease models for disorders that exhibit impaired glucose metabolism, deficient memory, or anxiety, such as Diabetes mellitus, Alzheimer's disease, or most of psychiatric disorders.

      The graphical presentation of the figures is of high quality, which helps the reader to obtain a good overview and to easily understand the experimental design, results, and conclusions.

      The behavioral studies are well conducted and provide valuable insights into the role of WNK kinases in glucose metabolism and their effect on learning and memory. Additionally, the authors evaluate the levels of basal and induced anxiety in Figures 1 and 2, enhancing our understanding of how WNK signaling might engage in cognitive function and anxiety-like behavior, particularly in the context of altered glucose metabolism.

      The data presented in Figures 3 and 4 are notably valuable and robust. The authors effectively utilize a variety of in vivo and in vitro models, combining different treatments in a clear manner. The experimental design is well-controlled, efficiently communicated, and well-executed, providing the reader with clear objectives and conclusions. Overall, these data represent particularly solid and reproducible evidence on the enhanced glucose uptake, GLUT4 targeting, and downstream effectors' activation upon insulin and WNK/OSR1 signaling crosstalk.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The study used a WNK643 inhibitor as the only tool to manipulate WNK1-4 activity. This inhibitor seems selective; however, it has been reported that it exhibits different efficiency in inhibiting the individual WNK kinases among each other (e.g. PMID: 31017050, PMID: 36712947). Additionally, the authors do not analyze nor report the expression profiles or activity levels of WNK1, WNK2, WNK3, and WNK4 within the relevant brain regions (i.e. hippocampus, cortex, amygdala). Combined, these weaknesses raise concerns about the direct involvement of WNK kinases within the selected brain regions and behavior circuits. It would be beneficial if the authors provided gene profiling for WNK1, 2, 3, and -4 (e.g. using Allen brain atlas). To confirm the observations, the authors should either add results from using other WNK inhibitors or, preferentially, analyze knock-down or knock-out animals/tissue targeting the single kinases.

      Revisions 1: The authors added Fig. S1A during the revisions to show expression of Wnt1-4. While the expression data from humans is interesting, the experimental part of the study is performed in mice. It would be more informative for the authors to add expression profiles from mice or overview the expression pattern with suitable references in the introduction to address this point. The authors did not add data from knock down or knockout tissue targeting the single kinases.

      (2) The authors do not report any data on whether the global inhibition of WNKs affects insulin levels as such. Since the authors demonstrate the synergistic effect of simultaneous insulin treatment and WNK1-4 inhibition, such data are missing.

      Revisions 1: The authors added Fig. S5A to address this point. It is appreciated that authors performed the needed experiment. Unfortunately, no significant change was found, therefore, the authors still cannot conclude that they demonstrate a synergistic effect of simultaneous insulin treatment and WNT1-4 inhibition. It is a missed opportunity that the authors did not measure insulin in the CSF or tissue lysate to support the data.

      (3) The study discovered that the Sortilin receptor binds to OSR1, leading the authors to speculate that Sortilin may be involved in the insulin-dependent GLUT4 surface trafficking. The authors conclude in the result section that "WNK/OSR1/SPAK influences insulin-sensitive GLUT4 trafficking by balancing GLUT4 sequestration in the TGN via regulation of Sortilin with GLUT4 release from these vesicles upon insulin stimulation via regulation of AS160." However, the authors do not provide any evidence supporting Sortilin's involvement in such regulation, thus, this conclusion should be removed from the section. Accordingly, the first paragraph of the discussion should be also rephrased or removed.

      Revisions 1: The authors added Fig. 5M-N to address this point. The new experiment is appreciated. However, the authors still do not show that sortilin is involved in insulin or WNK-dependent GLUT4 trafficking in their set up since the authors do not demonstrate any changes in GLUT4 sorting or binding. The conclusions should therefore be rephrased or included purely in the discussion. Moreover, the discussion was not adjusted either, leading to over interpretation based on the available data.

      (4) The background relevant to Figure 5, as well as the results and conclusions presented in Figure 5 are quite challenging to follow due to the lack of a clear introduction to the signaling pathways. Consequently, understanding the conclusions drawn from the data is also difficult. It would be beneficial if the authors addressed this issue with either reformulations or additional sections in the introduction. Furthermore, the pulldown experiments in this figure lack some of the necessary controls.

      Revisions 1: The Authors insufficiently addressed this point during the revisions and did not rewrite the introduction as suggested.

      (5) The authors lack proper independent loading controls (e.g. GAPDH levels) in their immunoblots throughout the paper, and thus their quantifications lack this important normalization step. The authors also did not add knock-out or knock-down controls in their co-IPs. This is disappointing since these improvements were central and suggested during the revision process.

      (6) The schemes that represent only hypotheses (Fig. 1K, 4A) are unnecessary and confusing and thus should be omitted or placed at the end of each figure if the conclusions align.

      (7) Low-quality images, such as Fig. 5H should be replaced with high-resolution photos, moved to the supplementary, or omitted.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study identifies HSD17B7 as a cholesterol biosynthesis gene enriched in sensory hair cells, with demonstrated importance for auditory behavior and potential involvement in mechanotransduction. Using zebrafish knockdown and rescue experiments, the authors show that loss of hsd17b7 reduces cholesterol levels and impairs hearing behavior. They also report a heterozygous nonsense variant in a patient with hearing loss. The gene mutation has a complex and somewhat inconsistent phenotype, appearing to mislocalize, reduce mRNA and protein levels, and alter cholesterol distribution, supporting HSD17B7 as a potential deafness gene.

      While the study presents an interesting candidate and highlights an underexplored role for cholesterol in hair cell function, several important claims are insufficiently supported, and the mechanistic interpretations remain somewhat murky.

      Strengths:

      (1) HSD17B7 is a new candidate deafness gene with plausible biological relevance.

      (2) Cross-species RNAseq convincingly shows hair-cell enrichment.

      (3) Lipid metabolism, particularly cholesterol homeostasis, is an emerging area of interest in auditory function.

      (4) The connection between cholesterol levels and MET is potentially impactful and, if substantiated, would represent a significant advance.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The pathogenic mechanism of the E182STOP variant is unclear: The mutant protein presumably does not affect WT protein localization, arguing against a dominant-negative effect. Yet, overexpression of HSD17B7-E182* alone causes toxicity in zebrafish, and it binds and mislocalizes cholesterol in HEI-OC1 cells, suggesting some gain-of-function or toxic effect. In addition, the mRNA of the variant has a low expression level, suggesting nonsense-mediated decay. This complexity and inconsistency need clearer explanation.

      (2) The link to human deafness is based on a single heterozygous patient with no syndromic features. Given that nearly all known cholesterol metabolism disorders are syndromic, this raises concerns about causality or specificity. The term "novel deafness gene" is premature without additional cases or segregation data.

      (3) The localization of HSD17B7 should be clarified better: In HEI-OC1 cells, HSD17B7 localizes to the ER, as expected. In mouse hair cells, the staining pattern is cytosolic and almost perfectly overlaps with the hair cell marker used, Myo7a. This needs to be discussed. Without KO tissue, HSD17B7 antibody specificity remains uncertain.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This work by Antonnen et al. was triggered by claims of auditory-mediated effects on altricial avian embryos, which were published without any direct evidence that the relevant parental vocalizations were actually heard. I agree with Anttonen et al. that, based on the available evidence about avian auditory development, those claims are highly speculative and therefore necessitate more direct experimental verification.

      Attonen et al. have embarked on a comprehensive series of experiments to:

      (1) Better characterize acoustically the relevant parental vocalizations (heat whistles; in a separate preprint, not reviewed here)

      (2) Characterize the auditory sensitivity of zebra finches at various stages of their posthatching development. Despite the long-standing importance of the zebra finch as a songbird model in neuroethology of learned vocalizations, the auditory development of the species has not been studied so far.

      (3) Explore an alternative hypothesis of how the parental vocalizations might be perceived.

      The principal method used here is the non-invasive recording of ABR (auditory brainstem response), a standard neurophysiological method in auditory research. The click-evoked ABR provides a quick and objective assessment of basic hearing sensitivity that does not require animal training. Weaknesses of the technique include its limited frequency specificity and low signal-to-noise ratio. The authors are experienced with ABR measurements and well aware of those issues. ABR responses in zebra finches are shown to gradually appear during the first week posthatching and to mature in subsequent weeks, consistent with the auditory development in other altricial bird species studied previously. When matching the acoustic properties of parental heat whistles and auditory sensitivities, hearing of the parental heat whistles by zebra finch hatchlings was convincingly excluded. Although not directly measured, this also convincingly extrapolates to zebra finch embryos. Finally, the authors tested the hypothesis that parental heat whistles could induce perceptible vibrations of the egg and thus stimulate the embryo via a different modality. The method used here was laser doppler vibrometry, an appropriate, state-of-the-art technique that the authors also have proven experience with. The induced vibrations were shown to be several orders of magnitude below known vibrotactile sensitivities in mammals and birds. Thus, although zebra finch vibrotactile thresholds were not obtained directly, the hypothesis of vibrotactile perception of parental heat whistles by zebra finch embryos could also be rejected convincingly.

      In summary, even when considering some weaknesses of the techniques (which the authors are aware of), the conclusions of the paper are well supported: Auditory and/or vibration perception of parental heat whistles can be excluded as an explanation for previous reports of developmental programming for high ambient temperatures. As a constructive suggestion towards resolving the apparent paradox, the authors recommend repeating some of the crucial, previous playback experiments at lower sound levels that better match the natural parental vocalizations.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Dorrego-Rivas et al. investigated two different DA neurons and their neurotransmitter release properties in the main olfactory bulb. They found that the two different DA neurons in mostly glomerular layers have different morphologies as well as electrophysiological properties. The anaxonic DA neurons are able to self-inhibit but the axon-bearing ones are not. The findings are interesting and important to increase the understanding both of the synaptic transmissions in the main olfactory bulb and the DA neuron diversity. However, there are some major questions that the authors need to address to support their conclusions.

      (1) It is known that there are two types of DA neurons in the glomerular layer with different diameters and capacitances (Kosaka and Kosaka, 2008; Pignatelli et al., 2005; Angela Pignatelli and Ottorino Belluzzi, 2017). In this manuscript, the authors need to articulate better which layer the imaging and ephys recordings took place, all glomerular layers or with an exception. Meanwhile, they have to report the electrophysiological properties of their recordings, including capacitances, input resistance, etc.

      (2) It is understandable that recording the DA neurons in the glomerular layer is not easy. However, the authors still need to increase their n's and repeat the experiments at least three times to make their conclusion more solid. For example (but not limited to), Fig 3B, n=2 cells from 1 mouse. Fig.4G, the recording only has 3 cells.

      (3) The statistics also use pseudoreplicates. It might be better to present the biology replicates, too.

      (4) In Figure 4D, the authors report the values in the manuscript. It is recommended to make a bar graph to be more intuitive.

      (5) In Figure 4F and G, although the data with three cells suggest no phenotype, the kinetics looked different. So, the authors might need to explore that aside from increasing the n.

      (6) Similarly, for Figure 4I and J, L and M, it is better to present and analyze it like F and G, instead of showing only the after-antagonist effect.

      Comments on revisions:

      In the rebuttal, the authors argued that it had been extremely hard to obtain recordings stable enough for before-and-after effects on the same cell. Alternatively, they could perform the before-and-after comparison on different cells.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper investigates the physical mechanisms underlying cell intercalation, which then enables collective cell flows in confluent epithelia. The authors show that T1 transitions (the topological transitions responsible for cell intercalation) correspond to the unbinding of groups of hexatic topological defects. Defect unbinding, and hence cell intercalation and collective cell flows, are possible when active stresses in the tissue are extensile. This result helps to rationalize the observation that many epithelial cell layers have been found to exhibit extensile active nematic behavior.

      Strengths:

      The authors obtain their results based on a combination of active hexanematic hydrodynamics and a multiphase field (MPF) model for epithelial layers, whose connection is a strength of the paper. With the hydrodynamic approach, the authors find the active flow fields produced around hexatic topological defects, which can drive defect unbinding. Using the MPF simulations, the authors show that T1 transitions tend to localize close to hexatic topological defects.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      This study by Park and colleagues uses longitudinal saliva viral load data from two cohorts (one in the US and one in Japan from a clinical trial) in the pre-vaccine era to subset viral shedding kinetics and then use machine learning to attempt to identify clinical correlates of different shedding patterns. The stratification method identifies three separate shedding patterns discriminated by peak viral load, shedding duration, and clearance slope. The authors also assess micro-RNAs as potential biomarkers of severity but do not identify any clear relationships with viral kinetics.

      Strengths:

      The cohorts are well developed, the mathematical model appears to capture shedding kinetics fairly well, the clustering seems generally appropriate, and the machine learning analysis is a sensible, albeit exploratory approach. The micro-RNA analysis is interesting and novel.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study investigated the impact of early HIV specific CD8 T cell responses on the viral reservoir size after 24 weeks and 3 years of follow up in individuals who started ART during acute infection. Viral reservoir quantification showed that total and defective HIV DNA, but not intact, declined significantly between 24 weeks and 3 years post-ART. The authors also showed that functional HIV-specific CD8⁺ T-cell responses persisted over three years and that early CD8⁺ T-cell proliferative capacity was linked to reservoir decline, supporting early immune intervention in the design of curative strategies.

      The paper is well written, easy to read, and the findings are clearly presented. The study is novel as it demonstrates the effect of HIV specific CD8 T cell responses on different states of the HIV reservoir, that is HIV-DNA (intact and defective), the transcriptionally active and inducible reservoir. Although small, the study cohort was relevant and well-characterized as it included individuals who initiated ART during acute infection, 12 of whom were followed longitudinally for 3 years, providing unique insights into the beneficial effects of early treatment on both immune responses and the viral reservoir. The study uses advanced methodology. I enjoyed reading the paper.

      The study's limitations are minor and well acknowledged. While the cohort included only male participants-potentially limiting generalizability-the authors have clarified this limitation in the discussion. Although a chronic infection control group was not yet available, the authors explained that their protocol includes plans to add this comparison in future studies. These limitations are appropriately addressed and do not undermine the strength or validity of the study's conclusions.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors attempt to study how oocyte incomplete cytokinesis occurs in the mouse ovary.

      Strengths:

      The finding that UPR components are highly expressed during zygotene is an interesting result that has broad implications for how germ cells navigate meiosis. The findings that proteasome activity increases in germ cells compared to somatic cells suggest that the germline might have a quantitatively different response for protein clearance.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The microscopy images look saturated, for example, Figure 1a, b, etc? Is this a normal way to present fluorescent microscopy?

      (2) The authors should ensure that all claims regarding enrichment/lower vs lower values have indicated statistical tests.

      (a) In Figure 2f, the authors should indicate which comparison is made for this test. Is it comparing 2 vs 6 cyst numbers?

      (b) Figures 4d and 4e do not have a statistical test indicated.

      (3) Because the system is developmentally dynamic, the major conclusions of the work are somewhat unclear. Could the authors be more explicit about these and enumerate them more clearly in the abstract?

      (4) The references for specific prior literature are mostly missing (lines 184-195, for example).

      (5) The authors should define all acronyms when they are first used in the text (UPR, EGAD, etc).

      (6) The jumping between topics (EMA, into microtubule fragmentation, polarization proteins, UPR/ERAD/EGAD, GCNA, ER, balbiani body, etc) makes the narrative of the paper very difficult to follow.

      (7) The heading title "Visham participates in organelle rejuvenation during meiosis" in line 241 is speculative and/or not supported. Drawing upon the extensive, highly rigorous Drosophila literature, it is safe to extrapolate, but the claim about regeneration is not adequately supported.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this paper, the authors conduct both experiments and modeling of human cytomegalovirus (HCMV) infection in vitro to study how the infectivity of the virus (measured by cell infection) scales with the viral concentration in the inoculum. A naïve thought would be that this is linear in the sense that doubling the virus concentration (and thus the total virus) in the inoculum would lead to doubling the fraction of infected cells. However, the authors show convincingly that this is not the case for HCMV, using multiple strains, two different target cells, and repeated experiments. In fact, they find that for some regimens (inoculum concentration), infected cells increase faster than the concentration of the inoculum, which they term "apparent cooperativity". The authors then provided possible explanations for this phenomenon and constructed mathematical models and simulations to implement these explanations. They show that these ideas do help explain the cooperativity, but they can't be conclusive as to what the correct explanation is. In any case, this advances our knowledge of the system, and it is very important when quantitative experiments involving MOI are performed.

      Strengths:

      Careful experiments using state-of-the-art methodologies and advancing multiple competing models to explain the data.

      Weaknesses:

      There are minor weaknesses in explaining the implementation of the model. However, some specific assumptions, which to this reviewer were unclear, could have a substantial impact on the results. For example, whether cell infection is independent or not. This is expanded below.

      Suggestions to clarify the study:

      (1) Mathematically, it is clear what "increase linearly" or "increase faster than linearly" (e.g., line 94) means. However, it may be confusing for some readers to then look at plots such as in Figure 2, which appear linear (but on the log-log scale) and about which the authors also say (line 326) "data best matching the linear relationship on a log-log scale".

      (2) One of the main issues that is unclear to me is whether the authors assume that cell infection is independent of other cells. This could be a very important issue affecting their results, both when analyzing the experimental data and running the simulations. One possible outcome of infection could be the generation of innate mediators that could protect (alter the resistance) of nearby cells. I can imagine two opposite results of this: i) one possibility is that resistance would lead to lower infection frequencies and this would result in apparent sub-linear infection (contrary to the observations); or ii) inoculums with more virus lead to faster infection, which doesn't allow enough time for the "resistance" (innate effect) to spread (potentially leading to results similar to the observations, supra-linear infection).

      (3) Another unclear aspect of cell infection is whether each cell only has one chance to be infected or multiple chances, i.e., do the authors run the simulation once over all the cells or more times?

      (4) On the other hand, the authors address the complementary issue of the virus acting independently or not, with their clumping model (which includes nice experimental measurements). However, it was unclear to me what the assumption of the simulation is in this case. In the case of infection by a clump of virus or "viral compensation", when infection is successful (the cell becomes infected), how many viruses "disappear" and what happens to the rest? For example, one of the viruses of the clump is removed by infection, but the others are free to participate in another clump, or they also disappear. The only thing I found about this is the caption of Figure S10, and it seems to indicate that only the infected virus is removed. However, a typical assumption, I think, is that viruses aggregate to improve infection, but then the whole aggregate participates in infection of a single cell, and those viruses in the clump can't participate in other infections. Viral cooperativity with higher inocula in this case would be, perhaps, the result of larger numbers of clumps for higher inocula. This seems in agreement with Figure S8, but was a little unclear in the interpretation provided.

      (5) In algorithm 1, how does P_i, as defined, relate to equation 1?

      (6) In line 228, and several other places (e.g., caption of Table S2), the authors refer to the probability of a single genome infecting a cell p(1)=exp(-lambda), but shouldn't it be p(1)=1-exp(-lambda) according to equation 1?

      (7) In line 304, the accrued damage hypothesis is defined, but it is stated as a triggering of an antiviral response; one would assume that exposure to a virion should increase the resistance to infection. Otherwise, the authors are saying that evolution has come up with intracellular viral resistance mechanisms that are detrimental to the cell. As I mentioned above, this could also be a mechanism for non-independent cell infection. For example, infected cells signal to neighboring cells to "become resistance" to infection. This would also provide a mechanism for saturation at high levels.

      (8) In Figure 3, and likely other places, t-tests are used for comparisons, but with only an n=5 (experiments). Many would prefer a non-parametric test.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors use high-resolution ribosome profiling (Ezra-seq) and eRF1 pulldown-based ribosome profiling (eRF1-seq) developed in their lab to identify a GA rich sequence motif located upstream of the stop codon responsible for translation termination pausing. They then perform a massively parallel assay with randomly generated sequences to further characterize this motif. Using mouse tissues, they show that termination pausing signatures can be tissue-specific. They use a series of published ribosome structures and 18S rRNA mutants, and eS26 knockdown experiments to propose that the GA rich sequence interacts with the 3′-end of the 18S rRNA.

      Strengths:

      (1) Robust ribosome profiling data and clear analyses clarify the subtle behavior of terminating ribosomes near the stop codon.

      (2) Novel termination or "false termination" sites revealed by eRF1-seq in the 5′-UTR, 3′-UTR, and CDS highlight a previously underappreciated facet of translation dynamics.

      Weakness:

      (1) Modest effects seen in ABCE1 knockdown do not seem to add up to the level of regulation. The authors state "ABCE1 regulates terminating ribosomes independent of the sequence context" on pg 9, and "ABCE1 modulates termination pausing independent of the mRNA sequence context" in the figure caption for Figure S4. Given the modest effect of the knockdown, such phrasing is most likely not supported. Further clarification of "ABCE1 plays a generic role in translation termination" is necessary.

      (2) The authors propose that the GA rich sequence element upstream of the stop codon on the mRNA could potentially base pair with the 3′-end of the 18S rRNA. In the PDBs the authors reference in their paper and also in 3JAG, 3JAH, 3JAI (structures of terminating ribosomes with the stop codon in the A-site and eRF1), the mRNA exiting the ribosome and the 3′-end of the 18S rRNA are about 25-30 A apart. In addition, a segment of eS26 is wedged in between these two RNA segments. This reviewer noted this arrangement in a random sampling of 5 other PDBs of mammalian and human ribosome 80S structures. How do the authors anticipate the base pairing they have proposed to occur in light of these steric hindrances? RpsS26 is known to be released by Tsr2 in yeast during very specific stresses. Is it their expectation that termination pausing in human/mammalian cells happens during stressful conditions only?

      (3) The authors say, "It is thus likely that mRNA undergoes post-decoding scanning by 18S rRNA." (pg. 10). It is unclear what the authors mean by "scanning." Do they mean that the mRNA gets scanned in a manner similar to scanning during initiation? There is no evidence presented to support that particular conclusion.

      (4) Role of termination pausing in the testis is highly speculative. The authors state: "It is thus conceivable that the wide range of ribosome density at stop codons in testis facilitates functional division of ribosome occupancy beyond the coding region." It is unclear what type of functional division they are referring to.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Microglia are mononuclear phagocytes in the CNS and play essential roles in physiology and pathology. In some conditions, circulating monocytes may infiltrate in the CNS and differentiated into microglia or microglia-like cells. However, the specific mechanism is large unknown. In this study, the authors explored the epigenetic regulation of this process. The quality of this study will be significantly improved if a few questions are addressed.

      (1) The capacity of circulating myeloid cell-derived microglia are controversial. In this study, the authors utilized CX3CR1-GFP/CCR2-DsRed (hetero) mice as a lineage tracing line. However, this animal line is not an appropriate approach for this purpose. For example, when the CX3CR1-GFP/CCR2-DsRed as the undifferentiated donor cell, they are GFP+ and DsRed+. When the cell fate has been changed to microglia, they will change into GFP+ and DsRed- cells. However, this process is mediated with busulfan and artificially introduced bone marrow cells in the circulating cell, which is not existed in physiological and pathological conditions. These artifacts will potentially bring in artifacts and confound the conclusion, as the classical wrong text book knowledge of the bone marrow derived microglia theory and subsequently corrected by Fabio Rossi lab1,2. This is the most risk for drawing this conclusion. The top evidence is from the parabiosis animal model. Therefore, A parabiosis study before making this conclusion, combining a CX3CR1-GFP (hetero) mouse with a WT mouse without busulfan conditioning and looking at whether there are GFP+ microglia in the GFP- WT mouse brain. If there are no GFP+ microglia, the author should clarify this is not a physiological or pathological condition, but a defined artificial host condition, as previously study did3.

      (2) In some conditions, peripheral myeloid cells can infiltrate and replace the brain microglia4,5. Discuss it would be helpful to better understand the mechanism of microglia replacement.

      References:

      (1) Ajami, B., Bennett, J.L., Krieger, C., Tetzlaff, W., and Rossi, F.M. (2007). Local self-renewal can sustain CNS microglia maintenance and function throughout adult life. Nature neuroscience 10, 1538-1543. 10.1038/nn2014.

      (2) Ajami, B., Bennett, J.L., Krieger, C., McNagny, K.M., and Rossi, F.M.V. (2011). Infiltrating monocytes trigger EAE progression, but do not contribute to the resident microglia pool. Nature neuroscience 14, 1142-1149. http://www.nature.com/neuro/journal/v14/n9/abs/nn.2887.html#supplementary-information.

      (3) Mildner, A., Schmidt, H., Nitsche, M., Merkler, D., Hanisch, U.K., Mack, M., Heikenwalder, M., Bruck, W., Priller, J., and Prinz, M. (2007). Microglia in the adult brain arise from Ly-6ChiCCR2+ monocytes only under defined host conditions. Nature neuroscience 10, 1544-1553. 10.1038/nn2015.

      (4) Wu, J., Wang, Y., Li, X., Ouyang, P., Cai, Y., He, Y., Zhang, M., Luan, X., Jin, Y., Wang, J., et al. (2025). Microglia replacement halts the progression of microgliopathy in mice and humans. Science 389, eadr1015. 10.1126/science.adr1015.

      (5) Xu, Z., Rao, Y., Huang, Y., Zhou, T., Feng, R., Xiong, S., Yuan, T.F., Qin, S., Lu, Y., Zhou, X., et al. (2020). Efficient strategies for microglia replacement in the central nervous system. Cell reports 32, 108041. 10.1016/j.celrep.2020.108041.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This paper investigates how heparan sulfate (HS) engagement functions in the cellular entry of SARS-CoV-2. A prevailing model that has been developed over the last five years by work from many laboratories using a variety of biochemical, structural, and microscopic approaches is that HS acts a co-receptor for SARS-CoV-2; its binding to SARS-CoV-2 both concentrates virus on the surface of target cells and allosterically alters the spike protein to promote an "up/open" RBD conformation that enables engagement of the proteinaceous receptor human ACE2 on the cell surface (PMID: 32970989, 35926454, 38055954, 39401361, 40548749). These two events enable plasma membrane fusion (after a cleavage event promoted by plasma membrane TMPSS2) or endocytosis and subsequent pH-dependent fusion (which requires a cathepsin L-mediated cleavage of the spike).

      The authors in this study used a series of microscopy techniques, labeled pseudoviruses and authentic SARS-CoV-2 strains, and cells lacking or expressing HS and/or hACE2 to re-examine the specific stage(s) HS and hACE2 function in the entry process. They suggest that HS mediates SARS-CoV-2 cell-surface attachment and endocytosis, and that hACE2 functions "downstream" of this to facilitate productive infection. Their results also suggest that SARS-CoV-2 binds clusters of HS molecules projecting 60-410 nm, which act as docking sites for viral attachment. Blocking HS binding with pixantrone, a drug under clinical evaluation for cancer (due to its anti-topoisomerase II activity), inhibited SARS-CoV-2 Omicron JN.1 variant from attaching to and infecting human airway cells. The authors conclude that their work establishes a revised entry paradigm in which HS clusters mediate SARS-CoV-2 attachment and endocytosis, with ACE2 acting at some stage downstream. They speculate this idea might apply broadly to other viruses known to engage HS and has translational implications for developing antiviral agents that target HS interactions.

      The strengths of the interesting and technically well-executed study include the use of multiple high-resolution microscopy modalities, the tracking of labelled viruses, the use of both pseudoviruses and authentic SARS-CoV-2, and the use of primary airway cells. Nonetheless, there are issues that need to be addressed to buttress the proposed model compared to earlier ones. These include: (a) the distinction between macropinocytosis and receptor-mediated endocytosis and what this might mean for productive SARS-CoV-2 infection; (b) the need to account for TMPRSS2 expression and plasma membrane fusion; (c) addition of genetic studies in which hACE2 is expressed in cells lacking HS; (d) an unclear picture of exactly where downstream hACE2 functions; and (e) and a need for comparative/additional study of earlier SARS-CoV-2 variants, which preferentially fuse at the plasma membrane.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Bisht et al address the hypothesis that protein folding chaperones may be implicated in aggregopathies and in particular Tau aggregation, as a means to identify novel therapeutic routes for these largely neurodegenerative conditions.

      The authors conducted a genetic screen in the Drosophila eye, which facilitates identification of mutations that either enhance or suppress a visible disturbance in the nearly crystalline organization of the compound eye. They screened by RNA-interference all 64 known Drosophila chaperones and revealed that mutations in 20 of them exaggerate the Tau-dependent phenotype, while 15 ameliorated it. The enhancer of degeneration group included 2 subunits of the typically heterohexameric prefoldin complex and other co-translational chaperones.

      The authors characterized in depth one of the prefoldin subunits, Pfdn5 and convincingly demonstrated that this protein functions in regulation of microtubule organization, likely due to its regulation of proper folding of tubulin monomers. They demonstrate convincingly using both immunohistochemistry in larval motor neurons and microtubule binding assays that Pfdn5 is a bona fide microtubule associated protein contributing to the stability of the axonal microtubule cytoskeleton, which is significantly disrupted in the mutants.

      Similar phenotypes were observed in larvae expressing the Frontotemporal dementia with Parkinsonism on chromosome 17-associated mutations of the human Tau gene V377M and R406W. On the strength of the phenotypic evidence and the enhancement of the TauV377M-induced eye degeneration they demonstrate that loss of Pfdn5 exaggerates the synaptic deficits upon expression of the Tau mutants. Conversely, overexpression of Pfdn5 or Pfdn6 ameliorates the synaptic phenotypes in the larvae, the vacuolization phenotypes in the adult, even memory defects upon TauV377M expression.

      Strengths:

      The phenotypic analyses of the mutant and its interactions with TauV377M at the cell biological, histological, and behavioral levels are precise, extensive, and convincing and achieve the aims of characterization of a novel function of Pfdn5.

      Regarding this memory defect upon V377M tau expression. Kosmidis et al (2010) pmid: 20071510, demonstrated that pan-neuronal expression of TauV377M disrupts the organization of the mushroom bodies, the seat of long-term memory in odor/shock and odor/reward conditioning. If the novel memory assay the authors use depends on the adult brain structures, then the memory deficit can be explained in this manner.

      If the mushroom bodies are defective upon TauV377M expression does overexpression of Pfdn5 or 6 reverse this deficit? This would argue strongly in favor of the microtubule stabilization explanation.

      The discovery that Pfdn5 (and 6 most likely) affect tauV377M toxicity is indeed a novel and important discovery for the Tauopathies field. It is important to determine whether this interaction affects only the FTDP-17-linked mutations, or also WT Tau isoforms, which are linked to the rest of the Tauopathies. Also, insights on the mode(s) that Pfdn5/6 affect Tau toxicity, such as some of the suggestions above are aiming at, will likely be helpful towards therapeutic interventions.

      Weaknesses:

      What is unclear however is how Pfdn5 loss or even overexpression affects the pathological Tau phenotypes.

      Does Pfdn5 (or 6) interact directly with TauV377M? Colocalization within tissues is a start, but immunoprecipitations would provide additional independent evidence that this is so.

      Does Pfdn5 loss exacerbate TauV377M phenotypes because it destabilizes microtubules, which are already at least partially destabilized by Tau expression?<br /> Rescue of the phenotypes by overexpression of Pfdn5 agrees with this notion.

      However, Cowan et al (2010) pmid: 20617325 demonstrated that wild-type Tau accumulation in larval motor neurons indeed destabilizes microtubules in a Tau phosphorylation-dependent manner.

      So, is TauV377M hyperphosphorylated in the larvae?? What happens to TauV377M phosphorylation when Pfdn5 is missing and presumably more Tau is soluble and subject to hyperphosphorylation as predicted by the above?

      Expression of WT human Tau (which is associated with most common Tauopathies other than FTDP-17) as Cowan et al suggest has significant effects on microtubule stability, but such Tau-expressing larvae are largely viable. Will one mutant copy of the Pfdn5 knockout enhance the phenotype of these larvae?? Will it result in lethality? Such data will serve to generalize the effects of Pfdn5 beyond the two FDTP-17 mutations utilized.

      Does the loss of Pfdn5 affect TauV377M (and WTTau) levels?? Could the loss of Pfdn5 simply result in increased Tau levels? And conversely, does overexpression of Pfdn5 or 6 reduce Tau levels?? This would explain the enhancement and suppression of TauV377M (and possibly WT Tau) phenotypes. It is an easily addressed, trivial explanation at the observational level, which if true begs for a distinct mechanistic approach.

      Finally, the authors argue that TauV377M forms aggregates in the larval brain based on large puncta observed especially upon loss of Pfdn5. This may be so, but protocols are available to validate this molecularly the presence of insoluble Tau aggregates (for example, pmid: 36868851) or soluble Tau oligomers as these apparently differentially affect Tau toxicity. Does Pfdn5 loss exaggerate the toxic oligomers and overexpression promotes the more benign large aggregates??

      Comments on revisions:

      In the revised manuscript Βisht et al have provided extensive new experimental evidence in support of previously more tenuous claims. These fully satisfy my comments and suggestions, and in my view, have significantly strengthened the manuscript with compelling new evidence.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The role of PRC2 in post neural crest induction was not well understood. This work developed an elegant mouse genetic system to conditionally deplete EED upon SOX10 activation. Substantial developmental defects were identified for craniofacial and bone development. The authors also performed extensive single-cell RNA sequencing to analyze differentiation gene expression changes upon conditional EED disruption.

      Strengths:

      (1) Elegant genetic system to ablate EED post neural crest induction.

      (2) Single-cell RNA-seq analysis is extremely suitable for studying the cell type specific gene expression changes in developmental systems.

      Original Weaknesses:

      (1) Although this study is well designed and contains state-of-art single cell RNA-seq analysis, it lacks the mechanistic depth in the EED/PRC2-mediated epigenetic repression. This is largely because no epigenomic data was shown.

      (2) The mouse model of conditional loss of EZH2 in neural crest has been previously reported, as the authors pointed out in the discussion. What is novelty in this study to disrupt EED? Perhaps a more detailed comparison of the two mouse models would be beneficial.

      (3) The presentation of the single-cell RNA-seq data may need improvement. The complexity of the many cell types blurs the importance of which cell types are affected the most by EED disruption.

      (4) While it's easy to identify PRC2/EED target genes using published epigenomic data, it would be nice to tease out the direct versus indirect effects in the gene expression changes (e.g Fig. 4e)

      Comments on latest version:

      The authors have addressed weaknesses 2 and 3 of my previous comment very well. For weaknesses 1 and 4, the authors have added a main Fig 5 and its associated supplemental materials, which definitely strengthen the mechanistic depth of the story. However, I think the audience would appreciate if the following questions/points could be further addressed regarding the Cut&Tag data (mostly related to main Figure 5):

      (1) The authors described that Sox10-Cre would be expressed at E8.75, and in theory, EED-FL would be ablated soon after that. Why would E16.5 exhibit a much smaller loss in H3K27me3 compared to E12.5? Shouldn't a prolong loss of EED lead to even worse consequence?

      (2) The gene expression change at E12.5 upon loss of EED (shown in Fig. 4h) seems to be massive, including many PRC2-target genes. However, the H3K27me3 alteration seems to be mild even at E12.5. Does this infer a PRC2 or H3K27 methylation - independent role of EED? To address this, I suggest the authors re-consider addressing my previously commented weakness #4 regarding the RNA-seq versus Cut&Tag change correlation. For example, a gene scatter plot with X-axis of RNA-seq changes versus Y-axis of H3K27me3 level changes.

      (3) The CUT&Tag experiments seem to contain replicates according to the figure legend, but no statistical analysis was presented including the new supplemental tables. Also, for Fig. 5c-d, instead of showing the MRR in individual conditions, I think the audience would really want to know the differential MRR between Fl/WT and Fl/Fl. In other words, how many genes/ MRR have statistically lower H3K27me3 level upon EED loss.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors validate the contribution of RAP2A to GB progression. RAp2A participates in asymetric cell division, and the localization of several cell polarity markers including cno and Numb.

      Strengths:

      The use of human data, Drosophila models and cell culture or neurospheres is a good scenario to validate the hypothesis using complementary systems.

      Moreover, the mechanisms that determine GB progression, and in particular glioma stem cells biology, are relevant for the knowledge on glioblastoma and opens new possibilities to future clinical strategies.

      Weaknesses:

      While the manuscript presents a well-supported investigation into RAP2A's role in GBM, some methodological aspects could benefit from further validation. The major concern is the reliance on a single GB cell line (GB5), including multiple GBM lines, particularly primary patient-derived 3D cultures with known stem-like properties, would significantly enhance the study's robustness.

      Several specific points raised in previous reviews have improved this version of the manuscript:

      • The specificity of Rap2l RNAi has been further confirmed by using several different RNAi tools.

      • Quantification of phenotypic penetrance and survival rates in Rap2l mutants would help determine the consistency of ACD defects. The authors have substantially increased the number of samples analyzed including three different RNAi lines (both the number of NB lineages and the number of different brains analyzed) to confirm the high penetrance of the phenotype.

      • The observations on neurosphere size and Ki-67 expression require normalization (e.g., Ki-67+ cells per total cell number or per neurosphere size). This is included in the manuscript and now clarified in the text.

      • The discrepancy in Figures 6A and 6B requires further discussion. The authors have included a new analysis and further explanations and they can conclude that in 2 cell-neurospheres there are more cases of asymmetric divisions in the experimental condition (RAP2A) than in the control.

      • Live imaging of ACD events would provide more direct evidence. Live imaging was not done due to technical limitations. Despite being a potential contribution to the manuscript, the current conclusions of the manuscript are supported by the current data, and live experiments can be dispensable

      • Clarification of terminology and statistical markers (e.g., p-values) in Figure 1A would improve clarity. This has been improved.

      Comments on revisions:

      The manuscript has improved the clarity in general, and I think that it is suitable for publication. However, for future experiments and projects, I would like to insist in the relevance of validating the results in vivo using xenografts with 3D-primary patient-derived cell lines or GB organoids.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study builds on previous work demonstrating that several beta connexins (Cx26, Cx30 and Cx32) have a carbamylation motif which renders them sensitive to CO2. In response to CO2, hemichannels composed of these connexins open, enabling diffusion of small molecules (such as ATP) between the cytosol and extracellular environment. Here, the authors have identified that an alpha connexin, Cx43, also contains a carbamylation motif, and they demonstrate that CO2 opens Cx43 hemichannels. Most of the study involves using transfected cells expressing wild-type and mutant Cx43 to define amino acids required for CO2 sensitivity. Hippocampal tissue slices in culture were used to show that CO2-induced synaptic transmission was affected by Cx43 hemichannels, providing a physiological context. The authors point out that the Cx43 gene significantly diverges from the beta connexins that are CO2 sensitive, suggesting that the conserved carbamylation motif was present before the alpha and beta connexin genes diverged.

      Strengths:

      The molecular analysis defining the amino acids which contribute to the CO2 sensitivity of Cx43 is a major strength of the study. The rigor of analysis was strengthened by using three independent assays for hemichannel opening: dye uptake, patch clamp channel measurements and ATP secretion. The resulting analysis identified key lysines in Cx43 that were required for CO2-mediated hemichannel opening. A double K to E Cx43 mutant produced a construct that produced hemichannels that were constitutively open, which further strengthened the analysis.

      Using hippocampal tissue sections to demonstrate that CO2 can influence field excitatory postsynaptic potentials (fEPSPs) provides a native context for CO2 regulation of Cx43 hemichannels. Cx43 mutations associated with Oculodentodigital Dysplasia (ODDD) inhibited CO2-induced hemichannel opening, although the mechanism by which this occurs was not elucidated.

      Cytosolic pH was measured and it was further demonstrated that Cx43 hemichannels composed of untagged Cx43 are sensitive to CO2.

      A molecular phylogenetic survey was performed which identified several other non-beta connexins that have a putative carbamylation motif. How this relates to connexin evolution was added to the discussion.

      Weaknesses:

      Cultured cells are typically grown in incubators containing 5% CO2 which is ~40 mmHg. Determining compensatory mechanisms that enable the cells to be viable if Cx43 hemichannels are open at this PCO2 would strengthen the study.

      Experiments using Gap26 to inhibit Cx43 hemichannels in fEPSP measurements used a scrambled peptide as a control. Including gap peptides specifically targeting Cx26, Cx30 and Cx32 as additional controls would strengthen the study, since the tissue sections have a complex pattern of connexin expression.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The work by Pinon et al describes the generation of a microvascular model to study Neisseria meningitidis interactions with blood vessels. The model uses a novel and relatively high throughput fabrication method that allows full control over the geometry of the vessels. The model is well characterized from the vascular standpoint and shows improvements when exposed to flow. The authors show that Neisseria binds to the 3D model in a similar geometry that in the animal xenograft model, induces an increase in permeability short after bacterial perfusion, and endothelial cytoskeleton rearrangements including a honeycomb actin structure. Finally, the authors show neutrophil recruitment to bacterial microcolonies and phagocytosis of Neisseria.

      Strengths:

      The article is overall well written, and it is a great advancement in the bioengineering and sepsis infection field. The authors achieved their aim at establishing a good model for Neisseria vascular pathogenesis and the results support the conclusions. I support the publication of the manuscript. I include below some clarifications that I consider would be good for readers.

      One of the most novel things of the manuscript is the use of a relatively quick photoablation system. Could this technique be applied in other laboratories? While the revised manuscript includes more technical details as requested, the description remains difficult to follow for readers from a biology background. I recommend revising this section to improve clarity and accessibility for a broader scientific audience.

      The authors suggest that in the animal model, early 3h infection with Neisseria do not show increase in vascular permeability, contrary to their findings in the 3D in vitro model. However, they show a non-significant increase in permeability of 70 KDa Dextran in the animal xenograft early infection. As a bioengineer this seems to point that if the experiment would have been done with a lower molecular weight tracer, significant increases in permeability could have been detected. I would suggest to do this experiment that could capture early events in vascular disruption.

      One of the great advantages of the system is the possibility of visualizing infection-related events at high resolution. The authors show the formation of actin of a honeycomb structure beneath the bacterial microcolonies. This only occurred in 65% of the microcolonies. Is this result similar to in vitro 2D endothelial cultures in static and under flow? Also, the group has shown in the past positive staining of other cytoskeletal proteins, such as ezrin in the ERM complex. Does this also occur in the 3D system?

      Significance:

      The manuscript is comprehensive, complete and represents the first bioengineered model of sepsis. One of the major strengths is the carful characterization and benchmarking against the animal xenograft model. Beyond the technical achievement, the manuscript is also highly quantitative and includes advanced image analysis that could benefit many scientists. The authors show a quick photoablation method that would be useful for the bioengineering community and improved the state-of-the-art providing a new experimental model for sepsis.

      My expertise is on infection bioengineered models.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have addressed all my concerns.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The manuscript by Choi and colleagues investigates the impact of variation in cortical geometry and growth on cortical surface morphology. Specifically, the study uses physical gel models and computational models to evaluate the impact of varying specific features/parameters of the cortical surface. The study makes use of this approach to address the topic of malformations of cortical development and finds that cortical thickness and cortical expansion rate are the drivers of differences in morphogenesis.

      The study is composed of two main sections. First, the authors validate numerical simulation and gel model approaches against real cortical postnatal development in the ferret. Next, the study turns to modelling malformations in cortical development using modified tangential growth rate and cortical thickness parameters in numerical simulations. The findings investigate three genetically linked cortical malformations observed in the human brain to demonstrate the impact of the two physical parameters on folding in the ferret brain.

      This is a tightly presented study that demonstrates a key insight into cortical morphogenesis and the impact of deviations from normal development. The dual physical and computational modeling approach offers the potential for unique insights into mechanisms driving malformations. This study establishes a strong foundation for further work directly probing the development of cortical folding in the ferret brain.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The authors investigated tactile spatial perception on the breast using discrimination, categorization, and direct localization tasks. They reach four main conclusions:

      (1) The breast has poor tactile spatial resolution.

      This conclusion is based on comparing just noticeable differences, a marker of tactile spatial resolution, across four body regions, two on the breast. The data compellingly support the conclusion; the study outshines other studies on tactile spatial resolution that tend to use problematic measures of tactile resolution, such as two-point-discrimination thresholds. The result will interest researchers in the field and possibly in other fields due to the intriguing tension between the finding and the sexually arousing function of touching the breast.

      The manuscript incorrectly describes the result as poor spatial acuity. Acuity measures the average absolute error, and acuity is good when response biases are absent. Precision relates to the error variance. It is common to see high precision with low acuity or vice versa. Just noticeable differences assess precision or spatial resolution, while points of subjective equality evaluate acuity or bias. Similar confusions between these terms appear throughout the manuscript.<br /> A paragraph within the next section seems to follow up on this insight by examining the across-participant consistency of the differences in tactile spatial resolution between body parts. To this aim, pairwise rank correlations between body sites are conducted. This analysis raises red flags from a statistical point of view. 1) An ANOVA and its follow-up tests assume no variation in the size of the tested effect but varying base values across participants. Thus, if significant differences between conditions are confirmed by the original statistical analysis, most participants will have better spatial resolution in one condition than the other condition, and the difference between body sites will be similar across participants. 2) Correlations are power-hungry, and non-parametric tests are power-hungry. Thus, the number of participants needed for a reliable rank correlation analysis far exceeds that of the study. In sum, a correlation should emerge between body sites associated with significantly different tactile JNDs; however, these correlations might only be significant for body sites with pronounced differences due to the sample size.

      (2) Larger breasts are associated with lower tactile spatial resolution

      This conclusion is based on a strong correlation between participants' JNDs and the size of their breasts. The depicted correlation convincingly supports the conclusion. The sample size is below that recommended for correlations based on power analyses, but simulations show that spurious correlations of the reported size are extremely unlikely at N=18. Moreover, visual inspection rules out that outliers drive these correlations. Thus, they are convincing. This result is of interest to the field, as it aligns with the hypothesis that nerve fibers are more sparsely distributed across larger body parts.

      (3) The nipple is a unit

      The data do not support this conclusion. The conclusion that the nipple is perceived as a unit is based on poor tactile localization performance for touches on the nipple compared to the areola. The problem is that the localization task is a quadrant identification task with the center being at the nipple. Quadrants for the areola could be significantly larger due to the relative size of the areola and the nipple; the results section seems to suggest this was accounted for when placing the tactile stimuli within the quadrants, but the methods section suggests otherwise. Additionally, the areola has an advantage because of its distance from the nipple, which leads to larger Euclidean distances between the centers of the quadrants than for the nipple. Thus, participants should do better for the areola than for the nipple even if both sites have the same tactile resolution.

      To justify the conclusion that the nipple is a unit, additional data would be required. 1) One could compare psychometric curves with the nipple as the center and psychometric curves with a nearby point on the areola as the center. 2) Performance in the quadrant task could be compared for the nipple and an equally sized portion of the areola and tactile locations that have the same distance to the border between quadrants in skin coordinates. 3) Tactile resolution could be directly measured for both body sites using a tactile orientation task with either a two-dot probe or a haptic grating.

      Categorization accuracy in each area was tested against chance using a Monte Carlo test, which is fine, though the calculation of the test statistic, Z, should be reported in the Methods section, as there are several options. Localization accuracies are then compared between areas using a paired t-test. It is a bit confusing that once a distribution-approximating test is used, and once a test that assumes Gaussian distributions when the data is Bernoulli/Binomial distributed. Sampling-based and t-tests are very robust, so these surprising choices should have hardly any effect on the results.

      A correlation based on N=4 participants is dangerously underpowered. A quick simulation shows that correlation coefficients of randomly sampled numbers are uniformly distributed at such a low sample size. This likely spurious correlation is not analyzed, but quite prominently featured in a figure and discussed in the text, which is worrisome.

      (4) Localization of tactile events on the breast is biased towards the nipple

      The conclusion that tactile percepts are drawn toward the nipple is based on localization biases for tactile stimuli on the breast compared to the back. Unfortunately, the way participants reported the tactile locations introduces a major confound. Participants indicated the perceived locations of the tactile stimulus on 3D models of these body parts. The nipple is a highly distinctive and cognitively represented landmark, far more so than the scapula, making it very likely that responses were biased toward the nipple regardless of the actual percepts. One imperfect but better alternative would have been to ask participants to identify locations on a neutral grey patch and help them relate this patch to their skin by repeatedly tracing its outline on the skin.

      Participants also saw their localization responses for the previously touched locations. This is unlikely to induce bias towards the nipple, but it renders any estimate of the size and variance of the errors unreliable. Participants will always make sure that the marked locations are sufficiently distant from each other.

      The statistical analysis is again a homebrew solution and hard to follow. It remains unclear why standard and straightforward measures of bias, such as regressing reported against actual locations, were not used.

      Null-hypothesis significance testing only lets scientists either reject the null hypothesis or not. The latter does NOT mean the Null hypothesis is true, i.e., it can never be concluded that there is no effect. This rule applies to every NHST test. However, it raises particular concerns with distribution tests. The only conclusion possible is that the data are unlikely from a population with the tested distribution; these tests do not provide insight into the actual distribution of the data, regardless of whether the result is significant or not.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      General assessment of the work:

      In this manuscript, Mohr and Kelly show that the C1 component of the human VEP is correlated with binary choices in a contrast discrimination task, even when the stimulus is kept constant and confounding variables are considered in the analysis. They interpret this as evidence for the role V1 plays during perceptual decision formation. Choice-related signals in single sensory cells are enlightening because they speak to the spatial (and temporal) scale of the brain computations underlying perceptual decision-making. However, similar signals in aggregate measures of neural activity offer a less direct window and thus less insight into these computations. For example, although I am not a VEP specialist, it seems doubtful that the measurements are exclusively picking up (an unbiased selection of) V1 spikes. Moreover, although this is not widely known, there is in fact a long history to this line of work. In 1972, Campbell and Kulikowski ("The Visual Evoked Potential as a function of contrast of a grating pattern" - Journal of Physiology) already showed a similar effect in a contrast detection task (this finding inspired the original Choice Probability analyses in the monkey physiology studies conducted in the early 1990's). Finally, it is not clear to me that there is an interesting alternative hypothesis that is somehow ruled out by these results. Should we really consider that simple visual signals such as spatial contrast are *not* mediated by V1? This seems to fly in the face of well-established anatomy and function of visual circuits. Or should we be open to the idea that VEP measurements are almost completely divorced from task-relevant neural signals? Why would this be an interesting technique then? In sum, while this work reports results in line with several single-cell and VEP studies and perhaps is technically superior in its domain, I find it hard to see how these findings would meaningfully impact our thinking about the neural and computational basis of spatial contrast discrimination.

      Summary of substantive concerns:

      (1) The study of choice probability in V1 cells is more extensive than portrayed in the paper's introduction. In recent years, choice-related activity in V1 has also been studied by Nienborg & Cumming (2014), Goris et al (2017), Jasper et al (2019), Lange et al (2023), and Boundy-Singer et al (2025). These studies paint a complex picture (a mixture of positive, absent, and negative results), but should be mentioned in the paper's introduction.

      (2) The very first study to conduct an analysis of stimulus-conditioned neural activity during a perceptual decision-making task was, in fact, a VEP study: Campbell and Kulikowski (1972). This study never gained the fame it perhaps deserves. But it would be appropriate to weave it into the introduction and motivation of this paper.

      (3) What are interesting alternative hypotheses to be considered here? I don't understand the (somewhat implicit) suggestion here that contrast representations late in the system can somehow be divorced from early representations. If they were, they would not be correlated with stimulus contrast.

      (4) I find the arguments about the timing of the VEP signals somewhat complex and not very compelling, to be honest. It might help if you added a simulation of a process model that illustrated the temporal flow of the neural computations involved in the task. When are sensory signals manifested in V1 activity informing the decision-making process, in your view? And how is your measure of neural activity related to this latent variable? Can you show in a simulation that the combination of this process and linking hypothesis gives rise to inverted U-shaped relationships, as is the case for your data?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      CCK is the most abundant neuropeptide in the brain, and many studies have investigated the role of CCK and inhibitory CCK interneurons in modulating neural circuits, especially in the hippocampus. The manuscript presents interesting questions regarding the role of excitatory CCK+ neurons in the hippocampus, which has been much less studied compared to the well-known roles of inhibitory CCK neurons in regulating network function. The authors adopt several methods, including transgenic mice and viruses, optogenetics, chemogenetics, RNAi, and behavioral tasks to explore these less-studied roles of excitatory CCK neurons in CA3. They find that the excitatory CCK neurons are involved in hippocampal-dependent tasks such as spatial learning and memory formation, and that CCK-knockdown impairs these tasks.

      However, these questions are very dependent on ensuring that the study is properly targeting excitatory CCK neurons (and thus their specific contributions to behavior).

      There needs to be much more characterization of the CCK transgenic mice and viruses to confirm the targeting. Without this, it is unclear whether the study is looking at excitatory CCK neurons or a more general heterogeneous CCK neuron population.

      Strengths:

      This field has focused mainly on inhibitory CCK+ interneurons and their role in network function and activity, and thus, this manuscript raises interesting questions regarding the role of excitatory CCK+ neurons, which have been much less studied.

      Weaknesses:

      (1a) This manuscript is dependent on ensuring that the study is indeed investigating the role of excitatory CCK-expressing neurons themselves and their specific contribution to behavior. There needs to be much more characterization of the CCK-expressing mice (crossed with Ai14 or transduced with various viruses) to confirm the excitatory-cell targeting. Without this, it is unclear whether the study is looking at excitatory CCK neurons or a more general heterogeneous CCK neuron population.

      (1b) For the experiments that use a virus with the CCK-IRES-Cre mouse, there is no information or characterization on how well the virus targets excitatory CCK-expressing neurons. (Additionally, it has been reported that with CaMKIIa-driven protein expression, using viruses, can be seen in both pyramidal and inhibitory cells.)

      (2) The methods and figure legends are extremely sparse, leading to many questions regarding methodology and accuracy. More details would be useful in evaluating the tools and data. More details would be useful in evaluating the tools and data. Additionally, further quantification would be useful-e.g. in some places, only % values are noted, or only images are presented.

      (3) It is unclear whether the reduced CCK expression is correlated, or directly causing the impairments in hippocampal function. Does the CCK-shRNA have any additional detrimental effects besides affecting CCK-expression (e.g., is the CCK-shRNA also affecting some other essential (but not CCK-related) aspect of the neuron itself?)? Is there any histology comparison between the shRNA and the scrambled shRNA?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study by Lemen et al. represents a comprehensive and unique analysis of gene networks in rat models of opioid use disorder, using multiple strains and both sexes. It provides a time-series analysis of Quantitative Trait Loci (QTLs) in response to morphine exposure.

      Strengths:

      A key finding is the identification of a previously unknown morphine-sensitive pathway involving Oprm1 and Fgf12, which activates a cascade through MAPK kinases in D1 medium spiny neurons (MSNs). Strengths include the large-scale, multi-strain, sex-inclusive design, the time-series QTL mapping provides dynamic insights, and the discovery of an Oprm1-Fgf12-MAPK signaling pathway in D1 MSNs, which is novel and relevant.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The proposed involvement of Nav1.2 (SCN2A) as a downstream target of the Oprm1-Fgf12 pathway requires further analysis/evidence. Is Nav1.2 (SCN2A) expressed in D1 neurons?

      The authors mentioned that SCN8A (Nav1.6) was tested as a candidate mediator of Oprm1-Fgf12 loci and variation in locomotor activity. However, the proposed model supports SCN2A as a target rather than SCN8A. This is somewhat unexpected since SCN8A is highly abundant in MSN.

      Can the authors provide expression data for SCN2A, Oprm1, and Fgf12 in D1 vs. D2 MSNs?

      (2) The authors should consider adding a reference to FGF12 in Schizophrenia (PMC8027596) in the Introduction.

      (3) There is recent evidence supporting the druggability of other intracellular FGFs, such as FGF14 (PMC11696184) and FGF13 (PMC12259270), through their interactions with Nav channels. What are the implications of these findings for drug discovery in the context of the present study? Could FGF12 be considered a potential druggable therapeutic target for opioid use disorder (OUD)?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript provides an open-source tool including hardware and software, and dataset to facilitate and standardize behavioral classification in laboratory mice. The hardware for behavioral phenotyping was extensively tested for safety. The software is GUI based facilitating the usage of this tool across the community of investigators that do not have a programming background. The behavioral classification tool is highly accurate, and the authors deposited a large dataset of annotations and pose tracking for many strains of mice. This tool has great potential for behavioral scientists that use mice across many fields, however there are many missing details that currently limit the impact of this tool and publication.

      Strengths:

      Software-hardware integration for facilitating cross-lab adaptation of the tool and minimizing the need to annotate new data for behavioral classification.

      Data from many strains of mice was included in the classification and genetic analyses in this manuscript.

      Large dataset annotated was deposited for the use of the community

      GUI based software tool decreases barriers of usage across users with limited coding experience.

      Weaknesses:

      The GUI requires pose tracking for classification but, the software provided in JABS does not do pose tracking, so users must do pose tracking using a separate tool. The pose tracking quality directly impacts the classification quality, given that it is used for the feature calculation

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors addressed all my concerns.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This paper by Poverlein et al reports the substantial membrane deformation around the oxidative phosphorylation super complex, proposing that this deformation is a key part of super complex formation. I found the paper interesting and well-written.

      * Analysis of the bilayer curvature is challenging on the fine lengthscales they have used and produces unexpectedly large energies (Table 1). Additionally, the authors use the mean curvature (Eq. S5) as input to the (uncited, but it seems clear that this is Helfrich) Helfrich Hamiltonian (Eq. S7). If an errant factor of one half has been included with curvature, this would quarter the curvature energy compared to the real energy, due to the squared curvature. The bending modulus used (ca. 5 kcal/mol) is small on the scale of typically observed biological bending moduli. This suggests the curvature energies are indeed much higher even than the high values reported. Some of this may be due to the spontaneous curvature of the lipids and perhaps the effect of the protein modifying the nearby lipids properties.

      * It is unclear how CDL is supporting SC formation if its effect stabilizing the membrane deformation is strong or if it is acting as an electrostatic glue. While this is a weakness for a definite quantification of the effect of CDL on SC formation, the study presents an interesting observation of CDL redistribution and could be an interesting topic for future work.

      In summary, the qualitative data presented are interesting (especially the combination of molecular modeling with simpler Monte Carlo modeling aiding broader interpretation of the results). The energies of the membrane deformations are quite large. This might reflect the roles of specific lipids stabilizing those deformations, or the inherent difficulty in characterizing nanometer-scale curvature.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Circannual timing is a phylogenetically widespread phenomenon in long-lived organisms and is central to the seasonal regulation of reproduction, hibernation, migration, fur color changes, body weight, and fat deposition in response to photoperiodic changes. Photoperiodic control of thyroid hormone T3 levels in the hypothalamus dictates this timing. However, the mechanisms that regulate these changes are not fully understood. The study by Stewart et al. reports that hypothalamic iodothyronine deiodinase 3 (Dio3), the major inactivator of the biologically active thyroid hormone T3, plays a critical role in circannual timing in the Djungarian hamster. Overall, the study yields important results for the field and is well-conducted, with the exception of the CRISPR/Cas9 manipulation.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have satisfactorily addressed all my comments. I no longer have concerns about the CRISPR/Cas9 experiments which have been conducted properly and are now reported appropriately.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The goal of the manuscript was to determine if strenuous exercise negatively impacted regeneration. Indeed, the major conclusion of the manuscript is that elevated exercise during the early stages of regeneration compromises the regenerative process. The authors further conclude that regeneration is disrupted due to defects in blastema formation, which is caused by impaired HA deposition and reduced active (nuclear) Yap.

      Strengths:

      (1) The paradigm of elevated exercise disrupting ECM and regeneration is significant, and provides an experimental model to better understand connections between the ECM and cell/tissue activities.

      (2) The conclusion that exercise intensity correlates with defects in regeneration is supported.

      (3) The demonstration for the requirement for HA is well supported via transcriptomics and multiple independent strategies to manipulate HA levels.

      (4) The demonstration that nuclear Yap depends on the amount of HA is well-supported.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors conclude throughout the manuscript that "blastema formation" is disrupted, but they do not provide any insights into how blastema formation is disrupted (reduced de-differentiation? reduced cell migration? both?). While they show that there are fewer dividing cells, the timing of exercise is prior to outgrowth. So, the effect of dividing cells is likely secondary, which is not considered (or not clearly explained).

      (2) The authors conclude that patterning is affected, but their analyses of patterns (bifurcations) are very limited. It is also not clear if patterning is believed to be affected by a common exercise-induced mechanism or a different exercise-induced mechanism (or by a secondary mechanism).

      (3) The significance of HA in regeneration has been shown before in zebrafish fins, as well as in a handful of other models of regeneration. Although largely cited, explaining some of this work in more detail would give the reader a better picture of how HA is believed to promote regeneration. It may also highlight some emerging questions about the role of HA in regeneration that would permit a richer story and specific future directions.

      (4) In general, parts of the text lack specificity/clarity, and in other cases, there seems to be contradictory information.

      (5) Overall, many of the conclusions were well supported by the data, and this study is likely to provide a foundation for future research on the role of the ECM in tissue repair and regeneration. The main limitations were in connecting the experimental details with the specific processes required for regeneration, and in clearly explaining the findings.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this manuscript, Qin and colleagues aim to delineate a neural mechanism by which the internal satiety levels modulate the intake of sugar solution. They identified a three-step neuropeptidergic system that downregulates the sensitivity of sweet-sensing gustatory sensory neurons in sated flies. First, neurons that release a neuropeptide Hugin (which is an insect homolog of vertebrate Neuromedin U (NMU)) are in an active state when the concentration of glucose is high. This activation does not require synaptic inputs, suggesting that Hugin-releasing neurons sense hemolymph glucose levels directly. Next, the Hugin neuropeptides activate Allatostatin A (AstA)-releasing neurons via one of Hugin's receptors, PK2-R1. Finally, the released AstA neuropeptide suppresses sugar response in sugar-sensing Gr5a-expressing gustatory sensory neurons through AstA-R1 receptor. Suppression of sugar response in Gr5a-expressing neurons reduces the fly's sugar intake motivation (measured by proboscis extension reflex). They also found that NMU-expressing neurons in the ventromedial hypothalamus (VMH) of mice (which project to the rostral nucleus of the solitary tract (rNST)) are also activated by high concentrations of glucose, independent of synaptic transmission, and that injection of NMU reduces the glucose-induced activity in the downstream of NMU-expressing neurons in rNST. These data suggest that the function of Hugin neuropeptide in the fly is analogous to the function of NMU in the mouse.

      Generally, their central conclusions are well-supported by multiple independent approaches. The parallel study in mice adds a unique comparative perspective that makes the paper interesting to a wide range of readers. It is easier said than done: the rigor of this study, which effectively combined pharmacological and genetic approaches to provide multiple lines of behavioral and physiological evidence, deserves recognition and praise.

      A perceived weakness is that the behavioral effects of the manipulations of Hugin and AstA systems are modest compared to a dramatic shift of sugar solution-induced PER (the behavioral proxy of sugar sensitivity) induced by hunger, as presented in Figure 1B and E. It is true that the mutation of tyrosine hydroxylase (TH), which synthesizes dopamine, does not completely abolish the hunger-induced PER change, but the remaining effect is small. Moreover, the behavioral effect of the silencing of the Hugin/AstA system (Figure Supplement 13B, C) is difficult to interpret, leaving a possibility that this system may not be necessary for shifting PER in starved flies. These suggest that the Hugin-AstA system accounts for only a minor part of the behavioral adaptation induced by the decreased sugar levels. Their aim to "dissect out a complete neural pathway that directly senses internal energy state and modulates food-related behavioral output in the fly brain" is likely only partially achieved. While this outcome is not a shortcoming of a study per se, the depth of discussion on the mechanism of interactions between the Hugin/AstA system and the other previously characterized molecular circuit mechanisms mediating hunger-induced behavioral modulation is insufficient for readers to appreciate the novelty of this study and future challenges in the field. In this context, authors are encouraged to confront a limitation of the study due to the lack of subtype-level circuit characterization, despite their intriguing finding that only a subtype of Hugin- and AstA-releasing neurons are responsive to the elevated level of bath-applied glucose.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This study extends the previous interesting work of this group to address the potentially differential control of movement and posture. Their earlier work explored a broad range of data to make the case for a downstream neural integrator hypothesized to convert descending velocity movement commands into postural holding commands. Included in that data were observations from people with hemiparesis due to stroke. The current study uses similar data, but pushes into a different, but closely related direction, suggesting that these data may address the independence of these two fundamental components of motor control. The study makes observations about the different expression movement deficits during postural fixation and movement, and the different effect of force perturbations during these periods, consistent with their hypothesis that movement and postural control are separate motor functions. They speculate that the appearance of the stereotypic flexor synergies characteristic of stroke, are the result of a breakdown of this normal separation between the two control modes.

      Comments on revisions:

      I had only two very trivial comments in the previous version. One was simply a figure that was mistakenly not updated, and the other was the use of the terms "proximal" and "distal" to describe the location of a target. Both have been corrected.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this submitted manuscript, Lu, Tang, and colleagues implement a novel serial perturbation paradigm during speech to isolate the effects of sensory and motor processes on compensation. They perform three main studies: in the first study, they validate their method by randomly perturbing pitch in a series of produced vowels. They demonstrate that the amount of perturbation is driven (in part) by the previous trial's amount of motor compensation applied as opposed to the sensory perturbation. In the second experiment, they found that this effect carries over to single vowel words, but the effect was much weaker when different words were produced. Thirdly, the authors reproduce these findings in a more linguistically relevant way (during sentences) and show that the previously shown compensation effect only occurs within syntactic structures and not across them, suggesting an interplay between sensorimotor systems and linguistic structure processing.

      Strengths:

      Overall, this is a very unique study and strikes me as being potentially quite impactful. The authors have performed a large number of experiments to validate their findings that provide novel insights into the processes underlying compensation during speech production. These findings are also likely to produce new avenues for studying the neural mechanisms that support these processes.

      Weaknesses:

      While the authors go to great lengths to disassociate the serial effects of sensory and motor compensation, which is commendable, one weakness is that they are intrinsically linked (motor actions produce sensory consequences). Therefore, there is no obvious way to decouple them for the purposes of investigation. It would be beneficial to discuss future research that could further disentangle these factors.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Calle-Schuler et. al. reconstruct all the pre- and post-synaptic neurons to the bristle mechanosensory neurons on the adult fly head to understand how neural circuits determine the sequential motor patterns during fly grooming. They find that most presynaptic neurons, interneurons, and excitatory postsynaptic neurons are also somatotopically organized, such that each neuron is more connected to bristles mechanosensory neurons that are closer on the head and less connected to bristles mechanosensory neurons that are further away. These include the direct BMN-BMN circuits, excitatory interneurons, as well as the inhibitory networks. They also identify that the entire hemi-lineage 23b forms excitatory postsynaptic circuits with BMNs, highlighting how these circuits and hence their function could be developmentally determined.

      Strengths:

      This is a complete map of all the neurons that make 5 or more pre- and post-synaptic connections of the fly head BMNs. Using this, the authors have identified various trends, such as ascending neurons providing most of the GABAergic inhibitory input, which could provide the presynaptic inhibition essential for the parallel model for sequential grooming generation. Moreover, they identified that the entire cholinergic hemilineage 23b is postsynaptic to BMNs.

      Weaknesses:

      Although the somatotropic organization is an elegant mechanism to generate sequential motor sequences during grooming, none of the analyses in the paper directly demonstrate that this somatotropic connectivity is sufficient to generate hierarchical suppression and reconstruct the grooming sequence. If somatotropic organization is sufficient, then hierarchical clustering should recover the grooming sequence. Their detailed connectome enables the authors to test if some networks are more crucial for grooming sequence than others: to what extent can each network individually (ascending neurons-BMN alone) or a combination (BMN-BMN, ascending-BMN, BMN-descending, etc.) recover the sequence observed during grooming. If all the pre- and post-synaptic neurons put together cannot explain the sequence, then the sequence is probably determined by individual synaptic strengths or other key downstream neurons.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The manuscript presents a compelling new in vitro system based on isogenic co-cultures of human iPSC-derived hepatocytes and macrophages, enabling the modelling of hepatic immune responses with unprecedented physiological relevance. The authors show that co-culture leads to enhanced maturation of hepatocytes and tissue-resident macrophage identity, which cannot be achieved through conditioned media alone. Using this system, they functionally validate immune-driven hepatotoxic responses to a panel of drugs and compare the system's predictive power to that of monocyte-derived macrophages. The results underscore the necessity of macrophage-hepatocyte crosstalk for accurate modelling of liver inflammation and drug toxicity in vitro.

      The manuscript is clearly written and addresses a key limitation in liver organoid systems: the lack of immune complexity and tissue-specific macrophage imprinting. Nevertheless, several conclusions would benefit from a more careful interpretation of the data, and some important controls or explanations are missing, particularly in the flow cytometry gating strategies, stress marker validation, and cluster interpretations.

      Strengths:

      (1) Novelty and Relevance: The study presents a highly innovative co-culture system based on isogenic human iPSCs, addressing an unmet need in modelling immune-mediated hepatotoxicity.

      (2) Mechanistic Insight: The reciprocal reprogramming between iHeps and iMacs, including induction of KC-specific pathways and hepatocyte maturation markers, is convincingly demonstrated.

      (3) Functional Readouts: The application of the model to detect IL-6 responses to hepatotoxic compounds enhances its translational relevance.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Several key claims, particularly those derived from PCA plots and DEG analyses, are overinterpreted and require more conservative language or further validation.

      (2) The purity of sorted hepatocytes and macrophages is not convincingly demonstrated; contamination across gates may confound transcriptomic readouts.

      (3) Stress response genes and ER stress/apoptosis signatures are not properly assessed, despite being potentially activated in the system.

      (4) Some figure panels and legends lack statistical annotations, and microscopy validation of morphological changes is missing.

      (5) The co-culture model with monocyte-derived macrophages is not fully characterised, making comparisons less informative.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The presented study by Centore and colleagues investigates the inhibition of BAF chromatin remodeling complexes. The study is well written and includes comprehensive datasets, including compound screens, gene expression analysis, epigenetics, as well as animal studies. This is an important piece of work for the uveal melanoma research field, and sheds light on a new inhibitor class, as well as a mechanism that might be exploited to target this deadly cancer for which no good treatment options exist.

      Strengths:

      This is a comprehensive and well-written study.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors performed an integration of 48 scRNA-seq public datasets and created a single-cell transcriptomic atlas for AML (222 samples comprising 748,679 cells). This is important since most AML scRNA-seq studies suffer from small sample size coupled with high heterogeneity. They used this atlas to further dissect AML with t(8;21) (AML-ETO/RUNX1-RUNX1T1), which is one of the most frequent AML subtypes in young people. In particular, they were able to predict Gene Regulatory Networks in this AML subtype using pySCENIC, which identified the paediatric regulon defined by a distinct group of hematopoietic transcription factors (TFs) and the adult regulon for t(8;21). They further validated this in bulk RNA-seq with AUCell algorithm and inferred prenatal signature to 5 key TFs (KDM5A, REST, BCLAF1, YY1, and RAD21), and the postnatal signature to 9 TFs (ENO1, TFDP1, MYBL2, KLF1, TAGLN2, KLF2, IRF7, SPI1, and YXB1). They also used SCENIC+ to identify enhancer-driven regulons (eRegulons), forming an eGRN, and found that prenatal origin shows a specific HSC eRegulon profile, while a postnatal shows a GMP profile. They also did an in silico perturbation and found AP-1 complex (JUN, ATF4, FOSL2), P300 and BCLAF1 as important TFs to induce differentiation. Overall, I found this study very important in creating a comprehensive resource for AML research.

      Strengths:

      • The generation of an AML atlas integrating multiple datasets with almost 750K cells will further support the community working on AML

      • Characterisation of t(8;21) AML proposes new interesting leads.

      • The t(8;21) TFs/regulons identified from any of the single dataset are not complete and now the authors showed that the increase in the number of cells that allowed identification of novel ones.

      Comments on revisions:

      In the revised version of the manuscript, the authors addressed all my comments.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Noell et al have presented a careful study of the dissociation kinetics of Kinesin (1,2,3) classes of motors moving in vitro on a microtubule. These motors move against the opposing force from a ~1 micron DNA strand (DNA tensiometer) that is tethered to the microtubule and also bound to the motor via specific linkages (Figure 1A). The authors compare the time for which motors remain attached to the microtubule when they are tethered to the DNA, versus when they are not. If the former is longer, the interpretation is that the force on the motor from the stretched DNA (presumed to be working solely along the length of the microtubule) causes the motor's detachment rate from the microtubule to be reduced. Thus, the specific motor exhibits "catch-bond" like behaviour.

      Strengths:

      The motivation is good - to understand how kinesin competes against dynein through the possible activation of a catch bond. Experiments are well done, and there is an effort to model the results theoretically.

      Weaknesses:

      The motivation of these studies is to understand how kinesin (1/2/3) motors would behave when they are pitted in a tug of war against dynein motors as they transport cargo in a bidirectional manner on microtubules. Earlier work on dynein and kinesin motors using optical tweezers has suggested that dynein shows a catch bond phenomenon, whereas such signatures were not seen for kinesin. Based on their data with the DNA tensiometer, the authors would like to claim that (i) Kinesin1 and Kinesin2 also show catch-bonding and (ii) the earlier results using optical traps suffer from vertical forces, which complicates the catch-bond interpretation.

      While the motivation of this work is reasonable, and the experiments are careful, I find significant issues that the authors have not addressed:

      (1) Figure 1B shows the PREDICTED force-extension curve for DNA based on a worm-like chain model. Where is the experimental evidence for this curve? This issue is crucial because the F-E curve will decide how and when a catch-bond is induced (if at all it is) as the motor moves against the tensiometer. Unless this is actually measured by some other means, I find it hard to accept all the results based on Figure 1B.

      (2) The authors can correct me on this, but I believe that all the catch-bond studies using optical traps have exerted a load force that exceeds the actual force generated by the motor. For example, see Figure 2 in reference 42 (Kunwar et al). It is in this regime (load force > force from motor) that the dissociation rate is reduced (catch-bond is activated). Such a regime is never reached in the DNA tensiometer study because of the very construction of the experiment. I am very surprised that this point is overlooked in this manuscript. I am therefore not even sure that the present experiments even induce a catch-bond (in the sense reported for earlier papers).

      (3) I appreciate the concerns about the Vertical force from the optical trap. But that leads to the following questions that have not at all been addressed in this paper:

      (i) Why is the Vertical force only a problem for Kinesins, and not a problem for the dynein studies?

      (ii) The authors state that "With this geometry, a kinesin motor pulls against the elastic force of a stretched DNA solely in a direction parallel to the microtubule". Is this really true? What matters is not just how the kinesin pulls the DNA, but also how the DNA pulls on the kinesin. In Figure 1A, what is the guarantee that the DNA is oriented only in the plane of the paper? In fact, the DNA could even be bending transiently in a manner that it pulls the kinesin motor UPWARDS (Vertical force). How are the authors sure that the reaction force between DNA and kinesin is oriented SOLELY along the microtubule?

      (4) For this study to be really impactful and for some of the above concerns to be addressed, the data should also have included DNA tensiometer experiments with Dynein. I wonder why this was not done?

      While I do like several aspects of the paper, I do not believe that the conclusions are supported by the data presented in this paper for the reasons stated above.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The study addresses the organisation of synaptic connections from the medial to the lateral entorhinal cortex. Classic anatomical work has suggested these connections exist, but very little is known about their identity or functional impact. The manuscript argues that these projections are mediated by glutamatergic neurons, providing excitatory input from MEC to all layers of LEC, and by SST+ve interneurons sending inhibitory projections to L1 of LEC. This appears to be the most likely interpretation of the data, although in my opinion, more could be done to rule out the possible impact of the spread of the virus/tracer from the injection site.

      While this concern might seem overly picky, the importance of this level of detail is nicely shown by the authors' previous work clarifying connectivity from postrhinal to entorhinal cortices through careful analysis of similar types of data (Doan et al. 2019). If additional analyses/data can address the concern here, then I think this will be an important set of fundamental results that will influence thinking about circuit mechanisms for spatial cognition and episodic memory. In particular, it will nicely add to an emerging view that MEC and LEC can interact directly, showing that the organisation of these interactions is asymmetric and identifying a potentially interesting long-range inhibitory pathway.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Fombellida-Lopez and colleagues describe the results of an ART intensification trial in people with HIV infection (PWH) on suppressive ART to determine the effect of increasing the dose of one ART drug, dolutegravir, on viral reservoirs, immune activation, exhaustion, and circulating inflammatory markers. The authors hypothesize that ART intensification will provide clues about the degree to which low-level viral replication is occurring in circulation and in tissues despite ongoing ART, which could be identified if reservoirs decrease and/or if immune biomarkers change. The trial design is straightforward and well-described, and the intervention appears to have been well tolerated. The investigators observed an increase in dolutegravir concentrations in circulation, and to a lesser degree in tissues, in the intervention group, indicating that the intervention has functioned as expected (ART has been intensified in vivo). Several outcome measures changed during the trial period in the intervention group, leading the investigators to conclude that their results provide strong evidence of ongoing replication on standard ART. The results of this small trial are intriguing, and a few observations in particular are hypothesis-generating and potentially justify further clinical trials to explore them in depth.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Persistence is a phenomenon by which genetically susceptible cells are able to survive exposure to high concentrations of antibiotics. This is especially a major problem when treating infections caused by slow growing mycobacteria such as M. tuberculosis and M. abscessus. Studies on the mechanisms adopted by the persisting bacteria to survive and evade antibiotic killing can potentially lead to faster and more effective treatment strategies.

      To address this, in this study, the authors have used a transposon mutagenesis based sequencing approach to identify the genetic determinants of antibiotic persistence in M. abscessus. To enrich for persisters they employed conditions, that have been reported previously to increase persister frequency - nutrient starvation, to facilitate genetic screening for this phenotype. M.abs transposon library was grown in nutrient rich or nutrient depleted conditions and exposed to TIG/LZD for 6 days, following which Tn-seq was carried out to identify genes involved in spontaneous (nutrient rich) or starvation-induced conditions. About 60% of the persistence hits were required in both the conditions. Pathway analysis revealed enrichment for genes involved in detoxification of nitrosative, oxidative, DNA damage and proteostasis stress. The authors then decided to validate the findings by constructing deletions of 5 different targets (pafA, katG, recR, blaR, Mab_1456c) and tested the persistence phenotype of these strains. Rather surprisingly only 2 of the 5 hits (katG and pafA) exhibited a significant persistence defect when compared to wild type upon exposure to TIG/LZD and this was complemented using an integrative construct. The authors then investigated the specificity of delta-katG susceptibility against different antibiotic classes and demonstrated increased killing by rifabutin. The katG phenotype was shown to be mediated through the production of oxidative stress which was reverted when the bacterial cells were cultured under hypoxic conditions. Interestingly, when testing the role of katG in other clinical strains of Mab, the phenotype was observed only in one of the clinical strains demonstrating that there might be alternative anti-oxidative stress defense mechanisms operating in some clinical strains.

      Strengths:

      While the role of ROS in antibiotic mediated killing of mycobacterial cells have been studied to some extent, this paper presents some new findings with regards to genetic analysis of M. abscessus susceptibility, especially against clinically used antibiotics, which makes it useful. Also, the attempts to validate their observations in clinical isolates is appreciated.

      Weaknesses:

      Amongst the 5 shortlisted candidates from the screen, only 2 showed marginal phenotypes which limits the impact of the screening approach.

      While the role of KatG mediated detoxification of ROS and involvement of ROS in antibiotic killing was well demonstrated, the lack of replication of this phenotype in some of the clinical isolates limits the significance of these findings.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Pavel et al. analyzed a cohort of atrial fibrillation (AF) patients from the University of Illinois at Chicago, identifying TTN truncating variants (TTNtvs) and TTN missense variants (TTNmvs). They reported a rare TTN missense variant (T32756I) associated with adverse clinical outcomes in AF patients. To investigate its functional significance, the authors modeled the TTN-T32756I variant using human induced pluripotent stem cell-derived atrial cardiomyocytes (iPSC-aCMs). They demonstrated that mutant cells exhibit aberrant contractility, increased activity of the cardiac potassium channel KCNQ1 (Kv7.1), and dysregulated calcium homeostasis. Interestingly, these effects occurred without compromising sarcomeric integrity. The study further identified increased binding of the titin-binding protein Four-and-a-Half Lim domains 2 (FHL2) with KCNQ1 and its modulatory subunit KCNE1 in the TTN-T32756I iPSC-aCMs.

      Comments on revised version:

      This revised manuscript demonstrates significant improvement, notably through the inclusion of new data (Supplementary Figures 5 and 7) and expanded explanations in the main text. These additions strengthen the association between the TTN-T32756I missense variant and electrophysiological phenotypes relevant to atrial fibrillation (AF). The authors are commended for their thorough and thoughtful responses to reviewer feedback, their transparency in acknowledging limitations, and their efforts to provide mechanistic insight into the observed phenotype.

      Nonetheless, several important limitations remain and should be more explicitly addressed when framing the conclusions and selecting the final manuscript title:

      (1) While the data support a functional impact of the TTN-T32756I variant, the evidence does not yet definitively establish causality in the context of AF. Statements asserting a causal relationship should be softened and clearly framed as suggestive, pending further in vivo or patient-specific validation.

      (2) The study models the TTN-T32756I variant in a single healthy iPSC line using CRISPR/Cas9 editing. Although this provides a genetically controlled system, the absence of validation in patient-derived iPSCs or replication across multiple isogenic lines limits the generalizability and reproducibility of the findings.

      (3) The co-localization and co-immunoprecipitation (co-IP) data provide strong support for an interaction between FHL2 and the KCNQ1/KCNE1 complex. However, in the current form, the proposed mechanism remains plausible but not fully validated.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The NF-kB signaling pathway plays a critical role in the development and survival of conventional alpha beta T cells. Gamma delta T cells are evolutionarily conserved T cells that occupy a unique niche in the host immune system and that develop and function in a manner distinct from conventional alpha beta T cells. Specifically, unlike the case for conventional alpha beta T cells, a large portion of gamma delta T cells acquire functionality during thymic development, after which they emigrate from the thymus and populate a variety of mucosal tissues. Exactly how gamma delta T cells are functionally programmed remains unclear. In this manuscript, Islam et al. use a wide variety of mouse genetic models to examine the influence of the NF-kB signaling pathway on gamma delta T cell development and survival. They find that the inhibitor of kappa B kinase complex (IKK) is critical to the development of gamma delta T1 subsets, but not adaptive/naïve gamma delta T cells. In contrast, IKK-dependent NF-kB activation is required for their long-term survival. They find that caspase 8-deficiency renders gamma delta T cells sensitive to RIPK1-mediated necroptosis, and they conclude that IKK repression of RIPK1 is required for the long-term survival of gamma delta T1 and adaptive/naïve gamma delta T cells subsets. These data will be invaluable in comparing and contrasting the signaling pathways critical for the development/survival of both alpha beta and gamma delta T cells.

      The conclusions of the paper are mostly well-supported by the data, but some aspects need to be clarified.

      (1) The authors appear to be excluding a significant fraction of the TCRlow gamma delta T cells from their analysis in Figure 1A. Since this population is generally enriched in CD25+ gamma delta T cells, this gating strategy could significantly impact their analysis due to the exclusion of progenitor gamma delta T cell populations.

      (2) The overall phenotype of the IKKDeltaTCd2 mice is not described in any great detail. For example, it is not clear if these mice possess altered thymocyte or peripheral T cell populations beyond that of gamma delta T cells. Given that gamma delta T cell development has been demonstrated to be influenced by gamma delta T cells (i.e, trans-conditioning), this information could have aided in the interpretation of the data. Related to this, it would have been helpful if the authors provided a comparison of the frequencies of each of the relevant subsets, in addition to the numbers.

      (3) The manner in which the peripheral gamma delta T cell compartment was analyzed is somewhat unclear. The authors appear to have assessed both spleen and lymph node separately. The authors show representative data from only one of these organs (usually the lymph node) and show one analysis of peripheral gamma delta T cell numbers, where they appear to have summed up the individual spleen and lymph node gamma delta T cell counts. Since gamma deltaT17 and gamma deltaT1 are distributed somewhat differently in these compartments (lymph node is enriched in gamma deltaT17, while spleen is enriched in gamma deltaT1), combining these data does not seem warranted. The authors should have provided representative plots for both organs and calculated and analyzed the gamma delta T cell numbers for both organs separately in each of these analyses.

      (4) The authors make extensive use of surrogate markers in their analysis. While the markers that they choose are widely used, there is a possibility that the expression of some of these markers may be altered in some of their genetic mutants. This could skew their analysis and conclusions. A better approach would have been to employ either nuclear stains (Tbx21, RORgammaT) or intracellular cytokine staining to definitively identify functional gamma deltaT1 or gamma deltaT17 subsets.

      (5) The analysis and conclusion of the data in Figure 3A is not convincing. Because the data are graphed on log scale, the magnitude of the rescue by kinase dead RIPK1 appears somewhat overstated. A rough calculation suggests that in type 1 game delta T cells, there is ~ 99% decrease in gamma delta T cells in the Cre+WT strain and a ~90% decrease in the Cre+KD+ strain. Similarly, it looks as if the numbers for adaptive gamma delta T cells are a 95% decrease and an 85% decrease, respectively. Comparing these data to the data in Figure 5, which clearly show that kinase dead RIPK1 can completely rescue the Caspase 8 phenotype, the conclusion that gamma delta T cells require IKK activity to repress RIPK1-dependent pathways does not appear to be well-supported. In fact, the data seem more in line with a conclusion that IKK has a significant impact on gamma delta T cell survival in the periphery that cannot be fully explained by invoking Caspase8-dependent apoptosis or necroptosis. Indeed, while the authors seem to ultimately come to this latter conclusion in the Discussion, they clearly state in the Abstract that "IKK repression of RIPK1 is required for survival of peripheral but not thymic gamma delta T cells." Clarification of these conclusions and seeming inconsistencies would greatly strengthen the manuscript. With respect to the actual analysis in Figure 3A, it appears that the authors used a succession of non-parametric t-tests here without any correction. It may be helpful to determine if another analysis, such as ANOVA, may be more appropriate.

      (6) The conclusion that the alternative pathway is redundant for the development and persistence of the major gamma delta T cell subsets is at odds with a previous report demonstrating that Relb is required for gamma delta T17 development (Powolny-Budnicka, I., et al., Immunity 34: 364-374, 2011). This paper also reported the involvement of RelA in gamma delta T17 development. The present manuscript would be greatly improved by the inclusion of a discussion of these results.

      (7) The data in Figures 1C and 3A are somewhat confusing in that while both are from the lymph nodes of IKKdeltaTCD2 mice, the data appear to be quite different (In Figure 3A, the frequency of gamma delta T cells increases and there is a near complete loss of the CD27+ subset. In Figure 1A, the frequency of gamma delta T cells is drastically decreased, and there is only a slight loss of the CD27+ subset.)

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      It is widely accepted that the number of muscle stem cells (MuSCs) declines with aging, leading to diminished regenerative capacity. In this study, when MuSCs were labeled with YFP at a young age, the authors found that the YFP-positive MuSC population remained stable with aging. However, VCAM1 and Pax7 expression levels were reduced in the YFP-positive MuSCs. These VCAM1-negative/low cells exhibited limited proliferative potential and reduced regenerative ability upon transplantation into MuSC-depleted mice. Furthermore, Vcam1-/low MuSCs were highly sensitive to senolysis and represented the population in which Vcam1 expression could be restored by DHT. Finally, the authors identified CD200 and CD63 as markers capable of detecting the entire geriatric MuSC population, including Vcam1-/low cells. Although numerous studies have reported an age-related decline in MuSC numbers, this study challenges that consensus. Therefore, the conclusions require further careful validation.

      Major comments:

      (1) As mentioned above, numerous studies have reported that the number of MuSCs declines with aging. The authors' claim is valid, as Pax7 and Vcam1 were widely used for these observations. However, age-related differences have also been reported even when using these markers (Porpiglia et al., Cell Stem Cell 2022; Liu et al., Cell Rep 2013). When comparing geriatric Vcam1⁺ MuSCs with young MuSCs in this study, did the authors observe any of the previously reported differences? Furthermore, would increasing the sample size in Figure 1 reveal a statistically significant difference? The lack of significance appears to result from variation within the young group. In addition, this reviewer requests the presentation of data on MuSC frequency in geriatric control mice using CD200 and CD63 in the final figure.

      (2) Can the authors identify any unique characteristics of Pax7-VCAM-1 GER1-MuSCs using only the data generated in this study, without relying on public databases? For example, reduced expression of Vcam1 and Pax7. The results of such analyses should be presented.

      (3) In the senolysis experiment, the authors state that GER1-MuSCs were depleted. However, no data are provided to support this conclusion. Quantitative cell count data would directly address this concern. In addition, the FACS profile corresponding to Figure 4D should be included.

      (4) Figure S4: It remains unclear whether DHT enhances regenerative ability through restoration of the VCAM1 expression in GER1-MuSCs, as DHT also acts on non-MuSC populations. Analyses of the regenerative ability of Senolysis+DHT mice may help to clarify this issue.

      (5) Why are there so many myonuclear transcripts detected in the single-cell RNA-seq data? Was this dataset actually generated using single-nucleus RNA-seq? This reviewer considers it inappropriate to directly compare scRNA-seq and snRNA-seq results.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The authors use inducible Fz::mKate2-sfGFP to explore "cell-scale signaling" in PCP. They reach several conclusions. First, they conclude that cell-scale signaling does not depend on limiting pools of core components (other than Fz). Second, they conclude that cell-scale signaling does not depend on microtubule orientation, and third, they conclude that cell-scale signaling is strong relative to cell to cell coupling of polarity.

      There are some interesting inferences that can be drawn from the manuscript, but there are also some significant challenges in interpreting the results and conclusions from the work as presented. I suggest that the authors 1) define "cell-scale signaling," as the precise meaning must be inferred, 2) reconsider some premises upon which some conclusions depend, 3) perform an essential assay validation, and 4) explain some other puzzling inconsistencies.

      Major concerns (first round of review):

      The exact meaning of cell-scale signaling is not defined, but I infer that the authors use this term to describe how what happens on one side of a cell affects another side. The remainder of my critique depends on this understanding of the intended meaning.

      The authors state that any tissue wide directional information comes from pre-existing polarity and its modification by cell flow, such that the de novo signaling paradigm "bypasses" these events and should therefore not be responsive to any further global cues. It is my understanding that this is not a universally accepted model, and indeed, the authors' data seem to suggest otherwise. For example, the image in Fig 5B shows that de novo induction restores polarity orientation to a predominantly proximal to distal orientation. If no global cue is active, how is this orientation explained? The 6 hr condition, that has only partial polarity magnitude, is quite disordered. Do the patterns at 8 and 10 hrs become more proximally-distally oriented? It is stated that they all show swirls, but please provide adult wing images, and the corresponding orientation outputs from QuantifyPolarity to help validate the notion that the global cues are indeed bypassed by this paradigm.

      It is implicit that, in the de novo paradigm, polarization is initiated immediately or shortly after heat shock induction. However, the results should be differently interpreted if the level of available Fz protein does not rise rapidly and then stabilize before the 6 hr time point, and instead continues to rise throughout the experiment. Western blots of the Fz::mKate2-sfGFP at time points after induction should be performed to demonstrate steady state prior to measurements. Otherwise, polarity magnitude could simply reflect the total available pool of Fz at different times after induction. Interpreting stability is complex, and could depend on the same issue, as well as the amount of recycling that may occur. Prior work from this lab using FRAP suggested that turnover occurs, and could result from recycling as well as replenishment from newly synthesized protein.

      From the Fig 3 results, the authors claim that limiting pools of core proteins do not explain cell-scale signaling, a result expected based on the lack of phenotypes in heterozygotes, but of course they do not test the possibility that Fz is limiting. They do note that some other contributing protein could be.

      In Fig 3, it is unclear why the authors chose to test dsh1/+ rather than dsh[null]/+. In any case, the statistically significant effect of Dsh dose reduction is puzzling, and might indicate that the other interpretation is correct. Ideally, a range including larger and smaller reductions would be tested. As is, I don't think limiting Dsh is ruled out.

      The data in Fig 5 are somewhat internally inconsistent, and inconsistent with the authors' interpretation. In both repolarization conditions, the authors claim that repolarization extends only to row 1, and row 1 is statistically different from non-repolarized row 1, but so too is row 3. Row 2 is not. This makes no sense, and suggests either that the statistical tests are inappropriate and/or the data is too sparse to be meaningful. For the related boundary intensity data in Fig 6, the authors need to describe exactly how boundaries were chosen or excluded from the analysis. Ideally, all boundaries would be classified as either meido-lateral (meaning anterior-posterior) or proximal-distal depending on angle.

      If the authors believe their Fig 5 and 6 analyses, how do they explain that hairs are reoriented well beyond where the core proteins are not? This would be a dramatic finding, because as far as I know, when core proteins are polarized, prehair orientation always follows the core protein distribution. Surprisingly, the authors do not so much as comment about this. The authors should age their wings just a bit more to see whether the prehair pattern looks more like the adult hair pattern or like that predicted by their protein orientation results.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      In this study, Li et al. aim to determine the effect of navigational experience on visual representations of scenes. Participants first learn to navigate within simple virtual environments where navigation is either unrestricted or restricted by an invisible wall. Environments are matched in terms of their spatial layout and instead differ primarily in terms of their background visual features. In a later same/different task, participants are slower to distinguish between pairs of scenes taken from the same navigation condition (i.e. both restricted or both unrestricted) than different navigation conditions. Neural response patterns in the PPA also discriminate between scenes from different navigation conditions. These results suggest that navigational experience influences perceptual representations of scenes. This is an interesting study, and the results and conclusions are clearly explained and easy to follow. There are a few points that I think would benefit from further consideration or elaboration from the authors, which I detail below.

      First, I am a little sceptical of the extent to which the tasks are able to measure navigational or perceptual experience with the scenes. The training procedure seems like it wouldn't require obtaining substantial navigational experience as the environments are all relatively simple and only require participants to follow basic paths, rather than encouraging more active exploration of a more complex environment. Furthermore, in the same/different task, all images show the same view of the environment (meaning they show the exact same image in the "same environment" condition). The task is therefore really a simple image-matching task and doesn't require participants to meaningfully extract the perceptual or spatial features of the scenes. An alternative would have been to present different views of the scenes, which would have prevented the use of image-matching and encouraged further engagement with the scenes themselves. Ultimately, the authors do still find a response time difference between the navigation conditions, but the effect does appear quite small. I wonder if the design choices could be obscuring larger effects, which might have been better evident if the navigational and perceptual tasks had encouraged greater encoding of the spatial and perceptual features of the environment. I think it would be helpful for the authors to explain their reasons for not employing such designs, or to at least give some consideration to alternative designs.

      Figure 1B illustrates that the non-navigable condition includes a more complicated environment than the navigable condition, and requires following a longer path with more turns in it. I guess this is a necessary consequence of the experiment design, as the non-navigable condition requires participants to turn around and find an alternative route. Still, this does introduce spatial and perceptual differences between the two navigation conditions, which could be a confounding factor. What do the response times for the "matched" condition in the same/different task look like if they are broken down by the navigable and non-navigable environments? If there is a substantial difference between them, it could be that this is driving the difference between the matched and mismatched conditions, rather than the matching/mismatching experience itself.

      In both experiments, the authors determined their sample sizes via a priori power analyses. This is good, but a bit more detail on these analyses would be helpful. How were the effect sizes estimated? The authors say it was based on other studies with similar methodologies - does this mean the effect sizes were obtained from a literature search? If so, it would be good to give some details of the studies included in this search, and how the effect size was obtained from these (e.g., it is generally recommended to take a lower bound over studies). Or is the effect size based on standard guidelines (e.g., Cohen's d ≈ 0.5 is a medium effect size)? If so, why are the effect sizes different for the two studies?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors investigate the role of H3K115ac in mouse embryonic stem cells. They report that H3K115ac localizes to regions enriched for fragile nucleosomes, CpG islands, and enhancers, and that it correlates with transcriptional activity. These findings suggest a potential role for this globular domain modification in nucleosome dynamics and gene regulation. If robust, these observations would expand our understanding of how non-tail histone modifications contribute to chromatin accessibility and transcriptional control.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study addresses a histone PTM in the globular domain, which is relatively unexplored compared to tail modifications.

      (2) The implication of a histone PTM in fragile nucleosome localization is novel and, if substantiated, could represent a significant advance for the field.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The absence of replicate paired-end datasets limits confidence in peak localization.

      (2) The analyses are primarily correlative, making it difficult to fully assess robustness or to support strong mechanistic conclusions.

      (3) Some claims (e.g., specificity for CpG islands, "dynamic" regulation during differentiation) are not fully supported by the analyses as presented.

      (4) Overall, the study introduces an intriguing new angle on globular PTMs, but additional rigor and mechanistic evidence are needed to substantiate the conclusions.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The manuscript by Bru et al. focuses on the role of vacuoles as a phosphate buffering system for yeast cells. The authors describe here the crosstalk between the vacuole and the cytosol using a combination of in vitro analyses of vacuoles and in vivo assays. They show that the luminal polyphosphatases of the vacuole can hydrolyze polyphosphates to generate inorganic phosphate, yet they are inhibited by high concentrations. This balances the synthesis of polyphosphates against the inorganic phosphate pool. Their data further show that the Pho91 transporter provides a valve for the cytosol as it gets activated by a decline in inositol pyrophosphate levels. The authors thus demonstrate how the vacuole functions as a phosphate buffering system to maintain a constant cytosolic inorganic phosphate pool.

      This is a very consistent and well-written manuscript with a number of convincing experiments, where the authors use isolated vacuoles and cellular read-out systems to demonstrate the interplay of polyphosphate synthesis, hydrolysis, and release. The beauty of this system the authors present is the clear correlation between product inhibition and the role of Pho91 as a valve to release Pi to the cytosol to replenish the cytosolic pool. I find the paper overall an excellent fit.

      Comments on Revision:

      The authors have addressed all my concerns.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript investigates the effects of oral supplementation with nicotinamide mononucleotide (NMN) on metabolism and inflammation in mice with diet-induced obesity, and whether these effects depend on the NAD⁺-dependent enzyme SIRT1. Using control and inducible SIRT1 knockout mice, the authors show that NMN administration mitigates high-fat diet-induced weight gain, enhances energy expenditure, and normalizes fasting glucose and plasma lipid profiles in a largely SIRT1-dependent manner. However, reductions in fat mass and adipose tissue expansion occur independently of SIRT1. Comprehensive plasma proteomic analyses (O-Link and mass spectrometry) reveal that NMN reverses obesity-induced alterations in metabolic and immune pathways, particularly those related to glucose and cholesterol metabolism. Integrative network and causal analyses identify both SIRT1-dependent and -independent protein clusters, as well as potential upstream regulators such as FBXW7, ADIPOR2, and PRDM16. Overall, the study supports that NMN modulates key metabolic and immune pathways through both SIRT1-dependent and alternative mechanisms to alleviate obesity and dyslipidemia in mice.

      Strengths:

      Well-written manuscript, and state-of-the-art proteomics-based methodologies to assess NMN and SIRT1-dependent effects.

      Weaknesses:

      Unfortunately, the study design, as well as the data analysis approach taken by the authors, are flawed. This limits the authors' ability to make the proposed conclusions.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Fungal survival and pathogenicity rely on the ability to undergo reversible morphological transitions, which are often linked to nutrient availability. In this study, the authors uncover a conserved connection between glycolytic activity and sulfur amino acid biosynthesis that drives morphogenesis in two fungal model systems. By disentangling this process from canonical cAMP signaling, the authors identify a new metabolic axis that integrates central carbon metabolism with developmental plasticity and virulence.

      Strengths:

      The study integrates different experimental approaches, including genetic, biochemical, transcriptomic, and morphological analyses, and convincingly demonstrates that perturbations in glycolysis alter sulfur metabolic pathways and thus impact pseudohyphal and hyphal differentiation. Overall, this work offers new and important insights into how metabolic fluxes are intertwined with fungal developmental programs and therefore opens new perspectives to investigate morphological transitioning in fungi.

      Weaknesses:

      A few aspects could be improved to strengthen the conclusions. Firstly, the striking transcriptomic changes observed upon 2DG treatment should be analyzed in S. cerevisiae adh1 and pfk1 deletion strains, for instance, through qPCR or western blot analyses of sulfur metabolism genes, to confirm that observed changes in 2DG conditions mirror those seen in genetic mutants. Secondly, differences between methionine and cysteine in their ability to rescue the mutant phenotype in both species are not mentioned, nor discussed in more detail. This is especially important as there seem to be differences between S. cerevisiae and C. albicans, which might point to subtle but specific metabolic adaptations.

      The authors are also encouraged to refine several figure elements for clarity and comparability (e.g., harmonized axes in bar plots), condense the discussion to emphasize the conceptual advances over a summary of the results, and shorten figure legends.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study by Yu et al investigated the role of protein N-glycosylation in regulating T-cell activation and functions is an interesting work. By using genome-wide CRISPR/Cas9 screenings, the authors found that B4GALT1 deficiency could activate expression of PD-1 and enhance functions of CD8+ T cells both in vitro and in vivo, suggesting the important roles of protein N-glycosylation in regulating functions of CD8+ T cells, which indicates that B4GALT1 is a potential target for tumor immunotherapy.

      Strengths:

      The strengths of this study are the findings of novel function of B4GALT1 deficiency in CD8 T cells.

      Weaknesses:

      However, authors did not directly demonstrate that B4GALT1 deficiency regulates the interaction between TCR and CD8, as well as functional outcomes of this interaction, such as TCR signaling enhancements.

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    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors describe a new computational method (SegPore), which segments the raw signal from nanopore direct RNA-Seq data to improve the identification of RNA modifications. In addition to signal segmentation, SegPore includes a Gaussian Mixture Model approach to differentiate modified and unmodified bases. SegPore uses Nanopolish to define a first segmentation, which is then refined into base and transition blocks. SegPore also includes a modification prediction model that is included in the output. The authors evaluate the segmentation in comparison to Nanopolish and Tombo (RNA002) as well as f5c and Uncalled 4 (RNA004), and they evaluate the impact on m6A RNA modification detection using data with known m6A sites. In comparison to existing methods, SegPore appears to improve the ability to detect m6A, suggesting that this approach could be used to improve the analysis of direct RNA-Seq data.

      Strengths:

      SegPore address an important problem (signal data segmentation). By refining the signal into transition and base blocks, noise appears to be reduced, leading to improved m6A identification at the site level as well as for single read predictions. The authors provide a fully documented implementation, including a GPU version that reduces run time. The authors provide a detailed methods description, and the approach to refine segments appears to be new.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper investigates how Pten loss influences the development of medulloblastoma using mouse models of Shh-driven MB. Previous studies have shown that Pten heterozygosity can accelerate tumorigenesis in models where the entire GNP compartment has MB-promoting mutations, raising questions about how Pten levels and context interact, especially when cancer-causing mutations are more sporadic. Here, the authors create an allelic series combining sporadic, cell-autonomous induction of SmoM2 with Pten loss in granule neuron progenitors. In their models, Pten heterozygosity does not significantly impact tumor development, whereas complete Pten loss accelerates tumour onset. Notably, Pten-deficient tumours accumulate differentiated cells, reduced cell death, and decreased macrophage infiltration. At early stages, before tumour establishment, they observe EGL hyperplasia and more pre-tumour cells in S phase, leading them to suggest that Pten loss initially drives proliferation but later shifts towards differentiation and accumulation of death-resistant, postmitotic cells. Overall, this is a well-executed and technically elegant study that confirms and extends earlier findings with more refined models. The phenotyping is strong, but the mechanistic insight is limited, especially with respect to dosage effects and macrophage biology.

      Strengths:

      The work is carefully executed, and the models-using sporadic oncogene induction rather than EGL-wide genetic manipulations-represent an advance in experimental design. The deeper phenotyping, including single-cell RNA-seq and target validation, adds rigor.

      Weaknesses:

      The biological conclusions largely confirm findings from previous studies (Castellino et al, 2010; Metcalf et al, 2013), showing that germline or conditional Pten heterozygosity accelerates tumorigenesis, generates tumors with a very similar phenotype, including abundant postmitotic cells, and reduced cell death.

      The second stated goal - to understand why Pten dosage might matter - remains underdeveloped. The difference between earlier models using EGL-wide SmoA1 or Ptch loss versus sporadic cell-autonomous SmoM2 induction and Pten loss in this study could reflect model-specific effects or non-cell-autonomous contributions from Pten-deficient neighbouring cells in the EGL, for example. However, the study does not explore these possibilities. For instance, examining germline Pten loss in the sporadic SmoM2 context could have provided insight into whether dosage effects are cell-autonomous or dependent on the context.

      The observations on macrophages are intriguing but preliminary. The reduction in Iba1+ cells could reflect changes in microglia, barrier-associated macrophages, or infiltrating peripheral macrophages, but these populations are not distinguished. Moreover, the functional relevance of these immune changes for tumor initiation or progression remains unexplored.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study by Pinho et al. presents a novel behavioral paradigm for investigating higher-order conditioning in mice. The authors developed a task that creates associations between light and tone sensory cues, driving mediated learning. They observed sex differences in task acquisition, with females demonstrating faster mediated learning compared to males. Using fiber photometry and chemogenetic tools, the study reveals that the dorsal hippocampus (dHPC) plays a central role in encoding mediated learning. These findings are crucial for understanding how environmental cues, which are not directly linked to positive/negative outcomes, contribute to associative learning. Overall, the study is well-designed, with robust results, and the experimental approach aligns with the study's objectives.

      Strengths:

      The authors develop a robust behavioral paradigm to examine higher-order associative learning in mice.

      They discover a sex-specific component influencing mediated learning.

      Using fiber photometry and chemogenetic techniques, the authors identify the dorsal hippocampus but not the ventral hippocampus, plays a crucial for encoding mediated learning.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      SMC5/6 is a highly conserved complex able to dynamically alter chromatin structure, playing in this way critical roles in genome stability and integrity that include homologous recombination and telomere maintenance. In the last years, a number of studies have revealed the importance of SMC5/6 in restricting viral expression, which is in part related to its ability to repress transcription from circular DNA. In this context, Oravcova and colleagues recently reported how SMC5/6 is recruited by two mutually exclusive complexes (orthologs of yeast Nse5/6) to SV40 LT-induced PML nuclear bodies (SIMC/SLF2) and DNA lesions (SLF1/2). In this current work, the authors extend this study, providing some new results.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In the research manuscript submitted to eLife (Manuscript ID eLife-RP-RA-2024-104545) titled "Therapeutic benefits of maintaining CDK4/6 inhibitors and incorporating CDK2 inhibitors beyond progression in breast cancer" authors identified 1) CDK4/6i treatment attenuates the growth of drug-resistant cell by prolongation of G1 phase; 2) CDK4/6i treatment results in an ineffective Rb inactivation pathways and suppress the growth of drug-resistant tumors; 3) Addition of endocrine therapy augments the efficacy of CDK4/6i maintenance; 4) Addition of CDK2i with CDK4/6 treatment as second-line treatment can suppress the growth of resistant cell; 5) finally role of cyclin E as key driver of resistance to CDK4/6 and CDK2 inhibition.

      Strengths:

      To prove authors complicated proposal, authors employed orchestration of several kinds of live cell markers, timed in situ hybridization, IF and Immono-bloting. The authors strongly recognize the resistance of CDK4/6 + ET therapy and demonstrated how to overcome it.

      Weaknesses:

      None.

      Comments on revisions:

      In response to the reviewers' questions and comments, the authors have revised the manuscript accordingly and sufficiently addressed the differences between their study and previous works on CDK4/6 and CDK2 combination therapy as a second-line approach.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The authors use Flow cytometry and scRNA seq to identify and characterize the defect in gdT17 cell development from HEB f/f, Vav-icre (HEB cKO), and Id3 germline-deficient mice. HEB cKO mice showed defects in the gdT17 program at an early stage, and failed to properly upregulate expression of Id3 along with other genes downstream of TCR signaling. Id3KO mice showed a later defect in maturation. The results together indicate HEB and Id3 act sequentially during gdT17 development. The authors further showed that HEB and TCR signaling synergize to upregulate Id3 expression in the Scid-adh DN3-like T cell line. Analysis of previously published Chi-seq data revealed binding of HEB (and Egr2) at overlapping regulatory regions near Id3 in DN3 cells.

      The study provides insight into mechanisms by which HEB and Id3 act to mediate gdT17 specification and maturation. The work is well performed and clearly presented. We only have minor comments.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Drosophila larval type II neuroblasts generate diverse types of neurons by sequentially expressing different temporal identity genes during development. Previous studies have shown that the transition from early temporal identity genes (such as Chinmo and Imp) to late temporal identity genes (such as Syp and Broad) depends on the activation of the expression of EcR by Seven-up (Svp) and progression through the G1/S transition of the cell cycle. In this study, Chaya and Syed examined whether the expression of Syp and EcR is regulated by cell cycle and cytokinesis by knocking down CDK1 or Pav, respectively, throughout development or at specific developmental stages. They find that knocking down CDK1 or Pav either in all type II neuroblasts throughout development or in single-type neuroblast clones after larval hatching consistently leads to failure to activate late temporal identity genes Syp and EcR. To determine whether the failure of the activation of Syp and EcR is due to impaired Svp expression, they also examined Svp expression using a Svp-lacZ reporter line. They find that Svp is expressed normally in CDK1 RNAi neuroblasts. Further, knocking down CDK1 or Pav after Svp activation still leads to loss of Syp and EcR expression. Finally, they also extended their analysis to type I neuroblasts. They find that knocking down CDK1 or Pav, either at 0 hours or at 42 hours after larval hatching, also results in loss of Syp and EcR expression in type I neuroblasts. Based on these findings, the authors conclude that cycle and cytokinesis are required for the transition from early to late temporal identity genes in both types of neuroblasts. These findings add mechanistic details to our understanding of the temporal patterning of Drosophila larval neuroblasts.

      Strengths:

      The data presented in the paper are solid and largely support their conclusion. Images are of high quality. The manuscript is well-written and clear.

      Weaknesses:

      The quantifications of the expression of temporal identity genes and the interpretation of some of the data could be more rigorous.

      (1) Expression of temporal identity genes may not be just positive or negative. Therefore, it would be more rigorous to quantify the expression of Imp, Syp, and EcR based on the staining intensity rather than simply counting the number of neuroblasts that are positive for these genes, which can be very subjective. Or the authors should define clearly what qualifies as "positive" (e.g., a staining intensity at least 2x background).

      (2) The finding that inhibiting cytokinesis without affecting nuclear divisions by knocking down Pav leads to the loss of expression of Syp and EcR does not support their conclusion that nuclear division is also essential for the early-late gene expression switch in type II NSCs (at the bottom of the left column on page 5). No experiments were done to specifically block the nuclear division in this study. This conclusion should be revised.

      (3) Knocking down CDK1 in single random neuroblast clones does not make the CDK1 knockdown neuroblast develop in the same environment (except still in the same brain) as wild-type neuroblast lineages. It does not help address the concern whether "type 2 NSCS with cell cycle arrest failed to undergo normal temporal progression is indirectly due to a lack of feedback signaling from their progeny", as discussed (from the bottom of the right column on page 9 to the top of the left column on page 10). The CDK1 knockdown neuroblasts do not divide to produce progeny and thus do not receive a feedback signal from their progeny as wild-type neuroblasts do. Therefore, it cannot be ruled out that the loss of Syp and EcR expression in CDK1 knockdown neuroblasts is due to the lack of the feedback signal from their progeny. This part of the discussion needs to be clarified.

      (4) In Figure 2I, there is a clear EcR staining signal in the clone, which contradicts the quantification data in Figure 2J that EcR is absent in Pav RNAi neuroblasts. The authors should verify that the image and quantification data are consistent and correct.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Hensley and Yildez studies the mechanical behavior of kinesin under conditions where the z-component of the applied force is minimized. This is accomplished by tethering the kinesin to the trapped bead with a long double-stranded DNA segment as opposed to directly binding the kinesin to the large bead. It complements several recent studies that have used different approaches to looking at the mechanical properties of kinesin under low z-force loads. The study shows that much of the mechanical information gleaned from the traditional "one bead" with attached kinesin approach was probably profoundly influenced by the direction of the applied force. The authors speculate that when moving small vesicle cargos (particularly membrane-bound ones), the direction of resisting force on the motor has much less of a z-component than might be experienced if the motor were moving large organelles like mitochondria.

      Strengths:

      The approach is sound and provides an alternative method to examine the mechanics of kinesin under conditions where the z-component of the force is lessened. The data show that kinesin has very different mechanical properties compared to those extensively reported using the "single-bead" assay, where the molecule is directly coupled to a large bead, which is then trapped.

      Weaknesses:

      My primary concern is that in some of the studies, there are not enough data points to be totally convincing. This is particularly apparent in the low z-force condition of Figure 1C and in Figure 2B.

      The substoichiometric binding of kinesins to multivalent DNA complicates the interpretation of the data.

    1. Joint Public Review:

      Summary:

      The Major Histocompatibility Complex (MHC) region is a collection of numerous genes involved in both innate and adaptive immunity. MHC genes are famed for their role in rapid evolution and extensive polymorphism in a variety of vertebrates. This paper presents a summary of gene-level gain and loss of orthologs and paralogs within MHC across the diversity of primates, using publicly available data.

      Strengths:

      This paper provides a strong case that MHC genes are rapidly gained (by paralog duplication) and lost over millions of years of macroevolution. The authors are able to identify MHC loci by homology across species, and from this infer gene duplications and losses using phylogenetic analyses. There is a remarkable amount of genic turnover, summarized in Figure 6 and Figure 7, either of which might be a future textbook figure of immune gene family evolution. The authors draw on state-of-the-art phylogenetic methods, and their inferences are robust.

      Editorial note:

      The authors have responded to the previous reviews and the Assessment was updated without involving the reviewers again.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study investigated spatial representations in deep feedforward neural network models (DDNs) that were often used in solving vision tasks. The authors create a three-dimensional virtual environment, and let a simulated agent randomly forage in a smaller two-dimensional square area. The agent "sees" images of the room within its field of view from different locations and heading directions. These images were processed by DDNs. Analyzing model neurons in DDNs, they found response properties similar to those of place cells, border cells and head direction cells in various layers of deep nets. A linear readout of network activity can decode key spatial variables. In addition, after removing neurons with strong place/border/head direction selectivity, one can still decode these spatial variables from remaining neurons in the DNNs. Based on these results, the authors argue that that the notion of functional cell types in spatial cognition is misleading.

      Comments on the revision:

      In the revision, the authors proposed that their model should be interpreted as a null model, rather than the actual model of the spatial navigation system in the brain. In the revision, the authors also argued that the criterion used in the place cell literature was arbitrary. However, the strength of the present work still depends on how well the null model can explain the experimental findings. It seems that currently the null model failed to explain important aspects of the response properties of different functional cell types in the hippocampus.

      Strengths:

      This paper contains interesting and original ideas, and I enjoy reading it. Most previous studies (e.g., Banino, Nature, 2018; Cueva & Wei, ICLR, 2018; Whittington et al, Cell, 2020) using deep network models to investigate spatial cognition mainly relied on velocity/head rotation inputs, rather than vision (but see Franzius, Sprekeler, Wiskott, PLoS Computational Biology, 2007). Here, the authors find that, under certain settings, visual inputs alone may contain enough information about the agent's location, head direction and distance to the boundary, and such information can be extracted by DNNs. This is an interesting observation from these models.

      Weaknesses:

      While the findings reported here are interesting, it is unclear whether they are the consequence of the specific model setting and how well they would generalize. Furthermore, I feel the results are over-interpreted. There are major gaps between the results actually shown and the claim about the "superfluousness of cell types in spatial cognition". Evidence directly supporting the overall conclusion seems to be weak at the moment.

      Comments on the revision:

      The authors showed that the results generalized to different types of networks. The results were generally robust to different types of deep network architectures. This partially addressed my concern. It remains unclear whether the findings would generalize across different types of environment. Regarding this point, the authors argued that the way how they constructed the environment was consistent with the typical experimental setting in studying spatial navigation system in rodents. After the revision, it remains unclear what the implications of the work is for the spatial navigation system in the brain, given that the null model neurons failed to reproduce certain key properties of place cells (although I agreed with the authors that examining such null models are useful and would encourage one to rethink about the approach used to study these neural systems).

      Major concerns:

      (1) The authors reported that, in their model setting, most neurons throughout the different layers of CNNs show strong spatial selectivity. This is interesting and perhaps also surprising. It would be useful to test/assess this prediction directly based on existing experimental results. It is possible that the particular 2-d virtual environment used is special. The results will be strengthened if similar results hold for other testing environments.

      In particular, examining the pictures shown in Fig. 1A, it seems that local walls of the 'box' contain strong oriented features that are distinct across different views. Perhaps the response of oriented visual filters can leverage these features to uniquely determine the spatial variable. This is concerning because this is is a very specific setting that is unlikely to generalize.

      [Updated after revision]: This concern is partially addressed in the revision. The authors argued that the way how they constructed the environment is consistent with the typical experimental setting in studying spatial navigation system in rodents.

      (2) Previous experimental results suggest that various function cell types discovered in rodent navigation circuits persist in dark environments. If we take the modeling framework presented in this paper literally, the prediction would be that place cells/head direction cells should go away in darkness. This implies that key aspects of functional cell types in the spatial cognition are missing in the current modeling framework. This limitation needs to be addressed or explicitly discussed.

      [Updated after revision]: The authors proposed that their model should be treated as a null model, instead of a candidate model for the brain's spatial navigation system. This clarification helps to better position this work. I would like to thank the authors for making this point explicit. However, this doesn't fully address the issues raised. The significance of the reported results still depend on how well the null model can explain the experimental findings. If the null model failed to explain important aspects of the firing properties of functional cell types, that would speak in favor of the usefulness of the concept of functional cell types.

      (3) Place cells/border cell/ head direction cells are mostly studied in the rodent's brain. For rodents, it is not clear whether standard DNNs would be good models of their visual systems. It is likely that rodent visual system would not be as powerful in processing visual inputs as the DNNs used in this study.

      [Updated after revision]: The authors didn't specifically address this. But clarifying their work as a null model partially addresses this concern.

      (4) The overall claim that the functional cell types defined in spatial cognition are superfluous seems to be too strong based on the results reported here. The paper only studied a particular class of models, and arguably, the properties of these models have a major gap to those of real brains. Even though that, in the DNN models simulated in this particular virtual environment, (i) most model neurons have strong spatial selectivity; (ii) removing model neurons with the strongest spatial selectivity still retain substantial spatial information, why is this relevant to the brain? The neural circuits may operate in a very different regime. Perhaps a more reasonable interpretation of the results would be: these results raise the possibility that those strongly selective neurons observed in the brain may not be essential for encoding certain features, as something like this is observed in certain models. It is difficult to draw definitive conclusions about the brain based on the results reported.

      [Updated after revision]: The authors clarified that their model should be interpreted as a null model. This partially addresses the concern raised here. However, some concerns remain- it remains unclear what new insights the current work offers in terms of understanding the spatial navigation systems. It seems that this work concerns more about the approach to studying the neural systems. Perhaps this point could be made even more clear.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Wang et al. studied an old, still unresolved problem: Why are reaching movements often biased? Using data from a set of new experiments and from earlier studies, they identified how the bias in reach direction varies with movement direction and movement extent, and how this depends on factors such as the hand used, the presence of visual feedback, the size and location of the workspace, the visibility of the start position and implicit sensorimotor adaptation. They then examined whether a target bias, a proprioceptive bias, a bias in the transformation from visual to proprioceptive coordinates and/or biomechanical factors could explain the observed patterns of biases. The authors conclude that biases are best explained by a combination of transformation and target biases.

      A strength of this study is that it used a wide range of experimental conditions with also a high resolution of movement directions and large numbers of participants, which produced a much more complete picture of the factors determining movement biases than previous studies did. The study used an original, powerful and elegant method to distinguish between the various possible origins of motor bias, based on the number of peaks in the motor bias plotted as a function of movement direction. The biomechanical explanation of motor biases could not be tested in this way, but this explanation was excluded in a different way using data on implicit sensorimotor adaptation. This was also an elegant method as it allowed the authors to test biomechanical explanations without the need to commit to a certain biomechanical cost function.

      Overall, the authors have done a good job mapping out reaching biases in a wide range of conditions, revealing new patterns in one of the most basic tasks, and the evidence for the proposed origins is convincing. The study will likely have substantial impact on the field, as the approach taken is easily applicable to other experimental conditions. As such, the study can spark future research on the origin of reaching biases.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary

      The revised manuscript by Liff et al. represents a substantial improvement over the original version. The authors have carefully addressed the key concerns raised in the initial review, most notably by expanding their behavioral analyses and incorporating additional experiments that strengthen the mechanistic links between olfactory sensory neuron (OSN) changes and behavioral outcomes. Their integration of unsupervised Keypoint-MoSeq analysis, extended behavioral metrics (distance travelled, mean speed, freezing time), and the inclusion of behavioral results in the main figures significantly enhance the clarity and impact of the work. The revised discussion also better contextualizes the findings in relation to previous literature, including the discrepancies with Dias & Ressler (2014), and provides more transparency regarding experimental choices.

      Overall Evaluation

      The revised version has substantially strengthened the manuscript. By addressing the initial concerns with new data, improved analyses, and clearer discussion, the authors provide a much more compelling and rigorous account of how odor-shock conditioning biases OSN fate and influences offspring. Although some questions remain open for future exploration, the present study now makes a clear, well-supported contribution to understanding intergenerational sensory inheritance. I commend the authors for their thoughtful and thorough revisions.

      Strengths

      Expanded behavioral analysis: The addition of multiple quantitative metrics, inclusion of freezing behavior, and use of Keypoint-MoSeq provide a much richer characterization of behavioral phenotypes in both F0 and F1 generations. These data convincingly demonstrate nuanced odor-specific effects that were not captured in the earlier version.

      Improved presentation: Behavioral data, previously relegated to supplementary materials, are now appropriately included in the main figures, supported by supplementary statistical tables. This makes the results more transparent and accessible.

      Potential Limitations

      Some behavioral effects in the F1 generation remain subtle; the discussion addresses this, but a cautious interpretation of behavioral inheritance would be appropriate.

      The MoSeq analysis is a valuable addition, though clarifying what "syllables" represent and how they relate to traditional behavioral measures could aid reader interpretation.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors use longitudinal in vivo 1-photon calcium recordings in mouse prefrontal cortex throughout the learning of an odor-guided spatial memory task, with the goal of examining the development of task-related prefrontal representations over the course of learning in different task stages and during sleep sessions. They report replication of their previous results, Muysers et al. 2025, that task and representations in prefrontal cortex arise de novo after learning, comprising of goal selective cells that fire selectively for left or right goals during the spatial working memory component of the task, and generalized task phase selective cells that fire equivalently in the same place irrespective of goal, together comprising task-informative cells. The number of task-informative cells increases over learning, and covariance structure changes resulting in increased sequential activation in the learned condition, but with limited functional relevance to task representation. Finally, the authors report that similar to hippocampal trajectory replay, prefrontal sequences are replayed at reward locations.

      Strengths:

      The major strength of the study is the use of longitudinal recordings, allowing identification of task-related activity in the prefrontal cortex that emerges de novo after learning, and identification of sub-second sequences at reward wells.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have added additional analyses and clarifications that increase the strength of evidence, especially quantification of functional classes of cells using longitudinal calcium recordings in prefrontal cortex during learning of an odor cue guided task, and quantification of prefrontal sequences.

      There are a few remaining issues:

      (1) The manuscript quantifies changes over learning in prefrontal goal-selective cells (equated to "splitter" place cells in hippocampus) and task-phase selective cells (similar to non-splitter place cells that are not goal modulated). A subset of these task cells remain stable throughout learning, and are equated to schema representations in the study. In the memory literature, schemas are generally described as relational networks of abstract and generalized information, that enable adapting to novel context and inference by enabling retrieval of related information from previous contexts. The task-phase selective cells that stay stable throughout learning clearly will have a role in organizing task representations, but to this reviewer, denoting them as forming a schema is an unwarranted interpretation. By this definition, hippocampal non-splitter place cells that emerge early in learning and are stable over days would also form a schema. Therefore, schema notation cannot just be based on stability, it requires further evidence of abstraction such as cross-condition generalization.

      (2) The quantification of prefrontal replay sequences during reward is useful, but it is still unconvincing that the distinction between existence of sequences in the odor sampling phase and reward phase is not trivially expected based on prior literature. This is odor guided task, not a spatial exploration task with no cues, and it is very well-established (as noted in citations in the previous review) that during odor sampling, animals' will sniff in an exploratory stage, resulting in strong beta and respiratory rhythms in prefrontal cortex. Not having LFP recordings in this task does not preclude considering prior literature that clearly shows that odor sampling results in a unique internal state network state, when animals are retrieving the odor-associated goal, vastly different from a reward sampling phase. The authors argue that this is not trivial since they see some sequences during sampling, although they also argue the opposite in response to a question from Reviewer 2 about shuffling controls for sequences, that 'not' seeing these sequences in the sampling phase is an internal control. The bigger issue here is equating these sequences during sampling to replay/ preplay or reactivation sequences similar to the reward phase, since the prefrontal network dynamics are engaged in odor-driven retrieval of associated goals during sampling, as has been shown in previous studies.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper reports an interesting and clever task which allows the joint measurement of both perceptual judgments and confidence (or subjective motion strength) in real / continuous time. The task is used together with a social condition to identify the (incidental, task-irrelevant) impact of another player on decision-making and confidence. The paper is well-written and clear.

      Strengths:

      The innovation on the task alone is likely to be impactful for the field, extending recent continuous report (CPR) tasks to examine other aspects of perceptual decision-making and allowing more naturalistic readouts. One interesting and novel finding is the observation of dyadic convergence of confidence estimates even when the partner is incidental to the task performance, and that dyads tend to be more risk-seeking (indicating greater confidence) than when playing solo.

      One concern with the novel task is whether confidence is disambiguated from a tracking of stimulus strength or coherence. The subjects' task is to track motion direction and use the eccentricity of the joystick to control the arc of a catcher - thus implementing a real-time sensitivity to risk (peri-decision wagering). The variable-width catcher has been used to good effect in other confidence/uncertainty tasks involving learning of the spread of targets (the Nassar papers). But in the context of an RDK task, one simple strategy here is to map eccentricity directly to (subjective) motion coherence - such that the joystick position at any moment in time is a vector with motion direction and strength. The revised version of the paper now includes a comprehensive analysis of the extent to which the metacognitive aspect of the task (the joystick eccentricity) tracks stimulus features such as motion coherence. The finding of a lagged relationship between task accuracy and eccentricity in conjunction with a relative lack of instantaneous relationships with coherence fluctuations, convincingly strengthens the inference that this component of the joystick response is metacognitive in nature, and dynamically tracking changes in performance. This importantly rebuts a more deflationary framing of the metacognitive judgment, in which what the subjects might be doing is tracking two features of the world - instantaneous motion strength and direction.

      The claim that the novel task is tracking confidence is also supported by new analyses showing classic statistical features of explicit confidence judgments (scaling with aggregate accuracy, and tracking psychometric function slope) are obtained with the joystick eccentricity measure.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Vineis et al. examined the structure and functional potential of microbial communities along a vertical sediment profile of a salt marsh, using a genome-centric metagenomic approach. They attempted to test whether (1) the microbial communities within dynamic upper layers contain genomes with diverse functional potential, (2) the energy limited deeper sediments contain microbial consortia assembled to metabolise complex carbon, and (3) microbial compositional changes in the low energy sediments mirror the burial processes observed in marine environments with similar energetic limitations. Results revealed a core microbial consortia that contains a collective metabolic potential for complex carbon and aromatics degradation, suggesting putative syntrophic interactions. Besides, the recovery of MAGs assembled independently from multiple depths in the same core and the consistent relative abundance structure of MAGs within co-occurrence network modules together suggest burial process as a likely mechanism for microbial assembly.

      Strengths:

      (1) Two long sediment cores (down to 240 cm deep) were collected in this study, allowing investigation of the less well characterised subsurface microbiome in salt marsh.

      (2) A genome-centric metagenomic approach was employed here, which provides information on both the structure and functional potential of the salt marsh sediment microbiome, which is not possible in commonly performed 16S rRNA-based surveys.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) In both the abstract and conclusion, the authors claimed that results from this study provide a "mechanistic understanding" of the assembly and distribution of the microbial communities in salt marsh sediment (P2, L31 and P35, L645-649). However, both claims are speculative and not supported by solid evidence. Firstly, the genomic data presented in this study and supplementary physical properties of sediments in the broader area are not enough to make a solid claim (that appears in the title) on microbial assembly being governed by a burial process. Alternative explanations include residual bioturbation, slow porewater advection, etc. Therefore, this remains an interesting hypothesis unless additional evidence is provided to rule out the alternative explanations. Similarly, the claim on the detailed syntrophic interactions among members within a co-occurrence network module (e.g. P36, L649-652) is purely speculative and warrants functional validation experiments to prove.

      (2) A major aim of this work was to study complex carbon degradation. However, neither CAZymes, the first-line carbon degradation enzymes, nor peptidases, which can be important contributors to carbon degradation at depth, was examined here. METABOLIC, which the authors used for functional annotation of MAGs, by default generates peptidases outputs and can be easily integrated here.

      (3) No geochemical data is available to provide context for the genomic analysis here. Without such information, readers cannot even tell whether the surface sediment samples were oxic or anoxic. A reference to a PhD thesis is provided (P6, L126) but it would be most helpful to extract relevant data from there and provide as a supplementary table.

      (4) A single metagenomic binning tool, CONCOCT, was used in this study, which very likely has resulted in a limited number of MAGs recovered. More (high-quality) MAGs are expected with the use of additional binners and a bin consolidation procedure.

      (5) Several terminologies are misleading here. Firstly, the term "co-occurring" or "co-located" microbes or MAGs (e.g. P1, L19 and P31, L537) can be misleading as it could imply a close spatial relationship. However, co-occurrence networks rely on correlations of (relative) abundance and show statistical associations instead of direct spatial or physical relationships. I would suggest alternative names such as co-abundant or statistically associated microbes. Secondly, the term "persistent conversion of soil organic carbon" (P36, L654) in the conclusion is also misleading as it implies an active process, which cannot be tested without metatranscriptomics or metaproteomics data.

      (6) Based on a NMDS plot of KEGG IDs (Figure 4B), the authors claimed that the functional potential among MAGs in modules 1, 2 and 7 was very similar (P18, L346). However, the dispersions of modules 1 and 2 were just too large. A proper statistical test, such as PERMANOVA, should be used to support the claim.

      (7) Genome-scale metabolic networks was analysed using Metag2Metabo (M2M) and results were discussed in detail (P26, L453-466). However, the source data should be provided in a supplementary table to show what metabolites are producible by which MAGs.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aimed to determine whether individual serotonin neurons encode a slowly evolving estimate of environmental value during a dynamic Pavlovian conditioning task. They used a Bayesian modeling framework to fit neural activity and behavior to reward history across multiple timescales. A key goal was to distinguish value coding from other influences, particularly thirst, by comparing model fits across neurons. Ultimately, they sought to quantify the prevalence and properties of value coding in single serotonin neurons and assess its relationship to behavior.

      Strengths:

      The authors employ a Bayesian modeling framework that allows for nuanced hypothesis testing on long timescales of reward history. This approach is well-suited to the complexity of single-neuron data, where noise and variability can obscure meaningful patterns. By fitting generative models to both neural activity and behavior, the authors move beyond descriptive statistics to infer latent variables such as value and thirst, and quantify their contributions to firing rate.

      The use of hierarchical Bayesian models enables partial pooling across neurons and sessions, improving parameter estimation while accounting for individual variability. The mixture modeling strategy further strengthens the analysis by explicitly testing whether neurons encode value, thirst, or neither - rather than assuming a single coding scheme. This avoids overfitting and provides a principled way to assess the prevalence and properties of value coding in the serotonergic population.

      The authors also validate their modeling choices through cross-validation and comparisons with null and trend models, demonstrating that their value model explains neural activity better than simpler alternatives. This lends credibility to their claim that serotonin neurons encode slowly evolving estimates of value.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors' decision to analyze neural activity during the ITI is methodologically sound in terms of maximizing spike counts and improving statistical power for single-unit modeling. Their generative model performs best when applied to ITI firing, and the longer duration and higher spike density of this period make it well-suited for capturing slow dynamics in serotonergic neurons.

      However, this strength simultaneously introduces a conceptual limitation. The behavioral readout-anticipatory licking-occurs during the cue periods, not the ITI. This creates a temporal disconnect between the neural and behavioral data streams. While the authors cite theoretical work suggesting that ITI value scales with trace period value, this assumption is not directly validated in the current dataset. As a result, it remains unclear whether ITI firing reflects behaviorally relevant value signals or merely captures slow fluctuations unrelated to immediate behavioral output. For example, after all of the analyses performed, the final results section point reads: "Taken together, anticipatory licking is explained partially by value integration occurring at a faster time scale than seen in serotonergic cells and partially by value integration happening at a timescale that matches the serotonergic cells, but the part of the behaviour matching the timescale seen in serotonergic cells is better explained by a model of thirst than a model of value." This appears to negate much of the work of the prior analyses.

      The manuscript lacks sufficient population-level illustrations of behavior. Figure 1 presents a single-session example, which does not allow the reader to assess consistency across mice or neurons. Figure 2 improves on this by showing individual traces and means, but the data are already processed and smoothed, obscuring raw behavioral variability.

      Additionally, key behavioral metrics are not clearly defined. For instance, the calculation of "reward collection probability" is ambiguous. It is unclear whether this refers to licking during the cue, the outcome window, or some other period. The relationship between reward collection probability and anticipatory licking is also not explicitly described, making it difficult to interpret how these behavioral measures relate to the modeled value signals. The reader is also not shown what licking looks like during the ITI - the precise period the authors analyse and focus on.

      Thirst plays a central role in the manuscript, both as a behavioral driver and as a confounding variable in interpreting serotonergic activity. However, the method used to quantify thirst, a linear decrease from an initial value following each drinking event, is overly simplistic and potentially misleading. This approach assumes that thirst diminishes uniformly with each reward, without accounting for the physiological complexity of hydration and satiety regulation.

      In reality, thirst is influenced by multiple factors, including fluid balance, timing of intake, and individual variability. Modeling it as a monotonic function of reward consumption risks conflating motivational state with mere reward history. Given how prominently thirst features in the analysis and interpretation, a more nuanced or empirically validated measure would strengthen the manuscript's conclusions.

      Minor, but I did not find Panel A of Figure S1 to be helpful to the manuscript. The panel says height, while the caption says hairline. This manuscript is not about faculty, height, or hairline.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors have used gene deletion approaches in zebrafish to investigate the function of genes of the hox clusters in pectoral fin "positioning" (but perhaps more accurately pectoral fin "formation"

      Strengths:

      The authors have employed a robust and extensive genetic approach to tackle an important and unresolved question.

      The results are largely very clearly presented.

      Weaknesses:

      The Abstract suggests that no genetic evidence exists in model organisms for a role of Hox genes in limb positioning. There are, however, several examples in mouse and other models (both classical genetic and other) providing evidence for a role of Hox genes in limb position, which is elaborated on in the Introduction.

      It would perhaps be more accurate to state that several lines of evidence in a range of model organisms (including the mouse) support a role for Hox genes in limb positioning. The author's work is not weakened by a more inclusive introduction that cites the current literature more comprehensively.

      It would be helpful for the authors to make a clear distinction between "positioning" of the limb/fin and whether a limb/fin "forms" at all, independent of the relative position of this event along the body axis.

      Discussion of why the zebrafish is sensitive to Hoxb loss with reference to the fin, but mouse Hoxb mutants do make a limb?

      Is this down to exclusive expression of Hoxbs in the zebrafish pectoral fin forming region rather than a specific functional role of the protein? This is important as it has implications for the interpretation of results throughout the paper and could explain some apparently conflicting results. .

      Why is hoxba more potent than hoxbb? Is this because Hioxba has Hox4/5 present while hox bb has only hoxb5? Hoxba locus has retained many more hox genes in,cluater than hoxbb therefore might expect to see greater redundancy in this locus)<br /> Deletion of either hox a or hox d in background of hoxba mutant does have some effect. IS this a reflection of protein function or expression dynamics of hoax/hoxd genes?

      Can we really be confident there is a "transformation of pectoral fin progenitor cells into cardiac cells"?

      The failure to repress Nkx2.5 in the posterior (pelvic fin) domain is clear but have these cells actually acquired cardiac identity? They would be expected to express Tbx5a (or b) as cardiac precursors but this domain does not broaden. There is no apparent expansion of the heart (field)/domain or progenitors beyond 16 somite stage. The claimed "migration" of heart precursors iin the mutant is not clear. The heart/cardiac domain that does form in the mutant is not clearly expanded in the mutant. The domain of cmlc2 looks abnormal in the mutant but I am not convinced it is "enlarged" as claim by the authors. The authors have not convincingly shown that " the cells that should form the pectoral fin instead differentiate into cardia cells."

      The only clear conclusion is the loss of pectoral fin-forming cells rather than these fin-forming cells being "transformed" into a new identity. It would be interesting to know what has happened to the cells of the pectoral fin forming region in these double mutants.

      It is not clear what the authors mean by a "converse" relationship between forelimb/pectoral fin and heart formation. The embryological relationship between these two populations is distinct in amniotes.

      The authors show convincing data that RA cannot induce Tbx5a in the absence of Hob clusters but I am not convinced by the interpretation of this result. The results shown would still be consistent with RA acting directly upstream of tbx5a but merely that RA acts in concert with hox genes to activate tbx5a. IN the absence of one or the other tbx5a would not be expressed. It is not necessary that RA and hoxbs act exclusively in a linear manner (i.e. RA regulates hoxb that in turn regulate tbx5a)

      The authors have carried out a functional test for the function of hoxb6 and hoxb8 in the hemizygous hoxb mutant background. What is lacking is any expression analysis to demonstrate whether hoxb6b or hoxb8b are even expressed in the appropriate pectoral fin territory to be able to contribute to pectoral fin development either in this assay or in normal pectoral fin development.

      (The term "compensate" used in this section is confusing/misleading.)

      The authors' confounding results described in Figures 6-7 are consistent with the challenges faced in other model organisms in trying to explore the function of genes in the hox cluster and the known redundancy that exists across paralogous groups and across individual clusters.

      Given the experimental challenges in deciphering the actual functions of individual or groups of hox genes, a discussion of the normal expression pattern of individual and groups of hox genes (and how this may change in different mutant backgrounds) could be helpful to make conclusions about likely normal function of these genes and compensation/redundancy in different mutant scenarios.

      Comments on revisions:

      No further issues to address.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors investigate sub-skin surface deformations to a number of different, relevant tactile stimuli, including pressure and moving stimuli. The results demonstrate and quantify the tension and compression applied from these types of touch to fingerprint ridges, where pressure flattens the ridges. Their study further revealed that on lateral movement, prominent vertical shearing occurred in ridge deformation, with somewhat inconsistent horizontal shear. This also shows how much the deeper skin layers are deformed in touch, meaning the activation of all cutaneous mechanoreceptors, as well as the possibility of other deeper non-cutaneous mechanoreceptors.

      Strengths:

      The paper has many strengths. As well as being impactful scientifically, the methods are sound and innovative, producing interesting and detailed results. The results reveal the intricate workings of the skin layers to pressure touch, as well as sliding touch over different conditions. This makes it applicable to many touch situations and provides insights into the differential movements of the skin, and thus the encoding of touch in regards to the function of fingerprints. The work is very clearly written and presented, including how their work relates to the literature and previous hypotheses about the function of fingerprint ridges. The figures are very well-presented and show individual and group data well. The additional supplementary information is informative and the video of the skin tracking demonstrates the experiments well.

      Weaknesses:

      There are very few weaknesses with the work; rather the authors detail well the limitations in the discussion. Therefore, this opens up lots of possibilities for future work.

      Impact/significance:

      Overall, the work will likely have a large impact on our understanding of the mechanics of the skin. The detail shown in the study goes beyond current understanding, to add profound insights into how the skin actually deforms and moves on contact and sliding over a surface, respectively. The method could be potentially applied in many other different settings (e.g. to investigate more complex textures, how skin deformation changes with factors like dryness and aging). This fundamental piece of work could therefore be applied to understand skin changes and how these impact on touch perception. It can further be applied to understand skin mechanoreceptor function better and model these. Finally, the importance of fingertip ridges is well-detailed, demonstrating how these play a role in directly shaping our touch perception and how they can shape the interactions we have with surfaces.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors analyse electron microscopy data of the nociceptive circuit in fly larvae at two developmental stages. They look for ways in which the connectivity of the circuit differs between these two stages, when neurons grow by a factor of about 5. They find that average synaptic weights do not change significantly, and that the density of synaptic inputs onto a dendrite is also unchanged despite the extreme change in size. Further, they find that synaptic weights become less variable and that synapses between pairs of neurons do not become more correlated over development. The second of these findings is evidence against many known long-term synaptic plasticity mechanisms having a significant effect on this circuit.<br /> They combine their first result with theoretical modelling to show that invariances in weight and density preserve neuronal responses despite scaling, and conclude that this is the mechanism by which the circuit can maintain useful function throughout development.

      Strengths:

      The paper carefully analyses a rich dataset of electron microscopy data and clearly highlights how the data support the authors' findings and not obvious alternative hypotheses. The overall finding, that this particular circuit can maintain stable responses using a local conservation of synaptic inputs, is quite striking.

      Weaknesses:

      The main weakness of this paper is in its argument that such a mechanism of input conservation might be a general developmental rule. The vast majority of literature on spine density in mammals finds that spine density increases early in development before falling again (Bourgeois & Rakic, J Neurosci 1993; Petanjek at el, PNAS 2011; Wildenberg et al, Nat Comms 2023). I find the analyses in this manuscript convincing, but the authors should more clearly highlight that this mechanism might be specific to insect nociceptive circuits. A further minor weakness is the fact that only staging data is available, where different individuals are imaged at different developmental stages. This is unavoidable and acknowledged in the manuscript, but it makes it harder to draw clear conclusions about plasticity mechanisms and specific changes in synaptic weight distributions.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Using a computational modeling approach based on the Drift and Diffusion Model (DDM) introduced by Ratcliff and McKoon in 2008, the article by Shevlin and colleagues investigates whether there are differences between neutral and negative emotional states in:

      (1) The timings of the integration in food choices of the perceived healthiness and tastiness of food options in individuals with bulimia nervosa (BN) and healthy participants (2) The weighting of the perceived healthiness and tastiness of these options.

      Strengths:

      By looking at the mechanistic part of the decision process, the approach has potential to improve the understanding of pathological food choices.

      Weaknesses:

      I thank the author for reviewing their manuscript.

      However, I still have major concerns.

      The authors say that they removed any causal claims in their revised version of the manuscript. The sentence before the last one of the abstract still says "bias for high-fat foods predicted more frequent subjective binge episodes over three months". This is a causal claim that I already highlighted in my previous review, specifically for that sentence (see my second sentence of my major point 2 of my previous review).

      I also noticed that a comment that I added was not sent to the authors. In this comment I was highlighting that in Figure 2 of Galibri et al., I was uncertain about a difference between neutral and negative inductions of the average negative rating after the induction in the BN group (i.e. comparing the negative rating after negative induction in BN to the negative rating after neutral induction in BN). Figure 2 of Galibri et al. looks to me that:

      (1) The BN participants were more negative before the induction when they came to the neutral session than when they came to the negative session. (2) The BN participants looked almost negatively similar (taking into account the error bars reported) after the induction in both sessions

      These observations are of high importance because they may support the fact that BN patients were likely in a similar negative state to run the food decision task in both conditions (negative and neutral). Therefore, the lack of difference in food choices in BN patients is unsurprising and nothing could be concluded from the DDM analyses. Moreover, the strong negative ratings of BN patients in the neutral condition as compared to healthy participants together with almost similar negative ratings after the two inductions contradict the authors' last sentence of their abstract.

      I appreciate that the authors reproduced an analysis of their initial paper regarding the negative ratings (i.e. Table S1). It partly answers my aforementioned point but does not address the fact that BN may have been in a similar negative state in both conditions (neutral and negative) when running the food decision task: if BN patients were similarly negative after both induction (neutral and negative), nothing can be concluded from their differences in their results obtained from the DDM. As the authors put it, "not all loss-of-control eating occurs in the context of negative state", I add that far from all negative states lead to a loss-of-control eating in BN patients. This grounds all my aforementioned remarks and my remarks of my first review.

      A solution for that is to run a paired t-test in BN patients only comparing the score after the induction in the two conditions (neutral and negative) reported in Figure 2 of their initial article.

      I appreciate the analysis that the authors added with the restrictive subscale of the EDE-Q. That this analysis does not show any association with the parameters of interest does not show that there is a difference in the link between self reported restrictions and self reported binges. Only such a difference would allow us to claim that the results the authors report may be related to binges.

      I appreciate the wording of the answer of the authors to my third point: "the results suggest that individuals whose task behavior is more reactive to negative affect tend to be the most symptomatic, but the results do not allow us to determine whether this reactivity causes the symptoms". This sentence is crystal clear and sums very well the limits of the associations the authors report with binge eating frequency. However, I do not see this sentence in the manuscript. I think the manuscript would benefit substantially from adding it.

      Statistical analyses:

      If I understood well the mixed models performed, analyses of supplementary tables S1 and S27 to S32 are considering all measures as independent which means that the considered score of each condition (neutral vs negative) and each time (before vs after induction) which have been rated by the same participants are independent. Such type of analyses does not take into account the potential correlation between the 4 scores of a given participant. As a consequence, results may lead to false positives that a linear mixed model does not address. The appropriate analysis would be to run adapted statistical tests pairing the data without running any mixed model.

      Notes:

      It is not because specific methods like correlating self reported measures over long periods with almost instantaneous behaviors (like tasks) have been used extensively in studies that these methods are adapted to answer a given scientific question. Measures aggregated over long periods miss the variations in instantaneous behaviors over these periods.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This is a well-designed and very interesting study examining the impact of imprecise feedback on outcomes on decision-making. I think this is an important addition to the literature and the results here, which provide a computational account of several decision-making biases, are insightful and interesting.

      I do not believe I have substantive concerns related to the actual results presented; my concerns are more related to the framing of some of the work. My main concern is regarding the assertion that the results prove that non-normative and non-Bayesian learning is taking place. I agree with the authors that their results demonstrate that people will make decisions in ways that demonstrate deviations from what would be optimal for maximizing reward in their task under a strict application of Bayes rule. I also agree that they have built reinforcement learning models which do a good job of accounting for the observed behavior. However, the Bayesian models included are rather simple- per the author descriptions, applications of Bayes' rule with either fixed or learned credibility for the feedback agents. In contrast, several versions of the RL models are used, each modified to account for different possible biases. However more complex Bayes-based models exist, notably active inference but even the hierarchical gaussian filter. These formalisms are able to accommodate more complex behavior, such as affect and habits, which might make them more competitive with RL models. I think it is entirely fair to say that these results demonstrate deviations from an idealized and strict Bayesian context; however, the equivalence here of Bayesian and normative is I think misleading or at least requires better justification/explanation. This is because a great deal of work has been done to show that Bayes optimal models can generate behavior or other outcomes that are clearly not optimal to an observer within a given context (consider hallucinations for example) but which make sense in the context of how the model is constructed as well as the priors and desired states the model is given.

      As such, I would recommend that the language be adjusted to carefully define what is meant by normative and Bayesian and to recognize that work that is clearly Bayesian could potentially still be competitive with RL models if implemented to model this task. An even better approach would be to directly use one of these more complex modelling approaches, such as active inference, as the comparator to the RL models, though I would understand if the authors would want this to be a subject for future work.

      Abstract:

      The abstract is lacking in some detail about the experiments done, but this may be a limitation of the required word count? If word count is not an issue, I would recommend adding details of the experiments done and the results. One comment is that there is an appeal to normative learning patterns, but this suggests that learning patterns have a fixed optimal nature, which may not be true in cases where the purpose of the learning (e.g. to confirm the feeling of safety of being in an in-group) may not be about learning accurately to maximize reward. This can be accommodated in a Bayesian framework by modelling priors and desired outcomes. As such the central premise that biased learning is inherently non-normative or non-Bayesian I think would require more justification. This is true in the introduction as well.

      Introduction:

      As noted above the conceptualization of Bayesian learning being equivalent to normative learning I think requires either further justification. Bayesian belief updating can be biased an non-optimal from an observer perspective, while being optimal within the agent doing the updating if the priors/desired outcomes are set up to advantage these "non-optimal" modes of decision making.

      Results:

      I wonder why the agent was presented before the choice - since the agent is only relevant to the feedback after the choice is made. I wonder if that might have induced any false association between the agent identity and the choice itself. This is by no means a critical point but would be interesting to get the authors' thoughts.

      The finding that positive feedback increases learning is one that has been shown before and depends on valence, as the authors note. They expanded their reinforcement learning model to include valence; but they did not modify the Bayesian model in a similar manner. This lack of a valence or recency effect might also explain the failure of the Bayesian models in the preceding section where the contrast effect is discussed. It is not unreasonable to imagine that if humans do employ Bayesian reasoning that this reasoning system has had parameters tuned based on the real world, where recency of information does matter; affect has also been shown to be incorporable into Bayesian information processing (see the work by Hesp on affective charge and the large body of work by Ryan Smith). It may be that the Bayesian models chosen here require further complexity to capture the situation, just like some of the biases required updates to the RL models. This complexity, rather than being arbitrary, may be well justified by decision-making in the real world.

      The methods mention several symptom scales- it would be interesting to have the results of these and any interesting correlations noted. It is possible that some of individual variability here could be related to these symptoms, which could introduce precision parameter changes in a Bayesian context and things like reward sensitivity changes in an RL context.

      Discussion:

      (For discussion, not a specific comment on this paper): One wonders also about participant beliefs about the experiment or the intent of the experimenters. I have often had participants tell me they were trying to "figure out" a task or find patterns even when this was not part of the experiment. This is not specific to this paper, but it may be relevant in the future to try and model participant beliefs about the experiment especially in the context of disinformation, when they might be primed to try and "figure things out".

      As a general comment, in the active inference literature, there has been discussion of state-dependent actions, or "habits", which are learned in order to help agents more rapidly make decisions, based on previous learning. It is also possible that what is being observed is that these habits are at play, and that they represent the cognitive biases. This is likely especially true given, as the authors note, the high cognitive load of the task. It is true that this would mean that full-force Bayesian inference is not being used in each trial, or in each experience an agent might have in the world, but this is likely adaptive on the longer timescale of things, considering resource requirements. I think in this case you could argue that we have a departure from "normative" learning, but that is not necessarily a departure from any possible Bayesian framework, since these biases could potentially be modified by the agent or eschewed in favor of more expensive full-on Bayesian learning when warranted. Indeed in their discussion on the strategy of amplifying credible news sources to drown out low-credibility sources, the authors hint to the possibility of longer term strategies that may produce optimal outcomes in some contexts, but which were not necessarily appropriate to this task. As such, the performance on this task- and the consideration of true departure from Bayesian processing- should be considered in this wider context. Another thing to consider is that Bayesian inference is occurring, but that priors present going in produce the biases, or these biases arise from another source, for example factoring in epistemic value over rewards when the actual reward is not large. This again would be covered under an active inference approach, depending on how the priors are tuned. Indeed, given the benefit of social cohesion in an evolutionary perspective, some of these "biases" may be the result of adaptation. For example, it might be better to amplify people's good qualities and minimize their bad qualities in order to make it easier to interact with them; this entails a cost (in this case, not adequately learning from feedback and potentially losing out sometimes), but may fulfill a greater imperative (improved cooperation on things that matter). Given the right priors/desired states, this could still be a Bayes-optimal inference at a social level and as such may be ingrained as a habit which requires effort to break at the individual level during a task such as this.

      The authors note that this task does not relate to "emotional engagement" or "deep, identity-related, issues". While I agree that this is likely mostly true, it is also possible that just being told one is being lied to might elicit an emotional response that could bias responses, even if this is a weak response.

      Comments on first revisions:

      In their updated version the authors have made some edits to address my concerns regarding the framing of the 'normative' Bayesian model, clarifying that they utilized a simple Bayesian model which is intended to adhere in an idealized manner to the intended task structure, though further simulations would have been ideal.

      The authors, however, did not take my recommendation to explore the symptoms in the symptom scales they collected as being a potential source of variability. They note that these were for hypothesis generation and were exploratory, fair enough, but this study is not small and there should have been sufficient sample size for a very reasonable analysis looking at symptom scores.

      However, overall the toned-down claims and clarifications of intent are adequate responses to my previous review.

      Comments on second revisions:

      While I believe an exploration of symptom scores would have been a valuable addition, this is not required for the purpose of the paper, and as such, I have no further comments.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors provide a compelling case that the unique variance explained by LLMs is different (and later) than the unique variance explained by DNNs. This characterises when, and to some extent where, these differences occur, and for LLMs, why. The authors also probe what in the sentences is driving the brain alignment.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study is timely.

      (2) There is a robust dataset and results.

      (3) There is compelling separation between unique responses related to LLMs and DNNs.

      (4) The paper is well-written.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors could explore more of what the overlap between the LLM and DNN means, and in general, how this relates to untrained networks.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Rahmani et al. utilize the TurboID method to characterize global proteome changes in the worm's nervous system induced by a salt-based associative learning paradigm. Altogether, they uncover 706 proteins tagged by the TurboID method in worms that underwent the memory-inducing protocol. Next, the authors conduct a gene enrichment analysis that implicates specific molecular pathways in salt-associative learning, such as MAP kinase and cAMP-mediated pathways, as well as specific neuronal classes including pharyngeal neurons, and specific sensory neurons, interneurons, and motor neurons. The authors then screen a representative group of hits from the proteome analysis. They find that mutants of candidate genes from the MAP kinase pathway, namely dlk-1 and uev-3, do not affect performance in the learning paradigm. Instead, multiple acetylcholine signaling mutants, as well as a protein-kinase-A mutant, significantly affected performance in the associative memory assay (e.g., acc-1, acc-3, lgc-46, and kin-2). Finally, the authors demonstrate that protein-kinase-A mutants, as well as acetylcholine signaling mutants, do not exhibit a phenotype in a related but distinct conditioning paradigm-aversive salt conditioning-suggesting their effect is specific to appetitive salt conditioning.

      Overall, the authors addressed the concerns raised in the previous review round, including the statistics of the chemotaxis experiments and the systems-level analysis of the neuron class expression patterns of their hits. I also appreciate the further attempt to equalize the sample size of the chemotaxis experiments and the transparent reporting of the sample size and statistics in the figure captions and Table S9. The new results from the panneuronal overexpression of the kin-2 gain-of-function allele also contribute to the manuscript. Together, these make the paper more compelling. The additional tested hits provide a comprehensive analysis of the main molecular pathways that could have affected learning. However, the revised manuscript includes more information and analysis, raising additional concerns.

      Major comments:

      As reviewer 4 noted, and as also shown to be relevant for C30G12.6 presented in Figure 6, the backcrossing of the mutants is important, as background mutations may lead to the observed effects. Could the authors add to Table 1, sheet 1, the outcrossing status of the tested mutants? It is important to validate that the results of the positive hits (where learning was affected), such as acc-1, acc-3, and lgc-46, do not stem from background mutations.

      The fold change in the number of hits for different neurons in the CENGEN-based rank analysis requires a statistical test (discussed on pages 17-19 and summarized in Table S7). Similar to the other gene enrichment analyses presented in the manuscript, the new rank analysis also requires a statistical test. Since the authors extensively elaborate on the results from this analysis, I think a statistical analysis is especially important for its interpretation. For example, if considering the IL1 neurons, which ranked highest, and assuming random groups of genes-each having the same size as those of the ranked neurons (209 genes in total for IL1 in Table S7)-how common would it be to get the calculated fold change of 1.38 or higher? Such bootstrapping analysis is common for enrichment analysis. Perhaps the authors could consult with an institutional expert (Dr. Pawel Skuza, Flinders University) for the statistical aspects of this analysis.

      The learning phenotypes from Figure S8, concerning acc-1, acc-3, and lgc-46 mutants, are summarized in a scheme in Figure 4; however, the chemotaxis results are found in the supplemental Figure S8. Perhaps I missed the reasoning, but for transparency, I think the relevant Figure S8 results should be shown together with their summary scheme in Figure 4.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors show that corticotropin-releasing factor (CRF) neurons in the central amygdala (CeA) and bed nucleus of the stria terminalis (BNST) monosynaptically target cholinergic interneurons (CINs) in the dorsal striatum of rodents. Functionally, activation of CRFR1 receptors increases CIN firing rate, and this modulation was reduced by pre-exposure to ethanol. This is an interesting finding, with potential significance for alcohol use disorders, but some conclusions could use additional support.

      Strengths:

      Well-conceived circuit mapping experiments identify a novel pathway by which the CeA and BNST can modulate dorsal striatal function by controlling cholinergic tone. Important insight into how CRF, a neuropeptide that is important in mediating aspects of stress, affective/motivational processes, and drug-seeking, modulates dorsal striatal function.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Tracing and expression experiments were performed both in mice and rats (in a mostly non-overlapping way). While these species are similar in many ways, some conclusions are based on assumptions of similarities that the presented data do not directly show. In most cases, this should be addressed in the text (but see point number 2).

      (2) Experiments in rats show that CRFR1 expression is largely confined to a subpopulation of striatal CINs. Is this true in mice, too? Since most electrophysiological experiments are done in various synaptic antagonists and/or TTX, it does not affect the interpretation of those data, but non-CIN expression of CRFR1 could potentially have a large impact on bath CRF-induced acetylcholine release.

      (3) Experiments in rats show that about 30% of CINs express CRFR1 in rats. Did only a similar percentage of CINs in mice respond to bath application of CRF? The effect sizes and error bars in Figure 5 imply that the majority of recorded CINs likely responded. Were exclusion criteria used in these experiments?

      (4) The conclusion that prior acute alcohol exposure reduces the ability of subsequent alcohol exposure to suppress CIN activity in the presence of CRF may be a bit overstated. In Figure 6D (no ethanol pre-exposure), ethanol does not fully suppress CIN firing rate to baseline after CRF exposure. The attenuated effect of CRF on CIN firing rate after ethanol pre-treatment (6E) may just reduce the maximum potential effect that ethanol can have on firing rate after CRF, due to a lowered starting point. It is possible that the lack of significant effect of ethanol after CRF in pre-treated mice is an issue of experimental sensitivity. Related to this point, does pre-treatment with ethanol reduce the later CIN response to acute ethanol application (in the absence of CRF)?

      (5) More details about the area of the dorsal striatum being examined would be helpful (i.e., a-p axis).

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Fogel & Ujfalussy report an extension of a visualization tool that was originally designed to enable an understanding of detailed biophysical neuron models. Named "extended currentscape", this new iteration enables visual assessment of individual currents across a neuron's spatially extended dendritic arbor with simultaneous readout of somatic currents and voltage. The overall aim was to permit a visually intuitive understanding for how a model neuron's inputs determine its output. This goal was worthwhile and the authors achieved it. Their manuscript makes two additional contributions of note: (1) a clever algorithmic approach to model the axial propagation of ionic currents (recursively traversing acyclic graph subsections) and (2) interesting, albeit not easily testable, insights into important neurophysiological phenomena such as complex spike generation and place field dynamics. Overall, this study provides a valuable and well-characterized biophysical modeling resource to the neuroscience community.

      Strengths:

      The authors significantly extended a previously published open-source biophysical modeling tool. Beyond providing important new capabilities, the potential impact of "extended currentscape" is boosted by its integration with preexisting resources in the field.

      The code is well-documented and freely available via GitHub.

      The author's clever portioning algorithm to relate dendritic/synaptic currents to somatic yielded multiple intriguing observations regarding when and why CA1 pyramidal neurons fire complex spikes versus single action potentials. This topic carries major implications for how the hippocampus represents and stores information about an animal's environment.

      Weaknesses:

      While extended currentscape is clearly a valuable contribution to the neuroscience community, this reviewer would argue that it is framed in a way that oversells its capabilities. The Abstract, Introduction, Results, and Methods all contain phrases implying that extended currentscape infers dendritic/synaptic currents contributing to somatic output., i.e. backwards inference of unknown inputs from a known output. This is not the case; inputs are simulated and then propagated through the model neuron using a clever partitioning algorithm that essentially traverses a biologically undirected graph structure by treating it like a time series of tiny directed graphs. This is an impressive solution, but it does not infer a neuron's input structure.

      Because a directed acyclic graph architecture is shown in Figure 2, it is unintuitive that the authors can infer bidirectional current flow, e.g. Figure 3 showing current flowing from basal dendrites and axon to soma, and further towards the apical dendrites. This is explained in Methods, but difficult to parse from Results amidst lots of rather abstract jargon (target, reference, collision, compartment). Figure 2 would have presented an opportunity to clearly illustrate the author's portioning algorithm by (1) rooting it in the exact morphology of one of their multicompartmental model neurons and (2) illustrating that "target" and "reference" have arbitrary morphological meanings; they describe the direction of current flow which is reevaluated at each time step.

      Analyses in Figure 7, C and D, are insightfully devised and illuminating. However, they could use some reconciliation with Figure 5 regarding initiation of individual APs versus CSBs within place fields.

      The intriguing observations generated by extended currentscape also point to its main weakness, which the authors openly acknowledge: as of now, no experimental methods exist to conclusively tests its predictions.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors used fine-level resolution epidemiological data to describe the spatiotemporal patterns of dengue, chikungunya and Zika. They assessed which factors best captured the historic transmission dynamics in Brazil. It was used epidemiological data from 2013 to 2020. They tested the association between arbovirus incidence and environment, human connectivity and socioeconomic, and climate variables, including extreme weather conditions.

      Strengths:

      The authors used granular epidemiological data at the subnational level and weekly case notification time series. Furthermore, they considered more than one hundred variables. Among the variables, it is highlighted that they also considered human connectivity and extreme weather events.

      The authors used appropriate statistical methods accounting for the spatiotemporal structure and used the negative binomial to handle overdispersion; They applied a systematic covariate screening, using WAIC and performed sensitivity analysis. Their results suggest an important role of climate variables such as El Niño South Oscillation Anomalies, and that extremes in wetness and drought may drive infections outside regular patterns; it also suggests that temperature variations and extremes may be more associated with the incidence than the mean temperature; in addition, human connectivity networks are also pointed out as a key driver factor at fine level scale.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors have not accounted for the correlation between diseases. They have not considered the co-occurrence of diseases by applying a joint modelling approach, nor have they discussed this as a possibility for future work. Still, regarding the methods, they used a simplified lag treatment. They could have included into the discussion, examples of methods like Distributed Lag Models. This can be used in contexts when analysing meteorological covariates and extreme weather events.

      They also have not considered the population's immunity to the different serotypes of dengue, which can reflect in peaks of incidence when a new serotype starts to circulate in a certain region. It is important to bring this into the discussion section.

      Whether the authors achieved their aims, and whether the results support their conclusions:

      The authors assess variables which may be associated with different vector-borne disease incidence and the magnitude of these associations. Conducting a fine-scale resolution analysis (spatial and temporal), they emphasised the role of environmental and extreme weather conditions. Their findings are coherent with their analysis and corroborate some of the existing literature.

      Discussion of the likely impact of the work on the field, and the utility of the methods and data to the community:

      Their work shows how the different vector-borne diseases are influenced by environmental and climatic factors and that human connectivity may play an important role at the fine level spatial and temporal scale. This work brings a picture of the spatial and temporal distributions of dengue, chikungunya and Zika, at the municipal level in Brazil (2013-2020). The material and methods are well described, and the source is made available, allowing reproducibility by other researchers and academics.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Many studies have investigated adaptation to altered sensorimotor mappings or to an altered mechanical environment. This paper asks a different but also important question in motor control and neurorehabilitation: how does the brain adapt to changes in the controlled plant? The authors addressed this question by performing a tendon transfer surgery in two monkeys during which the swapped tendons flexing and extending the digits. They then monitored changes in task performance, muscle activation and kinematics post-recovery over several months, to assess changes in putative neural strategies.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors performed complicated tendon transfer experiments to address their question of how the nervous system adapts to changes in the organisation of the neuromusculoskeletal system, and present very interesting data characterising neural (and in one monkey, also behavioural) changes post tendon transfer over several months.

      (2) The fact that the authors had to employ to two slightly different tasks -one more artificial, the other more naturalistic- in the two monkeys and yet found qualitatively similar changes across them makes the findings more compelling.

      (3) The paper is quite well written, and the analyses are sound, although some analyses could be improved (suggestions below).

      Weaknesses:

      (1) I think this is an important paper, paper but I'm puzzled about a tension in the results. On the one hand, it looks like the behavioural gains post-TT happen rather smoothly over time (Figure 5). On the other, muscle synergy activations changes abruptly at specific days (around day ~65 for Monkey A and around day ~45 for monkey B; e.g., Figure 6). How do the authors reconcile this tension? In other words, how do they think that this drastic behavioural transition can arise from what appears to be step-by-step, continuous changes in muscle coordination? Is it "just" subtle changes in movements/posture exploiting the mechanical coupling between wrist and finger movements combined with subtle changes in synergies and they just happen to all kick in at the same time? This feels to me the core of the paper and should be addressed more directly.

      (2) The muscles synergy analyses, which are an important part of the paper, could be improved. In particular:

      (2a) When measuring the cross-correlation between the activation of synergies, the authors should include error bars, and should also look at the lag between the signals.

      (2b) Figure 7C and related figures, the authors state that the activation of muscle synergies revert to pre-TT patterns toward the end of the experiments. However, there are noticeable differences for both monkeys (at the end of the "task range" for synergy B for monkey A, and around 50 % task range for synergy B for monkey B). The authors should measure this, e.g., by quantifying the per-sample correlation between pre-TT and post-TT activation amplitudes. Same for Figures 8I,J, etc.

      (2c) In Figures 9 and 10, the authors show the cross-correlation of the activation coefficients of different synergies; the authors should also look at the correlation between activation profiles because it provides additional information.

      (2d) Figure 11: the authors talk about a key difference in how Synergy B (the extensor finger) evolved between monkeys post-TT. However, to me this figure feels more like a difference in quantity -the time course- than quality, since for both monkeys the aaEMG levels pretty much go back to close to baseline levels -even if there's a statistically significant difference only for Monkey B. What am I missing?

      (2e) Lines 408-09 and above: The authors claim that "The development of a compensatory strategy, primarily involving the wrist flexor synergy (Synergy C), appears crucial for enabling the final phase of adaptation", which feels true intuitively and also based on the analysis in Figure 8, but Figure 11 suggests this is only true for Monkey A . How can these statements be reconciled?

      (3) Experimental design: at least for the monkey who was trained on the "artificial task" (Monkey A), it would have been good if the authors had also tested him on naturalistic grasping, like the second monkey, to see to what extent the neural changes generalise across behaviours or are task-specific. Do the authors have some data that could be used to assessed this even if less systematically?

      (4) Monkey's B behaviour pre-tendon transfer seems more variable than that of Monkey A (e.g., the larger error bars in Figure 5 compared to monkey A, the fluctuating cross-correlation between FDS pre and EDC post in Figure 6Q), this should be quantified to better ground the results since it also shows more variability post-TT.

      (5) Minor: Figure 12 is interesting and supports the idea that monkeys may exploit the biomechanical coupling between wrist and fingers as part of their function recovery. It would be interesting to measure whether there is a change in such coupling (tenodesis) over time, e.g., by plotting change in wrist angle vs change in MCP angle as a scatter plot (one dot per trial), and in the same plot show all the days, colour coded by day. Would the relationship remain largely constant or fluctuate slightly early on? I feel this analysis could also help address my point (1) above.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors propose a new technique which they name "Multi-gradient Permutation Survival Analysis (MEMORY)" that they use to identify "Genes Steadily Associated with Prognosis (GEARs)" using RNA-seq data from the TCGA database. The contribution of this method is one of the key stated aims of the paper. The majority of the paper focuses on various downstream analyses that make use of the specific GEARs identified by MEMORY to derive biological insights, with a particular focus on lung adenocarcinoma (LUAD) and breast invasive carcinoma (BRCA) which are stated to be representative of other cancers and are observed to have enriched mitosis and immune signatures, respectively. Through the lens of these cancers, these signatures are the focus of significant investigation in the paper.

      Strengths:

      The approach for MEMORY is well-defined and clearly presented, albeit briefly. This affords statisticians and bioinformaticians the ability to effectively scrutinize the proposed methodology and may lead to further advancements in this field. The scientific aspects of the paper (e.g., the results based on the use of MEMORY and the downstream bioinformatics workflows) are conveyed effectively and in a way that is digestible to an individual that is not deeply steeped in the cancer biology field.

      Weaknesses:

      Comparatively little of the paper is devoted to the justification of MEMORY (i.e., the authors' method) for identification of genes that are important broadly for the understanding of cancer. The authors' approach is explained in the methods section of the paper, but no comparison or reference is made to any other methods that have been developed for similar purposes, and no results are shown to illustrate the robustness of the proposed method (e.g., is it sensitive to subtle changes in how it is implemented).

      For example, in the first part of the MEMORY algorithm, gene expression values are dichotomized at the sample median, and a log-rank test is performed. This would seemingly result in an unnecessary loss of information for detecting an association between gene expression and survival. Moreover, while dichotomizing gene expressions at the median is optimal from an information theory perspective (i.e., it creates equally sized groups), there is no reason to believe that median-dichotomization is correct vis-à-vis the relationship between gene expression and survival. If a gene really matters and expression only differentiates survival more towards the tail of the empirical gene expression distribution, median-dichotomization could dramatically lower power to detect group-wise differences. Notwithstanding this point, the reviewer acknowledges that dichotomization offers a straightforward approach to model gene expression and is widely used. This approach is nonetheless an example of a limitation of the current version of MEMORY that could be addressed to improve the methodology.

      If I understand correctly, for each cancer the authors propose to search for the smallest subsample size (i.e., the smallest value of k_{j}) were there is at least one gene with a survival analysis p-value <0.05 for each of the 1000 sampled datasets. Then, any gene with a p-value <0.05 in 80% of the 1000 sampled datasets would be called a GEAR for that cancer. The 80% value here is arbitrary but that is a minor point. I acknowledge that something must be chosen.

      Presumably the gene with the largest effect for the cancer will define the value of K_{j} and, if the effect is large, this may result in other genes with smaller effects not being defined as a GEAR for that cancer by virtue of the 80% threshold. Thus, a gene being a GEAR is related to the strength of association for other genes in addition to its own strength of association. One could imagine that a gene that has a small-to-moderate effect consistently across many cancers may not show up as GEAR in any of them (if there are [potentially different] genes with more substantive effects for those cancers). Is this desirable?

      The term "steadily associated" implies that a signal holds up across subsample gradients. Effectively this makes the subsampling a type of indirect adjustment to ensure the evidence of association is strong enough. How well this procedure performs in repeated use (i.e., as a statistical procedure) is not clear.

      Assuredly subsampling sets the bar higher than requiring a nominal p-value to be beneath the 0.05 threshold based on analysis of the full data set. The author's note that the MEMORY has several methodological limitations, "chief among them is the need for rigorous, large-scale multiple-testing adjustment before any GEAR list can be considered clinically actionable." The reviewer agrees and would add that it may be difficult to address this limitation within the author's current framework. Moreover, should the author's method be used before such corrections are available given their statement? Perhaps clarification of what it means to be clinically actionable could help here. If a researcher uses MEMORY to screen for GEARs based on the current methodology, what do the authors recommend be done to select a subset of GEARs worthy of additional research/investment?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The Neuronal microtubule cytoskeleton is essential long long-range transport in axons and dendrites. The axon-specific plus-end out microtubule organization vs the dendritic-specific plus-end in organization allows for selective transport into each neurite, setting up neuronal polarity. In addition, the dendritic microtubule organization is thought to be important for dendritic pruning in Drosophila during metamorphosis. However, the precise mechanisms that organize microtubules in neurons are still incompletely understood.

      In the current manuscript, the authors describe the spectraplakin protein Shot as important in developmental dendritic pruning. They find that Shot has dendritic microtubule polarity defects, which, based on their rescues and previous work, is likely the reason for the pruning defect.

      Since Shot is a known actin-microtubule crosslinker, they also investigate the putative role of actin and find that actin is also important for dendritic pruning. Finally, they find that several factors that have been shown to function as a dendritic MTOC in C. elegans also show a defect in Drosophila upon depletion.

      Strengths:

      Overall, this work was technically well-performed, using advanced genetics and imaging. The author reports some interesting findings identifying new players for dendritic microtubule organization and pruning.

      Weaknesses:

      The evidence for Shot interacting with actin for its functioning is contradictory. The Shot lacking the actin interaction domain did not rescue the mutant; however, it also has a strong toxic effect upon overexpression in wildtype (Figure S3), so a potential rescue may be masked. Moreover, the C-terminus-only construct, which carries the GAS2-like domain, was sufficient to rescue the pruning. This actually suggests that MT bundling/stabilization is the main function of Shot (and no actin binding is needed). On the other hand, actin depolymerization leads to some microtubule defects and subtle changes in shot localization in young neurons (not old ones). More importantly, it did not enhance the microtubule or pruning defects of the Shot domain, suggesting these act in the same pathway. Interesting to note is that Mical expression led to microtubule defects but not to pruning defects. This argues that MT organization effects alone are not enough to cause pruning defects. This may be be good to discuss. For the actin depolymerization, the authors used overexpression of the actin-oxidizing Mical protein. However, Mical may have another target. It would be good to validate key findings with better characterized actin targeting tools.

      In analogy to C. elegans, where RAB-11 functions as a ncMTOC to set up microtubules in dendrites, the authors investigated the role of these in Drosophila. Interestingly, they find that rab-11 also colocalizes to gamma tubulin and its depletion leads to some microtubule defects. Furthermore, they find a genetic interaction between these components and Shot; however, this does not prove that these components act together (if at all, it would be the opposite). This should be made more clear. What would be needed to connect these is to address RAB-11 localization + gamma-tubulin upon shot depletion.

      All components studied in this manuscript lead to a partial reversal of microtubules in the dendrite. However, it is not clear from how the data is represented if the microtubule defect is subtle in all animals or whether it is partially penetrant stronger effect (a few animals/neurons have a strong phenotype). This is relevant as this may suggest that other mechanisms are also required for this organization, and it would make it markedly different from C. elegans. This should be discussed and potentially represented differently.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study aims to address an important and timely question: how does the mesoscale architecture of cortical and subcortical circuits reorganize during sensorimotor learning? By using high-density, chronically implanted ultra-flexible electrode arrays, the authors track spiking activity across ten brain regions as mice learn a visual Go/No-Go task. The results indicate that learning leads to more sequential and temporally compressed patterns of activity during correct rejection trials, alongside changes in functional connectivity ranks that reflect shifts in the relative influence of visual, frontal, and motor areas throughout learning. The emergence of a more task-focused subnetwork is accompanied by broader and faster propagation of stimulus information across recorded regions.

      Strengths:

      A clear strength of this work is its recording approach. The combination of stable, high-throughput multi-region recordings over extended periods represents a significant advance for capturing learning-related network dynamics at the mesoscale. The conceptual framework is well motivated, building on prior evidence that decision-relevant signals are widely distributed across the brain. The analysis approach, combining functional connectivity rankings with information encoding metrics is well motivated but needs refinement. These results provide some valuable evidence of how learning can refine both the temporal precision and the structure of interregional communication, offering new insights into circuit reconfiguration during learning.

      Weaknesses:

      The technical approach is strong and the conceptual framing is compelling, but several aspects of the evidence remain incomplete. In particular, it is unclear whether the reported changes in connectivity truly capture causal influences, as the rank metrics remain correlational and show discrepancies with the manipulation results. The absolute response onset latencies also appear slow for sensory-guided behavior in mice, and it is not clear whether this reflects the method used to define onset timing or factors such as task structure or internal state. Furthermore, the small number of animals, combined with extensive repeated measures, raises questions about statistical independence and how multiple comparisons were controlled. The optogenetic experiments, while intended to test the functional relevance of rank-increasing regions, leave it unclear how effectively the targeted circuits were silenced. Without direct evidence of reliable local inhibition, the behavioral effects or lack thereof are difficult to interpret. Details on spike sorting are limited.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study by Akhtar et al. aims to investigate the link between systemic metabolism and respiratory demands, and how sleep and the circadian clock regulate metabolic states and respiratory dynamics. The authors leverage genetic mutants that are defective in sleep and circadian behavior in combination with indirect respirometry and steady-state LC-MS-based metabolomics to address this question in the Drosophila model.

      First, the authors performed respirometry (on groups of 25 flies) to measure oxygen consumption (VO2) and carbon dioxide production (VCO2) to calculate the respiratory quotient (RQ) across the 24-hour day (12h:12h light-dark cycle) and assess metabolic fuel utilization. They observed that among all the genotypes tested, wild type (WT) flies and per0 flies in LD and WT flies in DD exhibit RQ >1. They concluded the >1 RQ is consistent with active lipogenesis. In contrast, the short-sleep mutants fumin (fmn) and sleepless (sss) showed significantly different RQ; the fmn exhibits a slight reduction in RQ values, suggesting increased reliance on carbohydrate metabolism, while sss exhibits even lower RQ (0.94), consistent with a shift toward lipid and protein catabolism.

      The authors then proceeded to bin these measurements in 12-hour partitions, ZT0-12 and ZT12-24, to assess diurnal differences in average values of VO2, VCO2, and RQ. They observed significant day-night differences in metabolic rates in WT-LD flies, with higher rates during the day. The diurnal differences remain in the short-sleep mutants, but the overall metabolic rates are higher. WT-DD flies exhibit the lowest respiratory activity, although the day-night differences remain in free-running conditions. Finally, per01 mutants exhibit no significant change in day-night respiratory rates, suggesting that a functional circadian clock is necessary for diurnal differences in metabolic rates.

      They then performed finer-resolution 24-hour rhythmic analysis (RAIN and JTK) to determine if VO2, VCO2, and RQ exhibit 24-hour rhythmic and if there are genotype-specific differences. Based on their criteria, VCO2 is rhythmic in all conditions tested, while VO2 is rhythmic in all conditions except in fmn-LD. Finally, RQ is rhythmic in all 3 mutants but not in WT-LD and WT-DD. Peak phases for the rhythms were deduced using JTK lag values.

      The authors proceeded to leverage a previously published steady-state metabolite dataset to investigate the potential association of RQ with metabolite profiles. Spearman correlation was performed to identify metabolites that exhibit coupling to respiratory output. Positive and negative lag analysis were subsequently performed to further characterize these associations based on the timing of the metabolite peak changes relative to RQ fluctuations. The authors suggest that a positive lag indicates that metabolite changes occur after shifts in RQ, and a negative lag signifies that metabolite changes precede RQ changes. To visualize metabolic pathways that exhibit these temporal relationships, a clustered heatmap and enrichment analysis were performed. Through these analyses, they concluded that both sleep and circadian systems are essential for aligning metabolic substrate selection with energy demands, and different metabolic pathways are misregulated in the different mutants with sleep and circadian defects.

      Strength:

      The research questions this study explores are significant, given that metabolism and respiratory demand are central to animal biology. The experimental methods used, including the well-characterized fly genetic mutants, the newly developed method for indirect calorimetry measurements, and LC-MS-based metabolomics, are all appropriate. This study provides insights into the impact of sleep and circadian rhythm disruption on metabolism and respiratory demand and serves as a foundation for future mechanistic investigations.

      Weaknesses:

      There are some conceptual flaws that the authors need to address regarding circadian biology, and some of the conclusions can be better supported by additional analysis to provide a stronger foundation for future functional investigation. At times, the methods, especially the statistical analysis, are not well articulated; they need to be better explained.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This article presents Morphonet 2.0, a software designed to visualise and curate segmentations of 3D and 3D+t data. The authors demonstrate its capabilities on five published datasets, showcasing how even small segmentation errors can be automatically detected, easily assessed and corrected by the user. This allows for more reliable ground truths which will in turn be very much valuable for analysis and training deep learning models. Morphonet 2.0 offers intuitive 3D inspection and functionalities accessible to a non-coding audience, thereby broadening its impact.

      Strengths:

      The work proposed in this article is expected to be of great interest for the community, by enabling easy visualisation and correction of complex 3D(+t) datasets. Moreover, the article is clear and well written making MorphoNet more likely to be used. The goals are clearly defined, addressing an undeniable need in the bioimage analysis community. The authors use a diverse range of datasets, successfully demonstrating the versatility of the software.

      We would also like to highlight the great effort that was made to clearly explain which type of computer configurations are necessary to run the different dataset and how to find the appropriate documentation according to your needs. The authors clearly carefully thought about these two important problems and came up with very satisfactory solutions.

      Weaknesses:

      Sometimes, it can be a bit difficult to assess the strength of the improvements made by the proposed methods, but this is not something the authors could easily address, given the great complexity of the samples

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors employ diaphragm denervation in rats and mice to study titin‑based mechanosensing and longitudinal muscle hypertrophy. By integrating bulk RNA‑seq, proteomics, and phosphoproteomics, they map the stretch‑responsive signalling landscape, uncovering robust induction of the muscle‑ankyrin‑repeat proteins (MARP1‑3) together with enhanced phosphorylation of titin's N2A element. Genetic ablation of MARPs in mice amplifies longitudinal fibre growth and is accompanied by activation of the mTOR pathway, whereas systemic rapamycin treatment suppresses the hypertrophic response, highlighting mTORC1 as a key downstream effector of titin/MARP signalling.

      Strengths:

      The authors address a clear biological question: "how titin‑associated factors translate mechanical stretch into longitudinal fibre growth" using a unique and clinically relevant animal model of diaphragm denervation. Using a comprehensive multiomics approach, the authors identify MARPs as potential mediators of these effects and use a genetic mouse model to provide compelling evidence supporting causality. Additionally, connecting these findings to rapamycin, a drug widely used clinically, further increases the relevance and potential impact of the study.

      Weaknesses:

      There are several areas where the manuscript could be substantially improved.

      (1) The statistical analysis of multi-omics data needs clarification. Typically, analyses across multiple experimental groups require controlling the false discovery rate (FDR) simultaneously to avoid reporting false-positive findings. It would be very helpful if the authors could specify whether adjusted p-values were calculated using a multi-factorial statistical model (e.g., ~group) or through separate pairwise contrasts.

      (2) There are three separate points regarding MARP3 that could be improved. First, the authors report that MARP3-KO mice exhibit smaller increases in muscle mass after diaphragm denervation compared to wild-type mice (a -13% difference), indicating MARP3 likely promotes rather than attenuates hypertrophy. However, the manuscript currently states the opposite (lines 215-216); this interpretation should be revisited. Second, it would be valuable if the authors could provide data showing whether MARP3 transcript or protein levels change response to denervation - if they do not, discussing mechanisms behind the observed phenotype would help clarify the findings. Finally, given that some MARP-KO mice already exhibit baseline differences, employing and reporting the full two-way ANOVA ( including genotype × treatment interaction) would allow a direct statistical assessment of whether MARP deficiency modifies the muscle's response to stretch. This analysis would help clearly resolve any existing ambiguity.

      (3) The current presentation of multi-omics data is somewhat difficult to follow, making it challenging to determine whether observed changes occur at the transcript or protein level due to inconsistent gene/protein naming and capitalization (e.g., proper forms are mTOR, p70 S6K, 4E-BP1). Clearly organizing and presenting transcript and protein-level changes side-by-side, especially for key molecules discussed in later experiments, would make the data more accessible and provide clearer insights into the biology of titin-mediated mechanosensing.

      (4) The current analysis relies on total protein measurements downstream of mTOR, yet mTOR's primary mode of action is to change phosphorylation status. Because the authors have already generated a phosphoproteomic dataset, it would be very helpful to report - or at least comment on - whether known mTOR target phosphosites were detected and how they respond to denervation and rapamycin. Including even a brief summary of canonical sites such as S6K1 Thr389 or 4E‑BP1 Thr37/46 would make the link between mTOR activity and hypertrophy much clearer.

      (5) Finally, since rapamycin blocks only a subset of mTOR signalling, a brief discussion that distinguishes rapamycin‑sensitive from rapamycin‑insensitive pathways would be valuable. Clarifying whether diaphragm stretch relies exclusively on the sensitive branch or also engages the resistant branch would place the results in a broader mTOR context and deepen the mechanistic narrative.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This thoughtful and thorough mechanistic and functional study reports ARHGAP36 as a direct transcriptional target of FOXC1, which regulates Hedgehog signaling (SUFU, SMO, and GLI family transcription factors) through modulation of PKAC. Clinical outcome data from patients with neuroblastoma, one of the most common extracranial solid malignancies in children, demonstrate that ARHGAP36 expression is associated with improved survival. Although this study largely represents a robust and near-comprehensive set of focused investigations on a novel target of FOXC1 activity, several significant omissions undercut the generalizability of the findings reported.

      (1) It is notable that the volcano plot in Figure 1a does now show evidence of canonical Hedgehog gene regulation, even though the subsequent studies in this paper clearly demonstrate that ARHGAP36 regulates Hedgehog signal transduction. Is this because canonical Hedgehog target genes (GLI1, PTCH1, SUFU) simply weren't labeled? Or is there a technical limitation that needs to be clarified? A note about Hedgehog target genes is made in conjunction with Table S1, but the justification or basis of defining these genes as Hedgehog targets is unclear. More broadly, it would be useful to see ontology analyses from these gene expression data to understand FOXC1 target genes more broadly. Ontology analyses are included in a supplementary table, but network visualizations would be much preferred.

      (2) Likewise, the ChIP-seq data in Figure 2 are under-analyzed, focusing only on the ARHGAP36 locus and not more broadly on the FOXC1 gene expression program. This is a missed opportunity that should be remedied with unbiased analyses intersecting differentially expressed FOXC1 peaks with differentially expressed genes from RNA-sequencing data displayed in Figure 1.

      (3) RNA-seq and ChIP-seq data strongly suggest that FOXC1 regulates ARHGAP36 expression, and the authors convincingly identify genomic segments at the ARHGAP36 locus where FOXC1 binds, but they do not test if FOXC1 specifically activates this locus through the creation of a luciferase or similar promoter reporter. Such a reagent and associated experiments would not only strengthen the primary argument of this investigation but could serve as a valuable resource for the community of scientists investigating FOXC1, ARHGAP36, the Hedgehog pathway, and related biological processes. CRISPRi targeting of the identified regions of the ARHGAP locus is a useful step in the right direction, but these experiments are not done in a way to demonstrate FOXC1 dependency.

      (4) It would be useful to see individual fluorescence channels in association with images in Figure 3b.

      (5) Perhaps the most significant limitation of this study is the omission of in vivo data, a shortcoming the authors partly mitigate through the incorporation of clinical outcome data from pediatric neuroblastoma patients in the context of ARHGAP36 expression. The authors also mention that high levels of ARHGAP36 expression were also detected in "specific CNS, breast, lung, and neuroendocrine tumors," but do not provide clinical outcome data for these cohorts. Such analyses would be useful to understand the generalizability of their findings across different cancer types. More broadly, how were high, medium, and low levels of ARHGAP36 expression identified? "Terciles" are mentioned, but such an approach is not experimentally rigorous, and RPA or related approaches (nested rank statistics, etc) are recommended to find optimal cutpoints for ARHGAP36 expression in the context of neuroblastoma, "specific CNS, breast, lung, and neuroendocrine" tumor outcomes.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study set out to investigate potential pharmacological drug-drug interactions between the two most common antimalarial classes, the artemisinins and quinolines. There is a strong rationale for this aim, because drugs from these classes are already widely used in Artemisinin Combination Therapies (ACTs) in the clinic, and drug combinations are an important consideration in the development of new medicines. Furthermore, whilst there is ample literature proposing many diverse mechanisms of action and resistance for the artemisinins and quinolines, it is generally accepted that the mechanisms for both classes involve heme metabolism in the parasite, and that artemisinin activity is dependent on activation by reduced heme. The study was designed to measure drug-drug interactions associated with a short pulse exposure (4 h) that is reminiscent of the short duration of artemisinin exposure obtained after in vivo dosing. Clear antagonism was observed between dihydroartemisinin (DHA) and chloroquine, which became even more extensive in chloroquine-resistant parasites. Antagonism was also observed in this assay for the more clinically-relevant ACT partner drugs piperaquine and amodiaquine, but not for other ACT partners mefloquine and lumefantrine, which don't share the 4-aminoquinoline structure or mode of action. Interestingly, chloroquine induced an artemisinin resistance phenotype in the standard in vitro Ring-stage Survival Assay, whereas this effect was not apparent for piperaquine.

      The authors also utilised a heme-reactive probe to demonstrate that the 4-aminoquinolines can inhibit heme-mediated activation of the probe within parasites, which suggests that the mechanism of antagonism involves the inactivation of heme, rendering it unable to activate the artemisinins. Measurement of protein ubiquitination showed reduced DHA-induced protein damage in the presence of chloroquine, which is also consistent with decreased heme-mediated activation, and/or with decreased DHA activity more generally.

      Overall, the study clearly demonstrates a mechanistic antagonism between DHA and 4-aminoquinoline antimalarials in vitro. It is interesting that this combination is successfully used to treat millions of malaria cases every year, which may raise questions about the clinical relevance of this finding. However, the conclusions in this paper are supported by multiple lines of evidence, and the data are clearly and transparently presented, leaving no doubt that DHA activity is compromised by the presence of chloroquine in vitro. It is perhaps fortunate that the clinical dosing regimens of 4-aminoquinoline-based ACTs have been sufficient to maintain clinical efficacy despite the non-optimal combination. Nevertheless, optimisation of antimalarial combinations and dosing regimens is becoming more important in the current era of increasing resistance to artemisinins and 4-aminoquinolines. Therefore, these findings should be considered when proposing new treatment regimens (including Tripe-ACTs) and the assays described in this study should be performed on new drug combinations that are proposed for new or existing antimalarial medicines.

      Strengths:

      This manuscript is clearly written, and the data presented are clear and complete. The key conclusions are supported by multiple lines of evidence, and most findings are replicated with multiple drugs within a class, and across multiple parasite strains, thus providing more confidence in the generalisability of these findings across the 4-aminoquinoline and peroxide drug classes.

      A key strength of this study was the focus on short pulse exposures to DHA (4 h in trophs and 3 h in rings), which is relevant to the in vivo exposure of artemisinins. Artemisinin resistance has had a significant impact on treatment outcomes in South-East Asia, and is now emerging in Africa, but is not detected using a 'standard' 48 or 72 h in vitro growth inhibition assay. It is only in the RSA (a short pulse of 3-6 h treatment of early ring stage parasites) that the resistance phenotype can be detected in vitro. Therefore, assays based on this short pulse exposure provide the most relevant approach to determine whether drug-drug interactions are likely to have a clinically relevant impact on DHA activity. These assays clearly showed antagonism between DHA and 4-aminoquinolines (chloroquine, piperaquine, amodiaquine, and ferroquine) in trophozoite stages. Interestingly, whilst chloroquine clearly induced an artemisinin-resistant phenotype in the RSA, piperaquine did not appear to impact the early ring stage activity of DHA, which may be fortunate considering that piperaquine is a currently recommended DHA partner drug in ACTs, whereas chloroquine is not!

      The evaluation of additional drug combinations at the end of this paper is a valuable addition, which increases the potential impact of this work. The finding of antagonism between piperaquine and OZ439 in trophozoites is consistent with the general interactions observed between peroxides and 4-aminoquinolines, and it would be interesting to see whether piperaquine impacts the ring-stage activity of OZ439.

      The evaluation of reactive heme in parasites using a fluorescent sensor, combined with the measurement of K48-linked ubiquitin, further supports the findings of this study, providing independent read-outs for the chloroquine-induced antagonism.

      The in-depth discussion of the interpretation and implications of the results is an additional strength of this manuscript. Whilst the discussion section is rather lengthy, there are important caveats to the interpretation of some of these results, and clear relevance to the future management of malaria that require these detailed explanations.

      Overall, this is a high-quality manuscript describing an important study that has implications for the selection of antimalarial combinations for new and existing malaria medicines.

      Weaknesses:

      This study is an in vitro study of parasite cultures, and therefore, caution should be taken when applying these findings to decisions about clinical combinations. The drug concentrations and exposure durations in these assays are intended to represent clinically relevant exposures, although it is recognised that the in vitro system is somewhat simplified and there may be additional factors that influence in vivo activity. I think this is reasonably well acknowledged in the manuscript.

      It is also important to recognise that the majority of the key findings regarding antagonism are based on trophozoite-stage parasites, and one must show caution when generalising these findings to other stages or scenarios. For example, piperaquine showed clear antagonism in trophozoite stages, but not in ring stages under these assay conditions.

      The key weakness in this manuscript is the over-interpretation of the mechanistic studies that implicate heme-mediated artemisinin activation as the mechanism underpinning antagonism by chloroquine. In particular, the manuscript title focuses on heme-mediated activation of artemisinins, but this study did not directly measure the activation of artemisinins. The data obtained from the activation of the fluorescent probe are generally supportive of chloroquine suppressing the heme-mediated activation of artemisinins, and I think this is the most likely explanation, but there are significant caveats that undermine this conclusion. Primarily, the inconsistency between the fluorescence profile in the chemical reactions and the cell-based assay raises questions about the accuracy of this readout. In the chemical reaction, mefloquine and chloroquine showed identical inhibition of fluorescence, whereas piperaquine had minimal impact. On the contrary, in the cell, chloroquine and piperaquine had similar impacts on fluorescence, but mefloquine had minimal impact. This inconsistency indicates that the cellular fluorescence based on this sensor does not give a simple direct readout of the reactivity of ferrous heme, and therefore, these results should be interpreted with caution. Indeed, the correlation between fluorescence and antagonism for the tested drugs is a correlation, not causation. There could be several reasons for the disconnect between the chemical and biological results, either via additional mechanisms that quench fluorescence, or the presence of biomolecules that alter the oxidation state or coordination chemistry of heme or other potential catalysts of this sensor. It is possible that another factor that influences the H-FluNox fluorescence in cells also influences the DHA activity in cells, leading to the correlation with activity. It should be noted that H-FluNox is not a chemical analogue of artemisinins. Its activation relies on Fenton-like chemistry, but with an N-O rather than O-O bond, and it possesses very different steric and electronic substituents around the reactive centre, which are known to alter reactivity to different iron sources. Despite these limitations, the authors have provided reasonable justification for the use of this probe to directly visualise heme reactivity in cells, and the results are still informative, but additional caution should be provided in the interpretation, and the results are not conclusive enough to justify the current title of the paper.

      Another interesting finding that was not elaborated by the authors is the impact of chloroquine on the DHA dose-response curves from the ring stage assays. Detection of artemisinin resistance in the RSA generally focuses on the % survival at high DHA concentrations (700 nM) as there is minimal shift in the IC50 (see Figure 2), however, chloroquine clearly induces a shift in the IC50 (~5-fold), where the whole curve is shifted to the right, whereas the increase in % survival is relatively small. This different profile suggests that the mechanism of chloroquine-induced antagonism is different from the mechanism of artemisinin resistance. Current evidence regarding the mechanism of artemisinin resistance generally points towards decreased heme-mediated drug activation due to a decrease in hemoglobin uptake, which should be analogous to the decrease in heme-mediated drug activation caused by chloroquine. However, these different dose-response curves suggest different mechanisms are primarily responsible. Additional mechanisms have been proposed for artemisinin resistance, involving redox or heat stress responses, proteostatic responses, mitochondrial function, dormancy, and PI3K signaling, among others. Whilst the H-FluNox probe generally supports the idea that chloroquine suppresses heme-mediated DHA activation, it remains plausible that chloroquine could induce these, or other, cellular responses that suppress DHA activity.

      The other potential weakness in the current manuscript is the interpretation of the OZ439 clinical data. Whilst the observed interaction with piperaquine and ferroquine may have been a contributing factor, it should also be recognised that the low pharmacokinetic exposure in these studies was the primary reason for treatment failure (Macintyre 2017).

      Impact:

      This study has important implications for the selection of drugs to form combinations for the treatment of malaria. The overall findings of antagonism between peroxide antimalarials and 4-aminoquinolines in the trophozoite stage are robust, and this carries across to the ring stage for chloroquine (but not piperaquine).

      The manuscript also provides a plausible mechanism to explain the antagonism, although future work will be required to further explore the details of this mechanism and to rule out alternative factors that may contribute.

      Overall, this is an important contribution to the field and provides a clear justification for the evaluation of potential drug combinations in relevant in vitro assays before clinical testing.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Nührenberg et al., describe vassi, a Python package for mutually exclusive behavioral classification of social behaviors. This package imports and organizes trajectory data and manual behavior labels, and then computes feature representations for use with available Python machine learning-based classification tools. These representations include all possible dyadic interactions within an animal group, enabling classification of social behaviors between pairs of animals at a distance. The authors validate this package by reproducing the behavior classification performance on a previously published dyadic mouse dataset, and demonstrate its use on a novel cichlid group dataset. The authors have created a package that is agnostic to the mechanism of tracking and will reduce the barrier of data preparation for machine learning, which can be a stumbling block for non-experts. The package also evaluates the classification performance with helpful visualizations and provides a tool for inspection of behavior classification results.

      Strengths:

      (1) A major contribution of this paper was creating a framework to extend social behavior classification to groups of animals such that the actor and receiver can be any member of the group, regardless of distance. To implement this framework, the authors created a Python package and an extensive documentation site, which is greatly appreciated. This package should be useful to researchers with a knowledge of Python, virtual environments, and machine learning, as it relies on scripts rather than a GUI interface and may facilitate the development of new machine learning algorithms for behavior classification.

      (2) The authors include modules for correctly creating train and test sets, and evaluation of classifier performance. This is extremely useful. Beyond evaluation, they have created a tool for manual review and correction of annotations. And they demonstrate the utility of this validation tool in the case of rare behaviors where correct classification is difficult, but the number of examples to review is reasonable.

      (3) The authors provide well-commented step-by-step instructions for the use of the package in the documentation.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) While the classification algorithm was not the subject of the paper, as the authors used off-the-shelf methods and were only able to reproduce the performance of the CALMS21 dyadic dataset, they did not improve upon previously published results. Furthermore, the results from the novel cichlid fish dataset, including a macro F1 score of 0.45, did not compellingly show that the workflow described in the paper produces useful behavioral classifications for groups of interacting animals performing rare social behaviors. I commend the authors for transparently reporting the results both with the macro F1 scores and the confusion matrices for the classifiers. The mutually exclusive, all-vs-all data annotation scheme of rare behaviors results in extremely unbalanced datasets such that categorical classification becomes a difficult problem. To try to address the performance limitation, the authors built a validation tool that allows the user to manually review the behavior predictions.

      (2) The pipeline makes a few strong assumptions that should be made more explicit in the paper.

      First, the behavioral classifiers are mutually exclusive and one-to-one. An individual animal can only be performing one behavior at any given time, and that behavior has only one recipient. These assumptions are implicit in how the package creates the data structure, and should be made clearer to the reader. Additionally, the authors emphasize that they have extended behavior classification to animal groups, but more accurately, they have extended behavioral classification to all possible pairs within a group.

      Second, the package expects comprehensive behavior labeling of the tracking data as input. Any frames not manually labeled are assumed to be the background category. Additionally, the package will interpolate through any missing segments of tracking data and assign the background behavioral category to those trajectory segments as well. The effects of these assumptions are not explored in the paper, which may limit the utility of this workflow for naturalistic environments.

      (3) Finally, the authors described the package as a tool for biologists and ethologists, but the level of Python and machine learning expertise required to use the package to develop a novel behavior classification workflow may be beyond the ability of many biologists. More accessible example notebooks would help address this problem.

  2. Oct 2025
    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this manuscript, Hoon Cho et al. presents a novel investigation into the role of PexRAP, an intermediary in ether lipid biosynthesis, in B cell function, particularly during the Germinal Center (GC) reaction. The authors profile lipid composition in activated B cells both in vitro and in vivo, revealing the significance of PexRAP. Using a combination of animal models and imaging mass spectrometry, they demonstrate that PexRAP is specifically required in B cells. They further establish that its activity is critical upon antigen encounter, shaping B cell survival during the GC reaction.

      Mechanistically, they show that ether lipid synthesis is necessary to modulate reactive oxygen species (ROS) levels and prevent membrane peroxidation.

      Highlights of the Manuscript:

      The authors perform exhaustive imaging mass spectrometry (IMS) analyses of B cells, including GC B cells, to explore ether lipid metabolism during the humoral response. This approach is particularly noteworthy given the challenge of limited cell availability in GC reactions, which often hampers metabolomic studies. IMS proves to be a valuable tool in overcoming this limitation, allowing detailed exploration of GC metabolism.

      The data presented is highly relevant, especially in light of recent studies suggesting a pivotal role for lipid metabolism in GC B cells. While these studies primarily focus on mitochondrial function, this manuscript uniquely investigates peroxisomes, which are linked to mitochondria and contribute to fatty acid oxidation (FAO). By extending the study of lipid metabolism beyond mitochondria to include peroxisomes, the authors add a critical dimension to our understanding of B cell biology.

      Additionally, the metabolic plasticity of B cells poses challenges for studying metabolism, as genetic deletions from the beginning of B cell development often result in compensatory adaptations. To address this, the authors employ an acute loss-of-function approach using two conditional, cell-type-specific gene inactivation mouse models: one targeting B cells after the establishment of a pre-immune B cell population (Dhrs7b^f/f, huCD20-CreERT2) and the other during the GC reaction (Dhrs7b^f/f; S1pr2-CreERT2). This strategy is elegant and well-suited to studying the role of metabolism in B cell activation.

      Overall, this manuscript is a significant contribution to the field, providing robust evidence for the fundamental role of lipid metabolism during the GC reaction and unveiling a novel function for peroxisomes in B cells. However, several major points need to be addressed:

      Major Comments:

      Figures 1 and 2

      The authors conclude, based on the results from these two figures, that PexRAP promotes the homeostatic maintenance and proliferation of B cells. In this section, the authors first use a tamoxifen-inducible full Dhrs7b knockout (KO) and afterwards Dhrs7bΔ/Δ-B model to specifically characterize the role of this molecule in B cells. They characterize the B and T cell compartments using flow cytometry (FACS) and examine the establishment of the GC reaction using FACS and immunofluorescence. They conclude that B cell numbers are reduced, and the GC reaction is defective upon stimulation, showing a reduction in the total percentage of GC cells, particularly in the light zone (LZ).

      The analysis of the steady-state B cell compartment should also be improved. This includes a more detailed characterization of MZ and B1 populations, given the role of lipid metabolism and lipid peroxidation in these subtypes.

      Suggestions for Improvement:

      - B Cell compartment characterization: A deeper characterization of the B cell compartment in non-immunized mice is needed, including analysis of Marginal Zone (MZ) maturation and a more detailed examination of the B1 compartment. This is especially important given the role of specific lipid metabolism in these cell types. The phenotyping of the B cell compartment should also include an analysis of immunoglobulin levels on the membrane, considering the impact of lipids on membrane composition.

      - GC Response Analysis Upon Immunization: The GC response characterization should include additional data on the T cell compartment, specifically the presence and function of Tfh cells. In Fig. 1H, the distribution of the LZ appears strikingly different. However, the authors have not addressed this in the text. A more thorough characterization of centroblasts and centrocytes using CXCR4 and CD86 markers is needed.<br /> The gating strategy used to characterize GC cells (GL7+CD95+ in IgD− cells) is suboptimal. A more robust analysis of GC cells should be performed in total B220+CD138− cells.

      - The authors claim that Dhrs7b supports the homeostatic maintenance of quiescent B cells in vivo and promotes effective proliferation. This conclusion is primarily based on experiments where CTV-labeled PexRAP-deficient B cells were adoptively transferred into μMT mice (Fig. 2D-F). However, we recommend reviewing the flow plots of CTV in Fig. 2E, as they appear out of scale. More importantly, the low recovery of PexRAP-deficient B cells post-adoptive transfer weakens the robustness of the results and is insufficient to conclusively support the role of PexRAP in B cell proliferation in vivo.

      - In vitro stimulation experiments: These experiments need improvement. The authors have used anti-CD40 and BAFF for B cell stimulation; however, it would be beneficial to also include anti-IgM in the stimulation cocktail. In Fig. 2G, CTV plots do not show clear defects in proliferation, yet the authors quantify the percentage of cells with more than three divisions. These plots should clearly display the gating strategy. Additionally, details about histogram normalization and potential defects in cell numbers are missing. A more in-depth analysis of apoptosis is also required to determine whether the observed defects are due to impaired proliferation or reduced survival.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper aims to characterize the relationship between affinity and fitness in the process of affinity maturation. To this end, the authors develop a model of germinal center reaction and a tailored statistical approach, building on recent advances in simulation-based inference. The potential impact of this work is hindered by the poor organization of the manuscript. In crucial sections, the writing style and notations are unclear and difficult to follow.

      Strengths:

      The model provides a framework for linking affinity measurements and sequence evolution and does so while accounting for the stochasticity inherent to the germinal center reaction. The model's sophistication comes at the cost of numerous parameters and leads to intractable likelihood, which are the primary challenges addressed by the authors. The approach to inference is innovative and relies on training a neural network on extensive simulations of trajectories from the model.

      Weaknesses:

      The text is challenging to follow. The descriptions of the model and the inference procedure are fragmented and repetitive. In the introduction and the methods section, the same information is often provided multiple times, at different levels of detail. This organization sometimes requires the reader to move back and forth between subsections (there are multiple non-specific references to "above" and "below" in the text).

      The choice of some parameter values in simulations appears arbitrary and would benefit from more extensive justification. It remains unclear how the "significant uncertainty" associated with these parameters affects the results of inference. In addition, the performance of the inference scheme on simulated data is difficult to evaluate, as the reported distributions of loss function values are not very informative.

      Finally, the discussion of the similarities and differences with an alternative approach to this inference problem, presented in Dewitt et al. (2025), is incomplete.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors develop a set of biophysical models to investigate whether a constant area hypothesis or a constant curvature hypothesis explains the mechanics of membrane vesiculation during clathrin-mediated endocytosis.

      Strengths:

      The models that the authors choose are fairly well-described in the field and the manuscript is well-written.

      Weaknesses:

      One thing that is unclear is what is new with this work. If the main finding is that the differences are in the early stages of endocytosis, then one wonders if that should be tested experimentally. Also, the role of clathrin assembly and adhesion are treated as mechanical equilibrium but perhaps the process should not be described as equilibria but rather a time-dependent process. Ultimately, there are so many models that address this question that without direct experimental comparison, it's hard to place value on the model prediction.

      While an attempt is made to do so with prior published EM images, there is excessive uncertainty in both the data itself as is usually the case but also in the methods that are used to symmetrize the data. This reviewer wonders about any goodness of fit when such uncertainty is taken into account.

      Comments on revisions:

      I appreciate the authors edits, but I found that the major concerns I had still hold. Therefore, I did not alter my review.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript by Pournejati et al investigates how BK (big potassium) channels and CaV1.3 (a subtype of voltage-gated calcium channels) become functionally coupled by exploring whether their ensembles form early-during synthesis and intracellular trafficking-rather than only after insertion into the plasma membrane. To this end, the authors use the PLA technique to assess the formation of ion channel associations in the different compartments (ER, Golgi or PM), single-molecule RNA in situ hybridization (RNAscope), and super-resolution microscopy.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript is well written and addresses an interesting question, combining a range of imaging techniques. The findings are generally well-presented and offer important insights into the spatial organization of ion channel complexes, both in heterologous and endogenous systems.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors have improved their manuscript after revisions, and some previous concerns have been addressed. Still, the main concern about this work is that the current experiments do not quantitatively or mechanistically link the ensembles observed intracellularly (in the endoplasmic reticulum (ER) or Golgi) to those found at the plasma membrane (PM). As a result, it is difficult to fully integrate the findings into a coherent model of trafficking. Specifically, the manuscript does not address what proportion of ensembles detected at the PM originated in the ER. Without data on the turnover or half-life of these ensembles at the PM, it remains unclear how many persist through trafficking versus forming de novo at the membrane. The authors report the percentage of PLA-positive ensembles localized to various compartments, but this only reflects the distribution of pre-formed ensembles. What remains unknown is the proportion of total BK and CaV1.3 channels (not just those in ensembles) that are engaged in these complexes within each compartment. Without this, it is difficult to determine whether ensembles form in the ER and are then trafficked to the PM, or if independent ensemble formation also occurs at the membrane. To support the model of intracellular assembly followed by coordinated trafficking, it would be important to quantify the fraction of the total channel population that exists as ensembles in each compartment. A comparable ensemble-to-total ratio across ER and PM would strengthen the argument for directed trafficking of pre-assembled channel complexes.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In the manuscript by Fu et al., the authors developed a chemo-immunological method for the reliable detection of Kacac, a novel post-translational modification, and demonstrated that acetoacetate and AACS serve as key regulators of cellular Kacac levels. Furthermore, the authors identified the enzymatic addition of the Kacac mark by acyltransferases GCN5, p300, and PCAF, as well as its removal by deacetylase HDAC3. These findings indicate that AACS utilizes acetoacetate to generate acetoacetyl-CoA in the cytosol, which is subsequently transferred into the nucleus for histone Kacac modification. A comprehensive proteomic analysis has identified 139 Kacac sites on 85 human proteins. Bioinformatics analysis of Kacac substrates and RNA-seq data reveal the broad impacts of Kacac on diverse cellular processes and various pathophysiological conditions. This study provides valuable additional insights into the investigation of Kacac and would serve as a helpful resource for future physiological or pathological research.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have made efforts to revise this manuscript and address my concerns. The revisions are appropriate and have improved the quality of the manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Kong et al.'s work describes a new approach that does exactly what the title states: "Correction of local beam-induced sample motion in cryo-EM images using a 3D spline model." I find the method appropriate, logical, and well-explained. Additionally, the work suggests using 2DTM-related measurements to quantify the improvement of the new method compared to the old one in cisTEM, Unblur. I find this part engaging; it is straightforward, accurate, and, of course, the group has a strong command of 2DTM, presenting a thorough study.

      However, everything in the paper (except some correct general references) refers to comparisons with the full-frame approach, Unblur. Still, we have known for more than a decade that local correction approaches perform better than global ones, so I do not find anything truly novel in their proposal of using local methods (the method itself- Unbend- is new, but many others have been described previously). In fact, the use of 2DTM is perhaps a more interesting novelty of the work, and here, a more systematic study comparing different methods with these proposed well-defined metrics would be very valuable. As currently presented, there is no doubt that it is better than an older, well-established approach, and the way to measure "better" is very interesting, but there is no indication of how the situation stands regarding newer methods.

      Regarding practical aspects, it seems that the current implementation of the method is significantly slower than other patch-based approaches. If its results are shown to exceed those of existing local methods, then exploring the use of Unbend, possibly optimizing its code first, could be a valuable task. However, without more recent comparisons, the impact of Unbend remains unclear.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Chengjian Zhao et al. focused on the interactions between vascular, biliary, and neural networks in the liver microenvironment, addressing the critical bottleneck that the lack of high-resolution 3D visualization has hindered understanding of these interactions in liver disease.

      Strengths:

      This study developed a high-resolution multiplex 3D imaging method that integrates multicolor metallic compound nanoparticle (MCNP) perfusion with optimized CUBIC tissue clearing. This method enables the simultaneous 3D visualization of spatial networks of the portal vein, hepatic artery, bile ducts, and central vein in the mouse liver. The authors reported a perivascular structure termed the Periportal Lamellar Complex (PLC), which is identified along the portal vein axis. This study clarifies that the PLC comprises CD34⁺Sca-1⁺ dual-positive endothelial cells with a distinct gene expression profile, and reveals its colocalization with terminal bile duct branches and sympathetic nerve fibers under physiological conditions.

      Weaknesses:

      This manuscript is well-written, organized, and informative. However, there are some points that need to be clarified.

      (1) After MCNP-dye injection, does it remain in the blood vessels, adsorb onto the cell surface, or permeate into the cells? Does the MCNP-dye have cell selectivity?

      (2) All MCNP-dyes were injected after the mice were sacrificed, and the mice's livers were fixed with PFA. After the blood flow had ceased, how did the authors ensure that the MCNP-dyes were fully and uniformly perfused into the microcirculation of the liver?

      (3) It is advisable to present additional 3D perspective views in the article, as the current images exhibit very weak 3D effects. Furthermore, it would be better to supplement with some videos to demonstrate the 3D effects of the stained blood vessels.

      (4) In Figure 1-I, the authors used MCNP-Black to stain the central veins; however, in addition to black, there are also yellow and red stains in the image. The authors need to explain what these stains are in the legend.

      (5) There is a typo in the title of Figure 4F; it should be "stem cell".

      (6) Nuclear staining is necessary in immunofluorescence staining, especially for Figure 5e. This will help readers distinguish whether the green color in the image corresponds to cells or dye deposits.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors used an in vitro microfluidic system where HUVECs are exposed to high, low, or physiologic (normal) shear stress to demonstrate that both high and low shear stress for 24 hours resulted in decreased KLF6 expression, decreased lipid peroxidation, and increased cell death, which was reversible upon treatment with Fer-1, the ferroptosis inhibitor. RNA sequencing (LSS vs normal SS) revealed decreased steroid synthesis and UPR signaling in low shear stress conditions, which they confirmed by showing reduced expression of proteins that mitigate ER stress under both LSS and HSS. Decreased KLF6 expression after exposure to HSS/LSS was associated with decreased expression of regulators of ER stress (PERK, BiP, MVD), which was restored with KLF6 overexpression. Overexpression of KLF6 also restored SLC7A11 expression, Coq10, and reduced c11 bodipy oxidation state- all markers of lipid peroxidation and ferroptosis. The authors then used vascular smooth muscle cells (atherosclerotic model) with HUVECs and monocytes to show that KLF6 overexpression reduces the adhesion of monocytes and lipid accumulation in conditions of low shear stress.

      Strengths:

      (1) The use of a microfluidic device to simulate shear stress while keeping the pressure constant when varying the shear stress applied is improved and more physiologic compared to traditional cone and shearing devices. Similarly, the utilization of both low and high shear stress in most experiments is a strength.

      (2) This study provides a link between disturbed shear stress and ferroptosis, which is novel, and fits nicely with existing knowledge that endothelial cell ferroptosis promotes atherosclerosis. This concept was also recently reported in September 2025, when a publication also demonstrated that LSS triggers ferroptosis in vascular endothelial cells (PMID: 40939914), which partly validates these findings.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) While HUVECs are commonly used in endothelial in vitro studies, it would be preferable to confirm the findings using an arterial cell line, such as human coronary artery cells, when studying mechanisms of early atherosclerosis. Furthermore, physiologic arterial shear stress is higher than venous shear stress, and different vascular beds have varying responses to altered shear stress; as such, the up- and downregulated pathways in HUVECs should be confirmed in an arterial system.

      (2) The authors provide convincing evidence of disturbances in shear stress inducing endothelial ferroptosis with assays for impaired lipid peroxidation and increased cell death that was reversed with a ferroptosis inhibitor. However, more detailed characterization of ferroptosis with iron accumulation assays, as well as evaluating GPX4 activity as a consequence of the impaired mevalonate pathway, and testing for concomitant apoptosis in addition to ferroptosis, would add to the data.

      (3) The authors state that KLF2 and KLF4 are not amongst the differentially expressed genes downregulated by reduced shear stress, which is contrary to previous data, where both KLF2 and KLF4 are well studied to be upregulated by physiologic laminar shear stress. While this might be due to the added pressure in their microfluidic system, it also might be due to changes in gene expression over time. In this case, a time course experiment would be needed. It is possible that KLF2, KLF4 and KLF6 are all reduced in low (and high) shear stress and cooperatively regulate the endothelial cell phenotype. Both KLF2 and KLF4 have been shown to be protective against atherosclerosis.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary

      The authors completed a statistically rigorous analysis of the synchronization of sharp-wave ripples in the hippocampal CA1 across and within hemispheres. They used a publicly available dataset (collected in the Buzsaki lab) from 4 rats (8 sessions) recorded with silicon probes in both hemispheres. Each session contained approximately 8 hours of activity recorded during rest. The authors found that the characteristics of ripples did not differ between hemispheres, and that most ripples occurred almost simultaneously on all probe shanks within a hemisphere as well as across hemispheres. The differences in amplitude and exact timing of ripples between recording sites increased slightly with distance between recording sites. However, the phase coupling of ripples (in the 100-250 Hz range), changed dramatically with distance between recording sites. Ripples in opposite hemispheres were about 90% less coupled than ripples on nearby tetrodes in the same hemisphere. Phase coupling also decreased with distance within the hemisphere. Finally, pyramidal cell and interneuron spikes were coupled to the local ripple phase and less so to ripples at distant sites or the opposite hemisphere.

      The authors also analyzed the changes in ripple coupling in relation to a couple of behavioral variables. Interestingly, while exposure to a novel track increased ripple abundance by ~5%, it did not change any form of ripple coupling within or between hemispheres.

      Strengths

      The analysis was well-designed and rigorous. The authors used statistical tests well suited to the hypotheses being tested, and clearly explained these tests. The paper is very clearly written, making it easy to understand and reproduce the analysis. The authors included an excellent review of the literature to explain the motivation for their study.

      Weaknesses

      The authors have addressed all of my concerns and recommendations.

      This paper presents an important and unique analysis of ripple coupling. The same method could be used in the future to analyze the effects of other behavioral variables, such as satiety versus hunger, sleep deprivation, or enrichment, to address potential functions and causes of ripple coupling.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Lu & Golomb combined EEG, artificial neural networks, and multivariate pattern analyses to examine how different visual variables are processed in the brain. The conclusions of the paper are mostly well supported.

      The authors find that not only real-world size is represented in the brain (which was known), but both retinal size and real-world depth is represented, at different time points or latencies, which may reflect different stages of processing. Prior work has not been able to answer the question of real-world depth due to stimuli used. The authors made this possible by assess real-world depth and testing it with appropriate methodology, accounting for retinal and real-world size. The methodological approach combining behavior, RSA, and ANNs is creative and well thought out to appropriately assess the research questions, and the findings may be very compelling if backed up with some clarifications and further analyses.

      The work will be of interest to experimental and computational vision scientists, as well as the broader computational cognitive neuroscience community as the methodology is of interest and the code is or will be made available. The work is important as it is currently not clear what the correspondence between many deep neural network models are and the brain are, and this work pushes our knowledge forward on this front. Furthermore, the availability of methods and data will be useful for the scientific community.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This study presents cryoEM-derived structures of the Trypanosome aquaporin AQP2, in complex with its natural ligand, glycerol, as well as two trypanocidal drugs, pentamidine and melarsoprol, which use AQP2 as an uptake route. The structures are high quality and the density for the drug molecules is convincing, showing a binding site in the centre of the AQP2 pore.

      The authors then continue to study this system using molecular dynamics simulations. Their simulations indicate that the drugs can pass through the pore and identify a weak binding site in the centre of the pore, which corresponds with that identified through cryoEM analysis. They also simulate the effect of drug resistance mutations which suggests that the mutations reduce the affinity for drugs and therefore might reduce the likelihood that the drugs enter into the centre of the pore, reducing the likelihood that they progress through into the cell.

      While the cryoEM and MD studies are well conducted, it is a shame that the drug transport hypothesis was not tested experimentally. For example, did they do cryoEM with AQP2 with drug resistance mutations and see if they could see the drugs in these maps? They might not bind, but another possibility is that the binding site shifts, as seen in Chen et al? Do they have an assay for measuring drug binding? I think that some experimental validation of the drug binding hypothesis would strengthen this paper. The authors describe in their response why these experiments are challenging.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Roseby and colleagues report on a body region-specific sensory control of the fly larval righting response, a body contortion performed by fly larvae to correct their posture when they find themselves in an inverted (dorsal side down) position. This is an important topic because of the general need for animals to move about in the correct orientation and the clever methodologies used in this paper to uncover the sensory triggers for the behavior. Several innovative methodologies are developed, including a body region-specific optogenetic approach along different axial positions of the larva, region-specific manipulation of surface contacts with the substrate, and a 'water unlocking' technique to initiate righting behaviors, a strength of the manuscript. The authors found that multidendritic neurons, particularly the daIV neurons, are necessary for righting behavior. The contribution of daIV neurons had been shown by the authors in a prior paper (Klann et al, 2021), but that study had used constitutive neuronal silencing. Here, the authors used acute inactivation to confirm this finding. Additionally, the authors describe an important role for anterior sensory neurons and a need for dorsal substrate contact. Conversely, ventral sensory elements inhibit the righting behavior, presumably to ensure that the ventral-side-down position dominates. They move on to test the genetic basis for righting behavior and, consistent with the regional specificity they observe, implicate sensory neuron expression of Hox genes Antennapedia and Abdominal-b in self-righting.

      Strengths:

      Strengths of this paper include the important question addressed and the elegant and innovative combination of methods, which led to clear insights into the sensory biology of self-righting, and that will be useful for others in the field. This is a substantial contribution to understanding how animals correct their body position. The manuscript is very clearly written and couched in interesting biology.

      Limitations:

      (1) The interpretation of functional experiments is complicated by the proposed excitatory and inhibitory roles of dorsal and ventral sensory neuron activity, respectively. So, while silencing of an excitatory (dorsal) element might slow righting, silencing of inputs that inhibit righting could speed the behavior. Silencing them together, as is done here, could nullify or mask important D-V-specific roles. Selective manipulation of cells along the D-V axis could help address this caveat.

      (2) Prior studies from the authors implicated daIV neurons in the righting response. One of the main advances of the current manuscript is the clever demonstration of region-specific roles of sensory input. However, this is only confirmed with a general md driver, 190(2)80, and not with the subset-specific Gal4, so it is not clear if daIV sensory neurons are also acting in a regionally specific manner along the A-P axis.

      (3) The manuscript is narrowly focused on sensory neurons that initiate righting, which limits the advance given the known roles for daIV neurons in righting. With the suite of innovative new tools, there is a missed opportunity to gain a more general understanding of how sensory neurons contribute to the righting response, including promoting and inhibiting righting in different regions of the larva, as well as aspects of proprioceptive sensing that could be necessary for righting and account for some of the observed effects of 109(2)80.

      (4) Although the authors observe an influence of Hox genes in righting, the possible mechanisms are not pursued, resulting in an unsatisfying conclusion that these genes are somehow involved in a certain region-specific behavior by their region-specific expression. Are the cells properly maintained upon knockdown? Are axon or dendrite morphologies of the cells disrupted upon knockdown?

      (5) There could be many reasons for delays in righting behavior in the various manipulations, including ineffective sensory 'triggering', incoherent muscle contraction patterns, initiation of inappropriate behaviors that interfere with righting sequencing, and deficits in sensing body position. The authors show that delays in righting upon silencing of 109(2)80 are caused by a switch to head casting behavior. Is this also the case for silencing of daIV neurons, Hox RNAi experiments, and silencing of CO neurons? Does daIII silencing reduce head casting to lead to faster righting responses?

      (6) 109(2)80 is expressed in a number of central neurons, so at least some of the righting phenotype with this line could be due to silenced neurons in the CNS. This should at least be acknowledged in the manuscript and controlled for, if possible, with other Gal4 lines.

      Other points

      (7) Interpretation of roles of Hox gene expression and function in righting response should consider previous data on Hox expression and function in multidendritic neurons reported by Parrish et al. Genes and Development, 2007.

      (8) The daIII silencing phenotype could conceivably be explained if these neurons act as the ventral inhibitors. Do the authors have evidence for or against such roles?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The importance of RNA editing in producing protein diversity is a widespread process that can regulate how genes function in various cellular contexts. Despite the importance of the process, we still lack a thorough knowledge of the profile of RNA editing targets in known cells. Crane and colleagues take advantage of a recently acquired scRNAseq database for Drosophila type Ib and Is larval motoneurons and identify the RNA editing landscape that differs in those cells. They find both canonical (A --> I) and non-canonical sites and characterize the targets, their frequencies, and determine some of the "rules" that influence RNA editing. They compare their database with existing databases to determine a reliance on the most well-known deaminase enzyme ADAR, determine the activity-dependence of editing profiles, and identify editing sites that are specific to larval Drosophila, differing from adults. The authors also identify non-canonical editing sites, especially in the newly appreciated and identified regulator of synaptic plasticity, Arc1.

      The paper represents a strong analysis of recently made RNAseq databases from their lab and takes a notable approach to integrate this with other databases that have been recently produced from other sources. One of the places where this manuscript succeeds is in a thorough approach to analyzing the considerable amount of data that is out there regarding RNAseq in these differing motoneurons, but also in comparing larvae to adults. This is a strong advance. It also enables the authors to begin to determine rules for RNA editing. From an analytical standpoint, this paper is a notable advance in seeking to provide a biological context for massive amounts of data in the field. Further, it addresses some biological aspects in comparing WT and adar mutants to assess one potential deaminase, addresses activity-dependence, and begins to reveal profiles of canonical and non-canonical editing.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this manuscript, Hoon Cho et al. present a novel investigation into the role of PexRAP, an intermediary in ether lipid biosynthesis, in B cell function, particularly during the Germinal Center (GC) reaction. The authors profile lipid composition in activated B cells both in vitro and in vivo, revealing the significance of PexRAP. Using a combination of animal models and imaging mass spectrometry, they demonstrate that PexRAP is specifically required in B cells. They further establish that its activity is critical upon antigen encounter, shaping B cell survival during the GC reaction.

      Mechanistically, they show that ether lipid synthesis is necessary to modulate reactive oxygen species (ROS) levels and prevent membrane peroxidation.

      Highlights of the Manuscript:

      The authors perform exhaustive imaging mass spectrometry (IMS) analyses of B cells, including GC B cells, to explore ether lipid metabolism during the humoral response. This approach is particularly noteworthy given the challenge of limited cell availability in GC reactions, which often hampers metabolomic studies. IMS proves to be a valuable tool in overcoming this limitation, allowing detailed exploration of GC metabolism.

      The data presented is highly relevant, especially in light of recent studies suggesting a pivotal role for lipid metabolism in GC B cells. While these studies primarily focus on mitochondrial function, this manuscript uniquely investigates peroxisomes, which are linked to mitochondria and contribute to fatty acid oxidation (FAO). By extending the study of lipid metabolism beyond mitochondria to include peroxisomes, the authors add a critical dimension to our understanding of B cell biology.

      Additionally, the metabolic plasticity of B cells poses challenges for studying metabolism, as genetic deletions from the beginning of B cell development often result in compensatory adaptations. To address this, the authors employ an acute loss-of-function approach using two conditional, cell-type-specific gene inactivation mouse models: one targeting B cells after the establishment of a pre-immune B cell population (Dhrs7b^f/f, huCD20-CreERT2) and the other during the GC reaction (Dhrs7b^f/f; S1pr2-CreERT2). This strategy is elegant and well-suited to studying the role of metabolism in B cell activation.

      Overall, this manuscript is a significant contribution to the field, providing robust evidence for the fundamental role of lipid metabolism during the GC reaction and unveiling a novel function for peroxisomes in B cells.

      Comments on revisions:

      There are still some discrepancies in gating strategies. In Fig. 7B legend (lines 1082-1083), they show representative flow plots of GL7+ CD95+ GC B cells among viable B cells, so it is not clear if they are IgDneg, as the rest of the GC B cells aforementioned in the text.

      Western blot confirmation: We understand the limitations the authors enumerate. Perhaps an RT-qPCR analysis of the Dhrs7b gene in sorted GC B cells from the S1PR2-CreERT2 model could be feasible, as it requires a smaller number of cells. In any case, we agree with the authors that the results obtained using the huCD20-CreERT2 model are consistent with those from the S1PR2-CreERT2 model, which adds credibility to the findings and supports the conclusion that GC B cells in the S1PR2-CreERT2 model are indeed deficient in PexRAP

      Lines 222-226: We believe the correct figure is 4B, whereas the text refers to 4C.

      Supplementary Figure 1 (line 1147): The figure title suggests that the data on T-cell numbers are from mice in a steady state. However, the legend indicates that the mice were immunized, which means the data are not from steady-state conditions.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors use the theory of planned behavior to understand whether or not intentions to use sex as a biological variable (SABV), as well as attitude (value), subjective norm (social pressure), and behavioral control (ability to conduct behavior), across scientists at a pharmacological conference. They also used an intervention (workshop) to determine the value of this workshop in changing perceptions and misconceptions. Attempts to understand the knowledge gaps were made.

      Strengths:

      The use of SABV is limited in terms of researchers using sex in the analysis as a variable of interest in the models (and not a variable to control). To understand how we can improve on the number of researchers examining the data with sex in the analyses, it is vital we understand the pressure points that researchers consider in their work. The authors identify likely culprits in their analyses. The authors also test an intervention (workshop) to address the main bias or impediments for researchers' use of sex in their analyses.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Asthenospermia, characterized by reduced sperm motility, is one of the major causes of male infertility. The "9 + 2" arranged MTs and over 200 associated proteins constitute the axoneme, the molecular machine for flagellar and ciliary motility. Understanding the physiological functions of axonemal proteins, particularly their links to male infertility, could help uncover the genetic causes of asthenospermia and improve its clinical diagnosis and management. In this study, the authors generated Ankrd5 null mice and found that ANKRD5-/- males exhibited reduced sperm motility and infertility. Using FLAG-tagged ANKRD5 mice, mass spectrometry, and immunoprecipitation (IP) analyses, they confirmed that ANKRD5 is localized within the N-DRC, a critical protein complex for normal flagellar motility. However, transmission electron microscopy (TEM) and cryo-electron tomography (cryo-ET) of sperm from Ankrd5 null mice did not reveal significant structural abnormalities.

      Strengths:

      The phenotypes observed in ANKRD5-/- mice, including reduced sperm motility and male infertility, are conversing. The authors demonstrated that ANKRD5 is an N-DRC protein that interacts with TCTE1 and DRC4. Most of the experiments are well-designed and executed.

      Comments on revised version:

      My concerns have been addressed.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      By expressing protein in a strain that is unable to phosphorylate KdpFABC, the authors achieve structures of the active wildtype protein, capturing a new intermediate state, in which the terminal phosphoryl group of ATP has been transferred to a nearby Asp, and ADP remains covalently bound. The manuscript examines the coupling of potassium transport and ATP hydrolysis by a comprehensive set of mutants. The most interesting proposal revolves around the proposed binding site for K+ as it exits the channel near T75. Nearby mutations to charged residues cause interesting phenotypes, such as constitutive uncoupled ATPase activity, leading to a model in which lysine residues can occupy/compete with K+ for binding sites along the transport pathway.

      Strengths:

      The high resolution (2.1 Å) of the current structure is impressive, and allows many new densities in the potassium transport pathway to be resolved. The authors are judicious about assigning these as potassium ions or water molecules, and explain their structural interpretations clearly. In addition to the nice structural work, the mechanistic work is thorough. A series of thoughtful experiments involving ATP hydrolysis/transport coupling under various pH and potassium concentrations bolsters the structural interpretations and lends convincing support to the mechanistic proposal. The SSME experiments are rigorous.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The study presents significant findings on the role of mitochondrial depletion in axons and its impact on neuronal proteostasis. It effectively demonstrates how the loss of axonal mitochondria and elevated levels of eIF2β contribute to autophagy collapse and neuronal dysfunction. The use of Drosophila as a model organism and comprehensive proteome analysis adds robustness to the findings.

      In this revision, the authors have responded thoughtfully to previous concerns. In particular, they have addressed the need for a quantitative analysis of age-dependent changes in eIF2β and eIF2α. By adding western blot data from multiple time points (7 to 63 days), they show that eIF2β levels gradually increase until middle age, then decline. In milton knockdown flies, this pattern appears shifted, supporting the idea that mitochondrial defects may accelerate aging-related molecular changes. These additions clarify the temporal dynamics of eIF2β and improve the overall interpretation.

      Other updates include appropriate corrections to figures and quantification methods. The authors have also revised some of their earlier mechanistic claims, presenting a more cautious interpretation of their findings.

      Overall, this work provides new insights into how mitochondrial transport defects may influence aging-related proteostasis through eIF2β. The manuscript is now more convincing, and the revisions address the main points raised earlier. I find the updated version much improved.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The aim of this study was a better understanding of the reproductive life history of acoels. The acoel Hofstenia miamia, an emerging model organism, is investigated; the authors nevertheless acknowledge and address the high variability in reproductive morphology and strategies within Acoela.

      The morphology of male and female reproductive organs in these hermaphroditic worms is characterised through stereo microscopy, immunohistochemistry, histology, and fluorescent in situ hybridization. The findings confirm and better detail historical descriptions. A novelty in the field is the in situ hybridization experiments, which link already published single-cell sequencing data to the worms' morphology. An interesting finding, though not further discussed by the authors, is that the known germline markers cgnl1-2 and Piwi-1 are only localized in the ovaries and not in the testes.

      The work also clarifies the timing and order of appearance of reproductive organs during development and regeneration, as well as the changes upon de-growth. It shows an association of reproductive organ growth to whole body size, which will be surely taken into account and further explored in future acoel studies. This is also the first instance of non-anecdotal degrowth upon starvation in H. miamia (and to my knowledge in acoels, except recorded weight upon starvation in Convolutriloba retrogemma [1]).

      Egg laying through the mouth is described in H. miamia for the first time as well as the worms' behavior in egg laying, i.e. choosing the tanks' walls rather than its floor, laying eggs in clutches, and delaying egg-laying during food deprivation. Self-fertilization is also reported for the first time.

      The main strength of this study is that it expands previous knowledge on the reproductive life history traits in H. miamia and it lays the foundation for future studies on how these traits are affected by various factors, as well as for comparative studies within acoels. As highlighted above, many phenomena are addressed in a rigorous and/or quantitative way for the first time. This can be considered the start of a novel approach to reproductive studies in acoels, as the authors suggest in the conclusion. It can be also interpreted as a testimony of how an established model system can benefit the study of an understudied animal group.

      The main weakness of the work is the lack of convincing explanations on the dynamics of self-fertilization, sperm storage, and movement of oocytes from the ovaries to the central cavity and subsequently to the pharynx. These questions are also raised by the authors themselves in the discussion. Another weakness (or rather missing potential strength) is the limited focus on genes. Given the presence of the single-cell sequencing atlas and established methods for in situ hybridization and even transgenesis in H. miamia, this model provides a unique opportunity to investigate germline genes in acoels and their role in development, regeneration, and degrowth. It should also be noted that employing Transmission Electron Microscopy would have enabled a more detailed comparison with other acoels, since ultrastructural studies of reproductive organs have been published for other species (cfr e.g. [2],[3],[4]). This is especially true for a better understanding of the relation between sperm axoneme and flagellum (mentioned in the Results section), as well as of sexual conflict (mentioned in the Discussion).

      (1) Shannon, Thomas. 2007. 'Photosmoregulation: Evidence of Host Behavioral Photoregulation of an Algal Endosymbiont by the Acoel Convolutriloba Retrogemma as a Means of Non-Metabolic Osmoregulation'. Athens, Georgia: University of Georgia [Dissertation].

      (2) Zabotin, Ya. I., and A. I. Golubev. 2014. 'Ultrastructure of Oocytes and Female Copulatory Organs of Acoela'. Biology Bulletin 41 (9): 722-35.

      (3) Achatz, Johannes Georg, Matthew Hooge, Andreas Wallberg, Ulf Jondelius, and Seth Tyler. 2010. 'Systematic Revision of Acoels with 9+0 Sperm Ultrastructure (Convolutida) and the Influence of Sexual Conflict on Morphology'.

      (4) Petrov, Anatoly, Matthew Hooge, and Seth Tyler. 2006. 'Comparative Morphology of the Bursal Nozzles in Acoels (Acoela, Acoelomorpha)'. Journal of Morphology 267 (5): 634-48.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This study investigates the contribution of renal dysfunction to systemic and neuronal decline in Drosophila models of Gaucher disease (Gba1b mutants) and Parkinson's disease (Parkin mutants). While lysosomal and mitochondrial pathways are known drivers in these disorders, the role of kidney-like tissues in disease progression has not been well explored.

      The authors use Drosophila melanogaster to model renal dysfunction, focusing on Malpighian tubules (analogous to renal tubules) and nephrocytes (analogous to podocytes). They employ genetic mutants, tissue-specific rescues, imaging of renal architecture, redox probes, functional assays, nephrocyte dextran uptake, and lifespan analyses. They also test genetic antioxidant interventions and pharmacological treatment.

      The main findings show that renal pathology is progressive in Gba1b mutants, marked by Malpighian tubule disorganization, stellate cell loss, lipid accumulation, impaired water and ion regulation, and reduced nephrocyte filtration. A central theme is redox dyshomeostasis, reflected in whole-fly GSH reduction, paradoxical mitochondrial versus cytosolic redox shifts, reduced ROS signals, increased lipid peroxidation, and peroxisomal impairment. Antioxidant manipulations (Nrf2, Sod1/2, CatA, and ascorbic acid) consistently worsen outcomes, suggesting a fragile redox balance rather than classical oxidative stress. Parkin mutants also develop renal degeneration, with impaired mitophagy and complete nephrocyte dysfunction by 28 days, but their mechanism diverges from that of Gba1b. Rapamycin treatment rescues several renal phenotypes in Gba1b but not in Parkin, highlighting distinct disease pathways.

      The authors propose that renal dysfunction is a central disease-modifying feature of Gaucher and Parkinson's disease models, driven by redox imbalance and differential engagement of lysosomal (Gba1b) vs. mitochondrial (Parkin) mechanisms. They suggest that maintaining renal health and redox balance may represent therapeutic opportunities and biomarkers in neurodegenerative disease. This is a significant manuscript that reframes GD/PD pathology through the lens of renal health. The data are extensive. However, several claims are ahead of the evidence and should be supported with additional experiments.

      Major Comments:

      (1) The abstract frames progressive renal dysfunction as a "central, disease-modifying feature" in both Gba1b and Parkin models, with systemic consequences including water retention, ionic hypersensitivity, and worsened neuro phenotypes. While the data demonstrates renal degeneration and associated physiological stress, the causal contribution of renal defects versus broader organismal frailty is not fully disentangled. Please consider adding causal experiments (e.g., temporally restricted renal rescue/knockdown) to directly establish kidney-specific contributions.

      (2) The manuscript shows multiple redox abnormalities in Gba1b mutants (reduced whole fly GSH, paradoxical mitochondrial reduction with cytosolic oxidation, decreased DHE, increased lipid peroxidation, and reduced peroxisome density/Sod1 mislocalization). These findings support a state of redox imbalance, but the driving mechanism remains broad in the current form. It is unclear if the dominant driver is impaired glutathione handling or peroxisomal antioxidant/β-oxidation deficits or lipid peroxidation-driven toxicity, or reduced metabolic flux/ETC activity. I suggest adding targeted readouts to narrow the mechanism.

      (3) The observation that broad antioxidant manipulations (Nrf2 overexpression in tubules, Sod1/Sod2/CatA overexpression, and ascorbic acid supplementation) consistently shorten lifespan or exacerbate phenotypes in Gba1b mutants is striking and supports the idea of redox fragility. However, these interventions are broad. Nrf2 influences proteostasis and metabolism beyond redox regulation, and Sod1/Sod2/CatA may affect multiple cellular compartments. In the absence of dose-response testing or controls for potential off-target effects, the interpretation that these outcomes specifically reflect redox dyshomeostasis feels ahead of the data. I suggest incorporating narrower interpretations (e.g., targeting lipid peroxidation directly) to clarify which redox axis is driving the vulnerability.

      (4) This manuscript concludes that nephrocyte dysfunction does not exacerbate brain pathology. This inference currently rests on a limited set of readouts: dextran uptake and hemolymph protein as renal markers, lifespan as a systemic measure, and two brain endpoints (LysoTracker staining and FK2 polyubiquitin accumulation). While these data suggest that nephrocyte loss alone does not amplify lysosomal or ubiquitin stress, they may not fully capture neuronal function and vulnerability. To strengthen this conclusion, the authors could consider adding functional or behavioral assays (e.g., locomotor performance)

      (5) The manuscript does a strong job of contrasting Parkin and Gba1b mutants, showing impaired mitophagy in Malpighian tubules, complete nephrocyte dysfunction by day 28, FRUMS clearance defects, and partial rescue with tubule-specific Parkin re-expression. These findings clearly separate mitochondrial quality control defects from the lysosomal axis of Gba1b. However, the mechanistic contrast remains incomplete. Many of the redox and peroxisomal assays are only presented for Gba1b. Including matched readouts across both models (e.g., lipid peroxidation, peroxisome density/function, Grx1-roGFP2 compartmental redox status) would make the comparison more balanced and strengthen the conclusion that these represent distinct pathogenic routes.

      (6) Rapamycin treatment is shown to rescue several renal phenotypes in Gba1b mutants (water retention, RSC proliferation, FRUMS clearance, lipid peroxidation) but not in Parkin, and mitophagy is not restored in Gba1b. This provides strong evidence that the two models engage distinct pathogenic pathways. However, the therapeutic interpretation feels somewhat overstated. Human relevance should be framed more cautiously, and the conclusions would be stronger with mechanistic markers of autophagy (e.g., Atg8a, Ref(2)p flux in Malpighian tubules) or with experiments varying dose, timing, and duration (short-course vs chronic rapamycin).

      (7) Several systemic readouts used to support renal dysfunction (FRUMS clearance, salt stress survival) could also be influenced by general organismal frailty. To ensure these phenotypes are kidney-intrinsic, it would be helpful to include controls such as tissue-specific genetic rescue in Malpighian tubules or nephrocytes, or timing rescue interventions before overt systemic decline. This would strengthen the causal link between renal impairment and the observed systemic phenotypes.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors used weighted ensemble enhanced sampling molecular dynamics (MD) to test the hypothesis that a double mutant of Abl favors the DFG-in state relative to the WT and therefore causes the drug resistance to imatinib.

      Strengths:

      The authors employed three novel progress coordinates to sample the DFG flip of ABl. The hypothesis regarding the double mutant's drug resistance is novel.

      Weaknesses:

      The study contains many uncertain aspects. As such, major conclusions do not appear to be supported.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed some of my concerns, but these concerns remain to be addressed:

      (1) Definition of the DFG conformation (in vs out). The authors specified their definition in the revised manuscript, but it has not been validated for a large number of kinases to distinguish between the two states. Thus, I recommend that the authors calculate the FES using another definition (see Tsai et al, JACS 2019, 141, 15092−15101) to confirm their findings. This FES can be included in the SI.

      (2) There is no comparison to previous computational work. I would like to see a comparison between the authors' finding of the DFG-in to DFG-out transition and that described in Tsai et al, JACS 2019, 141, 15092−15101.

      (3) My previous comment: "The study is not very rigorous. The major conclusions do not appear to be supported. The claim that it is the first unbiased simulation to observe DFG flip is not true. For example, Hanson, Chodera et al (Cell Chem Biol 2019), Paul, Roux et al (JCTC 2020), and Tsai, Shen et al (JACS 2019) have also observed the DFG flip." has not been adequately addressed.

      The newly added paragraph clearly does not address my original comment.

      "Through our work, we have simulated an ensemble of DFG flip pathways in a wild-type kinase and its variants with atomistic resolution and without the use of biasing forces, also reporting the effects of inhibitor-resistant mutations in the broader context of kinase inactivation likelihood with such level of detail. "

      (4) My previous comment, "Setting the DFG-Asp to the protonated state is not justified, because in the DFG-in state, the DFG-Asp is clearly deprotonated." has not been addressed.

      In the authors's response stated:

      According to previous publications, DFG-Asp is frequently protonated in the DFG-in state of Abl1 kinase. For instance, as quoted from Hanson, Chodera, et al., Cell Chem Bio (2019), "Consistent with previous simulations on the DFG-Asp-out/in interconversion of Abl kinase we only observe the DFG flip with protonated Asp747 ( Shan et al., 2009 ). We showed previously that the pKa for the DFG-Asp in Abl is elevated at 6.5."

      Since the pKa of DFG-Asp is 6.5, it should be deprotonated at the physiological pH 7.5. Thus, the fact that the authors used protonated DFG-Asp contradicts this. I am not requesting the authors to redo the entire simulations, but they need to acknowledge this discrepancy and add a brief discussion. See a constant pH study that demonstrates the protonation state population shift for DFG-Asp as the DFG transitions from in to out state (see Tsai et al, JACS 2019, 141, 15092−15101).

    2. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors used weighted ensemble enhanced sampling molecular dynamics (MD) to test the hypothesis that a double mutant of Abl favors the DFG-in state relative to the WT and therefore causes the drug resistance to imatinib.

      Strengths:

      The authors employed the state-of-the-art weighted ensemble MD simulations with three novel progress coordinates to explore the conformational changes the DFG motif of Abl kinase. The hypothesis regarding the double mutant's drug resistance is novel.

      Weaknesses:

      The study contains many uncertain aspects. A major revision is needed to strengthen the support for the conclusions.

      (1) Specifically, the authors need to define the DFG conformation using criteria accepted in the field, for example, see https://klifs.net/index.php.

      (2) Convergence needs to be demonstrated for estimating the population difference between different conformational states.

      (3) The DFG flip needs to be sampled several times to establish free energy difference.

      (4) The free energy plots do not appear to show an intermediate state as claimed.

      (5) The trajectory length of 7 ns in both Figure 2 and Figure 4 needs to be verified, as it is extremely short for a DFG flip that has a high free energy barrier.

      (6) The free energy scale (100 kT) appears to be one order of magnitude too large.

      (7) Setting the DFG-Asp to the protonated state is not justified, because in the DFG-in state, the DFG-Asp is clearly deprotonated.

      (8) Finally, the authors should discuss their work in the context of the enormous progress made in theoretical studies and mechanistic understanding of the conformational landscape of protein kinases in the last two decades, particularly with regard to the DFG flip.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Domínguez-Rodrigo and colleagues make a moderately convincing case for habitual elephant butchery by Early Pleistocene hominins at Olduvai Gorge (Tanzania), ca. 1.8-1.7 million years ago. They present this at the site scale (the EAK locality, which they excavated), as well as across the penecontemporaneous landscape, analyzing a series of findspots that contain stone tools and large-mammal bones. The latter are primarily elephants, but giraffids and bovids were also butchered in a few localities. The authors claim that this is the earliest well-documented evidence for elephant butchery; doing so requires debunking other purported cases of elephant butchery in the literature, or in one case, reinterpreting elephant bone manipulation as being nutritional (fracturing to obtain marrow) rather than technological (to make bone tools). The authors' critical discussion of these cases may not be consensual, but it surely advances the scientific discourse. The authors conclude by suggesting that an evolutionary threshold was achieved at ca. 1.8 ma, whereby regular elephant consumption rich in fats and perhaps food surplus, more advanced extractive technology (the Acheulian toolkit), and larger human group size had coincided.

      The fieldwork and spatial statistics methods are presented in detail and are solid and helpful, especially the excellent description (all too rare in zooarchaeology papers) of bone conservation and preservation procedures. However, the methods of the zooarchaeological and taphonomic analysis - the core of the study - are peculiarly missing. Some of these are explained along the manuscript, but not in a standard Methods paragraph with suitable references and an explicit account of how the authors recorded bone-surface modifications and the mode of bone fragmentation. This seems more of a technical omission that can be easily fixed than a true shortcoming of the study. The results are detailed and clearly presented.

      By and large, the authors achieved their aims, showcasing recurring elephant butchery in 1.8-1.7 million-year-old archaeological contexts. Nevertheless, some ambiguity surrounds the evolutionary significance part. The authors emphasize the temporal and spatial correlation of (1) elephant butchery, (2) Acheulian toolkits, and (3) larger sites, but do not actually discuss how these elements may be causally related. Is it not possible that larger group size or the adoption of Acheulian technology have nothing to do with megafaunal exploitation? Alternative hypotheses exist, and at least, the authors should try to defend the causation, not just put forward the correlation. The only exception is briefly mentioning food surplus as a "significant advantage", but how exactly, in the absence of food-preservation technologies? Moreover, in a landscape full of aggressive scavengers, such excess carcass parts may become a death trap for hominins, not an advantage. I do think that demonstrating habitual butchery bears very significant implications for human evolution, but more effort should be invested in explaining how this might have worked.

      Overall, this is an interesting manuscript of broad interest that presents original data and interpretations from the Early Pleistocene archaeology of Olduvai Gorge. These observations and the authors' critical review of previously published evidence are an important contribution that will form the basis for building models of Early Pleistocene hominin adaptation.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript investigates mutations and expression patterns of zinc finger proteins in Kenyan breast cancer patients.

      Strengths:

      Whole-exome sequencing and RNA-seq were performed on 23 breast cancer samples alongside matched normal tissues in Kenyan breast cancer patients. The authors identified mutations in ZNF217, ZNF703, and ZNF750.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Research scope:

      The results primarily focus on mutations in ZNF217, ZNF703, and ZNF750, with limited correlation analyses between mutations and gene expression. The rationale for focusing only on these genes is unclear. Given the availability of large breast cancer cohorts such as TCGA and METABRIC, the authors should compare their mutation profiles with these datasets. Beyond European and U.S. cohorts, sequencing data from multiple countries, including a recent Nigerian breast cancer study (doi: 10.1038/s41467-021-27079-w), should also be considered. Since whole-exome sequencing was performed, it is unclear why only four genes were highlighted and why comparisons to previous literature were not included.

      (2) Language and Style Issues:

      Several statements read somewhat 'unnaturally', and I strongly recommend proofreading.

      (3) Methods and Data Analysis Details:

      The methods section is vague, with general descriptions rather than specific details of data processing and analysis. The authors should provide:

      (a) Parameters used for trimming, mapping, and variant calling (rather than referencing another paper such as Tang et al. 2023).

      (b) Statistical methods for somatic mutation/SNP detection.

      (c) Details of RNA purification and RNA-seq library preparation.

      Without these details, the reproducibility of the study is limited.

      (4) Data Reporting:

      This study has the potential to provide a valuable resource for the field. However, data-sharing plans are unclear. The authors should:

      (a) deposit sequencing data in a public repository.

      (b) provide supplementary tables listing all detected mutations and all differentially expressed genes (DEGs).

      (c) clarify whether raw or adjusted p-values were used for DEG analysis.

      (d) perform DEG analyses stratified by breast cancer subtypes, since differential expression was observed by HER2 status, and some zinc finger proteins are known to be enriched in luminal subtypes.

      (5) Mutation Analysis:

      Visualizations of mutation distribution across protein domains would greatly strengthen interpretation. Comparing mutation distribution and frequency with published datasets would also contextualize the findings.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Using single-cell RNA sequencing and bioinformatics approaches, the authors aimed to discover if and how cells carrying mutations common to clonal haematopoiesis were more adherent to endothelial cells.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors used matched blood and adipose tissue samples from the same patients (with the exception of the control people) to conduct their analysis.

      (2) The use of bioinformatics and in-silico approaches helped to fast-track their aims to test specific inhibitors in their model cell adhesion system.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The analysis was done on pooled cells; it would have been interesting to know if the same adhesion gene signatures were observed across the donors.

      (2) The adhesion assays were conducted under static conditions; shear flow adhesion experiments would have been better. Mixed cultures using cell trackers would have been even better.

      (3) In the intervention studies, the authors should have directly targeted the monocytes (not the endothelial cells) and should have also included DNMT3A mutant/KO cells to show specificity to TET2 CHIP.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study by Castro et al. presents an interesting blueprint for designing influenza immunogens that can induce cross-group influenza-specific antibodies. The authors used a structure-based design to transplant receptor binding site (RBS) residues from H5 and H3 into an H1 scaffold. In addition, they assembled the transplanted structures as heterotrimers. They characterized the constructs structurally and used them to immunize mice to define ELISA binding and neutralizing antibodies (Abs) to different influenza strains.

      Strengths and Weaknesses:

      The authors succeeded in generating the different, correctly folded immunogens. The heterotrimers would benefit from more characterization: it remains unclear whether they are even formed or whether the sample is a mix of homotrimers and whether some combinations are more likely than others. While some of these questions are complex to answer, authors should at least confirm the presence of heterotrimers.

      While all constructs were able to elicit H1-specific Abs, different immunogens displayed differential ability to induce a response to the transplanted epitope. While H3-transplant resulted in H3-specific Abs, this was not the case for H5 or the heterotrimers. The importance of the finding is that authors are able to elicit polyclonal Abs neutralizing group 1 and group 2 influenza viruses with a single immunogen. A more in-depth discussion on why the H3-transplant but not the H5-transplant resulted in those specific Abs could be beneficial.

      Overall, the work is a proof of concept that H1-H3 chimeric proteins can be produced and an important first step towards computational vaccines, inducing Abs to multiple groups.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is a careful and comprehensive study demonstrating that effector-dependent conformational switching of the MT lattice from compacted to expanded deploys the alpha tubulin C-terminal tails so as to enhance their ability to bind interactors.

      Strengths:

      The authors use 3 different sensors for the exposure of the alpha CTTs. They show that all 3 sensors report exposure of the alpha CTTs when the lattice is expanded by GMPCPP, or KIF1C, or a hydrolysis-deficient tubulin. They demonstrate that expansion-dependent exposure of the alpha CTTs works in tissue culture cells as well as in vitro.

      Weaknesses:

      There is no information on the status of the beta tubulin CTTs. The study is done with mixed isotype microtubules, both in cells and in vitro. It remains unclear whether all the alpha tubulins in a mixed isotype microtubule lattice behave equivalently, or whether the effect is tubulin isotype-dependent. It remains unclear whether local binding of effectors can locally expand the lattice and locally expose the alpha CTTs.

      Appraisal:

      The authors have gone to considerable lengths to test their hypothesis that microtubule expansion favours deployment of the alpha tubulin C-terminal tail, allowing its interactors, including detyrosinase enzymes, to bind. There is a real prospect that this will change thinking in the field. One very interesting possibility, touched on by the authors, is that the requirement for MAP7 to engage kinesin with the MT might include a direct effect of MAP7 on lattice expansion.

      Impact:

      The possibility that the interactions of MAPS and motors with a particular MT or region feed forward to determine its future interaction patterns is made much more real. Genuinely exciting.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The remodeling of macromolecular substrates by AAA+ proteins is an essential aspect of life at the molecular scale, and understanding conserved and divergent features of substrate recognition across the AAA+ protein family remains an ongoing area of research. AAA+ proteins are highly modular and typically combine N-terminal recognition domain(s) with ATPase domain(s) to recognize and unfold some macromolecular target, such as dsDNA or protein substrates. This can be coupled to activity by additional C-terminal domains that further modify the substrate, such as a protease domain that hydrolyzes the extended, unstructured protein chain that emerges from the ATPase domain during substrate processing.

      This work focuses on one such AAA+ protease, LONP1. LONP1 is an essential AAA+ protein involved in mitochondrial proteostasis, and disruption of its function in vivo has serious developmental consequences. This work explores the processing of two new mitochondrial protein substrates (StAR, TFAM) by LONP1 and presents new conformational states of LONP1 with closed configurations and no substrate threaded through the ATPase pores. The quality of the reconstructions and models is very good. Critically, one of these states (LONP1C3) has a completely occluded ATPase pore from the N-terminal side of the ATPase ring, where three of the six NTDs/CCDs interact tightly to form a C3-symmetric substructure preventing substrate ingress. The authors note several key interactions between amino acids forming these substructures, and perform ATPase assays on mutant LONP1 proteins to determine hydrolysis rates in the absence or presence of substrate. These patterns are recapitulated in casein disassembly assays as well. Based on these results, the authors note that the mutants have differential effects depending on the "foldedness" of the substrate, and surmise that disruption of the C3-symmetric substructure from the EM experiments is responsible for these effects - an intriguing idea. In addition to the C3 state, the authors observe additional intermediates which they place on the same conformational coordinate. One such structure is the LONP1C2 state with two splits, hinting at a conformational transition from LONP1C3 to the closed/active state.

      Taken together, these results form the basis of an interesting story. However, I feel that more experimentation and analysis are needed to address several key points, or that the conclusions should be toned down. First and foremost, I note that while the hypothesis that the LONP1C3 state is a critical step in recognizing substrate "foldedness" is an interesting one, the claim is made solely on the basis of biochemical experiments with mutant LONP1, and that there is no substrate density associated with LONP1C3. In the absence of substrate density and/or structural data for the mutants, this seems like a very strong claim. More generally, the manuscript invokes the conformational landscape of LONP1C3 in multiple instances, but no such landscape is presented to show how LONP1C3 and the other states are quantitatively linked. Finally, I note the prevalence of ADP-only active sites in these intermediates, and am concerned that this might be related to the depletion of ATP under the on-grid reaction conditions. The inclusion of an ATP regeneration system may be a useful way to ensure that ATP/ADP concentrations are more physiological and that excessive ADP will not bias the conformations of the ring systems.

      In summary, I believe this manuscript is exciting but would benefit from a paring back of claims, or the inclusion of some additional data to fill in some of the conceptual gaps outlined above.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work provides evidence that slender T. brucei can initiate and complete cyclical development in Glossina morsitans without GlcNAc supplementation, in both sexes, and importantly in non-teneral flies, including salivary-gland infections.

      Comparative transcriptomics show early divergence between slender- and stumpy-initiated differentiation (distinct GO enrichments), with convergence by ~72 h, supporting an alternative pathway into the procyclic differentiation program.

      The work addresses key methodological criticisms of earlier studies and supports the hypothesis that slender forms may contribute to transmission at low parasitaemia.

      Strengths:

      (1) Directly tackles prior concerns (no GlcNAc, both sexes, non-teneral flies) with positive infections through to the salivary glands.

      (2) Transcriptomic time course adds some mechanistic depth.

      (3) Clear relevance to the "transmission paradox"; advances an important debate in the field.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Discrepancy with Ngoune et al. (2025) remains unresolved; no head-to-head control for colony/blood source or microbiome differences that could influence vector competence.

      (2) Lacks in vivo feeding validation (e.g., infecting flies directly on parasitaemic mice) to strengthen ecological relevance.

      (3) Mechanistic inferences are largely correlative (although not requested, there is no functional validation of genes or pathways emerging from the transcriptomics).

      (4) Reliance on a single parasite clone (AnTat 1.1) and one vector species limits external validity.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This is a re-review following an author revision. I will go point-by-point in response to my original critiques and the authors' responses. I appreciate the authors taking the time to thoughtfully respond to the reviewer critiques.

      Query 1. Based on the authors' description of their contribution to the algorithm design, it sounds like a hyperparameter search wrapped around existing software tools. I think that the use of their own language to describe these modules is confusing to potential users as well as unintentionally hides the contributions of the original LigBuilder developers. The authors should just explain the protocol plainly using language that refers specifically to the established software tools. Whether they use LigBuilder or something else, at the end of the day the description is a protocol for a specific use of an existing software rather than the creation of a new toolkit.

      Query 2. I see. Correct me if I am mistaken, but it seems as though the authors are proposing using the Authenticator to identify the best distributions of compounds based on an in silico oracle (in this case, Vina score), and train to discriminate them. This is similar to training QSAR models to predict docking scores, such as in the manuscript I shared during the first round of review. In principle, one could perform this in successive rounds to create molecules that are increasingly composed of features that yield higher docking scores. This is an established idea that the authors demonstrate in a narrow context, but it also raises concern that one is just enriching for compounds with e.g., an abundance of hydrogen bond donors and acceptors. Regarding points (4) and (5), it is unclear to me how the authors perform train/test splits on unlabeled data with supervised machine learning approaches in this setting. This seems akin to a Y-scramble sanity check. Finally, regarding the discussion on the use of experimental data or FEP calculations for the determination of HABs and LABs, I appreciate the authors' point; however, the concern here is that in the absence of any true oracle the models will just learn to identify and/or generate compounds that exploit limitations of docking scores. Again, please correct me if I am mistaken. It is unclear to me how this advances previous literature in CADD outside of the specific context of incorporating some ideas into a GPCR-Gprotein framework.

      Query 3. The authors mention that the hyperparameters for the ML models are just the package defaults in the absence of specification by the user. I would be helpful to know specifically what the the hyperparameters were for the benchmarks in this study; however, I think a deeper concern is still that these models are almost certainly far overparameterized given the limited training data used for the models. It is unclear why the authors did not just build a random forest classifier to discriminate their HABs and LABs using ligand- or protein-ligand interaction fingerprints or related ideas.

      Query 4. It is good, and expected, that increasing the fraction of the training set size in a random split validation all the way to 100% would allow the model to perfectly discriminate HABs and LABs. This does not demonstrate that the model has significant enrichment in prospective screening, particularly compared to simpler methods. The concern remains that these models are overparameterized and insufficiently validated. The authors did not perform any scaffold splits or other out-of-distribution analysis.

      Query 5. The authors contend that Gcoupler uniquely enables training models when data is scarce and ultra-large screening libraries are unavailable. Today, it is rather straightforward to dock a minimum of thousands of compounds. Using tools such as QuickVina2-GPU (https://pubs.acs.org/doi/10.1021/acs.jcim.2c01504), it is possible to quite readily dock millions in a day with a single GPU and obtain the AutoDock Vina score. GPU-acclerated Vina has been combined with cavity detection tools likely multiple times, including here (https://arxiv.org/abs/2506.20043). There are multiple cavity detection tools, including the ones the authors use in their protocol.

      Query 6. The authors contend that the simulations are converged, but they elected not to demonstrate stability in the predicting MM/GBSA binding energies with block averaging across the trajectory. This could have been done through the existing trajectories without additional simulation.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The authors have implemented several clarifications in the text and improved the connection between their findings and previous work. As stated in my initial review, I had no major criticisms of the previous version of the manuscript, and I continue to consider this a solid and well-written study. However, the revised manuscript still largely reiterates existing findings and does not offer novel conceptual or experimental advances. It supports previous conclusions suggesting a likely conserved sex determination locus in aculeate hymenopterans, but does so without functional validation (i.e., via experimental manipulation) of the candidate locus in O. biroi. I also wish to clarify that I did not intend to imply that functional assessments in the Pan et al. study were conducted in more than one focal species; my previous review explicitly states that the locus's functional role was validated in the Argentine ant.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Subhramanian et al. carefully examined how microglia adapt their surveillance strategies during chronic neurodegeneration, specifically in prion-infected mice. The authors used ex vivo time-lapse imaging and in vitro strategies, finding that reactive microglia exhibit a highly mobile, "kiss-and-ride" behavior, which contrasts with the more static surveillance typically observed in homeostatic microglia. The manuscript provides fundamental mechanistic insights into the dynamics of microglia-neuron interactions, implicates P2Y6 signaling in regulating mobility, and suggests that intrinsic reprogramming of microglia might underlie this behavior. The conclusions are therefore compelling.

      Strengths:

      (1) The novelty of the study is high, in particular, the demonstration that microglia lose territorial confinement and dynamically migrate from neuron to neuron under chronic neurodegeneration.

      (2) The possible implications of a stimulus-independent high mobility in reactive microglia are particularly striking. Although this is not fully explored (see comments below).

      (3) The use of time-lapse imaging in organotypic slices rather than overexpression models provided a more physiological approach.

      (4) Microglia-neuron interactions in neurodegeneration have broad implications for understanding the progression of other diseases that are associated with chronic inflammation, such as Alzheimer's and Parkinson's.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The Cx3cr1/EGFP line labels all myeloid cells, which makes it difficult to conclude that all observed behaviors are attributable to microglia rather than infiltrating macrophages. The authors refer to this and include it as a limitation. Nonetheless, complementary confirmation by additional microglia markers would strengthen their claims.

      (2) Although the authors elegantly describe dynamic surveillance and envelopment hypothesis, it is unclear what the role of this phenotype is for disease progression, i.e., functional consequences. For example, are the neurons that undergo sustained envelopment more likely to degenerate?

      (3) Moreover, although the increase in mobility is a relevant finding, it would be interesting for the authors to further comment on what the molecular trigger(s) is/are that might promote this increase. These adaptations, which are at least long-lasting, confer apparent mobility in the absence of external stimuli.

      (4) The authors performed, as far as I could understand, the experiments in cortical brain regions. There is no clear rationale for this in the manuscript, nor is it clear whether the mobility is specific to a particular brain region. This is particularly important, as microglia reactivity varies greatly depending on the brain region.

      (5) It would be relevant information to have an analysis of the percentage of cells in normal, sub-clinical, early clinical, and advanced stages that became mobile. Without this information, the speed/distance alone can have different interpretations.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors developed a new phenological lag metric and applied this analytical framework to a global dataset to synthesize shifts in spring phenology and assess how abiotic constraints influence spring phenology.

      Strengths:

      The dataset developed in this study is extensive, and the phenological lag metric is valuable.

      Weaknesses:

      The stability of the method used to calculate forcing requirements needs improvement, for example by including different base temperature thresholds. In addition, the visualization of the results should be improved.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In the current article, Octavia Soegyono and colleagues study "The influence of nucleus accumbens shell D1 and D2 neurons on outcome-specific Pavlovian instrumental transfer", building on extensive findings from the same lab. While there is a consensus about the specific involvement of the Shell part of the Nucleus Accumbens (NAc) in specific stimulus-based actions in choice settings (and not in General Pavlovian instrumental transfer - gPIT, as opposed to the Core part of the NAc), mechanisms at the cellular and circuitry levels remain to be explored. In the present work, using sophisticated methods (rat Cre-transgenic lines from both sexes, optogenetics and the well-established behavioral paradigm outcome-specific PIT - sPIT), Octavia Soegyono and colleagues decipher the differential contribution of dopamine receptors D1 and D2 expressing-spiny projection neurons (SPNs).

      After validating the viral strategy and the specificity of the targeting (immunochemistry and electrophysiology), the authors demonstrate that while both NAc Shell D1- and D2-SPNs participate in mediating sPIT, NAc Shell D1-SPNs projections to the Ventral Pallidum (VP, previously demonstrated as crucial for sPIT), but not D2-SPNs, mediates sPIT. They also show that these effects were specific to stimulus-based actions, as value-based choices were left intact in all manipulations.

      This is a well-designed study and the results are well supported by the experimental evidence. The paper is extremely pleasant to read and add to the current literature.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The paper reports some interesting patterns in epistasis in a recently published large fitness landscape dataset. The results may have implications for our understanding of fitness landscapes and protein evolution. However, this version of the paper remains fairly descriptive and has significant deficiencies in clarity and rigor.

      The authors have addressed some of my criticisms (e.g., I appreciate the additional analysis of synonymous mutations, and a more rigorous approach to calling fitness peaks), but many of the issues raised in my first round of review remain in the current version. Frankly, I am quite disappointed that the authors did not address my comments point by point, which is the norm. The remaining (and some new) issues are below.

      (1a) (Modified from first round) I previously suggested to dissect what appears to be three different patterns of epistasis: "strong" and "weak" global epistasis and what one can could "purely idiosyncratic", i.e., not dependent on background fitness. The authors attempted to address this, but I don't think what they have done is sufficient. They make a statement "The lethal mutations have a slope smaller than -0.7 and average slope of -0.98. The remaining mutations all have a slope greater than -0.56" (LL 274-276)", but there is no evidence provided to support this claim. This is a strong and I think interesting statement (btw, how is "lethal" defined?) and warrants a dedicated figure. This statement suggests that the mixed patterns shown in Figure 5 can actually be meaningfully separated. Why don't the authors show this? Instead, they still claim "overall, global epistasis is not very strong on the folA landscape" (LL. 273-274). I maintain that this claim does not quite capture the observations.

      Later in the text there is a whole section called "Only a small fraction of mutations exhibit strong global epistasis", which also seems related to this issue. First, I don't follow the logic here. Why is this section separate from this initial discussion? Second, here the authors claim "only a small subset of mutations exhibits strong global epistasis (R^2 > 0.5)" and then "This sharp contrast suggests a binary behavior of mutations: they either exhibit strong global epistasis (R2 > 0.5), or not (R2 < 0.5)." But this R^2 threshold seems arbitrary, and I don't see any statistical support for this binary nature.

      (1b) (Verbatim from first round) Another rather remarkable feature of this plot is that the slopes of the strong global epistasis patterns sem to be very similar across mutations. Is this the case? Is there anything special about this slope? For example, does this slope simply reflect the fact that a given mutation becomes essentially lethal (i.e., produces the same minimal fitness) in a certain set of background genotypes?

      (1c) (Verbatim from first round) Finally, how consistent are these patterns with some null expectations? Specifically, would one expect the same distribution of global epistasis slopes on an uncorrelated landscape? Are the pivot points unusually clustered relative to an expectation on an uncorrelated landscape?

      (1d) (Verbatim from first round) The shapes of the DFE shown in Figure 7 are also quite interesting, particularly the bimodal nature of the DFE in high-fitness (HF) backgrounds. I think this bimodalilty must be a reflection of clustering of mutation-background combinations mentioned above. I think the authors ought to draw this connection explicitly. Do all HF backgrounds have a bimodal DFE? What mutations occupy the "moving" peak?

      (1e) (Modified from first round). I still don't understand why there are qualitative differences in the shape of the DFE between functional and non-functional backgrounds (Figure 8B,C). Why is the transition between bimodal DFE in Figure 8B and unimodal DFE in Figure 8C is so abrupt? Perhaps the authors can plot the DFEs for all backgrounds on the same plot and just draw a line that separates functional and non-functional backgrounds so that the reader can better see whether DFE shape changes gradually or abruptly.

      (1f) (Modified from first round) I am now more convinced that synonymous mutations alter epistasis and behave differently than non-synonymous mutations, but I still have some questions. (i) I would have liked a side-by-side comparison of synonymous and non-synonymous mutations, both in terms of their effects on fitness and on epistasis.<br /> (ii) The authors claim (LL 278-286) that "synonymous substitutions tend to follow two recurring behaviors" but this is not shown. To demonstrate this, the authors ought to plot (for example) the distribution of slopes of regression lines. Is this distribution actually bimodal? (iii) Later in the same paragraph the authors say "synonymous changes do not exhibit very strong background fitness-dependence". I don't see how this follows from the previous discussion.

      (2) The authors claim to have improved statistical rigor of their analysis, but the Methods section is really thin and inadequate for understanding how the statistical analyses were done.

      (3) In general, I notice a regrettable lack of attention to detail in the text, which makes me worried about a similar problem in the actual data analysis. Here are a few examples. (i) Throughout the text, the authors now refer to functional and non-functional genotypes, but several figures and captions retained the old HF and LF designations. (ii) Figure 7 is called Figure 8. (iii) Figure 3B is not discussed, though it logically precedes Figure 3A and 3C. (iv) Many of my comments, especially minor, were not addressed at all.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Dendrotweaks provides to its users a solid tool to implement, visualize, tune, validate, understand, and reduce single-neuron models that incorporate complex dendritic arbors with differential distribution of biophysical mechanisms. The visualization of dendritic segments and biophysical mechanisms therein provide users an intuitive way to understand and appreciate dendritic physiology.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors conducted a human neuroimaging study investigating the role of context in the representation of fear associations when the contingencies between a conditioned stimulus and shock unconditioned stimulus switches between contexts. The novelty of the analysis centered on neural pattern similarity to derive a measure of context and cue stability and generalization across different regions of the brain. Given the complexity and nuance of the results, it is kind of difficult to provide a concise summary. But during fear and reversal, there was cue generalization (between current CS+ cues) in the canonical fear network, and "item stability" for cues that changed their association with the shock in the IFG and precuneus. Reinstatement was quantified as pattern similarity for items or sets of cues from the earlier phases to the test phases, and they found different patterns in the IFG and dmPFC. A similar analytical strategy was applied to contexts.

      Strengths:

      Overall, I found this to be a novel use of MVPA to study the role of context in reversal/extinction of human fear conditioning that yielded interesting results. The paper was overall well-written, with a strong introduction and fairly detailed methods and results. The lack of any univariate contrast results from the test phases was used as motivation for the neural pattern similarity approach, which I appreciated as a reader.

      I have no additional or new comments. The authors adequately addressed my major comments and concerns.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Henning et al. examine the impact of GABAergic feedback inhibition on the motion-sensitive pathway of flies. Based on a previous behavioral screen, the authors determined that C2 and C3, two GABAergic inhibitory feedback neurons in the optic lobes of the fly, are required for the optomotor response. Through a series of calcium imaging and disruption experiments, connectomics analysis, and follow-up behavioral assays, the authors concluded that C2 and C3 play a role in temporally sharpening visual motion responses. While this study employs a comprehensive array of experimental approaches, I have some reservations about the interpretation of the results in their current form. I strongly encourage the authors to provide additional data to solidify their conclusions. This is particularly relevant in determining whether this is a general phenomenon affecting vision or a specific effect on motion vision. Knowing this is also important for any speculation on the mechanisms of the observed temporal deficiencies.

      Strengths:

      This study uses a variety of experiments to provide a functional, anatomical, and behavioral description of the role of GABAergic inhibition in the visual system. This comprehensive data is relevant for anyone interested in understanding the intricacies of visual processing in the fly.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The most fundamental criticism of this study is that the authors present a skewed view of the motion vision pathway in their results. While this issue is discussed, it is important to demonstrate that there are no temporal deficiencies in the lamina, which could be the case since C2 and C3, as noted in the connectomics analysis, project strongly to laminar interneurons. If the input dynamics are indeed disrupted, then the disruption seen in the motion vision pathway would reflect disruptions in temporal processing in general and suggest that these deficiencies are inherited downstream. A simple experiment could test this. Block C2, C3, and both together using Kir2.1 and Shibire independently, then record the ERG. Alternatively, one could image any other downstream neuron from the lamina that does not receive C2 or C3 input.

      (2) Figure 6c. More analysis is required here, since the authors claim to have found a loss in inhibition (ND). However, the difference in excitation appears similar, at least in absolute magnitude (see panel 6c), for PD direction for the T4 C2 and C3 blocks. Also, I predict that C2 & C3 block statistically different from C3 only, why? In any case, it would be good to discuss the clear trend in the PD direction by showing the distribution of responses as violin plots to better understand the data. It would also be good to have some raw traces to be able to see the differences more clearly, not only polar plots and averages.

      (3) The behavioral experiments are done with a different disruptor than the physiological ones. One blocks chemical synapses, the other shunts the cells. While one would expect similar results in both, this is not a given. It would be great if the authors could test the behavioral experiments with Kir2.1, too.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This work by Reitz, Z. L. et al. developed an automated tool for high-throughput identification of microbial metallophore biosynthetic gene clusters (BGCs) by integrating knowledge of chelating moiety diversity and transporter gene families. The study aimed to create a comprehensive detection system combining chelator-based and transporter-based identification strategies, validate the tool through large-scale genomic mining, and investigate the evolutionary history of metallophore biosynthesis across bacteria.

      Major strengths include providing the first automated, high-throughput tool for metallophore BGC identification, representing a significant advancement over manual curation approaches. The ensemble strategy effectively combines complementary detection methods, and experimental validation using HPLC-HRMS strengthens confidence in computational predictions. The work pioneers a global analysis of metallophore diversity across the bacterial kingdom and provides a valuable dataset for future computational modeling.

      Some limitations merit consideration. First, ground truth datasets derived from manual curation may introduce selection bias toward well-characterized systems, potentially affecting performance assessment accuracy. Second, the model's dependence on known chelating moieties and transporter families constrains its ability to detect novel metallophore architectures, limiting discovery potential in metagenomic datasets. Third, while the proposed evolutionary hypothesis is internally consistent, it lacks direct validation and remains speculative without additional phylogenetic studies.

      The authors successfully achieved their stated objectives. The tool demonstrates robust performance metrics and practical utility through large-scale application to representative genomes. Results strongly support their conclusions through rigorous validation, including experimental confirmation of predicted metallophores via HPLC-HRMS analysis.

      The work provides a significant and immediate impact by enabling the transition from labor-intensive manual approaches to automated screening. The comprehensive phylogenetic framework advances understanding of bacterial metal acquisition evolution, informing future studies on microbial metal homeostasis. Community utility is substantial, since the tool and accompanying dataset create essential resources for comparative genomics, algorithm development, and targeted experimental validation of novel metallophores.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study explores the use of Transport-based morphometry (TBM) to predict hematoma expansion and growth 24 hours post-event, leveraging Non-Contrast Computed Tomography (NCCT) scans combined with clinical and location-based information. The research holds significant clinical potential, as it could enable early intervention for patients at high risk of hematoma expansion, thereby improving outcomes. The study is well-structured, with detailed methodological descriptions and a clear presentation of results. However, the practical utility of the predictive tool requires further validation, as the current findings are based on retrospective data. Additionally, the impact of this tool on clinical decision-making and patient outcomes needs to be further investigated.

      Strengths

      (1) Clinical Relevance: The study addresses a critical need in clinical practice by providing a tool that could enhance diagnostic accuracy and guide early interventions, potentially improving patient outcomes.

      (2) Feature Visualization: The visualization and interpretation of features associated with hematoma expansion risk are highly valuable for clinicians, aiding in the understanding of model-derived insights and facilitating clinical application.

      (3) Methodological Rigor: The study provides a thorough description of methods, results, and discussions, ensuring transparency and reproducibility.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed my concerns.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Donofrio et al. investigated cerebellar Purkinje cell (PC) degeneration during normal aging using both mouse and human samples. They found that PC loss followed a stripe pattern rather than occurring randomly. Although this pattern resembled the pattern of zebrin II expression in the anterior cerebellum, the overall pattern was different from zebrin II expression. Surviving PCs exhibited severe degeneration, including thickened axons, axonal torpedoes and shrunken dendrites. These structural changes were accompanied by functional deficits in motor coordination and tremor. Understanding why certain PC subpopulations are more vulnerable than others may provide insight into regional susceptibility (or resilience) to aging and inform potential therapeutic strategies for age-related neurological disorders. Overall, the findings are novel and significant, supported by compelling evidence from structural and functional analyses. The authors have fully addressed my previous concerns and improved the clarity of their presentation. I believe this work will have a significant impact in the field.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In their paper entitled "Combined transcriptomic, connectivity, and activity profiling of the medial amygdala using highly amplified multiplexed in situ hybridization (hamFISH)" Edwards et al. present a new method designated as hamFISH (highly amplified multiplexed in situ hybridization) that enables sequential detection of {less than or equal to}32 genes using multiplexed branched DNA amplification. As proof-of-principle, the authors apply the new technique - in conjunction with connectivity, and activity profiling - to the medial amygdala (MeA) of the mouse, which is a critical nucleus for innate social and defensive behaviors.

      As mentioned by Edwards et al., hamFISH could prove beneficial as an affordable alternative to other in situ transcriptomic methods, including commercial platforms, that are resource-intensive and require complex analysis pipelines. Thus, the authors envision that the method they present could democratize in situ cell-type identification in individual laboratories.

      The data presented by Edwards et al. is convincing. The authors use the appropriate and validated methodology in line with the current state-of-the-art. The paper makes a strong case for the benefits of hamFISH when combining transcriptomics studies with connectivity tracing and immediate early gene-based activity profiling. Notably, the authors also discuss the caveats and limitations of their study/approach in an open and transparent manner.

      Comments on revisions:

      In their revised paper, Edwards et al. have made an effort to improve manuscript clarity. Revisions made address the non-public "recommendations for the authors." The main criticism that prevents a more enthusiastic overall assessment, i.e., absence of some more in-depth hypothesis-based analysis (though, as originally mentioned, maybe beyond the study's scope), is still valid.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In the current article, Octavia Soegyono and colleagues study "The influence of nucleus accumbens shell D1 and D2 neurons on outcome-specific Pavlovian instrumental transfer", building on extensive findings from the same lab. While there is a consensus about the specific involvement of the Shell part of the Nucleus Accumbens (NAc) in specific stimulus-based actions in choice settings (and not in General Pavlovian instrumental transfer - gPIT, as opposed to the Core part of the NAc), mechanisms at the cellular and circuitry levels remain to be explored. In the present work, using sophisticated methods (rat Cre-transgenic lines from both sexes, optogenetics and the well-established behavioral paradigm outcome-specific PIT - sPIT), Octavia Soegyono and colleagues decipher the differential contribution of dopamine receptors D1 and D2 expressing-spiny projection neurons (SPNs).

      After validating the viral strategy and the specificity of the targeting (immunochemistry and electrophysiology), the authors demonstrate that while both NAc Shell D1- and D2-SPNs participate in mediating sPIT, NAc Shell D1-SPNs projections to the Ventral Pallidum (VP, previously demonstrated as crucial for sPIT), but not D2-SPNs, mediates sPIT. They also show that these effects were specific to stimulus-based actions, as value-based choices were left intact in all manipulations.

      This is a well-designed study and the results are well supported by the experimental evidence. The paper is extremely pleasant to read and add to the current literature.

      Comments on revisions:

      We thank the authors for their detailed responses and for addressing our comments and concerns.

      To further improve consistency and transparency, we kindly request that the authors provide, for Supplemental Figures S1-S4, panels E (raw data for lever presses during the PIT test), the individual data points together with the corresponding statistical analyses in the figure legends.

      In addition, regarding Supplemental Figure S3, panel E, we note the absence of a PIT effect in the eYFP group under the ON condition, which appears to differ from the net response reported in the main Figure 5, panel B. Could the authors clarify this apparent discrepancy?

      We also note a discrepancy between the authors' statement in their response ("40 rats excluded based on post-mortem analyses") and the number of excluded animals reported in the Materials and Methods section, which adds up to 47. We kindly ask the authors to clarify this point for consistency.

      Finally, as a minor point, we suggest indicating the total number of animals used in the study in the Materials and Methods section.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In the current article, Octavia Soegyono and colleagues study "The influence of nucleus accumbens shell D1 and D2 neurons on outcome-specific Pavlovian instrumental transfer", building on extensive findings from the same lab. While there is a consensus about the specific involvement of the Shell part of the Nucleus Accumbens (NAc) in specific stimulus-based actions in choice settings (and not in General Pavlovian instrumental transfer - gPIT, as opposed to the Core part of the NAc), mechanisms at the cellular and circuitry levels remain to be explored. In the present work, using sophisticated methods (rat Cre-transgenic lines from both sexes, optogenetics, and the well-established behavioral paradigm outcome-specific PIT-sPIT), Octavia Soegyono and colleagues decipher the differential contribution of dopamine receptors D1 and D2 expressing spiny projection neurons (SPNs).

      After validating the viral strategy and the specificity of the targeting (immunochemistry and electrophysiology), the authors demonstrate that while both NAc Shell D1- and D2-SPNs participate in mediating sPIT, NAc Shell D1-SPNs projections to the Ventral Pallidum (VP, previously demonstrated as crucial for sPIT), but not D2-SPNs, mediates sPIT. They also show that these effects were specific to stimulus-based actions, as value-based choices were left intact in all manipulations.

      This is a well-designed study, and the results are well supported by the experimental evidence. The paper is extremely pleasant to read and adds to the current literature.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors used high-density probe recordings in the medial prefrontal cortex (PFC) and hippocampus during a rodent spatial memory task to examine functional sub-populations of PFC neurons that are modulated vs. unmodulated by hippocampal sharp-wave ripples (SWRs), an important physiological biomarker that is thought to have role in mediating information transfer across hippocampal-cortical networks for memory processes. SWRs are associated with reactivation of representations of previous experiences, and associated reactivation in hippocampal and cortical regions have been proposed to have a role in memory formation, retrieval, planning, and memory-guided behavior. This study focuses of awake SWRs that are prevalent during immobility periods during pauses in behavior. Previous studies have reported strong modulation of a subset of prefrontal neurons during hippocampal SWRs, with some studies reporting prefrontal reactivation during SWRs that have a role in spatial memory processes. The study seeks to extend these findings by examining activity of SWR-modulated vs. unmodulated neurons across PFC sub-regions, and whether there is a functional distinction between these two kinds of neuronal populations with respect to representing spatial information and supporting memory-guided decision making.

      Strengths:

      The major strength of the study is the use of Neuropixels 1.0 probes to monitor activity throughput the dorsal-ventral extent of the rodent medial prefrontal cortex, permitting an investigation of functional distinction in neuronal populations across PFC sub-regions. They are able to show that SWR-unmodulated neurons, in addition to having stronger spatial tuning than SWR-modulated neurons as previously reported, also show stronger directional selectivity, and theta-cycle skipping properties.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The title and abstract have been updated to reflect the updated interpretation that prefrontal neurons are involved in spatial tuning and signaling upcoming choice independently from hippocampal SWRs, implying the negative that these functions do not happen during SWRs. The evidence presented, however, is lacking and the analyses has key limitations that preclude such a conclusion. First, the fact that prefrontal neurons decode past and future choices independently of the hippocampus, not just hippocampal SWRs, is well-established (for e.g., Baeg et al., 2003, 10.1016/s0896-6273(03)00597-x). Second, the statement that prefrontal neurons are involved in spatial tuning independently from SWRs is inconsistent, since spatial tuning is assessed during exploratory behaviors that are not associated with SWRs. Apart from showing that non-local decoding occurs in prefrontal cortex outside SWR time periods, which is already established, the conclusion needs evidence this does not occur during SWR time periods, which is not presented.

      (2) The results show that SWR-modulated prefrontal neurons are more linked to hippocampal non-local representations, whereas SWR-unmodulated neurons encode upcoming choice independently of SWRs. This is logical, and implies that SWR-modulated prefrontal neurons are involved in non-local decoding during hippocampal non-local representations. This hints at potentially multiple mechanisms, one involving independent prefrontal non-local decoding, and another involving prefrontal and hippocampal non-local decoding.

      (3) The analyses have key limitations. The Methods section notes that decoding was performed in 50ms bins, periods with running speed less than 15cm/s were excluded, then decoded probabilities summed for each maze segment, followed by grouping probabilities together for local and non-local decoding. This implies that decoding segments can span entire maze segments or long time periods - this needs to be clarified and quantified. When examining time-locking of decoding segments to hippocampal SWRs, only non-local segments that occurred within 2 secs of SWRs were used. This raises several concerns. First, prefrontal modulation by hippocampal SWRs lasts primarily <500ms, so a 2sec temporal proximity will lead to non-SWR modulation periods being included in the analyses. In addition, even for decoding segments that may be in close temporal proximity, these can be very long, based on the analyses description. This can lead to spurious results. Second, if only running speeds >15cm/s were included, immobility periods are necessarily being excluded, which is when SWRs occur. So, this analysis cannot be used to investigate decoding during SWRs; rather, a direct approach of extracting prefrontal activity during SWRs and then decoding this activity is required.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study presents a thorough investigation of remote memory deficits in the APP/PS1 mouse model of Alzheimer's disease, highlighting the progressive emergence of these deficits alongside selective hyperexcitability of PV interneurons in the mPFC. By combining viral-TRAP labeling and patch-clamp electrophysiology, the authors demonstrate increased inhibitory input onto engram cells in APP/PS1 mice, despite preserved engram size and reactivation. The revised manuscript successfully addresses earlier concerns by clarifying the relationship between amyloid pathology and circuit dysfunction, acknowledging the correlative nature of the findings, and integrating possible contributions of excitatory remodeling and broader network changes, including oscillatory disruptions. Although the precise mechanistic link between PV hyperexcitability, increased inhibition, and impaired remote memory remains to be empirically established, the study convincingly argues for inhibitory microcircuit alterations as an early contributor to cognitive decline in AD.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In this paper Chang et al follow up on their lab's previous findings about the secreted protein Shv and its role in activity-induced synaptic remodeling at the fly NMJ. Previously they reported that shv mutants have impaired synaptic plasticity. Normally a high stimulation paradigm should increase bouton size and GluR expression at synapses but this does not happen in shv mutants. The phenotypes relating to activity-dependent plasticity were completely recapitulated when Shv was knocked down only in neurons and could be completely rescued by incubation in exogenously applied Shv protein. The authors also showed that Shv activation of integrin signaling on both the pre- and post-synapse was the molecular mechanism underlying its function in plasticity. Here they extend their study to consider a role of Shv derived from glia in modulating synaptic features at baseline and remodeling conditions. The authors show evidence that Shv is expressed in both neurons and glia. Despite the fact that neuron-specific RNAi knockdown of Shv recapitulated the plasticity phenotypes seen in whole animal mutants, the authors asked whether glial-specific knockdown would have any effects. Surprisingly, knockdown of Shv only in glia also blocked plasticity, just like neuron-specific knockdown, and supporting an important role for glial-derived Shv in plasticity. Unlike neuronal knockdown, though, glial knockdown also caused abnormally high baseline GluR expression. Restoring Shv in ONLY glia in mutant animals is sufficient to completely rescue the plasticity phenotypes and baseline GluR expression, but glial-Shv does not appear to activate integrin signaling which was shown to be the mechanism for neuronally derived Shv to control plasticity. This suggests a different or indirect mechanism of action for glial-derived Shv. This led the authors to hypothesize that glial Shv might work via controlling the levels of neuronal Shv and/or extracellular glutamate. To test these hypotheses, they provide evidence that in the absence of glial Shv, synaptic levels of Shv go up overall, suggesting that glial Shv could somehow have a suppressive effect on release of neuronal Shv. This would indirectly modulate integrin signaling to control plasticity. Using an extracelluar glutamate sensor in presynaptic boutons, they also observe decreased signal (extracellular glutamate) from the sensor in glial Shv KD animals, and increased signal in glial Shv overexpression animals, supporting the hypothesis that glial Shv can regulate glutamate levels somehow. These results establish glia as an important source of Shv in these processes and identify some mechanisms for how this might be accomplished. Several outstanding questions remain-most importantly: how/why do glial-derived and neuronal-derived Shv have different effects when in the same space? No obvious isoform or size differences were found, and the same rescue construct expressed either in neurons or glia could have different effects on integrin activation or glutamate levels. Answering these questions using modified rescue constructs will be an important future direction to understand Shv function specifically and how neurons and glia work together in this context--and potentially many other contexts.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors addressed my and the other reviewers' concerns from the original review adequately and this has strengthened the paper substantially.

      One small omission to correct: In Figures 4 and 6, the graphs in the figures do not have a legend for the colored bars.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this manuscript, Rishiq et al. investigate whether natural killer (NK) cells can interact with Fusobacterium nucleatum and identify the molecular mediators involved in this interaction. The authors propose that the bacterial adhesin RadD may bind to the activating NK cell receptor NKp46 (NCR1 in mice), leading to NK cell activation and tumor control. While the topic is of significant interest and the hypothesis intriguing, the manuscript lacks critical experimental evidence, contains several technical concerns, and requires substantial revisions.

      Major Concerns:

      (1) Lack of Direct Evidence for RadD-NKp46 Interaction

      The central claim that RadD interacts with NKp46 is not formally demonstrated. A direct binding assay (e.g., Biacore, ELISA, or pull-down with purified proteins) is essential to support this assertion. The absence of this fundamental experiment weakens the mechanistic conclusions of the study.

      (2) Figure 2: Binding Specificity and Bacterial Strains

      A CEACAM1-Ig control should be included in all binding experiments to distinguish between specific and non-specific Ig interactions. There is differential Ig binding between strains ATCC 23726 and 10953. The authors should quantify RadD expression in each strain to determine if the difference in binding is due to variation in RadD levels.

      (3) Figure 3: Flow Cytometry Inconsistencies and Missing Controls

      What do the FITC-negative, Ig-negative events represent? The authors should clarify whether these are background signals, bacterial aggregates, or debris.

      Panel B, CEACAM1-Ig binding appears markedly increased compared to WT bacteria. The reason for this enhancement should be discussed-does it reflect upregulation of the bacterial ligand or an artifact of overexpression? Fluorescence compensation should be carefully reviewed for the NKp46/NCR1-Ig binding assays to ensure that the signals are not due to spectral overlap or nonspecific binding. Importantly, binding experiments using the FadI/RadD double knockout strain are missing and should be included. This control is essential.

      In Panel E, the basis for calculating fold-change in MFI is unclear. Please indicate the reference condition to which the change is normalized.

      (4) Figure 4: Binding Inhibition and Receptor Sensitivity

      Panel A lacks representative FACS plots and is currently difficult to interpret. Differences in the sensitivity of human vs. mouse NKp46 to arginine inhibition should be discussed, given species differences in receptor-ligand interactions. What are the inhibition results using F. nucleatum strains deficient in FadI?

      In Panel B, CEACAM1-Ig and RadD-deficient bacteria must be included as negative controls for binding specificity upon anti-NKp46 blocking.

      (5) Figure 5: Functional NK Activation and Tumor Killing

      In Panels B and C, the key control condition (NK cells + anti-NKp46, without bacteria) is missing. This is needed to evaluate if NKp46 recognition is involved in tumor killing. The authors should explicitly test whether pre-incubation of NK cells with bacteria enhances their anti-tumor activity. Alternatively, could bacteria induce stress signals in tumor cells that sensitize them to NK killing? This distinction is critical.

      (6) Figure 5D: Mechanism of Peripheral Activation

      It is suggested that contact between bacteria and NK cells in the periphery leads to their activation. Can the authors confirm whether this pre-activation leads to enhanced killing of tumor targets, or if bacteria-tumor co-localization is required? The literature indicates that F. nucleatum localizes intracellularly within tumor cells. If so, how is RadD accessible to NKp46 on infiltrating NK cells?

      (8) Figure 5E and In Vivo Relevance

      Surprisingly, F. nucleatum infection is associated with increased tumor burden. Does this reflect an immunosuppressive effect? Are NK cells inhibited or exhausted in infected mice (TGIT, SIGLEC7...)? If NK cell activation leads to reduced tumor control in the infected context, the role of RadD-induced activation needs further explanation. RadD-deficient bacteria, which do not activate NK cells, result in even poorer tumor control. This paradox needs to be addressed: how can NK activation impair tumor control while its absence also reduces tumor control?

      (9) NKp46-Deficient Mice: Inconsistencies

      In Ncr1⁻/⁻ mice, infection with WT or RadD-deficient F. nucleatum has no impact on tumor burden. This suggests that NKp46 is dispensable in this context and casts doubt on the physiological relevance of the proposed mechanism. This contradiction should be discussed more thoroughly.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is an interesting study on the role of FGF signaling in the induction of primitive streak like-cells (PS-LC) in human 2D-gastruloids. The authors use a previously characterized standard culture that generates a ring of PS-LCs (TBXT+) and correlate this with pERK staining. A requirement for FGF signaling in TBXT induction is demonstrated via pharmacological inhibition of MEK and FGFR activity. A second set of culture conditions (with no exogenous FGFs) suggests that endogenous FGFs are required for pERK and TBXT induction. The authors then characterize, via scRNA-seq, various components of the FGF pathway (genes for ligand, receptors, ERK regulators, HSPG regulation). They go on to characterize the pFGFR1, receptor isoforms and polarized localization of this receptor. Finally, they perform FGF4 inhibition and use a cell line with a limited FGF17 inactivation (heterozygous null) and show that loss of these FGFs reduce PS-LC and derivative cell types.

      Strengths:

      (1) As the authors point out, the role of FGF signaling in gastrulation is less well understood than other signaling pathways. Hence this is a valuable contribution to that field.

      (2) The FGF4 and FGF17 loss-of-function experiments in Figure 5 are very intriguing. This is especially so given the intriguing observation that these FGFs appear to be dominating in this model of human gastrulation, in contrast to what FGFs dominate in mice, chick and frogs.

      (3) In general this paper is valuable as a further development of the Human gastruloid system and the role of FGF signaling in the induction of PS-CLs. The wide net that the authors cast in characterizing FGF ligand gene, receptor isoforms, and downstream components provides a foundation for future work. As the authors write near the beginning of the Discussion "Many questions remain."

      Weaknesses:

      (1) FGFs are cell survival factors in various aspects of development. The authors fail to address cell death due to loss of FGF signaling in any of their experiments. For example, in Figure 1E (which requires statistical analysis) and 1G (the bottom FGFRi row), there appears to be a significant amount of cell loss. Is this due to cell death? The authors should address the question of whether the role of FGF/ERK signaling is to keep the cells alive.

      (2) Regarding the sparse cells in 1G, is there a reduction in cell number only with FGFRi and not MEKi? Is this reproducible? Gattiglio et al (Development, 2023, PMID: 37530863) present data supporting a "community effect" in the FGF-induced mesoderm differentiation of mouse embryonic stem cells. Could a community effect be at play in this human system (especially given the images in the bottom row of 1G). If the authors don't address this experimentally they should at least address the ideas in Gattoglio et al.

      (3) Do the FGF4 and FGF17 LOF experiments in Figure 5 affect cell number like FGFRi in Figure 1? Why examine PS-LC induction only in FGF17 heterozygous cells and not homozygous FGF17 nulls?

      (4) The idea that FGF8 plays a dominant role during gastrulation of other species but not humans is so intriguing it warrants deeper testing. The authors dismiss FGF8 because its mRNA "...levels always remained low." (line 363) as well as the data published in Zhai et al (PMID: 36517595) and Tyser et al (PMID: 34789876). But there are cases in mouse development where a gene was expressed at levels so low, it might be dismissed, and yet LOF experiments revealed it played a role or even was required in a developmental process. The authors should consider FGF8 inhibition or inactivation to explore its potential role, despite its low levels of expression.

      (5) Redundancy is a common feature in FGF genetics. What is the effect of inhibiting FGF4 in FGF17 LOF cells?

      (6) I suggest stating that the authors take more caution describing FGF gradients. For example, in one Results heading they write "Endogenous FGF4 and FGF17 gradients underly the ERK activity pattern.", implying an FGF protein gradient. However, they only present data for FGF mRNA , not protein. This issue would be clarified if they used proper nomenclature for gene, mRNA (italics) and protein (no italics) throughout the paper.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed my concerns.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This manuscript puts forward the concept that there is a specific time window during which YAP/TAZ driven transcription provides feedback for optimal endothelial cell adhesion, cytoskeletal organization and migration. The study follows up on previous elegant findings from this group and others which established the importance of YAP/TAZ-mediated transcription for persistent endothelial cell migration. The data presented here extends the concept at two levels: first, the data may explain why there are differences between experimental setups where YAP/TAZ activity are inhibited for prolonged times (e.g. cultures of YAP knockdown cells), versus experiments in which the transient inhibition of YAP/TAZ and (global) transcription affects endothelial cell dynamics prior to their equilibrium.

      All experiments are convincing, clearly visualized and quantified.

      The strength of the paper is that it clearly indicates that there are temporal controlled feedback systems, which is important knowledge for understanding the mechanisms that drive endothelial collective cell behavior.

      A potential limitation of the in vivo experiments is that the inhibitors may include off-target effects as well. To solve this caveat in future research endeavours, which is beyond the scope of the current study, it would be interesting to study this process in knockout models, combined with optogenetics and transgenic zebrafish lines that visualize endothelial cell functional properties such as proliferation and migration.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript explores behavioral responses of C. elegans to hydrogen sulfide, which is known to exert remarkable effects on animal physiology in a range of contexts. The possibility of genetic and precise neuronal dissection of responses to H2S motivates the study of responses in C. elegans.

      The authors have followed up observations in the initial version of the manuscript, and their data do not support the direct sensing of H2S by the ASJ neurons or other sensory neurons. Genetic and parallel analysis of O2 and CO2 responsive pathways do not reveal further insights regarding potential mechanisms underlying H2S sensing. Gene expression analysis extends prior work. Finally, the authors have examined how H2S-evoked locomotory behavioral responses are affected in mutants with altered stress and detoxification response to H2S, most notably hif-1 and egl-9. These data, while examining locomotion, are more suggestive that observed effects on animal locomotion are secondary to altered organismal toxicity as opposed to specific behavioral responedse

      Overall, the manuscript provides a wide range of preliminary observations of genetic interactions that may influence locomotory responses to H2S, but mechanistic insight or a synthesis of disparate data is lacking.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Okazaki et al. showed flickering stimuli to patients with unilateral spatial neglect (USN) and measured EEG responses. They compared this with another patient group (post-stroke, but no USN) and healthy controls. The author's rationale was to entrain intrinsic brain rhythms using the flicker of different frequencies (3-30 Hz). Effects found unique to the 9-Hz stimulation condition differentiate USN patients from the other groups, leading them to conclude that USN can be characterized by increased hemispheric alpha asymmetry, driven by a relatively increased response in the intact hemisphere.

      Strengths:

      This study is principled empirical work that benefits from access to special patient groups of considerable size (about 60 stroke patients in total, and 20 USN). The authors use state-of-the-art established methods to (1) deliver and (2) quantify the responses to the flicker stimulation in the EEG recordings. In addition, they use phase-coupling measures to investigate cross-frequency coupling (here: alpha-gamma) and a measure of directed connectivity between brain areas, transfer entropy. The results are supported by means of simulations using a coupled-oscillators model.

      Weaknesses:

      In my eyes, the major conceptual weakness of the study is that the authors make the a priori assumption that the flicker stimulation entrains intrinsic brain rhythms, especially alpha (9 Hz). To date, there is no direct (and only equivocal indirect) evidence that alpha rhythms can be entrained with periodic visual stimulation. In the present study, the assumption of alpha entrainment permeates some analytical decisions - where it would be possible to separate stimulus-driven from intrinsic rhythms more strongly than is currently the case, potentially yielding deeper insights into the oscillopathy of USN - and, ultimately, the interpretation of the results. Another potential issue to consider here is the analysis of gamma rhythms in EEG data, absent a control of miniature eye movements, a known problem (Yuval-Greenberg et al., 2008, https://doi.org/10.1016/j.neuron.2008.03.027) that may be exacerbated here, given that USN patients could show different auxiliary gaze behaviour.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study presents a novel toolkit for visualizing and manipulating neurotransmitter-specific vesicles in C. elegans neurons, addressing the challenge of tracking neurotransmitter dynamics at the level of individual synapses. The authors engineered endogenously tagged vesicular transporters for glutamate, GABA, acetylcholine, and monoamines, enabling cell-specific labeling while maintaining physiological function. Additionally, they developed conditional knockout strains to disrupt neurotransmitter synthesis in single neurons. The study reveals that over 10% of neurons in C. elegans exhibit co-transmission, with a detailed case study on the ADF sensory neuron, where serotonin and acetylcholine are trafficked in distinct vesicle pools. The approach provides a powerful platform for studying neurotransmitter identity, synaptic architecture, and co-transmission.

      Strengths:

      (1) This toolkit offers a generalizable framework that can be applied to other model organisms, advancing the ability to investigate synaptic plasticity and neural circuit logic with molecular precision.

      (2) Through the use of this toolkit, the authors uncover molecular heterogeneity at individual synapses, revealing co-transmission in over 10% of neurons, and offer new insights into neurotransmitter trafficking and synaptic plasticity, advancing our understanding of synaptic organization.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) While the article introduces valuable tools for visualizing neurotransmitter vesicles in vivo, the core techniques are based on previously established methods. The study does not present significant technological breakthroughs, limiting the novelty of the methodological advancements.

      (2) The article does not fully explore the potential implications or the underlying mechanisms governing this process, while the discovery of co-transmission in over 10% of neurons is an intriguing finding. A deeper investigation into the functional uniqueness and interactions of neurotransmitters released from individual co-transmitting neurons - perhaps through case study examples - would strengthen the study's impact.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Jouary et al. present Megabouts, a Transformer-based classifier and Python toolbox for automated categorization of zebrafish movement bouts into 13 bout types. This is potentially a very useful tool for the zebrafish community. It is broadly applicable to a wide variety of behavioral paradigms and could help to unify behavioral quantification across labs. The overall implementation is technically sound and thoughtfully engineered. The choice of standard Transformer architecture is well-justified (e.g., it can handle long-term tracking data and process missing data, integrates posture and trajectory information over time, and shows robustness to variable frame rates and partial occlusion). The data augmentation strategies (e.g., downsampling, tail masking, and temporal jitter) are well designed to enhance cross-condition generalization. Thus, I very much support this work.

      For the benefit of the end users of this tool, several clarifications and additional analyses would be helpful:

      (1) What is the source and nature of the classification errors? The reported accuracy is <80% with trajectory data and still <90% with trajectory + tail data.

      (1a) Is this due to model failure (is overfitting a concern? How unbiased were the test sets?), imperfections of the preprocessing step (how sensitive is this to noise in the input data?), or underlying ambiguity in the biological data (e.g., do some "errors" reflect intermediate patterns that don't map neatly onto the 13 discrete classes)?

      (1b) A systematic error analysis would be helpful. Which classes are most often confused? Are errors systematic (e.g., slow swims vs. routine turns) or random?

      (1c) Can confidence of classification be provided for each bout in the data? How would the authors recommend that the end user deal with misclassifications (e.g., by manual correction)?<br /> Overall, the end user would benefit greatly from more information on potential failure modes and their root causes.

      (2) How well does the trained network generalize across labs and setups? To what extent have the authors tested this on datasets from other labs to determine how well the pretrained model transfers across datasets? Having tested the code provided by the authors on a short stretch of x-y zebrafish trajectory data obtained independently, the pipeline generates phantom movement annotations. The underlying cause is unclear.

      (2a) One possibility is that preprocessing steps may be highly sensitive to slight noise in the x-y positional data, which leads to noise in the speed data. The neural net, in turn, classifies noise into movement annotations. It would be helpful if the authors could add Gaussian noise to the x-y trajectory data and then determine the extent to which the computational pipeline is robust to noise.

      (2b) When testing the pipeline, some stationary periods are classified as movements. Which step of the pipeline gave rise to the issue is unclear. Thus, explicit cross-lab validation and robustness tests (e.g., adding Gaussian noise to trajectories) would strengthen the claims of this paper.

      (2c) Lastly, given the potential issue of generalization across labs, it would be helpful to provide/outline the steps for users in different labs to retrain and fine-tune the model.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript investigates the interplay between spontaneous attention and melody formation during polyphonic music listening. The authors use EEG recordings during uninstructed listening to examine how attention bias influences melody processing, employing both behavioural measures and computational modelling with music transformers. The study introduces a very clever pitch-inversion manipulation design to dissociate high-voice superiority from melodic salience, and proposes a "weighted integration" model where attention dynamically modulates how multiple voices are combined into perceived melody.

      Strengths:

      (1) The attention bias findings (Figure 2) are compelling and methodologically sound, with convergent evidence from both behavioral and neural measures.

      (2) The pitch-inversion manipulation appears to super elegantly dissociate two competing factors (high-voice superiority vs melodic salience), moreover, the authors claim that the chosen music lends itself perfectly to his PolyInv condition. A claim I cannot really evaluate, but which would make it even more neat.

      (3) Nice bridge between hypotheses and operationalisations.

      Weaknesses:



      The results in Figure 3 are very striking, but I have a number of questions before I can consider myself convinced. 


      (1) Conceptual questions about surprisal analysis:


      The pattern of results seems backwards to me. Since the music is inherently polyphonic in PolyOrig, I'd expect the polyphonic model to fit the brain data better - after all, that's what the music actually is. These voices were composed to interact harmonically, so modeling them as independent monophonic streams seems like a misspecification. Why would the brain match this misspecified model better?
<br /> Conversely, it would seem to me the pitch inversion in PolyInv disrupts (at least to some extent) the harmonic coherence, so if anywhere, I'd a priori expect that in this condition, listeners would rather be processing streams separately - making the monophonic model fit better there (or less bad), not in PolyOrig. The current pattern is exactly opposite to what seems logical to me.


      (2) Missing computational analyses:


      If the transformer is properly trained, it should "understand" (i.e., predict/compress) the polyphonic music better, right? Can the authors demonstrate this via perplexity scores, bits-per-byte, or other prediction metrics, comparing how well each model (polyphonic vs monophonic) handles the music in both conditions? Similarly, if PolyInv truly maintains musical integrity as claimed, the polyphonic model should handle it as well as PolyOrig. But if the inversion does disrupt the music, we should see this reflected in degraded prediction scores. These metrics would validate whether the experimental manipulation works as intended. Also, how strongly are the surprisal streams correlated? There are many non-trivial modelling steps that should be reported in more detail.


      (3) Methodological inconsistencies:

      Why are the two main questions (Figures 2 and 3) answered with completely different analytical approaches? The switch from TRF to CCA with match-vs-mismatch classification seems unmotivated. I think it's very important to provide a simpler model comparison - just TRF with acoustic features plus either polyphonic or monophonic surprisal - evaluated on relevant electrodes or the full scalp. This would make the results more comparable and interpretable.

      (4) Presentation and methods:

      a) Coming from outside music/music theory, I found the paper somewhat abstract and hard to parse initially. The experimental logic becomes clearer with reflection, but you're doing yourselves a disservice with the jargon-heavy presentation. It would be useful to include example stimuli.

      b) The methods section is extremely brief - no details whatsoever are provided regarding the modelling: What specific music transformer architecture? Which implementation of this "anticipatory music transformer"? Pre-trained on what corpus - monophonic, polyphonic, Western classical only? What constituted "technical issues" for the 9 excluded participants? What were the channel rejection criteria?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is a well-structured and interesting manuscript that investigates how herbivorous insects, specifically whiteflies and planthoppers, utilize salivary effectors to overcome plant immunity by targeting the RLP4 receptor.

      Strengths:

      The authors present a strong case for the independent evolution of these effectors and provide compelling evidence for their functional roles.

      Weaknesses:

      Western blot evidence for effector secretion is weak. The possibility of contamination from insect tissues during the sample preparation should be avoided.

      Below are some specific comments and suggestions to strengthen the manuscript.

      (1) Western blot evidence for effector secretion:

      The western blot evidence in Figure 1, which aims to show that the insect protein is secreted into plants, is not fully convincing. The band of the expected size (~30 kDa) in the infested tissues is very weak. Furthermore, the high and low molecular weight bands that appear in the infested tissues do not match the size of the protein in the insects themselves, and a high molecular weight band also appears in the uninfested control tissues. It is difficult to draw a definitive conclusion that this protein is secreted into the plants based on this evidence. The authors should also address the possibility of contamination from insect tissues during the sample preparation and explain how they have excluded this possibility.

      (2) Inconsistent conclusion (Line 156 and Figure 3c): T

      The statement in line 156 is inconsistent with the data presented in Figure 3c. The figure clearly shows that the LRR domain of the protein is the one responsible for the interaction with BtRDP, not the region mentioned in the text. This is a critical misrepresentation of the experimental findings and must be corrected. The conclusion in the text should accurately reflect the data from the figure.

      (3) Role of SOBIR1 in the RLP4/SOBIR1 Complex:

      The authors demonstrate that the salivary effectors destabilize the RLP4 receptor, leading to a decrease in its protein levels and a reduction in the RLP4/SOBIR1 complex. A key question remains regarding the fate of SOBIR1 within this complex. The authors should clarify what happens to the SOBIR1 protein after the destabilization of RLP4. Does SOBIR1 become unbound, targeted for degradation itself, or does it simply lose its function without RLP4? This would provide further insight into the mechanism of action of the effectors.

      (4) Clarification on specificity and evolutionary claims:

      The paper's most significant claim is that the effectors from both whiteflies and planthoppers "independently evolved" to target RLP4. While the functional data is compelling, this evolutionary claim would be more convincing with stronger evidence. Showing that two different effector proteins target the same host protein is a fascinating finding but without a robust phylogenetic analysis, the claim of independent evolution is not fully supported. It would be valuable to provide a more detailed evolutionary analysis, such as a phylogenetic tree of the effector proteins, showing their relationship to other known insect proteins, to definitively rule out a shared, but highly divergent, common ancestor.

      (5) Role of SOBIR1 in the interaction:

      The results suggest that the effectors disrupt the RLP4/SOBIR1 complex. It is not entirely clear if the effectors are specifically targeting RLP4, SOBIR1, or both. Further experiments, such as a co-immunoprecipitation assay with just RLP4 and the effector, could clarify if the effector can bind to RLP4 in the absence of SOBIR1. This would help to definitively place RLP4 as the primary target.

      (6) Transcriptome analysis (Lines 130-143):

      The transcriptome analysis section feels disconnected from the rest of the manuscript. The findings, or lack thereof, from this analysis do not seem to be directly linked to the other major conclusions of the paper. This section could be removed to improve the manuscript's overall focus and flow. If the authors believe this data is critical, they should more clearly and explicitly connect the conclusions of the transcriptome analysis to the core findings about the effector-RLP4 interaction.

      (7) Signal peptide experiments (Lines 145 and beyond):

      The experiments conducted with the signal peptide (SP) are questionable. The SP is typically cleaved before the protein reaches its final destination. As such, conducting experiments with the SP attached to the protein may have produced biased observations and could lead to unjustified conclusions about the protein's function within the plant cell. We suggest the authors remove the experiments that include the signal peptide.

      (8) Overly strong conclusion and unclear evidence (Line 176):

      The use of the word "must" on line 176 is very strong and presents a definitive conclusion without sufficient evidence. The authors state that the proteins must interact with SOBIR1, but they do not provide a clear justification for this claim. Is SOBIR1 the only interaction partner for NtRLP4? The authors should provide a specific reason for focusing on SOBIR1 instead of demonstrating an interaction with NtRLP4 first. Additionally, do BtRDP or NlSP694 also interact with SOBIR1 directly? The authors should either tone down their language to reflect the evidence or provide a clearer justification for this strong claim.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      A summary of what the authors were trying to achieve:

      Zhang et al. examine connections between supramammillary (SuM) neurons and the subiculum in the context of stress-induced anxiety-like behaviors. They identify stress-activated neurons (SANs) in the SuM using Fos2A-iCreERT2 TRAP mice and show that reactivation of SANs increases anxiety-like behavior and corticosterone levels. Circuit mapping reveals inputs from glutamatergic neurons in both ventral and dorsal subiculum (Sub) to SANs. vSub neurons showing calcium dynamics correlated with open-arm exploration in the elevated zero maze (EZM), which is interpreted to indicate a link to e. Finally, chronic inhibition of vSub→SuM neurons during chronic social defeat stress (CSDS) reduces anxiety-like behaviors.

      An account of the major strengths and weaknesses of the methods and results:

      Strengths:

      The manuscript provides compelling evidence for monosynaptic connections from the subiculum to SuM neurons activated by stress. Demonstrating that SuM neuronal activity is altered after CSDS is of particular interest, potentially linking SuM circuits to stress-related psychiatric disorders. The TRAP approach highlights a stress-responsive population of neurons, and reactivation studies suggest behavioral relevance. Together, these data contribute to an emerging literature implicating SuM in stress and anxiety regulation.

      Weaknesses

      As presented, the manuscript has limitations that weaken support for the central conclusions drawn by the authors. Many of the findings align with prior work on this topic, but do not extend those findings substantially.<br /> An overarching limitation is the lack of temporal resolution in the manipulations relative to the behavioral assays. This is particularly important for anxiety-like behaviors, as antecedent exposures can alter performance. In the open field and elevated zero maze assays, testing occurred 30 minutes after CNO injection. During much of this interval, the targeted neurons were likely active, making it difficult to determine whether observed behavioral changes were primary - resulting directly from SuM neuronal activity - or secondary, reflecting a stress-like state induced by prolonged activation of SuM and related circuits. This concern also applies to the chronic inhibition of ventral subiculum (vSub) neurons during 10 days of CSDS.

      The combination of stressors (foot shock and CSDS) and behavioral assays further complicates interpretation. The precise role of SuM neurons, including SANs, remains unclear. Both vSub and dSub neurons responded to foot shock, but only vSub neurons showed activity differences associated with open-arm transitions in the EZM.

      In light of prior studies linking SuM to locomotion (Farrell et al., Science 2021; Escobedo et al., eLife 2024), the absence of analyses connecting subpopulations to locomotor changes weakens the claim that vSub neurons selectively encode anxiety. Because open- and closed-arm transitions are inherently tied to locomotor activity, locomotion must be carefully controlled to avoid confounding interpretations.

      Another limitation is the narrow behavioral scope. Beyond open field and EZM, no additional assays were used to assess how SAN reactivation affects other behaviors. Without richer behavioral analyses, interpretations about fear engrams, freezing, or broader stress-related functions of SuM remain incomplete.

      In addition, small n values across several datasets reduce confidence in the strength of the conclusions.

      Figure level concerns:

      (1) Figure 1: In Figure 1, the acute recruitment of SuM neurons by for shock is paired with changes in neural activity induced by social defeat stress. Although interesting, the connections of changes induced by a chronic stressor to Fos induction following acute foot shock are unclear and do not establish a baseline for the studies in Figure 3 on activation of SANs by social stressors.

      (2) Figure 2: The chemogenetic experiments using AAV-hSyn-Gq-DREADDs lack data or images, or hit maps showing viral spread across animals. This omission is critical given the small size of SuM, where viral spread directly determines which neurons are manipulated. Without this, it is difficult to interpret findings in the context of prior studies on SuM circuits involved in threats and rewards.

      (3) Figure 3: The TRAP experiments show that the number of labeled neurons following foot shock (Figure 3F) is approximately double that of baseline home-cage animals, though y-axis scaling complicates interpretation. It is unclear whether this reflects true Fos induction, low TRAP efficiency, or baseline recombination. Overlap analyses are also limited. For example, it is not shown what proportion of foot shock SANs are reactivated by subsequent foot shock. Comparisons of Fos induction after sucrose reward are also weakened by the very low Fos signal observed. If sucrose reward does not robustly induce Fos in SuM, its utility in distinguishing reward- versus stress-activated neurons is questionable. Thus, conclusions about overlap between SANs and socially stressed neurons remain uncertain due to the missing quantification of Fos+ populations.

      (4) Supplemental Figure 3: The claim that "SANs in the SuM encode anxiety but not fear memory" is not well supported. Inhibition of SANs (Gi-DREADDs) did not alter freezing behavior, but the absence of change could reflect technical issues (e.g., insufficient TRAP efficiency, low expression of Gi-DREADDs). Moreover, the manuscript does not provide a positive control showing that SuM SANs inhibition alters anxiety-like behavior, making it difficult to interpret the negative result. Prior work (Escobedo et al., eLife 2024) suggests SuM neurons drive active responses, not freezing, raising further interpretive questions.

      (5) Figure 4: The statement that corticosterone concentration is "usually used to estimate whether an individual is anxious" (line 236) is an overstatement. Corticosterone fluctuates dynamically across the day and responds to a broad range of stimuli beyond anxiety.

      (6) Figures 5-6: The conclusion that vSub neurons encode anxiety-like behavior is not firmly supported. Data from photo-activating terminals in SuM is shown for ex vivo recording, but not in vivo behavior, which would strengthen support for this conclusion. Both vSub and dSub neurons responded to foot shock. The key evidence comes from apparent differential recruitment during open-arm exploration. However, the timing appears to lag arm entry, no data are provided for closed-arm entry, and there is heterogeneity across animals. These limitations reduce confidence in the authors' central claim regarding vSub-specific encoding of anxiety.

      An appraisal of whether the authors achieved their aims, and whether the results support their conclusions:

      (1) From the data presented, the authors conclude that "the SuM is the critical brain region that regulates anxiety" (line 190). This interpretation appears overstated, as it downplays well-established contributions of other brain regions and does not place SuM's role within a broader network context. The data support that SuM neurons are recruited by foot shock and, to a lesser extent, by acute social stress. However, the alterations in activity of SuM subpopulations following chronic stress reported in Figure 1 remain largely unexplored, limiting insight into their functional relevance.

      (2) The limited temporal resolution of DREADD-based manipulations leaves alternative explanations untested. For example, if SANs encode signals of threat, generalized stress, or nociception, then prolonged activation could indirectly alter behavior in the open field and EZM assays, rather than reflecting direct anxiety regulation.

      (3) The conclusion that "SuM store information about stress but not memory" (line 240) is not fully supported, particularly with respect to possible roles in memory. The lack of a role in memory of events, as opposed to the output of threat or stress memory, may be true, but is functionally untested in presented experiments. The data do indicate activation of the SuM neuron by foot shock, which has been previously reported(Escobedo et al eLife 2024). The changes in SuM activity following chronic stress (Figure 1) are intriguing, but their relationship to "stress information storage" is not clearly established.

      A discussion of the likely impact of the work on the field, and the utility of the methods and data to the community:

      The reported results align with prior studies on SuM and Sub areas' roles in stress in anxiety. There are limitations due to narrowly focused behavioral assays and the limited temporal resolution of the tools used. Overall, the study further supports a role for SuM in threat and stress responses. The reported changes in SuM neuron activity following chronic stress may offer new insights into stress-induced disorders and behavioral changes.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript characterizes a functional peptidergic system in the echinoderm Apostichopus japonicus that is related to the widely conserved family of calcitonin/diuretic hormone 31 (CT/DH31) peptides in bilaterian animals. In vitro analysis of receptor-ligand interactions, using multiple receptor activation assays, identifies three cognate receptors for two CT-like peptides in the sea cucumber, which stimulate cAMP, calcium, and ERK signaling. Only one of these receptors clusters within the family of calcitonin and calcitonin-like receptors (CTR/CLR) in bilaterian animals, whereas two other receptors cluster with invertebrate pigment dispersing factor receptors (PDFRs). In addition, this study sheds light on the expression and in vivo functions of CT-like peptides in A. japonicus, by quantitative real-time PCR, immunohistochemistry, pharmacological experiments on body wall muscle and intestine preparations, and peptide injection and RNAi knockdown experiments. This reveals a conserved function of CT-like peptides as muscle relaxants and growth regulators in A. japonicus.

      Strengths:

      This work combines both in vitro and in vivo functional assays to identify a CT-like peptidergic system in an economically relevant echinoderm species, the sea cucumber A. japonicus. A major strength of the study is that it identifies three G protein-coupled receptors for AjCT-like peptides, one related to the CTR/CLR family and two related to the PDFR family. A similar finding was previously reported for the CT-related peptide DH31 in Drosophila melanogaster that activates both CT-type and PDF-type receptors. Here, the authors expand this observation to a deuterostomian animal, which suggests that receptor promiscuity is a more general feature of the CT/DH31 peptide family and that CT/DH31-like peptides may activate both CT-type and PDF-type receptors in other animals as well.

      Besides the identification of receptor-ligand pairs, the downstream signaling pathways of AjCT receptors have been characterized, revealing broad and in some cases receptor-specific effects on cAMP, calcium, and ERK signaling.

      Functional characterization of the CT-related peptide system in heterologous cells is complemented with ex vivo and in vivo experiments. First, peptide injection and RNAi knockdown experiments establish transcriptional regulation of all three identified receptors in response to changing AjCT peptide levels. Second, ex vivo experiments reveal a conserved role for the two CT-like peptides as muscle relaxants, which have differential effects on body wall muscle and intestine preparations. Finally, peptide injection and knockdown experiments uncover a growth-promoting role for one CT-like peptide (AjCT2). Injection of AjCT2 at high concentration, or long-term knockdown of the AjCT precursor, affects diverse growth-related parameters including weight gain rate, specific growth rate, and transcript levels of growth-regulating transcription factors. The authors also reveal a growth-promoting function for the PDFR-like receptor AjPDFR2, suggesting that this receptor mediates the effects of AjCT2 on growth.

      Weaknesses:

      Expression of CT-like peptides was investigated both at transcript and protein level, but insight into the expression of the three peptide receptors is limited. This makes it difficult to understand the mechanism underlying the (different) functions of the two CT-like peptides in vivo. The authors identify differences in signal transduction cascades activated by each peptide, which might underpin distinct functions, but these differences were established only in heterologous cells.

      The authors show overlapping phenotypes for a long-term knockdown of the AjCT precursor and the AjPDFR2 receptor, suggesting that the growth-regulating functions of AjCT2 are mediated by this receptor pathway. However, it remains unclear whether this mechanism underpins the growth-regulating function of AjCT2, until further in vivo evidence for this ligand-receptor interaction is presented. For example, the authors could investigate whether knockdown of AjPDFR2 attenuates the effects of AjCT2 peptide injection. In addition, a functional PDF system in this species remains uncharacterized, and a potential role of PDF-like peptides in growth regulation has not yet been investigated in A. japonicus. Therefore, it also remains unclear whether the ability of CT-like peptides to activate PDFRs is an evolutionary ancient property of this peptide family or whether this is an example of convergent evolution in some protostomian (Drosophila) and deuterostomian (sea cucumber) species.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This preprint from Shaowei Zhao and colleagues presents results that suggest tumorous germline stem cells (GSCs) in the Drosophila ovary mimic the ovarian stem cell niche and inhibit the differentiation of neighboring non-mutant GSC-like cells. The authors use FRT-mediated clonal analysis driven by a germline-specific gene (nos-Gal4, UASp-flp) to induce GSC-like cells mutant for bam or bam's co-factor bgcn. Bam-mutant or bgcn-mutant germ cells produce tumors in the stem cell compartment (the germarium) of the ovary (Figure 1). These tumors contain non-mutant cells - termed SGC for single-germ cells. 75% of SGCs do not exhibit signs of differentiation (as assessed by bamP-GFP) (Figure 2). The authors demonstrate that block in differentiation in SGC is a result of suppression of bam expression (Figure 2). They present data suggesting that in 73% of SGCs, BMP signaling is low (assessed by dad-lacZ) (Figure 3) and proliferation is less in SGCs vs GSCs. They present genetic evidence that mutations in BMP pathway receptors and transcription factors suppress some of the non-autonomous effects exhibited by SGCs within bam-mutant tumors (Figure 4). They show data that bam-mutant cells secrete Dpp, but this data is not compelling (see below) (Figure 5). They provide genetic data that loss of BMP ligands (dpp and gbb) suppresses the appearance of SGCs in bam-mutant tumors (Figure 6). Taken together, their data support a model in which bam-mutant GSC-like cells produce BMPs that act on non-mutant cells (i.e., SGCs) to prevent their differentiation, similar to what is seen in the ovarian stem cell niche. This preprint from Shaowei Zhao and colleagues presents results that suggest tumorous germline stem cells (GSCs) in the Drosophila ovary mimic the ovarian stem cell niche and inhibit the differentiation of neighboring non-mutant GSC-like cells. The authors use FRT-mediated clonal analysis driven by a germline-specific gene (nos-Gal4, UASp-flp) to induce GSC-like cells mutant for bam or bam's co-factor bgcn. Bam-mutant or bgcn-mutant germ cells produce tumors in the stem cell compartment (the germarium) of the ovary (Figure 1). These tumors contain non-mutant cells - termed SGC for single-germ cells. 75% of SGCs do not exhibit signs of differentiation (as assessed by bamP-GFP) (Figure 2). The authors demonstrate that block in differentiation in SGC is a result of suppression of bam expression (Figure 2). They present data suggesting that in 73% of SGCs, BMP signaling is low (assessed by dad-lacZ) (Figure 3) and proliferation is less in SGCs vs GSCs. They present genetic evidence that mutations in BMP pathway receptors and transcription factors suppress some of the non-autonomous effects exhibited by SGCs within bam-mutant tumors (Figure 4). They show data that bam-mutant cells secrete Dpp, but this data is not compelling (see below) (Figure 5). They provide genetic data that loss of BMP ligands (dpp and gbb) suppresses the appearance of SGCs in bam-mutant tumors (Figure 6). Taken together, their data support a model in which bam-mutant GSC-like cells produce BMPs that act on non-mutant cells (i.e., SGCs) to prevent their differentiation, similar to what in seen in the ovarian stem cell niche.

      Strengths:

      (1) Use of an excellent and established model for tumorous cells in a stem cell microenvironment.

      (2) Powerful genetics allow them to test various factors in the tumorous vs non-tumorous cells.

      (3) Appropriate use of quantification and statistics.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) What is the frequency of SGCs in nos>flp; bam-mutant tumors? For example, are they seen in every germarium, or in some germaria, etc, or in a few germaria?

      (2) Does the breakdown in clonality vary when they induce hs-flp clones in adults as opposed to in larvae/pupae?

      (3) Approximately 20-25% of SGCs are bam+, dad-LacZ+. Firstly, how do the authors explain this? Secondly, of the 70-75% of SGCs that have no/low BMP signaling, the authors should perform additional characterization using markers that are expressed in GSCs (i.e., Sex lethal and nanos).

      (4) All experiments except Figure 1I (where a single germarium with no quantification) were performed with nos-Gal4, UASp-flp. Have the authors performed any of the phenotypic characterizations (i.e., figures other than Figure 1) with hs-flp?

      (5) Does the number of SGCs change with the age of the female? The experiments were all performed in 14-day-old adult females. What happens when they look at a young female (like 2-day-old). I assume that the nos>flp is working in larval and pupal stages, and so the phenotype should be present in young females. Why did the authors choose this later age? For example, is the phenotype more robust in older females? Or do you see more SGCs at later time points?

      (6) Can the authors distinguish one copy of GFP versus 2 copies of GFP in germ cells of the ovary? This is not possible in the Drosophila testis. I ask because this could impact the clonal analyses diagrammed in Figure 4A and 4G and in 6A and B. Additionally, in most of the figures, the GFP is saturated, so it is not possible to discern one vs two copies of GFP.

      (7) More evidence is needed to support the claim of elevated Dpp levels in bam or bgcn mutant tumors. The current results with the dpp-lacZ enhancer trap in Figure 5A, B are not convincing. First, why is the dpp-lacZ so much brighter in the mosaic analysis (A) than in the no-clone analysis (B)? It is expected that the level of dpp-lacZ in cap cells should be invariant between ovaries, and yet LacZ is very faint in Figure 5B. I think that if the settings in A matched those in B, the apparent expression of dpp-lacZ in the tumor would be much lower and likely not statistically significant. Second, they should use RNA in situ hybridization with a sensitive technique like hybridization chain reactions (HCR) - an approach that has worked well in numerous Drosophila tissues, including the ovary.

      (8) In Figure 6, the authors report results obtained with the bamBG allele. Do they obtain similar data with another bam allele (i.e., bamdelta86)?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study investigates the effects of transcriptional activation on chromatin dynamics and mobility. Using a breast cancer model, the authors examine the effects of estrogen receptor-a (ERa) stimulation and the resulting transcriptional activation on chromatin behavior at ERa-dependent loci during three distinct phases: unstimulated, acute stimulation, and chronic stimulation. Through live DNA and RNA imaging, the authors claim that ERa-dependent target genes display distinct bursting dynamics during periods of acute versus chronic simulation, accompanied by an overall increase in chromatin mobility. Notably, they claim that ERa-dependent loci display increased mobility during the non-bursting phase compared to the bursting phase. The study also attempts to explore the role of condensates in mediating these transcriptional and chromatin mobility changes using a single-molecule tracking assay to identify a unique population of low diffusion-coefficient molecules that appears upon E2 stimulation and is sensitive to 1,6-hexanediol.

      Strengths:

      While the study develops interesting tools that have the potential to provide useful insights into the relationship between transcriptional state, genomic locus mobility, and condensate formation, several major claims lack key supportive evidence, and the methods are inadequately established and described.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The use of 1,6 hexanediol experiments is not suitable for drawing conclusions in live cell experiments, as this assay is now widely recognized to be plagued with artifacts and inadequate as a test for condensate formation. 1,6 hexanediol perturbs all hydrophobic interactions and has effects ranging from perturbing kinase and phosphatase activities (Düster et al, J. Biol. Chem., 2021), immobilizing and condensing chromatin in living cells (Itoh et al., Life Sci. Alliance 2021), disrupting nuclear pore complexes (Ribbeck et al., EMBO 2002), nuclear transport (Barrientos et al., Nucleus, 2023), and does not disrupt charge-mediated phase separation (Zheng et al., EMBO, 2025). There is also a discussion on these effects in a recent article: Current practices in the study of biomolecular condensates: a community comment, Alberti, Nat. Comm., 2025.

      (2) The chromatin mobility is analyzed using displacement, and the differences are typically less than 50 nm. There is no discussion on the precision of this measurement and what these small differences may mean. No control loci are assessed to see if this effect is specific to the genes of interest or global.

      (3) The SMT analysis is performed using Mean Square Displacement fitting of short single trajectories, which is error-prone, and no analysis is performed on the localization precision or error in estimation of the key parameters. Potential artifacts from this analysis are reflected in the distribution of alpha and diffusion coefficients that are presented in this paper, which include physically impossible values on which major claims rest.

      (4) No experiment is performed to directly connect foci/cluster/condensation formation of ER at the genes of interest. Given these points alone, it is impossible to assess whether any of the claims made in the current manuscript are correct.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors report the structure of the human CTF18-RFC complex bound to PCNA. Similar structures (and more) have been reported by the O'Donnell and Li labs. This study should add to our understanding of CTF18-RFC in DNA replication and clamp loaders in general. However, there are numerous major issues that I recommend the authors fix.

      Strengths:

      The structures reported are strong and useful for comparison with other clamp loader structures that have been reported lately.

      Comments on revisions:

      The revised manuscript is greatly improved. The comparison with hRFC and the addition of direct PCNA loading data from the Hedglin group are particular highlights. I think this is a strong addition to the literature.

      I only have minor comments on the revised manuscript.

      (1) The clamp loading kinetic data in Figure 6 would be more easily interpreted if the three graphs all had the same x axes, and if addition of RFC was t=0 rather than t=60 sec.

      (2) The author's statement that "CTF18-RFC displayed a slightly faster rate than RFC" seems to me a bit misleading, even though this is technically correct. The two loaders have indistinguishable rate constants for the fast phase, and RFC is a bit slower than CTF18-RFC in the slow phase. However, the data also show that RFC is overall more efficient than CTF18-RFC at loading PCNA because much more flux through the fast phase (rel amplitudes 0.73 vs 0.36). Because the slow phase represents such a reduced fraction of loading events, the slight reduction in rate constant for the slow phase doesn't impact RFC's overall loading. And because the majority of loading events are in the fast phase, RFC has a faster halftime than CTF18-RFC. (Is it known what the different phases correspond to? If it is known, it might be interesting to discuss.)

      (3) AAA+ is an acronym for "ATPases Associated with diverse cellular Activities" rather than "Adenosine Triphosphatase Associated".

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This paper by Troyer et al. measures the positioning and diffusivity of RNaseE-mEos3.2 proteins in E. coli as a function of rifampicin treatment, compares RNaseE to other E. coli proteins, and measures the effect of changes in domain composition on this localization and motion. The straightforward study is thoroughly presented, including very good descriptions of the imaging parameters and the image analysis/modeling involved, which is good because the key impact of the work lies in presenting this clear methodology for determining the position and mobility of a series of proteins in living bacteria cells.

      Most of my concerns in the original review were addressed in this round of revisions based on new text, experiments, and analysis, including most notably:

      -A revision of the abstract to focus on the actual topic of the manuscript.<br /> -New experiments (Fig. S1) to confirm that there is no significant undercounting of the fast-moving cytoplasmic population<br /> -Removing the experiments discussion related to degradosome proteins rather than overstating results.<br /> -Improving the logical flow and writing.

      One minor concern still remains:

      -Though the discussion of the rifampicin-treated cells is improved, this experiment is motivated (line 196) as "To test the effect of mRNA substrates on RNE diffusion", but the conclusion of the paragraph (based on similarities with the effect on LacY) is that the observed changes are due to factors other than the concentration of mRNA substrates, such that the effect of mRNA has not been tested.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      Assessment

      This study develops a potentially useful metric for quantifying codon usage adaptation – the Codon Adaptation Index of Species (CAIS) – that is intended to allow for more direct comparisons of the strength of selection at the molecular level across species by controlling for interspecies variation in amino acid usage and GC content. As evidence to support there claim CAIS better controls for GC content and amino acid usage across species, they note that CAIS has only a weak positive correlation with GC% (that does not stand up to multiple hypothesis testing correction) while CAI has a clear negative correlation with GC%. Using CAIS, they find better adapted species have more disordered protein domains; however, excitement about these findings is dampened due to (1) this result is also observed using the effective number of codons (ENC) and

      (2) concerns over the interpretation of CAIS as a proxy for the effectiveness of selection.

      Public Review

      Summary

      The goal of the authors in this study is to develop a more reliable approach for quantifying codon usage such that it is more comparable across species. Specifically, the authors wish to estimate the degree of adaptive codon usage, which is potentially a general proxy for the strength of selection at the molecular level. To this end, the authors created the Codon Adaptation Index for Species (CAIS) that attempts to control for differences in amino acid usage and GC% across species. Using their new metric, the authors observe a positive relationship between CAIS and the overall “disorderedness” of a species protein domains. I think CAIS has the potential to be a valuable tool for those interested in comparing codon adaptation across species in certain situations. However, I have certain theoretical concerns about CAIS as a direct proxy for the efficiency of selection sNe when mutation bias changes across species.

      Strengths

      (1) I appreciate that the authors recognize the potential issues of comparing CAI when amino acid usage varies and correct for this in CAIS. I think this is sometimes an under-appreciated point in the codon usage literature, as CAI is a relative measure of codon usage bias (i.e. only considers synonyms). However, the strength of natural selection on codon usage can potentially vary across amino acids, such that comparing mean CAI between protein regions with different amino acid biases may result in spurious signals of statistical significance.

      (2) The CAIS metric presented here is generally applicable to any species that has an annotated genome with protein-coding sequences. A significant improvement over the previous version is the implementation of software tool for applying this method.

      (3) The authors do a better job of putting their results in the context of the underlying theory of CAIS compared to the previous version.

      (4) The paper is generally well-written.

      Weaknesses

      (1) The previously observed correlation between CAIS and body size was due to a bug when calculating phylogenetic independent contrasts. I commend the authors for acknowledging this mistake and updating the manuscript accordingly. I feel that the unobserved correlation between CAIS and body size should remain in the final version of the manuscript. Although it is disappointing that it is not statistically significant, the corrected results are consistent with previous findings (Kessler and Dean 2014).

      (2) I appreciate the authors for providing a more detailed explanation of the theoretical basis model. However, I remain skeptical that shifts in CAIS across species indicates shifts in the strength of selection. I am leaving the math from my previous review here for completeness.

      As in my previous review, let’s take a closer look at the ratio of observed codon frequencies vs. expected codon frequencies under mutation alone, which was previously notated as RSCUS in the original formulation. In this review, I will keep using the RSCUS notation, even though it has been dropped from the updated version. The key point is this is the ratio of observed and expected codon frequencies. If this ratio is 1 for all codons, then CAIS would be 0 based on equation 7 in the manuscript – consistent with the complete absence of selection on codon usage. From here on out, subscripts will only be used to denote the codon and it will be assumed that we are only considering the case of r = genome for some species s.

      I think what the authors are attempting to do is “divide out” the effects of mutation bias (as given by Ei), such that only the effects of natural selection remain, i.e. deviations from the expected frequency based on mutation bias alone represents adaptive codon usage. Consider Gilchrist et al. GBE 2015, which says that the expected frequency of codon i at selection-mutation-drift equilibrium in gene g for an amino acid with Na synonymous codons is

      where ∆M is the mutation bias, ∆η is the strength of selection scaled by the strength of drift, and φg is the gene expression level of gene g. In this case, ∆M and ∆η reflect the strength and direction of mutation bias and natural selection relative to a reference codon, for which ∆M,∆η = 0. Assuming the selection-mutation-drift equilibrium model is generally adequate to model of the true codon usage patterns in a genome (as I do and I think the authors do, too), the Ei,g could be considered the expected observed frequency codon i in gene g

      E[Oi,g].

      Let’s re-write the  in the form of Gilchrist et al., such that it is a function of mutation bias ∆M. For simplicity we will consider just the two codon case and assume the amino acid sequence is fixed. Assuming GC% is at equilibrium, the term gr and 1 − gr can be written as

      where µx→y is the mutation rate from nucleotides x to y. As described in Gilchrist et al. MBE 2015 and Shah and Gilchrist PNAS 2011, the mutation bias . This can be expressed in terms of the equilibrium GC content by recognizing that

      As we are assuming the amino acid sequence is fixed, the probability of observing a synonymous codon i at an amino acid becomes just a Bernoulli process.

      If we do this, then

      Recall that in the Gilchrist et al. framework, the reference codon has ∆MNNG,NNG \= 0 =⇒ e−∆MNNG,NNG \=

      (1) Thus, we have recovered the Gilchrist et al. model from the formulation of Ei under the assumption that natural selection has no impact on codon usage and codon NNG is the pre-defined reference codon. To see this, plug in 0 for ∆η in equation (1).

      We can then calculate the expected RSCUS using equation (1) (using notation E[Oi]) and equation (6) for the two codon case. For simplicity assume, we are only considering a gene of average expression (defined as ). Assume in this case that NNG is the reference codon (∆MNNG,∆ηNNG \= 0).

      This shows that the expected value of RSCUS for a two codon amino acid is expected to increase as the strength of selection ∆η increases, which is desired. Note that ∆η in Gilchrist et al. is formulated in terms of selection against a codon relative to the reference, such that a negative value represents that a codon is favored relative to the reference. If ∆η = 0 (i.e. selection does not favor either codon), then E[RSCUS] = 1. Also note that the expected RSCUS does not remain independent of the mutation bias. This means that even if sNe (i.e. the strength of natural selection) does not change between species, changes to the strength and direction of mutation bias across species could impact RSCUS. Assuming my math is right, I think one needs to be cautious when interpreting CAIS as representative of the differences in the efficiency of selection across species except under very particular circumstances.

      Consider our 2-codon amino acid scenario. You can see how changing GC content without changing selection can alter the CAIS values calculated from these two codons. Particularly problematic appears to be cases of extreme mutation biases, where CAIS tends toward 0 even for higher absolute values of the selection parameter. Codon usage for the majority of the genome will be primarily determined by mutation biases,

      with selection being generally strongest in a relatively few highly-expressed genes. Strong enough mutation biases ultimately can overwhelm selection, even in highly-expressed genes, reducing the fraction of sites subject to codon adaptation.

      Peer review image 1.

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      CAIS (Low Expression)

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      CAIS (Average Expression)

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      CAIS (High Expression)

      If we treat the expected codon frequencies as genome-wide frequencies, then we are basically assuming this genome made up entirely of a single 2-codon amino acid with selection on codon usage being uniform across all genes. This is obviously not true, but I think it shows some of the potential limitations of the CAIS approach. Based on these simulations, CAIS seems best employed under specific scenarios. One such case could be when it is known that mutation bias varies little across the species of interest. Looking at the species used in this manuscript, most of them have a GC content around 0.41, so I suspect their results are okay (assuming things like GC-biased gene conversion are not an issue). Outliers in GC content probably are best excluded from the analysis.

      Although I have not done so, I am sure this could be extended to the 4 and 6 codon amino acids. One potential challenge to CAIS is the non-monotonic changes in codon frequencies observed in some species (again, see Shah and Gilchrist 2011 and Gilchrist et al. 2015).

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this work, Neiswender and colleagues test the hypothesis that mutations in BicD2 that are associated with SMALED alter BicD2-cargo interactions. To do this, they first establish the WT BicD2 cargo interactome (using a proximity-dependent biotin ligase screen with Turbo-ID on the BicD2 C-terminus). In addition to known cargo interactors, they also identified many proteins in the HOPs complex. Interestingly, they find that the HOPs complex may interact with BicD2 in a different manner than other known cargos. The authors also show that while BicD2 is required for the HOPs complex localization, on average, depletion of BicD2 from HeLa and Cos7 cells causes HOPs and Lysosome mislocalization that is consistent with Kinesin-1 trafficking defects, rather than dynein. The authors also use proximity biotin ligase approaches to define the cargo interactome of three BicD2 variants associated with SMALED. One variant (R747C) has the most altered cargo interactome. The authors highlight one protein, in particular, GRAMD1A, that is only found in the R747C dataset and mislocalizes specifically when R747C is expressed.

      The work in this manuscript is of a very high quality and contributes important findings to the field.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors did a great job addressing the points I brought up!

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Silbaugh, Koster, and Hansel investigated how the cerebellar climbing fiber (CF) signals influence neuronal activity and plasticity in mouse primary somatosensory (S1) cortex. They found that optogenetic activation of CFs in the cerebellum modulates responses of cortical neurons to whisker stimulation in a cell-type-specific manner and suppresses potentiation of layer 2/3 pyramidal neurons induced by repeated whisker stimulation. This suppression of plasticity by CF activation is mediated through modulation of VIP- and SST-positive interneurons. Using transsynaptic tracing and chemogenetic approaches, the authors identified a pathway from the cerebellum through the zona incerta and the thalamic posterior medial (POm) nucleus to the S1 cortex, which underlies this functional modulation.

      Strengths:

      This study employed a combination of modern neuroscientific techniques, including two-photon imaging, opto- and chemo-genetic approaches, and transsynaptic tracing. The experiments were thoroughly conducted, and the results were clearly and systematically described. The interplay between the cerebellum and other brain regions - and its functional implications - is one of the major topics in this field. This study provides solid evidence for an instructive role of the cerebellum in experience-dependent plasticity in the S1 cortex.

      Weaknesses:

      There may be some methodological limitations, and the physiological relevance of the CF-induced plasticity modulation in the S1 cortex remains unclear. In particular, it has not been elucidated how CF activity influences the firing patterns of downstream neurons along the pathway to the S1 cortex during stimulation.

      (1) Optogenetic stimulation may have activated a large population of CFs synchronously, potentially leading to strong suppression followed by massive activation in numerous cerebellar nuclear (CN) neurons. Given that there is no quantitative estimation of the stimulated area or number of activated CFs, observed effects are difficult to interpret directly. The authors should at least provide the basic stimulation parameters (coordinates of stim location, power density, spot size, estimated number of Purkinje cells included, etc.).

      (2) There are CF collaterals directly innervating CN (PMID:10982464). Therefore, antidromic spikes induced by optogenetic stimulation may directly activate CN neurons. On the other hand, a previous study reported that CN neurons exhibit only weak responses to CF collateral inputs (PMID: 27047344). The authors should discuss these possibilities and the potential influence of CF collaterals on the interpretation of the results.

      (3) The rationale behind the plasticity induction protocol for RWS+CF (50 ms light pulses at 1 Hz during 5 min of RWS, with a 45 ms delay relative to the onset of whisker stimulation) is unclear.

      a) The authors state that 1 Hz was chosen to match the spontaneous CF firing rate (line 107); however, they also introduced a delay to mimic the CF response to whisker stimulation (line 108). This is confusing, and requires further clarification, specifically, whether the protocol was designed to reproduce spontaneous or sensory-evoked CF activity.

      b) Was the timing of delivering light pulses constant or random? Given the stochastic nature of CF firing, randomly timed light pulses with an average rate of 1Hz would be more physiologically relevant. At the very least, the authors should provide a clear explanation of how the stimulation timing was implemented.

      (4) CF activation modulates inhibitory interneurons in the S1 cortex (Figure 2): responses of interneurons in S1 to whisker stimulation were enhanced upon CF coactivation (Figure 2C), and these neurons were predominantly SST- and PV-positive interneurons (Figure 2H, I). In contrast, VIP-positive neurons were suppressed only in the late time window of 650-850 ms (Figure 2G). If the authors' hypothesis-that the activity of VIP neurons regulates SST- and PV-neuron activity during RWS+CF-is correct, then the activity of SST- and PV-neurons should also be increased during this late time window. The authors should clarify whether such temporal dynamics were observed or could be inferred from their data.

      (5) Transsynaptic tracing from CN nicely identified zona incerta (ZI) neurons and their axon terminals in both POm and S1 (Figure 6 and Figure S7).

      a) Which part of the CN (medial, interposed, or lateral) is involved in this pathway is unclear.

      b) Were the electrophysiological properties of these ZI neurons consistent with those of PV neurons?

      c) There appears to be a considerable number of axons of these ZI neurons projecting to the S1 cortex (Figure S7C). Would it be possible to estimate the relative density of axons projecting to the POm versus those projecting to S1? In addition, the authors should discuss the potential functional role of this direct pathway from the ZI to the S1 cortex.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The manuscript by Chiu et al describes the modification of the Zwitch strategy to efficiently generate conditional knockouts of zebrafish betapix. They leverage this system to identify a surprising glia-exclusive function of betapix in mediating vascular integrity and angiogenesis. Betapix has been previously associated with vascular integrity and angiogenesis in zebrafish, and betapix function in glia has also been proposed. However, this study identifies glial betapix in vascular stability and angiogenesis for the first time.

      The study derives its strength from the modified CRISPR-based Zwitch approach to identify the specific role of glial betapix (and not neuronal, mural or endothelial). Using RNA-in situ hybridisation and analysis of scRNA-Seq data, they also identify delayed maturation of neurons and glia and implicate a reduction in stathmin levels in the glial knockouts in mediating vascular homeostasis and angiogenesis. The study also implicates a betapix-zfhx3/4-vegfa axis in mediating cerebral angiogenesis.

      There is both technical (the generation of conditional KOs) and knowledge-related (the exclusive role of glial betapix in vascular stability/angiogenesis) novelty in this work that is going to benefit the community significantly.

      However, the study has the following major weaknesses:

      (1) The lack of glia-specific rescue of betapix in the global KOs/mutants prevents the study from making a compelling case for the unexpected glial-specific function in vascular development and stability.

      (2) Given the known splice-isoform specific function of betapix in haemorrhaging (Liu et al, 2007), at least an expression profile of the isoforms in glia at the relevant timepoints would have further underscored betapix function.

      (3) Direct evidence of the status of endothelial cell proliferation/survival deficits, if any, in the glial betapix KOs would have provided a key mechanistic handle. It becomes all the more relevant as Liu et al, 2012 have demonstrated reduced proliferation of endothelial cells in bbh fish and linked it to deficits in angiogenesis.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This paper describes a number of patterns of epistasis in a large fitness landscape dataset recently published by Papkou et al. The paper is motivated by an important goal in the field of evolutionary biology to understand the statistical structure of epistasis in protein fitness landscapes, and it capitalizes on the unique opportunities presented by this new dataset to address this problem.

      The paper reports some interesting previously unobserved patterns that may have implications for our understanding of fitness landscapes and protein evolution. In particular, Figure 5 is very intriguing. However, I have two major concerns detailed below. First, I found the paper rather descriptive (it makes little attempt to gain deeper insights into the origins of the observed patterns) and unfocused (it reports what appears to be a disjointed collection of various statistics without a clear narrative. Second, I have concerns with the statistical rigor of the work.

      (1) I think Figures 5 and 7 are the main, most interesting, and novel results of the paper. However, I don't think that the statement "Only a small fraction of mutations exhibit global epistasis" accurately describes what we see in Figure 5. To me, the most striking feature of this figure is that the effects of most mutations at all sites appear to be a mixture of three patterns. The most interesting pattern noted by the authors is of course the "strong" global epistasis, i.e., when the effect of a mutation is highly negatively correlated with the fitness of the background genotype. The second pattern is a "weak" global epistasis, where the correlation with background fitness is much weaker or non-existent. The third pattern is the vertically spread-out cluster at low-fitness backgrounds, i.e., a mutation has a wide range of mostly positive effects that are clearly not correlated with fitness. What is very interesting to me is that all background genotypes fall into these three groups with respect to almost every mutation, but the proportions of the three groups are different for different mutations. In contrast to the authors' statement, it seems to me that almost all mutations display strong global epistasis in at least a subset of backgrounds. A clear example is C>A mutation at site 3.

      1a. I think the authors ought to try to dissect these patterns and investigate them separately rather than lumping them all together and declaring that global epistasis is rare. For example, I would like to know whether those backgrounds in which mutations exhibit strong global epistasis are the same for all mutations or whether they are mutation- or perhaps position-specific. Both answers could be potentially very interesting, either pointing to some specific site-site interactions or, alternatively, suggesting that the statistical patterns are conserved despite variation in the underlying interactions.

      1b. Another rather remarkable feature of this plot is that the slopes of the strong global epistasis patterns seem to be very similar across mutations. Is this the case? Is there anything special about this slope? For example, does this slope simply reflect the fact that a given mutation becomes essentially lethal (i.e., produces the same minimal fitness) in a certain set of background genotypes?

      1c. Finally, how consistent are these patterns with some null expectations? Specifically, would one expect the same distribution of global epistasis slopes on an uncorrelated landscape? Are the pivot points unusually clustered relative to an expectation on an uncorrelated landscape?

      1d. The shapes of the DFE shown in Figure 7 are also quite interesting, particularly the bimodal nature of the DFE in high-fitness (HF) backgrounds. I think this bimodality must be a reflection of the clustering of mutation-background combinations mentioned above. I think the authors ought to draw this connection explicitly. Do all HF backgrounds have a bimodal DFE? What mutations occupy the "moving" peak?

      1e. In several figures, the authors compare the patterns for HF and low-fitness (LF) genotypes. In some cases, there are some stark differences between these two groups, most notably in the shape of the DFE (Figure 7B, C). But there is no discussion about what could underlie these differences. Why are the statistics of epistasis different for HF and LF genotypes? Can the authors at least speculate about possible reasons? Why do HF and LF genotypes have qualitatively different DFEs? I actually don't quite understand why the transition between bimodal DFE in Figure 7B and unimodal DFE in Figure 7C is so abrupt. Is there something biologically special about the threshold that separates LF and HF genotypes? My understanding was that this was just a statistical cutoff. Perhaps the authors can plot the DFEs for all backgrounds on the same plot and just draw a line that separates HF and LF backgrounds so that the reader can better see whether the DFE shape changes gradually or abruptly.

      1f. The analysis of the synonymous mutations is also interesting. However I think a few additional analyses are necessary to clarify what is happening here. I would like to know the extent to which synonymous mutations are more often neutral compared to non-synonymous ones. Then, synonymous pairs interact in the same way as non-synonymous pair (i.e., plot Figure 1 for synonymous pairs)? Do synonymous or non-synonymous mutations that are neutral exhibit less epistasis than non-neutral ones? Finally, do non-synonymous mutations alter epistasis among other mutations more often than synonymous mutations do? What about synonymous-neutral versus synonymous-non-neutral. Basically, I'd like to understand the extent to which a mutation that is neutral in a given background is more or less likely to alter epistasis between other mutations than a non-neutral mutation in the same background.

      (2) I have two related methodological concerns. First, in several analyses, the authors employ thresholds that appear to be arbitrary. And second, I did not see any account of measurement errors. For example, the authors chose the 0.05 threshold to distinguish between epistasis and no epistasis, but why this particular threshold was chosen is not justified. Another example: is whether the product s12 × (s1 + s2) is greater or smaller than zero for any given mutation is uncertain due to measurement errors. Presumably, how to classify each pair of mutations should depend on the precision with which the fitness of mutants is measured. These thresholds could well be different across mutants. We know, for example, that low-fitness mutants typically have noisier fitness estimates than high-fitness mutants. I think the authors should use a statistically rigorous procedure to categorize mutations and their epistatic interactions. I think it is very important to address this issue. I got very concerned about it when I saw on LL 383-388 that synonymous stop codon mutations appear to modulate epistasis among other mutations. This seems very strange to me and makes me quite worried that this is a result of noise in LF genotypes.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The idea is appealing, but the authors have not sufficiently demonstrated the utility of this approach.

      Strengths:

      Novelty of the approach, potential implications for discovering novel interactions

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have adequately addressed most of my concerns in this improved version of the manuscript

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study characterized the function of SLC35G3, a putative transmembrane UDP-N-acetylglucosamine transporter, in spermatogenesis. They showed that SLC35G3 is testis-specific and expressed in round spermatids. Slc35g3-null males were sterile but females were fertile. Slc35g3-null males produced normal sperm count but sperm showed subtle head morphology. Sperm from Slc35g3-null males have defects in uterotubal junction passage, ZP binding, and oocyte fusion. Loss of SLC35G3 causes abnormal processing and glycosylation of a number sperm proteins in testis and sperm. They demonstrated that SLC35G3 functions as a UDP-GlcNAc transporter in cell lines. Two human SLC35G3 variants impaired its transporter activity, implicating these variants in human infertility.

      Strengths:

      This study is thorough. The mutant phenotype is strong and interesting. The major conclusions are supported by the data. This study demonstrated SLC35G3 as a new and essential factor for male fertility in mice, which is likely conserved in humans.

      Weaknesses:

      Some data interpretations needed to be revised. These have been adequately addressed in the revised manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Zhang et al. used a conditional knockout mouse model to re-examine the role of the RNA-binding protein PTBP1 in the transdifferentiation of astroglial cells into neurons. Several earlier studies reported that PTBP1 knockdown can efficiently induce the transdifferentiation of rodent glial cells into neurons, suggesting potential therapeutic applications for neurodegenerative diseases. However, these findings have been contested by subsequent studies, which in turn have been challenged by more recent publications. In their current work, Zhang et al. deleted exon 2 of the Ptbp1 gene using an astrocyte-specific, tamoxifen-inducible Cre line and investigated - using fluorescence imaging and bulk and single-cell RNA-sequencing - whether this manipulation promotes the transdifferentiation of astrocytes into neurons across various brain regions. The data strongly indicate that genetic ablation of PTBP1 is not sufficient to drive efficient conversion of astrocytes into neurons. Interestingly, while PTBP1 loss alters splicing patterns in numerous genes, these changes do not shift the astroglial transcriptome toward a neuronal profile.

      Strengths:

      Although this is not the first report of PTBP1 ablation in mouse astrocytes in vivo, this study utilizes a distinct knockout strategy and provides novel insights into PTBP1-regulated splicing events in astrocytes. The manuscript is well written, and the experiments are technically sound and properly controlled. I believe this study will be of considerable interest to the broad readership of eLife.

      Original weaknesses:

      (1) The primary point that needs to be addressed is a better understanding of the effect of exon 2 deletion on PTBP1 expression. Figure 4D shows successful deletion of exon 2 in knockout astrocytes. However - assuming that the coverage plots are CPM-normalized - the overall PTBP1 mRNA expression level appears unchanged. Figure 6A further supports this observation. This is surprising, as one would expect that the loss of exon 2 would shift the open reading frame and trigger nonsense-mediated decay of the PTBP1 transcript. Given this uncertainty, the authors should confirm the successful elimination of PTBP1 protein in cKO astrocytes using an orthogonal approach, such as Western blotting, in addition to immunofluorescence. They should also discuss possible reasons why PTBP1 mRNA abundance is not detectably affected by the frameshift.

      (2) The authors should analyze PTBP1 expression in WT and cKO substantia nigra samples shown in Figure 3 or justify why this analysis is not necessary.

      (3) Lines 236-238 and Figure 4E: The authors report an enrichment of CU-rich sequences near PTBP1-regulated exons. To better compare this with previous studies on position-specific splicing regulation by PTBP1, it would be helpful to assess whether the position of such motifs differs between PTBP1-activated and PTBP1-repressed exons.

      (4) The analyses in Figure 5 and its supplement strongly suggest that the splicing changes in PTBP1-depleted astrocytes are distinct from those occurring during neuronal differentiation. However, the authors should ensure that these comparisons are not confounded by transcriptome-wide differences in gene expression levels between astrocytes and developing neurons. One way to address this concern would be to compare the new PTBP1 cKO data with publicly available RNA-seq datasets of astrocytes induced to transdifferentiate into neurons using proneural transcription factors (e.g., PMID: 38956165).

      Point 1 has been successfully addressed in the revision by providing relevant references/discussion. Points 2-4 were addressed by including additional data/analyses.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this paper, the authors use numerical simulations to try to understand better a major experimental discovery in songbird neuroscience from 2002 by Richard Hahnloser and collaborators. The 2002 paper found that a certain class of projection neurons in the premotor nucleus HVC of adult male zebra finch songbirds, the neurons that project to another premotor nucleus RA, fired sparsely (once per song motif) and precisely (to about 1 ms accuracy) during singing.

      The experimental discovery is important to understand since it initially suggested that the sparsely firing RA-projecting neurons acted as a simple clock that was localized to HVC and that controlled all details of the temporal hierarchy of singing: notes, syllables, gaps, and motifs. Later experiments suggested that the initial interpretation might be incomplete: that the temporal structure of adult male zebra finch songs instead emerged in a more complicated and distributed way, still not well understood, from the interaction of HVC with multiple other nuclei, including auditory and brainstem areas. So at least two major questions remain unanswered more than two decades after the 2002 experiment: What is the neurobiological mechanism that produces the sparse precise bursting: is it a local circuit in HVC or is it some combination of external input to HVC and local circuitry? And how is the sparse precise bursting in HVC related to a songbird's vocalizations?

      The authors only investigate part of the first question, whether the mechanism for sparse precise bursts is local to HVC. They do so indirectly, by using conductance-based Hodgkin-Huxley-like equations to simulate the spiking dynamics of a simplified network that includes three known major classes of HVC neurons and such that all neurons within a class are assumed to be identical. A strength of the calculations is that the authors include known biophysically deduced details of the different conductances of the three majors classes of HVC neurons, and they take into account what is known, based on sparse paired recordings in slices, about how the three classes connect to one another. One weakness of the paper is that the authors make arbitrary and not-well-motivated assumptions about the network geometry, and they do not use the flexibility of their simulations to study how their results depend on their network assumptions. A second weakness is that they ignore many known experimental details such as projections into HVC from other nuclei, dendritic computations (the somas and dendrites are treated by the authors as point-like isopotential objects), the role of neuromodulators, and known heterogeneity of the interneurons. These weaknesses make it difficult for readers to know the relevance of the simulations for experiments and for advancing theoretical understanding.

      Strengths:

      The authors use conductance-based Hodgkin-Huxley-like equations to simulate spiking activity in a network of neurons intended to model more accurately songbird nucleus HVC of adult male zebra finches. Spiking models are much closer to experiments than models based on firing rates or on 2-state neurons.

      The authors include information deduced from modeling experimental current-clamp data such as the types and properties of conductances. They also take into account how neurons in one class connect to neurons in other classes via excitatory or inhibitory synapses, based on sparse paired recordings in slices by other researchers.

      The authors obtain some new results of modest interest such as how changes in the maximum conductances of four key channels (e.g., A-type K+ currents or Ca-dependent K+ currents) influence the structure and propagation of bursts, while simultaneously being able to mimic accurately current-clamp voltage measurements.

      Weaknesses:

      One weakness of this paper is the lack of a clearly stated, interesting, and relevant scientific question to try to answer. The authors do not discuss adequately in their introduction what questions have recent experimental and theoretical work failed to explain adequately concerning HVC neural dynamics and its role in producing vocalizations. The authors do not discuss adequately why they chose the approach of their paper and how their results address some of these questions.

      For example, the authors need to explain in more detail how their calculations relate to the works of Daou et al, J. Neurophys. 2013 (which already fitted spiking models to neuronal data and identified certain conductances), to Jin et al J. Comput. Neurosci. 2007 (which already discussed how to get bursts using some experimental details), and to the rather similar paper by E. Armstrong and H. Abarbanel, J. Neurophys 2016, which already postulated and studied sequences of microcircuits in HVC. This last paper is not even cited by the authors.

      The authors' main achievement is to show that simulations of a certain simplified and idealized network of spiking neurons, that includes some experimental details but ignores many others, can match some experimental results like current-clamp-derived voltage time series for the three classes of HVC neurons (although this was already reported in earlier work by Daou and collaborators in 2013), and simultaneously the robust propagation of bursts with properties similar to those observed in experiments. The authors also present results about how certain neuronal details and burst propagation change when certain key maximum conductances are varied.

      But these are weak conclusions for two reasons. First, the authors did not do enough calculations to allow the reader to understand how many parameters were needed to obtain these fits and whether simpler circuits, say with fewer parameters and simpler network topology, could do just as well. Second, many previous researchers have demonstrated robust burst propagation in a variety of feed-forward models. So what is new and important about the authors' results compared to the previous computational papers?

      Also missing is a discussion, or at least an acknowledgement, of the fact that not all of the fine experimental details of undershoots, latencies, spike structure, spike accommodation, etc may be relevant for understanding vocalization. While it is nice to know that some model can match these experimental details and produce realistic bursts, that does not mean that all of these details are relevant for the function of producing precise vocalizations. Scientific insights in biology often require exploring which of the many observed details can be ignored, and especially identifying the few that are essential for answering some questions. As one example, if HVC-X neurons are completely removed from the authors' model, does one still get robust and reasonable burst propagation of HVC-RA neurons? While part of nucleus HVC acts as a premotor circuit that drives nucleus RA, part of HVC is also related to learning. It is not clear that HVC-X neurons, which carry out some unknown calculation and transmit information to area X in a learning pathway, are relevant for burst production and propagation of HVC-RA neurons, and so relevant for vocalization. Simulations provide a convenient and direct way to explore questions of this kind.

      One key question to answer is whether the bursting of HVC-RA projection neurons is based on a mechanism local to HVC or is some combination of external driving (say from auditory nuclei) and local circuitry. The authors do not contribute to answering this question because they ignore external driving and assume that the mechanism is some kind of intrinsic feed-forward circuit, which they put in by hand in a rather arbitrary and poorly justified way, by assuming the existence of small microcircuits consisting of a few HVC-RA, HVC-X, and HVC-I neurons that somehow correspond to "sub-syllabic segments". To my knowledge, experiments do not suggest the existence of such microcircuits nor does theory suggest the need for such microcircuits.

      Another weakness of this paper is an unsatisfactory discussion of how the model was obtained, validated, and simulated. The authors should state as clearly as possible, in one location such as an appendix, what is the total number of independent parameters for the entire network and how parameter values were deduced from data or assigned by hand. With enough parameters and variables, many details can be fit arbitrarily accurately so researchers have to be careful to avoid overfitting. If parameter values were obtained by fitting to data, the authors should state clearly what was the fitting algorithm (some iterative nonlinear method, whose results can depend on the initial choice of parameters), what was the error function used for fitting (sum of least squares?), and what data were used for the fitting.

      The authors should also state clearly what is the dynamical state of the network, the vector of quantities that evolve over time. (What is the dimension of that vector, which is also the number of ordinary differential equations that have to be integrated?) The authors do not mention what initial state was used to start the numerical integrations, whether transient dynamics were observed and what were their properties, or how the results depend on the choice of initial state. The authors do not discuss how they determined that their model was programmed correctly (it is difficult to avoid typing errors when writing several pages or more of a code in any language) or how they determined the accuracy of the numerical integration method beyond fitting to experimental data, say by varying the time step size over some range or by comparing two different integration algorithms.

      Also disappointing is that the authors do not make any predictions to test, except rather weak ones such as that varying a maximum conductance sufficiently (which might be possible by using dynamic clamps) might cause burst propagation to stop or change its properties. Based on their results, the authors do not make suggestions for further experiments or calculations, but they should.

      Comments on revised version:

      The second version, unfortunately, did not address most of the substantive comments so that, while some parts of the discussion were expanded, most of the serious scientific weaknesses mentioned in the first round of review remain. The revised preprint is not a substantive improvement over the first.

    1. Joint Public Review:

      Summary:

      The authors previously published a study of RGC boutons in the dLGN in developing wild-type mice and developing mutant mice with disrupted spontaneous activity. In the current manuscript, they have broken down their analysis of RGC boutons according to the number of Homer/Bassoon puncta associated with each vGlut3 cluster.

      The authors find that, in the first post-natal week, RGC boutons with multiple active zones (mAZs) are about a third as common as boutons with a single active zone (sAZ). The size of the vGluT2 cluster associated with each bouton was proportional to the number of active zones present in each bouton. Within the author's ability to estimate these values (n=3 per group, 95% of results expected to be within ~2.5 standard deviations), these results are consistent across groups: 1) dominant eye vs. non-dominant eye, 2) wild-type mice vs. mice with activity blocked, and at 3) ages P2, P4, and P8. The authors also found that mAZs and sAZs also have roughly the same number (about 1.5) of sAZs clustered around them (within 1.5 um).

      There has been much discussion with the reviewers through multiple versions of this paper. of how to interpret these findings. Based on a large number of tests for statistical significance, the authors interpreted the presence of a statistical significance difference as evidence that "Eye-specific active zone clustering underlies synaptic competition in the developing visual system (title of previous version of manuscript)". The reviewers have focused on the small effect size as indicating that the small differences observed are not informative regarding this biological question. The authors have now tempered this interpretation.

      Strengths:

      The source dataset is high resolution data showing the colocalization of multiple synaptic proteins across development. Added to this data is labeling that distinguishes axons from the right eye from axons from the left eye. The first order analysis of this data showing changes in synapse density and in the occurrence of multi-active zone synapses is useful information about the development of an important model for activity dependent synaptic remodeling.

      Reviewing Editor's comment on the latest revision (without sending the paper back to the individual reviewers):

      In their latest revision, the authors have moderated earlier causal claims, incorporated additional statistical controls, and largely maintained their original interpretation of the data. While these changes address some prior concerns, the underlying issues remain. The previous review emphasized that the reported effect sizes were small and therefore hard to link to biological relevance. The authors argue that the effect sizes are large. Given the lack of a biological argument for this effect size, this point is really semantic. We would like to point out that the effect size measurement the authors used is likely a standard effect size calculation (the difference between groups is divided by the standard deviation of the groups). With only three experiments and irregular variance, it is likely that their estimates of standard deviation-and therefore effect size-are unreliable. Overall, the revisions improve presentation but do not substantively resolve the difficulty in drawing strong conclusions from the data set raised earlier.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The previous evidence for NMDARs containing N1, N2, and N3 subunits (t-NMDARs) was weak. All previous results could be explained by mixtures of di-heteromeric receptors. The authors here set out to identify t-NMDARs both in vitro and in the brain.

      Strengths:

      The single-channel recording is quite convincing because the authors could reproduce previous results in their system, but could also then add new observations. It is quite hard (if not impossible) to obtain the N1-N2A-N3A result at 100 µM Glu/Gly from a mixture, because the N1-N2A diheteromer has such a high open probability. Therefore, any idea that this might be, in fact, two receptors (GluN1-N2A and GluN1-N3A) is trivially falsified. The authors might prefer to make this argument based on the reduction of open probability, which cannot be achieved from a mixture masquerading as a single channel.

      With regard to crosslinker usage in brain tissue, these are very impressive attempts, which I applaud. The fluorescence images of the brain sections look convincing. But the bands corresponding to N2-N3 crosslinked subunits from neurons or the brain are faint. I would want more information to be convinced that these faint bands come from GluN2-N3 dimers.

      Weaknesses:

      In the first part of the paper, where the CryoEM structure is determined, it's not really clear to me the extent to which Fab binding might bias the position of the ATDs (and even then the arrangement of each subunit within the whole complex). Then, much later at the end of the results, there is a structural analysis that claims to be integrative (Figure 7) but does not obviously rely on any other data than the structures, but does mention this point about the Fabs. The results could be rearranged to make these points clearer.

      I have my biggest doubts about the crosslinking of native receptors. For the biochemistry from neurons or brain tissue, this is a very ambitious idea that has been hard to execute over the past 15-20 years. The authors use AzF for the obvious reason that this was done before in NMDARs. The constructs that have been assembled are neat. But AzF is a really bad crosslinker. The authors attribute the weak bands to subunit mobility, but the minor abundance is more likely due to the strong constraints on AzF crosslinking and its unsuitable photochemistry in general (very easily activated with room light, for example).

      There is no information at all given about the wavelength, intensity, duration of UV exposure, and how, for example, the right exposure was determined. How were the samples protected in between?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study shows that childhood malaria can weaken the antibody response to other vaccines and infections. This suggests that early exposure to P. falciparum may have a long-lasting effect on immunity, with implications for vaccine efficacy in endemic areas.

      Strengths:

      This study stands out for its longitudinal design, the use of robust immunological techniques, and the comparison between areas with different levels of malaria exposure. Its findings reveal that early malaria can weaken the response to childhood vaccines, with important implications for public health in endemic regions.

      Weaknesses:

      One of the study's main limitations is the lack of functional data confirming the clinical impact of the low antibody levels. Furthermore, although multiple immune responses were measured, other important components, such as cellular immunity, were not assessed. Furthermore, the results may not be generalizable to other regions.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This report demonstrates that the gene expression output of the Wnt pathway, when controlled precisely by a synthetic light-based input, depends substantially on the frequency of stimulation. The particular frequency-dependent trend that is observed - anti-resonance, a suppression of target gene expression at intermediate frequencies given a constant duty cycle - is a novel aspect that has not been clearly shown before for this or other signaling pathways. The paper provides both clear experimental evidence of the phenomenon with engineered cellular systems and a model-based analysis of how the pairing of rate constants in pathway activation/deactivation could result in such a trend.

      Strengths:

      This report couples in vitro experimental data with an abstracted mathematical model. Both of these approaches appear to be technically sound and to provide consistent and strong support for the main conclusion. The experimental data are particularly clear, and the demonstration that Brachyury expression is subject to anti-resonance in ESCs is particularly compelling. The modeling approach is reasonably scaled for the system at the level of detail that is needed in this case, and the hidden variable analysis provides some insight into how the anti-resonance works.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The anti-resonance phenomenon has not been demonstrated using physiological Wnt ligands; however, I view this as only a minor weakness for an initial report of the phenomenon. The potential significance of the phenomenon for Wnt outweighs the amount of effort it would take to carry the demonstration further - testing different frequencies/duty cycles at the level of ligand stimulus using microfluidics could get quite involved, and would likely take quite some time. Adding some more discussion about how the time scales of ligand-receptor binding could play into the reduced model would further ameliorate this issue.

      (2) While the model is fully consistent with the data, it has not been validated using experimental manipulations to establish that the mechanisms of the cell system and the model are the same. There may be some ways to make such modifications, for example, using a proteasome inhibitor. An alternative would be to more explicitly mention the need to validate the model's mechanism with experiments.

      (3) I think the manuscript misses an opportunity to discuss the potential of the phenomenon in other pathways. The hedgehog pathway, for example, involves GSK3-mediated partial proteolysis of a transcription factor, which could conceivably be subject to similar behaviors, and there are certainly other examples as well.

      (4) Some aspects of the modeling and hidden variable analysis are not optimally presented in the main text, although when considered together with the Supplemental Data, there are no significant deficiencies.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript presents a compelling and innovative approach that combines Track2p neuronal tracking with advanced analytical methods to investigate early postnatal brain development. The work provides a powerful framework for exploring complex developmental processes such as the emergence of sensory representations, cognitive functions, and activity-dependent circuit formation. By enabling the tracking of the same neurons over extended developmental periods, this methodology sets the stage for mechanistic insights that were previously inaccessible.

      Strengths:

      (1) Innovative Methodology:

      The integration of Track2p with longitudinal calcium imaging offers a unique capability to follow individual neurons across critical developmental windows.

      (2) High Conceptual Impact:

      The manuscript outlines a clear path for using this approach to study foundational developmental questions, such as how early neuronal activity shapes later functional properties and network assembly.

      (3) Future Experimental Potential:

      The authors convincingly argue for the feasibility of extending this tracking into adulthood and combining it with targeted manipulations, which could significantly advance our understanding of causality in developmental processes.

      (4) Broad Applicability:

      The proposed framework can be adapted to a wide range of experimental designs and questions, making it a valuable resource for the field.

      Weaknesses:

      None major. The manuscript is conceptually strong and methodologically sound. Future studies will need to address potential technical limitations of long-term tracking, but this does not detract from the current work's significance and clarity of vision

      Comments on revisions:

      I have no further requests. I think this is an excellent manuscript

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors explore the role of the conserved transcription factor POU4-2 in planarian maintenance and regeneration of mechanosensory neurons. The authors explore the role of this transcription factor and identify potential targets of this transcription factor. Importantly, many genes discovered in this work are deeply conserved, with roles in mechanosensation and hearing, indicating that planarians may be a useful model with which to study the roles of these key molecules. This work is important within the field of regenerative neurobiology, but also impactful for those studying evolution of the machinery that is important for human hearing.

      Strengths:

      The paper is rigorous and thorough, with convincing support for the conclusions of the work.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This is an interesting and valuable paper by Gil-Lievana, Arroyo et al. that presents an open-source method (the "Crunchometer") for quantifying biting and chewing behavior in mice using audio detection. The work addresses an important and unmet need in the field: quantitative measures of feeding behavior with solid foods, since most prior approaches have been limited to liquids. The authors make a clear and compelling case for why this problem is important, and I fully agree with their motivation.

      The system is carefully validated against human-scored video data and is shown to be at least as accurate, and in some cases more accurate, than human observers. This is a major strength of the study. I also particularly appreciate the demonstration of the technology in the context of LHA circuitry, which nicely illustrates its utility and importance for mechanistic studies of feeding. I also appreciate the ability to readily time-lock neural data to individual crunches. Overall, the manuscript is well-executed and represents a useful contribution to the field.

      The comments I have are largely minor and should be straightforward to address:

      (1) The authors should report sample sizes for all mouse cohorts, either alongside the statistics or in the figure legends for mean data.

      (2) Clarification is needed as to whether crunch detection fidelity is influenced by the hardness or softness of the food. The focus here is on standard pellets, with some additional high-fat pellet data, but it would be useful to know how generalizable the method is across different textures.

      (3) The authors should comment on how susceptible the Crunchometer is to background noise. For example, how well does it perform in the presence of white noise, experimenter movement, or other task-related sounds?

      (4) Chemogenetic activation of LHA GABAergic neurons is used. DREADD-based activation may strongly drive these neurons in a way that is not directly comparable to optogenetic or more physiological manipulations. While I do not think additional experiments are required, it would strengthen the discussion to briefly acknowledge this limitation.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This paper is a relevant overview of the currently published literature on low-intensity focused ultrasound stimulation (TUS) in humans, with a meta-analysis of this literature that explores which stimulation parameters might predict the directionality of the physiological stimulation effects.

      The pool of papers to draw from is small, which is not surprising given the nascent technology. It seems, nevertheless, relevant to summarise the current field in the way done here, not least to mitigate and prevent some of the mistakes that other non-invasive brain stimulation techniques have suffered from, most notably the theory- and data free permutation of the parameter space.

      A database summarising the literature and allowing for quantitative assessment of these studies is a key contribution of the paper. If curated well, it can become a valuable community resource.

      Comments on revisions:

      The paper is much improved. There remain a few caveats the authors may want to address.

      I'm not going to dwell on this if the authors don't agree, but remain critical about the inclusion of TPS in the discussion. It's comparing apples and oranges, and unless there's a personal interest the authors have in TPS, it remains puzzling why it is included in the first place. As per my previous review, the literature on TPS, and especially the main example cited, has been highly criticised, including national patient and medical associations. A mere disclaimer that more work is needed isn't enough, in this reviewer's opinion - I simply don't understand why the authors go out on a limb here when the rest of the paper is done so well and thoroughly.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript "Lifestyles shape genome size and gene content in fungal pathogens" by Fijarczyk et al. presents a comprehensive analyses of a large dataset of fungal genomes to investigate what genomic features correlate with pathogenicity and insect associations. The authors focus on a single class of fungi, due to the diversity of life styles and availability of genomes. They analyze a set of 12 genomic features for correlations with either pathogenicity or insect association and find that, contrary to previous assertions, repeat content does not associate with pathogenicity. They discover that the number of protein coding genes, including total size of non-repetitive DNA does correlate with pathogenicity. However, unique features are associated to insect associations. This work represents an important contribution to the attempts to understand what features of genomic architecture impact the evolution of pathogenicity in fungi.

      Strengths:

      The statistical methods appear to be properly employed and analyses thoroughly conducted. The size of the dataset is impressive and likely makes the conclusions robust. The manuscript is well written and the information, while dense, is generally presented in a clear manner.

      Weaknesses:

      My main concerns all involve the genomic data, how they were annotated, and the biases this could impart to the downstream analyses. The three main features I'm concerned with are sequencing technology, gene annotation, and repeat annotation. The authors have done an excellent investigation into these issues, but these show concerning trends, and my concerns are not as assuaged as the authors.

      The collection of genomes is diverse and includes assemblies generated from multiple sequencing technologies including both short- and long-read technologies. From the number of scaffolds its clear that the quality of the assemblies varies dramatically, even within categories of long- and short-read. This is going to impact many of the values important for this study, as the authors show.

      I have considerable worries that the gene annotation methods could impart biases that significantly effect the main conclusions. Only 5 reference training sets were used for the Sordariomycetes and these are unequally distributed across the phylogeny. Augusts obviously performed less than ideally, as the authors observe in their extended analysis. While the authors are not concerned about phylogenetic distance from the training species, due to prevailing trends, I am not as convinced. In figure S12, the Augustus features appear to have considerably more variation in values for the H2 set and possible the microascales. It is unclear how this would effect the conclusions in this study.

      Unfortunately, the genomes available from NCBI will vary greatly in the quality of their repeat masking. While some will have been masked using custom libraries generated with software like Repeatmodeler, others will probably have been masked with public databases like repbase. As public databases are again biased towards certain species (Fusarium is well represented in repbase for example), this could have significant impacts on estimating repeat content. Additionally, even custom libraries can be problematic as some software (like RepeatModeler) will included multicopy host genes leading to bona fide genes being masked if proper filtering is not employed. A more consistent repeat masking pipeline would add to the robustness of the conclusions. The authors show that there is a significant bias in their set.

      To a lesser degree I wonder what impact the use of representative genomes for a species has on the analyses. Some species vary greatly in genome size, repeat content and architecture among strains. I understand that it is difficult to address in this type of analysis, but it could be discussed.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Chaiyasitdhi et al. set out to investigate the detailed ultrastructure of the scolopidia in the locust Müller's organ, the geometry of the forces delivered to these scolopidia during natural stimulation, and the direction of forces that are most effective at eliciting transduction currents. To study the ultrastructure, they used the FIB-SEM technique, to study the geometry of natural stimulation, they used OCT vibrometry and high-speed light microscopy, and to study transduction currents, they used patch clamp physiology.

      Strengths:

      I believe that the ultrastructural description of the locust scolopidium is excellent and the first of its kind in any insect system. In particular, the finding of the bend in the dendritic cilium and the position of the ciliary dilation are interesting, and it would be interesting to see whether these are common features within the huge diversity of insect chordotonal organs.

      I believe the use of OCT to measure organ movements is a significant strength of this paper; however, using ex vivo preparations undermines any conclusions drawn about the system's in vivo mechanics.

      The choice of Group III scolopidia is also good. Research on the mechanics of locust tympana has shown that travelling waves are formed on the tympanum and waves of different frequencies show highest amplitudes at different positions on the tympanum, and therefore also on different groups of scolopidia within the Müller's organ (Windmill et al, 2005; 2008, and Malkin et al, 2013). The lowest frequency modal waves (F0) observed by Windmill et al 2008 were at about 4.4 kHz, which are slightly higher than the ~3 kHz frequencies studied in this paper but do show large deflections where these group III scolopidia attach at the styliform body (Windmill et al, 2005).

      This should be mentioned in the paper since the electrophysiology justification to use group III neurons is less convincing, given that Jacobs et al 1999 clearly point out that group III neurons are very variable and some of them are tuned much higher to 10 kHz, and others even higher to 20-30 kHz.

      Weaknesses:

      Specifically, it is understandable that the authors decided to use excised ears for the light microscopy, where Müller's organ would not be accessible in situ. However, it is very likely that excision will change the system's mechanics, especially since any tension or support to Müller's organ will be ablated. OCT enables in vivo measurements in fully undissected systems (Mhatre et al, Biorxiv, 2021) or in systems with minimal dissection where the mechanics have not been compromised (Vavakou et al, 2021). The choice to entirely dissect out the membrane is difficult to understand here.

      My main concern with this paper, however, is the use of light microscopy very close to the Nyquist limit to study scolopidial motion, and the fact that the OCT data contradict and do not match the light microscopy data.

      The light microscopy data is collected at ~8 kHz, and hence the Nyquist limit is ~4 kHz. It is possible to measure frequencies reliably this close to the limit, but the amplitude of motion is quite likely to be underestimated, given that the technique only provides 2 sample points per cycle at 4 kHz and approximately 2.66 sample points at 3 kHz. At that temporal resolution, the samples are much more likely to miss the peak of the wave than not, and therefore, amplitudes will be misestimated. A much more reasonable sample rate for amplitude estimation is generally about 10 samples per cycle. I do not believe the data from the microscopy is reliable for what the authors wish to use them for.

      Using the light microscopy data, the authors claim that the strains experienced by the group III scolopidia at 3 kHz are greater along the AP axis than the ML axis (Figure 4). However, this is contradicted by the OCT data, which show very low strain along the AP axis (black traces) at and around 3 kHz (Figure 3c and extended data Figure 2f) and show some movement along the ML axis (red traces, same figures). The phase at low amplitudes of motion cannot be considered very reliable either, and hence phase variations at these frequencies in the OCT cannot be considered reliable indicators of AP motion; hence, I'm unclear whether the vector difference in the OCT is a reliable indicator of movement.

      The OCT data are significantly more reliable as they are acquired at an appropriate sampling rate of 90 kHz. The authors do not mention what microphone they use to monitor or calibrate their sound field and phase measurements in OCT, but I presume this was done since it is the norm. Thus, the OCT data show that the movement within the Müller's organ is complex, probably traces an ellipse at some frequencies as observed in bushcrickets (Vavkou et al, 2021) and also thought to be the case in tree crickets based on the known attachment points of the TO (Mhatre et al, 2021). The OCT data shows relatively low AP motion at frequencies near 3 kHz, and higher ML motion, which contradicts the less reliable light microscopy data. Given that the locust membrane shows peaks in motion at ~4.5 kHz, ~11 kHz, and also at ~20 kHz (Windmill et al, 2008), I am surprised that the authors limited their OCT experiments and analyses to 5 kHz.

      In summary for this section, I am not convinced of the conclusion drawn by the authors that group III scolopidia receive significantly higher stimulation along the AP axis in their native configuration, if indeed they were studied in the appropriate force regime (altered due to excision).

      In the scolopidial patch clamp data, the authors study transduction currents in response to steady state stimulation along the AP axis and the ML axis. The responses to steady state and periodic forces may well be different, and the authors do not offer us a way to clearly relate the two and therefore, to interpret the data.

      In addition, both stimulation types, along the AP axis and the ML, elicit clear transduction responses. Stimulation along the AP axis might be slightly higher, but there is over 40% variation around the mean in one case (pull: 26.22 {plus minus} 10.99 pA) and close to 80% variation in the other (push: 10.96 {plus minus} 8.59 pA). These data are indeed from a very high displacement range (2000 nm), which is very high compared to the native displacement levels, which are in the 1-10 nm range.

      The factor change from sample to sample is not reported, and is small even overall. The statistical analyses of these data are not clearly reported, and I don't see the results of the overall ANOVA in the results section. I also find the dip in the reported transduction currents between 10 and 100 nm quite odd (Figure 5 j-m) and would like to know what the authors' interpretation of this behaviour is. It seems to me that those currents increase continuously linearly after ~50-100 nm and that the data below that range are in the noise. Thus, the transduction currents observed at the relevant displacement range (1-10 nm) may not actually be reliable. How were these small displacements achieved, and how closely were the actual levels monitored? Is it possible to reliably deliver 1-10 nm displacements using a micromanipulator?

      What is clear, despite the difficulty in interpreting this data, is that both AP and ML stimulation evoke transduction currents, and their relative differences are small. Additionally, in Müller's organ itself, in the excised organ, the scolopidia are stimulated along both axes. Thus, in my opinion, it is not possible to say that axial stretch along the cilium is 'the key mechanical input that activates mechano-electrical transduction'.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study shows a novel role for SCoR2 in regulating metabolic pathways in the heart to prevent injury following ischemia/reperfusion. It combines a new multi-omics method to determine SCoR2 mediated metabolic pathways in the heart. This paper would be of interest to cardiovascular researchers working on cardioprotective strategies following ischemic injury in the heart.

      Strengths:

      (1) Use of SCoR2KO mice subjected to I/R injury.

      (2) Identification of multiple metabolic pathways in the heart by a novel multi-omics approach.

      Comments on revisions:

      Authors have addressed all concerns raised in the previous round of review. Substantial modifications have been made in response to those concerns. There are no further comments.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors identify small-molecule compounds modulating the stability of the mitochondrial transcription factor A (TFAM) using a high-throughput CETSA screen and subsequent secondary assays. The identified compounds increased the protein levels of TFAM without affecting its RNA levels and led to an increase in mtDNA levels. As a read-out for dose-dependent action of the identified compounds, the authors investigated cGAS-STING and ISG activation in cellular inflammation models in the presence or absence of their compounds. The addition of TFAM modulators led to a decrease in cGAS-STING/ISG activation and decreased mtDNA release. Furthermore, beneficial effects could be determined in models of mtDNA disease (rescue of ATP rates), sclerotic fibroblasts (decreased fibrosis), and regulatory T cells (decreased activation of effector T cells). The study thus proposes novel first-in-class regulators of TFAM as a therapeutic option in conditions of mitochondrial dysfunction.

      Strengths:

      The authors identified TFAM as a promising target in conditions of mitochondrial dysfunction, as it is a key regulator of mitochondrial function, serving both as a transcription and packaging factor of mtDNA. Importantly, TFAM is a key regulator of mtDNA copy number, and a moderate increase in TFAM/mtDNA levels has been shown to be beneficial in a number of pathological conditions. Furthermore, mtDNA release leading to activation of inflammatory responses has been linked to a variety of pathological conditions in the last decade. Thus, the identification of small molecule modulators of TFAM that have the potential to increase mtDNA copy number and decrease inflammatory signaling is of great importance. Furthermore, the authors highlight potential applications in the field of mitochondrial disease, fibrosis, and autoimmune disease.

      Weaknesses:

      The central weakness of the study is the fact that the authors propose compounds as modulators or even activators of TFAM without sufficiently proving a direct effect on TFAM itself. There are no data indicating a direct effect on TFAM activity (e.g., mtDNA transcription, replication, packaging), and it is not sufficiently ruled out that other proteins (e.g., LONP1) mediate the effect. Additionally, important information on the performed screen is not provided. Thus, the data presented is currently incomplete to support the described findings. Furthermore, the introduction and discussion are lacking key references.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors aimed to clarify the transcriptional changes across murine postnatal small intestinal development (0 days to 1 month) in both the duodenum and ileum, a period that shows morphological similarity to 20-30 week old fetal humans. This is an especially critical stage in human intestinal development, as necrotizing enterocolitis (NEC) usually manifests during these stages.

      Strengths:

      The authors assessed numerous timepoints between 0 days and 1 month in the postnatal mouse duodenum and ileum using bulk RNA transcriptomics of bulk-isolated tissues. Cellular deconvolution, based on relative marker expression, was used to clarify immune cell proportions in the bulk RNA sequencing data. They confirmed some transcriptional targets found in vivo primarily in mouse via qrtPCR and immunohistochemistry, but also in human fetal tissues and isolated organoids, and are of decent quality.

      Weaknesses:

      The overall weakness of this study, as mentioned by the authors themselves, is that the bulk transcriptomic data generated for the study were isolated from non-fractionated bulk intestinal tissue. This makes it difficult to interpret much of this data regarding cellular fractions found across developmental time. It is difficult to rationalize the approach here, as even isolation protocols of epithelial-only or mesenchyme-only tissues for bulk RNA sequencing are well established. The authors address some of these concerns using cellular deconvolution for immune cell populations, which I think might be helpful if they expanded this analysis to other cell types (mesenchyme, endothelium, glia). However, I would assume that bulk isolations across developmental time are going to be influenced primarily by the bulk of tissue-type found at each time point - primarily epithelium. But this is also confirmed by the immune transcripts becoming more apparent later in their time series, as this system becomes more established during weaning. This study might also be strengthened by comparison with data that is publicly available for early fetal stage development in humans. Comparisons between the duodenum and ileum could be strengthened by what we already know from adult data, from both epithelial- and mesenchyme-isolated fractions. The rationale of using the postnatal mouse as a comparison to NEC is also a little unclear- perhaps some of the developmental processes are similar, however, the environments are completely different. For example, even in early postnatal mouse development, you would find microbial activity and milk.

    1. Joint Public Review:

      In this study, the authors sought to characterize the relationship between the timescales of evidence integration in an auditory change detection task and neural activity dynamics in the rat posterior parietal cortex (PPC), an area that has been implicated in the accumulation of sensory evidence. Using the state-of-the-art Neuropixel recording techniques, they identified two subpopulations of neurons whose firing rates were positively and negatively modulated by auditory clicks. The timescale of click-related response was similar to the behaviorally measured timescale for evidence evaluation. The click-related response of positively modulated neurons also depended on when the clicks were presented, which the authors hypothesized to reflect a time-dependent gain change to implement an urgency signal. Using muscimol injections to inactivate the PPC, they showed that PPC inactivation affected the rats' choices and reaction times.

      There are several strengths of this study, including:

      (1) Compelling evidence for short temporal integration in behavioral and neural data for this task.

      (2) Well-executed and interpretable comparisons of psychophysical reverse correlation with single-trial, click-triggered neuronal analyses to relate behavior and neural activity.

      (3) Inactivation experiments to test for causality.

      (4) Characterization of neural subpopulations that allows for complex relationships between a brain region and behavior.

      (5) Experimental evidence for an interesting way to use sensory gain change to implement urgency signals.

      There are also some concerns, including:

      (1) The work could be better contextualized. From a normative Bayesian perspective, the observed adaptation of timescales and gain aligns closely with optimal strategies for change detection in noisy streams: placing greater weight on recent sensory samples and lowering evidence requirements as decision urgency grows. However, the manuscript could go further in explicitly connecting the experimental findings to normative models, such as leaky accumulator or dynamic belief-updating frameworks. This would strengthen the broader impact of the work by making clear how the observed PPC dynamics instantiate computationally optimal strategies.

      (2) It is unclear how the rats are performing the task, both in terms of the quality of performance (they only show hit rates, but the rats also seem to have high false alarm rates), and in terms of the underlying strategy that they seem to be using.

      (3) A major conceptual weakness lies in the claim that PPC "dynamically modulates evidence evaluation in a time-adaptive manner to suit the behavioral demands of a free-response change detection task." To support this claim, it would require direct comparison of neural activity between two task demands, either in two tasks or in one task with manipulations that promote the adoption of different timescales.

      (4) Some analyses of neural data are lacking or seem incomplete, without considering alternative interpretations.

      (5) The muscimol inactivation results did not provide a clear interpretation about the link between PPC activity and decision performance.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      (1) Introduction Hybridogenesis involves one genome being clonally transmitted while the other is replaced by backcrossing. It results in high heterozygosity and balanced ancestry proportions in hybrids. Distinguishing it from other hybrid systems requires a combination of nuclear, mitochondrial, and population-genetic evidence. Hybridogenesis has been identified in only a few taxa (e.g., some fish, frogs, and stick insects), but no new cases have been reported in over a decade. Advancements in high-throughput sequencing now allow for the detection of high individual heterozygosity, which can indicate hybridization, but it is difficult to distinguish hybridogenesis from other similar asexual systems based solely on genome-wide data. To differentiate these systems, researchers look at several key indicators: Presence of pure-species offspring from hybrids (possible only in hybridogenesis); sex ratio (male presence in hybridogenetic systems); nuclear and mitochondrial haplotype sharing with co-distributed parental species; geographic distribution patterns, especially the lack of both parental species in hybrid populations.

      (2) What the authors were trying to achieve The paper studies Quasipaa Frogs. Q. robertingeri (narrowly endemic) and Q. boulengeri (widespread), which are morphologically similar and found sympatrically in parts of China. Preliminary RAD-seq data revealed bimodal heterozygosity in Q. boulengeri samples. Some individuals had extremely high heterozygosity, consistent across loci and suggestive of F1 hybrids. These high-heterozygosity individuals had one haplotype from each species. The study investigates the high heterozygosity observed in Quasipaa frogs, particularly in individuals morphologically resembling Q. boulengeri but genetically appearing to be F1 hybrids with Q. robertingeri. The goal is to determine whether these patterns are consistent with hybridogenesis, rather than other atypical reproductive modes. The authors also suggest the hypothesis that hybridogenesis could enable range expansion of an endemic species through hybridization with a widespread relative.

      (3) Methods A total of 107 individuals from 53 localities were collected for the study. This sample included 58 sexed adults-27 males and 31 females-as well as a majority of tadpoles. Of these individuals, 31 had previously determined karyotypes. DNA was extracted and sequenced. Individual heterozygosity and ancestry were estimated using bioinformatics tools. F1 hybrids were compared to one of the parental species to examine patterns of fixed heterozygous loci. Mitochondrial DNA was also extracted from sequencing data, and phylogenetic trees were constructed

      (4) Results Two groups of individuals were detected based on heterozygosity: one group exhibited high heterozygosity and consisted of F1 hybrids, while the other group showed low heterozygosity, representing pure-species types. The F1 hybrids demonstrated approximately equal ancestry from Q. robertingeri and Q. boulengeri, consistently maintaining a high proportion of heterozygous loci at around 16.7%. In contrast, pure individuals had much lower heterozygosity, approximately 2.9%. F1 hybrids were found across 21 different sites, including both male and female individuals. The presence of numerous fixed heterozygous loci in F1 hybrids confirmed their hybrid origin, and these loci were absent in pure Q. boulengeri samples. F1 individuals typically carried one haplotype from each parental species. There was minimal haplotype sharing between the two pure species, but extensive sharing was observed between F1 hybrids and co-occurring pure-species individuals. In fact, F1 types shared haplotypes with local Q. boulengeri in over 90% of cases, which supports the occurrence of local backcrossing and parental contribution. In terms of mitochondrial DNA, F1 hybrids possessed mitochondrial haplotypes that clustered with Q. boulengeri and often shared these haplotypes directly. Genetic structure and phylogenetic analyses, revealed three distinct genetic clusters corresponding to F1 hybrids, Q. boulengeri, and Q. robertingeri. The F1 hybrids positioned themselves intermediate between the two pure species. Neighbor-joining trees and TreeMix analyses confirmed a strong separation between pure-species types, with F1 hybrids clustering alongside local Q. boulengeri subpopulations, indicating local formation of hybrids.

      (5) Discussion In summary, the study reveals hybridogenesis (a reproductive system where hybrids clonally transmit one parental genome) in Quasipaa boulengeri and Q. robertingeri. Hybrids show high genetic heterozygosity and coexist with parental species, ruling out other reproductive modes like parthenogenesis or kleptogenesis. Evidence suggests hybridogenesis enables Q. robertingeri genomes to appear far outside their normal range, possibly aiding range expansion. Chromosomal abnormalities are linked to hybrid hybrids, supporting clonal genome transmission. The genetic divergence between parental species fits patterns seen in other hybridogenetic systems, highlighting a unique, understudied case in East Asia.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the authors carefully interpret their genetic data to support hybridogenesis as the reproductive mode in this system and propose that this mechanism may aid range expansion. They also appropriately acknowledge the need for further cytogenetic and ecological studies, demonstrating scientific caution. In summary, the discussion reasonably follows from the results, offering cautious interpretation where necessary.

      Weaknesses:

      Direct reproductive or cytological evidence is still lacking. While alternative reproductive modes are discussed and mostly ruled out logically, some require further empirical testing. The authors maintain a cautious interpretation, appropriately suggesting further research. Some outstanding questions remain.

      (1) The elevated heterozygosity and presence of fixed heterozygous loci in hybrids compared to parental species strongly indicate hybridogenesis. However, alternative explanations such as repeated F1 hybridization or some form of balanced polymorphism, while less likely, are not fully excluded.

      (2) The coexistence of hybrids and parental species, along with high nuclear and mitochondrial haplotype sharing between hybrids and Q. boulengeri, argues against reproductive modes like parthenogenesis, gynogenesis, or kleptogenesis. However, the assumption that hybrid sterility or multiple local hybrid origins are unlikely could be challenged if undetected local variation or cryptic reproductive strategies exist.

      (3) The presence of Q. robertingeri nuclear genomes far outside their known geographic range, genetically linked to nearby populations, fits a hybridogenetic-mediated dispersal model. Although the authors dismiss human-mediated or accidental transport as explanations, these scenarios are not necessarily unlikley.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Liver cancer shows a high incidence in males than females with incompletely understood causes. This study utilized a mouse model that lacks the bile acid feedback mechanisms (FXR/SHP DKO mice) to study how dysregulation of bile acid homeostasis and a high circulating bile acid may underlie the gender-dependent prevalence and prognosis of HCC. By transcriptomics analysis comparing male and female mice, unique sets of gene signatures were identified and correlated with HCC outcomes in human patients. The study showed that ovariectomy procedure increased HCC incidence in female FXR/SHP DKO mice that were otherwise resistant to age-dependent HCC development, and that removing bile acids by blocking intestine bile acid absorption reduced HCC progression in FXR/SHP DKO mice. Based on these findings, the authors suggest that gender-dependent bile acid metabolism may play a role in the male-dominant HCC incidence, and that reducing bile acid level and signaling may be beneficial in HCC treatment. This study include many strengths: 1. Chronic liver diseases often proceed the development of liver and bile duct cancer. Advanced chronic liver diseases are often associated with dysregulation of bile acid homeostasis and cholestasis. This study takes advantage of a unique FXR/SHP DKO model that develop high organ bile acid exposure and spontaneous age-dependent HCC development in males but not females to identify unique HCC-associated gene signatures. The study showed that the unique gene signature in female DKO mice that had lower HCC incidence also correlated with lower grade HCC and better survival in human HCC patients. 2. The study also suggests that differentially regulated bile acid signaling or gender-dependent response to altered bile acids may contribute to gender-dependent susceptibility to HCC development and/or progression. 3. The sex-dependent differences in bile acid-mediated pathology clearly exist but are still not fully understood at the mechanistic level. Female mice have been shown to be more sensitive to bile acid toxicity in a few cholestasis models, while this study showed a male dominance of bile acid promotion of HCC. This study used ovariectomy to demonstrate that female hormones are possible underlying factors. Future studies are needed to understand the interaction of sex hormones, bile acids, and chronic liver diseases and cancer.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors examine the impact of heat stress during an embryonic CP in Drosophila, focusing on the larval locomotor network. They show that elevated temperature increases neuronal activity and, when applied during the CP, results in long-term instability of the network, which manifests in prolonged seizure recovery times. At the neuromuscular junction, substantial structural changes occur, including terminal overgrowth and altered receptor composition, yet synaptic transmission remains preserved due to homeostatic regulation. Motoneurons display reduced excitability but receive increased synaptic input from premotor interneurons. These findings suggest that maladaptive instability originates within the central circuitry rather than at the neuromuscular junction, where changes seem to be homeostatically compensated. The study concludes that different network components exhibit distinct and hierarchical responses to CP perturbations, with premotor interneurons setting the tone for downstream adjustments in motoneurons.

      Strengths:

      The work takes advantage of the unique accessibility of the Drosophila system. A major strength of the study is the integration of structural, physiological, and behavioral analyses, which allows the authors to draw a comprehensive picture of how CP perturbations shape the locomotor network. The choice of an ecologically relevant stimulus (heat stress) is particularly convincing, as it links experimental manipulations more closely to natural environmental conditions. The experiments are carefully designed, and the results are robust and consistent with previous findings in the field, while also extending them in new directions.

      Weaknesses:

      The study leaves some uncertainty regarding the experimental design and interpretation. The change from short to prolonged heat shock manipulations raises the possibility that the effects observed may not be confined to the critical period alone - this could be experimentally addressed or simply rephrased in the text. In addition, the maladaptive (seizure recovery) and adaptive/homeostatic phenotypes are not always clearly distinguished or highlighted, which makes it harder to appreciate how the different levels of the network plasticity fit together into a single mechanistic framework.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      A study researching the relationship between affective shifts and cognitive performance in a daily life setting.

      Strengths:

      The evidence provided is compelling: the findings are conceptually replicated in three samples of adequate size and statistical rigor in analyzing the data, with methods beyond the current state of the art in applied research. For example, using two-step multilevel vector autoregressive models that were adopted to allow the inclusion of covariates, and contemporaneous effects corrected for temporal relations and background covariates. In addition, the authors use beautiful visualizations to convey the different samples used (Figure 1) and intuitive and rich figures to convey their obtained results.

      In summary, the authors were able to convincingly show that higher negative affect is linked to slower cognitive processing speed, with results supporting their conclusions.

      Weaknesses:

      I have one major concern. Although a check for careless responding has been conducted on the basis of long reaction times, I wonder whether, beyond long response times, any other sanity checks with respect to, e.g., careless responding were done? For example, a lack of variability of EMA items over subsequent occasions, e.g., say 15, is often seen as an indicator of careless responding, especially when using VAS items. In line 693, it is stated, "We added a small amount of random noise, ranging from -0.1 to +0.1, to each EMA time series to allow models to converge when EMA time series showed minimal variance over time", which I understand, but this lack of variability could also be caused by participants stopping to take the study seriously. For datasets 1 and 2, this might be more difficult to assess (due to the limited response values), but maybe the authors can get an indication of this in dataset 3?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Millet et al. show that C. elegans systematically prefers easy-to-eat bacteria but will switch its choice when harder-to-eat bacteria are offered at higher densities, producing indifference points that fit standard economic discounting models. Detailed kinetic analysis reveals that this bias arises from unchanged patch-entry rates but significantly elevated exit rates on effortful food, and dop-3 mutants lose the preference altogether, implicating dopamine in effort sensitivity. These findings extend effort-discounting behavior to a simple nematode, pushing the phylogenetic boundary of economic cost-benefit decision-making.

      Strengths:

      Extends the well-characterized concept of effort discounting into C. elegans, setting a new phylogenetic boundary and opening invertebrate genetics to economic-behavior studies.

      Elegant use of cephalexin-elongated bacteria to manipulate "effort" without altering nutritional or olfactory cues, yielding clear preference reversals and reproducible indifference points.

      Application of standard discounting models to predict novel indifference points is both rigorous and quantitatively satisfying, reinforcing the interpretation of worm behavior in economic terms.

      The three-state patch-model cleanly separates entry and exit dynamics, showing that increased leaving rates-rather than altered re-entry-drive choice biases.

      Demonstrates that _dop-3_ mutants lose normal effort discounting, firmly tying monoaminergic signaling to this behavior and paralleling vertebrate findings.

      Demonstration of discounting in wild strain (solid evidence).

      Weaknesses:

      Only _dop-3_ shows an effect, whereas _cat-2_/_dat-1_ do not, leaving the broader role of dopamine synthesis and reuptake ambiguous.

      With only five wild isolates tested, and only one clearly showing clear evidence of preference for the easy to eat bacteria, it's hard to conclude that effort discounting isn't a lab-strain artifact or how broadly it varies in natural populations.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors describe the results of a single study designed to investigate the extent to which horizontal orientation energy plays a key role in supporting view-invariant face recognition. The authors collected behavioral data from adult observers who were asked to complete an old/new face matching task by learning broad-spectrum faces (not orientation filtered) during a familiarization phase and subsequently trying to label filtered faces as previously seen or novel at test. This data revealed a clear bias favoring the use of horizontal orientation energy across viewpoint changes in the target images. The authors then compared different ideal observer models (cross-correlations between target and probe stimuli) to examine how this profile might be reflected in the image-level appearance of their filtered images. This revealed that a model looking for the best matching face within a viewpoint differed substantially from human data, exhibiting a vertical orientation bias for extreme profiles. However, a model forced to match targets to probes at different viewing angles exhibited a consistent horizontal bias in much the same manner as human observers.

      Strengths:

      I think the question is an important one: The horizontal orientation bias is a great example of a low-level image property being linked to high-level recognition outcomes, and understanding the nature of that connection is important. I found the old/new task to be a straightforward task that was implemented ably and that has the benefit of being simple for participants to carry out and simple to analyze. I particularly appreciated that the authors chose to describe human data via a lower-dimensional model (their Gaussian fits to individual data) for further analysis. This was a nice way to express the nature of the tuning function, favoring horizontal orientation bias in a way that makes key parameters explicit. Broadly speaking, I also thought that the model comparison they include between the view-selective and view-tolerant models was a great next step. This analysis has the potential to reveal some good insights into how this bias emerges and ask fine-grained questions about the parameters in their model fits to the behavioral data.

      Weaknesses:

      I will start with what I think is the biggest difficulty I had with the paper. Much as I liked the model comparison analysis, I also don't quite know what to make of the view-tolerant model. As I understand the authors' description, the key feature of this model is that it does not get to compare the target and probe at the same yaw angle, but must instead pick a best match from candidates that are at different yaws. While it is interesting to see that this leads to a very different orientation profile, it also isn't obvious to me why such a comparison would be reflective of what the visual system is probably doing. I can see that the view-specific model is more or less assuming something like an exemplar representation of each face: You have the opportunity to compare a new image to a whole library of viewpoints, and presumably it isn't hard to start with some kind of first pass that identifies the best matching view first before trying to identify/match the individual in question. What I don't get about the view-tolerant model is that it seems almost like an anti-exemplar model: You specifically lack the best viewpoint in the library but have to make do with the other options. Again, this is sort of interesting and the very different behavior of the model is neat to discuss, but it doesn't seem easy to align with any theoretical perspective on face recognition. My thinking here is that it might be useful to consider an additional alternate model that doesn't specifically exclude the best-matching viewpoint, but perhaps condenses appearance across views into something like a prototype. I could even see an argument for something like the yaw-averages presented earlier in the manuscript as the basis for such a model, but this might be too much of a stretch. Overall, what I'd like to see is some kind of alternate model that incorporates the existence of the best-match viewpoint somehow, but without the explicit exemplar structure of the view-specific model.

      Besides this larger issue, I would also like to see some more details about the nature of the cross-correlation that is the basis for this model comparison. I mostly think I get what is happening, but I think the authors could expand more on the nature of their noise model to make more explicit what is happening before these cross-correlations are taken. I infer that there is a noise-addition step to get them off the ceiling, but I felt that I had to read between the lines a bit to determine this.

      Another thing that I think is worth considering and commenting on is the stimuli themselves and the extent to which this may limit the outcomes of their behavioral task. The use of the 3D laser-scanned faces has some obvious advantages, but also (I think) removes the possibility for pigmentation to contribute to recognition, removes the contribution of varying illumination and expression to appearance variability, and perhaps presents observers with more homogeneous faces than one typically has to worry about. I don't think these negate the current results, but I'd like the authors to expand on their discussion of these factors, particularly pigmentation. Naively, surface color and texture seem like they could offer diagnostic cues to identity that don't rely so critically on horizontal orientations, so removing these may mean that horizontal bias is particularly evident when face shape is the critical cue for recognition.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Bansal et al. present a study on the fundamental blood and nectar feeding behaviors of the critical disease vector, Anopheles stephensi. The study encompasses not just the fundamental changes in blood feeding behaviors of the crucially understudied vector, but then uses a transcriptomic approach to identify candidate neuromodulation pathways which influence blood feeding behavior in this mosquito species. The authors then provide evidence through RNAi knockdown of candidate pathways that the neuromodulators sNPF and Rya modulate feeding either via their physiological activity in the brain alone or through joint physiological activity along the brain-gut axis (but critically not the gut alone). Overall, I found this study to be built on tractable, well-designed behavioral experiments.

      Their study begins with a well-structured experiment to assess how the feeding behaviors of A. stephensi change over the course of its life history and in response to its age, mating, and oviposition status. The authors are careful and validate their experimental paradigm in the more well-studied Ae. aegypti, and are able to recapitulate the results of prior studies, which show that mating is a prerequisite for blood feeding behaviors in Ae. aegypt. Here they find A. Stephensi, like other Anopheline mosquitoes, has a more nuanced regulation of its blood and nectar feeding behaviors.

      The authors then go on to show in a Y-maze olfactometer that ,to some degree, changes in blood feeding status depend on behavioral modulation to host cues, and this is not likely to be a simple change to the biting behaviors alone. I was especially struck by the swap in valence of the host cues for the blood-fed and mated individuals, which had not yet oviposited. This indicates that there is a change in behavior that is not simply desensitization to host cues while navigating in flight, but something much more exciting is happening.

      The authors then use a transcriptomic approach to identify candidate genes in the blood-feeding stages of the mosquito's life cycle to identify a list of 9 candidates that have a role in regulating the host-seeking status of A. stephensi. Then, through investigations of gene knockdown of candidates, they identify the dual action of RYa and sNPF and candidate neuromodulators of host-seeking in this species. Overall, I found the experiments to be well-designed. I found the molecular approach to be sound. While I do not think the molecular approach is necessarily an all-encompassing mechanism identification (owing mostly to the fact that genetic resources are not yet available in A. stephensi as they are in other dipteran models), I think it sets up a rich line of research questions for the neurobiology of mosquito behavioral plasticity and comparative evolution of neuromodulator action.

      Strengths:

      I am especially impressed by the authors' attention to small details in the course of this article. As I read and evaluated this article, I continued to think about how many crucial details could potentially have been missed if this had not been the approach. The attention to detail paid off in spades and allowed the authors to carefully tease apart molecular candidates of blood-seeking stages. The authors' top-down approach to identifying RYamide and sNPF starting from first principles behavioral experiments is especially comprehensive. The results from both the behavioral and molecular target studies will have broad implications for the vectorial capacity of this species and comparative evolution of neural circuit modulation.

      Weaknesses:

      There are a few elements of data visualizations and methodological reporting that I found confusing on a first few read-throughs. Figure 1F, for example, was initially confusing as it made it seem as though there were multiple 2-choice assays for each of the conditions. I would recommend removing the "X" marker from the x-axis to indicate the mosquitoes did not feed from either nectar, blood, or neither in order to make it clear that there was one assay in which mosquitoes had access to both food sources, and the data quantify if they took both meals, one meal, or no meals.

      I would also like to know more about how the authors achieved tissue-specific knockdown for RNAi experiments. I think this is an intriguing methodology, but I could not figure out from the methods why injections either had whole-body or abdomen-specific knockdown.

      I also found some interpretations of the transcriptomic to be overly broad for what transcriptomes can actually tell us about the organism's state. For example, the authors mention, "Interestingly, we found that after a blood meal, glucose is neither spent nor stored, and that the female brain goes into a state of metabolic 'sugar rest', while actively processing proteins (Figure S2B, S3)".

      This would require a physiological measurement to actually know. It certainly suggests that there are changes in carbohydrate metabolism, but there are too many alternative interpretations to make this broad claim from transcriptomic data alone.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this study, the authors investigate LFP responses to methionine in the olfactory system of the Xenopus tadpole. They show that this response is local to the glomerular layer, arises ipsilaterally, and is blocked by pharmacological blockade of AMPA and NMDA receptors, with little modulation during blockade of GABA-A receptors. They then show that this response is translently enlarged following transection of the contralateral olfactory nerve, but not the optic lobe nerve. Measurement of ROS- a marker of inflammation- was not affected by contralateral nerve transection, and LFP expansion was not affected by pharmacological blockade of ROS production. Imaging biased towards presynaptic terminals suggests that the enlargement of the LFP has a presynaptic component. A D2 antagonist increases the LFP size and variability in intact tadpoles, while a GABA-B antagonist does not. On this basis, the authors conclude that the increase driven by contralateral nerve transection is due to DA signaling.

      Overall, I found the array of techniques and approaches applied in this study to be creatively and effectively employed. However, several of the conclusions made in the Discussion are too strong, given the evidence presented. For example, the authors state that "The observed potentiation was not related to inflammatory mediators associated to inury, because it was caused by a release of the inhibition made by D2 dopamine receptor present in OSN axon terminals." This statement is too strong - the authors have shown that D2 receptors are sufficient to cause an increase in LFP, but not that they are required for the potentiation evoked by nerve transection. The right experiment here would be to get rid of the D2 receptors prior to transection and show that the potentiation is now abolished. In addition, the authors have not shown any data localizing D2 receptors to OSN axon terminals.

      Similarly, the authors state, "the onset of LFP changes detected in glomeruli is determined by glutamate release from OSNs." Again, the authors have shown that blockade of AMPA/NMDA receptors decreases the LFP, and that uncaging of glutamate can evoke small negative deflections, but not that the intact signal arises from glutamate release from OSNs. The conclusions about the in vivo contribution of this contralateral pathway are also rather speculative. Acute silencing of one hemisphere would likely provide more insight into the moment-to-moment contributions of bilateral signals to those recorded in one hemisphere.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this study, the authors aim to elucidate both how Pavlovian biases affect instrumental learning from childhood to adulthood, as well as how reward outcomes during learning influence incidental memory. While prior work has investigated both of these questions, findings have been mixed. The authors aim to contribute additional evidence to clarify the nature of developmental changes in these processes. Through a well-validated affective learning task and a large age-continuous sample of participants, the authors reveal that adolescents outperform children and adults when Pavlovian biases and instrumental learning are aligned, but that learning performance does not vary by age when they are misaligned. They also show that younger participants show greater memory sensitivity for images presented alongside rewards.

      The manuscript has notable strengths. The task was carefully designed and modified with a clever, developmentally appropriate cover story, and the large sample size (N = 174) means their study was better powered than many comparable developmental learning studies. The addition of the memory measure adds a novel component to the design. The authors transparently report their somewhat confusing findings.

      The manuscript also has weaknesses, which I describe in detail below.

      It was not entirely clear to me what central question the researchers aimed to address. They note that prior studies using a very similar learning task design have reported inconsistent findings, but they do not propose a reason for why these inconsistent findings may emerge nor do they test a plausible cause of them (in contrast, for example, Raab et al. 2024 explicitly tested the idea that developmental changes in inferences about controllability may explain age-related change in Pavlovian influences on learning). While the authors test a sample of participants that is very large compared to many developmental studies of reinforcement learning, this sample is much smaller than two prior developmental studies that have used the same learning task (and which the authors cite - Betts et al., 2020; Moutoussis et al., 2018). Thus, the overall goal seems to be to add an additional ~170 subjects of data to the existing literature, which isn't problematic per se, but doesn't do much to advance our theoretical understanding of learning across development. They happen to find a pattern of results that differs from all three prior studies, and it is not clear how to interpret this.

      Along those lines, the authors extend prior work by adding a memory manipulation to the task, in which trial-unique images were presented alongside reward outcomes. It was not clear to me whether the authors see the learning and memory questions as fundamentally connected or as two separate research questions that this paradigm allows them to address. The manuscript would potentially be more impactful if the authors integrated their discussion of these two ideas more. Did they have any a priori hypotheses about how Pavlovian biases may affect the encoding of incidentally presented images? Could heightened reward sensitivity explain both changes in learning and changes in memory? It was also not clear to me why the authors hypothesized that younger participants would demonstrate the greatest effects of reward on memory, when most of the introduction seems to suggest they might hypothesize an adolescent peak in both learning and memory.

      As stated above, while the task methods seemed sound, some of the analytic decisions are potentially problematic and/or require greater justification for the results of the study to be interpretable.

      Firstly, it is problematic not to include random participant slopes in the regression models. Not accounting for individual variation in the effects of interest may inflate Type I errors. I would suggest that the authors start with the maximal model, or follow the same model selection procedure they did to select the fixed effects to include for the random effects as well.

      Secondly, the central learning finding - that adolescents demonstrate enhanced learning in Pavlovian-congruent conditions only - is interesting, but it is unclear why this is the case or how much should be made of this finding. The authors show that adolescents outperform others in the Pavlovian-congruent conditions but not the Pavlovian-incongruent conditions. However, this conclusion is made by analyzing the two conditions separately; they do not directly compare the strength of the adolescent peak across these conditions, which would be needed to draw this strong conclusion. Given that no prior study using the same learning design has found this, the authors should ensure that their evidence for it is strong before drawing firm conclusions.

      It was also not clear to me whether any of the RL models that the authors fit could potentially explain this pattern. Presumably, they need an algorithmic mechanism in which the Pavlovian bias is enhanced when it is rewarded. This seems potentially feasible to implement and could help explain the condition-specific performance boosts.

      I also have major concerns about the computational model-fitting results. While the authors seemingly follow a sound approach, the majority of the fitted lapse rates (Figure S10) are near 1. This suggests that for most participants, the best-fitting model is one in which choices are random. This may be why the authors do not observe age-related change in model parameters: for these subjects, the other parameter values are essentially meaningless since they contribute to the learned value estimate, which gets multiplied by a near-0 weight in the choice function. It is important that the authors clarify what is going on here. Is it the case that most of these subjects truly choose at random? It does seem from Figure 2A that there is extensive variability in performance. It might be helpful if the authors re-analyze their data, excluding participants who show no evidence of learning or of reward-seeking behavior. Alternatively, are there other biases that are not being accounted for (e.g., choice perseveration) that may contribute to the high lapse rates?

      Parameter recovery also looks poor, particularly for gain & loss sensitivity, the lapse rate, and the Pavlovian bias - several parameters of interest. As noted above, this may be due to the fact that many of the simulations were conducted with lapse rates sampled from the empirical distribution. It would be helpful for the authors to a.) plot separately parameter recoverability for high and low lapse rates and b.) report the recoverability correlation for each parameter separately.

      Finally, many of the analytic decisions made regarding the memory analyses were confusing and merit further justification.

      (1) First, it seems as though the authors only analyze memory data from trials where participants "could gain a reward". Does this mean only half of the memory trials were included in the analyses? What about memory as a function of whether participants made a "correct" response? Or a correct x reward interaction effect?

      (2) The RPE analysis overcomes this issue by including all trials, but the trial-wise RPEs are potentially not informative given the lapse rate issue described above.

      (3) The authors exclude correct guesses but include incorrect guesses. Is this common practice in the memory literature? It seems like this could introduce some bias into the results, especially if there are age-related changes in meta-memory.

      (4) Participants provided a continuum of confidence ratings, but the authors computed d' by discretizing memory into 'correct' or 'incorrect'. A more sensitive approach could compute memory ROC curves taking into account the full confidence data (e.g., Brady et al., 2020).

      (5) The learning and memory tradeoff idea is interesting, but it was not clear to me what variables went into that regression model.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study examines how different parts of the brain's reward system regulate eating behavior. The authors focus on the medial shell of the nucleus accumbens, a region known to influence pleasure and motivation. They find that nerve cells in the front (rostral) portion of this region are inhibited during eating, and when artificially activated, they reduce food intake. In contrast, similar cells at the back (caudal) are excited during eating but do not suppress feeding. The team also identifies a molecular marker, Stard5, that selectively labels the rostral hotspot and enables new genetic tools to study it. These findings clarify how specific circuits in the brain control hedonic feeding, providing new entry points to understand and potentially treat conditions such as overeating and obesity.

      Strengths:

      (1) Conceptual advance: The work convincingly establishes a rostro-caudal gradient within the medNAcSh, clarifying earlier pharmacological studies with modern circuit-level and genetic approaches.

      (2) Methodological rigor: The combination of fiber photometry, optogenetics, CRISPR-Cas9 genetic engineering, histology, FISH, scRNA-seq, and novel mouse genetics adds robustness, with complementary approaches converging on the central claim.

      (3) Innovation: The generation of a Stard5-Flp line is a valuable resource that will enable precise interrogation of the rostral hotspot in future studies.

      (4) Specificity of findings: The dissociation between appetitive and aversive conditions strengthens the interpretation that the observed gradient is restricted to feeding.

      Weaknesses and points for clarification

      (1) Role of D2-SPNs: Since D1 and D2 pathways often show opposing roles in feeding, testing, or discussing D2-SPN contributions would provide an important control and context. Since the claim is that Stard5 is expressed in both D1- and D2MSNs, it seems to contradict the exclusive role of D1R MSNs in authorizing food intake.

      (2) Behavioral analyses:

      a) In Figure 2, group differences in consumption appear uneven; additional analyses (e.g., lick counts across blocks and session totals) would strengthen interpretation.

      b) The design and contribution of aversive assays to the main conclusions remain somewhat unclear and could be better justified.

      c) The scope of behavior is mainly limited to consumption; testing related domains (motivation, reward valuation, and extinction) could broaden the significance.

      (3) Molecular profiling:

      a) Stard5 expression is present in both D1- and D2-SPNs; comparisons to bulk calcium signals and quantification of percentages across rostral and caudal cells would be helpful. The authors should establish whether these cells also express SerpinB2, an established marker of LH projecting neurons.

      b) Verification of the Stard5-2A-Flp line (specificity, overlap with immunomarkers) should be documented more thoroughly.

      c) The molecular analysis is restricted to a small set of genes; broader spatial transcriptomics could uncover additional candidate markers. See also above.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript investigates methods for the analysis of time series data, in particular ecological time series. Such data can be analyzed using a myriad of approaches, with choices being made in both the statistical test performed and the generation of artificial datasets for comparison. The simulated data is for a two-species ecosystem. The main finding is that the rates of false positives and negatives strongly depend on the choices made during analysis, and that no one methodology is an optimal choice for all contexts. A few different scenarios were analyzed, including analysis with a time lag and communities with different species ratios.

      Strengths:

      The paper sets up a clear problem to motivate the study. The writing is easy to follow, given the dense subject matter. A broad range of approaches was compared for both statistical tests and surrogate data generation. The appendix will be helpful for readers, especially those readers hoping to implement these findings into their own work. The topic of the manuscript should be of interest to many readers, and the authors have put in extra effort to make the writing as clear as possible.

      Weaknesses:<br /> The main conclusions are rather unsatisfying: "use more than one method of analysis", "be more transparent in how testing is done", and there is a "need for humility when drawing scientific conclusions". In fact, the findings are not instructions for how to analyze data, but instead highlight the extreme dependence of the interpretation of results on choices made during analysis. The conclusions reached in this study would be of interest to a specialized subset of researchers focused on the biostatistics of ecological data. Ending the article with a few specific recommendations for how to apply these conclusions to a broad range of datasets would increase the impact of the work.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study addresses an important clinical challenge by proposing muscle network analysis as a tool to evaluate rehabilitation outcomes. The research direction is relevant, and the findings suggest further research. The strength of evidence supporting the claims is, however, limited: the improvements in function are not directly demonstrated, the robustness of the method is not benchmarked against already published approaches, and key terminology is not clearly defined, which reduces the clarity and impact of the work.

      Comments:

      There are several aspects of the current work that require clarification and improvement, both from a methodological and a conceptual standpoint.

      First, the actual improvements associated with the rehabilitation protocol remain unclear. While the authors report certain quantitative metrics, the study lacks more direct evidence of functional gains. Typically, rehabilitation interventions are strengthened by complementary material (e.g., videos or case examples) that clearly demonstrate improvements in activities of daily living. Including such evidence would make the findings more compelling.

      Second, the claim that the proposed muscle network analysis is robust is not sufficiently substantiated. The method is introduced without adequate reference to, or comparison with, the extensive literature that has proposed alternative metrics. It is also not evident whether a simpler analysis (e.g., EMG amplitude) might produce similar results. To highlight the added value of the proposed method, it would be important to benchmark it against established approaches. This would help clarify its specific advantages and potential applications. Moreover, several studies have shown very good outcomes when using AI and latent manifold analyses in patients with neural lesions. Interpreting the latent space appears even easier than interpreting muscle networks, as the manifolds provide a simple encoding-decoding representation of what the patient can still perform and what they can no longer do.

      Third, the terminology used throughout the manuscript is sometimes ambiguous. A key example is the distinction made between "functional" and "redundant" synergies. The abstract states: "Notably, we identified a shift from redundancy to synergy in muscle coordination as a hallmark of effective rehabilitation-a transformation supported by a more precise quantification of treatment outcomes."

      However, in motor control research, redundancy is not typically seen as maladaptive. Rather, it is a fundamental property of the CNS, allowing the same motor task to be achieved through different patterns of muscle activity (e.g., alternative motor unit recruitment strategies). This redundancy provides flexibility and robustness, particularly under fatiguing conditions, where new synergies often emerge. Several studies have emphasized this adaptive role of redundancy. Thus, if the authors intend to use "redundancy" differently, it is essential to define the term explicitly and justify its use to avoid misinterpretation.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study investigates how seasonal environments shape the evolution of gene expression by analyzing two-year time-series transcriptomes from leaves and buds of four Fagaceae tree species. The revised manuscript incorporates additional data and analyses that directly address earlier concerns about sampling design and environmental variation, thereby strengthening the robustness of the conclusions.

      The major strengths of this work are the scale and quality of the dataset, the integration of genome assemblies with time-series transcriptomics, and the careful analyses showing that winter bud expression is strongly conserved across species. The additional samples and re-analyses demonstrate convincingly that these results are not artifacts of sampling period or site differences. The study also links gene expression dynamics to phenological observations and frames its findings in relation to broader evolutionary concepts such as phenological synchrony and the developmental hourglass model.

      Remaining limitations include the absence of direct mechanistic analyses of cis-regulatory and chromatin-level processes, the relatively coarse resolution of phenological trait measurements, and the weak association between seasonal expression divergence and sequence divergence. Importantly, these limitations are now explicitly acknowledged in the revised Discussion and framed as directions for future research.

      Overall, the authors have substantially achieved their aims. This revised version represents a robust and convincing contribution that provides valuable data resources and conceptual insights into how seasonal environments constrain and shape gene expression. It will be of interest not only to evolutionary biologists and plant scientists, but also to researchers considering the broader role of environmental cycles in gene regulatory evolution.