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thy God, that her thou didst obey [ 145 ] Before his voice, or was shee made thy guide,
Adam, in worshipping Eve, is effectively worshipping a false god, idolatry. He has not followed God's instruction.
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his Angels to make several alterations in the Heavens and Elements.
Again Milton's attention to the heavens and astronomy. A reference to the events involving Adam and Eve, the microcosm, causing a realignment in the macrocosm: a renaissance conceit.
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O miserable of happie!
Suggesting that his previous happiness has caused his present misery, Milton stresses how one condition can produce its opposite.
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His free Will
What a lie...
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Man should be seduc't
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Man should be seduc't
So the man was doomed to fall...should be seduct...It seems that everything was planed and from this point of view all our problems todayare planned to be. I don't like the idea and it seems to me that is very comfortable to avoid our responsibilities, but on the other hand its a very complicate philosophycal problem.
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that day [ 210 ] Remov'd farr off;
This could mean that the actual day of their deaths is in the future, but the process of dying begins instantly.
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Thine shall submit, hee over thee shall rule
The "rule" of man over woman could be part of the punishment for the Fall.
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Absents thee,
could refer to psychological alienation rather than to physical absence.
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The sharpest sighted Spirit of all in Heav'n; Who to the fraudulent Impostor foule
If Uriel cannot see the evil, how can men do? It is all part of the plan of God. In that way God and Zeus are alike. They design fate. It all meant to be like this.
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To serve him better: wise are all his wayes.
Men serve better because they die. Heavenly creatures do not. The reward to do Godś bidding or being his slave is heaven so they serve him better.
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Thee I re-visit now with bolder wing, Escap't the Stygian Poo
The narrator took the identity of satan to write book 1 and 2, like an actor and now is returning to the light, returning to his own identity, like a prophet.
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As my Eternal purpose hath decreed: Man shall not quite be lost, but sav'd who will, Yet not of will in him, but grace in me Freely voutsaft; once more I will renew [ 175 ] His lapsed powers, though forfeit and enthrall'd By sin to foul exorbitant desires;
This gives me much hope in God's insight and power regarding this whole breech by Satan.
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Some I have chosen of peculiar grace Elect above the rest; so is my will:
This is the God I don't like, who seems to be choosing some men over others, even though all are apoarently sinners.
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destin'd to Eternal woe;
referring to original sin
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inheritance
Satan is claiming what is his
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the fixt Laws of Heav'n
democratic under Satan
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all things shall be your prey
on earth. Satan introduces death and sin on earth while God introduces eternal live and love.
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Where I reign King, and to enrage thee more, Thy King and Lord? Back to thy punishment, False fugitive,
"Better to reign in hell, than to serve in heaven". Now Satan finds out that he is king of nothing.
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learn by proof, Hell-born, not to contend with Spirits of Heav'n.
Satan is not hell born, like sin and death. He is from heaven, so be warned :-) .
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Before the Gates there sat
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In discourse more sweet [ 555 ] (For Eloquence the Soul, Song charms the Sense
Like the sirenes odyssey xii 184- 191. Sweet sounds of the voices that come from our mouths, and he who listens will not only expierience great pleasure before he goes back home but will also far more knowledgeable than before.. All is a lie off course.
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They vote:
Satan is no leader or absolute ruler as he presents himself. In fact he has nothing to say in the matter and it is decided for him.
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and his Sentence pleas'd, Advising peace: for such another Field They dreaded worse then Hell: so much the fear Of Thunder and the Sword of Michael
Evil is scared of a even worse fate than hell. They prefer peace; they are cowards.
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But perhaps [ 70 ] The way seems difficult and steep to scale With upright wing against a higher foe.
Al least Moloc has some self insight and all his advice turns out to be dreams or illusions or proud imaginations.
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the Torturer
AKA God.
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might draw [ 25 ] Envy from each inferior
Here Satan claims he is inferior because he envied the throne of god, waged war and lost. Rather ironic that he mentions it as a benefit from hell.
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Did first create your Leader, next free choice,
Like God created Adam first as his equal , he created Satan also first (and equal). And then free choice... . Free choice is a gift that makes a being.
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and another kind of creature equal or not much inferiour to themselves
The other creature is the snake. Since this creature is equal or not much inferior than themselves it makes them ridiculous. All the grandeur of Satan from book 1 is deflated when he put himself on the same level of a snake.
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So he with difficulty and labour hard Mov'd on, with difficulty and labour hee
When Milton repeats himself it is to make an important point. Here Satan's "labour" is "difficult" because it is in vain, since he is alienated from God. So he certainly does not look heroic here.
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and by what best way, [ 40 ] Whether of open Warr or covert guile, We now debate
Satan is nothing if not incongruous…or, more specifically, ridiculous. One would've assumed that he, and by extension, the rebel angels, had learned that rebellion (overt or covert) against God supremacy was useless. But here they are again, this time plotting to avenge the perceived wrongs of their own rebellion.
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Warr therefore, open or conceal'd, alike My voice disswades; for what can force or guile With him, or who deceive his mind, whose eye Views all things at one view? he from heav'ns highth [ 190 ] All these our motions vain, sees and derides; Not more Almighty to resist our might Then wise to frustrate all our plots and wiles. Shall we then live thus vile, the race of Heav'n Thus trampl'd, thus expell'd to suffer here [ 195 ] Chains and these Torments? better these then worse By my advice;
Belial seems to suggest that the devils cannot ultimately win against God's omniscience and power, and further rebellion might actually put them in a worse state than they are already in.
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and in his rising seem'd A Pillar of State; deep on his Front engraven Deliberation sat and public care; And Princely counsel in his face yet shon, Majestic though in ruin: sage he stood [ 305 ] With Atlantean shoulders fit to bear The weight of mightiest Monarchies; his look Drew audience and attention still as Night Or Summers Noon-tide air, while thus he spake.
Here is the oberture of Satan's words. None of the three past fallen angels was so praised. "With Atlantean shoulders" offers an image of someone that will carry big weights, and in this context it seems like he'll be be one who will do it, the hero.
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where there is then no good [ 30 ] For which to strive, no strife can grow up there From Faction; for none sure will claim in Hell Precedence, none, whose portion is so small Of present pain, that with ambitious mind Will covet more. With this advantage then [ 35 ] To union, and firm Faith, and firm accord, More then can be in Heav'n, we now return To claim our just inheritance of old,
Satan seems to be justifying his role as the leader in hell based upon his knowledge that he will receive the greatest punishment from heaven. Since their mission is to do the opposite of good, nobody will try to upstage Satan by doing more evil than him, and in turn increase their punishment. In another context we might consider this an epic quality (like "taking one for the team"), but in this context he is acting without merit and nobility...so this goes into the ridiculous column.
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If thou beest he; But O how fall'n! how chang'dFrom him, who in the happy Realms of Light [ 85 ]Cloth'd with transcendent brightness didst out-shineMyriads though bright:
Here the author makes a reference to the Bible when he says "Oh how fall'n!" This is referenced in the book of Isaiah where it describes Satan's fall and how much he had changed from being such a respected Angel, to being thrown down into the lake of fire, and becoming the leader of other fallen angels like himself. Here you can also feel a wave of emotion from he author where he puts himself into the story to describe Satan's transformation.
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Sing Heav'nly Muse,
Milton introduces Satan as subject of epic
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his Crew
It should be meaning Lucifer and his advocates. Here in this composition, Satan, Lucifer and Serpent are confused. It seems the author wanted to imply the notion that Satan is the same person with Lucifer, which is not the concept as suggested in the Bible.
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consult
In seventeenth-century usage, the term is associated with secret meetings for plotting insurgency. Was there ever a more secret and more insurgent meeting!
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Chaos
I've always been confused over whether or not "Chaos" referred to here is the same as the character Chaos in the poem.
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Better to reign in Hell, then serve in Heav'n.
Aeschylus' Prometheus expresses the same sentiment and a favorite saying of Julius Caesar was that he would rather be the first man in a village, than the second in Rome.
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Such place Eternal Justice had prepar'd
Unlike Dante's well-structured Inferno, the topography of Milton's Hell is muddled and uncertain; conveying more a state of mind than a sense of place.
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As one great Furnace flam'd, yet from those flamesNo light, but rather darkness visible
Milton's Hell is a chaotic, ill-defined region of turbulent darkness as opposed to the brilliant light that illuminates the orderliness of Heaven.
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In loss it self; which on his count'nance castLike doubtful hue: but he his wonted pride
Beautiful words but what does it mean? Help is appreciated.
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Next came oneWho mourn'd in earnest
Like the cescent of Odysseus into Hades: spirits pass by
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the Flowr of Heav'n, once yours, now lost
flower of heaven: a flower has a temporal beauty, cut in his prime and then dies: once yours now lost...
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New courage and revive
Once they hear that voice .. new courage and revive. Satan brings hope in hell. A battlecry.
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Receive thy new Possessor: One who bringsA mind not to be chang'd by Place or Time.
Satan the new king / possessor of hell. He brings his quality: a good functioning independent free mind.
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What reinforcement we may gain from Hope, [ 190 ]If not what resolution from despare.
Beautiful words. Hope gives strength, if that does now work: hate wil do also do nicely...
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As being the contrary to his high will
There is no "good" without "evil" : the same that you won't have day or night. Satan brings balance, it is his being.
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Sole reigning holds the Tyranny of Heav'n.
It all depends from which viewpoint you look. Tyranny from God: who is good of evil?
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deep despare
A contrast with the boldness of 105 all is not lost etc. Is satan saying those words without confidence? Empty threats? He already lost from god.
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Instruct me, for Thou know'st
The Muses tell him what they saw and heard. The writers mind is supposed to see and hear what the muses saw and heard. It gives authority and he is speaking the truth because he is directly connected to the goddesses of memory...
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Throne and Monarchy of God
This feels like it could be a reference to the Kabbalah, particularly to the top (Keter) and bottom (Malkhut) sefirot which are identified respectively with the Crown and the Kingship/Rulership of God.
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Argument
Theme: The subject of man's first disobedience
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O Spirit
A very clear religious reference to the Holy Spirit, one of the three divine persons. Jesus has already been referenced in the poem's opening as the "greater man" who will "restore us." Still waiting for God the father to be mentioned clearly.
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Of Oreb, or of Sinai, didst inspire That Shepherd, who first taught the chosen Seed,
A reference to Moses who received the ten commandments from God and taught them to his people.
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OF Mans First Disobedience, and the Fruit Of that Forbidden Tree, whose mortal tast Brought Death into the World, and all our woe, With loss of Eden, till one greater Man Restore us, and regain the blissful Seat, [ 5 ] Sing Heav'nly Muse,
This is the standard introduction to epic poetry throughout the ancient world, as can be seen in the worlds of Homer, Virgil and many others.
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Of Oreb, or of Sinai, didst inspire That Shepherd, who first taught the chosen Seed,
This refers to where Moses received the Ten Commandments. Certainly a noble man and noble deed.
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one greater Man
This is an example of the noble doings of a noble man. A reference to Jesus of Nazareth, known as "the second Adam" , and 'Restores us, and regain the blissful Seat'.
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And justifie the wayes of God to men.
Maybe another classical epic reference. Aristotle was talking about the august, heroic and godlike properties of the epic. Milton here wishes to "justify the ways of God to men", not just to make men in awe, but to make men understand what is heroic. By doing this, he deviates from the epic norm, and rebels (being the key word of the poem perhaps). "What in me is dark illumin" could be interpreted as a quest for knowledge, which led to the original sin. Do desire for knowledge and disobedience go hand in hand? And is disobedience so bad?
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rebellious
revolt, opposed, rebellious...words that reflect the act of disobedience and that keep coming up. Milton questions disobedience as an act of sin, and this is what I really like about the poem. It challenges the christian ideals of obedience.
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Who first seduc'd them to that foul revolt?
The first reference to Satan clearly emerging as the hero of the poem.
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Sing Heav'nly Muse
Instead of praising heroic deeds to the likes of Achilles, Milton uses the formula to reflect upon the act of disobedience as a heroic act.
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Clearly the opening lines of an epic, but varying greatly from the classical theme. Man's first disobedience seems to be the heroic deed the poem wishes to illustrate
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Soon recollecting, with high words, that boreSemblance of worth, not substance, gently rais'dThir fainting courage, and dispel'd thir fears. [ 530 ]
The narrator seems to call Satan's rhetorical abilities into question by writing that his speech is received as "worthy" by his listeners, but that it has no substance.
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hee as a vail down to the slender waste Her unadorned golden tresses wore [ 305 ] Disheveld, but in wanton ringlets wav'd
In the Bible, long and disheveled hair is associated with eroticism.
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Of sympathie and love; there I had fixt [ 465 ] Mine eyes till now, and pin'd with vain desire, Had not a voice thus warnd me, What thou seest, What there thou seest fair Creature is thy self, With thee it came and goes: but follow me, And I will bring thee where no shadow staies
Eve's self-reflection amid this male cosmology is interrupted and she's urged into the arms of waiting Adam.
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God is thy Law, thou mine: to know no more Is womans happiest knowledge and her praise.
This may not imply Eve's inferiority, as Eve is to Adam as Adam is to God, since the Son stands in the same relation to the Father.
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Millions of spiritual Creatures walk the Earth Unseen, both when we wake, and when we sleep: All these with ceasless praise his works behold Both day and night:
"Millions" of spiritual creatures and they can't keep Satan from Adam and Eve?Is this because they spend their time with ceaseless praise? This sounds like the demands of a tyrannical God.
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Sweet is the breath of morn, her rising sweet, With charm of earliest Birds; pleasant the Sun When first on this delightful Land he spreads His orient Beams, on herb, tree, fruit, and flour, Glistring with dew; fragrant the fertil earth [ 645 ] After soft showers; and sweet the coming on Of grateful Eevning milde, then silent Night With this her solemn Bird and this fair Moon, And these the Gemms of Heav'n, her starrie train:
Eve refers to the sun as "him" and the "morn" and Night as "her". This is odd because she supposes that God made "he" and "She" with specific qualities - why does she make anthropomorphic the times of day?
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About them frisking playd [ 340 ] All Beasts of th' Earth, since wilde, and of all chase In Wood or Wilderness, Forrest or Den; Sporting the Lion rampd, and in his paw Dandl'd the Kid; Bears, Tygers, Ounces, Pards Gambold before them, th' unwieldy Elephant [ 345 ] To make them mirth us'd all his might, and wreathd His Lithe Proboscis; close the Serpent sly Insinuating, wove with Gordian twine His breaded train, and of his fatal guile Gave proof unheeded; others on the grass [ 350 ] Coucht, and now fild with pasture gazing sat, Or Bedward ruminating
It seems that the fall of Mankind also brought about the fall of the animals under their dominion, since the Lion no longer dandles the kid.
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Her unadorned golden tresses wore [ 305 ] Disheveld, but in wanton ringlets wav'd As the Vine curles her tendrils, which impli'd Subjection,
William Blake's image of Adam and Eve in Bk 4 shows them as very classical, if muscular, entities - with Eve of course suitably subject. In the same plate Satan flites about while embracing the serpent (with a bird-like head!). Blake always adds something to a text; I guess just his own imagination.
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one slight bound high over leap'd
Which makes the existence of a wall irrelevant, but perhaps the following lines with their references to a wolf and a thief simply indicate that it is impossible to keep evil out.
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Apples
Interesting that Satan actually names the fruit. It is just a fruit in Genesis. The name, 'Apple' seems unimportant for it is the act of eating a fruit which is the act of disobedience Satan encourages.
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err'd in overmuch admiring What seemd in thee so perfet,
Poor Adam, like so many of us, has been distracted by the beauty of a woman. Never mind, he comes out of it well enough; he has knowledge (and the beautiful woman!)
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I now must change [ 5 ] Those Notes to Tragic
A change signaled by the narrator, Milton, the epic 'Notes' are now to tell of a tragedy. I have read that Bk 9 is about the length of an Euripidean tragedy, c. 1100 lines, and the Book is complete in itself.
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Scipio the highth of Rome. With tract oblique [ 510 ] At first, as one who sought access, but feard To interrupt, side-long he works his way. As when a Ship by skilful Stearsman wrought Nigh Rivers mouth or Foreland, where the Wind
The first letter of lines 510 to 514 spell SATAN, an acrostic. Presumably deliberate?
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delight to Reason joyn'd.
Milton could be referring to Aristotle's doctrine that "the highest end and chief delight of man is a life of intellectual speculation".
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if all be mine,
Milton points out that age and circumstances should make it impossible for him to produce a work on the scale of PL, and stresses that there must be a force or spirit that is speaking through him.
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Her hand he seis'd, and to a shadie bank, Thick overhead with verdant roof imbowr'd He led her nothing loath; Flours were the Couch, Pansies, and Violets, and Asphodel, [ 1040 ] And Hyacinth, Earths freshest softest lap. There they thir fill of Love and Loves disport Took largely, of thir mutual guilt the Seale, The solace of thir sin, till dewie sleep Oppress'd them, wearied with thir amorous play.
Milton connect the eaten fruit with sexual desire. In all previous poem we found only a platonic love, no sexual act. But now we see that. The fruit awake them the sexual desire and they make love. Bible's account don't say that but we can say that maybe this has a point from the status of women in Bible. The low status level and their role is not important in men's decisions, not all the time but in most of them.
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However I with thee have fixt my Lot, Certain to undergoe like doom, if Death Consort with thee, Death is to mee as Life; So forcible within my heart I feel [ 955 ] The Bond of Nature draw me to my owne, My own in thee, for what thou art is mine; Our State cannot be severd, we are one, One Flesh; to loose thee were to loose my self.
Adam, outside Bible's account, reveals his emotions and will. He seal his fate with his wife...permantly. Her way, his way, vice versa. Their decision ultimate, their life or death undisputable. Milton went beyond Bible's account and tried to find inner emotions and thoughts. These thoughts which seal permantly their fate.
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Thoughts, whither have ye led me, with what sweet Compulsion thus transported to forget What hither brought us, hate, not love, nor hope [ 475 ] Of Paradise for Hell, hope here to taste Of pleasure, but all pleasure to destroy, Save what is in destroying, other joy To me is lost. Then let me not let pass Occasion which now smiles, behold alone [ 480 ] The Woman, opportune to all attempts, Her Husband, for I view far round, not nigh, Whose higher intellectual more I shun, And strength, of courage hautie, and of limb Heroic built, though of terrestrial mould, [ 485 ] Foe not informidable, exempt from wound, I not; so much hath Hell debas'd, and paine Infeebl'd me, to what I was in Heav'n. Shee fair, divinely fair, fit Love for Gods, Not terrible, though terrour be in Love [ 490 ] And beautie, not approacht by stronger hate, Hate stronger, under shew of Love well feign'd, The way which to her ruin now I tend.
I think that this part is one of the most powerful in this poem. Satan is the hero, the underground hero, the person which make self critical, as he recognize that Hell has destroyed him. He is prepared for the final hit, which will ruin everything good and virtue and he will take his revenge. This part is out of book of Genesis. Bible actually says very few things about Satan and his intentions. But here Milton trying to give us his deep motives, his propose.
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Earths green Cape and verdant Isles
Cape Verde - modern Senegal. An indication of the ever expanding world and Milton's familiarity with it.
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the Wheele [ 135 ] Of Day and Night;
A wonderful metaphor describing the rotation of the Earth, and a reference to the Copernican universe.
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To ask or search I blame thee not, for Heav'n Is as the Book of God before thee set, Wherein to read his wondrous Works, and learne His Seasons, Hours, or Dayes, or Months, or Yeares: This to attain, whether Heav'n move or Earth, [ 70 ] Imports not, if thou reck'n right, the rest From Man or Angel the great Architect Did wisely to conceal, and not divulge His secrets to be scann'd by them who ought Rather admire;
The knowledge is something good, elogue and precious. But its also secret and hidden. God is the source and He reveals what He want when He want. In Genesis the knowledge is formated in a close account with specific order and theme. In Milton's version there is plurality more broad and epic.
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So spake the Godlike Power, and thus our Sire. For Man to tell how human Life began [ 250 ] Is hard; for who himself beginning knew?
In Genesis we have a simple narration of the creation of man. In Milton's version things are very different. Its no simple, its hard, maybe complicated. It seems more realistic.
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Let us make now Man in our image,
Man made in the image of God - one can only look at the world today and wonder what went wrong. Perhaps the creation should have stopped at line 519!
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Omnific
Again an instance of Milton the Classicist. The word is a composite of two common Latin words, and so 'all-making' or 'creating' - which is probably better in the context.
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vast immeasurable Abyss Outrageous as a Sea, dark, wasteful, wilde, Up from the bottom turn'd by furious windes And surging waves, as Mountains to assault Heav'ns highth, and with the Center mix the Pole.
This is, I take it, chaos. A wonderful concept of matter at it most primitive - the universe just after the Big Bang: uncontrolled and violent matter, but matter with the potential to be ordered, as the creation will do. (Note: I do not suggest Milton preempted the Big bang theory - that is mere whimsy on my part.)
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And by my Word, begotten Son, by thee This I perform
I would be interested to know just why Milton makes this departure from the Biblical Genesis. Or does he? Perhaps the Son in that work is called 'God'! Milton often confuses me!!
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DEscend from Heav'n Urania, by that name If rightly thou art call'd, whose Voice divine Following, above th' Olympian Hill I soare,
I often find it difficult to understand who is speaking in this poem, who is the 'I' here for instance. I take it this is the narrator, who is Milton himself, calling upon his muse, Urania. Interesting that this muse may reflect Milton's interest in the heavens (astronomy). Galileo was an older contemporary and Milton, who met him, was well aware of the use of the new telescope in studying the night sky.
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Tabernacle
Light is conceived as stored in a chamber during the night [Jb 38:19]. Also, "Tabernacle", connects the primal light with the ark of the covenant, which was also kept in a tabernacle.
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Light Ethereal,
The symbolism of light is universal and occurs in the ancient Near East as a whole in a manner similar to the symbolism of light in the bible. OT. Light is vision and Yahweh gives light to the eyes [Ps 13:4]. The light of the eyes is also hope [Ezr 9:8] and revelation. Light is the element of moral good [Is 51:4] and [Jn 3:20].
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quintessence pure Sprung from the Deep
Light was not 1 of the 4 elements, but Milton makes it into the 5th essence, or "quintessence" This has also been identified with the "philosophers' stone", a chemical elixir alchemists believed would act as a catalyst to bring the world to a state of perfection.
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Let ther be Light, said God, and forthwith Light
This light does not emanate from the sun which Milton says has not yet been created. [247-248] Yahweh is the creator of light [Gn 1:3-5] This affirmation is probably intended to raise Him above the dualism of light and darkness.
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Let ther be Light
The story of creation is enriched with many details out of book of Genesis. Of course there is an epic way of narrative and present the earth as a living being which is created in different stages. At the end a beautiful living being is present. Its not coinsidence that the light is coming first.
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Labouring,
Labor was the curse laid on Adam after the fall.
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then purg'd with Euphrasie and Rue The visual Nerve,
Milton has had personal experience with diseases of the eyes and he has made a reference to cures number of times in PL.
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There is, said Michael, if thou well observe [ 530 ] The rule of not too much, by temperance taught In what thou eatst and drinkst, seeking from thence Due nourishment, not gluttonous delight, Till many years over thy head return: So maist thou live, till like ripe Fruit thou drop [ 535 ] Into thy Mothers lap, or be with ease Gatherd, not harshly pluckt, for death mature: This is old age; but then thou must outlive Thy youth, thy strength, thy beauty, which will change To witherd weak and gray; thy Senses then [ 540 ] Obtuse, all taste of pleasure must forgoe, To what thou hast, and for the Aire of youth Hopeful and cheerful, in thy blood will reigne A melancholly damp of cold and dry To weigh thy spirits down, and last consume [ 545 ] The Balme of Life.
Milton here saw us a soft, mild, kind way of our fall, our death. All are coming to an end as the result of our sin. Death come to all of us. In my point of view this is nice, comfortable view, instead our reality. Our painful fall to diseases and death. The end is not peaceful. For the most of the people is painful, violent and hard. But people always tried to calm our violent enviroment. Life never was easy for the human.
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Thousands and by Millions
Even the numbers are Homeric in their magnitude. They also reflect the unknown concept of truly large numbers in Milton's time. John Locke similarly impressed by size refers to the microscope, new at his time, as magnifying an image a million times. He seemed to have no conception of just what that implies.
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Wak't by the circling Hours, with rosie hand Unbarr'd the gates of Light.
This seems the first reference to Homer whose rosie fingered dawn begins the day (quite often in fact). The battle is Homeric in its proportions and not decided until God's son, Jesus/Achilles, arrives upon the field.
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or possibly his love desert [ 515 ] Who formd us from the dust
Adam seems to be asking if God will desert Mankind.
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Mean while enjoy Your fill what happiness this happie state Can comprehend, incapable of more.
Adam and Eve's state evokes the words of Nirvana - "I think I'm dumb, maybe I'm just happy".
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His praise ye Winds, that from four Quarters blow, Breathe soft or loud; and wave your tops, ye Pines, With every Plant, in sign of Worship wave.
Adam takes his responsibility to have dominion over all of Nature quite literally, commanding the winds and trees and animals to give God praise.
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And why not Gods of Men, since good, the more Communicated, more abundant growes, The Author not impair'd, but honourd more?
Satan conveniently forgets that the evil will be communicated as well.As a political metaphor, though, he is dead on - the more the King grants freedom, the more honored will be the King.
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And O fair Plant, said he, with fruit surcharg'd, Deigns none to ease thy load and taste thy sweet, Nor God, nor Man
Satan as usual makes his mischief sound like an act of kindness, by "deigning to ease the load" and plucking an apple.
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A Seraph wingd; six wings he wore, to shade His lineaments Divine; the pair that clad Each shoulder broad, came mantling o're his brest With regal Ornament; the middle pair [ 280 ] Girt like a Starrie Zone his waste, and round Skirted his loines and thighes with downie Gold And colours dipt in Heav'n; the third his feet Shaddowd from either heele with featherd maile Skie-tinctur'd grain.
Blake's Raphael is a rather effeminate figure. Can one ask why much is made of his attire when Adam and Eve, in their purity, are naked. Perhaps it is something to do with hierarchy, after all Raphael also wears a crown (in Blake's image).
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unless for him [ 210 ] Som other able, and as willing, pay The rigid satisfaction, death for death.
This is the God I don't like - the "rigid satisfaction," "death to death" like an eye-for-an-eye. Also, earlier God seemed to say he could not foresee all, and now he seems to be assuming that man will be as bad as Satan, not merely deceived by him.
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I offer, on mee let thine anger fall;
I think this is one resemblance between Satan and God's Son. They are all confronted with a situation which no one else is brave enough to solve and they both stand out.
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though Thron'd in highest bliss
This meets my expectations as the Father pronounces the Son of God's exaltation above all names in heaven and earth.
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and his faithless Progenie: whose fault? Whose but his own?
This is disappointing here and seems to be victim blaming particularly that it includes all who follow.
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Freely they stood who stood, and fell who fell. Not free, what proof could they have givn sincere Of true allegiance, constant Faith or Love
This is easily passed, yet stands as an important philosophical point. God has created his men, angels, etc., as free, but he must do this to make their obedience meaningful. If they were not free to disobey obedience would mean nothing: it is as much a choice as it is to act disobediently.
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So were I equal'd with them in renown, Blind Thamyris and blind Mæonides, [ 35 ] And Tiresias and Phineus
With this Milton makes it clear that he is the narrator, the one who has visited hell (Bks. 1 and 2) and now, Bk. 3, heaven.
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Thir freedom, they themselves ordain'd thir fall.
In previous God seems to know everything, the possibility of the fall, the fall, and the cause of the fall. Now the main responsible in this situation is the man, by his own freedom to choose. I think that God loose His power to set the rules or set the rules with so unstable way which many things gone bad.
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I made him just and right, Sufficient to have stood, though free to fall.
This is a huge ethical and philosophical problem...Did man had the ability of free will?
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Grand Parents
Again, Milton describes the first man and woman as special beings. Earlier, he used the word greater to refer to to the one who restored us, which leads me to believe Milton saw the first man as great. Now, he uses the word grand to describe the first couple.
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one greater Man
This seems to imply that the first man was a great man and/or his disobedience was a great act.
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worthiest
The idea of worthieness is connected to heroic journeys
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Built like a Temple, where Pilasters roundWere set, and Doric pillars overlaidWith Golden Architrave; nor did there want [ 715 ]Cornice or Freeze, with bossy Sculptures grav'n,The Roof was fretted Gold. Not Babilon,Nor great Alcairo such magnificenceEqual'd in all thir glories, to inshrineBelus or Serapis thir Gods, or seat [ 720 ]Thir Kings, when Ægypt with Assyria stroveIn wealth and luxurie. Th' ascending pileStood fixt her stately highth, and strait the doresOp'ning thir brazen foulds discover wideWithin, her ample spaces, o're the smooth [ 725 ]And level pavement: from the arched roofPendant by suttle Magic many a rowOf Starry Lamps and blazing Cressets fedWith Naphtha and Asphaltus yeilded lightAs from a sky.
A Temple built for Satan like the ones that would have been built for the gods of classical mythology.
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Millions of flaming swords, drawn from the thighsOf mighty Cherubim
Is this an exaggeration or are there millions of fallen angels in Hell?
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Thrice he assayd, and thrice in spight of scorn,Tears such as Angels weep, burst forth: at last [ 620 ]Words interwove with sighs found out thir way.
Three is highly important in Christianity because of the Trinity.
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Could merit more then that small infantry [ 575 ]Warr'd on by Cranes: though all the Giant broodOf Phlegra with th' Heroic Race were joyn'dThat fought at Theb's and Ilium, on each side
Comparing Satan's army to the armies of Greek Heroes and other great heroes such as King Arthur in the lines that follow.
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For Spirits when they pleaseCan either Sex assume, or both; so softAnd uncompounded is thir Essence pure, [ 425 ]Not ti'd or manacl'd with joynt or limb,Nor founded on the brittle strength of bones,Like cumbrous flesh; but in what shape they chooseDilated or condens't, bright or obscure,Can execute thir aerie purposes, [ 430 ]
I love this line. It's so evocative.
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In this unhappy Mansion, or once moreWith rallied Arms to try what may be yetRegaind in Heav'n, or what more lost in Hell?
Yet Satan has not given up the idea of trying to control Heaven through battle with God.
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Here at leastWe shall be free; th' Almighty hath not builtHere for his envy, will not drive us hence: [ 260 ]Here we may reign secure, and in my choyceTo reign is worth ambition though in Hell:Better to reign in Hell, then serve in Heav'n.
Satan embracing his new kingdom.
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The mind is its own place, and in it selfCan make a Heav'n of Hell, a Hell of Heav'n.
Great line
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Farewel happy Fields
The mixing of Christianity and Ancient mythology is constant throughout the poem. This is one example.
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Who now is Sovran can dispose and bidWhat shall be right:
Implying that God was not sovereign ruler of Heaven before the downfall of Satan and his army?
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How all his malice serv'd but to bring forthInfinite goodness, grace and mercy shewnOn Man by him seduc't, but on himselfTreble confusion, wrath and vengeance pour'd.
Satan is being punished for leading Eve astray, even though it lead to the need for Jesus, which Satan (or the narrator?) does not see as fair.
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Fall'n Cherube, to be weak is miserableDoing or Suffering: but of this be sure,To do ought good never will be our task,But ever to do ill our sole delight, [ 160 ]As being the contrary to his high willWhom we resist. If then his ProvidenceOut of our evil seek to bring forth good,Our labour must be to pervert that end,And out of good still to find means of evil; [ 165 ]Which oft times may succeed, so as perhapsShall grieve him, if I fail not, and disturbHis inmost counsels from thir destind aim.
Satan intends to do as he likes anyway in spite of God's will.
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Or do him mightier service as his thrallsBy right of Warr, what e're his business be [ 150 ]Here in the heart of Hell to work in Fire,
The work of Hell is being referred to as God's will? And Satan and his allies no longer have free will?
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(whom I nowOf force believe Almighty, since no lessThen such could hav orepow'rd such force as ours)
They did not see God as almighty before their downfall.
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As far as Gods and Heav'nly EssencesCan perish
They have fallen as far as it is possible for an angel to fall
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What though the field be lost? [ 105 ]All is not lost; the unconquerable Will,And study of revenge, immortal hate,And courage never to submit or yield:And what is else not to be overcome?That Glory never shall his wrath or might [ 110 ]Extort from me. To bow and sue for graceWith suppliant knee, and deifie his power,Who from the terrour of this Arm so lateDoubted his Empire, that were low indeed,That were an ignominy and shame beneath [ 115 ]This downfall; since by Fate the strength of GodsAnd this Empyreal substance cannot fail,Since through experience of this great eventIn Arms not worse, in foresight much advanc't,We may with more successful hope resolve [ 120 ]To wage by force or guile eternal WarrIrreconcileable, to our grand Foe,Who now triumphs, and in th' excess of joySole reigning holds the Tyranny of Heav'n.
Satan's downfall has not changed him for the better (as we would expect from a hero) it has redoubled his hate and added a thirst for revenge. He thinks of God as a tyrant.
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Mixt with obdurate pride and stedfast hate
Again with tragic flaws of a fallen hero
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what time his Pride Had cast him out from Heav'n, with all his Host Of Rebel Angels, by whose aid aspiring To set himself in Glory above his Peers,
The tragic flaw of a hero that leads to his downfall? Refering to Satan?
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till one greater Man Restore us, and regain the blissful Seat,
Another Christian misreading of Genesis. When Adam and Eve are expelled, they're gone for good. It's time to get on with their lives.
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The mind is its own place, and in it selfCan make a Heav'n of Hell, a Hell of Heav'n.
Unusual for epic poem, since in epic poems fate and the gods usually decide what happens, the hero knows this and is fated to challenge it.
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Glory
Glory (κλέος) is characteristic of all epic poems, especially ancient Greek ones.
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I thence Invoke thy aid to my adventrous Song,
Invoking the aid of the muse and adventurous song are signs of an epic poem
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In the Beginning
calling upon the Beginning is a sign of an epic poem
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Sing Heav'nly Muse,
Calling upon Kalliopi, the muse of epic poetry according to the ancient Greeks is a way to identify epic poetry.
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Pandemonium
from the Greek Παν (πάντες, όλοι - all ) and (δαίμονας - demon)
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scurff
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So as not either to provoke, or dreadNew warr, provok't; our better part remains [ 645 ]To work in close design, by fraud or guileWhat force effected not
They're going to rebel still, but in a way that won't make God retaliate
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But what if he our Conquerour, (whom I nowOf force believe Almighty, since no lessThen such could hav orepow'rd such force as ours) [ 145 ]Have left us this our spirit and strength intireStrongly to suffer and support our pains,That we may so suffice his vengeful ire,Or do him mightier service as his thrallsBy right of Warr, what e're his business be [ 150 ]Here in the heart of Hell to work in Fire,Or do his Errands in the gloomy Deep;What can it then avail though yet we feelStrength undiminisht, or eternal beingTo undergo eternal punishment?
What if God merely left them alive to serve as his slaves for all eternity?
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Empyreal
Belonging to heaven. Also used in the Divine Comedy. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Empyrean
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But far withinAnd in thir own dimensions like themselvesThe great Seraphic Lords and CherubimIn close recess and secret conclave sat [ 795 ]A thousand Demy-Gods on golden seats,Frequent and full. After short silence thenAnd summons read, the great consult began.
Just like a good comic book, let the next phase of the nefarious plot unfold with this cliff hanger to Book 2.
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who overcomesBy force, hath overcome but half his foe.
God has failed to convert Satan. I imagine this quote was used during Vietnam in conjunction with "hearts and minds."
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tempting her in a dream
to eat the forbidden fruit from the tree of knowledge of good and evil
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Smil'd with superior Love,
Even in love Adam appears to be superior. This was unexpected.
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So farr the happier Lot
Eve assumes that the fact that she finds her fulfilment in Adam makes her more fortunate than him. This surprises me particularly as Milton assures us previously that Eve is certainly not Adam's equal and was created to serve Adam.
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The God that made both Skie, Air, Earth and Heav'n Which they beheld, the Moons resplendent Globe And starrie Pole: Thou also mad'st the Night, Maker Omnipotent, and thou the Day, [ 725 ] Which we in our appointed work imployd Have finisht happie in our mutual help And mutual love, the Crown of all our bliss Ordaind by thee, and this delicious place For us too large, where thy abundance wants [ 730 ] Partakers, and uncropt falls to the ground. But thou hast promis'd from us two a Race To fill the Earth, who shall with us extoll Thy goodness infinite, both when we wake, And when we seek, as now, thy gift of sleep
Pray is essential part of their life. They depend from God's favor and praise Him. There is no independed thesis.
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To whom thus Eve with perfet beauty adornd. My Author and Disposer, what thou bidst [ 635 ] Unargu'd I obey; so God ordains, God is thy Law, thou mine: to know no more Is womans happiest knowledge and her praise.
I hear an obedient, submisive woman, willing to make the work of her husband. She accept her lower position.
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yet be not sad.
A pleasant surprise that Adam comforted Eve after her troublesome dream, even though he did not like hearing about it. We see this repeated "Be not disheartened"line 122. This idea is reinforced by line 129 "So cheer'd he his fair spouse, and she was cheer'd;"
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is Knowledge so despis'd? [ 60 ] Or envie, or what reserve forbids to taste? Forbid who will, none shall from me withhold Longer thy offerd good, why else set here?
why else set here? We have to deal with great ethical problem...it was all set up from the begining? Are we created to hunt knowledge and eternity? Are all these a test?
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O Sole in whom my thoughts find all repose, My Glorie, my Perfection
I think that there is something deep in Eve's emotions...really strong emotions.
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Awake My fairest, my espous'd, my latest found, Heav'ns last best gift, my ever new delight,
I think that Adam was full in love with his wife....!!!
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Forthwith up to the Clouds With him I flew, and underneath beheld The Earth outstretcht immense, a prospect wide And various:
Why does Satan take Eve up into the clouds? What is Milton trying to do here? The only thing that comes into my mind is Satan's temptation of Jesus when he takes up 'on an exceedingly high mountain, and showed him all the kingdoms of the world and promises them to him in exchange for his worship - but I'm not sure there's a connection. I find these lines odd - why does he add them to the traditional 'temptation' narrative?
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impal'd with circling fire, Yet unconsum'd
Sounds like the burning bush (Exodus 3.2): And the angel of the Lord appeared unto him in a flame of fire out of the midst of a bush: and he looked, and, behold, the bush burned with fire, and the bush was not consumed.
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Adamantine Rock,
One of many echos of Satan to Prometheus: Power Now drive the adamantine wedge's stubborn edge straight [65] through his chest with your full force.
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which God by curse Created evil, for evil only good,
Quite a rewriting of Genesis. See 1.31: Then God saw everything that He had made, and indeed it was very good.
This may sound blasphemous, but it's Milton's doctrine that is blasphemous-- that creation wasn't complete, wasn't good, until He created Hell.
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Rocks, Caves, Lakes, Fens, Bogs, Dens, and shades of death,
And ten low Words oft creep in one dull Line (Pope). While Pope may have been thinking of this line, it works because the line is meant to be slow for a region dolorous.
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Thither full fraught with mischievous revenge, Accurst, and in a cursed hour he hies.
After all the heroic language and deeds preceding, Milton then reminds us that all Satan is after is mischievous revenge. His actions aren't heroic because he's not doing them for heroic reasons.
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from them I go This uncouth errand sole, and one for all Myself expose, with lonely steps to tread Th' unfounded deep, and through the void immense To search with wandring quest a place foretold
The epic hero on his sole quest to save his people...There are countless examples of this in mythology and epic poetry.
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Thus Beelzebub Pleaded his devilish Counsel, first devis'd By Satan, and in part propos'd:
Satan started the plan and fed it to Beelzebub, who then put it forth to the masses. It's a classic Machiavellian scheme, and allows Satan to be the hero/champion who volunteers for the job.
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Let us not then pursue By force impossible, by leave obtain'd [ 250 ] Unacceptable, though in Heav'n, our state Of splendid vassalage, but rather seek Our own good from our selves, and from our own Live to our selves, though in this vast recess, Free, and to none accountable, preferring [ 255 ] Hard liberty before the easie yoke Of servile Pomp.
Mammon echos Satan's words in book 1, arguably the most famous line in the entire poem, "Better to reign in Hell, then serve in Heav'n" (line 263).
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Our doom; which if we can sustain and bear, Our Supream Foe in time may much remit [ 210 ] His anger, and perhaps thus farr remov'd Not mind us not offending, satisfi'd With what is punish't
Someday God may not be as angry with them - Belial is arguing that they should take a chance at someday being forgiven.
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And that must end us, that must be our cure, [ 145 ] To be no more; sad cure
Milton told us that this is precisely what Moloc wanted in lines 45-50.
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His trust was with th' Eternal to be deem'd Equal in strength, and rather then be less Care'd not to be at all
Moloc thought he was God's equal in strength, but now that he had been proven wrong just wanted to cease to be.
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Satan exalted sat, by merit rais'd [ 5 ] To that bad eminence;
Satan being 'exalted' and 'by merit raised' certainly seemsItalic** heroic here although we know he is not after-all, by being Satan and evil.
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on th' other side Incenst with indignation Satan stood Unterrifi'd
Although Death is horrifying, Satan is not afraid. Faced with dark enemy, he is as brave as traditional heroes.
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So eagerly the fiend Ore bog or steep, through strait, rough, dense, or rare, With head, hands, wings, or feet pursues his way, And swims or sinks, or wades, or creeps, or flyes:
Satan's entire journey is confused and chaotic so he seems to be ridiculous.
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Champions
Milton associates the devil with the aristocratic virtue of chivalry as with a hero
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when his darling Sons
Satan seems ridiculous here when sarcasm is used to indicate his jealousy of God's love of man.
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Precedence,
Satan seems ridiculous here with a "performative contradiction" when he claims precedence in the act of renouncing it.
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His proud imaginations thus displaid
This refers to the fact that Satan does not argue rationally so he appears to be ridiculous.
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HIgh on a Throne of Royal State
Book 2 starts with Satan's monarchal qualities being emphasized as if he were a classic hero.
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O shame to men! Devil with Devil damn'd Firm concord holds
Devils govern themselves better than men.
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Refusing to accept as great a share Of hazard as of honour, due alike To him who Reigns, and so much to him due Of hazard more, as he above the rest [ 455 ] High honourd sits
The code of the classical hero, as Hektor replying to his wife in book 6 of the Iliad, who had advised him to stay out of the fighting:
Then tall Hektor of the shining helm answered her: “All these<br> things are in my mind also, lady; yet I would feel deep shame<br> before the Trojans, and the Trojan women with trailing garments,<br> if like a coward I were to shrink aside from the fighting;<br> and the spirit will not let me, since I have learned to be valiant and to fight always among the foremost ranks of the Trojans,<br> winning for my own self great glory, and for my father.
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long is the way
In Dryden's translation:
The gates of hell are open night and day; Smooth the descent, and easy is the way: But to return, and view the cheerful skies, In this the task and mighty labor lies.
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Hurl'd headlong
Repetition of Book 1, line 45:
Him the Almighty Power Hurld headlong flaming from th' Ethereal Skie With hideous ruine and combustion down To bottomless perdition, there to dwell In Adamantine Chains and penal Fire, Who durst defie th' Omnipotent to Arms.
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suttlety
Gen 3.1: Now the serpent was more subtil than any beast of the field which the Lord God had made.
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how wearisom Eternity so spent in worship paid To whom we hate.
Even if the devils are wrong, they get many great lines. Perhaps this is Milton's feeling towards the Restoration.
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nor the Law unjust
The law, as with the fall of Troy, the Melian Dialog, or the destruction of Thebes by Alexander, meant enslaving the women and slaughtering the men.
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Each on his rock transfixt,
(1) Another echo of Prometheus, along with adamantine in book 1, and tyranny spoken by Moloch. The bigger point is whether Satan (or other devils) are heroic rebels like Prometheus, or just devils.
(2) The authorship of Prometheus Bound is disputed, due to textual differences from Aeschylus' other works. See the WP article for a starting point.
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this Firmament [ 175 ] Of Hell
An echo of the flood in Gen 7.11
the same day were all the fountains of the great deep broken up, and the windows of heaven were opened.
Which itself is an undoing of creation (Gen 1.6)
6 And God said, Let there be a firmament in the midst of the waters, and let it divide the waters from the waters.
7 And God made the firmament, and divided the waters which were under the firmament from the waters which were above the firmament: and it was so.
8 And God called the firmament Heaven. And the evening and the morning were the second day.
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for who would loose, Though full of pain, this intellectual being,
Perhaps an echo of Claudio in Measure for Measure (3.1.130:
Ay, but to die, and go we know not where; To lie in cold obstruction and to rot; This sensible warm motion to become A kneaded clod; and the delighted spirit To bathe in fiery floods, or to reside In thrilling region of thick-ribbed ice; To be imprison'd in the viewless winds, And blown with restless violence round about The pendent world; or to be worse than worst Of those that lawless and incertain thought Imagine howling: 'tis too horrible! The weariest and most loathed worldly life That age, ache, penury and imprisonment Can lay on nature is a paradise To what we fear of death.
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Incapable of stain
Immaculate
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First, what Revenge?
Belial may be a slimy politician, but his point his sound: the devils don't have the firepower.
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The Prison of his Tyranny who Reigns By our delay?
Another hint of Prometheus Bound- i.e. the idea of God as a tyrant. To my mind, Milton makes Moloch sound better than Belial because of his courage, even if his advice is less sound.
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But I should ill become this Throne
So Satan takes this task no only because of bravery or hatred but of the king's pride.
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The weight of all and our last hope relies
Here is a proof of Satan being an epic hero. He has strength and bravery to accomplish a very difficult task, a task that no one can do except him.
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our Joy upraise In his disturbance
The process of Satan's plan is quite logical and effective. But the goal of the plan somehow is not very reasonable. The former fallen angels are talking about how to handle the situation. They want to get out of the pain, but to destruct what God likes is not a way to achieve that. I doubt whether Satan has been driven mad by torment and hatred. This plan can do no good to him except that it can satisfy his enormous ego. As if destructing Eden can destruct the creator of Eden! But perhaps he secretly knows their situation is hopeless so he has no choice but to spend his efforts on making things worse...
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shall curse Thir frail Original, and faded bliss, [ 375 ] Faded so soon
Misery wants company...
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Not peace:
What would peace be here? I'm not siding with Belial, but what better options do they have?
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every Starr perhaps a World Of destind habitation;
Milton's moving into the world of early science fiction, here, again! again, not at all the world of Genesis - more like the world of Galileo
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The Sixt, and of Creation last arose With Eevning Harps and Mattin, when God said, [ 450 ] Let th' Earth bring forth Foul living in her kinde, Cattel and Creeping things, and Beast of the Earth, Each in their kinde.
Milton seems to quote the biblical story almost verbatim at the start of each section, and then lets his imagination go wild with the detail, which bursts out a bit like the animals here burst into living.
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errour
I find it interesting that Milton inserts the idea of error into God's creation - way before the Fall. What is the point here of his choice of words, beyond the obvious of the rivers not being straight?
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but in the Womb as yet Of Waters, Embryon immature involv'd, Appeer'd not: over all the face of Earth Main Ocean flow'd, not idle, but with warme Prolific humour soft'ning all her Globe, [ 280 ] Fermented the great Mother to conceave,
This image of the Earth as 'great Mother', and the idea of the 'womb' of the waters, and of conception, is not at all in Genesis. It seems an image much more drawn from the classics.
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