10 Matching Annotations
- May 2022
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"I'd want to learn a lot from Professor Zimmerman so that I may obtain as much information as possible and use it in reality. It's not about the work."
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- (Shorter Piece) First two-sentences
- The backdrop of this annotation is that it was a late-semester free writing for an essay brainstorm. In this piece of writing, I mentioned how I didn't know what to expect going into the project and wanted to learn as much as possible for my own betterment.
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- Apr 2019
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"Wait, tell me one more time. What’s postmodernism?"
First sentence states the problem
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- Feb 2018
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ne of the most salient features of our culture is that there is so muchbullshit
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- Mar 2017
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The Channing E. Phillips Homes, located in the 1700 block of 7th street NW, is a subsidized apartment complex located near the Shaw-Howard Metro station.
First Sentence: Needs a point of controversy.
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The District of Columbia Office of Planning (OP) manages the development of the District of Columbia by preserving and revitalizing characteristic neighborhoods such as, Dupont Circle (District of Columbia Office of Planning, “About the DC Office of Planning | Mission”)
Begin with a controversy or a point of view.
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- Feb 2017
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aims to connect the history of inequality of the residents of Cabrini Greens, a poor public housing project in Chicago, to a series of issues with the built environment of the neighborhood that limit the economic, political, and social utility of the residents.
Strong first sentence!
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- Dec 2016
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In the seventh chapter of his book, City of Rhetoric, David Fleming exposes the disconnect between those living in the Cabrini Green homes and those financially stable enough to live outside the housing project.
Strong first sentence. You've got the hang of this.
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that interior designers and architects should set out to create non-gendered spaces that will better accommodate the evolution of traditional gender roles and identities that is happening in today’s society.
Bam! Fantastic.
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Built in 1982, the Westin City Center, has experienced many renovations and updates since its establishment.
First sentence should do something: See G&B "Getting Started"
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Fifty years after the creation of the Department of Housing and Urban Development — and nearly that long after the passage of the Fair Housing Act of 1968 — the fight against the interlinked scourges of housing discrimination and racial segregation in America is far from finished.
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