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their should be a comma after the word movie- carter bowling

their should be a comma after similarities- carter bowling

difference too is not a sentence- carter bowling

need to indent before freak- carter bowling

need to indent- carter bowling

novel should be movie-Jack Frambes

add some similarities-emma niehaus

it should have a comma after nightmares-Jack Frambes

this should be movie-Jack Frambes

make this book and movie-emma niehaus

help should either be taken out and explain should be explains or help should be helps to explain-Jack Frambes

i'm makeing this as dark as possible to see if it turns black- jack loughnane

The Pearl

The Pearl

The Pearl

The Pearl

The Pearl

The Pearl

make this the last sentence of the paragraph-emma niehaus

change this to how the beginning of the book starts-emma niehaus

and differences -emma niehaus

its coyotito before he gets baptized- emma niehaus

make sure you include this but change the sentence around to make it go with how he woundnt treat Coyotito-emma niehaus

change this to something about how the doctor wont treat Coyotito because he is from a poor family-emma niehaus

spell out doctor 7 lines down and 13 words out - jack loughnane

This should be taken out. -gabbi mayne

change to Doctor - emma niehaus

this should be taken out- emma niehaus

i would change this part to, Kino and Juana have a son named Coyotito, but in the movie when he gets baptized and his name changes to Juan Coyote- emma niehaus

this should be they-Emma Niehaus

this is a title and you should italicize -emma niehaus

This is a title and you should italicize. Gabbi Mayne

Revised Version of The Pearl comparisons The Pearl book and movie have many similarities and differences. The book and movie both have Kino as their main character and they both have the same characters. Kino’s son Coyotito is named Coyote in the movie, then after Coyote gets baptized by the priest Coyote becomes Juan Coyote. Another difference between the book and movie is at the beginning of the movie we get a background of Kino’s life as a child, this helps explain why his nightmares explain the origin of the songs he hears throughout the movie. There are also many similarities that happen throughout both the novel and the movie. For example the doctor on both the novel and the movie still won’t help the people of the town because they are poor and can’t pay the doctor. This is true even when Kino’s child, Coyotito gets stung by a scorpion. -Matt Rohlfs

The Pearl book and movie have many similarities and differences. The book and movie both have Kino and all of the original characters, but they change the name of Kino’s son, Coyotito. In the movie version, Coyotito is named Coyote. The priest then baptizes Coyote with a new name, Juan Coyote. The book introduces Kino as a grown man with a wife and a child. The movie introduces Kino as a young boy. Also, in the book, Kino hears the song of evil. In the movie, to describe where the evil comes from to the viewers, he has nightmares. There are many obvious differences but there are also many similarities that occur between the two. In both the movie and book, the Doctor still refuses to help the town people, even when Coyotito is stung.

This is my reviewed piece. Allison.

Does anybody else think that we should add reasoning to this to explain the doctor's selfishness? -Reero

Suggestion time: i think that we should change this also to something like "similarities that occur in these works. -Reero

This sentence just doesn't seem right to me. I think that we should change it to "Another difference between these works of art is the beginning of each." -RYAN

This whole part about coyotito's name is very jumbled and needs to be better organized------Allison

I simply do not like this sentence, for, it just does not seem long enough. Instead, to fix it, we should add more to describe the difference between these two sections of the movie and the book. If you agree with me, please edit this paragraph and add a smiley face. -Rotsching Boy

I think they should list the similarities first, then talk about the differances-Allison

Shouldn't be the song of evil-Nate

There should be a comma after Coyotito.- Matt Rohlfs

This is just a suggestion, but I think that we should add by a scorpion to this. - Ryan Rotsching

This should be "him having" instead of "he has" -Matt Rohlfs

"but the change" I think that this should be changed to " but they change" -Allison

This should be either book or novel, it should not say both, or that's what I think. -Ryan Rotsching

I think we should take this and make it doctor instead of saying the abbreviation. I'm not sure this should be capitalized. -Ryan Rotsching 8B

This is a title, you should italicize.-Allison Laughlin

this is a title and you should underline it.-Luke Misleh

that should be doctor spelled out -alex

it should be the book and the movie -alex

Explain a little more.- Kaylee

specify what he got stung by -Anime

Make sure to say what he got stung by. -Kaylee

the doctor is willing to for money -anime

After Coyitito, make sure to add a comma since they are saying his name.- Kaylee

You don't need to tell that Kino is the main character, not that important. -Kaylee

what does kino being a child have to do with coyotito getting stung by a scorpion alex

what does kino as a child have to do with coyoito getting stung -Anime

it explains the origin of all the songs not just the song of the family. -Anime

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"is ^ the" -Anime

Why is this important to the movie -Anime

Change to they- Kaylee

This is a title, and you should italicize. -Kaylee Monahan

Doctor.

"On the other hand, in the book, it does not explain about Kino's childhood, or how the "Song of the Family" came to be."

It should be, "Another difference between the book and the movie is the beginning, and in the movie the viewer meets Kino when he was young. The viewer also sees that Kino had nightmares when he was young, and those nightmares had helped with describing the origin of the "Song of the Family.

It should be, "In the movie Coyote is baptized by priest, and earns a new name, Juan Coyote."

, even though

In my sense, I think it should be, "In the book, Kino and Juana have a son named Coyotito, but in the movie, his name is Coyote.

, even though

add a comma after Pearl and after movie

Take out this word. It doesn't make sense.-Anna

Is this the song of family, or the song of evil?-Anna

Write the whole word. "Doctor."-Anna

Book and movie, book and novel are the same thing.-Anna

This is not a clear conclusion. Restate the thesis statement.-Anna

Take this out, it doesn't work. It is the beginning of the novel and the movie.-Anna

This sentence doesn't make sense to me. -Anna

This sentence would be better as a conclusion. -Anna

Sorry, forgot a space! -Sam

If you know why he is unwilling to help the people I would write it- Lizzie Madyda

You already said it so you don't need to say it again- Lizzie Madyda

Make one sentence. They are fragments. -Sam

The nightmares started the song of evil, not family and the song of the family comes from either his dad or Juan Tomas.... i couldn't tell. -Sam

*Had -Maddie Jones-Huddle

This sentence should not be the last sentence. There should be a conclusion sentence that sums everything up. -Sam

Change this to," with the new name of ,"

Change this to "book , but in the movie..."

This should instead be These nightmares. or Add this sentence to the previous sentence and make it become ... Song of the Family, and this does not happen in the book.<br> -Dean

follow up Then you want to change this to do not. -Dean Misleh

This is a title, you must italicize. -Dean Misleh

owen i know where you live

well well well owen

The Pearl book and movie have many similarities and differences. The book and movie both have Kino as their main character, but they change the name of Kino’s baby. Kino and Juana have a son named Coyotito in the book. In the movie, Coyotito is named Coyote. The priest baptizes Coyote with a new name, Juan Coyote. Another difference between the book and movie is the beginning of the novel. In the movie, the viewer meets Kino as a young boy and has nightmares that help explain the origin of the Song of the Evil, this does not happen in the book. There are many similarities that occur in the book and movie. The Doctor in the book and novel is still unwilling to help the people of the town. This is true even when Kino’s child, Coyotito gets stung.

I know where you live -God

i belive that you only need book or novel -andrew

Supposed to be Coyotito.

-Ryan H.

This is a fragment and I did this before Raegan did.

-Ryan H.

it should be in the book and the movie -Connor

Should be spelled out as "Doctor"

-Ryan H

Should be song of Evil.

- Ryan H.

it should be "and watches as he has nightmares." -Connor

"but in the movie the name of Kino's baby is changed" -Raegan

This is wrong. -Raegan

This could be the the conclusion. -Raegan

This could be one sentence. -Raegan

is in the -Raegan

This supposed to be movie not novel.-Evan Webb

You need a comma after Coyotito. - Evan Webb

Instead of saying this, explain what happens in the beginning of the novel-Zach

change this to a word that is a grouping word like each-Zach

there is no reason to why this is important/why is this significant-Zach

you need a conclusion after this-zach

The should be they-Zach

I don't think this is Song of the Family-Zach

Shouldn't this be movie-Zach

Write out doctor. -Ellie Jonas

You don't need this comma.-Zach

It should not be abbreviated.-Zach

If there are many similarities how come there is only two sentences?-Zach

After "...but they" not the. -Ellie Jonas

Make all of this one sentence.-Zach

This is a title, and you should italicize. -Zach

This is a title and you should italicize. -Ellie Jonas

spell out Doctor - Patrick

chnage to " this is true when coyotito gets stung"

remove this -abby

wait nevermind change novel to movie -abby

change this to the name of Kino's baby is changed in the movie.- Patrick

Add ' for example" before the to make sentence clear. - Abby dupps

Take this out. - coolest cat abby dupps

change but the change the name of Kino's baby to they changed the name of Kino's baby in the movie - Patrick

you have no conclusion!!!! :)

dont abbreviate

:)

no. should say another difference between... beginning. take out when it says of the novel. -alyssa

It doesn't explain the song of family, it explains the song of evil. -Abby

His nightmares describe the song of evil not the song of family. -alyssa

This should be two sentences. "...nightmares. That helps..." -alyssa

add " in the movie" here. -Abby

I don't think they should have abbreviated doctor. Ben Schlaack

Take this out. -Abby

This sentence is unclear. I would change it to say When the priest baptizes Coyote he gives him a new name: Juan Coyote. -alyssa

Spell out doctor. - Abby

Add that in the beggining of the book it started off with Kino as a man not a young boy. -Abby

This doesn't make a lot of sense. I would write "but the name of Kino's baby was changed." alyssa

Change the to they. -Abby

this is a title, you should italicize it. Ben Schlaack

This is a title. You should italicize. Alyssa.

This is a title and you shoudl italicize it. - Abby

Italicize it Jason! - Rotten Eggs

BERG!!!!!!- Pickles

it`s 11/18/2016 not 16 - JASON CAO...... no - Space Time Lord( Pickles)

This is a title, and you should italicize.- Ryan Eagan NO THIS IS PICKLES AND SHALL STAY PICKLES

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I think it should be; child, Coyotito, gets.. -mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Coyotito -Callie Jacobs

In the book Coyotito is never even baptized it is one of the things that Kino wants to do with the money from the pearl. -Callie Jacobs

We do not personally meet Kino jeez. - Eggdominous Rex

I agree that it should be spelled out -Callie Jacobs

Coyotito- MEW

Emphasize that it is by a scorpion- Scrambled Eags

The information in this statement is incorrect. their child's name is still Coyotito but they only said his name once before his baptism were they change his name Juan Coyote, from then on they call him Coyote to show respect for his baptism.- BERG

It should be town, this- Cap'n Eggs

The sentence should not end here it should, in my opinion, have ",in both the book and the movie." after -Callie Jacobs

Choose on or the other - Eggbert

Spell out doctor - green eggs and ham

It should be and the - Eagipoo

There two sentences should be put together with a ", but" instead of it being two separate sentences. -Callie Jacobs

It should be in the past tense- Eags

but the change "the" name of Kino`s should be changed to "of" -Jason Cow

I don't see how this is relevant, if this does make a difference to the story please give an explanation- Mary Wilkens

I am in agreement it should be they. - anonymous person

it should be has. - Ryan Eagan

"The" should be "they- Mary Wilkens Jason

this is a title and you should italicize. -Callie Jacobs

This is a title and you should italicize.- Jason Cao

This is a title, and you should italicize. -Mary Wilkens

Is this supposed to be they? 'The' doesn't make any sense. I think it is... -Heather Schwab

I think you should say why they wanted Coyotito to be baptized. -AH

The nightmares are not in the beginning of the book. They are in the beginning of the movie. This is unclear. I think you should say that it happens in the movie. Anna Heilers

There should be a comma after Coyotito because it's an appositive, I think...-Heather Schwab (...Coyotito,..)

Should this be like, spelled out? Like doctor. They are referring to him as the doctor, he's not special or like, a pronouns. -Heather Schwab ;)

You should spell out the word "doctor." I also don't think doctor is supposed to be capitalized. Anna Heilers

I don't believe they explain the origin of the song of the family. I think his nightmares foreshadow the end of the book. Anna Heilers ;)

You need to explain why this is significant. Anna Heilers

Why is this significant? You need to say why him being baptized is important. I think you should also say how this is different from the book. What happens in the book that is different from the movie? Anna Heilers

You need to say why this change is significant. I don't know if it is significant at all. Anna Heilers

You need a conclusion sentence. Anna Heilers

I don't think there is a good conclusion sentence. The last sentence is fine, but they should add another like, wrapping it up.

If you referred to him as Coyote in the movie before, it might make more sense to call him Coyote again, or put both in so it is clearer. Anna Heilers

You should explain WHY they change these things from the book to the movie and why they kept some things the same.- Emma Perera

You either need to take out the comma before Coyotito or add one after. It should say, "Kino's son, Coyotito," or "Kino's son Coyotito..." Anna Heilers

Put a comma in between Coyotito and gets. You are naming something that is not exactly part of the actual sentence.- Emma Perera

This should be they, not the. Anna Heilers

Change this to they. ", but THEY change the name of Kino's child is much more clear.

this is a title and you should italicize it.-Emma Perera

This is a title, and you should italicize. Anna Heilers