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Freak the Mighty has many similarities. Differences too. The book and movie have many similarities including the main characters. One difference is that Max and Freak meet in their 7th grade year in the movie. In the book, they met in the summer going into 8th grade. This is important because it means the timing of the story is different. Another difference is in the movie Max gets upset about his similarities to Killer Kane. Gram comes in and comforts him. This is right before he gets kidnapped by his father. This does not happen in the book. This is important because it shows the view that he does not want to be like his dad. These are some of the similarities and differneces.
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their should be a comma after the word movie- carter bowling
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similarities
their should be a comma after similarities- carter bowling
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Differences too.
difference too is not a sentence- carter bowling
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Freak
need to indent before freak- carter bowling
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need to indent- carter bowling
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The Dr. in the book and novel is still
novel should be movie-Jack Frambes
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There are many similarities that occur in the book and movie.
add some similarities-emma niehaus
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nightmares that
it should have a comma after nightmares-Jack Frambes
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novel
this should be movie-Jack Frambes
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book and novel
make this book and movie-emma niehaus
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help explain
help should either be taken out and explain should be explains or help should be helps to explain-Jack Frambes
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The Pearl
i'm makeing this as dark as possible to see if it turns black- jack loughnane
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There are many similarities that occur in the book and movie.
make this the last sentence of the paragraph-emma niehaus
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This does not happen in the book.
change this to how the beginning of the book starts-emma niehaus
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similarities
and differences -emma niehaus
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Coyote
its coyotito before he gets baptized- emma niehaus
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The Dr. in the book and novel is still unwilling to help the people of the town.
make sure you include this but change the sentence around to make it go with how he woundnt treat Coyotito-emma niehaus
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This is true even when Kino’s child, Coyotito gets stung.
change this to something about how the doctor wont treat Coyotito because he is from a poor family-emma niehaus
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Dr.
spell out doctor 7 lines down and 13 words out - jack loughnane
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This does not happen in the book.
This should be taken out. -gabbi mayne
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Dr.
change to Doctor - emma niehaus
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In the movie version, Coyotito is named Coyote.
this should be taken out- emma niehaus
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in the book.
i would change this part to, Kino and Juana have a son named Coyotito, but in the movie when he gets baptized and his name changes to Juan Coyote- emma niehaus
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this should be they-Emma Niehaus
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The Pearl
this is a title and you should italicize -emma niehaus
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The Pearl
This is a title and you should italicize. Gabbi Mayne
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Revised Version of The Pearl comparisons The Pearl book and movie have many similarities and differences. The book and movie both have Kino as their main character and they both have the same characters. Kino’s son Coyotito is named Coyote in the movie, then after Coyote gets baptized by the priest Coyote becomes Juan Coyote. Another difference between the book and movie is at the beginning of the movie we get a background of Kino’s life as a child, this helps explain why his nightmares explain the origin of the songs he hears throughout the movie. There are also many similarities that happen throughout both the novel and the movie. For example the doctor on both the novel and the movie still won’t help the people of the town because they are poor and can’t pay the doctor. This is true even when Kino’s child, Coyotito gets stung by a scorpion. -Matt Rohlfs
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Pearl book and movie have many similarities and differences. The book and movie both have Kino as their main character, but the change the name of Kino’s baby. Kino and Juana have a son named Coyotito in the book. In the movie version, Coyotito is named Coyote. The priest baptizes Coyote with a new name, Juan Coyote. Another difference between the book and movie is the beginning of the novel. In the movie, the viewer meets Kino as a young boy and sees he has nightmares that help explain the origin of the Song of the Family. This does not happen in the book. There are many similarities that occur in the book and movie. The Dr. in the book and novel is still unwilling to help the people of the town. This is true even when Kino’s child, Coyotito gets stung.
The Pearl book and movie have many similarities and differences. The book and movie both have Kino and all of the original characters, but they change the name of Kino’s son, Coyotito. In the movie version, Coyotito is named Coyote. The priest then baptizes Coyote with a new name, Juan Coyote. The book introduces Kino as a grown man with a wife and a child. The movie introduces Kino as a young boy. Also, in the book, Kino hears the song of evil. In the movie, to describe where the evil comes from to the viewers, he has nightmares. There are many obvious differences but there are also many similarities that occur between the two. In both the movie and book, the Doctor still refuses to help the town people, even when Coyotito is stung.
This is my reviewed piece. Allison.
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The Dr. in the book and novel is still unwilling to help the people of the town.
Does anybody else think that we should add reasoning to this to explain the doctor's selfishness? -Reero
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similarities that occur in the book and movie.
Suggestion time: i think that we should change this also to something like "similarities that occur in these works. -Reero
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Another difference between the book and movie is the beginning of the novel.
This sentence just doesn't seem right to me. I think that we should change it to "Another difference between these works of art is the beginning of each." -RYAN
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The book and movie both have Kino as their main character, but the change the name of Kino’s baby. Kino and Juana have a son named Coyotito in the book. In the movie version, Coyotito is named Coyote. The priest baptizes Coyote with a new name, Juan Coyote.
This whole part about coyotito's name is very jumbled and needs to be better organized------Allison
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This does not happen in the book.
I simply do not like this sentence, for, it just does not seem long enough. Instead, to fix it, we should add more to describe the difference between these two sections of the movie and the book. If you agree with me, please edit this paragraph and add a smiley face. -Rotsching Boy
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The Pearl book and movie have many similarities and differences
I think they should list the similarities first, then talk about the differances-Allison
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the Family
Shouldn't be the song of evil-Nate
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Coyotito gets stung.
There should be a comma after Coyotito.- Matt Rohlfs
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Coyotito gets stung.
This is just a suggestion, but I think that we should add by a scorpion to this. - Ryan Rotsching
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he has
This should be "him having" instead of "he has" -Matt Rohlfs
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but the change th
"but the change" I think that this should be changed to " but they change" -Allison
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the book and novel
This should be either book or novel, it should not say both, or that's what I think. -Ryan Rotsching
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Dr.
I think we should take this and make it doctor instead of saying the abbreviation. I'm not sure this should be capitalized. -Ryan Rotsching 8B
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The Pearl
This is a title, you should italicize.-Allison Laughlin
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The Pearl
this is a title and you should underline it.-Luke Misleh
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The Dr.
that should be doctor spelled out -alex
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book and novel
it should be the book and the movie -alex
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Coyote with a new name, Juan Coyote
Explain a little more.- Kaylee
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Coyotito gets stung.
specify what he got stung by -Anime
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Coyotito gets stung.
Make sure to say what he got stung by. -Kaylee
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The Dr. in the book and novel is still unwilling to help the people of the town
the doctor is willing to for money -anime
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Coyotito
After Coyitito, make sure to add a comma since they are saying his name.- Kaylee
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The Pearl book and movie have many similarities and differences. The book and movie both have Kino as their main character,
You don't need to tell that Kino is the main character, not that important. -Kaylee
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This is true even when Kino’s child, Coyotito gets stung.
what does kino being a child have to do with coyotito getting stung by a scorpion alex
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This is true even when Kino’s child, Coyotito gets stung.
what does kino as a child have to do with coyoito getting stung -Anime
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help explain the origin of the Song of the Family
it explains the origin of all the songs not just the song of the family. -Anime
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is the
at"is ^ the" -Anime
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The priest baptizes Coyote with a new name, Juan Coyote.
Why is this important to the movie -Anime
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the
Change to they- Kaylee
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The Pearl
This is a title, and you should italicize. -Kaylee Monahan
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Doctor.
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This does not happen in the book.
"On the other hand, in the book, it does not explain about Kino's childhood, or how the "Song of the Family" came to be."
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Another difference between the book and movie is the beginning of the novel. In the movie, the viewer meets Kino as a young boy and sees he has nightmares that help explain the origin of the Song of the Family.
It should be, "Another difference between the book and the movie is the beginning, and in the movie the viewer meets Kino when he was young. The viewer also sees that Kino had nightmares when he was young, and those nightmares had helped with describing the origin of the "Song of the Family.
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The priest baptizes Coyote with a new name, Juan Coyote.
It should be, "In the movie Coyote is baptized by priest, and earns a new name, Juan Coyote."
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Kino and Juana have a son named Coyotito in the book. In the movie version, Coyotito is named Coyote.
In my sense, I think it should be, "In the book, Kino and Juana have a son named Coyotito, but in the movie, his name is Coyote.
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The Pearl book and movie
add a comma after Pearl and after movie
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Take out this word. It doesn't make sense.-Anna
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Song of the Family
Is this the song of family, or the song of evil?-Anna
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Dr.
Write the whole word. "Doctor."-Anna
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book and novel
Book and movie, book and novel are the same thing.-Anna
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This is true even when Kino’s child, Coyotito gets stung.
This is not a clear conclusion. Restate the thesis statement.-Anna
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of the novel.
Take this out, it doesn't work. It is the beginning of the novel and the movie.-Anna
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This is true even when Kino’s child, Coyotito gets stung.
This sentence doesn't make sense to me. -Anna
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There are many similarities that occur in the book and movie.
This sentence would be better as a conclusion. -Anna
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The Pearlbook
Sorry, forgot a space! -Sam
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unwilling to help the people of the town
If you know why he is unwilling to help the people I would write it- Lizzie Madyda
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There are many similarities that occur in the book and movie.
You already said it so you don't need to say it again- Lizzie Madyda
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Kino and Juana have a son named Coyotito in the book. In the movie version, Coyotito is named Coyote.
Make one sentence. They are fragments. -Sam
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In the movie, the viewer meets Kino as a young boy and sees he has nightmares that help explain the origin of the Song of the Family
The nightmares started the song of evil, not family and the song of the family comes from either his dad or Juan Tomas.... i couldn't tell. -Sam
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This is true even when Kino’s child, Coyotito gets stung.
This sentence should not be the last sentence. There should be a conclusion sentence that sums everything up. -Sam
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a new name
Change this to," with the new name of ,"
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book. In
Change this to "book , but in the movie..."
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This
This should instead be These nightmares. or Add this sentence to the previous sentence and make it become ... Song of the Family, and this does not happen in the book.<br> -Dean
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does not
follow up Then you want to change this to do not. -Dean Misleh
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The Pearl
This is a title, you must italicize. -Dean Misleh
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owen i know where you live
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The Pearl book and movie have many similarities and differences. The book and movie both have Kino as their main character, but the change the name of Kino’s baby. Kino and Juana have a son named Coyotito in the book. In the movie version, Coyotito is named Coyote. The priest baptizes Coyote with a new name, Juan Coyote. Another difference between the book and movie is the beginning of the novel. In the movie, the viewer meets Kino as a young boy and sees he has nightmares that help explain the origin of the Song of the Family. This does not happen in the book. There are many similarities that occur in the book and movie. The Dr. in the book and novel is still unwilling to help the people of the town. This is true even when Kino’s child, Coyotito gets stung.
The Pearl book and movie have many similarities and differences. The book and movie both have Kino as their main character, but they change the name of Kino’s baby. Kino and Juana have a son named Coyotito in the book. In the movie, Coyotito is named Coyote. The priest baptizes Coyote with a new name, Juan Coyote. Another difference between the book and movie is the beginning of the novel. In the movie, the viewer meets Kino as a young boy and has nightmares that help explain the origin of the Song of the Evil, this does not happen in the book. There are many similarities that occur in the book and movie. The Doctor in the book and novel is still unwilling to help the people of the town. This is true even when Kino’s child, Coyotito gets stung.
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The Dr. in the book and novel is
i belive that you only need book or novel -andrew
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Coyote
Supposed to be Coyotito.
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This does not happen in the book.
This is a fragment and I did this before Raegan did.
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in the book and novel
it should be in the book and the movie -Connor
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The Dr.
Should be spelled out as "Doctor"
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Song of the Family.
Should be song of Evil.
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and sees he has nightmares
it should be "and watches as he has nightmares." -Connor
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but the change the name of Kino’s baby
"but in the movie the name of Kino's baby is changed" -Raegan
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In the movie version, Coyotito is named Coyote.
This is wrong. -Raegan
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There are many similarities that occur in the book and movie.
This could be the the conclusion. -Raegan
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In the movie version, Coyotito is named Coyote. The priest baptizes Coyote with a new name, Juan Coyote.
This could be one sentence. -Raegan
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is the
is in the -Raegan
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novel
This supposed to be movie not novel.-Evan Webb
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This is true even when Kino’s child, Coyotito gets stung.
You need a comma after Coyotito. - Evan Webb
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This does not happen in the book.
Instead of saying this, explain what happens in the beginning of the novel-Zach
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novel
change this to a word that is a grouping word like each-Zach
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In the movie version, Coyotito is named Coyote. The priest baptizes Coyote with a new name, Juan Coyote.
there is no reason to why this is important/why is this significant-Zach
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you need a conclusion after this-zach
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The should be they-Zach
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Song of the Family
I don't think this is Song of the Family-Zach
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novel
Shouldn't this be movie-Zach
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Dr.
Write out doctor. -Ellie Jonas
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,
You don't need this comma.-Zach
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Dr.
It should not be abbreviated.-Zach
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many
If there are many similarities how come there is only two sentences?-Zach
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the
After "...but they" not the. -Ellie Jonas
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but the change the name of Kino’s baby. Kino and Juana have a son named Coyotito in the book. In the movie version, Coyotito is named Coyote. The priest baptizes Coyote with a new name, Juan Coyote.
Make all of this one sentence.-Zach
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The Pearl
This is a title, and you should italicize. -Zach
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The Pearl
This is a title and you should italicize. -Ellie Jonas
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Dr.
spell out Doctor - Patrick
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This is true even when Kino’s child, Coyotito gets stung.
chnage to " this is true when coyotito gets stung"
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still
remove this -abby
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and novel
wait nevermind change novel to movie -abby
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but the change the name of Kino’s baby
change this to the name of Kino's baby is changed in the movie.- Patrick
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The
Add ' for example" before the to make sentence clear. - Abby dupps
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of the novel
Take this out. - coolest cat abby dupps
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change but the change the name of Kino's baby to they changed the name of Kino's baby in the movie - Patrick
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oyotito gets stung.
you have no conclusion!!!! :)
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dont abbreviate
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beginning of the novel.
no. should say another difference between... beginning. take out when it says of the novel. -alyssa
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Song of the Family
It doesn't explain the song of family, it explains the song of evil. -Abby
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Song of the Family.
His nightmares describe the song of evil not the song of family. -alyssa
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nightmares that help
This should be two sentences. "...nightmares. That helps..." -alyssa
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baby
add " in the movie" here. -Abby
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Dr.
I don't think they should have abbreviated doctor. Ben Schlaack
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and novel
Take this out. -Abby
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The priest baptizes Coyote with a new name, Juan Coyote.
This sentence is unclear. I would change it to say When the priest baptizes Coyote he gives him a new name: Juan Coyote. -alyssa
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Dr
Spell out doctor. - Abby
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This does not happen in the book.
Add that in the beggining of the book it started off with Kino as a man not a young boy. -Abby
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but the change the name of Kino’s baby
This doesn't make a lot of sense. I would write "but the name of Kino's baby was changed." alyssa
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the
Change the to they. -Abby
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The Pearl
this is a title, you should italicize it. Ben Schlaack
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The Pearl
This is a title. You should italicize. Alyssa.
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The Pearl
This is a title and you shoudl italicize it. - Abby
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Italicize it Jason! - Rotten Eggs
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BERG!!!!!!- Pickles
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it`s 11/18/2016 not 16 - JASON CAO...... no - Space Time Lord( Pickles)
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This is a title, and you should italicize.- Ryan Eagan NO THIS IS PICKLES AND SHALL STAY PICKLES
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this is not wed ints fri. Oh speaking of fri, i like fried chicken
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child, Coyotito gets
I think it should be; child, Coyotito, gets.. -mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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Coyote
Coyotito -Callie Jacobs
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The priest baptizes Coyote
In the book Coyotito is never even baptized it is one of the things that Kino wants to do with the money from the pearl. -Callie Jacobs
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the viewer meets
We do not personally meet Kino jeez. - Eggdominous Rex
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Dr.
I agree that it should be spelled out -Callie Jacobs
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Coyote
Coyotito- MEW
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Coyotito gets stung.
Emphasize that it is by a scorpion- Scrambled Eags
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but the change the name of Kino’s baby. Kino and Juana have a son named Coyotito in the book. In the movie version, Coyotito is named Coyote. The priest baptizes Coyote with a new name, Juan Coyote.
The information in this statement is incorrect. their child's name is still Coyotito but they only said his name once before his baptism were they change his name Juan Coyote, from then on they call him Coyote to show respect for his baptism.- BERG
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It should be town, this- Cap'n Eggs
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stung.
The sentence should not end here it should, in my opinion, have ",in both the book and the movie." after -Callie Jacobs
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book and novel
Choose on or the other - Eggbert
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Dr.
Spell out doctor - green eggs and ham
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and
It should be and the - Eagipoo
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Family. This
There two sentences should be put together with a ", but" instead of it being two separate sentences. -Callie Jacobs
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change
It should be in the past tense- Eags
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the
but the change "the" name of Kino`s should be changed to "of" -Jason Cow
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In the movie version, Coyotito is named Coyote
I don't see how this is relevant, if this does make a difference to the story please give an explanation- Mary Wilkens
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the
I am in agreement it should be they. - anonymous person
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have
it should be has. - Ryan Eagan
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the
"The" should be "they- Mary Wilkens Jason
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The Pearl
this is a title and you should italicize. -Callie Jacobs
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The Pearl
This is a title and you should italicize.- Jason Cao
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The Pearl
This is a title, and you should italicize. -Mary Wilkens
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the
Is this supposed to be they? 'The' doesn't make any sense. I think it is... -Heather Schwab
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The priest baptizes Coyote with a new name, Juan Coyote.
I think you should say why they wanted Coyotito to be baptized. -AH
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the novel.
The nightmares are not in the beginning of the book. They are in the beginning of the movie. This is unclear. I think you should say that it happens in the movie. Anna Heilers
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Coyotito
There should be a comma after Coyotito because it's an appositive, I think...-Heather Schwab (...Coyotito,..)
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Dr.
Should this be like, spelled out? Like doctor. They are referring to him as the doctor, he's not special or like, a pronouns. -Heather Schwab ;)
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Dr.
You should spell out the word "doctor." I also don't think doctor is supposed to be capitalized. Anna Heilers
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that help explain the origin of the Song of the Family
I don't believe they explain the origin of the song of the family. I think his nightmares foreshadow the end of the book. Anna Heilers ;)
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The Dr. in the book and novel is still unwilling to help the people of the town.
You need to explain why this is significant. Anna Heilers
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The priest baptizes Coyote with a new name, Juan Coyote.
Why is this significant? You need to say why him being baptized is important. I think you should also say how this is different from the book. What happens in the book that is different from the movie? Anna Heilers
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Kino and Juana have a son named Coyotito in the book. In the movie version, Coyotito is named Coyote.
You need to say why this change is significant. I don't know if it is significant at all. Anna Heilers
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You need a conclusion sentence. Anna Heilers
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I don't think there is a good conclusion sentence. The last sentence is fine, but they should add another like, wrapping it up.
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Coyotito
If you referred to him as Coyote in the movie before, it might make more sense to call him Coyote again, or put both in so it is clearer. Anna Heilers
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The Pearl book and movie have many similarities and differences. The book and movie both have Kino as their main character, but the change the name of Kino’s baby. Kino and Juana have a son named Coyotito in the book. In the movie version, Coyotito is named Coyote. The priest baptizes Coyote with a new name, Juan Coyote. Another difference between the book and movie is the beginning of the novel. In the movie, the viewer meets Kino as a young boy and sees he has nightmares that help explain the origin of the Song of the Family. This does not happen in the book. There are many similarities that occur in the book and movie. The Dr. in the book and novel is still unwilling to help the people of the town. This is true even when Kino’s child, Coyotito gets stung.
You should explain WHY they change these things from the book to the movie and why they kept some things the same.- Emma Perera
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, Coyotito
You either need to take out the comma before Coyotito or add one after. It should say, "Kino's son, Coyotito," or "Kino's son Coyotito..." Anna Heilers
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This is true even when Kino’s child, Coyotito gets stung.
Put a comma in between Coyotito and gets. You are naming something that is not exactly part of the actual sentence.- Emma Perera
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the
This should be they, not the. Anna Heilers
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the
Change this to they. ", but THEY change the name of Kino's child is much more clear.
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The Pearl
this is a title and you should italicize it.-Emma Perera
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The Pearl
This is a title, and you should italicize. Anna Heilers
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