White feminism has existed for centuries and continues to disenfranchise the experiences of women of color. Whether it be through silencing women of color by belittlement, arrogance, or usurping of power, white feminism continues to mute voices that do not specifically cater to white issues or that might make the lofty goals of feminism more difficult.
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