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  1. Dec 2021
  2. Nov 2021
    1. ., the history of protest movements),

      Was understood as a document justifying this particular revolution. -> widely seen as pivitol doc -> more historic context for enduring slavery and patriarchal laws. -> movements emerged here (don't go overboard) -> thesis

    2. itten

      Also specify what you mean by "declaration of independence" -> Dunlap? Written doc?

      ...we can see that despite this attempt to privatize it, meaning grew to evolve into a more public appreciation. Specifically, became legal document for women's and anti-slavery movements as these movements evvolved throughout the mid 19th century.

    3. Third

      Generally:

      • Close read texts and employ English strategy balanced w/ citations from secondary and such

      • PROOVE argument from primary sources - back up and explain with secondary. This is a close reading assignment

      • Make sure to provide more than one piece of evidence per point if you can - pads out word count (which we can cut down on later) and doesn't leave you scrambling to assemble some kind of last argument

      • Throughout, emphasize stakes. (Why Dec is revered today -> shows continued meaning? Shows EVOLVING meaning -> that it's a LIVING document like __ asserts? (but in more ways than one?)

      • FOLLOW INTRO EXAMPLE we've been using so far. But also maybe save this idk. Just don't struggle over that part more than necessary

    1. we turn to the declarations of the past, or to the professions of the present, the conduct of the nation seems equally hideous and revolting.

      EVID: REV / TYR

      • CITES THE PRESENT CONDITIONS AS BAD AS PAST
    2. Of this fundamental work, this day is the anniversary. Our eyes are met with demonstrations of joyous enthusiasm. Banners and pennants wave exultingly on the breeze.

      EVID DEC

      • Draws out connections between dec and ind
    3. esolved, That these united colonies are, and of right, ought to be free and Independent States; that they are absolved from all allegiance to the British Crown; and that all political connection between them and the State of Great Britain is, and ought to be, dissolved

      EVID BRIT:

      DIRECTLY QUOTES

    4. t has been denounced with burning words, from the high places of the nation, as an execrable traffic. To arrest it, to put an end to it, this nation keeps a squadron, at immense cost, on the coast of Africa. Everywhere, i

      International slavery already denounced. is there an equivalent to Britain here? Like unfair treatment of UK peeps to American ones and taxation or something?

    5. They may also rise in wrath and fury, and bear away, on their angry waves, the accumulated wealth of years of toil and hardship. They, however, gradually flow back to the same old channel, and flow on as serenely as ever. But, while the river may not be turned aside, it may dry up, and leave nothing behind but the withered branch, and the unsightly rock, to howl in the abyss-sweeping wind, the sad tale of departed glory. As with rivers so with nations

      Implies here the stakes of American tyranny? Shows that INITIAL dec was good tool to denounce tyranny

    6. Mr. President

      Significance of context: speech delivered in front of American president (why was he at a women's abolitionist campaign? YAWP?) -> shows "sentiments of the times" ?

    7. ederick Douglas

      Videos:

      1. (importance)symbolic leader and orrator, statesman
      • born a slave (till 20)
      • established a public persona - speaking at anti slavery societies. invited to nantucket island - hired as abolitionist orator
      • narrative of life

      NPR: rochestor speech'

      • ladies anti slavery society - invited Doug
      • "What to the Slave..."

      • Speech of three acts:

      1. Sets audience at ease. Declaration the "ringbolt" of american liberty - american passover as 4th of July

      2. Then pivots to slave trade horros. First person narratives. Middle movement - horrible repitle coiled up at nation's heart

      3. Last movement - nation still young and changeable could save yourselves.

      great theme: Amerciasn SECULAR and RLIGIOUS hypocrosy in face of slavery. Warns there will be disruption/violence because of it

      Statesmen and heroes -> founding fathers. Not evil. MEant what he said - principles of teh declaration "saving principles"

      • Right of revolution.

      Pronouns you: YOUR founders YOUR DECLARATION -> not enjoyed in common.

      Gutsy move? Was. Very poigniant attack on "patriotic" americans/ POINTS TO DECLARATION PRINCIPLES - you've GOT THE DOCUMENT< PRACTICE VIOLATES IT ALL.

      ALWAYS BELIVED right to vote was at core of liberty

    8. The arm of the Lord is not shortened,” and the doom of slavery is certain. I, therefore, leave off where I began, with hope. While drawing encouragement from the Declaration of Independence, the great principles it contains, and the genius of American Institutions, my spirit is also cheered by the obvious tendencies of the age

      Like ending to sentiments - assess stakes going forward

    9. the Constitution is a GLORIOUS LIBERTY DOCUMENT. Read its preamble, consider its purposes. Is slavery among them? Is it at the gateway? or is it in the temple? It is neither. While I do not intend to argue this question on the present occasion, let me ask, if it be not somewhat singular that, if the Constitution were intended to be, by its framers and adopters, a slave-holding instrument, why neither slavery, slaveholdi

      Evokes intent and power of constitution crafters

    10. Then, I dare to affirm, notwithstanding all I have said before, your fathers stooped, basely stooped To palter with us in a double sense: And keep the word of promise to the ear, But break it to the heart.37 And instead of being the honest men I have before declared them to be, they were the veriest imposters that ever practiced on mankind. T

      FOUNDERS AS IMPOSTERS

    11. ou declare, before the world, and are understood by the world to declare, that you “hold these truths to be self evident, that all men are created equal; and are endowed by their Creator with certain inalienable rights; and that, among these are, life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness;” and yet, you hold securely, in a bondage which, according to your own Thomas Jefferson, “is worse than ages of that which your fathers rose in rebellion to oppose,” a seventh part of the inhabitants of your country.

      dec reference

    12. American church is guilty, when viewed in connection with what it is doing to uphold slavery; but it is superlatively guilty when viewed in connection with its ability to abolish slavery.

      omission vs comission re responsibility

    13. The fact that the church of our country, (with fractional exceptions), does not esteem “the Fugitive Slave Law” as a declaration of war against religious liberty, implies that that church regards religion simply as a form of worship, an empty ceremony, and not a vital principle, requiring active benevolence, justice, love and good will towards man.

      Religion and principle

    14. lavery has been nationalized in its most horrible and revolting form. By that act, Mason and Dixon’s line has been obliterated;25 New York has become as Virginia; and the power to hold, hunt, and sell men, women, and children as slaves remains no longer a mere state institution, but is now an institution of the whole United States

      Fugituv

    15. uld you have me argue that man is entitled to liberty? that he is the rightful owner of his own body? You have already declared it

      American people as INHERITORS OF DECLARATION BUT ALSO OF RESPONSIBILITIES FOR UPHOLDING IT

    16. Must I undertake to prove that the slave is a man? That point is conceded already. Nobody doubts it. The slaveholders themselves acknowledge it in the enactment of laws for their government.

      3/5 clause

    17. n the name of the constitution and the Bible, which are disregarded and trampled upon, dare to call in question and to denounce, with all the emphasis I can command, everything that serves to perpetuate slavery

      Once again, calling upon Bible AND constitution to "declare" slavery bad

    18. Washington could not die till he had broken the chains of his slaves. Yet his monument is built up by the price of human blood, and the traders in the bodies and souls of men shout — “We have Washington to our father

      hmm

    19. The causes which led to the separation of the colonies from the British crown have never lacked for a tongue.

      Ideals of revolution have never left american ears since then

    20. eclaration of Independence is the ring-bolt to the chain of your nation’s destiny; so, indeed, I regard it. The principles contained in that instrument are saving principles

      DECLARATION ring bolt. contains foundational PRINCIPLES

    21. They did so in the form of a resolution; and as we seldom hit upon resolutions, drawn up in our day whose transparency is at all equal to this, it may refresh your minds and help my story if I read it. “

      deification of dec

    22. hese people were called Tories8 in the days of your fathers; and the appellation, probably, conveyed the same idea that is meant by a more modern, though a somewhat less euphonious9 term, which we often find in our papers, applied to some of our old politician

      Specific political connections?

    23. they became restive under this treatment.

      Thinks america failed in this initial defiant act becaus ethey "grew restive" with being oppressors like Britain

    24. This, however, did not answer the purpose. They saw themselves treated with sovereign indifference, coldness and scorn. Yet they persevered. They were not the men to look back

      So act of SIGING the dec itself inspired furtehr generations. Not just ideals -> saw it as a brave ACT that could be replicated by standing up to tyranny wherever it lay

    25. t is fashionable to do so; but there was a time when to pronounce against England, and in favor of the cause of the colonies, tried men’s souls.

      Easy to say fuck England now. In day required courae. Douglas AGREES THEY WERE BAD THOUGH

    26. wo years after the Compromise of 1850, which included a strengthening of the Fugitive Slave Act—which bolstered the ability of Southern planters to retrieve escaped slaves in the North—Douglass praised American political principles while excoriating the country for ways in which slavery made a mockery of these very same ideals.

      Principles vs practice: speech delivered at ind day celebration so immediate connections to declaration

    1. He has abdicated Government here, by declaring us out of his Protection and waging War against us

      Reason for voiding his power.

      Violence against people cancels out legitimacy of rule

    2. by a mock Trial, from punishment for any Murders whic

      Might be a direct sentiment relation here in regards to protecting abusers/not allowing divorces from such

    1. VIRGINIA

      Interesting how those courses (GER, FR, MED, etc) all have a taste or feeling to them. These were generated by the tembre of the prof's voice - gentle Hogg talking about atrocities and not emphasizing the pornography of violence. Changing alongside the visceral descriptions of the eras we studied 9 rainy, moody, cloudy Weimar, dark and forested ww2, the ugly tasting red rise of fascism, and the cold concrete smoke in the air of post war Germanies.

    2. “The Mark onthe Wall” is a response to the need to search for astyle and a typology: Woolf’s formalist aestheticsowes much to Fry’s, and Bell’s, philosophy of art,in which, as professor Banfield suggests “thevisual meets the invisible and abstract

      KEY KEY KEY -> EVEN THOUGH MISSION IS RANDOMNESS, DOESN'T MEAN THERE IS NO STRUCTURE. DRAWS ON STRUCTURES OF THES ADJACENT MODERN ART MOVEMENTS

    3. The proper stuff of fiction’ does not exist;everything is the proper stuff of fiction, everyfeeling, every thought; very quality of brain andspirit is drawn upon; no perception comesamiss

      Will have to see how to tie MF into this essay directly (if at all)

    4. some powerful and unscrupuloustyrant” who had him in thrall, “to provide plot,to provide a comedy, tragedy, love interest”66

      Wait this is genuis evidence -> links materialism to tyranny this is in the essay nvm

    5. “more or lessclumsily toward reality, the artist is seen goingagainst it. He is brazenly set on deforming reality,shattering its human aspect, dehumanizing it”6

      hmm...so descriptions not even the mission -> accuracy through play and deformation of reality

    6. arrative of “The Mark on the Wall”,therefore, engages in the post-impressionistpursuit for disinterestedness, and forces thereader into detached and impassioned contem-plation in the course of which random reveries“which are normally dormant”55 begin tocrystallize into one harmonic whole

      sub thesis about form?

    7. mark onthe wall – the controlling motiff of the story –remains the axis of the story, the physicallbackground against which the story is projected.It helps to arouse and sustain our thoughts andfeelings, and calls into play our visual ima-gination: “I looked up through the smoke of mycigarette and my eye lodged for a moment uponthe burning coals, and that old fancy of thecrimson flag flapping from the castle tower cameinto my mind, and I thought of the cavalcade ofred knights riding up the side of the black

      Mark as ringbolt of NARRATIVE STRUCTURE

    8. vised method of interruptions36 intendedto disrupt the conscious thought construct ofher narrator, and, at the same time, to slow downor speed up the plot and enhance the narrative

      THIS IS AN INTENTIONAL STRUCTURE OF NARRATIVE (alternative to trad one) employed by Woolf

    9. The narrator catches thefirst idea that passes34,

      Plot is just narrator catching ideas that pass by -> shakespeare, etc. returns to start with internal knowledge/INSGHT but no external knowledge gained (last part my own insight)

    10. rder of fiction restingboth on the progression from cause to effect,and on the two organically inseparable corre-latives - plot and character.

      Specifics: abandons plot and character of materialist traditions

      non linear plot -> instead circular (he argues)

    11. wanted to moveaway from both the established order of fictionand the established order of society which wasbased on the standard, as Woolf says, set byWhitaker’s Table of Precedency: “

      True: links standard of form to standard of SOCIETY with whitaker's table of prescedancy

    12. narrative not only discards therepresentative element in the narrative dis-course, it does away with most of the conventions– plot, character, setting - which are commonlyobserved by the novelist, and concentrates onthe workings of the mind at large, on the eyless,i.e., on “the flickerings of that innermost flamewhich flashes its messages through the brain”27

      ABSOLUTELY KEY

    13. nfold in random order that turns into afragmentary collage of unfinished vignettes. Andas it turns, it produces a series of multifariousintrospections on the nature of life and theweight of reality, the future of literature and thecommitments of the writer, the social order ofmale–governed and military-oriented hierarchicsociety etc.

      From thinking of "nothing important", W dpivots into serious trains of thought

    14. he Mark on the Wall” (1918),one of Woolf’s early exercises with narrative and“visual language” that fully accords with thetenets of the Post-Impressionist paradigmmentioned above, W

      AMOTW: dude argues that Woolf's experimentation with form in this story directly resembles/was inspired by visual Fry's aesthetics of "pure form" which sought to portray a hidden internal wolrd of imagination as opposed to concrete reality. (specifically, points to similarities between...)

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    1. ote that this i

      Having trouble finding a so what that isn't evidenced by the graphs at the back. Should I explain the context of why Loyalist paramilitaries sought out these deaths? Overall don't "argue" as much and do a close reading - instead

      Maybe just focus on UVF or UDA?

    1. uring the Stevens inquiry it became apparent that the UDA had access to a large number of security files on Republicans and suspected members of Republican paramilitary groups.

      collusion

    2. UDA, through the use of road blocks, which brought large sections of Northern Ireland to a stand-still

      This throws a bit of a wrench into things: if they werent organized, how could they pull this off?

      Maybe because this is before informents? Or showed less sectarian nature? Desire to remain?

    3. In April 1983 Joseph Bennett, who was a commander in the UVF, became an informer giving the RUC information which lead to the conviction of 14 leading members of the UVF. In the coming years the UVF was to suffer from the effects of further informers.

      So informing still cripples org, just on a later date (and doesn't prevent killings?)

    1. The term 'punishment' attacks covers shootings or beatings carried out by paramilitary groups on individuals they accuse of being involved in activities that are classified as 'anti-social behaviour' such as drug dealing, theft, and joyriding.

      also song

    2. Kneecapping' One form of 'punishment' favoured by paramilitary groups. Initially it involved shooting the victim in one or both kneecaps. However later on people who were punished in this way could be shot in the knees, or ankles, or thighs, or elbows, or wrists, or any combination of locations. Often guns were not used and instead victims limbs were broken by sticks or iron bars.

      song

    1. remind us that there is no limit to the horizon, and that nothing — no ‘method’, no experiment, even of the wildest —is forbidden, but only falsity and pretence.

      MODERN: ILLEGAL FREEDOM

    2. More accurately indeed we might speak of the inconclusiveness of the Russian mind. It is the sense that there is no answer, that if honestly examined life presents question after question which must be left to sound on and on after the story is over in hopeless interrogation

      Imagination/inconclusivity

    3. e has to have the courage to say that what interests him is no longer ‘this’ but ‘that’: out of ‘that’ alone must he construct his work. For the moderns ‘that’, the point of interest, lies very likely in the dark places of psychology. At once, therefore, the accent falls a little differently; the emphasis is upon something hitherto ignored; at once a different outline of form becomes necessary, difficult for us to grasp, incomprehensible to our predecessors.

      "Moderns" shifting their interests (courageously, against the grain) away from conventional subjects and into darker psyc realms of human experience

    4. In contrast with those whom we have called materialists, Mr Joyce is spiritual; he is con- cerned at all costs to reveal the flickerings of that innermost flame which flashes its messages through the brain, and in order to pre- serve it he disregards with complete courage whatever seems to him adventitious, whether it be probability, or coherence, or any other of these signposts which for generations have served to support the imagination of a reader when called upon to imagine what he can neither touch nor see.

      Discarding old conventions built up over generations.

      What about Shakespeare? Do research on this?

    5. hat it is of the utmost sincerity and that the result, difficult or unpleasant as we may judge it, is undeniably important.

      Might be messy, difficult, but this kind of writing important

    6. even if to do so they must discard most of the conventions which are commonly observed by the novelist.

      Thing PEACHES employs this quote.

      MODERN EVID: need to discard realist conventions (plot, etc) to achieve SoC

    7. some such fashion as this that we seek to define the quality which distinguishes the work of several young writers, among whom Mr James Joyce®

      Explicitly links this mission to modernist writers like Joyce.

      MODERN EVID: Like w/ materialism, doesn't explicitly state "modernism" anywhere (probably hadn't been coined yet) but goes w/ this association to make our assertions concrete

    8. it not the task of the novelist to convey this varying, this un- known and uncircumscribed spirit, whatever aberration or com- plexity it may display, with as little mixture of the alien and

      Interesting...

      MODERN EVIDENCE: so Woolf isn't just claiming that Noveslists should pursue internal descriptions, she's saying that they should PREVENT EXTERNAL from leaking in

    9. ind on an ordinary day. The mind receives a myriad impressions — trivial, fantastic, evanescent, or engraved with the sharpness of steel. From all sides they come, an incessant shower of innumerable atoms; and as they fall, as they shape themselves into the life of Monday or Tuesday,’ the accent falls differently from of old; the moment of importance came not here but there; so that, if a writer were a free man and not a slave, if he could write what he chose, not what he must, if he could base his work upon his own feeling and not upon convention, there would be no plot, no comedy, no tragedy, no love interest or catastrophe in the accepted style, and perhaps not a single button sewn on as the Bond Street tailors would have it

      Hmm. Can I just argue that this passage sums up what the MOTW is? Is that too much of a reach, like, "non traditional story structures abound in this story like thses" Would need to pack up each sub point (show of impression) w/ textual evidence, but is possible.

      Worth it though? Good to come back to at least?

    10. Look within and life, it seems, is very far from being ‘like this’.

      EVIDENCE MODERNISM: KEY PHILOSOPHY. While "life" might externally represent realist descriptions, internal life does NOT

    11. to provide a plot, to provide comedy, tragedy, love interest, and an air of prob- ability embalming the whole so impeccable

      List of some conventions realists employ

    12. If we fasten, then, one label on all these books, on which is one word materialists, we mean by it that they write of unimportant things;

      Ok: two points here.

      1. PEACHES is right -> materialists is word she uses

      2. EVIDENCE REALISM -> They write "unimportant" things very well

      MAKING THE TRANSITORY APPEAR THE TRUE AND ENDURING (when obviously its not)

    13. taking upon his shoulders the work that ought to have been discharged by Government officials, and in the plethora of his ideas and facts scarcely having leisure to realise, or forgetting to think important, the crudity and coarseness of his human beings.

      EVIDENCE REALISM: explicitly says this realism author should stick to facts/writing pamphlets. Does this super well, neglects to include CRUDITY/COURSENESS of human beings -> implies internal reality is unstable.

      Overall:

      • Woolf posits that reality is shifting/flawed/not just external. Human souls are flawed. In order to portray what's "accurate" need to focus on INTERNAL truths (thought processes, etc) as opposed to EXTERNAL descriptions of characters and events and such
    14. is characters live abundantly, even unexpectedly, but it remains to ask how do they live, and what do they live for?

      Not getting at truth of matter. The HOW is answered (archaeology) but not the WHY - reflections/internal

    15. e can make a book so well constructed and solid in its craftsmanship that it is difficult for the most exacting of critics to see through what chink or crevice decay can creep in. There is not so much as a draught b

      Conventions again overly intricate, useless, and "praised" so hard to overthrow

    16. r Wells, Mr Bennett, and Mr Galsworthy have excited so many hopes and disappointed them so persistently that our gratitude largely takes the form of thanking them for having shown us what they might have done but have not done; what we certainly could not do, but as certainly, perhaps, do not wish to do.

      These authors claim to reflect reality, fail, but in doing so reveal we shouldn't even try

    17. accomplishment that we can scarcely refrain from whisper- ing that the fight was not so fierce for them as for us.

      More entrenched institution evidence? (how could it possibly be overturned)

    18. We do not come to write better; all that we can be said to do is to keep moving, now a little in this direction, now in that, but with a circular tendency should the whole course of the track be viewed from a sufficiently lofty pinna- cle.

      Lit not innovated - has moved in pendulem like swing unlike science

    19. compare their opportunities with ours! Their masterpieces certainly have a strange air of simplicity.

      Direct mention of simplicity of conventions -> opportunities for FUTURE NOVELISTS abound