lways an
always provided on an individual basis
lways an
always provided on an individual basis
a couple CNAs
I was able to advocate for the participants by teaching a few CNAs techniques to dress.....
Often times in acute care, it is appropriate
It is often appropriate to co-treat with physical therapists in acute care.
exiles
Do you mean discharges?
One
One requirement being the person .....
In acute care, we assist with deciding discharge planning so patients who struggle to have a solid home life are often overlooked.
consider revising this sentence.
we
and we
appears to be more difficult to complete a basic ADL task with can attempt
has limited ability to perform basic ADL tasks can
were and hear
were. I watched her tearfully.....
ensured
assured
attend in
participate in
sense
source
shown and received to individuals
shown to and received from the individuals
, and
times. I believe
in direction
in one direction
, each of them teaching
facility. Each encounter taught me....
to name
remove
,
.
,
.
today
therapy. Instead, I got the patients entire criminal background, why an officer was next to the bed, ....
washcloths to relieve the sweaty brow from pain.
washcloths to cool and soothe his pain and wipe away sweat.
some of the most
remove this
skill, one patient in particular comes
prompt, one particular patient immediately came to mind. This was a patient I encountered during my last....
combining
(omit comma) we combined our ideas and professional skills to share knowledge on a much larger scale. This was intimidating, but also very rewarding.
in service
in-service
1
one
6
six
1
one. The rule is single word numbers should be written. large numbers are left in numeric form.
ask I wanted to take on and eventually relay to the staff at the program.
challenge that appealed to me and my interest in the presentation was relayed to the staff of the facility.
6 months of rotation
six months of clinical rotations.
them everything was fine, I would get them cleaned up, and sometimes
reassured them that everything was fine, that I would get them cleaned up, and I sometimes used
was
were
12 weeks spent here would beyond prove that
twelve weeks spent here would prove that beyond any doubt.
,
Dressed as Superman, I demonstrated
the obviously
they did not
be
demonstrate
larger amount
large number
leading
, and leading a
the ability
my ability. agreement of predicates
lead
led
phone, but I know I will have to so
phone. But I know I will have to learn, so
Feedback at midterm regarding my ability to receive feedback and progress forward. This is a skill I will always need.
"Comment from the midterm evaluation regarding my ability to receive feedback." Stop there as this was a descriptor of your evidence, not part of your narrative.
because who doesn’t appreciate some positive reinforcement
well, because who doesn't appreciate some positive reinforcement?
can be something that gets you through the whole week. Something as simple as, “You did good writing this evaluation.”
positive feedback like "you did a good job writing this evaluation" can help you through a tough week.
robotics
robots
5
write out five here and below in the paragraph
center
into the center
up to clinical expertise to decide
was the clinicians decision as to which of the two......
using terms and ideals for getting around
I'm not sure what this means? "using terms and ideals" Is this using the LSVT terminology and techniques?
e
couple of participants or with a few participants
changes that Parkinson’s can ensue
and emotional regulation in Parkinson's patients.
for
in
with
alongside
and
revise. "and work with a wide array.......
BS
Bachelor of Science
professionalism.
consider saying "professional development"