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  1. Apr 2020
    1. In acute care, we assist with deciding discharge planning so patients who struggle to have a solid home life are often overlooked.

      consider revising this sentence.

    1. ask I wanted to take on and eventually relay to the staff at the program.

      challenge that appealed to me and my interest in the presentation was relayed to the staff of the facility.

    2. them everything was fine, I would get them cleaned up, and sometimes

      reassured them that everything was fine, that I would get them cleaned up, and I sometimes used

    3. Feedback at midterm regarding my ability to receive feedback and progress forward. This is a skill I will always need.

      "Comment from the midterm evaluation regarding my ability to receive feedback." Stop there as this was a descriptor of your evidence, not part of your narrative.

    4. can be something that gets you through the whole week. Something as simple as, “You did good writing this evaluation.”

      positive feedback like "you did a good job writing this evaluation" can help you through a tough week.