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One client, in particular, comes to mind to provide a specific example.
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a lot of her difficulties were behavior-related, as well
many of her difficulties were behavior-related.
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A lot o
Some of
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Houstyn,
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before and he
before. He
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of wearing a jacket during therapy after expressing being cold
of providing him a jacket when he had expressed being cold so many times before.
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time, he
time he
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for
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therapy and then it spiraled from there into needing to lay down and over-working himself
therapy. He would then become focused on lying down and work himself into a state of mental and physical exhaustion.
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himself.
for himself.
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became frustrated with us quickly and told us that we didn't have his feelings and
quickly became frustrated, said we did not care about his feelings, and
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adamant on not doing
adamantly against doing
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him and h
him, and
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isn't short of work ethic and is
wasn't short of work ethic and was
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job and they basically made him slow
job, but his employer pushed him to slow down and retire.
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worked 105-hour weeks before
used to work 105-hour weeks.
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visit and would talk to him and to us and they told us how hard of a worker he is
visit. They would speak with him and they told us that he was a hard worker.
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increase
to increase
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the
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Especially for the kiddos with sensory processing dysfunction, there are a lot of preparatory methods and treatment approaches that are beneficial for the kiddos that have
For children with sensory processing disorder, there are many beneficial preparatory methods and treatment approaches that need to be incorporated into play. ( do not use pet names for clients in documentation)
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kiddos
children (no pet names for clients in professional documents)
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Overall, the risk of stepping out and being confident in the knowledge I had was very scary and intimidating, but ultimately successful and rewarding
revise. possibly " It was scary and intimidating to step out of my comfort zone and trust my knowledge and skills, but ultimately very rewarding....
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learned about
had learned.
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diagnosis not
illness that were not
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out" indicating that
out." This indicated that
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c
to cool
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ndifferent, but
indifferent. But,
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past, in other situations,
past, I
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resumed
returned
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client and grown
client. I had grown to enjoy his company and....
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take our attention off of the task at hand and discuss something silly while doing it
focus on the task at hand and to have a relaxed conversation as well.
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limitations that eluded him from the help of others changing his brie
limitations. He felt uncomfortable needing the help of others to change his briefs.
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overstep
overstep my bounds
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and
or
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With that being said, my leisurely approach to
My focus on self-care and leisure never interfered with my ability....
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and know
and to know
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during
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hink it has made me
feel I have become (tense agreement)
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experiences
experiences, and
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sessions and "jumping in" so to speak in their developed routines of coming to therapy and working with their trusted therapist(s).
sessions. (revise this last part as it doesn't seem to link to your theme of using your strength of relationship building..)
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respect
trust
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quickly
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had
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children, but
children. But,
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the
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are so many levels and
is so much (verb agreement) or simply "is"
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you have a different font color in this paragraph (darker) than in your other sections.
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to discuss expectations of each other
discussing our expectations for each other.
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experience, in which it was
experience. I felt
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As evidenced by successful completion and passing grades of both fieldwork responsibilities, I demonstrated the ability to give timely and constructive feedback
consider. I demonstrated the ability....feedback evidenced by successfully completing and passing both fieldwork rotations. (include a snapshot of one of your feedback forms)
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week 3 forms, week 6 forms, midterm, and final evaluation
consider. "forms at week three, six, mid-term and final evaluation
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always
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the most independent she could be when
the most independent possible when
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skill level
clinical skills needed
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about week 4
By week four, I
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severely
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unable
and was unable
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noticed varying levels of involvement and engagement regarding parents, some being influenced by religious
noticed the level of involvement and engagement of parents can be influenced by religious or spiritual beliefs.
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RESUME
Your resume should be revised. Don't include career goals or objectives. Also GPA and student honors should be moved to the leadership and professional memberships. Add a section for Research/ Scholarship and put your EBP poster/ project in there.
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traveling, and spending times outdoors fly fishing and
traveling, spending time outdoors, fly fishing, and snow...
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He did not get a login since he was only there for two weeks, so I shared mine with him
This is a major HIPAA violation! You can never share a login or password. Omit this sentence! Consider revising this paragraph to emphasize mentorship and not discussing patient information or data.
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the position
a leadership role and to explain
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the
treatment
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responsibility
fieldwork responsibilities
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taught him all the tools I knew for him
revise( you cant teach tools. you can teach a person to use a tool or to build a tool) possibly " provided him with the tools and resources necessary for him"
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case load
caseload
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with is current caregiver and the patient
with the patient and his caregiver
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After the meeting,
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Usually, OT likes to discharge the
Normally OT discharges on the same day as PT, but
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but if we feel as though there are areas where he/ she can improve, we can keep the patient longer.
but we can keep them longer if we feel there are areas in which they can still improve.
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meetings, his
meetings, the PT stated that they were ...
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One occasion when I faced with an ethical dilemma was on my first rotation.
I was faced with an ethical dilemma during my first rotation.
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in practice.
either "during fieldwork" or simply end with "well."
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WILL
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helps me
allows me time to
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the
a
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I will present the schedule on Monday to my educator to see if approves of the changes
Did she approve? This should be your final reflection of the fieldwork experience.
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followed by discussing
and discussed
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In addition,
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rehabilitation evaluation
what is this? a discipline? nursing? CNA or PCA?
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llness
illnesses
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strived to
strove to
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OT.
Good job!
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are living with untreated
have untreated
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ent, ma
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health care
healthcare
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unjust.
is unjust.
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als, d
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he did, I plan t
he had, I planned to
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still treated
often treated
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progresses
progress
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they
they have
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hat majority
that the majority
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the receive different privileges depending on the level.
privileges are dependent on their behavioral level.
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because majority of the time they will be written up or disciplined
or they will receive a written warning or be disciplined by losing a .......
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th
The
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yelling at and insulting the patients, on
yelling at and insulting patients on more than one occasion.
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OF the
with
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Theraputics
Therapists
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disregarded
marginalized
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from now
later.
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the
tools
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if I a
if I had
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upholding
holding
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Majority
The majority
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at rural
at the fact that it was such a rural location.
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experiences. I
experiences, I
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same as he is aging well into his 50’s
same. He was well over fifty years old.
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humor, a
humor was when a client
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not typically jump in and immediately make
not blindly jump in and make
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life
life,
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trust, allowing
trust, which allowed
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built
formed
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prioritize
prioritized
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out, hi
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core,
core stability,
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client's
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Majority
The majority
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"all the" OR "all my"
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During the evaluation,
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was
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majority
the majority
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to empower the caregiver to reinforce the skills and knowledge the client has learned into everyday occupations.
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and they understand the client’s relationships outside of therapy.
caregiver. I don't understand this last part..... consider revising.
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spend majority
spend the majrity
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to strive
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in,
in. I
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also
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one day this client demonstrated abnormal behavior than his usual bubbly self
a client who was usually bubbly demonstrated abnormal behavior.
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e, I
challenge as I could
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influences
influence
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income
ability to generate income
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constraint
strain
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All the social determinants of health became very apparent on their impact on this
The impact of social determinants of health were very apparent with this population.
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keynote
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aloud
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OTA
AOTA, reading AJOT, and
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forming, so
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the
what they heard from
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Overall, incorporating sensory interventions into treatment has shown functional outcomes. Nevertheless, best clinical judgement should be used when to integrating it into practice
consider moving this. It fits nicely after " discredited the interventions. Overall, incorporating sensory interventions into treatment has shown functional outcomes. Nevertheless, best clinical judgement should be used when to integrating it into practice." then simply delete the next sentence that starts "However, ..." senetence.
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at the benefits of
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Educate patient on
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expertise’s and client
expertise and client-centered
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strived
strove
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it in
it as individualized
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and
and in order to
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strived
strove
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the
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cultivated an educational discussion
(fostered or generated) a scholarly discussion
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?It covered
valid?, which covered
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history
has a
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Working with the patients came natural because I can relate to the clients.
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the care that an OT has for
how an OT cares for their patients.
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are
be
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don’t
not
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set me back in my studies and my time
was a setback in my studies,
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so h
so I had
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none essential
non-essential
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then just hearing they were great, they had
than just hearing that they were great because they had to....
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positivity and showing love and friendship to others, but also
positivity, showing love and friendship to others, and allowed them ...
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meditation is and what it’s used for. I also allowed
meditation is and what it is used for, and I allotted time for discussion on how to....
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reoccurring
recurring
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Without approval I had to hope
I had to trust
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a cognitive level that they
their cognitive level so that they
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still
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groups, all of
groups with different
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penitents i
patients
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well, and would be sure to note
well and noted any sexual behaviors.
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advantage of, however he was
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also
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major line
time that he had crossed the line.
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any
any further
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out,
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advantages
advances
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composer
composure
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throughout
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gras,
Gras
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alleviating anger from opposing opinions, and to ...
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relieve a client from feeling upset
to relieve a client's distress about....
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assisted me lead
continued to assist me with another group for a few week, because...
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