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  1. Apr 2022
  2. meganhenleyot.weebly.com meganhenleyot.weebly.com
  3. kathryntennerot.weebly.com kathryntennerot.weebly.com
    1. ​During my time at PBPRI, I demonstrated the ability to apply the domain of occupational therapy into all aspects of client care. In evaluating and gathering information, I focused on asking questions in a cautious, respectful way to ensure client-centered care. When intervention planning, I focused on considering client factors, occupations, contexts, performance patterns, and performance skills. When working with one client in particular, I had to consider several factors. This client had muscular dystrophy and was unable to work due to the progression of the disease. The client expressed that she was applying for financial programs but currently relied on family to provide for her needs. She disclosed that their income was limited and that she felt uncomfortable asking for help. Many of my intervention ideas focused on using adaptive equipment for increased engagement in occupations. I had to consider her financial situation prior to recommending several types of equipment that she may not have been able to afford. I spoke with my clinical instructor (CI) about resources for free or discounted equipment. Our clinic was able to provide a free universal cuff that the client used for writing, feeding, and grooming and a button hook for dressing. This client expressed her gratitude as she was able to journal again and wear her favorite shirt with the use of this equipment. We were also able to put the client in contact with a facility that provided free equipment to those in need. By considering her financial situation, I was able to tailor my sessions to providing client-centered care for this client while finding solutions to barriers in occupational engagement. With this client, I had to consider her physical condition, contexts, and financial situation to provide the most beneficial therapy. 

      This is a good description of addressing the client's needs. You do need to revise some sentences here as almost every sentence begins with "during this..., While at...By considering... With this .... Fewer commas is desirable .

    1. My CI has commented on my ability to change the activity depending on the direction of the session throughout my time at GMSD and always appears to be impressed.

      ? My CI seemed to be impressed by my ability to....

    2. weaknesses.

      You are using a lot of commas that aren't necessary. Consider revising some sentences to remove pauses and using fewer "during my time at ... and While at...phrases at the beginning of your statements.

    1. My CI and I decided to spend our treatment time introducing a home exercise program, adaptive equipment, and other compensatory strategies for carry over into daily life

      include a photo of his HEP or equipment you recommended

    2. During my rotation, several cultural holidays passed such as Halloween, Thanksgiving, Hanukkah, and Christma

      Several cultural holidays passed while I was on this rotation including......

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    1. Explore this portfolio

      Olivia, You did a great job of identifying evidence to support all the items on your PDE. My comments are limited but the main thing I would like you to do. Add more artifacts (photos, screenshots) that support your statements and feedback. Otherwise this is very well done!

    1. for

      can't end with this (no with, for, or to). Reword the end of the sentence. Example, "we carefully considered the costs and features for each piece of equipment that was submitted to insurance for payment."

    1. I unfortunately was able to witness another therapist use these meetings as excuses not to see every student. 

      I like your example, but don't end a positive outcome with a a negative statement. Rephrase this and move it back in the paragraph. "We were not required to make up client sessions if there were meetings scheduled during their timeslot. Although some people used this as an excuse to miss sessions, I worked hard to squeeze in every student...

    2. potential. 

      a picture of the schedule or a photo of sample equipment would be good here (could even be a stock phot if it matches something you did or could provide

    1. During

      Joe, Although I do have suggestions and comments in this section, I want to tell you this is exactly the type of content we want to see. Personal examples, stories and reflections of your experiences. Great!!

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    1. parade.

      As before, a picture of yourself in the parade or a photo of participants would fit well here. In general please include more photos, documents, etc. Your writing and grammar are excellent throughout!

    1. -verbally

      Please add a screenshot of your rating. In general, we want to see some pictures, screenshots, or attached documents in your sections. Not every section has to have this, but most should.

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  7. Apr 2021
    1. !

      Emily,

      This is very well done! I did notice that you do not have a link to your resume . Please add a tab at the top of your PDE and include the resume there. Awesome job!

    1. Sometimes, in a student-mentor dynamic, it can be intimidating to provide feedback because the mentor seems like they know so much more than the student, due to having more clinical experience and practice.

      consider revising as 2 sentences. You could end with feedback. The mentor seems...

    1. For example, during my initial evaluation when I went to introduce myself to one of these clients, he was convinced

      When I went to introduce myself to one client, he was convinced

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    1. Despite her consistent refusal and inappropriate things she said to me that I may not have agreed with, I remained professional with this patient

      Despite her constant resistance and the the inappropriate things she said, I remained professional.

    2. This meant adapting to and keeping up with the fast paced environment of the acute care setting. This includes seeing patients efficiently with evaluations, treatments, and documentation; as well as effective communication between multi-disciplines and families of the clients I work with daily. This also entails handling the patient's lines. At this time, I feel like I have met my goals, but progress can still be made. More experience will only further enhance my skills.

      revise and shorten. If the sentence doesn't relate to the prompt then it isn't needed

    1. mentoring students, performing research, publishing, presenting and/or teaching

      evidence for this section should come from your FWE. Did you train CNA's or OT students? Did you conduct inservices?

    2. During my time at the University of Tennessee Health Science Center, I attended many Journal Club Roundtable Meetings held on behalf of Pi Theta Epsilon (PTE).  These meetings entail open discussion of one journal article each month where students are encouraged to participate in the discussion, and review the chosen article.  One meeting in particular, they held a session about utilizing APA format and how to cite correctly.  I appreciated this experience and grew as I continued to attend these meetings.  I will continue to grow in hopes of cultivating a strong identity as an evidence-based practitioner.

      your evidence should be based on your fieldwork experiences, not on your didactic work

    1. Every day someone is in the hospital, lying in a bed, their bodies are getting weaker.  The way the client's body was functioning prior to admission into the hospital, is not the same anymore.  

      how is this relevant o your example? omit or revise

    2. During my time at Baptist Memorial Hospital, for my Level II B fieldwork rotation, I had the opportunity to see a variety of healthcare professionals fulfill their commitments to clients each day.  In particular, healthcare practitioners engage in ethically grounded practice. Therapists carry around clipboards with their notes taken from chart reviewing, evaluations, and interventions.  When we set our clipboards down, we always make sure to flip them over so that patient information is not easily available for others to see.  This is just one of the many ways ethically grounded practice is practiced at my fieldwork site.

      this prompt is for professional obligation to the community. These are things like inservices, trainings, and participation in state and national organizations.

    3. For my inservice project, I decided to create a document with translated English to Spanish medical terms and phrases that could be used in evaluations and treatment sessions. This document may serve as a beneficial communication tool for therapists to utilize with clients who are Spanish speaking. This tool is to serve as an additional, more efficient, tool and not in place of interpreters.

      you switch verb tenses several times. decided (past) may serve (future) and to serve(present) please clarify as one tense. Also don't split your paragraphs. I would like to see a picture of this sheet. In general, please include more pictures or examples to support your evidence

    1. We utilized theraband and items with twist tops for the client to manipulate

      the prompt is to consider motivation by using OCCUPATION_BASED intervention. These are exercises and activities. Please give an example of occupation-based tasks

    2. I had to educate the patient and her spouse on spinal precautions; as well as how to adhere to them while engaging in functional tasks. During the evaluation I provided education as well as a handout regarding spinal precautions, including things he could do and things he should avoid for 6-8 weeks. 

      you basically say the same thing twice. shorten or revise. Also, you state the client is a "he" and it should be "she"

    1. I believe this is an example of the confidence I bring to each treatment session with each client. I believe this shows my functional self-confidence and self-assurance when working with each client.

      repeat sentences. revise or omit one.

    1. While completing my first level II fieldwork in an inpatient psychiatric unit, I was able to present and educate a variety of healthcare professionals on the importance of assertiveness training. I accomplished this through presenting an inservice presentation about assertiveness training for healthcare professionals working in an inpatient psychiatric settin

      this is the same sentence restated. omit one

    2. An example of this is provided from my discussion boards from my fieldwork rotation in hand therapy. Below, I describe working with an individual who is a blackjack dealer. I was able to gather this information from the initial evaluation. From that point, we set goals she would like to accomplish, her main goal being returning to work full time/full duty. After her goals were set, I was able to implement occupational therapy interventions with her during each session. All in all, this client was very pleased with her progress and was highly complimentary of our services. 

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    1. I attempted to encourage this group member that this time would be different, we were available to help him, if he wanted.

      different. I told him that we were available to help him if he wanted.

    1. One example of this topic I experienced while completing my first Level II fieldwork rotation in an inpatient psychiatric setting. I lead

      start the sentence with "While completing... setting, I lead"

    2. I found this to be empowering, because with simple, yet effective group discussions, these clients were able to change their mindset, thus altering their engagement in meaningful occupations.

      revise. I like this example and it is profound but you have too many commas. consider two or more sentences.

    3. she expressed to me how difficult it had been because she was unemployed secondary to her injuries, did not have adequate income to pay for medical care, and was uninsured, so she could not receive adequate treatment for her health problem

      consider revising this