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discovered throughout my rotation and discussed the effects on these new findings, and while also considering how to incorporate other professions.
discovered. I discussed ....and considered how to incorporate these findings into other professions.
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As a future occupational therapist, it is our
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out.
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, because if we
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advocate
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finally are just at an ends
finally hit a dead end. or finally reach a dead end.
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Even though as an occupational therapist in an outpatient clinic setting I am tasked to base my therapy services on related goals, however if the client and caregiver do not currently maintain a healthy balance within their own basic needs then they will not be able to perform their daily occupations.
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ETHICALLY GROUNDED PROFESSIONALWITH A STRONG OT IDENTITY
Rachel,
This entire section is excellent. You did a great job of addressing the prompts and you have no significant grammar errors
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for.
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where a minute or rating
where the 8 minute rule applied or where a complexity rating
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thorough chart review
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models.
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then complete have them complete
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at Feltz Therapy Services,
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neglected or underrepresented
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giving me
I was thankful for the chance
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y, however
therapy. However,
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factor
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When placed at an inpatient hospital for a clinical rotation there are many different clients that will come in and out,
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higher complexity demanded
more complex and demanding tasks
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In regards to their progress at therapy, it had greatly increased
Their progress in therapy icreased
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motivation
motivated
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roblems, howeve
problems. However,
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client and appropriate
client, and included appropriate
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the long road in
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life, as well
life. I also had to reassure my PT partner that...
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was unfortunately very upset by this situation due to being unable
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pregnant and right after birth was scheduled
pregnant. Shortly after the baby's due date the client was scheduled....
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heavily
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l, they
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This inspiration in confidence
Inspiring confidence
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The majority of my role in this setting required for me to provide the confidence
My role in this setting was to instill confidence in ....
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At Encompass Health Inpatient Hospital,
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Though I am on the path to becoming a trained professional with a deal of understanding the biomechanics complexities that they required in order to achieve their goals, I did include the caregiver in the decision making process for what they believed to be of most value to the client's progress.
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good efforts to their
progress with their
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promote a balance within their development
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balance within our occupations
balance of occupations
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LeBonheur Outpatient
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at the time I had scheduled to see them on those particular days.
state, which varied throughout the day.
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them
the client
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cognition
cognitive
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There are many key elements that are derived together for a successful therapy journey with one of the most important ones is effective communication between the therapist and client
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to better appreciate these complex influences daily with every patient on my caseload.
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out best that the client
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up, however
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service and this greatly renders
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brachial plexus that
brachial plexus injury that
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Even when these patients are able to attend a session, does not mean they do not have other socio-cultural factors that will influence their engagement as some of them come from a lower education background
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This population has to choose some days which are the most important things in their day to day lives and
This population may be struggling.....
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hope to work in a setting that I can excel myself.
plan to work in a setting where I can excel.
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OCCUPATION AND CLIENT-CENTERED PRACTITIONER
Rachel, Throughout the PDE I would like to see a few artifacts. These can be photos, pieces of equipment, copies of handouts, etc. that support your fieldwork stories
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is important to be able to modify the information gathered not just during the initial evaluation, but in the following treatment sessions, to continue to implement interventions that are appropriate and challenging to the patient.
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create activities
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As I complete my Level II Fieldwork Rotations,
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She became extremely nervous when I mentioned standing up and reported that she was unable to do so but I explained to her that we would not let her do anything she could not handle but it is important to begin moving as soon as possible.
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During my Level II B rotation at West Florida Hospital
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information.
I am proud of you! This is a great example of how students can be teachers.
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thorough chart review
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level II fieldwork A experience at Tennova North Knoxville Medical Center, I
acute care rotation, I
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with treating clients have challenges with sensory processing
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Since this was the case with pediatrics,
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than the client
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In my Level II fieldwork A acute care, I
In my first fieldwork I
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can have an impact on their children significantly
can have a significant impact on their children
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treatment
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treatments
co-treatments
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Level II fieldwork experience at Blount Memorial pediatric outpatient clinic
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Since growing up in Knoxville, I have had relationships with a variety of people over the years but when I moved back, I decided it would be in my best interest to rekindle the relationships with people that I know in the field of rehabilitation.
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rotation at Simple Strokes.
outpatient pediatric rotation
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There,
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hands, the biomechanical approach was primarily used
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separately
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UTHSC students consistently seem more prepared
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During my time at Simple Strokes, I had the opportunity to co-treat with PTs.
In outpatient pediatrics I
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board with certain shaped holes
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hand therapy
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about a women that I shared about
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Again here we need evidence from fieldwork. It can be an inservice or handout from a presentation you attended or led. Also any supervision of another student, tech, or OTA .
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goal.
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effects
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andouts and protocols
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it help the child to not regress as much.
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flare
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I used used the information I learned with the patient I encountered.
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Invests in the acquisition of evidence through participation in workshops, continued education and pursuit of additional degrees.
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Additionally, I was able to clients through my advocacy for them when neede
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For individuals at the Simple Strokes, my
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new diagnosis and their life
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tasks with ease
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appropriately.
professionally.
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humor to diffuse tension.
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at Simple Stroke
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By the last four weeks of my fieldwork, I had taken on the full student caseload, including evaluations and documentation, without requiring my fieldwork educators to edit/make corrections for grammar or language.
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I then made changed according
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In the future of my OT career, I
As an OT I will....
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use deep pressure
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throughout
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Considers client motivation when using occupation based intervention to maximize functional independence.
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At Southern Hands,
In my outpatient pediatric rotation
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PAMS
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Additionally, during my rotation at Simple Strokes outpatient pediatrics
During my outpatient pediatrics rotation
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Communicates effectively with a wide range of clients, peers, and professionals both verbally and non-verbally.
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verbal and nonverbal
verbally and nonverbally
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Most commonly seen are lateral epicondylitis, carpal tunnel syndrome, and DeQuervain’s tenosynovitis.
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Over the period of a couple weeks,
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Level II A
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HEP
Home Exercise Program (HEP) the first time you use an acronym.
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level II fieldwork B
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fieldwork at Tennova North Medical Center in Knoxville, TN,
During my other fieldwork I was ....
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I am starting my level II fieldwork rotations soon in acute care and early intervention back in my hometown, Knoxville, TN, and I can't wait for all my new adventures!
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FWE
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Due to this
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This combined allowed for both
This allowed both
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OTS
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FWE at NMMC,
fieldwork educator, where I
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