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  1. Jun 2023
    1. Advocates

      Include a piece of evidence here (flyer for a religious service, activity you performed with a patient, etc.) It doesn't have to be something you did at work as long as it was during the fieldwork experience.

  2. Apr 2023
    1. Maintain values over self-promotion or profit.

      this prompt is looking for conflicts of interest or times when you could have profitted or benefitted from a situation. The client or family offers a gift card or free tickets to an event. A situation where you might ahve been tempted to violate a billing practice, or tempted to give away services.

    2. More than not, I got a positive response of relief from my patients and recognized that anyone and everyone will face struggles with everyday tasks in their life time

      revise this.

    3. Unfortunately, a majority of my older patients would confide to me after completion of this task that they usually make mistakes at home such as in the clinic.

      revise. either revise the start or change the end. "make mistakes such as in the clinic" is a fragment.

    1. Contributes to the knowledge base of OT practice by mentoring students, performing research, publishing, presenting and/or teaching.

      Cassady, This is good, but the prompt is for something from your fieldwork. You can cite an inservice you gave, peer teaching with other students, or any other contribution to your facilities like creating handouts, consolidating research article, etc.

    2. thus there would be generally no stable proximal stability when completing distal ability required activities

      revise. you have "no stable proximal stability" here? simplify. "he/she lacked proximal stability needed for distal mobility"

    3. Evidence Based/ Scholarly Clinician

      Cassady, ' I am sending this back to you for revision. I have provided specific feedback for the first two sections, but I am struggling with reading your content due to multiple run-on sentences, sentence fragments, changing verb tense, and content with incomplete thoughts. Please make the suggested edits and go forward and fix these issues in your evidence-based clinician and leader/change agent sections before i finish reviewing them. You have good ideas and stories, but he grammar needs significant changes. Perhaps have a peer or family member review as well.

    1. compensation to myself.

      Tarason, I think you did a fine job with this APDE. My final question is about your resume. Were you supposed to attach it to your APDE. If so, please add a tab and attach a copy.

    1. I made sure to be honest with the caregiver and giving full integrity through my decision making process as I had not before treated a client with this specific concerns regarding eating and explained that though I wanted to address these issues, I was not professionally equipped to handle.

      revise

    2. Usually in this situation the client would be more than understanding and generally would not have released the ethical issue with requesting personal information as they are not required to maintain health information privacy as I would. It may seem from another perspective as an innocent or even kind way of reaching out to others that need help, however

      revise

    3. that would request to ask about another client's medical condition or they would try to provide assistance to them through means of communicating with me.

      would ask about another client's medical condition or plan of care.

    4. At Encompass Health, I met many clients that expressed their personalities in different ways and some of them had an appreciation for their occupational therapy services, but there were others that could not be bothered no matter how much rapport you attempt to build.

      this can be omitted

    5. spent that day the same as I had always, instead I was about to embark this day

      planned to spend...instead I was about to embark on a different journey with no assistance...

    6. As a future occupational therapist when I gained the ability to communicate and advocate for the profession of occupational therapy through an inter-professional situation, I felt more prepared to enter the workforce before starting this rotation.

      revise

    7. There would always be an opportunity with my physical therapy partner to discuss what functional activities that could better our client's skills and alternating between days on more intensive based treatment session for those client working on walking or standing.

      revise

    8. I had the ability to work with my clinical instructor's partnered physical therapist throughout my clinical rotation and would collaborate together when to work with clients or share any information we had gathered related to an evaluation or treatment session.

      make this 2 sentences

    9. This in-service overlapped the gaps that we can face in the professional community due to not having the skilled experience to understand more in-depth other disciplines and thus provided ethically based resources to treat clients to the full holistic extent.

      revise

    10. discovered throughout my rotation and discussed the effects on these new findings, and while also considering how to incorporate other professions.

      discovered. I discussed ....and considered how to incorporate these findings into other professions.

    11. Even though as an occupational therapist in an outpatient clinic setting I am tasked to base my therapy services on related goals, however if the client and caregiver do not currently maintain a healthy balance within their own basic needs then they will not be able to perform their daily occupations.

      revise. you start a sentence with even though then add a however. Make this into several sentences or reword.

    1. ETHICALLY GROUNDED PROFESSIONALWITH A STRONG OT IDENTITY

      Rachel,

      This entire section is excellent. You did a great job of addressing the prompts and you have no significant grammar errors

    1. Though I am on the path to becoming a trained professional with a deal of understanding the biomechanics complexities that they required in order to achieve their goals, I did include the caregiver in the decision making process for what they believed to be of most value to the client's progress.

      Revise. You arent on a path to be a therapist, you are at the finish line waiting to pass your boards. Star with "Although I have understanding of the ....."

    2. ​There are many key elements that are derived together for a successful therapy journey with one of the most important ones is effective communication between the therapist and client

      verb changes and clarity

    3. Even when these patients are able to attend a session, does not mean they do not have other socio-cultural factors that will influence their engagement as some of them come from a lower education background

      revise

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    1. OCCUPATION AND CLIENT-CENTERED ​​PRACTITIONER

      Rachel, Throughout the PDE I would like to see a few artifacts. These can be photos, pieces of equipment, copies of handouts, etc. that support your fieldwork stories

    2. is important to be able to modify the information gathered not just during the initial evaluation, but in the following treatment sessions, to continue to implement interventions that are appropriate and challenging to the patient.

      maybe two sentences? this is choppy

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    1. She became extremely nervous when I mentioned standing up and reported that she was unable to do so but I explained to her that we would not let her do anything she could not handle but it is important to begin moving as soon as possible.

      make this 2 sentences

    2. During my Level II B rotation at West Florida Hospital

      throughout the APDE, avoid using specific site info. Say during my acute care rotation, during my pediatric outpatient rotation , etc