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level II Fieldwork
fieldwork.
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Level II
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Level II B
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Level II
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Level II A FWE
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care.
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Level II A
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Applies the domain of occupational therapy in gathering, evaluating, setting goals, planning and implementing occupational therapy.
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Level II B
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hopefully
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Even though it would not harm the clients or insurance companies, I felt that it would give an unrealistic reflection of how productive I was being during the day and could also lead to bad habits in other settings.
This is excellent. It is important to maintain honesty and integrity in all situations and billing fraud is a serious crime, regardless of the amount.
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Actively participates in leadership or supportive roles in local, state, and/or national associations.
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Level II A
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FWE
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Takes risks to maximize outcomes.
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FWE
fieldwork educator
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Level II B
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Level II A Fieldwork at NMMC,
acute care rotation
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experience
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During my level II fieldwork at North Mississippi Medical Center (NMMC) in Tupelo, MS.
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conditions, and at first, I was intimidated
conditions. At first I was intimidated.
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confidence in myself to where I was presenting
confidence in myself to present myself......
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at NMMC
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level II fieldwork in Tupelo, MS
acute care rotation
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ometimes that
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FWE
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Demonstrates the ability to give constructive and timely feedback.
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OT; therefore, I
"OT. Therefore, I also"
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Level II B fieldwork
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Level II B Fieldwork.
here and throughout the Weebly, say "my hand rotation" or "my acute rotation" as level IIB doesn't mean anything to other readers. It is and sounds like professional jargon.
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Collaborates with clients and caregivers in establishing and maintaining a balance of pleasurable, productive, and restful occupations to promote health and prevent disease and disability.
this is a great example. It would be good to add a picture of a task he performed or of a person hitting a backhand playing pickleball (can be a stock photo).
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of.
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AOTA FWPE
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RN, MD, SLP, PT, OTA, PTA,
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had the opportunity to have near constant practice with
I continuously practiced
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ROM/strength
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because I value the short gift of life,
revise. It reads as " a short gift" instead of the precious or wondrous or other term .
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AOTA and TNOTA
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I was
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dailywith
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I usually don't respond to this behavior or
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have.
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The slower paced and the positive environment and fieldwork
The slower pace, positive environment, and supportive fieldwork educator....
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I would make a list of bullet points to refer to during times of unease and stress during my acute care fieldwork to refer to in between patients as needed
I made a list........as needed.
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than work
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more
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One of the critiques in particular
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remains to be a skill I strive to work on
are skills I am still working to master.
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best available external clinical evidence.
Rachel,
Here we are looking for an example where you used research to inform your practice. The example of the Qigong article would be appropriate here.
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continuing education classes
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example home exercise program
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google translate
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active and he will still be able to participate any most activities, but
active, that he will still be able to participate in most activities, but it
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more.
please post a pic of a checklist or activity you did with the patients (can be stock photos or images if you didn't have a picture from the facility)
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For the front and CSU unit, many patients came in with
Many patients in the Front and CSU units had depression, bipolar disorder, or schizophrenia ...
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I am about to begin
I have completed
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TN and attending
TN and I attended
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Education and fieldwork rotations should be listed with the current or most recent item first and older items below (newest to oldest).
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I rarely felt guilty assisting patients with whatever it was that they asked within reason because I always viewed it as “well what if this was my mother/father/brother” I know that I would want a healthcare provider to just go one step further with their care to make my loved one feel a little more at ease.
end with within reason. I always viewed this as "...". I know
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times. That’s where all their belongings are,
times, as this is where their belongings are and this is where they sleep.
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behavior, a couple times though
behavior a few times though, I
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those professions as a whole, but I did witness few members of each profession sort of
other professions, but some seemed almost robotic when...
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members.
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perspective almos
perspective with was almost.....she wasn't alone.
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I had
I only had
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physically watch caregivers relax
I watched caregivers visibly relax
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Sara Stedy.
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Though the reward of a patient being grateful for the opportunity to move around out of their bed significantly outweighed the strenuous amount of labor I would perform for their benefit.
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tension.
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weeks and it was
weeks. They said "So
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commitments.
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This was my favorite part- when you get home- you’re
My favorite part was that when you get home you're
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spirits, I
spirits and I
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egan going after the workday
started going after the end of the workday.
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The start of all major life changing events can really send a person spiraling quite quickly
A life changing event can quickly cause a person's life to spiral out of control.
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My strength for both sites and
A strength for both sites, and
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me
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handling/communicating/challenging
handling and communicating with challenging children. OR handling, communicating with, and challenging children.
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management patient’s
manage the patient's
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half. I
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rarely believe
struggle to believe
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session inste
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wasn’t not
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For weeks
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well-informed
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did my own research in my free time
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still becoming known to doctors to diagnosis.
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Wednesday. My instructor
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the kids to the other students.
other students about their clients.
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could and then see as much movement from the patient that they would allow at the time
could, and then observe them perform as many occupations as possible in the time allotted.
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structures". All of these put
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It was my job as an OT to gather as much helpful
to gather relevant information about the patient, so that when an OTA
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clinical evidence
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Since I have a Bachelor of Science degree in Exercise Science and have spent a lot of time working out in the gym;
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was having a progress note coming up. T
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research medication discovery of Zolgensma
discovery of the research medication Zolgensma,
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an evidence based approach to practice.
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he nursing staff will
how much assistance the client would need to be able to safely transfer back to bed.
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would perform
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for when they leave
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and though I’m sure they wouldn’t not want to hear about how tired they are going to feel once they leave.
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I talk about how I usually was met with a negative response from most of my patients initially, but then after explaining to them what OT truly focuses on and the things we could work on simply in their room. T
about how I would often experience a negative response when first approaching the client, but their demeanor would change once I explained what OT was and how I could help them.
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our conversations education the patient they would
our conversation regarding AE education, the patient would
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Though in the moment I would become extremely agitated, hindsight 20/20 being so adjusted to being adjustable is a skill I now have.
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In this paragraph you use adjustable, but I think the better word is adaptable
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It was after this event when I knew in my gut that I truly can
After this event I knew in my gut that I could
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Had I not entered the room, attempted to arouse this patient, and the guest to see something was wrong from the patient not arousing, none of us know how it could’ve turned out in a different scenario.
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cried and cried
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since the code team arrived, and I
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Unfortunately, things would go wrong for me too. P
For example, a patient's
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He appeared asleep, so I announced my presence, I turned on the lights, I called his name out slowly getting louder in my voice projection, I performed sternal rubs and was about to apply a cold washcloth to his head to help wake this gentleman up.
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Again though, with more
With each mistake came more opportunities to learn, and I grew more sure of myself.
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ight my wrong
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hey tell me
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So, for
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Represents the unique perspective
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was complete with
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ns if a doctor were to interrupt
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mid-sizes
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DIY Therapy Carrots.
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life, t
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Having the patient repeatedly perform certain self-care tasks helps solidify his ability to care for himself regardless of how much or how little the caregivers assist.
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Granted I do not know what exactly is happening behind closed doors, but I do know that I saw enough evidence for major red flags to be shown.
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I believed that
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board post asking about an ethical dilemma we encountered during the two 12-week rotations
board post describing an ethical dilemma I encountered during fieldwork. (always stay with the singular first person) This is your unique story!
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directions are tasks therefore we were left to only provide sensory input.
directions and we were only able to focus on sensory input.
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and surprisingly weather played a part too.
schedules. Surprisingly, weather played a part too.
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challenging to find the just right challenge
difficult to find the just right challenge
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site, becoming proficient at challenging the patients here was a greater challenge surprisingly.
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patient.
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that we tested the reflexes on, and he was positive for most of them.
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I just completed my two 12-week Level 2 rotations one is in an inpatient acute care setting and the other is an outpatient pediatric clinic. One of these I am overjoyed to experience and the other terrifies me, but I know that I will be a better/stronger OT when it's all said and done. I am very proud to reflect on how I have changed and grown at end of these two rotations
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