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One of these relationships was with a .....
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Since growing up in Knoxville, I have had relationships with a variety of people over the years but when I moved back, I decided it would be in my best interest to rekindle the relationships with people that I know in the field of rehabilitation.
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rotation at Simple Strokes.
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There,
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hands, the biomechanical approach was primarily used
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UTHSC students consistently seem more prepared
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During my time at Simple Strokes, I had the opportunity to co-treat with PTs.
In outpatient pediatrics I
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board with certain shaped holes
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hand therapy
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about a women that I shared about
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For
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goal.
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effects
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andouts and protocols
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for additional exercise
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Southern Hand Center
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it help the child to not regress as much.
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I used used the information I learned with the patient I encountered.
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Invests in the acquisition of evidence through participation in workshops, continued education and pursuit of additional degrees.
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her her
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Additionally, I was able to clients through my advocacy for them when neede
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seem as if they hav
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For individuals at the Simple Strokes, my
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new diagnosis as their lives
new diagnosis and their life
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tasks with ease
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appropriately.
professionally.
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humor to diffuse tension.
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at Simple Stroke
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By the last four weeks of my fieldwork, I had taken on the full student caseload, including evaluations and documentation, without requiring my fieldwork educators to edit/make corrections for grammar or language.
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I then made changed according
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In the future of my OT career, I
As an OT I will....
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it makes me
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use deep pressure
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throughout
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Considers client motivation when using occupation based intervention to maximize functional independence.
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At Southern Hands,
In my outpatient pediatric rotation
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PAMS
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Additionally, during my rotation at Simple Strokes outpatient pediatrics
During my outpatient pediatrics rotation
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Communicates effectively with a wide range of clients, peers, and professionals both verbally and non-verbally.
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verbal and nonverbal
verbally and nonverbally
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Most commonly seen are lateral epicondylitis, carpal tunnel syndrome, and DeQuervain’s tenosynovitis.
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During my level II B fieldwork experience in Pediatrics at Blount Memorial,
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inspiration, and confidence with empathy and perseverance
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From starting out sessions with significant
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Over the period of a couple weeks,
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Level II A
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HEP
Home Exercise Program (HEP) the first time you use an acronym.
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level II fieldwork B
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injury to
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fieldwork at Tennova North Medical Center in Knoxville, TN,
During my other fieldwork I was ....
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Blount Memorial Pediatric
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I am starting my level II fieldwork rotations soon in acute care and early intervention back in my hometown, Knoxville, TN, and I can't wait for all my new adventures!
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toolbox
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HEPs
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FWE
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Due to this
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This combined allowed for both
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OTS
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FWE at NMMC,
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level II Fieldwork
fieldwork.
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Applies the domain of occupational therapy in gathering, evaluating, setting goals, planning and implementing occupational therapy.
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Even though it would not harm the clients or insurance companies, I felt that it would give an unrealistic reflection of how productive I was being during the day and could also lead to bad habits in other settings.
This is excellent. It is important to maintain honesty and integrity in all situations and billing fraud is a serious crime, regardless of the amount.
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Actively participates in leadership or supportive roles in local, state, and/or national associations.
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Level II A
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Takes risks to maximize outcomes.
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Level II A Fieldwork at NMMC,
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During my level II fieldwork at North Mississippi Medical Center (NMMC) in Tupelo, MS.
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conditions, and at first, I was intimidated
conditions. At first I was intimidated.
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confidence in myself to where I was presenting
confidence in myself to present myself......
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level II fieldwork in Tupelo, MS
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ometimes that
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FWE
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Demonstrates the ability to give constructive and timely feedback.
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OT; therefore, I
"OT. Therefore, I also"
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Level II B fieldwork
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Level II B Fieldwork.
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Collaborates with clients and caregivers in establishing and maintaining a balance of pleasurable, productive, and restful occupations to promote health and prevent disease and disability.
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of.
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AOTA FWPE
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RN, MD, SLP, PT, OTA, PTA,
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had the opportunity to have near constant practice with
I continuously practiced
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ROM/strength
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because I value the short gift of life,
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AOTA and TNOTA
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I was
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I usually don't respond to this behavior or
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have.
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The slower paced and the positive environment and fieldwork
The slower pace, positive environment, and supportive fieldwork educator....
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I would make a list of bullet points to refer to during times of unease and stress during my acute care fieldwork to refer to in between patients as needed
I made a list........as needed.
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than work
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One of the critiques in particular
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remains to be a skill I strive to work on
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best available external clinical evidence.
Rachel,
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continuing education classes
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example home exercise program
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google translate
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active and he will still be able to participate any most activities, but
active, that he will still be able to participate in most activities, but it
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For the front and CSU unit, many patients came in with
Many patients in the Front and CSU units had depression, bipolar disorder, or schizophrenia ...
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TN and I attended
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Education and fieldwork rotations should be listed with the current or most recent item first and older items below (newest to oldest).
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I rarely felt guilty assisting patients with whatever it was that they asked within reason because I always viewed it as “well what if this was my mother/father/brother” I know that I would want a healthcare provider to just go one step further with their care to make my loved one feel a little more at ease.
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times. That’s where all their belongings are,
times, as this is where their belongings are and this is where they sleep.
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behavior, a couple times though
behavior a few times though, I
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those professions as a whole, but I did witness few members of each profession sort of
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members.
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perspective almos
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I had
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physically watch caregivers relax
I watched caregivers visibly relax
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Sara Stedy.
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Though the reward of a patient being grateful for the opportunity to move around out of their bed significantly outweighed the strenuous amount of labor I would perform for their benefit.
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tension.
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weeks and it was
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commitments.
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This was my favorite part- when you get home- you’re
My favorite part was that when you get home you're
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spirits, I
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egan going after the workday
started going after the end of the workday.
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The start of all major life changing events can really send a person spiraling quite quickly
A life changing event can quickly cause a person's life to spiral out of control.
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My strength for both sites and
A strength for both sites, and
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me
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well-informed
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