many cultural diversities
many cultures
many cultural diversities
many cultures
rehab
rehab facility
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disability, it can be a life-altering
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patient who had mysterious
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feeling under appreciated unless and work-life balance
unless work-life
set the patient up at their
get the patient to their next therapy session.
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of the client's cognitive deficits
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becoming independent we naturally look
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kid, but still practiced the skill
student.
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where I looked
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assignments and she sent five students from her program to carry out the objectives with me at the Hope Cente
assignments for the 5 students, and I was able to supervise and direct the students while they were at the Hope Center..
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studetn
student
list posted of expectations of the children posted
list of the children's expectations posted
weight bear
weight-bear
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her injury
throughout
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had a love for any game that could be played on the wii gaming system prior to her injury
loved playing a game on the Wii.
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injury. I had
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completing fieldwork duties
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effectively
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natural and I was happy to see my reactions shift into proactive responses for the future.
came naturally. I was proactive in seeking feedback.
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was able to formulate a lunch and learn meet with the clinicians
I developed a lunch and learn presentation for the staff. It included suggestions.........
Several of the therapists had children with the diagnosis on their caseload and with it being sucha rare and ultimately life-ending illness at a young age, there is not much research or clinical trials done within the topic
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presented on and be able to
presented and then utilize them with their clients.
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I would like to hear your response to this parent. It is a good example.
interacting and
interacting with and treating clients.
during every session and also once
during and after each session.
I have reached all listed AOTA standards and surpassed professional expectations of placements.Â
I have demonstrated mastery of the listed AOTA standards and surpassed the expectations of my fieldwork placements.
which I developed from as well
program I attended as well.
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share a unique and new perspective of what occupation therapy is and can provide for the populations they work with.
share my unique perspective of what occupational therapy is and what we can provide for the populations we work with.
We met in person a couple times each week, but had daily interactions.
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please add more. what did you find? how did you help?
help them navigate the uncharted territory of this disease for several of the therapists.
help several of the therapists to navigate this uncharted territory.
, but
and
and success in regaining function once lost in therapy.
and poor recovery of lost function
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in the
in their academic growth.
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that demonstrate
"to determine" or maybe "to capture" depending on how you intend this to read.
At evaluation, more times than not
Often during evaluation
ASD (Autism Spectrum Disorder
Autism Spectrum Disorder (ASD),
introduce the term first, then the acronym.
on.
interventions.
how smoothly and successful it was
how smoothly and successfully it went.
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herself
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the homeless
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While building the occupational profile within the evaluation, one question always asked was about who the child lives with in their residence.
One question we always asked in the occupational profile was who.....residence.
clinic I was
clinic where I was
that they may find meaningful, but may be difficult since an injury or illness.
that they find meaningful, but may be difficult due to an injury or illness.
ability
potential
requiring maximal assistance improve their abilities to setup assistance of modified independence and returning home
requiring maximal assistance improve their performance to a setup assistance or modified independent level and be able to return home.
I made for a young boy who seemed impossible to hold his attention via Telehealth
revise for clarity "who seemed impossible to hold his attention"
This was risky due to fall risks and at any time he could simply give up
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expecting my first baby in July!
awesome! congratulations!!
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She said she was happy to see
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their chart
the client's chart
Parents and teachers were also included in the school system evaluations
this isn't relevant here and doesn't add to your evidence for the prompt.
I developed an occupational profile during an evaluation in both my level II fieldwork to determine what each factor under each domain of occupational therapy
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During treatment sessions and forming plans of care, I used the information gathered from an occupational profile in addition to best evidence to maximize treatment outcomes and motivation to participate in therapy.
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assess
access
documentations
documentation independently.
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inpatient
infections/diseases.
infectious materials
cloves
gloves
client's
clients
functional goals
the client's functional goals.
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I provided support to his....through his affected side as needed.
address
addressed
wanted to address transferring. First, we had to address sitting balance
wanted to work on transfers, but we had to address sitting balance first.
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Physical Therapist, Physical Therapy assistants, and their students
physical therapists, physical therapy assistants, and their students
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to provide education on the unique aspects of sensory diets
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I believe that entering a room to address the client's basic needs while asking open ended questions is the best way we can use therapeutic use of self during an evaluation or intervention while demonstrating how unique occupational therapy is!
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​My first Level II fieldwork was a school based therapy rotation and my second Level II was at a SNF. I am very thankful for these two settings because I got two completely different views of the various influences on occupation throughout the lifespan. In school based our primary focus was on handwriting and sensory issues that impacted a child's ability to learn or participate in the classroom. During my time at the SNF, I always asked my client's what their primary occupations are. Many people were retired but always gave me something that they loved doing and gave their life meaning. It was interesting to hear so many various occupations and how they brought meaning into their lives. I was provided with the opportunity to score Sensory Profiles completed by the child's classroom teacher. I used the results to form a list called "SPM Quick Tips" that I would create for the teacher and the parent. I would explain what the tips are and how they related to the child's occupation of learning. Socio-cultural factors are very important to consider when looking at effects on occupations. Some children I had the privilege of working with came from completely different cultures and socioeconomic backgrounds. The school I was primarily serves a lower income area. The school strived to have the basic needs of each child met so the child could best engage in learning. That stuck out to me because we learned in OT school that basic needs have to be met first, then proceed with therapy. If a child is hungry or not getting adequate rest due to their living situation, they may display behaviors that interfere with engagement in occupation. All behaviors are a form of communication and their therapist may be the only ones who listen.Â
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school I was assigned to primarily serves
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This is an ongoing issue in rehab. It is difficult to balance productivity, time management and client needs while also having healthy boundaries (not working off the clock or staying late).
I had to learn to navigate the program very quickly, and I still ran into confusion or technological issues throughout my time at this facility
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discouraging to the client.
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that every healthcare professional has.
every healthcare professional demonstrates.
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This is excellent! I am proud of you taking ownership and developing a program manual for this setting!!
and our
and how our
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both dynamic and static splinting
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Around Valentine's Day, I had some of my clients make these crafts that involved some of the same skills needed for fastener manipulation--pinch strength to peel off the backing of some pieces, grip strength to squeeze glue, and this activity also addressed visual scanning for clients who needed to work on visual scanning skills by choosing the appropriate pieces for their craft.
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activities. I
If the client is challenged so much through the treatment session that they are discouraged, their confidence is gone
If the client is over-challenged they can become discouraged and lose their confidence.
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and a member of Pi Theta Epsilon, AOTA, and TNOTA.
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