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  1. Apr 2021
    1. share a unique and new perspective of what occupation therapy is and can provide for the populations they work with.

      share my unique perspective of what occupational therapy is and what we can provide for the populations we work with.

    2. We met in person a couple times each week, but had daily interactions.

      had no daily?, had minimal daily? clarify

    3. ,

      omit

    4. .

      please add more. what did you find? how did you help?

    5. help them navigate the uncharted territory of this disease for several of the therapists.

      help several of the therapists to navigate this uncharted territory.

    6. , but

      and

    7. and success in regaining function once lost in therapy.

      and poor recovery of lost function

    8. ,

      omit comma

    1. in the

      in their academic growth.

    2. While treating,

      omit

    3. that demonstrate

      "to determine" or maybe "to capture" depending on how you intend this to read.

    4. At evaluation, more times than not

      Often during evaluation

    5. ASD (Autism Spectrum Disorder

      Autism Spectrum Disorder (ASD),

      introduce the term first, then the acronym.

    6. on.

      interventions.

    7. how smoothly and successful it was

      how smoothly and successfully it went.

    8. y.Th

      activity. The

    9. .

      omit period

    10. her self

      herself

    11. the

      their

    12. unemployed

      and unemployed

    13. homeless

      the homeless

    14. population

      populations

    15. them rather

      them, whether that be

    16. While building the occupational profile within the evaluation, one question always asked was about who the child lives with in their residence.

      One question we always asked in the occupational profile was who.....residence.

    17. clinic I was

      clinic where I was

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    1. that they may find meaningful, but may be difficult since an injury or illness.

      that they find meaningful, but may be difficult due to an injury or illness.

    1. ability

      potential

    2. requiring maximal assistance improve their abilities to setup assistance of modified independence and returning home

      requiring maximal assistance improve their performance to a setup assistance or modified independent level and be able to return home.

    3. I made for a young boy who seemed impossible to hold his attention via Telehealth

      revise for clarity "who seemed impossible to hold his attention"

    4. This was risky due to fall risks and at any time he could simply give up

      revise- shouldn't say risky due to fall risks as this is redundant

    5. expecting my first baby in July!

      awesome! congratulations!!

    6. She often made many comments about how happy she was

      She said she was happy to see

    7. I personally relied

      I relied

    1. To do this,

      omit

    2. Additionally, i

      In

    3. dis-regulation

      dysregulation

    4. an

      could (verb agreement)

    5. their chart

      the client's chart

    6. Parents and teachers were also included in the school system evaluations

      this isn't relevant here and doesn't add to your evidence for the prompt.

    7. I developed an occupational profile during an evaluation in both my level II fieldwork to determine what each factor under each domain of occupational therapy

      this is not a complete sentence and is disjointed. Please revise as one or two complete sentences.

    8. ,

      omit

    9. During treatment sessions and forming plans of care, I used the information gathered from an occupational profile in addition to best evidence to maximize treatment outcomes and motivation to participate in therapy.

      revise this

    10. assess

      access

    1. documentations

      documentation independently.

    2. Due to this,

      omit

    3. in patient

      inpatient

    4. infections/diseases.

      infectious materials

    5. cloves

      gloves

    6. client's

      clients

    7. functional goals

      the client's functional goals.

    8. As needed, I provided support to his back and encouraged weight bearing through his affected side.

      I provided support to his....through his affected side as needed.

    9. address

      addressed

    10. wanted to address transferring. First, we had to address sitting balance

      wanted to work on transfers, but we had to address sitting balance first.

    11. for

      to

    12. Physical Therapist, Physical Therapy assistants, and their students

      physical therapists, physical therapy assistants, and their students

    13. Additionally, d

      During

    14. to provide the unique perspective of sensory diets

      to provide education on the unique aspects of sensory diets

    15. inter

      professionals

    16. processionals

      professionals

    17. for

      for an

    18. a

      an

    1. I believe that entering a room to address the client's basic needs while asking open ended questions is the best way we can use therapeutic use of self during an evaluation or intervention while demonstrating how unique occupational therapy is!

      consider shortening this or making 2 sentences

    2. through

      thorough

    3. dis regulated

      dysregulation

    4. notices

      notice

    5. when learning

      when transitioning from a pediatric to a geriatric

    6. ​My first Level II fieldwork was a school based therapy rotation and my second Level II was at a SNF. I am very thankful for these two settings because I got two completely different views of the various influences on occupation throughout the lifespan. In school based our primary focus was on handwriting and sensory issues that impacted a child's ability to learn or participate in the classroom. During my time at the SNF, I always asked my client's what their primary occupations are. Many people were retired but always gave me something that they loved doing and gave their life meaning. It was interesting to hear so many various occupations and how they brought meaning into their lives. I was provided with the opportunity to score Sensory Profiles completed by the child's classroom teacher. I used the results to form a list called "SPM Quick Tips" that I would create for the teacher and the parent. I would explain what the tips are and how they related to the child's occupation of learning. Socio-cultural factors are very important to consider when looking at effects on occupations. Some children I had the privilege of working with came from completely different cultures and socioeconomic backgrounds. The school I was primarily serves a lower income area. The school strived to have the basic needs of each child met so the child could best engage in learning. That stuck out to me because we learned in OT school that basic needs have to be met first, then proceed with therapy. If a child is hungry or not getting adequate rest due to their living situation, they may display behaviors that interfere with engagement in occupation. All behaviors are a form of communication and their therapist may be the only ones who listen. 

      consider a darker font for your document. The print is very light on this background.

    7. school I was primarily serves

      school I was assigned to primarily serves

    1. This is an ongoing issue in rehab. It is difficult to balance productivity, time management and client needs while also having healthy boundaries (not working off the clock or staying late).

    2. I had to learn to navigate the program very quickly, and I still ran into confusion or technological issues throughout my time at this facility

      revise

    3. ".

      I want a Sarah wheel! Great job of thinking outside the box

    4. ,

      omit

    5. didn't

      I didn't

    6. start

      started

    7. discouraging.

      discouraging to the client.

    8. build

      built

    9. During my experience in at one of Baptist's outpatient facilitie

      omit "in"

    1. that every healthcare professional has.

      every healthcare professional demonstrates.

    2. .

      This is excellent! I am proud of you taking ownership and developing a program manual for this setting!!

    3. and our

      and how our

    1. both dynamic and splinting

      both dynamic and static splinting

    2. the

      to the

    3. y client loved this wheel because he felt that it was easier to do tasks like opening a door much because those muscles were prepared to do the task.

      omit "much"

    4. did you get a participation certificate or do you have a visual to share here?

    5. can

      that can

    1. Around Valentine's Day, I had some of my clients make these crafts that involved some of the same skills needed for fastener manipulation--pinch strength to peel off the backing of some pieces, grip strength to squeeze glue, and this activity also addressed visual scanning for clients who needed to work on visual scanning skills by choosing the appropriate pieces for their craft.

      revise as two sentences or shorten

    2. activities, so I

      activities. I

    3. If the client is challenged so much through the treatment session that they are discouraged, their confidence is gone

      If the client is over-challenged they can become discouraged and lose their confidence.

    4. than he normally did

      than normal.

    5. who

      whom

    6. accomplishments, but d

      accomplishments. During

    7. situations, so many

      situations. Many of

    8. t

      joints

    9. relax

      relaxes

    10. prevent the progression

      slow the progression

    11. encourage

      verb tense- encouraging

    12. and

      and to educate

    13. come

      verb tense - came

    14. every for

      every Friday for

  3. May 2020
  4. Apr 2020
    1. s so

      sessions, she

    2. pain and rapport

      pain. Because rapport

    3. , but

      . But

    4. r therapy and t

      therapy, their roommate

    5. s and when

      . When

    6. m h

      ,

    7. ns a

      ,

    8. till

      omit

    9. fully

      entirely

    10. Pi Theta Epsilon, as well as AOTA and TNOTA

      and a member of Pi Theta Epsilon, AOTA, and TNOTA.

    11. are doing aren't

      were doing were not going

    12. try

      tried

    13. return

      returned

    14. feel

      felt

    15. tell

      told

    16. thought and they a

      thought. They

    17. progress

      progress, and

    18. ensuring

      ensured

    19. and once

      shower. Once I

    20. allows

      allowed

    21. are

      were

    22. rotation, is

      rotation was

    23. and

      how to

    24. t and c

      and building confidence

    25. ot all of these activities, but some of them

      some of these activities

    26. what

      the

    27. , however

      . However,

    28. us and told

      us. She told us

    29. down, but it turns

      down. It turned out

    30. A few examples

      An example

    31. weak a

      weak,

    32. are several

      were

    33. find yourself in several situations

      often find yourself in situations

    34. setback and it definitely paid off. 

      circumstances, and it definitely paid off.

    35. the

      and I had the

    36. had several worries in my head about whether or not I was going to be able to prove my abilities in enough time to

      worried whether I would have time to prove my abilities in order to

    37. back to my out of state location to the facility

      to the out of state facility

    38. morning when I wen

      morning, went back to the facility with a thank you card, and exchanged proper goodbyes.

    39. off, however,

      off. However,

    40. for the day and got a call

      the facility when I received a

    41. r a

      humor, and

    42. days as a new patient in the facility I was in, we would administer

      days after admission, new patients were administered the

    43. when

      for when

    44. clients which

      clients. This is a

    45. being

      were

    46. with the

      and that my

    47. and

      to

    48. created with the best interest of the client in mind to address deficit

      designed to best address the client's interests and deficits.

    49. to

      articles to

    50. , see photo provided below

      . (see photo provided below)

    51. and tha

      . That routine

    52. and

      and to make

    53. now but

      know. But it

    54. but also using the strengths of my team members.

      omit (you can make another sentence if you want to discuss taking advantage of the strengths of other team members)

    55. and I

      . I

    56. effectively so

      effectively, so

    57. s,

      .

    58. if it was a Friday and I was traveling home and I found that I reached my goal of documenting with minimal errors as I had discussions with my educator and reviewed my midterm evaluation.

      this is a fragment.

    59. after, if it

      after. If it

    60. always

      omit

    61. hours and I

      hours, and

    62. , which

      . This is

    63. back and we needed to be prepared

      back, and we needed to be prepared,

    64. times w

      times,

    65. and when

      errors. When

    66. ality

      personality,

    67. Further, I

      I

    68. ensure

      ensuring

    69. perfect and she

      perfect. She

    70. learning and w

      learning. While

    71. were

      we were

    72. n, t

      . There

    1. to learn about all the details that need to be paid close attention to when working

      to learn the importance of being detail oriented when working

    2. Also, I

      I

    3. to

      and to

    4. the

      my (clarity)

    5. had

      also had

    6. at the site as well

      omit

    7. topics the staff may need further education on

      topics related to staff education.

    8. r e

      ,

    9. practice and not only assist us with the evaluation, but it would also guide our practice for writing

      practice. The OTPF not only guided our evaluation, but also guided our intervention choices, and our goal writing for ....

    10. talk wit

      inform (you later add "because my FE was more familiar with children") so it is less "we talk" and more "I inform."

    11. prepare

      perform

    12. I was assisting with an evaluation with my fieldwork educator and in the department where my fieldwork educator worked, we mostly treated children 13 years of age or younger.

      In the pediatric clinic we primarily treat children 13 years of age or younger.

    13. I can use my knowledge of all the skills an activity addressed when I used it on my pediatric rotation and use it with an adult to address the skills the client is having difficulty with.

      I can take the activity analysis skills I used on my pediatric rotation and use those skills to address adult skills deficits.

    14. I did with children, such as puzzles and lacing activities,  I can do

      I used.....I can use

    15. talk

      to talk

    16. as, h

      no comma

    17. or

      and

    18. on it and found

      on the topic. I found

    19. Further, s

      Sensory

    20. Further,

      omit

    21. mpact muscle tightness and neurologic concerns/developmental delays

      negatively impact muscle tightness and increase neurologic concerns/....

    22. There were several articles to represent some of the interventions used in practice and some of the strategies that were consistently used in the facility,

      Simplify. There were research articles regarding best practice interventions and evidence-based strategies that were....

    23. patients may not even know what a stroke is or a lot of times, when someone

      many patients don't understand the meaning of the work stroke. When a patient has a stroke, some cognitive deficits can occur, so ...

    24. because

      . The main

    25. haven't seen before so that was very interesting to practice with.

      had not seen and were interesting to use.