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often find yourself in situations
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circumstances, and it definitely paid off.
the
and I had the
had several worries in my head about whether or not I was going to be able to prove my abilities in enough time to
worried whether I would have time to prove my abilities in order to
back to my out of state location to the facility
to the out of state facility
morning when I wen
morning, went back to the facility with a thank you card, and exchanged proper goodbyes.
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for the day and got a call
the facility when I received a
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days after admission, new patients were administered the
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designed to best address the client's interests and deficits.
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but also using the strengths of my team members.
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if it was a Friday and I was traveling home and I found that I reached my goal of documenting with minimal errors as I had discussions with my educator and reviewed my midterm evaluation.
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back, and we needed to be prepared,
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to learn the importance of being detail oriented when working
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my (clarity)
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at the site as well
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topics the staff may need further education on
topics related to staff education.
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practice and not only assist us with the evaluation, but it would also guide our practice for writing
practice. The OTPF not only guided our evaluation, but also guided our intervention choices, and our goal writing for ....
talk wit
inform (you later add "because my FE was more familiar with children") so it is less "we talk" and more "I inform."
prepare
perform
I was assisting with an evaluation with my fieldwork educator and in the department where my fieldwork educator worked, we mostly treated children 13 years of age or younger.
In the pediatric clinic we primarily treat children 13 years of age or younger.
I can use my knowledge of all the skills an activity addressed when I used it on my pediatric rotation and use it with an adult to address the skills the client is having difficulty with.
I can take the activity analysis skills I used on my pediatric rotation and use those skills to address adult skills deficits.
I did with children, such as puzzles and lacing activities, I can do
I used.....I can use
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and
on it and found
on the topic. I found
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mpact muscle tightness and neurologic concerns/developmental delays
negatively impact muscle tightness and increase neurologic concerns/....
There were several articles to represent some of the interventions used in practice and some of the strategies that were consistently used in the facility,
Simplify. There were research articles regarding best practice interventions and evidence-based strategies that were....
patients may not even know what a stroke is or a lot of times, when someone
many patients don't understand the meaning of the work stroke. When a patient has a stroke, some cognitive deficits can occur, so ...
because
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haven't seen before so that was very interesting to practice with.
had not seen and were interesting to use.
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TIA, so
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Later we found
me
me,
very honest by saying
honestly say
I have found that I have been
I have been
Further, I feel as though
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was
it was
safely, therefore every minute counts of the 3 hours of therapy.
safely. Therefore, every minute of their three hours of therapy matters.
For my pediatric rotation specifically, several of our clients
Many of our pediatric clients
and
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ns
sessions, so when I am documenting,
Further,
I was
the amount of toys available to use for therapy was very limited and I had to still effectively provide treatment for the child by using creativity.
there were few toys available to use, and I had to be creative in order to provide effective treatment.
job and with
job. With
s a
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one picture link is broken.
oming and I feel as though as I continue with my practice, I will continue to grow in the professional aspect
coming. I feel I will continue to grow in the ....
very natural
naturally (adverb agreement)
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job,
patients
patient's
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Every week,
all
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, because
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the PT? or the fieldwork educator?
I took over my fieldwork educator's caseload so
"After I took over my fieldwork educator's caseload, I communicated and ..."
enew these memberships every year and
omit. Start with "I plan to stay in..."
as I complete my final fieldwork rotation as well as when I enter into my practice
omit (this is implied )
There are several ways I plan to fulfill commitments in my future as a practitioner such as being a life long learner and keeping up with continuing education hours even if that means taking courses after I have met the criteria for the number of hours I am expected to get.
revise. This is too long a sentence. You could simply start with "I plan to be a lifelong learner and I am committed to learning about my profession, even if that means taking...
medica
the healthcare professions. or in our profession.
is writing a progress note
Makensie, I begin to struggle here with your train of thought. You start with this "writing a progress note" as advocacy. Then you describe insurance denying visits due to lack of progress (that is a valid decision unless there are unusual circumstances). You then make their case by stating family and client non-compliance with therapy. Your better argument here would be 1. client has need 2. services can be helpful 3. how you modified POC to increase compliance 4. why further services are cost-effective long-term (more independent, fewer hosp stays) Also, you shift from past to present tense through the end of the paragraph.
insurance was reluctant to approve her for visits because they say she isn't making progress.
her insurance company kept denying additional visits due to lack of progress.
the deficits listed above
his deficits.
and it
. It was
s it correlated with the child's age level.
clarify? was the child given the assessment because it was age appropriate? were the results that the child scored age appropriate?
n
,
doesn't mean they wouldn't benefit
(double negative) rephrase. omit "just because" i.e. A child may score at.....assessment, but still benefit ....
evaluations because when
evaluations. When you perform...
Unfortunately, on multiple occasions, we are
We are often put... (unfortunately) is a victimizing word here where you appear to be disadvantaged. Quite the opposite, you are the advocate!
because she was able to understand
, because she understood
while standing at t
on the mat
of how MOHO is used is
when MOHO was used was when
,
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thing,
,
and on most days, we
stroke. Most days we would ....
she had a goal set based on her evaluation to address visual memory,
her treatment goal was focused on visual memory,
and I
, and I
to
in order to
,
the
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and as we know, play is a child's
. We know that play is.....
,
and he
. He
activities he did that became much easier for him after his
activities that became easier for him as his ....
my sessions with him, I would try to
During our sessions I would repeat...
,
at times
omit
, therefore,
. Therefore,
to give them
, to give him
questions and
questions. She thanked me....
had
supervised
s
questions,
another therapist other than my fieldwork educato
different (simplify)
is, for example, I had a
was the
ducators as well as other team members know
educators, as well as other team members, know
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together, so this occupation was
is
was
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do,
because he talked with me about
and he told me
how he wanted
his desire to
about
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caregivers and it seems as though several
caregivers. However, some clients....
is something that is so
are
as
as a result of my advocacy. (omit " her therapy session ended and i left the room.)
, she
. She
verbalize things
consider. "convey information"
and feel
and I feel
nd
and with clients
However, you become very optimistic and appreciative
It is unclear how you become optimistic. Do you mean "You learn to appreciate the individual and understand their lifestyle choices."?
environment so,
environment. So,
the different cultures each client represents.
how culture influences each client differently.
experience
experience,
evel II Fieldwork Experience EncompassHealth RehabHospital—North|Memphis, TN | Inpatient Rehab| January-March2020 High Hopes Pediatric Therapy | Monroe, LA| Pediatric Outpatient | September-December2019LevelI Fieldwork Experience Therapy Hut | Cordova, TN | Pediatric Outpatient| September 2018•Implemented pediatric OT evaluation, therapeutic stretching techniques, and the Peabody Developmental Motor Skills assessment. St. Francis Hospital | Memphis, TN | Inpatient Acute|March2019
make a single heading "Clinical Experience" then list in reverse order by date (newest first)
on
omit the GPA.
Objective
Career objectives should not be in a resume
Project
Label this section Scholarship/ Research
of
for
I believe
omit
provide
become
provides
is
with hopes to contribute research in future conferences, specifically on my
and I plan to conduct and present research on DoC programs at future conferences.
proceeding Vice President by
incoming Vice President, and by
the most
omit
so
, so
concerns and
concerns. I took time to go over.....
we would work so closely
Because we frequently worked together, I was able to provide feedback....
co-treat and having
co-treat. Having
, or
and
interventions, however
interventions and modified them to be
a high level of evidence, however was
high level evidence, however it was
to best support the needs of these clients, however, would consider the population.
unclear. revise this and fix/remove the fragment "would consider the population"
evidence based
evidence-based
When working with the pediatric population, there often wasn't research pertaining specifically to this population when dealing with medically complicated clients.
revise. perhaps "There was a lack of research data related to pediatric clients with medical complexity"
return an outcome
recovery
place
place,
to
in order to
many of our patients were in, however,
of these patients. However,
provided
allowed me to complete
that
and
in
as an OT
Upon
After
a
omit
is when
was
this
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pants
pants,
bathroom and with each step,
bathroom, and with each step she