bounce

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Unnecessary word

opportunities that motivate my classmates.

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interact with people of...

Interact with people of...

Copied from a previous page

Find the specific name for the chapter, and spell out.

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Make sure the font size is consistent on this page.

Spell out. Also, find out the precise name for the chapter..

Please spell out

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The darker background makes it really difficult for me to read...use a lighter background if possible, to increase the contrast with the print color.

Be consistent with font styles, colors, size, etc.

Spell out any acronyms!

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Example?

Can you provide a specific example?

Interesting!

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Spell out--I didn't see it before.

Formatting error.

Not sure where this fits!

This sentence needs to be restructured for clarity. Clients with PD in their activities...etc

Spell out. Also, the official name is the University of Tennessee Health Science Center Chapter of the Coalition of Occupational Therapy Advocates for Diversity. This can be abbreviated to UTHSC COTAD Chapter.

Is this what you meant?

Nice.

What was the intervention? Please elaborate with an example.

Rewrite for clarity

Can you give an example? This is very general.

Can you give an example?

Have you done anything outside of these roles, like you were planning in term 1?

Great reflection!

gave

Missing!

Beautiful!

possessive

Great!

Fantastic!

Lovely!

Would a reader know what this meant?

Lovely! I'm curious to learn more.

Lovely!

Capitalize the names of your degree subjects. The APA manual has clear guidelines for formatting if you are unclear.

See APA guidelines for abbreviations and acronyms.

Nice work!

Fantastic! I want to learn more!

hyphenate

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Can you provide a specific example?

Nice reflection.

This is a nice reflection but doesn't match the intent of the competency. You accurately understood the meaning of this competency through your written reflection in Term 1. Do you have another example?

APA

Lovely!

as the

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Great reflection!

Nice reflection!

APA guidelines

Great job!

Good reflection!

Excellent!

Fabulous example!

two separate words

This is a wonderful reflection, and an outstanding example to show development of this competency. Great job.

Spell out the first time, then place in parentheses. See APA guidelines.

This is a good start, but needs a specific example.

plural

wording? Not sure what this means.

University of Tennessee Health Science Center (UTHSC)

Provide an example.

Provide an example.

What have you already done to develop this competency?

Did you do this for level 1? Provide an example.

How have you developed this competency thus far?

Break this sentence down into smaller parts.

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Please provide a specific example from your past experience.

Have you already done this? Can you give an example?

Please provide an example of how you achieved the competency.

Please provide a specific example from the past term/s. The reflection is based on past experiences, not on projected (future) experiences.

This section should include a reflection of how you have achieved your plan thus far. You should be well on your way towards achieving this competency, with some examples from earlier in the term. Please provide an example of how you met this competency.

This is a broad, generalized statement. Please provide a specific example. Please break down this sentence.

Provide a specific example of what you did that helped your professional development towards this specific competency.

End the sentence here and start a new one.

interests

This is a repeat of the very first competency listed on the page. I am not sure why you have two. There are only 3 competencies for this outcome. This one is more well developed than the one you have listed up at the top of the page.

Make sure this is spelled out previously, or spell it out here.

I appreciate this is your goal, however, how did you accomplish this during your FW experience? Can you provide a specific example of when you incorporated client motivation and interest when designing an intervention?

grammar

How does this relate to your ability to understand backgrounds different from your own? I am not sure that your example of advocating for your own child relates to understanding the backgrounds of others different from yours.

grammar

How is this related to the competency regarding verbal and non-verbal interactions? Give a specific example.

Start a new sentence.

Capitalize

I had a hard time understanding this sentence. Did you mean to say, "While on my Level 1 Fieldwork B in a pediatric setting, I recognized that the school was in a low income neighborhood. This helped me focus....etc."

singular

This reflection needs to be expanded. Can you provide an example that led you to use those resources?

plural

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in

plural

Great insight and goal to set for yourself! I have no doubt you will exceed!

Capitalize.

Capitalize, since it is a proper name

This is a beautiful reflection!

Can you provide an example?

Please provide specifics for this competency.

Nice

Can you give an example of how this helped you become an evidence-based scholarly clinician?

Very nice. This could be strengthened with a specific example.

Nice example!

Lovely!

Lovely!

Nice example.

It is preferable to use "first person" language, meaning, that you put the person first rather than their diagnosis. A preferable phrase would be "people with dementia"

Please elaborate, and add a period at the end of the sentence.

Provide a specific example.

How did this contribute to classroom discussions?

Provide specific example, and reflect on achieving competency.

Please see previous comments.

Please be more specific. The intent of this portfolio is for you to reflect on your experiences and how they relate to your professional development, beyond listing what you did.

Please provide specific details as well as reflection. HOw does this relate to self-directedness and problem solving?

Abbreviations. Please specify your leadership or supportive role.

See previous comments regarding use of abbreviations and acronyms.

Please provide a specific example of civility and empathy.

Please integrate into previous paragraphs

Please provide specifics to illustrate how you contributed your fair share.

Check APA guidelines for using acronyms or abbreviations.

Check APA guidelines for using acronyms or abbreviations. Also see my previous comments.

Have you achieved this competency? Did you have any opportunities in term 2 to talk about OT and give your elevator speech?

Please give a specific example.

See comments from previous page---please integrate this under each statement from term 1.

Lovely pictures!

Please be more specific. What was the client interested in? How did you incorporate this into the intervention?

Please provide a specific example of how you demonstrated cultural humility through actively seeking to become more self-aware and well versed about your client.

grammar

Please give a specific example of an instance in which you interacted effectively, both verbally and non-verbally, with individuals and/or groups that were different from you.

Grammar--break down this sentence.

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grammar = helps

a part

please see previous comment about grammar. Everyone should be possessive = everyone's and culture should be plural = cultures

Punctuation

Punctuation--period at the end of the sentence.

Make sure this (and any other) acronym is spelled out the first time you use it on the web page. If you use it again, place it in parentheses after you spelled it out. For example,

"According to the American Occupational Therapy Association (AOTA), occupational therapists can work with people across the lifespan. AOTA also has a website..."

For the sake of continuity, please integrate your reflections from term to directly underneath your reflections from term one. This will help keep your ideas together, and will make it easier for you and the reader to see your professional development.

Example?

Please give a specific example.

the

In December I asked you to spell this out in the previous paragraph, but it was not done.

Example?

Excellent example.

Good examples.

Example?

Example?

Please provide a specific example of when you sought feedback and modified your behavior in response.

Please describe a specific instance. What happened? What feedback did you receive? How did this help you grow?

This last sentence is a good example for this standard. You can elaborate on how you used your elevator speech and how it was received. How did the interviews go? Did the prospective applicants ask you questions?

of

representative?

This is an excellent specific example to illustrate this standard! Good job describing.

Give an example of when you contributed your fair share by working as an open-minded team member.

These are great examples to start with. Please provide a specific example of when you incorporated client motivation and interests when designing interventions.

COTAD is not the only way to learn about other cultures and develop self-awareness. Please provide a specific example of when you met someone from a different background and learned about their lifestyles.

Randi, this is a good start--please provide a specific example to show how you interacted effectively, both verbally and non-verbally with individuals and/or groups from a variety of backgrounds.

Hyphenate!

Capitalize

Capitalize, and possessive

Capitalize

Be specific with an example of one client.

not possessive

Not possessive

The abbreviation should come at the first instance. Occupational therapy appeared in the first sentence of the page, albeit in plural--but you could change the first sentence to "occupational therapy (OT) practitioners".

See prior comment--please link to AOTA COE and specific principle. Any examples of other principles in action?

Explain the link to AOTA COE and the specific principle.

Allison, I can't let you off the hook on this one! What would you have done if you were the only therapist? Please expand on this in your reflection.

Lovely example. Please insert a space after the paragraph to separate it from the reference.

Capitalize

Please address previous comment on spacing this bullet

Who does "our" refer to?

Is this an accurate description of OT?

Who does "our" refer to?

No! You didn't work with a variety of ages! You worked with people/clients/children/patients of a wide variety of ages (choose one).

Please see previous comment

was

Please capitalize

I asked before if you were certain it was neglect, or was it a defect? It sounds like he had a visual field defect, not neglect. He wouldn't be as high functioning if he had the latter condition.

Alison, no need to place in parentheses if you don't use it again on the page.

poorly

Please revise sentence.

were unfamiliar to me.

Delete these two words

See comment for next words