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  1. Nov 2024
  2. sjtheot.weebly.com sjtheot.weebly.com
    1. The definition of wheel-chair accessible seemed to differ which surprised me since in the past I've thought everything has a standard it must uphold to in order to be considered ADA accessible.

      Consider rephrasing for clarity.

    2. The first takeaway that stuck with me was the fact that with any type of inclement weather, that affects the racers using chairs exponentially worse than those running.

      Difficult to understand this sentence--consider rephrasing.

  3. randithedandyot2be.weebly.com randithedandyot2be.weebly.com
    1. ocument

      Thanks for providing two options for your PDP hours. I am unsure if the downloaded file is as updated as the direct link, which I could not access.

      In the spreadsheet, please capitalize the first word in the third column (Description of the event)--some of the rows are not appropriately capitalized.

    1. ngaging in open class discussions

      Do you a speaker, or are you a listener? Do you pay attention to the frequency in which you engage in discussions? This may help you be more self-reflective.

  4. randithedandyot2be.weebly.com randithedandyot2be.weebly.com
  5. randithedandyot2be.weebly.com randithedandyot2be.weebly.com
    1. ed Practitioner

      Please respond to each competency rather than all three at once. Please see my previous suggestion to use Grammarly or other program to help identify any spelling or grammar errors.

  6. danitheoccupationaltherapist.weebly.com danitheoccupationaltherapist.weebly.com
  7. danitheoccupationaltherapist.weebly.com danitheoccupationaltherapist.weebly.com
    1. leisure I like to engage in focusing on my art, specifically I do acrylic painting. I also enjoy  cooking for my family, enjoying nature, or taking walks in the park.

      Please consider using Grammarly or other spell- and grammar-checking programs. Grammarly can help identify spelling and grammar errors before you publish your work. It can help you polish your website and other written work.

  8. danitheoccupationaltherapist.weebly.com danitheoccupationaltherapist.weebly.com
  9. rachelmccartyot26.weebly.com rachelmccartyot26.weebly.com
    1. Additionally, the duration of the marathon being on a sidewalk is problematic for someone in a wheelchair because their chair is wider than that of an average runner and takes up almost the entirety of the sidewalk.

      This is a very long sentence--consider breaking it down into shorter chunks.

  10. rachelmccartyot26.weebly.com rachelmccartyot26.weebly.com
    1. I am eager to gain more experience and exposure to these different specialties to discover where my strengths and interests align most closely with the needs of my future client

      Long sentence--please break it up into shorter structures.

  11. rachelmccartyot26.weebly.com rachelmccartyot26.weebly.com
    1. Being able to have a balance of verbal and non-verbal cues adds value to communication skills and the client's comfortability factor.

      Please rephrase for clarity. Perhaps remove the first few words "Being able to...". Here is a suggestion:

      "I value having good verbal and non-verbal communication skills because they can make a client feel more comfortable".

  12. otismydestiny.weebly.com otismydestiny.weebly.com
    1. ivities.

      There is a 10-nautical mile race in Millington in June every year. It is the only race I am aware of that has a wheelchair division. If you are interested in adaptive sports, you can contact them to see if there are volunteer opportunities.

    2. I understand that people do not want to receive special treatment because of their disability so others attempt to adhere to those wishes, but that does not mean that people’s needs should be disregarded

      See previous comment

    3. from the marathon was because it seemed longer due to the uphill terrain.

      rephrase for clarity. Did you mean that the 26.2 mile route of the marathon seemed longer due to the uphill terrain?

  13. otismydestiny.weebly.com otismydestiny.weebly.com
    1. a realm that aids people in their daily life activities and goals as we strive to help people return back to their independence, cope with their new normal, or help them try new things to satisfy the meaning of what matters most to them in their life.

      Break down this sentence--it is very long and confusing.

    1. his competency is important because in a professional setting, such as a job where I will be getting paid and clients are waiting to be seen, it is important to arrive prepared and ready for my client to receive best care.

      Shorten this sentence or break it up into smaller chunks.

    1. It is important for me to look further into my client interactions both by what they are communicating as well as what their body language is telling me.

      Can you shorten or simplify this sentence? It is long and difficult to follow

  14. letsgolo.weebly.com letsgolo.weebly.com
  15. letsgolo.weebly.com letsgolo.weebly.com
    1. Edit this text to make it your own. To edit, simply click directly on the text and start typing. You can move the text by dragging and dropping the Text Element anywhere on the page. Break up your text with more than one paragraph for better readability.

      I"d love to learn more about you.

  16. letsgolo.weebly.com letsgolo.weebly.com
  17. thatotgirlraven.weebly.com thatotgirlraven.weebly.com
  18. thatotgirlraven.weebly.com thatotgirlraven.weebly.com
    1. OT s

      Spell out any acronyms or abbreviations and place in parentheses if you are going to use later on the page, e.g., My name is Raven and I'm an occupational therapy (OT) student.

    1. This is another level of consideration wheelchair users must face in daily life, especially racing, is where they will be and what they will do if a tire on their wheelchair becomes damaged (ensuring they have the capability and means to change it independently if help is not available as well).

      Grammar.

  19. otjourney4annie.weebly.com otjourney4annie.weebly.com
    1. oint alignment,

      I am concerned about the position of the left GH joint; if this position was prolonged with the humerus hanging over the back of the chair, it would compress the axillary artery along with the brachial plexus, leading to injury.

    1. eah's base of support is relatively large and consists of the points of contact between the chair, her feet on the ground, and her hands resting on the des

      Yes! More points of contact results in more stability.

  20. mdsotjourney.weebly.com mdsotjourney.weebly.com
    1. but since she is able to use her laptop, her upper extremities are free to move.

      I don't understand this part of the sentence.

      Her wrists are resting on the tabletop, providing additional points of stability via contact with a stable surface.