Awkward sentence...you're such a good writer, try expressing this differently.

Beautifully written

Since this is the first time you use the acronym, please spell it out followed by (OT). You will need to do this for each page.

did you mean NOT everyone?

spell out; also please include the words "UTHSC Chapter" when referencing this organization. Thanks

There are many forms of professional communication. This portfolio is one example.

Have you actively engaged in this competency in the past few months since starting the program? If so, can you reflect on your efforts? If not--what is required for change?

Too many periods.

Please spell out

Please spell out.

This needs to be a comma, not period.

Lovely!

remove capitalization

Have you actively engaged in this competency in the past few months since starting the program? If so, can you reflect on your efforts? If not--what is required for change?

Please spell out

Remove capiitalization

Remove capitalization

Remove capitalization

Please provide more detail for each competency. The responses are very brief.

How will you determine when your interactions are effective?

This portfolio is also an example of professional communication.

Have you actively engaged in this competency in the past few months since starting the program? If so, can you reflect on your efforts? If not--what is required for change?

spelling

Have you actively engaged in this competency in the past few months since starting the program? If so, can you reflect on your efforts? If not--what is required for change?

Have you actively engaged in this competency in the past few months since starting the program? If so, can you reflect on your efforts? If not--what is required for change?

Documentation is not the only type of professional communication you will need to use. This PDP is an example of professional communication too.

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spell out

enhances

Please address other forms of professional communication, e.g., this portfolio. Documentation is only one aspect of professional communication.

spacing

What you wrote describes student expectations. What will you do to demonstrate your own scholarship, beyond the classroom?

remove capitalization--this comment was previously made

Clarify your contribution

Have you engaged in this activity in the past few months as an OT student? If so, can you add a reflection about it?

Please elaborate how this relates to the competency

Punctuation

spacing

Spacing

Formatting

Incomplete sentence

Grammar

Grammar and punctuation

Incomplete sentence

How does this relate to the competency?

grammar

separate words.

Is there a reason this is bolded?

grammar

remove this word

Start a new sentence.

the

in a leadership role

This sentence still needs work.

What does "this" refer to?

Break down this sentence. If it was me I would end the sentence after the word "presented".

plural

Thanks for sharing about yourself! It's lovely to get to know you.

currently or in the past? Would it be more accurate to say..

I have fostered x (be precise with the number because these are human beings and you don't want to exclude anyone from the count) children in the past two years; three siblings stayed the longest.

Place this in parentheses after you spell it out in the first sentence. See APA guidelines.

Very good formatting (putting acronyms/abbreviations in parentheses after first spelling out)!

Walkers are like portable parallel bars

Grammar. To use forearm crutches, the client must have strong trunk stability compared to axillary crutches.

A cane is the least stable device. A cane has the narrowest base of support.

Forearm crutches are used similarly to axillary crutches and have a hand grip. The cuff keeps the crutch attached to the forearm, so a person can use one hand without the crutch falling away. The forearm crutches provide less stability than axillary crutches because their contact with the body is more distal. The forearms don't move the crutches--the hands still do the steering.

Warren, please use Grammarly to help avoid grammar mistakes.

There is a technique for using walkers on stairs!

Great. Another pitfall with walkers is to make sure that the patient is walking within the frame, and not pushing it forward while leaning. A common mistake you will see! Very nice work!

Excellent!

Very nice work! Consider downloading Grammarly to help polish your writing!

Colon after sitting: I would tell them....

Colon after sitting:

Place a colon after the word stand, so this phrase turns into a heading. Instruction for sit-to-stand: I would first tell them....

Grammar

grammar (possessive)

Grammar

Did he learn how to comprehend? Or did he realize?

Consider--Through this experience he realized how important a mentor can be.

OR

Through this experience, he realized how important it was to have a mentor.

who was worried...

Do you know the story of the Boston Marathon Bombings in 2013? It was a horrifying event. Read about it here:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Boston_Marathon_bombing

I was thrown off by the comma, because it made it difficult for me to understand the last part of the sentence. What are they not familiar with for an extended amount of time? I need clarification!

possessive--needs apostrophe

Is this a direct quote? Where does it end? Please check APA guidelines for citation of direct quotes.

what is this about?

grammar

Consider rephrasing for clarity. I am not sure the meaning behind these sentences.

Rewrite for clarity

please clarify

Nice work!

Needs a comma to pause the sentence otherwise it is difficult to understand.

Nice work!

Beautiful!

Well written!

Why did they need to worry?

they would have the funds

OR

they had the funds

I read about

as

Very well written! Lovely!

Lovely. Check APA for correct formatting and citation of a direct quote.

I would have loved to learn more about "hipping"---I bet other readers would love to learn more, too.

Lovely blog post

apostrophe

Lovely; however, check APA for correct citation of a direct quote.

End the sentence here and start a new one.

26.2

Thanks for this resource--I bookmarked it for future. For your information, there's a race in Millington, TN that has a wheelchair division. I would love for students to volunteer at this event. Check it out here:

https://www.facebook.com/Navy10nm/

You write very well!

Great blog. You write very well!

Great resource. Thank you. There is also the Navy 10-nautical mile race in Millington, TN in early June. There is a wheelchair division to that race--check out volunteer opportunities if you're interested.

https://www.facebook.com/Navy10nm/

grammar

spelling and grammar

hyper or hypothermia?

didn't have

plural?

encouraged

described

who does "they" refer to?

what does "this" refer to?

remove word

Consider revising for clarity

I am not sure what "this" refers to. Also, the sentence is so long; please consider shortening or breaking it into smaller sentences.

This was a joy to read!

Incomplete sentence.

no capitalization

I don't understand

Please break this down into shorter sentences. Is HITS an acronym? If so, please spell it out.

and

throughout

could or couldn't?

They did? Paul is the author, not Grant and Aaron.

went

book by

Enjoyable read!

unclear which race Paul participated in--the marathon or the 10K?

because of what?

Please clarify

This blog was a joy to read!

unnecessary word

It was difficult for the hotel?

As written this is an incomplete sentence. You could change the beginning to read, "I found this interesting....."

Who? Give them names at the start of your blog!

A joy to read!

Grammar

Who? Consider naming the author at the beginning of your blog post.

what is? please rephrase for clarity

remove word

rephrase for clarity

please rephrase for clarity

...they noticed on the race website that wheelchair athletes....

had

get support

Consider rephrasing for clarity:

She dedicated not only her career but also her whole life to assisting people with disabilities.

rings true

where? confusing

the person

Please consider rewriting for clarity--difficult to understand who you are referring to.

marginalized

Grammar?

Incomplete sentence

Please rephrase for clarity...and WOW! What a story!

I love the passion in your writing!

Please consider naming them--the phrase "these people" or "these individuals" can be de-personalizing, especially if the author were to read your blog post (in the past I have shared them). I know you mean it in a kindhearted way; but I wanted to point this out to you. See this article:

https://www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/microagressions

excerpt

who were?

Interesting points!

individuals' or individual's

in the sense?

excerpt

I would have liked to read your takeaways from reading both stories. You did a great job summarizing but I was hoping to learn about your insights, aside from how little tasks can become difficult.

gammar

Grammar

Lovely post!

Lovely!

It is difficult for me to understand what you meant--please consider rewriting for clarity.

Check APA guidelines for citing a direct quotation.

Lovely!

grammar

spelling

who does "they refer to?

Spell out--could be read as Los Angeles or Louisiana

spelling

whose time?

Give him a name.

Consider rephrasing for clarity.

the rain

easily

Difficult to understand this sentence--consider rephrasing.

is this the right phrase? "In lieu of" means "instead of".

possessive

I wasn't sure of the meaning of this sentence.

Lovely!

lovely essay!

spell out. Check APA guidelines for use of acronyms/abbreviations.

spell out

Thanks for providing two options for your PDP hours. I am unsure if the downloaded file is as updated as the direct link, which I could not access.

In the spreadsheet, please capitalize the first word in the third column (Description of the event)--some of the rows are not appropriately capitalized.

It is...

It is important...

Please clarify

centered

Consider rephrasing for clarity:

Seeking feedback helps enhance many...

Perhaps also studying medical terminology?