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appropriate assess
The word "appropriate" seems out of context. Would one ever select an inappropriate assessment?
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partnered
Use a synonym, since you already used this verb in the preceding sentence. Alternatively, change the preceding sentence.
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partner with Le
Please revise for accuracy. Did you partner with the hospital, or with a practitioner?
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these youth.
Please use a different description so as not to sound condescending.
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orting/advoc
see previous comments
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who
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due to losing her phone
this doesn't make sense in the context of the first part of the sentence, please rephrase
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As
Since
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see previous comment, refer to APA
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w i
hyphenate, and be consistent throughout portfolio
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See question 9
Question 9?
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In my project, I was discussing the use of a Pediatric Activity Card Sort (ACS) as an assessment (or an intervention) and the ways in which administering the ACS provides an opportunity for the clinician to ask follow up questions about the child’s level of independence and identifying strengths or barriers to their engagement.
Please break down this sentence to shorter parts.
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tor
Please provide an example from your FW2 experiences--what did you do to earn this praise from your FW educator?
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The following blog post is an example of an assignment in which I considered the client’s motivation while aiming to maximize her functional independence:
Please find an example from your level 2 FW experiences. This assignment was already graded and is not relevant to this APDE.
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on both ends
what do you mean by this?
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essions/grou
choose one. See prior comment
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alendar/desk/resources
see previous comment regarding slash use in sentences, which halts the reader and stops the flow of reading.
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instil
American spelling is instill.
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Can you provide an example to support this statement?
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To elaborate,
Is this an elaboration, or did you mean to write something like "therefore" or "thus"?
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remain
am constantly
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(verbal & non-verbal)
Rather than use parentheses, can you possibly rewrite this, e.g., "Effective verbal and non-verbal communication skills are essential...etc."
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low-income
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which they are proud of
of which they were proud
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self exploration and in turn self confidence
I don't see the connection. Please elaborate or rephrase.
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providing
to provide
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as well as an example of occupations they can incorporate throughout the rest of their week
Please rephrase for clarity
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3
See APA guidelines for numbers in text.
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girls
"Girls" comes across as condescending
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high and low
What is this?
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check in in
Did you mean to write check-in?
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girls
were they girls, teens, or mothers? Would it be appropriate to call a mother, "girl"? Is there a better word? students?
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end d
past tense
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lead
led? held? Please keep the sentence in the past, as this time has already passed.
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wrapped up/wound up a
Please try to limit or completely avoid the use of a slash. It is very distracting and halts the flow of the sentence. Choose one or the other.
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health and disease/disability prevention.
supporting one's health and disease? This doesn't make sense. Please revise.
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of mine
implied--delete.
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vs.
please write out the abbreviation
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their
Is this word necessary?
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For example collaborating with others, gaining understanding of a client’s occupational engagement, implementing effective interventions, inspiring confidence in others, advocating for clients, representing OT’s perspective in inter-professional situations, contributing to the knowledge base of OT through presenting and/or teaching, and giving constructive feedback.
This is not a complete sentence.
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any of the other tenets addressed throughout the rest of these prompts fall under the umbrella of communication in that one will not be successful in these areas if they are unable to effectively communicate.
I don't understand this sentence. Is it necessary? If so, please revise for clarity.
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I agree. Can you possibly write this in first person, rather than a generalized statement?
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was somewhat familiar to me, however, it was not similar to my experience growing up
I really like how you contrast your own life experiences with the locations in which you found yourself in FW2; but perhaps try to vary the way you write about it--the sentences sound too similar. Was this your intention?
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messages
non-verbal
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increase my awareness around
pay more attention to my use of language
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growing up in the city in low income housing and/or underserved communities was not my experience growing up
Revise for clarity
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Sensational!
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Parenthesize UTHSC here, because you use the acronym further down the page.
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me.
Good job!
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we can always take advantage of our resources and our researching skills to further educate ourselves on topics we are interested in learning more about
please revise for clarity
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a practitioner, we
a practitioner= singular Change "we" to I and keep it singular
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use to
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nts
How exciting! I am jealous!
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time
find a different word here or at the beginning of the sentence
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always
always is synonymous with throughout
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oster.
This was an outstanding poster presentation, I learned a lot too!
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a lot about research and how to conduct my own research w
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I recommend you change this to a personal reflection and use first-person language
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hemiparetic patien
first-person language
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Functional Electrical Stimulation, M
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scenario gave a
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and planning and researching
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hos
Please post an image without red and blue markups of errors!
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assignment
redundant word
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inpatient re
Please see previous comment about using discussion board posts.
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other opinions and points of views from other disciplines
rewrite this part for clarity
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CEU
acronym alert
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self ego
Not sure what this means
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or to prevent an unsafe behavior
not sure how this applies here. Please revise this entire sentence for clarity.
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always come
remove repeated word, and use past tense
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self promotion
not sure how this applies--perhaps explain more? Or rewrite
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n the shower
bathe
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my kind patients
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Lovely. Go Amanda!
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attend
can you find another word so as not to repeat the same verb in the sentence?
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any service activities we were participating in and any upcoming events we were having
our service activities and upcoming events.
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UTHSCs
acronym and apostrophe
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TNOTA
acronym alert!
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to teach him; to build within him the capacity; etc.
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enough
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everything there is to know
Is this true? Do you know everything there is to know?
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Nice example
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functional
delete the word. Is there a non-functional type of reach?
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Great reflection. This is one of my favorite treatments in the inpatient rehab setting--for just about anyone. Most of the time the patients have been lying on their backs for weeks. There is so much therapeutic benefit to lying in prone. I am so pleased to hear this!
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By getting them into different positions such as prone, or quadruped on the mat, it really helped facilitate weight bearing through all four extremities and increased core and scapular strength needed for bed mobility and ADLs
Please revise this long sentence for clarity and accuracy.
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sis.
Nice reflection
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what the situation may be
the situation.
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We always had an ongoing playful competition between our PT we were paired with and my educator and I involving who could be the patients "favorite therapist
I think I understand what you are trying to get at; can you please reword for clarity
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I was
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spinal cord injury patients
first person language
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the patients that we treated were in
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experienced similar things as I did.
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erstand
understood where I was coming from
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o grateful that I had these students to go through this experienc
grateful I went through this experience with these students
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socializing with each other, and just enjoyed
socializing, enjoying (use same tense)
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going into evaluations
Is there another way to say this? Would a hiring manager who was not a therapist understand this phrase?
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evaluation
remove this word or find a different one, so as not to repeat the same word. Perhaps "cheat sheet"?
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MMT, ROM, o
Abbreviation alert!
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Fieldwork
Lovely! Perhaps order them with FW A first followed by FW B.
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lways immediately receptive
Can you find another way to say this?
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nal need
I agree!
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in order to prevent my patients from losing trust in me and in order to preserve my overall confidence level
Turn this into a new sentence and reword.
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provide
providing
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affects
affected
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the patient lose trust in me
Is this a fact, or is this your projection/fear? Did a patient ever say this to you? I completely understand your point of view, but this is conjecture. Perhaps there is a better way to describe this, rather than making an assumption about the patient's response?
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often times
remove these words, they are redundant since you already said "sometimes" earlier in the sentence.
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when I am away from the patient
Please find another way to say this--I think you mean that you didn't want to receive the feedback in front of the patient, right?
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do.
Very nice. What was your educator's reponse?
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Please summarize the discussion board post--it is fine to refer to it, but I can't comment on it since it was already graded for another course.
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vely.
Nice reflection. Example?
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different diagnoses and conditions
first person language
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SCI
see previous comment about abbreviations/acronyms
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everyday
separate words
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and completed
completed what?
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spinal cord injury patients
Can you provide a specific example rather than making a generalized statement? You can start the sentence by including the phrase, "For example, ..."
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