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I would also consider deleting this section.

Possibly delete?

I would centre this as a strong intro on the page.

Can you possibly incorporate your photo into the header so it doesn't take up extra space on the sign-up page?

I would drop this paragraph down in a new visual section. Centre the heading, and add 3 columns underneath with each idea.

in my 10th year participating

I would add another button here that takes people to the last bottom section of the page: Yes, I want one!

a double up from the heading?

replace with ...

...

:

This updated version of the Companion

will love this companion if...

We could add another bullet point: Boost your translation productivity (without using source text)

bold

bold

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on the next line and in bold ... this guide...

...

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like you

I would move this underneath the photo and make it bold and centre it. I'd also introduce it with PLUS:

The FREE Website Glow-Up Guide you're about to grab...

Finding you here tells me a few things about you:

add the page count here so it sounds as robust as it is!

If that's not happening right now... you're in the right spot!

Creating a professional visual brand identity will make your website even more impactful. Thankfully, it's easier than you think. And you don’t need hours or a design degree!

Add the Branding Challenge now to give your website the professional edge and get noticed for the RIGHT reasons!

add: , client-attracting

delete this?

bold

bold

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and lands you dream clients

Add these bullet points from the cart page: Ask your questions and get support in the LIVE Challenge Community Join the LIVE Website Coworking Session to create your website design and copy together. Wednesday, January 14 from 3-4 PM CET. Join the LIVE Website Critiques and get feedback on your website from professional graphic designer Clàudia Orengo. Wednesday, January 28th from 5-6 PM CET

Add a 3rd blue box with this text:

Join the next LIVE round from January 12-31, 2026!

Tackle the 9 steps during the LIVE experience with my support, and guest expert feedback for your website in a LIVE session with designer Clàudia Orengo on January 28! Plus: Ask your questions and get support in the LIVE Challenge Community any time.

add in below: The next LIVE round kicks off on January, 12-31!

add in: ", client-attracting"

I would add a 'Imagine' section before you introduce the membership. Imagine what life would be like with consistent time for yourself. Where you feel calmer, more in tune with yourself, and you've escaped the hamster wheel of life... all thanks to doable, on-demand resources to prioritize yourself.

Make sure you scatter testimonials from members across the page so they organically pop up as people scroll

I would eleborate on each of these ideas and again touch on the so what

Can you turn this section into a preview of what's ahead? As soon as you join... after a month... after 3 months

I would elaborate on each of these points and answer the 'so what'? Why does each of these idea matter?

I would bold this entire sentence

I'm not sure they know they need to be consistent. I would start with the obvious here: You know you crave more moments of self-care, but you have no idea where to start. Am I right?

The self-care membership that gives you the exact tools to start your self-care journey and fall in love with a sustainable practice that suits your busy schedule

I would remove this bit and incorporate the price into the button copy 'Join the Studio for $19/month'

I'd change this to AFTER THE LIVE WORKSHOP

Above this section, I would feature testimonials from past workshop attendees. Intro the section with: This isn't the first workshop we've hosted...

again, I'd elaborate on how long they get replay access for

I would remove these because you elaborate beautifully on each inclusion in the section below.

as above

You're in the right place! This workshop will help you stop overthinking and give you a simple, doable path forward.

Raise your hand if you...

Can you elaborate on how long they get access to the replay for? Lifetime? Ongoing?

Add this question: How does the LIVE challenge work?

Every Monday, Wednesday and Friday I’ll prompt you with a new lesson.

Every lesson includes: - A bite-sized video to watch - A prompt to work on one specific component of your website

You can also get guest expert feedback for your website in a LIVE session!

Plus: Ask your questions and get support in the LIVE Challenge Community.

Can't make it live? Catch the replay shortly after the LIVE sesisons.

The next LIVE round is happening from January, 12-31!

OR

Join us for the next LIVE round from January 12-31, 2026!

The next LIVE round is happening from January, 12-31!

OR

Join us for the next LIVE round from January 12-31, 2026!

The next LIVE round is happening: January 12-31, 2026

What if the frustration (or even shame) of school challenges could be a thing of the past?

Your online destination for school navigation support & strategies to overcome academic challenges

I help frustrated families build tailored roadmaps for school success.

Before you get into your about section, I would list out the 3 options you want to steer people towards and specifically call out (one 1:1 offer, your best-selling low-ticket resource, yoru membership, and your checklist freebie). Then have a button underneath to 'Check out all my offers' (linking to your work with me page).

Move this right underneath the 'How my coaching packages...' section.

How my coaching packages & resources can help parents like you

I would move this logo bar up right underneath the header/above the fold section. As for the podcast features, could you move them into the about page?

learn

Button copy: JOIN ME FREE AT MY ART TABLE

Replace with: Join me

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with this FREE 7-minute behind-the-scenes video

I would make this bold and bigger.

...and get BONUS $50 in credit towards one of our courses AND $50 in Lindsey Does Languages Credit.

That's $100 in extra opportunities!

Underneath any button from here onwards, add a line 'Cancel any time!'

Replicate the changes from the header section here

I would also add a button at the bottom of this section so people don't miss it

only $99/year

Move the timer up underneath 'Join before this timer...'

Get

Make this slightly smaller so it doesn't take up as much space.

Can you add a short section above this final invite to join that touches on the promise on the course? 'This course will take you from x to y/ This program will help you.../ Imagine being having all the resources and guicance to confidenctly ...

This is really hard to read, and I'm actually not sure it adds anything. So possibly remove it?

I would move this section with the logos up right underneath the other 'about' section

Ongoing access to

for personal feedback and guidance

Ongoing access to the

Is this within your community? Possibly reword it then and touch on the community they get ongoing access to

I would start a new paragraph here and replace this with. "This journey is designed for..."

Move this section up with the one above

I would move this section right underneath the header to set the scene

this self-paced

This needs to be removed ;-)

Could you add an emoji here to make this pop more? Possibly 🤩

Can you remove the hyperlink from 'Already an insiders member? Not interest? No worries!' below? I would only hyperlink the 'Click here to NOT add this offer to your purchase'.

reduce the width

Reduce the width here

Can you centre this box on the page? I reckon it would look better in the centre.

Can you centre this bullet point list? It looks somewhat odd this way.

This isn't centred

This box seems bigger than the other 2. Can you make them an equal size?

Same here... Slightly narrower width

Same here... I'd reduce the width so you don't have to read from edge to edge

I would reduce the display width for this section so it doesn't go from edge to edge

And the button above

Same for the button above. Now is in the second row and make the button rather large

Is there a way to display the button across one line? The word 'now' displays on the second row for me...

And you'll walk away with priceless connections with other driven women ready to collaborate and grow their impact.

Underneath this section, can you add a section about the process? Step 1: request your invite Step 2: Attend a pre-event interview to help me curate the perfect group experience (and make sure you're ready for this experience!) Step 3: 2 Days of action taking Step 4: Attend your Feedback Call to celebrate your wins and cement your aha-moments

Strictly Capped at 14 Attendees Max.

I would move this section up so it sits right underneath the introduction paragraph

could this live on a separate page?

When it comes to features and podcast interviews, possibly group them onto a separate page 'Features'. That's where you could also include an invite to reach out for collaboration opportunities

When it comes to giveaways or events you're a part of, is it possible to have pop ups on your website at all? Or you could add a banner at the top of your page so it's not a part of your regular home page.

I would also have a look at your general navigation to make it easy for people to check out all your offers. Rather than listing them all on the home page, I'd build and 'everything' page where you touch on all your workshops and courses, and people can click through to the individual offers from there.

In this paragraph, I would set the scene for what people expects but leave who you are for your about section. I'd explore the power of healing through creativity, and how everything you do is centered around this idea

Insert screenshots/feedback from past attendees

Also, will there be a replay if they can't make it live? If so, I'd mention it at the bottom of the page and add another bright yellow button to secure their spot.

Can you add a trust bar underneath this section? As featured by

Join 6000+ other physicians and APPs who have already benefited from this training...

How many?

I'd insert LIVE in here to make it clear it's happening live

I would add screenshots of feedback from others who have watched/attended this session above the buttion. Something like: Here's what other physicians had to say about this session

I would remove this link from the tripwire page because it distracts from the main CTA. I'd link to the workbook in the confirmation email.

can you define this in terms of hours/quantitiy?

can you add a brief explanation here so people know what they're looking at?

where we cover xyz

Underneath this section, I'd include something like this:

While this membership is a brand new space, I'm not new to facilitating communities.

Here's a small sample of feedback from inside those experiences:

and then grab screenshots from past challenges, events, etc that speak to your level of support and guidance and community

I would add a final 'imagine if''section here.

This is where you acknowledge how they're currently approaching their art practice... in isolatin, overthinking, wondering how others approach creativity, not sure whether to start.

And you paint a picture of what's possible inside the Collective. You could catch up when it suits you from the comfort of your home with your new creative besties. Take imperfectly perfect action with fresh inspiration, have gentle accountability to make time for yourself and your practice. etc

And then I'd follow that up with another join now section with the 3 tiers and buttons.

Other questions that come to mind: Can I upgrade or downgrade later? What if I get overwhelmed by everything? Is this only for experienced artists?

Choose the experience that works best for you

Commit to lasting momentum

Secure founders pricing

Develop your flow

Get creating right away

Make immediate

member-only

add LIVE?

Can you add LIVE in here? or does it make the heading too long?

exclusive to members

what exactly does that mean? I'm sure it's clear to you, but I'm picturing printables the members have created? Is that it?

Can you call it your typical month? Just to make it clear that's what expects them every month?

What about 'Let perfection get in the way' so you don't repleat struggle?

if this is the lowest price they'll see, make sure you mention that

Ongoing access to a Private Online Creative Community with LIVE Zoom sessions

ongoing access

Is this the only time they'll see this offer? If so, you could mention that.

Can you be more specific here and give quantities or elaborate a little on what that includes?

Is this video broken down into bite-sized chapters at all? If so, I'd touch on it here as 'easy to follow'

Ongoing might be another alternative for lifetime

could you go with pre-recorded here?

Can you break this out visually because it gets lost in this formatting

I wonder whether you can make this a standalone idea and bold it.

One-time payment

For transparency, and to prime attendees that there will be a pitch, you could add: "A special Slumber Party The Roben's Nest offer if you choose to continue with us."

On another note... you could totally extend the special annual offer to existing members too (so they don't feel short-changed). And existing annual members could receive a special surprise bonus for being annual members.

I would add this in here: After that, you can choose to continue as a full Nest member or your access simply ends – no automatic charges.

Possibly add 'Yours to keep' underneath this heading?

I would make it clear underneath the button that this is a one-time payment.

So

I'd move this underneath the stunning photo of you in a standalone section.

I would move this underneath the Virtual Creative Slumber Party, and have a button underneath "Join the Party for $15"

what you need to succeed:

I would also add the bullet point list on the video page here to futher clarify why it's worth their time:

You'll Walk Away With: Understanding the charting narratives & mindsets that are getting in your way New charting narratives & mindsets that empower you to get your work done My 4-step framework that you can apply to your situation to finish your charting at work Tips to get through your charting faster The opportunity to join a proven charting program if you need more help

And

I would add a thumbnail of the video below to spark intrigue.

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I wonder whether you can change the layout here so it's a 4-column design with a matching icon for each idea?

This

your personal

You can end this vicious cycle today... with the 3-Step Charting Clarity Method below

Trust me when I say: You're not alone!

I've worked with xxxx+ physicians and APPs, and most have never been taught how to...

When it comes to the video, does your vido hosting platform allow you to add a thumbnail? If so, I would create a thumbnail that says: 'Your charting personality results are in...'overlayed over the video so it creates an element of intrigue, and convinces people to watch.

High-Performers in Overdrive like you... Finish your notes and respond to ever message Are on top of...

Same comment for this video. I'd add a thumbnail with a teaser of their personality reveal

Quick-Fix Technicians like you... Finish notes fast - but not always confidently

The truth is: Speed...

growth paths

growth path

growth path

growth paths

I like the concept of growth paths.

Join a a private, encouraging online community space to share your art, reflections, and questions.

I wold move this up above the FAQs so people don't miss this part.

I feel like this is doubling up with the 'No art experience is needed' statement underneath. I would remove this one because we've mentioned it's free. You could move this down on the page so it sits in the section 'A creative space just for you'

I would move this section up above the section that comes before it so you're telling readers earlier what they'll get

This is your personal invitation to a workshop sampler...

I would remove this to keep it nice and succinct

Can you add a button underneath the title? 'Sign up free now'

Can you add a bullet point list here of everything they get so it's easy to scan?

Is it worth mentioning to scroll down to access the course immediately? I would have missed that the course access is at the bottom of this page

ongoing?

ongoing might be better?

I would delete this sentence and start with a reminder of what they're getting

I like this angle from the report: 'This isn’t just another membership! insiders is your new professional circle, tech lab, and peer advisory board all in one.'

As for the button... change the CTA to: "Take charge today!" and add 'Cancel anytime' underneath again. And possibly change the button CTA to: Step up today!

all-in-one support hub

Add a button underneath this sentence: 'Join 450+ language pros today!' underneath: Cancel anytime. 30-Day Money Back Guarantee!