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Is this too much info?
Most people don’t rewatch presentations. But then three months in, they hit a mistake and think, “Didn’t someone show how to fix this?” With replay windows that close, they’re stuck. With this pass, you’re not. Come back next year. Come back in five years. It’s all there.
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Wonder if this is your new normalAnd whether you simply have to get used to it.
I would breat this out into a separate idea below the 4 other ideas so it sums up this section.
Making sense of what’s changing in your body
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A FREE 4-day virtual summit designed to help women understand and navigate the changes of perimenopause.
The free 4-day virtual summit to give you practical, holistic strategies to navigate perimonapuase without the shame, overwhelm, or conflicting advice.
Spanning nutrition, hormones, sleep, stress, mindset, movement, self-advocacy, and more...
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The Root Cause Renewal Summit
The summit name is different here?
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One of the 'feel's needs to go here. ;-) Could you start this section with 'Imagine finally feeling more like yourself again!'
There has to be a better way
I would delete this line and leave the one in the above section... just make it bigger and bolder.
The ultimate event to lose belly fat, boost your energy, and know exactly what to do, and what to stop doing, for women in peri & postmenopause.
The ultimate 5-day event for women in peri & postmenopause.
Join 30+ experts so you finally know what to do and what to STOP doing, and walk away with practical action steps to help you lose belly fat and boost your energy... tailored to where you are in your journey.
5 Days.
Across 5 days, we're going deep on 5 life-changing topics:
Overwhelmed by conflicting advice about what to eat and do
This is now covered in the intro. Can you think of another common symptom?
Sound Familiar?
Finding you here tells me you're a women in peri or postmenopause who's overwhelmed with all the generic advice out there, desperate for practical tips that actually work.
And you're likely suffering from one or more of these common symptoms...
WHAT YOU'LL WALK AWAY WITH
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Expert Speakers
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By the end of this Summit you'll have beginner, intermediate, and advanced action steps tailored to where you are in your journey.
I would make this the overarching headline in this section.
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In general, I feel like this bar is simply repeating what you said above. ;-) So can you get rid of it entirely?
10+ Hours of Content
I'm not sure this is a great seling point. You're targeting busy women who are likely already overwhelmed and time-poor, so telling them it'll take up over 10 hours of their time will likely put them off.
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$500+ in premium bonus content
this amount is different from the other 2 I saw further up on the page ($1000 and $1500)
$1,500
You're mentioning $1000 further down on the page. I'd make sure this is consistent.
Bonuses
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I would remove this because you're going to touch in it separately in the next section
lifetime access to every session, conversation, and practical idea
turn this into the section heading
10% off any Vision to Venture path
same here... turn this into the section heading
The Willow Grove
Let's assume people are totally new to The Willow Grove. I would add a quick explainer here what The Willow Grove is
transcripts, slides, and session materials
I would turn this into the heading for this section so it's crystal clear
The All-Access Pass helps you do something with it.
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I would again slightly rewrite this so the benefit of attending is clear for everyone, even if you're not in the hot seat
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Does this kick off on a certain date or is it self-paced and they can start when it suits them? Might be worth including here.
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Can you give more detail around the quantity, length and theme here?
working
can you reframe this slightly and outline in more details what 'working' could include? Is it watching sessions together? Is it going through the workbooks together? What do you picture people doing in these sessions?
A handful of Wired for More members will have the opportunity to submit an application for a live 15-minute coaching session with me. Selected mums will receive personalised coaching while the rest of the group listens in via Zoom.
I would rewrite this slightly so it sells the benefits of even listening in more rather than sounding like they're missing out if they're not chosen.
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I would recommend having a 2-column table here where you clearly stack up the inclusions for the extended access and the Bundle against each other.
$2,500+ (and growing)
Same here... I would give more context around each of the bonuses including individual price for each.
3 Sales in 3 Days Challenge 3 Sales in 3 Days Challenge 7-Day Booked Out Club Access $100 Booked Out Club Credit
Seeing that you've broken these off from the list above, I assume they're significant. I would definitely add an explainer for each here so people understand why they're critical to their ongoing momentum.
Ongoing Access
Can you answer the 'so what' in this section somehow? I would also add a visual element here, even if it's just one graphic per category.
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beyond this summit.
Stop Starting Over Every Quarter
I would turn this into a question. What if you could finally stop starting over every quarter?
Inside: ongoing access to every session, exclusive implementation tools, live experiences, and $2,500+ in premium bonuses.
The contracst and font size of the inclusions make them easy to miss.
The Summit shows you what's working now. The Booked Out Bundle is where you turn those ideas into action.
I would make these 2 lines pop more by breaking them up. Sub-heading: Your free summit ticket shows you what's working now. Main heading: The Booked Out Bundle gives you everything to turn those ideas into action.
Bundle.
I would definitely add a vidual mockup of the inclusions up here
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one repeatable system away.
Join us at the Solo Consultant Summit, and take the first steps towards your own scalable, relationship-led & client-converting system.
This is NOT for you if you're looking for get-rich-quick tactics, you're not willing to put in the work to build a system, or you're selling to consumers (not businesses). No judgment, just different playbooks.
If you're looking for ...this summit is not the right environment for you.
Launch week Scholarship + cart open September 17 September 14 Applications open. Free summit ticket registers you to apply. September 17 Cart opens for the Booked Out Club. Scholarship winner announced live. September 17 — Bonus Day Live training: How to make 2027 your most profitable year. Brainstorm Hour: bring your business questions. Scholarship winner announced. Live 2027 Planning Training Brainstorm Hour Scholarship Announcement
I'd remove this section entirely and somehow incorporate the info into the How it works section.
September 14 Keynote kick-off. Relationship-led pipeline trainings go live. Available for 48 hours. Live inquiry form tear-downs with real feedbackwith Kendall Cherry. September 15 Scalable Lead Generation trainings go live. Available for 48 hours. Live consultant panel: what's working in 2026 with a panlist of solo consultants that stay booked out. September 16 Sales Skills That Convert trainings go live. Available for 48 hours. Networking party hosted by Liz Batsche of Well Hosted. Summit Bingo with prizes. Community connections that last past the event. September 17 Bonus Day for Booked Out Collective Applicants. Includes live training, scholarship announcement, and Brainstorm Hour.
Can you split these out more so each of the components don't get lost?
$100K+ in contracts using
It might just be me, but that number doesn't seem super impressive in itself. What's impressive is the experiment that you ran... and clearly needed some solid strategies behind it. So I'd skip the 100k number entirely and lead stratight with the 94k experiement in 30 days.
Sarah Noel Block After 15 years in corporate marketing, Sarah launched her own consulting business and signed $100K+ in contracts using the exact systems she now teaches. She ran a 30-day experiment that closed $94K in new business, created the Booked Out in Six framework, and has helped 50+ solo consultants build predictable referral and visibility engines. She built this summit so you can hear directly from the consultants who are doing the work, closing the deals, and building the systems you need.
I'd consider switching this to first person so it comes across more personal
Learn from consultants who've built what you're building.
I would also restructure the page so you know which speaker fits into which track/day.
Building a referral engine that doesn't depend on luck Follow-up frameworks that feel like hospitality, not hustle Turning warm connections into booked consultations
I would turn this into a to-the-pont blurb rather than a bullet point list. The actual speaker topics inside these 3 tracks are going to take care of those specific bullet points and ideas.
rk you love.
This needs a transition to the next section. Something like... The free Solo Consultant Summit will set you up with a long list of actionable steps you can take today towards your own repeatable system.
brought clients to you,
can you underline this or italic this so it pops more?
Every quarter feels like starting from zero, and the feast-or-famine cycle is exhausting.
I would make this a standalone statement and format it differently so it really hits home.
advice
and possibly the parameters (as in AI, economy, etc)
Sound familiar?
I know short and sharp can work, but I'd give a little more of an intro before dropping this list on readers. ;-) Something like: Finding you here checking out this event gives me a pretty good indication of what your solo consultant reality looks like right now:
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You dream of finding a way to earn a living doing this work that fits into your already-full life, and that actually works.
I'm asking you the same question here. What is it that they actually are struggling with, and what are they hoping to achieve?
you wonder whether anyone will ever pay for this work.you feel invisible no matter how much you post, write, or share.worry that people do not know to look for what you do.hear every “no” as proof that this will never work.think you need ‘one more thing’ before you are ready.
Can yo umake this list more specific and touch on things they would have tried/thought? You're doubting your career choice and are actively considering retraining. You have a long list of courses on your 'enrol now' list hoping they will give you the edge.
But when the answer is no, the next step is unclear, or the opportunities are not opening, it is easy to start building a story about what that means.
I would turn this into somethign more tangible. Somethign like... But when your support gets turned down yet again, and you can't seem to get the consistency in your work to feel genuinely settled and confident in your work, it's easy to start doubting yourself, your expertise and the amazing work you do for the community.
You’re already bringing a lot to this:
You already have a lot going for you:
earn a living doing this work.
I hope it earns them a living. ;-) What's in it for them beyond earning a living? earn a living in a way that doesn't drain all your energy? help you fill fulfilled in what you do and be generously rewarded for it? Dig deep and really touch on what they're hoping for and what they're currently struggling with.
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Above this heading, I'd slot in: The Max Pass gives you everything to walk into the new school year with a plan built to last.
THE MAX PASS!
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Serious about walking into the new school year with a plan built to last?Want to spend the year teaching instead of troubleshooting?
Personally, I would remove the first heading, and move the questions into the green section at the top. Then, move up the bullet points and the button so it all fits above the fold.
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and turn what you're about to hear into year-long action.
Because you want to spend the year teaching, not troubleshooting!
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Can you change the button so the copy doesn't sit across 3 lines?
One Strategic Power-up Session
Possibly get this text all on the one line by making both boxes slightly bigger?
I’m a full-time published Spanish-English translator, conference interpreter, trainer, and translation team leader with specialisation in healthcare, marketing, and technical texts. I also lead teams of linguists from Mexico, South America and Spain. My interest in productivity has led me to constantly explore technology, including CAT tools, speech recognition, computer automation and custom macros.I’m also the Co-Author of The Translator’s Tool Box.
Either centre it all or make it all left-aligned
As a UN and EU accredited translator and interpreter working from Spanish, French, Italian, Portuguese and Catalan into English, I split my time between translating, interpreting, and teaching about the intersection between languages, technology and education.I’m also the Geek-In-Chief at techforword, where I share tips about technology, translation, interpreting and languages in conferences and workshops, academic articles, AI Language Club and techforword insiders, the premier online community for innovative language professionals.
Either centre it all or make it all left-aligned
🎁 Bonus 3Join the LIVE Direct Client Outreach Q&A Session for our personal feedback on your pitches, and how to improve them.
The text sits higher in the box than with the other 2 boxes.
🫱🏽🫲🏼 Win 1Identify the direct clients you actually want to work with
This box scrolls with the page as I scroll... double check the setting so it's not stickly on the page.
plan you can stick to
This box is smaller than the others in this row... possibly add a blank row so it's the same size?
July 13 - 17
the button shows displays the text for me across 2 lines. Any chance you could get the 99EUR onto the first line with a few tweaks?
1️⃣ The Dream Client Finder
Can you add a gap here so there's more space between the paragraph above and this wizard name?
Your next direct client usually doesn’t magically drop into your inbox
I would decrease the column width here so it's in line with the subheading below
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Everything you need to feel in total control on day one... and beyond!
We've brought together a lineup of experienced educators ready to help you head into the year with more clarity and more support.
Add a mention of the audio format here and how convenient it is for listening on the go
So, along with the practical audio sessions you love, we're adding live sessions, and a guided First Day Plan Challenge, so you'll leave with a big part of your back-to-school prep, ready to go.
I would drop this down into a new line and paragraph
Throughout the week, you'll get a mix of both audio and live sessions, plus a daily challenge call you won't want to miss.
I would move this into the section below so it does't muddle up the message here.
before
can you underline this or make it pop in another way?
signed up
joined us
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this course bundle, ...
This is for you if…
I would move this one underneath the What's inside section
What This Collection Feels Like
Can you add an image section above this one to draw people in? I feel they need to scroll a fair way to get to the actual courses, especially on mobile.
WELCOME!
I would remove this
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This collection is yours to explore at your own pace — dip in when inspiration strikes, return when you need a creative reset, and make something beautiful just because you can.
I would drop this down onto a new line and bold the line above
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What if school challenges didn’t leave you feeling stuck and second-guessing?
I would add a paragraph above this one that speaks to the 'what's possible'. School doesn't have to be xyz, your child doesn't have to struggle through xyz.
On-Demand Resources for Parents
I would lead with a promise here: Struggling with school-related academic, behavioral, or social challenges?
Visit the Library:
Just thinking out loud... could you theme the experience around a Library pass and carry that through their inboarding experience also? Stamps on their card, borrowed resources, etc?
Meet your host
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You don't have to figure this out alone. The support, perspective, and connection you've been looking for are waiting for you.
Drop this onto a new line and bold it.
Instead of telling you what decisions to make, this summit helps you see a wider range of possibilities so you can make informed choices that align with your family's values, goals, and needs.
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The missing piece
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What to expect
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Meet the presenters Four days, four themes, one supportive community A growing lineup of Deaf adults, parents, educators, advocates, interpreters, and Deaf creators, plus live calls and a hands-on workshop. Here's how each day comes together.
I would give this section a different background colour so it appears separate from the section above
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learn from 20+ Deaf adults, parents, educators, advocates, interpreters, and professionals
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Learn directly from Deaf adults who share what they wish hearing parents understood from the very beginning. Learn from parents who have walked this road before you and found their footing. Understand why early language access matters and what it can mean for your child's future. Feel connected to a community that truly understands what you're navigating. See a future that feels hopeful, joyful, and full of possibility. Make decisions with confidence because you've explored more than one perspective. Focus less on fixing and more on connecting with your child.
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During the summit
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How would it feel to...
Make this bigger and bolder
You need to learn from people who have actually lived it.
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A different way forward
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every person has a different opinion, every path comes with pressure, and every decision carries the weight of your child's future.
Turn this into a bullet point list
A 4-day virtual event for hearing parents, caregivers, and families raising deaf and hard-of-hearing children.
I would turn this into the main tagline because it seems more inclusive
But you can get it for just a fraction of that.
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You’d pay over $300 if you bought these bonuses individually.
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this summit can keep supporting you for the rest of the school year (and beyond)!
with practical and actionable trainings to help you conquer the mid-year slump and eliminate curriculum overload to foster a thriving music program.
consider getting rid of this!
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Also drop the value up here above the button. 300$ worth!
Where you'll trade the anxiety of missing sessions for the freedom to
Get ongoing access to all summit sessions, and BONUS high-quality professional resources to confidently engage your classroom the entire school year!
If you're determined about exchanging your post-holiday exhaustion for a clear plan to finish the school year strong, you'll love the All-Access Pass.
Decrease the width, and step away from All Caps here too
walk into the second semester refreshed and ready to reignite student engagement through music.
I actually would be more specific here and repurpose somethign from further down on the page.:
Discover new practical skills, innovative lesson ideas, and specialized strategies to conquer behavior management and revitalize your mid-year curriculum.
and finally gain
I'd start a new sentence here on a new line.
It's time to finally gain.... by joining us for the ...
When and Where
Can you add a visula to match each of these sections? I feel people will simply scroll past it.
inclusive, sensory-friendly, and engaging learning environments
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former preK-6th grade general music teacher turned full-time instructional coach
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MEET YOUR SPEAKERS
Is there a way to split them up into themed days? That way you can intro each theme day with a short blurb to give it more context. I would also add the speaker topic in this list for more context and to build excitement for what's to come.
SUPPORTED IN PART BY:
I feel the sponsor logos distract here. I'd move them to the bottom of the page
Join
I would add the summit logo between the heading and this paragraph
gain practical skills, innovative lesson ideas, and specialized strategies to conquer behavior management and revitalize your mid-year curriculum.
Genereally have a look whether you can reduce the width on some of these sections so people don't have to read screen edge to screen edge.
you….
Make sure this reads consistently... either move the ARE into the heading or start each bullet point with ARE... or get rid of the ARE altogether.
Are battling curriculum overload
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Feel the post-holiday slump
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You’re doing the hard work of managing hundreds of students across multiple grade levels, diligently seeking new ideas, and attempting to align curriculum standards.
I would turn this into easier-to-read bullet points
not just waiting for motivation or endlessly searching ideas online.
I'd drop this into the line below.
Elementary music
We all know that...
Watch the video below to learn how this FREE event will help you exchange second-semester exhaustion for the powerful, content-specific knowledge you need to finish the year strong.
I would also remove the All Caps here, and change the text to 'watch this video' so it correctly references the position. ;-)
A free
Consider switching away from all caps because it's tricky to read... especially when there's lots of text.
Teachers don't really need more ideas,They need the right support, at the right time, all year long.
Consider tweaking this so it's not so AI ;-)
- You don’t need - brand-new systems every month.- You do need - a clear way to decide whether your classroom needs more structure or more spark, and how to easily restore balance.
Again, very AI-typical and this structure features quite a bit on the page already. It's not this, but this. You don't need this, but this.
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I'd remove this and get straight into the introducing the Club section
What you actually needisn’t more effort. ⬇️You need a frameworkthat adjusts with the school year.
I'd consider rewording this because it sounds very AI ;-)
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Love this colourful touch!
live group sessions, access to select membership communities, and practical writing resources
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Live Events, Workshops & Experiences
I would remove the categories and simply list the resources in order of 'most valuable' to 'least valuable' so people can't miss the highest-profile bonuses. Also, list the value of each bonus in this section so it's crystal clear.
Check out the Premium Bonuses
I would give this a little more context with a short intro paragraph. Something along these lines: With these amazing resources, you can keep up the momentum and commit to your craft well beyond our time together during this summit.
You will have ongoing access to the presentations to revise anytime at your own pace.
I would give more detail around the length of the access here. Is it at least 12 months? Lifetime?
What’s Included:—> Bonus One Example—> Bonus Two Example—> Bonus Three Example
Make sure to also include more details around the ongoing access here on top of the bonuses
—together representing hundreds of dollars in added value.
I would drop this into a separate line, and specifically spell out the total value of the extra resources once they're finalised.
Together, these offerings represent several hundred dollars in value.
I would bold this line and drop it into a separate line so it stands out more. Plus, once you have the total value of all the extra resources, I'd make this more specific.
Get ongoing access to every conversation, plus a curated collection of bonus resources, tools, and live experiences from our speakers designed to help you move your story forward—together representing hundreds of dollars in added value.
I would centre this on the page
If the button doesn’t see
I wouldn't add this line underneath every button because it adds too much clutter on the page. Leave it here, then underneath your bio, and underneath the final section button on the page
Interactive & Dimensional Cards
Can you add one byline to give each category a little more depth?
If the button doesn’t seem to work, please turn off any pop-up blockers so you can see the form once the button is clicked. Thx!
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with xx+ fresh ideas!
A 3 day virtual event for Cricut, Silhouette and other electronic cutting machine users to learn new techniques to improve their card making skills.
Update this so it reflects the final tagline you run with at the top of the page.