Plus these bonus resources:

I would include the reduced pricetag in the bar at the top of the page. Also, can you format it so it goes from screen edge to screen edge?

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Because life gets busy!

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This exclusive upgrade

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Get ongoing access to all Summit sessions, plus

in between playdates, nappy changes and all the other things that come with parenting a pre-schooler.

Make sure you do a spell-check on the page ;-)

Again, I would add a super strong closing sentence here that touches on the event promise: This free event will help you/show you/introduce you to/...

I would stick with the tagline/event promise you brainstormed with the team here for a stronger intro section: Join 20+ Christian moms and mentors to discover how to connect with God - even in the chaos of motherhood, when having a "perfect" quiet time isn't an option.

Make sure the button CTA is consistent throughout the page: Grab your free ticket

This summit is for any preschooler mom looking to xyz. I would add a summarizing sentence here that makes the browser totally seen. And I would add another button to grab the free ticket here.

Why not? What makes this summit unique and super valuable?

I would pull the speakers for each day into these day sections with their topic so people know what exactly awaits them.

Can you elaborate here what that has looked like specifically for you, and why you're so excited to share these 20+ experts with the audience?

Can you make this section somewhat more specifically linked to the outcome/promise of your summit? What are they hoping right now that will actually be possible for them after attending your summit?

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feels much harder than before kids.

Your

I would make these bullet points somewhat more tangible and relatable. Cheerios and laundry is a great start, but what about the other 2? What's actually happening in their daily lives right now that would make them proud?

This seems to be repeated from the video intro line. Why don't we rephrase this to somethign like: Yes, you can walk with God while raising little kids!

I would add one final emotive paragraph underneath your bio as a final push. Something along the lines of 'Imagine having...' or 'What if...'. You want to catch anyone who's taken the time to scroll down the page without signing up. Paint a vivid picture of what unschooling can look like, and that this summit is their window into this alternative way of schooling.

I would stick to the lighter button colour you've used towards the top of the page so they pop more. It's easy to miss them because they blend in.

Could you have one line for each day that sets the scene around the day's topic (if you have one)?

Your expert sessions

If your speakers have been feautured in recognisable publications or media outlets, you could include a small trust section here... As featured by:

Your expert lineup

The Unschooling Summit is your space to explore how you and your child can live, learn and thrive!

In terms of the video... is there a way to remove the black frame at the top of and the bottom to make it look more visually appealing and also reduce the size of the video section?

I wonder whether turning this into a 'trust bar' with matching icons for each idea makes these ideas pop even more

The Thriving Toolkit allows you to go even deeper with ongoing access, additional action guides and juicy speaker bonuses.

Unlock even more resources & strategies from our expert speakers (beyond what you learn as part of the summit!)

the actionable expert strategies

your chance to make this summit even more transformational for you and your family.

This is your chance to access even more real-life resources & strategies to make your life as a mum easier.

You don't need more pressure or "shoulds". This Toolkit gives you peace of mind and totally doable action steps you can implement beyond this Summit.

I would attach a dollar value to every inclusion as you list it rather than repeating each resource here.

Remove the inclusions list.

Grab the Thriving Toolkit now!

...for only $87 (strikethrough) $47. Save over 40%!

child...

For the next 30 minutes only, you can grab...

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I would delete this line and centre 'You're in'

give you even more support when...

Tagline suggestions to make it tighter and less wordy: -Learn practical, innovative strategies from 30+ experts to transform how you support complex trauma. -Learn practical, innovative strategies from 30+ experts to address the underlying roots of complex trauma. -30+ experts share practical & innovative strategies to help you target the root causes of complex trauma.

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and elevate your yoga practice.

I would end on an emotive paragraph that sells the transformation. Imagine having... What if you had...

How can you highlight how transformative this free experience can be, and what it will do to their confidence and yoga practice in the long run?

update the FAQs from last year

Can you touch on the combination of theoretical AND practical components here?

Can you turn this into a column layout with matching icon for each idea so it's easier to digest?

and yoga enthusiasts

I would save this for further down on the page where you explore the 3 aspects in great detail

I would move this line up above the 'LEARN THE ACTUAL SCIENCE BEHIND..." heading so it's clear who this event is targeting.

I would move the date into the white header section so the date is front and centre

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I would also consider deleting this section.

Possibly delete?

I would centre this as a strong intro on the page.

Can you possibly incorporate your photo into the header so it doesn't take up extra space on the sign-up page?

I would drop this paragraph down in a new visual section. Centre the heading, and add 3 columns underneath with each idea.

in my 10th year participating

I would add another button here that takes people to the last bottom section of the page: Yes, I want one!

a double up from the heading?

replace with ...

...

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This updated version of the Companion

will love this companion if...

We could add another bullet point: Boost your translation productivity (without using source text)

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on the next line and in bold ... this guide...

...

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like you

I would move this underneath the photo and make it bold and centre it. I'd also introduce it with PLUS:

The FREE Website Glow-Up Guide you're about to grab...

Finding you here tells me a few things about you:

add the page count here so it sounds as robust as it is!

If that's not happening right now... you're in the right spot!

Creating a professional visual brand identity will make your website even more impactful. Thankfully, it's easier than you think. And you don’t need hours or a design degree!

Add the Branding Challenge now to give your website the professional edge and get noticed for the RIGHT reasons!

add: , client-attracting

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and lands you dream clients

Add these bullet points from the cart page: Ask your questions and get support in the LIVE Challenge Community Join the LIVE Website Coworking Session to create your website design and copy together. Wednesday, January 14 from 3-4 PM CET. Join the LIVE Website Critiques and get feedback on your website from professional graphic designer Clàudia Orengo. Wednesday, January 28th from 5-6 PM CET

Add a 3rd blue box with this text:

Join the next LIVE round from January 12-31, 2026!

Tackle the 9 steps during the LIVE experience with my support, and guest expert feedback for your website in a LIVE session with designer Clàudia Orengo on January 28! Plus: Ask your questions and get support in the LIVE Challenge Community any time.

add in below: The next LIVE round kicks off on January, 12-31!

add in: ", client-attracting"

I would add a 'Imagine' section before you introduce the membership. Imagine what life would be like with consistent time for yourself. Where you feel calmer, more in tune with yourself, and you've escaped the hamster wheel of life... all thanks to doable, on-demand resources to prioritize yourself.

Make sure you scatter testimonials from members across the page so they organically pop up as people scroll

I would eleborate on each of these ideas and again touch on the so what

Can you turn this section into a preview of what's ahead? As soon as you join... after a month... after 3 months

I would elaborate on each of these points and answer the 'so what'? Why does each of these idea matter?

I would bold this entire sentence

I'm not sure they know they need to be consistent. I would start with the obvious here: You know you crave more moments of self-care, but you have no idea where to start. Am I right?

The self-care membership that gives you the exact tools to start your self-care journey and fall in love with a sustainable practice that suits your busy schedule

I would remove this bit and incorporate the price into the button copy 'Join the Studio for $19/month'

I'd change this to AFTER THE LIVE WORKSHOP

Above this section, I would feature testimonials from past workshop attendees. Intro the section with: This isn't the first workshop we've hosted...

again, I'd elaborate on how long they get replay access for

I would remove these because you elaborate beautifully on each inclusion in the section below.

as above

You're in the right place! This workshop will help you stop overthinking and give you a simple, doable path forward.

Raise your hand if you...

Can you elaborate on how long they get access to the replay for? Lifetime? Ongoing?

Add this question: How does the LIVE challenge work?

Every Monday, Wednesday and Friday I’ll prompt you with a new lesson.

Every lesson includes: - A bite-sized video to watch - A prompt to work on one specific component of your website

You can also get guest expert feedback for your website in a LIVE session!

Plus: Ask your questions and get support in the LIVE Challenge Community.

Can't make it live? Catch the replay shortly after the LIVE sesisons.

The next LIVE round is happening from January, 12-31!

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Join us for the next LIVE round from January 12-31, 2026!

The next LIVE round is happening from January, 12-31!

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Join us for the next LIVE round from January 12-31, 2026!

The next LIVE round is happening: January 12-31, 2026

What if the frustration (or even shame) of school challenges could be a thing of the past?

Your online destination for school navigation support & strategies to overcome academic challenges

I help frustrated families build tailored roadmaps for school success.

Before you get into your about section, I would list out the 3 options you want to steer people towards and specifically call out (one 1:1 offer, your best-selling low-ticket resource, yoru membership, and your checklist freebie). Then have a button underneath to 'Check out all my offers' (linking to your work with me page).

Move this right underneath the 'How my coaching packages...' section.

How my coaching packages & resources can help parents like you

I would move this logo bar up right underneath the header/above the fold section. As for the podcast features, could you move them into the about page?

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Button copy: JOIN ME FREE AT MY ART TABLE

Replace with: Join me

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with this FREE 7-minute behind-the-scenes video

I would make this bold and bigger.

...and get BONUS $50 in credit towards one of our courses AND $50 in Lindsey Does Languages Credit.

That's $100 in extra opportunities!

Underneath any button from here onwards, add a line 'Cancel any time!'

Replicate the changes from the header section here

I would also add a button at the bottom of this section so people don't miss it

only $99/year

Move the timer up underneath 'Join before this timer...'

Get

Make this slightly smaller so it doesn't take up as much space.

Can you add a short section above this final invite to join that touches on the promise on the course? 'This course will take you from x to y/ This program will help you.../ Imagine being having all the resources and guicance to confidenctly ...

This is really hard to read, and I'm actually not sure it adds anything. So possibly remove it?

I would move this section with the logos up right underneath the other 'about' section

Ongoing access to

for personal feedback and guidance

Ongoing access to the

Is this within your community? Possibly reword it then and touch on the community they get ongoing access to

I would start a new paragraph here and replace this with. "This journey is designed for..."

Move this section up with the one above

I would move this section right underneath the header to set the scene

this self-paced

This needs to be removed ;-)

Could you add an emoji here to make this pop more? Possibly 🤩

Can you remove the hyperlink from 'Already an insiders member? Not interest? No worries!' below? I would only hyperlink the 'Click here to NOT add this offer to your purchase'.

reduce the width

Reduce the width here

Can you centre this box on the page? I reckon it would look better in the centre.

Can you centre this bullet point list? It looks somewhat odd this way.

This isn't centred

This box seems bigger than the other 2. Can you make them an equal size?

Same here... Slightly narrower width

Same here... I'd reduce the width so you don't have to read from edge to edge

I would reduce the display width for this section so it doesn't go from edge to edge

And the button above

Same for the button above. Now is in the second row and make the button rather large

Is there a way to display the button across one line? The word 'now' displays on the second row for me...

And you'll walk away with priceless connections with other driven women ready to collaborate and grow their impact.

Underneath this section, can you add a section about the process? Step 1: request your invite Step 2: Attend a pre-event interview to help me curate the perfect group experience (and make sure you're ready for this experience!) Step 3: 2 Days of action taking Step 4: Attend your Feedback Call to celebrate your wins and cement your aha-moments

Strictly Capped at 14 Attendees Max.

I would move this section up so it sits right underneath the introduction paragraph

could this live on a separate page?

When it comes to features and podcast interviews, possibly group them onto a separate page 'Features'. That's where you could also include an invite to reach out for collaboration opportunities

When it comes to giveaways or events you're a part of, is it possible to have pop ups on your website at all? Or you could add a banner at the top of your page so it's not a part of your regular home page.

I would also have a look at your general navigation to make it easy for people to check out all your offers. Rather than listing them all on the home page, I'd build and 'everything' page where you touch on all your workshops and courses, and people can click through to the individual offers from there.

In this paragraph, I would set the scene for what people expects but leave who you are for your about section. I'd explore the power of healing through creativity, and how everything you do is centered around this idea

Insert screenshots/feedback from past attendees

Also, will there be a replay if they can't make it live? If so, I'd mention it at the bottom of the page and add another bright yellow button to secure their spot.

Can you add a trust bar underneath this section? As featured by

Join 6000+ other physicians and APPs who have already benefited from this training...

How many?

I'd insert LIVE in here to make it clear it's happening live

I would add screenshots of feedback from others who have watched/attended this session above the buttion. Something like: Here's what other physicians had to say about this session

I would remove this link from the tripwire page because it distracts from the main CTA. I'd link to the workbook in the confirmation email.

can you define this in terms of hours/quantitiy?

can you add a brief explanation here so people know what they're looking at?

where we cover xyz

Underneath this section, I'd include something like this:

While this membership is a brand new space, I'm not new to facilitating communities.

Here's a small sample of feedback from inside those experiences:

and then grab screenshots from past challenges, events, etc that speak to your level of support and guidance and community

I would add a final 'imagine if''section here.

This is where you acknowledge how they're currently approaching their art practice... in isolatin, overthinking, wondering how others approach creativity, not sure whether to start.

And you paint a picture of what's possible inside the Collective. You could catch up when it suits you from the comfort of your home with your new creative besties. Take imperfectly perfect action with fresh inspiration, have gentle accountability to make time for yourself and your practice. etc

And then I'd follow that up with another join now section with the 3 tiers and buttons.

Other questions that come to mind: Can I upgrade or downgrade later? What if I get overwhelmed by everything? Is this only for experienced artists?

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