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  1. Nov 2024
  2. www.robenmarie.com www.robenmarie.com
    1. My art has been featured in countless books and industry magazines including Get Messy, Journal It!, The Artist Unique, Creative Lettering Workshop, Art Saves, Exhibition 36, Journal Revolution, A World of Artist Journal Pages, 1000 Artist Journal Pages, "Somerset Studio," "Art Journaling," "Green Craft," "Artist' Cafe," "Artful Blogging," "Legacy," "Somerset Memories," "Somerset Life," "Somerset Apprentice" and "Somerset Gallery."

      Is there any way to turn this into a visual and have these icons on your about page rather than a duplicate of the home page icons?

    1. Join me for an art retreat in

      If feel that a pop up box would be better for announcements like these so you don't have to constantly update your website, and people's attention is drawn to topical things.

    1. You'll walk away with

      I feel like you've covered these elements in previous sections. I wonder whether you could give them ideas around what they can use the finished project for. Gift card, framed artwork, etc.

    1. 12 x 1:1 60-min coaching sessions with Jacqueline For personalized ADHD strategies tailored to you, your situation and your ADHD to help you succeed.

      Can you left-align all these sections? Some are centred, while others are left-aligned.

    2. These are the same 4 Pillars  that I teach my 1:1 coaching clients, so they can achieve success in their career and life too. While you may have tried making changes on your own, it can be challenging to know how to apply each of the four pillars into your life, when to adjust your approach within a pillar, or when it’s time to explore a fresh perspective.

      I thing this section needs to move up above the testimonial section so it flows on form your about section where you mention the 4 pillars. And, I'd make the first sentence BOLD

  3. Oct 2024
    1. Want the bonuses above?Click here to upgrade to the Power Pack for just 50€!

      I would add a visual here to draw attention

      To access these EXTRA bonuses...

      Click here to grab the Power Pack for an extra 50EUR instead!

    1. Yay, you made the smart decision to grab the Power Pack!

      This one looks GREAT!!! The only thing I'd possibly do to add a visual, is add the membership logo in the header section.

      Oh, and check that only the first month is free...

    1. If you’re excited about the AI in Translation Summit, you’ll love the Power Pack!Actionable extra resources, toolkits, prompts and workshops to confidently optimize your work with AI firmly by your side

      Is it possible to reduce the width here so the text appears narrower and is easier to read? It can be hard for the reader to digest when they're reading all across a big desktop screen.

    1. You can purchase Nest Fest as a stand-alone course or join The Roben’s Nest, where you’ll not only get access to all the Nest Fest lessons but also additional short lessons from each of our guest artists. These bonus lessons are released monthly, building on what you learned in Nest Fest. Here's what you can expect: Textile Printing With The Gelli® Plate: Marsha ValkDaily Creative Practice Journal Cover: Andrea ChebeleuEco Dyed Journal: Lisa GoddardPlaster Book Covers: Stephanie LeeAdhesive Nerds Unite: Discover the Foundation of Your Art: Shay MichelleTips, Tricks and Special Gifts - A Window into Wozniak's Watercolor World: Tracey WozniakOil Painting Made Easy: Wendy BrightbillPainted Papers - Pieced and Weaved: Julie HamiltonInky Fun: Roben-Marie SmithCreative Play with Color Pencils and Oil Pastels: Joy Ting Charde Whether you're ready to dive into Nest Fest or eager for a more immersive experience inside The Roben’s Nest, there’s a place for you to spread your creative wings!

      I would move this section up much higher on the page right underneath the kind words section.

      I would also revamp this section entirely because the lessons are already released (I assume) and ready to watch as soon as they join. So I would say something like: Access additional short sessons from each of the guest artists as well as the othe amazing benefits waiting for you inside the membership.

      And then I'd list the sessions as well as the other top-line inclusions of your membership in bullet point format.

    1. tter of days.

      I'm curious... are you not able to link to the print version or do you ask them to sign up so you capture their email addresses? If it's a conscious decision to make them sign up, I'd reword the button CTA slightly. GET YOUR EXCLUSIVE LINK TO ORDER... and then the CTA in the pop-up box would be SEND ME THE EXCLUSIVE LINK TO ORDER

    2. n Digital and Print*

      I wonder whether you can include a photo of yourself with the print version in the header so there's a warm smile as soon as they land on the page.

    1. 12 x Private 1:1 ADHD coaching sessions with Jacqueline!  Ongoing support via WhatsApp in between coaching sessions  Coaching Call Transcripts  It's a Wrap Home Study Course

      I would move this up so it's in line with the inclusions in the column on the left. And bold the VIP day inclusion on the left...

    2. Here's what you get when you enroll in Untapped Brilliance Success Coaching 12 x Private 1:1 ADHD coaching sessions with Jacqueline!  ($4500 Value) Ongoing support via WhatsApp in between coaching sessions ( Priceless!!) Coaching Call Transcripts ($600 Value) It's a Wrap Home Study Course ($247 Value)

      I would centre this

    3. These are the same strategies, and practical tools that I teach my 1:1 coaching clients, so they can achieve success in their career and life too. While you might have tried making changes on your own, it’s tough to know which techniques will work for you, when to tweak them or when it’s time to let go and try a brand new strategy.

      Can you centre this section on the page and bold the first sentence?

    4. After my diagnosis, I created a system of strategies to support myself. I let go of neurotypical techniques that didn’t suit me.  I adapted other techniques so that they truly worked for my brain and worked with my strengths. Then everything changed. Life doesn’t feel like an endless to-do list anymore. These strategies allowed me to be a full time ADHD coach for 19 years ( and counting).

      Can you move this text next to the photo of your with your medal at all?

    1. Ignite Your Creativity: Dive into 12 weeks of pure artistic discovery Connect with Enthusiastic Artists: Join our vibrant community and fuel your inspiration Maximize your Innate Potential: Discover new techniques and embrace your unique style Return to Play: Innovation through exploration and experimentation Personalized Support: Individual feedback elevates your art Learn on Your Terms: Access course materials whenever inspiration strikes

      I think this is too much in the header section. I would remove this section entirely.

      As for the button copy, I'd remove Register Here!

      I would beef these up in a separate 'this is what you can expect' section underneath your about section.

    2. Do you ever feel like you're sitting on the sidelines, watching other people create beautiful art? Wishing that you could do it, too?

      Some of these ideas would be great to the 'right now' section further up on the page

    3. I've spent years honing in on my process for creating art journals that are not only functional but unique works of art. I will teach you the steps that will guarantee results that you will be proud to show off. Through a distinctive process of learning the "rules" and techniques, I will then encourage you to break the rules and make the creation process your own. Intuitive playing and experimentation will become integral parts of your art practice.

      I'd try to condense your about section to one visual section on the page. So possibly see how you can move this bit into your 'main' about section

    4. y you approach art.

      I'd then follow it with a paragraph that addresses the right now and how they're currently approaching their art. The frustration of doubting themselves, not knowing where to start, lacking feedback so they know how they can improve, etc...

      And then I would introduce your BB Art Journals Masterclass as the solution in the next section.

    5. It's Time to Activate Your Creative Potential: Say Goodbye to Overwhelm and Hello to Confidence!

      I would lead with what's possibe here... the dream future!

      What if you activated your full creative potential and said goodbye to overwhelm?

      Imagine what it would feel like to eliminate the sheer impossible obsticles that have been holidng you back from creating? And you not only started creating consistently, but you could watch your skills grow week by week?

      And you could trust your artistic intuition?

      Someting like this...

    6. Personalized Support: You're never alone; your teacher is with you every step of the way. Real-Time Interaction: Get answers to your questions promptly with live office hours and co-creates. Collaborative Creativity: Join live co-creates to play and create with fellow artists, sparking inspiration. Supportive Community: Join a positive, encouraging community where both your teacher and peers cheer you on.

      This also perfectly lends itself to a clumn-style approach

    7. Option 1: Dive into all the course content (videos, PDFs, guides, etc.) released on April 14th! Take the "choose your adventure" approach: binge-watch the videos or explore modules that interest you the most. Feel free to dive deeper into captivating modules—there's no strict schedule here. My goal is for you to enjoy the journey and find art as an escape from the daily hustle. Option 2: Prefer a community-driven experience?  If you are in need of accountability and looking for friends that will help you stay encouraged, this is the path for you! Follow along week by week as I guide you through the modules. This structured approach culminates in creating a stunning art journal. Take advantage of our private group forum, live office hours, and direct feedback sessions for added support and encouragement. Option 3: Can't decide? Opt for a mix of both! Ultimately, it's about what feels right for you. One thing you'll learn early on about me as a teacher, is that I will provide you the tools you need to succeed, but then I will encourage you to discover the path that works best for YOU! With various learning methods, you're sure to find what resonates with you best.

      I would definitely turn this into a 3-colum section with a matching icon/graphic for each

    1. Have you check out my new FREE art course??

      Next up, I would explore your courses. A headling like 'This is how you can create with me'. And then a short blurb that sets the scene for your classes and courses. Possibly mention accessible, mix of free and paid, fun, colourful and easy-to-follow here. Maybe a mockup of some of your creations next to the blurb. And then a button that reads something like [START CREATING]

    2. How to Use Le

      When it comes to your freebie sign-up... I would leave it as as separate section at the bottom of the page, but also have a banner at the top of your page that links to a pop up where people can sign up so it's always visible.

    3. Check out my other classes that are available to watch now!

      I know you're 'big' on YouTube, so why not have a section that inviges people to subscribe to your YouTube channel linking to your 3 most popular videos and a main button underneath that reads [SUBSCRIBE NOW]

    4. I’m Brooke!

      I would start with a big, bold banner above the fold that leads with a simple statement around what you do. Something like: Fun courses, classes & inspiration for newbie & seasoned artists. Also add a bright, bold button that links through to your courses page [JOIN A CLASS]

      ...

      Right underneath, I would have an 'as featured by & seen in banner' where you hightlight any amazing features you've had since starting out.

      ....

      Next up, I'd slot in a short and sharp intro paragraph that sets the scene for your unique approach to art, and what makes it so appealing for your community.

    5. Until recently I didn’t think I deserved to claim the title of “Artist” because in school we were taught that artists had to be able to draw realistically. I didn’t fit that mold - so just another reason to add to the list of why I felt like I didn’t fit in. My journey to claiming that title has been long and at times difficult. (We are our own worst critics, amiright?) But I can now confidently say, that when someone asks me that dreaded question, “What do you do?” I can proudly say, without hesitation, “I am an Artist.”Maybe you can relate to my story? I would love for you to join me wherever you may be in your artistic journey. Whether you are discovering art for the first time or you’ve been around the block a time or two. Welcome. I am so thankful to have you here.

      I would keep your about section on the Home page short and intriguing so people click through to your about page to find out more. I would focus on this part of your story here, and then invite them to click through to your about page where you go into more detail. The button can read something like: EXPLORE MY ARTISTIC JOURNEY

    1. Make simple lifestyle changes to minimize the negative aspects of ADHD Create an environment that encourages you to focus Identify and begin achieving your life goals

      Could you turn this into a 3-column section with a matching icon so it pops more?

    1. courage others to as well. 😉

      Underneath the video, I'd include a snapshot of the projects you've committed to without linking to other places on your website (because you want to keep readers here). Maybe one image with a mention of the project name and year?

    2. Grab your FREE copy of The 100 Day Project Workbook and Tracker today!

      Digital or print? The choice is yours!

      And then I'd display 2 columns with mockups underneath giving people the ability to choose.

      For digital it could read something like: Get instant FREE access to a digital download for you to print at home.

      For the print version it could read something like: Get your luxurious hard copy delivered right to your doorstep in a matter of days.

    3. Here’s What’s Included:

      I would create a brand new video to embed right above the inclusion section where you talk through your experience with the challenge, and talk through the free digital or paid print options. Why not showcase a printed journal in the video so people can see what it looks like? I'd also take the opportunity to introduce yourself here for context. Unerneath the video, I'd also include logos of where you've been featured in relation to this concept.

    4. Workbook Page Thumbnails

      Underneath the thumbnail section, I would include an FAQ section addressing the differences between the digital delivery and the phyiscal delivery to make it crystal clear. And then finish with a repetition of the 2-column section giving people the option to choose digital or paid printed.

    5. Take a look at the whole Workbook and Tracker

      If you show a hard copy of the tracker in your video, then I'd skip this section and simply leave the thumbnail section you currently have.

    6. The 100 Day Project Workbook and Tracker*- Over 65+ Pages -

      Elevate your 100 Day Project Experience with the 65+-page Workbook and Tracker | Available in Digital & Print

  4. Sep 2024
    1. There are over 15 freebies in the archives waiting for you to download. (You'll put in your email address, but don't worry you won't be added to the list again. My system just needs to know who to send the download to)

      Could you use trigger links here to introduce the 3 most popular ones and allow them to get them straight to their inbox with one click?

    1. → Newsletters

      I'd stay away from the term newsletter and change it to 'emails from me'. I reckon newletter sounds outdated because, let's face it, hardly anyone wants constant sales pitches in their inbox... and that's what comes to mind when I hear newsletter ;-)

    1. I know you are probably wondering what BB RingDex is all about and what youʼll learn in this course. Let's get into it— there is SO much goodness waiting for you!

      I'd totally remove this and get straight into it

    1. A few of my favorites. These are a few Youtube Lives I did that I think you'll enjoy.

      Why don't you position this section as a collection of your AND your community's favourites, and include a subtle mention of your membership and our best-selling low-ticket course?

      I'd reword the intro to "Let's start with a few of my community's (and my) favourites"

    2. rn.

      Can you add a sentence here around the idea of how many people roughly you have 'connected with' over the years? That could look like this: Since {year}, that's seen xxxx+ art curious humans experience my courses and community.

    1. Seriously!  I would like to know more about you. This is the part where we "connect" so share some fun tidbits about yourself with me.  Just hit reply!

      Can you possibly encourage a reply here with the promise to send them access to an exclusive class they can't get anywhere else? I reckon it will skyrocket your responses and help you build connections

    1. Create a tactile, layered journal with collage. This course invites you to embrace upcycling while creating meaningful art that tells your unique story.

      Looove the little blurbs!

    2. Although creative souls, like you, have more info at our fingertips than ever before (thanks, Internet) true community can be hard to find. The Roben's Nest is your well-deserved break to nurture your creative soul and reconnect with fellow makers in a joyful, judgment-free, and FUN online haven. Whether you’re searching for fresh inspiration, craving deeper creative connection, or needing a gentle push to dive into your craft, you belong here. Here, you’ll find the support, motivation, and creative confidence to explore without pressure, experiment freely, and truly enjoy the process of making art.

      I'd center this section

    1. Perfectly invisible on all skin tones, leaves no residues or flashback.Smooths and refines the appearance of pores and fine lines for an impeccable finish.Brightens and evens out skin tone, effectively reducing the appearance of dark spots.Absorbs instantly, offering a weightless feel under makeup without any pilling.Provides deep hydration without a greasy feel, maintaining skin’s moisture balance.Fresh and revitalizing application experience, entirely free from any scent.

      I would turn these AMAZING benefits into an emotive introduction blurb. They are what's going to sell your product!

    1. This is my first time launching

      I'd make this section easier to read and less wordy. Also, can you add the price of NOT joining in here to give them a gentle nudge? I'd also add an inclusion table again at the bottom of the sales page

    2. Testimonials

      Can you scatter individual reviews/testimonials throughout the sales page rather than bunching them up in one section? It means people don't accidentally scroll past.

    3. How the ETA Club Works

      Again, try to format it in a way that makes it easier to digest this information. I'd steer towards a brief paragraph for each inclusion outlining it in more detail

    4. Here’s exactly what you’ll get:

      I would make this section easier to digest by turning it into columns with matching icons/mockups as well as adding the 'so what' to each inclusin

    5. This email got me started! “Bit*h, how are you turning up to parties, galas, lunches and still making more money that I am?”I received this from a friend who reads all my posts and shares some love on my stories; someone with whom I catch up with every summer when I’m back in England.

      Love how you're introducing the origin of this concept. I would add a section about you here. Who you are, why you're perfectly positioned to support them, and touch on accountability being the one thing that got you to where you are today

    6. Discover a Real (aka the ETA Club) Solution:

      This is a great third section. It's the solution to their current approach. Introduce the membership here with a big, bold promise while touching on the structure/format.

    7. Does any of this sound like you?

      I would start with a section here that speaks to what's possible. .. the ultimate dream rather than the struggles. That way you're starting on a positive note and what's possible.

    8. nt Plan

      I would link these buttons up to the inclusins section on this page rather than to the checkout because people haven't had a chance to learn more about the program yet

    9. Coaching with actual accountability is the fastest way I know to get clients incredible results! This is how, in 60 minutes, I get clients from ‘overwhelmed’ to‘I get it — and I got it done!’ If you are ready to go from being confused about how to market and sell to clear daily action tasks with the support to finally see a higher return on effort… then this is for you!Join the Entrepreneurs Take Action Club and achieve the big goal we will set together in 26 weeks…or get your money back.

      Start with the big, bild promise here. What are members going to achieve by joining?

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      Move this right underneath the main header for instant trust and credibility

    2. I'M ALL ABOUTProtecting__________________i'll show you howYOU WHILE BUILDING YOUR SUCCESSFUL HOME health NURSING REPUTATION + career your way.you while building your successful home health nursing reputation + career your way.just so we're super clear...<img src="//static.showit.co/200/QP_6psQnT8qnDmcUMSgM1w/105115/7.png" class="se-img" alt="" title="7"/>

      Let's protect you while...

    1. Picture yourself flipping through the pages of your completed RingDex, each one filled with carefully curated materials that tell your unique story. It’s about transforming your supplies and previous artworks into a piece of art that you’ll be proud to show off, celebrating the joy of seeing your creativity come to life in a tangible, beautiful way.

      I reckon get rid of this because there's too much copy in one section

    2. Give those beautiful handmade papers and collage fodder a home Turn that collection of vintage ephemera into something more than just a drawer full of memories Bring those forgotten fabric scraps to life in your journal Use those paints and writing tools to add personal touches and depth to your pages Incorporate previous artworks, and give them new life by blending them with fresh ideas

      Can you add a matching icon to each idea and turn this into one row with 5 columns?

    3. You love creating, but let's face it

      I reckon this makes a FABULOUS sub-heading... I'd open the paragraph with this as the big, bold sub-heading because it draws people in.

    4. Is your creative space overflowing with papers, embellishments, and art supplies that you’ve collected over the years? Maybe it started with a few choice pieces—some vintage ephemera here, a few handmade papers there, and a handful of fabric scraps tucked into a drawer—but now, your collection has grown into a colorful, chaotic treasure trove of artistic potential. You’re a passionate artist, driven by the thrill of discovering new materials and the joy of crafting something unique. But let’s be honest—I know I’m not alone when I say that all that passion can sometimes turn into a pile of unfinished projects and unused materials. It’s easy to feel overwhelmed by the sheer amount of stuff you’ve gathered, and even easier to feel guilty about it. Sound familiar? If you’ve ever found yourself staring at your art stash, wondering how you’ll ever use everything—how you’ll ever turn it into something cohesive—you’re not alone. Many creatives face this same struggle: the desire to create something meaningful, yet the challenge of actually bringing it all together.

      Love this intro all about making the reader feel heard and seen. What if you open it with something like: Finding you here checking out this brand new resource tells me a few things about you: Your creative space is likely overflowing withpapers... You're a passionate artist ... And at some stage, you have stared at your art stash wondering...

    5. But what if you could take all those beautiful supplies and finally give them the home they deserve? A place where each piece plays a part in telling your unique artistic story. That’s exactly where BB RingDex comes in.

      I would turn this paragraph into a standalong section that pops! And make the last sentence stand out separately too...

    1. Are you ready to join other creatives like you who are ready to be inspired and encouraged in a fun and supportive community?

      I'd change this to a decision-inviting statement. Something like: This is your chance to join creatives just like you ready to be inspired and encouraged to create.

    2. Local connections. Find other members near you, plan meetups, swaps, or live call art sessions. There’s a forum dedicated to helping you make these connections—building a global yet wonderfully personal community.

      Underneath this section, I'd include a separate section that showcases some of the tangible transformations/wins/mindset shifts that popped up in your survey. I would add them in 2 rows with 5 columns each where you add an icon to each tangible win so it's easy for people to digest.

    3. really learning a lot! -Stacey Vicari

      Just before the final invite, I'd insert a section that speaks to immediate, short-term and long-term wins. You'd structure it in 3 columns titled As soon as you join..., In a month..., in 6 months... That's where you outline what they can achieve/experience/feel at each stage. It's super powerful and hopefully invites readers to opt for the annual membership because you highlight the long-term transformation.

    4. You love creating but feel stuck and need support to reignite your spark. You’re seeking fresh inspiration, accountability, and the confidence to create consistently. You’re eager to explore new mediums and techniques in a welcoming, encouraging environment. You want to learn new skills without the stress of spending a fortune on courses. You’re ready to leave behind online overwhelm and step into a real, nurturing community. You want to enjoy the creative process fully and feel proud of every step in your artistic journey You’re craving connection with fellow creatives who understand and share your passion. Your inner muse is ready to break free from the comfort zone, play without pressure, and truly believe in your art.

      I would shrink the list down to the 5 most commen denominators to make it easier to digest. Also, I'd move the you into the heading so you start each bullet point idea with a verb. Can you have a look through your survey responses to see whether there are any priceless expressions that make this section feel really tangible?

    5. The Roben’s Nest, a monthly membership led by artist Roben-Marie Smith, is your go-to community for free-spirited creatives of all levels—beginners are not just welcome, they’re celebrated!

      I would turn this into a standalone statement underneath this section so it can pop and stand out. It's easy to miss within this paragraph.

    6. Take a break to nurture your creative soul and reconnect with fellow makers in a joyful, judgment-free, and FUN online haven.

      This is where you introduce the Roben's Nest. Start the sentence with 'The Roben's Nest is your well-deserved break to nurture... this speaks to the mindset that a lot of women think they don't deserve time to themselves from yoru survey

    7. Although creative souls have more info at our fingertips than ever before (thanks, Internet) true community can be hard to find.

      And make this the subheading. It hits home!!! Possibly add 'like you' in there.

  5. Aug 2024
    1. Who this course is designed for:

      I would insert a 'what you'll walk away with' section here first.

      Something like...

      This isn't just any course. It sets you up for creative success!

      Spark your ideas Learn the steps Source your materials Silence your inner critique Take it from idea to finished project