for your friends and family
This line keeps popping up in your copy a little too much. Can you think of tangible reasons why summit attendees consider gifting? I'm thinking meaning, impact, purpose. Can you rewrite some of these phrases so they speak to these benefits?
ready to experience the joy of creating for the people you love
Ready to step up as the expert handmade gifter you were always meant to be
ideas you’ve never tried before
also make this bold
create better gifts
I'd make this bold, so it stands out
You dream of finding a way to make handmade gifts thatpeople actually love to get from you.
You dream of finding the day when your handmade gifts are a smashing success, because you love making them AND everyone loves receiving them!
think making handmade gifts takes too long
I'd make this more tangible...something like... Can't see how handmade gifts can fit into your already busy life
But…when it comes to actually making handmade gifts, you STILL feel like you need ideas.
Here, I would make it more about the doubts, lack of skills and strategies... something like... But...when it comes to turning ideas into actual gifts, your inner doubters and your lack of strategies like to get in the way.
And you’re saving them so you can find them later
And you have the best intentions to bring them to life
You’re collecting the awesome ideas
You're starting a collection of winning handmade ideas
You’re thinking about making handmade gifts and what you need to do
Can you make this more about the gift recipients here? When it comes to handmade gifts, the recipient usually determines the ideas. So something like... You're researching gift ideas to wow your favourite people.