Beat procrastination and increase focus with unlimited accountability sessions with another Untapped Brilliance Club member. Virtual-work alongside each other to beat your ADHD and get things done!

I'd also shorten this to something like:

Get personal support from me for your ADHD-related challenges and course-specific questions in our fortnightly live coaching calls. Join live, watch the replays or tune in via your private podcast feed on the run.

I'd also shorten this. Something like:

Get immediate access to my complete online course library that explores the most common challenges for people like you living with ADHD and sets you up with practical tools and techniques to get unstuck.

I would shorten this up also. Something like:

Feel organized, productive AND accomplished with a crystal clear 7-module roadmap to help manage your ADHD and get you BIG results.

I would shorten this list of bullet points to make it easier to read (even skim-read). Something like:

You will always have someone to... * Talk through a problem * Give you proven ADHD-related advice * Support you with encouragement or a confidence boost * Keep you company through hard or scary tasks * Celebrate wins (big or small) * Care about you (genuinely!)

Someone to provide a safe space that sees you and others like you build a life you love and thrive without letting your ADHD get in the way.

The must-attend virtual event specifically designed for aspiring and seasoned homesteaders

Can you be more specific when it comes to classifying and introducing your speakers. Are they experts in their field? Are they award-winning, published authors, etc?

Can you turn some of these points of differences into icons that make them easy to take in?

Specialised advice, Easy to implement. Hand-picked topics. Specific & actionable strategies. Simplify what you're already doing.

Love how you've presented your perspective as unique!

can you lead with the obstacles/pain points in this section and move the desires into the next one? It seems more organic to tease everything they're struggling with right now, and then speak to the desired outcomes in the next section.

and make it a financially & personally rewarding experience

I find this section somewhat hard to digest. Can you investigate smart formatting that bolds the first section of each idea and treats the rest as a by-line (making it easier to get the main idea)?

Learn from 25+ experts and take your cricut carfting skills to the next level for your best holiday craft seasion yet

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The 3-day virtual summit for new and experienced cricut crafters

I'd add in some of the personable snippets from your Beets Makes website about page. No need to mention what the summit delivers, but instead share a little about your motivation, how you support crafters outside of the summit, and what excites you about cricut.

Before you get into the FAQs, I'd explore everything that makes your summit different to all others in your space, and worth attending. Really go into detail as to what makes it different. Is it the format of the presentations? Is it the presenters? Is it the never-been-done-before projects?

the AMAZING

I'd move the speaker section underneath your about section and the details section to give the event context first

Move this into a separate section about your summit.

During the Holiday Crafts Summit, you'll explore 24+ projects with ...

Replace the current heading with something like: You dream of a way to actually enjoy crafting during the holiday season!

And then move this statement towards the bottom of this section leading into the details of the summit.

This doesn't fit here either following on from the struggles.

Something like: Imagine a day where cricut crafting felt easy!

I'd move this into the next section and focus on the struggles here instead (the ones you explore in the section below).

25+ expert speakers helping you make this holiday crafting season your best one yet.

I'd insert a separate line about the nature of the event, and who it's for:

The FREE must-attend online event for nursing educators ready for more creativity and motivation in the classroom

Learn xx+ game-changing active learning techniques from industry experts to boost your nursing student engagement AND motivate you to step up as the education leader in your space

I would move this section underneath the Meet the Speaker section

I'd also make it crystal clear what makes your summit different all the other summits they've possibly attended on this topic

Can you elaborate on this idea? I assume this is your paid upgrade, but I'd make it a little clearer what the credits include

How long will they have access for?

Can you include here the benefit of having the summit spread out over 2 weeks? They're busy, and it takes time to digest the learnings as part of their busy educator lives

Can you reword this slightly to hook people in this section and make them read it?

What to expect at this Event

Love this section, I would just include a reference to your business, and how you support nurse educators outside of this summit

The same goes for the other ideas in this section. I'd combine them into one sentence as body copy.

I find the formatting somewhat overwhelming in this section. Can you make this heading a part of the body copy below and combine it into one?

"Keep your students active, engaged and invested in their learning even during a 3-hour session."

How are they currently trying to make their content stick?

Can you add a bullet point list here of things they're currently doing?

Can you elaborate on the transformation that comes from mastering the software? What they really want isn't mastering the software, they want the results that come with it.

Is it creating with ease? Is it creating quickly? Is it bringing their ideas to life without stress and overwhelm?

This section really only needs a short and sharp sentence about the nature of the speakers, what makes them experts, and how they will support your summit attendees.

Move this one into the section above and really hone in on who your ideal summit attendee is. You can use the current struggles and the things they hope for from further up on your page as inspiration.

I have a feeling there might be other summits about cricut out there. Do they need another generic cricut event talking about basic things?

You don't need another event touching on the basics of cricut.

Thankfully, this summit is anything but basic.

We'll take you through the full process from start to finish using the no.1 cricut software so you can confidently design AND create your next project in no time.

Really hone in on the unique nature of your summit here.

Is it the only summit that specifically teaches everything about design space? Is it the only event specifically designed for cricut crafters?

Make this headline really strong and compelling so your summit becomes the must-attend event.

Seeing that you don't have your bio yet, I'd touch on why you had the idea for this event, how it's relevant to what you do, and touch on your personal journey (and frustrations) with cricut

Can you change this up slightly so it speaks to the transformation. Something like:

We'll take you from frustrated and overwhelmed to the calm and collected cricut crafter who can bring ideas to life with ease.

Is this really a struggle?

Change this idea up slightly so it's consistent with the format of the other ideas. You're struggling with...

Move this bullet point list further down on the page underneath the 'how would it feel' section because it doesn't sit right in this section.

This section needs to speak to some of the misconceptions your summit attendees might be having right now, and how they're currently trying to get around the questions, roadblocks and obstacles holding them back from creating with ease.

something like:

Designing and bringing your dream cricut creations to life takes a whole lot more than your creativity.

I know you're doing your best to navigate your machine, software and the many moving pieces that go with it...

...but you're still a long way from being the confident cricut crafter you aspire to be.

Really hone in on the tangibles obstacles and hurdles in this section.

Again, really think about why attendees need to master this system, and what the outcomes will be. Make it tangible!

Can you be more specific here? Is it for beginners only or aspiring and experienced cricut crafters?

Have a think about the 'what's in it for them?'. Why is it beneficial for them to use Cricut Design Space? What are the outcomes? What becomes easier/better/a no-brainer once you know how to use Cricut Design Space?

Something like:

Let's demystify Cricut Design Space together so you can finally start crafting with joy, confidence and ease.

I'd change this to read 'at 50% off' to make it crystal clear

I'd move the timer from underneath the video to this spot because it fits nicely with the 96% savings promise

I would make this more tangible also and add some more variation. Possibly speaking to actually taking their gifts from idea to actual gift!

As per your sign-up page, have a think about what makes the handmade gifts unique that they're going to be completing after this summit (and with the all access pass)

Have a think about any other adjectives you can add here to give it even more oomph. Easier, smarter, effortlessly, etc?

I wouldn't overdo the timers. Possibly skip this one because you have one just before this video.

I would make it very clear that the sessions teach an actual craft project ready for attendees to bring to life. I currently can't tell this from the blurb.

The Become a Handmade Boss Summit will give you REAL ideas and the matching step-by-step process to help you step away from your Pinterest board and start creating instead.

Can you make this more about the learnings within the presentations? From what I can tell, a lot of them unpack actual craft projects. So try to make it super clear that they'll watch 10 expert crafters as they explore practical gifting ideas from start to finish.

Watch the video below to learn how this free event will set you up with 10 REAL handmade gift ideas (and the expert-taught step-by-step instructions).

A 3-day virtual event for aspiring handmade gift-makers ready to take action!

Take your gifting game from DULL to INSPIRED, and explore 10 AMAZING handmade gift ideas your friends and family will love!

You're ready to step up as the expert gifter you were always mean to be.

I would again highlight that they'll walk away with 10 REAL gift ideas to fast-track their gifting adventures

I'd make this section more about the takeaways and that they'll walk away with actual gift ideas complete with instructions so they can make them happen right away, and get a head-start on their handmade xmas gifting journey. Where other summits might give you ideas, this summit takes you through a project from start to finish with the expert guidance of experience crafters.

Love that you're calling this out! Great incentive to sign up.

This line keeps popping up in your copy a little too much. Can you think of tangible reasons why summit attendees consider gifting? I'm thinking meaning, impact, purpose. Can you rewrite some of these phrases so they speak to these benefits?

Ready to step up as the expert handmade gifter you were always meant to be

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I'd make this bold, so it stands out

You dream of finding the day when your handmade gifts are a smashing success, because you love making them AND everyone loves receiving them!

I'd make this more tangible...something like... Can't see how handmade gifts can fit into your already busy life

Here, I would make it more about the doubts, lack of skills and strategies... something like... But...when it comes to turning ideas into actual gifts, your inner doubters and your lack of strategies like to get in the way.

And you have the best intentions to bring them to life

You're starting a collection of winning handmade ideas

Can you make this more about the gift recipients here? When it comes to handmade gifts, the recipient usually determines the ideas. So something like... You're researching gift ideas to wow your favourite people.