Move this bullet point list further down on the page underneath the 'how would it feel' section because it doesn't sit right in this section.

This section needs to speak to some of the misconceptions your summit attendees might be having right now, and how they're currently trying to get around the questions, roadblocks and obstacles holding them back from creating with ease.

something like:

Designing and bringing your dream cricut creations to life takes a whole lot more than your creativity.

I know you're doing your best to navigate your machine, software and the many moving pieces that go with it...

...but you're still a long way from being the confident cricut crafter you aspire to be.

Really hone in on the tangibles obstacles and hurdles in this section.

Again, really think about why attendees need to master this system, and what the outcomes will be. Make it tangible!

Can you be more specific here? Is it for beginners only or aspiring and experienced cricut crafters?

Have a think about the 'what's in it for them?'. Why is it beneficial for them to use Cricut Design Space? What are the outcomes? What becomes easier/better/a no-brainer once you know how to use Cricut Design Space?

Something like:

Let's demystify Cricut Design Space together so you can finally start crafting with joy, confidence and ease.

I'd change this to read 'at 50% off' to make it crystal clear

I'd move the timer from underneath the video to this spot because it fits nicely with the 96% savings promise

I would make this more tangible also and add some more variation. Possibly speaking to actually taking their gifts from idea to actual gift!

As per your sign-up page, have a think about what makes the handmade gifts unique that they're going to be completing after this summit (and with the all access pass)

Have a think about any other adjectives you can add here to give it even more oomph. Easier, smarter, effortlessly, etc?

I wouldn't overdo the timers. Possibly skip this one because you have one just before this video.

I would make it very clear that the sessions teach an actual craft project ready for attendees to bring to life. I currently can't tell this from the blurb.

The Become a Handmade Boss Summit will give you REAL ideas and the matching step-by-step process to help you step away from your Pinterest board and start creating instead.

Can you make this more about the learnings within the presentations? From what I can tell, a lot of them unpack actual craft projects. So try to make it super clear that they'll watch 10 expert crafters as they explore practical gifting ideas from start to finish.

Watch the video below to learn how this free event will set you up with 10 REAL handmade gift ideas (and the expert-taught step-by-step instructions).

A 3-day virtual event for aspiring handmade gift-makers ready to take action!

Take your gifting game from DULL to INSPIRED, and explore 10 AMAZING handmade gift ideas your friends and family will love!

You're ready to step up as the expert gifter you were always mean to be.

I would again highlight that they'll walk away with 10 REAL gift ideas to fast-track their gifting adventures

I'd make this section more about the takeaways and that they'll walk away with actual gift ideas complete with instructions so they can make them happen right away, and get a head-start on their handmade xmas gifting journey. Where other summits might give you ideas, this summit takes you through a project from start to finish with the expert guidance of experience crafters.

Love that you're calling this out! Great incentive to sign up.

This line keeps popping up in your copy a little too much. Can you think of tangible reasons why summit attendees consider gifting? I'm thinking meaning, impact, purpose. Can you rewrite some of these phrases so they speak to these benefits?

Ready to step up as the expert handmade gifter you were always meant to be

also make this bold

I'd make this bold, so it stands out

You dream of finding the day when your handmade gifts are a smashing success, because you love making them AND everyone loves receiving them!

I'd make this more tangible...something like... Can't see how handmade gifts can fit into your already busy life

Here, I would make it more about the doubts, lack of skills and strategies... something like... But...when it comes to turning ideas into actual gifts, your inner doubters and your lack of strategies like to get in the way.

And you have the best intentions to bring them to life

You're starting a collection of winning handmade ideas

Can you make this more about the gift recipients here? When it comes to handmade gifts, the recipient usually determines the ideas. So something like... You're researching gift ideas to wow your favourite people.