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  1. Aug 2023
    1. Here are the projects you can follow along with and learn how to make yourselfat the Become a Handmade Gift Boss Summit!

      I would again highlight that they'll walk away with 10 REAL gift ideas to fast-track their gifting adventures

    2. This isn’t just a summit for crafters, it is a summit serving crafters who want to use their skills to make handmade gifts for their friends and family. It’s for crafters who need a little hand-holding

      I'd make this section more about the takeaways and that they'll walk away with actual gift ideas complete with instructions so they can make them happen right away, and get a head-start on their handmade xmas gifting journey. Where other summits might give you ideas, this summit takes you through a project from start to finish with the expert guidance of experience crafters.

    3. for your friends and family

      This line keeps popping up in your copy a little too much. Can you think of tangible reasons why summit attendees consider gifting? I'm thinking meaning, impact, purpose. Can you rewrite some of these phrases so they speak to these benefits?

    4. You dream of finding a way to make handmade gifts thatpeople actually love to get from you.

      You dream of finding the day when your handmade gifts are a smashing success, because you love making them AND everyone loves receiving them!

    5. But…when it comes to actually making handmade gifts, you STILL feel like you need ideas.

      Here, I would make it more about the doubts, lack of skills and strategies... something like... But...when it comes to turning ideas into actual gifts, your inner doubters and your lack of strategies like to get in the way.

    6. You’re thinking about making handmade gifts and what you need to do

      Can you make this more about the gift recipients here? When it comes to handmade gifts, the recipient usually determines the ideas. So something like... You're researching gift ideas to wow your favourite people.