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  1. May 2026
    1. with practical and actionable trainings to help you conquer the mid-year slump and eliminate curriculum overload to foster a thriving music program.

      consider getting rid of this!

    2. Where you'll trade the anxiety of missing sessions for the freedom to

      Get ongoing access to all summit sessions, and BONUS high-quality professional resources to confidently engage your classroom the entire school year!

    3. If you're determined about exchanging your post-holiday exhaustion for a clear plan to finish the school year strong, you'll love the All-Access Pass.

      Decrease the width, and step away from All Caps here too

    1. walk into the second semester refreshed and ready to reignite student engagement through music.

      I actually would be more specific here and repurpose somethign from further down on the page.:

      Discover new practical skills, innovative lesson ideas, and specialized strategies to conquer behavior management and revitalize your mid-year curriculum.

    2. MEET YOUR SPEAKERS

      Is there a way to split them up into themed days? That way you can intro each theme day with a short blurb to give it more context. I would also add the speaker topic in this list for more context and to build excitement for what's to come.

    3. gain practical skills, innovative lesson ideas, and specialized strategies to conquer behavior management and revitalize your mid-year curriculum.

      Genereally have a look whether you can reduce the width on some of these sections so people don't have to read screen edge to screen edge.

    4. You’re doing the hard work of managing hundreds of students across multiple grade levels, diligently seeking new ideas, and attempting to align curriculum standards.

      I would turn this into easier-to-read bullet points

    5. Watch the video below to learn how this FREE event will help you exchange second-semester exhaustion for the powerful, content-specific knowledge you need to finish the year strong.

      I would also remove the All Caps here, and change the text to 'watch this video' so it correctly references the position. ;-)

  2. Apr 2026
    1. - You don’t need - brand-new systems every month.- You do need - a clear way to decide whether your classroom needs more structure or more spark, and how to easily restore balance.

      Again, very AI-typical and this structure features quite a bit on the page already. It's not this, but this. You don't need this, but this.

    2. This isn’t about doing more..css-1c9e5nj{height:0;width:100%;margin:12px 0;border:none;border-bottom-width:5px;border-bottom-color:rgb(253,45,151);border-bottom-style:solid;}It’s about knowing what matters right now — and putting your energy there. Classroom management isn’t about finding the perfect strategy once and hoping it lasts. It’s about noticing when student needs shiftand making small, timely adjustments to restore the balance.

      I'd remove this and get straight into the introducing the Club section

    1. Live Events, Workshops & Experiences

      I would remove the categories and simply list the resources in order of 'most valuable' to 'least valuable' so people can't miss the highest-profile bonuses. Also, list the value of each bonus in this section so it's crystal clear.

    2. Check out the Premium Bonuses

      I would give this a little more context with a short intro paragraph. Something along these lines: With these amazing resources, you can keep up the momentum and commit to your craft well beyond our time together during this summit.

    3. You will have ongoing access to the presentations to revise anytime at your own pace.

      I would give more detail around the length of the access here. Is it at least 12 months? Lifetime?

    4. What’s Included:—> Bonus One Example—> Bonus Two Example—> Bonus Three Example

      Make sure to also include more details around the ongoing access here on top of the bonuses

    5. —together representing hundreds of dollars in added value.

      I would drop this into a separate line, and specifically spell out the total value of the extra resources once they're finalised.

    6. Together, these offerings represent several hundred dollars in value.

      I would bold this line and drop it into a separate line so it stands out more. Plus, once you have the total value of all the extra resources, I'd make this more specific.

    7. Get ongoing access to every conversation, plus a curated collection of bonus resources, tools, and live experiences from our speakers designed to help you move your story forward—together representing hundreds of dollars in added value.

      I would centre this on the page

  3. Mar 2026
    1. If the button doesn’t see

      I wouldn't add this line underneath every button because it adds too much clutter on the page. Leave it here, then underneath your bio, and underneath the final section button on the page

    2. If the button doesn’t seem to work, please turn off any pop-up blockers so you can see the form once the button is clicked. Thx!

      Make sure this writing doesn't overlap the graphic

    3. A 3 day virtual event for Cricut, Silhouette and other electronic cutting machine users to learn new techniques to improve their card making skills.

      Update this so it reflects the final tagline you run with at the top of the page.

    4. Have Questions? We've Got Answers

      Can you break this up into 2 clear lines where 'Have questions?' sits on the first line, and 'We've got the answers' sits on the second line somewhat smaller in size?

    5. <img loading="lazy" decoding="async" width="66" height="66" src="https://cardmakingwithsvgs.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/03/3_icon.avif" class="attachment-large size-large wp-image-4932 lazyload" alt="" />Discover new materials, techniques and more to make your SVG cards stand out from the rest.

      Make sure you keep the fonts consistent :)

    6. <img loading="lazy" decoding="async" width="1024" height="1024" src="https://cardmakingwithsvgs.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/02/6-2-1024x1024.avif" class="attachment-large size-large wp-image-4540 lazyload" alt="" srcset="https://cardmakingwithsvgs.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/02/6-2-1024x1024.avif 1024w, https://cardmakingwithsvgs.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/02/6-2-300x300.avif 300w, https://cardmakingwithsvgs.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/02/6-2-150x150.avif 150w, https://cardmakingwithsvgs.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/02/6-2-768x768.avif 768w, https://cardmakingwithsvgs.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/02/6-2.avif 1080w" sizes="(max-width: 1024px) 100vw, 1024px" />Katherine McCrory from Katherine Learns StuffNever Ending Congratulations Card <img loading="lazy" decoding="async" width="1024" height="1024" src="https://cardmakingwithsvgs.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/02/2026-Speaker-Project-Image-Template-1-1024x1024.png" class="attachment-large size-large wp-image-4582 lazyload" alt="" srcset="https://cardmakingwithsvgs.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/02/2026-Speaker-Project-Image-Template-1-1024x1024.png 1024w, https://cardmakingwithsvgs.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/02/2026-Speaker-Project-Image-Template-1-300x300.avif 300w, https://cardmakingwithsvgs.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/02/2026-Speaker-Project-Image-Template-1-150x150.png 150w, https://cardmakingwithsvgs.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/02/2026-Speaker-Project-Image-Template-1-768x768.png 768w, https://cardmakingwithsvgs.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/02/2026-Speaker-Project-Image-Template-1.avif 1080w" sizes="(max-width: 1024px) 100vw, 1024px" />Bette Daoust from Bettes MakesEasy Slider Valentine Card

      Can you centre these two on the page?

    7. <img loading="lazy" decoding="async" width="59" height="59" src="https://cardmakingwithsvgs.com/wp-content/uploads/2026/03/x_icon.avif" class="attachment-thumbnail size-thumbnail wp-image-4885 lazyload" alt="" />Despite your best efforts, your ideas just won’t come together – there’s something missing, but what?

      Can you turn this into a bold statement underneath the bullet point list? It doesn't really fit within the list, and it's a great transition to the next section.

    8. A 3 day virtual event for Cricut, Silhouette and other electronic cutting machine users to learn new techniques to improve their card making skills.

      Learn new techniques for Cricut, Silhouette and other electronic cutting machines, and blend them with traditional techniques in this free 3-day event!

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      Same here... I had a Convertbox banner asking me to download the Writhing Wheel for free. I would exclude these pages from any Convertboxes other than timers for what you're selling. :)

    1. Potentially exclude this page from Convertbox banners. I had the Kingdom Writers Conference banner pop up as I landed on the page. It might distract from your main message on the page.

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    2. Check out the videos below to discover what you'll learn!

      I would change this to "Here's a preview of what expects you in each of the 4 courses:"and make it the heading for the next section

    3. Want to master tablet interpreting on your iPad?You've come to the right place!

      The ultimate 4-course Bundle for interpreters who want to use their iPad to work smarter & be far more productive

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    2. Plus, learn to stay in touch with colleagues during remote interpreting assignments in our BONUS MODULE on tech-savvy communication beyond walls!Want to check out a few lessons before enrolling? Just click on the "Preview" buttons in the course curriculum below.

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    2. Plus, it includes two bonus lessons to up your symbol game and use handwriting recognition on your tablet.Want to check out a few lessons before enrolling? Watch the video below to discover what you'll learn, or click on the "Preview" buttons in the course curriculum below to watch a preview

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    3. Have you ever wondered whetheryou could take consecutive notes on your iPad?

      Yes, it's absolutely possible to take consecutive notes on your iPad!

      Also make this bigger!

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    2. It also includes a bonus module where you'll learn you to set up glossaries and use your tablet to study terms before an assignment.

      BONUS LESSON

      Learn how to set up glossaries and use your tablet to study terms before an assignment.

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  4. Feb 2026
    1. ender moments too.

      Again, I would add a super strong closing sentence here that touches on the event promise: This free event will help you/show you/introduce you to/...

    2. A free 4-day event for Mothers of Preschoolers

      I would stick with the tagline/event promise you brainstormed with the team here for a stronger intro section: Join 20+ Christian moms and mentors to discover how to connect with God - even in the chaos of motherhood, when having a "perfect" quiet time isn't an option.

    3. If you’re longing for encouragement right where you are

      This summit is for any preschooler mom looking to xyz. I would add a summarizing sentence here that makes the browser totally seen. And I would add another button to grab the free ticket here.

    4. I know firsthand how hard it can be to find quiet moments with God in this season. Between snack times, story times, and endless questions, I’ve had to learn that spending time with God doesn’t have to look perfect to be meaningful.

      Can you elaborate here what that has looked like specifically for you, and why you're so excited to share these 20+ experts with the audience?

    5. Fill your spare moments with GodLearn to embrace the busyChoose an imperfect quiet time reading the Bible, over none at allWhether that be listening to the audio version of the Bible while doing the dishes.Understanding that God is still there in the busiest of moments and He sees everything you are pouring into your family.Whatever your quiet time looked like before, it has to change when children come into the scene. It may not be a "quiet" ti

      Can you make this section somewhat more specifically linked to the outcome/promise of your summit? What are they hoping right now that will actually be possible for them after attending your summit?

    6. You're trying to read the Bible between the spilled Cheerios and laundryKeeping in mind that motherhood is one of greatest blessingsAnd you are thinking about God in the hardest of moments

      I would make these bullet points somewhat more tangible and relatable. Cheerios and laundry is a great start, but what about the other 2? What's actually happening in their daily lives right now that would make them proud?

    7. seek god in the busy (preschooler) season

      This seems to be repeated from the video intro line. Why don't we rephrase this to somethign like: Yes, you can walk with God while raising little kids!

    1. journeys.

      I would add one final emotive paragraph underneath your bio as a final push. Something along the lines of 'Imagine having...' or 'What if...'. You want to catch anyone who's taken the time to scroll down the page without signing up. Paint a vivid picture of what unschooling can look like, and that this summit is their window into this alternative way of schooling.

    2. ns and live workshops.

      If your speakers have been feautured in recognisable publications or media outlets, you could include a small trust section here... As featured by:

    3. Welcome to The Unschooling Summit, a space to explore how you and your child can live, learn and thrive!

      The Unschooling Summit is your space to explore how you and your child can live, learn and thrive!

    4. s

      In terms of the video... is there a way to remove the black frame at the top of and the bottom to make it look more visually appealing and also reduce the size of the video section?

    5. International Speakers - Live Roundtables - Workshops - Community Sessions

      I wonder whether turning this into a 'trust bar' with matching icons for each idea makes these ideas pop even more

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    1. This isn’t “more content.” It’s a better experience.

      The Thriving Toolkit allows you to go even deeper with ongoing access, additional action guides and juicy speaker bonuses.

    2. IF YOU WANT SUPPORT THAT FITS REAL LIFE

      This is your chance to access even more real-life resources & strategies to make your life as a mum easier.

      You don't need more pressure or "shoulds". This Toolkit gives you peace of mind and totally doable action steps you can implement beyond this Summit.

    1. Join 30+ experts to learn practical, trauma-informed strategies and innovative interventions to address the systemic and developmental roots of complex trauma.

      Tagline suggestions to make it tighter and less wordy: -Learn practical, innovative strategies from 30+ experts to transform how you support complex trauma. -Learn practical, innovative strategies from 30+ experts to address the underlying roots of complex trauma. -30+ experts share practical & innovative strategies to help you target the root causes of complex trauma.

    1. sing or support.

      I would end on an emotive paragraph that sells the transformation. Imagine having... What if you had...

      How can you highlight how transformative this free experience can be, and what it will do to their confidence and yoga practice in the long run?

    2. Evidence-Based Practice: Understand specific yoga protocols for various health conditions to enhance your personal practice and teaching.Customized Approach: Gain insights into yoga’s core elements for tailored, effective practice.Advocacy & Integration: Build a scientific foundation to support yoga’s integration in schools, healthcare, prisons, and more.Critical Analysis: Develop the skills to independently access, evaluate, and interpret scientific research, so you can overcome misinformation.Collaboration & Growth: Connect with fellow yogis and scientists, opening doors for career advancement and future research collaborations.

      Can you turn this into a column layout with matching icon for each idea so it's easier to digest?

    3. Yoga + Schools and Neurodiversity — behavior, mental health, academic performance, autism, and ADHD Yoga + Migraine and Headache — frequency, intensity, duration, disability, and autonomic functionYoga + Brain Longevity® — memory, attention, and aging

      I would save this for further down on the page where you explore the 3 aspects in great detail

    4. Calling all who are curious about yoga!

      I would move this line up above the 'LEARN THE ACTUAL SCIENCE BEHIND..." heading so it's clear who this event is targeting.

    1. If you are ready to:Create scroll-stopping course content that feel like experiences, not lecturesTranslate your big ideas into binge-worthy learning momentsBorrow (lovingly) from the best of adult-learning psychologyBuild a program that lets you breathe, think, and enjoy what you do...then sign up and fall in love with Thursdays all over again!

      delete

    2. Read a sample newsletterJust smart strategy, irreverent honesty, and the occasional spicy rant when someone suggests “just add more lessons.”

      I would also consider deleting this section.

    3. Make Thursdays Your New Creative Playground ✨(think smarter modules, spicy insights, & full-on nerd fun!)Introducing The Course Spark:A weekly newsletter to stretch your mind, turn 'good enough' courses into Netflix-level experiences, and call forth your inner learning designer in an even bolder way!

      I would centre this as a strong intro on the page.

    4. Every week, you’ll get one small but mighty spark:

      I would drop this paragraph down in a new visual section. Centre the heading, and add 3 columns underneath with each idea.

  6. Jan 2026