I'd add 'cancel any time' here just to make it clear

I would include the Acadamy logo or even the inclusion mockup here so there's a visual that draws the reader in.

Could you include timestamps/chapters so people have an idea of what to expect before tuning in?

Same here... I had a Convertbox banner asking me to download the Writhing Wheel for free. I would exclude these pages from any Convertboxes other than timers for what you're selling. :)

Can you give a little more context here around the exercise to make it a little juicier? ;-) Format, what's involved, etc.

Potentially exclude this page from Convertbox banners. I had the Kingdom Writers Conference banner pop up as I landed on the page. It might distract from your main message on the page.

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I would change this to "Here's a preview of what expects you in each of the 4 courses:"and make it the heading for the next section

4-course Bundle

The ultimate 4-course Bundle for interpreters who want to use their iPad to work smarter & be far more productive

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What expects you inside:

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make your iPad the perfect sidekick for your simultaneous interpreting.

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This course will help you achieve just that!

What if your iPad became the cornerstone of your next big productivity boost?

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What expects you inside:

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I this hands-on workshop, I'll show you how.

Yes, it's absolutely possible to take consecutive notes on your iPad!

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go paperless when preparing for interpreting assingments:

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What expects you inside?

BONUS LESSON

Learn how to set up glossaries and use your tablet to study terms before an assignment.

this is the course for you!

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hands-on workshop

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How many videos?

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Plus these bonus resources:

I would include the reduced pricetag in the bar at the top of the page. Also, can you format it so it goes from screen edge to screen edge?

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Because life gets busy!

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This exclusive upgrade

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Get ongoing access to all Summit sessions, plus

in between playdates, nappy changes and all the other things that come with parenting a pre-schooler.

Make sure you do a spell-check on the page ;-)

Again, I would add a super strong closing sentence here that touches on the event promise: This free event will help you/show you/introduce you to/...

I would stick with the tagline/event promise you brainstormed with the team here for a stronger intro section: Join 20+ Christian moms and mentors to discover how to connect with God - even in the chaos of motherhood, when having a "perfect" quiet time isn't an option.

Make sure the button CTA is consistent throughout the page: Grab your free ticket

This summit is for any preschooler mom looking to xyz. I would add a summarizing sentence here that makes the browser totally seen. And I would add another button to grab the free ticket here.

Why not? What makes this summit unique and super valuable?

I would pull the speakers for each day into these day sections with their topic so people know what exactly awaits them.

Can you elaborate here what that has looked like specifically for you, and why you're so excited to share these 20+ experts with the audience?

Can you make this section somewhat more specifically linked to the outcome/promise of your summit? What are they hoping right now that will actually be possible for them after attending your summit?

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feels much harder than before kids.

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I would make these bullet points somewhat more tangible and relatable. Cheerios and laundry is a great start, but what about the other 2? What's actually happening in their daily lives right now that would make them proud?

This seems to be repeated from the video intro line. Why don't we rephrase this to somethign like: Yes, you can walk with God while raising little kids!

I would add one final emotive paragraph underneath your bio as a final push. Something along the lines of 'Imagine having...' or 'What if...'. You want to catch anyone who's taken the time to scroll down the page without signing up. Paint a vivid picture of what unschooling can look like, and that this summit is their window into this alternative way of schooling.

I would stick to the lighter button colour you've used towards the top of the page so they pop more. It's easy to miss them because they blend in.

Could you have one line for each day that sets the scene around the day's topic (if you have one)?

Your expert sessions

If your speakers have been feautured in recognisable publications or media outlets, you could include a small trust section here... As featured by:

Your expert lineup

The Unschooling Summit is your space to explore how you and your child can live, learn and thrive!

In terms of the video... is there a way to remove the black frame at the top of and the bottom to make it look more visually appealing and also reduce the size of the video section?

I wonder whether turning this into a 'trust bar' with matching icons for each idea makes these ideas pop even more

The Thriving Toolkit allows you to go even deeper with ongoing access, additional action guides and juicy speaker bonuses.

Unlock even more resources & strategies from our expert speakers (beyond what you learn as part of the summit!)

the actionable expert strategies

your chance to make this summit even more transformational for you and your family.

This is your chance to access even more real-life resources & strategies to make your life as a mum easier.

You don't need more pressure or "shoulds". This Toolkit gives you peace of mind and totally doable action steps you can implement beyond this Summit.

I would attach a dollar value to every inclusion as you list it rather than repeating each resource here.

Remove the inclusions list.

Grab the Thriving Toolkit now!

...for only $87 (strikethrough) $47. Save over 40%!

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For the next 30 minutes only, you can grab...

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I would delete this line and centre 'You're in'

give you even more support when...

Tagline suggestions to make it tighter and less wordy: -Learn practical, innovative strategies from 30+ experts to transform how you support complex trauma. -Learn practical, innovative strategies from 30+ experts to address the underlying roots of complex trauma. -30+ experts share practical & innovative strategies to help you target the root causes of complex trauma.

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and elevate your yoga practice.

I would end on an emotive paragraph that sells the transformation. Imagine having... What if you had...

How can you highlight how transformative this free experience can be, and what it will do to their confidence and yoga practice in the long run?

update the FAQs from last year

Can you touch on the combination of theoretical AND practical components here?

Can you turn this into a column layout with matching icon for each idea so it's easier to digest?

and yoga enthusiasts

I would save this for further down on the page where you explore the 3 aspects in great detail

I would move this line up above the 'LEARN THE ACTUAL SCIENCE BEHIND..." heading so it's clear who this event is targeting.

I would move the date into the white header section so the date is front and centre

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I would also consider deleting this section.

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I would centre this as a strong intro on the page.

Can you possibly incorporate your photo into the header so it doesn't take up extra space on the sign-up page?

I would drop this paragraph down in a new visual section. Centre the heading, and add 3 columns underneath with each idea.

in my 10th year participating

I would add another button here that takes people to the last bottom section of the page: Yes, I want one!

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This updated version of the Companion

will love this companion if...

We could add another bullet point: Boost your translation productivity (without using source text)

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I would move this underneath the photo and make it bold and centre it. I'd also introduce it with PLUS:

The FREE Website Glow-Up Guide you're about to grab...

Finding you here tells me a few things about you:

add the page count here so it sounds as robust as it is!

If that's not happening right now... you're in the right spot!

Creating a professional visual brand identity will make your website even more impactful. Thankfully, it's easier than you think. And you don’t need hours or a design degree!

Add the Branding Challenge now to give your website the professional edge and get noticed for the RIGHT reasons!

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and lands you dream clients

Add these bullet points from the cart page: Ask your questions and get support in the LIVE Challenge Community Join the LIVE Website Coworking Session to create your website design and copy together. Wednesday, January 14 from 3-4 PM CET. Join the LIVE Website Critiques and get feedback on your website from professional graphic designer Clàudia Orengo. Wednesday, January 28th from 5-6 PM CET

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Join the next LIVE round from January 12-31, 2026!

Tackle the 9 steps during the LIVE experience with my support, and guest expert feedback for your website in a LIVE session with designer Clàudia Orengo on January 28! Plus: Ask your questions and get support in the LIVE Challenge Community any time.

add in below: The next LIVE round kicks off on January, 12-31!

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I would add a 'Imagine' section before you introduce the membership. Imagine what life would be like with consistent time for yourself. Where you feel calmer, more in tune with yourself, and you've escaped the hamster wheel of life... all thanks to doable, on-demand resources to prioritize yourself.

Make sure you scatter testimonials from members across the page so they organically pop up as people scroll

I would eleborate on each of these ideas and again touch on the so what

Can you turn this section into a preview of what's ahead? As soon as you join... after a month... after 3 months

I would elaborate on each of these points and answer the 'so what'? Why does each of these idea matter?

I would bold this entire sentence

I'm not sure they know they need to be consistent. I would start with the obvious here: You know you crave more moments of self-care, but you have no idea where to start. Am I right?

The self-care membership that gives you the exact tools to start your self-care journey and fall in love with a sustainable practice that suits your busy schedule

I would remove this bit and incorporate the price into the button copy 'Join the Studio for $19/month'

I'd change this to AFTER THE LIVE WORKSHOP

Above this section, I would feature testimonials from past workshop attendees. Intro the section with: This isn't the first workshop we've hosted...

again, I'd elaborate on how long they get replay access for

I would remove these because you elaborate beautifully on each inclusion in the section below.

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You're in the right place! This workshop will help you stop overthinking and give you a simple, doable path forward.

Raise your hand if you...

Can you elaborate on how long they get access to the replay for? Lifetime? Ongoing?

Add this question: How does the LIVE challenge work?

Every Monday, Wednesday and Friday I’ll prompt you with a new lesson.

Every lesson includes: - A bite-sized video to watch - A prompt to work on one specific component of your website

You can also get guest expert feedback for your website in a LIVE session!

Plus: Ask your questions and get support in the LIVE Challenge Community.

Can't make it live? Catch the replay shortly after the LIVE sesisons.

The next LIVE round is happening from January, 12-31!

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Join us for the next LIVE round from January 12-31, 2026!

The next LIVE round is happening from January, 12-31!

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Join us for the next LIVE round from January 12-31, 2026!

The next LIVE round is happening: January 12-31, 2026

What if the frustration (or even shame) of school challenges could be a thing of the past?

Your online destination for school navigation support & strategies to overcome academic challenges

I help frustrated families build tailored roadmaps for school success.

Before you get into your about section, I would list out the 3 options you want to steer people towards and specifically call out (one 1:1 offer, your best-selling low-ticket resource, yoru membership, and your checklist freebie). Then have a button underneath to 'Check out all my offers' (linking to your work with me page).

Move this right underneath the 'How my coaching packages...' section.

How my coaching packages & resources can help parents like you

I would move this logo bar up right underneath the header/above the fold section. As for the podcast features, could you move them into the about page?

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Button copy: JOIN ME FREE AT MY ART TABLE

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with this FREE 7-minute behind-the-scenes video

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...and get BONUS $50 in credit towards one of our courses AND $50 in Lindsey Does Languages Credit.

That's $100 in extra opportunities!

Underneath any button from here onwards, add a line 'Cancel any time!'

Replicate the changes from the header section here

I would also add a button at the bottom of this section so people don't miss it

only $99/year

Move the timer up underneath 'Join before this timer...'

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Make this slightly smaller so it doesn't take up as much space.

Can you add a short section above this final invite to join that touches on the promise on the course? 'This course will take you from x to y/ This program will help you.../ Imagine being having all the resources and guicance to confidenctly ...

This is really hard to read, and I'm actually not sure it adds anything. So possibly remove it?

I would move this section with the logos up right underneath the other 'about' section

Ongoing access to

for personal feedback and guidance