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Raves for the BB Bash
As for the final nudge, what about something like...
Imagine having 14 days to chip away at not only your skills but also your mindset?
What would it mean to you to finally stop procrastinating and doubting everything you create and LOVE the entire process instead?
Join myself and a community of fellow creatives at this transformative LIVE experience.
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What are you waiting for? Sign up now!
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If you're nodding along, you belong here.
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You don’t need fancy supplies, loads of time, or a clear plan. All it takes is your willingness to show up and see what happens.
I'd slot in testimonials under this section
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Will live sessions be recorded?
Can you mention here how long these replays will be available on the free ticket?
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Anyone who’s tired of feeling stuck and wants to break through creative blocks.
I'd move this down so it's the last bullet point
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→ A Live Call to introduce the theme and spark ideas→ A Pre-Recorded Video where I show you my personal approach→ A Hands-On Exercise
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This is your chance to explore new creative concepts—things like repetition, scraps, detail, and layering—through live calls, actionable prompts, and pre-recorded art videos where I show you exactly how I approach each theme. No pressure, no rules—just you, your supplies, and a whole lot of possibility.
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Your art pra
Can you add one more sentence here that sets the scene and picks up on this idea?
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experienced artist looking to shake things up or someone who just wants to start
I'm tempted to also mention this right underneath the "A FREE 14-Day Art Journaling...."
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possibly center this?
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live calls, actionable prompts, and pre-recorded art videos
I'd make this bold and italic
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Creativity
Loooove this opener!
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**Look for events with red borders to see the unique events you'll get by upgrading.**
Make sure this is centered on the page as well as the line above
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What students who upgraded in the past have to say
I'd move this up on the page right underneath the intro section so it doesn't separate the online and in-person inclusions.
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In-Person experience*
I would list this in a separate visual section so it's clearly distingueshed from the inclusions in both passes. Set the scenes with something like: The in-person experience also gives you access to:
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The Lifetime-Access Pass ONLINE allows students to maximize learning, and is designed for lifelong learners. Repetition reinforces knowledge, and having ongoing access to the presentations means students will be able to refer back to them regularly to solidify what they have learned. You will also benefit from other bonuses including workbooks, quizzes, and transcriptions to turn passive listening into active learning. Lastly, yoga teachers will be eligible for 30 hours of Yoga Alliance and 30 hours of International Association of Yoga Therapist Continuing Education Credit with this option. The Lifetime-Access Pass IN-PERSON includes everything in the Lifetime-Access Pass ONLINE, but adds a retreat like experience taking place in person in Jersey City during the conference. Join for community, structured learning time, and a bit of relaxation, too
I would condense this section so it's crystal clear even for skim-readers. I'd simply go with something like... Both Upgrade options include:
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I would list this underneath on a separate row so it pops on the page. Possibly even add a logo to each option.
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By upgrading, you are able
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You can save $100 on upgrades for the next 30 minutes.
I assume you'll have a timer on the page so I would remove this sentence because it's covered in the button copy
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Lifetime-Access Pass ONLINE or our Lifetime-Access Pass IN-PERSON.
upgrade options.
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Ready to fall in love with paper planning?
I'd plant some seed here in a separte section above this one. Something along the lines of: Use the ideas inside this Mini Training to...
Orangise your multi-passionate business Keep your neurodivergent brain in check Map out your busy family week .....
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What’s included in Dopamine Planning:
I would include a testimonial section above this one once you have reviews/screenshots. Something like: This is what's possible:
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For years, I struggled with using a planner consistently. I’d start off excited, set everything up beautifully… and then stop using it after a few weeks. I owned a veritable planner graveyard. Every time I tried to get back into planning, I felt like I’d already failed. But the problem wasn’t me. The problem was that most planner advice isn’t designed for brains that need novelty, flexibility, and dopamine to stay engaged. That’s why I created Dopamine Planning - to help you find a way to plan that feels rewarding, motivating, and actually fun to come back to. If you’ve ever felt like planners just don’t work for you… I promise, you’re not broken. You just need a different approach - one that works with your brain, not against it. And that’s exactly what I’m going to show you inside Dopamine Planning.
This section is so good. Highly relevant, super personal! Love!
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The secret to planner consistency? Making it fun to return to.
The mini-training that adds the fun back into planning so you actually stay on track.
Because planning should be flexible, rewarding and motivating!
No complicated systems. No perfectionism. Just a simple way to reset and start again.
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There's a space in front of But :)
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Conference Schedule
I would include a section above the schedule that touches on what's in it for the attendees. This can be along the lines of cement yourself as THE trusted instructor, have a competitive edge, support your students better, have a deep understanding of the impact of what you do.
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Over the next three days,
Let's explore our key topics for the event: brain injury, endocrine health, and reproductive health
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Focused Deep Dives:
Days 2-4: Focused Deep Dives
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Please click each event to learn more about it. Please pardon changes as the schedule is under construction.
Please click each event to learn more. NOTE: The final schedule is yet to be confirmed.
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Transformational Learning Goals:Evidence-Based Practice: Understand specific yoga protocols for various health conditions to enhance your personal practice and teaching.Customized Approach: Gain insights into yoga’s core elements for tailored, effective practice.Advocacy & Integration: Build a scientific foundation to support yoga’s integration in schools, healthcare, prisons, and more.Critical Analysis: Develop the skills to independently access, evaluate, and interpret scientific research, reducing misinformation.Collaboration & Growth: Connect with fellow yogis and scientists, opening doors for career advancement and future research collaborations.
I would move this underneath the table below
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Daily sessions total 3-4 hours of immersive learning. 🔍 (7-8 hours if you upgrade after registering)
I would bold this
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No prerequisites required—just bring your curiosity! 🌟
I would bold this
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Day one covers
Let's start with the
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Day 1: Kick off with the Basics
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We will build your knowledge of the brain science of yoga in three key areas: Yoga + Brain InjuryYoga + Endocrine HealthYoga + Reproductive Health
I suggest moving this part underneath the sign-up button and turning it into a 3-column section with an icon to match each idea.
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Our 5th annual conference will be hybrid, with online and in person options (Jersey City, NJ).
Join us online or in person (Jersey City, NJ).
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what 2025 in Untapped Brilliance looks like
what's waiting for you inside Untapped Brilliance in 2025
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I teach these same strategies and insights that helped me, to my ADHD clients so they get amazing results too!!
Now I get to support my ADHD clients with the same strategies and insights that have helped me get amazing results!
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Does your life look amazing on paper? You're smart, creative, healthy, travel to fun places, and have loving family and friends. But inside, you feel disorganized, and your ADHD symptoms seem to hold you back from fully enjoying life.
Your life looks amazing on paper.
You're smart, creative, healthy, travel to amazing places and have a loving family and friends.
But inside, you...
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Pay Annually
I would add an FAQ section above this section
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Hello Morning!
Can you format these monthly sections consistently?
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Here's what you get when you enroll in The Untapped Brilliance Club. 2 monthly live group coaching calls with Jacqueline A live training workshop every month 8 Week Planning Party Workshop Course Library A Personal Guided Tour with Jacqueline. Unlimited Body Double Sessions Private Facebook Group Monthly Voxer Hours
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Managing ADHD isn't a one-size-fits-all approach.
Can you make this bold so it really pops?
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If you’ve been nodding along, it doesn’t mean those things aren’t possible for you—it just means you haven’t discovered the right approach that works in harmony with your ADHD brain, body, and life… yet!
I would centre this on the page so it really pops and place it on a separate visual section
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What you'd REALLY love is this:
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Finding you here tells me a few things about you.
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Bored by textbooks and repetitive exercises for learning a new language?Ready for language learning resources for your exact level and interests?👉 Treat yourself to cutting-edge approaches crafted by two experienced language teachers... so you don’t keep having the same old chatbot conversation over and over again.👉 Pick up an incredible toolkit that combines fresh inspiration, innovative study materials, and tutorials to put the FUN back in language learning!
Experience the FUTURE of language learning and join the thriving online community.
If you’re looking for fresh inspiration (and a lot more FUN! 🥳), then this is the perfect place for you.
Find the accountability, inspiration and community to confidently make AI a firm part of your tailored language learning routine.
Join for $9/month!
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What if you could learn your target language EXTRA QUICK……right inside your favorite AI chatbot?Get INSTANT ACCESS to a growing collection of 80+ tried-and-tested prompts to help you improve your conversational & grammar skills right away.Using the prompts is as easy as 1, 2, 3:1. Copy the prompt into your favorite AI chatbot.2. Fill in the blanks to adjust your level and topics of interest.3. Hit send and let the learning begin!And with chatbot recommendations for each prompt, you always get the BEST results!
Get INSTANT ACCESS to a growing collection of 80+ tried-and-tested prompts to help you improve your conversational & grammar skills right away.
Everything you need to learn your target language EXTRA QUICK right inside your favorite AI chatbot!
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Want to easily boost your listening skills but don't have tons of time to spend abroad?Wondering how AI can help boost your listening skills? This course is for you!Learn how to use AI tools to:💬 Understand Natural Spoken Language💬 Get Ready for Real-Life Conversations💬 Practice Your Listening Skills with AI QuizzesComing by March 2025. 😁
The handy self-guided resource that grows your target language comprehension skills right inside popular free AI tools like ChatGPT!
Grow your vocabulary, practice your listening and understand natural spoken language with our 5 tried-and-tested shortcuts!
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What if we told you that you can get ready for real-life conversations or improve the ones you’re already having… …without a practice partner?AI Shortcuts for Speaking Practice is the handy self-guided resource that grows your confidence & target language communication skills right inside popular free AI tools like ChatGPT!
The handy self-guided resource that grows your confidence & target language communication skills right inside popular free AI tools like ChatGPT!
Get ready for real-life conversations or improve the ones you're already having without a practice partner!
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What’s your language learning superpower?
Take the short 6-question quiz, and walk away with 3 tried-and-tested AI prompts to match your learning style and boost your target language skills right away.
Take the quiz!
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How AI Can Boost Your Language Learning Are you sick of boring textbooks and repetitive exercises for learning a new language? Wish you could get Artificial Intelligence to create tailored learning materials just for you?You can! 🦾In this FREE 60-minute training, you'll learn:🤖 Why use AI for language learning🦾 How to build AI-powered learning habits🤓 How to use AI to maintain and improve your languagesIntrigued? Check it out!
Are you sick and tired of the same repetitive exercises and wish you had access to tailored learning materins instead?
Watch the FREE 60-minute training and find out how AI can boost your language learning.
Watch free now!
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Are you a student or member? Log in here.
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The Untapped Brilliance
I suggest adding 2 sections:
- Here is what past challengers had to say about their experience: (add screenshot testimonials here)
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Being part of a private community helps you feel
Join your fellow challengers for accountability, to share wins and connect with likeminded ADHDers.
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Daily Training
Is this live? If so, add this in here. Otherwise mention it's prerecorded
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Get FREE access to my step-by-step system designed for ADHD brains like yours.
Map out and implement your plan for 2025 in a way that feels logical and motivating to you.
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Free LIVE Challenge
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Craft your ADHD friendly plan for 2025 in just 5 days! So you can create a memorable and productive year.
I would totally make this the potent main tagline in the header...
Craft your ADHD friendly plan for 2025 in just 5 days for a memorable and productive year ahead!
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Take a closer look at what you can look forward to →
I love this video and would totally move it up towards the top of the page right underneath the 'during the bb art jouranls masterclass' section
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This comment relates to the picture above: I'd change it to something like... but right now...
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Find confidence through creativity in this
Get first dibs on a transformative 12-week art experience and FINALLY embrace your unique style as a creator.
Join the waitlist today and prepare to grow your confidence through creativity!
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And you finally...
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Ready to Do This?
I'd finish off with a final push. Help them reflect about their options. Yes, you can attempt to do this on your own, or you can do it with my expert guidance and support. What is it going to be?
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Command the Room, Sis!
I would include a section that shows how people progress through the program week by week with a tangible win after each week so they can picture how they'll progress through the content but also through their transformation
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Can you change these up so it's crystal clear what people get? Is it pre-recorded videos? Do they get personal access to you? If so, how often?
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$2,850
Personally, I'm not a huge fan of putting hyperthetical pricetags against inclusions and rather lead with the amazing value this offer represents on its own
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budget-friendly
Not sure about the use of budget-friendly here.
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I would move this further down on the page and explain the possible transformation with your program a bit more first.
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Command the Room, Sis! is more than a
Introducing: Command the Room, the career coaching program that...
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And while you ABSOLUTELY have the ...
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Mamas, you second-guess yourself
But right now, you're...
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Imagine if...
Love this section... and I would totally lead in with it. Imagine a day when...
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It’s time to remember
Lead with a big, bold promise here that gives peope hope right from the start
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CTA: Get instant access now
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If you are a mixed media artist
I would bold the most important sections here and possibly reduce them to the 5-8 most important.
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gather supplies
Can you add 1 short sentence here?
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Take a look at some of the class highlights →
What we'll cover in this course:
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What will you gain from this course when you enroll today?
I'm tempted to add an emotive intro blurb here, even it it's short. Somethign along the lines of. What if you could create a zipper pouch without... a sewing machine, being a sewing pro, etc.
All it takes is your creativity, a few affordable materials and the lessons inside this self-paced course.
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All lessons are available to watch immediately upon purchase!
I would also remove this and incorporate it into the button CTA: Get instant access for only $45
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A self-paced, online art course for the mixed media artist interested in slow stitching and textiles
I would remove this because it feels like a double up and instead simply add 'self-paced' into the header image.
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Co-create, share and learn in a space where connection matters more than perfection...a cozy community for creatives.
Can you possibly add a button underneath each blurb so it's clear where people have to click?
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You might enjoy these podcast episodes,featuring yours truly:
As you add more episodes to your repertoire, you can absolutely add them here. :)
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In my spare time (HA!) I love to read, bake all the things, sleep in, travel and go barefoot on the beach.
So good. That's the stuff people love to find on an about page. :)
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Several placesto find me in print…
Love!!!! Such a great visual touch and a good option to make this trust section different to the one on your home page.
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Wherever you are in your creative journey, I’m here to help you take that next step.
Love the above the fold section. I would bold this sentence to make it pop though!
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Blending Abstract is the perfect introduction to mixed media play with pastels, watercolors and pencils, designed for beginners. Check it out now.SALVAGED: A Layered Pieces Journal guides you through building a curated cache of salvaged papers and then creating your own art journal by layering color, paper and texture. Click Here.Free Mixed Media Art Tutorials Find my creative walkthroughs archived here. You will access creative tips, techniques and color filled projects that I am excited to share. There is something for everyone regardless of your preferred medium or experience level. Let’s go!
Ideally, I'd still love to see this as 3 columns with image. :)
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Your creative journey deserves a joyful, supportive space.
But there's more to my story than meets the eye.
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Artist, maker, baker, and a tech-loving beach wanderer,
I would save this detail for your about page. This section is meant to be teasing a little bit and intrigue people to click through to your about page. :)
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Hey, I’m Roben-Marie!
Meet the artist!
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PS. Remember that you have ongoing access to BB Fringe Flip Book, so make sure you bookmark it for when the time is right.
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special discount 😍
Is it worth mentioning the discount here? If it's juicy enough, I'd totally be specific here.
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After more creative adventures?
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Thankfully you do have ongoing access to this class, so can tune in when the time's right.
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🤩 Get inspired by your classmates!
Love this! Such good motivation.
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Hey ! I wanted to touch base and
It's been a little while since you grabbed BB Fringe Flip Book (hyperlink this to the course platform login page), so I thought I'd...
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My only ask?? Please SHARE with all of your friends! I want everyone to be able to take full advantage of this offering.
If you enjoy this class, I'd love you to spread the love and share it with your friends.
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I would remove this section because it sends people away from your website. You want to conver them to sign up to your list and/or buy from you while here, so sending them to Instagram, etc is making this harder.
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My art has been featured in countless books and industry magazines including Get Messy, Journal It!, The Artist Unique, Creative Lettering Workshop, Art Saves, Exhibition 36, Journal Revolution, A World of Artist Journal Pages, 1000 Artist Journal Pages, "Somerset Studio," "Art Journaling," "Green Craft," "Artist' Cafe," "Artful Blogging," "Legacy," "Somerset Memories," "Somerset Life," "Somerset Apprentice" and "Somerset Gallery."
Is there any way to turn this into a visual and have these icons on your about page rather than a duplicate of the home page icons?
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The Membership for Creatives Craving a Cozy Space
I wonder whether you can add a visual here too and a bit more contect from your sales page.
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CREATION WITHOUT LIMITATIONS
This would be perfect to set the scene right underneath the header and icon bar.
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Join me for an art retreat in
If feel that a pop up box would be better for announcements like these so you don't have to constantly update your website, and people's attention is drawn to topical things.
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Your art, your creativity and your story matter.
I feel that this could be deleted.
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My latest creative endeavor is The 100 Day Project.
I would move this project into a separate section because it gets lost here.
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You'll walk away with
I feel like you've covered these elements in previous sections. I wonder whether you could give them ideas around what they can use the finished project for. Gift card, framed artwork, etc.
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this focused mini class
I would switch this for the course name
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What if you could experience a creative WIN today?
I would move this up above the 'who it's for' section
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I would move this sectin underneath the course name graphic with your photo.
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12 x 1:1 60-min coaching sessions with Jacqueline For personalized ADHD strategies tailored to you, your situation and your ADHD to help you succeed.
Can you left-align all these sections? Some are centred, while others are left-aligned.
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These are the same 4 Pillars that I teach my 1:1 coaching clients, so they can achieve success in their career and life too. While you may have tried making changes on your own, it can be challenging to know how to apply each of the four pillars into your life, when to adjust your approach within a pillar, or when it’s time to explore a fresh perspective.
I thing this section needs to move up above the testimonial section so it flows on form your about section where you mention the 4 pillars. And, I'd make the first sentence BOLD
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Not sure this button clicks to where you want it to click?
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A couple of quick demos
Bold this
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Move the Order bump down so the pricing options are shown first
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What people are saying about the VIP Summit Experience
This needs to move down so it sits right above the screenshot testimonials
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I think 30€ is missing from the second row of button copy
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tment will be worth it!
This section looks AWESOME!!!
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Want the bonuses above?Click here to upgrade to the Power Pack for just 50€!
I would add a visual here to draw attention
To access these EXTRA bonuses...
Click here to grab the Power Pack for an extra 50EUR instead!
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Can you include this emoji here to draw attention to this section? 🙅
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I would move the order bump down so it sits underneath the pricing options
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What people are saying about the VIP Summit Experience
This needs to move down to sit right above the screenshot testimonials
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now:
Any way to reduce this statement so it sits on one line? On my screen, now is sitting by itself on the second row.
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Designed by translators, for translators.
Any chance you could move the button up closer to this line so it shows above the fold?
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Recordings of all previous LIVE workshops so you can catch up the previous action!
A little picky, but is it possibly to align this box with the one next to it?
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AI
I'd delete this second robot emoji
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Yay, you made the smart decision to grab the Power Pack!
This one looks GREAT!!! The only thing I'd possibly do to add a visual, is add the membership logo in the header section.
Oh, and check that only the first month is free...
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Choose a pricing option
I would also move the pricing options further up so they come before the order bump
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What people are saying about the VIP Summit Experience
This needs to sit right above the testimonials further down in the cart
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How to
Same for these boxes. They don't quite align at the bottom. Sorry, being 100% picky now ;-)
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or 10 ATA CEPs.)
and this one is slightly bigger than the other 2
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Use it tow
Is it possible to make this box align with the others in this row? It comes in slightly shorter than the others.
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🤖 99€ store credit to use on ANY techforword course in the next 6 months🤖 A ticket to a brand new LIVE workshop all about using CustomGPTs to boost your translation, transcreation, and copywriting🤖 One month inside techforword insiders, the premier online community for tech-savvy language professionals🤖 10 hours of continuing education credit (ATA-approved)
Could you center this section also? It looks a little off as the only left-aligned part.
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BUT
I can't mark up buttons so have added the comment here. I it possible to format the button so the words all sit on one line?
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If you’re excited about the AI in Translation Summit, you’ll love the Power Pack!Actionable extra resources, toolkits, prompts and workshops to confidently optimize your work with AI firmly by your side
Is it possible to reduce the width here so the text appears narrower and is easier to read? It can be hard for the reader to digest when they're reading all across a big desktop screen.
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You can purchase Nest Fest as a stand-alone course or join The Roben’s Nest, where you’ll not only get access to all the Nest Fest lessons but also additional short lessons from each of our guest artists. These bonus lessons are released monthly, building on what you learned in Nest Fest. Here's what you can expect: Textile Printing With The Gelli® Plate: Marsha ValkDaily Creative Practice Journal Cover: Andrea ChebeleuEco Dyed Journal: Lisa GoddardPlaster Book Covers: Stephanie LeeAdhesive Nerds Unite: Discover the Foundation of Your Art: Shay MichelleTips, Tricks and Special Gifts - A Window into Wozniak's Watercolor World: Tracey WozniakOil Painting Made Easy: Wendy BrightbillPainted Papers - Pieced and Weaved: Julie HamiltonInky Fun: Roben-Marie SmithCreative Play with Color Pencils and Oil Pastels: Joy Ting Charde Whether you're ready to dive into Nest Fest or eager for a more immersive experience inside The Roben’s Nest, there’s a place for you to spread your creative wings!
I would move this section up much higher on the page right underneath the kind words section.
I would also revamp this section entirely because the lessons are already released (I assume) and ready to watch as soon as they join. So I would say something like: Access additional short sessons from each of the guest artists as well as the othe amazing benefits waiting for you inside the membership.
And then I'd list the sessions as well as the other top-line inclusions of your membership in bullet point format.
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Ready to Keep Growing?
Keep growing with your FREE month inside the Roben's Nest
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and receive ONE MONTH FREE inside the Roben's Nest, the membership .... (valued at $24).
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Price goes up to $37 on November 25.
This exlusive launch offer and pricetag disappear when the timer strikes zero
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For a limited time,
I would make this the heading
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free event
virtual summit
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ome.
I'd change the CTA here too... DOWNLOAD THE DIGITAL VERSION
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tter of days.
I'm curious... are you not able to link to the print version or do you ask them to sign up so you capture their email addresses? If it's a conscious decision to make them sign up, I'd reword the button CTA slightly. GET YOUR EXCLUSIVE LINK TO ORDER... and then the CTA in the pop-up box would be SEND ME THE EXCLUSIVE LINK TO ORDER
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n Digital and Print*
I wonder whether you can include a photo of yourself with the print version in the header so there's a warm smile as soon as they land on the page.
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VIP Day
Can you add a little more detail around how many hours it includes and the outcome of the day?
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12 x Private 1:1 ADHD coaching sessions with Jacqueline! Ongoing support via WhatsApp in between coaching sessions Coaching Call Transcripts It's a Wrap Home Study Course
I would move this up so it's in line with the inclusions in the column on the left. And bold the VIP day inclusion on the left...
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Here's what you get when you enroll in Untapped Brilliance Success Coaching 12 x Private 1:1 ADHD coaching sessions with Jacqueline! ($4500 Value) Ongoing support via WhatsApp in between coaching sessions ( Priceless!!) Coaching Call Transcripts ($600 Value) It's a Wrap Home Study Course ($247 Value)
I would centre this
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Coaching Call Transcripts for Easy Reference
This font seems different to the headings above?
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These are the same strategies, and practical tools that I teach my 1:1 coaching clients, so they can achieve success in their career and life too. While you might have tried making changes on your own, it’s tough to know which techniques will work for you, when to tweak them or when it’s time to let go and try a brand new strategy.
Can you centre this section on the page and bold the first sentence?
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After my diagnosis, I created a system of strategies to support myself. I let go of neurotypical techniques that didn’t suit me. I adapted other techniques so that they truly worked for my brain and worked with my strengths. Then everything changed. Life doesn’t feel like an endless to-do list anymore. These strategies allowed me to be a full time ADHD coach for 19 years ( and counting).
Can you move this text next to the photo of your with your medal at all?
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You would love to arrive at work a
Could you structure this section as 4 columns at all? I think it would make it look cleaner.
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Let me guess...
I feel like there's something missing over the header image?
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Ignite Your Creativity: Dive into 12 weeks of pure artistic discovery Connect with Enthusiastic Artists: Join our vibrant community and fuel your inspiration Maximize your Innate Potential: Discover new techniques and embrace your unique style Return to Play: Innovation through exploration and experimentation Personalized Support: Individual feedback elevates your art Learn on Your Terms: Access course materials whenever inspiration strikes
I think this is too much in the header section. I would remove this section entirely.
As for the button copy, I'd remove Register Here!
I would beef these up in a separate 'this is what you can expect' section underneath your about section.
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Do you ever feel like you're sitting on the sidelines, watching other people create beautiful art? Wishing that you could do it, too?
Some of these ideas would be great to the 'right now' section further up on the page
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I've spent years honing in on my process for creating art journals that are not only functional but unique works of art. I will teach you the steps that will guarantee results that you will be proud to show off. Through a distinctive process of learning the "rules" and techniques, I will then encourage you to break the rules and make the creation process your own. Intuitive playing and experimentation will become integral parts of your art practice.
I'd try to condense your about section to one visual section on the page. So possibly see how you can move this bit into your 'main' about section
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MY PROMISE TO YOU ... By the end of the 12-week BB Art Journals Masterclass you
BB ARt Journal Masterclass will help you...
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y you approach art.
I'd then follow it with a paragraph that addresses the right now and how they're currently approaching their art. The frustration of doubting themselves, not knowing where to start, lacking feedback so they know how they can improve, etc...
And then I would introduce your BB Art Journals Masterclass as the solution in the next section.
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