As per your sign-up page, have a think about what makes the handmade gifts unique that they're going to be completing after this summit (and with the all access pass)

Have a think about any other adjectives you can add here to give it even more oomph. Easier, smarter, effortlessly, etc?

I wouldn't overdo the timers. Possibly skip this one because you have one just before this video.

I would make it very clear that the sessions teach an actual craft project ready for attendees to bring to life. I currently can't tell this from the blurb.

The Become a Handmade Boss Summit will give you REAL ideas and the matching step-by-step process to help you step away from your Pinterest board and start creating instead.

Can you make this more about the learnings within the presentations? From what I can tell, a lot of them unpack actual craft projects. So try to make it super clear that they'll watch 10 expert crafters as they explore practical gifting ideas from start to finish.

Watch the video below to learn how this free event will set you up with 10 REAL handmade gift ideas (and the expert-taught step-by-step instructions).

A 3-day virtual event for aspiring handmade gift-makers ready to take action!

Take your gifting game from DULL to INSPIRED, and explore 10 AMAZING handmade gift ideas your friends and family will love!

You're ready to step up as the expert gifter you were always mean to be.

I would again highlight that they'll walk away with 10 REAL gift ideas to fast-track their gifting adventures

I'd make this section more about the takeaways and that they'll walk away with actual gift ideas complete with instructions so they can make them happen right away, and get a head-start on their handmade xmas gifting journey. Where other summits might give you ideas, this summit takes you through a project from start to finish with the expert guidance of experience crafters.

Love that you're calling this out! Great incentive to sign up.

This line keeps popping up in your copy a little too much. Can you think of tangible reasons why summit attendees consider gifting? I'm thinking meaning, impact, purpose. Can you rewrite some of these phrases so they speak to these benefits?

Ready to step up as the expert handmade gifter you were always meant to be

also make this bold

I'd make this bold, so it stands out

You dream of finding the day when your handmade gifts are a smashing success, because you love making them AND everyone loves receiving them!

I'd make this more tangible...something like... Can't see how handmade gifts can fit into your already busy life

Here, I would make it more about the doubts, lack of skills and strategies... something like... But...when it comes to turning ideas into actual gifts, your inner doubters and your lack of strategies like to get in the way.

And you have the best intentions to bring them to life

You're starting a collection of winning handmade ideas

Can you make this more about the gift recipients here? When it comes to handmade gifts, the recipient usually determines the ideas. So something like... You're researching gift ideas to wow your favourite people.