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  1. Apr 2025
    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Pradhan et al investigated the potential gustatory mechanisms that allow flies to detect cholesterol. They found that flies are indifferent to low cholesterol and avoid high cholesterol. They further showed that the ionotropic receptors Ir7g, Ir51b, and Ir56d are important for the cholesterol sensitivity in bitter neurons. The figures are clear and the behavior result is interesting. However, I have several major comments, especially on the discrepancy of the expression of these Irs with other lab published results, and the confusing finding that the same receptors (Ir7g, Ir51b) have been implicated in the detection of various seemingly unrelated compounds.

      Strengths:

      The results are very well presented, the figures are clear and well-made, text is easy to follow.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Regarding the expression of Ir56d. The reported Ir56d expression pattern contradicts multiple previous studies (Brown et al., 2021 eLife, Figure 6a-c; Sanchez-Alcaniz et al., 2017 Nature Communications, Figure 4e-h; Koh et al., 2014 Neuron, Figure 3b). These studies, using three different driver lines, consistently showed Ir56d expression in sweet-sensing neurons and taste peg neurons. Importantly, Sanchez-Alcaniz et al. demonstrated that Ir56d is not expressed in Gr66a-expressing (bitter) neurons. This discrepancy is critical since Ir56d is identified as the key subunit for cholesterol detection in bitter neurons, and misexpression of Ir7g and Ir51b together is insufficient to confer cholesterol sensitivity (Fig.4b,d). Which Ir56d-GAL4 (and Gr66a-I-GFP) line was used in this study? Is there additional evidence (scRNA sequencing, in-situ hybridization, or immunostaining) supporting Ir56d expression in bitter neurons?

      (2) Ir51b has previously been implicated in detecting nitrogenous waste (Dhakal 2021), lactic acid (Pradhan 2024), and amino acids (Aryal 2022), all by the same lab. Additionally, both Ir7g and Ir51b have been implicated in detecting cantharidin, an insect-secreted compound that flies may or may not encounter in the wild, by the same lab. Is Ir51b proposed to be a specific receptor for these chemically distinct compounds or a general multimodal receptor for aversive stimuli? Unlike other multimodal bitter receptors, the expression level of Ir51b is rather low and it's unclear which subset of GRNs express this receptor. The chemical diversity among nitrogenous waste, amino acids, lactic acid, cantharidin, and cholesterol raises questions about the specificity of these receptors and warrants further investigation and at a minimum discussion in this paper. Given the wide and seemingly unrelated sensitivity of Ir51b and Ir7g to these compounds I'm leaning towards the hypothesis that at least some of these is non-specific and ecologically irrelevant without further supporting evidence from the authors.

      (3) The Benton lab Ir7g-GAL4 reporter shows no expression in adults. Additionally, two independent labellar RNA sequencing studies (Dweck, 2021 eLife; Bontonou et al., 2024 Nature Communications) failed to detect Ir7g expression in the labellum. This contradicts the authors' previous RT-PCR results (Pradhan 2024 Fig. S4, Journal of Hazardous Materials) showing Ir7g expression in the labellum. Additionally the Benton and Carlson lab Ir51b-GAL4 reporters show no expression in adults as well. Please address these inconsistencies.

      (4) The premise that high cholesterol intake is harmful to flies, which makes sensory mechanisms for cholesterol avoidance necessary, is interesting but underdeveloped. Animal sensory systems typically evolve to detect ecologically relevant stimuli with dynamic ranges matching environmental conditions. Given that Drosophila primarily consume fruits and plant matter (which contain minimal cholesterol) rather than animal-derived foods (which contain higher cholesterol), the ecological relevance of cholesterol detection requires more thorough discussion. Furthermore, at high concentrations, chemicals often activate multiple receptors beyond those specifically evolved for their detection. If the cholesterol concentrations used in this study substantially exceed those encountered in the fly's natural diet, the observed responses may represent an epiphenomenon rather than an ecologically and ethologically relevant sensory mechanism. What is the cholesterol content in flies' diet and how does that compare to the concentrations used in this paper?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The aim of this study is to test the overarching hypothesis that plasticity in BNST CRF neurons drives distinct behavioral responses to unpredictable threat in males and females. The manuscript provides solid evidence for a sex-specific role for CRF-expressing neurons in the BNST in unpredictable aversive conditioning and subsequent hypervigilance across sexes. As the authors note, this is an important question given the high prevalence of sex differences in stress-related disorders, like PTSD, and the role of hypervigilance and avoidance behaviors in these conditions. The study includes in vivo manipulation, bulk calcium imaging, and cellular resolution calcium imaging, which yield important insights into cell-type specific activity patterns. A major strength of this manuscript is the inclusion of both males and females and attention to possible behavioral and neurobiological differences between them throughout.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this study, Osiurak and colleagues investigate the neurocognitive basis of technical reasoning. They use multiple tasks from two neuroimaging studies to show that the area PF is central to technical reasoning and plays an essential role in tool-use and non-tool-use physical problem-solving, as well as both conditions of mentalizing tasks. They also demonstrate the specificity of technical reasoning, finding that area PF is not involved in the fluid-cognition task or the mentalizing network (INT+PHYS vs. PHYS-only). This work enhances our understanding of the neurocognitive basis of technical reasoning that supports advanced technologies.

      Strengths:

      - The topic this study focuses on is intriguing and can help us understand the neurocognitive processes involved in technical reasoning and advanced technologies.<br /> - The researchers collected fMRI data from multiple tasks. The data is rich and encompasses the mechanical problem-solving task, psychotechnical task, fluid-cognition task, and mentalizing tasks.<br /> - The article is well written.

      The authors have addressed many of the reviewers' concerns in their response. They utilized both correlation analysis and coordinate analysis to tackle alternative hypotheses, namely the same-region-but-different-function interpretation and the adjacency interpretation. Additionally, ROI analysis was conducted to validate the negative results. These additional analyses have enhanced the reliability of the findings. This study offers valuable insights into the neurocognitive mechanisms underlying technical reasoning.

      Weaknesses:

      While the authors attempted to address the limitations of overlap analysis by correlating activation across different tasks within subjects, this issue could not be entirely resolved due to the constraints of the current experimental design. The mechanical problem-solving task was not included since the sample of subjects differed from that of other tasks. Furthermore, the fluid-cognition task was not scanned in the same run as the psychotechnical and mentalizing tasks, which may have contributed to a lack of correlation between them, thereby affecting result interpretation. Moreover, the core cognitive focus of this study, technical reasoning, may be influenced by assumptions about motion-related information. While this issue has been discussed in the discussion section, further evidence is needed to substantiate this interpretation.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Hüppe and colleagues had already developed an apparatus and an analytical approach to capture swimming activity rhythms in krill. In a previous manuscript they explained the system, and here they employ it to show a circadian clock, supplemented by exogenous light, produces an activity pattern consistent with "twilight" diel vertical migration (DVM; a peak at sunset, a midnight sink, and a peak in the latter half of the night).

      They used light:dark (LD) followed by dark:dark (DD) photoperiods at two times of the year to confirm the circadian clock, coupled with DD experiments at four times a year to show rhythmicity occurs throughout the year along with DVM in the wild population. The individual activity data show variability in the rhythmic response, which is expected. However, their results showed rhythmicity was sustained in DD throughout the year, although the amplitude decayed quickly. The interpretation of a weak clock is reasonable, and they provide a convincing justification for the adaptive nature of such a clock in a species that has a wide distributional range and experiences various photic environments. These data also show that exogenous light increases the activity response and can explain the morning activity bouts, with the circadian clock explaining the evening and late-night bouts. This acknowledgement that vertical migration can be driven by multiple proximate mechanisms is important.

      The work is rigorously done, and the interpretations are sound. I see no major weaknesses in the manuscript. Because a considerable amount of processing is required to extract and interpret the rhythmic signals (see Methods and previous AMAZE paper), it is informative to have the individual activity plots of krill as a gut check on the group data.

      The manuscript will be useful to the field as it provides an elegant example of looking for biological rhythms in a marine planktonic organism and disentangling the exogenous response from the endogenous one. Furthermore, as high-latitude environments change, understanding how important organisms like krill have the potential to respond will become increasingly important. This work provides a solid behavioral dataset to complement the earlier molecular data suggestive of a circadian clock in this species.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript by Kaya et al. studies the effect of food consumption on hippocampal sharp wave ripples (SWRs) in mice. The authors use multiple foods and forms of food delivery to show that the frequency and power of SWRs increase following food intake, and that this effect depends on the caloric content of food. The authors also studied the effects of administration of various food-intake-related hormones on SWRs during sleep, demonstrating that ghrelin negatively affects SWR rate and power, but not GLP-1, insulin, or leptin. Finally, the authors use fiber photometry to show that GABAergic neurons in the lateral hypothalamus, increase activity during a SWR event.

      Strengths:

      The experiments in this study seem to be well performed, and the data are well presented, visually. The data support the main conclusions of the manuscript that food intake enhances hippocampal SWRs. Taken together, this study is likely to be impactful to the study of the impact of feeding on sleep behavior, as well as the phenomena of hippocampal SWRs in metabolism.

      Weaknesses:

      None

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript addresses an important question which has not yet been solved in the field, what is the contribution of different gamma oscillatory inputs to the development of "theta sequences" in the hippocampal CA1 region. Theta sequences have received much attention due to their proposed roles in encoding short-term behavioral predictions, mediating synaptic plasticity, and guiding flexible decision-making. Gamma oscillations in CA1 offer a readout of different inputs to this region and have been proposed to synchronize neuronal assemblies and modulate spike timing and temporal coding. However, the interactions between these two important phenomena have not been sufficiently investigated. The authors conducted place cell and local field potential (LFP) recordings in the CA1 region of rats running on a circular track. They then analyzed the phase locking of place cell spikes to slow and fast gamma rhythms, the evolution of theta sequences during behavior and the interaction between these two phenomena. They found that place cell with the strongest modulation by fast gamma oscillations were the most important contributors to the early development of theta sequences and that they also displayed a faster form of phase precession within slow gamma cycles nested with theta.

      Comments on revisions:

      Several important shortcomings were noted in the original manuscript. These have been addressed in this revised version with the addition of multiple new analysis, controls and clarifications. The revised manuscript has been significantly improved and its conclusions are adequately supported by the results presented.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This very interesting manuscript proposes a general mechanism for how activating signaling proteins respond to species specific signals arising from a variety of stresses. In brief, the authors propose that the activating signal alters the structure by a universal allosteric mechanism.

      Strengths:

      The unitary mechanism proposed is appealing and testable. The propose that the allosteric module consists of crossed alpha-helical linkers with similar architecture and that their attached regulatory domains connect to phosphatases or other molecules through coiled-coli domains, such that the signal is transduced via rigidifying the alpha helices, permitting downstream enzymatic activity. The authors present genetic and structural prediction data in favor of the model for the system they are studying, and stronger structural data in other systems.

      Weaknesses:

      I thank the authors for making significant revisions that addressed almost all of my concerns. I hope that the authors will consider addressing my last concern, which is that the title is inappropriate. However, I do not believe that this should hold up the publication of the ms.

      "A General Mechanism for Initiating the General Stress Response in Bacteria" is misleading because it suggests a broadly applicable, universal mechanism across all bacterial species, whereas the study primarily focuses on Bacillus subtilis and its RsbU phosphatase activation. While the authors propose that the mechanism may extend to other bacteria, the evidence is largely based on structural modeling rather than direct experimental validation across multiple phyla. Additionally, the phrase "General Stress Response" might imply that the paper broadly explains stress response regulation, but it specifically examines the activation of RsbU by RsbT, which is just one really small part of the broader GSR network. The redundancy in "A General Mechanism for the General Stress Response" could also create an impression of an oversimplified, universal model when stress responses are often species- and context-specific. Furthermore, the study builds upon existing knowledge of partner-switching mechanisms rather than introducing an entirely new concept, making the claim of a general mechanism overstated and misleading for the field.

      Title options could be "A Conserved Activation Mechanism for the General Stress Response Phosphatase in Bacteria", "Coiled-Coil Linker-Mediated Activation of a General Stress Response Phosphatase", all of which more accurately reflect the study's scope and findings.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Kimura et al performed a saturation mutagenesis study of CDKN2A to assess functionality of all possible missense variants and compare them to previously identified pathogenic variants. They also compared their assay result with those from in silico predictors.

      Strengths:

      CDKN2A is an important gene that modulate cell cycle and apoptosis, therefore it is critical to accurately assess functionality of missense variants. Overall, the paper reads well and touches upon major discoveries in a logical manner.

      Weaknesses:

      The paper lacks proper details for experiments and basic data, leaving the results less convincing. Analyses are superficial and does not provide variant-level resolution.

      Comments on revisions

      The manuscript was improved during the revision process.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors investigate the effect of high concentrations of the lipid aldehyde trans-2-hexadecenal (t-2-hex) in a yeast deletion strain lacking the detoxification enzyme. Transcriptomic analyses as global read out reveals that a large range of cellular functions across all compartments are affected (transcriptomic changes affect 1/3 of all genes). The authors provide additional analyses, which indicate that mitochondrial protein import is affected.

      Strengths:

      Global analyses (transcriptomic and functional genomics approach) to obtain an overview of changes upon yeast treatment with high doses of t-2-hex.

      Weaknesses:

      The use of high concentrations of t-2-hex in combination with a deletion of the detoxifying enzyme Hfd1 limits the possibility to identify physiological relevant changes. For the follow-up analysis, the authors focus on mitochondrial proteins and describe an impairment of mitochondrial protein biogenesis, but the underlying molecular modification resulting in the observed impairment is not yet known.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors have developed self-amplifying RNAs (saRNAs) encoding additional genes to suppress dsRNA-related inflammatory responses and cytokine release. Their results demonstrate that saRNA constructs encoding anti-inflammatory genes effectively reduce cytotoxicity and cytokine production, enhancing the potential of saRNAs. This work is significant for advancing saRNA therapeutics by mitigating unintended immune activation.

      Strengths:

      This study successfully demonstrates the concept of enhancing saRNA applications by encoding immune-suppressive genes. A key challenge for saRNA-based therapeutics, particularly for non-vaccine applications, is the innate immune response triggered by dsRNA recognition. By leveraging viral protein properties to suppress immunity, the authors provide a novel strategy to overcome this limitation. The study presents a well-designed approach with potential implications for improving saRNA stability and minimizing inflammatory side effects.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Impact on Cellular Translation:

      The authors demonstrate that modified saRNAs with additional components enhance transgene expression by inhibiting dsRNA-sensing pathways. However, it is unclear whether these modifications influence global cellular translation beyond the expression of GFP and mScarlet-3 (which are encoded by the saRNA itself). Conducting a polysome profiling analysis or a puromycin labeling assay would clarify whether the modified saRNAs alter overall translation efficiency. This additional data would strengthen the conclusions regarding the specificity of dsRNA-sensing inhibition.

      (2) Stability and Replication Efficiency of Long saRNA Constructs:

      The saRNA constructs used in this study exceed 16 kb, making them more fragile and challenging to handle. Assessing their mRNA integrity and quality would be crucial to ensure their robustness.<br /> Furthermore, the replicative capacity of the designed saRNAs should be confirmed. Since Figure 4 shows lower inflammatory cytokine production when encoding srIkBα and srIkBα-Smad7-SOCS1, it is important to determine whether this effect is due to reduced immune activation or impaired replication. Providing data on replication efficiency and expression levels of the encoded anti-inflammatory proteins would help rule out the possibility that reduced cytokine production is a consequence of lower replication.

      (3) Comparative Data with Native saRNA:

      Including native saRNA controls in Figures 5-7 would allow for a clearer assessment of the impact of additional genes on cytokine production. This comparison would help distinguish the effect of the encoded suppressor proteins from other potential factors.

      (4) In vivo Validation and Safety Considerations:

      Have the authors considered evaluating the in vivo potential of these saRNA constructs? Conducting animal studies would provide stronger evidence for their therapeutic applicability. If in vivo experiments have not been performed, discussing potential challenges - such as saRNA persistence, biodistribution, and possible secondary effects-would be valuable.

      (5) Immune Response to Viral Proteins:

      Since the inhibitors of dsRNA-sensing proteins (E3, NSs, and L*) are viral proteins, they would be expected to induce an immune response. Analyzing these effects in vivo would add insight into the applicability of this approach.

      (6) Streamlining the Discussion Section:

      The discussion is quite lengthy. To improve readability, some content - such as the rationale for gene selection-could be moved to the Results section. Additionally, the descriptions of Figure 3 should be consolidated into a single section under a broader heading for improved coherence.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors present a novel usage of fluorescence lifetime imaging microscopy (FLIM) to measure NAD(P)H autofluorescence in the Drosophila brain, as a proxy for cellular metabolic/redox states. This new method relies on the fact that both NADH and NADPH are autofluorescent, with a different excitation lifetime depending on whether they are free (indicating glycolysis) or protein-bound (indicating oxidative phosphorylation). The authors successfully use this method in Drosophila to measure changes in metabolic activity across different areas of the fly brain, with a particular focus on the main center for associative memory: the mushroom body.

      Strengths:

      The authors have made a commendable effort to explain the technical aspects of the method in accessible language. This clarity will benefit both non-experts seeking to understand the methodology and researchers interested in applying FLIM to Drosophila in other contexts.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Despite being statistically significant, the learning-induced change in f-free in α/β Kenyon cells is minimal (a decrease from 0.76 to 0.73, with a high variability). The authors should provide justification for why they believe this small effect represents a meaningful shift in neuronal metabolic state.

      (2) The lack of experiments examining the effects of long-term memory (after spaced or massed conditioning) seems like a missed opportunity. Such experiments could likely reveal more drastic changes in the metabolic profiles of KCs, as a consequence of memory consolidation processes.

      (3) The discussion is mostly just a summary of the findings. It would be useful if the authors could discuss potential future applications of their method and new research questions that it could help address.

    1. Joint Public Review:

      The manuscript describes the role of mmp21, a metallopeptidase, in left-right patterning. MMP21 has been implicated in genetic studies of patients with heterotaxy and the authors add an additional case. However, a molecular mechanism for Htx/LR patterning defects is not clear although one previous study implicated Notch signaling. The authors find that mmp21 does indeed cause LR patterning defects in Xenopus consistent with work in mice and zebrafish without affecting cilia motility. Importantly, the authors extend this work to place mmp21 in the LR pathway between dand5 (in the nodal cascade) and the cilia-driven sensation of flow. With RNA overexpression studies, the authors show MMP21 can induce Nodal signaling bilaterally suggesting it is an activator of the pathway, potentially through regulation of dand5 asymmetry. The authors also show that the role of MMP21 is upstream of another matrix metalloprotease CIROP which is tethered to the plasma membrane and possibly the cilium. They propose that mmp21, which is secreted, may represent a morphogen that is asymmetrically distributed along the LR axis due to cilia-driven flow and sensed by sensory cilia in the LRO.

      The authors attempt to address a highly controversial subject in the LR patterning field, that is, the debate between Nodal Vesicular Particles (NVP, ie morphogens) being driven by cilia to activate signaling on the left and the Two Cilia model which posits that mechanosensation of fluid flow and not morphogens drive asymmetric organogenesis.

      The model they propose is that mmp21 is secreted in the center of the LRO. LRO cilia generate leftward flow driving mmp21 to the left where sensory cilia at the LRO margin detect the mmp21 via cirop and suppress dand5, leading to activation of Nodal and Pitx2 expression.

      First and foremost, the authors need to consider alternative models in the discussion and acknowledge the strengths and weaknesses of their work. All three reviewers felt that their conclusion that mmp21 is a morphogen is premature and that other models could also fit their data which needs to be discussed. The authors need to soften the conclusion that other models have been excluded.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors demonstrate that two human preproprotein human mutations in the BMP4 gene cause a defect in proprotein cleavage and BMP4 mature ligand formation, leading to hypomorphic phenotypes in mouse knock-in alleles and in Xenopus embryo assays.

      Strengths:

      They provide compelling biochemical and in vivo analyses supporting their conclusions, showing the reduced processing of the proprotein and concomitant reduced mature BMP4 ligand protein from impressively mouse embryonic lysates. They perform excellent analysis of the embryo and post-natal phenotypes demonstrating the hypomorphic nature of these alleles. Interesting phenotypic differences between the S91C and E93G mutants are shown with excellent hypotheses for the differences. Their results support that BMP4 heterodimers act predominantly throughout embryogenesis whereas BMP4 homodimers play essential roles at later developmental stages.

      Weaknesses:

      In the revision the authors have appropriately addressed the previous minor weaknesses.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this paper, the authors first examined lens phenotypes in mice with Le-Cre-mediated knockdown (KD) of all the four FGFR (FGFR1-4), and found that pERK signals, Jag1 and foxe3 expression are absent or drastically reduced, indicating that FGF signaling is essential for lens induction. Next, the authors examined lens phenotypes of FGFR1/2-KD mice and found that lens fiber differentiation is compromised, and that proliferative activity and cell survival are also compromised in lens epithelium. Interestingly, Kras activation rescues defects in lens growth and lens fiber differentiation in FGFR1/2-KD mice, indicating that Ras activation is a key step for lens development, downstream of FGF signaling. Next, the authors examined the role of Frs2, Shp2 and Grb2 in FGF signaling for lens development. They confirmed that lens fiber differentiation is compromised in FGFR1/3-KD mice combined with Frs2-dysfunctional FGFR2 mutants, which is similar to lens phenotypes of Grb2-KD mice. However, lens defects are milder in mice with Shp2YF/YF and Shp2CS mutant alleles, indicating that involvement of Shp2 is limited for the Grb2 recruitment for lens fiber differentiation. Lastly, the authors showed new evidence on the possibility that another adapter protein, Shc1, promotes Grb2 recruitment independent of Frs2/Shp2-mediated Grb2 recruitment.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the manuscript provides valuable data on how FGFR activation leads to Ras activation through the adapter platform of Frs2/Shp2/Grb2, which advances our understanding on complex modification of FGF signaling pathway. The authors applied a genetic approach using mice, whose methods and results are valid to support the conclusion. The discussion also well summarizes the significance of their findings.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors found that the new adaptor protein Shc1 is involved in Grb2 recruitment in response to FGF receptor activation. However, the main data on Shc1 are only histological sections and statistical evaluation of lens size. Cellular-level evidence on Shc1 makes the authors' conclusion more convincing.

      Comments on latest version:

      In the 2nd revised version of the manuscript, the authors responded to my recommendation to show the number of biological replicates for Prox1 and αA-crystallin (Fig. 1F) and conductedstatistical analysis for pmTOR, and pS6 (Supplementary figure 1B).

      The authors also explained why the animals are no longer available for the additional experiments that I requested. I may understand the situation, but hope that the authors will investigate the cellular-level evidence on Shc1 in more detail and report it maybe as another paper in future.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Chang and colleagues use tetrode recordings in behaving rats to study how learning an audiovisual discrimination task shapes multisensory interactions in auditory cortex. They find that a significant fraction of neurons in auditory cortex responded to visual (crossmodal) and audiovisual stimuli. Both auditory-responsive and visually-responsive neurons preferentially responded to the cue signaling the contralateral choice in the two-alternative forced choice task. Importantly, multisensory interactions were similarly specific for the congruent audiovisual pairing for the contralateral side.

      Strengths:

      The experiments are conducted in a rigorous manner. Particularly thorough are the comparisons across cohorts of rats trained in a control task, in a unisensory auditory discrimination task and the multisensory task, while also varying the recording hemisphere and behavioral state (engaged vs. anesthesia). The resulting contrasts strengthen the authors' findings and rule out important alternative explanations regarding the effect of experience. Through the comparisons, they show that the enhancements of activity in multisensory trials in auditory cortex are specific to the paired audiovisual stimulus and specific to contralateral choices in correct trials and thus dependent on learned associations in a task engaged state.

      Weaknesses:

      The main result that multisensory interactions are specific for contralateral paired audiovisual stimuli is consistent across experiments and interpretable as a learned task-dependent effect. However, the alternative interpretation of behavioral signals is crucial to rule out, which would also be specific to contralateral, correct trials in trained animals. Although the authors focus on the first 150 ms after cue onset, some of the temporal profiles of activity suggest that choice-related activity could confound some of the results.

      The main concern (noted by all reviewers) is the interpretation of the evoked activity in visual trials. In the revised manuscript, the authors have not provided much data to disentangle movement related activity from sensory related activity. The only new data is on the visual response dynamics in supplementary figure 2, which is unconvincing both in terms of visual response latency and response dynamics. Therefore, the response of the authors has been insufficient to prove the visual nature of the evoked responses.

      In this supplemental figure 2 the same example neuron as in the original manuscript is shown again as well as the average z-scored visual response. First, the visual response latency is inconsistent with literature. The first evoked activity in mouse V1 (!) is routinely reported around 50 ms (for example, 45 ms in Niell Stryker 2008, 52 ms, Schnabel et al. 2018, 54 ms in Oude Lohuis et al. 2024). According to the authors the potential route of crossmodal modulation of AC can occur through either corticocortical connections (which will impose further polysynaptic delays - monosynaptic projection from dLGN or V1 incredibly sparse), or through pulvinar (but pulvinar visual responses are much later (they find 170 vs 80 ms in dLGN, Roth et al. 2019) as expected from a higher order thalamic nucleus). One can also critique the estimation of the response latency which depends on the signal strength (visual response is smaller) and thus choice of threshold. With a different arbitrary threshold one would come to different conclusions.

      Second, the temporal response dynamics to visual input are the same as the auditory response. It can be observed that if the data were normalized by the max response the dynamics are very similar, with the response back to near baseline levels at 100 ms post stimulus. I am not aware of publications that have observed response dynamics that are similar between A and V stimuli, nor such short-lasting visual response. In the visual system, mean activity typically drops again around 150-200ms.<br /> With the nature of the observed activity unclear, careful interpretation is warranted about audiovisual interactions in auditory cortex.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this work, the authors manage to optimize a simple and rapid protocol using SEC followed by DGCU to isolate sEVs with adequate purity and yield from small volumes of plasma. Isolated fractions containing sEVs using SEC, DGCU, SEC-DGCU and DGCU-SEC are compared in terms of their yield, purity surface protein profile and RNA content. Although the combined use of these methodologies has already been evaluated in previous works, the authors manage to adapt them for the use of small volumes of plasma, which allows working in 1.5 mL tubes and reducing the centrifugation time to 2 hours.<br /> The authors finally find that although both the SEC-DGCU and DGCU-SEC combinations achieve isolates with high purity, the SEC-DGCU combination results in higher yields.<br /> This work provides an interesting tool for the rapid obtention of sEVs with sufficient yield and purity for detailed characterization which could be very useful in research and clinical therapy.

      Strengths:

      The work is well written and organized.<br /> The authors clearly state the problem they want to address, that is, optimizing a method that allows sEV to be isolated from small volumes of plasma.<br /> Although these methodologies have been tested in previous works, the authors manage to isolate sEVs of high purity and good performance through a simple and fast methodology.<br /> The characteristics of all isolated fractions are exhaustively analyzed through various state-of-the-art methodologies.<br /> They present a good interpretation of the results obtained through the methodologies used.

      Weaknesses:

      Although this work focuses on comparing different techniques and their combinations to find an optimal option, the authors could strengthen their analysis by using statistical methods that reliably show the differences between the explored techniques.

      Comments on revisions:

      Although superiority of the proposed method was demonstrated by other techniques, it is always advisable to calculate the differences between different methodologies through different statistical methods, whenever possible, to strengthen the obtained results.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript entitled "Molecular dynamics of the matrisome across sea anemone life history", Bergheim and colleagues report the prediction, using an established sequence analysis pipeline, of the "matrisome" - that is, the compendium of genes encoding constituents of the extracellular matrix - of the starlet sea anemone Nematostella vectensis. Re-analysis of an existing scRNA-Seq dataset allowed the authors to identify the cell types expressing matrisome components and different developmental stages. Last, the authors apply time-resolved proteomics to provide experimental evidence of the presence of the extracellular matrix proteins at three different stages of the life cycle of the sea anemone (larva, primary polyp, adult) and show that different subsets of matrisome components are present in the ECM at different life stages with, for example, basement membrane components accompanying the transition from larva to primary polyp and elastic fiber components and matricellular proteins accompanying the transition from primary polyp to the adult stage.

      Strengths:

      The ECM is a structure that has evolved to support the emergence of multicellularity and different transitions that have accompanied the complexification of multicellular organisms. Understanding the molecular makeup of structures that are conserved throughout evolution is thus of paramount importance.

      The in-silico predicted matrisome of the sea anemone has the potential to become an essential resource for the scientific community to support big data annotation efforts and understand better the evolution of the matrisome and of ECM proteins, an important endeavor to better understand structure/function relationships. This study is also an excellent example of how integrating datasets generated using different -omic modalities can shed light on various aspects of ECM metabolism, from identifying the cell types of origins of matrisome components using scRNA-Seq to studying ECM dynamics using proteomics.

      Weaknesses:

      My concerns pertain to the three following areas of the manuscript:

      (1) In-silico definition of the anemone matrisome using sequence analysis:

      a) While a similar computational pipeline has been applied to predict the matrisome of several model organisms, the authors fail to provide a comprehensive definition of the anemone matrisome: In the text, the authors state the anemone matrisome is composed of "551 proteins, constituting approximately 3% of its proteome (see page 6, line 14), but Figure 1 lists 829 entries as part of the "curated" matrisome, Supplementary Table S1 lists the same 829 entries and the authors state that "Here, we identified 829 ECM proteins that comprise the matrisome of the sea anemone Nematostella vectensis" (see page 17, line 10). Is the sea anemone matrisome composed of 551 or 829 genes? If we refer to the text, the additional 278 entries should not be considered as part of the matrisome, but what is confusing is that some are listed as glycoproteins and the "new_manual_annotation" proposed by the authors and that refer to the protein domains found in these additional proteins suggest that in fact, some could or should be classified as matrisome proteins. For example, shouldn't the two lectins encoded by NV2.3951 and NV2.3157 be classified as matrisome-affiliated proteins? Based on what has been done for other model organisms, receptors have typically been excluded from the "matrisome" but included as part of the "adhesome" for consistency with previously published matrisome; the reviewer is left wondering whether the components classified as "Other" / "Receptor" should not be excluded from the matrisome and moved to a separate "adhesome" list.

      In addition to receptors, the authors identify nearly 70 glycoproteins classified as "Other". Here, does other mean "non-matrisome" or "another matrisome division" that is not core or associated? If the latter, could the authors try to propose a unifying term for these proteins? Unfortunately, since the authors do not provide the reasons for excluding these entries from the bona fide matrisome (list of excluding domains present, localization data), the reader is left wondering how to treat these entries.

      Overall, the study would gain in strength if the authors could be more definitive and, if needed, even propose novel additional matrisome annotations to include the components for now listed as "Other" (as was done, for example, for the Drosophila or C. elegans matrisomes).

      b) It is surprising that the authors are not providing the full currently accepted protein names to the entries listed in Supplementary Table S1 and have used instead "new_manual_annotation" that resembles formal protein names. This liberty is misleading. In fact, the "new_manual_annotation" seems biased toward describing the reason the proteins were positively screened for through sequence analysis, but many are misleading because there is, in fact, more known about them, including evidence that they are not ECM proteins. The authors should at least provide the current protein names in addition to their "new_manual_annotations".

      c) To truly serve as a resource, the Table should provide links to each gene entry in the Stowers Institute for Medical Research genome database used and some sort of versioning (this could be added to columns A, B, or D). Such enhancements would facilitate the assessment of the rigor of the list beyond the manual QC of just a few entries.

      d) Since UniProt is the reference protein knowledge database, providing the UniProt IDs associated with the predicted matrisome entries would also be helpful, giving easy access to information on protein domains, protein structures, orthology information, etc.

      e) In conclusion, at present, the study only provides a preliminary draft that should be more rigorously curated and enriched with more comprehensive and authoritative annotations if the authors aspire the list to become the reference anemone matrisome and serve the community.

      (2) Proteomic analysis of the composition of the mesoglea during the sea anemone life cycle:

      a) The product of 287 of the 829 genes proposed to encode matrisome components was detected by proteomics. What about the other ~550 matrisome genes? When and where are they expressed? The wording employed by the authors (see line 11, page 13) implies that only these 287 components are "validated" matrisome components. Is that to say that the other ~550 predicted genes do not encode components of the ECM? This should be discussed.

      b) Can the authors comment on how they have treated zero TMT values or proteins for which a TMT ratio could not be calculated because unique to one life stage, for example?

      c) Could the authors provide a plot showing the distribution of protein abundances for each matrisome category in the main figure 4? In mammals, the bulk of the ECM is composed of collagens, followed by fibrillar ECM glycoproteins, the other matrisome components being more minor. Is a similar distribution observed in the sea anemone mesoglea?

      d) Prior proteomic studies on the ECM of vertebrate organisms have shown the importance of allowing certain post-translational modifications during database search to ensure maximizing peptide-to-spectrum matching. Such PTMs include the hydroxylation of lysines and prolines that are collagen-specific PTMs. Multiple reports have shown that omitting these PTMs while analyzing LC-MS/MS data would lead to underestimating the abundance of collagens and the misidentification of certain collagens. The authors may want to re-analyze their dataset and include these PTMs as part of their search criteria to ensure capturing all collagen-derived peptides.

      e) The authors should ensure that reviewers are provided with access to the private PRIDE repository so the data deposited can also be evaluated. They should also ensure that sufficient meta-data is provided using the SRDF format to allow the re-use of their LC-MS/MS datasets.

      (3) Supplementary tables:

      The supplementary tables are very difficult to navigate. They would become more accessible to readers and non-specialists if they were accompanied by brief legends or "README" tabs and if the headers were more detailed (see, for example, Table S2, what does "ctrl.ratio_Larvae_rep2" exactly refer to? Or Table S6 whose column headers using extensive abbreviations are quite obscure). Similarly, what do columns K to BX in Supplementary Table S1 correspond to? Without more substantial explanations, readers have no way of assessing these data points.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aimed to assess the variability in the expression of surface protein multigene families between amastigote and trypomastigote Trypanosoma cruzi, as well as between individuals within each population. The analysis presented shows higher expression of multigene family transcripts in trypomastigotes compared to amastigotes and that there is variation in which copies are expressed between individual parasites. Notably, they find no clear subpopulations expressing previously characterised trans-sialidase groups. The mapping accuracy to these multicopy genes requires demonstration to confirm this, and the analysis could be extended further to probe the features of the top expressed genes and the other multigene families also identified as variable.

      Strengths:

      The authors successfully process methanol-fixed parasites with the 10x Genomics platform. This approach is valuable for other studies where using live parasites for these methods is logistically challenging.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors describe a single experiment, which lacks controls or complementation with other approaches and the investigation is limited to the trans-sialidase transcripts.

      It would be more convincing to show either bioinformatically or by carrying out a controlled experiment, that the sequencing generated has been mapped accurately to different members of multigene families to distinguish their expression. If mapping to the multigene families is inaccurate, this will impact the transcript counts and downstream analysis.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Liu et al., present glmSMA, a network-regularized linear model that integrates single-cell RNA-seq data with spatial transcriptomics, enabling high-resolution mapping of cellular locations across diverse datasets. Its dual regularization framework (L1 for sparsity and generalized L2 via a graph Laplacian for spatial smoothness) demonstrates robust performance of their model and offers novel tools for spatial biology, despite some gaps in fully addressing spatial communication.

      Overall, the manuscript is commendable for its comprehensive benchmarking across different spatial omics platforms and its novel application of regularized linear models for cell mapping. I think this manuscript can be improved by addressing method assumptions, expanding the discussion on feature dependence and cell type-specific biases, and clarifying the mechanism of spatial communication.

      The conclusions of this paper are mostly well supported by data, but some aspects of model development and performance evaluation need to be clarified and extended.

      (1) What were the assumptions made behind the model? One of them could be the linear relationship between cellular gene expression and spatial location. In complex biological tissues, non-linear relationships could be present, and this would also vary across organ systems and species. Similarly, with regularization parameters, they can be tuned to balance sparsity and smoothness adequately but may not hold uniformly across different tissue types or data quality levels. The model also seems to assume independent errors with normal distribution and linear additive effects - a simplification that may overlook overdispersion or heteroscedasticity commonly observed in RNA-seq data.

      (2) The performance of glmSMA is likely sensitive to the number and quality of features used. With too few features, the model may struggle to anchor cells correctly due to insufficient discriminatory power, whereas too many features could lead to overfitting unless appropriately regularized. The manuscript briefly acknowledges this issue, but further systematic evaluation of how varying feature numbers affect mapping accuracy would strengthen the claims, particularly in settings where marker gene availability is limited. A simple way to show some of this would be testing on multiple spatial omics (imaging-based) platforms with varying panel sizes and organ systems. Related to this, based on the figures, it also seems like the performance varies by cell type. What are the factors that contribute to this? Variability in expression levels, RNA quantity/quality? Biases in the panel? Personally, I am also curious how this model can be used similarly/differently if we have a FISH-based, high-plex reference atlas. Additional explanation around these points would be helpful for the readers.

      (3) Application 3 (spatial communication) in the graphical abstract appears relatively underdeveloped. While it is clear that the model infers spatial proximities, further explanation of how these mappings translate into insights into cell-cell communication networks would enhance the biological relevance of the findings.

      (4) What is the final resolution of the model outputs? I am assuming this is dictated by the granularity of the reference atlas and the imposed sparsity via the L1 norm, but if there are clear examples that would be good. In figures (or maybe in practice too), cells seem to be assigned to small, contiguous patches rather than pinpoint single-cell locations, which is a pragmatic compromise given the inherent limitations of current spatial transcriptomics technologies. Clarification on the precise spatial scale (e.g., pixel or micrometer resolution) and any post-mapping refinement steps would be beneficial for the users to make informed decisions on the right bioinformatic tools to use.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Kwon et al present a very well-conducted and well-written sieve analysis of rotavirus infections in a passive surveillance network in the US, considering how relative vaccine efficacy changes with genetic distance from the vaccine strains including the whole genome. The results are compelling, supported by a number of sensitivity analyses, and the manuscript is generally easy to follow.

      Strengths:

      (1) The underlying study base, a surveillance network across multiple sites in the US.

      (2) The use of a test-negative design, which is well established for rotavirus, to estimate vaccine efficacy.

      (3) The use of genetic distance to measure differences between infecting and vaccine strains, and the innovative use of k-means clustering to make results more interpretable.

      (4) The secondary and sensitivity analyses that provide additional context and support for the primary findings.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) As identified by the authors, there is a limited sample size for the analysis of RV1 (monovalent rotavirus vaccine).

      (2) Sieve analyses were originally designed for randomized trials, in which setting their key assumptions are more likely to be met. There is little discussion in this paper of how those assumptions might be violated and what effect that might have on the results. The authors have access to some important confounders, but I believe some more discussion on potential biases in this observational study is warranted.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study presents findings on dual TCR regulatory T cells (Tregs) using previously published single-cell RNA and TCR sequencing datasets. The authors aimed to quantify dual TCR Tregs in different tissues and analyze their characteristics. Rather than perform the difficult experiments needed to ascertain the functional role of dual receptors, this study relies entirely on scRNA-VDJ-seq data published by two other groups. The findings primarily confirm prior work rather than provide new insights, and the methodology has significant weaknesses that limit the study's impact. We have concerns about the scientific integrity of this work.

      Strengths:

      (1) The use of single-cell RNA and TCR sequencing is appropriate for addressing potential relationships between gene expression and dual TCR.

      (2) The data confirm the presence of dual TCR Tregs in various tissues, with proportions ranging from 10.1% to 21.4%, aligning with earlier observations in αβ T cells.

      (3) Tissue-specific patterns of TCR gene usage are reported, which could be of interest to researchers studying T cell adaptation, although these were more rigorously analyzed in the original works.

      Weaknesses

      (1) Lack of Novelty: The primary findings do not substantially advance our understanding of dual TCR expression, as similar results have been reported previously in other contexts.

      (2) Incomplete Evidence: The claims about tissue-specific differences lack sufficient controls (e.g., comparison with conventional T cells) and functional validation (e.g., cell surface expression of dual TCRs).

      (3) Methodological Weaknesses: The diversity analysis does not account for sample size differences, and the clonal analysis conflates counts and clonotypes, leading to potential misinterpretation.

      (4) Insufficient Transparency: The sequence analysis pipeline is inadequately described, and the study lacks reproducibility features such as shared code and data.

      (5) Weak Gene Expression Analysis: No statistical validation is provided for differential gene expression, and the UMAP plots fail to reveal meaningful clustering patterns.

      (6) A quick online search reveals that the same authors have repeated their approach of reanalysing other scientists' publicly available scRNA-VDJ-seq data in six other publications:

      (1) Peng, Q., Xu, Y. & Yao, X. scRNA+ TCR-seq revealed dual TCR T cells antitumor response in the TME of NSCLC. J Immunother Cancer 12 (2024). https://doi.org:10.1136/jitc-2024-009376

      (2) Wang, H., Li, J., Xu, Y. & Yao, X. scRNA + BCR-seq identifies proportions and characteristics of dual BCR B cells in the peritoneal cavity of mice and peripheral blood of healthy human donors across different ages. Immun Ageing 21, 90 (2024). https://doi.org:10.1186/s12979-024-00493-6

      (3) Xu, Y. et al. scRNA+TCR-seq reveals the pivotal role of dual receptor T lymphocytes in the pathogenesis of Kawasaki disease and during IVIG treatment. Front Immunol 15, 1457687 (2024). https://doi.org:10.3389/fimmu.2024.1457687

      (4) Yuanyuanxu, Qipeng, Qingqingma & Yao, X. scRNA + TCR-seq revealed the dual TCR pTh17 and Treg T cells involvement in autoimmune response in ankylosing spondylitis. Int Immunopharmacol 135, 112279 (2024). https://doi.org:10.1016/j.intimp.2024.112279

      (5) Zhu, L. et al. scRNA-seq revealed the special TCR beta & alpha V(D)J allelic inclusion rearrangement and the high proportion dual (or more) TCR-expressing cells. Cell Death Dis 14, 487 (2023). https://doi.org:10.1038/s41419-023-06004-7

      (6) Zhu, L., Peng, Q., Wu, Y. & Yao, X. scBCR-seq revealed a special and novel IG H&L V(D)J allelic inclusion rearrangement and the high proportion dual BCR expressing B cells. Cell Mol Life Sci 80, 319 (2023). https://doi.org:10.1007/s00018-023-04973-8

      In other words, the approach used here seems to be focused on quick re-analyses of publicly available data without further validation and/or exploration

      Appraisal of the Study's Aims and Conclusions:

      The authors set out to analyze dual TCR Tregs across tissues, but the lack of robust controls, incomplete analyses, and insufficient novelty limit the study's ability to achieve its aims. The results confirm prior findings but do not provide compelling evidence to support the broader claims about the characteristics or significance of dual TCR Tregs.

      Impact and Utility:

      While the study provides a descriptive analysis of dual TCR Tregs, its limited novelty and methodological weaknesses reduce its likely impact on the field. The methods and data could have utility for researchers interested in tissue-specific TCR gene usage, but additional rigor is required to make the findings broadly applicable.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors report four cryoEM structures (2.99 to 3.65 Å resolution) of the 180 kDa, full-length, glycosylated, soluble Angiotensin-I converting enzyme (sACE) dimer, with two homologous catalytic domains at the N- and C-terminal ends (ACE-N and ACE-C). ACE is a protease capable of effectively degrading Aβ. The four structures are C2 pseudo-symmetric homodimers and provide insight into sACE dimerization. These structures were obtained using discrete classification in cryoSPARC and show different combinations of open, intermediate, and closed states of the catalytic domains, resulting in varying degrees of solvent accessibility to the active sites.

      To deepen the understanding of the gradient of heterogeneity (from closed to open states) observed with discrete classification, the authors performed all-atom MD simulations and continuous conformational analysis of cryo-EM data using cryoSPARC 3DVA, cryoDRGN, and RECOVAR. cryoDRGN and cryoSPARC 3DVA revealed coordinated open-closed transitions across four catalytic domains, whereas RECOVAR revealed independent motion of two ACE-N domains, also observed with cryoSPARC-focused classification. The authors suggest that the discrepancy in the results of the different methods for continuous conformational analysis in cryo-EM could result from different approaches used for dimensionality reduction and trajectory generation in these methods.

      Strengths:

      This is an important study that shows, for the first time, the structure and the snapshots of the dynamics of the full-length sACE dimer. Moreover, the study highlights the importance of combining insights from different cryo-EM methods that address questions difficult or impossible to tackle experimentally while lacking ground truth for validation.

      Weaknesses:

      The open, closed, and intermediate states of ACE-N and ACE-C in the four cryo-EM structures from discrete classification were designated quantitatively (based on measured atomic distances on the models fitted into cryo-EM maps, Figure 2D). Unfortunately, atomic models were not fitted into cryo-EM maps obtained with cryoSPARC 3DVA, cryoDRGN, and RECOVAR, and the open/closed states in these cases were designated based on qualitative analysis. As the authors clearly pointed out, there are many other methods for continuous conformational heterogeneity analysis in cryo-EM. Among these methods, some allow analyzing particle images in terms of atomic models, like MDSPACE (Vuillemot et al., J. Mol. Biol. 2023, 435:167951), which result in one atomic model per particle image and can help in analyzing cooperativity of domain motions through measuring atomic distances or angular differences between different domains (Valimehr et al., Int. J. Mol. Sci. 2024, 25: 3371). This could be discussed in the article.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In their manuscript, Andriani et al. show intracellular zinc is exported from sperm during capacitation and suppresses the alkalinization-induced hyperpolarization in sperm. Intracellular zinc inhibits Slo3 current, which is enhanced by the co-expression of gamma subunit Lrrc52. Computational studies reveal that the Zn binding site on mSlo3 is located near E169 and E205, which are involved in the sustained zinc inhibition of mSlo3 current. The authors propose that intracellular zinc plays a key role in sperm capacitation by inhibiting the Slo3 channel.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the work appears well-designed (e.g., oocyte patch-clamp experiments), and clearly presented. Three-dimensional structural modeling and flooding simulations are executed.

      Weaknesses:

      The simple mutagenesis analysis of E169 and E205 showed partial abolishment, but the molecular mechanism by which zinc inhibits Slo3 current is not yet fully shown. The authors should consider performing more extensive experiments, such as creating double mutants or combination mutants involving other residues. Additionally, could other mechanisms explain the role of zinc in regulating the Slo3 current?

      While elucidating the mechanism of Slo3 is interesting, there is substantial literature indicating how zinc regulates channel functions at a molecular level. Given this, the manuscript should provide a deeper understanding by clearly elucidating the molecular mechanism of the regulation of Slo3 current by zinc.<br /> The manuscript includes no experimental data on the mechanism of intracellular zinc export during sperm capacitation, despite being crucial for the regulation of sperm function.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript "Lifestyles shape genome size and gene content in fungal pathogens" by Fijarczyk et al. presents a comprehensive analysis of a large dataset of fungal genomes to investigate what genomic features correlate with pathogenicity and insect associations. The authors focus on a single class of fungi, due to the diversity of lifestyles and availability of genomes. They analyze a set of 12 genomic features for correlations with either pathogenicity or insect association and find that, contrary to previous assertions, repeat content does not associate with pathogenicity. They discover that the number of protein-coding genes, including the total size of non-repetitive DNA does correlate with pathogenicity. However, unique features are associated with insect associations. This work represents an important contribution to the attempts to understand what features of genomic architecture impact the evolution of pathogenicity in fungi.

      Strengths:

      The statistical methods appear to be properly employed and analyses thoroughly conducted. The manuscript is well written and the information, while dense, is generally presented in a clear manner.

      Weaknesses:

      My main concerns all involve the genomic data, how they were annotated, and the biases this could impart to the downstream analyses. The three main features I'm concerned with are sequencing technology, gene annotation, and repeat annotation.

      The collection of genomes is diverse and includes assemblies generated from multiple sequencing technologies including both short- and long-read technologies. Not only has the impact of the sequencing method not been evaluated, but the technology is not even listed in Table S1. From the number of scaffolds it is clear that the quality of the assemblies varies dramatically. This is going to impact many of the values important for this study, including genome size, repeat content, and gene number. Additionally, since some filtering was employed for small contigs, this could also bias the results.

      I have considerable worries that the gene annotation methods could impart biases that significantly affect the main conclusions. Only 5 reference training sets were used for the Sordariomycetes and these are unequally distributed across the phylogeny. Augusts obviously performed less than ideally, as the authors reported that it under-annotated the genomes by 10%. I suspect it will have performed worse with increasing phylogenetic distance from the reference genomes. None of the species used for training were insect-associated, except for those generated by the authors for this study. As this feature was used to split the data it could impact the results. Some major results rely explicitly on having good gene annotations, like exon length, adding to these concerns. Looking manually at Table S1 at Ophiostoma, it does seem to be a general trend that the genomes annotated with Magnaporthe grisea have shorter exons than those annotated with H294. I also wonder if many of the trends evident in Figure 5 are also the result of these biases. Clades H1 and G each contain a species used in the training and have an increase in genes for example.

      Unfortunately, the genomes available from NCBI will vary greatly in the quality of their repeat masking. While some will have been masked using custom libraries generated with software like Repeatmodeler, others will probably have been masked with public databases like repbase. As public databases are again biased towards certain species (Fusarium is well represented in repbase for example), this could have significant impacts on estimating repeat content. Additionally, even custom libraries can be problematic as some software (like RepeatModeler) will include multicopy host genes leading to bona fide genes being masked if proper filtering is not employed. A more consistent repeat masking pipeline would add to the robustness of the conclusions.

      To a lesser degree, I wonder what impact the use of representative genomes for a species has on the analyses. Some species vary greatly in genome size, repeat content, and architecture among strains. I understand that it is difficult to address in this type of analysis, but it could be discussed.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      IBEX Knowledge Database

      Here, Anidi and colleagues present the IBEX knowledge base. A community tool developed to centralize knowledge and help its adoption by more users. The authors have done a fantastic job, and there is careful consideration of the many aspects of data management and FAIR principles. The manuscript needs no further work, as it is very well written and has detailed descriptions for data contribution as well as describing the KB itself. Overall, it is a great initiative, especially the aim to inform about negative data and non-recommended reagents, which will positively affect the user community and scientific reproducibility.

      As such amount of work has been put into developing this community tool, it would be worth thinking about how it could serve other multiplex-immunofluorescence methods (such as immunoSABER, 4i, etc). Adding an extra tab where the particular method that uses those reagents is mentioned. This would also help as IBEX itself and related methods evolve in the future.

      It has a rather minimal description of the software. In particular, there is software that has not been developed for IBEX specifically but that could be used for IBEX datasets (ASHLAR, WSIReg, VALIS, WARPY, and QuPath, etc). It would be nice if there was mention of those.

      There is a concern about how the negative data information will be added, as no publication or peer-review process can back it up. Perhaps the particular conditions of the experiment should be very well described to allow future users to assess the validity. The proposed scheme where a reagent can be validated or recommended against by up to 4 different labs should be good. It may be good to make sure that researchers who validate belong to different labs and are not only different ORCID that belong to the same group. Similar to making a case of recommendations against a reagent.

      It is very interesting to keep track of the protocol versions used. Perhaps users should be able to validate independent versions and it will be important to know how information is kept.

      The final point I would make is that the need to form a GitHub repository may deter some people from submitting data. For sporadic contributions, authors could think that users could either reach out to main developers and/or provide a submission form that can help less experienced users of command-line and GitHub programming, but still promote the contribution from the community.

      I am keen to see how the KB evolves and how it helps disseminate the use of this and other great techniques.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Le et al.. aimed to explore whether AAV-mediated overexpression of Oct4 could induce neurogenic competence in adult murine Müller glia, a cell type that, unlike its counterparts in cold-blooded vertebrates, lacks regenerative potential in mammals. The primary goal was to determine whether Oct4 alone, or in combination with Notch signaling inhibition, could drive Müller glia to transdifferentiate into bipolar neurons, offering a potential strategy for retinal regeneration.

      The authors demonstrated that Oct4 overexpression alone resulted in the conversion of 5.1% of Müller glia into Otx2+ bipolar-like neurons by five weeks post-injury, compared to 1.1% at two weeks. To further enhance the efficiency of this conversion, they investigated the synergistic effect of Notch signaling inhibition by genetically disrupting Rbpj, a key Notch effector. Under these conditions, the percentage of Müller glia-derived bipolar cells increased significantly to 24.3%, compared to 4.5% in Rbpj-deficient controls without Oct4 overexpression. Similarly, in Notch1/2 double-knockout Müller glia, Oct4 overexpression increased the proportion of GFP+ bipolar cells from 6.6% to 15.8%.

      To elucidate the molecular mechanisms driving this reprogramming, the authors performed single-cell RNA sequencing (scRNA-seq) and ATAC-seq, revealing that Oct4 overexpression significantly altered gene regulatory networks. They identified Rfx4, Sox2, and Klf4 as potential mediators of Oct4-induced neurogenic competence, suggesting that Oct4 cooperates with endogenously expressed neurogenic factors to reshape Müller glia identity.

      Overall, this study aimed to establish Oct4 overexpression as a novel and efficient strategy to reprogram mammalian Müller glia into retinal neurons, demonstrating both its independent and synergistic effects with Notch pathway inhibition. The findings have important implications for regenerative therapies as they suggest that manipulating pluripotency factors in vivo could unlock the neurogenic potential of Müller glia for treating retinal degenerative diseases.

      Strengths:

      (1) Novelty: The study provides compelling evidence that Oct4 overexpression alone can induce Müller glia-to-bipolar neuron conversion, challenging the conventional view that mammalian Müller glia lacks neurogenic potential.

      (2) Technological Advances: The combination of Muller glia-specific labeling and modifying mouse line, AAV-GFAP promoter-mediated gene expression, single-cell RNA-seq, and ATAC-seq provides a comprehensive mechanistic dissection of glial reprogramming.

      (3) Synergistic Effects: The finding that Oct4 overexpression enhances neurogenesis in the absence of Notch signaling introduces a new avenue for retinal repair strategies.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) In this study, the authors did not perform a comprehensive functional assessment of the bipolar cells derived from Müller glia to confirm their neuronal identity and functionality.

      (2) Demonstrating visual recovery in a bipolar cell-deficiency disease model would significantly enhance the translational impact of this work and further validate its therapeutic potential.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The paper by Fournier et al. investigates the sensitivity of neural circuits to changes in intrinsic and synaptic conductances. The authors use models of the stomatogastric ganglion (STG) to compare how perturbations to intrinsic and synaptic parameters impact network robustness. Their main finding is that changes to intrinsic conductances tend to have a larger impact on network function than changes to synaptic conductances, suggesting that intrinsic parameters are more critical for maintaining circuit function.

      The paper is well-written, and the results are compelling. The authors addressed most of the minor comments I had and improved the manuscript.

      However, it remains unclear how general the results are and what the underlying mechanism is. Regarding generality, the authors changed the title and added a sentence in the discussion. At this point, they do not claim generality beyond the specific function they explore in the STG circuit. While this is acceptable, I still believe the paper would be much more insightful if it provided a more general statement and investigated the mechanism behind why, in their hands, synaptic parameters appear more resilient to changes than intrinsic parameters.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study takes a detailed approach to understand the effect of menopausal hormone therapy (MHT) in brain aging of females. Neuroimaging data from the UK Biobank is used to explore brain aging and shows an unexpected effect of current MHT use and poorer brain health outcomes relative to never users. There is considerable debate about the benefits of MHT and estrogens in particular for brain health, and this analysis illustrates thta the effects are certainly not straight forward and require greater considerations.

      Strengths:

      (1) The detailed approach to obtain important information about MHT use from primary care records. Prior studies have suggested that factors such as estrogen/progestin type, route of administration, duration, and timing of use relative to menopause onset can contribute to whether MHT benefits brain health.<br /> (2) Consideration of type of menopause (spontaneous, or surgical) in the analysis, as well as sensitivity diagnoses to rule out the effect being driven by those with clinical conditions<br /> (3) The incorporation of the brain age estimate along with hippocampal volume to address brain health<br /> (4) The complex data are also well explained and interpretations are reasonable.<br /> (5) Limitations of the UKbiobank data are acknowledged

      Weaknesses:

      These have since been addressed by the authors in the revision.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The author studied metabolic networks for central metabolism, focusing on how system trajectories returned to their steady state. To quantify the response, systematic perturbation was performed in simulation and the maximal destabilization away from steady state (compared with initial perturbation distance) was characterized. The author analyzed the perturbation response and found that sparse network and networks with more cofactors are more "stable", in the sense that the perturbed trajectories have smaller deviation along the path back to the steady state.

      Strengths and major contributions:

      The author compared three metabolic models and performed systematic perturbation analysis in simulation. This is the first work characterized how perturbed trajectories deviate from equilibrium in large biochemical systems and illustrated interesting findings about the difference between sparse biological systems and randomly simulated reaction networks.

      Discussion and impact for the field:

      Metabolic perturbation is an important topic in cell biology and has important clinical implication in pharmacodynamics. The computational analysis in this study provides an initiative for future quantitative analysis on metabolism and homeostasis.

      Comments on latest version:

      In the latest version of this work, the author included NADH, NADPH into the analysis, and perform some comparison about sensitivity analysis. I think this paper is ready to be finalized, and many open questions inspired from this work can be studied in future.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors examine the role of the medial prefrontal cortex (mPFC) in cognitive control, i.e. the ability to use task-relevant information and ignore irrelevant information, in the rat. According to the central-computation hypothesis, cognitive control in the brain is centralized in the mPFC and according to the local hypothesis, cognitive control is performed in task-related local neural circuits. Using the place avoidance task which involves cognitive control, it is predicted that if mPFC lesions affect learning, this would support the central computation hypothesis whereas no effect of lesions would rather support the local hypothesis. The authors thus examine the effect of mPFC lesions in learning and retention of the place avoidance task. They also look at functional interconnectivity within a large network of areas that could be activated during the task by using cytochrome oxydase, a metabolic marker. In addition, electrophysiological unit recordings of CA1 hippocampal cells are made in a subset of (mPFC-lesioned or intact) animals to evaluate overdispersion, a firing property that reflects cognitive control in the hippocampus. The results indicate that mPFC lesions disrupted correlations of activity between functionally-related regions. Behaviorally, lesions did not impair place avoidance learning and retention (though flexibility was altered during conflict training). In addition, hippocampal place cell overdispersion was decreased in lesioned rats only in the absence of cognitive control challenge (pretraining). Cognitive control seen in hippocampal place cell activity (alternation of frame-specific firing) was not affected by the lesion. Overall, the absence of effects of mPFC lesions on cognitive control in the task or in hippocampal place cells firing support the local hypothesis.

      Strengths:

      Straightforward hypothesis: clarification of the involvement of the mPFC in the brain is expected and achieved. Appropriate use of fully mastered methods (active place avoidance task, electrophysiological unit recordings, measure of metabolic marker cytochrome oxidase) and rigorous analysis of the data. The conclusion is strongly supported by the data.

      Weaknesses:

      No notable weaknesses in the conception, making of the study and data analysis.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have satisfactorily addressed all my comments in the revised version.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript by Obray et al., the authors show that adolescent ethanol exposure increases mechanical allodynia in adulthood. Additionally, the show that BLA mediated inhibition of prelimbic cortex is reduced, resulting in increased excitability in neurons that then project to vlPAG. This effect was mediated by BLA inputs onto PV interneurons. The primary finding of the manuscript is that these AIE induced changes further impact acute pain processing in the BLA-PrL-vlPAG circuit, albeit behavioral readouts after inducing acute pain were not different between AIE rats and controls. These results provide novel insights into how AIE can have long lasting effects on pain-related behaviors and neurophysiology.In this manuscript by Obray et al., the authors show that adolescent ethanol exposure increases mechanical allodynia in adulthood. Additionally, the show that BLA mediated inhibition of prelimbic cortex is reduced, resulting in increased excitability in neurons that then project to vlPAG. This effect was mediated by BLA inputs onto PV interneurons. The primary finding of the manuscript is that these AIE induced changes further impact acute pain processing in the BLA-PrL-vlPAG circuit, albeit behavioral readouts after inducing acute pain were not different between AIE rats and controls. These results provide novel insights into how AIE can have long lasting effects on pain-related behaviors and neurophysiology.

      The manuscript was very well written and the experiments were rigorously conducted. The inclusion of both behavioral and neurophysiological circuit recordings was appropriate and compelling. The authors analyzed their data extensively, and consider how many different factors may influence physiological activity and downstream behavior. The attention to SABV and appropriate controls was well thought out. The Discussion provided novel ideas for how to think about AIE and chronic pain, and proposed several interesting mechanisms. This was a very well executed set of experiments.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed the concerns raised by the reviewers. Excellent work!

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    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is a convincing description of approximately ten years of funding from the NIH BRAIN initiative. It is of particular value at this moment in history, given the cataclysmic changes in the US government structure and function occurring in early 2025.

      Strengths:

      The paper contains a fair bit of documentation so that the curious reader can actually parse what this BRAIN program funded.

      Weaknesses:

      There are too many acronyms, and the manuscript reads as if it were an internal NIH document, where the audience knows all of the NIH nomenclature and program details. It is not particularly friendly to the outside, lay reader.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this useful narrative, the authors attempt to capture their experience of the success of team projects for the scientific community.

      Strengths:

      The authors are able to draw on a wealth of real-life experience reviewing, funding, and administering large team projects, and assessing how well they achieve their goals.

      Weaknesses:

      The utility of the RCR as a measure is questionable. I am not sure if this really makes the case for the success of these projects. The conclusions do not depend on Figure 1.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This computational study builds on a previous study (Liu et al) from the Marder lab from 1998, where a model was proposed that demonstrated activity-dependent homeostatic recovery of activity in individual bursting neurons, based on three "sensors" of intrinsic calcium concentration. The original model modified levels of ion channel conductances. The current model builds on that and adds activity-dependent modifications of the voltage-dependence of these ionic currents, implemented to happen concurrently with maximum conductance levels, but at a different timescale. The faster timescale change in voltage dependence is justified by the assumption that such changes can occur by neuromodulatory chemicals or similar second messenger-based mechanisms that presumably act at a faster rate than the regulation of channel densities. The main finding is that the difference in timescales between the two homeostatic mechanisms (channel density vs. voltage dependence) could result in distinct subsets of parameters, depending on how fast the second messenger mechanisms operate.

      This study is an interesting and noteworthy extension of the theoretical ideas proposed by the classic study of Liu et al, 1998. It addresses a very important question: How do two known mechanisms of modifications of neuronal activity that occur at different timescales interact within an activity-dependent homeostatic framework? However, the study and its presentation have some major shortcomings that should be addressed to strengthen the claim.

      Major comments:

      (1) The main issue that I have with this study is the lack of exploration of "why" the model produces the results it does. Considering this is a model, it should be possible to find out why the three timescales of half-act/inact parameter modifications lead to different sets of results. Without this, it is simply an exploratory exercise. (The model does this, but we do not know the mechanism.) Perhaps this is enough as an interesting finding, but it remains unconvincing and (clearly) does not have the impact of describing a potential mechanism that could be potentially explored experimentally.

      (2) A related issue is the use of bootstrapping to do statistics for a family of models, especially when the question is in fact the width of the distribution of output attributes. I don't buy this. One can run enough models to find say N number of models within a tight range (say 2% cycle period) and the same N number within a loose range (say 20%) and compare the statistics within the two groups with the same N.

      (3) The third issue is that many of the results that are presented (but not the main one) are completely expected. If one starts with gmax values that would never work (say all of them 0), then it doesn't matter how much one moves the act/inact curves one probably won't get the desired activity. Alternately, if one starts with gmax values that are known to work and randomizes the act/inact midpoints, then the expectation would be that it converges to something that works. This is Figure 1 B and C, no surprise. But it should work the other way around too. If one starts with random act/inact curves that would never work and fixes those, then why would one expect any set of gmax values would produce the desired response? I can easily imagine setting the half-act/inact values to values that never produce any activity with any gmax.

      (4) A potential response to my previous criticism would be that you put reasonable constraints on gmax's or half-act/inact values or tie the half-act to half-inact. But that is simply arbitrary ad hoc decisions made to make the model work, much like the L8-norm used to amplify some errors. There is absolutely no reason to believe this is tied to the biology of the system.

      (5) The discussion of this manuscript is at once too long and not adequate. It goes into excruciating detail about things that are simply not explored in this study, such as phosphorylation mechanisms, justification of model assumptions of how these alterations occur, or even the biological relevance. (The whole model is an oversimplification - lack of anatomical structure, three calcium sensors, arbitrary assumptions, and how parameter bounds are implemented.) Lengthy justifications for why channel density & half-act/inact of all currents are obeying the same time constant are answering a question that no one asked. It is a simplified model to make an important point. The authors should make these parts concise and to the point. More importantly, the authors should discuss the mechanism through which these differences may arise. Even if it is not clear, they should speculate.

      (6) There should be some justification or discussion of the arbitrary assumptions made in the model/methods. I understand some of this is to resolve issues that had come up in previous iterations of this approach and in fact the Alonso et al, 2023 paper was mainly to deal with these issues. However, some level of explanation is needed, especially when assumptions are made simply because of the intuition of the modeler rather than the existence of a biological constraint or any other objective measure.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Inhibitory hM4Di and excitatory hM3Dq DREADDs are currently the most commonly utilized chemogenetic tools in the field of nonhuman primate research, but there is a lack of available information regarding the temporal aspects of virally-mediated DREADD expression and function. Nagai et al. investigated the longitudinal expression and efficacy of DREADDs to modulate neuronal activity in the macaque model. The authors demonstrate that both hM4Di and hM3Dq DREADDs reach peak expression levels after approximately 60 days and are stably expressed for a period of at least 1.5 years in the macaque brain. During this period, DREADDs effectively modulated neuronal activity, as evidenced by a variety of measures, including behavioural testing, functional imaging, and/or electrophysiological recording. Notably, some of the data suggest that DREADD expression may decline after two years. This is a novel finding and has important implications for the utilization of this technology for long-term studies, as well as its potential therapeutic applications. Lastly, the authors highlight that peak DREADD expression may be significantly influenced by the choice of viral titer and the expressed protein tag, emphasizing the importance of careful design and selection of viral constructs for neuroscientific research. This study represents a critical step in the field of chemogenetics, setting the scene for future development and optimization of this technology.

      Strengths:

      The longitudinal approach of this study provides important preliminary insights into the long-term utility of chemogenetics, which has not yet been thoroughly explored.

      The data presented are novel and inclusive, relying on well-established in vivo imaging methods, as well as behavioral and immunohistochemical techniques. The conclusions made by the authors are generally supported by a combination of these techniques. In particular, the utilization of in vivo imaging as a non-invasive method is translationally relevant and likely to make an impact in the field of chemogenetics, such that other researchers may adopt this method of longitudinal assessment in their own experiments. Rigorous standards have been applied to the datasets, and the appropriate controls have been included where possible.

      The number of macaque subjects (20) from which data was available is also notable. Behavioral testing was performed in 11 subjects, FDG-PET in 5, electrophysiology in 1, and [11C]DCZ-PET in 15. This is an impressive accumulation of work that will surely be appreciated by the growing community of researchers using chemogenetics in nonhuman primates.

      The implication that chemogenetic effects can be maintained for up to 1.5-2 years, followed by a gradual decline beyond this period, is an important development in knowledge. The limited duration of DREADD expression may present an obstacle in the translation of chemogenetic technology as a potential therapeutic tool, and it will be of interest for researchers to explore whether this limitation can be overcome. This study therefore represents a key starting point upon which future research can build.

      Weaknesses:

      Overall, the conclusions of the paper are mostly supported by the data but may be overstated in some cases, and some details are also missing or not easily recognizable within the figures. The provision of additional information and analyses would be valuable to the reader and may even benefit the authors' interpretation of the data.

      The conclusion that DREADD expression gradually decreases after 1.5-2 years is only based on a select few of the subjects assessed; in Figure 2, it appears that only 3 hM4Di cases and 2 hM3Dq cases are assessed after the 2-year timepoint. The observed decline appears consistent within the hM4Di cases, but not for the hM3Dq cases (see Figure 2C: the AAV2.1-hSyn-hM3Dq-IRES-AcGFP line is increasing after 2 years.)

      Given that individual differences may affect expression levels, it would be helpful to see additional labels on the graphs (or in the legends) indicating which subject and which region are being represented for each line and/or data point in Figure 1C, 2B, 2C, 5A, and 5B. Alternatively, for Figures 5A and B, an accompanying table listing this information would be sufficient.

      While the authors comment on several factors that may influence peak expression levels, including serotype, promoter, titer, tag, and DREADD type, they do not comment on the volume of injection. The range in volume used per region in this study is between 2 and 54 microliters, with larger volumes typically (but not always) being used for cortical regions like the OFC and dlPFC, and smaller volumes for subcortical regions like the amygdala and putamen. This may weaken the claim that there is no significant relationship between peak expression level and brain region, as volume may be considered a confounding variable. Additionally, because of the possibility that larger volumes of viral vectors may be more likely to induce an immune response, which the authors suggest as a potential influence on transgene expression, not including volume as a factor of interest seems to be an oversight.

      The authors conclude that vectors encoding co-expressed protein tags (such as HA) led to reduced peak expression levels, relative to vectors with an IRES-GFP sequence or with no such element at all. While interesting, this finding does not necessarily seem relevant for the efficacy of long-term expression and function, given that the authors show in Figures 1 and 2 that peak expression (as indicated by a change in binding potential relative to non-displaced radioligand, or ΔBPND) appears to taper off in all or most of the constructs assessed. The authors should take care to point out that the decline in peak expression should not be confused with the decline in longitudinal expression, as this is not clear in the discussion; i.e. the subheading, "Factors influencing DREADD expression," might be better written as, "Factors influencing peak DREADD expression," and subsequent wording in this section should specify that these particular data concern peak expression only.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript from Kaletsky et al is a response to a paper recently published by Craig Hunter's group (Gainey et al 2024). The Murphy lab has previously shown that learned avoidance of C. elegans to PA14 can be transmitted through four generations. In a series of detailed studies, they defined the mechanism of this transgenerational epigenetic inheritance (TEI), identifying both PA14 and C. elegans factors required for this effect (Moore et al., 2019, Kaletsky et al., 2020; Moore et al., 2021). PA14 produces a small RNA, P11, that is necessary and sufficient for transgenerational epigenetic inheritance of avoidance behaviour in C. elegans. In the worm, P11 decreases maco-1 expression, which in turn regulates daf-7.

      In the study by Gainey et al (eLife 2024), the authors report their attempt at replicating the original findings of the Murphy lab using a modified experimental setup. The Gainey study observed avoidance of PA14 and upregulation of daf-7::GFP in the F1 progeny of trained parents, but not in subsequent generations. Importantly, although they examined a number of different deviations of the protocol, they did not repeat the original experiment using the exact protocol outlined in the Moore or Kaletsky papers. Nevertheless, the authors concluded that "this example of TEI is insufficiently robust for experimental investigations".

      The manuscript by Kaletsky et al. attempts to provide an explanation as to why Gainey et al., were unable to observe transgenerational avoidance of PA14. They identify two discrepancies in the methodology used between the two studies and examine the possible impacts of these.

      One of the primary differences in protocols between the two papers is how avoidance is measured. The Murphy group uses the traditional method of adding azide to bacterial spots on the choice plates to trap worms once they have come close to the food spot. The animals are on the plate for 1 hour but most have likely been immobilized before this time point. Gainey et al. omit the azide and instead shift animals to 4C after 30-60 minutes of exposure to immobilize the worms for counting. Kaletsky et al show that the choice of assay has a significant impact on measuring attraction and avoidance.

      While Gainey et al., assert that the addition of azide had no discernable effect on the choice assay results, these data are not shown in their paper. Kaletsky et al. test these conditions head-to-head with the same 1 hour exposure time, showing that with azide, the initial response to PA14 in untrained worms is attraction. By contrast, in the absence of azide, when cold temperature is used to immobilize the worms , the response recorded is aversion to PA14. The choice assay generated by Kaletsky et al without azide is consistent with the choice assays in untrained worms shown in the Gainey paper, demonstrating that this is likely one factor that contributed to the different outcomes reported in the Gainey paper.

      Kaletsky et al. propose that learned aversion to PA14 may be occurring within the 1-hour exposure time when worms are not trapped in their initial decision with the use of azide. This is consistent with previous findings from another group (Ooi and Prahlad 2017), showing that 45 minutes of exposure is sufficient to overcome the attraction to PA14 and shift to avoidance of PA14. Importantly, the Gainey paper notes exposure times between 30 and 60 minutes before shifting worms to 4C to count, this window may have generated additional variability between assays.

      The second possibility explored by Kaletsky et al. is that the expression of P11 differed between the studies. Because P11 is required for TEI, differences in P11 expression is a reasonable explanation for different observations between studies. Unfortunately, in the Gainey study, P11 levels were not measured; it is therefore not possible to know whether low or absent levels of P11 explain the inability to observe TEI. Nevertheless, Kaletsky et al. test the potential for changes in one growth condition, temperature, to influence the production P11. Indeed, the expression of P11 differs in PA14 grown at different growth temperatures, providing an additional explanation for the discrepancies.

      While it is possible that temperature is the culprit, it may be another culture condition or media component suppressing P11 expression. Nevertheless, the fact that expression of P11 can so easily be modified demonstrates that P11 expression is not immune to differences in culture conditions. Given its role in nitrogen fixation, I would be surprised if it was not regulated by environmental conditions. Differences in iron content between media batches are notorious for altering bacteria phenotypes. Although outside the scope of this study, with the connection to biofilm formation, I would be curious if iron levels had an impact on P11 expression. All in all, the data highlight the fact that P11 levels should be measured if TEI is not seen.

      Strengths:

      Overall, this is an excellent study that has provided additional understanding of the difference between naïve preference and TEI and provides guidance for investigators in replicating TEI experiments. The manuscript is very well written and provides additional understanding regarding the replication of TEI in response to P. aeruginosa.

      The manuscript provides an important discussion about differences in methodology and how they might reflect specific biology. Many examples of experimental deviations that have large impacts have simple biological explanations. I believe the authors have done an excellent job making this point.

      Weaknesses:

      None noted.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study presents a system for delivering precisely controlled cutaneous stimuli to freely moving mice by coupling markerless real-time tracking to transdermal optogenetic stimulation, using the tracking signal to direct a laser via galvanometer mirrors. The principal claims are that the system achieves sub-mm targeting accuracy with a latency of <100 ms. The nature of mouse gait enables accurate targeting of forepaws even when mice are moving.

      Strengths:

      The study is of high quality and the evidence for the claims is convincing. There is increasing focus in neurobiology in studying neural function in freely moving animals, engaged in natural behaviour. However, a substantial challenge is how to deliver controlled stimuli to sense organs under such conditions. The system presented here constitutes notable progress towards such experiments in the somatosensory system and is, in my view, a highly significant development that will be of interest to a broad readership.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) "laser spot size was set to 2.00 } 0.08 mm2 diameter (coefficient of variation = 3.85)" is unclear. Is the 0.08 SD or SEM? (not stated). Also, is this systematic variation across the arena (or something else)? Readers will want to know how much the spot size varies across the arena - ie SD. CV=4 implies that SD~7 mm. ie non-trivial variation in spot size, implying substantial differences in power delivery (and hence stimulus intensity) when the mouse is in different locations. If I misunderstood, perhaps this helps the authors to clarify. Similarly, it would be informative to have mean & SD (or mean & CV) for power and power density. In future refinements of the system, would it be possible/useful to vary laser power according to arena location?

      (2) "The video resolution (1920 x 1200) required a processing time higher than the frame interval (33.33 ms), resulting in real-time pose estimation on a sub-sample of all frames recorded". Given this, how was it possible to achieve 84 ms latency? An important issue for closed-loop research will relate to such delays. Therefore please explain in more depth and (in Discussion) comment on how the latency of the current system might be improved/generalised. For example, although the current system works well for paws it would seem to be less suited to body parts such as the snout that do not naturally have a stationary period during the gait cycle.

  2. Mar 2025
    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Fluorescence imaging has become an increasingly popular technique for monitoring neuronal activity and neurotransmitter concentrations in the living brain. However, factors such as brain motion and changes in blood flow and oxygenation can introduce significant artifacts, particularly when activity-dependent signals are small. Yogesh et al. quantified these effects using GFP, an activity-independent marker, under two-photon and wide-field imaging conditions in awake behaving mice. They report significant GFP responses across various brain regions, layers, and behavioral contexts, with magnitudes comparable to those of commonly used activity sensors. These data highlight the need for robust control strategies and careful interpretation of fluorescence functional imaging data.

      Strengths:

      The effect of hemodynamic occlusion in two-photon imaging has been previously demonstrated in sparsely labeled neurons in V1 of anesthetized animals (see Shen and Kara et al., Nature Methods, 2012). The present study builds on these findings by imaging a substantially larger population of neurons in awake, behaving mice across multiple cortical regions, layers, and stimulus conditions. The experiments are extensive, the statistical analyses are rigorous, and the results convincingly demonstrate significant GFP responses that must be accounted for in functional imaging experiments.

      In the revised version, the authors have provided further methodological details that were lacking in the previous version, expanded discussions regarding alternative explanations of these GFP responses as well as potential mitigation strategies. They also added a quantification of brain motion (Fig. S5) and the fraction of responsive neurons when conducting the same experiment using GCaMP6f (Fig. 3D-3F), among other additional information.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors have now included a detailed methodology for blood vessel area quantification, where they detect blood vessels as dark holes in GFP images and measure vessel area by counting pixels below a given intensity threshold (line 437-443). However, this approach has a critical caveat: any unspecific decrease in image fluorescence will increase the number of pixels below the threshold, leading to an apparent increase in blood vessel area, even when the actual vessel size remains unchanged. As a result, this method inherently introduces a positive correlation between fluorescence decrease and vessel dilation, regardless of whether such a relationship truly exists.

      To address this issue, I recommend labelling blood vessels with an independent marker, such as a red fluorescence dye injected into the bloodstream. This approach would allow vessel dilation to be assessed independently of GFP fluorescence -- dilation would cause opposite fluorescence changes in the green and red channels (i.e., a decrease in green due to hemodynamic occlusion and an increase in red due to the expanding vessel area). In my opinion, only when such ani-correlation is observed can one reliably infer a relationship between GFP signal changes and blood vessel dynamics.

      Because this relationship is central to the author's conclusion regarding the nature of the observed GFP signals, including this experiment would greatly strengthen the paper's conclusion.

      (2) Regarding mitigation strategy, the authors advocate repeating key functional imaging experiments using GFP, and state that their aim here is to provide a control for their 2012 study (Keller et al., Neuron). Given this goal, I find it important to discuss how these new findings impact the interpretation of their 2012 results, particularly given the large GFP responses observed.

      For example, Keller et al. (2012) concluded that visuomotor mismatch strongly drives V1 activity (Fig. 3A in that study). However, in the present study, mismatch fails to produce any hemodynamic/GFP response (Fig. 3A, 3B, rightmost bar), and the corresponding calcium response is also the weakest among the three tested conditions (Fig. 3D). How do these findings affect their 2012 conclusions?

      Similarly, the present study shows that GFP reveals twice as many responsive neurons as GCaMP during locomotion (Fig. 3A vs. Fig. 3D, "running"). Does this mean that their 2012 conclusions regarding locomotion-induced calcium activity need reconsideration? Given that more neurons responded with GFP than with GCaMP, the authors should clarify whether they still consider GCaMP a reliable tool for measuring brain activity during locomotion.

      (3) More generally, the author should discuss how functional imaging data should be interpreted going forward, given the large GFP responses reported here. Even when key experiments are repeated using GFP, it is not entirely clear how one could reliably estimate underlying neuronal activity from the observed GFP and GCaMP responses.

      For example, consider the results in Fig. 3A vs. 3D: how should one assess the relative strength of neuronal activity elicited by running, grating, or visuomotor mismatch? Does mismatch produce the strongest neuronal activity, since it is least affected by the hemodynamic/GFP confounds (Fig. 3A)? Or does mismatch actually produce the weakest neuronal activity, given that both its hemodynamic and calcium responses are the smallest?

      In my opinion, such uncertainty makes it difficult to robustly interpret functional imaging results. Simply repeating experiments with GFP does not fully resolve this issue, as it does not provide a clear framework for quantifying the underlying neuronal activity. Does this suggest a need for a better mitigation strategy? What could these strategies be?

      In my opinion, addressing these questions is critical not only for the authors' own work but also for the broader field to ensure a robust and reliable interpretation of functional imaging data.

      (4) The authors now discuss various alternative sources of the observed GFP signals. However, I feel that they often appear to dismiss these possibilities too quickly, rather than appreciating their true potential impacts (see below).

      For example, the authors argue that brain movement cannot explain their data, as movement should only result in a decrease in observed fluorescence. However, while this might hold for x-y motion, movement in the axial (z) direction can easily lead to both fluorescence increase and decrease. Neurons are not always precisely located at the focal plane -- some are slightly above or below. Axial movement in a given direction will bring some cells into focus while moving others out of focus, leading to fluorescence changes in both directions, exactly as observed in the data (see Fig. S2).

      Furthermore, the authors state that they discard data with 'visible' z-motion. However, subtle axial movements that escape visual detection could still cause fluorescence fluctuations on the order of a few percent, comparable to the reported signal amplitudes.

      Finally, the authors state that "brain movement kinematics are different in shape than the GFP responses we observe". However, this appears to contradict what they show in Fig. 2A. Specifically, the first example neuron exhibits fast GFP transients locked to running onset, with rapid kinematics closely matching the movement speed signals in Fig. S5A. These fast transients are incompatible with slower blood vessel area signals (Fig. 4), suggesting that alternative sources could contribute significantly.

      In sum, the possibility that alternative signal sources could significantly contribute should be taken seriously and more thoroughly discussed.

      (5) The authors added a quantification of brain movement (Fig. S5) and claim that they "only find detectable brain motion during locomotion onsets and not the other stimuli." However, Fig. S5 presents brain 'velocity' rather than 'displacement'. A constant (non-zero) velocity in Fig. S5 B-D indicates that the brain continues to move over time, potentially leading to significant displacement from its initial position across all conditions. While displacement in the x-y plane are corrected, similar displacement in the z direction likely occurs concurrently and cannot be easily accounted for. To assess this possibility, the authors should present absolute displacement relative to pre-stimulus frames, as displacement -- not velocity -- determines the size of movement-related fluorescence changes.

      (6) In line 132-133, the authors draw an analogy between the effect of hemodynamic occlusion and liquid crystal display (LCD) function. However, there are fundamental differences between the two. LCDs modulate light transmission by rotating the polarization of light, which then passes through a crossed polarizer. In contrast, hemodynamic occlusion alters light transmission by changing the number and absorbance properties of hemoglobin. Additionally, LCDs do not involve 'emission' light - back-illumination travels through the liquid crystal layer only once, whereas hemodynamic occlusion affects both incoming excitation light and the emitted fluorescence. Given these fundamental differences, the LCD analogy may not be entirely appropriate.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors performed experimental evolution of MreB mutants that have a slow growing round phenotype and studied the subsequent evolutionary trajectory using analysis tool from molecular biology. It was remarkable and interesting that they found that the original phenotype was not restored (most common in these studies) but that the round phenotype was maintained.

      Strengths:

      The finding that the round phenotype was maintained during evolution rather than that the original phenotype, rod shape cells, was recovered is interesting. The paper extensively investigates what happens during adaptation with various different techniques. Also the extensive discussion of the findings at the end of the paper is well thought through and insightful.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Evading predation is of utmost importance for most animals and camouflage is one of the predominant mechanisms. Wu et al. set out to test the hypothesis of a unique camouflage system in leafhoppers. These animals coat themselves with brochosomes, which are spherical nanostructures that are produced in the Malpighian tubules and are distributed on the cuticle after eclosion. Based on previous findings on reflectivity properties of brochosomes, the authors provide convincing evidence that these nanostructures indeed reduce reflectivity of the animals thereby reducing predation by jumping spiders. Further, they identify four proteins, which are essential for proper development and function of brochosomes: In RNAi experiments, the regular brochosome structure is lost, the reflectivity reduced and the respective animals are prone to increased predation. Finally, the authors provide phylogenetic sequence analyses and speculate about the evolution of these genes.

      Strengths:

      The study is very comprehensive including careful optical measurements, EM and TM analysis of the nanoparticles and their production line in the malphigian tubules, in vivo predation tests and knock-down experiments to identify essential proteins. Indeed, the results are very convincingly in line with the starting hypothesis such that the study robustly assigns a new biological function to the brochosome coating system.

      A key strength of the study is that the biological relevance of the brochosome coating is convincingly shown by an in vivo predation test using a known predator from the same habitat.

      Another major step forward is an RNAi screen, which identified four proteins, which are essential for the brochosome structure (BSMs). After respective RNAi knock-downs, the brochosomes show curious malformations that are interesting in terms of the self-assembly of these nanostructures. The optical and in vivo predation tests provide excellent support for the model that the RNAi knock-down leads to a change of brochosomes structure, which reduces reflectivity, which in turn leads to a decrease of the antipredatory effect.

      Conclusion:

      The authors successfully tested their hypothesis in a multidisciplinary approach and convincingly assigned a new biological function to the brochosomes system. The results fully support their claims on the involvement of the four BSM genes in brochosome structure, the relevance of brochosomes for predation avoidance and they provide evidence for the evolution of these genes.

      The work is a very interesting study case of the evolutionary emergence of a new system to evade predators. Based on this study, the function of the BSM genes could now be studied in other species to provide insights into putative ancestral functions. Further, studying the self-assembly of such highly regular complex nano-structures will be strongly fostered by the identification of the four key structural genes.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The article provides a timely and well-written examination of how group identification influences collective behaviors and performance using fNIRs and behavioral data.

      Comments on revisions:

      Most Reviewer concerns have been addressed in the revised manuscript, but some limitations persist with respect to core aspects of study design (e.g., long block durations and lack of counter-balancing) and analysis (i.e., the potential circularity of some analyses, the insufficiency of a mediation model to demonstrate causality, and a lack of clarity concerning the model us to map task activation).

      Editor's note: Although the Reviewers found the reviews generally responsive, some fundamental concerns remain which will not be changed by further revision.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The goal of this study was to identify the phenotype of olfactory ensheathing cells (OECs) that have been associated with neural tissue repair, and investigate the properties of these cells that can be used to identify them. OECs modify inhibitory glial scar formation, enabling axon regeneration past the scar border and into the lesion center. Single-cell RNA sequencing revealed diverse subtypes of OECs expressing novel marker genes associated with progenitor, axonal regeneration, repair, and microglia-like functions, suggesting their potential roles in wound healing, injury repair, and axonal regeneration. Additionally, the study identified secreted molecules such as Reelin and Connective tissue growth factor, which are important for neural repair and axonal outgrowth, further supporting the multifunctional nature of OECs in facilitating spinal cord injury recovery. This is an extremely well written and impactful series of experiments from a renowned leader in the field. The experimental questions are timely, with similar therapeutic approaches being prepared for clinical trial. The results address a gap that has persisted in the field for several decades, and one that has asked by many scientists long before technology existed to find answers. This highlights the importance of these experiments and the results reported here. The authors have also included a thoughtful discussion that highlights the importance of their data in the context of prior research. They have carefully interpreted their results and also indicate where additional studies in future work will continue to expand our knowledge of these important cells and their potential use for neural repair.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study provides new insights on the phenomenon of pre-saccadic foveal prediction previously reported by the same authors. In particular, this study examines to what extent this phenomenon varies based on the visibility of the saccade target. Visibility is defined as the contrast level of the target with respect to the noise background, and it is related to the signal-to-noise ratio of the target. A more visible target facilitates the oculomotor behavior planning and execution, however, as speculated by the authors, it can also benefit foveal prediction even if the foveal stimulus visibility is maintained constant. Remarkably, the authors show that presenting a highly visible saccade target is beneficial for foveal vision as detection of stimuli with an orientation similar to that of the saccade target is improved, the lower is the saccade target visibility, the less prominent is this effect. The results are convincing and the research methodology is technically sound.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors addressed all the concerns raised in the previous rounds of reviews.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Velichko et al. argues that the ability of nucleolar protein Treacles to form phase-separated condensates is necessary for its function in nucleolar organization, rRNA transcription, and rDNA repair. These findings may be of interest to the communities studying biomolecular condensates, nucleolar organization, and ribosome biogenesis. The authors propose that Treacle's ability to undergo liquid-liquid phase separation is the key to its role as a scaffold for the FC of the nucleolus. The experiments in this study were designed and performed well, particularly the overexpression studies, done in the absence of endogenous protein and accounted for the protein expression levels.

      Comments on revisions:

      I am satisfied with the authors' revisions; my earlier concerns have been addressed thoroughly, and the manuscript is considerably improved. This study is important for our understanding of the role of Treacle in nucleolar organization and function, as well as general principles of cellular compartmentalization that involve biomolecular condensates.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this meticulously conducted study, the authors show that Drosophila epidermal cells can modulate escape responses to noxious mechanical stimuli. First, they show that activation of epidermal cells evokes many types of behaviors including escape responses. Subsequently, they demonstrate that most somatosensory neurons are activated by activation of epidermal cells, and that this activation has a prolonged effect on escape behavior. In vivo analyses indicate that epidermal cells are mechanosensitive and require stored-operated calcium channel Orai. Altogether, the authors conclude that epidermal cells are essential for nociceptive sensitivity and sensitization, serving as primary sensory noxious stimuli.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript is clearly written. The experiments are logical and complementary. They support the authors' main claim that epidermal cells are mechanosensitive and that epidermal mechanically evoked calcium responses require the stored-operated calcium channel Orai. Epidermal cells activate nociceptive sensory neurons as well as other somatosensory neurons in Drosophila larvae, and thereby prolong escape rolling evoked by mechanical noxious stimulation.

      Weaknesses:

      In several places the text is unclear. For example, core details are missing in the protocols, including the level of LED intensity used, which are necessary for other researchers to reproduce the experiments. Secondly, the rationales are missing for some experiments (for experiments X, Y, and Z). It would be helpful to clarify for your readers why the experiments (for example Figure 3S2) were performed. Finally, for most experiments, the epidermal cells are activated for 60 s, which is long when considering that nocifensive rolling occurs on a timescale of milliseconds. It would be informative to know the shortest duration of epidermal cell activation that is sufficient for observing the behavioral phenotype (prolongation of escape behavior) and activation of sensory neurons.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors show certain memory deficits in a mouse knock-in model of Alzheimer's Disease (AD). They show that the observed memory deficits can be explained by a computational model, the latent cause model of associative memory. The memory tasks used include the fear memory task (CFC) and the 'reverse' Barnes maze. Research on AD is important given its known huge societal burden. Likewise, better characterization of the behavioral phenotypes of genetic mouse models of AD is also imperative to advance our understanding of the disease using these models. In this light, I applaud the authors' efforts.

      Strengths:

      (1) Combining computational modelling with animal behavior in genetic knock-in mouse lines is a promising approach, which will be beneficial to the field and potentially explain any discrepancies in results across studies as well as provide new predictions for future work.

      (2) The authors' usage of multiple tasks and multiple ages is also important to ensure generalization across memory tasks and 'modelling' of the progression of the disease.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) I have some concerns regarding the interpretation of the behavioral results. Since the computational model then rests on the authors' interpretation of the behavioral results, it, in turn, makes judging the model's explanatory power difficult as well. For the CFC data, why do knock-in mice have stronger memory in test 1 (Figure 2C)? Does this mean the knock-in mice have better memory at this time point? Is this explained by the latent cause model? Are there some compensatory changes in these mice leading to better memory? The authors use a discrimination index across tests to infer a deficit in re-instatement, but this indicates a relative deficit in re-instatement from memory strength in test 1. The interpretation of these differential DIs is not straightforward. This is evident when test 1 is compared with test 2, i.e., the time point after extinction, which also shows a significant difference across groups, Figure 2F, in the same direction as the re-instatement. A clarification of all these points will help strengthen the authors' case

      (2) I have some concerns regarding the interpretation of the Barnes maze data as well, where there already seems to be a deficit in the memory at probe test 1 (Figure 6C). Given that there is already a deficit in memory, would not a more parsimonious explanation of the data be that general memory function in this task is impacted in these mice, rather than the authors' preferred interpretation? How does this memory weakening fit with the CFC data showing stronger memories at test 1? While I applaud the authors for using multiple memory tasks, I am left wondering if the authors tried fitting the latent cause model to the Barnes maze data as well.

      (3) Since the authors use the behavioral data for each animal to fit the model, it is important to validate that the fits for the control vs. experimental groups are similar to the model (i.e., no significant differences in residuals). If that is the case, one can compare the differences in model results across groups (Figures 4 and 5). Some further estimates of the performance of the model across groups would help.

      (4) Is there an alternative model the authors considered, which was outweighed in terms of prediction by this model? One concern here is also parameter overfitting. Did the authors try leaving out some data (trials/mice) and predicting their responses based on the fit derived from the training data?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In the current study, Huang et al. examined ACC response during a novel discrimination-avoid task. The authors concluded that ACC neurons primarily encode post-action variables over extended periods, reflecting the animal's preceding actions rather than the outcomes or values of those actions. Specifically, they identified two subgroups of ACC neurons that responded to different aspects of the actions. This work represents admirable efforts to investigate the role of ACC in task-performing mice. However, in my opinion, alternative explanations of the data were not sufficiently explored, and some key findings were not well supported.

      Strengths:

      The development of the new discrimination-avoid task is applauded. Single-unit electrophysiology in task-performing animals represents admirable efforts and the datasets are valuable. The identification of different groups of encoding neurons in ACC can be potentially important.

      Weaknesses:

      One major conclusion is that ACC primarily encodes the so-called post-action variables (specifically shuttle crossing). However, only a single example session was included in Figure 2, while in Supplementary Figure 2 a considerable fraction of ACC neurons appears to respond to either the onset of movement or ramp up their activity prior to movement onset. How did the authors reach the conclusion that ACC preferentially respond to shuttle crossing?

      In Figure 4, it was concluded that ACC neurons respond to action independent of outcome. Since these neurons are active on both correct and incorrect shuttle but not stay trials, they seem to primarily respond to overt movement. If so, the rationale for linking ACC activity and adaptive behavior/associative learning is not very clear to me. Further analyses are needed to test whether their firing rates correlated with locomotion speed or acceleration/deceleration. On a similar note, to what extent are the action state neurons actually responding to locomotion-related signals? And can ACC activity actually differentiate correct vs. incorrect stays?

      Given that a considerable amount of ACC neurons encode 'action content', it is not surprising that by including all neurons the model is able to make accurate predictions in Figure 6. How would the model performance change by removing the content neurons?

      Moving on to Figure 7. Since Figure 4 showed that ACC neurons respond to movement regardless of outcome, it is somewhat puzzling how ACC activity can be linked to future performance.

      Two mice contributed about 50% of all the recorded cells. How robust are the results when analyzing mouse by mouse?

      Lastly, the development of the new discrimination-avoid task is applauded. However, a major missing piece here is to show the importance of ACC in this task and what aspects of this behavior require ACC.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors tackled the public concern about E-cigarettes among young adults by examining the lung immune environment in mice using single-cell RNA sequencing, discovering a subset of Ly6G- neutrophils with reduced IL-1 activity and increased CD8 T cells following exposure to tobacco-flavored e-cigarettes. Preliminary serum cotinine (nicotine metabolite) measurements validated the effective exposure to fruit, menthol, and tobacco-flavored e-cigarettes with air and PG:VG serving as control groups. They also highlighted the significance of metal leaching, which fluctuated over different exposure durations to flavored e-cigarettes, underscoring the inherent risks posed by these products. The scRNAseq analysis of e-cig exposure to flavors and tobacco demonstrated the most notable differences in the myeloid and lymphoid immune cell populations. Differentially expressed genes (DEGs) were identified for each group and compared against the air control. Further sub-clustering revealed a flavor-specific rise in Ly6G- neutrophils and heightened activation of cytotoxic T cells in response to tobacco-flavored e-cigarettes. These effects varied by sex, indicating that immune changes linked to e-cig use are dependent on gender. By analyzing the expression of various genes and employing gene ontology and gene enrichment analysis, they identified key pathways involved in this immune dysregulation resulting from flavor exposure. Overall, this study affirmed that e-cigarette exposure can suppress the neutrophil-mediated immune response, subsequently enhancing T cell toxicity in the lung tissue of mice.

      Strengths:

      This study used single-cell RNA sequencing to comprehensively analyze the impact of e-cigarettes on the lung. The study pinpointed alterations in immune cell populations and identified differentially expressed genes and pathways that are disrupted following e-cigarette exposure. The manuscript is well written, the hypothesis is clear, the experiments are logically designed with proper control groups, and the data is thoroughly analyzed and presented in an easily interpretable manner. Overall, this study suggested novel mechanisms by which e-cigs impact lung immunity and created a dataset that could benefit the lung immunity field.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors included a valuable control group - the PG:VG group, since PG:VG is the foundation of the e-liquid formulation. However, most of the comparative analyses use the air group as the control. Further analysis comparing the air group to the PG:VG group, and the PG:VG group to the individual flavored e-cig groups will provide more clear insights into the true source of irritation. This is done for a few analyses but not consistently throughout the paper. Flavor-specific effects should be discussed in greater detail. For example, Figure 1E shows that the Fruit flavor group exhibits more severe histological pathology but similar effects were not corroborated by the single-cell data.

      (2) The characterization of Ly6g+ vs Ly6g- neutrophils is interesting and potentially very impactful. Key results like this from scRNAseq analyses should be validated by qPCR and flow cytometry.

      Also, a recent study by Ruscitti et al reported Ly6g+ macrophages in the lung which can potentially confound the cell type analysis. A more detailed marker gene and sub-population analysis of the myeloid clusters could rule out this potential confounding factor.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Praegel et al. explore the differences in learning an auditory discrimination task between adolescent and adult mice. Using freely moving (Educage) and head-fixed paradigms, they compare behavioral performance and neuronal responses over the course of learning. The mice were initially trained for seven days on an easy pure frequency tone Go/No-go task (frequency difference of one octave), followed by seven days of a harder version (frequency difference of 0.25 octave). While adolescents and adults showed similar performances on the easy task, adults performed significantly better on the harder task. Quantifying the lick bias of both groups, the authors then argue that the difference in performance is not due to a difference in perception, but rather to a difference in cognitive control. The authors then used neuropixel recordings across 4 auditory cortical regions to quantify the neuronal activity related to the behavior. At the single-cell level, the data shows earlier stimulus-related discrimination for adults compared to adolescents in both the easy and hard tasks. At the neuronal population level, adults displayed a higher decoding accuracy and lower onset latency in the hard task as compared to adolescents. Such differences were not only due to learning, but also to age as concluded from recordings in novice mice. After learning, neuronal tuning properties had changed in adults but not in adolescents. Overall, the differences between adolescent and adult neuronal data correlate with the behavior results in showing that learning a difficult task is more challenging for younger mice.

      Strengths:

      (1) The behavioral task is well designed, with the comparison of easy and difficult tasks allowing for a refined conclusion regarding learning across ages. The experiments with optogenetics and novice mice complete the research question in a convincing way.

      (2) The analysis, including the systematic comparison of task performance across the two age groups, is most interesting and reveals differences in learning (or learning strategies?) that are compelling.

      (3) Neuronal recording during both behavioral training and passive sound exposure is particularly powerful and allows interesting conclusions.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The presentation of the paper must be strengthened. Inconsistencies, mislabeling, duplicated text, typos, and inappropriate color code should be changed.

      (2) Some claims are not supported by the data. For example, the sentence that says that "adolescent mice showed lower discrimination performance than adults (l.22) should be rewritten, as the data does not show that for the easy task (Figure 1F and Figure 1H).

      (3) The recording electrodes cover regions in the primary and secondary cortices. It is well known that these two regions process sounds quite differently (for example, one has tonotopy, the other does not), and separating recordings from both regions is important to conclude anything about sound representations. The authors show that the conclusions are the same across regions for Figure 4, but is it also the case for the subsequent analysis? In Figure 7 for example, are the quantified properties not distinct across primary and secondary areas? If this is not the case, how is it compatible with the published literature?

      (4) Some analysis interpretations should be more cautious. For example, I do not understand how the lick bias, defined -according to the method- as the inverse normal distribution of the z-score (hit rate) +z-scored (false alarm rate; Figure 1j?, l.749-750), should reflect a cognitive difficulty (l. 161-162, l.171). A lower lick rate in general could reflect a weaker ability to withhold licking- as indicated on l.164, but also so many other things, like a lower frustration threshold, lower satiation, more energy, etc).

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors demonstrate for the first time that opioid signaling has opposing effects on the same target neuron depending on the source of the input. Further, the authors provide evidence to support the role of potassium channels in regulating a brake on glutamatergic and cholinergic signaling, with the latter finding being developmentally regulated and responsive to opioid treatment. This evidence solves a conundrum regarding cholinergic signaling in the interpeduncular nucleus that evaded elucidation for many years.

      Strengths:

      This manuscript provides 3 novel and important findings that significantly advance our understanding of the medial habenula-interpeduncular circuitry:

      (1) Mu opioid receptor activation (mOR) reduces postsynaptic glutamatergic currents elicited from substance P neurons while simultaneously enhancing postsynaptic glutamatergic currents from cholinergic neurons, with the latter being developmentally regulated.

      (2) Substance P neurons from the Mhb provide functional input to the rostral nucleus of the IPN, in addition to the previously characterized lateral nuclei.

      (3) Potassium channels (Kv1.2) provide a break in neurotransmission in the IPN.

      Weaknesses:

      Overall I find the data presented compelling, but I feel that the number of observations is quite low (typically n=3-7 neurons, typically one per animal). While I understand that only a few slices can be obtained for the IPN from each animal, the strength of the novel findings would be more convincing with more frequent observations (larger n, more than one per animal). The findings here suggest that the authors have identified a novel mechanism for the normal function of neurotransmission in the IPN, so it would be expected to be observable in almost any animal. Thus it is not clear to me why the authors investigated so few neurons per slice and chose to combine different treatments into one group (e.g. Figure 2f), even if the treatments have the same expected effect.

      There are also significant sex differences in nAChR expression in the IPN that might not be functionally apparent using the low n presented here. It would be helpful to know which of the recorded neurons came from each sex, rather than presenting only the pooled data.

      There are also some particularly novel observations that are presented but not followed up on, and this creates a somewhat disjointed story. For example, in Figure 2, the authors identify neurons in which no response is elicited by light stimulation of ChAT-neurons, but the application of DAMGO (mOR agonist) un-silences these neurons. Are there baseline differences in the electrophysiological or morphological properties of these "silent" neurons compared to the responsive neurons?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors were attempting to describe whether trained innate immunity would modulate antibody-dependent cellular phagocytosis (ADCP) and/or efferocytosis.

      Strengths:

      The use of primary murine macrophages, and not a cell line, is considered a strength.

      The trained immunity-mediated changes to phagocytosis affected both melanoma and breast cancer cells. The broad effect is consistent with trained immunity.

      Weaknesses:

      The most significant weakness, also noted by the authors in the discussion, is the lack of in vivo data. Without these data, it is not possible to put the in vitro data in context. It is unknown if the described effects on efferocytosis will be relevant to the in vivo progression of cancer.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Integrating large-field stimulation with a retinotopic atlas, this study introduces an fMRI-based method for measuring contrast sensitivity across the visual field. Retinotopy was assessed using pRF mapping and a calibrated Benson atlas. The authors validate their method by replicating known patterns of contrast sensitivity across eccentricities and visual field quadrants in healthy subjects and demonstrate its potential clinical utility through case studies of both simulated and real visual field loss.

      Strengths:

      The new method is promising, with potential clinical utility in assessing visual field loss.

      Weaknesses:

      The current claims should be better supported by more evidence.

      In the first experiment, have the statistics undergone multiple comparison corrections (e.g., Line 441-442)? Given the small sample size, incorporating additional statistical tests (such as the Bayes Factor) could strengthen the analysis.

      The authors claim that "structure-based atlases can replace the need for pRF mapping in cases where it might otherwise be difficult or impossible to collect pRF data." This claim needs further scrutiny. Currently, only one simulated condition of visual field loss was examined in one subject. Also, in Figure 7, contrast sensitivity in the periphery differs between pRF mapping and the Benson atlas. How do the authors explain this discrepancy?

      Overall, the writing could be significantly improved.

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      Summary:

      The Szczupak lab published a very interesting paper in 2012 (Rodriquez et al. J Neurophysiol 107:1917-1924) on the effects of the segmentally-distributed non-spiking (NS) cell on crawl-related motoneurons. As far as I can tell, the working model presented in 2012, for how the non-spiking (NS) cell impacts the crawling motor pattern, is the same functional model presented in this new paper. Unfortunately, the Discussion does not address any of the findings in the previous paper or cite them in the context of NS alterations of fictive crawling. Aside from different-looking figures and some new analyses, the results and conclusions are the same.

      Strengths:

      The figures are well illustrated.

      Weaknesses:

      The paper is a mix of what appears to be two different studies and abruptly switches gears to examine how closely the crawl patterning is in the intact animal as compared to the fictive crawl patterning in the intact animal. Unfortunately, previous studies in other labs are not cited even though identical results have been obtained and similar conclusions were made. Thus, the novelty of the results is missing for those who are familiar with the leech preparation. The lack of appropriate citations and discussion of previous studies also deprives the scientific community of fully comprehending the impact of the data presented and the science it was built upon.

      (1) Results, Lines 167-170: "While multiple extracellular recordings have been performed previously (Eisenhart et al., 2000), these results present the first quantitative analysis of motor units activated throughout the crawling cycle. The In-Phase units are expected to control the contraction stage by exciting or inhibiting the longitudinal or circular muscles, respectively, and the Anti-Phase units to control the elongation stage by exciting or inhibiting the circular or longitudinal muscles, respectively."

      The first line above is misleading. The study by Puhl and Mesce (2008, J. Neurosci, 28:4192- 420) contains a comprehensive analysis of the motoneurons active during fictive crawling with the aim of characterizing their roles and phase relationships and solidifying the idea that the oscillator for crawling resides in a single ganglion. Intracellular recordings from a number of key crawl-related motoneurons were made in combination with extracellular recordings of motoneuron DE-3, a key monitor of crawling. In their paper, it was shown that motoneurons AE, VE-4, DI-1, VI-2, and CV were all correlated with crawl activity, and fired repeatedly either in phase or out-of-phase with DE-3. They were shown to be either excitatory or inhibitory.

      At a minimum, the above paper should be cited. The submitted paper would be strengthened if some of these previously identified motoneurons were again recorded with intracellular electrodes and concomitant NS cell stimulation. The power of the leech preparation is that cells can be identified as individuals with dual somatic (intracellular) and axonal recordings (extracellular). The shortfall of this aspect of the study (Figure 5) is that the extracellular units have not been identified here. In fact, these units might not even be motoneurons. They could represent activity from the centrally located sensory neurons, dopamine-modulated afferent neurons or peripherally projecting modulatory neurons. Essentially, they may not have much to do with the crawl motor pattern at all.

      (2) Results Lines 206-210: "with the elongation and contraction stages of in vivo behavior. However the isometric stages displayed in vivo have no obvious counterpart in the electrophysiological recordings. It is important to consider that the rhythmic movement of successive segments along the antero-posterior axis of the animal requires a delay signal that allows the appropriate propagation of the metachronal wave, and this signal is probably absent in the isolated ganglion."

      The so-called isometric stages, indeed, have an electrophysiological counterpart due in part to the overlapping activities across segments. This submitted paper would be considerably strengthened if it referred to the body of work that has examined how the individual crawl oscillators operate in a fully intact nerve cord, excised from the body but with all the ganglia (and cephalic ganglion) attached. Puhl and Mesce 2010 (J. Neurosci 30: 2373-2383) and Puhl et al. 2012 (J. Neurosci, 32:17646 -17657) have shown that "appropriate propagation of the metachronal wave" requires the brain, especially cell R3b-1. They also show that the long-distance projecting cell R3b-1 synapses with the CV motoneuron, providing rhythmic excitatory input to it.

      For this and other reasons, the paper would be much more informative and exciting if the impacts of the NS cell were studied in a fully intact nerve cord. Those studies have never been done, and it would be exciting to see how and if the effects of NS cell manipulation deviated from those in the single ganglion.

      (3) Discussion Lines 322-324. "The absence of descending brain signals and/or peripheral signals are assumed as important factors in determining the cycle period and the sequence at which the different behavioral stages take place."

      The authors could strengthen their paper by including a more complete picture of what is known about the control of crawling. For example, Puhl et al. 2012 (J Neurosci, 32:17646-17657) demonstrated that the descending brain neuron R3b-1 plays a major role in establishing the crawl-cycle frequency. With increased R3b-1 cell stimulation, DE-3 periods substantially shortened throughout the entire nerve cord. Thus, the importance of descending brain inputs should not be merely assumed; empirical evidence exists.

      (4) Discussion Lines 325-327: "the sequence of events, and the proportion of the active cycle dedicated to elongation and contraction were remarkably similar in both experimental settings. This suggests that the network activated in the isolated ganglion is the one underlying the motor behavior."

      The results and conclusions drawn in the current manuscript mirror those previously reported by Puhl and Mesce (2008, J. Neurosci, 28:4192- 420) who first demonstrated that the essential pattern-generating elements for leech crawling were contained in each of the segmental ganglia comprising the nerve cord. Furthermore, the authors showed that the duty cycle of DE-3, in a single ganglion treated with dopamine, was statistically indistinguishable from the DE-3 duty cycle measured in an intact nerve cord showing spontaneous fictive crawling, in an intact nerve cord induced to crawl via dopamine, and in the intact behaving animal. What was statistically significant, however, was that the DE-3 burst period was greatly reduced in the intact animal (i.e., a higher crawl frequency), which was replicated in the submitted paper.

      In my opinion, the novelty of the results reported in the submitted manuscript is diminished in the light of previously published studies. At a minimum, the previous studies should be cited, and the authors should provide additional rationale for conducting their studies. They need to explain in the discussion how their approach provided additional insights into what has already been reported.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      The work of Umetani et al. monitors the death of about 100,000 cells caused by lethal antibiotic treatments in a microfluidic device. They observe that the surviving bacteria are either in a dormant or in a non-dormant state prior to the antibiotic treatment. They then study the relative abundances of these different persister cells when varying the physiological state of the culture. In agreement with previous observations, they observe that late stationary phase cultures harbor a high number of dormant persister cells and that this number goes down as the culture is more exponential but remains non-zero, suggesting that cultures at the exponential phase contain different types of persister bacteria. These results were qualitatively similar in a rich and poor medium. Further characterization of the growing persister bacteria shows that they often form L-forms, have low RpoS-mcherry expression levels and grow only slightly more slowly than the non-persister bacteria. Taken together, these results draw a detailed view of persister bacteria and the way they may survive extensive antibiotic treatments. However, in order to represent a substantial advance on previous knowledge, a deeper analysis of the persister bacteria should be done.

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      Weiler, Teichert, and Margrie systematically analyzed long-range cortical connectivity, using a retrograde viral tracing strategy to identify layer and region-specific cortical projections onto the primary visual, primary somatosensory, and primary motor cortices. Their analysis revealed several hundred thousand inputs into each region, with inputs originating from almost all cortical regions but dominated in number by connections within cortical sub-networks (e.g. anatomical modules). Generally, the relative areal distribution of contralateral inputs followed the distribution of corresponding ipsilateral inputs. The largest proportion of inputs originated from layer 6a cells, and this layer 6 dominance was more pronounced for contralateral than ipsilateral inputs, which suggests that these connections provide predominantly feedback inputs. The hierarchical organization of input regions was similar between ipsi- and contralateral regions, except for within-module connections, where ipsilateral connections were much more feed-forward than contralateral. These results contrast earlier studies which suggested that contralateral inputs only come from the same region (e.g. V1 to V1) and from L2/3 neurons. The conclusions of this paper are well-supported by the data and analysis, and useful follow-up analyses and discussions are present in the supplemental figures. Taken together, these results provide valuable data supporting a view of interhemispheric connectivity in which layer 6 neurons play an important role in providing modulatory feedback.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study aims to identify the proteins that compose the electrical synapse, which are much less understood than those of the chemical synapse. Identifying these proteins is important to understand how synaptogenesis and conductance are regulated in these synapses. The authors identified more than 50 new proteins and used immunoprecipitation and immunostaining to validate their interaction of localization. One new protein, a scaffolding protein, shows particularly strong evidence of being an integral component of the electrical synapse. However, many key experimental details are missing (e.g. mass spectrometry), making it difficult to assess the strength of the evidence.

      Strengths:

      One newly identified protein, SIPA1L3, has been validated both by immunoprecipitation and immunohistochemistry. The localization at the electrical synapse is very striking.<br /> A large number of candidate interacting proteins were validated with immunostaining in vivo or in vitro.

      Weaknesses:

      There is no systematic comparison between the zebrafish and mouse proteome. The claim that there is "a high degree of evolutionary conservation" was not substantiated.

      No description of how mass spectrometry was done and what type of validation was done.

      The threshold for enrichment seems arbitrary.

      Inconsistent nomenclature and punctuation usage.

      The description of figures is very sparse and error-prone (e.g. Figure 6).

      In Figure 1B, there is very broad non-specific labeling by avidin in zebrafish (In contrast to the more specific avidin binding in mice, Figure 2B). How are the authors certain that the enrichment is specific at the electrical synapse?

      In Figure 1E, there is very little colocalization between Cx35 and Cx34.7. More quantification is needed to show that it is indeed "frequently associated."

      Expression of GFP in HCs would potentially be an issue, since GFP is fused to Cx36 (regardless of whether HC expresses Cx36 endogenously) and V5-TurboID-dGBP can bind to GFP and biotinylate any adjacent protein.

      Figure 7: the description does not match up with the figure regarding ZO-1 and ZO-2.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The Authors explore associations between plasma metabolites and glaucoma, a primary cause of irreversible vision loss worldwide. The study relies on measurements of 168 plasma metabolites in 4,658 glaucoma patients and 113,040 controls from the UK Biobank. The Authors show that metabolites improve the prediction of glaucoma risk based on polygenic risk score (PRS) alone, albeit weakly. The Authors also report a "metabolomic signature" that is associated with a reduced risk (or "resilience") for developing glaucoma among individuals in the highest PRS decile (reduction of risk by an estimated 29%). The Authors highlight the protective effect of pyruvate, a product of glycolysis, for glaucoma development and show that this molecule mitigates elevated intraocular pressure and optic nerve damage in a mouse model of this disease.

      Strengths:

      This work provides additional evidence that glycolysis may play a role in the pathophysiology of glaucoma. Previous studies have demonstrated the existence of an inverse relationship between intraocular pressure and retinal pyruvate levels in animal models (Hader et al. 2020, PNAS 117(52)) and pyruvate supplementation is currently being explored for neuro-enhancement in patients with glaucoma (De Moraes et al. 2022, JAMA Ophthalmology 140(1)). The study design is rigorous and relies on validated standard methods. Additional insights gained from a mouse model are valuable.

      Weaknesses:

      Caution is warranted when examining and interpreting the results of this study. Among all participants (cases and controls) glaucoma status was self-reported, determined on the basis of ICD codes or previous glaucoma laser/surgical therapy. This is problematic as it is not uncommon for individuals in the highest PRS decile to have undiagnosed glaucoma (as shown in previous work by some of the authors of this article). The Authors acknowledge a "relatively low glaucoma prevalence in the highest decile group" but do not explore how undiagnosed glaucoma may affect their results. This also applies to all controls selected for this study. The Authors state that "50 to 70% of people affected [with glaucoma] remain undiagnosed". Therefore, the absence of self-reported glaucoma does not necessarily indicate that the disease is not present. Validation of the findings from this study in humans is, therefore, critical. This should ideally be performed in a well-characterized glaucoma cohort, in which case and control status has been assessed by qualified clinicians.

      The authors indicate that within the top decile of PRS participants with glaucoma are more likely to be of white ethnicity, while they are more likely to be of Black and Asian ethnicity if they are in the bottom half of PRS. Have the Authors explored how sensitive their predictions are to ethnicity? Since their cohort is predominantly of European ancestry (85.8%), would it make sense to exclude other ethnicities to increase the homogeneity of the cohort and reduce the risk for confounders that may not be explicitly accounted for?

      The authors discuss the importance of pyruvate, and lactate for retinal ganglion cell survival along with that of several lipoproteins for neuroprotection. However, there is a distinction to be made between locally produced/available glycolysis end products and lipoproteins and those circulating in the blood. It may be useful to discuss this in the manuscript, and for the Authors to explore if plasma metabolites may be linked to metabolism that takes place past the blood-retinal barrier.

      Comments on revisions:

      The Authors have addressed all of my concerns.

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      Summary:

      By way of background, the Jiang lab has previously shown that loss of the type II BMP receptor Punt (Put) from intestinal progenitors (ISCs and EBs) caused them to differentiate into EBs, with a concomitant loss of ISCs (Tian and Jiang, eLife 2014). The mechanism by which this occurs was activation of Notch in Put-deficient progenitors. How Notch was upregulated in Put-deficient ISCs was not established in this prior work. In the current study, the authors test whether a very low level of Dl was responsible. But co-depletion of Dl and Put led to a similar phenotype as depletion of Put alone. This result suggested that Dl was not the mechanism. They next investigate genetic interactions between BMP signaling and Numb, an inhibitor of Notch signaling. Prior work from Bardin, Schweisguth and other labs has shown that Numb is not required for ISC self-renewal. But the authors wanted to know whether loss of both the BMP signal transducer Mad and Numb would cause ISC loss. This result was observed for RNAi depletion from progenitors and for mad, numb double mutant clones. Of note, ISC loss was observed in 40% of mad, numb double mutant clones, whereas 60% of these clones had an ISC. They then employed a two-color tracing system called RGT to look at the outcome of ISC divisions (asymmetric (ISC/EB) or symmetric (ISC/ISC or EB/EB)). Control clones had 69%, 15% and 16%, respectively, whereas mad, numb double mutant clones had much lower ISC/ISC (11%) and much higher EB/EB (37%). They conclude that loss of Numb in moderate BMP loss of function mutants increased symmetric differentiation which lead caused ISC loss. They also reported that numb15 and numb4 clones had a moderate but significant increase in ISC-lacking clones compared to control clones, supporting the model that Numb plays a role in ISC maintenance. Finally, they investigated the relevance of these observation during regeneration. After bleomycin treatment, there was a significant increase in ISC-lacking clones and a significant decrease in clone size in numb4 and numb15 clones compared to control clones. Because bleomycin treatment has been shown to cause variation in BMP ligand production, the authors interpret the numb clone under bleomycin results as demonstrating an essential role of Numb in ISC maintenance during regeneration.

      Strengths

      i. Data are quantified with statistical analysis<br /> ii. Experiments have appropriate controls and large numbers of samples<br /> iii. Results demonstrate an important role of Numb in maintaining ISC number during regeneration and a genetic interaction between Mad and Numb during homeostasis.

      Weaknesses

      None noted in the revised manuscript.

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      The authors investigated the response of worms to the odorant 1-octanol (1-oct) using a combination of microfluidics-based behavioral analysis and whole-network calcium imaging. They hypothesized that 1-oct may be encoded through two simultaneous, opposing afferent pathways: a repulsive pathway driven by ASH, and an attractive pathway driven by AWC. And the ultimate chemotactic outcome is likely determined by the balance between these two pathways.

      It is not surprising that 1-octanol is encoded as attractive at low concentrations and repulsive at higher concentrations. However, the novel aspect of this study is the discovery of the combinatorial coding of 1-oct in the periphery, where it serves as both an attractant and a repellent. Furthermore, the study uses this dual encoding as a model to explore the neural basis of sensory-driven behaviors at a whole-network scale in this organism. The basic conclusions of this study are well supported by the behavioral and imaging experiments, though there are certain aspects of the manuscript that would benefit from further clarification.

      A key issue is that several previous studies have demonstrated a combinatorial and concentration-dependent coding of odorant sensing in the nematode peripheral nervous system. Specifically, ASH and AWC are the primary receptors for repellent and attractive responses, respectively. However, other neurons such as AWB, AWA, and ADL are also involved in the coding process. These neurons likely communicate with different interneurons to contribute to 1-oct-induced outputs. The authors' conclusion that loss of tax-4 reduces attractive responses and that osm-9 mutants reduce repulsive responses is not entirely convincing. TAX-4 is required for both AWC (an attractive neuron) and AWB (a repulsive neuron), and osm-9 is essential for ASH, ADL, and AWA (attraction-associated). Therefore, the observed effects on the attractive and repulsive responses could be more complex. Additionally, the interpretation of results involving the use of IAA to reduce the contribution of AWC at lower concentrations lacks clarity. A more effective approach might involve using transgenically expressed miniSOG or histamine (HisCl1) to specifically inhibit AWC neurons.

      The authors did not observe any increased correlation between motor command interneurons and sensory neurons, which is consistent with the absence of a consistent relationship between state transitions and 1-oct application. Furthermore, they did not observe significant entrainment of AIB activity with the 2.2 mM 1-oct application. This might be due to the animals being anesthetized with 1 mM tetramisole hydrochloride, which could affect neural activity and/or feedback from locomotion. It is unclear whether subtracting AVA activity from AIB activity provides a valid measure. Similarly, it is unclear how the behavioral data from freely moving worms compares to the whole-network calcium imaging results obtained from immobilized worms.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Xie and colleagues presents transcriptomic experiments that measure gene expression in eight different tissues taken from adult female and male mice from four species. These data are used to make inferences regarding the evolution of sex-biased gene expression across these taxa.

      Strengths:

      The experimental methods and data analysis appear appropriate. The authors promote their study as unprecedented in its size and technical precision.

      Weaknesses:

      The manuscript does not present a clear set of novel evolutionary conclusions. The major findings recapitulate many previous comparative transcriptomics studies - gene expression variation is prevalent between individuals, sexes, and species; and genes with sex-biased expression evolve more rapidly than genes with unbiased expression - but it is not clear how the study extends our understanding of gene expression or its evolution.

      Many gene expression differences between individual animals are selectively neutral, because these differences in mRNA concentration are buffered at the level of translation, or differences in protein abundance have no effect on cellular or organismal function. The hypothesis that sex-biased genes are enriched for selectively neutral expression differences is supported by the excess of inter-individual expression variance and inter-specific expression differences in sex-biased genes. A higher rate of adaptive coding evolution is inferred among sex-biased genes as a group, but it is not clear whether this signal is driven by many sex-biased genes experiencing a little positive selection, or a few sex-biased genes experiencing a lot of positive selection, so the relationship between expression and protein-coding evolution remains unclear. It is likely that only a subset of the gene expression differences detected here will have phenotypic effects relevant for fitness or medicine, but without some idea of how many or which genes comprise this subset, it is difficult to interpret the results in this context.

      Throughout the paper the concepts of sexual selection and sexually antagonistic selection are conflated; while both modes of selection can drive the evolution of sexually dimorphic gene expression, the conditions promoting and consequence of both kinds of selection are different, and the manuscript is not clear about the significance of the results for either mode of selection.

      The manuscript's conclusion that "most of the genetic underpinnings of sex-differences show no long-term evolutionary stability" is not supported by the data, which measured gene expression phenotypes but did not investigate the underlying genetic variation causing these differences between individuals, sexes, or species. Furthermore, most of the gene expression differences are observed between sex-specific organs such as testes and ovaries, which are downstream of the sex-determination pathway that is conserved in these four mouse species, so these conclusions are limited to gene expression phenotypes in somatic organs shared by the sexes.

      The differences between sex-biased expression in mice and humans are attributed to differences in the two species effective population sizes; but the human samples have significantly more environmental variation than the mouse samples taken from age-matched animals reared in controlled conditions, which could also explain the observed pattern.

      The smoothed density plots in Figure 5 are confusing and misleading. Examining the individual SBI values in Table S9 reveals that all of the female and male SBI values for each species and organ are non-overlapping, with the exception of the heart in domesticus and mammary gland in musculus, where one male and one female individual fall within the range of the other sex. The smoothed plots therefore exaggerate the overlap between the sexes; in particular, the extreme variation shown in the SBI in the mammary glands in spretus females and spicilegus males is hard to understand given the normalized values in Table S3. The R code used to generate the smoothed plots is not included in the Github repository, so it is not possible to independently recreate those plots from the underlying data.

      The correlations provided in Table S9 are confusing - most of the reported correlations are 1.0, which are not recovered when using the SBI values in Table S9, and which does not support the manuscript's assertion that sex-biased gene expression can vary between organs within an individual. Indeed, using the SBI values in Table S9, many correlations across organs are negative, which is expected given the description of the result in the text.

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      Summary:

      Makarova et al. provide the first complete cellular-level reconstruction of an insect eye. They use the extremely miniaturized parasitoid wasp, Megaphragma viggiani and apply improved and optimized volumetric EM methods they can describe, the size, volume and position of every single cell in the insect compound eye.

      This data has previously only been inferred from TEM cross-sections taken in different parts of the eye, but in this study and in the associated 3d datasets video and stacks, one can observe the exact position and orientation in 3D space.<br /> The authors have made a very rigorous effort to describe and assess the variation in each cell type and have also compared two different classes of dorsal rim and non-dorsal rim ommatidia and the associated visual apparatus for each, confirming previous known findings about the distribution and internal structure that assists in polarization detection in these insects.

      Strengths:

      The paper is well written and strives to compare the data with previous literature wherever possible and goes beyond cell morphology, calculating the optical properties of the different ommatidia and estimating light sensitivity and spatial resolution limits using rhabdom diameter, focal length and showing how this varies across the eye.

      Finally, the authors provide very informative and illustrative videos showing how the cones, lenses, photoreceptors, pigment cells, and even the mitochondria are arranged in 3D space, comparing the structure of the dorsal rim and non-dorsal rim ommatidia. They also describe three 'ectopic' photoreceptors in more anatomical detail providing images and videos of them.

      Comments on revisions:

      The updates improve the manuscript.

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      Summary:

      This interesting manuscript first shows that human, murine, and feline sperm penetrate the zona pellucida (ZP) of bovine oocytes recovered directly from the ovary, although first cleavage rates are reduced. Similarly, bovine sperm can penetrate superovulated murine oocytes recovered directly from the ovary. However, bovine oocytes incubated with oviduct fluid (30 min) are generally impenetrable by human sperm.

      Thereafter, the cytoplasm was aspirated from murine oocytes - obtained from the ovary or oviduct. Binding and penetration by bovine and human sperm was reduced in both groups relative to homologous (murine) sperm. However, heterologous (bovine and human) sperm penetration was further reduced in oviduct vs. ovary derived empty ZP. These data show that outer (ZP) not inner (cytoplasmic) oocyte alterations reduce heterologous sperm penetration as well as homologous sperm binding.

      This was repeated using empty bovine ZP incubated, or not, with bovine oviduct fluid. Prior oviduct fluid exposure reduced non-homologous (human and murine) empty ZP penetration, polyspermy, and sperm binding. This demonstrates that species-specific oviduct fluid factors regulate ZP penetrability.

      To test the hypothesis that OVGP1 is responsible, the authors obtained histidiine-tagged bovine and murine OVGP1 and DDK-tagged human OVGP1 proteins. Tagging was to enable purification following over-expression in BHK-21 or HEK293T cells. The authors confirm these recombinant OVGP1 proteins bound to both murine and bovine oocytes. Moreover, previous data using oviduct fluid was mirrored using bovine oocytes supplemented with homologous (bovine) recombinant OVGP1, or not. This confirms the hypothesis, at least in cattle.

      Next, the authors exposed bovine and murine empty ZP to bovine, murine, and human recombinant OVGP1, in addition to bovine, murine, or human sperm. Interestingly, both species-specific ZP and OVGP1 seem to be required for optimal sperm binding and penetration.

      Lastly, empty bovine and murine ZP were treated with neuraminidase, or not, with or without pre-treatment with homologous OVGP1. In each case, neuraminidase reduced sperm binding and penetration. This further demonstrates that both ZP and OVGP1 are required for optimal sperm binding and penetration.

      In summary, the authors demonstrate that two mechanisms seem to underpin mammalian sperm recognition and penetration, the first being specific (ZP-mediated) and the second non-specific (OVGP1 mediated).

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This important article reveals that the Nora virus can colonize the intestinal cells of Drosophila melanogaster, where it persists with minimal immediate impact on its host. However, upon aging, infection, or exposure to toxicants, stem cell activation induces Nora virus proliferation, enabling it to colonize enterocytes. This colonization disrupts enterocyte function, leading to increased gut permeability and a significant reduction in lifespan. Results are convincing with an important impact on the Drosophila community.

      Strengths:

      (1) Building on previous studies by Habayeb et al. (2009) and Hanson et al. (2023), this study highlights cryptic Nora virus infection as a crucial factor in aging and gut homeostasis in Drosophila melanogaster.

      (2) Consistent with the oral route of Nora virus transmission, the study demonstrates that the virus resides in intestinal stem cells, with its replication directly linked to stem cell proliferation. This process facilitates the colonization of enterocytes, ultimately disrupting intestinal function.

      (3) The study establishes a clear connection between stem cell proliferation and virus replication, suggesting that various factors - such as microbiota, aging, diet, and injury - can influence Nora virus dynamics and associated pathology.

      (4) The experimental design is robust, comparing infected flies with virus-cured controls to validate findings.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The study does not explore or discuss how oral ingestion of Nora virus leads to the colonization of stem cells, which are located basally in the gut. This mechanism should be discussed.

      (2) The authors fail to detect Dicer-GFP fusion protein expression in stem cells, a finding that could explain why the virus persists in these cells. Further investigation is needed to determine whether RNAi functions are effective in stem cells compared to enterocytes. For clarification, the authors could cross esg-Gal4 UAS-GFP and Myo-Gal4 UAS-GFP with UAS GFP-RNAi and/or express a Dicer-GFP construct under a stem cell-specific driver.

      (3) The presentation of experimental parameters (e.g., pathogen type, temperature, time points) should be improved in the results section and at the top of the figures to enhance clarity. Additionally, details regarding the mode of oral infection (continuous exposure vs. single feeding on a filter) should be specified. Given that fly stock flipping frequency influences microbiota load (as noted in Broderick et al.), this should be reported, especially for lifespan studies.

      (4) To confirm that enterocyte colonization requires stem cell proliferation and differentiation, the authors should analyze Nora virus localization in JAK-STAT-deficient flies infected with bacteria or toxicants. This would help determine whether the virus can infect enterocytes in the absence of enterocyte differentiation, but stimulation of stem cells.

      (5) The study does not discuss the spatial distribution of Nora virus infection along the gut. Specifically, it remains unclear whether viral colonization is higher in gut regions R2 and R3, which contain proliferative stem cells. Addressing this could provide valuable insights into the virus's infection dynamics.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work investigated how the sense of control influences perceptions of stress. In a novel "Wheel Stopping" task, the authors used task variations in difficulty and controllability to measure and manipulate perceived control in two large cohorts of online participants. The authors first show that their behavioral task has good internal consistency and external validity, showing that perceived control during the task was linked to relevant measures of anxiety, depression, and locus of control. Most importantly, manipulating controllability in the task led to reduced subjective stress, showing a direct impact of control on stress perception. However, this work has minor limitations due to the design of the stressor manipulations/measurements and the necessary logistics associated with online versus in-person stress studies.

      Nevertheless, this research adds to our understanding of when and how control can influence the effects of stress and is particularly relevant to mental health interventions.

      Strengths:

      The primary strength of this research is the development of a unique and clever task design that can reliably and validly elicit variations in beliefs about control. Impressively, higher subjective control in the task was associated with decreased psychopathology measures such an anxiety and depression in a non-clinical sample of participants. In addition, the authors found that lower control and higher difficulty in the task led to higher perceived stress, suggesting that the task can reliably manipulate perceptions of stress. Prior tasks have not included both controllability and difficulty in this manner and have not directly tested the direct influence of these factors on incidental stress, making this work both novel and important for the field.

      Weaknesses:

      One minor weakness of this research is the validity of the online stress measurements and manipulations. In this study, the authors measure subjective stress via self-report both during the task and also after either a Trier Social Stress Test (high-stress condition) or a memory test (low-stress condition). One concern is that these stress manipulations were really "threats" of stress, where participants never had to complete the stress tasks (i.e., recording a speech for judgment). While this is not unusual for an in-lab study and can reliably elicit substantial stress/anxiety, in an online study, there is a possibility for communication between participants (via online forums dedicated to such communication), which could weaken the stress effects. That said, the authors did find sensible increases and decreases of perceived stress between relevant time points, but future work could improve upon this design by including more complete stress manipulations and measuring implicit physiological signs of stress.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Busch and Hansel present a morphological and histological comparison between mouse and human Purkinje cells (PCs) in the cerebellum. The study reveals species-specific differences that have not previoulsy been reported despite numerous observations in these species. While mouse PCs show morphological heterogeneity and occasional multi-innervation by climbing fibers (CFs), human PCs exhibit a widespread, multi-dendritic structure that exceeds expectations based on allometric scaling. Specifically, human PCs are significantly larger, exhibit increased spine density, with a unique cluster-like morphology not found in mice.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript provides an exceptionally detailed analysis of PC morphology across species, surpassing any prior publication. Major strengths include a systematic and thorough methodology, rigorous data analysis, and clear presentation of results. This work is likely to become the go-to resource for quantitation in this field. The authors have largely achieved their aims, with the results effectively supporting their conclusions.

      Weaknesses:

      There are a few concerns that need to be addressed, specifically related to details of the methodolology as well as data interpretation based on the limits of some experimental approaches. Overall, these weaknesses are minor.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors addressed my concerns in the revised manuscript. One bit of clarification, the defraction limit calculation involves the wavelength of light used for excitation not emission ("...for the minimum resolvable distance (R) given the fluorophore emission wavelength [l; 570nm for the Cy3 probe] and numerical aperture of the objective (NA) as follows:"). This is why a 2p system has less resolving power than a confocal system as it uses much longer wavelengths for excitation.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study from Belato, Knight and co-workers, the authors investigated the Rec domain of a thermophilic Cas9 from Geobacillus stearothermophilus (GeoCas9). The authors investigated three constructs, two individual subdomains of Rec (Rec1 and Rec2) and the full Rec domain. This domain is involved in binding to the guide RNA of Cas9, as well as the RNA-DNA duplex that is formed upon target binding. The authors performed RNA binding and relaxation experiments using NMR for the wild-type domain as well as two-point mutants. They observed differences in RNA binding activities as well as the flexibility of the domain. The authors also performed molecular dynamics and functional experiments on full-length GeoCas9 to determine whether these biophysical differences affect the RNA binding or cleavage activity. Although the authors observed some changes in the thermal stability of the mutant GeoCas9-gRNA complex, they did not observe substantial differences in the guide RNA binding or cleavage activities of the mutant GeoCas9 variants.

      Overall, this manuscript provides a detailed biophysical analysis of the GeoCas9 Rec domain. The NMR assignments for this construct should prove very useful, and can serve as the basis for future similar studies of GeoCas9 Rec domain mutants. While the two mutants tested in the study did not produce significant differences from wild-type GeoCas9, the study rules out the possibility that analogous mutations can be translated between type II-A and II-C Cas9 orthologs. Together, these findings may provide the grounds for future engineering of higher fidelity variants of GeoCas9

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Using lineage tracing and single-cell RNA sequencing, Li et al. reported brain ECs can differentiate into pericytes after stroke. This finding is novel and important to the field.

      Strengths:

      Detailed characterization of each time point and genetic manipulation of genes for study role of ECs and E-pericyte.

      Weaknesses:

      Genetic evidence for lineage tracing of ECs and E-pericytes requires more convincing data that includse staining, FACS, and scRNA-seq analysis.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript by Toledo and colleagues describes the generation and characterization of Y220C mice (Y217C in the mouse allele). The authors make notable findings: Y217C mice that have been backcrossed to C57Bl/6 for five generations show decreased female pup births due to exencephaly, a known defect in p53 -/- mice, and they show a correlation with decreased Xist expression, as well as increased female neonatal death. They also noted similar tumor formation in Y217C/+ and p53 +/- mice, suggesting that Y217C may not function as a dominant negative. Notably, the authors find that homozygous Y217C mice die faster than p53 -/- mice, and that the lymphomas in the Y217C mice were more aggressive and invasive. The authors then perform RNA seq on thymi of Y217C homozygotes compared to p53 -/-, and they suggest that these differentially expressed genes may explain the increased tumorigenesis in Y217C mice.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the study is well controlled and quite well done and will be of interest to a broad audience, particularly given the high frequency of the Y220C mutation in cancer (1% of all cancers, 4% of ovarian cancer).

      Weaknesses:

      None noted

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have done a superb job on this very interesting work.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Paturi et.al. presents a detailed structural and mechanistic study of the DRB7.2:DRB4 complex in plants, focusing on its role in sequestering endogenous inverted-repeat dsRNA precursors and inhibiting Dicer-like protein 3 (DCL3) activity. By truncating the two proteins, they systematically identify the domains involved in direct interaction between DRB7.2 and DRB4 and study the interactions between the two using biophysical techniques (ITC and NMR). They show using NMR that the interacting domains between the two proteins are likely partially unfolded or aggregated in the absence of the binding partner and determining the NMR structure of the individual interacting domains in the presence of the isotopically unlabelled partner using sparse restrain data combined with Rosetta. They also determine the complex structure of the interacting DRB7.2 dsRBD domain and the DRB4 D3 domain using X-ray crystallography.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the manuscript is well written, provides molecular details at high resolution between the interaction of DRB7.2 and DRB4 and the data in the manuscript strongly supports the proposed model where DRB7.2:DRB4 complex sequesters the DCL3 substrates inhibiting its function of producing epigenetically activated siRNAs.

      Weaknesses:

      Major comments:

      (1) The manuscript unfortunately completely lacks functional validation of the determined DRB7.2:DRB4 complex structure which is required for the rigorous validation of the proposed model. For functional validation of the determined structures, the author should at least present the mutational analysis (impact on complex formation, RNA affinity) of the point mutants derived from the structure of the DRB7.2:DRB4 complex.

      (2) The proposed model shows the DRB7.2M and DRB4D3 as partially folded/aggregated proteins in the absence of the complex, understandably from the presented NMR data of the individual domains. However, in the cellular context, when the RNAs are present, especially DRB7.2M might be properly folded/not aggregated. Could the authors support or negate this by showing the 15N HSQC spectrum of DRB7.2M in complex with the 13 bp dsRNA?

      (3) It remains unclear from the manuscript if DRB7.1 will have a similar or different mechanism of interaction with DRB4. Based on the sequence comparisons of the two proteins, the authors should comment on this in the discussion section.

      Minor comments:

      (1) There are no errors for the N, dH and dS values of the ITC measurements in Table 1. Also, it seems that the measurements are done only once. Values derived from at least triplicates should be presented. This would be helpful to increase confidence in the values derived from ITC especially for the titration between DRB7.2, DRB4C, and DRB4D3 as the N value there is substantially lower than 1 which does not agree with the other data.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study shows, perhaps surprisingly, that human fecal homogenates enhance the invasiveness of Salmonella typhimurium into cells of a swine colonic explant. This effect is only seen with chemotactic cells that express the chemoreceptor Tsr. However, two molecules sensed by Tsr that are present at significant concentrations in the fecal homogenates, the repellent indole and the attractant serine, do not, either by themselves or together at the concentrations in which they are present in the fecal homogenates, show this same effect. The authors then go on to study the conflicting repellent response to indole and attractant response to serine in a number of different in vitro assays.

      Strengths:

      The demonstration that homogenates of human feces enhance the invasiveness of chemotactic Salmonella Typhimurium in a colonic explant is unexpected and interesting. The authors then go on to document the conflicting responses to the repellent indole and the attractant serine, both sensed by the Tsr chemoreceptor, as a function of their relative concentration and the spatial distribution of gradients.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors do not identify what is the critical compound or combination of compounds in the fecal homogenate that gives the reported response of increased invasiveness. They show it is not indole alone, serine alone, or both in combination that have this effect, although both are sensed by Tsr and both are present in the fecal homogenates. Some of the responses to conflicting stimuli by indole and serine in the in vitro experiments yield interesting results, but they do little to explain the initial interesting observation that fecal homogenates enhance invasiveness.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Mazer & Yovel 2025 dissect the inverse problem of how echolocators in groups manage to navigate their surroundings despite intense jamming using computational simulations.

      The authors show that despite the 'noisy' sensory environments that echolocating groups present, agents can still access some amount of echo-related information and use it to navigate their local environment. It is known that echolocating bats have strong small and large-scale spatial memory that plays an important role for individuals. The results from this paper also point to the potential importance of an even lower-level, short-term role of memory in the form of echo 'integration' across multiple calls, despite the unpredictability of echo detection in groups. The paper generates a useful basis to think about the mechanisms in echolocating groups for experimental investigations too.

      Strengths:

      (1) The paper builds on biologically well-motivated and parametrised 2D acoustics and sensory simulation setup to investigate the various key parameters of interest

      (2) The 'null-model' of echolocators not being able to tell apart objects & conspecifics while echolocating still shows agents successfully emerge from groups - even though the probability of emergence drops severely in comparison to cognitively more 'capable' agents. This is nonetheless an important result showing the direction-of-arrival of a sound itself is the 'minimum' set of ingredients needed for echolocators navigating their environment.

      (3) The results generate an important basis in unraveling how agents may navigate in sensorially noisy environments with a lot of irrelevant and very few relevant cues.

      (4) The 2D simulation framework is simple and computationally tractable enough to perform multiple runs to investigate many variables - while also remaining true to the aim of the investigation.

      Weaknesses:

      There are a few places in the paper that can be misunderstood or don't provide complete details. Here is a selection:

      (1) Line 61: '... studies have focused on movement algorithms while overlooking the sensory challenges involved' : This statement does not match the recent state of the literature. While the previous models may have had the assumption that all neighbours can be detected, there are models that specifically study the role of limited interaction arising from a potential inability to track all neighbours due to occlusion, and the effect of responding to only one/few neighbours at a time e.g. Bode et al. 2011 R. Soc. Interface, Rosenthal et al. 2015 PNAS, Jhawar et al. 2020 Nature Physics.

      (2) The word 'interference' is used loosely places (Line 89: '...took all interference signals...', Line 319: 'spatial interference') - this is confusing as it is not clear whether the authors refer to interference in the physics/acoustics sense, or broadly speaking as a synonym for reflections and/or jamming.

      (3) The paper discusses original results without reference to how they were obtained or what was done. The lack of detail here must be considered while interpreting the Discussion e.g. Line 302 ('our model suggests...increasing the call-rate..' - no clear mention of how/where call-rate was varied) & Line 323 '..no benefit beyond a certain level..' - also no clear mention of how/where call-level was manipulated in the simulations.

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      Summary:

      The authors revisit the specific domains/signals required for the redirection of an inner nuclear membrane protein, emerin, to the secretory pathway. They find that epitope tagging influences protein fate, serving as a cautionary tale for how different visualisation methods are used. Multiple tags and lines of evidence are used, providing solid evidence for the altered fate of different constructs.

      Strengths:

      This is a thorough dissection of domains and properties that confer INM retention vs secretion to the PM/lysosome, and will serve the community well as a caution regarding the placement of tags and how this influences protein fate.

      Weaknesses:

      Biogenesis pathways are not explored experimentally: it would be interesting to know if the lysosomal pool arrives there via the secretory pathway (eg by engineering a glycosylation site into the lumenal domain) or by autophagy, where failed insertion products may accumulate in the cytoplasm and be degraded directly from cytoplasmic inclusions.

      It would be helpful if the topology of constructs could be directly demonstrated by pulse-labelling and protease protection. It's possible that there are mixed pools of both topologies that might complicate interpretation.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      García-Vázquez et al. identify GTSE1 as a novel target of the cyclin D1-CDK4/6 kinases. The authors show that GTSE1 is phosphorylated at four distinct serine residues and that this phosphorylation stabilizes GTSE1 protein levels to promote proliferation. This regulatory link appears to be particularly important in pathological conditions such as cancer, where cyclin D levels are elevated.

      Strengths:

      The authors support their findings with several previously published results, including databases. In addition, the authors perform a wide range of experiments to support their findings.

      Impact:

      The authors reveal a mechanism by which elevated levels of cyclin D1-CDK4 can stabilize GTSE1 throughout the cell cycle via phosphorylation. This provides insight into the role of cyclin D1-CDK4 in regulating the cell cycle and promoting cancer growth.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed all my concerns, and I would like to thank them for their efforts on this great study.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this paper, the authors have leveraged Single-cell RNA sequencing of the various stages of evolution of lung adenocarcinoma to identify the population of macrophages that contribute to tumor progression. They show that S100a4+ alveolar macrophages, active in fatty acid metabolic activity, such as palmitic acid metabolism, seem to drive atypical adenomatous hyperplasia (AAH) stage. These macrophages also seem to induce angiogenesis promoting tumor growth. Similar types of macrophage infiltration were demonstrated in the progression of the human lung adenocarcinomas.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have satisfactorily addressed my main concerns.

      The only weakness is that infusion of S100a4+ macrophages seem not to affect tumor growth when introduced to the intratracheal route. This negative result somewhat diminishes the significance of the study.

      Overall, the revised manuscript is significantly improved.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study combines predictions from MD simulations with sophisticated experimental approaches including native mass spectrometry (nMS), cryo-EM, and thermal protein stability assays to investigate the molecular determinants of cardiolipin (CDL) binding and binding-induced protein stability/function of an engineered model protein (ROCKET), as well as of the native E. coli intramembrane rhomboid protease, GlpG.

      Strengths:

      State-of-the-art approaches and sharply focused experimental investigation lend credence to the conclusions drawn. Stable CDL binding is accommodated by a largely degenerate protein fold that combines interactions from distant basic residues with greater intercalation of the lipid within the protein structure. Surprisingly, there appears to be no direct correlation between binding affinity/occupancy and protein stability.

      Overall, using both model and native protein systems, this study convincingly underscores the molecular and structural requirements for CDL binding and binding-induced membrane protein stability. This work provides much-needed insight into the poorly understood nature of protein-CDL interactions.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Fernandez et al. investigate the influence of maternal behavior on bat pup vocal development in Saccopteryx bilineata, a species known to exhibit vocal production learning. The authors performed detailed longitudinal observations of wild mother-pup interactions to ask whether non-vocal maternal displays during juvenile vocal practice, or 'babbling', affect vocal production. Specifically, the study examines the durations of pup babbling events and the developmental babbling phase, in relation to female display rates, as well as pup age and the number of nearby singing adult males. Furthermore, the authors examine pup vocal repertoire size and maturation in relation to maternal display rates encountered during babbling. Statistical models identify female display behavior as a predictor of i) babbling bout duration, ii) the length of the babbling phase, iii) song composition and iv) syllable maturation. Notably, these outcomes were not influenced by the number of nearby adult males (the pups' source of song models) and were largely independent of general maturation (pup age). These findings highlight the impact of non-vocal aspects of social interactions in guiding mammalian vocal development.

      Strengths:

      Historically, work on developmental vocal learning has focused on how juvenile vocalizations are influenced by the sounds produced by nearby adults (often males). In contrast, this study takes the novel approach of examining juvenile vocal ontogeny in relation to non-vocal maternal behavior, in one of the few mammals known to exhibit vocal production learning. The authors collected an impressive dataset from multiple wild bat colonies in two Central American countries. This includes longitudinal acoustic recordings and behavioral monitoring of individual mother-pup pairs, across development.

      The identified relationships between maternal behavior and bat pup vocalizations have intriguing implications for understanding the mechanisms that enable vocal production learning in mammals, including human speech acquisition. As such, these findings are likely be relevant to a broad audience interested in the evolution and development of social behavior as well as sensory-motor learning.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors qualitatively describe specific patterns of female displays during pup babbling, however, subsequent quantitative analyses are based on aggregate measures of female behavior that pool across display types. Consequently, it remains unclear how certain maternal behaviors might differentially influence pup vocalizations (e.g. through specific feedback contingencies or more general modulation of pup behavioral states).

      Comments on revisions:

      (1) More detailed analyses of female behavior may be beyond the scope of this study, given the nature of the dataset/recordings. I look forward to the authors' future work on this aspect.

      By addressing the important distinction between display number vs. display rate, the authors have provided more direct support for the claim that babbling behavior is related to female displays.

      (2) The additional information regarding exposure to adult male song is appreciated.

      (3) Added discussion of pup sex differences provides useful context and intriguing speculation about the role of female pup babbling.

      (4) The authors' additions have significantly improved the clarity of their acoustic terminology and syllable analyses.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Du et al. address the cell cycle-dependent clearance of misfolded protein aggregates mediated by the endoplasmic reticulum (ER) associated Hsp70 chaperone family and ER reorganisation. The observations are interesting and impactful to the field.

      Strength:

      The manuscript addresses the connection between the clearance of misfolded protein aggregates and the cell cycle using a proteostasis reporter targeted to ER in multiple cell lines. Through imaging and some biochemical assays, they establish the role of BiP, an Hsp70 family chaperone, and Cdk1 inactivation in aggregate clearance upon mitotic exit. Furthermore, the authors present an initial analysis of the role of ER reorganisation in this clearance. These are important correlations and could have implications for ageing-associated pathologies. Overall, the results are convincing and impactful to the field.

      Weakness:

      The manuscript still lacks a mechanistic understanding of aggregate clearance. Even though the authors have provided the role of different cellular components, such as BiP, Cdk1 and ATL2/3 through specific inhibitors, at least an outline establishing the sequence of events leading to clearance is missing. Moreover, the authors show that the levels of ER-FlucDM-eGFP do not change significantly throughout the cell cycle, indicating that protein degradation is not in play. Therefore, addressing/elaborating on the mechanism of disassembly can add value to the work. Also, the physiological relevance of aggregate clearance upon mitotic exit has not been tested, nor have the cellular targets of this mode of clearance been identified or discussed.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors investigate the neuroprotective effect of reserpine in a retinitis pigmentosa (P23H-1) model, characterized by a mutation in the rhodopsin gene. Their results reveal that female rats show better preservation of both rod and cone photoreceptors following reserpine treatment compared to males.

      Strengths:

      This study effectively highlights the neuroprotective potential of reserpine and underscores the value of drug repositioning as a strategy for accelerating the development of effective treatments. The findings are significant for their clinical implications, particularly in demonstrating sex-specific differences in therapeutic response.

      Weaknesses:

      The main limitation is the lack of precise identification of the specific pathway through which reserpine prevents photoreceptor death.

      Comments on revisions:

      Thank you for your thorough revisions. I appreciate the effort you have put into addressing all the concerns I previously raised. Upon reviewing your responses and the updated manuscript, I find that you have adequately clarified the issues and incorporated the necessary modifications. Your revisions have strengthened the paper, and I have no further concerns at this stage.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Golamalamdari, van Schaik, Wang, Kumar Zhang, Zhang and colleagues study interactions between the speckle, nucleolus and lamina in multiple cell types (K562, H1, HCT116 and HFF). Their datasets define how interactions between the genome and the different nuclear landmarks relate to each other and change across cell types. They also identify how these relationships change in K562 cells in which LBR and LMNA are knocked out.

      Strengths:

      Overall, there are a number of datasets that are provided, and several "integrative" analyses performed. This is a major strength of the paper, and I imagine the datasets will be of use to the community to further probed and the relationships elucidated here further studied. An especially interesting result was that specific genomic regions (relative to their association with the speckle, lamina, and other molecular characteristics) segregate relative to the equatorial plane of the cell.

      Weaknesses:

      The experiments are primarily descriptive, and the cause-and-effect relationships are limited (though the authors do study the role of LMNA/LBR knockdown with their technologies).

      Comments on revisions:

      I have no additional comments. I appreciate the authors responding to my previous comments. I anticipate the datasets and concepts raised will be helpful to many investigators in the field.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Gray and colleagues describe the identification of Integrator complex subunit 12 (INTS12) as a contributor to HIV latency in two different cell lines and in cells isolated from the blood of people living with HIV. The authors employed a high-throughput CRISPR screening strategy to knock down genes and assess their relevance in maintaining HIV latency. They had used a similar approach in two previous studies, finding genes required for latency reactivation or genes preventing it and whose knockdown could enhance the latency-reactivating effect of the NFκB activator AZD5582. This work builds on the latter approach by testing the ability of gene knockdowns to complement the latency-reactivating effects of AZD5582 in combination with the BET inhibitor I-BET151. This drug combination was selected because it has been previously shown to display synergistic effects on latency reactivation.

      The finding that INTS12 may play a role in HIV latency is novel, and the effect of its knock down in inducing HIV transcription in primary cells, albeit in only a subset of donors, is intriguing.

      In this revised version, the authors have included new data and clarifications which help strengthen their conclusions.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study identifies two types of activation: one that is cue-triggered and non-specific to motion directions, and another that is specific to the exposed motion directions but occurs in a reversed manner. The finding that activity in the medial temporal lobe (MTL) preceded that in the visual cortex suggests that the visual cortex may serve as a platform for the manifestation of replay events, which potentially enhance visual sequence learning.

      Evaluations:

      Identifying the two types of activation after exposure to a sequence of motion directions is very interesting. The experimental design, procedures and analyses are solid. The findings are interesting and novel.

      In the original submission, it was not immediately clear to me why the second type of activation was suggested to occur spontaneously. The procedural differences in the analyses that distinguished between the two types of activation need to be a little better clarified. However, this concern has been satisfactorily addressed in the revision.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Overall I found the approach taken by the authors to be clear and convincing. It is striking that the conclusions are similar to those obtained in a recent study using a different computational approach (finite state controllers), and lends confidence to the conclusions about the existence of an optimal memory duration. There are a few questions that could be expanded on in future studies:

      (1) Spatial encoding requirements

      The manuscript contrasts the approach taken here (reinforcement learning in a gridworld) with strategies that involve a "spatial map" such as infotaxis. However, the gridworld navigation algorithm has an implicit allocentric representation, since movement can be in one of four allocentric directions (up, down, left, right), and wind direction is defined in these coordinates. Future studies might ask if an agent can learn the strategy without a known wind direction if it can only go left/right/forward/back/turn (in egocentric coordinates). In discussing possible algorithms, and the features of this one, it might be helpful to distinguish (1) those that rely only on egocentric computations (run and tumble), (2) those that rely on a single direction cue such as wind direction, (3) those that rely on allocentric representations of direction, and (4) those that rely on a full spatial map of the environment.

      (2) Recovery strategy on losing the plume

      The authors explore several recovery strategies upon losing the plume, including backtracking, circling, and learned strategies, finding that a learned strategy is optimal. As insects show a variety of recovery strategies that can depend on the model of locomotion, it would be interesting in the future to explore under which conditions various recovery strategies are optimal and whether they can predict the strategies of real animals in different environments.

      (3) Is there a minimal representation of odor for efficient navigation?

      The authors suggest that the number of olfactory states could potentially be reduced to reduce computational cost. They show that reducing the number of olfactory states to 1 dramatically reduces performance. In the future it would be interesting to identify optimal internal representations of odor for navigation and to compare these to those found in real olfactory systems. Does the optimal number of odor and void states depend on the spatial structure of the turbulence as explored in Figure 5?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this elegant and thorough study, Sánchez-León et al. investigate the effects of tDCS on the firing of single cerebellar neurons in awake and anesthetized mice. They find heterogeneous responses depending on the orientation of the recorded Purkinje cell.

      Strengths:

      The paper is important in that it may well explain part of the controversial and ambiguous outcomes of various clinical trials. It is a well-written paper on a deeply analyzed dataset.

      Weaknesses:

      The sample size could be increased for some of the experiments.

      Comments on revised version: They have not been able to increase the size of some of the critical experiments, but they have done additional statistics, which make me feel confident that the main conclusions are correct.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This study provides significant insights into the dynamics of attentional re-orienting within visual working memory, demonstrating how expected and unexpected memory tests influence attention focus and re-focus. The evidence supporting these conclusions is convincing, with the use of appropriate and validated methodologies, including behavioral measures, EEG, and eye tracking, that are in line with current state-of-the-art practices. This work will be of particular interest to cognitive neuroscientists studying attention and memory processes.

      Thank you for the detailed revisions. I am pleased to see that the manuscript now effectively addresses every point I raised. The clarification between microsaccades and saccades greatly enhances transparency regarding the eye movement data. The inclusion of time-frequency plots and topographic maps for the working-memory test phase further improves the comprehensiveness of the alpha lateralization results, despite the relative lack of alpha effects at that stage. Moreover, the implementation of the Fractional Area Latency analysis successfully rules out amplitude-related confounds in the saccade bias latency measurements. Finally, the clear reporting of the statistical analyses for significant saccade bias further strengthens the reliability of the findings.

      Overall, I appreciate the thorough and thoughtful response, and I believe that all my concerns have been successfully addressed.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The manuscript by Li et al., investigates metabolism independent role of nuclear IDH1 in chromatin state reprogramming during erythropoiesis. The authors describe accumulation and redistribution of histone H3K79me3, and downregulation of SIRT1, as a cause for dyserythropoiesis observed due to IDH1 deficiency. The authors studied the consequences of IDH1 knockdown, and targeted knockout of nuclear IDH1, in normal human erythroid cells derived from hematopoietic stem and progenitor cells and HUDEP2 cells respectively. They further correlate some of the observations such as nuclear localization of IDH1 and aberrant localization of histone modifications in MDS and AML patient samples harboring IDH1 mutations. These observations are overall intriguing from a mechanistic perspective and hold therapeutic significance. The authors have addressed the previous concerns sufficiently in the revised manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The manuscript investigates the role of the membrane-deforming cytoskeletal regulator protein Abba in cortical development and its potential implications for microcephaly. It is a valuable contribution to the understanding of Abba's role in cortical development. The strengths and weaknesses identified in the manuscript are outlined below:

      Clinical Relevance:

      The authors identified a patient with microcephaly and intellectual disability patient harboring a mutation in the Abba variant (R671W), adding a clinically relevant dimension to the study.

      Mechanistic Insights:

      The study offers valuable mechanistic insights into the development of microcephaly by elucidating the role of Abba in radial glial cell proliferation, radial fiber organization, and the migration of neuronal progenitors. The identification of Abba's involvement in the cleavage furrow during cell division, along with its interaction with Nedd9 and positive influence on RhoA activity, adds depth to our understanding of the molecular processes governing cortical development.

      In Vivo Validation:

      The overexpression of mutant Abba protein (R671W), which results in phenotypic similarities to Abba knockdown effects, supports the significance of Abba in cortical development.

      Weaknesses:

      The findings in the study suggest that heterozygous expression of the R671W variant may exert a dominant-negative effect on ABBA's role, disrupting normal brain development and leading to microcephaly and cognitive delay. However, evidence also points to a possible gain-of-function effect, as the mutation does not decrease RhoA activity or PH3 expression in vivo. Additionally, the impact of ABBA depletion on cell fate is not fully addressed. While abnormal progenitor accumulation in the ventricular and subventricular zones is observed, the transition of progenitors to neuroblasts and their ability to support neuroblast migration remains unclear. Impaired cleavage furrow ingression and disrupted Nedd9 and RhoA signaling could lead to structural abnormalities in radial glial progenitors, affecting their scaffold function and neuroblast progression. The manuscript lacks an exploration of the loss or decrease in interaction between Abba and NEDD9 in the case of the pathogenic patient-derived mutation in Abba. Furthermore, addressing the changes in localization and ineraction in for NEDD9 following over-expression of the mutant are important to further mehcanistically characterizxe this interaction in future studies. These gaps suggest the need for further exploration of ABBA's role in progenitor cell fate and neuroblast migration to clarify its mechanistic contributions to cortical development.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work by the Meng lab investigates the role of the proteins MARK2 and CAMSAP2 in the Golgi reorientation during cell polarisation and migration. They identified that both proteins interact together and that MARK2 phosphorylates CAMSAP2 on the residue S835. They show that the phosphorylation affects the localisation of CAMSAP2 at the Golgi apparatus and in turn influences the Golgi structure itself. Using the TurboID experimental approach, the author identified the USO1 protein as a protein that binds differentially to CAMSAP2 when it is itself phosphorylated at residue 835. Dissecting the molecular mechanisms controlling Golgi polarisation during cell migration is a highly complex but fundamental issue in cell biology and the author may have identified one important key step in this process.

      Comments on latest version:

      I thank the authors for the numerous revisions they have made to this manuscript, which have strengthened its clarity and overall quality. However, I must reiterate my initial concerns from the first review regarding the rigor of the data analysis, as certain methodological choices may lead to potential overinterpretation of the results.<br /> For instance, the low number of cells analyzed in the new Figure 1B (N = 3; 0 h: n = 28; 0.5 h: n = 23; 2 h: n = 20) indicates that fewer than 10 fixed cells have been quantified per replicate. Given the variability of the CAMSAP2 signal observed in Supplementary Figure 2, this sample size does not appear optimal for accurately capturing the complexity of CAMSAP2 localization within the cell population. Additionally, the Pearson's coefficients calculated between CAMSAP2 and GM130 in Figure 1B (approximately 0.4) do not align with those in Figure 3C, where the control condition shows values above 0.6. This discrepancy highlights the high variability of CAMSAP2 Golgi localization in the HT1080 cell population, which may not be adequately represented by the quantification of such a limited number of cells. If the population distribution were narrow, averaging only a few cells might be sufficient to achieve high statistical power; however, this does not appear to be the case, and a larger sample size is necessary.

      Furthermore, to ensure a more robust analysis, SuperPlots displaying each biological replicate should be provided for all quantifications, and statistical analysis should be conducted using a t-test or ANOVA on the means of the three independent experiments rather than on the total number of cells, as the latter approach may influence statistical significance (for reference: jcb.202001064). This recommendation is relevant for Figures 1E, 3B, 3C, 4E, 4F, 6F, Sup1D, Sup3D, Sup3E, Sup3I, and Sup3G and should be implemented whenever possible.

      For instance, in the new Figure 6F, the statistical difference (1 star) between Pearson's coefficients for HT1080 and siUSO1-2 conditions, both approaching 90, raises questions about whether this difference is truly substantial enough to support the claim that USO1 knockdown negatively impacts CAMSAP2 localization.

      Publishing in journals such as eLife requires high standards in data analysis to ensure rigorous and reproducible scientific conclusions. In its present form, this manuscript does not yet meet those standards.

      Additional comments:

      Supplementary figure 2<br /> A) The video microscopy conditions are not described in the Materials and Methods section. It is unclear what type of microscope was used-was it a bright-field or confocal microscope? The images contain a significant amount of out-of-focus signal, making it difficult to accurately assess the extent of Golgi apparatus dispersion as described by the authors. If a confocal microscope was used, a Z-stack projection would be beneficial for quantifying this process.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary

      In this manuscript, De La Forest Divonne et al. build a repertory of hemocytes from adult Pacific oysters combining scRNAseq data with cytologic and biochemical analyses. Three categories of hemocytes were described previously in this species (i.e. blast, hyalinocyte and granulocytes). Based on scRNAseq data, the authors identified 7 hemocyte clusters presenting distinct transcriptional signatures. Using Kegg pathway enrichment and RBGOA, the authors determined the main molecular features of the clusters. In parallel, using cytologic markers, the authors classified 7 populations of hemocytes (i.e. ML, H, BBL, ABL, SGC, BGC, and VC) presenting distinct sizes, nucleus sizes, acidophilic/basophilic, presence of pseudopods, cytoplasm/nucleus ratio and presence of granules. Then, the authors compared the phenotypic features with potential transcriptional signatures seen in the scRNAseq. The hemocytes were separated in a density gradient to enrich for specific subpopulations. The cell composition of each cell fraction was determined using cytologic markers and the cell fractions were analysed by quantitative PCR targeting major cluster markers (two per cluster). With this approach, the authors could assign cluster 7 to VC, cluster 2 to H, and cluster 3 to SGC. The other clusters did not show a clear association with this experimental approach. Using phagocytic assays, ROS, and copper monitoring, the authors showed that ML and SGC are phagocytic, ML produces ROS, and SGC and BGC accumulate copper. Then with the density gradient/qPCR approach, the authors identified the populations expressing anti-microbial peptides (ABL, BBL, and H). At last, the authors used Monocle to predict differentiation trajectories for each subgroup of hemocytes using cluster 4 as the progenitor subpopulation.

      The manuscript provides a comprehensive characterisation of the diversity of circulating immune cells found in Pacific oysters.

      Strengths

      The combination of scRNAseq, cytologic markers and gradient based hemocyte sorting offers an integrative view of the immune cell diversity.<br /> Hemocytes represent a very plastic cell population that has key roles in homeostatic and challenged conditions. Grasping the molecular features of these cells at the single-cell level will help understand their biology.<br /> This type of study may help elucidate the diversification of immune cells in comparative studies and evolutionary immunology.

      Weaknesses

      Several figures show inconsistency leading to erroneous conclusions and some conclusions are poorly supported. Moreover, the manuscript remains highly descriptive with limited comparison with the available literature.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      There has been intense controversy over the generality of Hamilton's inclusive fitness rule for how evolution works on social behaviors. All generally agree that relatedness can be a game changer, for example allowing for otherwise unselectable altruistic behaviors when c < rb, where c is the fitness cost to the altruism, b is the fitness benefit to another, and r their relatedness. Many complications have been successfully incorporated into the theory, including different reproductive values and viscous population structures.

      The controversy has centered on another dimension; Hamilton's original model was for additive fitness, but how does his result hold when fitnesses are non-additive? One approach has been not to worry about a general result but just find results for particular cases. A consistent finding is that the results depend on the frequency of the social allele - non-additivity causes frequency dependence that was absent in Hamilton's approach. Two other approaches derive from Queller via the Price equation. Queller 1 is to find forms like Hamilton's rule, but with additional terms that deal with non-additive interaction, each with an r-like population structure variable multiplied by a b-like fitness effect (Queller 1985). Queller 2 redefines the fitness effects c and b as partial regressions of the actor's and recipient's genes on fitness. This leaves Hamilton's rule intact, just with new definitions of c and b that depend on frequency.

      Queller 2 is the version that has been most adopted by the inclusive fitness community along with assertions that Hamilton's rule in completely general. In this paper, van Veelen argues that Queller 1 is the correct approach. He derives a general form that Queller only hinted at. He does so within a more rigorous framework that puts both Price's equation and Hamilton's rule on firmer statistical ground. Within that framework, the Queller 2 approach is seen to be a statistical misspecification - it employs a model without interaction in cases that actually do have interaction. If we accept that this is a fatal flaw, the original version of Hamilton's rule is limited to linear fitness models, which might not be common.

      Strengths:

      While the approach is not entirely new, this paper provides a more rigorous approach and a more general result. It shows that both Queller 1 and Queller 2 are identities and give accurate results, because both are derived from the Price equation, which is an identity. So why prefer Queller 1? It identifies the misspecification issue with the Queller 2 approach and points out its consequences. For example, it will not give the minimum squared differences between the model and data. It does not separate the behavioral effects of the individuals from the population state (b and c become dependent on r and the population frequency).

      The paper also shows how the same problems can apply to non-social traits. Epistasis is the non-additivity of effects of two genes within the individual. (So one wonders why have we not had a similarly fierce controversy over how we should treat epistasis?)

      The paper is clearly written. Though somewhat repetitive, particularly in the long supplement, most of that repetition has the purpose of underscoring how the same points apply equally to a variety of different models.<br /> Finally, this may be a big step towards reconciliation in the inclusive fitness wars. Van Veelen has been one of the harshest critics of inclusive fitness, and now he is proposing a version of it.

      Weaknesses:

      van Veelen argues that the field essentially abandoned the Queller 1 approach after its publication. I think this is putting it too strongly - there have been a number of theoretical studies that incorporate extra terms with higher-order relatednesses. It is probably accurate to say that there has been relative neglect. But perhaps this is partly due to a perception that this approach is difficult to apply.

      The model in this paper is quite elegant and helps clarify conceptual issues, but I wonder how practical it will turn out to be. In terms of modeling complicated cases, I suspect most practitioners will continue doing what they have been doing, for example using population genetics or adaptive dynamics, without worrying about neatly separating out a series of terms multiplying fitness coefficients and population structure coefficients.

      For empirical studies, it is going to be hard to even try to estimate all those additional parameters. In reality, even the standard Hamilton's rule is rarely tested by trying to estimate all its parameters. Instead, it is commonly tested more indirectly, for example by comparative tests of the importance of relatedness. That of course would not distinguish between additive and non-additive models that both depend on relatedness, but it does test the core idea of kin selection. It will be interesting to see if van Veelen's approach stimulates new ways of exploring the real world.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In my previous review, I considered the contributions of the authors to be substantial because they have nearly doubled the number of genome sequences for chitons, and their newly sequenced genomes apparently are very well annotated. I would even extend these strengths now that I have had a chance to better review recent literature on marine animal genomes. Their contribution has helped make the chitons one of the best available marine taxa for comparative genomic studies. However, I still am unconvinced by the authors' claims to have demonstrated an unusually high rate of large-scale genome rearrangements across chitons. Their best argument seems to be comparisons drawn within a couple of similarly ancient bivalve lineages that were used to identify the conserved genomic regions in the first place, specifically the 20 molluscan linkage groups (MLGs). Perhaps it is safest to conclude that these MLGs are mostly conserved in conchiferans. Their main comparison with other molluscan classes is presented in tables 4 and 5 in the supplement, where they report a somewhat higher mean translocation rate for chitons (45.48) than for bivalves (41.10) or gastropods (41.87) but does this justify the implications of the title or the claims made in the Summary? I am not sure, partly because these summary tables are not made in a way that separates the gastropod or bivalve species listed into subtaxa separated by LCAs with estimated age, so the mean value across each class is not especially helpful. I still feel that the authors were not convincing in their arguments that chiton chromosomes have been subject to an unexpected history of rearrangement when contrasting quite ancient chitons lineages. This does not include impressive rearrangements documented for the likely geologically recent rearrangements seen within the genus, Acanthochitona, and separately within the subfamily Acanthopleurinae. These are quite impressive events that occurred recently within lineages of shallow-water chiton taxa, not deep still waters.

      By the authors' estimates, some sequenced chiton genomes represent lineages that share a last common ancestor (LCA) as much as over 300 million years before present. This is like comparing a frog genome with a human genome. I suspect that the authors would agree that the pace of chiton genome rearrangements is not nearly as great as that observed for younger taxa such as mammals or particular insect orders known to have a history of genome shuffling. For example, according to Damas et al. (2022; https://www.pnas.org/doi/full/10.1073/pnas.2209139119) for comparisons within mammals, "94 inversions, 16 fissions, and 14 fusions that occurred over 53 My differentiated the therian from the descendent eutherian ancestor."

      It is more interesting to me how the chiton genome rearrangements compare with other molluscan classes or for comparisons of other marine taxa genomes that share a similarly ancient LCA, but this is difficult to dig out of the authors' presentation. As far as I am aware, there are relatively few such comparisons of genome rearrangements available for marine animals. Attempting to do my own search for any comparison I could make, I noticed in that in a recent compilation of "high quality"* genomes (Martínez-Redondo 2024; https://doi.org/10.1093/gbe/evae235), this included genomes for 84 (mostly insect) arthropods, 67 vertebrates, 31 mollusks, 15 annelids, 12 nematodes, and 6 cnidarians, but the numbers drop off to 1-4 for many phyla, e.g., echinoderms. If there are really so few marine taxa available for comparison to the last 300 My of chiton genome rearrangements and fusions, then I would like to see a better presentation of the contrasts of the 20 molluscan linkage groups (MLGs) across molluscan classes. I found it very difficult to evaluate beyond the assertion that these are relatively conserved in two bivalve taxa. I remain unconvinced whether the amount of genome rearrangement observed by the authors for chitons is either especially rapid or slow. Certainly the genome browsers I have seen do not make it easy to compare, for example, marine gastropod or bivalve genomes (e.g., https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/cgv/9606 or https://genome.ucsc.edu/cgi-bin/hgGateway).

      An unrelated topic that I also brought up in my earlier review is the ancestral reconstruction of molluscan chromosome numbers. The authors' explanation does nothing to justify how they ended up with an optimization of 20 for the ancestor of Mollusca. The outgroups included two annelids, Owenia [12 chromosomes] and Paraescarpia [14], plus the very distant chordate, Branchiostoma [19] (but the tunicate, Oikopleura has 6). Do the authors not understand that outgroups are critical for the optimization of character states at an ancestral node, with the most proximal outgroups being most important? How did they end up with an ancestral reconstruction of the chiton LCA with 16 chromosomes when there is no chiton with more than 13? Given the number of chromosomes in annelids, which is clearly the most proximal outgroups included with chromosome numbers available, it is more parsimonious to postulate that there was an increase in chromosome number for the conchiferan lineage. Related, they should have rooted that tree figure (Fig. 2) with the deuterostome, Branchiostoma, not a monophyletic grouping of all outgroups.

      A recent study by Lewin et al. (2024; https://doi.org/10.1093/molbev/msae172) comparing annelid genomic rearrangements suggests to me that annelids probably have a more striking history of rearrangements than for chitons, but I found it difficult to evaluate. I do tend to agree with the overall conclusion of Lewin et al: "All animals with bilateral symmetry inherited a genome structure from their last common ancestor that has been highly conserved in some taxa but seemingly unconstrained in others." That is also my impression so far but the authors have done little to summarize what is known. One study that implies that at least deuterostomes have conserved elements of an ancestral chromosomal arrangement is provided by Lin et al. (2024; https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pbio.3002661), who sequenced two genomes representing crown group hemichordates (LCA about 504 My).

      Even if my general impression is wrong that the history of chiton genome rearrangement is not especially remarkable, or at least we still do not have a great idea of how rapid it is, I still think the authors could have done a better job of demonstrating their claims. This is important if they are going to make big claims about the pace of chiton chromosomal rearrangements. There is very little discussion of other similarly ancient marine animal taxa. I do not especially have a problem with excluding better known terrestrial mammalian or insect genomes as perhaps not a very relevant contrast, but am I supposed to be impressed with the comparisons made with bivalves and gastropods in Tables 4 and 5 of the Supplement? Where do the authors present a detailed comparison of how these estimates compare to conchiferans? Is this amount of genome rearrangement observed for chitons surprising for an extant taxon that has diversified for over 300 My? This is claimed in the title and summary of the manuscript as the take-home for the contribution, but I am left with the impression that there is too little attempt to justify that the pace across Polyplacophora (Neoloricata) is in any way remarkable. Apparently, there are few other lineages of marine taxa within which there are sequenced and well annotated genomes that can be compared, and this confounds the extent of conclusions that can be made.

      * "high quality" genomes defined as follows by Martínez-Redondo (2024): "...we lowered the threshold used to consider a data set as high quality to 70% C + F (complete plus fragmented) BUSCO score (Manni et al. 2021), as the original 85% threshold was too restrictive when prioritizing a wide taxonomic sampling and the inclusion of biologically interesting species that are not widely studied."

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study investigates protein-protein interactions (PPIs) within the nuage, a germline-specific organelle essential for piRNA biogenesis in Drosophila melanogaster, using AlphaFold2 to predict interactions among 20 nuage-localizing proteins. The authors identify five novel interaction candidates and experimentally validate three of them, including Spindle-E and Squash, through co-immunoprecipitation assays. They confirm the functional significance of these interactions by disrupting salt bridges at the Spn-E_Squ interface. The study further expands its scope to analyze approximately 430 oogenesis-related proteins, validating three additional interaction pairs. A comprehensive screen of around 12,000 Drosophila proteins for interactions with the key piRNA pathway player, Piwi, identifies 164 potential binding partners. Overall, the research demonstrates that in silico approaches using AlphaFold2 can link bioinformatics predictions with experimental validation, streamlining the identification of novel protein interactions and reducing the reliance on extensive experimental efforts.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript investigates the role of the neck linker in coordinating the stepping cycles of the two heads of a kinesin-1 motor. Previous studies in the field showed that kinesin walks by alternating stepping of its heads, referred to as hand-over-hand. In this stepping mechanism, the front head of a kinesin dimer must remain bound until the rear head dissociates from the microtubule, moves forward, and rebinds to the tubulin on the plus-end side of the front head. There is a large body of work done to address this question. These studies all point to the central role of the 14 amino acid extension, a neck-linker, which connects the two heads to a common stalk, in coordination of kinesin motility. In a two-head-bound state, the motor domains (heads) are oriented parallel to the microtubule, but the neck linkers are orienting toward each other, thereby, breaking the symmetry in a homodimeric motor. In addition, the neck linkers are quite short, almost stretching to their near contour length to accommodate the microtubule binding of both heads. Previous studies pointed out that either the opposing orientation or the intramolecular tension of the neck linkers coordinate the stepping cycle.

      However, we still do not know which step(s) in the chemo-mechanical cycle is controlled by the neck-linker to keep the two heads out of phase. The front head gating model postulates that ATP binding to the front head is gated until the rear head detaches from the microtubule. The rear head gating model proposes that the neck linker accelerates the detachment of the rear head from the microtubule. In this study, the authors use pre-steady state kinetics and smFRET to address this question. They measured ATP binding and microtubule detachment kinetics of kinesin's catalytic domain with neck linker constraints 1) imposed by disulfide crosslinking of the neck linker in monomeric kinesin in backward (rear head-like) and forward (front head-like) orientations, and 2) using the E236A-WT heterodimer to create a two-head microtubule-bound state with the mutant and WT heads occupying the rear and front positions respectively. They found that neck-linker conformation of the rear head reduces the ATP dissociation rate but has little effect on microtubule affinity. In comparison, the neck-linker conformation of the front head does not change ATP binding to the front head, but it reduces ATP-induced detachment of the front head, suggesting that a step after ATP binding (i.e. ATP hydrolysis or Pi release) is gated in the front head.

      Significance:

      I believe that this work will make an important contribution to the large body of literature focused on the mechanism of kinesin, which serves as an excellent model system to understand the kinetics and mechanics of a molecular motor. The mechanism proposed by the authors modifies the front-head gating model and is in agreement with recent structural work done on a kinesin dimer bound to a microtubule. Overall, the work is well performed, and the conclusions are well supported by the experimental data.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Cell metabolism exhibits a well-known behavior in fast-growing cells, which employ seemingly wasteful fermentation to generate energy even in the presence of sufficient environmental oxygen. This phenomenon is known as Overflow Metabolism or the Warburg effect in cancer. It is present in a wide range of organisms, from bacteria and fungi to mammalian cells.

      In this work, starting with a metabolic network for Escherichia coli based on sets of carbon sources, and using a corresponding coarse-grained model, the author applies some well-based approximations from the literature and algebraic manipulations. These are used to successfully explain the origins of Overflow Metabolism, both qualitatively and quantitatively, by comparing the results with E. coli experimental data.

      By modeling the proteome energy efficiencies for respiration and fermentation, the study shows that these parameters are dependent on the carbon source quality constants K_i (p.115 and 116). It is demonstrated that as the environment becomes richer, the optimal solution for proteome energy efficiency shifts from respiration to fermentation. This shift occurs at a critical parameter value K_A(C).<br /> This counterintuitive result qualitatively explains Overflow Metabolism.

      Quantitative agreement is achieved through the analysis of the heterogeneity of the metabolic status within a cell population. By introducing heterogeneity, the critical growth rate is assumed to follow a Gaussian distribution over the cell population, resulting in accordance with experimental data for E. coli. Overflow metabolism is explained by considering optimal protein allocation and cell heterogeneity.

      The obtained model is extensively tested through perturbations: 1) Introduction of overexpression of useless proteins; 2) Studying energy dissipation; 3) Analysis of the impact of translation inhibition with different sub-lethal doses of chloramphenicol on Escherichia coli; 4) Alteration of nutrient categories of carbon sources using pyruvate. All model perturbations results are corroborated by E. coli experimental results.

      Strengths:

      In this work, the author effectively uses modeling techniques typical of Physics to address complex problems in Biology, demonstrating the potential of interdisciplinary approaches to yield novel insights. The use of Escherichia coli as a model organism ensures that the assumptions and approximations are well-supported in existing literature. The model is convincingly constructed and aligns well with experimental data, lending credibility to the findings. In this version, the extension of results from bacteria to yeast and cancer is substantiated by a literature base, suggesting that these findings may have broad implications for understanding diverse biological systems.

      Weaknesses:

      The author explores the generalization of their results from bacteria to cancer cells and yeast, adapting the metabolic network and coarse-grained model accordingly. In the previous version this generalization was not completely supported by references and data from the literature. This drawback, however, has been treated in this current version, where the authors discuss in much more detail and give references supporting this generalization.

      Comments on revisions:

      I have no specific comments for the authors. My previous comments were all addressed, discussed and explained.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper presents a method for reconstructing videos from mouse visual cortex neuronal activity using a state-of-the-art dynamic neural encoding model. The authors achieve high-quality reconstructions of 10-second movies at 30 Hz from two-photon calcium imaging data, reporting a 2-fold increase in pixel-by-pixel correlation compared to previous methods. They identify key factors for successful reconstruction including the number of recorded neurons and model ensembling techniques.

      Strengths:

      (1) A comprehensive technical approach combining state-of-the-art neural encoding models with gradient-based optimization for video reconstruction.

      (2) Thorough evaluation of reconstruction quality across different spatial and temporal frequencies using both natural videos and synthetic stimuli.

      (3) Detailed analysis of factors affecting reconstruction quality, including population size and model ensembling effects.

      (4) Clear methodology presentation with well-documented algorithms and reproducible code.

      (5) Potential applications for investigating visual processing phenomena like predictive coding and perceptual learning.

      Weaknesses:

      The main metric of success (pixel correlation) may not be the most meaningful measure of reconstruction quality:

      High correlation may not capture perceptually relevant features.

      Different stimuli producing similar neural responses could have low pixel correlations The paper doesn't fully justify why high pixel correlation is a valuable goal

      Comparison to previous work (Yoshida et al.) has methodological concerns: Direct comparison of correlation values across different datasets may be misleading; Large differences in the number of recorded neurons (10x more in the current study); Different stimulus types (dynamic vs static) make comparison difficult; No implementation of previous methods on the current dataset or vice versa.

      Limited exploration of how the reconstruction method could provide insights into neural coding principles beyond demonstrating technical capability.

      The claim that "stimulus reconstruction promises a more generalizable approach" (line 180) is not well supported with concrete examples or evidence.

      The paper would benefit from addressing how the method handles cases where different stimuli produce similar neural responses, particularly for high-speed moving stimuli where phase differences might be lost in calcium imaging temporal resolution.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study is built on the emerging knowledge of trained immunity, where innate immune cells exhibit enhanced inflammatory responses upon being challenged by a prior insult. Trained immunity is now a very fast-evolving field and has been explored in diverse disease conditions and immune cell types. Earhart and the team approached the topic from a novel angle and were the first to explore a potential link to the complement system.

      The study focused on the central complement protein C3 and investigated how its signalling may modulate immune training in alveolar macrophages. The authors first performed in vivo experiments in C57BL mouse models to observe the presence of enhanced inflammation and C3a in BAL fluid following immune training. These changes were then compared with those from C3-deficient mice, which confirmed the involvement of C3a. This trained immunity was further validated in ex vivo experiments using primary alveolar macrophage, which was blunted in C3-deficiency, and, intriguingly, rescued by adding exogenous C3 protein, but not C3a. The genetic-based findings were supported by pharmacological experiments using the C3aR antagonist SB290157. Mechanistically, transcriptomic analyses suggested the involvement of metabolism-linked, particularly glycolytic, genes, which was in agreement with an upregulation of glycolytic flux in WT but not C3-deficient macrophages.

      Collectively, these data suggest that C3, possibly through engaging with C3aR, contributes to trained immunity in alveolar macrophages.

      Strengths:

      The conclusions reached were well supported by in vivo and ex vivo experiments, encompassing both genetic-knockout animal models and pharmacological tools.

      The transcriptomic and cell metabolism studies provided valuable mechanistic insights.

      Weaknesses:

      For the in vivo experiments, the histopathological and other inflammatory markers (Figure 1) were not directly linked to alveolar macrophages by experimental evidence. Other innate immune cells (eg. dendritic cells, neutrophils) and endothelial cells could also be involved in immune training and contribute to the pathological outcomes. These cells were not examined or mentioned in the study.

      For the ex vivo experiments assessing immune training in alveolar macrophages, only the release of selected inflammatory factors were measured. Macrophage activities constitute multiple aspects (e.g. phagocytosis, ROS production, microbe killing), which should also be considered to better depict the effect of trained immunity.

      The proposed mechanism of C3 getting cleaved intracellularly and then binding to lysosomal C3aR needs to be further supported by experimental evidence.

      There was an absence of any validation in human-based models.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors aimed to characterize neurocomputational signals underlying interpersonal guilt and responsibility. Across two studies, one behavioral and one fMRI, participants made risky economic decisions for themselves or for themselves and a partner; they also experienced a condition in which the partners made decisions for themselves and the participant. The authors also assessed momentary happiness intermittently between choices in the task. Briefly, results demonstrated that participants' self-reported happiness decreased after disadvantageous outcomes for themselves and when both they and their partner were affected; this effect was exacerbated when participants were responsible for their partner's low outcome, rather than the opposite, reflecting experienced guilt. Consistent with previous work, BOLD signals in the insula correlated with experienced guilt, and insula-right IFG connectivity was enhanced when participants made risky choices for themselves and safe choices for themselves and a partner.

      Strengths:

      This study implements an interesting approach to investigating guilt and responsibility; the paradigm in particular is well-suited to approach this question, offering participants the chance to make risky v. safe choices that affect both themselves and others. I appreciate the assessment of happiness as a metric for assessing guilt across the different task/outcome conditions, as well as the implementation of both computational models and fMRI.

      Weaknesses:

      In spite of the overall strengths of the study, I think there are a few areas in which the paper fell a bit short and could be improved.

      (1) While the framing and goal of this study was to investigate guilt and felt responsibility, the task implemented - a risky choice task with social conditions - has been conducted in similar ways in past research that were not addressed here. The novelty of this study would appear to be the additional happiness assessments, but it would be helpful to consider the changes noted in risk-taking behavior in the context of additional studies that have investigated changes in risky economic choice in social contexts (e.g., Arioli et al., 2023 Cerebral Cortex; Fareri et al., 2022 Scientific Reports).

      (2) The authors note they assessed changes in risk preferences between social and solo conditions in two ways - by calculating a 'risk premium' and then by estimating rho from an expected utility model. I am curious why the authors took both approaches (this did not seem clearly justified, though I apologize if I missed it). Relatedly, in the expected utility approach, the authors report that since 'the number of these types of trials varied across participants', they 'only obtained reliable estimates for [gain and loss] trials in some participants' - in study 1, 22 participants had unreliable estimates and in study 2, 28 participants had unreliable estimates. Because of this, and because the task itself only had 20 gains, 20 losses, and 20 mixed gambles per condition, I wonder if the authors can comment on how interpretable these findings are in the Discussion. Other work investigating loss aversion has implemented larger numbers of trials to mitigate the potential for unreliable estimates (e.g., Sokol-Hessner et al., 2009).

      (3) One thing seemingly not addressed in the Discussion is the fact that the behavioral effect did not replicate significantly in study 2.

      (4) Regarding the computational models, the authors suggest that the Reponsibility and Responsibility Redux models provided the best fit, but they are claiming this based on separate metrics (e.g., in study 1, the redux model had the lowest AIC, but the responsibility only model had the highest R^2; additionally, the basic model had the lowest BIC). I am wondering if the authors considered conducting a direct model comparison to statistically compare model fits.

      (5) In the reporting of imaging results, the authors report in a univariate analysis that a small cluster in the left anterior insula showed a stronger response to low outcomes for the partner as a result of participant choice rather than from partner choice. It then seems as though the authors performed small volume correction on this cluster to see whether it survived. If that is accurate, then I would suggest that this result be removed because it is not recommended to perform SVC where the volume is defined based on a result from the same whole-brain analysis (i.e., it should be done a priori).

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this article, the authors set out to understand how people's food decisions change when they are hungry vs. sated. To do so, they used an eye-tracking experiment where participants chose between two food options, each presented as a picture of the food plus its "Nutri-Score". In both conditions, participants fasted overnight, but in the sated condition, participants received a protein shake before making their decisions. The authors find that participants in the hungry condition were more likely to choose the tastier option. Using variants of the attentional drift-diffusion model, they further find that the best-fitting model has different attentional discounts on the taste and health attributes and that the attentional discount on the health information was larger for the hungry participants.

      Strengths:

      The article has many strengths. It uses a food-choice paradigm that is established in neuroeconomics. The experiment uses real foods, with accurate nutrition information, and incentivized choices. The experimental manipulation is elegant in its simplicity - administering a high-calorie protein shake. It is also commendable that the study was within-participant. The experiment also includes hunger and mood ratings to confirm the effectiveness of the manipulation. The modeling work is impressive in its rigor - the authors test 9 different variants of the DDM, including recent models like the mtDDM and maaDDM, as well as some completely new variants (maaDDM2phi and 2phisp). The model fits decisively favor the maaDDM2phi.

      Weaknesses:

      First, in examining some of the model fits in the supplements, e.g. Figures S9, S10, S12, S13, it looks like the "taste weight" parameter is being constrained below 1. Theoretically, I understand why the authors imposed this constraint, but it might be unfairly penalizing these models. In theory, the taste weight could go above 1 if participants had a negative weight on health. This might occur if there is a negative correlation between attractiveness and health and the taste ratings do not completely account for attractiveness. I would recommend eliminating this constraint on the taste weight.

      Second, I'm not sure about the mediation model. Why should hunger change the dwell time on the chosen item? Shouldn't this model instead focus on the dwell time on the tasty option?

      Third, while I do appreciate the within-participant design, it does raise a small concern about potential demand effects. I think the authors' results would be more compelling if they replicated when only analyzing the first session from each participant. Along similar lines, it would be useful to know whether there was any effect of order.

      Fourth, the authors report that tasty choices are faster. Is this a systematic effect, or simply due to the fact that tasty options were generally more attractive? To put this in the context of the DDM, was there a constant in the drift rate, and did this constant favor the tasty option?

      Fifth, I wonder about the mtDDM. What are the units on the "starting time" parameters? Seconds? These seem like minuscule effects. Do they align with the eye-tracking data? In other words, which attributes did participants look at first? Was there a correlation between the first fixations and the relative starting times? If not, does that cast doubt on the mtDDM fits? Did the authors do any parameter recovery exercises on the mtDDM?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Mancl et al. present cryo-EM structures of the Insulin Degrading Enzyme (IDE) dimer and characterize its conformational dynamics by integrating structures with SEC-SAXS, enzymatic activity assays, and all-atom molecular dynamics (MD) simulations. They present five cryo-EM structures of the IDE dimer at 3.0-4.1 Å resolution, obtained with one of its substrates, insulin, added to IDE in a 1:2 ratio. The study identified R668 as a key residue mediating the open-close transition of IDE, a finding supported by simulations and experimental data. The work offers a refined model for how IDE recognizes and degrades amyloid peptides, incorporating the roles of IDE-N rotation and charge-swapping events at the IDE-N/C interface.

      Strengths:

      The study by Mancl et al. uses a combination of experimental (cryoEM, SEC-SAXS, enzymatic assays) and computational (MD simulations, multibody analysis, 3DVA) techniques to provide a comprehensive characterization of IDE dynamics. The identification of R668 as a key residue mediating the open-to-close transition of IDE is a novel finding, supported by both simulations and experimental data presented in the manuscript. The work offers a refined model for how IDE recognizes and degrades amyloid peptides, incorporating the roles of IDE-N rotation and charge-swapping events at the IDE-N/C interface. The study identifies the structural basis and key residues for IDE dynamics that were not revealed by static structures.

      Weaknesses:

      Based on MD simulations and enzymatic assays of IDE, the authors claim that the R668A mutation in IDE affects the conformational dynamics governing the open-closed transition, which leads to altered substrate binding and catalysis. The functional importance of R668 would be substantiated by enzymatic assays that included some of the other known substrates of IDE than insulin such as amylin and glucagon.

      It is unclear to what extent the force field (FF) employed in the MD simulations favors secondary structures and if the lack of any observed structural changes within the IDE domains in the simulations - which is taken to suggest that the domains behave as rigid bodies - stems from bias by the FF.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This work employs both in vitro and in vivo/transplant methods to investigate the contribution of BDNF/TrkB signaling to enhancing differentiation and dentin-repair capabilities of dental pulp stem cells in the context of exposure to a variety of inflammatory cytokines. A particular emphasis of the approach is the employment of dental pulp stem cells in which BDNF expression has been enhanced using CRISPR technology. Transplantation of such cells is said to improve dentin regeneration in a mouse model of tooth decay.

      The study provides several interesting findings, including demonstrating that exposure to several cytokines/inflammatory agents increases the quantity of (activated) phospho-Trk B in dental pulp stem cells.

      However, a variety of technical issues weaken support for the major conclusions offered by the authors. These technical issues include the following:

      (1) It remains unclear exactly how the cytokines tested affect BDNF/TrkB signaling. For example, in Figure 1C, TNF-alpha increases TrkB and phospho-TrkB immunoreactivity to the same degree, suggesting that the cytokine promotes TrkB abundance without stimulating pathways that activate TrkB, whereas in Figure 2D, TNF-alpha has little effect on the abundance of TrkB, while increasing phospho-TrkB, suggesting that it affects TrkB activation and not TrkB abundance.

      (2) I find the histological images in Figure 3 to be difficult to interpret. I would have imagined that DAPI nuclear stains would reveal the odontoblast layer, but this is not apparent. An adjacent section labeled with conventional histological stains would be helpful here. Others have described Stro-1 as a stem cell marker that is expressed on a minority of cells associated with vasculature in the dental pulp, but in the images in Figure 3, Stro-l label is essentially co-distributed with DAPI, in both control and injured teeth, indicating that it is expressed in nearly all cells. Although the authors state that the Stro-1-positive cells are associated with vasculature, but I see no evidence that is true.

      (3) The data presented convincingly demonstrate that they have elevated BDNF expression in their dental pulp stem cells using a CRISPR-based approach I have a number of questions about these findings. Firstly, nowhere in the paper do they describe the nature of the CRISPR plasmid they are transiently transfecting. Some published methods delete segments of the BDNF 3'-UTR while others use an inactivated Cas9 to position an active transactivator to sequences in the BDNF promoter. If it is the latter approach, transient transfection will yield transient increases in BDNF expression. Also, as BDNF employs multiple promoters, it would be helpful to know which promoter sequence is targeted, and finally, knowing the identity of the guide RNAs would allow assessment for the potential of off-target effects I am guessing that the investigators employ a commercially obtained system from Santa Cruz, but nowhere is this mentioned. Please provide this information.

      (4) Another question left unresolved is whether their approach elevated BDNF, proBDNF, or both. Their 28 kDa western blot band apparently represents proBDNF exclusively, with no mature BDNF apparent, yet only mature BDNF effectively activates TrkB receptors. On the other hand, proBDNF preferentially activates p75NTR receptors. The present paper never mentions p75NTR, which is a significant omission, since other investigators have demonstrated that p75NTR controls odontoblast differentiation.

      (5) In any case, no evidence is presented to support the conclusion that the artificially elevated BDNF expression has any effect on the capability of the dental pulp stem cells to promote dentin regeneration. The results shown in Figures 4 and 5 compare dentin regeneration with BDNF-over-expressing stem cells with results lacking any stem cell transplantation. A suitable control is required to allow any conclusion about the benefit of over-expressing BDNF.

      (6) Whether increased BDNF expression is beneficial or not, the evidence that the BDNF-overexpressing dental pulp stem cells promote dentin regeneration is somewhat weak. The data presented indicate that the cells increase dentin density by only 6%. The text and figure legend disagree on whether the p-value for this effect is 0.05 or 0.01. In either case, nowhere is the value of N for this statistic mentioned, leaving uncertainty about whether the effect is real.

      (7) The final set of experiments applies transcriptomic analysis to address the mechanisms mediating function differences in dental pulp stem cell behavior. Unfortunately, while the Abstract indicates " we conducted transcriptomic profiling of TNFα-treated DPSCs, both with and without TrkB antagonist CTX-B" that does not describe the experiment described, which compared the transcriptome of control cells with cells simultaneously exposed to TNF-alpha and CTX-B. Since CTX-B blocks the functional response of cells to TNF-alpha, I don't understand how any useful interpretation can be attached to the data without controls for the effect of TNF alone and CTX-B alone.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, authors utilized in situ cryo-electron tomography (cryo-ET) to uncover the native thylakoid architecture of spinach chloroplasts and mapped the molecular organization of these thylakoids with single-molecule resolution. The obtained images show the detailed ultrastructural features of grana membranes and highlight interactions between thylakoids and plastoglobules. Interestingly, despite the distinct three-dimensional architecture of vascular plant thylakoids, their molecular organization closely resembles that of green algae. The pronounced lateral segregation of PSII and PSI was observed at the interface between appressed and non-appressed thylakoid regions, without evidence of a specialized grana margin zone where these complexes might intermix. Furthermore, unlike isolated thylakoid membranes, photosystem II (PSII) did not form a semi-crystalline array and distributed uniformly within the membrane plane and across stacked grana membranes in intact chloroplasts. Based on the above observations, the authors propose a simplified two-domain model for the molecular organization of thylakoid membranes that can apply to both green algae and vascular plants. This study suggests that the general understanding of the functional separation of thylakoid membranes in vascular plants should be reconsidered.

      Strengths:

      By employing and refining AI-driven computational tools for the automated segmentation of membranes and identification of membrane proteins, this study successfully quantifies the spatial organization of photosynthetic complexes both within individual thylakoid membranes and across neighboring stacked membranes.

      Weaknesses:

      This study's weakness is that it requires the use of chloroplasts isolated from leaves and the need to freeze them on a grid for observation, so it is unclear to what extent the observations reflect physiological conditions. In particular, the mode of existence of the thylakoid membrane complexes seems to be strongly influenced by the physicochemical environment surrounding the membranes, as indicated by the different distribution of PSII between intact chloroplasts and those with ruptured envelope membranes.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper proposes a new set of local synaptic plasticity rules that differs from classic rules in two regards: First, working under the assumption that signals coming into synapses change smoothly over time and thus have temporal correlations such that immediate activity is positively correlated with subsequent activity, it proposes both fast plasticity that immediately corrects errors as well as slower plasticity. Second, it derives these rules from optimal, Bayesian control theory principles that, even without the fast component of plasticity, are shown to provide more accurate performance than classic, non-Bayesian plasticity rules. As a proof of principle, it applies these to a simple cerebellar learning example that demonstrates how the proposed rules lead to learning performance that exceeds that achieved with classic cerebellar learning rules. The work also provides a potential normative explanation for post-climbing fiber spike pauses in Purkinje cell firing and proposes testable predictions for cerebellar experiments. Overall, I found the idea to be compelling and potentially broadly applicable across many systems. Further, I thought the work was a rare, very beautiful display of the application of optimal control theory to fundamental problems in neuroscience. My comments are all relatively minor and more expressions of interest than criticism.

      Comments:

      (1) The algorithm assumes, reasonably, that inputs are relatively smooth. However, I was wondering if this could make additional experimental predictions for the system being exceptionally noisy or otherwise behaving in signature ways if one were able to train a real biological network to match a rapidly changing or non-smooth function that does not align with the underlying assumptions of the model.

      (2) The algorithm assumes that one can, to a good approximation, replace individual input rates by their across-synapse average. How sensitive is the learning to this assumption, as one might imagine scenarios where a neuron is sensitive to different inputs for different tasks or contexts so that a grand average might not be correct? Or, the functional number of inputs driving the output might be relatively low or otherwise highly fluctuating and less easily averaged over.

      (3) On the cerebellar example, it is nice that the Bayesian example provides a narrower PF-CF interval for plasticity than the classical rules, but the window is not nearly as narrow as the Suvrathan et al. 2016 paper cited by the authors. Maybe this is something special about that system having well-defined, delayed feedback, but (optional) further comments or insights would be welcome if available.

      (4) In the discussion, I appreciated the comparison with the Deneve work which has fast and slow feedback components. I was curious whether, although non-local, there were also conceptual similarities with FORCE learning in which there is also an immediate correction of activity through fast changing of synaptic weights, which then aids the slow long-term learning of synaptic weights.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The ventral nerve cord (VNC) of organisms like Drosophila is an invaluable model for studying neural development and organisation in more complex organisms. Its well-defined structure allows researchers to investigate how neurons develop, differentiate, and organise into functional circuits. As a critical central nervous system component, the VNC plays a key role in controlling motor functions, reflexes, and sensory integration.

      Particularly relevant to this work, the VNC provides a unique opportunity to explore neuronal hemilineages - groups of neurons that share molecular, genetic, and functional identities. Understanding these hemilineages is crucial for elucidating how neurons cooperate to form specialized circuits, essential for comprehending normal brain function and dysfunction.

      A significant challenge in the field has been the lack of developmentally stable, hemilineage-specific driver lines that enable precise tracking and measurement of individual VNC hemilineages. The authors address this need by generating and validating a comprehensive, lineage-specific split-GAL4 driver library.

      Strengths and weaknesses

      The authors select new marker genes for hemilineages from previously published single-cell data of the VNC. They generate and validate specific and temporally stable lines for almost all the hemilineages in the VNC. They successfully achieved their aims, and their results support their conclusions. This will be a valuable resource for investigating neural circuit formation and function.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors introduce ImPaqT, a modular toolkit for zebrafish transgenesis, utilizing the Golden Gate cloning approach with the rare-cutting enzyme PaqCI. The toolkit is designed to streamline the construction of transgenes with broad applications, particularly for immunological studies. By providing a versatile platform, the study aims to address limitations in generating plasmids for zebrafish transgenesis.

      Strengths:

      The ImPaqT toolkit offers a modular method for constructing transgenes tailored to specific research needs. By employing Golden Gate cloning, the system simplifies the assembly process, allowing seamless integration of multiple genetic elements while maintaining scalability for complex designs. The toolkit's utility is evident from its inclusion of a diverse range of promoters, genetic tools, and fluorescent markers, which cater to both immunological and general zebrafish research needs. Furthermore, the modular design ensures expandability, enabling researchers to customize constructs for diverse experimental designs. The validation provided in the manuscript is solid, demonstrating the successful generation of several functional transgenic lines. These examples highlight the toolkit's efficacy, particularly for immune-focused applications.

      Weaknesses:

      While the toolkit's technical capabilities are well-demonstrated, there are several areas where additional validation and examples could enhance its impact. One limitation is the lack of data showing whether the toolkit can be directly used for rapid cloning and testing of enhancers or promoters, particularly cloning them directly from PCR using PaqCI overhangs without needing an entry vector. Similarly, the feasibility of cloning genes directly from PCR products into the system is not demonstrated, which would significantly increase the utility for researchers working with genomic elements.

      The authors discuss potential applications such as using the toolkit for tissue-specific knockout applications by assembling CRISPR/Cas9 gRNA constructs. However, they do not demonstrate the cloning of short fragments, such as gRNA sequences downstream of a U6 promoter, which would be an important proof-of-concept to validate these applications. Furthermore, while the manuscript focuses on macrophage-specific promoters, the widely used mpeg1.1 promoter is not included or tested, which limits the toolkit's appeal for researchers studying macrophages and microglia.

      Another potential limitation is the handling of sequences containing PaqCI recognition sites. Although the authors discuss domestication to remove these sites, a demonstration of cloning strategies for such cases or alternative methods to address these challenges would provide practical guidance for users.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Optogenetic tools enable very precise spatiotemporal control of the signaling pathway. The authors developed an optimized light-regulated PKC epsilon, Opto-PKCepsilon using AlphaFold for rational design. Interactome and phosphoproteome studies of light-activated Opto-PKCepsilon confirmed a high similarity of interaction partners to PMA-stimulated wild-type PKCepsilon and high specificity for PKCepsilon substrates. Light-dependent recruitment of Opto-PKCepsilon to the plasma membrane revealed the specific phosphorylation of the insulin receptor at Thr 1160 and recruitment to mitochondria the phosphorylation of the complex I subunit NDUFS4 correlating with reduced spare respiratory capacity, respectively. The interactome and phosphoproteome studies confirm the functionality of Opto-PKCepsilon.

      Strengths:

      AlphaFold simulations enable the design of an optimized Opto-PKCepsilon with respect to dark-light activity. Opto-PKCepsilon is a versatile tool to study the function of PKCepsilon in a precisely controlled manner.

      Weaknesses:

      Light-controlled PCKepsilon was recently reported by Gada et al. (2022). Ong et al. developed an optimized Opto-PKCepsilon and presented in their manuscript the potential of this tool for controlling signaling pathways. However, some data have to be improved and appropriate controls are still missing for some experiments.

      Major comments:

      (1) The group of proteins detected as phosphorylated PKC substrates (phospho-Ser PKC substrate antibody) induced by Opto-PKCepsilon varies significantly between Figure 1 C and Figure 2 C. Have the authors any explanation for this? Do both figures show similar areas of the membrane? The size marker indicates that this is not the case.

      (2) The ratio of endogenous and exogeneous PCKepsilon is quite different in the experiments shown in Figure 1 C and Figure 2 C. What is the reason for this effect?

      (3) In addition to the overall phosphorylation of PKC substrates, the PKCepsilon mutants should be tested for phosphorylation of a known PKCepsilon substrate. The phosphorylation of the insulin receptor at Thr 1160 by Opto-PKCepsilon (see Figure 6) is very convincing and would provide clearer results for comparing the mutants.

      (4) The quality of the fluorescence images shown in Figure 5 is poor and should be improved. In addition, a MitoTracker dye for mitochondria labeling should be included to confirm the mitochondrial localization of Opto-PKCepsilon.

      (5) Figure S6 shows a light experiment in the absence of insulin, as stated in the headline of the figure legend and in the main text. Does this mean that Figure 6B shows an experiment in which the cells were exposed to light in the presence of insulin? If so, this should be mentioned in the legend of the figure and in the main text. What influence does insulin have on IR phosphorylation at Thr 1160?

      (6) The signal of NDUSF4 phosphorylation induced by Opto-PKCepsilon is weak in the experiment shown in Figure 7E. What about the effect of shorter and longer exposure times? How many times was this experiment repeated?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors present results and analysis of an experiment studying the genetic architecture of phenology in two geographically and genetically distinct populations of switchgrass when grown in 8 common gardens spanning a wide range of latitudes. They focused primarily on two measures of phenology - the green-up date in the spring, and the date of flowering. They observed generally positive correlations of flowering date across the latitudinal gradient, but negative correlations between northern and southern (i.e. Texas) green-up dates. They use GWAS and multivariate meta-analysis methods to identify and study candidate genetic loci controlling these traits and how their effect sizes vary across these gardens. They conclude that much of the genetic architecture is garden-specific, but find some evidence for photoperiod and rainfall effects on the locus effect sizes.

      Strengths:

      The strengths of the study are in the large scale and quality of the field trials, the observation of negative correlations among genotypes across the latitudinal gradient, and the importance of the central questions: Can we predict how genetic architecture will change when populations are moved to new environments? Can we breed for more/less sensitivity to environmental cues?

      Weaknesses:

      I have tried hard to understand the concept of the GxWeather analysis presented here, but still do not see how it tests for interactions between weather and genetic effects on phenology. I may just not understand it correctly, but if so, then I think more clarity in the logical model would help - maybe a figure explaining how this approach can detect genotype-weather interactions. Also, since this is a proposal for a new approach to detecting gene-environment effects, simulations would be useful to show power and false positive rates, or other ways of validating the results. The QTL validation provided is not very convincing because the same trials and the same ways of calculating weather values are used again, so it's not really independent validation, plus the QTL intervals are so large overlap between QTL and GWAS is not very strong evidence.

      The term "GxWeather" is never directly defined, but based on its pairing with "GxE" on page 5, I assumed it means an interaction between genotypes (either plant lines or genotypes at SNPs) and weather variables, such that different genotypes alter phenology differently as a response to a specific change in weather. For example, some genotypes might initiate green-up once daylengths reach 12 hours, but others require 14 hours. Alternatively (equivalently), an SNP might have an effect on greenup at 12 hours (among plants that are otherwise physiologically ready to trigger greenup on March 21, only those with a genotype trigger), while no effect on greenup with daylengths of 14 hours (e.g., if plants aren't physiologically ready to greenup until June when daylengths are beyond 14 hours, both aa and AA genotypes will greenup at the same time, assuming this locus doesn't affect physiological maturity).

      Either way, GxE and (I assume) GxWeather are typically tested in one of two ways. Either genotype effects are compared among environments (which differ in their mean value for weather variables) and GxWeather would be inferred if environments with similar weather have similar genotype effects. Or a model is fit with an environmental (maybe weather?) variable as a covariate and the genotype:environment interaction is measured as a change of slope between genotypes. Basically, the former uses effect size estimates across environments that differ in mean for weather, while the latter uses variation in weather within an experiment to find GxWeather effects.

      However, the analytical approach here seems to combine these in a non-intuitive way and I don't think it can discover the desired patterns. As I understand from the methods, weather-related variables are first extracted for each genotype in each trial based on their green-up or flowering date, so within each trial each genotype "sees" a different value for this weather variable. For example, "daylength 14 days before green-up" is used as a weather variable. The correlation between these extracted genotype-specific weather variables across the 8 trials is then measured and used as a candidate mixture component for the among-trial covariance in mash. The weight assigned to these weather-related covariance matrices is then interpreted as evidence of genotype-by-weather interactions. However, the correlation among genotypes between these weather variables does not measure the similarity in the weather itself across trials. Daylengths at green-up are very different in MO than SD, but the correlation in this variable among genotypes is high. Basically, the correlation/covariance statistic is mean-centered in each trial, so it loses information about the mean differences among trials. Instead, the covariance statistic focuses on the within-trial variation in weather. But the SNP effects are not estimated using this within-trial variation, they're main effects of the SNP averaged over the within-trial weather variation. Thus it is not clear to me that the interpretation of these mash weights is valid. I could see mash used to compare GxWeather effects modeled in each trial (using the 2nd GxE approach above), but that would be a different analysis. As is, mash is used to compare SNP main effects across trials, so it seems to me this comparison should be based on the average weather differences among trials.

      A further issue with this analysis is that the weather variables don't take into account the sequence of weather events. If one genotype flowers after the 1st rain event and the second flowers after the 2nd rain event, they can get the same value for the cumulative rainfall 7d variable, but the lack of response after the 1st rain event is the key diagnostic for GxWeather. There's also the issue of circularity. Since weather values are defined based on observed phenology dates, they're effectively caused by the phenology dates. So then asking if they are associated with phenology is a bit circular. Also, it takes a couple of weeks after flowering is triggered developmentally before flowers open, so the < 2-week lags don't really make developmental sense.

      Thus, I don't think this sentence in the abstract is a valid interpretation of the analysis: "in the Gulf subpopulation, 65% of genetic effects on the timing of vegetative growth covary with day length 14 days prior to green-up date, and 33% of genetic effects on the timing of flowering covary with cumulative rainfall in the week prior to flowering". There's nothing in this analysis that compares the genetic effects under 12h days to genetic effects under 14h days (as an example), or genetic effects with no rainfall prior to flowering to genetic effects with high rainfall prior to flowering. I think the only valid conclusion is: "65% of SNPs for green-up have a GxE pattern that mirrors the similarity in relationships between green-up and day length among trials." However I don't know how to interpret that statement in terms of the overall goals of the paper.

      Next, I am confused about the framing in the abstract and the introduction of the GxE within and between subpopulations. The statement: "the key expectation that different genetic subpopulations, and even different genomic regions, have likely evolved distinct patterns of GxE" needs justification or clarification. The response to an environmental factor (ie plasticity) is a trait that can evolve between populations. This happens through the changing frequencies of alleles that cause different responses. But this doesn't necessarily mean that patterns of GxE are changing. GxE is the variance in plasticity. When traits are polygenic, population means can change a lot with little change in variance within each population. Most local adaptation literature is focused on changes in mean trait values or mean plasticities between populations, not changes in the variance of trait values or plasticities within populations. Focusing on the goal of this paper, differences in environmental or weather responses between the populations are interesting (Figure 1). However the comparisons of GxE between populations and with the combined population are hard to interpret. GxE within a population means that that population is not fixed for this component of plasticity, meaning that it likely hasn't been strongly locally selected. Doesn't this mean that in the context of comparing the two populations, loci with GxE within populations are less interesting than loci fixed for different values between populations? Also, if there is GxE in the Gulf population, by definition it is also present in the "Both" population. Not finding it there is just a power issue. If individuals in the two subpopulations never cross, the variance across the "Both" population isn't relevant in nature, it's an artificial construct of this experimental design. I wonder if there is confusion about the term "genetic" in GxE and as used in the first paragraph of the intro ("Genetic responses" and "Genetic sensitivity"). These sentences would be most clear if the "genetic" term referred to the mechanistic actions of gene products. But the rest of the paper is about genetic variation, ie the different effects of different alleles at a locus. I don't think this latter definition is what these first uses intend, which is confusing.

      Note that the cited paper (26) is not relevant to this discussion about GxE patterns. This paper discusses the precision of estimating sub-group-specific genetic effects. With respect to the current paper, reference 26 shows that you might get more accurate measures of the SNP effects in the Gulf population using the full "Both" population dataset because i) the sample size is larger, and ii) as long as the true effects are not that different between populations. That paper is not focused on whether effect size variation is caused by evolution but on the technical question of whether GxG or GxE impacts the precision of within-group effect size estimates. The implication of paper 26 is that comparing SNP effects estimated in the "Both" population among gardens might be more powerful for detecting GxE than using only Gulf samples, even if there is some difference in SNP effects among populations. But if there magnitudes (or directions) of SNP effects change a lot among populations (ie not just changes in allele frequency), then modeling the populations separately will be more accurate.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary

      This work performed Raman spectral microscopy at the single-cell level for 15 different culture conditions in E. coli. The Raman signature is systematically analyzed and compared with the proteome dataset of the same culture conditions. With a linear model, the authors revealed correspondence between Raman pattern and proteome expression stoichiometry indicating that spectrometry could be used for inferring proteome composition in the future. With both Raman spectra and proteome datasets, the authors categorized co-expressed genes and illustrated how proteome stoichiometry is regulated among different culture conditions. Co-expressed gene clusters were investigated and identified as homeostasis core, carbon-source dependent, and stationary phase-dependent genes. Overall, the authors demonstrate a strong and solid data analysis scheme for the joint analysis of Raman and proteome datasets.

      Strengths and major contributions

      (1) Experimentally, the authors contributed Raman datasets of E. coli with various growth conditions.

      (2) In data analysis, the authors developed a scheme to compare proteome and Ramen datasets. Protein co-expression clusters were identified, and their biological meaning was investigated.

      Weaknesses

      The experimental measurements of Ramen microscopy were conducted at the single-cell level; however, the analysis was performed by averaging across the cells. The author did not discuss if Ramen microscopy can used to detect cell-to-cell variability under the same condition.

      Discussion and impact on the field

      Ramen signature contains both proteomic and metabolomic information and is an orthogonal method to infer the composition of biomolecules. It has the advantage that single-cell level data could be acquired and both in vivo and in vitro data can be compared. This work is a strong initiative for introducing the powerful technique to systems biology and providing a rigorous pipeline for future data analysis.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work shows that a specific adenosine deaminase protein in Dictyostelium generates the ammonia that is required for tip formation during Dictyostelium development. Cells with an insertion in the ADGF gene aggregate but do not form tips. A remarkable result, shown in several different ways, is that the ADGF mutant can be rescued by exposing the mutant to ammonia gas. The authors also describe other phenotypes of the ADGF mutant such as increased mound size, altered cAMP signaling, and abnormal cell type differentiation. It appears that the ADGF mutant has defects in the expression of a large number of genes, resulting in not only the tip defect but also the mound size, cAMP signaling, and differentiation phenotypes.

      Strengths:

      The data and statistics are excellent.

      Weaknesses:

      The key weakness is understanding why the cells bother to use a diffusible gas like ammonia as a signal to form a tip and continue development. The rescue of the mutant by adding ammonia gas to the entire culture indicates that ammonia conveys no positional information within the mound. By the time the cells have formed a mound, the cells have been starving for several hours, and desperately need to form a fruiting body to disperse some of themselves as spores, and thus need to form a tip no matter what. One can envision that the local ammonia concentration is possibly informing the mound that some minimal number of cells are present (assuming that the ammonia concentration is proportional to the number of cells), but probably even a minuscule fruiting body would be preferable to the cells compared to a mound. This latter idea could be easily explored by examining the fate of the ADGF cells in the mound - do they all form spores? Do some form spores? Or perhaps the ADGF is secreted by only one cell type, and the resulting ammonia tells the mound that for some reason that cell type is not present in the mound, allowing some of the cells to transdifferentiate into the needed cell type. Thus elucidating if all or some cells produce ADGF would greatly strengthen this puzzling story.

    1. Joint Public Review:

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors investigate how different domains of the presynaptic protein UNC-13 regulate synaptic vesicle release in the nematode C. elegans. By generating numerous point mutations and domain deletions, they propose that two membrane-binding domains (C1 and C2B) can exhibit "mutual inhibition," enabling either domain to enhance or restrain transmission depending on its conformation. The authors also explore additional N-terminal regions, suggesting that these domains may modulate both miniature and evoked synaptic responses. From their electrophysiological data, they present a "functional switch" model in which UNC-13 potentially toggles between a basal state and a gain-of-function state, though the physiological basis for this switch remains partly speculative.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors conduct a thorough exploration of how mutations in the C1, C2B, and other regulatory domains affect synaptic transmission. This includes single, double, and triple mutations, as well as domain truncations, yielding a large, informative dataset.

      (2) The study includes systematically measure both spontaneous and evoked synaptic currents at neuromuscular junctions, under various experimental conditions (e.g., different Ca²⁺ levels), which strengthens the reliability of their functional conclusions.

      (3) Findings that different domain disruptions produce distinct effects on mEPSCs, mIPSCs, and evoked EPSCs suggest UNC-13 may adopt an elevated functional state to regulate synaptic transmission.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The authors have constructively responded to previous referee comments and I believe that the manuscript is a useful addition to the literature. I particularly appreciate the quantitative approach to social behavior, but have two cautionary comments.

      (1) Conceptually it is important to further justify why this particular maximum entropy model is appropriate. Maximum entropy models have been applied across a dizzying array of biological systems, including genes, neurons, the immune system, as well as animal behavior, so would seem quite beneficial to explain the particular benefits here, for mouse social behavior as coarse-grained through the eco-hab chamber occupancy. This would be an excellent chance to amplify what the models can offer for biological understanding, particularly in the realm of social behavior

      (2) Maximum entropy models of even intermediate size systems involve a large number of parameters. The authors are transparent about that limitation here, but I still worry that the conclusion of the sufficiency of pairwise interactions is simply not general, and this may also relate to the differences from previous work. If, as the authors suggest in the discussion, this difference is one of a choice of variables, then that point could be emphasized. The suggestion of a follow up study with a smaller number of mice is excellent.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors present a new model for animal pose estimation. The core feature they highlight is the model's stability compared to existing models in terms of keypoint drift. The authors test this model across a range of new and existing datasets. The authors also test the model with two mice in the same arena. For the single animal datasets the authors show a decrease in sudden jumps in keypoint detection and the number of undetected keypoints compared with DeepLabCut and SLEAP. Overall average accuracy, as measured by root mean squared error, generally shows generally similar but sometimes superior performance to DeepLabCut and better performance compared to SLEAP. The authors confusingly don't quantify the performance of pose estimation in the multi (two) animal case instead focusing on detecting individual identity. This multi-animal model is not compared with the model performance of the multi-animal mode of DeepLabCut or SLEAP.

      Strengths:

      The major strength of the paper is successfully demonstrating a model that is less likely to have incorrect large keypoint jumps compared to existing methods. As noted in the paper, this should lead to easier-to-interpret descriptions of pose and behavior to use in the context of a range of biological experimental workflows.

      Weaknesses:

      There are two main types of weaknesses in this paper. The first is a tendency to make unsubstantiated claims that suggest either model performance that is untested or misrepresents the presented data, or suggest excessively large gaps in current SOTA capabilities. One obvious example is in the abstract when the authors state ADPT "significantly outperforms the existing deep-learning methods, such as DeepLabCut, SLEAP, and DeepPoseKit." All tests in the rest of the paper, however, only discuss performance with DeepLabCut and SLEAP, not DeepPoseKit. At this point, there are many animal pose estimation models so it's fine they didn't compare against DeepPoseKit, but they shouldn't act like they did. Similar odd presentation of results are statements like "Our method exhibited an impressive prediction speed of 90{plus minus}4 frames per second (fps), faster than DeepLabCut (44{plus minus}2 fps) and equivalent to SLEAP (106{plus minus}4 fps)." Why is 90{plus minus}4 fps considered "equivalent to SLEAP (106{plus minus}4 fps)" and not slower? I agree they are similar but they are not the same. The paper's point of view of what is "equivalent" changes when describing how "On the single-fly dataset, ADPT excelled with an average mAP of 92.83%, surpassing both DeepLabCut and SLEAP (Figure 5B)" When one looks at Figure 5B, however, ADPT and DeepLabCut look identical. Beyond this, oddly only ADPT has uncertainty bars (no mention of what uncertainty is being quantified) and in fact, the bars overlap with the values corresponding to SLEAP and DeepPoseKit. In terms of making claims that seem to stretch the gaps in the current state of the field, the paper makes some seemingly odd and uncited statements like "Concerns about the safety of deep learning have largely limited the application of deep learning-based tools in behavioral analysis and slowed down the development of ethology" and "So far, deep learning pose estimation has not achieved the reliability of classical kinematic gait analysis" without specifying which classical gait analysis is being referred to. Certainly, existing tools like DeepLabCut and SLEAP are already widely cited and used for research.

      The other main weakness in the paper is the validation of the multi-animal pose estimation. The core point of the paper is pose estimation and anti-drift performance and yet there is no validation of either of these things relating to multi-animal video. All that is quantified is the ability to track individual identity with a relatively limited dataset of 10 mice IDs with only two in the same arena (and see note about train and validation splits below). While individual tracking is an important task, that literature is not engaged with (i.e. papers like Walter and Couzin, eLife, 2021: https://doi.org/10.7554/eLife.64000) and the results in this paper aren't novel compared to that field's state of the art. On the other hand, while multi-animal pose estimation is also an important problem the paper doesn't engage with those results either. The two methods already used for comparison in the paper, SLEAP and DeepPoseKit, already have multi-animal modes and multi-animal annotated datasets but none of that is tested or engaged with in the paper. The paper notes many existing approaches are two-step methods, but, for practitioners, the difference is not enough to warrant a lack of comparison. The authors state that "The evaluation of our social tracking capability was performed by visualizing the predicted video data (see supplement Videos 3 and 4)." While the authors report success maintaining mouse ID, when one actually watches the key points in the video of the two mice (only a single minute was used for validation) the pose estimation is relatively poor with tails rarely being detected and many pose issues when the mice get close to each other.

      Finally, particularly in the methods section, there were a number of places where what was actually done wasn't clear. For example in describing the network architecture, the authors say "Subsequently, network separately process these features in three branches, compute features at scale of one-fourth, one-eight and one-sixteenth, and generate one-eight scale features using convolution layer or deconvolution layer." Does only the one-eight branch have deconvolution or do the other branches also? Similarly, for the speed test, the authors say "Here we evaluate the inference speed of ADPT. We compared it with DeepLabCut and SLEAP on mouse videos at 1288 x 964 resolution", but in the methods section they say "The image inputs of ADPT were resized to a size that can be trained on the computer. For mouse images, it was reduced to half of the original size." Were different image sizes used for training and validation? Or Did ADPT not use 1288 x 964 resolution images as input which would obviously have major implications for the speed comparison? Similarly, for the individual ID experiments, the authors say "In this experiment, we used videos featuring different identified mice, allocating 80% of the data for model training and the remaining 20% for accuracy validation." Were frames from each video randomly assigned to the training or validation sets? Frames from the same video are very correlated (two frames could be just 1/30th of a second different from each other), and so if training and validation frames are interspersed with each other validation performance doesn't indicate much about performance on more realistic use cases (i.e. using models trained during the first part of an experiment to maintain ids throughout the rest of it.)

      Editors' note: None of the original reviewers responded to our request to re-review the manuscript. The attached assessment statement is the editor's best attempt at assessing the extent to which the authors addressed the outstanding concerns from the previous round of revisions.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study aims to uncover molecular and structural details underlying the broad substrate specificity of glycosaminoglycan lyases belonging to a specific family (PL35). They determined the crystal structures of two such enzymes, conducted in vitro enzyme activity assays, and a thorough structure-guided mutagenesis campaign to interrogate the role of specific residues. They made progress towards achieving their aims and I appreciate the attempt of the authors to address my initial comments on the paper.

      Impact on the field:

      I expect this work will have limited impact on the field, although it does stand on its own as a solid piece of structure-function analysis.

      Strengths:

      The major strengths of the study were the combination of structure and enzyme activity assays, comprehensive structural analysis, as well as a thorough structure-guided mutagenesis campaign.

      Weaknesses:

      (Before revision) -the authors claim to have done a ICP-MS experiment to show Mn2+ binds to their enzyme, but did not present the data. The authors could have used the anomalous scattering properties of Mn2+ at the synchrotron to determine the presence and location of this cation (i.e. fluorescence spectra, and/or anomalous data collection at the Mn2+ absorption peak).<br /> *comment after revision: I appreciate that the authors included this data now, and it looks fine.

      (Before revision) -the authors have an over-reliance on molecular docking for understanding the position of substrates bound to the enzyme. The docking analysis performed was cursory at best; Autodock Vina is a fine program but more rigorous software could have been chosen, as well we molecular dynamics simulations. As well the authors do not use any substrate/product-bound structures from the broader PL enzyme family to guide the placement of the substrates in the GAGases, and interpret the molecular docking models.<br /> *comment after revision: the authors used another docking program, which is fine, but did not do any MD analysis or comment on why not. Also maybe it is just me but I still do not see a figure explicitly showing an overlay/superposition of the docking results with crystal structures of similar enzymes with similar ligands. The authors do have a statement in this regard but I believe a figure (e.g. an additional panel on S2) would be very helpful to the reader.

      (Before revision)-the conclusion that the structures of GAGase II and VII are most similar to the structures of alginate lyases (Table 2 data), and the authors' reliance on DALI, are both questioned. DALI uses a global alignment algorithm, which when used for multi-domain enzymes such as these tends to result in sub-optimal alignment of active site residues, particularly if the active site is formed between the two domains as is the case here. The authors should evaluate local alignment methods focused on optimization of the superposition of a single domain; these methods may result in a more appropriate alignment of the active site residues, and different alignment statistics. This may influence the overall conclusion of the evolutionary history of these PL35 enzymes.<br /> *comment after revision: I'm not sure the authors understood my suggestion as the reply reiterates the original conclusions. I suggest local structural alignment of *only* the toroid and antiparallel β-sheet domains, not global alignment of both domains, as this would improve the accuracy of the structural similarity conclusions.

      (Before revision)-the data on the GAGase III residue His188 is not well interpreted; substitution of this residue clearly impacts HA and HS hydrolysis as well. The data on the impact on alginate hydrolysis is weak, which could be due to the fact that the WT enzyme has poor activity against alginate to start with.<br /> *comment after revision: I appreciate that the authors used higher amounts of H188A variants and still do not see activity on alginate, which strengthens the conclusions regarding this substrate. However this variant also has decreased activity against HS (Figure 5C) and thus H188 appears to be important for more substrates than just alginate. The discussion section should be updated accordingly.

      (Before revision)-the authors did not use the words "homology", "homologous", or "homolog" correctly (these terms mean the subjects have a known evolutionary relationship, which may or may not be known in the contexts the authors used these targets); the words "similarity" and "similar" are recommended to be used instead.<br /> *comment after revision: I thank the authors for addressing this.

      (Before revision)-the authors discuss a "shorter" cavity in GAGases, which does not make sense, and is not supported by any figure or analysis. I recommend a figure with a surface representation of the various enzymes of interest, with dimensions of the cavity labeled (as a supplemental figure). The authors also do not specifically define what subsites are in the context of this family of enzymes, nor do they specifically label or indicate the location of the subsites on the figures of the GAGase II and IV enzyme structures.<br /> *comment after revision: I thank the authors for improving their figures and text description on this point.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript under review investigates the role of periosteal stem cells (P-SSC) in bone marrow regeneration using a whole bone subcutaneous transplantation model. While the model is somewhat artificial, the findings were interesting, suggesting the migration of periosteal stem cells into the bone marrow and their potential to become bone marrow stromal cells. This indicates a significant plasticity of P-SSC consistent with previous reports using fracture models (Cell Stem Cell 29:1547, Dev Cell 59:1192).

      Major comments from previous round of review:

      (1) The authors assert that the periosteal layer was completely removed in their model, which is crucial for their conclusions. To substantiate this claim, it is recommended that the authors provide evidence of the successful removal of the entire periosteal stem cell (P-SSC) population. A colony-forming assay, with and without periosteal removal, could serve as a suitable method to demonstrate this.

      (2) The observation that P-SSCs do not express Kitl or Cxcl12, while their bone marrow stromal cell (BM-MSC) derivatives do, is a key finding. To strengthen this conclusion, the authors are encouraged to repeat the experiment using Cxcl12 or Scf reporter alleles. Immunofluorescence staining that confirms the migration of periosteal cells and their transformation into Cxcl12- or Scf-reporter-positive cells would significantly enhance the paper's key conclusion.

      (3) On page 8, line 20, the authors' statement regarding the detection of Periostin+ cells outside the periosteum layer could be misinterpreted due to the use of the periostin antibody. Given that periostin is an extracellular matrix protein, the staining may not accurately represent Periostin-expressing cells but rather the presence of periostin in the extracellular matrix. The authors should revise this section for greater precision.

      Comments on revised version:

      My comments from the previous round of review have mostly been addressed.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this study, Tiang et al. explore the role of ubiquitination of non-structural protein 16 (nsp16) in the SARS-CoV-2 life cycle. nsp16, in conjunction with nsp10, performs the final step of viral mRNA capping through its 2'-O-methylase activity. This modification allows the virus to evade host immune responses and protects its mRNA from degradation. The authors demonstrate that nsp16 undergoes ubiquitination and subsequent degradation by the host E3 ubiquitin ligases UBR5 and MARCHF7 via the ubiquitin-proteasome system (UPS). Specifically, UBR5 and MARCHF7 mediate nsp16 degradation through K48- and K27-linked ubiquitination, respectively. Notably, degradation of nsp16 by either UBR5 or MARCHF7 operates independently, with both mechanisms effectively inhibiting SARS-CoV-2 replication in vitro and in vivo. Furthermore, UBR5 and MARCHF7 exhibit broad-spectrum antiviral activity by targeting nsp16 variants from various SARS-CoV-2 strains. This research advances our understanding of how nsp16 ubiquitination impacts viral replication and highlights potential targets for developing broadly effective antiviral therapies.

      Strengths:

      The proposed study is of significant interest to the virology community because it aims to elucidate the biological role of ubiquitination in coronavirus proteins and its impact on the viral life cycle. Understanding these mechanisms will address broadly applicable questions about coronavirus biology and enhance our overall knowledge of ubiquitination's diverse functions in cell biology. Employing in vivo studies is a strength.

      Weaknesses:

      Minor comments:<br /> Figure 5A- The authors should ensure that the figure is properly labeled to clearly distinguish between the IP (Immunoprecipitation) panel and the input panel.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors investigated causal inference in the visual domain through a set of carefully designed experiments, and sound statistical analysis. They suggest the early visual system has a crucial contribution to computations supporting causal inference.

      Strengths:

      (1) I believe the authors target an important problem (causal inference) with carefully chosen tools and methods. Their analysis rightly implies the specialization of visual routines for causal inference and the crucial contribution of early visual systems to perform this computation. I believe this is a novel contribution and their data and analysis are in the right direction.<br /> (2) Authors sufficiently discuss the alternative perspective to causal inference.<br /> (3) The authors also expand the discussions beyond pure psychophysics and also include neural aspects.

      Weaknesses:

      I would not call them weaknesses, perhaps a different perspective:

      (1) Authors arguing pro a mere bottom-up contribution of early sensory areas for causal inference. Certainly, as the authors suggested, early sensory areas have a crucial contribution, and the authors expand it to other possibilities in their discussion (but more for more complex scenario). It would say, even in simple cases, we can still consider the effect of top down processes. This particularly makes sense in light of recent studies. These studies progressively suggest perception as an active process that also weighs in strongly, the top-down cognitive contributions. For instance, the most simple cases of perception have been conceptualized along this line (Martin, Solms, and Sterzer 2021) and even some visual illusions (Safavi and Dayan 2022), and other extensions (Kay et al. 2023). Thus, I believe it would be helpful to extend the discussion on the top-down and cognitive contributions of causal inference (of course that can also be hinted at, based on recent developments). Even adaptation, which is central in this study, can be influenced by top-down factors (Keller et al. 2017).

      Lastly, I hope the authors find this review helpful. I generally want to try to end all of my reviews with areas of the paper I liked because I think this should be part of the feedback. Certainly, there were many in this manuscript as well (clever questions, experimental design and statistical analysis) that I had to highlight further. I congratulate the authors again on their manuscript and hope they will find it helpful.

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    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Machii et al. reported a possible molecular mechanism underlying the parallel evolution of lip hypertrophy in African cichlids. The multifaceted approach taken in this manuscript is highly valued, as it uses histology, proteomics, and transcriptomics to reveal how phylogenetically distinct thick-lips have evolved in parallel. Findings from histology and proteomics connected to wnt signaling through the transcriptome are very exciting.

      Strengths:

      There is consistency between the results and it is possible to make a strong argument from the results.

      Comments on revised version:

      The issues I pointed out in the previous review have been carefully answered, and all issues have been addressed. The main points of the manuscript are clear, and the conclusions are easy to understand. The enlarged lips are a notable example of convergent evolution in African cichlids.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript focuses on the olfactory system of Pieris brassicae larvae and the importance of olfactory information in their interactions with the host plant Brassica oleracea and the major parasitic wasp Cotesia glomerata. The authors used CRISPR/Cas9 to knockout odorant receptor co-receptors (Orco), and conducted a comparative study on the behavior and olfactory system of the mutant and wild-type larvae. The study found that Orco-expressing olfactory sensory neurons in antennae and maxillary palps of Orco knockout (KO) larvae disappeared, and the number of glomeruli in the brain decreased, which impairs the olfactory detection and primary processing in the brain. Orco KO caterpillars show weight loss and loss of preference for optimal food plants; KO larvae also lost weight when attacked by parasitoids with the ovipositor removed, and mortality increased when attacked by untreated parasitoids. On this basis, the authors further studied the responses of caterpillars to volatiles from plants attacked by the larvae of the same species and volatiles from plants on which the caterpillars were themselves attacked by parasitic wasps. Lack of OR-mediated olfactory inputs prevents caterpillars from finding suitable food sources and from choosing spaces free of enemies.

      Strengths:

      The findings help to understand the important role of olfaction in caterpillar feeding and predator avoidance, highlighting the importance of odorant receptor genes in shaping ecological interactions.

      Weaknesses:

      There are the following major concerns:

      (1) Possible non-targeted effects of Orco knockout using CRISPR/Cas9 should be analyzed and evaluated in Materials and Methods and Results.

      (2) Figure 1E: Only one olfactory receptor neuron was marked in WT. There are at least three olfactory sensilla at the top of the maxillary palp. Therefore, to explain the loss of Orco-expressing neurons in the mutant (Figure 1F), a more rigorous explanation of the photo is required.

      (3) In Figure 1G, H, the four glomeruli are circled by dotted lines: their corresponding relationship between the two figures needs to be further clarified.

      (4) Line 130: Since the main topic in this study is the olfactory system of larvae, the experimental results of this part are all about antennal electrophysiological responses, mating frequency, and egg production of female and male adults of wild type and Orco KO mutant, it may be considered to include this part in the supplementary files. It is better to include some data about the olfactory responses of larvae.

      (5) Line 166: The sentences in the text are about the choice test between " healthy plant vs. infested plant", while in Fig 3C, it is "infested plant vs. no plant". The content in the text does not match the figure.

      (6) Lines 174-178: Figure 3A showed that the body weight of Orco KO larvae in the absence of parasitic wasps also decreased compared with that of WT. Therefore, in the experiments of Figure 3A and E, the difference in the body weight of Orco KO larvae in the presence or absence of parasitic wasps without ovipositors should also be compared. The current data cannot determine the reduced weight of KO mutant is due to the Orco knockout or the presence of parasitic wasps.

      (7) Lines 179-181: Figure 3F shows that the survival rate of larvae of Orco KO mutant decreased in the presence of parasitic wasps, and the difference in survival rate of larvae of WT and Orco KO mutant in the absence of parasitic wasps should also be compared. The current data cannot determine whether the reduced survival of the KO mutant is due to the Orco knockout or the presence of parasitic wasps.

      (8) In Figure 4B, why do the compounds tested have no volatiles derived from plants? Cruciferous plants have the well-known mustard bomb. In the behavioral experiments, the larvae responses to ITC compounds were not included, which is suggested to be explained in the discussion section.

      (9) The custom-made setup and the relevant behavioral experiments in Figure 4C need to be described in detail (Line 545).

      (10) Materials and Methods Line 448: 10 μL paraffin oil should be used for negative control.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The study introduces an open-source, cost-effective method for automating the quantification of male social behaviors in Drosophila melanogaster. It combines machine-learning-based behavioral classifiers developed using JAABA (Janelia Automatic Animal Behavior Annotator) with inexpensive hardware constructed from off-the-shelf components. This approach addresses the limitations of existing methods, which often require expensive hardware and specialized setups. The authors demonstrate that their new "DANCE" classifiers accurately identify aggression (lunges) and courtship behaviors (wing extension, following, circling, attempted copulation, and copulation), closely matching manually annotated ground-truth data. Furthermore, DANCE classifiers outperform existing rule-based methods in accuracy. Finally, the study shows that DANCE classifiers perform as well when used with low-cost experimental hardware as with standard experimental setups across multiple paradigms, including RNAi knockdown of the neuropeptide Dsk and optogenetic silencing of dopaminergic neurons.

      The authors make creative use of existing resources and technology to develop an inexpensive, flexible, and robust experimental tool for the quantitative analysis of Drosophila behavior. A key strength of this work is the thorough benchmarking of both the behavioral classifiers and the experimental hardware against existing methods. In particular, the direct comparison of their low-cost experimental system with established systems across different experimental paradigms is compelling. While JAABA-based classifiers have been previously used to analyze aggression and courtship (Tao et al., J. Neurosci., 2024; Sten et al., Cell, 2023; Chiu et al., Cell, 2021; Isshi et al., eLife, 2020; Duistermars et al., Neuron, 2018), the demonstration that they work as well without expensive experimental hardware opens the door to more low-cost systems for quantitative behavior analysis.

      Although the study provides a detailed evaluation of DANCE classifier performance, its conclusions would be strengthened by a more comprehensive analysis. The authors assess classifier accuracy using a bout-level comparison rather than a frame-level analysis, as employed in previous studies (Kabra et al., Nat Methods, 2013). They define a true positive as any instance where a DANCE-detected bout overlaps with a manually annotated ground-truth bout by at least one frame. This criterion may inflate true positive rates and underestimate false positives, particularly for longer-duration courtship behaviors. For example, a 15-second DANCE-classified wing extension bout that overlaps with ground truth for only one frame would still be considered a true positive. A frame-level analysis performance would help address this possibility.

      In summary, this work provides a practical and accessible approach to quantifying Drosophila behavior, reducing the economic barriers to the study of the neural and molecular mechanisms underlying social behavior.

    1. Soil particles can be transferred from one location to anotherthrough various means, such as footwear, vehicles, or tools.

      "Soil transfers naturally from a person's clothing and shoes as they move between locations"

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Quach et al. report a detailed investigation into the defense mechanisms of Caenorhabditis elegans in response to predatory threats from Pristionchus pacificus. Based on principles from predatory imminence and prey refuge theories, the authors delineate three defense modes (pre-encounter, post-encounter, and circa-strike) corresponding to increasing levels of threat proximity. These modes are observed in a controlled but naturalistic setup and are quantified by multiple behavioral outputs defined in time and/or space domains allowing nuanced phenotypic assays. The authors demonstrate that C. elegans displays graded defense behavioral responses toward varied lethality of threats and that only life-threatening predators trigger all three defense modes. The study also offers a narrative on the behavioral strategies and underlying molecular regulation, focusing on the roles of SEB-3 receptors and NLP-49 peptides in mediating responses in these defense modes. They found that the interplay between SEB-3 and NLP-49 peptides appears complex, as evidenced by the diverse outcomes when either or both genes are manipulated in various behavioral modes.

      Strengths:

      The paper presents an interesting story, with carefully designed experiments and necessary controls, and novel findings and implications about predator-induced defensive behaviors and underlying molecular regulation in this important model organism. The design of experiments and description of findings are easy to follow and well-motivated. The findings contribute to our understanding of stress response systems and offer broader implications for neuroethological studies across species.

      Weaknesses:

      Although overall the study is well designed and movitated, the paper could benefit from further improvements on some of the methods descriptions and experiment interpretations.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper describes molecular dynamics simulations (MDS) of the dynamics of two T-cell receptors (TCRs) bound to the same major histocompatibility complex molecule loaded with the same peptide (pMHC). The two TCRs (A6 and B7) bind to the pMHC with similar affinity and kinetics, but employ different residue contacts. The main purpose of the study is to quantify via MDS the differences in the inter- and intra-molecular motions of these complexes, with a specific focus on what the authors describe as catch-bond behavior between the TCRs and pMHC, which could explain how T-cells can discriminate between different peptides in the presence of weak separating force.

      Strengths:

      The authors present extensive simulation data that indicates that, in both complexes, the number of high-occupancy inter-domain contacts initially increases with applied load, which is generally consistent with the authors' conclusion that both complexes exhibit catch-bond behavior, although to different extents. In this way, the paper expands our understanding of peptide discrimination by T-cells. The conclusions of the study are generally well supported by data. Further, the paper makes predictions about the relative strength of the catch-bond response of the two TCRs, which could be tested experimentally through protein mutagenesis and force application in Atomic Force Microscopy.

    1. Joint public review

      Summary:

      The authors examine the eigenvalue spectrum of the covariance matrix of neural recordings in the whole-brain larval zebrafish during hunting and spontaneous behavior. They find that the spectrum is approximately power law, and, more importantly, exhibits scale-invariance under random subsampling of neurons. This property is not exhibited by conventional models of covariance spectra, motivating the introduction of the Euclidean random matrix model. The authors show that this tractable model captures the scale invariance they observe. They also examine the effects of subsampling based on anatomical location or functional relationships. Finally, they discuss the benefit of neural codes which can be subsampled without significant loss of information.

      Strengths:

      With large-scale neural recordings becoming increasingly common, neuroscientists are faced with the question: how should we analyze them? To address that question, this paper proposes the Euclidean random matrix model, which embeds neurons randomly in an abstract feature space. This model is analytically tractable and matches two nontrivial features of the covariance matrix: approximate power law scaling, and invariance under subsampling. It thus introduces an important conceptual and technical advance for understanding large-scale simultaneously recorded neural activity.

      Comment:

      Are there quantitative comparisons of the collapse indices for the null models in Figure 2 and the data covariance in 2F? If so, this could be potentially useful to report.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Based on previous publications suggesting a potential role for miR-26b in the pathogenesis of metabolic dysfunction-associated steatohepatitis (MASH), the researchers aim to clarify its function in hepatic health and explore the therapeutical potential of lipid nanoparticles (LNPs) to treat this condition. First, they employed both whole-body and myeloid cell-specific miR-26b KO mice and observed elevated hepatic steatosis features in these mice compared to WT controls when subjected to WTD. Moreover, livers from whole-body miR-26b KO mice also displayed increased levels of inflammation and fibrosis markers. Kinase activity profiling analyses revealed distinct alterations, particularly in kinases associated with inflammatory pathways, in these samples. Treatment with LNPs containing miR-26b mimics restored lipid metabolism and kinase activity in these animals. Finally, similar anti-inflammatory effects were observed in the livers of individuals with cirrhosis, whereas elevated miR-26b levels were found in the plasma of these patients in comparison with healthy control. Overall, the authors conclude that miR-26b plays a protective role in MASH and that its delivery via LNPs efficiently mitigates MASH development.

      The study has some strengths, most notably, its employ of a combination of animal models, analyses of potential underlying mechanisms, as well as innovative treatment delivery methods with significant promise. However, it also presents certain weaknesses that could be improved. The precise role of miR-26b in a human context remains elusive, hindering direct translation to clinical practice.

      Comments on revised version:

      Some of the recommendations provided by this Reviewer in the first version of the manuscript have been successfully addressed in the revision. However, others, particularly those related to human translation, remain unresolved due to the lack of additional samples for analysis. Since the revised title now indicates that the mechanisms described were primarily observed in mice, it seems reasonable to defer addressing this issue to future studies.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper explores how diverse forms of inhibition impact firing rates in models for cortical circuits. In particular, the paper studies how the network operating point affects the balance of direct inhibition from SOM inhibitory neurons to pyramidal cells, and disinhibition from SOM inhibitory input to PV inhibitory neurons. This is an important issue as these two inhibitory pathways have largely been studies in isolation. A combination of analytical calculations and direct numerical simulations provide convincing evidence that the interplay of these inhibitory circuits can separately control network gain and stability.

      Strengths

      The paper has improved in revision, and the intuitive summary statements added to the end of each results section are quite helpful. The addition of numerical simulations to extend the conclusions beyond the linear range of network behavior are also quite helpful.

      Weaknesses

      None

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this article, the authors set out to understand how people's food decisions change when they are hungry vs. sated. To do so, they used an eye-tracking experiment where participants chose between two food options, each presented as a picture of the food plus its "Nutri-Score". In both conditions, participants fasted overnight, but in the sated condition, participants received a protein shake before making their decisions. The authors find that participants in the hungry condition were more likely to choose the tastier option. Using variants of the attentional drift diffusion model, they further find that the best fitting model has different attentional discounts on the taste and health attributes, and that the attentional discount on the health information was larger for the hungry participants.

      Strengths:

      The article has many strengths. It uses a food-choice paradigm that is established in neuroeconomics. The experiment uses real foods, with accurate nutrition information, and incentivized choices. The experimental manipulation is elegant in its simplicity - administering a high-calorie protein shake. It is also commendable that the study was within-participant. The experiment also includes hunger and mood ratings to confirm the effectiveness of the manipulation. The modeling work is impressive in its rigor - the authors test 8 different variants of the DDM, including recent models like the maaDDM, as well as some completely new variants (maaDDM2phi and 2phisp). The model fits decisively favor the maaDDM2phi.

      Weaknesses:

      While I do appreciate the within-participant design, it does raise a small concern about potential demand effects. The authors' results would have been more compelling if they had replicated when only analyzing the first session from each participant. However, the authors did demonstrate that there was no effect of order on the results, which helps to alleviate this concern.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      The authors recorded from multiple mossy cells (MCs) of the dentate gyrus in slices or in vivo using anesthesia. They recorded MC spontaneous activity during spontaneous sharp waves (SWs) detected in area CA3 (in vitro) or in CA1 ( in vivo). They find variability of the depolarization of MCs in response to a SW. They then used deep learning to parse out more information. They conclude that CA3 sends different "information" to different MCs. However, this is not surprising because different CA3 neurons project to different MCs and it was not determined if every SW reflected the same or different subsets of CA3 activity.

      The strengths include recording up to 5 MCs at a time. The major concerns are in the finding that there is variability. This seems logical, not surprising. Also it is not clear how deep learning could lead to the conclusion that CA3 sends different "information" to different MCs. It seems already known from the anatomy because CA3 neurons have diverse axons so they do not converge on only one or a few MCs. Instead they project to different MCs. Even if they would, there are different numbers of boutons and different placement of boutons on the MC dendrites, leading to different effects on MCs. There also is a complex circuitry that is not taken into account in the discussion or in the model used for deep learning. CA3 does not only project to MCs. It also projects to hilar and other dentate gyrus GABAergic neurons which have complex connections to each other, MCs, and CA3. Furthermore, MCs project to MCs, the GABAergic neurons, and CA3. Therefore at any one time that a SW occurs, a very complex circuitry is affected and this could have very different effects on MCs so they would vary in response to the SW. This is further complicated by use of slices where different parts of the circuit are transected from slice to slice.

      It is also not discussed if SWs have a uniform frequency during the recording session. If they cluster, or if MC action potentials occur just before a SW, or other neurons discharge before, it will affect the response of the MC to the SW. If MC membrane potential varies, this will also effect the depolarization in response to the SW.

      In vivo, the SWs may be quite different than in vivo but this is not discussed. The circuitry is quite different from in vitro. The effects of urethane could have many confounding influences.

      Furthermore, how much the in vitro and in vivo SWs tell us about SWs in awake behaving mice is unclear.

      Also, methods and figures are hard to understand.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript described a structure-guided approach to graft important antigenic loops of the neuraminidase to a homotypic but heterologous NA. This approach allows the generation of well-expressed and thermostable recombinant proteins with antigenic epitopes of choice to some extent. The loop-grafted NA was designated hybrid.

      Strengths:

      The hybrid NA appeared to be more structurally stable than the loop-donor protein while acquiring its antigenicity. This approach is of value when developing a subunit NA vaccine which is difficult to express. So that antigenic loops could be potentially grafted to a stable NA scaffold to transfer strain-specific antigenicity.

      Weaknesses:

      However, major revisions to better organize the text, and figure and make clarifications on a number of points, are needed. There are a few cases in which a later figure was described first, data in the figures were not sufficiently described, or where there were mismatched references to figures.

      More importantly, the hybrid proteins did not show any of the advantages over the loop-donor protein in the format of VLP vaccine in mouse studies, so it's not clear why such an approach is needed to begin with if the original protein is doing fine.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Wu et al. introduce a novel approach to reactivate the Muller glia cell cycle in the mouse retina by simultaneously reducing p27Kip1 and increasing cyclin D1 using a single AAV vector. The approach effectively promotes Muller glia proliferation and reprogramming without disrupting retinal structure or function. Interestingly, reactivation of the Muller glia cell cycle downregulates IFN pathway, which may contribute to the induced retinal regeneration. The results presented in this manuscript may offer a promising approach for developing Müller glia cell-mediated regenerative therapies for retinal diseases.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have revised the manuscript and addressed my concerns.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Mehmet Mahsum Kaplan et al. demonstrate that Meis2 expression in neural crest-derived mesenchymal cells is crucial for whisker follicle (WF) development, as WF fails to develop in wnt1-Cre;Meis2 cKO mice. Advanced imaging techniques effectively support the idea that Meis2 is essential for proper WF development and that nerves, while affected in Meis2 cKO, are dispensable for WF development and not the primary cause of WF developmental failure. The study also reveals that although Meis2 significantly downregulates Foxd1 in the mesenchyme, this is not the main reason for WF development failure. The paper presents valuable data on the role of mesenchymal Meis2 in WF development. However, it is still not known what is the molecular mechanisms that link Meis2 to impact the epithelial compartment.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors describe a novel molecular mechanism involving Mesenchymal Meis2 expression, which plays a crucial role in early WF development.<br /> (2) They employ multiple advanced imaging techniques to illustrate their findings beautifully.<br /> (3) The study clearly shows that nerves are not essential for WF development.

      Weaknesses:

      The paper lacks clarity on how Meis2 loss, along with the observed general reduction in proliferation and changes in extracellular matrix and cell adhesion, leads specifically to the loss of whisker follicles. Future studies addressing this gap, perhaps with methods enabling higher cell recovery or epithelial cell inclusion in the sequenced cells, could provide valuable insights into the specific roles of Meis2 in this context.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      In this work, the authors present a novel, multi-layer computational model of motor control to produce realistic walking behaviour of a Drosophila model in the presence of external perturbations and under sensory and motor delays. The novelty of their model of motor control is that it is modular, with divisions inspired by the fly nervous system, with one component based on deep learning while the rest are based on control theory. They show that their model can produce realistic walking trajectories. Given the mostly reasonable assumptions of their model, they convincingly show that the sensory and motor delays present in the fly nervous system are the maximum allowable for robustness to unexpected perturbations.

      Their fly model outputs torque at each joint in the leg, and their dynamics model translates these into movements, resulting in time-series trajectories of joint angles. Inspired by the anatomy of the fly nervous system, their fly model is a modular architecture that separates motor control at three levels of abstraction:<br /> (1) oscillator-based model of coupling of phase angles between legs,<br /> (2) generation of future joint-angle trajectories based on the current state and inputs for each leg (the trajectory generator), and<br /> (3) closed-loop control of the joint-angles using torques applied at every joint in the model (control and dynamics).

      These three levels of abstraction ensure coordination between the legs, future predictions of desired joint angles, and corrections to deviations from desired joint-angle trajectories. The parameters of the model are tuned in the absence of external perturbations using experimental data of joint angles of a tethered fly. A notable disconnect from reality is that the dynamics model used does not model the movement of the body and ground contacts as is the case in natural walking, nor the movement of a ball for a tethered fly, but instead something like legs moving in the air for a tethered fly.

      In order to validate the realism of the generated simulated walking trajectories, the authors compare various attributes of simulated to real tethered fly trajectories and show qualitative and quantitative similarities, including using a novel metric coined as Kinematic Similarity (KS). The KS score of a trajectory is a measure of the likelihood that the trajectory belongs to the distribution of real trajectories estimated from the experimental data. While such a metric is a useful tool to validate the quality of simulated data, there is some room for improvement in the actual computation of this score. For instance, the KS score is computed for any given time-window of walking simulation using a fraction of information from the joint-angle trajectories. It is unclear if the remaining information in joint-angle trajectories that are not used in the computation of the KS score can be ignored in the context of validating the realism of simulated walking trajectories.

      The authors validate simulated walking trajectories generated by the trained model under a range of sensorimotor delays and external perturbations. The trained model is shown to generate realistic joint-angle trajectories in the presence of external perturbations as long as the sensorimotor delays are constrained within a certain range. This range of sensorimotor delays is shown to be comparable to experimental measurements of sensorimotor delays, leading to the conclusion that the fly nervous system is just fast enough to be robust to perturbations.

      Strengths:

      This work presents a novel framework to simulate Drosophila walking in the presence of external perturbations and sensorimotor delay. Although the model makes some simplifying assumptions, it has sufficient complexity to generate new, testable hypotheses regarding motor control in Drosophila. The authors provide evidence for realistic simulated walking trajectories by comparing simulated trajectories generated by their trained model with experimental data using a novel metric proposed by the authors. The model proposes a crucial role in future predictions to ensure robust walking trajectories against external perturbations and motor delay. Realistic simulations under a range of prediction intervals, perturbations, and motor delays generating realistic walking trajectories support this claim. The modular architecture of the framework provides opportunities to make testable predictions regarding motor control in Drosophila. The work can be of interest to the Drosophila community interested in digitally simulating realistic models of Drosophila locomotion behaviors, as well as to experimentalists in generating testable hypotheses for novel discoveries regarding neural control of locomotion in Drosophila. Moreover, the work can be of broad interest to neuroethologists, serving as a benchmark in modelling animal locomotion in general.

      Weaknesses:

      As the authors acknowledge in their work, the control and dynamics model makes some simplifying assumptions about Drosophila physics/physiology in the context of walking. For instance, the model does not incorporate ground contact forces and inertial effects of the fly's body. It is not clear how these simplifying assumptions would affect some of the quantitative results derived by the authors. The range of tolerable values of sensorimotor delays that generate realistic walking trajectories is shown to be comparable with sensorimotor delays inferred from physiological measurements. It is unclear if this comparison is meaningful in the context of the model's simplifying assumptions. The authors propose a novel metric coined as Kinematic Similarity (KS) to distinguish realistic walking trajectories from unrealistic walking trajectories. Defining such an objective metric to evaluate the model's predictions is a useful exercise, and could potentially be applied to benchmark other computational animal models that are proposed in the future. However, the KS score proposed in this work is calculated using only the first two PCA modes that cumulatively account for less than 50% of the variance in the joint angles. It is not obvious that the information in the remaining PCA modes may not change the log-likelihood that occurs in the real walking data.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed the concerns and questions raised in the original review.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The authors introduces DIPx, a deep learning framework for predicting synergistic drug combinations for cancer treatment using the AstraZeneca-Sanger (AZS) DREAM Challenge dataset. While the approach is innovative, I have following concerns and comments, and hopefully will improve the study's rigor and applicability, making it a more powerful tool in real clinical world.

      (1) In the abstract: "We trained and validated DIPx in the AstraZeneca-Sanger (AZS) DREAM Challenge dataset using two separate test sets: Test Set 1 comprised the combinations already present in the training set, while Test Set 2 contained combinations absent from the training set, thus indicating the model's ability to handle novel combinations". Test Set 1 comprises combinations already present in the training set, likely leading overfitting issue. The model might show inflated performance metrics on this test set due to prior exposure to these combinations, not accurately reflecting its true predictive power on unknown data, which is crucial for discovering new drug synergies. The testing approach reduces the generalizability of the model's findings to new, untested scenarios.

      (2) The model struggles with predicting synergies for drug combinations not included in its training data (showing only Spearman correlation 0.26 in Test Set 2). This limits its potential for discovering new therapeutic strategies. Utilizing techniques such as transfer learning or expanding the training dataset to encompass a wider range of drug pairs could help to address this issue.

      (3) The use of pan-cancer datasets, while offering broad applicability, may not be optimal for specific cancer subtypes with distinct biological mechanisms. Developing subtype-specific models or adjusting the current model to account for these differences could improve prediction accuracy for individual cancer types.

      (4) Line 127, "Since DIPx uses only molecular data, to make a fair comparison, we trained TAJI using only molecular features and referred to it as TAJI-M.". TAJI was designed to use both monotherapy drug-response and molecular data, and likely won't be able to reach maximum potential if removing monotherapy drug-response from the training model. It would be critical to use the same training datasets and then compare the performances. From the Figure 6 of TAJI's paper (Li et al., 2018, PMID: 30054332) , i.e., the mean Pearson correlation for breast cancer and lung cancer are around 0.5 - 0.6.

      The following 2 concerns had been include in the Discussion section which are great:

      (1) Training and validating the model using cell lines may not fully capture the heterogeneity and complexity of in vivo tumors. To increase clinical relevance, it would be beneficial to validate the model using primary tumor samples or patient-derived xenografts.

      (2) The Pathway Activation Score (PAS) is derived exclusively from primary target genes, potentially overlooking critical interactions involving non-primary targets. Including these secondary effects could enhance the model's predictive accuracy and comprehensiveness.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors replied to my concerns but they did not address my comments/concerns. Especially for my concern #1: They trained and validated DIPx in the AstraZeneca-Sanger (AZS) DREAM Challenge dataset using two separate test sets: Test Set 1 comprised the combinations already present in the training set. Therefore, test Set 1 comprises combinations already present in the training set, likely leading overfitting issue but they claimed "There is no danger overfitting here" in their "Author Response" letter.

      All my other concerns are unchanged too.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Jocher, Janssen, et al examine the robustness of comparative functional genomics studies in primates that make use of induced pluripotent stem cell-derived cells. Comparative studies in primates, especially amongst the great apes, are generally hindered by the very limited availability of samples, and iPSCs, which can be maintained in the laboratory indefinitely and defined into other cell types, have emerged as promising model systems because they allow the generation of data from tissues and cells that would otherwise be unobservable.

      Undirected differentiation of iPSCs into many cell types at once, using a method known as embryoid body differentiation, requires researchers to manually assign all cell types in the dataset so they can be correctly analysed. Typically, this is done using marker genes associated with a specific cell type. These are defined a priori, and have historically tended to be characterised in mice and humans and then employed to annotate other species. Jocher, Janssen, et al ask if the marker genes and features used to define a given cell type in one species are suitable for use in a second species, and then quantify the degree of usefulness of these markers. They find that genes that are informative and cell type specific in a given species are less valuable for cell type identification in other species, and that this value, or transferability, drops off as the evolutionary distance between species increases.

      This paper will help guide future comparative studies of gene expression in primates (and more broadly) as well as add to the growing literature on the broader challenges of selecting powerful and reliable marker genes for use in single-cell transcriptomics.

      Strengths:

      Marker gene selection and cell type annotation is a challenging problem in scRNA studies, and successful classification of cells often requires manual expert input. This can be hard to reproduce across studies, as, despite general agreement on the identity of many cell types, different methods for identifying marker genes will return different sets of genes. The rise of comparative functional genomics complicates this even further, as a robust marker gene in one species need not always be as useful in a different taxon. The finding that so many marker genes have poor transferability is striking, and by interrogating the assumption of transferability in a thorough and systematic fashion, this paper reminds us of the importance of systematically validating analytical choices. The focus on identifying how transferability varies across different types of marker genes (especially when comparing TFs to lncRNAs), and on exploring different methods to identify marker genes, also suggests additional criteria by which future researchers could select robust marker genes in their own data.

      The paper is built on a substantial amount of clearly reported and thoroughly considered data, including EBs and cells from four different primate species - humans, orangutans, and two macaque species. The authors go to great lengths to ensure the EBs are as comparable as possible across species, and take similar care with their computational analyses, always erring on the side of drawing conservative conclusions that are robustly supported by their data over more tenuously supported ones that could be impacted by data processing artefacts such as differences in mappability, etc. For example, I like the approach of using liftoff to robustly identify genes in non-human species that can be mapped to and compared across species confidently, rather than relying on the likely incomplete annotation of the non-human primate genomes. The authors also provide an interactive data visualisation website that allows users to explore the dataset in depth, examine expression patterns of their own favourite marker genes and perform the same kinds of analyses on their own data if desired, facilitating consistency between comparative primate studies.

      Weaknesses and recommendations:

      (1) Embryoid body generation is known to be highly variable from one replicate to the next for both technical and biological reasons, and the authors do their best to account for this, both by their testing of different ways of generating EBs, and by including multiple technical replicates/clones per species. However, there is still some variability that could be worth exploring in more depth. For example, the orangutan seems to have differentiated preferentially towards cardiac mesoderm whereas the other species seemed to prefer ectoderm fates, as shown in Figure 2C. Likewise, Supplementary Figure 2C suggests a significant unbalance in the contributions across replicates within a species, which is not surprising given the nature of EBs, while Supplementary Figure 6 suggests that despite including three different clones from a single rhesus macaque, most of the data came from a single clone. The manuscript would be strengthened by a more thorough exploration of the intra-species patterns of variability, especially for the taxa with multiple biological replicates, and how they impact the number of cell types detected across taxa, etc.

      The same holds for the temporal aspect of the data, which is not really discussed in depth despite being a strength of the design. Instead, days 8 and 16 are analysed jointly, without much attention being paid to the possible differences between them. Are EBs at day 16 more variable between species than at day 8? Is day 8 too soon to do these kinds of analyses? Are markers for earlier developmental progenitors better/more transferable than those for more derived cell types?

      (2) Closely tied to the point above, by necessity the authors collapse their data into seven fairly coarse cell types and then examine the performance of canonical marker genes (as well as those discovered de novo) across the species. However some of the clusters they use are somewhat broad, and so it is worth asking whether the lack of specificity exhibited by some marker genes and driving their conclusions is driven by inter-species heterogeneity within a given cluster.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is an important and very well-presented set of experiments following up on prior work from the lab investigating knock-down (KD) of EMC10 in restoration of neuronal and cognitive deficits in 22q11.2 Del models, including now both human iPSCs and a mouse model in vivo now with ASOs.

      The valuable progress in this current manuscript is the development of ASOs, and the proof of efficacy in vivo in mouse of the ASO in knock-down of EMC10 and amelioration of in vivo behavioral phenotypes.

      The experiments include: iPSC studies demonstrating elevations of EMC10 in a solid collection of paired iPSC lines. These studies also provide evidence of manipulation of EMC10 by overexpression and inhibition of miRNAs that exist in the 22q11 interval. The iPSC studies also nicely demonstrate rescue of impairments with KD of EMC10 in neuronal arborization as well as KCl induced neuronal activity. The major in vivo contributions reflect impressive demonstration of efficacy of two ASOs in vivo on both KD of EMC10 in vivo and through improvement in behavioral abnormalities in the 22q11 mouse in a range of different behaviors, including social behavior and learning behaviors.

      Overall, there are many strengths reflected in this study, including in particular the synergy between in vitro studies in human cell models and in vivo studies in the well characterized mouse model. The experiments are generally rigorously performed and well powered, and nicely presented. The claims with regard to the mechanisms of EMC10 elevations and the importance of restoration of EMC10 expression to neuronal morphology and behavior are well supported by the data. The work may be further supported in future studies, by investigation of rescue by ASOs of circuit dysfunction in vivo or ex vivo through electrophysiology in the mouse model. Also, in future studies, investigation of the mechanism by which EMC10, an ER protein involved in protein processing, may function in the observed neuronal abnormalities; however, these studies are clearly for future investigations.

      The potential impact of the work is found in the potential value of the ASO approach to the treatment of 22q11, or the pre-clinical evidence that knock-down of this protein may lead to some amelioration of cognitive symptoms. Overall, a very convincing and complementary set of experiments to support EMC10 KD as a therapeutic strategy.

      Review of revision: The authors have addressed the questions from the prior review.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript by Yu et al. demonstrates that activation of caspase-3 is essential for synapse elimination by microglia, but not by astrocytes. This study also reveals that caspase-3 activation-mediated synapse elimination is required for retinogeniculate circuit refinement and eye-specific territories segregation in dLGN in an activity-dependent manner. Inhibition of synaptic activity increases caspase-3 activation and microglial phagocytosis, while caspase-3 deficiency blocks microglia-mediated synapse elimination and circuit refinement in the dLGN. The authors further demonstrate that caspase-3 activation mediates synapse loss in AD, loss of caspase-3 prevented synapse loss in AD mice. Overall, this study reveals that caspase-3 activation is an important mechanism underlying the selectivity of microglia-mediated synapse elimination during brain development and in neurodegenerative diseases.

      A previous study (Gyorffy B. et al., PNSA 2018) has shown that caspase-3 signal correlates with C1q tagging of synapses (mostly using in vitro approaches), which suggests that caspase-3 would be an underlying mechanism of microglial selection of synapses for removal. The current study provides convincing in vivo evidence demonstrating that caspase-3 activation is essential for microglial elimination of synapses during both brain development and neurodegeneration.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The authors investigated the similarity (or lack thereof) of neural dynamics while monkeys reached to and manipulated one of 4 objects in each trial, compared to observing similar movements performed by experimenters. They focused on mirror neurons (MNs) and rather convincingly showed that MNs dynamics are dissimilar during executing vs. observing actions. The manuscript has improved quite significantly compared to the previous version and I congratulate the authors for that. However, there are still a few points I would like to raise that I think will improve the manuscript scientifically and make it more pleasant to read.

      - I appreciate the nicely compiled literature review which provides the context for the manuscript.<br /> - Message: The takeaway message of the paper is inconsistent and changes throughout the paper. To me, the main takeaway is that observation and execution subspaces progress during the trial (Fig 4), and that they are distinct processes and rather dissimilar, as stated in #440-441, #634-635, etc. But the title of the paper implies the opposite. Some of the interpretations of the results (e.g., Fig 8) also imply similarity of dynamics.<br /> - Readability: I have many issues with the readability/organisation of the paper. Unfortunately, I still find the quality of data presentation low. Below I list a few points:<br /> (1) In 5 sessions out of 9, there are fewer than 20 neurons categorised as AE. This means this population is under-sampled in the data which makes applying any neural population techniques questionable. Moreover, the relevance of the AE analysis is also sometimes unclear: In Fig 4, the AE-related panels are just referred to once in the paper. Yet AE results are presented right next to the main results throughout the paper.<br /> (2) Figures are low resolution and pixelated. There are some faded horizontal and vertical lines in Fig1B that are barely visible. Moreover, it may be my personal preference, but I think Fig1 is more confusing than helpful. Although panel A shows some planes rotating, indicating time-varying dynamics, I couldn't understand what more panel B is trying to convey. The arrow of time is counterclockwise, but the planes progress clockwise (i > ii > iii). Similarly, panel C just seems to show some points being projected to orthogonal subspaces (even though later in the paper we'll see that observation and execution subspaces are not orthogonal), and the CCA subspace illustrated in the same high-d space, which mathematically may be inaccurate, as CCA projects the data to a new space.<br /> In Fig 2A, the objects are too small and pixelated as well. I suggest an overhaul of the figures to make the paper more accessible.<br /> (3) Clarity of the text: The manuscript text could be more concise, to the point, avoiding repetitions, self-consistent, and simply readable. To name a few issues: Single letter acronyms were used to refer to trial epochs (I/G/M/H). M alone has been re-defined 13 different times in the text as in: ...Movement (M)..., excluding every related figure. The acronym (I) refers to the instruction epoch, the high-d space in Fig 1, and panel I of some figures. The acronym MN for Mirror Neurons was defined 4 separate times in the text yet spelled out as Mirror Neuron more than 2 dozen times. CD is defined in the caption of Fig 3 and never used, despite condition-dependent being a common term in the text. Many sentences, e.g., "In contrast, throughout..." in #265-#269, and "To summarize,..." in #270-#275, are too long with difficult wording. To get the point from these sentences, I had to read them many times, and go back and forth between them and the figure. Rewriting such sentences makes the manuscript much more accessible.<br /> - Figure 3: It appears that the condition independent signal has been calculated by subtracting the average of the 4 neural trajectories in Fig 3A, corresponding to different objects. Whereas #133 suggests that it should be calculated by subtracting the average firing rate of different conditions. Assuming I got the methods right, dynamics being "knotted" (#234) after removing the condition independent signal could be because they are similar, so subtracting the condition independent signal leaves us with the noise component. This matters for the manuscript especially since this is the reason for performing the more sensitive instantaneous subspaces.<br /> - Decoding results: I appreciate that the authors improved the decoding results in this version of the manuscript. Now it is much more interesting. However oddly, it appears that only data from 1 monkey is shown. #370 says the results from the other 2 are similar. The decoding data from every monkey must be shown. If the results are similar, they must be at least in Supplements. Currently, only 1 session (out of 3) in the Observation condition seems to decode the object type. This effect, if consistent across animals and session, is very interesting on its own and challenges other claims in the paper.<br /> - Figure8: I reiterate the issue #7 in my previous review. I appreciate the authors clearing some methods, but my concern persists. As per line #839, spiking activity has been smoothed with a 50ms kernel. Thus, unless trial data is concatenated, I suspect the 100ms window used for this analysis is too short (small sample size), thus the correlation values (CCs) might be spurious. References cited in this section use a smaller smoothing kernel (30ms) and a much longer window (~450ms).<br /> Moreover, I don't know why the authors chose to show correlation values in 3D space! Values of Fig8C-red are impossible to know. Furthermore, the manuscript insists on CC values of the Hold period being high, which is probably correct. But I wonder why the focus on the Hold period? I think the most relevant epoch for analysing the MNs is the Movement where the actual action happens. Interestingly, in the movement epoch, the CC values are visibly low. The reason why Hold results are more important and why the CCs in Movement are so low should be clarified in the text. Especially, statements like that in #661 seem particularly unjustified.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      From a forward genetic mosaic mutant screen using EMS, the authors identify mutations in glucosylceramide synthase (GlcT), a rate-limiting enzyme for glycosphingolipid (GSL) production, that result in EE tumors. Multiple genetic experiments strongly support the model that the mutant phenotype caused by GlcT loss is due to by failure of conversion of ceramide into glucosylceramide. Further genetic evidence suggests that Notch signaling is comprised in the ISC lineage and may affect the endocytosis of Delta. Loss of GlcT does not affect wing development or oogenesis, suggesting tissue-specific roles for GlcT. Finally, an increase in goblet cells in UGCG knockout mice, not previously reported, suggests a conserved role for GlcT in Notch signaling in intestinal cell lineage specification.

      Strengths:

      Overall, this is a well-written paper with multiple well-designed and executed genetic experiments that support a role for GlcT in Notch signaling in the fly and mammalian intestine. I do, however, have a few comments below.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors bring up the intriguing idea that GlcT could be a way to link diet to cell fate choice. Unfortunately, there are no experiments to test this hypothesis.

      (2) Why do the authors think that UCCG knockout results in goblet cell excess and not in the other secretory cell types?

      (3) The authors should cite other EMS mutagenesis screens done in the fly intestine.

      (4) The absence of a phenotype using NRE-Gal4 is not convincing. This is because the delay in its expression could be after the requirement for the affected gene in the process being studied. In other words, sufficient knockdown of GlcT by RNA would not be achieved until after the relevant signaling between the EB and the ISC occurred. Dl-Gal4 is problematic as an ISC driver because Dl is expressed in the EEP.

      (5) The difference in Rab5 between control and GlcT-IR was not that significant. Furthermore, any changes could be secondary to increases in proliferation.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors propose a transformer-based model for the prediction of condition - or tissue-specific alternative splicing and demonstrate its utility in the design of RNAs with desired splicing outcomes, which is a novel application. The model is compared to relevant existing approaches (Pangolin and SpliceAI) and the authors clearly demonstrate its advantage. Overall, a compelling method that is well thought out and evaluated.

      Strengths:

      (1) The model is well thought out: rather than modeling a cassette exon using a single generic deep learning model as has been done e.g. in SpliceAI and related work, the authors propose a modular architecture that focuses on different regions around a potential exon skipping event, which enables the model to learn representations that are specific to those regions. Because each component in the model focuses on a fixed length short sequence segment, the model can learn position-specific features. Another difference compared to Pangolin and SpliceAI which are focused on modeling individual splice junctions is the focus on modeling a complete alternative splicing event.

      (2) The model is evaluated in a rigorous way - it is compared to the most relevant state-of-the-art models, uses machine learning best practices, and an ablation study demonstrates the contribution of each component of the architecture.

      (3) Experimental work supports the computational predictions.

      (4) The authors use their model for sequence design to optimize splicing outcomes, which is a novel application.

      Weaknesses:

      No weaknesses were identified by this reviewer, but I have the following comments:

      (1) I would be curious to see evidence that the model is learning position-specific representations.

      (2) The transformer encoders in TrASPr model sequences with a rather limited sequence size of 200 bp; therefore, for long introns, the model will not have good coverage of the intronic sequence. This is not expected to be an issue for exons.

      (3) In the context of sequence design, creating a desired tissue- or condition-specific effect would likely require disrupting or creating motifs for splicing regulatory proteins. In your experiments for neuronal-specific Daam1 exon 16, have you seen evidence for that? Most of the edits are close to splice junctions, but a few are further away.

      (4) For sequence design, of tissue- or condition-specific effect in neuronal-specific Daam1 exon 16 the upstream exonic splice junction had the most sequence edits. Is that a general observation? How about the relative importance of the four transformer regions in TrASPr prediction performance?

      (5) The idea of lightweight transformer models is compelling, and is widely applicable. It has been used elsewhere. One paper that came to mind in the protein realm:<br /> Singh, Rohit, et al. "Learning the language of antibody hypervariability." Proceedings of the National Academy of Sciences 122.1 (2025): e2418918121.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary

      Fleming et al. present the first, proteomics-based attempt to identify the possible mechanism of action of ALS-linked DNAJC7 molecular chaperone in pathology. Impressively, it is the first report of DNAJC7 interactome studies, using a suitable iPSC-derived lower motor neuron model. Using a co-immunoprecipitation approach the authors identified that the interactome of DNAJC7 is predominantly composed of proteins engaged in response to stress, but also that this interactome is enriched in RNA-binding proteins. The authors also created a DNAJC7 haploinsufficiency cellular model and show the resulting increased insolubility of HNRNPU protein which causes disruptions in its functionality as shown by analysis of its transcriptional targets. Finally, this study uses pharmacological agents to test the effect of decreased DNAJC7 expression on cell response to proteotoxic stress and finds evidence that DNAJC7 regulates the activation of Heat shock factor 1 (HSF1) protein upon stress conditions.

      Strengths

      (1)This study uses the best so far model to study the interactome and possible mechanism of action of DNAJC7 molecular chaperone in an iPSC-derived cellular model of motor neurons. Furthermore, the authors also looked into available transcriptome databases of ALS patient samples to further test whether their findings may yield relevance to pathology.

      (2) The extent to which the authors are explicit about the sample sizes, protocols, and statistical tests used throughout this manuscript, should be applauded. This will help the whole field in their efforts to reliably replicate the results in this study.

      Weaknesses

      (1) The most significant caveat of interactome experiments inherently comes from the method of choice. It is possible that by using the co-purification approach of DNAJC7 IP the resulting pool of binding partners is depleted in proteins that interact with DNAJC7 weakly or transiently. An alternative approach presumably more sensitive towards weaker binders could use the TurboID-based proximity-labeling method.

      (2) The authors mention in Results (and Figure 2D) that HNRNPA1 was identified as DNAJC7-interacting protein in their co-IP experiments, however, an identifier for this protein cannot be found in Figure 1C and Table S1 listing the proteomics results. Could the authors appropriately update Figure 1C and Table S1, or if HNRNPA1 wasn't really a hit then remove it from listed HNRNPs?

      (3) No further validation of DNAJC7-interacting proteins from the heat-shock protein (HSP) family. Current validation of mass spectrometry-identified proteins comes from IP-western blots with antibodies against HSPs. It would be interesting to further inspect possible interactions of these proteins by inspecting co-localization with immunocytochemistry.

      (4) Similarly, the observation of DNAJC7 haploinsufficiency causing an increase in HNRNPU insolubility could be also easily further confirmed by checking for the emergence of "puncta" under a fluorescence microscope, in addition to provided WB experiments from MN lysates.

      (5) I would like to recommend the authors to also provide with this manuscript a complete dataset (possibly in the form of a table, presented similarly as Table S1) resulting from experiments presented in Figures 2F and S2D. The information on upregulated and downregulated targets in their DNAJC7 haploinsufficiency model would be a valuable resource for the field and enable further investigations.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study shows that Zizyphi spinosi semen (ZSS), particularly its non-extracted simple crush powder, has significant therapeutic effects on neurodegenerative diseases. It removes Aβ, tau, and α-synuclein oligomers, restores synaptophysin levels, enhances BDNF expression and neurogenesis, and improves cognitive and motor functions in mouse AD, FTD, DLB, and PD models. Additionally, ZSS powder reduces DNA oxidation and cellular senescence in normal-aged mice, increases synaptophysin, BDNF, and neurogenesis, and enhances cognition to levels comparable to young mice.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) While the study demonstrates that ZSS has protective effects across a wide range of animal models, including AD, FTD, DLB, PD, and both young and aged mice, it is broad and lacks a detailed investigation into the underlying mechanisms. This is the most significant concern.

      (2) The authors highlight that the non-extracted simple crush powder of ZSS shows more substantial effects than its hot water extract and extraction residue. However, the manuscript provides very limited data comparing the effects of these three extracts.

      (3) The authors have not provided a rationale for the dosing concentrations used, nor have they tested the effects of the treatment in normal mice to verify its impact under physiological conditions.

      (4) Regarding the assessment of cognitive function in mice, the authors only utilized the Morris Water Maze (MWM) test, which includes a five-day spatial learning training phase followed by a probe trial. The authors focused solely on the learning phase. However, it is relevant to note that data from the learning phase primarily reflects the learning ability of the mice, while the probe trial is more indicative of memory. Therefore, it is essential that probe trial data be included for a more comprehensive analysis. A justification should be included to explain why the latency of 1st is about 50s not 60s.

      (5) The BDNF immunohistochemical staining in the manuscript appears to be non-specific.

      (6) The central pathological regions in PD are the substantia nigra and striatum. Please replace the staining results from the cortex and hippocampus with those from these regions in the PD model.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study aims to provide imaging methods for users of the field of human layer-fMRI. This is an emerging field with 240 papers published so far. Different than implied in the manuscript, 3T is well represented among those papers. E.g. see the papers below that are not cited in the manuscript. Thus, the claim on the impact of developing 3T methodology for wider dissemination is not justified. Specifically, because some of the previous papers perform whole brain layer-fMRI (also at 3T) in more efficient, and more established procedures.

      The authors implemented a sequence with lots of nice features. Including their own SMS EPI, diffusion bipolar pulses, eye-saturation bands, and they built their own reconstruction around it. This is not trivial. Only a few labs around the world have this level of engineering expertise. I applaud this technical achievement. However, I doubt that any of this is the right tool for layer-fMRI, nor does it represent an advancement for the field. In the thermal noise dominated regime of sub-millimeter fMRI (especially at 3T) it is established to use 3D readouts over 2D (SMS) readouts. While it is not trivial to implement SMS, the vendor implementations (as well as the CMRR and MGH implementations) are most widely applied across the majority of current fMRI studies already. The author's work on this does not serve any previous shortcomings in the field.

      The mechanism to use bi-polar gradients to increase the localization specificity is doubtful to me. In my understanding, killing the intra-vascular BOLD should make it less specific. Also, the empirical data do not suggest a higher localization specificity to me.

      Embedding this work in the literature of previous methods is incomplete. Recent trends of vessel signal manipulation with ABC or VAPER are not mentioned. Comparisons with VASO are outdated and incorrect.

      The reproducibility of the methods and the result is doubtful (see below).

      I don't think that this manuscript is in the top 50% of the 240 layer-fmri papers out there.

      3T layer-fMRI papers that are not cited:

      Taso, M., Munsch, F., Zhao, L., Alsop, D.C., 2021. Regional and depth-dependence of cortical blood-flow assessed with high-resolution Arterial Spin Labeling (ASL). Journal of Cerebral Blood Flow and Metabolism. https://doi.org/10.1177/0271678X20982382

      Wu, P.Y., Chu, Y.H., Lin, J.F.L., Kuo, W.J., Lin, F.H., 2018. Feature-dependent intrinsic functional connectivity across cortical depths in the human auditory cortex. Scientific Reports 8, 1-14. https://doi.org/10.1038/s41598-018-31292-x

      Lifshits, S., Tomer, O., Shamir, I., Barazany, D., Tsarfaty, G., Rosset, S., Assaf, Y., 2018. Resolution considerations in imaging of the cortical layers. NeuroImage 164, 112-120. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.neuroimage.2017.02.086

      Puckett, A.M., Aquino, K.M., Robinson, P.A., Breakspear, M., Schira, M.M., 2016. The spatiotemporal hemodynamic response function for depth-dependent functional imaging of human cortex. NeuroImage 139, 240-248. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.neuroimage.2016.06.019

      Olman, C.A., Inati, S., Heeger, D.J., 2007. The effect of large veins on spatial localization with GE BOLD at 3 T: Displacement, not blurring. NeuroImage 34, 1126-1135. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.neuroimage.2006.08.045

      Ress, D., Glover, G.H., Liu, J., Wandell, B., 2007. Laminar profiles of functional activity in the human brain. NeuroImage 34, 74-84. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.neuroimage.2006.08.020

      Huber, L., Kronbichler, L., Stirnberg, R., Ehses, P., Stocker, T., Fernández-Cabello, S., Poser, B.A., Kronbichler, M., 2023. Evaluating the capabilities and challenges of layer-fMRI VASO at 3T. Aperture Neuro 3. https://doi.org/10.52294/001c.85117

      Scheeringa, R., Bonnefond, M., van Mourik, T., Jensen, O., Norris, D.G., Koopmans, P.J., 2022. Relating neural oscillations to laminar fMRI connectivity in visual cortex. Cerebral Cortex. https://doi.org/10.1093/cercor/bhac154

      Strengths:

      See above. The authors developed their own SMS sequence with many features. This is important to the field. And does not leave sequence development work to view isolated monopoly labs. This work democratises SMS.<br /> The questions addressed here are of high relevance to the field: getting tools with good sensitivity, user-friendly applicability, and locally specific brain activity mapping is an important topic in the field of layer-fMRI.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) I feel the authors need to justify why flow-crushing helps localization specificity. There is an entire family of recent papers that aims to achieve higher localization specificity by doing the exact opposite. Namely, MT or ABC fRMRI aims to increase the localization specificity by highlighting the intravascular BOLD by means of suppressing non-flowing tissue. To name a few:

      Priovoulos, N., de Oliveira, I.A.F., Poser, B.A., Norris, D.G., van der Zwaag, W., 2023. Combining arterial blood contrast with BOLD increases fMRI intracortical contrast. Human Brain Mapping hbm.26227. https://doi.org/10.1002/hbm.26227.

      Pfaffenrot, V., Koopmans, P.J., 2022. Magnetization Transfer weighted laminar fMRI with multi-echo FLASH. NeuroImage 119725. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.neuroimage.2022.119725

      Schulz, J., Fazal, Z., Metere, R., Marques, J.P., Norris, D.G., 2020. Arterial blood contrast ( ABC ) enabled by magnetization transfer ( MT ): a novel MRI technique for enhancing the measurement of brain activation changes. bioRxiv. https://doi.org/10.1101/2020.05.20.106666

      Based on this literature, it seems that the proposed method will make the vein problem worse, not better. The authors could make it clearer how they reason that making GE-BOLD signals more extra-vascular weighted should help to reduce large vein effects.

      The empirical evidence for the claim that flow crushing helps with the localization specificity should be made clearer. The response magnitude with and without flow crushing looks pretty much identical to me (see Fig, 6d).<br /> It's unclear to me what to look for in Fig. 5. I cannot discern any layer patterns in these maps. It's too noisy. The two maps of TE=43ms look like identical copies from each other. Maybe an editorial error?

      The authors discuss bipolar crushing with respect to SE-BOLD where it has been previously applied. For SE-BOLD at UHF, a substantial portion of the vein signal comes from the intravascular compartment. So I agree that for SE-BOLD, it makes sense to crush the intravascular signal. For GE-BOLD however, this reasoning does not hold. For GE-BOLD (even at 3T), most of the vein signal comes from extravascular dephasing around large unspecific veins and the bipolar crushing is not expected to help with this.

      (2) The bipolar crushing is limited to one single direction of flow. This introduces a lot of artificial variance across the cortical folding pattern. This is not mentioned in the manuscript. There is an entire family of papers that perform layer-fmri with black-blood imaging that solves this with a 3D contrast preparation (VAPER) that is applied across a longer time period, thus killing the blood signal while it flows across all directions of the vascular tree. Here, the signal cruising is happening with a 2D readout as a "snap-shot" crushing. This does not allow the blood to flow in multiple directions.<br /> VAPER also accounts for BOLD contaminations of larger draining veins by means of a tag-control sampling. The proposed approach here does not account for this contamination.

      Chai, Y., Li, L., Huber, L., Poser, B.A., Bandettini, P.A., 2020. Integrated VASO and perfusion contrast: A new tool for laminar functional MRI. NeuroImage 207, 116358. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.neuroimage.2019.116358

      Chai, Y., Liu, T.T., Marrett, S., Li, L., Khojandi, A., Handwerker, D.A., Alink, A., Muckli, L., Bandettini, P.A., 2021. Topographical and laminar distribution of audiovisual processing within human planum temporale. Progress in Neurobiology 102121. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.pneurobio.2021.102121

      If I would recommend anyone to perform layer-fMRI with blood crushing, it seems that VAPER is the superior approach. The authors could make it clearer why users might want to use the unidirectional crushing instead.

      (3) The comparison with VASO is misleading.<br /> The authors claim that previous VASO approaches were limited by TRs of 8.2s. The authors might be advised to check the latest literature of the last years.<br /> Koiso et al. has performed whole brain layer-fMRI VASO at 0.8mm at 3.9 seconds (with reliable activation) and 2.7 seconds (with unconvincing activation pattern, though), and 2.3 (without activation).<br /> Also, whole brain layer-fMRI BOLD at 0.5mm and 0.7mm has been previously performed by the Juelich group at TRs of 3.5s (their TR definition is 'fishy' though).

      Koiso, K., Müller, A.K., Akamatsu, K., Dresbach, S., Gulban, O.F., Goebel, R., Miyawaki, Y., Poser, B.A., Huber, L., 2023. Acquisition and processing methods of whole-brain layer-fMRI VASO and BOLD: The Kenshu dataset. Aperture Neuro 34. https://doi.org/10.1101/2022.08.19.504502

      Yun, S.D., Pais‐Roldán, P., Palomero‐Gallagher, N., Shah, N.J., 2022. Mapping of whole‐cerebrum resting‐state networks using ultra‐high resolution acquisition protocols. Human Brain Mapping. https://doi.org/10.1002/hbm.25855

      Pais-Roldan, P., Yun, S.D., Palomero-Gallagher, N., Shah, N.J., 2023. Cortical depth-dependent human fMRI of resting-state networks using EPIK. Front. Neurosci. 17, 1151544. https://doi.org/10.3389/fnins.2023.1151544

      The authors are correct that VASO is not advised as a turn-key method for lower brain areas, incl. Hippocampus and subcortex. However, the authors use this word of caution that is intended for inexperienced "users" as a statement that this cannot be performed. This statement is taken out of context. This statement is not from the academic literature. It's advice for the 40+ user base that want to perform layer-fMRI as a plug-and-play routine tool in neuroscience usage. In fact, sub-millimeter VASO is routinely being performed by MRI-physicists across all brain areas (including deep brain structures, hippocampus etc). E.g. see Koiso et al. and an overview lecture from a layer-fMRI workshop that I had recently attended: https://youtu.be/kzh-nWXd54s?si=hoIJjLLIxFUJ4g20&t=2401

      Thus, the authors could embed this phrasing into the context of their own method that they are proposing in the manuscript. E.g. the authors could state whether they think that their sequence has the potential to be disseminated across sites, considering that it requires slow offline reconstruction in Matlab?<br /> Do the authors think that the results shown in Fig. 6c are suggesting turn-key acquisition of a routine mapping tool? In my humble opinion it looks like random noise, with most of the activation outside the ROI (in white matter).

      (4) The repeatability of the results is questionable.<br /> The authors perform experiments about the robustness of the method (line 620). The corresponding results are not suggesting any robustness to me. In fact the layer profiles in Fig. 4c vs. Fig 4d are completely opposite. Location of peaks turn into locations of dips and vice versa.<br /> The methods are not described in enough detail to reproduce these results.<br /> The authors mention that their image reconstruction is done "using in-house MATLAB code" (line 634). They do not post a link to github, nor do they say if they share this code.

      It is not trivial to get good phase data for fMRI. The authors do not mention how they perform the respective coil-combination.<br /> No data are shared for reproduction of the analysis.

      (5) The application of NODRIC is not validated.<br /> Previous applications of NORDIC at 3T layer-fMRI have resulted in mixed success. When not adjusted for the right SNR regime it can result in artifactual reductions of beta scores, depending on the SNR across layers. The authors could validate their application of NORDIC and confirm that the average layer-profiles are unaffected by the application of NORDIC. Also, the NORDIC version should be explicitly mentioned in the manuscript.

      Akbari, A., Gati, J.S., Zeman, P., Liem, B., Menon, R.S., 2023. Layer Dependence of Monocular and Binocular Responses in Human Ocular Dominance Columns at 7T using VASO and BOLD (preprint). Neuroscience. https://doi.org/10.1101/2023.04.06.535924

      Knudsen, L., Guo, F., Huang, J., Blicher, J.U., Lund, T.E., Zhou, Y., Zhang, P., Yang, Y., 2023. The laminar pattern of proprioceptive activation in human primary motor cortex. bioRxiv. https://doi.org/10.1101/2023.10.29.564658

      Comments on revisions:

      Among all the concerns mentioned above, I think there is only one of the specific issues that was sufficiently addressed.<br /> The authors implemented a combination of three consecutive-dimensional flow crushers. Other concerns were not sufficiently addressed to change my confidence level of the study.<br /> - While the abstract is still focusing on the utility of using 3T, they do not give credit to early 3T layer-fMRI papers leading the way to larger coverage and connectivity applications.<br /> - While the author's choice of using custom SMS 2D readout is justified for them. I do not think that this very method will utilize widespread 3T whole brain connectivity experiments across the global 3T community. This lowers the impact of the paper.<br /> - The images in Fig. 5 are still suspiciously similar. To the level that the noise pattern outside the brain is identical across large parts of the maps with and without PR.<br /> - Maybe it's my ignorance, but I still do not agree why flow crushing focuses the local BOLD responses to small vessels.<br /> - While my feel of a misleading representation of the literature had been accompanied by explicit references, the authors claim that they cannot find them?!? Or claim that they are about something else (which they are not, in my viewpoint).<br /> Data and software are still not shared (not even example data, or nii data).

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Millard and colleagues investigated if the analgesic effect of nicotine on pain sensitivity, assessed with two pain models, is mediated by Peak Alpha Frequency (PAF) recorded with resting state EEG. The authors found indeed that nicotine (4 mg, gum) reduced pain ratings during phasic heat pain but not cuff pressor algometry compared to placebo conditions. Nicotine also increased PAF (globally). However, mediation analysis revealed that the reduction in pain ratings elicited by the phasic heat pain after taking nicotine was not mediated by the changes in PAF. Also, the authors only partially replicated the correlation between PAF and pain sensitivity at baseline (before nicotine treatment). At the group-level no correlation was found, but an exploratory analysis showed that the negative correlation (lower PAF, higher pain sensitivity) was present in males but not in females. The authors discuss the lack of correlation.<br /> In general, the study is rigorous, methodology is sound and the paper is well written. Results are compelling and sufficiently discussed.

      Strengths:

      Strengths of this study are the pre-registration, proper sample size calculation and data analysis. But also the presence of the analgesic effect of nicotine and the change in PAF.

      Weaknesses:

      It would even be more convincing if they had manipulated PAF directly.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors present MerQuaCo, a computational tool that fills a critical gap in the field of spatial transcriptomics: the absence of standardized quality control (QC) tools for image-based datasets. Spatial transcriptomics is an emerging field where datasets are often imperfect, and current practices lack systematic methods to quantify and address these imperfections. MerQuaCo offers an objective and reproducible framework to evaluate issues like data loss, transcript detection variability, and efficiency differences across imaging planes.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study draws on an impressive dataset comprising 641 mouse brain sections collected on the Vizgen MERSCOPE platform over two years. This scale ensures that the documented imperfections are not isolated or anecdotal but represent systemic challenges in spatial transcriptomics. The variability observed across this large dataset underscores the importance of using sufficiently large sample sizes when benchmarking different image-based spatial technologies. Smaller datasets risk producing misleading results by over-representing unusually successful or unsuccessful experiments. This comprehensive dataset not only highlights systemic challenges in spatial transcriptomics but also provides a robust foundation for evaluating MerQuaCo's metrics. The study sets a valuable precedent for future quality assessment and benchmarking efforts as the field continues to evolve.

      (2) MerQuaCo introduces thoughtful metrics and filters that address a wide range of quality control needs. These include pixel classification, transcript density, and detection efficiency across both x-y axes (periodicity) and z-planes (p6/p0 ratio). The tool also effectively quantifies data loss due to dropped images, providing tangible metrics for researchers to evaluate and standardize their data. Additionally, the authors' decision to include examples of imperfections detectable by visual inspection but not flagged by MerQuaCo reflects a transparent and balanced assessment of the tool's current capabilities.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The study focuses on cell-type label changes as the main downstream impact of imperfections. Broadening the scope to explore expression response changes of downstream analyses would offer a more complete picture of the biological consequences of these imperfections and enhance the utility of the tool.

      (2) While the manuscript identifies and quantifies imperfections effectively, it does not propose post-imaging data processing solutions to correct these issues, aside from the exclusion of problematic sections or transcript species. While this is understandable given the study is aimed at the highest quality atlas effort, many researchers don't need that level of quality to compare groups. It would be important to include discussion points as to how those cut-offs should be decided for a specific study.

      (3) Although the authors demonstrate the applicability of MerQuaCo on a large MERFISH dataset, and the limited number of sections from other platforms, it would be helpful to describe its limitations in its generalizability.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work investigated the role of CXXC-finger protein 1 (CXXC1) in regulatory T cells. CXXC1-bound genomic regions largely overlap with Foxp3-bound regions and regions with H3K4me3 histone modifications in Treg cells. CXXC1 and Foxp3 interact with each other, as shown by co-immunoprecipitation. Mice with Treg-specific CXXC1 knockout (KO) succumb to lymphoproliferative diseases between 3 to 4 weeks of age, similar to Foxp3 KO mice. Although the immune suppression function of CXXC1 KO Treg is comparable to WT Treg in an in vitro assay, these KO Tregs failed to suppress autoimmune diseases such as EAE and colitis in Treg transfer models in vivo. This is partly due to the diminished survival of the KO Tregs after transfer. CXXC1 KO Tregs do not have an altered DNA methylation pattern; instead, they display weakened H3K4me3 modifications within the broad H3K4me3 domains, which contain a set of Treg signature genes. These results suggest that CXXC1 and Foxp3 collaborate to regulate Treg homeostasis and function by promoting Treg signature gene expression through maintaining H3K4me3 modification.

      Strengths:

      Epigenetic regulation of Treg cells has been a constantly evolving area of research. The current study revealed CXXC1 as a previously unidentified epigenetic regulator of Tregs. The strong phenotype of the knockout mouse supports the critical role CXXC1 plays in Treg cells. Mechanistically, the link between CXXC1 and the maintenance of broad H3K4me3 domains is also a novel finding.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors addressed the reviewer's critiques fully in the revised manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Bohra et al. describes the indirect effects of ligand-dependent gene activation on neighboring non-target genes. The authors utilized single-molecule RNA-FISH (targeting both mature and intronic regions), 4C-seq, and enhancer deletions to demonstrate that the non-enhancer-targeted gene TFF3, located in the same TAD as the target gene TFF1, alters its expression when TFF1 expression declines at the end of the estrogen signaling peak. Since the enhancer does not loop with TFF3, the authors conclude that mechanisms other than estrogen receptor or enhancer-driven induction are responsible for TFF3 expression. Moreover, ERα intensity correlations show that both high and low levels of ERα are unfavorable for TFF1 expression. The ERa level correlations are further supported by overexpression of GFP-ERa. The authors conclude that transcriptional machinery used by TFF1 for its acute activation can negatively impact the TFF3 at peak of signaling but once, the condensate dissolves, TFF3 benefits from it for its low expression.

      Strengths:

      The findings are indeed intriguing. The authors have maintained appropriate experimental controls, and their conclusions are well-supported by the data.

      Weaknesses:

      There are some major and minor concerns that related to approach, data presentation and discussion. But the authors have greatly improved the manuscript during the revision work.

      Comments on latest version:

      The authors have done a lot of work for the revision. The manuscript has been greatly improved.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this study, the authors developed a mathematical model to predict human biological ages using physiological traits. This model provides a way to identify environmental and genetic factors that impact aging and lifespan.

      Strength:

      (1) The topic addressed by the authors - human age predication using physiological traits - is an extremely interesting, important, and challenging question in the aging field. One of the biggest challenges is the lack of well-controlled data from a large number of humans. However, the authors took this challenge and tried their best to extract useful information from available data.<br /> (2) Some of the findings can provide valuable guidelines for future experimental design for human and animal studies. For example, it was found that this mathematical model can best predict age when all different organ and physiological systems are sampled. This finding makes scenes in general, but can be, and have been, neglected when people use molecular markers to predict age. Most of those studies have used only one molecular trait or different traits from one tissue.

      Weakness:

      (1) As I mentioned above, the Biobank data used here are not designed for this current study, so there are many limitations for model development using these data, e.g., missing data points and irrelevant measurements for aging. This is a common caveat for human studies and has been discussed by the authors.<br /> (2) There is no validation dataset to verify the proposed model. The authors suggested that human biological age can be predicted with a high accuracy using 12 simple physiological measurements. It will be super useful and convincing if another biobank dataset containing those 12 traits can be applied to the current model.

      Comments on revisions:

      In this revision, the authors improved the manuscript by adding discussion of two main weaknesses about human data limitation and model validation. My several other specific concerns and suggestions are all properly resolved.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The fledgling field of epitranscriptomics has encountered various technical roadblocks with implications as to the validity of early epitranscriptomics mapping data. As a prime example, the low specificity of (supposedly) modification-specific antibodies for the enrichment of modified RNAs, has been ignored for quite some time and is only now recognized for its dismal reproducibility (between different labs), which necessitates the development of alternative methods for modification detection. Furthermore, early attempts to map individual epitranscriptomes using sequencing-based techniques are largely characterized by the deliberate avoidance of orthogonal approaches aimed at confirming the existence of RNA modifications that have been originally identified.

      Improved methodology, the inclusion of various controls, and better mapping algorithms as well as the application of robust statistics for the identification of false-positive RNA modification calls have allowed revisiting original (seminal) publications whose early mapping data allowed making hyperbolic claims about the number, localization and importance of RNA modifications, especially in mRNA. Besides the existence of m6A in mRNA, the detectable incidence of RNA modifications in mRNAs has drastically dropped.

      As for m5C, the subject of the manuscript submitted by Zhou et al., its identification in mRNA goes back to Squires et al., 2012 reporting on >10.000 sites in mRNA of a human cancer cell line, followed by intermittent findings reporting on pretty much every number between 0 to > 100.000 m5C sites in different human cell-derived mRNA transcriptomes. The reason for such discrepancy is most likely of a technical nature. Importantly, all studies reporting on actual transcript numbers that were m5C-modified relied on RNA bisulfite sequencing, an NGS-based method, that can discriminate between methylated and non-methylated Cs after chemical deamination of C but not m5C. RNA bisulfite sequencing has a notoriously high background due to deamination artifacts, which occur largely due to incomplete denaturation of double-stranded regions (denaturing-resistant) of RNA molecules. Furthermore, m5C sites in mRNAs have now been mapped to regions that have not only sequence identity but also structural features of tRNAs. Various studies revealed that the highly conserved m5C RNA methyltransferases NSUN2 and NSUN6 do not only accept tRNAs but also other RNAs (including mRNAs) as methylation substrates, which in combination account for most of the RNA bisulfite-mapped m5C sites in human mRNA transcriptomes. Is m5C in mRNA only a result of the Star activity of tRNA or rRNA modification enzymes, or is their low stoichiometry biologically relevant?

      In light of the short-comings of existing tools to robustly determine m5C in transcriptomes, other methods, like DRAM-seq, aiming to map m5C independently of ex situ RNA treatment with chemicals, are needed to arrive at a more solid "ground state", from which it will be possible to state and test various hypotheses as to the biological function of m5C, especially in lowly abundant RNAs such as mRNA.

      Importantly, the identification of >10.000 sites containing m5C increases through DRAM-Seq, increases the number of potential m5C marks in human cancer cells from a couple of 100 (after rigorous post-hoc analysis of RNA bisulfite sequencing data) by orders of magnitude. This begs the question, whether or not the application of these editing tools results in editing artefacts overstating the number of actual m5C sites in the human cancer transcriptome.

      [Editors' note: earlier reviews have been provided here: https://doi.org/10.7554/eLife.98166.3.sa1; https://doi.org/10.7554/eLife.98166.2.sa1; https://doi.org/10.7554/eLife.98166.1.sa1]

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Tamoxifen resistance is a common problem in partially ER-positive patients undergoing endocrine therapy, and this manuscript has important research significance as it is based on clinical practical issues. The manuscript discovered that the absence of FRMD8 in breast epithelial cells can promote the progression of breast cancer, thus proposing the hypothesis that FRMD8 affects tamoxifen resistance and validated this hypothesis through a series of experiments. The manuscript has certain theoretical reference value.

      Strengths:

      At present, research on the role of FRMD8 in breast cancer is very limited. This manuscript leverages the MMTV-Cre+;Frmd8fl/fl;PyMT mouse model to study the role of FRMD8 in tamoxifen resistance, and single-cell sequencing technology discovered the interaction between FRMD8 and ESR1. At the mechanistic level, this manuscript has demonstrated two ways in which FRMD8 affects ERα, providing some new insights into the development of ER-positive breast cancer in patients who are resistant to tamoxifen.

      Limitations:

      Whether FRMD8 can become a biomarker should be verified in large clinical samples or clinical data.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The article entitled "Pu.1/Spi1 dosage controls the turnover and maintenance of microglia in zebrafish and mammals" by Wu et al., identifies a role for the master myeloid developmental regulator Pu.1 in the maintenance of microglial populations in the adult. Using a non-homologous end joining knock-in strategy, the authors generated a pu.1 conditional allele in zebrafish, which reports wildtype expression of pu.1 with EGFP and truncated expression of pu.1 with DsRed after Cre-mediated recombination. When crossed to existing pu.1 and spi-b mutants, this approach allowed the authors to target a single allele for recombination and induce homozygous loss-of-function microglia in adults. This identified that although there is no short-term consequence to loss of pu.1, microglia lacking any functional copy of pu.1 are depleted over the course of months, even when spi-b is fully functional. The authors go on to identify reduced proliferation, increased cell death, and higher expression of tp53 in the pu.1 deficient microglia, as compared to the wild-type EGFP+ microglia. To extend these findings to mammals, the authors generated a conditional Pu.1 allele in mice and performed similar analyses, finding that loss of a single copy of Pu.1 resulted in similar long-term loss of Pu.1-deficient microglia. The conclusions of this paper are overall well supported by the data.

      Strengths:

      The genetic approaches here for visualizing the recombination status of an endogenous allele are very clever, and by comparing the turnover of wildtype and mutant cells in the same animal the authors can make very convincing arguments about the effect of chronic loss of pu.1. Likely this phenotype would be either very subtle or nonexistent without the point of comparison and competition with the wildtype cells.

      Using multiple species allows for more generalizable results, and shows conservation of the phenomena at play.

      The demonstration of changes to proliferation and cell death in concert with higher expression of tp53 is compelling evidence for the authors' argument.

      Weaknesses:

      This paper is very strong. It would benefit from further investigating the specific relationship between pu.1 and tp53 specifically. Does pu.1 interact with the tp53 locus? Specific molecular analysis of this interaction would strengthen the mechanistic findings.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      It is well known that neurons in the medial prefrontal cortex (mPFC) are involved in higher cognitive functions such as executive planning, motivational processing, and internal state-mediated decision-making. These internal states often correlate with the emotional states of the brain. While several studies point to the role of mPFC in regulating behavior based on such emotional states, the diversity of information processing in its sub-populations remains a less explored territory. In this study, the authors try to address this gap by identifying and characterizing some of these sub-populations in mice using a combination of projection-specific imaging, function-based tagging of neurons, multiple behavioral assays, and ex-vivo patch clamp recordings.

      Strengths:

      The authors targeted mPFC projections to the nucleus accumbens (NAc) and basolateral amygdala (BLA). Using the open field task (OFT), the authors identified four relevant behavioral states as well as neurons active while the animal was in the center region ("center-ON neurons"). By characterizing single-unit activity and using dimensionality reduction, the authors show differentiated coding of behavioral events at both the projection and functional levels. They further substantiate this effect by showing higher sensitivity of mPFC-BLA center-ON neurons during time spent in the open arms of the elevated plus maze (EPM). The authors then pivoted to the three-chamber social interaction (SI) assay to show the different subsets of neurons encode preference for social stimulus over non-social. This reveals an interesting diversity in the function of these sub-populations on multiple levels. Lastly, the authors used the tube test as a manipulation of the anxiety state of mice and compared behavioral differences before/after the OFT and social interaction tasks. This experiment revealed that "losers" of the tube test spend less time in the center of the open field while "winners" show a stronger preference for the familiar mouse over the object. Using patch-clamp experiments, the authors also found that "winners" exhibit stronger synaptic transmission in the mPFC-NAc projection while "losers" exhibit stronger synaptic transmission in the mPFC-BLA projection. Given the popularity of the tube test assay in rank determination, this provides useful insights into possible effects on anxiety levels and synaptic plasticity. Overall, the many experiments performed by the authors reveal interesting differences in mPFC neurons relative to their involvement in high or low anxiety behaviors, social preference, and social rank.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors focused primarily on female mice without commenting on the effect that sex differences would have on their results. While the authors have identified relevant behavioral states across the various behavioral tasks, there is still a missing link between them and "emotional states" - the phrase used by them emphatically throughout the manuscript. The authors have neither provided adequate references to satisfy this gap nor shared any data pertaining to relevant readouts such as cortisol levels. Both the projection-specific recordings and patch-clamp experiments, including histology reports in the manuscript, would provide essential information for anyone trying to replicate the results, especially since it's known that sub-populations in the BLA and NAc can have vastly different functions. The population-level analysis in the manuscript requires more rigor to reduce bias and statistical controls for establishing the significance of their results. Lastly, the tube test is used as a manipulation of the "emotional state" in several of the experiments. While the tube test can cause a temporary spike in anxiety of the participating mice, it is not known to produce a sustained effect - unless there are additional interventions such as forced social defeat. Thus, additional controls for these experiments are essential to support claims based on changes in the emotional state of mice. Apart from the methodology, the manuscript could also be improved with the addition of clear scatter points in all the plots along with detailed measures of the statistical tests such as exact p values and size of groups being compared.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors in this study extensively investigate how telomere length (TL) regulates hTERT expression via non-telomeric binding of the telomere-associated protein TRF2. They conclusively show that TRF2 binding to long telomeres results in a reduction in its binding to the hTERT promoter. In contrast, short telomeres restore TRF2 binding in the hTERT promoter, recruiting repressor complexes like PRC2, and suppressing hTERT expression. The study presents several significant findings revealing a previously unknown mechanism of hTERT regulation by TRF2 in a TL-dependent manner

      Strengths:

      (1) A previously unknown mechanism linking telomere length and hTERT regulation through the non-telomeric TRF2 protein has been established strengthening the telomere biology understanding.

      (2) The authors used both cancer cell lines and iPSCs to showcase their hypothesis and multiple parameters to validate the role of TRF2 in hTERT regulation.

      (3) Comprehensive integration of the recent literature findings and implementation in the current study.

      (4) In vivo validation of the findings.

      (5) Rigorous controls and well-designed assays have been use.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors should comment on the cell proliferation and morphology of the engineered cell lines with ST or LT.

      (2) Also, the entire study uses engineered cell lines, with artificially elongated or shortened telomeres that conclusively demonstrate the role of hTERT regulation by TRF2 in telomere-length dependent manner, but using ALT negative cell lines with naturally short telomere length vs those with long telomeres will give better perspective. Primary cells can also be used in this context.

      (3) The authors set up time-dependent telomere length changes by dox induction, which may differ from the gradual telomere attrition or elongation that occurs naturally during aging, disease progression, or therapy. This aspect should be explored.

      (4) How does the hTERT regulation by TRF2 in a TL-dependent manner affect the ETS binding on hTERT mutant promoter sites?

      (5) Stabilization of the G-quadruplex structures in ST and LT conditions along with the G4 disruption experimentation (demonstrated by the authors) will strengthen the hypothesis.

      (6) The telomere length and the telomerase activity are not very consistent (Figure 2A, and S1A, Figure 4B and S3). Please comment.

      (7) Please comment on the other telomere-associated proteins or regulatory pathways that might contribute to hTERT expression based on telomere length.

    1. for - Christine Wamsler - Lund University - homepage - from - youtube - Mindfulness World Community - Awareness, Care and Sustainability for Our Earth - https://hyp.is/GCUJ1APHEfCcr_vvv3lAFw/www.youtube.com/watch?v=CTUc_0GroGM

      research areas - sustainable cities - collaborative governance - city-citizen collaboration - citizen participation - sustainability and wellbeing - sustainability transformation - inner development goals - inner transformation - inner transition - existential sustainability

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper introduces a new class of machine learning models for capturing how likely a specific nucleotide in a rearranged IG gene is to undergo somatic hypermutation. These models modestly outperform existing state-of-the-art efforts, despite having fewer free parameters. A surprising finding is that models trained on all mutations from non-functional rearrangements give divergent results from those trained on only silent mutations from functional rearrangements.

      Strengths:

      (1) The new model structure is quite clever and will provide a powerful way to explore larger models.

      (2) Careful attention is paid to curating and processing large existing data sets.

      (3) The authors are to be commended for their efforts to communicate with the developers of previous models and use the strongest possible versions of those in their current evaluation.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) 10x/single cell data has a fairly different error profile compared to bulk data. A synonymous model should be built from the same `briney` dataset as the base model to validate the difference between the two types of training data.

      (3) The decision to test only kernels of 7, 9, and 11 is not described. The selection/optimization of embedding size is not explained. The filters listed in Table 1 are not defined.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this manuscript, Purzner and colleagues examine the role of Ezh2 in cerebellar development and tumorigenesis using animal models of SHH medulloblastoma (MB). While Ezh2 plays a relatively minor role in granule neuron development and SHH MB, the authors demonstrate that Ezh2 inhibition, when combined with enforced cell cycle exit, promotes MB cell differentiation and potentially reduces malignancy. Overall, this study is solid and provides valuable insights into Ezh2 regulation in cerebellar development and SHH-MB tumorigenesis.

      Strengths:

      The authors investigate the role of Ezh2 in granule neuronal differentiation during cerebellar development and medulloblastoma (MB) progression, integrating multi-omics for a comprehensive epigenetic analysis. The use of Ezh2 conditional knockout (cKO) mice and combination therapy with Ezh2 and CDK4/6 inhibitors shows a promising strategy to induce terminal differentiation in MB cells, with potential therapeutic implications. Additionally, analysis of human SHH-MB samples reveals that higher EZH2 expression correlates with worse survival, indicating the clinical relevance.

      Weaknesses:

      The study does not fully explore compensatory mechanisms of PRC2 given that the phenotype of Ezh2 conditional knockout (cKO) in GNP development and MB tumor formation is relatively mild.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study provides valuable and comprehensive information about the SARS-CoV-2 seroprevalence during 2021 and 2022 in different regions of Bolivia. Moreover, data on immune responses against the SARS-CoV-2 variants based on neutralization tests denotes the presence of several virus variants circulating in the Bolivian population. Evidence for seroprevalence data provided by the authors is solid, across the study period, while data regarding variant circulation is limited to the early stages of the pandemic.

      Strengths:

      The major strength of this study is that it provided nationwide seroprevalence estimates from infection and/or vaccination based on antibodies against both spike and the nucleocapsid protein in a large representative sample of sera collected at two time points from all departments of Bolivia, gaining insight into COVID-19 epidemiology. On the other hand, data from virus neutralization assays inferred the circulation during the study period of four SARS-CoV-2 variants in the population. Overall, the study results provide an overview of the level of viral transmission and vaccination and insights into the spread across the country of SARS-CoV-2 variants.

      Weaknesses:

      The assessment of a Lambda variant that circulated in several neighboring countries (Peru, Chile, and Argentina), which had a significant impact on the COVID-19 pandemic in the region, may have strengthened the study to contrast Gamma spread. In addition, even though neutralizing antibodies can certainly reveal previous infections of SARSCOV2 variants in the population, it is of limited value to infer from this information some potential timing estimates of specific variant circulation, considering the heterogeneous effects that past infections, vaccinations, or a combination of both could have on the level of variant-specific neutralizing antibodies and/or their cross-neutralization capacity.

      An appraisal of whether the authors achieved their aims, and whether the results support their conclusions.

      The conclusions of this paper are well supported by data, particularly regarding seroprevalence that reliably reflects the epidemiology of COVID-19 in Bolivia, and seroprevalence trends in other low- and middle-income countries.

      A discussion of the likely impact of the work on the field, and the utility of the methods and data to the community.

      Since this is the first study that has been conducted to assess indicators of immunity against SARS-CoV-2 in the population of Bolivia at a nationwide scale, seroprevalence data provided by geographic regions at two time points can be useful as a reference for potential retrospective global meta-analysis and to further explore and compare the risk factors for infection, variant distribution, and the impact on infection and vaccination, gaining deeper insights into understanding the evolution of the COVID-19 pandemic in Bolivia and in the region.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study demonstrates the significant role of secretory leukocyte protease inhibitor (SLPI) in regulating B. burgdorferi-induced periarticular inflammation in mice. They found that SLPI-deficient mice showed significantly higher B. burgdorferi infection burden in ankle joints compared to wild-type controls. This increased infection was accompanied by infiltration of neutrophils and macrophages in periarticular tissues, suggesting SLPI's role in immune regulation. The authors strengthened their findings by demonstrating a direct interaction between SLPI and B. burgdorferi through BASEHIT library screening and FACS analysis. Further investigation of SLPI as a target could lead to valuable clinical applications.

      The conclusions of this paper are mostly well supported by data. And the authors were responsive to the reviewers' comments.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have thoroughly addressed the previous concerns and improved the manuscript. The revisions have strengthened both the conclusions. I have no additional suggestions for improvement and recommend this manuscript for publication.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, authors have tried to repurpose cipargamin (CIP), a known drug against Plasmodium and Toxoplasma against Babesia. They proved the efficacy of CIP on Babesia in nanomolar range. In silico analyses revealed the drug resistance mechanism through a single amino acid mutation at amino acid position 921 on the ATP4 gene of Babesia. Overall, the conclusions drawn by the authors are well justified by their data. I believe this study opens up a novel therapeutic strategy against babesiosis.

      Strengths:

      Authors have carried out a comprehensive study. All the experiments performed were carried out methodically and logically.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      As our understanding of the immune system increases it becomes clear that murine models of Immunity cannot always prove an accurate model system for human immunity. However, mechanistic studies in humans are necessarily limited. To bridge this gap many groups have worked on developing humanised mouse models in which human immune cells are introduced into mice allowing their fine manipulation. However, since human immune cells will attack murine tissues, it has proven complex to establish a human-like immune system in mice. To help address this Vecchione et al, have previously developed several models using human cell transfer into mice with or without human thymic fragments that allow negative selection of autoreactive cells. In this report they focus on the examination of the function of the B-helper CD4 T-cell subsets T-follicular helper (Tfh) and T-peripheral helper (Tph) cells. They demonstrate that these cells are able to drive both autoantibody production and can also induce B-cell independent autoimmunity.

      Strengths:

      A strength of this paper is that currently there is no well-established model for Tfh or Tph in HIS mice and that currently there is no clear murine Tph equivalent making new models for the study of this cell type of value. Equally, since many HIS mice struggle to maintain effective follicular structures Tfh models in HIS mice are not well established giving additional value to this model.

      Weaknesses:

      A weakness of the paper is that the models seem to lack a clear ability to generate germinal centres in which Tfh may exert some of their key functions. In some cases, the definition of Tph-like does not seem to differentiate well between Tph and highly activated CD4 T-cells in general, partly since the literature around these cells has not fully resolved this point.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This paper by Ionescu et al. applies novel brain connectivity measures based on fMRI and serotonin PET both at baseline and following ecstasy use in rats. There are multiple strengths to this manuscript. First, the use of connectivity measures using temporal correlations of 11C-DASB PET, especially when combined with resting state fMRI, is highly novel and powerful. The effects of ecstasy on molecular connectivity of the serotonin network and salience network are also quite intriguing.

      The authors discussed their use of high-dose (1.3%) isolfurane in the context of a recent consensus paper on rat fMRI (Grandjean et al., "A Consensus Protocol for Functional Connectivity Analysis in the Rat Brain.") which found that medetomidine combined with low dose isoflurane provided optimal control of physiology and fMRI signal. The authors acknowledge their suboptimal anaesthetic regimen, which was chosen before the publication of the consensus paper. This likely explains, in part, why fMRI ICs in figure 2A appear fairly restricted.

      The PET ICs appear less bilateral than the fMRI ICs, which the authors attribute to lower SNR.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript aimed to study the role of Rudhira (also known as Breast Carcinoma Amplified Sequence 3), an endothelium-restricted microtubules-associated protein, in regulating of TGFβ signaling. The authors demonstrate that Rudhira is a critical signaling modulator for TGFβ signaling by releasing Smad2/3 from cytoskeletal microtubules and how that Rudhira is a Smad2/3 target gene. Taken together, the authors provide a model of how Rudhira contributes to TGFβ signaling activity to stabilize the microtubules, which is essential for vascular development.

      Strengths:

      The study used different methods and techniques to achieve aims and support conclusions, such as Gene Ontology analysis, functional analysis in culture, immunostaining analysis, and proximity ligation assay. This study provides unappreciated additional layer of TGFβ signaling activity regulation after ligand-receptor interaction.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) It is unclear how current findings provide a better understanding of Rudhira KO mice, which the authors published some years ago.

      (2) Why do they use HEK cells instead of SVEC cells in Fig 2 and 4 experiments?

      (3) A model shown in Fig 5E needs improvement to grasp their findings easily.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors provide a compelling method for characterizing communication within brain networks. The study engages important, biologically pertinent, concerns related to the balance of dynamics and structure in assessing the focal points of brain communication. The methods are clear, and seem broadly applicable, although they require some forethought about data and modeling choices.

      Strengths:

      The study is well-developed, providing overall clear exposition of relevant methods, as well as in-depth validation of the key network structural and dynamical assumptions. The questions and concerns raised in reading the text were always answered in time, with straightforward figures and supplemental materials.

      Weaknesses:

      In earlier drafts of the work, the narrative structure at times conflicts with the interpretability, however, this was greatly improved during revisions. The only remaining limitation for broad applicability lies in the full observability required in the current paradigm, however, the authors point at avenues for relaxing this assumption, which could be fruitful next steps for researchers aiming to deploy this work to EM or two-photon based datasets.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The paper addresses the problem of optimising the mapping of serum antibody responses against a known antigen. It uses the croEM analysis of polyclonal Fabs to antibody genes, with the ultimate aim of getting complete and accurate antibody sequences. The method, commonly termed EMPEM, is becoming increasingly used to understand responses in convalescent sera and optimisation of the workflows and provision of openly available tools is of genuine value to a growing number of people.

      The authors do not address the experimental aspects of the methods and do not present novel computational tools, rather they use a series of established computational methods to provide workflows that simplify the interpretation of the EM map in terms of the sequences of dominant antibodies.

      Strengths:

      The paper is well-written and clearly argued. The tests constructed seem appropriate and fair and demonstrate that the workflow works pretty well. For a small subset (~17%) of the EMPEM maps analysed the workflow was able to get convincing assignments of the V-genes.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Mehta et al., in constructing E. coli strains unable to synthesize polyamines, noted that strains deficient in putrescine synthesis showed decreased movement on semisolid agar. They show that strains incapable of synthesizing putrescine have decreased expression of Type I pilin and, hence, decreased ability to perform pilin-dependent surface motility.

      Strengths:

      The authors characterize the specific polyamine pathways that are important for this phenomenon. RNAseq provides a detailed overview of gene expression in the strain lacking putrescine. They rule out potential effects of pilin phase variation on the phenotype. The data suggest homeostatic control of polyamine synthesis and metabolic changes in response to putrescine.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors do not, in the end, uncover the molecular details of pilin expression per se, but that would require significantly more analyses and data; the mechanisms of pilin regulation are complicated and still not completely understood.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this interesting and original paper, the authors examine the effect that heat stress can have on the ability of bacterial cells to evade infection by lytic bacteriophages. Briefly, the authors show that heat stress increases the tolerance of Klebsiella pneumoniae to infection by the lytic phage Kp11. They also argue that this increased tolerance facilitates the evolution of genetically encoded resistance to the phage. In addition, they show that heat can reduce the efficacy of phage therapy. Moreover, they define a likely mechanistic reason for both tolerance and genetically encoded resistance. Both lead to a reorganization of the bacterial cell envelope, which reduces the likelihood that phage can successfully inject their DNA.

      Strengths:

      I found large parts of this paper well-written and clearly presented. I also found many of the experiments simple yet compelling. For example, the experiments described in Figure 3 clearly show that prior heat exposure can affect the efficacy of phage therapy. In addition, the experiments shown in Figures 4 and 6 clearly demonstrate the likely mechanistic cause of this effect. The conceptual Figure 7 is clear and illustrates the main ideas well. I think this paper would work even without its central claim, namely that tolerance facilitates the evolution of resistance. The reason is that the effect of environmental stressors on stress tolerance has to my knowledge so far only been shown for drug tolerance, not for tolerance to an antagonistic species.

      Weaknesses:

      I did not detect any weaknesses that would require a major reorganization of the paper, or that may require crucial new experiments. However, the paper needs some work in clarifying specific and central conclusions that the authors draw. More specifically, it needs to improve the connection between what is shown in some figures, how these figures are described in the caption, and how they are discussed in the main text. This is especially glaring with respect to the central claim of the paper from the title, namely that tolerance facilitates the evolution of resistance. I am sympathetic to that claim, especially because this has been shown elsewhere, not for phage resistance but for antibiotic resistance. However, in the description of the results, this is perhaps the weakest aspect of the paper, so I'm a bit mystified as to why the authors focus on this claim. As I mentioned above, the paper could stand on its own even without this claim.

      More specific examples where clarification is needed:

      (1) A key figure of the paper seems to be Figure 2D, yet it was one of the most confusing figures. This results from a mismatch between the accompanying text starting on line 92 and the figure itself. The first thing that the reader notices in the figure itself is the huge discrepancy between the number of viable colonies in the absence of phage infection at the two-hour time point. Yet this observation is not even mentioned in the main text. The exclusive focus of the main text seems to be on the right-hand side of the figure, labeled "+Phage". It is from this right-hand panel that the authors seem to conclude that heat stress facilitates the evolution of resistance. I find this confusing, because there is no difference between the heat-treated and non-treated cells in survivorship, and it is not clear from this data that survivorship is caused by resistance, not by tolerance/persistence. (The difference between tolerance and resistance has only been shown in the independent experiments of Figure 1B.) Figure 2F supports the resistance claim, but it is not one of the strongest experiments of the paper, because the author simply only used "turbidity" as an indicator of resistance. In addition, the authors performed the experiments described therein at small population sizes to avoid the presence of resistance mutations. But how do we know that the turbidity they describe does not result from persisters?

      I see three possibilities to address these issues. First, perhaps this is all a matter of explaining and motivating this particular experiment better. Second, the central claim of the paper may require additional experiments. For example, is it possible to block heat induced tolerance through specific mutations, and show that phage resistance does not evolve as rapidly if tolerance is blocked? A third possibility is to tone down the claim of the paper, and make it about heat tolerance rather than the evolution of heat resistance.

      A minor but general point here is that in Figure 2D and in other figures, the labels "-phage" and "+phage" do not facilitate understanding, because they suggest that cells in the "-phage" treatment have not been exposed to phage at all, but that is not the case. They have survived previous phage treatment and are then replated on media lacking phage.

      (2) Another figure with a mismatch between text and visual materials is Figure 5, specifically Figures 5B-F. The figure is about two different mutants, and it is not even mentioned in the text how these mutants were identified, for example in different or the same replicate populations. What is more, the two mutants are not discussed at all in the main text. That is, the text, starting on line 221 discusses these experiments as if there was only one mutant. This is especially striking as the two mutants behave very differently, as, for example, in Figure 5C. Implicitly, the text talks about the mutant ending in "...C2", and not the one ending in "...C1". To add to the confusion, the text states that the (C2) mutant shows a change in the pspA gene, but in Figure 5f, it is the other (undiscussed) mutant that has a mutation in this gene. Only pspA is discussed further, so what about the other mutants? More generally, it is hard to believe that these were the only mutants that occurred in the genome during experimental evolution. It would be useful to give the reader a 2-3 sentence summary of the genetic diversity that experimental evolution generated.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This manuscript presents an interesting exploration of the potential activation mechanisms of DLK following axonal injury. While the experiments are beautifully conducted and the data are solid, I feel that there is insufficient evidence to fully support the conclusions made by the authors.

      In this manuscript, the authors exclusively use the puc-lacZ reporter to determine the activation of DLK. This reporter has been shown to be induced when DLK is activated. However, there is insufficient evidence to confirm that the absence of reporter activation necessarily indicates that DLK is inactive. As with many MAP kinase pathways, the DLK pathway can be locally or globally activated in neurons, and the level of DLK activation may depend on the strength of the stimulation. This reporter might only reflect strong DLK activation and may not be turned on if DLK is weakly activated.

      As noted by the authors, DLK has been implicated in both axon regeneration and degeneration. Following axotomy, DLK activation can lead to the degeneration of distal axons, where synapses are located. This raises an important question: how is DLK activated in distal axons? The authors might consider discussing the significance of this "synapse connection-dependent" DLK activation in the broader context of DLK function and activation mechanisms.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors of this study set out to find RNA binding proteins in the CNS in cell-type specific sequencing data and discover that the cardiomyopathy-associated protein RBM20 is selectively expressed in olfactory bulb glutamatergic neurons and PV+ GABAergic neurons. They make an HA-tagged RBM20 allele to perform CLIP-seq to identify RBM20 binding sites and find direct targets of RBM20 in olfactory bulb glutmatergic neurons. In these neurons, RBM20 binds intronic regions. RBM20 has previously been implicated in splicing, but when they selectively knockout RBM20 in glutamatergic neurons they do not see changes in splicing, but they do see changes in RNA abundance, especially of long genes with many introns, which are enriched for synapse-associated functions. These data show that RBM20 has important functions in gene regulation in neurons, which was previously unknown, and they suggest it acts through a mechanism distinct from what has been studied before in cardiomyocytes.

      Strengths:

      The study finds expression of the cardiomyopathy-associated RNA binding protein RBM20 in specific neurons in the brain, opening new windows into its potential functions there.

      The study uses CLIP-seq to identify RBM20 binding RNAs in olfactory bulb neurons.

      Conditional knockout of RBM20 in glutamatergic or PV neurons allows the authors to detect mRNA expression that is regulated by RBM20.

      The data include substantial controls and quality control information to support the rigor of the findings.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors do not fully identify the mechanism by which RBM20 acts to regulate RNA expression in neurons, though they do provide data suggesting that neuronal RBM20 does not regulate alternate splicing in neurons, which is an interesting contrast to its proposed mechanism of function in cardiomyocytes. Discovery of the RNA regulatory functions of RBM20 in neurons is left as a question for future studies.

      The study does not identify functional consequences of the RNA changes in the conditional knockout cells, so this is also a question for the future.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The aim of this paper is to develop a simple method to quantify fluctuations in the partitioning of cellular elements. In particular, they propose a flow-cytometry-based method coupled with a simple mathematical theory as an alternative to conventional imaging-based approaches.

      Strengths:

      The approach they develop is simple to understand and its use with flow-cytometry measurements is clearly explained. Understanding how the fluctuations in the cytoplasm partition vary for different kinds of cells is particularly interesting.

      Weaknesses:

      The theory only considers fluctuations due to cellular division events. This seems a large weakness because it is well known that fluctuations in cellular components are largely affected by various intrinsic and extrinsic sources of noise and only under particular conditions does partitioning noise become the dominant source of noise.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study was motivated by the general claim that delayed development of cognitive control can be beneficial for learning, and investigated this claim in the specific domain of conceptual development. A comprehensive set of computational model simulations showed that delaying the onset of semantic control produces faster learning with only minimal effects on conceptual abstraction. The simulations also showed that control was most effective at intermediate levels between modality-specific "spokes" and the multimodal "hub". A meta-analysis of developmental data was consistent with the claim of delayed onset of semantic control: young children show substantially better semantic knowledge than the ability to constrain that knowledge to a specific task at hand.

      Strengths:

      The computational modelling is based on a very well-established model of semantic cognition, which means that the simulations allow exploring the specific issues under investigation here in the context of a model that accounts for a very large set of semantic cognition phenomena. The simulations are comprehensive - manipulating different parameters of the model provides important insights into how (and why) it works.

      In addition to simulations exploring delayed maturation, there is an exploration of where semantic control is most effective, yielding the interesting result that control is most effective when it targets intermediate levels of semantic processing. To my knowledge, this is a novel finding and a concrete prediction for future testing.

      The meta-analysis is designed in a very clever way that allows extracting evidence of semantic control from a large body of prior work. The results are quite clear and compelling in showing that semantic knowledge is acquired before children are able to use task demands to constrain the use of that knowledge.

      Weaknesses:

      Computational models of cognition inherently require simplification in order to focus on the mechanisms under investigation. However, it is also important to keep these simplifications in mind because they limit the generality of the inferences that can be made from the simulation results. Two aspects are important in this context:

      (1) The multimodal structure was orthogonal to the surface similarity structure of the concepts to be learned. It is certainly true that multimodal structure does not perfectly mirror surface similarity, but closely related things tend to be perceptually similar. There are exceptions (whales, penguins, etc.), but they are *exceptional*, not typical. It may be that the somewhat extreme dissociation of multimodal and surface similarity structures creates demands that are not faced in natural conceptual development.

      (2) Much of the benefit of delayed semantic control seems to be because the model is not penalised for activating task-irrelevant features. This blurs the distinction between being aware of a feature and making a response based on that feature. A full model that also includes a response layer could become a lot more complicated and more difficult to understand, so maybe there is an advantage to using a simpler architecture.

      In addition, there is a bit of a misalignment between the model simulations and the meta-analysis. In the model, there are distinct modality-specific "spokes" and control is required in order to focus on modality/spoke in a task-appropriate way. The meta-analysis does not compare a task-defined selection of a modality; it compares the selection of taxonomic vs thematic relations, both of which are multimodal. One way to resolve this is to say that taxonomic and thematic relations are also represented in distinct sub-systems of semantic knowledge and semantic control is needed to select between them in a task-appropriate way.

      This is particularly relevant to the inference at the bottom of p. 38: "taxonomic and thematic relationships ...[are]... both being encoded within the same system of representation", which seems in direct contradiction to the present results, or at least to the logic of combining these simulations with this meta-analysis. The simulations are based on semantic control being used to select/constrain the correct distinct sub-system (modality-specific spoke); the meta-analysis is based on semantic control being used to select/constrain the correct relationship type. If these two things are analogous in some way, then the relationship type has to be something like a distinct sub-system.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Pavel et al. analyzed a cohort of atrial fibrillation (AF) patients from the University of Illinois at Chicago, identifying TTN truncating variants (TTNtvs) and TTN missense variants (TTNmvs). They reported a rare TTN missense variant (T32756I) associated with adverse clinical outcomes in AF patients. To investigate its functional significance, the authors modeled the TTN-T32756I variant using human induced pluripotent stem cell-derived atrial cardiomyocytes (iPSC-aCMs). They demonstrated that mutant cells exhibit aberrant contractility, increased activity of the cardiac potassium channel KCNQ1 (Kv7.1), and dysregulated calcium homeostasis. Interestingly, these effects occurred without compromising sarcomeric integrity. The study further identified increased binding of the titin-binding protein Four-and-a-Half Lim domains 2 (FHL2) with KCNQ1 and its modulatory subunit KCNE1 in the TTN-T32756I iPSC-aCMs.

      Strengths:

      This work has translational potential, suggesting that targeting KCNQ1 or FHL2 could represent a novel therapeutic strategy for improving cardiac function. The findings may also have broader implications for treating patients with rare, disease-causing variants in sarcomeric proteins and underscore the importance of integrating genomic analysis with experimental evidence to advance AF research and precision medicine.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Variant Identification: It is unclear how the TTN missense variant (T32756I) was identified using REVEL, as none of the patients' parents reportedly carried the mutation or exhibited AF symptoms. Are there other TTN variants identified in the three patients carrying TTN-T32756I? Clarification on this point is necessary.

      (2) Patient-Specific iPSC Lines: Since the TTN-T32756I variant was modeled using only one healthy iPSC line, it is unclear whether patient-specific iPSC-derived atrial cardiomyocytes would exhibit similar AF-related phenotypes. This limitation should be addressed.

      (3) Hypertension as a Confounding Factor: The three patients carrying TTN-T32756I also have hypertension. Could the hypertension associated with this variant contribute secondarily to AF? The authors should discuss or rule out this possibility.

      (4) FHL2 and KCNQ1-KCNE1 Interaction: Immunostaining data demonstrating the colocalization of FHL2 with the KCNQ1-KCNE1 (MinK) complex in TTN-T32756I iPSC-aCMs are needed to strengthen the mechanistic findings.

      (5) Functional Characterization of FHL2-KCNQ1-KCNE1 Interaction: Additional functional assays are necessary to characterize the interaction between FHL2 and the KCNQ1-KCNE1 complex in TTN-T32756I iPSC-aCMs to further validate the proposed mechanism.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Polymers of orthophosphate of varying lengths are abundant in prokaryotes and some eukaryotes where they regulate many cellular functions. Though they exist in metazoans, few tools exist to study their function. This study documents the development of tools to extract, measure, and deplete inorganic polyphosphates in *Drosophila*. Using these tools, the authors show:

      (1) that polyP levels are negligible in embryos and larvae of all stages while they are feeding. They remain high in pupae but their levels drop in adults.

      (2) that many cells in tissues such as the salivary glands, oocytes, haemocytes, imaginal discs, optic lobe, muscle, and crop, have polyP that is either cytoplasmic or nuclear (within the nucleolus).

      (3) that polyP is necessary in plasmatocytes for blood clotting in Drosophila.

      (4) that ployP controls the timing of eclosion.

      The tools developed in the study are innovative, well-designed, tested, and well-documented. I enjoyed reading about them and I appreciate that the authors have gone looking for the functional role of polyP in flies, which hasn't been demonstrated before. The documentation of polyP in cells is convincing as its role in plasmatocytes in clotting. Its control of eclosion timing, however, could result from non-specific effects of expressing an exogenous protein in all cells of an animal. The RNAseq experiments and their associated analyses on polyP-depleted animals and controls have not been discussed in sufficient detail. In its current form, the data look to be extremely variable between replicates and I'm therefore unsure of how the differentially regulated genes were identified.

      It is interesting that no kinases and phosphatases have been identified in flies. Is it possible that flies are utilising the polyP from their gut microbiota? It would be interesting to see if these signatures go away in axenic animals.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript uses a diverse isolate collection of Streptococcus pneumoniae from hospital patients in the Netherlands to understand the population-level genetic basis of growth rate variation in this pathogen, which is a key determinant of S. pneumoniae within-host fitness. Previous efforts have studied this phenomenon in strain-specific comparisons, which can lack the statistical power and scope of population-level studies. The authors collected a rigorous set of in vitro growth data for each S. pneumoniae isolate and subsequently paired growth curve analysis with whole-genome analyses to identify how phylogenetics, serotype, and specific genetic loci influence in vitro growth. While there were noticeable correlations between capsular serotype and phylogeny with growth metrics, they did not identify specific loci associated with altered in vitro growth, suggesting that these phenotypes are controlled by the collective effect of the entire genetic background of a strain. This is an important finding that lays the foundation for additional, more highly-powered studies that capture more S. pneumoniae genetic diversity to identify these genetic contributions.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors were able to completely control the experimental and genetic analyses to ensure all isolates underwent the same analysis pipeline to enhance the rigor of their findings.

      (2) The isolate collection captures an appreciable amount of S. pneumoniae diversity and, importantly, enables disentangling the contributions of the capsule and phylogenetic background to growth rates.

      (3) This study provides a population-level, rather than strain-specific, view of how genetic background influences the growth rate in S. pneumoniae. This is an advance over previous studies that have only looked at smaller sets of strains.

      (4) The methods used are well-detailed and robust to allow replication and extension of these analyses. Moreover, the manuscript is very well written and includes a thoughtful and thorough discussion of the strengths and limitations of the current study.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) As acknowledged by the authors, the genetic diversity and sample size of this newly collected isolate set are still limited relative to the known global diversity of S. pneumoniae, which evidently limits the power to detect loci with smaller/combinatorial contributions to growth rate (and ultimately infection).

      (2) The in vitro growth data is limited to a single type of rich growth medium, which may not fully reflect the nutritional and/or selective pressures present in the host.

      (3) The current study does not use genetic manipulation or in vitro/in vivo infection models to experimentally test whether alteration of growth rates as observed in this study is linked to virulence or successful infection. The availability of a naturally diverse collection with phylogenetic and serotype combinations already identified as interesting by the authors provides a strong rationale for wet-lab studies of these phenotypes.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work integrates two timepoints from the Adolescent Brain Cognitive Development (ABCD) Study to understand how neuroimaging, genetic, and environmental data contribute to the predictive power of mental health variables in predicting cognition in a large early adolescent sample. Their multimodal and multivariate prediction framework involves a novel opportunistic stacking model to handle complex types of information to predict variables that are important in understanding mental health-cognitive performance associations.

      Strengths:

      The authors are commended for incorporating and directly comparing the contribution of multiple imaging modalities (task fMRI, resting state fMRI, diffusion MRI, structural MRI), neurodevelopmental markers, environmental factors, and polygenic risk scores in a novel multivariate framework (via opportunistic stacking), as well as interpreting mental health-cognition associations with latent factors derived from partial least squares. The authors also use a large well-characterized and diverse cohort of adolescents from the ABCD Study. The paper is also strengthened by commonality analyses to understand the shared and unique contribution of different categories of factors (e.g., neuroimaging vs mental health vs polygenic scores vs sociodemographic and adverse developmental events) in explaining variance in cognitive performance

      Weaknesses:

      The paper is framed with an over-reliance on the RDoC framework in the introduction, despite deviations from the RDoC framework in the methods. The field is also learning more about RDoC's limitations when mapping cognitive performance to biology. The authors also focus on a single general factor of cognition as the core outcome of interest as opposed to different domains of cognition. The authors could consider predicting mental health rather than cognition. Using mental health as a predictor could be limited by the included 9-11 year age range at baseline (where many mental health concerns are likely to be low or not well captured), as well as the nature of how the data was collected, i.e., either by self-report or from parent/caregiver report.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The current study by Xing et al. establishes the methodology (machine vision and gaze pose estimation) and behavioral apparatus for examining social interactions between pairs of marmoset monkeys. Their results enable unrestrained social interactions under more rigorous conditions with detailed quantification of position and gaze. It has been difficult to study social interactions using artificial stimuli, as opposed to genuine interactions between unrestrained animals. This study makes an important contribution for studying social neuroscience within a laboratory setting that will be valuable to the field.

      Strengths:

      Marmosets are an ideal species for studying primate social interactions due to their prosocial behavior and the ease of group housing within laboratory environments. They also predominantly orient their gaze through head movements during social monitoring. Recent advances in machine vision pose estimation set the stage for estimating 3D gaze position in marmosets but require additional innovation beyond DeepLabCut or equivalent methods. A six-point facial frame is designed to accurately fit marmoset head gaze. A key assumption in the study is that head gaze is a reliable indicator of the marmoset's gaze direction, which will also depend on the eye position. Overall, this assumption has been well supported by recent studies in head-free marmosets. Thus the current work introduces an important methodology for leveraging machine vision to track head gaze and demonstrates its utility for use with interacting marmoset dyads as a first step in that study.

      Weaknesses:

      One weakness that should be easily addressed is that no data is provided to directly assess how accurate the estimated head gaze is based on calibrations of the animals, for example, when they are looking at discrete locations like faces or video on a monitor. This would be useful to get an upper bound on how accurate the 3D gaze vector is estimated to be, for planned use in other studies. Although the accuracy appears sufficient for the current results, it would be difficult to know if it could be applied in other contexts where more precision might be necessary.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The current manuscript by Bendeker et al. (2024) presents a new platform, MorphoCellSorter, for performing population wide microglial morphological analyses. This method adds to the many programs/platforms available to determine characteristics of microglial morphology; however, MorphoCellSorter is unique in that it uses Andrew's plotting to rank populations of cells together (in control and experimental groups) and present "big picture" views of how entire populations of microglia alter under different conditions. In their ranking system, Bendeker et al. (2024) use PCA to determine which of the morphological characteristics most define microglial populations, avoiding user subjective biases to determine these parameters. Compared to "expert" evaluators, MorphoCellSorter appears to perform consistently and accurately, including in different types of tissue preservation methods and in live cells, a key feature of the program. In addition, the researchers point out that this platform can be used across a wide array of imaging techniques and most microscopes that are available in a basic research lab. There are minor concerns about the platform's utility in analyzing embryonic microglia and primary microglial cultures, but overall, this platform will be another useful tool for microglial researchers to consider using in future studies. Furthermore, the method of morphological assessment aligns with the current direction of the field in identifying microglial cells in more nuanced ways.

      In their current revision, the authors have done an excellent job responding to concerns and have updated the manuscript accordingly.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper shows that the synthetic opioid fentanyl induces respiratory depression in rodents. This effect is revised by the opioid receptor antagonist naloxone, as expected. Unexpectedly, the peripherally restricted opioid receptor antagonist naloxone methiodide also blocks fentanyl-induced respiratory depression.

      Strengths:

      The paper reports compelling physiology data supporting the induction of respiratory distress in fentanyl-treated animals. Evidence suggesting that naloxone methiodide reverses this respiratory depression is compelling. This is further supported by pharmacokinetic data suggesting that naloxone methiodide does not penetrate into the brain, nor is it metabolized into brain-penetrant naloxone.

      Weaknesses:

      The paper would be further strengthened by establishing the functional significance of the altered neural activity detected in the nTS (as measured by cFos and GcAMP/photometry) in the context of opioid-induced respiratory depression.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript co-authored by Pál Barzó et al is very clear and very well written, demonstrating the electrophysiological and morphological properties of the human cortical layer 2/3 pyramidal cells across a wide age range, from age 1 month to 85 years using whole-cell patch clamp. To my knowledge, this is the first study that look at the cross-age differences biophysical and morphological properties of human cortical pyramidal cells. The community will also appreciate the significant effort involved in recording data from 485 cells, given the challenges associated with collecting data from human tissue. Understanding the electrophysiological properties of individual cells, which are essential for brain function, is crucial for comprehending human cortical circuits. I think this research enhances our knowledge of how biophysical properties change over time in the human cortex. I also think that by building models of human single cells at different ages using these data, we can develop more accurate representations of brain function. This, in turn, provides valuable insights into human cortical circuits and function and helps in predicting changes in biophysical properties in both health and disease.

      Strengths:

      The strength of this work lies in demonstrating how the electrophysiological and morphological features of human cortical layer 2/3 pyramidal cells change with age, offering crucial insights into brain function throughout life.

      Comments on revisions:

      Thanks to the authors for addressing my comments and providing greater clarity in the methodology. The analysis is much clearer now. I also appreciate their additional data analysis, particularly on morphology, which strengthens the paper.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      Shi and colleagues report the use of modified Cre lines in which the coding region of Cre is disrupted by rox-STOP-rox or lox-STOP-lox sequences to prevent the expression of functional protein in the absence of Dre or Cre activity, respectively. The main purpose of these tools is to enable intersectional or tamoxifen-induced Cre activity with minimal or no leaky activity from the second, Cre-expressing allele. It is a nice study but lacks some functional data required to determine how useful these alleles will be in practice, especially in comparison with the figure line that stimulated their creation.

      Strengths:

      The new tools can reduce Cre leak in vivo.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Activity of R26-loxCre line. As the authors point out, the greatest value of this approach is to accomplish a more complete Cre-mediated gene deletion using CreER transgenes that are combined with low-efficiency floxed alleles using their R26-loxCre line that is similar to the iSure Cre reported by Benedito and colleagues. The data in Figure 5 show strong activity at the Confetti locus, but the design of the newly reported R26-loxCre line lacks a WPRE sequence that was included in the iSure-Cre line to drive very robust protein expression. Thus while the line appears to have minimal leak, as the design would predict, the question of how much of a deletion increase is obtained over simple use of the CreER transgene alone is a key question for use by investigators. This is further addressed in Figure 6 where it is compared with Alb-CreER alone to recombine the Ctnnb1 floxed allele. They demonstrate that recombination frequency is clearly improved, but the western blot in Figure 6E does not look like there was a large amount of remaining b-catenin to remove. These data are certainly promising, but the most valuable experiment for such a new tool would be a head-to-head comparison with iSure (or the latest iSure version from the Benedito lab) using the same CreER and target floxed allele. At the very least a comparision of Cre protein expression between the two lines using identical CreER activators is needed.

      (2) In vivo analysis of mCre activities. Why did the authors not use the same driver to compare mCre 1, 4, 7, and 10? The study in Figure 2 uses Alb-roxCre for 1 and 7 and Cdh5-roxCre for 4 and 10, with clearly different levels of activity driven by the two alleles in vivo. Thus whether mCre1 is really better than mCre4 or 10 is not clear.

      (3) Technical details are lacking. The authors provide little specific information regarding the precise way that the new alleles were generated, i.e. exactly what nucleotide sites were used and what the sequence of the introduced transgenes is. Such valuable information must be gleaned from schematic diagrams that are insufficient to fully explain the approach.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors are interested in the relative importance of PRL versus GH and their interactive signaling in breast cancer. After examining GHR-PRLR interactions in response to ligands, they suggest that a reduction in cell surface GHR in response to PRL may be a mechanism whereby PRL can sometimes be protective against breast cancer.

      Strengths:

      The strengths of the study include the interesting question being addressed and the application of multiple complementary techniques, including dSTORM, which is technically very challenging, especially when using double labeling. Thus, dSTORM is used to analyze co-clustering of GHR and PRLR, and, in response to PRL, rapid internalization of GHR and increased cell surface PRLR. Conclusions from Proximity ligation assays are that some GHR and PRLR are within 40 nm (≈ 4 plasma membranes) of each other and that upon ligand stimulation, they move apart. Intact receptor knockin and knockout approaches and receptor constructs without the Jak2 binding domain demonstrate a) a requirement for the PRLR for there to be PRL- driven internalization of GHR, and b) that Jak2-PRLR interactions are necessary for stability of the GHR-PRLR colocalizations.

      Weaknesses:

      Although improved over the first version, the manuscript still suffers from a lack of detail, which in places makes it difficult to evaluate the data and would make it very difficult for the results to be replicated by others.

      Comments on revised version:

      Points for improvement of the manuscript:

      (1) There is still insufficient detail about the proximity ligation assay. For example, PLAs that use reagents from Sigma (as now reported) require primary antibodies from two different species and yet both the anti-PRLR and anti-GHR used for dSTORM were mouse monoclonals. On line 356 it says that the ECD antibodies were used for microscopy and the PLA is microscopy. Were instead the ICD antibodies used for the PLA? If so, how do we know that one or more of the proteins in the very strong "non-specific" bands seen on Figure 5A are not what is being localized? Could you do a Western blot of just cell membrane proteins? There needs to be further clarity/explanation.

      (2) Although the manuscript now shows a Western blot using the antibodies against intracellular regions of the receptor, a full Western blot is not provided for the antibodies against the S2 extracellular domain used for the dSTORM. While I haven't checked the papers showing characterization of the anti-GHR, I did re-check reference 70, which the authors say shows full characterization of the PRLR antibody, and this does not show a full Western (only portions of gels). How do we know that this antibody is not recognizing some other cell surface molecule, the surface expression of which increases upon stimulation of the cells with PRL? Is there only one band when blotting whole cell extracts with either the GHR or PRLR ECD antibodies so we can be sure of specificity? Figure S2 helps some, but these are different cells and the relative expression of the PRLR versus some other potential cell surface protein in these engineered cells may well be completely different.

    1. Joint Public Review:

      The Lee et al. study has been revised in response to reviewer comments. It presents a valuable investigation into the role of the Hippo signaling pathway (specifically wts-1/LATS and yap) in age-dependent neurodegeneration and microtubule dynamics in C. elegans TRNs. The authors convincingly demonstrated that disruption of wts-1/LATS leads to age-associated neuronal abnormalities and enhanced microtubule stabilization, with a genetic link to yap. While the study was praised for its well-conducted and well-controlled approaches, reviewers raised concerns about the specificity of the Hippo pathway's effects to TRNs, the correlation of Hpo signaling decline in TRNs with age, and the mechanistic link between Hpo-mediated gene expression and microtubule regulation. The authors addressed the TRN specificity by suggesting the unique microtubule structure of these neurons might contribute to their susceptibility. They acknowledged the difficulty in detecting Hpo signaling decline specifically in aged TRNs but noted increased YAP-1 nuclear localization in other tissues. Importantly, the authors provided evidence suggesting that YAP-TEAD-mediated transcriptional regulation is responsible for neuronal degeneration, as loss of yap-1 or egl-44 restored the wts-1 mutant phenotype. However, the specific transcriptional targets of YAP-1 regulating microtubule stability remain unidentified, representing a key limitation. The authors also discussed the possibility of non-cell-autonomous effects of YAP-1 and offered explanations for the seemingly moderate impairment of the touch response despite structural damage. Finally, they attributed the shorter lifespan of wts-1 and wts-1; yap-1 mutants to roles of wts-1 beyond TRNs and potential synergistic effects of yap-1. Overall, the study provides significant insights into the Hippo pathway's role in neuronal aging and microtubule dynamics, while acknowledging remaining mechanistic gaps.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Summary of what author's were trying to achieve: In the manuscript by Hoisington et al., the authors utilized a novel conditional neuronal prosap2-interacting protein 1 (Prosapip1) knockout mouse to delineate the effects of both neuronal and dorsal hippocampal (dHP)-specific knockout of Prosapip1 impacts biochemical and electrophysiological neuroadaptations within the dHP that may mediate behaviors associated with this brain region.

      Strengths:

      (1) Methodological Strengths

      a) The generation and use of a conditional neuronal knockout of Prosapip1 is a strength. These mice will be useful for anyone interested in studying or comparing and contrasting the effects of loss of Prosapip1 in different brain regions or in non-neuronal tissues.<br /> b) The use of biochemical, electrophysiological, and behavioral approaches are a strength. By providing data across multiple domains, a picture begins to emerge about the mechanistic role for Prosapip1. While questions still remain, the use of the 3 domains is a strength.<br /> c) The use of both global, constitutive neuronal loss of Prosapip1 and postnatal dHP-specific knockout of Prosapip1 help support and validate the behavioral conclusions.

      (2) Strengths of the results

      a) It is interesting that loss of Prosapip1 leads to specific alterations in the expression of GluN2B and PSD95 but not GluA1 or GluN2A in a post homogenization fraction that the author's term a "synaptic" fraction. Therefore, these results suggest protein-specific modulation of glutamatergic receptors within a "synaptic" fraction.<br /> b) The electrophysiological data demonstrate an NMDAR-dependent alteration in measures of hippocampal synaptic plasticity, including long-term potentiation (LTP) and NMDAR input/output. These data correspond with the biochemical data demonstrating a biochemical effect on GluN2B localization. Therefore, the conclusion that loss of Prosapip1 influences NMDAR function is well supported.<br /> c) The behavioral data suggest deficits in memory in particular novel object recognition and spatial memory, in the Prosapip1 knockout mice. These data are strongly bolstered by both the pan neuronal knockout and the dHP Cre transduction.

      The authors highlight potential future studies to further the understanding of Prosapip1.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study addresses the issue of rapid skill learning and whether individual sequence elements (here: finger presses) are differentially represented in human MEG data. The authors use a decoding approach to classify individual finger elements, and accomplish an accuracy of around 94%. A relevant finding is that the neural representations of individual finger elements dynamically change over the course of learning. This would be highly relevant for any attempts to develop better brain machine interfaces - one now can decode individual elements within a sequence with high precision, but these representations are not static but develop over the course of learning.

      Strengths:

      The work follows a large body of work from the same group on the behavioural and neural foundations of sequence learning. The behavioural task is well established a neatly designed to allow for tracking learning and how individual sequence elements contribute. The inclusion of short offline rest periods between learning epochs has been influential because it has revealed that a lot, if not most of the gains in behaviour (ie speed of finger movements) occur in these so-called micro-offline rest periods.

      The authors use a range of new decoding techniques, and exhaustively interrogate their data in different ways, using different decoding approaches. Regardless of the approach, impressively high decoding accuracies are observed, but when using a hybrid approach that combines the MEG data in different ways, the authors observe decoding accuracies of individual sequence elements from the MEG data of up to 94%.

      Weaknesses:

      A formal analysis and quantification of how head movement may have contributed to the results should be included in the paper or supplemental material. The type of correlated head movements coming from vigorous key presses aren't necessarily visible to the naked eye, and even if arms etc are restricted, this will not preclude shoulder, neck or head movement necessarily; if ICA was conducted, for example, the authors are in the position to show the components that relate to such movement; but eye-balling the data would not seem sufficient. The related issue of eye movements is addressed via classifier analysis. A formal analysis which directly accounts for finger/eye movements in the same analysis as the main result (ie any variance related to these factors) should be presented.

      This reviewer recommends inclusion of a formal analysis that the intra-vs inter parcels are indeed completely independent. For example, the authors state that the inter-parcel features reflect "lower spatially resolved whole-brain activity patterns or global brain dynamics". A formal quantitative demonstration that the signals indeed show "complete independence" (as claimed by the authors) and are orthogonal would be helpful

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this work, the authors investigate the functional difference between the most commonly expressed form of PTH, and a novel point mutation in PTH identified in a patient with chronic hypocalcemia and hyperphosphatemia. The value of this mutant form of PTH as a potential anabolic agent for bone is investigated alongside PTH(1-84), which is a current anabolic therapy. The authors have achieved the aims of the study.

      Strengths:

      The work is novel, as it describes the function of a novel, naturally occurring, variant of PTH in terms of its ability to dimerise, to lead to cAMP activation, to increase serum calcium, and its pharmacological action compared to normal PTH.

      Comments on revisions: No further recommendations for revisions. Acceptable as the paper stands.

      [Editors' note: the original reviews are here, https://doi.org/10.7554/eLife.97579.1.sa1]

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this paper, the authors have performed an antigenic assay for human seasonal N1 neuraminidase using antigens and mouse sera from 2009-2020 (with one avian N1 antigen). This shows two distinct antigen groups. There is poorer reactivity with sera from 2009-2012 against antigens from 2015-2019, and poorer reactivity with sera from 2015-2020 against antigens from 2009-2013. There is a long branch separating these two groups. However, 321 and 423 are the only two positions that are consistently different between the two groups. Therefore these are the most likely cause of these antigenic differences.

      Strengths:

      (1) A sensible rationale was given for the choice of sera, in terms of the genetic diversity.

      (2) There were two independent batches of one of the antigens used for generating sera, which demonstrated the level of heterogeneity in the experimental process.

      (3) Replicate of the Wisconsin/588/2019 antigen (as H1 and H6) is another useful measure of heterogeneity.

      (4) The presentation of the data, e.g. Figure 2, clearly shows two main antigenic groups.

      (5) The most modern sera are more recent than other related papers, which demonstrates that has been no major antigenic change.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Issues with experimental methods<br /> As I am not an experimentalist, I cannot comment fully on the experimental methods. However, I note that BALB/c mice sera were used, whereas outbred ferret sera are typically used in influenza antigenic characterisation, so the antigenic difference observed may not be relevant in humans. Similarly, the mice were immunised with an artificial NA immunogen where the typical approach would be to infect the ferret with live virus intra-nasally.

      (2) Five mice sera were generated per immunogen and then pooled, but data was not presented that demonstrated these sera were sufficiently homogenous that this approach is valid.

      (3) There were no homologous antigens for most of the sera. This makes the responses difficult to interpret as the homologous titre is often used to assess the overall reactivity of a serum. The sequence of the antigens used is not described, which again makes it difficult to interpret the results.

      (4) To be able to untangle the effects of the individual substitutions at 321, 386, and 432, it would have been useful to have included the naturally occurring variants at these positions, or to have generated mutants at these positions. Gao et al clearly show an antigenic difference with ferret sera correlated separately with N386K and I321V/K432E.

      (5) The challenge experiments in Gao et al showed that NI titre was not a good correlate of protection, so that limits the interpretation of these results.

      Issues with the computational methods

      (6) The NAI titres were normalised using the ELISA results, and the motivation for this is not explained. It would be nice to see the raw values.

      (7) It is not clear what value the random forest analysis adds here, given that positions 321 and 432 are the only two that consistently differ between the two groups.

      (8) As with the previous N2 paper, the metric for antigenic distance (the root mean square of the difference between the titres for two sera) is not one that would be consistent when different sera are included. More usual metrics of distance are Archetti-Horsfall, fold down from homologous, or fold down from maximum.

      (9) Antigenic cartography of these data is fraught. I wonder whether 2 dimensions are required for what seems like a 1-dimensional antigenic difference - certainly, the antigens, excluding the H5N1, are in a line. The map may be skewed by the high reactivity Brisbane/18 antigen. It is not clear if the column bases (normalisation factors for calculating antigenic distance) have been adjusted to account for the lack of homologous antigens. It is typical to present antigenic maps with a 1:1 x:y ratio.

      Issues with interpretation

      (10) Figure 2 shows the NAI titres split into two groups for the antigens, however, A/Brisbane is an outlier in the second antigenic group with high reactivity.

      (11) Following Gao et al, I think you can claim that it is more likely that the antigenic change is due to K432E than I321V, based on a comparison of the amino acid change.

      Appraisal:

      Taking into account the limitations of the experimental techniques (which I appreciate are due to resource constraints), this paper meets its aim of measuring the antigenic relationships between 2009-2020 seasonal N1s, showing that there were two main groups. The authors discovered that the difference between the two antigenic groups was likely attributable to positions 321 and 432, as these were the only two positions that were consistently different between the two groups. They came to this finding by using a random forest model, but other simpler methods could have been used.

      Impact:

      This paper contributes to the growing literature on the potential benefit of NA in the influenza vaccine.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Shi and colleagues report the use of modified Cre lines in which the coding region of Cre is disrupted by rox-STOP-rox or lox-STOP-lox sequences to prevent the expression of functional protein in the absence of Dre or Cre activity, respectively. The main purpose of these tools is to enable intersectional or tamoxifen-induced Cre activity with minimal or no leaky activity from the second, Cre-expressing allele. It is a nice study but lacks some functional data required to determine how useful these alleles will be in practice, especially in comparison with the figure line that stimulated their creation.

      Strengths:

      The new tools can reduce Cre leak in vivo.

      Comments on revisions:

      The major improvement in my mind is the inclusion of Supp Fig 7 where the authors compare their loxCre to iSureCre. The discussion is somewhat improved, but still fails to discuss significant issues such as Cre toxicity in detail. As noted by most reviewers, without a biological question the paper is entirely a technical description of a a couple of new tools. However, I do feel that these tools will be of use to the field.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this article, Chunharas and colleagues compared the representational differences of orientation information during a sensory task and a working memory task. By reanalyzing data from a previous fMRI study and applying representational similarity analysis (RSA), they observed that orientation information was represented differently in the two tasks: during visual perception, orientation representation resembled the veridical model, which captures the known naturalistic statistics of orientation information; whereas during visual working memory, a categorical model, which assumes different psychological distances between orientations, better explained the data, particularly in more anterior retinotopic regions. The authors suggest fundamental differences in the representational geometry of visual perception and working memory along the human retinotopic cortex.

      Strengths:

      Examining the differences in representational geometry between perception and working memory has important implications for the understanding of the nature of working memory. This study presents a carefully-executed reanalysis of previous data to address this question. The authors developed a novel method (model construction combined with RSA) to examine the representational geometry of orientation information under different tasks, and the control analyses provide rich, convincing support for their claims.

      Weaknesses:

      Although the control analyses are convincing, I still have alternative explanations for some of the results. I'm also concerned about the low sample size (n = 6 in the fMRI experiment). Overall, I think additional analyses may help to further clarify the issues and strengthen the claims.

      (1) The central claim of the current study is that orientation information is represented in a veridical manner during the sensory task, and in a categorical manner during working memory. However, In the sensory task, a third type of representational geometry was observed, especially in brain regions from V3AB and beyond. These regions showed a symmetric pattern in which oblique orientations (45 and 135 degrees) appeared more similar to each other. In fact, a similar pattern can even be found in V1-V3, although the effect looked weaker. The authors raised two possible explanations for this in the discussion, one being that participants might have used verbal labels (e.g., diagonal) for both orientations, and the other being a lack of attention to orientation. Either way, this suggests that a veridical model may not be the best fit for these ROIs. How would this symmetric model explain the sensory data, in comparison to the veridical model?

      (2) If the symmetric model also explains the sensory data well, I wonder whether this result challenges the authors' central claim, or instead suggests that the sensory task is not ideal for the purpose of the study. One way to address this issue might be to use the sample period of the working memory task as the perception task, as some other studies have been doing (e.g., Kwak & Curtis, 2022). This epoch of data might function as a stronger version of the attention task as the authors discussed in the discussion. What would the representational geometry look like in the sample period? I would also like to note that the current analyses used 5.6-13.6 s after stimulus onset for the memory task, which I think may reflect a mix of sample- and delay-related activity.

      (3) When comparing the veridical and categorical models, it is important to first show the significance of each model before making comparisons. For instance, was the veridical model significant in different ROIs in the memory task? And was either model significant in IPS1-3 in the two tasks? I'm asking about this because the two models appear to be both significant in the memory task, whereas only the veridical model was significant in the sensory task (with overall lower correlation coefficients than the categorical model in the memory task).

      (4) The current study has a low sample size of six participants. With such a small sample, it would be helpful to show results from individual participants. For example, I appreciate that Figures 2D and 3C showed individual data points, but additionally showing the representational geometry plot (i.e., Figure 1C) for each subject could better illustrate the robustness of the effect. Alternatively, the original paper from which the fMRI data were drawn actually had two fMRI experiments with similar task designs. I wonder if the authors could replicate these patterns using data from the second experiment with seven participants. This might provide even stronger support for the current findings with a more reasonable sample size.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work tried to map the synaptic connectivity between the inputs and outputs of the song premotor nucleus, HVC in zebra finches to understand how sensory (auditory) to motor circuits interact to coordinate song production and learning. The authors optimized the optogenetic technique via AAV to manipulate auditory inputs from a specific auditory area one-by-one and recorded synaptic activity from a neuron with whole-cell recording from slice preparation with identification of the projection area by retrograde neuronal tracing. This thorough and detailed analysis provides compelling evidence of synaptic connections between 4 major auditory inputs (3 forebrain and 1 thalamic region) within three projection neurons in the HVC; all areas give monosynaptic excitatory inputs and polysynaptic inhibitory inputs, but proportions of projection to each projection neuron varied. They also find specific reciprocal connections between mMAN and Av. Taken together the authors provide the map of the synaptic connection between intercortical sensory to motor areas which is suggested to be involved in zebra finch song production and learning.

      Strengths:

      The authors optimized optogenetic tools with eGtACR1 by using AAV which allow them to manipulate synaptic inputs in a projection-specific manner in zebra finches. They also identify HVC cell types based on projection area. With their technical advance and thorough experiments, they provided detailed map synaptic connections.

      Weaknesses:

      As it is the study in brain slice, the functional implication of synaptic connectivity is limited. Especially as all the experiments were done in the adult preparation, there could be a gap in discussing the functions of developmental song learning.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Shao et al. investigate the contribution of different cortical areas to working memory maintenance and control processes, an important topic involving different ideas about how the human brain represents and uses information when no longer available to sensory systems. In two fMRI experiments, they demonstrate that human frontal cortex (area sPCS) represents stimulus (orientation) information both during typical maintenance, but even more so when a categorical response demand is present. That is, when participants have to apply an added level of decision control to the WM stimulus, sPCS areas encode stimulus information more than conditions without this added demand. These effects are then expanded upon using multi-area neural network models, recapitulating the empirical gradient of memory vs control effects from visual to parietal and frontal cortices. Multiple experiments and analysis frameworks provide support for the authors' conclusions, and control experiments and analysis are provided to help interpret and isolate the frontal cortex effect of interest. While some alternative explanations/theories may explain the roles of frontal cortex in this study and experiments, important additional analyses have been added that help ensure a strong level of support for these results and interpretations.

      Strengths:

      - The authors use an interesting and clever task design across two fMRI experiments that is able to parse out contributions of WM maintenance alone along with categorical, rule-based decisions. Importantly, the second experiments only uses one fixed rule, providing both an internal replication of Experiment 1's effects and extending them to a different situation when rule switching effects are not involved across mini-blocks.

      - The reported analyses using both inverted encoding models (IEM) and decoders (SVM) demonstrate the stimulus reconstruction effects across different methods, which may be sensitive to different aspects of the relationship between patterns of brain activity and the experimental stimuli.

      - Linking the multivariate activity patterns to memory behavior is critical in thinking about the potential differential roles of cortical areas in sub-serving successful working memory. Figure 3's nicely shows a similar interaction to that of Figure 2 in the role of sPCS in the categorization vs. maintenance tasks. This is an important contribution to the field when we consider how a distributed set of interacting cortical areas support successful working memory behavior.

      - The cross-decoding analysis in Figure 4 is a clever and interesting way to parse out how stimulus and rule/category information may be intertwined, which would have been one of the foremost potential questions or analyses requested by careful readers.

      - Additional ROI analyses in more anterior regions of the PFC help to contextualize the main effects of interest in the sPCS (and no effect in the inferior frontal areas, which are also retinotopic, adds specificity). And, more explanation for how motor areas or preparation are likely not involved strengthens the takeaways of the study (M1 control analysis).

      - Quantitative link via RDM-style analyses between the RNNs constructed and fMRI data.

      Weaknesses:

      - In the given tasks, multiple types of information codes may be present, and more detail on this possibility could always be added analytically or in discussion. However, the authors have added beneficial support to this comparison in this version of the manuscript.

      - The space of possible RNN architectures and their biological feasibility could always be explored more, but links between the fMRI and RNN data provide a good foundation for this work moving forward.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Here, the authors propose that changes in m6A levels may be predictable via a simple model that is based exclusively on mRNA metabolic events. Under this model, m6A mRNAs are "passive" victims of RNA metabolic events with no "active" regulatory events needed to modulate their levels by m6A writers, readers, or erasers; looking at changes in RNA transcription, RNA export, and RNA degradation dynamics is enough to explain how m6A levels change over time.

      The relevance of this study is extremely high at this stage of the epitranscriptome field. This compelling paper is in line with more and more recent studies showing how m6A is a constitutive mark reflecting overall RNA redistribution events. At the same time, it reminds every reader to carefully evaluate changes in m6A levels if observed in their experimental setup. It highlights the importance of performing extensive evaluations on how much RNA metabolic events could explain an observed m6A change.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Sattin, Nardin, and colleagues designed and evaluated corrective microlenses that increase the useable field of view of two long (>6mm) thin (500 um diameter) GRIN lenses used in deep-tissue two-photon imaging. This paper closely follows the thread of earlier work from the same group (esp. Antonini et al, 2020; eLife), filling out the quiver of available extended-field-of-view 2P endoscopes with these longer lenses. The lenses are made by a molding process that appears practical and easy to adopt with conventional two-photon microscopes.

      Simulations are used to motivate the benefits of extended field of view, demonstrating that more cells can be recorded, with less mixing of signals in extracted traces, when recorded with higher optical resolution. In vivo tests were performed in piriform cortex, which is difficult to access, especially in chronic preparations.

      The design, characterization, and simulations are clear and thorough, but they do not break new ground in optical design or biological application. However, the approach shows much promise, including for applications such as miniaturized GRIN-based microscopes. Readers will largely be interested in this work for practical reasons: to apply the authors' corrected endoscopes to their own research.

      Strengths:

      The text is clearly written, the ex vivo analysis is thorough and well supported, and the figures are clear. The authors achieved their aims, as evidenced by the images presented, and were able to make measurements from large numbers of cells simultaneously in vivo in a difficult preparation.

      The authors did a good job of addressing issues I raised in initial review, including analyses of chromaticity and the axial field of view, descriptions of manufacturing and assembly yield, explanations in the text of differences between ex vivo and in vivo imaging conditions, and basic analysis of the in vivo recordings relative to odor presentations. They have also shortened the text, reduced repetition, and better motivated their approach in the introduction.

      Weaknesses:

      As discussed in review and nicely simulated by the authors, the large figure error indicated by profilometry (~10 um in some cases on average) is inconsistent with the optical performance improvements observed, suggesting that those measurements are inaccurate. I see no reason to include these inaccurate measurements.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The IBL here presents an important paper that aims to assess potential reproducibility issues in rodent electrophysiological recordings across labs and suggests solutions to these. The authors carried out a series of analyses on data collected across 10 laboratories while mice performed the same decision-making task, and provided convincing evidence that basic electrophysiology features, single-neuron functional properties, and population-level decoding were fairly reproducible across labs with proper preprocessing. This well-motivated large-scale collaboration allowed systematic assessment of lab-to-lab reproducibility of electrophysiological data, and the suggestions outlined in the paper for streamlining preprocessing pipelines and quality metrics will provide general guidance for the field, especially with continued effort to benchmark against standard practices (such as manual curation).

      The authors have carefully incorporated our suggestions. As a result, the paper now better reflects where reproducibility is affected when using common, simple, and more complex analyses and preprocessing methods, and it is more informative-and more reflective of the field overall. We thank the reviewers for this thorough revision. We have 2 remaining suggestions on text clarification:

      (1) Regarding benchmarking the automated metrics to manual curation of units: although we appreciate that a proper comparison may require a lot of effort potentially beyond the scope of the current paper; we do think that explicit discussion regarding this point is needed in the text, to remind the readers (and indeed future generations of electrophysiologists) the pros and cons of different approaches.

      In addition to what the authors have currently stated (line 469-470):<br /> "Another significant limitation of the analysis presented here is that we have not been able to assess the extent to which other choices of quality metrics and inclusion criteria might have led to greater or lesser reproducibility."

      Maybe also add:<br /> "In particular, a thorough comparison of automated metrics against a careful, large, manually-curated dataset, is an important benchmarking step for future studies.

      (2) The authors now include in Figure 3-Figure Supplement 1 that highlight how much probe depth is adjusted by using electrophysiological features such as LFP power to estimate probe and channel depth. This plot is immensely informative for the field, as it implies that there can be substantial variability-sometimes up to 1 mm discrepancy between insertions-in depth estimation based on anatomical DiI track tips alone. Using electrophysiological features in this way for probe depth estimation is currently not standard in the field and has only been made possible with Neuropixels, which span several millimeters. These figures highlight that this should be a critical step in preprocessing pipelines, and the paper provides solid evidence for this.

      Currently, this part of the figure is only subtly referenced to in the text. We think it would be helpful to explicitly reference this particular panel with discussions of its implication in the text.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The manuscript consists of two separate but interlinked investigations: genomic epidemiology and virulence assessment of Salmonella Dublin. ST10 dominates the epidemiological landscape of S. Dublin, while ST74 was uncommonly isolated. Detailed genomic epidemiology of ST10 unfolded the evolutionary history of this common genotype, highlighting clonal expansions linked to each distinct geography. Notably, North American ST10 was associated with more antimicrobial resistance compared to others. The authors also performed long read sequencing on a subset of isolates (ST10 and ST74), and uncovered a novel recombinant virulence plasmid in ST10 (IncX1/IncFII/IncN). Separately, the authors performed cell invasion and cytotoxicity assays on the two S. Dublin genotypes, showing differential responses between the two STs. ST74 replicates better intracellularly in macrophage compared to ST10, but both STs induced comparable cytotoxicity levels. Comparative genomic analyses between the two genotypes showed certain genetic content unique to each genotype, but no further analyses were conducted to investigate which genetic factors likely associated with the observed differences. The study provides a comprehensive and novel understanding on the evolution and adaptation of two S. Dublin genotypes, which can inform public health measures. The methodology included in both approaches were sound and written in sufficient detail, and data analysis were performed with rigour. Source data were fully presented and accessible to readers.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have addressed all the points raised by the reviewer. The manuscript is now much enhanced in clarity and accuracy. The re-written Discussion is more relevant and brings in comparison with other invasive Salmonella serotypes.

      Comments:

      In light of the metadata supplied in this revision, for Australian isolates, all human cases of ST74 (n=7) were from faeces (assuming from gastroenteritis) while 18/40 of ST10 were from invasive specimen (blood and abscess). This may contradict with the manuscript's finding and discussion on different experiment phenotypes of the two STs, with ST74 showing more replication in macrophages and potentially more invasive. Thus, the reviewer suggests the authors to mention this disparity in the Discussion, and discuss possible reasons underlying this disparity. This can strengthen the author's rationale for further in vivo studies.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The main observation that the sperm from CRISP proteins 1 and 3 KO lines are post-fertilization less developmentally competent is convincing. The data showing progressive acquisition of the sperm defects during epididymal transport and the exchange fluid studies showing the altered epididymal environment are important. However, the molecular characterization of the mechanism(s) that leads to these defects requires additional studies.

      Strengths:

      The generation of these double mutant mice is valuable for the field. Moreover, the fact that the double mutant line of Crisp 1 and 3 is phenotypically different from the Crisp 1 and 4 line suggests different functions of these epididymis proteins. The methods used to demonstrate that developmental defects are largely due to post-fertilization defects are also a considerable strength. The initial characterization that these sperm have altered intracellular Ca2+ levels, and increased rates of DNA fragmentation are valuable. The increase fragmentation of control sperm DNA when exposed to mutant epididymal fluid is significant and an excellent platform for future studies.

      Weaknesses:

      The study is mechanistically incomplete because evidence of how these proteins alter the environment is not shown. What are the target(s) of these proteins that result in increased Ca2+?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors investigate the role of BEND2, a novel regulator of meiosis, in both male and female fertility. Huang et al have created a mouse model where the full-length BEND2 transcript is depleted but the truncated BEND2 version remains. This mouse model is fertile, and the authors used it to study the role of BEND2 on both male and female meiosis. Overall, the full-length BEND2 appears dispensable for male meiosis. The more interesting phenotype was observed in females. Females exhibit a lower ovarian reserve suggesting that full-length BEND2 is involved in the establishment of the primordial follicle pool.

      Strengths:

      The authors generated a mouse model that enabled them to study the role of BEND2 in meiosis. The role of BEND2 in female fertility is novel and enhances our knowledge of genes involved in the establishment of the primordial follicle pool.

      Weaknesses highlighted previously:

      The manuscript extensively explores the role of BEND2 in male meiosis; however, a more interesting result was obtained from the study of female mice.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Turi, Teng and the team used state of the art techniques to provide convincing evidence on the infraslow oscillation of DG cells during NREM sleep, and how serotonergic innervation modulates hippocampal activity pattern during sleep and memory. First, they showed that the glutamatergic DG cells become activated following an infraslow rhythm during NREM sleep. In addition, the infraslow oscillation in the DG is correlated with rhythmic serotonin release during sleep. Finally, they found that specific knockdown of 5-HT receptors in the DG impairs the infraslow rhythm and memory, suggesting that serotonergic signaling is crucial for regulating DG activity during sleep. Given that the functional role of infraslow rhythm still remains to be studied, their findings deepen our understanding on the role of DG cells and serotonergic signaling in regulating infraslow rhythm, sleep microarchitecture and memory.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Using sequences of short videos to elicit emotional changes in participants, Malamud & Huys demonstrate how a brief, controlled emotion regulation intervention (distancing) can effectively alter subsequent emotion ratings. The authors employ latent state-space models to capture the trajectories of emotion ratings, leveraging tools from control theory to quantify the intervention's impact on emotion dynamics.

      Strengths:

      The experiment is well-designed and tailored to the computational modeling approach advanced in the paper. It also relies on a selection of stimuli that were previously validated. Within the constraints of a controlled experiment, the intervention successfully implements a relatively common tool of psychotherapeutic treatment, ensuring its clinical relevance.

      The computational modeling is grounded in the well-established framework of dynamical systems and control theory. This foundation offers a conceptually clear formalization along with powerful quantification tools that go beyond previous more data-driven approaches.

      Overall, the study presents a coherent approach that bridges concepts from clinical psychology and computational theories, providing a timely stepping stone toward advancing quantified, evidence-based psychological interventions targetting emotion control.

      Weaknesses:

      A primary limitation of this study, acknowledged by the authors, is its reliance on self-reports of participants' emotional states. Although considerable effort was made to minimize expectation effects, further research is needed to confirm that the observed behavioral changes reflect genuine alterations in emotional states. Additionally, the generalizability of the findings to long-term remediation strategies remains an open question.

      Second, the statistical analysis, particularly the computational approach, sometimes lacks sufficient detail and refinement. While I will not elaborate on specific points here, one notable issue is the interpretation of the intrinsic matrix (A). The model-free analysis reveals correlations between emotions at a given time or within an emotional state across time points. However, it does not provide evidence to support lagged interactions across states that would justify non-diagonal elements in A. The other result concerning the dynamics matrix only highlights a trend in the dominant eigenvalue, which is difficult to interpret in isolation. The absence of a statistically significant group x intervention interaction furthermore makes this finding a little compelling. This weakens the study's conclusions about the importance of intrinsic dynamics, as claimed in the title.

      Finally, to avoid potential misunderstandings of their work, the authors should be more careful about their use of terms pertaining to the control theory and take the time to properly define them. For example, the "controllability" of emotional states can either denote that those states are more changeable (control theory definition), or, conversely, more tightly regulated (common interpretation, as used in the abstract). This is true for numerous terms (stability, sensitivity, Gramian, etc.) for which no clear definition nor references are provided. Readers unfamiliar with the framework of control theory will likely be at a loss without more guidance.