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  1. Dec 2015
    1. All of which makes Vint Virga's project — sustaining that illusion, by incremental changes in how the animals are treated — seem more than a little quixotic. Last August, the Costa Rican government announced it was closing all its zoos. The new policy, the government declared, was "no cages." (A court ruling has so far kept the zoos open.) I think we're moving slowly toward the same sensibility. In 25 years, there will likely still be some way for Americans to see exotic animals. But I will be pretty surprised if those places have cages, mirrors, smoke machines, and conference-room tanks for 12,000-pound whales. There may be nature preserves. But it seems to me that we're pretty rapidly reaching the end of the era of the modern urban zoo

      strong concluding paragraph, has sources and evidence

    2. Last August, the Costa Rican government announced it was closing all its zoos

      evidence that greatly supports the author's main point, sourced

    3. It is hard to avoid the conclusion that in some way the animals understand that the world around them is an artificial one, that these phobias and psychotic episodes represent reactions to that artifice, or subversions of it.

      supporting information

    4. A giraffe who freaks out about men with large cameras, a brown bear whose cage door is the subject of his obsessive compulsive disorder, a 5,000-pound killer whale who shows her trainer who is boss by dragging him underwater for just about as long as he can live, before letting him go

      evidence, sourced

    5. In the first two years of her life, my daughter has seen more of the savannah, via National Geographic's website, than I did in the 30-plus years before she was born

      connecting reader

      sub-claim

    6. I think these fabrications comprise a great deal of what zoos depend upon, and what has begun to fail: a kind of double illusion, in which the people are convinced that they are seeing animals in something like their natural state and the animals, most of whom have never lived in the wild, are convinced that they are at home

      discrediting counter-argument

      sub-claim

    7. Samuels also visits the set designers who fabricate the present-day exhibit spaces, and learns about the tricks they employ to make the enclosures seem more realistic: smoke machines, "half-slivered" mirrors, native American trees that kind of resemble those in postcard versions of the Congo

      counter-argument

    8. But I found

      unlike the last article, this author uses the conjunction at the beginning of the sentence in a more appropriate way and so far this is the only one I have noticed. the article keeps a semi-formal tone (with small interjections that lighten the mood).

    9. Now we understand that animal cognition and social behavior is for many species pretty sophisticated, and there is a new form of intelligence to define ourselves against: Not what makes us different than a chimpanzee, but what makes us different than Siri? Perhaps this is pushing us toward a closer identification with the animals and helping to shape some of the discomfort with zoos

      sub-claim, possible main point

    10. For a very long post-Enlightenment period, human beings asked themselves what made them different from the apes, and fixed on logic and reason as the highest human characteristics; zoos were a way to engage that question while emphasizing that there was a great distinction indeed.

      veeerrrryyyyy good piece of information, gets the reader thinking and is an attention getter

    11. t got attention mostly for a discovery Samuels made, in the archives, that the leading figure in the early history of the Bronx Zoo was a eugenicist propagandist named Madison Grant who corresponded with Hitler, and saw his work at the Zoo in the same vein, as rescuing the perfect form of a species before it declined. (Grant once exhibited a human pygmy named Ota Benga at the Zoo; crowds of 40,000 greeted Ota Benga by jeering and poking him; eventually, he committed suicide.) The Grant story caught on in part because it highlighted what is anachronistic about zoos.

      connecting reader using a touchy topic

    12. "This is the worst thing I've seen in a long time," Virga says.

      sourced quote to support main point

    13. He spends time alone with the giraffe so she might grow comfortable with him, feeds her branches when visitors are around so she grows more comfortable with the scenario. He teaches zoo technicians how to medicate animals without freaking them out. Occasionally, for the most stubborn cases, he prescribes Prozac.

      evidence, crediting subject

    14. A giraffe develops a compulsive fear of men with large cameras. Halberstadt writes, "Disorders like phobias, depression and OCD, documented at zoos, don’t appear to have analogues among animals living in the wild

      sourced sub-claim

    15. But most of the issues are hard to imagine arising in the wild. A brown bear develops a form of obsessive compulsive disorder, repeatedly, almost ritually, smashing his head into a metal door in his enclosure. A harbor seal is uneasy about being treated by the vet

      evidence, sub-claims

    16. Libby can be kind of a jerk," a zookeeper tells Virga, speaking of a quarrelsome sheep — no wonder other sheep have been fighting with her.

      connect reader, keep attention

    17. Called in by zoos to assess a psychologically troubled animal, he tries to understand the source of the stress and alter it

      describing subject

    18. a gentle soul with some weenie strains.

      connecting reader, fallacy

    19. though whether that actually happens still seems a little unclear to me — but this was a more modest case, that zoos are doing much less harm to animals than they once did, that they deserve credit for being re-conceived from the zoo animal's point of view. As for what the zoo animal's point of view is, that's the province of Vint Virga, the behaviorist subject of the Times Magazine piece.

      discrediting counter-argument

    20. Zoos have changed incredibly in the past thirty years," a second-generation zoo director named Mark Reed tells Halberstadt. "These days, moats and glass have replaced cages; there are education departments and conservation initiatives. And full-time vets, antibiotics and better diets have doubled and in some cases tripled animals’ life spans in captivity.” Zoo advocates tend to argue that exhibiting animals leads to a stronger conservation movement

      counter-argumenet

    21. Soon, state legislators in California and New York introduced bills making it illegal to keep orcas in captivity. SeaWorld's profits took a hit; CNN and the Times started musing about its long-term viability as a business; protests mounted. But the case against SeaWorld always seemed a little narrowly construed. If it was an abomination to keep a killer whale in a tiny cage, then why was it okay to keep a polar bear in a similarly restrictive enclosure? Sure, SeaWorld's marketing is particularly crass, but if the basic problem is that intelligent, social animals are being kept in inhumane conditions that may be driving them insane, then shouldn't that same principle apply to other species, too? It's hard to think that SeaWorld should be put out of business and not have complicated thoughts about the National Zoo. You can't just stop at the orca; you've got to consider the orangutan

      evidence, connect reader

    22. If you were in a bathtub for 25 years, don't you think you'd get a little psychotic?"

      evidence, connecting reader, sub-claim

    23. hat film's subject is Tillikum, a 12,000-pound male killer whale who had been for years a star attraction at Sea World, a celebrated run that ended when he attacked and killed his trainer immediately following a live show.

      evidence, sourced

      connecting reader

    24. ut the whole animal captivity picture began to look decidedly more grim and less defensible (to me, and also to lawmaking bodies) in 2013, with the release of the sublime documentary Blackfish.

      sourced evidence

    25. Madagascar and Planet of the Apes,

      connect reader

    26. afety, mostly, and access to medical care, and the presence of a team of trained professionals who work very hard to entertain and engage you

      acknowledging counter-argument, gaining points to his credibility

    27. one million times the territory that they do in captivity, and zoo polar bears suffer all kinds of pathologies and maladies

      sub-claim

    28. One long-term 1983 study of animal mortality at the San Diego Zoo found cannibalism and infanticide, widespread malnutrition, and frequent deaths from tranquilizer use. (An online summary is included in the essay here.

      sourced, evidence

      sub-claim

    29. the zoo eradicationists tend to cite a somewhat melodramatic Rilke poem about a panther caged in a Paris zoo: "It seems to him there are / a thousand bars; and beyond the bars no world"

      connect reader, source

    30. My daughter is not quite 2, and the zoo brings out all of her best and least complicated emotions — awe, delight, empathy

      connect reader

    31. I realize that to even raise this issue makes you sound like some kind of sour, rule-bound vegetarian, so let me make clear my position up front: I love zoos.

      connecting reader

      acknowledges a negative viewpoint

    32. whether there is a good reason for zoos to exist at all.

      main point

    33. the psychological lives of their animals.

      I view this, personally, as an attention getter

  2. Nov 2015
    1. Which means that the central illusion of the zoo is no longer holding. The animals know.

      I found this interesting, because he explains how animals are starting to think which you don't really think about when you think about the animals at the zoo.

    2. For instance, polar bears in nature cover one million times the territory that they do in captivity, and zoo polar bears suffer all kinds of pathologies and maladies.

      counter-argument, because he loves zoos.

    3. That film's subject is Tillikum, a 12,000-pound male killer whale who had been for years a star attraction at Sea World, a celebrated run that ended when he attacked and killed his trainer immediately following a live show.

      It's a credible source and also a secondary.

    4. Problems seem particularly acute, other biologists have found, among animals who have the greatest roaming ranges in the wild.

      Credible source and is a secondary.

    5. But there are advantages to being in zoos, from the animal's perspective — safety, mostly, and access to medical care, and the presence of a team of trained professionals who work very hard to entertain and engage you

      Throwing a bit of counter argument in the middle of the evidence he uses to argue his points that modern zoos may soon be a thing of the past. This counter-argument would be the exact idea I would ask the author. My general opinion is that zoos operating with the purpose of rehabilitating injured or sick animals, and zoos with a high release rate, are beneficial to society and the animals they serve.

    6. One long-term 1983 study of animal mortality at the San Diego Zoo found cannibalism and infanticide, widespread malnutrition, and frequent deaths from tranquilizer use. (An online summary is included in the essay here.)

      Scholarly source.

    7. A couple of years ago, the essayist David Samuels published a long piece in Harper's on the Bronx Zoo.

      Another non-scholarly source.

    8. A giraffe develops a compulsive fear of men with large cameras. Halberstadt writes, "Disorders like phobias, depression and OCD, documented at zoos, don’t appear to have analogues among animals living in the wild."

      The assumption that mental disorders aren't present in wild animals is false. There have been documented cases of wild animals with PTSD and other related mental illnesses. It stands to mention , though, that the reason we don't see many of them might be because they simply can't survive with that condition. Animals in zoos may have an advantage, then, by receiving proper care and medication for it.

    9. sublime documentary Blackfish.

      Using Blackfish as a source, which is hinky because Blackfish is hardly a scholarly source and has very, very mixed reviews. Also uses the opinionated term "sublime," which gives away his true stance on this issue.

    10. whether there is a good reason for zoos to exist at all.

      Definitely seems to be the main claim of the argument, as the rest of the article is filled with examples and reasons to support both sides of the argument.

    11. Perhaps this is pushing us toward a closer identification with the animals and helping to shape some of the discomfort with zoos

      But still, this seems like a big leap to me. I follow what he's saying but not necessarily convinced of this opinion.

    12. Now we understand that animal cognition and social behavior is for many species pretty sophisticated, and there is a new form of intelligence to define ourselves against: Not what makes us different than a chimpanzee, but what makes us different than Siri?

      This could be a rhetorical strategy. Made me think.

    13. As for what the zoo animal's point of view is, that's the province of Vint Virga, the behaviorist subject of the Times Magazine piece.

      Up to this point he has shown some evidence both ways, now he is introducing back the main point.

    14. I love zoos.

      He makes his opinion on this clear here, so does that count as a bias that he has memories with his daughter there?

    15. An online summary is included in the essay here

      His evidence here is secondary but I think it's a good thing he put it in. The first source is a book which I'm not sure how many people are going to go through and fact check that.

    16. Zoo advocates tend to argue that exhibiting animals leads to a stronger conservation movement, though whether that actually happens still seems a little unclear to me — but this was a more modest case, that zoos are doing much less harm to animals than they once did, that they deserve credit for being re-conceived from the zoo animal's point of view.

      Here he is trying to discredit the information presented by this section.

    17. If it was an abomination to keep a killer whale in a tiny cage, then why was it okay to keep a polar bear in a similarly restrictive enclosure?

      Associative trail, linking us back to the zoo problem

    18. "If you were in a bathtub for 25 years, don't you think you'd get a little psychotic?"

      Author using emotion to persuade

    19. For instance, polar bears in nature cover one million times the territory that they do in captivity, and zoo polar bears suffer all kinds of pathologies and maladies.

      Author tries to make a point about downfalls of zoos, but the point has no credibility.

    20. A giraffe develops a compulsive fear of men with large cameras. Halberstadt writes, "Disorders like phobias, depression and OCD, documented at zoos, don’t appear to have analogues among animals living in the wild."

      Primary source, direct quote

    21. sublime documentary Blackfish.

      Used as a source, similar to the explanation of the poem previously stated. Primary source

    22. : whether there is a good reason for zoos to exist at all.

      this is the author's MAIN claim, although many subclaims are made throughout the entire article.

    23. Last August, the Costa Rican government announced it was closing all its zoos. The new policy, the government declared, was "no cages." (A court ruling has so far kept the zoos open.) I think we're moving slowly toward the same sensibility.

      Examples of why we might approach the closing of all zoos

    24. A giraffe who freaks out about men with large cameras, a brown bear whose cage door is the subject of his obsessive compulsive disorder, a 5,000-pound killer whale who shows her trainer who is boss by dragging him underwater for just about as long as he can live,

      I've never thought of this killer whale situation in this way before. This is very interesting.

    25. I think these fabrications comprise a great deal of what zoos depend upon, and what has begun to fail: a kind of double illusion, in which the people are convinced that they are seeing animals in something like their natural state and the animals, most of whom have never lived in the wild, are convinced that they are at home.

      another claim made by the author

    26. A couple of years ago, the essayist David Samuels published a long piece in Harper's on the Bronx Zoo. It got attention mostly for a discovery Samuels made, in the archives, that the leading figure in the early history of the Bronx Zoo was a eugenicist propagandist named Madison Grant who corresponded with Hitler, and saw his work at the Zoo in the same vein, as rescuing the perfect form of a species before it declined.

      This statement made really affects the reader's emotions strongly by bringing up the concept of Hitler and this woman treating these animals in a Hitler way.

    27. Occasionally, for the most stubborn cases, he prescribes Prozac.

      Really treating animals like humans aren't they?

    28. "Zoos have changed incredibly in the past thirty years," a second-generation zoo director named Mark Reed tells Halberstadt. "These days, moats and glass have replaced cages; there are education departments and conservation initiatives. And full-time vets, antibiotics and better diets have doubled and in some cases tripled animals’ life spans in captivity.”

      Here the author provides a source that counter argues the previously stated information about animals living shorter lives and going crazy in zoos.

    29. Sure, SeaWorld's marketing is particularly crass, but if the basic problem is that intelligent, social animals are being kept in inhumane conditions that may be driving them insane, then shouldn't that same principle apply to other species, too? It's hard to think that SeaWorld should be put out of business and not have complicated thoughts about the National Zoo. You can't just stop at the orca; you've got to consider the orangutan.

      I think this is one of the author's main claims. I think he is trying to make the point that you can't just apply one moral concept to one particular animal.

    30. But there are advantages to being in zoos, from the animal's perspective — safety, mostly, and access to medical care, and the presence of a team of trained professionals who work very hard to entertain and engage you — and the disadvantages of being an animal in a place like the National Zoo have not always seemed to outweigh the security. In retrospect, you can see a form of anti-zoo sentiment building, reflected in films like

      begins to form a counter-argument here about the main claim he talks about

    31. One long-term 1983 study

      source used as backup for his argument

    32. (the zoo eradicationists tend to cite a somewhat melodramatic Rilke poem about a panther caged in a Paris zoo: "It seems to him there are / a thousand bars; and beyond the bars no world"),

      The author connects to a poem used by zoo eradicationists to give the reader an bit of background to the topic he is about to discuss.

    33. Soon, state legislators in California and New York introduced bills making it illegal to keep orcas in captivity. SeaWorld's profits took a hit; CNN and the Times started musing about its long-term viability as a business; protests mounted. But the case against SeaWorld always seemed a little narrowly construed.

      I find the source credible and it does bring to my attention that the matter of animals in captivity is now being taken seriously by politicians also.

    34. Grant once exhibited a human pygmy named Ota Benga at the Zoo; crowds of 40,000 greeted Ota Benga by jeering and poking him; eventually, he committed suicide.

      I found an article and story that goes with this if anyone is interested in hating humanity today:

    35. One long-term 1983 study of animal mortality at the San Diego Zoo found cannibalism and infanticide, widespread malnutrition, and frequent deaths from tranquilizer use.

      This evidence is scholarly and credible.

    36. The Case for the End of the Modern Zoo

      I think this is the main claim the author is making.