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    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript submitted by Koch et al. describes a novel approach to collect budding yeast cells in metaphase I or metaphase II by synthetically activating the spinde checkpoint (SAC). The arrest is transient and reversible. This synchronization strategy will be extremely useful for studying meiosis I and meiosis II, and compare the two divisions. The authors characterized this so named syncSAC approach and could confirm previous observations that the SAC arrest is less efficient in meiosis I than in meiosis II. They found that downregulation of the SAC response through PP1 phosphatase is stronger in meiosis I than in meiosis II. The authors then went on to purify kinetochore-associated proteins from metaphase I and II extracts for proteome and phosphoproteome analysis. Their data will be of significant interest to the cell cycle community (they compared their datasets also to kinetochores purified from cells arrested in prophase I and -with SynSAC in mitosis).

      Significance:

      The technique described here will be of great interest to the cell cycle community. Furthermore, the authors provide data sets on purified kinetochores of different meiotic stages and compare them to mitosis. This paper will thus be highly cited, for the technique, and also for the application of the technique.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      In this study Hammond et al. investigated the role of Dual-specificity Tyrosine Phosphorylation regulated Kinase 1A (DYRK1) in G1/S transition. By exploiting Dependency Map portal, they identified a previously unexplored protein FAM53C as potential regulator of G1/S transition. Using RNAi, they confirmed that depletion of FAM53C suppressed proliferation of human RPE1 cells and that this phenotype was dependent on the presence protein RB. In addition, they noted increased level of CDKN1A transcript and p21 protein that could explain G1 arrest of FAM53C-depleted cells but surprisingly, they did not observe activation of other p53 target genes. Proteomic analysis identified DYRK1 as one of the main interactors of FAM53C and the interaction was confirmed in vitro. Further, they showed that purified FAM53C blocked the ability of DYRK1 to phosphorylate cyclin D in vitro although the activity of DYRK1 was likely not inhibited (judging from the modification of FAM53C itself). Instead, it seems more likely that FAM53C competes with cyclin D in this assay. Authors claim that the G1 arrest caused by depletion of FAM53C was rescued by inhibition of DYRK1 but this was true only in cells lacking functional p53. This is quite confusing as DYRK1 inhibition reduced the fraction of G1 cells in p53 wild type cells as well as in p53 knock-outs, suggesting that FAM53C may not be required for regulation of DYRK1 function. Instead of focusing on the impact of FAM53C on cell cycle progression, authors moved towards investigating its potential (and perhaps more complex) roles in differentiation of IPSCs into cortical organoids and in mice. They observed a lower level of proliferating cells in the organoids but if that reflects an increased activity of DYRK1 or if it is just an off-target effect of the genetic manipulation remains unclear. Even less clear is the phenotype in FAM53C knock-out mice. Authors did not observe any significant changes in survival nor in organ development but they noted some behavioral differences. Whether and how these are connected to the rate of cellular proliferation was not explored. In the summary, the study identified previously unknown role of FAM53C in proliferation but failed to explain the mechanism and its physiological relevance at the level of tissues and organism.

      Comments on the previous version:

      In the revised version of the manuscript, authors addressed most of the critical points. They now include new data with depletion of FAM53C using single siRNAs that show small but significant enrichment of population of the G1 cells. This G1 arrest is likely caused by a combined effects on induction of p21 expression and decreased levels of cyclin D1. Authors observed that inhibition of DYRK1 rescued cyclin D1 levels in FAM53 depleted cells suggesting that FAM53C may inhibit DYRK1. This possibility is also supported by in vitro experiments. On the other hand, inhibition of DYRK1 did not rescue the G1 arrest upon depletion of FAM53C, suggesting that FAM53C may have also DYRK1-independent role in G1. Functional rescue experiments with cyclin D1 mutants and detection of DYRK1 activity in cells would be necessary to conclusively explain the function of FAM53C in progression through G1 phase but unfortunately these experiments were technically not possible. Knock out of FAM53C in iPSCs and in mice suggest that FAM53C may have additional functions besides the cell cycle control and/or that adaptation may have occurred in these model systems. Overall, the study implicated FAM53C in fine tuning DYRK1 activity in cells that may to some extent influence the progression through G1 phase. In addition, FAM53C may also have DYRK1 and cell cycle independent functions that remain to be addressed by future studies.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Joint analysis of multiple modalities in single cells will provide a comprehensive view of cell fate states. In this manuscript, Bhardwaj et al developed a single-cell multi-omics assay, T-ChIC, to simultaneously capture histone modifications and the full-length transcriptome and applied the method to early embryos of zebrafish. The authors observed a decoupled relationship between the chromatin modifications and gene expression at early developmental stages. The correlation becomes stronger as development proceeds, as genes are silenced by the cis-spreading of the repressive marker H3k27me3. Overall, the work is well performed, and the results are meaningful and interesting to readers in the epigenomic and embryonic development fields.

      Strengths:

      This work utilized a new single-cell multi-omics method and generated abundant epigenomics and transcriptomics datasets for cells covering multiple key developmental stages of zebrafish.

      Weaknesses:

      The data analysis was superficial and mainly focused on the correspondence between the two modalities. The discussion of developmental biology was limited.

      Overall, the T-ChIC method is efficient and user-friendly, and the single-cell datasets for zebrafish early development are also valuable. Audiences in the field of epigenomic and embryonic development will benefit from this work.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have answered my previous concerns.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Measurements of the reward positivity, an electrophysiological component elicited during reward evaluation, have previously been used to understand how self-benefitting effort expenditure influences processing of rewards. The present study is the first to complement those measurements with electrophysiological reward after-effects of effort expenditure during prosocial acts. The results provide solid evidence that effort adds reward value when the recipient of the reward is the self but discounts reward value when the beneficiary is another individual.

      Strengths:

      An important strength of the study is that amount of effort, the prospective reward, the recipient of the reward, and whether the reward was actually gained or not were parametrically and orthogonally varied. In addition, the researchers examined whether the pattern of results generalized to decisions about future efforts. The sample size (N=40) and mixed-effects regression models are also appropriate for addressing the key research questions. Those conclusions are plausible and adequately supported by statistical analyses.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript reports a novel and quite important study of chimerism among common marmosets. As the authors discuss, it has been known for years that marmosets display chimerism across a number of tissues. However, as the authors also recognize, the scope and details of this chimerism have been controversial. Some prior publications have suggested that the chimerism only involves cells derived from hematopoietic stem cells, while other publications have suggested more cell types can also be chimeric, including a wide range of cell types present in multiple organs. The present authors address this question and several other important issues by using snRNA-seq to track the expression of host and sibling-derived mRNAs across multiple tissues and cell types. The results are clear and provide convincing evidence that for the various organs analyzed, all chimeric cells are derived from hematopoietic cell lineages.

      This work will have impact on studies using marmosets to investigate various biological questions, but will have biggest impact on neuroscience and studies of cellular function within the brain. The demonstration that microglia and macrophages from different siblings from a single pregnancy, with different genomes expressing different transcriptomes, are commonly present within specific brain structures of a single individual opens a number of new opportunities to study microglia and macrophage function as well as interations between microglia, macrophages and other cell types.

      Strengths:

      The paper has a number of important strengths. This analysis employs the first unambiguous approach providing a clear answer to the question of whether sibling-derived chimeric cells arise only from hematopoietic lineages or from a wider array of embryonic sources. That is a long-standing open question and these snRNA-seq data seem to provide a clear answer, at least for brain and liver and kidney. In addition, the present authors investigate quantitative variation in chimeric cell proportions across several dimensions, comparing the proportion of chimeric cells across individual marmosets, across organs within an individual and across brain regions within an individual. All these are significant questions, and the answers have important implications for multiple research areas. Marmosets are increasingly being used for a range of neuroscience studies, and a better understanding of the process that leads to chimerism of microglia and macrophages in the marmoset brain is a valuable and timely contribution. But this work also has implications for other lines of study such as defining embryological and development processes and the potential to track specific cell populations within genetically engineered marmosets. Third, the snRNA-seq data will be made available through Brain Initiative NeMO portal and the software used to quantify host vs. sibling cell proportions in different biosamples will be available through Github.

      Comments on revisions:

      Several minor weaknesses have been addressed by the authors in a revision of the original manuscript. Each of my concerns and perceived weaknesses regarding the initial submission have been satisfactorily addressed in the revision.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Infants' auditory brain responses reveal processing of music (clearly different from shuffled music patterns) from the age of 3 months; however, they do not show related increase in spontaneous movement activity to music until the age of 12 months.

      Strengths:

      This is a nice paper, well designed, with sophisticated analyses and presenting clear results filling an important gap about early infant sensitivity, detection, and differentiation of musical sounds. The addition of EEG recordings (specifically ERPs) in response to music presentations at 3 different infant ages in the first postnatal year is important, and the manipulation of the music stimuli into shuffled, high and low pitch to capture differences in brain response processing and spontaneous movements is interesting. Further, the movement analysis based on Quantity of Movements (QoM) and movement subdivision into 10 distinct Principal Movements (PMs) is novel and creative.

      Overall, results show that ERPs responses to music occurs earlier than QoM in early development, and that even at 12 months, motor responses to music remain coarse and not rhythmically aligned with the music tempo. This work increases our fundamental understanding of infants' early music perception in relation to auditory processing and motor response.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed my questions in their revision. I have no other questions. Thanks again for the opportunity to read and evaluate this interesting work.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this paper the authors seek to disentangle brain areas that encode the subjective value of individual stimuli/items (input regions) from those that accumulate those values into decision variables (integrators) for value-based choice. The authors used a novel task in which stimulus presentation was slowed down to ensure that such a dissociation was possible using fMRI despite its relatively low temporal resolution. In addition, the authors leveraged the fact that gaze increases item value, providing a means of distinguishing brain regions that encode decision variables from those that encode other quantities such as conflict or time-on-task. The authors adopt a region-of-interest approach based on an extensive previous literature and found that the ventral striatum and vmPFC correlated with the item values and not their accumulation whereas the pre-SMA, IPS and dlPFC correlated more strongly with their accumulation. Further analysis revealed that the pre-SMA was the only one of the three integrator regions to also exhibit gaze modulation.

      The study uses a highly innovative design and addresses an important and timely topic. The manuscript is well-written and engaging, while the data analysis appears highly rigorous.

      Weaknesses:

      With 23 subjects the study has relatively low statistical power for fMRI although the within-subjects design and relatively high trial count reduces these concerns.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary

      The authors introduce DNA O-MAP, a method that combines oligo-based in situ hybridization with peroxidase-mediated proximity biotinylation to profile proteins and DNA-DNA interactions linked to targeted genomic regions. In the revised manuscript, they expand the method beyond repetitive elements by profiling non-repetitive gene clusters (HOXA and HOXB), studying inhibitor-induced chromatin remodeling, and differentiating homolog-specific proteomes on both the active and inactive X chromosome. These additions considerably broaden the scope of the work and indicate that DNA O-MAP is currently most effective for analyzing gene-cluster size or domain-level chromatin environments, rather than focusing on individual promoters or cis-regulatory elements.

      Strengths

      The study demonstrates that DNA O-MAP can be applied to both repetitive domains and non-repetitive genomic regions, including gene clusters spanning 80 kilobases and larger single-copy chromosomal intervals, rather than isolated cis-regulatory elements.

      Orthogonal validation using ENCODE ChIP-seq data supports several differentially enriched proteins observed between the HOXA and HOXB gene clusters proteomes.

      The ability to detect quantitative changes in local protein environments after chemical perturbation demonstrates the method's sensitivity at the level of extended genomic domains.

      Homolog-resolved analysis of the active and inactive X chromosome provides an additional demonstration of biological specificity and technical flexibility at the megabase scale.

      The revised manuscript appropriately frames DNA O-MAP as a method for interrogating local domain-level genomic environments, rather than exhaustively defining the protein composition of individual regulatory elements.

      Weaknesses

      As with all proximity labeling approaches, the effective resolution of DNA O-MAP is constrained by the spatial distance of peroxidase-mediated labeling rather than by genomic distance. Consequently, for gene-cluster-scale targets, enrichment extends beyond the targeted interval into surrounding chromosomal regions, potentially limiting the method's specificity at the level of individual promoters, enhancers, or gene bodies.

      Specificity is demonstrated through comparative and internally controlled analyses rather than through a quantitative estimate of false discovery rate for locus specificity. Readers should therefore interpret individual protein enrichments as indicative of local chromatin environments rather than definitive evidence of direct binding to a specific regulatory element.

      Orthogonal validation is necessarily selective and hypothesis-driven. A broader validation would be required before newly enriched proteins can be interpreted as bona fide region-resident factors.

      Comparisons to prior locus-proteomics methods remain indirect and should be interpreted primarily in terms of demonstrated feasibility, scalability, and reduced cell-number requirements rather than absolute performance or resolution.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary and strengths:

      In this manuscript, Grimes presents an extension of Ellipse of Insignificant (EOI) and Region of Attainable Redaction (ROAR) metrics to meta-analysis setting as metrics for fragility and robustness evaluation of meta-analysis. The author applies these metrics to three meta-analyses of Vitamin D and cancer mortality, finding substantial fragility in their conclusions. Overall, I think extension/adaption is a conceptually valuable addition to meta-analysis evaluation, and the manuscript is generally well-written.

      Specific comments:

      (1) The manuscript would benefit from a clearer explanation of in what sense EOIMETA is generalizable. The author mentions this several times, but without a clear explanation of what they mean here.

      (2) The authors mentioned the proposed tools assume low between-study heterogeneity. Could the author illustrate mathematically in the paper how the between-study heterogeneity would influence the proposed measures? Moreover, the between-study heterogeneity is high in Zhang et al's 2022 study. It would be a good place to comment on the influence of such high heterogeneity on the results, and specifying a practical heterogeneity cutoff would better guide future users.

      (3) I think clarifying the concepts of "small effect", "fragile result", and "unreliable result" would be helpful for preventing misinterpretation by future users. I am concerned that the audience may be confusing these concepts. A small effect may be related to a fragile meta-analysis result. A fragile meta-analysis doesn't necessarily mean wrong/untrustworthy results. A fragile but precise estimate can still reflect a true effect, but whether that size of true effect is clinically meaningful is another question. Clarifying the effect magnitude, fragility, and reliability in the discussion would be helpful.

      Comments on revisions:

      I am unable to find the author's responses to my previous round comments (Reviewer #3) in the revision package, though replies to the other reviewers are present. I will provide my updated feedback once these responses are available for review.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The authors begin by highlighting the importance of genome organisation in cellular compartmentalisation and identity. They focus their study on centromeres - key chromosomal features required for segregation-and aim to identify proteins responsible for their spatial distribution in interphase nuclei. However, none of the experimental data addresses broader aspects of genome architecture, such as individual chromosome territories or A/B compartments. As such, the title of the article may be misleading and would benefit from being more specific, for example: "Identification of factors influencing centromere positioning in interphase."

      Strengths:

      One of the strengths of the paper is the comprehensive CRISPR-based screening and the comparative analysis between two distinct cell lines.

      Including further investigation into factors that behave differently across these cell lines - particularly in relation to expression levels or the unique "inverted architecture" of RPE cells-would have added valuable depth.

      Comments on revisions:

      From the previous review:<br /> The Authors have undertook a very minimal revision of the paper. The Authors have addressed some of the comments raised by rewarding the text and being slightly more critical in the interpretation of their results and added previously published literature.<br /> They have provided more details on the characterisation of the new cell lines and added some statistical analyses.

      However, I still believe that the title does not reflect the finding, as it is all about centromere position rather than "interphase genome architecture" as claimed.<br /> As I said in my previous comments, this will make a precedent and will cause mis-interpretations in the field.

      Changes from the previous version:

      While in the new manuscript the Authors have discussed that degradation of NUF2 and SPC24 caused some aberrant nuclear phenotypes, this is at odd with the first screening where these morphologies were used as part of the exclusion criteria. Some comments would be required.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript investigates the neural mechanisms of anxiety and identifies the supramammillary nucleus (SuM) as a critical hub in mediating anxiety-related behaviors. The authors describe a population of neurons in the SuM that are activated by acute and chronic stress. While their activity is not required for fear memory recall, reactivation of these neurons after chronic stress robustly increases anxiety-like behaviors as well as physiological stress markers. Circuit analysis further shows that these stress-activated neurons are driven by inputs from the ventral, but not dorsal, subiculum, and inhibition of this pathway exerts an anxiolytic effect.

      The study provides an elegant integration of techniques linking stress, neuronal ensembles, and circuit function, advancing our understanding of the neural substrates of anxiety. A particularly notable point is the selective role of these stress-activated neurons in anxiety, but not in associative fear memory, highlighting functional distinctions between neural circuits underlying anxiety and fear.

      The recruited neuronal population is activated by acute and chronic stress, though the overlap across stress exposures is partial, suggesting that further studies will be important to define how these neurons respond under other stressors and conditions.

      Overall, this work identifies SuM stress-activated neurons and their ventral subiculum inputs as central elements of anxiety circuitry, providing a valuable framework for future studies and potential targeted interventions for stress-related disorders.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is a very interesting study focusing on a remarkable oligomerization domain, the LisH-CTLH-CRA module. The module is found in a diverse set of proteins across evolution. The present manuscript focuses on the extraordinary elaboration of this domain in GID/CTLH RING E3 ubiquitin ligases, which assemble into a gigantic, highly ordered, oval-shaped megadalton complex with strict subunit specificity. The arrangement of LisH-CTLH-CRA modules from several distinct subunits is required to form the oval on the outside of the assembly, allowing functional entities to recruit and modify substrates in the center. Although previous structures had shown that data revealed that CTLH-CRA dimerization interfaces share a conserved helical architecture, the molecular rules that govern subunit pairing have not been explored. This was a daunting task in protein biochemistry that was achieved in the present study, which defines this "assembly specificity code" at the structural and residue-specific level.<br /> The authors used X-ray crystallography to solve high-resolution structures of mammalian CTLH-CRA domains, including RANBP9, RANBP10, TWA1, MAEA, and the heterodimeric complex between RANBP9 and MKLN. They further examined and characterized assemblies by quantitative methods (ITC and SEC-MALS) and qualitatively using nondenaturing gels. Some of their ITC measurements were particularly clever, and involved competitive titrations, and titrations of varying partners depending on protein behavior. The experiments allowed the authors to discover that affinities for interactions between partners is exceptionally tight, in the pM-nM range, and to distill the basis for specificity while also inferring that additional interactions beyond the LisH-CTLH-CRA modules likely also contribute to stability. Beyond discovering how the native pairings are achieved, the authors were able to use this new structural knowledge to reengineer interfaces to achieve different preferred partnerings.

      Strengths:

      Nearly everything about this work is exceptionally strong.<br /> -The question is interesting for the native complexes, and even beyond that has potential implications for design of novel molecular machines.<br /> -The experimental data and analyses are quantitative, rigorous, and thorough.<br /> -The paper is a great read - scholarly and really interesting.<br /> -The figures are exceptional in every possible way. They present very complex and intricate interactions with exquisite clarity. The authors are to be commended for outstanding use of color and color-coding throughout the study, including in cartoons to help track what was studied in what experiments. And the figures are also outstanding aesthetically.

      Weaknesses:

      There are no major weaknesses of note, and in the revision the authors addressed my minor suggestions for the text.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Methods to infer action potentials from fluorescence-based measurements of intracellular calcium dynamics are important for optical measurements of activity across large populations of neurons. The variety of existing methods can be separated into two broad classes: a) model-independent approaches that are trained on ground truth datasets (e.g., deep networks), and b) approaches based on a model of the processes that link action potentials to calcium signals. Models usually contains parameters describing biophysical variables, such as rate constants of the calcium dynamics and features of the calcium indicator. The method presented here, PGBAR, is model-based and uses a Bayesian approach. A novelty of PGBAR is that static parameters and state variables are jointly estimated using particle Gibbs sampling, a sequential Monte Carlo technique that can efficiently sample the latent embedding space.

      Strengths:

      A main strength of PGBAR is that it provides probability distributions rather than point estimates of spike times. This is different from most other methods and may be an important feature in cases when estimates of uncertainty are desired. Another important feature of PGBAR is that it estimates not only the state variable representing spiking activity, but also other variables such as baseline fluctuations and stationary model variables, in a joint process. PGBAR can therefore provide more information than various other methods. The information in the github repository is well-organized. The authors demonstrate convincingly that PGBAR can resolve inter-spike intervals in the range of 5 ms using fluorescence data obtained with a very fast genetically encoded calcium indicator at very high sampling rates (line scans at >= 1 kHz).

      Weaknesses:

      The accuracy of spike train reconstructions is not higher than that of other model-based approaches, and lower than the accuracy of a model-independent approach based on a deep network in a regime of commonly used acquisition rates.

      Comments on revisions:

      I have no further comments on the manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Serantes and colleagues analysed how sleep and anesthesia impact the processing of olfactory inputs, focusing on early sensory processing (occurring at the first or second synaptic contacts). First, they show that the transition to sleep has a major impact on breathing-dependent gamma activity. Second, they show that this decrease originates at the first synaptic contact and is independent of respiration itself. Third, they show a decrease in connectivity associated with neocortical slow waves. These results are very interesting and supported by a robust methodology. However, I have two major concerns regarding this work.

      First, the authors fail to adequately contextualize their work. For example, the impact of sleep on respiration-locked gamma activity was reported several years ago and is, in fact, used in some laboratories to score sleep using data from the olfactory bulb.

      Second, the authors should exercise much more caution when comparing the urethane anesthesia model with NREM/REM sleep cycles. There are very significant differences between the two. Yet, the title and abstract of the article mention only sleep and anesthesia. More concerningly, the results obtained under urethane anesthesia are uncritically generalized to sleep.

      In conclusion, the first finding was already shown in previous studies, and the second and third results were obtained not during sleep but during an anesthetic state that only resembles certain aspects of sleep.

      Strengths:

      The authors deploy an interventional approach that allows them to determine with compelling evidence the relationship of the gamma activity time-locked to breathing and different aspects of breathing, proving in particular that the disconnection is independent of respiratory dynamics. They leveraged invasive recordings that allow them to pinpoint at which level the disconnection occurs.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) My first comment concerns how this work fits within the state of the art. The introduction of the article leaves out very important and highly relevant work.

      (1a) First, "disconnection" is not a defining feature of sleep; "unresponsiveness" is. It is often assumed that this unresponsiveness (which can be directly measured, contrary to disconnection) is due to a form of disconnection, but there has been substantial work over the past decade showing that disconnection is not as extensive as initially expected. It is therefore incorrect, in my view, to state that "most models attribute sensory gating to thalamocortical mechanisms". Most models attribute sensory gating to a combination of thalamocortical and cortical mechanisms.

      (1b) The rationale of the article appears unclear ("the olfactory system-bypassing the thalamus-offers a unique window into earlier stages of sensory disconnection"). If the idea is to investigate gating mechanisms before the thalamus, then any sensory modality would suffice, since even modalities that later relay through the thalamus involve pre-thalamic processing stages. I assume that the authors instead mean that, because olfactory information does not relay through the thalamus, gating mechanisms in the olfactory stream could occur very early. However, this also implies that focusing on olfactory processing would say little about other sensory modalities.

      (1c) Key previous results have been completely overlooked. First, the impact of sleep on respiration-locked gamma activity was reported several years ago (Bagur et al., Plos Biology 2018). Second, important articles investigating olfactory processing during sleep have been overlooked (e.g., Arzi et al., Nature Neuroscience 2012; Arzi et al., Journal of Neuroscience 2014). I am not providing an exhaustive list here, but these articles are not only extremely relevant to the present study; they have also become classics in the sleep literature.

      (2) For most of their findings (Figures 2 to 5), the authors used urethane anesthesia. They show that this pharmacological manipulation results in alternation between periods of high-amplitude delta waves (SWSt) and a desynchronized state (ASt). However, the parallel with NREM and REM sleep, respectively, is rough and insufficiently justified. Differences can already be noted by contrasting the short examples provided in the figures. While NREM and REM sleep differ in terms of muscle tone (EMG), no such difference is discernible between SWSt and ASt. In SWSt, the slow waves appear to overlap with fast activity at the cortical level (M1, S1), which is not typically the case during NREM sleep. In addition, because the time scale is not the same in Figures 1 and 2 (1 s vs 2 s), yet the slow waves appear to have similar durations, it is also possible that the slow waves generated during SWSt and NREM differ. To better support the proposed parallel between NREM and SWSt on the one hand, and ASt and REM on the other, the authors should provide a thorough comparison of these states (spectral features, properties of the slow waves, duration and frequency of each state, etc.). Without this, inferences from results obtained under urethane anesthesia to sleep are not warranted.

      The authors acknowledge this issue in the Discussion ("These findings suggest that there is no functional equivalence between urethane-activated states and REM sleep"), but this caveat should be integrated from the very beginning (title, abstract, and introduction).

      (3) In some graphs, the power spectrum is normalized. Under anesthesia, this normalization was performed "within each animal to the SWSt maximum for that signal". However, I could not find equivalent information for sleep. This is key information needed to correctly interpret the results shown in Figure 1.

      (4) The authors should also clarify their criteria for concluding on the absence or presence of a given effect. For example, in the legend of Figure 1c, they write: "Note the presence of coherence during wakefulness, demonstrating the internalization of the respiratory signal, and its drop during sleep". Unless coherence is exactly zero, some degree of coherence is always "present". Figure 1 instead shows that coherence is modulated across frequencies during wakefulness, with peaks in the delta and theta ranges.

      In Figure 2, they write: "PAC between respiration and OB gamma amplitude was present during ASt but disappeared during SWSt". Again, the authors should clarify what is meant by "disappeared", as they only tested for differences between ASt and SWSt.

      Given that the authors implemented a strategy to test for above-chance coherence using surrogate datasets, they should consistently provide statistical tests showing which conditions or frequency bands exhibit coherence above chance in order to justify claims about the presence or absence of an effect.

      (5) Likewise, comparisons across states should always be supported by statistical tests, for example, in Figure 4. In addition, despite the apparent absence of coherence during SWSt in Figures 4f and 4g (which again should be formally tested), Figure 4h shows an increase in coherence around 2 Hz, which suggests some degree of coherence between nasal airflow and the olfactory bulb.

      (6) Figures should more clearly distinguish results based on a single "representative" animal from population averages. For example, were Figures 4g and 2h computed at the population level?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      After manually labelling 144 human adult hemispheres in the lateral parieto-occipital junction (LPOJ), the authors 1) propose a nomenclature for 4 previously unnamed highly variable sulci located between the temporal and parietal or occipital lobes, 2) focus on one of these newly named sulci, namely the ventral supralateral occipital sulcus (slocs-v) and compare it to neighbouring sulci to demonstrate its specificity (in terms of depth, surface area, gray matter thickness, myelination, and connectivity), 3) relate the morphology of a subgroup of sulci from the region including the slocs-v to the performance in a spatial orientation task, demonstrating behavioural and morphological specificity. In addition to these results, the authors propose an extended reflection on the relationship between these newly named landmarks and previous anatomical studies, a reflection about the slocs-v related to functional and cytoarchitectonic parcellations as well as anatomic connectivity and an insight about potential anatomical mechanisms relating sulcation and behaviour.

      Strengths:

      - To my knowledge, this is the first study addressing the variable tertiary sulci located between the superior temporal sulcus (STS) and intra-parietal sulcus (IPS).

      - This is a very comprehensive study addressing altogether anatomical, architectural, functional and cognitive aspects.

      - The definition of highly variable yet highly reproductible sulci such as the slocs-v feeds the community with new anatomo-functional landmarks (which is emphasized by the provision of a probability map in supp. mat., which in my opinion should be proposed in the main body).

      - The comparison of different features between the slocs-v and similar sulci is useful to demonstrate their difference.

      - The detailed comparison of the present study with state of the art contextualises and strengthens the novel findings.

      - The functional study complements the anatomical description and points towards cognitive specificity related to a subset of sulci from the LPOJ

      - The discussion offers a proposition of theoretical interpretation of the findings

      - The data and code are mostly available online (raw data made available upon request).

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Sleep affects cognition and metabolism, evolving throughout development. In mammals, infants have fast sleep-wake cycles that stabilize in adults via circadian regulation. In this study, the author performed a genetic screen for neurotransmitters/peptides regulating sleep and identified the neuropeptide Hugin and its receptor PK2-R1 as essential components for sleep in Drosophila larvae. They showed that IPCs express Pk2-R1 and silencing IPCs resulted in significant increase in the sleep amount, which was consistent with the effect they observed in PK2-R1 knock out mutants. They also showed that Hugin peptides, secreted by a subset of Hugin neurons (Hug-PC), activate IPCs through the PK2-R1 receptor. This activation prompts IPCs to release insulin-like peptides (Dilps), which are implicated in the modulation of sleep. They showed that Hugin peptides induce a PK2-R1 dependent calcium (Ca²⁺) increase in IPCs, which they linked to the release of Dilp3, showing a connection between Hugin signaling to IPCs, Dilp3 release and sleep regulation. Additionally, the activation of Hug-PC neurons reduced sleep amounts, while silencing them had the opposite effect. In contrast to the larval stage, the Hugin/PK2-R1 axis was not critical for sleep regulation in Drosophila adults, suggesting that this neuropeptidergic circuitry has divergent roles in sleep regulation across different stages of development.

      Strengths:

      This study used an updated system for sleep quantification in Drosophila larvae and this method allowed precise measurement of larval sleep patterns which is essential for the understanding of sleep regulation.

      The authors performed unbiased genetics screening and successfully identified novel regulators for larval sleep, Hugin and its receptor PK2-R1, making a substantial contribution to the understanding of neuropeptidergic control of sleep regulation.

      They clearly demonstrated the mechanism by which Hugin expressing neurons influence sleep through the activation of IPCs via PK2-R1 with Ca2+ responses and can modulate sleep.

      Based on the demonstrated activation of PK2-R1 by the human Hugin orthologue Neuromedin U, research on human sleep disorders may benefit from the discoveries from Drosophila since sleep regulating mechanisms are conversed across species.

      Weaknesses:

      Previously identified weaknesses have been largely addressed by the authors.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work presents interesting findings where the addition of exogenous ATP extends the replicative lifespan of yeast cells in a way that seems uncorrelated with actual increased intracellular ATP levels or mitochondria. To be clear, the addition of ATP to yeast growth media increases the number of cell divisions per cell in yeast. Expression of the NTT1 ATP transporter gene increases intracellular ATP levels according to LCMS analysis, but the effect on replicative lifespan works without the NTT1 gene and without an intracellular increase in ATP (possibly with a decrease in intracellular ATP), so the effect appears to be independent of the effect on intracellular ATP levels or mitochondria, as mitochondria-less R0 yeast cells also have increased numbers of cell division when grown with extracellular ATP. The plots in Figure 5 make it seem like exogenous ATP addition lowers intracellular ATP for both the NTT1 cells and the wild-type cells, and that is not what the data in Figure 2d with LCMS shows.

      As an aside, this seems like a better model for increased tumor cell growth in the presence of increased extracellular ATP, which happens in some cancers.

      Restated, the data suggest they were successful in increasing intracellular ATP by LCMS, but not by queen reporter, and that the seemingly likely increased intracellular ATP was not causative, as cells that did not have an increase in intracellular ATP, but had the same exogenous ATP addition, also gained an increase in replicative lifespan. There could also be two distinct mechanisms extending replicative lifespan to the same degree in these two different strains. More measurements, controls, and analyses are needed to accurately determine what is happening with intracellular ATP levels with age. It is currently unknown if there is any correlation between ATP levels and replicative aging (with properly controlled longitudinal measurements).

      Strengths:

      Longitudinal imaging of single cells. Analyzed ATP levels with two approaches. Creative approach to use NTT1 transporter to increase intracellular ATP levels. Solid replicative lifespan data.

      Weaknesses:

      Mostly unclear about ATP levels with age and the relationship, or lack thereo,f between intracellular ATP levels and replicative lifespan. No idea what this effect depends on, but some ideas what it does not depend on (mitochondria or increased intracellular ATP). Experiments seem to lack biological controls (cells without gfp) for age related changes in autofluorescence (and pH that can affect gfp signal) for the fluorescent microscopy quantifying ATP with age using the QUEEN reporter (seems that way as written); conflicting evidence on ATP levels; lack of LC-MS measurements in old cells; no apparent correlation between ATP levels and replicative lifespan, but that could be wrong - just not apparent from the longitudinal data plots. The LCMS data seems better than the microscopy data on ATP because the microscopy approach seems to lack proper biological controls, and the selection of only the top 40% of pixels to quantify signal seems unjustified as written, and possibly prone to technical artifacts. Figure 2 B&C plots of ATP levels should show what the cells were normalized to. The figures also seem too diluted and should probably be combined or put in the supplements (hog1 western) if they do not relate to the lifespan effect. There seem to be some technical scientific editorial errors, like in Figure 7.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The work by Henning et al. explores the role of feedback inhibition in motion vision circuits, providing the first identification of inhibitory inheritance in motion-selective T4 and T5 cells of Drosophila. Among the strengths of this work is the verification of the GABAergic nature of C2 and C3 with genetic and immunohistochemical approaches. In addition, double-silencing C2&C3 experiments help to establish a functional role for these cells. The authors holistically use the Drosophila toolbox to identify neural morphologies, synaptic locations, network connectivity, neuronal functions and the behavioral output.

      A limitation of the study is that the mediating neural correlates from C2&C3 to T4&T5 are not clarified, rather Mi1 is found to be one of them. In the future, the same set of silencing experiments performed for C2-Mi1 could be extended to C2 &C3-Tm1 or Tm4 to find the T5 neural mediators of this feedback inhibition loop. Future experiments might also disentangle the parallel or separate function of C2 and C3 neurons.

      In summary, this work advances our current knowledge in Drosophila motion vision and sets the way for further exploring the intricate details of direction selective computations.

      Comments on revisions:

      A label for T5 is missing from Figure 5b. Thank you for addressing our concerns and considering each of our suggestions.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Fan and colleagues measure proteomics and transcriptomics in 3 organs (liver, skeletal muscle, cerebral cortex) from male C57BL/6 mice to investigate whether intermittent fasting (IF; 16h daily fasting over 4 months) produces systemic and organ-specific adaptations.

      They find shared signaling pathways, certain metabolic changes and organ-specific responses that suggest IF might affect energy utilization, metabolic flexibility while promoting resilience at the cellular level.

      Strengths:

      The fact that there are 3 organs and 2 -omics approaches is a strength of this study.

      Weaknesses:

      Poor figures presentation and knowledge of the literature. One sex (male).

      On resubmission the Authors' decision to discriminate the organ-specific from the organ-shared effects of intermittent fasting (IF) also enabled them to more precisely determine the lack of correspondence between transcriptomics and proteomics, i.e., not all transcripts lead to protein translation.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors evaluated a novel bivalent (Wu1/BA.5 based) mRNA platform that uses the EABR strategy to produce enveloped virus-like particles for vaccination. These were tested as boosters in the context of pre-existing immunity in mice that received two prior immunizations with conventional Wu1 mRNA vaccines. The animal experimental timeline aimed at mimicking the vaccinations/booster schedule implemented during the COVID-19 pandemia. The authors tested and compared different booster strategies: (1) conventional Wu1 S protein encoding mRNA vaccine, (2) EABR Wu1 S protein encoding mRNA vaccine that produces enveloped virus-like particles, (3) conventional Wu1/BA.5 S protein encoding mRNA vaccine, and (4) EABR Wu1/BA.5 S protein encoding mRNA vaccine that produces enveloped virus-like particles. The EABR approach (monovalent or bivalent) enhanced the antibody response against Wu1 and Omicron subvariants. Interestingly, the bivalent EABR Wu1/BA.5 mRNA (strategy 4) generated polyclonal sera targeting multiple receptor-binding domain epitopes: these sera were more diverse than those generated with the other tested booster strategies (1 to 3).

      Strengths:

      The monovalent Wu1 S-EABR mRNA booster led to increase in antibody binding to tested Omicron variants (BA.5, BQ.1.1, XBB.1), while the bivalent Wu1/BA.5 S-EABR mRNA booster led to the highest Ab response against Omicron variants (BA.5, BQ.1.1, XBB.1) in pre-vaccinated mice.

      Neutralization assays showed that the monovalent Wu1 S-EABR mRNA booster had the highest Wu1 neutralization activity and to a lesser extent the early BA.1 early Omicron variant. The monovalent Wu1 S-EABR mRNA booster and bivalent Wu1/BA.5 S-EABR mRNA booster had similar BA.5 neutralizing activity. Neutralizing activity of the different boosters was less pronounced with later Omicron variants BQ.1.1 and XBB.1. However, of the different boosters tested, the bivalent Wu1/BA.5 S-EABR mRNA booster induced the highest neutralizing titers. These results support that the EABR mRNA vaccine strategy helps improve neutralizing activity against different tested Omicron subvariants: a few (1 or 2) mRNA constructs expressing major antigens in enveloped virus-like particles likely provide a novel strategy to elicit an immune response that has the potential to neutralize subsequent variants.

      The EABR enveloped virus-like particle strategy induces a more diverse antibody response, including epitopes not recognized by the other booster strategies: these new epitopes could play a role in neutralizing activity against new future variants.

      Moreover, the bivalent Wu1/BA.5 S-EABR mRNA booster could potentially produce heterotrimeric S proteins to help activation of cross-reactive B cells and increase polyclass antibody responses.

      Weaknesses:

      When it comes to later Omicron variants (BQ.1.1 and XBB.1), there is a discrepancy between epitope binding response and neutralization titers: only a few binding antibodies have neutralizing activity with these later variants, showing a limitation of the EABR strategy.

      The authors showed that the EABR mRNA strategy represents a novel antigen exposing strategy where antigens are produced at the cell surface and also at the surface of enveloped virus-like particles. This allows the production of novel antigens in addition to those that would be typically generated against cell surface exposed antigens. These novel antigens targeting new epitopes could potentially have neutralizing activity.

      Using a bivalent EABR mRNA booster led to higher antibody titers and higher neutralizing activity. The challenge is to select the best antigen target/variant to support neutralizing activity against later virus variants.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Nishimura and colleagues present findings of a behavioral and neurobiological dissociation of associative and nonassociative components of Stress Enhanced Fear Responding (SEFR).

      Strengths:

      This is a strong paper that identifies the PVT as a critical brain region for SEFR responses using a variety of approaches, including immunohistochemistry, fiber photometry, and bidirectional chemogenetics. In addition, there is a great deal of conceptual innovation. The authors identify a dissociable behavior to distinguish the effects of PVT function (among other brain regions).

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors find a lack of difference between the Stress and No Stress groups in pPVT activity during SEFL conditioning with fiber photometry but an increase in freezing with Gq DREADD stimulation. How do authors reconcile this difference in activity vs function?

      (2) Because the PVT plays a role in defensive behaviors, it would be beneficial to show fiber photometry data during freezing bouts vs exclusively presented during tone a shock cue presentations.

      (3) Similar to the above point, were other defensive behaviors expressed as a result of footshock stress or PVT manipulations?

      (4) Tone attenuation in Figure 8 seems to be largely a result of minimal freezing to a 115-dB tone. While not a major point of the paper, a more robust fear response would be convincing.

      (5) In the open field test, the authors measure total distance. It would be beneficial to also show defensive behavioral (escape, freezing, etc) bouts expressed.

      (6) The authors, along with others, show a behavioral and neural dissociation of footshock stress on nonassociative vs associative components of stress; however, the nonassociative components as a direct consequence of the stress seem to be necessary for enhancement of associative aspects of fear. Can authors elaborate on how these systems converge to enhance or potentiate fear?

      (7) In the discussion, authors should elaborate on/clarify the cell population heterogeneity of the PVT since authors later describe PVT neurons as exclusively glutamatergic.

      Comments on revisions:

      Following revision, this reviewer felt all of the above concerns were addressed.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Eukaryotic translation initiation factor 4E (eIF4E) acts as a key susceptibility factor for members of the Potyviridae family, and knockout of eIF4E family members enables the generation of corresponding virus-resistant germplasm. In this study, the authors performed systematic knockout experiments on the members of eIF(iso)4E and nCBP clades in cassava, which demonstrated that simultaneous knockout of the eIF4E-family genes nCBP-1 and nCBP-2 in the cultivar 60444 significantly attenuates Cassava Brown Streak Disease (CBSD) root symptoms and reduces viral titer. The authors further screened for CBP mutants without VPg-binding activity and identified the nCBP-2 L51F mutant, which loses the ability to interact with VPg. In the revised manuscript, the authors have addressed most of my previous questions and revised the relevant content accordingly. Overall, this study is a well-performed work, with extensive explorations carried out particularly in the gene knockout of members of eIF(iso)4E and nCBP. It provides an important value for investigating the functions of eIF(iso)4E and nCBP clade members in the development of disease-resistant germplasm, and the identified nCBP-2 L51F mutant also offers a crucial gene editing site target for the generation of virus-resistant cassava germplasm in future.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study by Mercer et al. focused on Vglut1 neurons in the BLA that project to the NAc. They characterized reward conditioning-induced electrophysiological changes in these neurons, including a decrease in membrane excitability and an increase in inhibitory synaptic inputs onto them, and showed the consequences of reducing their activity in enhancing reward-seeking behaviors. Considering that Vglut1 neurons represent the majority of the BLA→NAc projecting neurons, the findings are important for potentially correcting some of the previous biases in understanding the role of BLA-to-NAc projection in reward processing, for example, the notion that this projection generally promotes reward seeking by conveying reward-associated cue information.

      Strengths:

      The paper is clearly written, with results strongly supporting the main conclusions for the most part.

      There are a few weaknesses noted. For example:

      (1) They used a retrograde recombinase strategy to drive DREADD expression in these cells; however, it is not known if they project exclusively to NAc or to other brain regions as well, and whether those other potential regions may mediate the DREADDs (Gi) effects on reward seeking. They also did not show which subregions of the NAc were innervated by these neurons.

      (2) They did not assess potential changes in excitatory synaptic transmission onto these cells after reward conditioning, which leaves a gap in concluding a shift toward inhibition.

      (3) They also did not report on whether the inhibition was specific to Vglut1 neurons.

      (4) Some statistics appear missing (Figure 3D-F), not optimal (Figure 5CEF and HJK using separate t-tests rather than repeated measure ANOVA), not clear (Figure 2I on peak timing or port entry), or has low n number (Figure 1 Ephys, animal-based manipulations).

      (5) They did not clarify why they used two different doses of the DREADDs ligand Compound 21 at 0.1 or 0.3 mg/kg for different experiments.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Calder-Travis et al. investigate how people form decisions about abstract rules in environments that may change over time. They show that individuals adaptively accumulate information, adjusting how much weight they give new evidence depending on how surprising or uncertain the environment is. Using whole-brain recordings (MEG), they further report that signals reflecting beliefs about the current rule are broadly distributed, particularly in visual and parietal regions. They further argue that these belief-related signals cannot be reduced to representations of momentary sensory evidence alone.

      Overall, the behavioral results convincingly demonstrate adaptive evidence accumulation consistent with the normative model. The neural data provide solid evidence for temporally structured belief-related signals that are broadly distributed across cortical regions. However, the evidence for sustained belief maintenance "across" cues and for full dissociation from gaze-related influences in visual cortex is less definitive. These issues temper, but do not undermine, the central conclusions.

      Strengths:

      A major strength of the study is the integration of normative modeling with temporally resolved neural data. The authors exploit the fine temporal scale of the recordings to examine belief updating across distinct task epochs, and they show that neural signals evolve in a manner consistent with the normative model that best captures behavior. This alignment between behavioral modeling and neural dynamics is carefully executed and conceptually coherent.<br /> Another strength is the authors' cautious interpretation of their findings. They explicitly acknowledge limitations in distinguishing between direct representation of a latent variable and neural modulation driven by that variable. This restraint strengthens the credibility of the conclusions and avoids overstatement.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Evidence for sustained belief representation across cues

      Behaviorally, the data clearly demonstrate accumulation across sequential cues. However, the neural analyses primarily focus on responses around individual samples (from pre-cue to late post-cue windows). While these analyses demonstrate belief updating following each sample, they do not fully establish whether belief representations are maintained continuously across cues.

      Specifically, it remains unclear whether the neural representation of the prior belief is sustained from the late post-cue period of cue t-1 into the pre-cue period of cue t. Without explicit evidence of such continuity, it is difficult to conclude that the neural signals reflect a maintained belief state rather than repeated sample-locked updating processes. This distinction is important for interpreting the neural mechanism of accumulation.

      (2) Interpretation of belief signals in the visual cortex

      The claim that belief-related signals in the visual cortex cannot be explained by gaze position requires stronger support. The distribution of gaze positions across contexts appears largely non-overlapping, raising the possibility that context-related gaze biases could contribute to the observed neural effects.

      In particular, the "gaze-inconsistent" analysis based on a median split may not fully dissociate belief from gaze if the absolute gaze positions remain systematically different between contexts. As currently presented, the evidence does not fully rule out the possibility that gaze-related modulation contributes to the belief-related signal in visual areas. This affects the strength of the interpretation regarding abstract belief representation in early sensory cortex.

      (3) Clarity and transparency of task and model description

      Several aspects of the task and modeling framework would benefit from clearer exposition. The description of the noise distribution in the context cue would be easier to interpret if the overlapping distributions were visualized explicitly, allowing readers to assess how much accumulation is required versus reliance on strong individual cues. Similarly, the main text would benefit from a clearer explanation of how change point probability and uncertainty are computed (not just in Methods), as these quantities are central to the analyses and interpretation.

      In addition, temporal epochs (e.g., pre-cue, early post-cue, late post-cue) are not clearly defined with specific time ranges in the main text, making it difficult to compare across figures.

      (4) Interpretation of neural dynamics

      Several neural findings are intriguing but underinterpreted. For example, the absence of clear sensory evidence representation in early post-cue epochs in any regions (Figure 4B) is surprising and not discussed. The relative stability of belief-related signals in visual cortex compared to parietal regions (Figure 4E) is also unexpected and warrants interpretation. Additionally, the temporal dynamics of change point probability and uncertainty representations appear different from each other, but such a pattern was not described in detail.

      Clarifying these points would strengthen the interpretability of the results and help readers understand the mechanistic implications.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Zhang et al. investigate how blood feeding and dietary protein influence sleep in the mosquito Aedes aegypti. The authors first establish a behavioural definition of sleep using postural analysis and arousal threshold measurements, then demonstrate that both blood meals and a bovine serum albumin (BSA)-based protein diet increase sleep for several days. They further show that RNAi-mediated knockdown of the leucokinin receptor (Lkr) enhances sleep, implicating neuropeptide signalling in the regulation of postprandial sleep. The authors propose that elevated sleep persists well beyond the restoration of host-seeking behaviour, suggesting the existence of distinct "opportunistic" versus "determined" host-seeking phases.

      Strengths

      The central question is well-motivated, and the experimental approach is systematic. The use of multiple independent methods to characterise sleep - postural analysis, infrared activity monitoring, videography, and arousal threshold - provides converging evidence. The BSA feeding experiment is a particularly effective demonstration that dietary protein, rather than other blood components, is the key regulator of the sleep increase. The conservation of leucokinin signalling in sleep regulation between Drosophila and Ae. aegypti is a noteworthy finding that adds comparative depth.

      Weaknesses

      (1) Sleep definition.

      The authors settle on a 10-minute immobility threshold, but their own data do not convincingly support this choice. The arousal threshold data (Figure 1G) show no significant difference between the 1-5 min and 6-10 min bins (P=0.246), with significance emerging only at the 11-15 min bin. The postural analysis likewise indicates that sleep-associated postures appear at ~20 min during the day and ~11 min at night. A 15-minute threshold would be better supported by the data as presented. The previous literature used 120 minutes for this species (Ajayi et al. 2022), making this a dramatic shift.

      (2) Confound of reproduction and sleep.

      The primary experimental paradigm measures sleep beginning at Day 4 post-blood feeding, immediately after oviposition. Animals have undergone gut distension, vitellogenesis, and oviposition, and what is being measured as "sleep" could reflect post-reproductive quiescence or recovery rather than diet-induced sleep per se. The BSA experiment partially addresses this, but since BSA also triggers vitellogenesis and egg production (as the authors note), the confound persists.

      (3) Opportunistic vs. determined host-seeking hypothesis.

      This framework is presented as a key conceptual contribution, but the paper contains no data on host-seeking behaviour. The authors infer two phases from the temporal mismatch between a 72-hour host-seeking suppression window (from prior studies) and elevated sleep through Day 5 (~120 hours). While this is an interesting hypothesis, it requires actual measurement of host-seeking alongside sleep to be substantiated, or at least the caveats need to be discussed more explicitly.

      (4) Statistical approach.

      The methods describe "one-way ANOVA, followed by Mann-Whitney tests with Welch's correction," which is an internally inconsistent combination: Mann-Whitney is non-parametric and does not use Welch's correction (which applies to t-tests). Throughout the figures, F-statistics (parametric) are reported alongside what appear to be non-parametric tests. The statistical framework needs to be clarified and made consistent. Exact sample sizes per group should also be stated explicitly in the methods for all experiments.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper develops a model to account for flexible and context-dependent behaviors, such as where the same input must generate different responses or representations depending on context. The approach is anchored in the hippocampal place cell literature. The model consists of a module X, which represents context, and a module H (hippocampus), which generates "sequences". X is a binary attractor RNN, and H appears to be a discrete binary network, which is called recurrent but seems to operate primarily in a feedforward mode. H has two types of units (those that are directly activated by context, and transition/sequence units). An input from X drives a winner-take-all activation of a single unit H_context unit, which can trigger a sequence in the H_transition units. When a new/unpredicted context arises, a new stable context in X is generated, which in turn can trigger a new sequence in H. The authors use this model to account for some experimental findings, and on a more speculative note, propose to capture key aspects of contextual processing associated with schizophrenia and autism.

      Strengths:

      Context-dependency is an important problem. And for this reason, there are many papers that address context-dependency - some of this work is cited. To the best of my knowledge, the approach of using an attractor network to represent and detect changes in context is novel and potentially valuable.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have adequately addressed my concerns. Most importantly, the details of the implementation of the different components of the model are much more clearly described.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Ito and Toyoizumi present a computational model of context-dependent action selection. They propose a "hippocampus" network that learns sequences based on which the agent chooses actions. The hippocampus network receives both stimulus and context information from an attractor network that learns new contexts based on experience. The model is consistent with a variety of experiments, both from the rodent and the human literature, such as splitter cells, lap cells, and the dependence of sequence expression on behavioral statistics. Moreover, the authors suggest that psychiatric disorders can be interpreted in terms of over-/under-representation of context information.

      Strengths:

      This ambitious work links diverse physiological and behavioral findings into a self-organizing neural network framework. All functional aspects of the network arise from plastic synaptic connections: Sequences, contexts, and action selection. The model also nicely links ideas from reinforcement learning to neuronally interpretable mechanisms, e.g., learning a value function from hippocampal activity.

      Weaknesses:

      The presentation, particularly of the methodological aspects, needs to be majorly improved. Judgment of generality and plausibility of the results is hampered, but is essential, particularly for the conclusions related to psychiatric disorders. In its present form, it is unclear whether the claims and conclusions made are justified. Also, the lack of clarity strongly reduces the impact of the work in the larger field.

      More specifically:

      (1) The methods section is impenetrable. The specific adaptations of the model to the individual use cases of the model, as well as the posthoc analyses of the simulations, did not become clear. Important concepts are only defined in passing and used before they are introduced. The authors may consider a more rigorous mathematical reporting style. They also may consider making the methods part self-contained and moving it in front of the results part.

      (2) The description of results in the main text remains on a very abstract level. The authors may consider showing more simulated neural activity. It remains vague how the different stimuli and contexts are represented in the network. Particularly, the simulations and related statistical analyses underlying the paradigms in Figure 4 are incompletely described.

      (3) The literature review can be improved (laid out in the specific recommendations).

      (4) Given the large range of experimental phenomenology addressed by the manuscript, it would be helpful to add a Discussion paragraph on how much the results from mice and humans can be integrated, particularly regarding the nature of the context selection network.

      (5) As a minor point, the hippocampus is pretty much treated as a premotor network. Also, a Discussion paragraph would be helpful.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Howard et al. describe a set of deep mutational scanning (DMS) experiments applied to TYK2, which is a drug target implicated in autoimmune disease. By assaying protein abundance (stability) effects as well as immune signaling, the authors are able to disentangle variant effects that may be directly involved in protein activity (and therefore potentially druggable) from variant effects that are due to loss of protein or general structural instability. By performing these assays under multiple conditions, including the presence of various concentrations of small molecules, they develop a clear picture of which sites in TYK2 may be most relevant for intervention or targeting. Overall, the work represents a very compelling example of DMS for understanding protein biology and candidate drug mechanisms.

      The work is very thorough, with multiple DMS assays described and compared/contrasted. This greatly enhances the impact and interpretability of any individual assay performed.

      The authors have made improvements to the state of the art in terms of wet-lab assay design as well as the analysis of FACS-based deep mutational scans.

      The potential mechanism of loss of protein abundance in TYK2 being protective for autoimmune disease is clear, but the estimates of the effect size in more physiologically relevant settings vary quite a bit and might be quite small. Are there examples that could be cited of other similar disease mechanisms where a 10% loss in abundance is associated with a clinical phenotype?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This groundbreaking study characterizes the structure of activity correlations over millimeter scale in the mouse cortex with the goal of identifying visual channels, specialized conduits of visual information that show preferential connectivity. Examining the statistical structure of visual activity of L2/3 neurons, the study finds pairs of neurons located near each other or across distances of hundreds of micrometers with significantly correlated activity in response to visual stimuli. These highly correlated pairs have closely related visual tuning sharing orientation and/or spatial and/or temporal preference as would be expected from dedicated visual channels with specific connectivity.

      Strengths:

      The study presents best-in-class mesoscopic-scale 2-photon recordings from neuronal populations in pairs of visual areas (V1-LM, V1-PM, V1-AL, V1-LI). The study employs diverse visual stimuli that capture some of the specialization and heterogeneity of neuronal tuning in mouse visual areas. The rigorous data quantification takes into consideration functional cell groups as well as other variables that influence trial-to-trial correlations (similarity of tuning, neuronal distance, receptive field overlap, behavioral state). The paper demonstrates the robustness of the activity clustering analysis and of the activity correlation measurements. The paper shows convincingly that the correlation structure observed with grating stimuli is present in the responses to naturalistic stimuli. A simple simulation is provided that suggest that recurrent connectivity is required for the stimulus invariance of the results. The paper is well written and conceptually clear. The figures are beautiful and clear. The arguments are well laid out and the claims appear in large part supported by the data and analysis results (but see weaknesses).

      Weaknesses:

      An inherent limitation of the approach is that it cannot reveal which anatomical connectivity patterns are responsible for observed network structure. A methodological issue that does not seem completely addressed is whether the calcium imaging measurements with their limited sensitivity amplify the apparent dependence of noise correlations on the similarity of tuning. Although the paper shows that noise correlation measurements are robust to changes in firing rates / missing spikes, the effects of receptive field tuning dissimilarity are not addressed directly. The calcium responses of mouse visual cortical neurons are sharply tuned. Neurons with dissimilar receptive fields may show too little overlap in their estimated firing rates to infer noise correlations, which could lead to underestimation of correlations across groups of dissimilar neurons.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This work attempts to reconcile the concepts of critical neural dynamics with short-term reliable responses and long-term drifting responses. This is an important question, because critical dynamics are typically associated with unpredictable population responses to perturbations. Instead, this paper demonstrates that recordings from the mouse visual cortex include typical avalanche statistics in their spontaneous state as well as clustered within-session responses to natural movies. The authors find that a spiking neural network with homeostatic plasticity on inhibitory coupling captures the correlation-based metrics observed in experiments and that this network self-organizes into a critical state.

      Strengths:

      The structure of the manuscript is clear, and the line of argumentation is easy to follow. The question raised is valid, and the model employed to answer it is adequate. While I am unsure if representation should be equated with reliable responses, I find the framework of reliable responses well-suited to compare experimental and numerical data.

      Weaknesses:

      • The claim that the presented model "self-organizes to the critical spontaneous state" is incompatible with Fig. 6 showing that the inhibitory timescale is a control parameter of the transition from subcritical to supercritical avalanche statistics.

      • The notion of "drift" implies to me a gradual change on long timescales. This is demonstrated in Ref. [47] for a model including two different types of plasticity. Also, such a drift over time was observed in Ref. [11] Fig.3C. In the present work, we can see from Fig. 2E that the correlation drops immediately to a plateau. Instead, the model actually shows some decay of correlations, expected from the ongoing plasticity. This challenges the claim that the "model successfully reproduce[s] both representational drift and [...]". Instead, the model of [47] does reproduce representation drift.

      • The claim that "spontaneous self-organized criticality serves as [...] functional mechanism for maintaining reliable information representation under continuously changing networks" is not justified by the above-raised points.

      • From the methods, I understand that the dimensionality reduction in Fig.2C and Fig.4C is a result of independent t-SNE. Since t-SNE to my knowledge starts with a random projection of data to then optimize the embedding, the resulting orientation of independent runs cannot be compared such that statements like "rotation of low-dimensional representations as in Fig. 2C, where nodes (centers of the same-color clusters) change their positions across sessions (top panel and bottom panel), but their relative positions remain stable" are not possible.

    1. Reviewer #4 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The significance of this study lies in its focus on translational regulation in the late phase of neuropathic pain, using both genetic and pharmacological approaches, with specific emphasis on parvalbumin-positive (PV⁺) inhibitory interneurons in the spinal cord. The authors are very responsive to all the reviewers' comments.

      Strengths:

      I did not review this manuscript in the first round. However, the authors have been highly responsive to the reviewers' comments and have substantially strengthened the study. They conducted new behavioral experiments that yielded informative negative results (Fig. 6A and 6B). These findings demonstrate that targeting translational control in PV neurons is sufficient to reverse SNI-induced reductions in PV neuron excitability, but insufficient to ameliorate behavioral phenotypes. This suggests that additional cell types and pathways contribute to late-phase neuropathic pain.

      Weaknesses:

      Only the withdrawal threshold was measured to assess neuropathic pain. Some studies only used female mice. However, the authors appropriately discuss the study's limitations in the final two paragraphs and have added experimental details to improve clarity. Overall, the manuscript has been significantly improved.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript by Wafer, Tandon et al., presents exciting new approaches for using the zebrafish CRISPR screening and imaging system to identify genes that are associated with hyperplastic and hypertrophic adipose morphology. This paper established valuable screening pipelines in zebrafish to identify genetic regulators that affect adipose tissue morphology by combining CRISPR with an imaging-based, comprehensive adipose spatial analysis platform. Starting from a human transcriptomic dataset with differentially expressed genes that separate small and large adipocytes, they eventually identified 3 genes that induce hyperplastic or hypertrophic phenotypes in zebrafish. From which, they focused on foxp1 gene, a transcription factor known to regulate tissue development. They discovered that the foxp1 mutant displays basal hypertrophic morphology and failed to undergo hypertrophic remodeling in response to a high-fat diet, suggesting a link between adipose tissue development and diet-induced remodeling response. Overall, this manuscript is extremely well-written, the data presented is quite compelling, and the identified novel genes that are associated with adipose tissue hyperplastic and hypertrophic morphology and diet-induced remodeling are very exciting.

      Strength:

      (1) Obesity remains a worldwide public health concern. The mechanisms underlying adipose tissue hypertrophic and hyperplastic adaptation remain unclear.

      (2) This manuscript combined multiple omic datasets to identify candidate genes and performed a CRISPR-based screening to identify genes underlying adipose tissue development and adaptation. This new method will open opportunities that will facilitate our understanding and testing of new genetic mechanisms underlying the development of obesity.

      (3) Using the screening approach, this paper successfully identified new genes that are associated with adipose tissue LD size change. More importantly, the paper provided further validation using a stable CRISPR line to show the phenotype in basal and HFD conditions.

      (4) The experiments are extremely well-designed. Sample sizes are large. Statistical analysis is rigorous. Overall, this is a very high-quality study.

      Author's response to the previous comments/weakness:

      (1) In this revised manuscript, the authors provided new comprehensive spatial analyses of foxp1a and foxp1 b mutants in basal conditions as well as responding to high-fat feeding. The new data confirmed their initial findings and beautifully illustrated the spatiotemporal dynamics of the adipocytes in response to High-fat diet feeding.

      (2) The authors have addressed all my comments, and I do not have further comments.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The goal of this study was to develop a model for CDHR1-based Con-rod dystrophy and study the role of this cadherin in cone photoreceptors. Using genetic manipulation, a cell binging assay, and high- resolution microscopy the authors find that like rods, cones localize CDHR1 to the lateral edge of outer segment (OS) discs and closely opposes PCDH15b which is known to localize to calyceal processes (CPs). Ectopic expression of CDHR1 and PCDH15b in K652 cells indicate these cadherins promote cell aggregation as heterophilic interactants, but not through homophilic binding. This data suggests a model where CDHR1 and PCDH15b link OS and CPs and potential stabilize cone photoreceptor structure. Mutation analysis of each cadherin results in cone structural defects at late larval stages. While pcdh15b homozygous mutants are lethal, cdhr1 mutants are viable and subsequently show photoreceptor degeneration by 3-6 months.

      Strengths:

      A major strength of this research is the development of an animal model to study the cone specific phenotypes associate with CDHR1-based CRD. The data supporting CDHR1 (OS) and PCDH15 (CP) binding is also a strength, although this interaction could be better characterized in future studies. The quality of the high-resolution imaging (at the light and EM levels) is outstanding. In general, results support the conclusions of the authors.

      Weaknesses:

      While the cellular phenotyping is strong, the functional consequences of CDHR1 disruption is not addressed. While this is not the focus of the investigation, such analysis would raise the impact of the study overall. This is particularly important given some of the small changes observed in OS and CP structure. While statistically significant, are the subtle changes biologically significant? Examples include cone OS length (Fig 4F, 6E) as well as other morphometric data (Fig 7I in particular). Related, for quantitative data and analysis throughout the manuscript, more information regarding the number of fish/eyes analyzed as well as cells per sample would provide confidence in the rigor. The authors should also not whether analysis was done in an automated and/or masked manner.

      Comments on revisions:

      Most of my concerns were addressed in this revised version.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Franz and colleagues combined proteomics analysis of OVSAHO cell lines treated with 6 individual drugs. The quantitative proteomics data was then used for computational analysis to identify candidates/modules that could be used to predict combination treatments for specific drugs.

      Strengths:

      The authors present solid proteomics data and computational analysis to effectively repeat at the proteomics level analysis that have previously been done predominately with transcriptional profiling. Since most drugs either target proteins and/or proteins are the functional units of cells, this makes intuitively sense.

      Weaknesses:

      Considering the available resources of the involved teams, preforming the initial analysis in a single HGSC cells is certainly a weakness/limitation. During the revision additional cell lines were used for verification.

      The data also shows how challenging it is to correctly predict drug combinations. In Table 2 (if I read it correctly) the majority of the drug combinations predicted for the initial cell line OVSAHO did not result in the predicted effect. It also shows how variable response was in the different HGSC cell lines used for combination treatment. The success rate will most likely continue to drop as more sophisticated models are being used (i.e., PDX). Human patients are even more challenging.

      It would most likely be useful to more directly mention/discuss these caveats in the manuscript. This was added to the discussion during the revision. Overall the authors have responded to previous suggestions.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Haith applies, and to some extent extends, the theoretical framework of policy gradient (PG) and the derived REINFORCE learning rules to human motor learning. This approach is coherent because human motor skill learning is characterized by improvements in both accuracy and precision (the inverse of variance), and REINFORCE provides update rules for both the mean and the variance of the motor commands.

      Weaknesses:

      The mean update (equation 4) is given in task space (i.e., angle and velocity for the skittle task), but the covariance update (equation 5) is given in eigenvector space. This formulation appears to have been provided for computational convenience, as it ensures that the variances are always positive by exponentiating the eigenvalues. However, this eigenspace formulation is somewhat artificial and complex (notably the update rule for the orientation of the covariance matrix) and seems far from biological reality. A simpler alternative, suggested by the author, is to provide the full covariance matrix, including crossed terms, and derive equations to update the diagonal variance terms and the cross-terms (perhaps after a transformation to keep all elements positive if needed). This would provide a simpler and more biologically plausible update to the covariance matrix terms, in the spirit of the original REINFORCE algorithm. The author suggests that he has derived the update rule for the cross terms, so this should be relatively easy to write and update, especially for the skittle learning rules. If the author wishes to keep their rules in simulations, then the two mathematical rules could be presented in the methods or a supplementary material section.

      The discussion about binary rewards and the increase in variance in previous experiments is potentially interesting. However, I do not understand why variance cannot increase with the policy-gradient RL update? Surely, equation 5 can lead to both an increase and a decrease in variance depending on the reward prediction error and the noise (for example, suppose the noise at trial i is small and leads to a smaller reward than the baseline; variance would increase). It would be interesting to see detailed simulation results for the skittle task showing changes in both mean and variance across a few consecutive trials, with both increases and decreases in reward prediction errors. These results could then be compared in simulations with those of a task with discrete binary rewards.

      Generalization is a major feature of human learning, but it is not discussed or studied here. In fact, in the de novo task simulations, there can be no generalization because the values are modeled as running averages for each target rather than derived from a critic network. Can the author discuss this point and, ideally, show generalization results in simulations, say in the skittle task?

      The application of the model to reproduce the Shmuelof et al. data is, at the same time, justified (because one of their main results is an improvement in precision, which Policy Gradient directly addresses) and somewhat "forced," as the author approximates curved movements with a series of straight-line movements. The author therefore needs to specify multiple via points with PG updating and a reward function that also enforces smoothness. The justification for the Guigon 2023 model seems somewhat artificial because it mainly applies to slow movements. Can the author comment and discuss alternatives that do not require via points, drawing from the robotics literature if needed (Schaal's Dynamic Movement Primitives come to mind, for example).

      Policy Gradient requires both a "noisy" and a clean "pass", making it non-biological in its simplest form. Legenstein et al. (2010) and Miconi (2017) provided biologically plausible forms for the mean update. Since Policy Gradient is proposed as a model of human motor learning, can the author discuss the biological plausibility of the proposed learning rules and possible biologically plausible extensions?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Kim et al. evaluates the performance of three modern AI-based methods in predicting complex structures and binding affinities between proteins and chemical compounds. An honest 'prospective' evaluation is achieved by studying benchmark structures and chemical compounds that did not exist in the PDB at the time the AI structure prediction models (AlphaFold3, Chai-1, Boltz-2) were trained.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study addresses an important question in modern computational biology and drug discovery, and establishes the strengths and limitations of the three tools in solving various computational chemistry tasks, including compound pose prediction, active-inactive discrimination, and potency ranking.

      (2) The conclusions are based on examination of four separate targets and respective compound datasets, where for one of the targets, the authors also obtained numerous X-ray structures to serve as experimental answers for the binding pose prediction task.

      (3) The study reports relationships between structure prediction confidence, predicted energies (DOCK3.7), and affinity predictions (Boltz-2) with the geometric accuracy of compound pose prediction as well as the experimentally measured potency.

      (4) One of the key findings is the limited ability of co-folding methods to predict conformational rearrangements, which does not correlate with their ability to predict binding poses of the compounds inducing these rearrangements.

      (5) The findings could serve as useful guidelines for computational chemists in selecting appropriate software and scoring schemes for each task.

      Weaknesses:

      While I consider this a solid study, several aspects would need to be addressed to make it really strong:

      (1) DOCK3.7 docking and scoring experiments were performed using one experimental structure of Mac1, selected from dozens of structures based on a criterion that is not sufficiently well justified. For sigma2 receptor, dopamine D4 receptor, and AmpC β-lactamase, it is not clear which structures or models were selected for docking at all. It is well known that geometry predictions, scoring, and active-inactive ROC AUCs are all strongly influenced by the selected structure. It would be important to attempt Mac1 docking using all available experimental Mac1 structures, or at least against representative structures in various conformations; it would also be quite insightful to compare results to docking of the same compound sets to AF3, Boltz-2 and Chai-1 predicted structures of Mac1. Same goes for the docking studies of sigma2, D4, and AmpC β-lactamase.

      (2) For binding affinity predictions, as a control, authors should consider compound co-folding with an unrelated protein, or even with a pseudo-peptide that consists of a few random single amino acids - this would provide an honest baseline for such predictions.

      (3) ROC curves Figure 3 and elsewhere should be shown, and AUCs quantified/reported on a log or square-root scaled x-axis, to emphasize early enrichment, which is the area of practical significance for these predictions. For example, Figure 3A currently suggests that the pose prediction performance of AF3 exceeds that of Boltz-2 whereas the early enrichment is clearly better for Boltz-2.

      (4) 'Trained set' in figures and text should probably be 'training set'? Or otherwise explain this new term the first time it is introduced.

      (5) Figure 1 illustrates a projection onto the first two principal components of a space that apparently had only one (scalar) metric for each compound pair (% maximum common substructure or Tanimoto coefficient); the authors need to better explain the principle behind this analysis and visualization.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors discovered that HDAC1/2 are degraded in HSV-1 and PRV infections. They attempted to establish a new mechanism by which HDAC1/2 are translocated to the cytoplasm to be degraded in HSV-1 infection, and the degradation causes changes in histone acetylation to affect the DDR pathway.

      Strength:

      (1) Interesting findings of HDAC1/2 degradation during HSV-1 and PRV infection, and it may impact more than the virology field.

      (2) Significant work to identify the ubiquitin site in HDAC1/2 and K63 linkage.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Insufficient evidence to support the mechanism described by the authors.

      (2) Expansion of the conclusion to alphaherpesvirus without studying the intended mechanism in PRV infection.

      Overall, there may be a correlation between HDAC1/2 level, ATM/ATR phosphorylation, and HDAC1 translocation during the HSV-1 infection. However, core evidence supporting the mechanism that a) HDAC1 export causes its degradation, b) degradation of HDAC1 causes histone acetylation changes and DRR activation has not been sufficiently demonstrated.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The topic of the paper is intriguing as it sets out to age one of the potentially largest living organisms, a tree clone (Pando), using shallow genome resequencing of a large number of replicate samples. The key result is that the Pando clone is several tens of thousands of years old, which is of high-interest to plant genomics and evolutionary ecology.

      Weaknesses:

      Unfortunately, the claims are not matched by the available data and their analysis. Probably, the results can also not be resurrected using modified analyses, as the available data are not suited to reliably detect somatic genetic variation as a means to age-clonal plants.

      In order to reliably age clones, one needs to consider the full process by which clone mates genetically diverge from one another over time, which starts with a plant's apical meristem (SAM). From this, all above-ground tissues such as twigs and branches, as well as leaves, are derived, which has been beautifully worked out now in oaks and many fruit trees (e.g., doi: 10.1101/2023.01.10.523380 ; 10.1101/2024.01.04.573414). For the accumulation and propagation of fixed somatic genetic variation, only the processes in the SAM matter. Hence, it does make little sense to look at tissue-specific mutations unless one is invoking non-cell division induced mutations through UV light. Those, however, would remain undetected with the present low-coverage sequencing as they cannot leave the mosaic status any more, as that tissue is essentially non-dividing.

      Somatic genetic drift (https://www.nature.com/articles/s41559-020-1196-4) is the foundation for the fixation of somatic genetic variation and hence, for ageing (plant) clones. It requires quantitative modeling of the processes at the cell-line level when new modules, here, aspen trees are formed, in particular N (cell population size) and N0 (founder cell size).

      Calibrations have to be made using the mutation and fixation rate at the somatic cell lineage level, ideally also with some empirical data. In trees such as aspen, it would be very easy to obtain calibration points of branch tips that have physically and thus genetically diverged upon a defined TCA to directly determine the rate of accumulation of somatic genetic variation by direct dendrochronology (i.e., counting tree rings).

      Instead, in the present work, a mutation rate from another tree species is taken, which will introduce a lot of uncertainty into the estimates, given that tree SAMs divide at a very different pace (see doi 10.1093/evolut/qpae150). It is clear that a small difference in the assumed mutation rate, e.g., a higher one, would conversely reduce the age estimate considerably.

      I am doubtful that a conventional phylogenetic model based on coalescence, such as the one employed here, can be utilized, as it assumes a sexually recombining population and hence variable sites. A model simulation on an asexually evolving population would be needed to check this.

      In order to reliably call somatic genetic variation, a decent coverage of short-read sequences is needed, definitely > 15x, which was achieved in the present dataset. This is particularly relevant as a fixation in one of the three haploid chromosome sets would just amount to a read frequency of only 0.33. A coverage of only 4x reads per called site seems very low to me; in other words, the filtering steps do not seem to be very rigorous to me. It is also difficult to follow the logic of several ad hoc adjustments that were made to compensate for the low coverage of sequencing, in particular, the common panel and the replicate identical samples. Why chose 80% in the latter?

      There are alternative, non-sequencing-based ways to double-check the accuracy of somatic SNP calls (e.g., described here https://www.nature.com/articles/s41559-020-1196-4), which could have been employed at least once to evaluate the error rates for the specific sequencing strategy.

      I also suggest that for any future study, reference to mutation callers developed for cancer somatic mutation detection should be employed, which are now increasingly used both in clonal plants and trees for that purpose.

      What worries me is that there is a poor correlation between physical and genetic distance. This lack of correlation among spatial and genetic structure, for example, the star-like phylogeny presented in Figure 6d, indicates a large fraction of false positives rather than some special, as yet unexplained processes of local mutation accumulation that the authors claim to have discovered.

      Finally, the work is not properly embedded into the current literature. For example, recent developments of molecular clocks were not considered, such as the development of a dedicated somatic genetic clock that precisely addresses this question (https://www.nature.com/articles/s41559-024-02439-z). Also, older but nevertheless significant work that aged aspen clones using microsatellite markers is not mentioned (http://dx.doi.org/10.1111/j.1365-294X.2008.03962.x).

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript titled "Latent gene network expression underlies partial re-evolution of a polyphenic trait in the worker caste of ants" by Vasquez-Correa et al. aimed to study genetic mechanisms underlying developmental plasticity, especially binary polyphenism in queen vs worker ant castes. This is an interesting question regarding the extent to which phenotypic traits were altered, lost or regained, and how molecular pathways (upstream vs. downstream) can facilitate this process.

      In ants, reproductive castes (queens and males) develop wings as well as 3 ocelli for mating flights and other activities, while worker castes are wingless, and in some species, they have either no or a reduced number of ocelli. The phylogenetic analysis showed that in the Camponotini ant clade, the one-ocellus phenotype re-evolved in three species independently. The authors analyzed the conserved developmental pathways between Drosophila (well-established) and ants using HCR (a high-quality in situ hybridization technique). They found that although upstream genes for the development of ocelli (otd and hh) showed similar expression between castes, downstream genes (toy, eya, and so) had reduced or no expression in workers of C. floridanus, and this differential expression may lead to partial or complete loss of ocelli. Consistently, workers develop rudimentary tissues, suggesting that they initiate the ocellus developmental process but somehow stop it before adulthood.

      Strengths:

      Evo-devo approaches to reveal conserved molecular pathways of ocellus development. High-quality HCR provided convincing evidence of the expression of key genes in ocelli, eyes and antenna throughout larval development.

      Using HCR, the authors showed differential expression of downstream genes in males vs. soldiers vs. minor workers of C. floridanus, which might explain phenotypic differences between castes.

      Weaknesses:

      Although the molecular pathway is conserved, the mechanism underlying the lack of ocelli in workers remains unclear. In C. floridanus, it could be explained by the evidence of no expression of certain developmental genes, but in other species, e.g. Polyrachis rastellata, is their expression intact, or reduced? There is no control male.

      In addition, HCR in species with partial re-evolution (if their genomes have been sequenced) would be useful to understand the mechanism. For example, there might be differential spatial expression between medial and lateral ocelli.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors identify KIN-G as an in vitro substrate for phosphorylation by TbPLK and show that several of the in vitro P-ated sites, including T310, overlap with P-ation sites seen in live cells. The authors further show that PLK-mediated P-ation inhibits KIN-G binding to microtubules in vitro, as does a KIN-G-T301D mutant, and that expression of a KIN-G-T301D Phospho-mimic in T. brucei phenocopies KIN-G RNAi knockdowns, producing defects in cell division, morphogenesis of the centrin arm, FAZ and other cellular structures, as well as a misplaced cytokinesis furrow.

      Understanding cytoskeletal rearrangements that drive cell division in T. brucei is an important and unresolved problem, so the work addresses important questions that are of great interest. PLK and KIN-G have previously been shown to be important for cell division and morphogenesis of cytoskeletal structures that drive cell division in T. brucei. The current work advances our understanding by suggesting a potential mechanism by which PLK and KIN-G might participate, namely through PLK-dependent P-ation to control KIN-G MT binding activity.

      Strengths:

      The authors use a rigorous combination of biochemistry, phosphoproteomics, cell biology, and mutant analysis to support their conclusion that PLK-mediated P-ation of KIN-G negatively regulates KIN-G microtubule binding, and this may explain the observation that a KIN-G T301 phosphomimic mutant blocks cell division and perturbs biogenesis of cytoskeletal structures that drive cell division and morphogenesis. Combining rigorous and informative in vitro studies with mutant analysis in live cells is a great strength. The work is solid and important, though a few pieces are needed to fully connect the in vitro findings with the in vivo observations, as detailed below.

      Weaknesses:

      Overall, I find this work to be solid and to provide an important addition to our understanding of mechanisms controlling cell division in T. brucei. The biochemistry, in particular, is rigorous and convincingly demonstrates PLK can P-ate KIN-G, altering its MT-binding ability. Analysis of phospho-mutants of KIN-G in live T. brucei supports the conclusion that P-ation of KIN-G at T301 negatively affects KIN-G function in vivo. I think, however, that the results fall short of supporting the title, because, although the data convincingly show that PLK can phosphorylate KIN-G at T301 in vitro, and that T301 is P-ated in vivo, they do not formally demonstrate (nor even test) whether PLK is the kinase responsible for this phosphorylation in vivo (experiments to address this seem quite feasible). I also do not see where the authors try to reconcile the absence of phenotype for KIN-G-T301A with the implied importance of KIN-G phosphorylation by PLK in cell division, which calls into question the need for P-ation of KIN-G-T301 in cell division. Suggestions for addressing these concerns are provided below.

      My two main questions are:

      (1) What is the biological relevance of KIN-G P-ation at T301?

      a) The authors report no defect for the KIN-G-T301A mutant, so what then is the need for T301 P-ation, if the cell gets along fine without it? One step toward addressing this would be to ask what fraction of KIN-G shows P-ation at T301. Although published studies indicate P-ation at T301, it isn't known what percentage of KIN-G in the cell is P-ated. One might anticipate, for example, that T301-P is a small minority of the population in asynchronous cultures and that T301 P-ation increases at specific cell cycle stages.

      b) Published work links PLK to cell division, FAZ elongation, etc... The current work suggests that one role of PLK is to P-ate KIN-G at T301. In contrast, however, the current work also indicates that P-ation of KIN-G at T301 is unnecessary for normal cell division, FAZ elongation, etc....

      c) Some experiments or at least commentary on points a and b above would strengthen the paper.

      (2) Is PLK the kinase that P-ates Kin-G T301 in vivo?

      a) The authors show PLK P-ates T301 (and other residues) in vitro, and that T-301 is P-ated in vivo. To bring the analysis full circle, it would be informative to examine KIN-G P-ation in a PLK mutant or upon inhibition of PLK with published inhibitors. This seems to be a very doable experiment with the tools available.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript presents results of a study using two complementary approaches (RT-qPCR and DBL) to analyze the putative relationship between var gene transcription (and hence, PfEMP1 expression) and clinical presentation among Kenyan children with Plasmodium falciparum malaria. Binary rosetting (yes/no) data are used in a similar way. The study includes samples collected over a period of almost 20 years from about 700 children presenting with either severe (impaired consciousness [IC], respiratory distress [RD], severe anemia [SA]) or non-severe malaria. During the study period, the study area experienced a remarkable drop in P. falciparum transmission intensity.

      Strengths:

      The study stands on the shoulders of many similar studies of this kind, both by the authors and by other research teams, and the inferences made largely confirm those made previously. The current study has analytical rigor and a large sample size. Disentangling the multiple parameters of the above-mentioned relationship is of obvious and crucial importance to an improved understanding of P. falciparum malaria pathogenesis and of the targets and mechanisms of protective immunity to the disease. The present study is a valuable effort towards that. The study is well-structured, and the figures are clear.

      Weaknesses:

      It is somewhat unclear to this reviewer to what extent the samples and data analyzed and reported here are new (i.e., not used/analyzed in previous studies). If there is substantial overlap with earlier studies, this is a weakness because of the risk of circular inferences. The Discussion section would benefit from less repetition of the results section and a more in-depth discussion of the findings obtained relative to the existing literature. Better inclusion of key primary references is recommended.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Wang et al. examined an engineered whole-tumor-cell vaccine based on senescent tumor cells co-encapsulated with liposomal celecoxib in a chitosan hydrogel. The authors propose that prolonged persistence of senescent cells, combined with COX2/PGE2 inhibition, restores NK-DC crosstalk, enhances cDC1 recruitment, and ultimately drives robust CD8⁺ T-cell-mediated antitumor immunity. The study is nicely executed and clearly presented, with extensive in vitro and in vivo validation across multiple tumor models, including melanoma brain metastases and orthotopic PDAC. While the overall concept is timely and of potential interest, several mechanistic conclusions are based primarily on correlative evidence and would benefit from additional functional experiments to strengthen causal interpretation and translational relevance.

      Strengths:

      (1) Strong conceptual framework

      (2) Impressive breadth of in vivo models.

      (3) Clear immunological readouts.

      (4) Innovative combination of senescence biology and biomaterials.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Mechanistic conclusions rely heavily on correlation.

      (2) Lack of functional immune cell depletion studies.

      (3) Limited exploration of long-term safety and antigenic specificity.

      Major Critiques:

      (1) The authors emphasize the expansion and activation of cDC1 as a key mechanism linking innate and adaptive immunity, yet it does not directly test whether cDC1 is required for the observed CD8⁺ T-cell responses and tumor control.

      The authors should perform experiments using Batf3-deficient mice or any other cDC1-depletion strategies to provide important mechanistic validation. If such experiments are not feasible, this limitation should be more clearly acknowledged and discussed.

      (2) The authors note that senescence may generate neoantigens distinct from those present in proliferating tumor cells, but the extent to which STC-induced immunity cross-reacts with non-senescent tumor cells is not fully addressed. While it is appreciated that tumor challenge experiments are included, the author should perform a more explicit analysis of antigenic overlap that would strengthen the translational relevance of the approach. For example, they can compare senescence induced by different stimuli or directly assess immune recognition of non-senescent tumor targets, which would help clarify whether the vaccine primarily exploits senescence-specific antigens or broadly shared tumor antigens.

      (3) Hydrogel encapsulation clearly extends STC persistence in vivo; however, the study provides limited information on the eventual clearance of these cells and the potential implications of prolonged SASP exposure. Given general concerns regarding chronic inflammation associated with senescent cells, additional discussion of long-term local and systemic responses would be helpful. If extended safety analyses are beyond the scope of the current study, the authors should acknowledge the limitation.

      (4) The immunological effects are attributed to COX2/PGE2 inhibition, but it remains unclear whether these effects are specific to celecoxib or could reflect formulation-dependent or off-target mechanisms. The authors may perform additional experiments employing an alternative COX2 inhibitor, genetic COX2 suppression, or PGE2 rescue, which could further support the specificity of the COX2/PGE2-dependent mechanism.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Qiu, Jun et. al., developed and validated a computational pipeline aimed at stabilizing α-helical bundles into very stable folds. The computational pipeline is a hierarchical computational methodology tasked to generate and filter a pool of candidates, ultimately producing a manageable number of high-confidence candidates for experimental evaluation. The pipeline is split into two stages. In stage I, a large pool of candidate designs is generated by RFdiffusion and ProteinMPNN, filtered down by a series of filters (hydropathy score, foldability assessed by ESMFold and AlphaFold). The final set is chosen by running a series of steered MD simulations. This stage reached unfolding forces above 100pN. In stage II, targeted tweaks are introduced - such as salt bridges and metal ion coordination - to further enhance the stability of the α-helical bundle. The constructs undergo validation through a series of biophysical experiments. Thermal stability is assessed by CD, chemical stability by chemical denaturation, and mechanical stability by AFM.

      Strengths:

      A hierarchical computational approach that begins with high-throughput generation of candidates, followed by a series of filters based on specific goal-oriented constraints, is a powerful approach for a rapid exploration of the sequence space. This type of approach breaks down the multi-objective optimization into manageable chunks and has been successfully applied for protein design purposes (e.g., the design of protein binders). Here, the authors nicely demonstrate how this design strategy can be applied to successfully redesign a moderately stable α-helical bundle into an ultrastable fold. This approach is highly modular, allowing the filtering methods to be easily swapped based on the specific optimization goals or the desired level of filtering.

      Weaknesses:

      Assessing the change in stability relative to the WT α-helical bundle is challenging because an additional helix has been introduced, resulting in a comparison between a three-helix bundle and a four-helix bundle. Consequently, the appropriate reference point for comparison is unclear. A more direct and informative approach would have been to redesign the sequence of the original α-helical bundle of the human spectrin repeat R15, allowing for a more straightforward stability comparison.

      The three constructs chosen are 60-70% identical to each other, either suggesting over-constrained optimization of the sequence, or a physical constraint inherent to designing ultrastable α-helical bundles. It would be interesting to explore whether choosing a different combination of filters would enable ultrastable α-helical bundles constructs with a more varied sequence content.

      While the use of steered MD is an elegant approach to picking the top N most stable designs, its computational cost may become prohibitive as the number of designs increases or as the protein size grows, especially since it requires simulating a water box that can accommodate a fully denatured protein.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have done a good job of addressing the comments.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study examines how individual movement vigor is integrated into a shared, dyadic vigor when two individuals are physically coupled. Participants performed wrist-reaching movements toward targets at different distances while mechanically linked via a virtual elastic band, and dyads were formed by pairing participants with different baseline vigor profiles. Under interaction conditions, movements converged to coordinated patterns that could not be explained by simple averaging, indicating that each dyad behaved as a single functional unit. Notably, under coupling, movement durations for both partners were shorter than in the solo condition, arguing against the view that each individual simply executed an independent movement plan. Furthermore, dyadic vigor was primarily predicted by the slower partner's vigor rather than by the faster partner's, suggesting that neither a leader-follower strategy nor a weighted averaging account fully explains the observed behavior. The authors propose a computational model in which both partners adapt to the emerging interaction dynamics ("interactive adaptation strategy"), providing a coherent explanation of the behavioral observations.

      Strengths:

      The study is carefully designed and addresses an important question about how individual movement vigor is integrated during joint action. The experimental paradigm allows systematic manipulation of interaction strength and partner asymmetry. The behavioral results show clear and robust patterns, particularly the shortening of movement durations under elastic coupling (KL and KH condition) and the asymmetrical contribution of the slower partner's vigor to dyadic vigor. The computational model captures the main behavioral patterns well and provides a principled framework for interpreting dyadic vigor not as a simple combination of two independent motor plans, but as an emergent property arising from mutual adaptation. Conceptually, the study is notable in extending the notion of vigor from an individual attribute to a dyad-level construct, opening a new perspective on coordinated movement and motor decision-making.

      Weaknesses:

      The revised manuscript now clearly explains why the proposed computational model successfully accounts for the observed dyadic behavior. In particular, the mechanisms by which uncertainty associated with the slower partner and time-related costs of the faster partner jointly shape dyadic vigor are now clear. I have no further comments to add.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The paper presents a regression-based approach for analysing fiber photometry data termed Concurrent Functional Mixed Models (cFLMMs). The approach works by fitting linear mixed effect models separately to each time point in trial aligned data, then applying smoothing to the model coefficients (betas), and computing confidence intervals. The method extends the authors previous work on using FLMMs for photometry data analysis by allowing for the inclusion of predictors whose value changes across timepoints within a trial, rather than just from trial to trial. As fiber photometry is a rapidly expanding field, developing principled methods to analyse photometry data is valuable, particularly as the authors have released an R package that implements their method to facilitate their use by other groups. The basic FLMM approach for using mixed effects models to analyse trial aligned photometry data, detailed by the authors in their previous manuscript (Loewinger et al. 2025, doi: 10.7554/eLife.95802) appears valuable. The aim of incorporating variables that change within trial into this framework is interesting, and the technical implementation appears to be rigorous. However, I have some reservations as to whether the way in which variables that change within trial have been integrated into the analysis framework is likely to be widely useful, and hence how impactful the additional functionality of cFLMM relative to the previously published FLMM will be.

      In the original FLMM approach, where predictors change only from trial-to-trial, fitting separate regressions at each timepoint generates a timeseries of betas is for each predictor, indicating when and how the predictor explained variance across the trial. This makes a lot of sense and is widely used in neuroscience data analysis. In extending this approach to incorporate variables that change within trial, the authors have used the same method of fitting separate regression models at each timepoint, to obtain a timeseries of betas for each predictor. It is less clear that this approach makes sense for variables that change within trial. This is because the resulting betas only capture how variation in the predictor across trials at a given timepoint explains variance in the signal, but does not capture effects of variation in the predictor across timepoints within trials. This partitioning of variance in the predictor into a between-trial component whose effect on the signal is modelled, and a within-trial component whose effect on the signal is not, is artificial in many experiment designs, and may yield hard to interpret results.

      Consider e.g. the experimental condition considered in Figure 3, taken from Machen et al. 2025 (doi: 10.1101/2025.03.10.642469) in which mice ran down a linear track to collect rewards. In analysing such data, one might want to know how neural activity covaried with the animal's position, but as this variable changes strongly within trial but will have a similar time-course across trials, the cFLMM analysis approach will not work to quantify these effects. This is because variance attributed to position would not capture how neural activity covaried with changes in the animals position within trial, but rather how neural activity covaried with changes in the animals position from trial-to-trial at a given timepoint, which could occur due to e.g. trial-to-trial differences in latency to start moving or running speed. As such, although significant effects of 'position' might be observed, they would not capture covariation between position and neural activity in a straightforwardly interpretable way.

      It is therefore not obvious to me that incorporating variables that change within trial into an analysis framework that runs separate regressions at each timepoint in trial aligned data is likely to be widely useful. If scientific questions require understanding how neural activity covaries as a function of variables that change both within and across trials, an alternative approach would be to run a single regression analysis across all timepoints, and capture the extended temporal responses to discrete behavioural events by using temporal basis functions convolved with the event timeseries. This provides a very flexible framework for capturing covariation of neural activity both with variables that change continuously such as position, and discrete behavioural events such as choices or outcomes, while also handling variable event timing from trial-to-trial.

      One way that cFLMM is used in the manuscript is to handle variable timing of trial events in trial aligned data. In the Machen et al. data, the time when the animal reaches the reward varies from trial to trial, and this is represented in the cFLMM analysis by a binary variable which changes value at this timepoint. From the resulting beta coefficient timeseries (Figure 3C) it is not straightforward to understand how neural activity changed as the subject approached and then received the reward. A simpler approach to quantify this, which I think would have yielded more interpretable coefficient timeseries would have been to align activity across trials on when the subject obtained the reward, rather than on the start of the trial, allowing e.g. the effect of reward type to be visualised as a function of time relative to reward delivery, and hence to see the differential effects during approach vs consumption. More broadly, handling variable trial timing in analyses like FLMM which use trial aligned data, can be achieved either by separately aligning the data to different trial events of interest or by time warping the signal to align multiple important timepoints across trials. It is not obvious that using cFLMM with binary indicator variables that indicate when task states changed will yield a clearer picture of neural activity than these methods.

      It may be that I am missing some key strengths of cFLMM relative to the other approaches I have outlined, or that there are applications where this approach to implementing within-trial variable changes is a natural formalism. However my impression is that while cFLMM represent a technical advance, it is not clear how widely useful the model formalism will be.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The researchers analyzed GFP-tagged RNA Pol II and RNA Pol III catalytic subunits RPB-1 and RPC-1, and showed that they form foci in early embryo nuclei that overlap with the 5S rDNA loci and foci by ATTF-6-RFP. They showed foci are round, dissolve upon hexanediol incubation, and are detected during S phase, removed during, and re-established after mitosis. The researchers performed FRAP and showed fast exchange of polymerases, unlike ATTF-6. They show that, unlike RNA Pol III, RNA Pol II foci are dependent on ATTF-6 and temperature sensitive. The researchers propose that the two polymerases form distinct foci with different biochemical dependencies. This study shows that, although closely located within a gene cluster, the regulation of RNA Pol II and RNA Pol III is independent.

      Strengths:

      The researchers provide high-quality images that support the main results. The researchers' use of auxin-inducible and RNAi depletion work is validated in the same embryos by fluorescent analysis of the target protein.

      Weaknesses:

      Although the researchers propose the hypothesis that the RNA Pol II and RNA Pol III form distinct condensates, alternative hypotheses are not presented, and the criteria by which the other possibilities are ruled out are not discussed.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript, "Nerve Injury-Induced Protein 2 preserves lysosomal membrane integrity to suppress ferroptosis", identifies a previously unrecognized function of NINJ2 as a regulator of lysosomal membrane integrity and iron homeostasis, thereby suppressing ferroptosis. The authors demonstrate that NINJ2 localizes to lysosomes, interacts with LAMP1, limits lysosomal membrane permeabilization (LMP), stabilizes ferritin, and protects cells from ferroptotic cell death. They further extend these mechanistic findings to human cancer datasets, showing co-overexpression and positive correlation of NINJ2 with ferritin genes in iron-addicted cancers.

      Overall, the study is conceptually interesting, technically solid, and integrates cell biology, iron metabolism, and ferroptosis in a coherent framework. The work expands the functional repertoire of the Ninjurin family beyond plasma membrane rupture and inflammation, which will be of interest to researchers in cell death, lysosome biology, and cancer metabolism.

      Strengths:

      (1) The identification of NINJ2 as a lysosome-associated protein that suppresses ferroptosis represents a meaningful advance beyond its previously described roles in inflammation, pyroptosis, and tumorigenesis.

      (2) The work distinguishes NINJ2 functionally from NINJ1, reinforcing the idea that structurally related Ninjurins have divergent membrane-related roles.

      (3) The study presents a logically connected pathway:<br /> NINJ2 loss → LMP → labile iron increase → ferritin degradation → ferroptosis sensitization, which is well supported by the data.

      (4) The link between LAMP1, ferritin turnover, and ferroptosis is particularly compelling and timely given recent interest in lysosomal contributions to ferroptotic signaling.

      (5) The authors use confocal microscopy, proximity ligation assays, biochemical IPs, iron measurements, protein half-life analyses, ferroptosis assays, and TCGA-based analyses, providing convergent evidence for their model.

      (6) Use of two distinct cell lines (MCF7 and Molt4) strengthens generalizability.

      (7) The integration of cancer expression datasets linking NINJ2 with ferritin expression in hepatocellular and breast carcinomas enhances translational relevance.

      (8) Assigning NINJ2 a lysosomal protective function, distinct from NINJ1-mediated plasma membrane rupture, is novel.

      (9) Linking NINJ2 to ferroptosis regulation via lysosomal iron handling, rather than canonical GPX4 or system Xc⁻ pathways, is also novel, along with proposing a NINJ2-LAMP1-ferritin axis as a buffering mechanism against iron-driven lipid peroxidation.

      (10) These insights are not incremental; they reframe how NINJ2 may function at the intersection of membrane biology, iron metabolism, and regulated cell death.

      Areas for improvement:

      While the study is strong, several issues should be addressed for mechanistic depth and general relevance.

      (1) Although NINJ2 is shown to interact with LAMP1 and LAMP1 knockdown rescues ferritin levels, it remains unclear whether the NINJ2-LAMP1 interaction is required for lysosomal protection. The authors could:<br /> a) Map the NINJ2 domain required for LAMP1 interaction and test whether an interaction-deficient mutant fails to protect against LMP and ferroptosis.<br /> b) Rescue NINJ2 KO cells with wild-type versus mutant NINJ2 to establish causality.

      (2) The conclusion that NINJ2 suppresses ferroptosis relies primarily on RSL3 and Erastin sensitivity. A direct assessment of ferroptosis would hence the study, such as:<br /> a) Include ferroptosis rescue experiments using ferrostatin 1 or liproxstatin 1.<br /> b) Assess lipid peroxidation directly (e.g., C11 BODIPY staining) to strengthen the ferroptosis claim.

      (3) The manuscript discusses lysosomal ferritin degradation but does not directly examine NCOA4, a central mediator of ferritinophagy. It would be good to:<br /> a) Test whether NCOA4 knockdown rescues ferritin loss and ferroptosis sensitivity in NINJ2 KO cells.<br /> b) This would clarify whether NINJ2 acts upstream of canonical ferritinophagy pathways or via an alternative mechanism.

      (4) The study is entirely cell-based, despite references to inflammatory and tumor phenotypes in Ninj2-deficient mice. While not strictly required, even limited in vivo validation (e.g., ferroptosis markers or iron accumulation in existing Ninj2 KO tissues) would substantially strengthen the manuscript.

      (5) Finally, most imaging data (e.g., Galectin 3/LAMP1 colocalization, PLA signals) and immunoblot data are presented qualitatively. The authors should provide the qualifications of Western blots and other measurements.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Evidence for the influence of MHC on mate choice in humans is challenging, as social structures and norms often confound the power of studying populations. This study uses an unusual, diverse, but relatively isolated population that allows a direct comparison of arranged and chosen partners to determine if MHC diversity is increased when choice drives mate choice. Overall, the authors use a range of genetic analyses to determine individual relationships alongside different measures of MHC diversity and potential selection pressures. The overall finding that there is no heterozygous dissimilarity difference between arranged and chosen partners. There is evidence of positive selection that may be a stronger driver, or at least it may mask other selection forces.

      Strengths:

      A rare opportunity to study human mate choice and genetic diversity. An excellent range of data and analysis that is well applied, and all results point to the same conclusion.

      Overall, this is a very well-written and concise paper when considering the significant amount of data and excellent analysis that has been undertaken.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) For the type of samples and data available, none are obvious.

      (2) Although this paper is clearly focused on humans, I was expecting more discussion around the studies that have been undertaken in animals. It is likely that between populations and species, there are different pressures that have driven the MHC evolution, but also mate choice.

      (3) The peptide presentation based on pathogen genomes is interesting but usually not significant. I wondered if another measure of MHC haplotype diversity to complement this would be the overall repertoire of peptides that could be presented, pathogen-based or otherwise. There is usually significant overlap in the peptides that can be presented, for example, between HLA-A and HLA-B, and this may reveal more significant differences between the alleles and haplotype frequencies.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study examines how genes involved in cellular recycling (autophagy) influence lifespan under different experimental conditions. The findings help clarify why previous studies have reported conflicting results about whether blocking autophagy shortens or extends lifespan. The work will be of interest to researchers studying aging and cellular stress responses, particularly those using model organisms.

      Strengths:

      The findings are valuable, as they help resolve inconsistencies within a specific subfield of aging research. The evidence presented is solid, as the data broadly support the primary claims of the study. In addition, the discussion is thorough and thoughtfully integrates the findings within the broader context of the field.

      Weaknesses:

      Additional functional validation would further strengthen the conclusions.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript describes novel technique development and experiments to track the social gaze of marmosets. The authors used video tracking of multiple cameras in pairs of marmoset to infer head orientation and gaze, and then studied gaze direction as a function of distance between animals, relationships, and social conditions/stimuli.

      Strengths:

      Overall the work is interesting and well done. It addresses an area of growing interest in animal social behavior, an area that has largely been dominated by research in rodents and other non-primate species. In particular, this work addresses something that is uniquely primate (perhaps not unique, but not studied much in other laboratory model organisms), which is that primates, like humans, look at each other, and this gaze is an important social cue of their interactions. As such, the presented work is an important advance and addition to the literature that will allow more sophisticated quantification of animal behaviors. I am particularly enthusiastic about how the authors approach the cone of uncertainty in gaze, which can be both due to some error in head orientation measurements as well as variable eye position

      Weaknesses:

      While there remains some degree of uncertainty in the precise accuracy of the gaze measure, the authors have done an excellent job accounting for these as well as they can, and appropriately acknowledge the limitations of their approach.

      Comments on revisions:

      I have no further recommendations. The authors addressed my previous suggestions or acknowledged them as topics for future investigation. This is excellent work.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      This paper addresses, through experiment and simulation, the combined effects of bacterial circular swimming near no-slip surfaces and chemotaxis in simple linear gradients. The authors have constructed a microfluidic device in which a gradient of L-aspartate is established, to which bacteria respond while swimming while confined in channels of different widths. There is a clear effect that the chemotactic drift velocity reaches a maximum in channel widths of about 8 microns, similar in size to the circular orbits that would prevail in the absence of side walls. Numerical studies of simplified models confirm this connection.

      The experimental aspects of this study are well executed. The design of the microfluidic system is clever in that it allows a kind of "multiplexing" in which all the different channel widths are available to a given sample of bacteria.

      The authors have included a useful intuitive explanation of their results via a geometric model of the trajectories. In future work it would be interesting to analyze further the voluminous data on the trajectories of cells by formulating the mathematical problem in terms of a suitable Fokker-Planck equation for the probability distribution of swimming directions. In particular, this might help understand how incipient circular trajectories are interrupted by collisions with the walls and how this relates to enhanced chemotaxis.

      The authors argue that these findings may have relevance to a number of physiological and ecological contexts. As these would be characterized by significant heterogeneity in pore sizes and geometries, further work will be necessary to translate the present results to those situations.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Lenz et al. seeks to investigate molecular mechanisms directing virulence gene expression in the malaria parasite Plasmodium falciparum. The report provides a detailed characterization of the phenotypic and epigenetic features of a var2csa expressing parasite population, the key virulence gene causing the clinical syndrome of placental malaria. Novel evidence supporting the concept that active expression of this gene is associated with nuclear repositioning away from suppressive regions of chromatin is presented. In addition, the authors conducted a preliminary characterization of different forms of DNA methylation, suggesting that 5-methylcytosine is enriched in virulence genes, but does not correlate with their activation or repression. However, a trend towards higher enrichment of 5-methylcytosine in highly active as opposed to inactive genes from the core genome was reported, although this observation requires further validation.

      Strengths:

      The concise study provides a well documented and controlled set of experiments utilizing state-of-the-art OMICs methodologies including ChIPseq, RNAseq, chromatin-conformation capture (Hi-C) and DNA methylation (MeDIPseq) to generate deep insight into the epigenetic regulation of the key virulence factor of P. falciparum. The study unifies different lines of evidence and thereby contributes to a clearer understanding of the mechanisms underlying active expression of var2csa.

      Weaknesses:

      Although all experiments appear to have been rigorously conducted and documented with appropriate replicates and controls, the study is overall lacking statistical support from individual analyses of the biological replicates. In particular, the key novel result suggesting increased distance of the active var2csa gene from regions of heterochromatin as assessed by chromatin conformation capture would benefit from further analysis by comparison with other genetic loci. This also applies to the differential DNA methylation patterns, which should be dissected in more detail to support any association with gene expression or intron function.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work presents ANTIPODE, a bilinear generative model developed for the simultaneous integration and identification of cell types across species and developmental stages using single-cell RNA-seq data. ANTIPODE is inspired by scANVI, a well-established semi-supervised framework for single-cell transcriptomics. After describing its implementation, the authors use ANTIPODE to integrate data from 15 species comprising 1,854,767 cells. Then, the authors benchmark ANTIPODE against commonly used methods (scVI, Harmony, and Scanorama) using two snRNAseq datasets and report comparable or superior performance. They then return to the initial integrated dataset and analyse patterns of gene expression evolution. Finally, they leverage the model to study the "later-is-larger" concept, evaluating the relationship between gene expression, developmental timing and structure size and finding gene expression signatures of this concept.

      Strengths:

      A major strength of the paper is that ANTIPODE employs a bilinear decoding architecture, which produces more interpretable model parameters while performing at least as well as existing, more opaque nonlinear integration approaches.

      The authors demonstrate the utility of ANTIPODE by integrating single-cell mRNA sequencing data from mouse, macaque, and human brains and confirming general principles regarding developmental timing and cell-type-specific gene expression divergence.

      They also propose a conceptually interesting framework for studying gene expression evolution: instead of focusing solely on differentially expressed genes between homologous cell types, they jointly model gene expression across developmental states and species-specific divergence, allowing them to define and analyse four categories of differential expression.

      Finally, the authors' conclusions are well supported by the analyses presented, although these conclusions remain relatively conservative and reinforce already established principles.

      Weaknesses:

      A central weakness of the paper is its limited accessibility to a broad audience. Despite attempting to keep computational details in the supplement, the main text still uses substantial jargon, undermining the goal of providing an intuitive explanation of the model. The figures are also insufficiently annotated (e.g., colour schemes in Figure 2 heatmap, bubble plot details in Figure 3, entropy definition in Figure 3), and the figure legends are overly brief and lack essential information. I strongly recommend that the authors revise both text and figures to improve clarity and readability.

      Similarly, the materials and methods lack a lot of information about the implementation of the model, the statistical tests used, the calculations of entropy, etc.

      The study sits between tool development and biological discovery but does not fully commit to either. As a result, it cannot be evaluated as a full benchmarking study, yet it also does not provide new biological insights that are validated experimentally.

      Finally, the GitHub repository for ANTIPODE is not yet functional and lacks documentation or tutorials, making it impossible to assess usability or reproducibility.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The manuscript "Alternative splicing of PIF4 regulates plant development under heat stress" by Niño-González et al. describes a heat-responsive alternative splicing (AS) event in PIF4 in Arabidopsis and its potential impact on seedling development. The authors observe that etiolated ings exposed to heat respond with a more photomorphogenic developmental behaviour, as reflected, for example, by increased cotyledon opening and reduced hypocotyl elongation. They propose that the AS event in PIF4 may contribute to this response, due to reduced formation of the full-length PIF4 protein and an increase in the shorter PIF4 protein with potentially dominant negative functions.

      Expressing the individual variants in a pif4 mutant background was used to further examine their function. In the case of the full-length PIF4 variant, some of the heat-induced phenotypes were suppressed. For the lines overexpressing the shorter PIF4 variant, heat responses were not examined.

      The authors describe an interesting phenotype and present an appealing model of how AS of PIF4, a well-known key regulator of developmental processes including light- and temperature responses, might be involved. However, I don't think that the authors provide strong evidence for their model, and the unaltered heat response of pif4 mutants argues against a major role of this gene and its AS event under these conditions. Regarding the heat responses, it remains open how distinct those are from thermomorphogenesis.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) In the manuscript, it is emphasized that previous studies on PIFs' role in temperature responses have mainly focused on thermomorphogenesis under high ambient temperature and not under hot temperatures causing heat stress. How do the authors know that the effects they are looking at are specific to hot temperatures and do not also occur at more moderate temperature increases? So, what would PIF4 splicing look like upon a shift from 22{degree sign}C to 28{degree sign}C (instead of 37{degree sign}C as used in the manuscript)?

      (2) The potential role of PIF4 and its AS event in the heat response is the key point of this manuscript, as also reflected by the title. As summarized above, I don't see direct evidence for this and a functional characterization of the AS event is lacking. First, the pif4 mutant doesn't show an altered response, which argues against its requirement under these conditions, and in particular against the proposed model that a shortened version of PIF4 acts in a dominant negative manner. Second, the impact of AS on PIF4 protein levels remains open. Antibodies against PIF4 exist and have been used before, e.g. in Lee et al. (2021), Nat Comm, and Fan et al. (2025), Nat Comm - both studies address the role of PIF4 in thermomorphogenesis and should also be discussed in this manuscript. Detecting PIF4 proteins would allow testing if indeed both PIF4 protein variants are detectable and whether, upon heat stress, the longer variant decreases while the shorter variant increases. This could be expected based on transcript data; however, due to regulation at multiple steps, a correlation between transcript and protein levels might not exist. Third, the transgenic lines expressing either the short or long PIF4 variant do not really reflect the situation in the wild type and might be/are overexpression lines. Specifically, constructs for both variants lack the UTRs according to the description in the method section. Furthermore, is the short version expressed as GFP fusion, as I understood from the method description? The PIF4-L mutants have similar PIF levels as the WT (SFig. 9); however, this refers to total transcripts, which makes a difference in the wild type, in particular under heat stress. Comparing here only the PIF4-L levels would be more informative. Accordingly, the transgenic lines may overexpress PIF4-L compared to the wild type. All the PIF4-S lines show 4 to 5-fold overexpression (again for total transcripts) compared to WT. Including lines with lower overexpression levels would be needed for a direct comparison to the wild type. Moreover, immunoblot analysis of the PIF4 protein would be needed for a direct comparison between the wild type and the two types of mutants.

      (3) Apart from the question of what level of (over)expression the transgenic lines have, several aspects of the phenotyping experiments are not in line with a simple model of PIF4 regulation or have not been addressed. Expressing the long PIF4 variant in the pif4 mutant background suppresses some of the heat-induced changes, but not the hypocotyl shortening, suggesting that the hypocotyl effect is not caused by a heat-induced lack of PIF4.

      When expressing the short variant, the authors observe increased cotyledon opening in darkness, consistent with a suppression of skotomorphogenesis due to a negative function of PIF4-S, at least when it is overexpressed. For hypocotyl length, no consistent difference between wild type and PIF4-S lines was observed: seedlings grown for 3 d in darkness had identical lengths, for 4-d-old seedlings, the PIF4-S lines did not give consistent results: PIF4S.1 (which has highest transgene expression) had same length as wild type; a pronounced difference was only seen for PIF4-S.3, which is the line with lowest expression. Have the experiments been reproduced with independent seed badges? I'm also wondering why the authors haven't performed the heat stress experiments with these PIF4-S lines, as they did for the PIF4-L mutants. According to the authors' model, the PIF4-S lines might show an opposite response compared to the PIF4-L lines, i.e. an even more pronounced heat effect compared to the wild type.

      (4) Why was the heat effect on AS of PIF6 not further analysed? Previous work showed the role of PIF6 in seed development and germination; in line with this, PIF6 expression is particularly high in embryos and seeds, but it is also expressed and alternatively spliced in other tissues and conditions, as shown in Figure 1 and SFigure 2. From the data in Figure 1, it looks like the AS pattern in heat might also be different from other conditions. So, it would be interesting to see how AS of PIF6 changes in the control and heat samples that the authors analysed for PIF4 AS, in particular, if this response is distinct for PIF4 versus PIF6.

      (5) The presentation of the RNA-seq data is incomplete. According to the method section, WT, pif4-101, PIF4-L.1 and PIF4-L.2 seedlings upon 3 h heat/control treatment were analysed. Why are DE and DAS genes and comparisons of different genotypes not shown? The FC data displayed in Figure 2E and the overlap between heat-regulated genes (Fig. 3D; only in WT) and PIF regulation show only some aspects of the data.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this paper, Shukla, Cross, Kish, and colleagues investigate how binding of a cargo-adaptor mimic (KinTag) to the TPR domains of the kinesin-1 light chain, or disruption of the TPR docking site (TDS) on the kinesin-1 heavy chain, triggers release of the TPR domains from the holoenzyme. This dislocation provides a plausible mechanism for transition out of the autoinhibited lambda-particle toward the open and active conformation of kinesin-1. Using a combination of negative-stain electron microscopy, AlphaFold modeling, biochemical assays, hydrogen-deuterium exchange mass spectrometry (HDX-MS) and other methods, the authors show how TPR undocking propagates conformational changes through the coiled-coil stalk to the motor domains, increasing their mobility, and enhances interactions with the microtubule-bound cofactor MAP7. Together, they propose a model in which the TDS on CC1 of the heavy chain forms a "shoulder" in the compact, autoinhibited state. Cargo-adaptor binding, mimicked here by KinTag, dislodges this shoulder, liberating the motor domains and promoting MAP7 association, driving kinesin-1 activation.

      Strengths:

      Throughout the study, the authors use clever construct design - e.g. delta-Elbow, ElbowLock, CC-Di and the high-affinity KinTag - to test specific mechanisms by directly perturbing structural contacts or effecting interactions. The proposed mechanism of releasing autoinhibition via adaptor-induced TPR undocking is also interrogated with a number of complementary techniques that converge on a convincing model for activation that can be further tested in future studies.

      Weaknesses:

      These reflect limits of what the current data can establish rather than flaws in execution. It remains to be tested if the open state of kinesin-1 initiated by TPR undocking is indeed an active state of kinesin-1 capable of processive movement and/or cargo transport. It also remains to be determined what the mechanism of motor domain undocking from the autoinhibited conformation is. But this important study provides the groundwork for testing these open questions.

      Comments on revisions:

      My original minor concerns have been addressed in the revision.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Barré et al. investigate the roles of the phosphatases Shp1 and Shp2 in the megakaryocyte and platelet lineage using genetic depletion in mice. By employing Gp1ba-Cre-based models, the study builds on the authors' previous work and addresses some limitations associated with earlier Pf4-Cre approaches. The authors report relatively mild alterations in megakaryocyte and platelet parameters in mice lacking either Shp1 or Shp2 alone, whereas combined deletion of both phosphatases results in macrothrombocytopenia, mild bleeding, and impaired GPVI-dependent platelet aggregation accompanied by reduced Syk phosphorylation. The functional platelet defects are linked to reduced expression of GPVI and integrin α2, while thrombocytopenia is associated with impaired megakaryocyte maturation, reduced ploidy, defective proplatelet formation, and altered TPO-dependent Ras/MAPK signaling. Similar effects on megakaryopoiesis are also observed in vitro following treatment with newly developed Shp2 inhibitors.

      Strengths and Weaknesses:

      The study addresses an important biological question and presents a substantial dataset that could contribute to a better understanding of Shp1 and Shp2 function in platelet biology. However, several aspects of data presentation and interpretation would benefit from additional clarification. In particular, while the authors conclude that single genetic deletion or pharmacological inhibition of Shp1 has a limited impact and that the major phenotypes are specific to combined Shp1/2 deletion or Shp2 inhibition, some of the data suggest more nuanced effects that may warrant further discussion.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The manuscript by Jackman et al. explores the role of a candidate enhancer of dlx2b in zebrafish tooth formation.

      They have mapped the dental epithelium and mesenchyme activity of a 4kb promoter proximal region previously identified as a candidate enhancer region. They identified candidate TFBS and candidate transcription factors regulating this enhancer and proposed that their findings reveal principles of enhancer function during vertebrate organogenesis (tooth development) and the power of dissecting cis regulatory architecture. The study offer valuable genetic tagging resource for studying tooth development while further experiments and analyses would be needed to support the suggestion for novel findings on in cis-regulatory principles of tooth development. In the lack of functional evidence on endogenous target gene pr tooth development, some of the claims of the paper may need rephrasing.

      (1) The candidate enhancer region has previously been published, this study narrows the enhancer effect to a well-conserved region within. To what degree the element is unique in the locus for tooth development and to what degree this element is required for tooth morphogenesis, is not addressed.

      (2) The knock-in approach is convenient for reporter activity based analyses, however it lacks the precision that would be necessary to conclude on enhancer- autonomous effects or enhancer effects on the endogenous target promoter. The HSP promoter inserted in within a 5kb(?) insert in the UTR region of dlx2b creates an chimeric E-P context. The expression profile of the knock-in reporter is substantially different from the endogenous gene (Figure 1B and C) suggesting E-P interaction dependent expression profile, which may confuse what in the expression comes solely from the enhancer and not as a result of the HSP promoter interaction with the enhancer. An alternative heterologous promoter would help in defining the enhancer specific effects.

      (3) Function of the candidate enhancer: The MTE enhancer effect is measured by gain of function towards dlx2b regulation. The deletion assays are limited to plasmids designed to test the enhancer in isolation from the endogenous enhancer architecture, or to a deletion in the knock-in, which may be impacted by the chimeric regulatory interaction with a heterologous HSP promoter. As a result we do not learn whether the enhancer targets or needs for endogenous target gene activity. This design allows a conclusion on tissue activity of the enhancer but not the requirement for tooth development.

      (4) Since the locus is scattered by candidate enhancers (see genome annotation resources) it is feasible that additional E-P interactions lead to potential enhancer redundancies with the MTE. For a conclusive functional test/requirement of the MTE enhancer, the authors would need to delete it in the endogenous locus context. The knock-in could theoretically be used for an enhancer function on dlx2b activity, if the authors show that there is interaction with the endgogenous promoter (3C type experiment); and that the MTE enhancer-driven GFP activity was identical to the endogenous tagged dlx2b activity. This does not appear to be the case, as ectopic expression in Fig 1C as compared to B is shown. Of note, RNA detection by WISH would be more precise for comparisons. The figure likely compares protein (legend is unclear, but text suggests protein) to mRNA, which is imprecise.

      (5) There is an experimental design question arising with generating the MTE deletion in the knock-in (line 391): the authors describe generating the transgenic lines by screening for reduced reporter activity first. This suggests the authors pre-emptively looked for an effect as result they predicted when generating the transgenic lines, which would create a circular argument. All transgenic lines carrying the deletion (tested by sequencing first) would need to be assayed for activity change and then can conclusion could be made on effect of MTE loss by statistical analyses of reporter activities in the generated lines.

      (6) Most transgenic work described are based on single transgenic lines. Enhancer promoter contexts may be affected either by position effects (in case of the reporter constructs) or by the heterologous promoter context of the knock which may be affected by unexpected recombination events. Such unintended confound effects can be excluded by replicates.

      (7) GFP protein detection does not allow precise spatio-temporal resolution due to varying protein stability in tissues, which potentially impacts endogenous gene activity comparison, and accurate determination of activity dynamics towards conclusions on lineage determining/maintenance roles of the dlx2b enhancer.

      (8) The expression pattern change upon MTE loss (retention of mesenchyme, loss of epithelium) is an interesting observation, which would benefit from more comprehensive analysis of the grammar (TFBS contributions) to the pattern variation by dissection of the combination of TFBS contributions. Without such, enhancer grammar remains mostly unclear, thus, principles of morphogenesis may not have been uncovered.

      (9) The diagrammatic models of the conclusions are illustrating simple logic which does not add to the text.

      (10) Author contributions need to be explained in more detail to be sufficiently granular for fair credit.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The work titled "Geomagnetic and visual cues guide seasonal migratory orientation in the nocturnal fall armyworm, the world's most invasive insect" provided experimental evidence on how geomagnetic and visual cues are integrated, and visual cues are indispensable for magnetic orientation in the nocturnal fall armyworm.

      Strengths:

      It has been demonstrated that the Australian Bogon moth could integrate global stellar cues with the geomagnetic field for long distance navigation. However, data are lacking for other insects. This study suggested that the integration of geomagnetic and visual cues may represent a conserved navigational mechanism broadly employed across migratory insects.

      Weaknesses:

      The visual cues used in the indoor experimental system designed by the authors may have some limitations in ecological relevance. The author may need more explanations on this experimental system.

      In the revised manuscript, the authors have added explanations in the discussion section. I am fine with the revision.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In this paper, Biswas et al. describe the role of acetylcholine (ACh) signaling in protection against chronic oxidative stress in C. elegans. They showed that disruption of ACh signaling in either unc-17 mutant or gar-3 mutants led to sensitivity to toxicity caused by chronic paraquat (PQ) treatment. Using RNA seq, they found that approximately 70% of the genes induced by chronic PQ exposure in wild type failed to upregulate in these mutants. The overexpression of gar-3 selectively in cholinergic neurons was sufficient to promote protection against chronic PQ exposure in an ACh-dependent manner. The study points to a previously undescribed role for ACh signaling in providing organism-wide protection from chronic oxidative stress likely through the transcriptional regulation of numerous oxidative stress-response genes. The paper is well-written, and the data are robust, though some conclusions seem preliminary and are not fully support the current data (see below). While the study identifies the muscarinic ACh receptor gar-3 as an important regulator of the response to PQ, the specific neurons in which gar-3 functions were not unambiguously identified, and the sources of ACh that regulate GAR-3 signaling and the identities of the tissues targeted by gar-3 were not addressed.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors addressed my comments adequately in their revised submission. Please include representative images to accompany the quantification of the new results presented in Fig S4A.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The goal of this study was to investigate the degree to which low-level stimulus features (i.e., grating orientation) are processed in V1 when stimuli are not consciously perceived under conditions of continuous flash suppression (CFS). The authors measured the activity of a population of V1 neurons at single neuron resolution in awake fixating monkeys while they viewed dichoptic stimuli that consisted of an oriented grating presented to one eye and a noise stimulus to the other eye. Under such conditions, the mask stimulus can prevent conscious perception of the grating stimulus. By measuring the activity of neurons (with Ca2+ imaging) that preferred one or the other eye, the authors tested the degree of orientation processing that occurs during CFS.

      Strengths:

      The greatest strength of this study is the spatial resolution of the measurement and the ability to quantify stimulus representations during CSF in populations of neurons preferring the eye stimulated by either the grating or the mask. There have been a number of prominent fMRI studies of CFS, but all of them have had the limitation of pooling responses across neurons preferring either eye, effectively measuring the summed response across ocular dominance columns. The ability to isolate separate populations offers an exciting opportunity to study the precise neural mechanisms that give rise to CFS, and potentially provide insights into nonconscious stimulus processing.

      Weaknesses:

      However, while this is an impressive experimental setup, the major weakness of this study is that the experiments don't advance any theoretical account of why CFS occurs or what CFS implies for conscious visual perception. There are two broad camps of thinking with regard to CFS. On the one hand, Watanabe et al., 2011 reported that V1 activity remained intact during CFS, implying that CFS interrupts stimulus processing downstream of V1. On the other hand, Yuval-Greenberg and Heeger (2013) showed that V1 activity is in fact reduced during CFS. By using a parametric experimental design, they measured the impact of the mask on the stimulus response as a function of contrast, and concluded that the mask reduces the gain of neural responses to the grating stimulus. They presented a theoretical model in which the mask effectively reduced the SNR of the grating, making it invisible in the same way that reducing contrast makes a stimulus invisible.

      In the first submission of the manuscript, the authors incorrectly described the Yuval-Greenberg & Heeger (2013) paper and Watanabe et al. (2011) papers, suggesting that they had observed the same or similar effects of CFS on V1 activity, when in fact they had described opposite results. Reviewer 1 also observed that the authors appeared to be confused in their reading of these highly relevant papers. In the revision, the authors have reworked this paragraph, now correctly describing these sets of opposing results. However, I still do not understand what the authors are trying to argue: "...these studies were not designed to quantify the pure effect of CFS on stimulus-evoked V1 responses." I do not understand what is meant by "pure" in this case. Regardless, it is clear that the measurements in the present study strongly support the interpretation of Yuval-Greenberg & Heeger (i.e., that V1 activity is degraded by CFS, 'akin' to a loss in the contrast-to-noise ratio of neural activity). It would be appropriate for the authors to communicate this clearly.

      I continue to be of the opinion that this study is lacking an adequate model of interocular interactions that might explain the Ca2+ imaging. The machine learning results are not terribly surprising - multivariate methods, such as SVMs, are more sensitive than univariate approaches. So it is plausible that an SVM can support decoding of the coarse orientation information, even when no tuning is evident in the univariate analyses. However, the link between this result and the underlying neurophysiology is opaque. The failure to model the neural data with an explicit model is a missed opportunity.

  2. Mar 2026
    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Zhe Li and colleagues investigate how mice exposed to visual threats and rewards balance their decisions in favour of consuming rewards or engaging in defensive actions. By varying threat intensity and reward value, they first confirm previous findings showing that defensive responses increase with threat intensity and that there is habituation to the threat stimulus. They then find that water-deprived mice have a reduced probability of escaping from low contrast visual looming stimuli when water or sucrose are offered in the environment, but that when the stimulus contrast is high, the presence of sucrose or water increases the probability of escape. By analysing behaviour metrics such as the latency to flee from the threat stimulus, they suggest that this increase in threat sensitivity is due to increased vigilance. Analysis of this behaviour as a function of social hierarchy shows that dominant mice have higher threat sensitivity, which is also interpreted as being due to increased vigilance. These results are captured by a drift diffusion model variant that incorporates threat intensity and reward value.

      The main contribution of this work is quantifying how the presence of water or sucrose in water-deprived mice affects escape behaviour. The differential effects of reward between the low and high contrast conditions are intriguing, but I find the interpretation that vigilance plays a major in this process not supported by the data. The idea that reward value exerts some form of graded modulation of the escape response is also not supported by the data. In addition, there is very limited methodological information, which makes assessing the quality of some of the analyses difficult, and there is no quantification on the quality of the model fits.

      (1) The main measure of vigilance in this work is reaction time. While reaction time can indeed be affected by vigilance, reaction times can vary as a function of many variables, and be different for the same level of vigilance. For example, a primate performing the random dot motion task exhibits differences in reaction times that can be explained entirely by the stimulus strength. Reaction time is therefore not a sound measure of vigilance, and if a goal of this work is to investigate this parameter, then it should be measured. There is some attempt at doing this for a subset of the data in Figure 3H, by looking at differences in the action of monitoring the visual field (presumably a rearing motion, though this is not described) between the first and second trials in the presence of sucrose. I find this an extremely contrived measure. What is the rationale for analysing only the difference between the first and second trials? Also, the results are only statistically significant because the first trial in the sucrose condition happens to have zero up action bouts, in contrast to all other conditions. I am afraid that the statistics are not solid here. When analysing the effects of dominance, a vigilance metric is the time spent in the reward zone. Why is this a measure of vigilance? More generally, measuring vigilance of threats in mice requires monitoring the position of the eyes, which previous work has shown is biased to the upper visual field, consistent with the threat ecology of rodents.

      (2) In both low and high contrast conditions, there are differences in escape behaviour between no reward and water or sucrose presence, but no statistically significant differences between water and sucrose (eg: Figure 3B). I therefore find that statements about reward value are not supported by the data, which only show differences between the presence or absence of reward. Furthermore, there is a confound in these experiments, because according to the methods, mice in the no-reward condition were not water-deprived. It is thus possible that the differences in behaviour arise from differences in the underlying state.

      (3) There is very little methodological information on behavioural quantification. For example, what is hiding latency? Is this the same are reaction time? Time to reach the safe zone? What exactly is distance fled? I don't understand how this can vary between 20 and 100cm. Presumably, the 20cm flights don't reach the safe place, since the threat is roughly at the same location for each trial? How is the end of a flight determined? How is duration measured in reward zone measures, e.g., from when to when? How is fleeing onset determined?

      (4) There is little methodological information on how the model was fit (for example, it is surprising that in the no reward condition, the r parameter is exactly 0. What this constrained in any way), and none of the fit parameters have uncertainty measures so it is not possible to assess whether there are actually any differences in parameters that are statistically significant.

      Comments on the revised manuscript:

      The manuscript has been revised and improved significantly by the addition of methodological details and new analysis. I remain, however, unconvinced by the argument that increased vigilance in the presence of reward leads to heightened escape behaviour.

      In response to my criticism that the work does not measure vigilance directly, the authors have included measures of foraging interval and foraging speed, which they state are "two direct behavioral analyses of vigilance". I disagree - like reaction time, foraging speed and foraging interval can be modulated, for example, by changes in threat sensitivity. Increased threat sensitivity comes with diverse behavioral changes that may well include increased vigilance, but foraging interval and foraging speed can certainly change without the animal expressing increased vigilance behaviors. A bigger issue I still have though, is with the conclusion that the presence of reward increases "direct escape behaviors". Comparing the no reward, water and sucrose groups indeed shows a difference (which is now clear after the split into early and late phases), but the issue is that these are different mice. As the text is written, is sounds like introducing reward will acutely increase escape. But if we look at the raw data show in Figure 2C, what I think is happening is that the presence of reward is decreasing habituation to the stimulus. The data for trials 1 and 10 in the three conditions show this - there is habituation with no reward (reaction times are all shifting to the right), a bit less with water and very little with sucrose. This is interesting in its own right and we can speculate why it might be happening, but I think this is conceptually different from what the authors are proposing.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper investigates the mode of action of GPR55, a relatively understudied type of cannabinoid receptors, in presynaptic terminals of Purkinje cells. The authors use demanding techniques of patch clamp recording of the terminals, sometimes coupled with another recording of the postsynaptic cell. They find a lower release probability of synaptic vesicles after activation of GPR55 receptors, while presynaptic voltage-dependent calcium currents are unaffected. They propose that the size of a specific pool of synaptic vesicles supplying release sites is decreased upon activation of GPR55 receptors.

      Strengths:

      The paper uses cutting edge techniques to shed light on a little studied, potentially important type of cannabinoid receptors. The results are clearly presented, and the conclusions are sound.

      Weaknesses:

      The nature of the vesicular pool that is modified following activation of GPR55 is not definitively characterized.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have done a good job in answering the criticisms of reviewers. Consequently, the revised version offers a substantial improvement over the first version.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper provides an ingenious experimental test of an efficient coding objective based on optimization as a task success. The key idea is that different tasks (estimation vs discrimination) will, under the proposed model, lead to a different scaling between the encoding precision and the width of the prior distribution. Empirical evidence in two tasks involving number perception supports this idea.

      Strengths:

      - The paper provides an elegant test of a prediction made by a certain class of efficient coding models previously investigated theoretically by the authors.<br /> The results in experiments and modeling suggest that competing efficient coding models, optimizing mutual information alone, may be incomplete by missing the role of the task.

      - The paper carefully considers how the novel predictions of the model interact with the Weber/Fechner law.

      Weaknesses:

      - The claims would be even more strongly validated if data were present at more than two widths in the discrimination experiment (also noted in Discussion).

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript presents a valuable single-cell RNA-seq study on Trypanosoma cruzi, an important human parasite. It investigates the expression heterogeneity of surface proteins, particularly those from the trans-sialidase-like (TcS) superfamily, within amastigote and trypomastigote populations. The findings suggest a previously underappreciated level of diversity in TcS expression, which could have implications for understanding parasite-host interactions and immune evasion strategies. The use of single cell approaches to delve into population heterogeneity is strong. However, the study does have some limitations that need to be addressed.

      The focus on single-cell transcriptional heterogeneity in surface proteins, especially the TcS family, in T. cruzi is novel. Given the important role of these proteins in parasite biology and host interaction, the findings have potential significance.

      Strengths:

      The key finding of heterogeneous TcS expression in trypomastigotes is well-supported. The analysis comparing multigene families, single-copy genes, and ribosomal proteins highlights the unusual nature of the variation in surface protein coding genes.

      Weaknesses:

      While the manuscript identifies TcS heterogeneity, the functional implications of the different expression profiles remain speculative. The authors state it may reflect differences in infectivity, but no direct experimental evidence supports this.

      The manuscript lacks any functional validation of the single-cell findings. For instance, do the trypomastigote subpopulations identified based on TcS expression exhibit differences in infectivity, host cell tropism, or immune evasion? Such experiments would greatly strengthen the study.

      The authors identify a subpopulation of TcS genes that are highly expressed in many cells. However, it is unclear if these correspond to previously characterized TcS members with specific functions.

      The authors hypothesize that observed heterogeneity may relate to chromatin regulation. However, the study does not directly address these mechanisms. There are interesting connections to be made with what they identify as colocalization of genes within chromatin folding domains, but the authors do not fully explore this. It would be insightful to address these mechanisms in future work. [...]

      Comments on revisions:

      The novel version of the manuscript has improved and satisfied this reviewer.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Neurons have varied responses to external stimuli that cannot be explained by naive Poisson models. Previous work has quantified and partitioned higher-than-Poisson variability in the brain into different components. The authors improve on these methods to infer how both the stimulus drive and internal gain dynamics impact neuronal variability continuously in time. The clean and well-reasoned model is rigorously developed and then applied to neural data across the visual hierarchy. This lends new insights into how variability is partitioned, agreeing with and extending previous work on how that variability changes from early visual areas (LGN, V1) through to higher, motion-sensitive areas (area MT). Another key contribution is that this partitioning can be fully addressed as a continuous-time process, which allows for the dissection of how the timescale of fluctuations in these two components changes across the brain's processing arc.

      Strengths:

      (1) The model is cleanly derived and thoroughly documented, including usable code shared in a GitHub repo. This makes the method immediately portable to other neural systems.

      (2) This is a clear and well-presented piece of work. The figures and writing are clear and understandable, and all pieces of the derivations are included in the main text and supplementary information.

      (3) Comparisons to other models, particularly the one from Goris et al., 2014 shows how this Continuous Modulated Poisson (CMP) model outperforms previous work.

      (4) New insights about how variability partitioning changes across the visual stream from LGN to MT are revealed, including how the gain fluctuates on longer timescales in higher visual areas. Another key result about the anticorrelation between the variance in stimulus drive and gain fluctuations comports with theories about how neurons maintain efficient, reliable encoding.

      (5) In addition to the results reported here, this work will serve as an excellent tutorial for students and postdocs first delving into the sources of variability in the brain.

      Weaknesses:

      The work is somewhat incremental, building on previous studies of the partitioning of variability in the brain, but it provides important new extensions, as noted above.

      The only major gap I would suggest addressing in the Discussion is the observation of sub-Poisson variability in the brain. It seems clear that this model can extend to sub-Poisson variability and its partitioning and perhaps even show how that varies in real time, with an animal's attentional state. That is, of course, beyond the scope of the current work, but could be mentioned in the Discussion.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study from Maigler et al investigates how between- and within-animal differences in taste preference relate to differences in neural responsiveness. The experiments rely on an elegant combination of behavioral assays to measure preference (e.g., repeated brief access testing, BAT) and electrophysiological recordings to monitor the activity of ensembles of neurons in the gustatory cortex (GC) of rats.

      BAT with distinct batteries of tastants revealed pronounced variability in preference (measured as licking bout size) across individuals. This variability across individuals persisted after repeated testing. Repeated BAT also revealed that each rat's preference for different tastants changed across time.

      Electrophysiological responses of GC neurons to batteries of tastants showed that firing in the "late epoch" of taste processing (i.e., 500ms post taste delivery) correlated more strongly with the individualized rat's BAT preference rather than with a canonical preference ranking. Importantly, this correlation was stronger for the last BAT session compared to the first. Finally, the author shows that the correlation disappeared in a second, consecutive recording session, indicating that exposure to tastants reconfigures preferences.

      Strengths:

      (1) The experimental design allows for an unprecedented look at the relationship between individual variability in taste preferences and neural processing.

      (2) The study demonstrates that taste preference variability is not mere experimental noise but reflects the dynamic nature of taste. A key strength is the clear evidence that behavioral variability is reflected in neural activity patterns, establishing a strong correlation between brain and behavior.

      (3) The evidence that simple exposure to familiar tastes can reconfigure preferences and taste representations is interesting.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The manuscript could use additional corollary analyses to provide a more complete picture of the phenomenon. For instance, how many neurons (per animal and in total) have significant correlations with the final BAT patterns? And with the first BAT? Can a time course of such counts be provided? Can some decoding analyses be performed at a single session level to reconstruct a rat's behavioral preference pattern from its neural activity?

      (2) The manuscript could benefit from additional polishing, both in the text as well as in the figures.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper makes important contributions to our understanding of how nervous systems evolve, with a particular focus on whether changes in neurotransmitter usage within homologous neurons represent a mechanism for evolutionary adaptation without large-scale changes to circuitry. Comparing the predatory nematode P. pacificus with C. elegans, this study systematically examines monoamine-producing neurons, assesses how their neurotransmitter identities differ between homologous neural types, and determines how these differences relate to behavior.

      Strengths:

      The major strength of this work is its breadth, rigor, and data quality. It combines multiple, independent lines of evidence to assign neurotransmitter identity for neurons with homology grounded in lineage, morphology, and connectomics, which is essential for meaningful cross-species comparisons. Additionally, by extending the analysis beyond P. pacificus and C. elegans to other nematodes, the authors convincingly argue that features observed in P. pacificus likely reflect an ancestral state. This depth greatly enhances the significance of the conclusions.

      This work is likely to have a significant impact on the fields of comparative neurobiology and nervous system evolution. It demonstrates a powerful system and approach for linking molecular identity, cell-type homology, circuit context, and behavior across species. The data generated here will be a valuable resource for the community and provide a strong foundation for future mechanistic studies.

      More broadly, the study reinforces the idea that evolutionary change in nervous systems can occur through modulation of chemical signaling within conserved circuits, rather than through complete rewiring. This conceptual framework is likely to influence how researchers think about neural evolution in other systems.

      Weaknesses:

      Given the availability of detailed connectivity information for both species, a more explicit comparison of the local circuit context of key neurons would further strengthen the link between molecular identity and circuit function.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Guo et al. investigate the neural and behavioral mechanisms of stress-induced impairments in memory-based inference. Across two well-powered experiments (N=136), the authors demonstrate that acute stress disrupts the rapid neural reactivation of "bridge" elements necessary for novel inferences. Crucially, they identify retrieval practice as a robust behavioral buffer that restores both inferential performance and the underlying neural signatures of memory reactivation.

      Strengths:

      (1) The use of two independent experiments provides high confidence in the behavioral findings.

      (2) Utilizing time-resolved EEG decoding allows the authors to pinpoint the "online" moment of inferential failure, a significant advancement over the lower temporal resolution of fMRI.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors correctly timed the inference task to begin approximately 20 minutes after the onset of the stressor. While this window aligns with the expected peak of the glucocorticoid (HPA) response, it also represents a period where the rapid adrenergic (SAM) response, confirmed by heart rate elevation, is still highly influential. As the authors acknowledge, because they did not collect saliva samples due to safety protocols, they cannot definitively separate the influence of peak cortisol from the tail-end of the adrenergic surge on the observed memory impairments.

      (2) Figures 4 and 6: Without asterisks is really difficult to compare the significant group differences.

      Appraisal and Impact:

      This study provides high-quality evidence that acute stress impairs the rapid neural reactivation of "bridge" elements necessary for novel memory-based inferences. By leveraging the high temporal resolution of EEG decoding, the authors identify the specific neural "chokepoint" where inferential failure occurs. The research is strengthened by two independent experiments and the identification of retrieval practice as a powerful buffer that not only preserves but also enhances neural reactivation under pressure. The findings have significant implications for both cognitive neuroscience and applied learning science.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This article focuses on the study of two E. coli tripartite efflux pumps both using TolC as partner in the outer membrane, namely MacAB-TolC and AcrABZ-TolC.

      By preparing MacAB-TolC in Peptidiscs rather than in detergent for cryo-EM structure determination, they visualized an extra protein localized around TolC. The resolution was sufficient to build part of the structure, and using the AlphaFold2 database and DALI topology recognition program, they identified it as the lipoprotein YbjP. This protein has an anchorage in the outer membrane, and it was suggested that it could act as a support for TolC that is the only OMF that does not have an N-terminal extension anchored in the outer membrane, which is very puzzling for the community working in this field of research.

      Authors used a large number of different approaches to evaluate the importance of YbjP (structure, genomic evolution, microbiology, photocrosslink in vivo, proteomic profile), but did not succeed in finding it a clear role so far, even if it could be important depending on environmental stress. Nevertheless, their results are of main interest for the comprehension of the complexity of such systems and deserve publication.

      The different analyses are properly performed and presented, and support the conclusions.

      My only concern is for the photocrosslink presented in Figures 3 and S3. My impression is that the bands do not migrate at the proper size after the crosslink.

      A second point that could be discussed further is the comparison of the structure of the pump in the presence of the peptidoglycan with the images previously obtained by tomography. It is not totally clear to me if YbjP could have been positioned in these maps.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work presents a new spike sorter, EMUsort, to target the challenging task of spike sorting Motor Unit Action Potentials (MUAP). EMUsort is essentially a modified version of Kilosort, with some key extensions to target EMG data: correct for large delays due to propagation across channels, spike detection of highly overlapping and large units via multiple thresholds, an increased number of waveform templates for spike detection, and an extended representation of waveforms to grasp complex MUAP spike shapes. The results on simulated data show solid evidence that the applied modifications make a difference for EMG recordings. All in all, I believe that EMUsort will greatly improve spike sorting performance for high-density EMG data.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript is well written, and the methods and modifications to the Kilosort pipeline are well-motivated, well-explained, and clear. The simulation results provide strong evidence that the presented modifications make spike sorting of high-density EMG data more accurate.

      Weaknesses:

      The method is overall only validated on 15 simulated motor units. The monkey dataset, in particular, seems too "easy" and not challenging enough to highlight weaknesses of any of the spike sorters. A second weakness is in the distribution of the code, which is shipped with submodules for Kilosort and SpikeInterface, and makes it hard to maintain long-term, and pins to old versions of these key dependencies.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The paper by Freas and Wystrach is an interesting computational study, exploring the detailed mechanisms of how simple neural circuits could explain complex behavioral patterns observed in navigating ants. The authors compare detailed, high-speed video recordings of Australian desert ants (Melophorus bagoti) with predictions made by their new computational model and find convincing similarities between the model and the behavioral data, at a level of detail not previously studied. Particularly interesting are emerging properties of the model, yielding behavioral motifs it was not designed to reproduce, but which occur in natural ant behavior.

      Strengths:

      A strength of the study is that the model is based on previous models, without making major novel explicit assumptions. It combines existing models of the insect central complex with a model of the lateral accessory lobe and adds a stochastic inhibition of forward velocity to the interaction of central complex and lateral accessory lobes. The central complex provides corrective steering signals when the goal direction and the current heading of an insect are not aligned, while the lateral accessory lobes provide an intrinsic oscillator underlying the behavioral oscillations shown by walking ants at all times. These background oscillations are modulated by the steering signals from the central complex. Depending on which phase of the intrinsic oscillations coincides with the corrective signals, and how fast the ant is moving forward during this time, a complex set of behaviors emerges. Most prominently, scanning behaviors, which are regularly carried out by the ants, are recapitulated in great detail by the model. Additionally, other behaviors, such as full loops, emerge naturally from the model. While computational models are not to be seen as definite evidence for any biological reality, they can provide strong support for particular neural implementations. The current study is an excellent example in that it provides evidence for a serial arrangement of central complex circuits upstream of the lateral accessory lobe circuits, modulated by speed-regulating input. While the latter is hypothetical, it yields a clear hypothesis that can be validated by connectomics studies and functional work in the future.

      The study shows that even complex behavioral motifs do not require dedicated neural modules, but can rather emerge from the interplay of already known circuits - highlighting the efficiency of insect brains and possibly providing the path towards embodied hardware solutions of such circuits in autonomous agents.

      Weaknesses:

      There are several weaknesses in the paper as it is.

      Firstly, the model is not described in the methods, but only found when following the link to the authors' GitHub repository. This is clearly not sufficient and prevents readers from evaluating the model's assumptions directly. Most importantly, how natural do the emerging properties indeed emerge from the model? What parameters need to be tuned to generate a match between data and model?

      Second, it is often not entirely clear what is biological data and what is a computational model. This relates to figures, text, and references. As a reader, this makes it difficult to clearly judge what is new in the current paper, how it adds to previous models, and what the predictions and assumptions are for biology.

      Third, while neural data from bees and flies are taken to motivate and design the computational model, the discussion and interpretation revolve almost exclusively around ants. For the most part, this is justified, as the behavioral data used to benchmark the model are taken from ants. Nevertheless, more broadly discussing the newly defined circuit in the context of flying insects would give a better idea of the broad relevance of the neural circuits predicted by the model.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The mechanisms governing autophagic membrane expansion remain incompletely understood. ATG2 is known to function as a lipid transfer protein critical for this process; however, how ATG2 is coordinated with the broader autophagic machinery and endomembrane systems has remained elusive. In this study, the authors employ an elegant proximity labeling approach and identify two ER-Golgi intermediate compartment (ERGIC)-localized proteins-Rab1 and ARFGAP1-as novel regulators of ATG2 during autophagic membrane expansion.

      Their findings support a model in which autophagosome formation occurs within a specialized subdomain of the ER that is enriched in both ER exit sites (ERES) and ERGIC, providing valuable mechanistic insight. The overall study is well executed and offers an important contribution to our understanding of autophagy. I support its publication in eLife and offer the following minor comments for clarification and improvement.

      Specific Comments

      (1) Integration with Prior Literature<br /> The data convincingly implicate the ERES-ERGIC interface in autophagosome biogenesis. It would strengthen the manuscript to discuss previous studies reporting ERES and ERGIC remodeling and formation of ERERS-ERGIC contact sites (PMID: 34561617; PMID: 28754694) in the context of the current findings.

      (2) Figure Labeling<br /> The font size in Figure 1A and Supplementary Figure S1G is too small for comfortable reading. Please consider enlarging the labels to improve clarity.

      (3) Experimental Conditions<br /> In Figures 2A-C and Figure 4, it is unclear how the cells were treated. Were they starved in EBSS? Please include this information in the corresponding figure legends.

      (4) LC3 Lipidation vs. Cleavage<br /> In Figure 2A, ARFGAP1 knockdown appears to reduce LC3 lipidation without affecting Halo-LC3 cleavage. Clarifying this observation would help readers better understand the functional specificity of ARFGAP1 in the pathway.

      (5) Use of HT-mGFP in Figure 2C<br /> Please clarify why the assay in Figure 2C was performed in the presence of HT-mGFP. Explaining the rationale would aid interpretation of the results.

      (6) FIB-SEM Imaging<br /> For the FIB-SEM images in Figures 3 and S3, directly labeling the cellular structures in the images would greatly facilitate interpretation for the reader.

      (7) Supplementary Figures<br /> Many of the supplemental figures are high quality and contain key data. If space permits, I suggest moving these into the main figures. In particular, the FLASH-PAINT experiment could be presented as part of Figure 1.

      (8) Text Revision for Clarity<br /> In line 242, the phrase "but protein-protein interactions appear to be limited to RAB1" would benefit from clarification. A more precise formulation could be: "but stable protein-protein interactions appear to be limited to RAB1."

      (9) COPII Inhibition Strategy<br /> The authors used the dominant-active SAR1(H79G) mutant to inhibit COPII function. While this is effective in in vitro budding assays, the GDP-locked mutant SAR1(T39N) has been shown to be more effective in blocking COPII-mediated trafficking in cells. Including SAR1(T39N) in the analysis would provide stronger support for the conclusions.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Kern et al. investigated whether temporally delayed linear modeling (TDLM) can uncover sequential memory replay from a graph-learning task in human MEG during an 8 minute post-learning rest period. After failing to detect replay events, they conduct a simulation study in which they insert synthetic replay events, derived from each participants' localizer data, into a control rest period prior to learning. The simulations suggest that TDLM only reveals sequences when replay occurs at very high densities (> 80 per minute) and that individual differences in baseline sequenceness may lead to spurious and/or lacklustre correlations between replay strength and behavior.

      Strengths:

      The approach is extremely well documented and rigorous. The authors have done an excellent job re-creating the TDLM methodology that is most commonly used, reporting the different approaches and parameters that they used, and reporting their preregistrations. The hybrid simulation study is creative and provides a new way to assess the efficacy of replay decoding methods, and its comparison to earlier published TDLM simulations is particularly useful. The authors remain measured in the scope/applicability of their conclusions, constructive in their discussion, and end with a useful set of recommendations for how to best apply TDLM in future studies. I also want to commend this work for not only presenting a null result, but thoroughly exploring the conditions under which such a null result is expected. I think this paper is interesting and will be generally quite useful for the field.

      In the revised version, the authors have adequately addressed each of the weaknesses I raised previously. In brief, they:

      (i) Added new power analyses of sequenceness for bootstrapped sample sizes, along with a new permutation test (Supplemental Fig 11),

      (ii) Qualified their conclusions with added limitations and clarified several points that I found previously unclear,

      (iii) Added several new analyses to the Appendices

      (iv) Demonstrated that previous simulations validating TDLM overestimated TDLM sensitivity relative to the hybrid simulation.

      (v) Added a new and extensive appendix on the relationship between TDLM and replay characteristics.

      Weaknesses:

      The remaining weaknesses of the work relate primarily to explaining the cause of measured non-random fluctuations in the simulated correlations between replay detection and performance at different time lags, as well as a lack of general recommendations of parameter choices for applying TDLM in future work. But these are minor weaknesses that can be left to future work.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Frangos et al present a set of studies aiming to determine mechanisms underlying initiation and tumour progression. Overall, this work provides some useful datasets, further establishing mitochondrial dysfunction during the cellular transformation process.

      A key strength is the coordinated analysis of transcriptomics and proteomics from tumour samples derived from a Neu-dependent mouse model for breast cancer. This analysis provides rigorous datasets that show robust patterns, including down-regulation across many components of mitochondrial OXPHOS that were generally consistent at both the mRNA and protein level. Parallel analysis of corresponding tumour samples thereby clearly shows the opposite trend of increased mitochondrial function, which is unexpected. As such, this work further establishes altered mitochondrial phenotypes in tumour contexts and further illustrates that mitochondrial function is not necessarily always tightly correlated with mitochondrial gene expression patterns.

      Several key weaknesses remain. It remains unclear how increased mitochondrial function is being sustained despite wide decreases in mRNA and protein levels of OXPHOS components. In terms of mechanism, the study confirmed that pharmacologic EGFR inhibition decreases OXPHOS in a EGFR-dependent breast cancer line. However, it remains unclear if the cell culture system recapitulates other key observations of the tumour model (namely decreased expression with increased function).

      Therefore, the mechanistic basis of increased mitochondrial function in light of decreased mitochondrial content remains speculative, as does the role of these changes for tumour initiation or progression.

      Comments on revisions:

      We agree with the overall findings of the study and appreciate that the claims in text and title have been appropriately toned down.

      As additional suggestions eg for presentation, many of the graphics/labels are still too small to be useful. It would be interesting to see if this cell line is similar to the tumours in terms of all the phenotypes. The lapatinib experiment was good. I wonder how quick this drug affects the mitochondria. Also it would be interesting to see if these cells have higher OXPHOS than other non-transformed breast epithelial cells.

      The WB on oxphos components is good with ab110413 but this looks like many subunits are detected so this should be made clear.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Xu, Cao and colleagues aimed to overcome the obstacles of high-resolution imaging of intact liver tissue. They report successful modification of the existing CUBIC protocol into Liver-CUBIC, a high-resolution multiplex 3D imaging method that integrates multicolor metallic compound nanoparticle (MCNP) perfusion with optimized liver tissue clearing, significantly reducing clearing time and enabling simultaneous 3D visualization of the portal vein, hepatic artery, bile ducts, and central vein spatial networks in the mouse liver. Using this novel platform, the researchers describe a previously unrecognized perivascular structure they termed Periportal Lamellar Complex (PLC), regularly distributed along the adult liver portal veins.<br /> Using available scRNAseq data, the authors assessed the CD34<sup>+</sup>Sca-1<sup>+</sup> cells' expression profile, highlighting mRNA presence of genes linked to neurodevelopment, bile acid transport, and hematopoietic niche potential. Different aspects of this analysis were then addressed by protein staining of selected marker proteins in the mouse liver tissue. Next, the authors addressed how the PLC and biliary system react to CCL4-induced liver fibrosis, implying PLC dynamically extends, acting as a scaffold that guides the migration and expansion of terminal bile ducts and sympathetic nerve fibers into the hepatic parenchyma upon injury.

      The work clearly demonstrates the usefulness of the Liver-CUBIC technique and the improvement of both resolution and complexity of the information, gained by simultaneous visualization of multiple vascular and biliary systems of the liver. The identification of PLC and the interpretation of its function represent an intriguing set of observations that will surely attract the attention of liver biologists as well as hepatologists. The importance of the CD34+/Sca1+ endothelial cell population and claims based on transcriptomic re-analysis require future assessment by functional experimental approaches to decipher the functional molecules involved in PLC formation, maintenance, and the involvement in injury response before establishing their role in biliary, arterial, and neural liver systems.

      Strengths:

      The authors clearly demonstrate an improved technique tailored to the visualization of the liver vasulo-biliary architecture in unprecedented resolution.<br /> This work proposes a new morphological feature of adult liver facilitating interaction between the portal vein, hepatic arteries, biliary tree, and intrahepatic innervation, centered at previously underappreciated protrusions of the portal veins - PLCs.

      Weaknesses:

      The importance of CD34+Sca1+ endothelial cell sub-population for PLC formation and function was not tested and warrants further validation.

      Comments on revisions:

      I appreciate the author's effort to revise the text so it more rigorously adheres to the presented evidence. Following a thorough read of the revised text, a few remaining minor issues were identified in the Discussion.

      (1) From where comes the hard evidence for PLC being the stem cell niche in the following sentence?<br /> for the two following statements:

      This suggests that the PLC may not only provide structural support but also serve as a perivascular stem cell niche specific to the portal region, potentially involved in hematopoiesis and tissue regeneration.

      The PLC serves as a directional scaffold for ductal growth, a specialized stem cell niche, and a potential site of neurovascular coupling.

      (2) In the following paragraph, I lack references to the previously published evidence of liver innervation guidance mechanisms, such as the mesenchyme-mediated guidance (CD31- population) Gannoun et al., 2023 https://doi.org/10.1242/dev.201642, an important context for your finding.

      Further analysis showed significant upregulation of genes involved in neurodevelopment and axonal guidance in the CD34<sup>+</sup>Sca-1<sup>+</sup> cluster, along with activation of neuronal signaling pathways. Immunostaining confirmed the presence of TH<sup>+</sup> sympathetic nerve fibers wrapping around the PLC in a "beads-on-a-string" pattern (Fig. 6), consistent with a classic neurovascular unit(Adori et al., 2021). Previous studies have shown that sympathetic nerves enter the liver along collagen fibers of Glisson's capsule and interact with hepatic arteries, portal veins, and bile duct epithelium, supporting the PLC as a scaffold for intrahepatic neurovascular integration.

      (3) Several sentences have issues with a lack of space between words.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The manuscript by Xu et al. studies the relevance of endophilin A3-dependent endocytosis and retrograde transport of immune synapse components and in the activation of cytotoxic CD8 T cells. First, the authors show that ICAM1 and ALCAM, known component of immune synapses, are endocytosed via endoA3-dependent endocytosis and retrogradely transported to the Golgi. The authors then show that blocking internalization or retrograde trafficking reduces the activation of CD8 T cells. Moreover, this diminished CD8 T cells activation resulted the formation of an enlarged immune synapse with reduced ICAM1 recruitment.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed all my comments adequately.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Zhang and colleagues investigate the molecular mechanisms by which the small brown planthopper (SBPH, Laodelphax striatellus) manipulates host rice carbohydrate metabolism to enhance its own fitness. Using a combination of molecular, pharmacological, and biochemical approaches, they demonstrate that SBPH infestation induces systemic glucose reallocation in rice, as evidenced by the upregulation of glucose levels in aerial tissues and a simultaneous reduction in root glucose levels. Notably, host-derived glucose acts as a central signaling molecule, driving two key adaptive traits: enhanced fecundity via the glucose-TOR-JH-Vg signaling cascade, and increased imidacloprid tolerance through synergistic metabolic (GCL-GSH) and regulatory (TOR-JH-GST) pathways targeting GST activity. These findings uncover a sophisticated resource-manipulation strategy in SBPH and identify nutrient-sensing and detoxification pathways as potential targets for pest control.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study addresses a gap in plant-insect coevolution research by identifying glucose as a dual-function signaling molecule that coordinates SBPH reproduction and insecticide tolerance, providing valuable insights into how herbivores exploit host nutritional signals.

      (2) The experimental design is well structured and multifaceted, integrating RNAi, RT-qPCR, Western blotting, pharmacological inhibition, and biochemical assays. The use of appropriate controls (e.g., osmotic controls with mannitol and hydrolase-inhibitor rescue experiments) strengthens the causal interpretation of the results.

      (3) The mechanistic framework is clear and well-supported. The authors delineate two interconnected molecular cascades (glucose-TOR-JH-Vg for fecundity and GCL-GSH/TOR-JH-GST for tolerance) with hierarchical validation (e.g., rescue experiments with JHA), ensuring the reliability of conclusions.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The study focuses exclusively on SBPH without validating whether the observed phenomena and mechanisms are conserved in closely related planthopper species (e.g., brown planthopper Nilaparvata lugens). This limitation restricts the generalizability of the findings to other economically important rice pests.

      (2) The specific upstream signals that trigger glucose reallocation in rice (e.g., SBPH salivary effectors or oviposition-associated factors) are not identified. Although this represents a complex and independent research direction, the absence of such information limits the depth and completeness of the mechanistic framework and leaves open questions regarding the initiation of host metabolic manipulation.

      (3) Insecticide tolerance assays are limited to imidacloprid. Extending these analyses to one or two additional commonly used insecticides (e.g., thiamethoxam) would help determine whether the glucose-mediated detoxification pathway is specific to imidacloprid or reflects a broader resistance mechanism, thereby strengthening conclusions regarding the generality of the GST activation cascade.

      (4) Given the study's potential implications for pest management, the manuscript would benefit from a brief discussion of possible practical applications, such as manipulating rice glucose metabolism through breeding strategies or developing small-molecule inhibitors targeting the TOR-JH axis. Including such perspectives would enhance the translational relevance of the work by linking mechanistic insights to real-world pest control strategies.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The authors aimed to investigate whether gamma synchrony serves a functional role in figure-ground perception. They specifically sought to test whether the stimulus-dependence of gamma synchrony, often considered a limitation, actually facilitates perceptual grouping. Using the theory of weakly coupled oscillators (TWCO), they developed a framework wherein synchronization depends on both frequency detuning (related to contrast heterogeneity) and coupling strength (related to proximity between visual elements). Through psychophysical experiments with texture discrimination tasks and computational modeling, they tested whether human performance follows patterns predicted by TWCO and whether perceptual learning enhances synchrony-based grouping.

      Strengths:

      (1) The theoretical framework connecting TWCO to visual perception is innovative and well-articulated, providing a potential mechanistic explanation for how gamma synchrony might contribute to both feature binding and separation.

      (2) The methodology combines psychophysical measurements with computational modeling, with a solid quantitative agreement between model predictions and human performance.

      (3) In particular, the demonstration that coupling strengths can be modified through experience is remarkable and suggests gamma synchrony could be an adaptable mechanism that improves with visual learning.

      (4) The cross-validation approach, wherein model parameters derived from macaque neurophysiology successfully predict human performance, strengthens the biological plausibility of the framework.

      Likely Impact and Utility:

      This work offers a fresh perspective on the functional role of gamma oscillations in visual perception. The integration of TWCO with perceptual learning provides a novel theoretical framework that could influence future research on neural synchrony.

      The computational model, with parameters derived from neurophysiological data, offers a useful tool for predicting perceptual performance based on synchronization principles. This approach might be extended to study other perceptual phenomena and could inspire designs for artificial vision systems.

      The learning component of the study may have a particular impact, as it suggests a mechanism by which perceptual expertise develops through modified coupling between neural assemblies. This could influence thinking about perceptual learning more broadly, but also raises questions about the underlying mechanism.

      Additional Context:

      Historically, the functional significance of gamma oscillations has been debated, with early theories of temporal binding giving way to skepticism based on gamma's stimulus-dependence. This study reframes this debate by suggesting that stimulus-dependence is exactly what makes gamma useful for perceptual grouping.

      The successful combination of computational neuroscience and psychophysics is a significant strength of this study.

      The field would benefit from future work extending (if possible) these findings to more naturalistic stimuli and directly measuring neural activity during perceptual tasks. Additionally, studies comparing predictions from synchrony-based models against alternative mechanisms would help establish the specificity of the proposed framework.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors now soften their claim. However, the paper demonstrates that TWCO-derived predictions quantitatively match human figure-ground perception in texture stimuli, and that a synchrony-based readout provides a viable mapping from stimulus to behavior. Given that they cite (and do not show in this paper) the link to synchrony, what they actually establish is that this particular transformation of stimulus features maps better onto behavior. That's meaningful, but it is not a demonstration of mechanism.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this work, Hathaway and colleagues aim to understand how audiovisual cues at time of outcome promote selection of risky choices. A real life illustration of this effect is used in electronic gambling machines which signal a win with flashing lights and jingles, encouraging the player to keep betting. More specifically, the author asks whether the cue has to be paired exclusively to wins, or whether it can be paired to both outcomes, or exclusively loss outcomes, or occur randomly. To tackle this question, they employ a version of the Iowa Gambling Task adapted to rats, and test the effect of different rules of cue-outcome associations on the probability of selecting the riskier options; they then test the effect of prior reward devaluation on the task; finally, the optimise computational models on the early phases of the experiment to investigate potential mechanisms underlying the behavioural differences.

      Strengths:

      The experimental approach is very thorough, in particular the choice of the different task variants cover a wide range of different potential hypotheses. Using this approach, they find that, although rats prefer the optimal choices, there is a shift towards selecting riskier options in the variants of the task where the cue is paired to win outcomes. They analyse this population average shift by showing that there is a concurrent increase in the number of risk-taking individuals in these tasks. They also make the novel discovery that pairing cues with loss outcomes instead reduces the tendency for risky decisions.

      The computational strategy is appropriate and in keeping with the accepted state of the art: defining a set of candidate models, optimising them, comparing them, simulating the best ones to ensure they replicate the main experimental results, then analysing parameter estimates in the different tasks to speculate abut potential mechanisms.

      Weaknesses:

      While the overall computational approach is excellent, there is a missed opportunity in the computational modelling section due to the choice of models which is dependent on a preceding study by Langdon et al. (2019). Loss trials come at a double cost: firstly the lost opportunity of not having selected a winning option which is reflected straightforwardly in Q-learning by the fact that r=0, secondly a waiting period which will affect the overall reward rate. The authors combine these costs by converting the time penalty into "reward currency" using three different functions which make up the three different tested models. This means the question when comparing models is not something along the lines of "are individuals in the paired win-cue tasks more sensitive to risk? or less sensitive to time? etc." but rather "what is the best way of converting time into Q-value currency to fit the data?". Instead, the authors could have contrasted other models which explicitly track time as a separate variable (see for example "Impulsivity and risk-seeking as Bayesian inference under dopaminergic control" (Mikhael & Gershman 2021)) or give actions an extra risk bonus (as in "Nicotinic receptors in the VTA promote uncertainty seeking" (Naude et al 2016)) to better disentangle the mechanisms at play.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      During vertebrate gastrulation, the mesoderm and endoderm arise from a common population of precursor cells and are specified by similar signaling events, raising questions as to how these two germ layers are distinguished. Here, Cheng and colleagues use zebrafish gastrulation as a model for mesoderm and endoderm segregation. By reanalyzing published single cell sequencing data, they identify a common progenitor population for anterior endoderm and the mesodermal prechordal plate (PP). They find that expression levels of PP genes gsc and ripply are among the earliest differences between these populations, and that their increased expression suppresses the expression of endoderm markers. Further analysis of chromatin accessibility and Ripply CUT-and-TAG is consistent with direct repression of endoderm by this PP marker. This study demonstrates roles for Gsc and Ripply in suppressing anterior endoderm fate, but this role for Gsc was already known and the effect of Ripply is limited to a small population of anterior endoderm.

      Strengths:

      Integrated single cell ATAC- and RNA-seq convincingly demonstrate changes in chromatin accessibility that may underlie segregation of mesoderm and endoderm lineages, including gsc and ripply. Identification of Ripply-occupied genomic regions augments this analysis. The genetic mutants for both genes provide strong evidence for their function anterior mesendoderm development, although these phenotypes are subtle.

      Weaknesses:

      The use of zebrafish embryonic explants for cell fate trajectory analysis (rather than intact embryos) is not justified. Much of the work is focused on the role of Nodal in the mesoderm/endoderm fate decision, but the results largely confirm previous studies and again provide few new insights. The authors similarly confirm previous findings that FGF signaling likely plays a larger role in this fate decision, but these results are largely overlooked by the authors.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The Crenarchaeal Cdv division system represents a reduced form of the universal and ubiquitous ESCRT membrane reverse-topology scission machinery, and therefore a prime candidate for synthetic and reconstitution studies. The work here represents a convincing extension of previous work in the field, clarifying the order of recruitment of Cdv proteins to curved membranes.

      Strengths:

      The use of a recently developed approach to produce dumbbell-shaped liposomes (De Franceschi et al. 2022), which allowed the authors to assess recruitment of various Cdv assemblies to curved membranes or membrane necks; reconstitution of a quaternary Cdv complex at a membrane neck.

      Weaknesses:

      The initial manuscript was a bit light on quantitative detail, across the various figures - addressing this would make the paper much stronger. The authors could also include in the discussion a short paragraph on implications for our understanding of ESCRT function in other contexts and/or in archaeal evolution - for the interests of a broad audience. These issues have been addressed in the authors' revision.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study systematically characterizes the activity patterns of a lateral supramammillary nucleus (SuM)-medial septum (MS)-hippocampus circuit across sleep-wake cycles and its role in memory consolidation. The authors demonstrate that the lateral SuM-MS projection is specifically active during REM sleep, and that REM-selective inhibition of this circuit, and of its downstream MS-CA2 pathway, impairs the consolidation of social memory. The work is well-designed, and the data are robust in supporting clear and significant conclusions. It provides important new insights into how distinct memory modalities could be processed by parallel, sleep-active subcortical-hippocampal circuits. The manuscript is of high quality overall, with some points to address as detailed below.

      Strengths:

      (1) Novel finding:<br /> The identification of a REM-specialized subpopulation within the lateral SuM-MS pathway and its specific role in social memory consolidation via the lateral SuM-MS-CA2 projection is a significant advance. It effectively complements the previously described direct SuM-CA2 pathway and supports a model of the SuM as a "REM-hub" routing information through dedicated downstream targets.

      (2) Technical rigor:<br /> The combination of retrograde tracing, in vivo calcium imaging, single-unit identification via optrode recording, and temporally precise (REM-sleep-specific) optogenetic manipulation provides strong correlative and causal evidence.

      (3) Appropriate controls:<br /> Behavioral experiments include crucial controls for optogenetic inhibition (GtACR1 group, NREM/Wake inhibition control, mCherry control), effectively ruling out nonspecific effects of light or timing.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Figure titles/descriptions:<br /> For clarity, the authors should consider specifying the recording method in the figure titles or legends. For instance, Figure 2: "Bulk Ca2+ activity (fiber photometry) of lateral SuM-MS projecting neurons..." and Figure 3: "Single-unit activity patterns (optrode recordings) of lateral SuM-MS projecting neurons...".

      (2) Statistical details:<br /> The use of "LSD post-hoc comparison" following ANOVA is noted. LSD is sensitive but can increase Type I error risk with multiple comparisons. Please justify its use or consider employing a more conservative post-hoc test (e.g., Tukey's or Bonferroni) for key comparisons like the social preference index in Figure 4h to bolster robustness.

      (3) Data presentation:<br /> When reporting statistical results in figure legends (e.g., Figures 2d, 3i-k), please provide the specific test statistic values (e.g., F, χ²) and exact P values where possible, rather than only significance asterisks.

      (4) Deepening mechanistic insight:<br /> The study excellently demonstrates "what" the circuit does. The discussion could be strengthened by further exploring "how" it might work. The finding that SuM-MS inhibition does not affect CA1 theta power is interesting and distinguishes it from other MS/hippocampal pathways. The suggestion of a theta-independent mechanism is plausible. Could the authors hypothesize more specifically? For example, might this circuit modulate reactivation events in the local CA2 network, neurochemical milieu (e.g., acetylcholine), or synapse-specific plasticity during REM sleep to facilitate social memory consolidation?

      (5) Implications of regional heterogeneity:<br /> The functional divergence between lateral (90% REM-active) and medial SuM-MS neurons is intriguing. A brief discussion on the potential anatomical basis (differential inputs/outputs) and functional significance (e.g., integration of specific affective or arousal signals) of this subdivision would be valuable.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Selvaratnam et al. defines how the transcription factor HEB integrates with TCR signaling to regulate Id3 expression in the context of gdT17 maturation in the fetal thymus. Using conditional HEB ablation driven by Vav Cre, flow cytometry, scRNA-seq, and reanalysis of ChIP-seq data the authors, provide evidence for a sequential model in which HEB and TCR-induced Egr2 cooperatively upregulate Id3, enabling gdT17 maturation and limiting diversion to the ab lineages. The work provides an important mechanistic insight into how the E/ID-protein axis coordinates gd T cell specification and effector maturation.

      Strengths include:

      (1) The proposed model that HEB primes, TCR induces, and Id3 stabilizes gdT17 cells in embryonal development is elegant and consistent with the findings.

      (2) The choice of animal models and the study of a precise developmental window.

      (3) The cross-validation of flow, scRNA-seq, and ChIP-seq reanalyses strengthens the conclusions.

      (4) The study clarifies the dual role of Id3, first as an HEB-dependent maturation factor for gdT17 cells, and as a suppressor of diversion to the ab lineages.

      Comments on revisions:

      In this revised version of their manuscript the authors have effectively addressed all of my previous concerns. In its current form the study represents a significant advancement in our understanding of how the transcription factor HEB integrates with TCR signaling to regulate Id3 expression in the context of gdT17 maturation in the fetal thymus. In this revised version of their manuscript the authors have effectively addressed all of my previous concerns. In its current form the study represents a significant advancement in our understanding of how the transcription factor HEB integrates with TCR signaling to regulate Id3 expression in the context of gdT17 maturation in the fetal thymus.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary

      In this manuscript, Zhang et al. investigate the conduction and inhibition mechanisms of the Kv2.1 channel, with a particular focus on the distinct effects of TEA and RY785 on Kv2 potassium channels. Using microsecond-scale molecular dynamics simulations, the authors characterize K⁺ ion permeation and RY785-mediated inhibition within the central pore. Their results reveal an inhibition mechanism that differs from those described for other Kv channel inhibitors.

      Strengths

      The study identifies a distinctive inhibitory mode for RY785, which binds along the channel walls in the open-state structure while still permitting a reduced level of K⁺ conduction. In addition, the authors propose a long-range allosteric coupling between RY785 binding in the central pore and changes in the structural dynamics of Kv2.1. Overall, this is a well-organized and carefully executed study, employing robust simulation and analysis methodologies. The work provides novel mechanistic insights into voltage-gated potassium channel inhibition and may offer useful guidance for future structure-based drug design efforts.

      Weaknesses:

      The study needs to consider the possibility of multiple binding sites for PY785, particularly given its impact on voltage sensors and gating currents. Specifically, the potential for allosteric binding sites in the voltage-sensing domain (VSD) should be assessed, as some allosteric modulators with thiazole moieties are known to bind VSD domains in multiple voltage-gated sodium channels (Ahuja et al., 2015; Li et al., 2022; McCormack et al., 2013; Mulcahy et al., 2019). Increasing structural and functional evidence supports the existence of multiple ligand-binding modes in voltage-gated ion channels. For example, polyunsaturated fatty acids have been shown to bind to KCNQ1 at both the voltage sensor domain and the pore domain (https://doi.org/10.1085/jgp.202012850). Similarly, cannabidiol has been structurally resolved in Nav1.7 at two distinct sites, one in a fenestration and another near the IFM-binding pocket (https://doi.org/10.1038/s41467-023-39307-6). These advances illustrate that ligand effects cannot always be interpreted based solely on a single binding site identified previously.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary

      The aim of this study was to assess which amino acid stretches are tolerated/favoured in the course of evolution, considering their physico-chemical properties, metabolic costs and proteotoxicity. To address this question, the authors expressed PolyX variants in yeast, E. coli and also referred to COS cells. The PolyX constructs were tagged with GFP or a different fluorescence reporter to assess expression levels and localization at the C-terminus with or without a cleavable linker or to study topological effects. The PolyX stretch was also embedded between two different fluorescent proteins. The authors used growth rate and expression levels as judged by fluorescence intensities to calculate the relative neutrality in comparison to GFP alone.

      They could show that harmful/beneficial effects depend on the specific amino acid (aa) and polar aa are tolerated well, whereas hydrophobic and positively charged aa are harmful to the cell. This is not surprising as hydrophobic and positively charged aa are known to be aggregation-prone. They could further show that the topology matters for some, but not all, PolyX variants. The PolyX stretch can affect the subcellular localization and aggregation propensity of the GFP it is fused to. Interestingly, overexpression of PolyG, PolyQ or PolyS was not harmful, and overexpression of PolyE was potentially even beneficial for the cell. The authors concluded their study with a theoretical analysis of the presence of aa stretches in various species and identified a high correlation between their expression in yeast and other species, suggesting that the selection of aa stretches is conserved and follows biochemical rules (trade-off between tolerance of expression levels, solubility, sub-cellular localization, and maybe metabolic costs).

      Strengths:

      The authors performed a high number of experiments and systematically assessed the expression and tolerance of 10mer stretches of 20 aa fused to GFP or other fluorophores in yeast and E. coli. This is an impressive effort.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The analysis of expression levels of the various PolyX variants should not rely only on fluorescence intensities. The fusion of the PolyX stretch may affect the fluorescence properties (brightness, photostability) of the fluorescent partner and may or may not affect abundance. A quantitative analysis of PolyX-GFP (same applies to the other fusion constructs shown in Figure 3) is needed. Preferably by an MS-based proteomic analysis via peptide count. Western blot is less ideal as it would rely on epitope recognition of the respective antibody, and the epitope accessibility might be altered upon fusion with different PolyX stretches. In addition, the authors should analyse the PolyX stretch without an attached fluorophore as a control.

      (2) The images shown in Figure 4 are not very informative. The constructs should be subjected to FRAP to assess the solubility of the PolyX variants and Ssa1 (Hsp70). FCS could be an alternative as well.

      (3) The observation of the lack of mCherry fluorescence for PolyK and PolyP (Figure 4) can also be interpreted as an instability of the fusion protein (partial truncation and degradation) or quenching. The authors should test different fluorophores and different linker lengths between the PolyX stretch and the fluorophores. Fluorophore swapping (N/C-terminally) would also be a good control.

      (4) The study would benefit from a consideration of a large body of literature on protein aggregation and the contribution of amino acid composition. The here identified amino acids that as 10mer stretch are harmful to the cell and are known to be aggregation-prone and are also recognised by molecular chaperones to prevent their aggregation.

      (5) The study could further benefit from ex vivo and in vitro analyses of the PolyX constructs. They could isolate the PolyX variants and study their solubility by, e.g. light scattering outside of the cellular context.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors compiled 29 patients with various neurodevelopmental symptoms due to the ARID5B mutations. Although not directly, the mouse model demonstrated that the heterozygous mutant mouse showed mild behavioral problems. It would be interesting to see if the mice carry craniofacial features.

      Strengths:

      The HEK293T model showed that the mutant protein mis-localized, but did not show whether the mutation caused any changes in epigenetic status. Nevertheless, this paper delivers clear support for genotype-phenotype correlation.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The paper would be improved by providing pedigrees of some of the patients with inherited variants.

      (2) Figure 3d could provide more species for an accurate conservation assessment.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Inactivating VHL mutations are common in clear cell renal cell carcinoma, and about half of those mutations unfold/destabilize the protein rather than directly interfering with critical protein-protein interactions. The authors identify a compound that can stabilize/refold mutant VHL and seemingly restore its ability to downregulate its major downstream targets.

      Strengths:

      The authors use a clever combination of virtual and cell-based screens, followed by suitable biophysical and cell-based validation assays, to arrive at a VHL refolder. This compound is suboptimal from an ADME point of view, but could be a starting point for further medicinal chemistry optimization. Success would have implications for other diseases linked to similar loss-of-function mutations.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors need to tighten up the evidence that the VHL refolder is downregulating HIF2 in a strictly "on-target" manner.

      (1) In Figure 3C, the increase in VHL stability looks very modest. Taking into account the increased abundance of the VHL protein at time 0 in the presence of CP4 compared to control, it is not so clear that VHL is decaying much more slowly in the presence of CP4. I understand that the fact that the signal is low in the absence of CP4 at time 1 hour makes it hard to quantify the half-life of p30 in the absence of the drug (is a longer exposure needed?). However, perhaps the authors could try to quantify the p19 half-life.

      (2) In going from CP4 to CP4.29 the authors screened based on downregulation of HIF. This is logical but also introduces the danger of identifying chemicals that can downregulate HIF in an "off-target" manner, i.e. non-specifically. It is therefore essential to clearly show that CP4.29 downregulates steady-state levels of HIF and HIF target genes in cells with suitable (hydrophobic core) VHL mutants but not in isogenic cells lacking VHL. Another prediction is that these chemicals should be inert in cells with VHL mutations that directly abrogate HIF binding. So Figure 4E (HIF2 target genes) needs the use of the isogenic VHL-/- cells described later in the paper. And the steady-state levels of HIF2 should be measured in the isogenic cells (mutant VHL vs -/-) with or without CP4.29. Figure 4G, as it is done now, is too indirect and not very compelling. I don't understand why the "time 0" HIF2 levels aren't lower in the presence of CP4.29, and I think the half-life differences with treatment are very subtle to my eyeball densitometer (although I applaud the authors' attempt to quantify), with the exception of I180N. I agree that Figure 4F is encouraging, but hypoxia has many effects, and this experiment is not as "clean" as the VHL-/- experiments. The same applies to some of the pharmacologic agents in Figure 5.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In this study, Xu et al. investigated the regulatory mechanisms controlling intramolecular cleavage of the transmembrane transcription factor MYRF-1, an important event that controls developmental progression in C. elegans.

      The authors made important advances in several aspects:

      (1) Through endogenous gene editing/tagging, further supported by western blots, the authors convincingly demonstrate the novel finding that the intramolecular cleavage and nuclear translocation of MYRF-1 is not static, but temporally controlled within each developmental stage: with nuclear translocation peaking at the late stage and then declining into lethargus/molts between developmental stages (Figure 1).

      (2) They demonstrate that this cleavage and nuclear translocation is controlled by external stimuli, namely starvation.

      (3) They reveal modes of regulation of the intramolecular cleavage that is mildly regulated by MYRF-1's own JM domain as well as the CCT tail of interacting partner PAN-1.

      The conclusions of this paper are mostly well supported by data, but some aspects of the manuscript and conclusions should be clarified and extended to strengthen its findings.

      (1) The authors concluded that the intramolecular cleavage and nuclear localization of MYRF-1 were similarly temporally-regulated in all tissue types. However, the data/image presented was limited to specific regions/cell types that were inconsistently chosen across developmental windows. For example, for the cleavage/nuclear translocation across L1 into lethargus (Figures 1B, E, F, G), the heads of the worm were shown to comprise mostly neurons and muscles. While across the rest of the larval stages, only mid-body pictures were shown, comprising mostly hypodermal and some intestinal cells. A complete coverage of all tissues across all time points would better support the author's conclusion that this temporal regulation occurs similarly in all tissue types. Additionally, the authors should clearly indicate which tissue/cell-types were used in the quantifications, as these were not done for several figure panels (including but not limited to Figure 1I and J).

      (2) Related to point 1 above, this inconsistency in tissue assessment was also true for downstream experiments (Figures 2-6; e.g., starvation, JM, and CCT regulation, etc.). Broad tissue specific assessment for all downstream experiments would greatly enhance the strength and relevance of the findings. Judging by the current data presented (Figures 3, 5, 6), it seems to suggest that there are tissue/cell-type differences in the regulation of MYRF-1 nuclear translocation.

      (3) Developmental progression was superficially and inconsistently assessed across the study. Developmental progression was mainly assessed by hypodermal (V-lineage) division patterns and worm length in this study. Several glaring omissions that should have been examined were the lengths of larval stages/lethargus and molting defects, as well as gonad development, to help identify which developmental landmarks were affected vs. not.

      (4) The phosphorylation within MYRF-1's JM domain was insufficiently investigated. There were two serine phosphorylation sites that were discovered through mass spectrometry experiments, however the authors only investigated one of the serine (S623) residues without any justifications for the choice. Additional investigation of the other residues, as well as both together, would strengthen the relevance of these phosphorylation events to cleavage and nuclear translocation, especially considering the minimal effect observed with only mutating the one residue.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Feng, Jing-Xin et al. studied the hemogenic capacity of the endothelial cells in the adult mouse bone marrow. Using Cdh5-CreERT2 in vivo inducible system, though rare, they characterized a subset of endothelial cells expressing hematopoietic markers which was transplantable. They suggested that the endothelial cells need the support of stromal cells to acquire blood forming capacity ex vivo. This endothelial cells were transplantable and contribute to hematopoiesis with ca. 1% chimerism in a stress hematopoiesis condition (5-FU) and recruited to peritoneal cavity upon Thioglycolate treatment. Ultimately, the authors detailed the blood lineage generation of the adult endothelial cells in a single cell fashion suggesting a predominant HSPCs-independent blood formation by adult bone marrow endothelial cells, in addition to the discovery of Col1a2+ endothelial cells with blood forming potential corresponds to its high Runx1 expressing property.

      Comments on revised version:

      Overall, the authors have addressed our main concerns, and the revised manuscript is improved. The new data now more strongly supports long-term multilineage reconstitution of the adult hemogenic ECs. However, critical data, especially regarding the ECs' hematopoietic identity and functional capacity remains insufficient, which limits the strength of hemogenic claim, especially to assert that these adult hemogenic ECs generate bona fide HSCs.

      Points that are sufficiently addressed:

      (1) Exclusion of the potential contamination during cell sorting for the ex vivo CD45- ZsGreen+ fraction culture has been explicitly shown to be of a high purity in Fig. 2B.

      (2). The pre-cultured ZsG+ fraction is shown to having a long-term multilineage reconstituting capacity (10 months chimerism, Fig. 2J), which increases confidence that the fraction is not limited to short-lived progenitors.

      Points that are insufficiently addressed:

      (1) As noted in the "Limitation of Study", the absence of LT-HSC phenotyping and/or secondary transplantation data of ZsG+ donor limits confidence in concluding that the adult hemogenic BM-ECs generate HSPCs.

      (2) The lack of early to the end of reconstitution kinetics in Fig 2E-2J restricts interpretation of whether the donor fraction contains rapid reconstituting transient progenitor versus sustained repopulating HSCs.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study addresses the hypothesis that the strikingly higher prevalence of autoimmune diseases in women could be the result of biased thymic generation or selection of TCR repertoires. The biological question is important and the hypothesis is valuable. Although the topic is conceptually interesting and the dataset is rich, the study has a number of major issues. In particular, the majority of "autoimmunity-related TCRs" considered in this study are in fact specific to type 1 diabetes (T1D). Notably, T1D incidence is higher in males, which directly contradicts the stated objective of the study - to explain the higher prevalence of autoimmune diseases in women. Given this conceptual inconsistency, the evidence presented does not support the authors' conclusions.

      Strengths:

      The key strength of this work is the newly generated dataset of TCR repertoires from sorted thymocyte subsets (DP and SP populations). This approach enables the authors to distinguish between biases in TCR generation (DP) and thymic selection (SP). Bulk TCR sequencing allows deeper repertoire coverage than single-cell approaches, which is valuable here, although the absence of TRA-TRB pairing and HLA context limits the interpretability of antigen specificity analyses. Importantly, this dataset represents a valuable community resource and should be openly deposited rather than being "available upon request."

      Weaknesses:

      I thank the authors for their detailed responses to my previous comments. Several concerns were addressed satisfactorily; however, important issues remain unresolved, and a new major concern has emerged from the revised manuscript.

      Major concerns:

      (1) Autoimmune specificity is dominated by T1D, contradicting the study's premise. Newly added supplementary Table 3 shows that the authors considered only 14 autoimmune-related epitopes, of which 12 are associated with type 1 diabetes (T1D) and 2 with celiac disease (CeD). (I guess this is because identification of particular peptide autoantigens is an extremely difficult task and was only successful in T1D and CeD.) Thus conclusions of this work mostly relate to T1D. However, the incidence of T1D is higher in males than in females (e.g. doi:10.1111/j.1365-2796.2007.01896.x; doi:10.25646/11439.2). This directly contradicts the stated objective of the study - to explain the higher prevalence of autoimmune diseases in women. As a result, the authors' conclusions (a) cannot be generalized to autoimmune disease as a whole as the authors only considered T1D and CeD antigens and (b) are internally inconsistent with the stated objective of the study.

      (2) By contrast, CeD does show a female bias (~60/40 female/male; doi:10.1016/j.cgh.2018.11.013). However, the manuscript does not allow evaluation of how much the reported "autoimmune TCR enrichment" derives from T1D versus CeD. Despite my previous request, the authors did not provide per-donor and per-epitope distributions of autoimmune-specific TCR matches. I therefore explicitly request a table in which: each row corresponds to a specific autoimmune antigen; each column corresponds to a donor (with metadata available including sex); each cell reports the number of unique TCRs specific to that antigen in that donor. Without such data, the conclusions cannot be evaluated.

      (3) It is scientifically inappropriate to generalize findings to "autoimmune diseases" when only T1D and CeD were analyzed. Moreover, given that T1D and CeD show opposite directions of sex bias, combining them into a single "AID" category is misleading. All analyses presented in Figure 8 and Supplementary Figure 16 should be repeated and shown separately for T1D and CeD, rather than combined.

      (4) The McPAS database contains TCRs associated with other autoimmune diseases (e.g., multiple sclerosis, rheumatoid arthritis), although the exact autoantigens in these contexts are unknown. Why didn't the authors perform the search for such TCRs? I believe disease association even without particular known antigen could still be insightful.

      (5) Misuse of the concept of polyspecificity. I appreciate the authors' reference to Don Mason's work; however, the concept of polyspecificity discussed there is fundamentally different from the authors' usage. Mason, Sewell (doi:10.1074/jbc.M111.289488), Garcia (doi:10.1016/j.cell.2014.03.047), and others demonstrated that individual TCRs can recognize multiple peptides, possibly around 1 million. But importantly these peptides are not random but share some sequence motif. This is a general feature of TCRs, i.e. 100% of TCRs are polyspecific in this sense.<br /> In contrast, the authors define polyspecificity as TRB sequences annotated as specific to unrelated epitopes in TCR databases such as VDJdb. These databases are well known to contain substantial numbers of false-positive annotations (see, e.g., Ton Schumacher's preprint https://www.biorxiv.org/content/10.1101/2025.04.28.651095.abstract). The authors acknowledge that, under their definition, polyspecificity has been experimentally validated for only one (!) TCR (Quiniou et al.). In the absence of robust experimental validation, use of the term "polyspecificity" in this context is misleading. I strongly recommend removing all analyses and conclusions related to polyspecificity from the manuscript unless supported by independent functional validation.

      (6) I agree that comparing specificity enrichment between sexes is meaningful. However, enrichment relative to the database composition itself is not biologically interpretable, as acknowledged by the authors in their response. I therefore recommend removing Supplementary Figure 15, which is potentially misleading.

      (7) In contrast, Supplementary Figure 16 represents the most convincing result of the study (keeping in mind that the AID group should be splitted to T1D and CeD with T1D and that T1D and CeD have opposing directions of sex biases) and should be shown as a main figure, replacing Figure 8A-B which is less convincing as it doesn't show per-donor distribution.

      (8) The authors argue that applying mixed-effects modeling to Rényi entropy would require assuming a common sex effect across subsets. I do not find this assumption unreasonable. For example, if sex effects are mediated through AIRE-dependent negative selection, one would indeed expect a consistent direction of effect across subsets. The lack of statistical significance in Figure 3 may reflect limited sample size rather than true absence of the difference. Moreover, the title's phrasing "comparable TCR repertoire diversity" is vague: what is the statistical definition of "comparable"?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      At a high-level, the reviewers demonstrate that there is a explanation for pre-word-onset predictivity in neural responses that does not invoke a theory of predictive coding or processing. The paper does this by demonstrating that this predictivity can be explained solely as a property of the local mutual information statistics of natural language. That is, the reason that pre-word onset predictivity exist could simply boil down to the common prevalence of redundant bigram or skip-gram information in natural language.

      Strengths:

      The paper addresses a problem of significance and uses methods from modern NeuroAI encoding model literature to do so. The arguments, both around stimulus dependencies and the problems of residualization, are compellingly motivated and point out major holes in the reasoning behind several influential papers in the field, most notably Goldstein et al. This result, together with other papers that have pointed out other serious problems in this body of work, should provoke a reconsideration of papers from encoding model literature that have promoted predictive coding. The paper also brings to the forefront issues in extremely common methods like residualization that are good to raise for those who might be tempted to use or interpret these methods incorrectly.

      Weaknesses:

      After author revision, I see no major weaknesses in the underlying arguments or data processing steps.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors performed a series of population genetic analyses in Lantana camara using 19,008 genome-wide SNPs data from 359 individuals in India. They found clear population structure that did not show a geographical pattern, and flower color was rather associated with population structure. Excess of homozygosity indicate high selfing rate, which may lead to fixation of alleles in local populations and explain the presence of population structure without a clear geographic pattern. Authors also performed a forward simulation analysis, theoretically confirming that selfing promotes fixation of alleles (higher Fst) and reduction in genetic diversity (lower heterozygosity).

      Strengths:

      Biological invasion is a critical driver of biodiversity loss, and it is important to understand how invasive species adapt to novel environments despite limited genetic diversity (genetic paradox of biological invasion). Lantana camara is one of the hundred most invasive species in the world (IUCN 2000), and the authors collected 359 plants from a wide geographical range in India, where L. camara has invaded. The scale of the dataset and the importance of the target species are the strength of the present study. Coalescent-based analysis nicely supports the authors' claim that multiple introductions may have contributed the population structure of this species.

      Weaknesses:

      The main findings of the SLiM-based simulation were that inbreeding promotes fixation of alleles and reduction in genetic diversity. These are theoretically well known, and such findings themselves are not novel, although it may have become interesting if these findings are quantitatively integrated with their empirical findings in the studied species.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In humans, short photoperiods are associated with hypersomnolence. The mechanisms underlying these effects is however, unknown. Chen et al. use the fly Drosophila to determine the mechanisms regulating sleep under short photoperiods. They find that mutations in the circadian photoreceptor cryptochrome (cry) increase sleep specifically under short photoperiods (e.g. 4h light : 20 h dark). They go on to show that cry is required in GABAergic neurons and that the effects of the cry mutation on sleep are mediated by alterations in GABA signalling. Further, they suggest that the relevant subset of GABAergic neurons are the well-studied small ventral lateral neurons that they suggest inhibit the arousal promoting large ventral neurons via GABA signalling

      Strengths:

      Genetic analysis to show that cryptochrome (but not other core clock genes) mediates the increase in sleep in short photoperiods, and circuit analysis to localise cry function to GABAergic neurons.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors' have substantially revised their manuscript, and the manuscript is better for the revisions. However, the conclusion that the sLNvs are GABAergic is unfortunately still not well supported by the data. A key sticking point remains the anti GABA immunostaining, and specific driver lines for sLNvs and lLNvs.

      The authors should tone down their conclusions to reflect the fact that their data, as presented, does not support the model that cry acts in sLNvs to modulate GABA signalling onto lLNvs and thus modulate sleep.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study presents LUNA, an autofocus method that compensates for focus drift during rapid temperature changes. Using this approach, the authors show that E. coli cells continue to grow and divide during cold shock, revealing a coordinated, multi-phase adaptation process that could not be deduced from traditional population measurements. They propose a scattering-theory-based model that reconciles the paradox between growth differences of the bacteria at the single-cell level vs population level.

      Strengths:

      (1) The LUNA approach is pretty creative, turning coma aberration from what is normally a nuisance into an exploit. LUNA enabled long-term single-cell imaging during rapid temperature downshifts.

      (2) The authors show that the long-assumed growth arrest during cold shock from population-level measurements is misleading. At the single-cell level, bacteria do not stop growing or dividing but undergo a continuous, three-phase adaptation process. Importantly, this behavior is highly synchronized across the population and not based on bet-hedging.

      (3) Finally, the authors propose a model to resolve a long-standing paradox between single-cell vs population behavior: if cells keep growing, why does optical density (OD) of the culture stop increasing? Using light-scattering theory, they show that OD depends not only on cell number but also on cell volume, which decreases after cold shock. As a result, OD can remain flat, or even decrease, despite continued biomass accumulation. This demonstrates that OD is not a reliable proxy for growth under non-steady conditions.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) While the authors theoretically explain the advantages of LUNA over existing autofocus methods, it is unclear whether practical head-to-head comparisons have been performed, apart from the comparison to Nikon PFS shown in Video S1. As written, the manuscript gives the impression that only LUNA can solve this problem, but such a claim would require more systematic and rigorous benchmarking against alternative approaches.

      (2) No mutants/inhibitors used to test and challenge the proposed model.

      (3) Cells display a high degree of synchronization, but they are grown in confined microfluidic channels under highly uniform conditions. It is unclear to what extent this synchrony reflects intrinsic biology versus effects imposed by the microfluidic environment.

      (4) To further test and generalize the model, it would be informative to also examine bacterial responses at intermediate temperatures rather than focusing primarily on a single cold-shock condition.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript introduces Miniscope Processing Suite (MPS), a novel no-code GUI-based pipeline built to easily process long-duration one-photon calcium imaging data from head-mounted Miniscopes. MPS aims to address two large problems that persist despite the rapid proliferation of Miniscope use across the field. The first issue is concerned with the high technical barrier to using existing pipelines (e.g., CaImAn, MIN1PIPE, Minian, CaliAli) that require users to have coding skills to analyze data. The second problem addressed is the intense memory limitations of these pipelines, which can prevent analysis of long-duration (multi-hour) recordings without state-of-the-art hardware. The MPS toolbox takes inspiration from what existing pipelines do well, innovates new modules like Window Cropping, NNDSVD initialization, Watershed-based segmentation, and improves the user experience to improve access to calcium imaging analysis without the need for new training in new coding languages. In many ways, MPS achieves this aim, and thus will be of interest to a growing, broad audience of new calcium imagers.

      There are, however, some concerns with the current manuscript and pipeline that, if addressed, would greatly improve the impact of this work. Currently, the manuscript provides insufficient evidence that MPS can generate good results efficiently on various data sets, and it is not properly benchmarked against other established packages. Additionally, considering the goal of MPS is to attract novices to attempt Miniscope analysis, better tutorials, documentation, and walkthroughs of expected vs inaccurate results should be provided so that it is clear when the user can trust the output. Otherwise, this simplified approach may end up leading new users to erroneous results.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript itself is well-organized, clear, and easy to follow. MPS is clearly designed to remove the computational barrier for entry for a broad neuroscience community to record and analyze calcium data. The development of several well-detailed algorithmic innovations merits recognition. Firstly, MPS is extremely easy to install, keep updated, and step through. Having each step save every output automatically is a well-thought-out feature that will allow users to enter back into the pipeline at any step and compare results.

      The implementation of an erroneous frame identifier and remover during preprocessing is an important new feature that is typically done offline with custom-built code. Interactive ROI cropping early in the pipeline is an efficient way to lower pixel load, and NNDSVD initialization is a new way to provide nonnegative, biologically interpretable starting spatial and temporal factors for later CNMF iterations. Parallel temporal-first update ordering cuts down dramatically on later computational load. Together, all these features, neatly packaged into a no-code GUI like the Data Explorer for manual curation, are practical additions that will benefit end users.

      Weaknesses:

      A major limitation of this manuscript is that the authors don't validate the accuracy of their source extraction using ground-truth data or any benchmark against existing pipelines. The paper uses their own analysis of processing speeds, component counts, signal-to-noise ratio improvements, and morphological characteristics of detected cells, but it needs to be reworked to include some combination of validation against manually annotated ground truth data sets, simulated data with known cell locations and activity patterns, or cross-validation with established pipelines on identical datasets. Without this kind of validation, it is impossible to truly determine whether MPS produces biologically acceptable results that help distinguish it from what is currently already available. For example, line 57 refers to the CaImAn pipeline having near-human efficiency (Figures 3-5 and Tables 1 and 2 of the CaImAn paper), but no specific examples for MPS performance benchmarks are made. Figure 15 of the Minian paper provides other examples of how to show this.

      Considering one of the main benefits of MPS is its low memory demand and ability to run on unsophisticated hardware, the authors should include a figure that shows how processing times and memory usage scale with dataset sizes (FOV, number of frames and/or neurons, sparsity of cells) and differing pipelines. Figure 8 of the CaImAn paper and Figure 18 of the Minian paper show this quite nicely. Table 1 currently references how "traditional approaches" differ methodologically from MPS innovations, but runtime comparisons on identical datasets processed through MPS, CaImAn, Minian, or CaliAli would be necessary to substantiate performance claims of MPS being "10-20X faster". Additionally, while the paper does mention the type of hardware used by the experimenters, a table with a full breakdown of components may be useful for reproducibility. As well as the minimum requirements for smooth processing.

      The current datasets used for validating MPS are not described in the manuscript. The manuscript appears to have 28 sessions of calcium imaging, but it is unclear if this is a single cohort or even animal, or whether these data are all from the same brain region. Importantly, the generalizability of parameter choices and performance could vary for others based on brain region differences, use of alternative calcium indicators (anything other than GCaMP8f used in the paper), etc. This leads to another limitation of the paper in its current form. While MPS is aimed at eliminating the need to code, users should not be expected to blindly trust default or suggested parameter selections. Instead, users need guidance on what each modifiable parameter does to their data and how each step analysis output should be interpreted. Perhaps including a tutorial with sample test data for parameter investigation and exploration, like many other existing pipelines do, is warranted. This would also increase the transparency and reproducibility of this work.

      Currently, the documentation and FAQ website linked to MPS installation does not do an adequate job of describing parameters or their optimization. The main GitHub repository does contain better stepwise explanations, but there needs to be a centralized location for all this information. Additionally, a lack of documentation on the graphs created by each analysis step makes it hard for a true novice to interpret whether their own data is appropriately optimized for the pipeline. Greater detail on this would greatly improve the quality and impact of MPS.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Zhang and colleagues examine the role of participant selection in creating and using functional templates to improve analyses using hyperalignment. Hyperalignment aligns participants' functional MRI data to a shared functional template, analogous to the anatomical templates used to bring anatomical MRI data into a shared space (e.g., MNI152). The question of appropriate template creation is especially pressing for population-level analyses, where a large number of demographic groups (e.g., different age ranges, clinical statuses) may be included in the same analysis. These different demographic groups may have differences in their functional organization that complicate the creation of a single study-specific functional template.

      To provide an initial investigation of the potential effect of demographic-specific templates, the authors use the publicly available Cam-CAN dataset, which contains participants from 18 to 87 years of age. They define a young adult (< 45 years of age) and an older adult group (> 65 years of age) from this dataset with approximately the same number of participants. They investigate whether "age-congruent" templates (i.e. defined in the same age group they are used) improve three analyses where hyperalignment has been previously shown to boost performance: inter-subject correlation, predicting individual connectomes, and predicting individual functional responses. Using the Cam-CAN-derived older adult template, they then replicate the ISC analyses using the publicly available Dallas Lifespan Brain Study (DLBS).

      Overall, the presented results are highly suggestive that age-congruent templates consistently improve performance, though the absolute effects are small.

      Strengths:

      The use of a separate validation sample, reusing the same template calculated with Cam-CAN, highlights the potential of developing independent templates for individual demographic groups and then distributing these for wider use, analogous to the MNI templates that are widely used throughout the field of neuroimaging. This suggests that the potential impact of this framework is significant.

      Weaknesses:

      While the authors appropriately highlight the potential applications of this result (e.g., to different clinical statuses), it is not apparent how to appropriately extend this methodology to many common experimental paradigms. For example, in case-control studies (where researchers are interested in comparing clinical and non-clinical participants) the use of two different functional templates may complicate rather than ease analyses. Providing this as a potential limitation of the current template construction method, or providing recommendations to researchers interested in comparing across groups, would help to increase the impact of this work.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors tackle an important question of why IL-17 production and TH17 responses are lower than expected during Mtb infection. The authors identify an axis of cross-regulation between TH1 and TH17 cells and provide data to support roles for Mtb virulence factors ESX1 and PDIM in promoting TH1 responses and/or suppressing TH17 responses.

      Strengths:

      The strengths include the significance of the work, the combination of host and Mtb genetic models to dissect the mechanistic basis for regulation of IL-17 production from T cells during infection, and the rigor of the experiments. There are a number of exciting findings from the work, including the cross-talk between T cell responses and the impact of ESX1 and PDIM on these responses.

      Weaknesses:

      The following conclusions and interpretations should be revisited, rephrased, and re-evaluated:

      (1) The manuscript neglects to analyze T cell responses in the dLN, which is the critical site where these responses are initiated (only DC cytokine production is measured in the dLN). The differences in the lungs could reflect trafficking of T cells to the lungs, local lung T cell responses, or durability of the T cell responses in the lungs. The authors state in the last results section that "These results indicate that the ESX-1 and PDIM virulence factors impact naïve T cell differentiation at the draining mediastinal lymph node..." but T cell responses are never measured in the dLN.

      (2) Figure 2: The authors state that "Importantly, IFN-γ deficient mice did not exhibit elevated levels of IL-17A producing CD4 T cells demonstrating that IFN-γ production is not the mechanism by which Th1 T cells limit a Th17 response during Mtb infection", but the difference is significantly different and even more obvious in Panel B. In fact, if the Panel D y-axis was on a log scale, the Ifng-/- would likely look more like Tbet-/- than WT. Based on this data, it seems like IFNg is having an effect and should not be completely discounted. Does the deletion of Ifng affect the number of Tbet+ T cells?

      In addition, the deletion of Tbet results in an increased number of IFNg+IL-17+ double positive T cells (Figure 2B), in addition to a sizable IFNg single positive T cell population maintained in the Tbet-/- mice (10x the negative control of Ifng-/-). Is this why Tbet deletion is not as severe as Ifng deletion, because T cells are still making IFNg?

      Along these lines, the statement in the text that, "Tbet-/-Il17a-/- mice completely lacked both IFN-γ producing...." T cells is not supported by the data in Figure 2C. Tbet-/-Il17a-/- mice look to have more gamma-producing T cells than Tbet-/- mice (which is already 10x the negative control of Ifng-/- in panel 2B if one includes the gamma single positive and IFNg/IL-17 double positive).

      (3) In the Results sections describing Figures 3, 4, and 5, the authors equate IL-17 production by T cells with TH17 responses and IFNg expression with TH1, but Tbet and RORgt expression in the T cells should be measured to make conclusions about TH1 and TH17. Or the authors can rephrase their findings to specifically state the observations as IFNg or IL-17 expressing CD4+ T cells.

      (4) Conceptually, do the authors think that ESX1/PDIM promotes TH1 responses and this blocks TH17 or are ESX1/PDIM blocking TH17 responses directly, allowing for increased TH1 responses? It would be helpful to clarify the model in this regard, describe how the data supports one model or the other, and then make sure the language is consistent throughout. Can these effects on T cell responses be tested and recapitulated in vitro using infected APC and T cell co-cultures?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper by Diaz et al. uses the zebrafish model to examine how early embryonic exposure to Chlorpyrifos (CPF), a widely used organophosphate pesticide, induces social behavior deficits later in life. This paper combined behavioral testing, pharmaceutical treatment, genetic manipulation, and multi-omics to test the hypothesis that early CPF increases the abundance of denitrifying bacteria, Pseudomonas, which, in turn, enhances nitric oxide production and induces selective inhibition of HDAC8 and abnormal gene expression in the brain.

      Strengths:

      (1) The observation that early embryonic CPF exposure causes behavior deficits in juvenile zebrafish is very intriguing. It is especially exciting to see that CPF-induced behavior deficits can be reversed by overnight treatment with butyrate or HDAC1 inhibitors in juvenile zebrafish. In humans, CPF exposure during pregnancy causes brain abnormalities and neurological disorders such as Autism. Though it is far away from the zebrafish experimental study to human application, the experimental effects reported in the paper are still quite thought-provoking.

      (2) The authors performed RNA sequencing experiments on control zebrafish, CPF-exposed zebrafish, and CPF-exposed zebrafish that were treated with Butyrate. The data not only showed large-scale transcriptomic changes in the juvenile zebrafish brain in response to embryonic CPF exposure but also showed that many CPF-induced genetic alterations can be alleviated by butyrate exposure later in life.

      (3) The authors also performed untargeted metabolomics on zebrafish gut and metagenomic analysis in zebrafish feces samples. The results are interesting and support the conclusion that increased Intestinal Nitric oxide metabolism and the abundance of denitrifying bacteria, such as Pseudomonas, are associated with CPF exposure.

      (4) The large datasets presented in the paper will be useful to other researchers interested in understanding how CPF or butyrate alters brain and gut function. It might be useful to generate new hypotheses to power other research lines.

      (5) The social preferences, behavior testing, and experimental paradigm used by the paper may also be used by other researchers to investigate the interaction among gene, environmental factors, and brain function.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The presented link between gut microbiome and CPF-induced behavior and genetic alteration is an association, but not causation. Although the research data align with the hypothesis, the hypothesis is not fully supported or tested by the data presented in the paper in the current state.

      (2) The authors performed several large omic studies. However, some of the presented analyses are relatively simple and incomplete. For example, the authors performed shotgun metagenomic analysis on zebrafish feces. However, the paper only displayed the bacterial taxa differences. Are there any differences in bacterial genetic pathways, especially the pathways associated with microbial nitrogen metabolism? What is the alpha and beta diversity looking like when comparing different experimental groups?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript reports the behavior of a computational model of rat claustral neurons during the performance of a behavioral task known as the delayed escape task (in this reviewer's understanding, this behavioral task was created and implemented by this group only). These authors have argued in a prior manuscript (Han et al.) that a group of neurons located "rostral to striatum" is part of the claustrum. The group names the region the "rostral to striatum claustrum." Additionally, in the Han et al. paper, the authors argue that these cells are responsible for maintaining a signal that lasts through the delay period.

      The main findings of the current paper are:

      (1) The authors have built a model network that was trained to show firing similar to what was reported for rats in their prior paper.

      (2) The authors' analysis of model behavior is used to suggest that the model network recapitulates biological activity, including the existence of a cluster of cells mainly responsible for the delay period firing.

      (3) The authors offer evidence from patch clamp recordings for excitatory interconnections among claustral neurons that are an essential feature of the model network.

      A major value of the computational network is that "trials" of the network can be performed. In experiments on animals, only single trials can be used.

      Concerns:

      (1) This paper is based on behavioral results and neural recordings from their prior paper (Han et al.), but data, e.g., in Figure 1, are not clearly identified as new or as coming from that source. Figure 1A, for example, appears to be taken directly from Han et al. No methods are given in this manuscript for the behavioral testing or the in vivo electrophysiology.

      (2) Many other details are unclear. Examples include model training, the weight matrices and how these changed with training (p. 13), equations 2 and 3 (p. 13), the sources for the constants in the equations (p. 14), the methods (anesthesia, stereotaxic coordinates, injection specifics and details for "sparse expression") for the ChrimsonR injections.

      (3) The explorations of model behavior are a catalog of everything tried rather than an organized demonstration of what the model can and cannot do. The figures could be reduced in number to emphasize the key comparisons of the different clusters and the model's behavior under different conditions, intended to "test" the model.

      (4) On page 6, the E-E connectivity is argued from Shelton et al. (2025) and against Kim et al. (2016), but ignores Orman (2015), which, to this reviewer's knowledge, was the first to demonstrate such connectivity, including the long-duration events and impact of planes of section.

      (5) Whereas the authors are entitled to their own opinion of prior work (references 3-8), it is inappropriate to misrepresent prior work as only demonstrating a "limited function" of claustum. Additional papers by Mathur's group and Citri's group are ignored.

      In summary, the authors have made a computational model that recapitulates the firing of a subset of potentially claustral neurons during a particular behavioral task (delayed escape is certainly not the only behavior that involves claustrum - see e.g., attention, salience, sleep). If the conclusion is that excitatory claustral cells must be connected to other excitatory claustral cells, such a conclusion is not new, and the electrophysiological E-E metrics are not well quantified (e.g., connectivity frequency, strength of connection). If the model is intended to predict how the claustrum might accomplish any other task, there is insufficient detail to evaluate the model beyond the evidence that the model creates a subset of cells that can sustain firing during the delay period in the delayed escape task.

      All relevant work must be appropriately cited throughout the manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Missed diagnosis of myocardial ischemia (MI) is more common in women, and treatment is typically less aggressive. This diagnosis stems from the fact that women's ECGs commonly exhibit 12 lead ECG biomarkers that are less likely to fall within the traditional diagnostic criteria. Namely, women have shorter QRS durations and lower ST junction and T wave amplitudes, but longer QT intervals, than men. To study the impact, this study aims to quantify sex differences in heart-torso anatomy and ECG biomarkers, as well as their relative associations, in both pre- and post-MI populations. A novel computational pipeline was constructed to generate torso-ventricular geometries from cardiac magnetic resonance imaging. The pipeline was used to build models for 425 post-myocardial infarction subjects and 1051 healthy controls from UK Biobank clinical images to generate the population.

      This study has a strength in that it utilizes a large patient population from the UK Biobank (425 post-MI and 1051 healthy controls) to analyze sex-based differences. The computational pipeline is state-of-the-art for constructing torso-ventricular geometries from cardiac MR and is clinically viable. It draws on novel machine learning techniques for segmentation, contour extraction, and shape modeling. This pipeline is publicly available and can help in the large-scale generation of anatomies for other studies. The study then deploys a linear regression model to relate the level of influence of various factors to ECG-based changes. This allows computation of various anatomical factors (torso volume, cavity volume, etc), and subsequent linear regression analysis on how these factors are altered before and after MI from the 12-lead ECG.

      A major weakness is that a linear additive model may not adequately capture how anatomy and electrophysiology interact. Myocardial infarction dramatically alters both anatomy and electrophysiology in ways that are not easily separable and could be considered non-linear. As such, the electrophysiological factors in the model may still include factors that have an anatomical basis (i.e. the formation of scar) that were not accounted for during model generation. However, the technique remains useful for dissecting large factors beyond anatomy, as demonstrated in this study.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Missed diagnosis of myocardial ischemia (MI) is more common in women, and treatment is typically less aggressive. This diagnosis stems from the fact that women's ECGs commonly exhibit 12 lead ECG biomarkers that are less likely to fall within the traditional diagnostic criteria. Namely, women have shorter QRS durations and lower ST junction and T wave amplitudes, but longer QT intervals, than men. To study the impact, this study aims to quantify sex differences in heart-torso anatomy and ECG biomarkers, as well as their relative associations, in both pre- and post-MI populations. A novel computational pipeline was constructed to generate torso-ventricular geometries from cardiac magnetic resonance imaging. The pipeline was used to build models for 425 post-myocardial infarction subjects and 1051 healthy controls from UK Biobank clinical images to generate the population.

      Strengths:

      This study has a strength in that it utilizes a large patient population from the UK Biobank (425 post-MI and 1051 healthy controls) to analyze sex-based differences. The computational pipeline is state-of-the-art for constructing torso-ventricular geometries from cardiac MR and is clinically viable. It draws on novel machine learning techniques for segmentation, contour extraction, and shape modeling. This pipeline is publicly available and can help in the large-scale generation of anatomies for other studies. This allows computation of various anatomical factors (torso volume, cavity volume, etc), and subsequent regression analysis on how these factors are altered before and after MI from the 12-lead ECG.

      Weaknesses:

      Major weaknesses stem from the fact that, while electrophysiological factors appear to play a role across many leads, both post-MI and healthy, the electrophysiological factors are not stated or discussed. The computational modeling pipeline is validated for reconstructing torso contours; however, potential registration errors stemming from ventricular-torso construction are not addressed within the context of anatomical factors, such as the tilt and rotation of the heart. This should be discussed as the paper's claims are based on these results. Further analysis and explanation are needed to understand how these sex-specific results impact the ECG-based diagnosis of MI in men and women, as stated as the primary reason for the study at the beginning of the paper. This would provide a broader impact within the clinical community. Claims about demographics do not appear to be supported within the main manuscript but are provided in the supplements. Reformatting the paper's structure is required to efficiently and effectively present and support the findings and outcomes of this work.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In the current study, the authors use an odor-guided sequence learning task described as a "figure 8" task to probe neuronal differences in latent state encoding within the orbitofrontal cortex after cocaine (n = 3) vs sucrose (n = 3) self-administration. The task uses six unique odors which are divided into two sequences that run in series. For both sequences, the 2nd and 3rd odors are the same and predict reward is not available at the reward port. The 1st and 4th odors are unique, and are followed by reward. Animals are well-trained before undergoing electrode implant and catheterization, and then retrained for two weeks prior to recording. The hypothesis under test is that cocaine-experienced animals will be less able to use the latent task structure to perform the task, and instead encode information about each unique sequence that is largely irrelevant. Behaviorally, both cocaine and sucrose-experienced rats show high levels of accuracy on task, with some group differences noted. When comparing reaction times and poke latencies between sequences, more variability was observed in the cocaine-treated group, implying animals treated these sequences somewhat differently. Analyses done at the single unit and ensemble level suggests that cocaine self-administration had increased the encoding of sequence-specific information, but decreased generalization across sequences. For example, the ability to decode odor position and sequence from neuronal firing in cocaine-treated animals was greater than controls. This pattern resembles that observed within the OFC of animals that had fewer training sessions. The authors then conducted tensor component analysis (TCA) to enable a more "hypothesis agnostic" evaluation of their data.

      Overall, the paper is well written and the authors do a good job of explaining quite complicated analyses so that the reader can follow their reasoning. The findings are important, and the results are compelling. The introduction and discussion contextualize the experiments in the context of the literature, and explain the novelty and significance of the current findings. Specifically, the observation that cocaine self-administration impairs generalization across task sequences at the single unit level builds on previous observations of aberrant neuronal activity within the OFC in animals with a history of cocaine self-administration. These new data point to a neurophysiological mechanism that could explain why drug-seeking is so context dependent, and hard to ameliorate with therapeutic strategies that take place within a clinical setting.

      The authors clearly acknowledge the major limitations of this work, namely that the sample size is restricted due to the technical challenges of performing in vivo electrophysiology recordings combined with self-administration, and that animals of only one sex were used. Importantly, the data from all rats within each group was remarkably homogeneous, increasing confidence in the conclusions drawn.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study addresses the population genetic underpinnings of the extraordinary diversity of genes in the MHC, which is widespread among jawed vertebrates. This topic has been widely discussed and studied, and several hypotheses have been suggested to explain this diversity. One of them is based on the idea that heterozygote genotypes have an advantage over homozygotes. While this hypothesis lost early on support, a reason study claimed that there is good support for this idea. The current study highlights an important aspect that allows us to see results presented in the earlier published paper in a different light, changing strongly the conclusions of the earlier study, i.e., there is no support for a heterozygote advantage. This is a very important contribution to the field. Furthermore, this new study presents an alternative hypothesis to explain the maintenance of MHC diversity, which is based on the idea that gene duplications can create diversity without heterozygosity being important. This is an interesting idea, but not entirely new.

      Strength:

      (1) A careful re-evaluation of a published model, questioning a major assumption made by a previous study.

      (2) A convincing reanalysis of a model that, in the light of the re-analysis-loses all support.

      (3) A convincing suggestion for an alternative hypothesis.

      Weakness:

      (1) The title of the study is catchy, but it is explained only in the very end of the paper.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The major part of this study reproduces previously published findings in both mice and humans and provides incremental analyses on these findings. In essence, the work reaffirms the presence of coordinated infraslow fluctuations in sigma power and heart rate during NREM sleep. It further confirms previous findings that coordination depends on noradrenaline-releasing neurons in the locus coeruleus. Also supporting previously published work in mice and humans, the authors describe a link between the strength of these infraslow fluctuations and memory consolidation in mice and humans.

      Strengths:

      The authors successfully replicate key previously reported phenomena across both mice and humans. Confirmatory studies and demonstrations of reproducibility are essential for progress in neuroscience. To maximize their value, such studies should clearly acknowledge their confirmatory nature and carefully situate what, in their view, are novel results, going beyond existing literature.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors' interpretation of their data needs to be revised. Many of their claims regarding the mechanistic basis of their findings and the predictive value of their correlative datasets are not supported by the available evidence.

      In the present manuscript, several citations of literature on the work they reproduce lack precision or completeness, which reduces transparency and obscures how the reported findings relate to previously established results.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study investigates the impact of BRCA1/2 mutations on immunotherapy in lung adenocarcinoma using multi-omics approaches. The work highlights distinct roles of BRCA1 and BRCA2 mutations in shaping immune-related processes, and is logically structured with clearly presented analyses. However, the conclusions rely primarily on descriptive computational analyses and would benefit from additional immunological validation.

      Strengths:

      By integrating public datasets with in-house data, this study examines the impact of BRCA1/2 mutations on immunotherapy in lung adenocarcinoma from multiple perspectives using multi-omics approaches. The analyses are diverse in scope, with a clear overall logic and a well-organized structure.

      Weaknesses:

      The study is largely descriptive and would benefit from additional immunological experiments or validation using in vivo models. The fact that the BRCA1 and BRCA2 samples were each derived from a single patient also limits the robustness of the conclusions.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors set out to test whether a defined set of small molecules can lessen damaging effects caused by venoms from several Bothrops species, and whether these effects are consistent enough to suggest a broadly applicable approach. They present a cross-venom dataset spanning in-vitro activity readouts and blood-based functional outcomes, and include a chicken embryo model to explore whether venom inhibition can translate into improved survival. The central message is that certain small molecules can reduce specific venom-driven effects across multiple samples, providing a comparative resource for the field and a basis for prioritizing future validation.

      Strengths:

      The main value of this work is the breadth and structure of the dataset, which places multiple venoms and multiple readouts into a single, comparable framework that should be useful for readers evaluating patterns across samples. The experimental flow is generally coherent, moving from activity measurements to functional outcomes and then to an in-vivo test, which helps the reader understand how the authors link mechanism-oriented assays to more integrated endpoints. The manuscript also provides practical information for the community by highlighting which readouts appear most consistently affected across venoms, which can help guide hypothesis generation and study design in follow-up work.

      Weaknesses:

      Several aspects of the study design and framing reduce the confidence with which readers can translate the findings beyond the specific experimental context presented. The evidence base is strongest in controlled in-vitro settings, while the bridge to real-world effectiveness remains limited, particularly for understanding performance under conditions that better reflect delayed treatment and systemic exposure. As a result, the manuscript is best interpreted as a well-organized comparative screening study with promising signals, rather than a definitive demonstration of a broadly effective, deployable intervention.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript combines fMRI and EEG investigations performed at two research sites to examine 'willed' or volitional visuospatial attention, as contrasted with more standard cued (or 'instructed') visuospatial attention. The primary findings are: 1) willed attention (vs. instructed attention) drives additional cortical circuitry across a broad fronto-parietal network; 2) the direction of willed attention, but not instructed attention can be decoded from the pre-cue EEG data and from MVPA analysis of the trial-level fMRI data; and 3) the subjects with high EEG decoding also exhibited high neural efficiency (i.e., high decoding with low BOLD signal change) in the fMRI data. The methods and data analysis are generally sound, and these results appear solid. On the negative side, it is not made clear how the present findings extend our understanding beyond prior published work from one of the senior authors. There are also three significant concerns regarding interpretation of the findings. One has to do with the causal interpretation of the pre-cue alpha EEG signal determining the direction of willed attention. The second concern is the degree to which the present research paradigm adequately examines 'willed attention.' The third is that the MVPA analysis is not sufficiently described, and Permutation testing needs to be done to validate these findings. Otherwise, this manuscript appears methodologically sound, but questions about interpretation may mute the potential impact.

      Strengths:

      The focus on willed attention attempts to move beyond some of the many limitations of standard laboratory investigations of attention.

      The shared paradigm across two modalities and two research sites demonstrates solid reproducibility, even though a few minor differences are observed across sites.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) There are concerns about this experimental paradigm carrying the banner of Willed Attention, because the application of 'Will' appears quite modest. Yes, extra brain activity is exhibited for this condition vs. its control, but do the cognitive processes isolated adequately stand in for 'Willed Attention?" Willed attention, as operationally defined here, appears to involve a simple decision process prior to the shifting of spatial attention. The cue is internally generated, but after that the rest of the attentional processes appear identical to standard externally cued visuospatial attention experiments. This self-generated cue process likely involves some sort of memory/history of the recently selected cues and then some random-ish selection between A and B. This appears very similar to asking the subject to guess whether a fair coin flip will be heads or tails on each trial. A mental 'coin flip' feels like a very weak version of 'will.' As a potential remedy, it would be helpful to discuss what other phenomena might fall within 'willed attention' and what some future studies might choose to focus on, along with some potential pitfalls (e.g., the reasons why the current study avoided more robust exemplars of will).

      (2) The manuscript is lacking a description of the decision processes used during the willed attention paradigm and is lacking evidence as to WHEN subjects made their willed decision. Both of these points are of major concern:

      (a) The authors state: "For willed attention, participants were explicitly told to avoid relying on any stereotypical strategies of generating decisions, such as always attending the same/opposite side they attended during the previous trial, as well as to avoid randomizing or equalizing their decisions to choose left or right across trials; prior studies found that decisions to explicitly randomize decisions might invoke additional working memory related processes (Spence & Frith, 1999)." Subjects were instructed NOT to apply a simple heuristic and NOT to randomize or try to equalize their decisions, but exactly HOW the subjects made their decisions is not at all clear. What options does that leave? How does this strategy avoid the working memory-related processes mentioned in the Spence & Frith, 1999 citation? The brain regions that comprise the network of interest (aka Frontoparietal Decision Network) are activated by a very broad range of visual cognitive tasks, including many working memory paradigms. The Anterior Insula and dACC nodes Salience Network often simply reflect task difficulty. Obviously, making a choice is more cognitively demanding than not making a choice. The present experiments do not distinguish functional roles between different regions of the Frontoparietal Decision Network. On the whole, the study does very little to isolate the cognitive processes or neural bases of willed attention beyond calling out the set of 'Usual Suspects' for visual cognition.

      (b) The finding that pre-cue EEG signals predicted the postcue decision is intriguing. It could mean that the seemingly irrelevant and transient state of the brain causally and unconsciously biased the subject to one direction or the other. Alternatively, it could mean that the subjects utilized the pre-cue period to make their decision and hold it in case it was needed (i.e., that it was a choice trial). While 2-8 seconds ITI variability makes sense for fMRI decoding, it is a long time for a subject to idly wait, so they might fill that time preparing for the next trial. There appears to have been a substantial amount of individual difference in the pre-cue alpha decoding, which could reflect individual differences in cognitive strategy, specifically in the use of the pre-cue period to make their decision. More efficient decision makers might have pre-decided, which might account for the neural efficiency. The experiments lack any measurement of WHEN participants made their decision. For that reason, I would ask that the authors temper their claims about the significance of the alpha decoding and its possible causality.

      (3) Did individual subjects exhibit a choice bias of location for the willed trials? If not, doesn't that raise concerns that subjects were trying to equalize their trials? If they do exhibit location biases, how does that impact the decoding? A simple decoder could learn to always just guess the biased direction for a subject and would perform > 50%. Consider the example in which an individual subject chooses 'Left' 55% of the time. A classifier that simply learns to choose 'Left' on every trial will be correct on 55% of trials. The training data would likely be sufficient to learn the direction of choice bias in each individual subject. So the classifiers could perform significantly above 50% without learning anything beyond the tendency of each subject. That is to say, 50% is not truly chance in this data set. It doesn't appear that Permutation testing has been performed to empirically determine chance for an individual's data. Permutation methods, scrambling the labels 1000 or 10000 times to establish a true baseline would be preferred over simply comparing to 50% and would address concerns about individual subject biases.

      (4) The novel contributions of this work beyond the two prior Bengson et al papers from Dr. Mangun's lab appear quite modest. The discussion would be enhanced by specifically stating how the present work advances understanding beyond the prior Bengson studies.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This population-based cohort study found no evidence that physical activity, whether self-reported or objectively measured, positively influenced brain structure (hippocampal volume or BrainAGE) or cognitive function (Trail Making Test scores). Notably, longitudinal analyses suggested the opposite temporal relationship: a higher BrainAGE at baseline predicted higher physical capacity at follow-up, more in line with reverse causation rather than a neuroprotective effect of physical activity.

      Strengths:

      The study's statistical approach is thorough and well-documented, and the inclusion of two measurements of physical activity (self-report questionnaire and objective accelerometer data) is a strength. The longitudinal aspect also represents a strength.

      Weaknesses:

      Several aspects of the measurement timing warrant consideration. Physical activity was assessed over 7-day periods, creating a potential mismatch with (commonly less dynamic) brain outcomes examined (hippocampal volume, BrainAGE), which may reflect cumulative exposures over longer timescales. Additionally, the asynchronous measurement protocol (cognitive testing preceding accelerometry, and the MRI occurring weeks after baseline visits) may introduce time lags that attenuate associations. The observed null associations may be influenced by timing misalignment rather than reflecting the absence of consistent effects of physical activity on brain health and cognition.

      Other measurement characteristics also warrant consideration when interpreting the null findings. Physical activity was assessed using short-form self-report questionnaires and averaged accelerometer MET/day values, both of which have limited reliability. Additionally, the modest accelerometer subsample size and low/insufficient variation in activity levels observed in this cohort increase the likelihood of missing effects. These factors collectively raise the possibility that true physical activity-brain health associations may have been obscured.

      The study's conclusions regarding brain health, structure, and cognitive functioning are broad despite the scope of the selection of outcomes examined. The analyses focus on hippocampal volume, BrainAGE (a global aging metric), and Trail Making Test performance (processing speed and executive function), while omitting other important neuroimaging markers such as cortical thickness, functional connectivity, or white matter microstructure. The null findings presented here cannot exclude positive effects of physical activity on broader constructs of brain health or cognitive functioning.

      While the authors appropriately note the use of different physical activity instruments across time points (IPAQ at baseline, VSAQ at follow-up) in the limitations section, the discussion should more explicitly address the interpretive challenges this creates. The observed association between higher baseline brain age gap and lower follow-up physical activity may reflect: (1) a true temporal relationship, (2) an artifact of switching from behavior-focused (IPAQ) to capacity-focused (VSAQ) measurement, or (3) some combination of both. This ambiguity substantially limits causal inference.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper presents a new approach for explicitly transforming B-cell receptor affinity into evolutionary fitness in the germinal center. It demonstrates the feasibility of using likelihood-free inference to study this problem and demonstrates how effective birth rates appear to vary with affinity in real-world data.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors leverage the unique data they have generated for a separate project to provide novel insights into a fundamental question.

      (2) The paper is clearly written, with accessible methods and a straightforward discussion of the limits of this model.

      (3) Code and data are publicly available and well-documented.

      Weaknesses (minor):

      (1) Lines 444-446: I think that "affinity ceiling" and "fitness ceiling" should be considered independent concepts. The former, as the authors ably explain, is a physical limitation. This wouldn't necessarily correspond to a fitness ceiling, though, as Figure 7 shows. Conversely, the model developed here would allow for a fitness ceiling even if the physical limit doesn't exist.

      (2) Lines 566-569: I would like to see this caveat fleshed out more and perhaps mentioned earlier in the paper. While relative affinity is far more important, it is not at all clear to me that absolute affinity can be totally ignored in modeling GC behavior.

      (3) One other limitation that is worth mentioning, though beyond the scope of the current work to fully address: the evolution of the repertoire is also strongly shaped by competition from circulating antibodies. (Eg: http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3600904/, http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1931312820303978). This is irrelevant for the replay experiment modeled here, but still an important factor in general repertoires.

    2. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper presents a new approach for explicitly transforming B cell receptor affinity into evolutionary fitness in the germinal center. It demonstrates the feasibility of using likelihood-free inference to study this problem and demonstrates how effective birth rates appear to vary with affinity in real-world data.

      Strengths:

      • The authors leverage the unique data they have generated for a separate project to provide novel insights to a fundamental question.
      • The paper is clearly written, with accessible methods and straightforward discussion of the limits of this model.
      • Code and data are publicly available and well-documented.

      Weaknesses:

      • No substantial weaknesses noted.
    1. Reviewer #2 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      The authors combine a clever use of historical clinical data on infection duration in immunologically naive individuals and queuing theory to infer the force of infection (FOI) from measured multiplicity of infection (MOI) in a sparsely sampled setting. They conduct extensive simulations using agent-based modeling to recapitulate realistic population dynamics and successfully apply their method to recover FOI from measured MOI. They then go on to apply their method to real-world data from Ghana before and after an indoor residual spraying campaign.

      Strengths:

      (1) The use of historical clinical data is very clever in this context.

      (2) The simulations are very sophisticated with respect to trying to capture realistic population dynamics.

      (3) The mathematical approach is simple and elegant, and thus easy to understand.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The assumptions of the approach are quite strong and should be made more clear. While the historical clinical data is a unique resource, it would be useful to see how misspecification of the duration of infection distribution would impact the estimates.

      (2 )Seeing as how the assumption of the duration of infection distribution is drawn from historical data and not informed by the data on hand, it does not substantially expand beyond MOI. The authors could address this by suggesting avenues for more refined estimates of infection duration.

      (3) It is unclear in the example how their bootstrap imputation approach is accounting for measurement error due to antimalarial treatment. They supply two approaches. First, there is no effect on measurement, so the measured MOI is unaffected, which is likely false and I think the authors are in agreement. The second approach instead discards the measurement for malaria-treated individuals and imputes their MOI by drawing from the remaining distribution. This is an extremely strong assumption that the distribution of MOI of the treated is the same as the untreated, which seems unlikely simply out of treatment-seeking behavior. By imputing in this way, the authors will also deflate the variability of their estimates.

      - For similar reasons, their imputation of microscopy-negative individuals is also questionable, as it also assumes the same distributions of MOI for microscopy-positive and negative individuals.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript describes the structure of the Mycobacterium tuberculosis (MmpS4)3-(MmpL4)3 hetero-heximeric transporter complex. The structure was obtained by cryogenic electron microscopy using an engineered construct that cross-links MmpS4 to MmpL4 via a disulfide bond. The position of the disulfide bond was determined using an Alphafold2 model of the hetero-heximer. Although Alphafold2 predicts a symmetric hetero-heximer, the author found that the structure of the coiled-coil domain (CCD) is asymmetric, tilted at about 60° relative to the membrane domains, and only contains two of the three alpha helical hairpins, with the third being disordered.

      Strengths:

      The strategy of using Alphafold2 models to guide construct design for experimental structure determination is state-of-the-art, and this work provides a great example of its applications and limitations. I.e., the experimental structure does not fully recapitulate the prediction but provides unexpected results.

      The comparisons between the authors' structures and the previously published structures of the MmpL4 monomer and MmpL5 trimers strengthen the authors' findings.

      Weaknesses:

      A more detailed description of the current mechanistic hypothesis would strengthen the manuscript. The authors state that the two periplasmic domains "are expected to undergo rigid body movements that allow substrate transport through these periplasmic domains similar to the conformational changes observed in the E. coli multidrug efflux pump AcrB". A schematic of the proposed transport cycle, as a supplemental figure that shows the current hypothesis regarding transport, would be beneficial for understanding the previous structures and putting the current structure in context. Outside of "the mechanistic basis of how these conformational changes are coupled to protonation of the DY-pairs", what are the major controversies/open questions regarding the mechanism?

      The authors provide evidence that the cysteine-depleted S4L4 construct is functional, but do not show that the construct with the introduced disulfide bond #5 (D39C MmpS4 and S434C MmpL4) is also functional. Demonstrating this would allow the authors to better interpret their resulting structures.

      The analysis presented in Figure 5 and Supplementary Figure 7 seems to suggest that the authors are proposing that the CCD central cavity acts as a transport pathway for the transported substrate, but I am not sure that this hypothesis is explicitly stated. This makes the reasoning behind the analysis presented unclear. Clarity could be improved by stating that the hypothesis of direct transport of substrate through the CCD central channel is being examined using the structure prediction, and what the implications are for the structure solved with the incompletely formed CCD.

      Given that the results emphasize the flexibility of the CCD, the manuscript would be strengthened by 3D variability analysis either in cryoSPARC or using cryoDRGN (or both). This would allow the authors to better quantify the degree of motion in the CCD and how it may correlate to flexibility in other regions. Further 3D flex reconstruction in cryoSPARC may improve the map quality of the CCD.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is an inspired study that merges the concept of individuality with evolutionary processes to uncover a new strategy that diversifies individual behavior that is also potentially evolutionarily adaptive.

      The authors use time-resolved measurement of spontaneous, innate behavior, namely handedness or turn bias in individual, isogenic flies, across several genetic backgrounds.

      They find that an individual's behavior changes over time, or drifts. This has been observed before, but what is interesting here is that by looking at multiple genotypes, the authors find the amount of drift is consistent within genotype i.e., genetically regulated, and thus not entirely stochastic. This is not in line with what is known about innate, spontaneous behaviors. Normally, fluctuations in behavior would be ascribed to a response to environmental noise. However, here, the authors go on to find what is the pattern or rule that determines the rate of change of the behavior over time within individuals. Using modeling of behavior and environment in the context of evolutionarily important timeframes such as lifespan or reproductive age, they could show when drift is favored over bet-hedging and that there is an evolutionary purpose to behavioral drift. Namely, drift diversifies behaviors across individuals of the same genotype within the timescale of lifespan, so that the genotype's chance for expressing beneficial behavior is optimally matched with potential variation of environment experienced prior to reproduction. This ultimately increases fitness of the genotype. Because they find that behavioral drift is genetically variable, they argue it can also evolve.

      Strengths:

      Unlike most studies of individuality, in this study, authors consider the impact of individuality on evolution. This is enabled by the use of multiple natural genetic backgrounds and an appropriately large number of individuals to come to the conclusions presented in the study. I thought it was really creative to study how individual behavior evolves over multiple timescales. And indeed this approach yielded interesting and important insight into individuality. Unlike most studies so far, this one highlights that behavioral individuality is not a static property of an individual, but it dynamically changes. Also, placing these findings in the evolutionary context was beneficial. The conclusion that individual drift and bet-hedging are differently favored over different timescales is, I think, a significant and exciting finding.

      Overall, I think this study highlights how little we know about the fundamental, general concepts behind individuality and why behavioral individuality is an important trait. They also show that with simple but elegant behavioral experiments and appropriate modeling, we could uncover fundamental rules underlying the emergence of individual behavior. These rules may not at all be apparent using classical approaches to studying individuality, using individual variation within a single genotype or within a single timeframe.

      Weaknesses:

      I am unconvinced by the claim that serotonin neuron circuits are regulating behavioral drift, especially because of its bidirectional effect and lack of relative results for other neuromodulators. Without testing other neuromodulators, it will remain unclear if serotonin intervention increases behavioral noise within individuals, or if any other pharmacological or genetic intervention would do the same. Another issue is that the amount of drugs that the individuals ingested was not tracked. Variable amounts can result in variable changes in behavior that are more consistent with the interpretation of environmental plasticity, rather than behavioral drift. With the current evidence presented, individual behavior may change upon serotonin perturbation, but this does not necessarily mean that it changes or regulates drift.

      However, I think for the scope of this study, finding out whether serotonin regulates drift or not is less important. I understand that today there is a strong push to find molecular and circuit mechanisms of any behavior, and other peers may have asked for such experiments, perhaps even simply out of habit. Fortunately, the main conclusions derived from behavioral data across multiple genetic backgrounds and the modeling are anyway novel, interesting and in fact more fundamental than showing if it is serotonin that does it or not.

      To this point, one thing that was unclear from the methods section is whether genotypes that were tested were raised in replicate vials and how was replication accounted for in the analyses. This is a crucial point - the conclusion that genotypes have different amounts of behavioral drift cannot be drawn without showing that the difference in behavioral drift does not stem from differences in developmental environment.

      Comments on the latest version:

      The changes to the manuscript sufficiently addressed my few comments. I do not have anything else substantial to add to my review and I am comfortable with my initial assessment.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The main objective of the study was to link the changes in brain state due to anesthesia to consequences on visual neural processing, particularly effects on spatial frequency tuning. This is accomplished by 2-photon imaging of excitatory and inhibitory neurons (separating PV- and SST-positive subtypes) in mouse visual cortex during full-field visual stimulation with gratings, and tracking neuronal tuning for spatial frequency before, during, and after isoflurane anesthesia. The main finding is that anesthesia induces lower spatial frequency preferences in excitatory neurons, and this leads to poorer population representations (decoding) of higher spatial frequency responses during anesthesia. A second main finding is that anesthesia impacts inhibitory neuron subtypes in distinct ways, with the most pronounced effects of anesthesia on somatostatin inhibitory neurons.

      Strengths:

      (1) A main strength is that the study is that it is straightforward, and reassuringly, the results confirm multiple previous studies showing anesthesia's effects on the amplitude of cortical responses: larger and less selective responses in excitatory neurons (versus awake responses); strongly reduced responses in somatostatin inhibitory neurons (versus awake responses) (Fig. 5I-L), with less differences across anesthetized and awake states on response amplitude of PV neurons.

      (2) These confirmations of prior observations (on the amplitude of responses) establish good ground for the new results on spatial frequency tuning. For excitatory neurons, spatial frequency selectivity shifts to higher values in awake versus anesthetized conditions; this is because anesthesia induces larger responses to lower spatial frequencies. In somatostatin neurons, instead, wakefulness reduces the lower spatial frequency responses present in anesthesia, and dramatically increases the overall amplitude of responses and medium and higher spatial frequencies. This is consistent with prior work showing that in awake states, somatostatin neurons exert broad inhibition in V1; this study extends that finding to the tuning of spatial frequencies.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) A first weakness of the study is the lack of examination of changes to single neuron receptive field sizes and/or surround suppression across conditions, and how these may relate to the effects on spatial frequency tuning with full field gratings. There is a well-known relationship between the size of the receptive field and the resulting selectivity for spatial frequencies (i.e., large receptive fields prefer lower spatial frequency stimuli). Likewise, there are many studies showing how surround suppression / spatial integration is impacted by anesthesia (and arousal). A more detailed examination of all these related quantities on an individual neuron basis would provide a greater understanding of the factors underlying the effects on spatial frequency tuning. One could imagine that receptive field changes, and/or changes in surround suppression, influence the selectivity to full-field gratings.

      (2) A second weakness is the lack of examination/insight into the temporal dynamics of the effects. The experimental paradigm records activity across control, anesthesia, and recovery epochs in a single duration (~40 mins) session. The epochs are simply binned together ("Awake", "Anes.", "Recover"). It is not clear how the start of the anesthesia bin is defined, nor is it clear how the recovery period is defined. It is also not clear what the changes are to motor tone, brain state, etc., that are also strong influences on visual responses in mouse V1. Presumably, these onset/offset effects are similar enough across mice and sessions that they affect all the bins in the same way, but greater examination of the temporal effects in excitatory, PV, and SOM neurons could shed light on interactions driving the changes. Is there some temporal dependence of anesthesia on selectivity changes across the cell types? For example, at the onset of anesthesia, are SOM neurons losing broadband frequency responses before the excitatory neurons gain low frequency responses? Do PV neurons also show effects after the changes in SOM neurons (suggesting strong SOM -> PV inhibition)? Such analysis might shed light on the timing/causality of the effects among these 3 neuron types.

      (3) A third weakness concerns the interpretation of the low and high arousal conditions during awake states (Figure 6). It is not clear how movement (or lack of movement) impacts the high arousal epochs, nor is it clear how the low arousal condition compares to the brain state during anesthesia. For example, deep versus light anesthesia can lead to synchronized or asynchronous states, respectively, and low arousal in wakefulness can show strong low-frequency oscillations of activity, which could promote a lower excitability state than light anesthesia. Without some more detail about commonly measured brain state or body/face motion metrics, it is difficult to know what brain states are represented by the bins and how to interpret the comparisons.

      Overall, the study uses adequate methods and experimental design to demonstrate solid support for the (somewhat narrow) central finding that anesthesia lowers the spatial resolution of mouse V1 responses.

      Since this is a very well-examined topic, the findings here are not totally surprising, but confirmatory and slightly extend prior findings (a good thing). As such, the study will likely have most relevance to specialists in the mouse visual system, but if the study could address some of the remaining questions discussed above, this would potentially broaden the implications of the study to general insights about the operation of cortical circuitry.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This paper by Kleinman et al. tackles an increasingly discussed biosecurity scenario, namely the possibility that "mirror bacteria" could evade key elements of host immunity and therefore demand bespoke medical countermeasures. The authors experimentally probe two such countermeasure concepts: (1) whether existing chiral antibiotics might still work against mirror bacteria (this is tested indirectly by measuring the activity of antibiotic enantiomers against natural-chirality bacteria), and (2) whether D-peptide antigens can be made immunogenic. Briefly, the authors show that enantiomers of four approved antibiotics have little to no activity in MIC assays, argue this implies the parent drugs would likely fail against mirror bacteria, report limited single-dose tolerability data for the enantiomers in mice, and show that selected bacterially derived D-peptides can elicit strong binding antibody titers when conjugated to a carrier protein and given with adjuvant.

      Overall, the study is quite interesting but constrained by the fact that D-peptide immunogens and related ideas have been explored for decades, by prior literature showing that D-enantiomeric peptides can themselves be strongly antimicrobial vs conventional bacteria, and by a number of conceptual and experimental limitations outlined below.

      (1) A blanket statement indicating that flipping chirality makes antibiotics ineffective cannot be true across all classes. Indeed, there is extensive precedent for "mirror" (D-amino-acid) peptides that retain, or even improve, antimicrobial activity against natural bacteria.

      (2) The paper's key claim ("parent antibiotics won't work on mirror bacteria") is based on the observation that the enantiomers of chloramphenicol/linezolid/tedizolid/aztreonam largely lose activity against natural bacteria. This is a reasonable proxy experiment given the absence of mirror organisms, but it remains an inference and should be described as such.

      (3) The chiral purity needs to be documented more rigorously. The methods mention structural confirmation by NMR and >95% purity by LC-MS/HPLC for enantiomeric compounds, but this is not the same as demonstrating high enantiomeric excess or excluding low-level contamination by the active parent enantiomer.

      (4) The residual activity of ent-aztreonam is quite interesting. The authors report slight activity for ent-aztreonam (MIC of 32-128 µg/mL in a subset), still far weaker than aztreonam but nonzero.

      (5) For antibiotics, MIC is a starting point, but further experiments are needed. To justify countermeasure relevance, it would help to include at least one additional pharmacodynamic readout (time-kill kinetics, post-antibiotic effect, inoculum effect, or activity in the presence of human serum).

      (6) The acute toxicity study is limited (single-dose, short follow-up, small n, one sex/strain, and no histopathology).

      (7) The Discussion leans on human equivalent dosing logic to reassure feasibility. Given the lack of PK, bioavailability, metabolism, and repeat-dose data, these comparisons risk overreach.

      (8) The readout is ELISA endpoint binding (IgG; and IgA in BALF for one antigen), which is fine for an initial immunogenicity screen. But the manuscript then drifts toward "vaccine strategy" claims without showing any antibody functionality (opsonophagocytosis, complement deposition, neutralization, blocking adhesion, and so on) or even binding to a more native-like antigen format (e.g., D-peptide displayed on particles; D-protein fragments; or any surrogate that goes beyond plate-bound peptide).

      (9) The methods report peptide conjugates containing ~10-200 EU/mL endotoxin. That is not trivial and could materially amplify immunogenicity, and should be discussed.

      (10) The authors should report how many technical/biological replicates were performed for MIC determinations and for ELISAs.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Zhou et al investigated the expression and function of AIRE in B cells in peripheral lymphoid tissues. First, they found the expression of AIRE protein in mature B cells in the follicles in human tonsils and spleens from healthy donors. Flow cytometry analyses using human samples as well as Aire-reporter mice demonstrated AIRE expression in germinal center B cells. The expression of Aire in B cells was induced by CD40 signals. Then, to investigate the impact of AIRE deficiency on B-cell function, the authors used a method of transplanting bone marrow cells from Aire-KO and WT mice into B-cell-deficient mice, comparing B-cell development and function reconstituted in the recipient mice. Their results showed that Aire-deficient B cells strongly responded to immunization with antigens, exhibiting enhanced class switching and somatic hypermutation of antibodies compared with WT B cells. The same phenomena were observed in CRISPRed B cell lines lacking Aire. The authors successfully utilized the Aire-deficient B cell line to demonstrate that Aire suppresses antibody class switching and somatic hypermutation via its interaction with AID. Finally, using B cell transfer into B cell-deficient mice demonstrated that mice harboring Aire-deficient B cells produced high levels of autoantibodies against Th17 cytokines and exhibited reduced resistance to Candida infection. This mirrors characteristic symptoms in AIRE-deficient patients. The findings of this study not only reveal an unexpected function of AIRE in B cells but also have the potential to contribute to understanding the pathogenesis of APECED and to offering a new direction for developing therapies.

      Strengths:

      The strength of this study lies in demonstrating the expression of the function of AIRE in B cells in both mice and humans. It also revealed the direct interaction between AIRE and AID, along with its binding mode (requiring CARD and NLS domains of AIRE), and showed that this interaction is crucial for AIRE function in B cells. It is also significant that the study demonstrated how B-cell-intrinsic dysfunction of AIRE leads to autoantibody production against cytokines.

      Weaknesses:

      As for loss-of-function analysis of Aire in B cells, in addition to the B cell transfer from Aire-KO mice performed in this study, generating B cell-specific Aire-deficient mice using Aire-flox mice (Dobes et al, Eur J Immunol 2018) would further reinforce the conclusions of this study. Furthermore, the relationship with Aire function in thymic B cells reported by previous studies remains unclear, posing an unresolved challenge. This study also failed to address whether Aire deficiency affects gene expression in GC B cells, in particular, whether it induces the expression of various self-antigens as reported in thymic B cells or mTECs.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Synesthesia is a neurological condition where stimulation of one sensory channel leads to involuntary, automatic, and consistent experience of another, unrelated percept. For example, Sir Francis Galton (1880, Nature) famously described the robust tendency of some individuals (synesthetes) to associate numerals with a distinct color. Ever since, synesthesia has continued to attract a broad interest in the cognitive neurosciences in light of its implications for the study of domains such as perception, consciousness, and brain connectivity, among others.

      Strauch, Leenaars, and Rouw measured pupil size in a group of 16 grapheme-color synesthetes and two matched control groups. The participants were presented with gray digits - that is, visual stimuli having identical physical properties in terms of brightness. Each participant subsequently rated the corresponding evoked color and brightness: unlike controls, synesthetes did so in a very consistent and reliable fashion. Accordingly, this was also shown in their pupils: despite the same objective luminance, digits associated with brighter percepts caused their pupils to constrict, and digits associated with darker percepts caused their pupils to dilate more than controls. These results highlight how crossmodal correspondences are deeply rooted in synesthetes, and put forward pupillometry as a particularly appealing biomarker for some phenomenological experience (at least those grounded in "brightness").

      Further strengths of the technique are its temporal resolution and its responsiveness to several constructs. Across several tasks, the authors show, for example, that responses to synesthetic light are somewhat slower than responses to real light (i.e., they are likely mediated), but at the same time faster than responses to mental imagery. The role of mental imagery can also be reasonably dismissed when considering the second feature of pupil size: its responsiveness to mental effort and cognitive load. The pupils tend to dilate with demanding, challenging tasks, and this was the case when control participants were asked to report the color of a digit for which they did not consistently experience a synesthetic association. The same task was, instead, seemingly effortless for synesthetes, again speaking in favor of the automaticity of number-color correspondences in their case.

      Overall, the findings by Strauch, Leenaars, and Rouw are highly significant for the field and likely to be impactful. The strength of their evidence, when accounting for the relatively small sample size and the inherent variability of both phenomenology (color perception and subjective reporting) and physiology (pupil size), is adequate and sufficiently convincing.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors utilized ChIP-seq on strains containing tagged transcription factor (TF)-overexpression plasmids to identify binding sites for 172 transcription factors in P. aeruginosa. High-quality binding site data provides a rich resource for understanding regulation in this critical pathogen. These TFs were selected to fill gaps in prior studies measuring TF binding sites in P. aeruginosa. The authors further perform a structured analysis of the resulting transcriptional regulatory network, focusing on regulators of virulence and metabolism, in addition to performing a pangenomic analysis of the TFs. The resulting dataset has been made available through an online database. While the implemented approach to determining functional TF binding sites has limitations, the resulting dataset still has substantial value to P. aeruginosa research.

      Strengths:

      The generated TF binding site database fills an important gap in regulatory data in the key pathogen P. aeruginosa. Key analyses of this dataset presented include an analysis of TF interactions and regulators of virulence and metabolism, which should provide important context for future studies into these processes. Experimental validation has been included in the revised version. The online database containing this data is well organized and easy to access. As a data resource, this work should be of significant value to the infectious disease community.

      Weaknesses:

      Drawbacks of the study, which have been mitigated in a revised version, include 1) challenges interpreting binding site data obtained from TF overexpression due to unknown activity state of the TFs on the measured conditions (discussed by the authors), and 2) remaining challenges in the practical utilization of the TRN topological analysis.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Varani et al present important findings regarding the role of distinct cerebellothalamic connections in motor learning and performance. Their key findings are that: 1) cerebellothalamic connections are important for learning motor skills, 2) cerebellar efferents specifically to the central lateral (CL) thalamus are important for short-term learning, 3) cerebellar efferents specifically to the ventral anterior lateral (VAL) complex are important for offline consolidation of learned skills, and 4) that once a skill is acquired, cerebellothalamic connections become important for online task performance. The authors went to great lengths to separate effects on motor performance from learning, for the most part successfully. While one could argue about some of the specifics, there is little doubt that the CN-CL and CN-VAL pathways play distinct roles in motor learning and performance. An important next step will be to dissect the downstream mechanisms by which these cerebellothalamic pathways mediate motor learning and adaptation.

      Strengths:

      (1) The dissociation between on-line learning through CN-CL and offline consolidation through CN-VAL is convincing.

      (2) The ability to tease learning apart from performance using their titrated chemogenetic approach is impressive. In particular, their use of multiple motor assays to demonstrate preserved motor function and balance is an important control.

      (3) The evidence supporting the main claims is convincing, with multiple replications of the findings and appropriate controls.

      (4) The retrograde tracing experiments (Supplementary Figure 5) demonstrate convincingly that the CN-VAL and CN-CL projections are almost entirely segregated,

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Despite the care the authors took to demonstrate that their chemogenetic approach does not impair online performance, there is (as they acknowledge in the Discussion) impaired rotarod performance at fixed higher speeds in Supplementary Figure 4f for CN-VAL projections, suggesting that there could be subtle changes in motor performance below the level of detection of their assays. There is also a trend in the same direction that did not pass significance for CN-CL at higher speeds, suggesting that part of the effects could be related to subtle deficits in performance.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The authors hypothesized that chemostat propagated viromes could modulate the GM and reduce NEC lesions while avoiding potential side effects, such as the earlier onset of diarrhea. This is interesting.

      Major revision

      (1) As authors said, the aim of the research is 'We hypothesized that chemostat propagated viromes could modulate the GM and reduce NEC lesions while avoiding potentialside effects, such as earlier onset of diarrhea'.

      (a) For the efficacy, in Fig 5, there are no significance in stomach pathology and enterocolitis between groups, even between the control group and the experimental groups, is it because of the low incidence of NEC? This may affect the statistical power of the conclusions. And how can you draw the conclusion that chemostat can reduce NEC lesions?

      (b) Lack of gross view pictures of animal tissues or any other pathological pictures is not convincing.

      (c) For the safety, such as body weight development, FVT had no statistical significance with control, CVT and CVT-MO, so how can you draw the conclusion that chemostat can avoiding potentialside effects?

      (d) The evidence to prove the decrease of eukaryotic viruses are not enough and quantitative.

      (2) Fig 3F,

      (a) How can a medium have 'the baseline viral content' ?

      (b) Statistical significance of relative abundance of specific eukaryotic viral contigs between different times is unkown.

      (c) Some of listed eukaryotic viruses, their hosts are not pigs, piglets or even human, so what's the meaning if these eukaryotic viruses decreased?

      (3) In this study, pH 6.5 was selected as the pH value for chemostat cultivation, but considering the different adaptability of different bacteria to pH, it is recommended to further explore the effect of pH on bacteria and virus groups. In particular, it was optimized to maintain the growth of beneficial bacteria such as Lactobacillaceae and Bacteroides in order to improve the effect of chemostat cultivation.

      (4) In some charts, the annotation of error lines, statistical significance markers (even 'ns' should be marked), etc., should be more standardized and clearer. And in your results section, the combination of pictures is messy, thus maybe you should do some recombination.

      Comments on revisions:

      (1) At the design level, the study posited "reduction of necrotizing enterocolitis (NEC)" as the primary hypothesis and endpoint. Yet neither of the two in-vivo experiments demonstrated any NEC-protective signal; Experiment 2 even showed a trend toward more severe gastric lesions. Although delayed onset of diarrhea can be listed as a secondary endpoint, its clinical significance is limited. The work remains a safety proof-of-concept and falls short of efficacy validation, yielding insufficient scientific value for publication.

      (2) The manuscript postulates a link between the loss of Lactobacillaceae phages and the absence of NEC protection, but no reverse verification (e.g., re-introducing these phages or optimizing culture to retain them) was performed within the study.

      (3) Culturing intestinal microbiota ex vivo is inherently challenging, owing to oxygen sensitivity, pH drift, nutrient depletion, and other factors. This study not only failed to demonstrate stable congruence between the cultured community and the original fecal inoculum, but also documented a marked loss of Lactobacillaceae and a 75 % drop in viral diversity. In the absence of any NEC-protective efficacy, the authors likewise provide no functional validation of phage viability (lysis assays, MOI determination, etc.). Consequently, the data are inadequate to support expectations of therapeutic benefit in vivo.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Endowing protein language models with an ability to predict the function of antibodies would open a world of translational possibilities. However, antibody language models have yet to achieve the breakthrough success, which large language models have achieved for the understanding and generation of natural language. This paper elegantly demonstrates how training objectives imported from natural language applications lead antibody language models astray on function prediction tasks. Training models to predict masked amino acids teaches models to exploit biases of nucleotide-level mutational processes, rather than protein biophysics. Taking the underlying biology of antibody diversification and selection seriously allows disentangling these processes, through what the authors call deep amino acid selection models. These models extend previous work by the authors (Matsen MBE 2025) by providing predictions not only for the selection strength at individual sites, but also for individual amino acids substitutions. This represents a practically important advance.

      Strengths:

      The paper is based on a deep conceptual insight, the existence of multitude of biological processes that affect antibody maturation trajectories. The figures and writing a very clear, which should help make the broader field aware of this important but sometimes overlooked insight. The paper adds to a growing literature proposing biology-informed tweaks for training protein language models, and should thus be of interest to a wide readership interested in the application of machine learning to protein sequence understanding and design.

      Weaknesses:

      Proponents of the state-of-the-art protein language models might counter the claims of the paper by appealing to the ability of fine-tuning to deconvolve selection and mutation-related signatures in their high-dimensional representation spaces. Leaving the exercise of assessing this claim entirely to future work somewhat diminishes the heft of the (otherwise good!) argument. In the context of predicting antibody binding affinity, the modeling strategy only allows prediction of mutations that improve affinity on average but not those which improve binding to specific epitopes.

      Comments on revisions:

      We thank the authors for clarifying the description of the methods and for adding additional discussion of important directions for future work.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript reports the identification of ZNF-236 as a key regulator that maintains quiescence of heat shock inducible genes in C. elegans. Using a forward genetic screen for constitutive activation of an endogenous hsp-16.41 reporter, the authors show that loss of znf-236 leads to widespread, HSF-1-dependent expression of inducible heat shock proteins (iHSPs) and a subset of prion-like stress-responsive genes, in the absence of proteotoxic stress. Transcriptomic analysis reveals that znf-236 mutants partially overlap with the canonical heat shock response, selectively activating highly inducible iHSPs rather than the full HSR program. iHSP transgenes integrated throughout the genome generally become de-repressed in znf-236 mutants, whereas the same constructs on extrachromosomal arrays or inserted into the rDNA locus re insensitive to znf-236 loss. Using a newly developed method, Transcription Factor Deaminase Sequencing (TFD-seq), the authors show that ZNF-236 binds sparsely across the genome and does not associate with iHSP promoters, supporting an indirect mode of regulation. Physiologically, znf-236 mutants exhibit increased thermotolerance and maintain iHSP expression during aging.

      Strengths:

      This is a carefully executed and internally consistent study that identifies a new regulator of stress-induced gene quiescence in C. elegans. The genetics are clean and the phenotypes are robust.

      Weaknesses:

      The manuscript is largely descriptive. It would be substantially strengthened by deeper mechanistic insight into what ZNF-236 does beyond being required for default silencing.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The question of how caloric and taste information interact and consolidate remains both active and highly relevant to human health and cognition. The authors of this work sought to understand how nutrient sensing of glucose modulates sweet sensation. They found that glucose intake activates hugin signaling to AstA neurons to suppress feeding, which contributes to our mechanistic understanding of nutrient sensation. They did this by leveraging the genetic tools of Drosophila to carry out nuanced experimental manipulations, and confirmed the conservation of their main mechanism in a mammalian model. This work builds on previous studies examining sugar taste and caloric sensing, enhancing the resolution of our understanding.

      Strengths:

      Fully discovering neural circuits that connect body state with perception remains central to understanding homeostasis and behavior. This study expands our understanding of sugar sensing, providing mechanistic evidence for a hugin/AstA circuit that is responsive to sugar intake and suppresses feeding. In addition to effectively leveraging the genetic tools of Drosophila, this study further extends their findings into a mammalian model with the discovery that NMU neural signaling is also responsive to sugar intake.

      Weaknesses:

      The effect of Glut1 knockdown on PER in hugin neurons is modest in both fed and starved flies, suggesting that glucose intake through Glut1 may only be part of the mechanism. Additionally, many of the manipulations testing the "brake" circuitry throughout the study show similar effects in both fed and starved flies. This suggests that the focus of the discussion and Supplemental Figure 16 on a satiety-specific "brake" mechanism may not be fully supported by the data.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors propose a method for estimating the spatial power spectrum of cortical activity from irregularly sampled data and apply it to iEEG data from human patients during a delayed free recall task. The main findings are that the spatial spectra of cortical activity peak at low spatial frequencies and decrease with increasing spatial frequency. This is observed over a broad range of temporal frequencies (2-100 Hz).

      Strengths:

      A strength of the study is the type of data that is used. As pointed out by the authors, spatial spectra of cortical activity are difficult to estimate from non-invasive measurements (EEG and MEG) and from commonly used intracranial measurements (i.e. electrocorticography or Utah arrays) due to their limited spatial extent. In contrast, iEEG measurements are easier to interpret than EEG/MEG measurements and typically have larger spatial coverage than Utah arrays. However, iEEG is irregularly sampled within the three-dimensional brain volume and this poses a methodological problem that the proposed method aims to address.

      Weaknesses:

      Although the proposed method is evaluated in several indirect ways, a direct evaluation is lacking. This would entail simulating cortical current source density (CSD) with known spatial spectrum and using a realistic iEEG volume-conductor model to generate iEEG signals.

      Comments on revisions:

      I would like to clarify two points:

      (1) In their response, the authors frame the role of simulations primarily as a means of assessing the effects of volume conduction. However, the purpose of evaluating a proposed estimation method through simulations extends beyond this specific issue. More generally, simulations are essential for establishing that the proposed method-particularly given the multiple non-trivial transformations applied to the observed data-produces accurate and reliable estimates under controlled conditions.

      (2) The authors seem to interpret my use of the term current source density as referring to the current source density (CSD) method, which is an approach to mitigating volume conduction by inverting Poisson's equation. This was not my intention: current source density refers to the physical quantity (i.e., the spatial density of current sources) underlying macroscopic brain activity, and is independent of any specific estimation or inversion technique.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper presents a novel transformer-based neural network model, termed the epistatic transformer, designed to isolate and quantify higher-order epistasis in protein sequence-function relationships. By modifying the multi-head attention architecture, the authors claim they can precisely control the order of specific epistatic interactions captured by the model. The approach is applied to both simulated data and ten diverse experimental deep mutational scanning (DMS) datasets, including full-length proteins. The authors argue that higher-order epistasis, although often modest in global contribution, plays critical roles in extrapolation and capturing distant genotypic effects, especially in multi-peak fitness landscapes.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study tackles a long-standing question in molecular evolution and protein engineering: "how significant are epistatic interactions beyond pairwise effects?" The question is relevant given the growing availability of large-scale DMS datasets and increasing reliance on machine learning in protein design.

      (2) The manuscript includes both simulation and real-data experiments, as well as extrapolation tasks (e.g., predicting distant genotypes, cross-ortholog transfer). These well-rounded evaluations demonstrate robustness and applicability.

      (3) The code is made available for reproducibility.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The paper mainly compares its transformer models to additive models and occasionally to linear pairwise interaction models. However, other strong baselines exist. For example, the authors should compare baseline methods such as "DANGO: Predicting higher-order genetic interactions". There are many works related to pairwise interaction detection, such as: "Detecting statistical interactions from neural network weights", "shapiq: Shapley interactions for machine learning", and "Error-controlled non-additive interaction discovery in machine learning models".

      (2) While the transformer architecture is cleverly adapted, the claim that it allows for "explicit control" and "interpretability" over interaction order may be overstated. Although the 2^M scaling with MHA layers is shown empirically, the actual biological interactions captured by the attention mechanism remain opaque. A deeper analysis of learned attention maps or embedding similarities (e.g., visualizations, site-specific interaction clusters) could substantiate claims about interpretability.

      (3) The distinction between nonspecific (global) and specific epistasis is central to the modeling framework, yet it remains conceptually underdeveloped. While a sigmoid function is used to model global effects, it's unclear to what extent this functional form suffices. The authors should justify this choice more rigorously or at least acknowledge its limitations and potential implications.

      (4) The manuscript refers to "pairwise", "3-4-way", and ">4-way" interactions without always clearly defining the boundaries of these groupings or how exactly the order is inferred from transformer layer depth. This can be confusing to readers unfamiliar with the architecture or with statistical definitions of interaction order. The authors should clarify terminology consistently. Including a visual mapping or table linking a number of layers to the maximum modeled interaction order could be helpful.

      Comments for the revision:

      I want to thank the authors for their efforts in revising the manuscript. Most of the concerns raised in the initial review have been adequately addressed.

      However, one important issue remains. I previously asked the authors to benchmark their method against stronger baselines. The authors declined, arguing that these alternatives are "not directly applicable to the types of analyses." I am not persuaded by this rationale. In my view, these baseline methods target essentially the same underlying problem, and at least some, if not all, should be included in a comparative evaluation (or the manuscript should provide a clearer, more technically grounded explanation of why such comparisons are not feasible or not meaningful).

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper starts with a large-scale yeast two-hybrid (Y2H) screen using Set1 (full-length and smaller parts) and other Set1C/COMPASS subunits as bait. There are hundreds of possible interactions identified, but only a small number are given any follow-up. While it's useful to document all the possible interactions, the unfocused and preliminary nature of the results makes the paper feel scattered and incomplete.

      Strengths:

      The Y2H screen was very comprehensive, producing lots of interesting possible leads for further experiments.

      Weaknesses:

      The results are useful but incomplete because only a small subset of the Y2H interactions is further examined. Even in the case of those that were further tested, the validating experiments are only partial or inconclusive.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors measure the directional consistency of water diffusion in white matter (functional anisotropy: FA) to stratify depression subtypes across young adults. These findings are significant in that they highlight white matter as an underappreciated aspect of neural heterogeneity in major depressive disorder. While the evidence for meaningful, lower-dimensional structure in depression heterogeneity within their Nanjing cohorts is strong, claims that their subtypes are characterized by specific clinical symptom profiles and reflect neuroplasticity reserve are not supported by the same strength of evidence.

      Strengths:

      Circumscribing analyses to a simple white matter measure, across a sparse skeleton, with explicit sparsity-promoting algorithms yielded heterogeneity subdivisions that are much more interpretable than most depression heterogeneity clustering papers. Replication of their 3-cluster solution in an external dataset bolsters confidence in the existence of these 3 clusters, although generalizability to more diverse populations remains untested. The authors also tested a wide variety of treatment outcomes, which is difficult data to aggregate but ultimately critical for validating the utility of depression subtypes.

      Weaknesses:

      sCCA and SVR results were less interpretable. In part, this is due to core features of these methods (broad distribution of weights, instability across iterations). However, these inherent components of sCCA and SVR opacity were exacerbated by the opacity surrounding several analytic choices made by the authors and intermediate results associated with them. Without more transparency, it's unclear how these results extend the neuroclinical differentiation established (or not established) by their original NMF analyses.

      To be more specific, a central claim of the paper is that their biotypes are "pathophysiologically distinct" and demonstrate "symptom-specific neurobiological substrates". However, only 3/18 pairwise symptom differences generalize across both datasets (Figures 1 and 2), implying that these biotypes have more symptom overlap than distinction. Brain-based distinctions are real and replicable, but because their NMF approach specifically optimizes for separating clusters on the basis of brain features, this is more of a methodological validation than a scientific finding. While several brain-symptom relationships reported later using sCCA and SVR are interesting, it is not currently possible to evaluate the robustness of these relationships and whether or not these relationships are nested within NMF-derived clusters or exist regardless of subtype.

      To be clear, the heterogeneity problem in depression is extremely difficult to solve and beyond the scope of this manuscript. Despite the scale of this problem, the authors do report tangible progress in this aim, largely through finding an interpretable set of white matter features distinguishing patient clusters. These findings may lead researchers to meaningfully incorporate white matter features into heterogeneity analyses more in the future. However, many of the claims made are not fully supported, particularly surrounding clinical specificity and neuroplasticity reserve.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In this paper, Hamid et al present 40 genomes from the Faroe Islands. They use these data (a pilot study for an anticipated larger-scale sequencing effort) to discuss the population genetic diversity and history of the sample, and the Faroes population. I think this is an overall solid paper; it is overall well-polished and well-written. It is somewhat descriptive (as might be expected for an explorative pilot study), but does make good use of the data.

      The data processing and annotation follows a state-of-the-art protocol, and at least I could not find any evidence in the results that would pinpoint towards bioinformatic issues having substantially biased some of the results, and at least preliminary results lead to the identification of some candidate disease alleles, showing that small, isolated cohorts can be an efficient way to find populations with locally common, but globally rare disease alleles.

      I also enjoyed the population structure analysis in the context of ancient samples, which gives some context to the genetic ancestry of Faroese, although it would have been nice if that could have been quantified, and it is unfortunate that the sampling scheme effectively precludes within-Faroes analyses.

      Comments on the revision:

      I appreciate the authors' detailed and thoughtful response to my review. They have addressed all my concerns to my satisfaction and I have no additional comments.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Henshall et al. study invasion of human erythrocytes by Plasmodium falciparum merozoites and report knockout of PfMSP2, a critical merozoite surface protein with unknown function. They describe conservation of MSP2 in P. falciparum and key avian malaria parasites, unabated growth of two knockout lines (∆MSP2) produced in divergent 3D7 and Dd2 strains, no differences in expression of key invasion-associated genes, no effect on invasion kinetics (with or without protease treatment of erythrocytes), nonsignificant effects of knockout on parasite growth inhibition by antibodies directed against key invasion-associated antigens, and do find a significant effect on potentiating AMA1 invasion inhibitory antibodies. The studies are interesting and have potential for directing vaccine design targeting erythrocyte invasion, a critical step in bloodstream expansion of malaria parasites.

      Major points:

      (1) Much of the manuscript describes negative results and this reviewer found it arduous to get through many negative or nonsignificant results before finally getting to the significant effect on AMA1 inhibitory antibodies, not presented until Figure 6! Computational studies in Fig. 1 could be a supplementary figure. Figs. 2 and 3. demonstrate knockout in 3D7 and Dd2, respectively and could be assembled into a single figure. (Notably Fig. 2A and 3A are almost identical with use of some different primers.) Fig. 2E, 2F, 3D-H, all of Fig. 4, most of Fig. 5 are all negative or insignificant results that could also be moved to supplementary data. As MSP4, MSP5, and SUB1 are presumably included in the whole genome RNA-seq experiments shown in Fig. 4C, it makes sense to remove Fig. 4A data from the paper fully. These consolidating changes would help highlight the key finding of improved binding and block of AMA1's role in invasion.

      (2) The potentiating effects on anti-AMA1 antibodies are shown with rabbit sera and purified antibodies, mouse monoclonal antibodies, and smaller i-bodies inspired by shark antibody-like receptors but not with human monoclonal antibodies (hmAbs). As naturally acquired hmAbs targeting AMA1 have been identified and characterized (PMIDs: 39632799, 40020675), would it not be important to test these antibodies in the ∆MSP2, especially as the authors emphasize the importance of their model in designing better human malaria vaccines?

      (3) Fig. 7 presents quantitative fluorescence microscopy to measure anti-AMA1 binding and support a model where MSP2 serves to sterically hinder antibody access to AMA1 on individual merozoites. I understand that the negative WD33 control is useful to contrast to the positive WD34 antibody (both bind AMA1 but only WD34 exhibits parasite growth inhibitory effects), but it seems that use of smaller i-bodies rather than conventional larger mouse or ideally human monoclonal antibodies may compromise demonstration of steric hindrance by MSP2 because smaller i-bodies may be less hinder.

      (4) Some explanation for why WD33 fails to inhibit growth despite targeting the same antigen as WD34 is needed. Are the epitopes known? Does one bind further from the RON2 binding pocket?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors used the Drosophila heart tube to model Retinal vasculopathy with the goal of building a model that could be used to identify druggable targets and for testing chemical compounds that might target the disease. They generated flies expressing human TREX1 as well as a line expressing the V235G mutation that causes a C-terminal truncation that has been linked to the disease. In humans, this mutation is dominant. Heart tube function was monitored using OCM; the most robust change upon overexpression of wild-type or mutant TREX1was heart tube restriction, and this effect was similar for both forms of TREX1. Lifespan and climbing assays did show differential effects between wt and mutant forms when they were strongly and ubiquitously expressed by an actin-Gal4 driver. Unfortunately, these types of assays are less useful as drug screening tools. Their conclusion that the primary effect of TREX is on neuronal function is inferential and not directly supported by the data.

      Strengths:

      The authors do not show that CG3165 is normally expressed in the heart. Further fly heart tube function was similarly restricted in response to expression of either wild-type or mutant TREX1. The fact that expression of any form of human TREX1 had deleterious effects on heart function suggests that TREX1 serves different roles in flies compared to humans. Thus, in the case of this gene, it may not be a useful model to use to identify targets or use it as a drug screening tool.

      The significant effects on lifespan and climbing that did show differential effects required ubiquitous overexpression using an actin-gal4 driver that does not allow the identification of tissue-specific effects. Thus, their assertion that the results suggested a strong positive correlation between Drosophila neuromotor regulation and transgenic hTREX1 presence and a negative impact from hTREX1 V235G" is not supported by these data. Also worrisome was the inability to identify the mutant TREX1 protein by Western blot despite the enhanced expression levels suggested by qPCR analysis. Mutant TREX1 cannot exert a dominant effect on cell function if it isn't present.

      There are also some technical problems. The lifespan assays lack important controls, and the climbing assays do not appear to have been performed correctly. It is unclear what the WT genetic background is in Figure 1-3, so it is unclear if the appropriate controls have been used. Finally, the lack of information on the specific statistical analyses used for each graph makes it difficult to judge the significance of the data. Overall, the current findings establish the Retinal vasculopathy disease model platform, but with only incremental new data and without any mechanistic insights.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This study presents a comprehensive genetic dissection of the role of IKK signaling in the development and maintenance of lymphoid gd T cells. By employing a variety of conditional and mutant mouse models, the authors demonstrate that IKK-dependent NF-κB activation is essential for the generation of type 1 gd T cells, while adaptive gd T cells require this pathway primarily for long-term survival. The use of multiple complementary genetic strategies, including IKK deletion and modulation of RIPK1 and CASPASE8 activity, provides robust mechanistic insight into subset-specific regulation of gd T cell homeostasis. Overall, the study provides mechanistic insight for IKK-dependent regulation of gd T cell development and peripheral maintenance.

      Comments on revisions:

      Thank you for your comments and clarifications.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript investigates the protein composition and functional role of the C2a projection of the central apparatus (CA) in vertebrate motile cilia. Using three knockout mouse models (Ccdc108, Mycbpap, and Cfap70), the authors demonstrate that these genes - homologs of Chlamydomonas FAP65, FAP147, and FAP70 - are required for normal motile cilia function in ependymal and tracheal multiciliated cells. Specifically, the authors show that:

      (1) Knockout mice for each gene exhibit primary ciliary dyskinesia phenotypes (hydrocephalus and sinusitis), accompanied by abnormal ciliary motion and reduced ciliary beat frequency.

      (2) CCDC108, MYCBPAP, and CFAP70 physically interact and localize to the axonemal central lumen, consistent with the C2a projection.

      (3) Loss of any one of these proteins destabilizes the others and disrupts CA integrity in a tissue-specific manner.

      (4) ARMC3 and MYCBP are C2a-associated proteins.

      Strengths:

      (1) Clarity: the results are presented in a coherent sequence that facilitates understanding of both the rationale and conclusions.

      (2) Genetic rigor: three independent knockout mouse lines that exhibit consistent motile cilia phenotypes provide in vivo support for the proposed role of these proteins.

      (3) Integration of structural and functional analyses: combination of ultrastructural (TEM) and immunofluorescence data with CBF measurements provides convincing correlation between structural defects and impaired ciliary function.

      (4) Mutual dependency model: reciprocal destabilization of CCDC108, MYCBPAP, and CFAP70 supports their interdependence in the C2a assembly.

      (5) Expansion of the vertebrate C2a proteome: the identification of ARMC3 and MYCBP as C2a-associated proteins provides a foundation for future mechanistic studies.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Mechanistic depth: the data show a convincing correlation between C2a and ciliary function, but the cell type-specificity of CCDC108, MYCBPAP, and CFAP70 knockout effects is underdeveloped. This is an interesting observation that raises mechanistic/structural questions not addressed in the study, such as what is the role of C2a in CP nucleation, maintenance, or mechanical stabilization? Is C2a composition different in different cell types?

      (2) Cell model choice: co-immunoprecipitation was performed using mouse testis lysates. While this is a reasonable source of CA proteins from flagellated cells, the functional analyses in this study focus on ependymal and tracheal multiciliated cells. It would therefore be helpful for the authors to clarify the extent to which these interactions are expected to be conserved across ciliated cell types, and to discuss potential tissue-specific differences in CA assembly.

      (3) Statistical analysis: the manuscript states "Statistical significance was defined as P < 0.5", which is likely a typo, but should be P < 0.05. In general, the statistical methods require more clarification. In several figures (e.g., 2B, 2D, 5J, 5K), multiple knockout genotypes are compared with WT, yet unpaired t-tests are reported. When more than two groups are analyzed, multiple pairwise t-tests inflate Type I error unless appropriately corrected; a one-way ANOVA with post hoc comparisons (e.g., Dunnett's test for WT-referenced comparisons) would be more appropriate. Furthermore, the analysis of ciliary movement modes (Figure 2D) involves categorical data, for which a t-test is not statistically appropriate. These comparisons could instead be evaluated using chi-square or Fisher's exact tests. Addressing these issues is important to ensure accurate statistical inference.

      (4) Methods section: does not sufficiently describe how image-based quantifications were performed. For example, the criteria used to define cilia number, basal body number, and rotational beating are not specified, nor is how CBF measurements were analyzed. The authors should also provide details regarding analysis software and imaging parameters used (and whether they were kept constant across genotypes).

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In the manuscript "Primordial Cardiomyocytes orchestrate myocardial morphogenesis and vascularization but are dispensable for regeneration", Sun et al. identify a novel marker of primordial cardiomyocytes and use it to visualize and ablate the population during development and regeneration. The role of the primordial layer has not been investigated because the tools to manipulate this population have not existed. The manuscript is straightforward, easy to understand, and addresses an important question that has not been explored.

      While the manuscript provides important insights into the role of primordial CMs, backed by a convincing methodology, the authors should clarify their requirements for heart development and maturation. Specifically, is the primordial layer required for the fish to survive? Do primordial CMs regenerate when ablated during development, and do the defects observed (in trabecular and compact CMs and coronary vessels) resolve after 10 days post-treatment when they were detected?

      Strengths:

      The major strengths are the identification of a marker that enables manipulation of primordial cardiomyocytes and the tools generated by the team.

      Weaknesses:

      The major weakness is not considering the longer-term consequences of primordial layer ablation during development, as it is unclear whether the animals succumb to the acute cardiac defects observed or fully recover.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Aims:

      The authors sought to optimize SHARE-seq, a multimodal single-cell method, to improve the simultaneous profiling of gene expression and chromatin accessibility. Their goal was to enhance barcode design for better sequencing efficiency and cost savings, while improving overall data quality. They then applied their optimized method, easySHARE-seq, to study liver sinusoidal endothelial cells (LSECs) to demonstrate its utility in examining gene regulation and spatial zonation.

      Strengths:

      The improved barcode design is an advance, increasing the proportion of sequencing reads dedicated to biological information rather than barcode identification. This modification offers practical benefits in terms of sequencing costs and read length, potentially reducing alignment errors. The method also demonstrates improved RNA detection compared to the original SHARE-seq protocol. The biological applications showcase how simultaneous measurement of both modalities enables analyses that would be practically impossible with single-modality approaches, particularly in examining how chromatin states change along developmental or spatial trajectories.

      Weaknesses:

      There is a notable reduction in chromatin accessibility detection compared to the original SHARE-seq method, likely limiting the broad use of the method. While the authors are transparent about this tradeoff, additional discussion would be helpful regarding how this affects data interpretation. Comparisons showing consistency between easySHARE-seq and SHARE-seq chromatin accessibility patterns at the single-cell level would strengthen confidence in the method.

      Overall:

      The authors achieve their aim of creating an optimized protocol with improved barcode design and enhanced RNA detection. The method represents a useful advance for specific experimental contexts where the tradeoffs are appropriate.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study by Robben et al., show 3D beta-cell spheroid platform, a valuable tool allowing high-throughput monitoring of cytoplasmic Ca concentrations and insulin secretion, with Ca signals comparable to those recorded in primary islets. The authors demonstrate a solid method to culturing MIN6 cells in a 3D culture system, recording Ca signals in a high-throughput format and characterizing these Ca signals using pharmacological tools, including TRPM3 channel and K-ATP channel modulators. This highlights the utility of the 3D beta-cell spheroid for screening new ion channel modulators in beta-cells of the pancreas.

      Strengths:

      - The study shows that the MIN-6-based 3D beta-cell model is better to study Ca-signaling and insulin secretion compared to 2D culture of single MIN-6 cells.

      - The method allows imaging of Ca signaling in many spheroids in parallel followed by collecting medium to measure insulin release and correlate both effects.

      - The authors demonstrate that this system is suitable for screening new pharmacological modulators and used as an agonist of the ATP-sensitive potassium channel (diazoxide) and the agonist and antagonist of the TRPM3 channel.

      Weaknesses:

      - The study is based on only one cell line, the MIN6 insulinoma cells, which may not fully mimic the pancreatic beta-cells within the islet.

      - The authors show only spheroids cultured overnight. A long-term culture is missing to assess beta-cell viability long term function.

      - The authors tested their platform using only two compounds. Testing a larger compound library is necessary to make a clear conclusion about the suitability of the platform for high-throughput screening.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this paper, the authors leverage single-cell approaches to delve deeper into the host responses and immune cells involved in immunopathogenesis of influenza virus infection in aged mice. The dynamics of gene expression and immune cell frequencies were also tracked at multiple time-points to examine the acute and chronic changes in young and aged mice after influenza virus infection. Their analyses demonstrated that the immune cell frequencies and gene signatures differed in young and aged mice, especially macrophages, T cells and B cells. Furthermore, interferon pathways were found to be differentially regulated in the young and aged mice, and blocking the interferon pathway with monoclonal antibodies led to improvement in lung respiratory functions and reduced inflammation.

      Strengths:

      A strength of this study is that multiple time points are considered for analyses, allowing assessment of temporal changes in gene expression and immune cell frequencies after virus infection during the acute and chronic phases of the disease. The data presented could also serve as a potential resource for other researchers interested in understanding the host responses to the influenza virus, especially in aged mice. Another interesting finding was that blocking interferon signalling can reduce the chronic severe symptoms caused by the influenza virus in aged mice.

      Weaknesses:

      The manuscript could greatly benefit from more rigorous approaches, particularly in the statistical analyses and data visualisation. Moreover, the scientific rationale and logic for several parts of the manuscript can be improved. Finally, the authors did not adequately dissect whether the contribution of host responses was from virus infection or from bystander effects. Specifically, my major comments are as follows:

      (1) While it is interesting to compare the difference in host responses between aged and young mice, the authors should also more deeply characterise the differences in phenotypic and infection kinetics between aged and young mice, so that the readers can better appreciate the effects of virus infection and host immune tolerance to viral infection. For instance, what are the differences in virus infection kinetics between the aged and young mice? Are the levels of infection different? Are the virus dynamics and kinetics different between aged and young mice? Besides lung tissue damage, are there also tissue damage or inflammatory responses beyond lung tissues that differ between aged and young mice?

      (2) Figure 1B: Could the authors quantify the extent of tissue damage in aged and young adults? It is challenging to interpret the extent of tissue damage, especially across the different time points.

      (3) Figure 1D: The authors claim that the senescence signatures are higher in aged mice, justifying that the pathway analyses are consistent with ageing signatures. However, it is also important to note that the senescence signatures were insignificant in aged mice after day 14. Is this expected?

      (4) Figure 1E: The stacked bar charts are difficult to read. It is unclear if the cell type frequencies or proportions are significantly changed, especially as the authors are showing these changes with averaged values. Moreover, the authors should keep the colours of the bar charts consistent with the UMAP.

      (5) Figure 1F-M: The charts show increased frequencies of innate and adaptive immune cells in aged mice. How about the young mice? Which type of cells are increased to allow these mice to be more tolerant to infection?

      (6) Figure 2D and Figure S2C: Besides showing the dynamics of the different clusters, the authors should also display the statistics for individual mice. If the analyses have to be pooled for the single-cell analysis, the authors should declare the challenges and show the statistical comparisons for the flow cytometry.

      (7) Figure 3E: The authors should not claim differences in somatic hypermutation based on gene expression. This will require BCR sequencing and evidence for clonal expansion to confirm that there are differences in somatic hypermutation. Moreover, the authors did not measure the quality and quantity of antibody responses between aged and young mice. The claims for the antibody responses are thus extrapolated, and the B cell identities cannot be identified without any functional or phenotypic readouts.

      (8) Figure 4H. Why did the authors not perform the experiments for aged mice with a higher virus dose? Also, the spider plots do not display the variability between individual mice, making it challenging to interpret whether the changes were statistically different between the conditions.

      (9) Figure 5A. Is the interferon pathway the only pathway that was significantly enriched in the aged mice? Is it the top pathway? The authors should also show the other pathways that were significantly enriched in aged mice. Did the authors also analyse whether the differences in interferon pathways were caused by infected cells or by bystander cells?

      (10) Figure 5B: Based on the pathway analyses, the peak responses for interferon are at day 9 post-infection. However, the interferon treatment is performed on day 14, where differences were less apparent. Why did the authors choose to do the interferon treatment at day 14 instead?

      (11) Figure 6: How about interferon-mediated cell-cell interactions? The authors should consider using established libraries such as Cell Chat to determine if there are any cell-cell communications that lead to differences in interferon responses and signaling.

      (12) Throughout the whole manuscript, the authors kept emphasising that the aged mice displayed uncoordinated immune responses, yet, based on the pathway analyses and phenotypic characterisation, it appears that only interferon was mainly dysregulated. I would thus like to recommend that the authors adjust the tone of the manuscript to tailor it to the results obtained from their investigations.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      I have reviewed both the original and revised version of this manuscript and while no additional experiments were added, I find the interpretations and discussion of the limitations of the study have improved. This is appreciated.

      My original concern regarding the mixture treatments largely remains. Figure 4 nicely shows that the mixtures are more potent than the average of all single compounds. However, Fig S3 shows that the effects of mixtures are not significantly different from effects of at least one, single N,S compound (voruscharin or uscharin) across all measured growth/sequestration responses. Essentially, the effects of single N,S compounds is similar to mixtures (which also contain N,S compounds).

      While the current results are certainly interesting as presented, in my view the main takeaway of the manuscript would be more compelling if it could be demonstrated that it isn't simply the presence of N,S compounds in the mixtures driving the observations. For example, does a mixture of all compounds except voruscharin or uscharin still have stronger growth/sequestration effects compared to single non-N,S compounds?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Sheidaei et al. reported on their study of chromosome congression during the early stages of mitotic spindle assembly. Building on their previous study (ref. #15, Booth et al., eLife, 2019), they focused on the exact role of the actin-myosin-based contraction of the nuclear envelope. First, they addressed a technical issue from their previous study, finding a way to specifically impair the actomyosin contraction of the nuclear membrane without affecting the contraction of the plasma membrane. This allowed them to study the former more specifically. They then tracked individual kinetochores to reveal which were affected by nuclear membrane contraction and at what stage of displacement towards the metaphase plate. The investigation is rigorous, with all the necessary controls performed. The images are of high quality. The analyses are accurate and supported by convincing quantifications. In summary, they found that peripheral chromosomes, which are close to the nuclear membrane, are more influenced by nuclear membrane contraction than internal chromosomes. They discovered that nuclear membrane contraction primarily contributes to the initial displacement of peripheral chromosomes by moving them towards the microtubules. The microtubules then become the sole contributors to their motion towards the pole and subsequently the midplane. This step is particularly critical for the outermost chromosomes, which are located behind the spindle pole and are most likely to be mis-segregated.

      Significance:

      While the conclusions are somewhat intuitive and could be considered incremental with regard to previous works, they are solid and improve our understanding of mitotic fidelity. The authors had already reported the overall role of nuclear membrane contraction in reducing chromosome mis-segregation in their previous study, as mentioned fairly and transparently in the text. However, the reason for this is now described in more detail with solid quantification. Overall, this is good-quality work which does not drastically change our understanding of chromosome congression but contributes to improving it. Personally, I am surprised by the impact of such a small contraction (of around one micron) on the proper capture of chromosomes and wonder whether the signalling associated with the contraction has a local impact on microtubule dynamics. However, investigating this point is clearly beyond the scope of this study.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors present the latest improvement of their previously published methods, pMAGIC and nMAGIC, which can be used to engineer mosaic gene expression in wild-type animals and in a tissue-specific manner. They address the main limitation of MAGIC, the lack of gRNA-marker transgenes, which has hampered the broader adoption of MAGIC in the fly community. To do so, they create an entire toolkit of gRNA markers for every Drosophila chromosome and test them across a range of different tissues and in the context of making Drosophila species hybrid mosaic animals. The study provides a significant and broadly useful improvement compared to earlier versions, as it broadens the use-cases for transgenic manipulation with MAGIC to virtually any subfield of Drosophila cell biology.

      Strengths:

      Major improvements to MAGIC were made in terms of clone induction efficiency and usability across the Drosophila model system, including wild-type genotypes and the use in non-melanogaster species.

      Notably, mosaic mutants can now be created for genes residing on the 4th chromosome, which is exciting and possibly long-awaited by 4th chromosome gene enthusiasts.

      Selection of the standard set of gRNA markers was done thoughtfully, using non-repetitive conserved and unique sequences.

      The authors demonstrate that MAGIC can be used easily in the context of interspecific hybrids. I believe this is a great advancement for the Drosophila community, especially for evolutionary biologists, because this may allow for easy access to mechanistic, tissue-specific insight into the process of a range of hybrid incompatibilities, an important speciation process that is normally difficult to study at the level of molecular and cell biology.

      In the same way, because it is not limited to usage in any particular genetic background, genome-wide MAGIC can be potentially used in wild-type genotypes relatively easily. This is exciting, especially because natural genetic diversity is rarely investigated more mechanistically and at the scale/resolution of cells or specific tissues. Now, one can ask how a particular naturally occurring allele influences cell physiology compared to another (control) while keeping the global physiological context of the particular genetic background largely intact.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In the submitted manuscript the authors investigate the role of Synaptotagmins (Syt1) and (Syt7) in MR1 presentation of Mtb antigens. By using Syt1 and Syt7 knock down the authors determine that these molecules are required to effectively control Mtb infection.

      Strengths:

      In the first series of experiments, the authors determined that knocking down Syt1 and Sy7 in antigen-presenting cells decreases IFN-γ production following cellular infection with Mtb. These experiments are well performed and controlled.

      Comments on revisions:

      The revised manuscript offers further support to the role of Synaptogamins 1 and 7 in MR1 trafficking during MT infection

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors identify the N-glycosylation factor B4GALT1 as an important regulator of CD8 T-cell function.

      Strengths:

      The use of complementary ex vivo and in vivo CRISPR screens is commendable and provides a useful dataset for future studies of CD8 T-cell biology.

      The authors perform multiple untargeted analyses (RNAseq, glycoproteomics) to hone their model on how B4GALT1 functions in CD8 T-cell activation, as well as the use of a CD8-CD3 to narrow down the effects of B4GALT1, which is a broad-acting enzyme.

      B4GALT1 is shown to be important in both in vitro T-cell killing assays and a mouse model of tumor control, reinforcing the authors' claims.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors did not verify the efficiency of knockout in their single gene KO lines, although they mention a plan to include such data in a future version of the manuscript.

      The specific N-glycosylation sites of TCR and CD8 are not identified, and would be helpful for site-specific mutational analysis to further the authors' model.

      The study or future studies could benefit from further in vivo experiments testing the role of B4GALT1 other physiological contexts relevant to CD8 T cells, for example autoimmune disease or infectious disease.

      Comments on revisions:

      The paper improved after revision.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The authors present a comparative genomic and phylogenetic analysis aimed at elucidating the functions of nickel-dependent carbon monoxide dehydrogenases (Ni-CODHs) and hybrid-cluster proteins (HCPs). By examining gene neighborhoods, phylogenetic relationships, and co-occurrence patterns, they propose functional hypotheses for different CODH clades and highlight those with the greatest potential for biotechnological applications.

      A major strength of this work lies in its systematic and conceptually clear approach, which provides a rapid and low-cost framework for predicting the functional potential of newly identified CODHs based on sequence data and genomic context. The analysis is careful in minimizing false positives and offers valuable insights into the diversity and distribution of CODH enzyme clades.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Fu and colleagues have shown that VALOR, a model of multimodal and dynamic stimulus features, better predicts brain responses compared to unimodal or static models such as AlexNet, WordNet, or CLIP. The authors demonstrated robustness of their findings from generalizing encoding results to an external dataset. They demonstrated the models' practical benefit by showing that semantic mappings were comparable to another model that required labor-intensive manual annotation. Finally, the authors showed that the model reveals predictive coding mechanisms of the brain, which held meaningful relationship with individuals' fluid intelligence measure.

      Strengths:

      Recent advances in neural network models that extract visual, linguistic, and semantic features from real-world stimuli have enabled neuroscientists to build encoding models that predict brain responses from these features. Higher prediction accuracy indicates greater explained variance in neural activity, and therefore a better model of brain function. Commonly used models include AlexNet for visual features, WordNet for audio-semantic features, and CLIP for visuo-semantic features; these served as comparison models in the study. Building on this line of work, the authors developed an encoding model using VALOR, which captures the multimodal and dynamic nature of real-world stimuli. VALOR outperformed the comparison models in predicting brain responses. It also recapitulated known semantic mappings and revealed evidence of predictive processing in the brain. These findings support VALOR as a strong candidate model of brain function.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors argue that this modeling contributes to better understanding how the brain works. However, upon reading, I am less convinced how VALOR's superior performance than other models tell us more about the brain. VALOR is a better model of the audiovisual stimulus because it processes multimodal and dynamic stimuli compared to other unimodal or static models. If the model better captures real-world stimuli, then I almost feel that it has to better capture brain responses, assuming that the brain is a system that is optimized to process multimodal and dynamic inputs from the real world. The authors could strengthen the manuscript if the significance of their encoding model findings is better explained.

      In Study 3, the authors show high alignment between WordNet and VALOR feature PCs. Upon reading the method together with Figure 3, I suspect that the alignment almost has to be high, given that the authors projected VALOR features to the Huth et al.'s PC space. Could the authors conduct non-parametric permutation tests, such as shuffling the VALOR features prior to mapping onto Huth et al.'s PC space, and then calculating the Jaccard scores? I imagine that the null distribution would be positively shifted. Still, I would be convinced if the alignment is higher than this shifted null distribution for each PC. If my understanding about this is incorrect, I suggest editing the relevant Method section (line 508) because this analysis was not easy to understand.

      In Study 4, the authors show that individuals whose superior parietal gyrus (SPG) exhibited high prediction distance had high fluid cognitive scores (Figure 4C). I had a hard time believing that this was a hypothesis-driven analysis. The authors motivate the analysis that "SPG and PCu have been strongly linked to fluid intelligence (line 304)". Did the authors conduct two analyses only-SPG-fluid intelligence and PCu-fluid intelligence-without relating other brain regions with other individual differences measures? Even if so, the authors should have reported the same r value and p value for PCu-fluid intelligence. If SPG-fluid intelligence indeed hold specificity in terms of statistical significance compared to all possible scenarios that were tested, is this rationally an expected result and could the authors explain the specificity? Also, the authors should explain why they considered fluid intelligence to be the proxy of one's ability to anticipate upcoming scenes during movie watching. I would have understood the rationale better if the authors have at least aggregated predictive scores for all brain regions that held significance into one summary statistics and have found significant correlation with the fluid intelligence measure.

      Comments on revisions:

      The revision has addressed these concerns.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Huang et al recorded anterior cingulate cortex activity in mice while they performed a shuttle escape task. The task utilized two auditory cues, each of which informed the mice to stay or escape depending on which side they were on, and incorrect responses were punished by shock administration. Analyses focused on ACC neurons that fired when mice crossed the shuttle box in either direction (A-->B or B-->A), coined "action state", or when mice crossed in one direction but not the other, coined "action content". The authors characterized these populations, and ACC firing changes mostly occurred around the time of shuttle crossing. This work will likely be of broad interest to those who are interested in neocortical neurophysiology broadly, anterior cingulate cortex specifically, and their contributions to learning about actions. The task is well-designed and provides a nice background for neurophysiological recordings. The authors leveraged these strengths in characterizing the neural populations that fire to shuttle crossings in both directions vs one direction.

      Strengths:

      The factorial design nicely controls for sensory coding and value coding, since the same stimulus can signal different actions and values.

      The figures are well presented, labeled, and easy to read.

      Additional analyses, such as the 2.5/7.5s windows and place-field analysis, are nice to see and indicate that the authors were careful in their neural analyses.

      The n-trial + 1 analysis where ACC activity was higher on trials that preceded correct responses is a nice addition, since it shows that ACC activity predicts future behavior, well before it happens.

      The authors identified ACC neurons that fire to shuttle crossings in one direction or to crossings in both directions. This is very clear in the spike rasters and population scaled color images. While other factors such as place fields, sensory input, and their integration can account for this activity, the authors discuss this and provide additional supplemental analyses.

      Weaknesses:

      Some of the neural analyses could use the necessary and sufficient comparisons to strengthen the authors' claims.

      Comment on revised version:

      I think the authors did a very admirable job revising the manuscript. It is much improved. However, I believe a formal analysis of action-state versus action-content neurons on A-->B versus B-->A crossing is still warranted. I appreciate the fact that this analysis may not be as reliable with smaller ensemble sizes, but with careful pseudo-ensemble and resampling approaches, such an analysis would go a long way towards increasing the strength of evidence.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors are attempting to advance understanding of the role of unconventional PKCs, PKCM𝛇, and PKC𝜄/𝝀 in maintenance of late-phase LTP. Their results help to clarify the interplay between "structural" and "biochemical/enzymatic" mechanisms of LTP and learning in the hippocampus.

      Strengths:

      A strength is the use of conditional knock-outs of PKCM𝛇 and PKC𝜄/𝝀 to assess the role of these two enzymes in maintaining long-term potentiation and in compensating for each other when one of them is conditionally knocked out in the adult.

      Weaknesses:

      The paper is extremely difficult to read because the abstract does not clearly state the advances made over earlier studies by the use of conditional KO mutation. For example, in line nine of the abstract, the authors state, "Here, we found PKC𝜄/𝝀 persists in LTP and long-term memory when PKM𝛇 is genetically deleted." This is confusing because it sounds as though the experiments have repeated earlier published experiments in which the gene encoding PKM𝛇 is deleted in the embryo. The authors are not clear throughout the manuscript that they are using conditional KO of the two enzymes in the adult animal, rather than deletion of the gene. The term "genetically deleted" does not mean "conditionally deleted in the adult." The final sentences of the abstract are: "Whereas deleting PKM𝛇 and PKC𝜄/𝝀 individually induces compensation, deleting both aPKCs abolishes hippocampal late-LTP. Hippocampal 𝜄/𝝀-𝛇 -double-knockout eliminates spatial long-term memory but not short-term memory. Thus, in the absence of PKM𝛇 , a second persistent biochemical process compensates to maintain late-LTP and long-term memory." These sentences do not convey a clear logical conclusion. The Discussion does a better job of stating the importance of the experiments.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Here, the authors attempt to demonstrate that a simple model of multicellularity - snowflake yeast - exhibits key ecologically relevant changes in the regulation of the cell cycle. By examining the effects of the ace2 mutation in environments where multicellularity is not directly selected for or against, and combining it with mutations in key cell cycle regulators, they hope to show that mutations driving simple multicellularity can be selectively favored due to their effects on the release from quiescence rather than their effects on multicellularity itself.

      Strengths:

      The experiments performed are extensive and thorough. The yeast genotypes examined are judiciously chosen, so as to map out a functional model of the relationship between alterations to cell cycle control and changes to multicellularity phenotypes. Multiple possible interactions are examined, with the causal link and model of the relationship between the multicellular passenger phenotype and the selectable quiescence-release phenotype being well-supported. There are extensive controls demonstrating the separation between the 'passenger' multicellular phenotype and the cell cycle regulation phenotypes examined, including haploid/diploid strains with different multicellular phenotypes but similar cell cycle regulation phenotypes, and phenocopy strains in which downstream enzymes are deleted rather than key central regulators.

      Weaknesses:

      My only concerns about these results relate to the focus on selection on cell cycle control being examined in a model of multicellularity with key core cell cycle mutations rather than in a wild-type background, as this is a somewhat artificial system.

      I believe, however, that the authors convincingly make their case that this work on the multicellular phenotypes of yeast represents a potent proof-of-concept that simple multicellularity can be driven into existence or selected for as a passenger phenotype due to pleiotropic effects of mutations under selection from real-world ecological pressures. They are able to connect this phenotype back to known mutations of particular cell cycle regulators (RB) in other multicellular lineages and demonstrate that ecologically relevant changes to the cell cycle are connected to multicellular phenotypes. As a proof of concept of the connection between these phenotypes, rather than a study of a particular event in the past of a living lineage, it makes a strong case.

      A longstanding question in the field of multicellularity is the selective pressures that can drive simple multicellularity into existence and then act on simple multicells to drive their increased size and complexity. This work brings to the table tangible evidence of the possibility that, instead of being selected for on its own, simple multicellularity can be a side-effect of selection on other key phenotypes.

      This separates the question of the origins of multicellularity and the forces that drive its further evolution. This separation can reframe how the field is studied, especially in the context of the apparent dichotomy between dozens of origins of 'simple' multicellularity across the tree of life and a few origins of 'complex' multicellularity in the history of Earth. Especially in light of other evidence that multicellularity is connected to changes in cell cycle regulation, I believe that this is an important insight that will alter the way we think about the origins of this key evolutionary transition.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript addresses an important and timely question in TDP-43 biology by systematically identifying regulators of TDP-43 anisosome formation, with a particular focus on nuclear export via XPO1. Using a combination of unbiased chemical screening, genetic perturbation, and advanced imaging approaches, the authors propose that inhibition of nuclear export modulates the abundance and biophysical properties of TDP-43 anisosomes. The study is conceptually innovative and has potential relevance for neurodegenerative diseases characterized by TDP-43 pathology. However, significant concerns regarding experimental controls, reporting transparency, and model translatability currently limit the strength of the conclusions and the interpretability of several key findings.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study employs an unbiased, hypothesis-free compound screen to identify regulators of TDP-43 anisosome formation, which is a major strength and reduces confirmation bias.

      (2) The authors combine chemical and genetic screening approaches, providing orthogonal validation of key pathways and increasing confidence in the biological relevance of top hits.

      (3) The focus on biophysical properties of TDP-43 assemblies, assessed through imaging and FRAP, moves beyond simple presence/absence of aggregates and provides mechanistic insight into the biophysical states of TDP-43.

      (4) The use of multiple experimental modalities, including live-cell imaging, FRAP, pharmacological perturbation, and transcriptomic analysis, reflects a technically sophisticated and ambitious study design.

      (5) The authors attempt to extend findings beyond immortalized cancer cell lines by incorporating organoid models, demonstrating awareness of disease relevance and translational importance.

      Overall, the manuscript is clearly written and logically structured, making complex experimental workflows accessible and the central hypotheses easy to follow.

      Weaknesses:

      Despite its strengths, the manuscript has several major limitations that affect data interpretation and confidence in the conclusions.

      (1) Lack of appropriate controls for overexpression experiments:

      A central concern is the absence of proper controls for TDP-43 and XPO1 overexpression. Prior studies (including those cited by the authors, Archbold et al.2018) show that overexpression of WT TDP-43 alone is toxic to neurons. Thus, the experimental system itself may induce anisosome formation independently of the mechanisms under study. Similarly, XPO1 overexpression lacks a suitable control (e.g., mCherry alone or mCherry fused to a protein known to be independent of TDP-43). The near-complete colocalization of XPO1 with TDP-43 anisosomes upon overexpression raises the possibility that these structures reflect non-physiological protein accumulation rather than regulated assemblies.

      2) Insufficient experimental and analytical transparency:

      The manuscript frequently lacks clear reporting of experimental details. In multiple figures, the stated number of independent experiments does not match the number of data points shown, making it difficult to assess statistical validity. Concentrations used in the compound screen are not clearly defined, nor is it stated whether multiple concentrations were tested. It is unclear how many wells, cells, or independent cultures were analyzed. The criteria used to reduce 1,533 screening hits to 211 candidates via STRING analysis are not explained. Knockdown and overexpression efficiencies are not reported.

      (3) RNA-seq concerns:

      The RNA-seq experiments are particularly problematic. The number of biological replicates per condition is not stated, and heatmaps suggest that only one sample per group may have been used, which would preclude statistical analysis. No baseline comparison between WT and mutant TDP-43 is shown. Given that TDP-43 is an RNA-binding protein, splicing analyses would be far more informative than gene expression alone, yet no splicing data are presented. Moreover, nuclear retention of TDP-43 does not preclude nuclear aggregation, which may still impair its splicing function.

      (4) Limited translatability to neuronal biology:

      All anisosome analyses are performed in a cancer cell line, raising concerns about relevance to post-mitotic neurons. While organoids are used as a secondary model, the assays performed do not overlap with those used in cancer cells, making it difficult to assess whether anisosome-related mechanisms are conserved. Neuronal toxicity, a critical outcome given known TDP-43 biology, is not assessed. Prior work has shown that WT TDP-43 overexpression alone is toxic to neurons, yet this is not addressed.

      (5) Conceptual and interpretational gaps:

      The authors quantify anisosome number but also report conditions in which anisosome number decreases while size increases. The biological interpretation of larger anisosomes is not discussed, and whether this reflects improvement or worsening of pathology is unclear. Compounds targeting the same mechanism (e.g., nuclear export inhibition) are inconsistently used across experiments (KPT compounds, verdinexor, leptomycin B), raising concerns about reproducibility. In organoids, the experimental paradigm shifts to long-term treatment (35 days vs. 16 hours), further complicating interpretation.

      (6) Overinterpretation of rescue effects:

      Although the authors state that they aim to test whether nuclear export inhibition rescues neuronal defects, no functional neuronal readouts are provided (e.g., viability, morphology, axon outgrowth, or electrophysiological measures). RNA-seq alone is insufficient to support claims of rescue.

      (7) Finally, the model does not appear to exhibit cytosolic TDP-43 aggregation at baseline. It remains unclear whether longer induction would produce cytosolic gel-like assemblies and whether these would be prevented by nuclear export inhibition. Long-term data are shown only in organoids, yet anisosome formation is not assessed there.

    1. You, the writer of the document, are the most important voice.

      This is surprising because I thought research papers should mostly focus on sources. I didn’t realize the writer’s own ideas are actually the most important part.

    1. The Issei were 50- to 60-year-old men—religious leaders, teachers, business owners, gardeners, husbands, fathers, grandfathers

      This part is interesting because it shows that many of the people who were detained were normal community members. It makes the situation feel more real and personal.

    1. 83 accounts are responsible for 70% of the negative hate content targeting the couple on Twitter.”

      This is troubling because only a small number of accounts created most of the hate. It shows that a few people or bots can make the internet feel negative.

  3. Feb 2026
    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study addresses an important and timely question in colorectal cancer biology by systematically examining the effects of the common driver mutations APC, KRAS G12D, and TP53 in murine colorectal organoids, with particular emphasis on how the order of APC and TP53 acquisition influences tumor phenotype. These mutations are well known to be frequent, truncal, and often co-occurring in colorectal cancer. While it is increasingly appreciated that mutational order can shape tumor behavior, studies directly comparing the phenotypic consequences of alternative APC-TP53 mutation orders remain rare. This work, therefore, addresses a relevant and timely question.

      Strengths:

      A major strength of the study is its focus on previously unexplored biology, combined with the generation of multiple isogenic murine organoid models with controlled mutational sequences. The authors employ careful and robust quality control of the CRISPR-mediated alterations, and the inclusion of both in vitro and in vivo experiments strengthens the relevance of the work.

      Weaknesses:

      There are, however, several limitations that should be considered when interpreting the findings. First, KRAS G12D activation is used as the initiating alteration, whereas APC loss is generally believed to be the initiating event in most human colorectal cancers. Second, the analysis is restricted to comparing only two mutation orders (KAT versus KTA), which limits the breadth of conclusions that can be drawn about mutation ordering more generally. Finally, key RNA-sequencing and in vivo experiments rely on a single isogenic line, which substantially constrains interpretability.

      The aim of the study was to systematically investigate how mutation accumulation and order influence colorectal cancer initiation. While the data suggest that the relative timing of APC and TP53 loss may be particularly important for tumor initiation, the absence of biological replication makes it difficult to draw robust conclusions. Engraftment efficiency and tumor behavior can be influenced by many factors for a single clone, including additional passenger mutations acquired during culturing, as well as epigenetic differences that are independent of the engineered mutations.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors introduce a generalised HGF featuring (1) volatility coupling (rate of change), value coupling (phasic or autoregressive drift) [and 'noise coupling', which is a volatility parent of an outcome state] (2) parameters: volatility coupling κ, tonic volatility ω, value coupling α, tonic drift ρ, {plus minus}auto-regressive drift λ (3) inputs at irregular intervals (but still discrete time steps, unlike continuous time belief evolution in predictive coding) (4) states with multiple parents or parents with multiple child states (5) value parents by default have a volatility parent, and volatility parents have a value parent (or none) (6) linear or non-linear (including ReLU) functions (7) also beliefs can be any exponential family distribution (incl binary, categorical), hence can also model POMDPs

      They describe the 3 steps involved in updating (for both value and volatility): (1) prediction (2) update posterior (entails passing both pwPE and prediction precision from lower to upper node - the latter is not found in other predictive coding schemes) (3) prediction error NB this makes the network modular, so nodes can be added/removed without recomputing all the update equations.

      They give some examples of models working using simulated data: (1) sharing of parent nodes can generalise an update from one context to another (2) sharing of child nodes enables multisensory cue combination (e.g. auditory-visual, or interoceptive-exteroceptive).

      The authors further discuss a potential shortcoming of the HGF - its discretisation of timesteps - which is less naturalistic but nevertheless makes it very amenable to fitting trial-wise experimental data. They propose to extend the HGF to modelling within-step dynamics in future, which could make testable continuous time neuronal predictions.

      Strengths:

      Overall, I think the paper is excellent - it contributes an important extension to a popular modelling tool which substantially increases the number of potential applications. It is well written, and I have almost no criticisms to make.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors state that this generalised HGF will "make it easy to build large networks with considerable hierarchical depth", comparable to neural network architectures. The examples they give are extremely simple; however, it would be good to see a more complex one.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Pierre Despas and co-workers, reports the biochemical characterization of LppB a peculiar Lpp (Braun's lipoprotein) homolog found in Salmonella enterica. S. enterica encodes two Lpp homologs LppA and LppB: while LppA and Lpp function similarly, the role of LppB is less clear. LppB shares with Lpp the C-terminal Lys needed for covalent attachment to peptidoglycan (PG) but diverges in residues that precede the terminal Lys featuring a Cys residue at the penultimate position. By using E. coli as a surrogate model, the authors show that LppB can be covalently linked to PG via the terminal Lys residues and that the penultimate Cys residue can be used to form homodimer species when expressed alone and heterotrimeric complexes when co-expressed with Lpp. Interestingly, LppB expressed in E. coli seems to be stabilized at acidic pH a condition Salmonella encounters in macrophage phagosomes. Finally, based on decreased intensity of LppB-PG crosslinked bands as LppB expression increases the authors suggest that LppB is able to negatively modulate the outer membrane-peptidoglycan connectivity.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript is interesting, describes a novel strategy employed by bacteria to fine tuning outer membrane-PG attachment and provides new insights into how envelope remodeling processes can contribute to bacterial fitness and pathogenicity.

      Weaknesses:

      The analysis and quantification of muropeptides formed in E. coli strains overexpressing LppB would strengthen the main conclusion of the manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Foucault, Weber, and Hunt examines human learning behavior across change-point and continuously changing environments. The authors suggest that humans normatively adjust their learning dynamics to the current environmental dynamics. Moreover, they argue that humans not only track the means of the outcome-generating process, but also the variance, which extends recent work in this domain. The present results suggest that human learners are well able to distinguish the two moments and adjust their behavior accordingly.

      Strengths:

      (1) The paper is clearly written, and the figures demonstrate the results well. The authors clearly explain the two key results and their implications for the field.

      (2) The paper uses a common modeling framework for the two environments. This makes it less likely that differences in learning behavior between the two environments are driven by general model properties rather than the specific learning mechanisms.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Interpretation in terms of normative learning

      (1.1) Perseveration and paddle movement

      The model presented in the main manuscript is equipped with a response-probability mechanism that controls whether the paddle is updated. Especially on smaller prediction errors, the paddle is often not updated (perseveration). I wonder whether this mechanism truly reflects normative updating behavior or rather a heuristic strategy. Not moving the paddle is non-normative. A fully Bayesian model would hardly ever show a learning rate of exactly zero (one could argue only when the error is itself zero or after a massive amount of trials). This is partly apparent in Supplementary Figure 1, where the lowest learning rates are around alpha = 0.2 (change-point environment) and 0.5 (random walk).

      Supplementary Figure 1 shows the learning rate for the normative model without the response-probability mechanism. Primarily in the random-walk environment, but to some extent also in the change-point condition, the shape of the learning rate changes quite dramatically compared to Figure 4. In the random-walk environment, the learning rate appears relatively stable, with a value slightly larger than 0.5. In the change-point case, the learning rate is somewhat higher in the range of smaller prediction errors. Doesn't this speak against the interpretation that the model in the main manuscript is really behaving in a purely normative fashion? The tendency to perseverate might reflect a simplified strategy, which is sometimes described as "satisficing". That is, in line with the authors' description of the mechanism, perseveration occurs when it seems "good enough" (Simon, 1956), which has been demonstrated in a belief updating context before (Bruckner et al., 2025; Gershman, 2020; Nassar et al., 2021).

      Supplementary Figure 3 suggests that humans show quite a lot of this type of behavior. It indicates that in the change-point condition, in only 20% of the trials in the minimal prediction error range, participants update their prediction (i.e., in 80% of these trials, they perseverate on the previous prediction). This update probability increases as a function of the prediction error. In the random-walk condition, update probabilities are higher, starting at around 40% and also increasing as a function of the error.

      Indeed, Supplementary Figure 4 suggests that the shape of the learning rate for true update trials is much shallower for humans and the "perseverative" model compared to the model in Supplementary Figure 1. This suggests that the curve in Figure 4 (main manuscript), hinting at a continuous increase in the learning rate, could be the result of a mixture of perseveration (alpha = 0) and higher learning rates compared to the normative model without the response-probability mechanism.

      (1.2) Control models

      One might reply that the response-probability mechanism just adds noise, while the actual learning mechanism is still normative. However, a standard Rescorla-Wagner model with the same response-probability mechanism might also show increasing apparent learning rates as a function of prediction error (when perseveration trials and regular update trials are averaged as a function of the prediction error).

      Therefore, I suggest adding a control analysis with a Rescorla-Wagner model. One version with the same response mechanism yielding perseveration, and one standard Rescorla-Wagner model without this mechanism. This should help identify how well the present analyses can distinguish true learning-rate dynamics from averaging artifacts due to perseveration.

      (1.3) Discussion of the possibility of non-normative learning mechanisms

      Given the considerations above, I suggest a more balanced discussion of potential non-normative influences on learning, in particular, perseveration. Several previous papers have similarly shown that perseveration prominently characterizes human learning and decision-making (Bruckner et al., 2025; Gershman, 2020; Nassar et al., 2021), and in my opinion, it would be relevant to discuss how normative and non-normative mechanisms might jointly shape learning.

      (2) Model description

      The Bayesian model is quite central to the paper. However, the mathematical details are sparse, and I did not fully understand the differences between the model variants and how they were implemented. In particular, what approximations were used to make the model tractable? And how does the variance inference work? Is the learning rate directly computed, similar to the Nassar model, or is it derived from updates and prediction errors?

      (3) Apparent learning rates in humans

      The main learning-rate analyses compute the fraction of updates and prediction errors. For quality assurance, it would be useful to see a few supplementary histograms of the apparent learning rates. It would be great to have one plot across all participants and a few example plots for single participants. These analyses will reveal the distribution of learning rates and the proportion at the boundaries, which can sometimes be a source of bias.

      References:

      Bruckner, R., Nassar, M. R., Li, S.-C., & Eppinger, B. (2025). Differences in learning across the lifespan emerge via resource-rational computations. Psychological Review, 132(3), 556-580. https://doi.org/10.1037/rev0000526.

      Gershman, S. J. (2020). Origin of perseveration in the trade-off between reward and complexity. Cognition, 204, 104394. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.cognition.2020.104394.

      Nassar, M. R., Waltz, J. A., Albrecht, M. A., Gold, J. M., & Frank, M. J. (2021). All or nothing belief updating in patients with schizophrenia reduces precision and flexibility of beliefs. Brain, 144(3), 1013-1029. https://doi.org/10.1093/brain/awaa453.

      Simon, H. A. (1956). Rational choice and the structure of the environment. Psychological Review, 63(2), 129-138. https://doi.org/10.1037/h0042769.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript addresses a clear and widely relevant question: how ongoing fluctuations in alertness during wakefulness relate to large-scale patterns of coordinated brain activity. The authors combine high-field magnetic resonance imaging with simultaneous pupil measurements, and they compute an edgewise measure of arousal-related coupling for every pair of regions. Their main contribution is to show that arousal-related coupling is low-dimensional and organized into seven reproducible "connectivity communities", each with characteristic network pair compositions. A secondary contribution is the observation that these communities exhibit systematic but community-specific hemispheric asymmetries, including a striking left/right dissociation within the ventral attention network, where the left side participates broadly across communities while the right side forms a more cohesive, segregated arousal-responsive module. A final contribution is cross-context generalization: the same organizational structure and lateralization signatures are largely preserved during naturalistic movie watching.

      Strengths:

      (1) The paper moves beyond state contrasts and quantifies arousal-related modulation continuously within wakefulness, directly addressing a gap highlighted in the Introduction.

      (2) The hemispheric asymmetry result is not framed as a crude global dominance effect; the authors explicitly test and argue that the key signal lies in structured spatial heterogeneity rather than mean shifts.

      (3) The cross paradigm replication in movie watching is a strong design choice and supports the claim that the organizational motifs are not limited to unconstrained rest.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Arousal effects on BOLD signals and on pupil size can have different delays, so it would be valuable to test lagged relationships (for example, shifting the pupil series forward and backward) to show that the main community structure and lateralization results are not sensitive to an arbitrary temporal alignment.

      (2) Pupil diameter covaries with blinks, eye closure, and other factors that can covary with head motion and physiological noise. The Methods include substantial quality control and denoising, including motion regression and scrubbing, plus exclusions for eye closure.

      (3) The dataset is described in terms of runs retained (for example, 485 resting runs), and runs are treated as observations in clustering after z-scoring across runs. If multiple runs come from the same individuals, the manuscript would benefit from explicitly showing that results replicate at the participant level (for example, community structure stability within participant across runs, and participant-level summary statistics used for inference), rather than relying primarily on pooled run-level patterns.

      (4) Time-resolved connectivity is estimated using a 30-second sliding window and 5 second step. It is reasonable to wonder whether the same conclusions hold with alternative estimators that do not rely on fixed windows. The Discussion acknowledges this limitation, but adding a small robustness analysis would make the paper more definitive.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript introduces Neuroplex, a pipeline that integrates miniscope Ca²⁺ imaging in freely moving mice with multiplexed confocal and spectral imaging to infer projection identities of recorded neurons. This technical approach is promising and could broaden access to projection-resolved population imaging. However, the core quantitative analyses apply a winner-take-all single-label assignment per neuron even when multiple fluorophores exceed threshold, with additional labels treated descriptively as "secondary hits." While the authors acknowledge and simulate dual labeling, the extent to which this single-label decision rule affects subtype fractions and behavioural comparisons remains uncertain without a multi-label (or probabilistic) sensitivity analysis and propagation of classification uncertainty.

      Strengths:

      (1) Conceptual advance and practicality: Decoupling acquisition from identity readout constitutes an innovative approach that is, in principle, applicable in laboratories currently using single-color miniscopes.

      (2) Engineering thoroughness: The manuscript offers detailed consideration of GRIN optics, spectral libraries, registration procedures, and simulations that address signal-to-noise ratio, background, and class imbalances.

      (3) Immediate community value: If demonstrated to be robust, the pipeline could enable projection-resolved analyses without reliance on specialized multicolor miniscopes.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Single-label assignment in the main analyses: When multiple fluorophores exceed threshold for a neuron/ROI, the workflow applies a winner-take-all rule and assigns a single label (the fluorophore with the largest standardized beta), while additional above-threshold fluorophores are retained only as "secondary hits." This is a reasonable specificity-first choice, but because cortical excitatory neurons can collateralize, collapsing dual-threshold ROIs to one identity may under-represent dual-projecting cells and could bias estimated subtype fractions and behavioural comparisons.

      (2) Dual-label detection is acknowledged but remains descriptive in vivo: the manuscript explicitly discusses the possibility of dual projection, evaluates dual-fluorophore detection in simulations (including performance under realistic noise/background), and reports in vivo rates of secondary hits. However, these dual-threshold events are not incorporated as co-identities in the main statistical analyses, making it difficult to judge how robust the principal biological conclusions are to the single-label decision rule.

      (3) Uncertainty is not propagated: False-positive/false-negative rates from simulations and uncertainty from registration/segmentation are not carried forward into quantitative confidence bounds on subtype proportions or behaviour-by-subtype effects.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript investigates how people's perceptual reports are influenced by events and trials in the past, and how this long-range dependence relates to broader learning across locations in a visual learning task. The authors present clear and internally consistent analyses showing that extended temporal integration is associated with greater generalization of learning. The study is thought-provoking and may contribute meaningfully to understanding how short-term influences and long-term improvement interact, although several interpretational points would benefit from clarification.

      Strengths:

      (1) The manuscript identifies unusually long-range perceptual biases extending up to ten trials back, which is a striking and potentially important finding.

      (2) The association between strong long-range dependence and greater learning generalization is clearly documented and supported by consistent analyses.

      (3) The dataset is large and rich, and the authors apply repeated and well-controlled analyses that give confidence in the stability of the effects.

      (4) The writing is generally clear, and the manuscript raises interesting conceptual links between temporal integration and generalization of learning.

      Weaknesses / Points Requiring Clarification:

      (1) The manuscript repeatedly equates generalization with increased efficiency, but this relationship is not universally true. In some populations or tasks, excessive generalization can reduce task-specific efficiency. The authors should discuss this context-dependence to clarify when generalization is beneficial versus detrimental.

      (2) Serial dependence is also present, though smaller, in the central fixation task. It remains unclear whether this bias could contribute to the serial dependence observed in the main task. The authors should clarify whether the two biases are independent or whether the central-task bias might partially influence orientation judgments in the main task.

      (3) Several figure captions and labels contain minor inconsistencies in formatting and terminology. Careful proofreading would improve clarity.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors set out to determine whether people can adjust how narrowly or broadly they focus attention in advance based on expectations about how difficult an upcoming visual task will be. Specifically, they aimed to test whether expecting a more demanding search leads to a narrower focus of attention or instead strengthens attention at the relevant location without changing its spatial extent.

      Strengths:

      The study addresses a timely and interesting question about how expectations influence the preparation of attention before a task begins. The experimental design is well-suited to isolating anticipatory effects by manipulating expectations about task difficulty independently of moment-to-moment stimulus information. The manuscript is clearly written, and the methods are described in sufficient detail to support transparency and reproducibility.

      Weaknesses:

      Despite the strengths of the design and the merit of the work, I have a few concerns regarding the analysis and the interpretation of the results.

      (1) I was somewhat confused by aspects of the behavioural analysis. I may be mistaken, but fixed effects in generalised mixed-effects models are more commonly reported using Wald statistics with beta coefficients rather than F statistics, and the very large degrees of freedom reported here are difficult to interpret. In particular, they appear closer to trial counts than to the number of participants, which raises questions about how statistical uncertainty is being estimated. This concern is compounded by the fact that different statistical approaches appear to yield different conclusions: the generalised mixed-effects models and the pairwise t-tests reported in the figure caption do not fully align. Moreover, the latter are not described in the Methods, and the justification for using them in the figure is not provided. Taken together, this makes it difficult to assess the strength of the behavioural evidence. The reported effects of expectation on behaviour also appear small, and there is no clear cost at uncued locations. This limited behavioural footprint makes it difficult to determine how robust the proposed preparatory mechanism is. It also complicates the interpretation of the neural findings as reflecting a general strategy for optimising task preparation.

      (2) A central premise of the study is that, if observers proactively narrow their attentional focus when expecting difficult search, this should be reflected in sharper spatial tuning profiles. This prediction is presented as a diagnostic test of whether expectations modulate attentional scope. However, the absence of such sharpening is later taken as evidence that expectations do not alter spatial extent and instead operate exclusively through gain modulation. This inference may be stronger than the data allow. The lack of an observed difference in tuning width does not necessarily rule out changes in attentional scope, particularly if such changes are subtle, temporally limited, or not well captured by the spatial resolution of the approach. As a result, while the findings are consistent with a gain-based account, they do not definitively exclude the possibility that expectations also influence spatial extent, and the logic linking the original prediction to the final conclusion would benefit from a more cautious interpretation.

      (3) The difference between easy and hard searches in the CTF slope is taken as evidence for enhanced preparatory spatial attention under high expected difficulty. However, these differences could also reflect broader changes in alertness or motivational state between blocks. The behavioural results show a small overall increase in accuracy in expect-hard blocks, which may be consistent with a more general increase in task engagement rather than a spatially specific preparatory mechanism. Although the authors decompose slope differences into amplitude and width parameters, the interpretation still relies on ruling out alternative, more global explanations for enhanced signal strength or reduced variability. This leaves some ambiguity as to whether the observed modulation reflects a specific adjustment of preparatory attention or a more general change in task state.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors investigate single-neuron activity in rhesus macaques during model-based (MB) and model-free (MF) reinforcement learning (RL). Using a well-established two-step choice task, they analyze neural correlates of MB and MF learning across four brain regions: the anterior cingulate cortex (ACC), dorsolateral PFC (DLPFC), caudate, and putamen. The study provides strong evidence that these regions encode distinct RL-related signals, with ACC playing a dominant role in MB learning and caudate updating value representations after rare transitions. The authors apply rigorous statistical analyses to characterize neural encoding at both population and single-neuron levels.

      Strengths:

      (1) The research fills a gap in the literature, which has been limited in directly dissociating MB vs. MF learning at the single unit level and across brain areas known to be involved in reinforcement learning. This study advances our understanding of how different brain regions are involved in RL computations.

      (2) The study used a two-step choice task Miranda et al., (2020), which was previously established for distinguishing MB and MF reinforcement learning strategies.

      (3) The use of multiple brain regions (ACC, DLPFC, caudate, and putamen) in the study enabled comparisons across cortical and subcortical structures.

      (4) The study used multiple GLMs, population-level encoding analyses, and decoding approaches. With each analysis, they conducted the appropriate controls for multiple comparisons and described their methods clearly.

      (5) They implemented control regressors to account for neural drift and temporal autocorrelation.

      (6) The authors showed evidence for three main findings:

      (a) ACC as the strongest encoder of MB variables from the four areas, which emphasizes its role in tracking transition structures and reward-based learning. The ACC also showed sustained representation of feedback that went into the next trial.

      (b) ACC was the only area to represent both MB and MF value representations.

      (c) The caudate selectively updates value representations when rare transitions occur, supporting its role in MB updating.

      (7) The findings support the idea that MB and MF reinforcement learning operate in parallel rather than strictly competing.

      (8) The paper also discusses how MB computations could be an extension of sophisticated MF strategies.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) There is limited evidence for a causal relationship between neural activity and behavior. The authors cite previous lesion studies, but causality between neural encoding in ACC, caudate, and putamen and behavioral reliance on MB or MF learning is not established.

      (2) There is a heavy emphasis on ACC versus other areas, but is unclear how much of this signal drives behavior relative to the caudate.

      (3) The authors mention the monkeys were overtrained before recording, which might have led to a bias in MB versus MF strategy.

      (4) The authors have responded to the weaknesses appropriately in the manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      A particular challenge in treating infections caused by the parasite Toxoplasma gondii is to target (and ultimately clear) the tissue cysts that persist for the lifetime of an infected individual. The study by Maus and colleagues leverages the development of a powerful in vitro culture system for the cyst-forming bradyzoite stage of Toxoplasma parasites to screen a compound library for candidate inhibitors of parasite proliferation and survival. They identify numerous inhibitors capable of inhibiting both the disease-causing tachyzoite and the cyst-forming bradyzoite stages of the parasite. To characterize the potential targets of some of these inhibitors, they undertake metabolomic analyses. The metabolic signatures from these analyses lead them to identify one compound (MMV1028806) that interferes with aspects of parasite mitochondrial metabolism. In the revised version of the manuscript, the authors present convincing evidence that MMV1028806 targets the mitochondrial electron transport (ETC) chain of the parasite (although they don't identify the actual target in the ETC). The revised manuscript also nicely addresses my other criticisms of the original version. Overall, the study presents an exciting approach for identifying and characterizing much-needed inhibitors for targeting tissue cysts in these parasites.

      Strengths:

      The study presents convincing proof-of-principle evidence that the myotube-based in vitro culture system for T. gondii bradyzoites can be used to screen compound libraries, enabling the identification of compounds that target the proliferation and/or survival of this stage of the parasite. The study also utilizes metabolomic approaches to characterize metabolic 'signatures' that provide clues to the potential targets of candidate inhibitors. In addition to insights into candidate bradyzoite inhibitors, the study also provides new insights into the physiological role of the mitochondrial electron transport chain of bradyzoites, and raises a host of interesting questions around the functional roles of mitochondria in this stage of the parasite.

      Weaknesses:

      In the revised manuscript, the authors have included additional oxygen consumption rate data that indicate that MMV1028806 targets the mitochondrial electron transport chain (ETC). These data are convincing. On line 481, the authors state that "treatments with ATQ, BPQ, MMV1028806, and antimycin A resulted in substantially reduced oxygen consumption levels relative to the DMSO control and suggest indeed a blockage of the mETC consistent with the inhibition of the bc1-complex." The OCR assay the authors use is still only an indirect measure of bc1 activity. Given that most OCR-inhibiting compounds in T. gondii are bc1 inhibitors, it is possible (and perhaps likely) that MMV1028806 is targeting this complex. However, the data cannot rule out that it is targeting another component of the ETC (or potentially even a TCA cycle enzyme). Without a direct test that MMV1028806 inhibits bc1 complex activity, the authors should be more cautious in their interpretation (e.g. by acknowledging the limitations of their conclusion, or acknowledging other possible targets). Similarly, the conclusion on line Line 622 that "... we confirmed the bc1-complex as a target" is overstating the findings. The phrasing on lines 683-695 is more appropriate: "... suggesting that it also targets complex III or a functionally linked site within the mitochondrial electron transport chain."

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Mansingh et al., investigate the impact of voluntary wheel training and acute physical exercise on the transcriptomic and proteomic profile of spinal cord tissues from young adult mice. They first describe the proteomic and transcriptomic differences between sedentary mice and mice provided with running wheels for voluntary exercise. They show that voluntary physical exercise induces changes at a transcriptional level as well as at a proteomic level, with most of these effects restricted to glial cells. They further analyze the putative cell interactions that are induced in the context of physical training and describe the specificity of transcriptional changes in the different cell populations. Using the same multi-omics pipeline, the authors assess dynamic changes in sedentary and trained mice 6 and 24 hours following a bout of physical exercise until exhaustion. Importantly, they demonstrate that the impact of this single bout to exhaustion is modified in mice that have access to running wheels compared with sedentary mice, with a reduced amplitude of the reaction and a faster resolution of changes caused by exercise until exhaustion.

      Altogether, this study provides a useful description of the transcriptional changes at play following voluntary physical training and, importantly, uncovers the role of this training in shaping future transcriptomic reactions to a stressful bout of exercise until exhaustion. However, the conclusions of the manuscripts would be strengthened by the clarification of the methods, a better use of the proteomic data regarding the transcriptomic datasets, and a cross-validation of the main claims currently based solely on transcriptomic datasets.

      (1) In this study, the housing strategy used is key as it will impact both the proteome and transcriptome of cells in the central nervous system. It can be difficult to measure the running activity of individual mice if they are not housed individually. Yet, individual housing has a major impact on the nervous system and notably on glial cells. Therefore, a better description of the housing strategy for the sedentary and trained group during the 6 weeks of training is required.

      (2) In the first part of the paper that uses the results from the first set of multi-omics data, the protocol used is not clear. From Figure 1A, it seems that the mice went through a max performance test before and after the 6-week period in which the two groups had different life experiences (voluntary running versus sedentary). Since in the methods the maximal test protocol is effectively an exercise until exhaustion, it is difficult to understand why the authors defined this first experiment as the one allowing them to test "molecular remodeling in the spinal cord at rest". Also, it is not clear how long after the max performance test the tissues were collected. If indeed the mice went through the max endurance test before tissue collection, it is not a condition at rest, and this first protocol in some way looks like a duplication of a subpart of the second experiment. If mice did not go through this max performance test, it needs to be clarified both in the text and in the figure.

      (3) One of the strengths of this study is its multi-omics approach assessing changes at both transcriptomic and proteomic levels. Yet, the use by authors of the proteomic datasets is minimal, and there are no comments on how the proteomic and transcriptomic datasets support each other. Changes at the transcriptional level do not necessarily translate into changes at the protein level. Therefore, it would improve the quality of the study if authors could use the bulk proteomic data in relation to the transcriptomic dataset. The fact that the proteomic datasets do not provide the identity of the cells from which the changes originate should not prevent authors from putting them in perspective with transcriptomic results.

      (4) None of the results from the single-nucleus RNA sequencing are cross-validated with, for instance, in situ hybridizations. It would improve the strength of the claim if some findings, in particular regarding the dynamics of the changes 6 vs 24h after exhaustion bout, were cross-validated.

      (5) Although the authors note as a limitation that cholinergic neurons were underrepresented in their dataset, since one of the main claims of the manuscript relates to them, it calls for some additional comments on the identity of the cholinergic neurons present in their dataset. There are different populations of spinal cholinergic neurons with very different functions. It would greatly improve the strength of this result if the authors could identify which cholinergic neurons show these changes (or at least which proportion of the different cholinergic population is present in their datasets). For instance, which proportion of cholinergic neurons are expressing classical markers of motor neurons versus markers of cholinergic interneurons (for instance, from the V0c population).

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript investigates the mechanisms by which visual working memory (WM) interacts with perceptual judgements, using continuous mouse-tracking to dissociate putative attentional capture from representational shift. Across two experiments, participants maintained a color in WM while performing an intervening perceptual matching task. Analyses of mouse trajectories revealed bidirectional influences with distinct dynamics of attentional capture and representational shift components. For WM's influence on perceptual judgments, trajectories showed a fast and endpoint-inconsistent deviation (interpreted as attentional capture by WM-matching features), followed by a slower and sustained drift that closely matched the final perceptual bias. In contrast, when perceptual judgments influenced subsequent WM recall, trajectory dynamics were dominated by the sustained drift component, with minimal capture-like deviation. Together, these findings are interpreted as evidence that WM shapes perceptual decisions through at least two temporally distinct processes.

      Strengths:

      I find the paradigm to be cleverly designed and the analyses rigorous. A major strength of this work is the use of continuous mouse-tracking and time-resolved analyses to dissociate transient influences from sustained biases within single trials. The trajectory decomposition provides an elegant way to separate early deviations from later drift, which would be difficult to achieve using traditional measures that only measure the final recall. I find the observation particularly compelling that trajectories initially deviate toward WM-matching information and then correct back toward the task-relevant target, highlighting the dynamic interplay between transient priority signals and the final decision.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The early curvature in the mouse trajectory, inconsistent with the endpoint, is interpreted as fast attentional capture. However, this signal may also reflect competition among multiple responses driven simultaneously by the WM representation and the perceptual matching item. While the current interpretation is plausible, it would be helpful if the authors could more clearly articulate why this component should be solely interpreted as attentional capture rather than early response competition.

      (2) The mouse trajectories show a clear correction back toward the target later in the movement, particularly when the cursor enters the color wheel (Figure 3a), where the correction appears most pronounced. I wonder how this corrective phase should be interpreted. For example, does this correction reflect disengagement from an initial WM-driven priority signal, increasing influence of task demands and sensory evidence, or some other control process?

      Relatedly, movement onset latency modulated the overall AUC but did not influence the final perceptual error. I wonder whether the time courses of the capture and shift components (as revealed by the destination-vector transformation) differ between early-onset and late-onset trials, and if so, when those differences emerge. Explicitly showing these comparisons would help further clarify how early capture is corrected while the endpoint bias remains stable. It may also be informative to include representative raw trajectory paths for early- and late-onset trials, as Figure 3a is currently the only figure showing raw trajectories, whereas most subsequent results are derived measures.

      (3) The contrast in destination-vector dynamics between the perceptual matching response and the WM recall response (Figure 8) is interesting. For the representational shift component, the effect appears to increase sharply after movement onset. Conceptually, one might expect the shift in WM representation to have already occurred following perceptual judgment, rather than emerging during the response itself. It would be helpful if the authors could clarify why the shift is expressed primarily during the movement phase. Additionally, although weak, there appears to be a small capture-like deviation in the WM recall trajectories. Was this effect statistically significant? It may be informative to apply the same cluster-based permutation analysis directly comparing the capture effects against zero, in addition to the paired comparisons currently reported.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This paper investigates the latent dynamic brain states that emerge during memory encoding and predict later memory performance in children (N = 24, ages: 8 -13 years). A novel computational approach (Bayesian Switching Dynamic Systems, BSDS) discovers latent brain states from fMRI data in an unsupervised and parameter-free manner that is agnostic to external stimuli, resulting in 4 states: an active-encoding state, a default-mode state, an inactive state, and an intermediate state. The key finding is that the percentage of time occupied in the active-encoding state (characterized by greater activity in hippocampal, visual, and frontoparietal regions), as well as greater transitions to this state, predicts memory accuracy. Memory accuracy was also predicted by the mean lifetime and transitions to the default-mode state (characterized by greater activity in medial prefrontal cortex and posterior cingulate cortex) during post-encoding rest. Together, the results provide insights into dynamic interactions between brain regions that may be optimal for encoding novel information and consolidating memories for long-term retention.

      The approach is interesting and important for our understanding of neural mechanisms of memory during development, as we know less about dynamic interactions between memory systems in development.

      Moreover, the novel methodology may be broadly useful beyond the questions addressed in this study. The manuscript is well-written and concise. Nonetheless, there are several areas for improvement:

      (1) The study focuses on middle childhood, but there is a lack of engagement in the Introduction or Discussion about what is known about memory development and the brain during this period. Many of the brain regions examined in this study, particularly frontoparietal regions, undergo developmental changes that could influence their involvement in memory encoding and consolidation. The paper would be strengthened by more directly linking the findings to what is already known about episodic memory development and the brain.

      (2) A more thorough overview of the BSDS algorithm is needed, since this is likely a novel method for most readers. Although many of the nitty-gritty details can be referenced in prior work, it was unclear from the main text if the BSDS algorithm discovered latent states based on activation patterns, functional connectivity, or both. Figure 1F is not very informative (and is missing labels).

      (3) A further confusion about the BSDS algorithm was whether it necessarily had to work on the rest data. Figure 4A suggests that each TR was assigned one of the four states based on the maximum win from the log-likelihood estimation. Without more details about how this algorithm was applied to the rest data, it is difficult to evaluate the claim on page 14 about the spontaneous emergence of the states at rest.

      (4) Although the BSDS algorithm was validated in prior simulations and task-based fMRI using sustained block designs in adults, it is unclear whether it is appropriate for the kind of event-related design used in the current study. Figure 1G shows very rapid state changes, which is quantified in the low mean lifetime of the states (between 1-3 TRs on average) in Figure 4C. On the one hand, it is a strength of the algorithm that it is not necessarily tied to external stimuli. On the other hand, it would be helpful to see simulations validating that rapid transitions between states in fMRI data are meaningful and not due to noise.

      (5) The Methods section mentions that participants actively imagined themselves within the encoded scenes and were instructed to memorize the images for a later test during the post-encoding rest scan. This detail needs to be included in the main text and incorporated into the interpretation of the findings, as there are likely mechanistic differences between spontaneous memory replay/reinstatement vs. active rehearsal.

      (6) Information about the general linear model used to discover the 16 ROIs that showed a subsequent memory effect are missing, such as: covariates in the model (motion, etc.), group analysis approach (parametric or nonparametric), whether and how multiple-comparisons correction was performed, if clusters were overlapping at all or distinct, if the total number of clusters was 16 or if this was only a subset of regions that showed the effect.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This work studies the self-association behavior of 109 human Death Fold Domains (DFD) in eukaryotic cells and its connection to their function in innate immune signalosomes.

      Using an amphifluoric FRET (DAmFRET) method previously developed by the authors, self-association is monitored as a function of protein concentration by Förster Resonance Energy Transfer in the cell.

      Several DFDs are found to be in a supersaturable state and are considered energy reservoirs necessary for signal amplification.

      The revised manuscript addresses most of the original concerns, resulting in a significant improvement.

      The following observations are made:

      (1) A group of DFDs shows a bimodal FRET distribution of no FRET and high FRET values at low and high protein concentration, which indicates a nucleation barrier. This conclusion is corroborated by the modification from a discontinuous to a continuous FRET transition by expressing a structural template or seed. The authors find that DFDs displaying discontinuous FRET behavior are supersaturated, and those that retain their discontinuous behavior in the context of the full-length protein correspond to protein adaptors of innate immune signalosomes.

      (2) The authors indicate that the adaptors of inflammatory signalosomes act as energy reservoirs for signal amplification. This is not demonstrated, but it is assumed that the energy stored in the supersaturated state is released upon polymerization.

      (3) This work also includes evidence showing that nonsupersaturable and supersaturable constructs of caspase-9 form puncta that dissolve or persist, respectively, upon apoptosome stimulation. The supersaturable construct also induces massive cell death, in contrast to the nonsupersaturable form. Although not demonstrated, these results could be related to the level of signal amplification.

      (4) The cell's lifespan depends on the supersaturation levels of certain DFDs.

      (5) Polymerization nucleated by interaction between DFDs from different pathways (different signalosomes) is rare.

      (6) The study demonstrates the presence of nucleation barriers, inferred from supersaturable conditions, in the adaptor orthologs of zebrafish (Danio rerio) and the model sponge Amphimedon queenslandica, which indicates that this characteristic is conserved.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Xiaoyu Wu and colleagues examined a potential role in sleep of a Drosophila ribosomal RNA methyltransferase, mettl5. Based on sleep defects reported in CRISPR generated mutants, the authors performed both RNA-seq and Ribo-seq analyses of head tissue from mutants and compared to control animals collected at the same time point. A major conclusion was that the mutant showed altered expression of circadian clock genes, and that the altered expression of the period gene in particular accounted for the sleep defect reported in the mettl5 mutant. In this revision, the authors have added a more thorough analysis of clock gene expression and show that PER protein levels are increased relative to wild type animals a specific times of day, indicating increased stability of the protein. Given that PER inhibits its own transcription, the per RNA is low in the mutants. Efforts toward a more detailed understanding of how clock gene expression was altered in the mutants, as well as other clarification of sleep phenotypes throughout is appreciated. As noted above, a strength of this work is its relevance to a human developmental disorder as well as the transcriptomic and ribosomal profiling of the mutant. However, there still remain some minor weaknesses in the manuscript. This reviewer is not in agreement with the interpretation of the epigenetic experiments. Specifically, co-expression of Clk[jrk] or per[01] with the mettl5 mutant recovered the nighttime sleep phenotype, but was additive to the daytime sleep phenotype such that double mutants showed higher sleep. This effect should be acknowledged and discussed. Overall, this is an interesting paper that indicates a molecular link between mettl5 and the circadian clock in regulation of sleep.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, performed in human patients, the authors aimed at dissecting out the role of cholinergic modulation in different types of memory (recollection-based vs familiarity and novelty-based) and during different memory phases (encoding and retrieval). Moreover, their goal was to obtain the electrophysiological signature of cholinergic modulation on network activity of the hippocampus and the entorhinal cortex.

      Strengths:

      Authors combined cognitive tasks and intracranial EEG recordings in neurosurgical epilepsy patients. The study confirms previous evidence regarding the deleterious effects of scopolamine, a muscarinic acetylcholine receptor antagonist, on memory performance when administered prior the encoding phase of the task. During both encoding and retrieval phases scopolamine disrupts the power of theta oscillations in terms of amplitude and phase synchronization. These results raise the question on the role of theta oscillations during retrieval and the meaning of scopolamine effect on retrieval-associated theta rhythm without cognitive changes. The authors clearly discussed this issue in the discussion session.

      A major point is the finding that scopolamine-mediated effect is selective for recollection-based memory and not for familiarity- and novelty-based memory.

      The methodology used is powerful and the data underwent a detailed and rigorous analysis.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The revised data support the conclusion that methodological differences can influence apparent receptor localization. However, key claims regarding functional surface engagement of TfR and hydrodynamic clearance remain based largely on indirect evidence and model-based interpretation. These conclusions should therefore be phrased more cautiously.

      I thank the authors for their careful rebuttal and the additional experiments included in the revised manuscript. The new fixation comparisons and transferrin competition assays substantially strengthen the technical basis of the study and address several of the original concerns.

      However, some conclusions remain more inferential than directly supported by the data. While the fixation and washing controls demonstrate that methodology influences apparent TfR localisation, they do not directly establish that previous protocols quantitatively redistribute surface TfR into the flagellar pocket. Statements implying such redistribution should therefore be phrased more cautiously.

      Similarly, the added transferrin binding controls argue against non-specific interactions, but functional engagement of surface-exposed TfR in intact bloodstream-form parasites remains supported mainly by indirect evidence. The proposed explanation involving rapid on/off rates and newly arriving receptors is plausible but should be more clearly identified as an inference.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The posterior parietal cortex (PPC) has been identified as an integrator of multiple sensory streams and guides decision making. Hira et al observe that dissection of the functional specialization of PPC subregions requires simultaneous measurement of neuronal activity throughout these areas. To this end, they use widefield calcium imaging to capture the activity of thousands of neurons across the PPC and surrounding areas. They begin by delineating the boundaries between the primary sensory and higher visual areas using intrinsic imaging and validate their mapping using calcium imaging. They then conduct imaging during a visually guided task to identify neurons that respond selectively to visual stimuli or choice. They find that vision and choice neurons intermingle primarily in the anterior medial (AM) area, and that AM uniquely encodes information regarding both the visual stimulus and the previous choice, positioning AM as the main site of integration of behavioral and visual information for this task.

      Strengths:

      There is an enormous amount of data and results reveal very interesting relationships between stimulus and choice coding across areas and how network dynamics relate to task coding.

      Weaknesses:

      The enormity of the data and the complexity of the analysis makes the manuscript hard to follow. Sometimes it reads like a laundry list of results as opposed a cohesive story.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed our concerns.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary

      Briola and co-authors have performed a structural analysis of the human CTF18 clamp loader bound to PCNA. The authors purified the complexes and formed a complex in solution. They used cryo-EM to determine the structure to high resolution. The complex assumed an auto-inhibited conformation, where DNA binding is blocked, which is of regulatory importance and suggests that additional factors could be required to support PCNA loading on DNA. The authors carefully analysed the structure and compared it to RFC and related structures.

      Strength & Weakness

      Their overall analysis is of high quality, and they identified, among other things, a human-specific beta-hairpin in Ctf18 that flexible tethers Ctf18 to Rfc2-5. Indeed, deletion of the beta-hairpin resulted in reduced complex stability and a reduction in the rate of primer extension assay with Pol ε. Moreover, the authors identify that the Ctf18 ATP-binding domain assumes a more flexible organisation.

      The data are discussed accurately and relevantly, which provides an important framework for rationalising the results.

      All in all, this is a high-quality manuscript that identifies a key intermediate in CTF18-dependent clamp loading.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Mohr and Kelly report a high-density EEG study in healthy human volunteers in which they test whether correlations between neural activity in primary visual cortex and choice behavior can be measured non-invasively. Participants performed a contrast discrimination task on large arrays of Gabor gratings presented in the upper left and lower right quadrants of the visual field. The results indicate that single-trial amplitudes of C1, the earliest cortical component of the visual evoked potential in humans, predict forced-choice behavior over and beyond other behavioral and electrophysiological choice-related signals. These results constitute an important advance for our understanding of the nature and flexibility of early visual processing.

      Strengths:

      The findings suggest a previously unsuspected role for aggregate early visual cortex activity in shaping behavioral choices.

      The authors extend well-established methods for assessing covariation between neural signals and behavioral output to non-invasive EEG recordings.

      The effects of initial afferent information in primary visual cortex on choice behavior is carefully assessed by accounting for a wide range of potential behavioral and electrophysiological confounds.

      Caveats and limitations are transparently addressed and discussed.

      Weaknesses:

      Due to the inherent limitations of scalp-recorded visual evoked potentials, the results cannot be directly compared to invasive recordings in animal models.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      - This is a complicated research topic that touches on a few sub-fields of biology, and thus to make the paper more approachable I would recommend a careful edit of the text for clarity and precision of language.<br /> - Authors point out that this is a decades-old field; it would make sense to use terminology established within the field rather than inventing their own. Allelic imbalance has been referred to as AI, MAE (monoallelic expression), RMAE (random monoallelic expression) etc. The paper whose mouse data the authors make use of uses Asynchronous Stochastic Replication Timing (ASRT) instead of VERT to refer to the same phenomenon. Creating unnecessary jargon makes the paper more difficult to read and adds needless complexity to an already complex field.<br /> - Methods do not provide sufficient detail to fully evaluate or reproduce these experiments.<br /> - It is helpful to show representative loci as the authors do in Fig 1F and G and Fig 2, but these panels are very densely rendered and thus difficult to process visually - even the cartoon version (1D) is thick with overlapping lines. The point that allelic imbalance is enriched in VERTs would be enhanced if the authors could present the allelic ratio for all genes found in all VERTs, demonstrating how replication timing on either chromosome affects the allelic ratio.<br /> - The authors make the important point that VERTs are unlikely to be shared among different cell types and tissues (Fig 1i) but then find an enrichment for neuronal and immune genes in VERT regions identified in ACPs. It follows that these same genes are unlikely to be in such regions in the tissues where they are relevant. Some of the GO terms presented are too broad to suggest any biological significance to the result, even if there is statistical significance (for example, the top term for LCL clones 'Cytoplasm' is associated with 12,000 genes, and the second term for mouse clones 'Membrane' is associated with 10,000). It would be helpful to focus on GO terms lower in the GO hierarchy.<br /> - Figure 3 highlights the association of related gene clusters with VERTs but the VERTs are assigned based on variable replication timing in just 1 or 2 clones. This is an interesting observation, but to make the point that "VERT regions frequently coincide with gene clusters in the human genome" there needs to be a systematic assessment of replication timing at all gene clusters across all clones, and a statistical test for significance.<br /> - It is an interesting hypothesis that VERTs are conserved between species at synentic loci. If such regions are really conserved, one would expect that replication timing at these sites would be consistently asynchronous. However, the data presented shows that in human clones these VERTs can be specific to an individual donor (as in 5A) or an individual clone (as in 5H).<br /> - Again, the finding that VERTs coincide with neurodevelopmental disease genes in immune and cartilage cells is at odds with the previous statements and data about the tissue specificity of VERTs. In order to support the claim that neurodevelopmental disease associated genes reside in asynchronously replicating regions, and are thus more prone to allelic imbalance, the authors would need to demonstrate this phenomenon in neuronal cells.

      Significance:

      The authors pair analysis of replication timing and allele-specific expression in clonal populations of primary human cells. They combine these data with previously published data on clones from transformed human cell lines. They identify a number of genomic regions that display asynchronous replication timing in at least one clone and correlate these regions with allele-specific expression of genes within them. They also observe that several interesting gene sets, including genes that are associated with human diseases, map to asynchronously replicating regions. This is a good experimental approach that builds on already published data demonstrating the connection between allelic imbalance and replication timing. However, the authors consistently lean on thin evidence (i.e. a single clone) within a modestly sized dataset (4 clones from 2 donors each) to propose a new model for haploinsufficiency in human disease. The consistent focus on limited elements in the data and perhaps an overreach in the interpretation makes it difficult to appreciate what is in fact a very good experiment.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript describes novel BK channel concatemers as a tool to study the stoichiometry of gamma subunit and mutations in modulation of the channel. Taking the advantage of modular design of BK channel alpha subunit the authors connected S1-S6/1st RCK as two- and four-subunit concatemers and coexpressed with S0-RCK2 to form normal function channels. These concatemers avoided the difficulty that the extracellular N-terminus of S0 was unable to connect with the cytosolic C-terminus of the alpha or gamma subunit, allowing a single gamma subunit to be connected to the concatemers. The concatemers also helped reveal the required stoichiometry of mutant BK subunits in modulating channel function. These include L312A in the deep pore region that altered channel function additively with each additional subunit harboring the mutation, and V288A at the selectivity filter that altered channel function cooperatively only when all four subunits being mutated. These results demonstrate that the concatemers are robust and effective in studying BK channel function and molecular mechanisms related to stoichiometry. The different requirement of the gamma subunit and the mutations stoichiometry for altering channel function is interesting, revealing fundamental mechanisms of how different motifs of the channel protein control function.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript presents well designed experiments with high quality data, which convincingly demonstrate the BK channel concatemers and their utility. The results are clearly written.

      Weaknesses:

      This reviewer did not identify any major concerns with the manuscript.

      Editors' note: We thank you for addressing some of the concerns, adding clarifications and more complete discussions, including further details about experimental protocols. The revised version is significantly improved. Some concerns linger that the biophysical/structural mechanisms underlying the observed phenotypes remain unclear and in some ways are phenomenological. However, the current study is more about the methodology and the mechanisms underlying the stoichiometry dependent effects are perhaps left for a separate study, with more detailed exploration. Congratulations for the excellent work.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The work titled "Geomagnetic and visual cues guide seasonal migratory orientation in the nocturnal fall armyworm, the world's most invasive insect" provided experimental evidence on how geomagnetic and visual cues are integrated, and visual cues are indispensable for magnetic orientation in the nocturnal fall armyworm.

      Strengths:

      It has been demonstrated that the Australian Bogon moth could integrate global stellar cues with the geomagnetic field for long distance navigation. However, data are lacking for other insects. This study suggested that the integration of geomagnetic and visual cues may represent a conserved navigational mechanism broadly employed across migratory insects.

      Weaknesses:

      The visual cues used in the indoor experimental system designed by the authors may have some limitations in ecological relevance. The author may need more explanations on this experimental system.

      In the revised manuscript, the authors have added explanations in the discussion section. I am fine with the revision.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this article, Laaker et al described diverse populations of macrophages and dendritic cells found in and around the cribriform plate in the context of a neuroinflammation caused by an autoimmune disease (EAE). The authors utilize elegant histochemical staining and a nifty approach to sort doublets to interrogate cells that are in contact with one another, presumably in vivo. Notably, they uncover a population of CD11c+CD11b+ cells interacting with M2 macrophages and PDPN+ fibroblasts and lymphatics. These cells are heterogenous but some of these DCs express PD-1, and transcriptional profiling suggests they may have immunosuppressive behavior. Altogether, this article explains well the complexity of cell populations found around the cribriform plate during inflammation, and is suggestive of different interactions that trigger these different phenotypes from immune cells.

      Strengths:

      Beautiful images of a unique CNS: peripheral interface that support a novel scRNA approach to understanding how different cell populations engage in functional interactions in vivo.

      Weaknesses:

      It's currently unclear how the sorted populations reflect in vivo interactions or a propensity to form aggregates during ex vivo processing. The authors address both podoplanin-expressing cells as stromal cells and as lymphatic endothelial cells, but at times it's unclear which of these two populations is being analyzed and which is the most relevant. While novel observations, most of these findings are descriptive and lack functional correlates, and in places, the potential implications could use further discussion.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Almansour et al. investigate whether the proximity of TAD boundaries is directly linked to gene activity. The authors use high-throughput imaging to simultaneously measure the gene activity and physical distances between boundary regions in an allele-specific manner. Using transcriptional inhibitors, expression induction, and acute depletion of CTCF and cohesin, they test whether proximity of boundaries affects, or is affected by, gene activity.

      Strengths:

      The combined use of DNA and RNA imaging enabled simultaneous measurement of boundary proximity and transcriptional status at individual alleles. This allows single-allele correlation between boundary proximity and gene activity at multiple loci across thousands of alleles.

      The use of both transcription inhibitors and transcription stimulation provides compelling and consistent evidence that boundary proximity can be disconnected from a gene's activity. The data convincingly support the conclusion that stable proximity between boundary regions is not required for ongoing transcription at the loci and timescales examined.

      This work strengthens the emerging view that genome organization at the level of domain boundaries does not impose a deterministic control over transcription.

      Weaknesses:

      In untreated cells, the distribution of distance measurements between boundary probes is exceptionally narrow. While depletion of RAD21 clearly demonstrates an ability to detect changes in this distribution, this tight baseline distribution may limit sensitivity to more subtle changes (like those one might expect from transcriptional influences). In addition, the correlation analysis is asymmetric, primarily stratifying by transcriptional status and then comparing boundary distances. Given the central claim that boundary architecture does not influence gene activity, the analysis should be done from the opposite perspective (stratifying by boundary distance).

      Strong disruption of boundary distances is only observed upon depletion of cohesin. Notably, this corresponds with the largest changes in gene activity. In contrast, depletion of CTCF actually had minimal impact on boundary distances and also had minimal impact on gene activity. This makes sense in light of previous work, where live cell imaging demonstrated that cohesin is more important for domain-structure, whereas CTCF is only important for blocking cohesin from continuing on, such that the fully formed loop occurs in a very small percentage of cells. Therefore, the fact that disruption of cohesin (more important for internal domain structure) affects gene activity while disruption of CTCF does not is exceptionally interesting but is lacking from the discussion.

      On a related note, this approach primarily tests the role of boundary interactions rather than domain organization as a whole, and it should be acknowledged that internal domain structures are not directly assessed.

      The comparison to work in other organisms (particularly the comparisons made to Drosophila) should be handled with care. The mechanisms underlying domain formation differ substantially across these systems, particularly regarding the differences in CTCF's role.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Okatsu et al report the cryoEM structure of the PINK1-HSP90-CDC37 complex at 3.08A. To do so, they mutated the PARL cleavage site (F104M) and removed the N-terminal 103 a.a. The construct was co-expressed with HSP90beta and CDC37 in insect cells, as performed previously for other kinase-HSP90-CDC37 complexes (e.g. Raf1). Molybdate was added to prevent cycling between open and closed HSP90 conformations. The initial characterization by single particle cryoEM reveals two HSP90 conformations: closed with CDC37 dissociated, and open with the CTD of HSP90 separated. Thus, the authors crosslinked the complex, which yielded a more homogenous closed structure with clearly visible density for HSP90, CDC37, and PINK1. The structure shows an immature or partially folded kinase domain conformation for PINK1, with the C-lobe bound to HSP90 and the N-lobe unfolded. The C-lobe binds to HSP90 via the HPNI motif in CDC37, which mimics the HPNI motif found in the N-lobe of kinases, and which is conserved across kinases. The main novelty here is the interaction between the C-terminal extension (CTE) of PINK1, which must adopt another conformation than in the folded state, which would otherwise clash with HSP90. The interaction with the CTE is notably mediated by the flexible charged linker (FCL) of HSP90, which is partially disordered. In this conformation, HSP90 would clash with TOM20 binding.

      Strengths:

      Overall, this is well-executed structural biology work, which brings insight into the elements required to fold PINK1. The protein engineering used in this study is of great value and will help others in the field explore the function of PINK1 folding. Understanding the mode of activation of PINK1 is important, and this work brings forward hypotheses that are worthy of testing.

      Weaknesses:

      In the absence of functional assays, the study does not bring much novelty or biological insights. Furthermore, there are already several structures of HSP90-CDC37 bound to partially folded kinases, and a simple superposition of these structures on the model of HsPINK1 allows similar conclusions to be drawn, i.e. that it would bind a folded C-lobe and unfolded N-lobe. Furthermore, a very similar structure of PINK1 bound to HSP90-CDC37 (and FKBP5) was published in Nature Communications in December 2025 by another group. The main novelty from this work (and the paper published in December) is that the CTE adopts a different conformation compared to the mature form, but the implications of this are not explored. Furthermore, the authors propose that HSP90 would compete with TOM20, but what dictates the outcome of this competition? More importantly, how do these results help understand how PINK1 become active? Again, this is not explored.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Aging poses a significant challenge to the regenerative capacity of oligodendrocyte precursor cells (OPCs) to differentiate and myelinate neuronal axons. Myelin abnormalities accumulate with age, and it is likely that the ability of OPCs to differentiate into myelinating oligodendrocytes becomes progressively impaired during aging, leading to inefficient turnover of damaged myelin and oligodendrocytes, as well as reduced adaptive myelination. Understanding the molecular mechanisms underlying the compromised capacity of aged OPCs is therefore critical for addressing age-related white matter decline.

      This study aims to decipher the intrinsic molecular changes that occur in aged OPCs. By profiling differentially expressed transcription factors (TFs) between young and aged OPCs, and by employing a novel bioinformatic tool to identify key TFs that undergo dynamic changes across distinct stages of OPC differentiation, the authors identify Bcl11a as a potential regulator. Bcl11a is highly expressed in young OPCs but markedly reduced in aged cells. Functional experiments further demonstrate that while Bcl11a does not affect OPC proliferation, it significantly promotes the differentiation of aged OPCs. Importantly, this effect is also observed in vivo following demyelinating injury in aged mice.

      While the study provides compelling evidence that BCL11A represents a limiting factor for OPC differentiation during ageing, the downstream targets and molecular mechanisms through which BCL11A exerts its effects are not directly addressed. As such, the work should be interpreted primarily as identifying a key regulatory node rather than a fully defined molecular pathway.

      Overall, this study offers valuable insights into the age-related loss of regenerative capacity in the central nervous system and introduces a computational framework that may be broadly useful for investigating dynamic gene regulation in other biological contexts.

      Major Points:

      (1) MACS mouse anti-A2B5 microbeads are not OPC-specific and may also label astrocyte precursor cells or immature astrocytes. How do the authors justify this caveat? Could some of the claimed "OPC-specific" switch genes in fact be enriched in astrocyte lineage cells?

      (2) Overall, Figures 1 and 2 are not very informative in terms of biological insight. The authors should provide more detail in the main figures regarding the enriched gene sets associated with each of the Type 1-4 switch categories. For example, summarizing the top Gene Ontology terms for each switch type would greatly enhance interpretability.

      (3) A similar issue applies to Figure 3. The authors should explicitly specify the transcription factors in the main figure, particularly the 27 TFs identified through the ENCODE/ReMap2 analysis.

      (4) Have the authors validated Bcl11a expression across different CNS cell types and between young and aged conditions using independent methods such as qPCR, immunofluorescence, or western blotting?

      (5) Regarding OPC aging, an open question is whether the reduced differentiation capacity of aged OPCs is an intrinsic property of the cells themselves or whether it results from prolonged exposure to an aging environment that induces non-cell-autonomous epigenetic or genetic changes, thereby rendering OPCs less efficient at differentiating. It would be helpful if the authors could expand on this point in the Discussion, with reference to relevant previous studies and experimental evidence.

      (6) Do the authors observe a change in the number or density of OPCs between young and aged mice?

      (7) The in vivo characterization of Bcl11a overexpression using the AAV-based approach appears incomplete. Do aged mice overexpressing Bcl11a in Sox10⁺ cells exhibit reduced age-related myelin degeneration under baseline conditions? In the LPC model, do the authors observe differences in lesion size and/or remyelination efficiency?

      (8) Are the authors presenting gSWITCH for the first time in this manuscript? Given that the gSWITCH framework is novel and central to the study, its conceptual contribution could be emphasized more strongly. A brief comparison with existing trajectory- or pattern-based methods-ideally in the main text around Figure 1-would help readers better appreciate its novelty.

      (9) The evolutionary analysis also appears somewhat disconnected from the rest of the study. Could the authors leverage available public datasets to test whether a similar Bcl11a expression trajectory is observed in human oligodendrocyte lineage cells?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary

      This manuscript focuses on the role of social responsibility and guilt in social decision making by integrating neuroimaging and computational modeling methods. Across two studies, participants completed a lottery task in which they made decisions for themselves or for a social partner. By measuring momentary happiness throughout the task, the authors show that being responsible for a partner's bad lottery outcome leads to decreased happiness compared to trials in which the participant was not responsible for their partner's bad outcome. At the neural level, this guilt effect was reflected in increased neural activity in the anterior insula, and altered functional connectivity between the insula and the inferior frontal gyrus. Using computational modeling, the authors show that trial by trial fluctuations in happiness were successfully captured by a model including participant and partner rewards and prediction errors (a 'responsibility' model), and model-based neuroimaging analyses suggested that prediction errors for the partner were tracked by the superior temporal sulcus. Taken together, these findings suggest that responsibility and interpersonal guilt influence social decision making.

      Strengths

      This manuscript investigates the concept of guilt in social decision making through both statistical and computational modeling. It integrates behavioral and neural data, providing a more comprehensive understanding of the psychological mechanisms. For the behavioral results, data from two different studies is included, and although minor differences are found between the two studies, the main findings remain consistent. The authors share all their code and materials, leading to transparency and reproducibility of their methods.

      The manuscript is well-grounded in prior work. The task design is inspired by a large body of previous work on social decision making, and includes the necessary conditions to support their claims (i.e., Solo, Social, and Partner conditions). The computational models used in this study are inspired by previous work, and build on well-established economic theories of decision making. The research question and hypotheses clearly extend previous findings, and the more traditional univariate results align with prior work.

      The authors conducted extensive analyses, as supported by the inclusion of different linear models and computational models described in the supplemental materials. Psychological concepts like risk preferences are defined and tested in different ways, and different types of analyses (e.g., univariate and multivariate neuroimaging analyses) are used to try to answer the research questions. The inclusion and comparison of different computational models provides compelling support for the claim that partner prediction errors indeed influence task behavior, as illustrated by the multiple model comparison metrics and the good model recovery.

      The authors did a good job acknowledging other factors that could differ between the conditions, including the role of other emotions (like empathy) or agency in the decision making process. These additional analyses and nuances strengthen the manuscript and the interpretability of the findings.

      Weaknesses

      As the authors already note, they did not directly ask participants to report their feelings of guilt. The authors clearly describe this limitation, and also note that in addition to guilt, other emotions like empathy could also be at play in interpersonal decisions. Despite this limitation, this study provides insights into the neural and behavioral mechanisms of responsibility and guilt in social decision making, and how they influence behavior.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In this paper, Rayan et al. report that RNA influences cytotoxic activity of the staphylococcal secreted peptide cytolysin PSMalpha3 versus human cells and E. coli by impacting its aggregation. The authors used sophisticated methods of structural analysis and described the associated liquid-liquid phase separation. They also compare the influence of RNA on the aggregation and activity of LL-37, which shows differences from that on PSMalpha3.

      Strengths:

      That RNA impacts PSM cytotoxicity when co-incubated in vitro becomes clear.

      Weaknesses:

      I have two major and fundamental problems with this study:

      (1) The premise, as stated in the introduction and elsewhere, that PSMalpha3 amyloids are biologically functional, is highly debatable and has never been conclusively substantiated. The property that matters most for the present study, cytotoxicity, is generally attributed to PSM monomers, not amyloids. The likely erroneous notion that PSM amyloids are the predominant cytotoxic form is derived from an earlier study by the authors that has described a specific amyloid structure of aggregated PSMalpha3. Other authors have later produced evidence that, quite unsurprisingly, indicated that aggregation into amyloids decreases, rather than increases, PSM cytotoxicity. Unfortunately, yet other groups have, in the meantime, published in-vitro studies on "functional amyloids" by PSMs without critically challenging the concept of PSM amyloid "functionality". Of note, the authors' own data in the present study, which show strongly decreased cytotoxicity of PSMalpha3 after prolonged incubation, are in agreement with monomer-associated cytotoxicity as they can be easily explained by the removal of biologically active monomers from the solution.

      (2) That RNA may interfere with PSM aggregation and influence activity is not very surprising, given that PSM attachment to nucleic acids - while not studied in as much detail as here - has been described. Importantly, it does not become clear whether this effect has biologically significant consequences beyond influencing, again not surprisingly, cytotoxicity in vitro. The authors do show in nice microscopic analyses that labeled PSMalpha3 attaches to nuclei when incubated with HeLa cells. However, given that the cells are killed rapidly by membrane perturbation by the applied PSM concentrations, it remains unclear and untested whether the attachment to nucleic acids in dying cells makes any contribution to PSM-induced cell death or has any other biological significance.

      Overall, the findings can be explained in a much more straightforward way with the common concept of cytotoxicity being due to monomeric PSMs, and the impact of nucleic acids on cytotoxicity being due to lowering of the concentration of that active form by RNA attachment. Further limiting the significance of the findings, whether this interaction has any biological significance on the physiology or infectivity of the PSM producer remains largely unexplored.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      The authors argue that the Emiliano Aguirre Korongo (EAK) assemblage from the base of Bed II at Olduvai Gorge shows systematic exploitation of elephants by hominins about 1.78 million years ago. They describe it as the earliest clear case of proboscidean butchery at Olduvai and link it to a larger behavioral shift from the Oldowan to the Acheulean.

      The manuscript makes a valuable contribution to the Olduvai Gorge record, offering a detailed description of the EAK faunal assemblage. In particular, the paper provides a high-resolution record of a juvenile Elephas recki carcass, associated lithic artifacts, and several green-broken bone specimens. These data are inherently valuable and will be of significant interest to researchers studying Early Pleistocene taphonomy.

      Comments on previous round of revisions:

      The revised manuscript does a good job of using less definitive language, particularly by adding "possible" qualifiers to several interpretations. This addresses the concern about overstatement.

      The main issue raised in the original review, however, remains unresolved. Only two elephant bone specimens at EAK show green-bone breakage interpreted as anthropogenic, and the diagnostic basis for that interpretation is not demonstrated clearly on the EAK material itself. The manuscript discusses a suite of fracture attributes described as diagnostic of dynamic percussive breakage, but these attributes are not explicitly documented on the EAK specimens. Instead, the diagnostic traits are illustrated using material from other Olduvai contexts, and that behavior is then extrapolated to make similar claims at EAK. For a paper making a potentially important behavioral argument, the key diagnostic evidence is not clearly demonstrated at the focal assemblage.

      This problem is evident in the presentation of the EAK specimens. In their response, the authors state that one EAK specimen shows "overlapping scars" and constitutes a "long bone flake"; however, these features are not clearly identifiable in the figures or captions as currently presented. The authors state that Figures S21-S23 clearly indicate human agency, including a long bone flake with overlapping scars and a view of the medullary surface, but it is unclear which specimens or surfaces these descriptions refer to. Figure S21 does appear to show green fracture and is described only as an "elephant-sized flat bone fragment with green-bone curvilinear break." Figure S22 shows the same bone and cortical surface in a different orientation, providing no additional information. In Figure S23, I cannot clearly identify a medullary surface or evidence of green-bone fracture from this image. None of these images clearly demonstrates overlapping scars, and the figures would be substantially improved by explicitly identifying the features described in the text. Even if both EAK specimens are accepted as green-broken, they do not demonstrate the co-occurrence of multiple diagnostic fracture traits such as multiple green breaks, large step fractures, hackle marks, and overlapping scars that the authors state is required to attribute dynamic percussive activity to hominins and address equifinality.

      I appreciate that the authors are careful to state that spatial association between stone tools and fossils alone does not demonstrate hominin behavior, and that they treat the spatial analyses as supportive rather than decisive. While the association is intriguing, the problem is downstream: spatial association is used to strengthen an interpretation of butchery at EAK that still depends on fracture evidence that is not clearly documented at the assemblage level.

      The critique concerning Nyayanga is not addressed in the revision. The manuscript proposes alternative explanations for the Nyayanga material but does not demonstrate why these are more plausible than the interpretation advanced by Plummer et al. (2023). I am not arguing that the Nyayanga material should be accepted as butchery; rather, showing that trampling is possible does not establish it as more probable than cut marks. In contrast, the EAK material is treated as evidence of butchery on the basis of evidence that, in my opinion, is more limited and less clearly demonstrated. Even if this is not the authors' intention, the uneven treatment removes an earlier megafaunal case from the comparison and strengthens the case for interpreting EAK as marking a behavioral shift toward megafaunal butchery by excluding other early cases.

      While I remain concerned about how the EAK evidence is documented and interpreted, I think the manuscript is appropriate for publication and will generate useful discussion. Readers can then assess for themselves whether the available evidence supports the strength of the behavioral claims.

      [Editors' note: the authors are encouraged to make this version the Version of Record.]

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      King et al. present several sets of experiments aimed to address potential impact of UV irradiation on human mitochondrial DNA as well as possible role of mitochondrial TFAM protein in handling UV irradiated mitochondrial genomes. The carefully worded conclusion derived from the results of experiments performed with human HeLa cells, in vitro small plasmid DNA, with PCR-generated human mitochondrial DNA and with UV-irradiated small oligonucleotides is presented in the title of the manuscript: "UV irradiation alters TFAM binding to mitochondrial DNA". Authors also interpret results of somewhat unconnected experimental approaches to speculate that "TFAM as a potential DNA damage sensing protein in that it promotes UVC-dependent conformational changes in the [mitochondrial] nucleoids, making them more compact. They further propose that such a proposed compaction might trigger removal of UV-damaged mitochondrial genomes as well as facilitates replication of undamaged mitochondrial genomes.

      Strengths:

      (1) Authors presented convincing evidence that a very high dose (1500 J/m2) of UVC applied to oligonucleotides covering the entire mitochondrial DNA genome alleviates sequence specificity of TFAM binding (Figure 3). This high dose was sufficient to cause UV-lesions in a large fraction of individual oligonucleotides. The method has been developed in the lab of one of the corresponding authors (ref. 74) and is technically well refined. This result can be published as is or in combination with other data.

      (2) Manuscript also presents AFM evidence (Figure 4) that TFAM, which was long known to facilitate compaction of mitochondrial genome (Alam et al., 2003; PMID 12626705 and follow up citations), causes in vitro compaction of a small pUC19 plasmid and that approximately 3 UVC lesions per plasmid molecule results in slight albeit detectable increase in TFAM compaction of the plasmid.

      Both results are discussed in line of a possible extrapolation to in vivo phenomena. The revised version of the discussion includes a clear statement that no in vivo support was provided within the set of experiments presented in the manuscript.

      Weaknesses:

      The experiments presented on Figures 3 and 4 may support the speculation that TFAM can carry protective role of eliminating mitochondrial genomes with bulky lesions by way of excessive compaction and removal damaged genomes from the in vivo pool, however extensive additional studies that would go well beyond the experiments described in this paper are needed to fill the gap between this set of results and the proposed explanations.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Chen et al addresses an important aspect of pathogenesis for mycobacterial pathogens, seeking to understand how bacterial effector proteins disrupt the host immune response. To address this question the authors sought to identify bacterial effectors from M. tuberculosis (Mtb) that localize to the host nucleus and disrupt host gene expression as a means of impairing host immune function. Their revised manuscript has strengthened their observations by performing additional experiments with BCG strains expressing tagged MgdE.

      Strengths:

      The researchers conducted a rigorous bioinformatic analysis to identify secreted effectors containing mammalian nuclear localization signal (NLS) sequences, which formed the basis of quantitative microscopy analysis to identify bacterial proteins that had nuclear targeting within human cells. The study used two complementary methods to detect protein-protein interaction: yeast two-hybrid assays and reciprocal immunoprecipitation (IP). The combined use of these techniques provides strong evidence of interactions between MgdE and SET1 components and suggests the interactions are in fact direct. The authors also carried out rigorous analysis of changes in gene expression in macrophages infected with MgdE mutant BCG. They found strong and consistent effects on key cytokines such as IL6 and CSF1/2, suggesting that nuclear-localized MgdE does in fact alter gene expression during infection of macrophages. The revised manuscript contains additional biochemical analyses of BCG strains expressing tagged MgdE that further supports their microscopy findings.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript examines how disease-associated hyperphosphorylation disrupts tau's role as a cooperative microtubule-binding regulator of intracellular transport. Using in vitro reconstitution assays and live-cell imaging in iPSC-derived neurons, the authors employ phosphomutant tau constructs (E14 to mimic hyperphosphorylation, AP to prevent phosphorylation) at 14 disease-associated residues to isolate phosphorylation effects independent of expression system-dependent PTM heterogeneity. The results show that hyperphosphorylated tau fails to form cooperative envelope-like structures on microtubules, instead binding diffusely and dissociating rapidly. In contrast, wild-type and phospho-resistant tau form cohesive envelopes that regulate motor protein access. At the single-molecule level, hyperphosphorylation reduces KIF5C inhibition while maintaining or enhancing KIF1A inhibition through altered processivity and detachment rates. In live neurons, hyperphosphorylated tau phenocopies tau knockout conditions, weakening tau-mediated inhibition of lysosome transport and increasing processive motility. The authors quantify tau binding using Gaussian mixture model-based image analysis and measure tau kinetics via FRAP, demonstrating that hyperphosphorylation-induced loss of cooperative binding correlates with dysregulated organelle transport. These findings establish a mechanism by which phosphorylation-driven disruption of tau's gatekeeper function on microtubules compromises axonal transport prior to aggregation in tauopathies. The paper provides interesting new knowledge for the field, but there are outstanding concerns that could be further addressed by the authors to strengthen and clarify the current manuscript:

      (1) Lack of Phosphatase-Treated Control and Explicit WT Phosphorylation Quantification

      Wild-type tau expressed in insect and mammalian cells is known to be phosphorylated by endogenous kinases (eg, GSK3, CDK5, MARK). The manuscript acknowledges this in the Discussion but provides no phosphatase-treated lysate control or quantification of endogenous phosphorylation on WT tau via phospho-specific Western blots. This leaves ambiguity about whether observed differences between WT and E14 reflect purely the introduced mutations or confounding baseline differences in phosphostate content.

      (2) Limited Normalization of Motor Effects to Measured Tau Lattice Occupancy

      Although kinesin trajectories are classified inside vs. outside tau envelopes (inherently normalizing to local tau density), motor parameters are not systematically reported as functions of tau fluorescence intensity across all constructs. Co-purifying MAPs or microtubule-modifying enzymes in cell lysates is not quantified or excluded, leaving residual uncertainty about tau-specificity of observed motor inhibition. This should be at least acknowledged in the results section.

      (3) Insufficient Citation of Prior Neuronal Tau Envelope Evidence

      In the Introduction, the authors state, "it was an open question if tau forms envelopes in neurons," but this understates existing evidence. Tan et al. (2019) report tau neuronal staining consistent with envelope formation, while Siahaan et al. (2021) provide more direct evidence in non-neuronal cells. The framing should acknowledge and integrate these prior findings.

      (4) Unclear Wording on Expression System-Dependent Phosphorylation

      The sentence "The phosphostate of tau is strongly dependent on the expression system" requires rewording. It is ambiguous whether this refers to the final phosphostate achieved after expression or the inherent phosphorylating capacity of each system. Clearer language would strengthen the methodological justification.

      (5) Insufficient Quantification of Motor and Lysosome Transport Effect Magnitudes in Results Section

      The data on molecular motor motility and lysosome transport are densely described. The magnitude of effects (fold-changes, percentage differences) should be explicitly stated in the Results section when first presenting findings to orient readers to biological significance. For example, effect magnitudes for lysosome run lengths, velocities, and directional bias should be quantified in text, not left to figure inspection.

      (6) Incomplete Discussion of Projection Domain Necessity for Envelope Formation

      The Discussion states the projection domain is "a critical regulator of both tau-tau and tau-microtubule interactions," but does not engage with prior domain dissection work. Tan et al. (2019) found that the entire projection domain is not necessary for envelope formation in vitro. The authors should discuss which projection domain regions are specifically regulated by phosphorylation vs. required for cooperativity, providing a more nuanced interpretation than implied by their current framing.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      To discover peptides that interact with autophagy-related protein LC3B and profile the key binding determinants, the authors screened a library of ~500,000 36-residue peptides derived from the human proteome using bacterial cell-surface display. Analysis of the screening data revealed exceptions to the reported LIR motif and a strong preference for negatively charged residues adjacent to the LIR.<br /> These results support a refinement of the LIR motif definition and expand the network of candidate LC3B interaction partners.

      Strengths:

      High-throughput approach.

      Weaknesses:

      Lack of in vitro data and molecular dynamics simulations.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this paper, the authors have characterized Rv2577 as a Fe3+/Zn2+ -dependent metallophosphatase and a nucleomodulin protein. The authors have also identified His348 and Asn359 as critical residues for Fe3+ coordination. The authors show that the proteins encode for two nuclease localization signals. Using C-terminal Flag expression constructs, the authors have shown that MmpE protein is secretory. The authors have prepared genetic deletion strains and show that MmpE is essential for intracellular survival of M. bovis BCG in THP-1 macrophages, RAW264.7 macrophages and mice model of infection. The authors have also performed RNA-seq analysis to compare the transcriptional profiles of macrophages infected with wild type and mmpE mutant strain. The relative levels of ~ 175 transcripts were altered in mmpE mutant infected macrophages and majority of these were associated with various immune and inflammatory signalling pathways. Using these deletion strains, the authors proposed that MmpE inhibits inflammatory gene expression by binding to the promoter region of vitamin D receptor. The authors also showed that MmpE arrests phagosome maturation by regulating the expression of several lysosome associated genes such as TFEB, LAMP1, LAMP2 etc. These findings reveal a sophisticated mechanism by which a bacterial effector protein manipulates gene transcription and promotes intracellular survival.

      Strength:

      The authors have used a combination of cell biology, microbiology and transcriptomics to elucidate the mechanisms by which Rv2577 contributes to intracellular survival.

      Weakness:

      The authors should thoroughly check the mice data and show individual replicate values in bar graphs.

      Comments on revisions:

      Thanks to the authors for addressing the concerns raised during the review of the original manuscript. The data is now presented with clarity, and discrepancies in mouse experiments have also been addressed with additional experiments.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Metabolic dysfunction associated liver disease (MASLD) describes a spectrum of progressive liver pathologies linked to life style-associated metabolic alterations (such as increased body weight and elevated blood sugar levels), reaching from steatosis over steatohepatitis to fibrosis and finally end stage complications, such as liver failure and hepatocellular carcinoma. Treatment options for MASLD include diet adjustments, weight loss, and the receptor-β (THR-β) agonist resmetirom, but remain limited at this stage, motivating further studies to elucidate molecular disease mechanisms to identify novel therapeutic targets.

      In their present study, the authors aim to identify early molecular changes in MASLD linked to obesity. To this end, they study a cohort of 109 obese individuals with no or early-stage MASLD combining measurements from two anatomic sides: 1. bulk RNA-sequencing and metabolomics of liver biopsies, and 2. metabolomics from patient blood. Their major finding is that GTPase-related genes are transcriptionally altered in livers of individuals with steatosis with fibrosis compared to steatosis without fibrosis.

      Major comments:

      (1) Confounders (such as (pre-)diabetes)

      The patient table shows significant differences in non-MASLD vs. MASLD individuals, with the latter suffering more often from diabetes or hypertriglyceridemia. Rather than just stating corrections, subgroup analyses should be performed (accompanied with designated statistical power analyses) to infer the degree to which these conditions contribute to the observations. I.e., major findings stating MASLD-associated changes should hold true in the subgroup of MASLD patients without diabetes/of female sex and so forth (testing for each of the significant differences between groups).

      Post-rebuttal update: The authors have performed the requested sub-group analysis and find the gene signatures hold for the non-diabetic sub-cohort, but not the diabetic subgroup. They denote a likely interaction between fibrosis and diabetes, that was not corrected for in the original analysis.

      Post-post-rebuttal update: I thank the authors for having added Figure 5-figure supplement 2 to show this analysis.

      (2) External validation

      Additionally, to back up the major GTPase signature findings, it would be desirable to analyze an external dataset of (pre)diabetes patients (other biased groups) for alternations in these genes. It would be important to know if this signature also shows in non-MASLD diabetic patients vs. healthy patients or is a feature specific to MASLD. Also, could the matched metabolic data be used to validate metabolite alterations that would be expected under GTPase-associated protein dysregulation?

      Post-rebuttal update: The authors confirm that with the present data, insulin resistance cannot be fully ruled out as a confounder to the GTP-ase related gene signature. They however plan future mouse model experiments to study whether the GTPase-fibrosis signature differs in diabetic vs. non-diabetic conditions.

      (3) 3D liver spheroid MASH model, Fig. 6D/E

      This 3D experiment is technically not an external validation of GTPase-related genes being involved in MASLD, since patient-derived cells may only retain changes that have happened in vivo. To demonstrate that the GTPase expression signature is specifically invoked by fibrosis the LX-2 set up is more convincing, however, the up-regulation of the GTPase-related genes upon fibrosis induction with TGF-beta, in concordance with the patient data, needs to be shown first (qPCR or RNA-seq). Additionally, the description of the 3D model is too uncritical. The maintenance of functional PHHs is a major challenge (PMID: 38750036, PMID: 21953633, PMID: 40240606, PMID: 31023926). It cannot be ruled out that their findings are largely attributable to either 1) the (other present) mesenchymal cells (i.e., mesenchyme-derived cells, such as for example hepatic stellate cells, not to be confused with mesenchymal stem cells, MSCs), or 2) related to potential changes in PHHs in culture, and these limitations need to be stated.

      Post-rebuttal update: To address the concern of other cells than hepatocytes contributing to the observed effects in culture, the authors performed TGF-beta treatment in independent mono-cultures (Figure R4): LX-2 and hepatocytes, and the spheroid system. Surprisingly, important genes highlighted in Figure 6E for the spheroid system (RAB6A, ARL4A, RAB27B, DIRAS2) are all absent from this qPCR(?) validation experiment. The authors evaluate instead RAC1, RHOU, VAV1, DOCK2, RAB32. ­In spheroids, RHOU and RAB32 are down-regulated with TGF-B. In hepatocytes DOCK2 and RAC seemed up-regulated. They find no difference in these genes in LX-2 cells. Surprisingly, ACTA2 expression values are missing for LX-2 cells. Together, it is hard to judge which individual cell type recapitulates the changes observed in patients in this validation experiment, as the major genes called out in Figure 6E are not analyzed.

      Post-post-rebuttal update: I thank the authors for having added Figure 6-figure supplement 5 to show qPCR results for this question.

      Unfortunately, the 3D liver spheroid model used (as presente­d in PMID39605182) lacks important functional validation tests of maintained hepatocyte identity in culture (at the very least Albumin expression and secretion plus CYP3A4 assay). This functional data (acquired at the time point in culture when the RNA expression analysis in 6E was performed) is indispensable prior to stating that mature hepatocytes cause the observed effects.

      Post-post-rebuttal update: I thank the authors for having added more references, I still think a quick functional validation of the system (at the time point in culture when the RNA expression analysis in 6E was performed) would be beneficial.

      (4) Novelty / references

      Similar studies that also combined liver and blood lipidomics/metabolomics in obese individuals with and without MASLD (e.g. PMID 39731853, 39653777) should be cited. Additionally, it would benefit the quality of the discussion to state how findings in this study add new insights over previous studies, if their findings/insights differ, and if so, why.

      Post-rebuttal update: The authors have included the studies into their discussion.

      Overall post-post-rebuttal update: I thank the authors for having added more data, important discussion points, and references, and have no further requests.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper uses an optogenetic approach to either activate or inhibit separate neural pathways projecting to the ventral CA1 hippocampal subregion, from either CA3 or the entorhinal cortex. The authors report that manipulation of the vCA3→vCA1 pathway affected behavioural performance on a number of tasks: elevated plus maze, open field, Vogel conflict test and freezing behaviour to both context and a trace CS cue. In contrast, optogenetic manipulation of neural activity in the EC→vCA1 pathway only affected behaviour on the trace CS/context fear memory test but had no effect on the elevated plus maze, open field or Vogel conflict test. The authors suggest different roles for these two ventral hippocampal pathways in fear versus anxiety.

      Strengths:

      This is an interesting study addressing an important question in a highly topical subject area. The experiments are well conducted and have generated interesting and important data.

      Weaknesses:

      While I am broadly sympathetic to the overall narrative of the paper, I have some questions/comments around the specific interpretation of the results presented. In my view, the authors' claims may not be completely supported by their data, but the data are interesting nonetheless.

      In terms of the framework presented by the authors for interpreting their data, many would argue that freezing (or at least reduced activity/behavioural inhibition) to the context provides a readout of conditioned anxiety rather than fear. In this sense, the context is a signal of potential threat (i.e. the context becomes associated with both shock and with the absence of shock) and thus generates anxiety rather than fear. Likewise, the trace CS cue could be considered as an ambiguous predictor of shock in that the shock doesn't occur straight away. In contrast, a punctate CS cue which co-terminates with shock would be a reliable signal of imminent threat and thus generates a fear response. Thus, it might be argued that all of the assays adopted by the authors are readouts of anxiety (albeit comprising tests of both conditioned and unconditioned anxiety). For example, from the authors' perspective, it is not clear a priori why the Vogel conflict test is considered anxiety, but contextual freezing is considered fear? Indeed, in the Discussion, the authors mention another study in which the data from the Vogel conflict test align with fear assays rather than anxiety tests. Can the authors elaborate on their distinction? I appreciate that, in practice, it might be difficult to distinguish between fear and anxiety at the behavioural level in rodents (although opposing effects of fear and anxiety on pain responses might be one option). At the very least, this issue merits further discussion.

      Another question is whether rather than representing a qualitative difference between the contributions of the vCA3→vCA1 and EC→vCA1 pathways to different aspects of fear/anxiety behaviours, the different results reflect a quantitative difference between the magnitude of effects in vCA1 that are generated from optogenetic manipulation of the two pathways, coupled with the possibility that behaviour on the trace CS/context fear memory task is more sensitive to manipulation than the "anxiety tests". The possibility that vCA3→vCA1 stimulation is more effective is potentially supported by the c-fos measurements in vCA1. vCA3→vCA1 stimulation produced a much bigger vCA1 c-fos response (approx. 350% c-fos cell activation; see Figure 1E) compared to activation of the EC→vCA1 pathway (approx. 170% c-fos cell activation; see Figure 4E).

      Furthermore, in some studies, there seem to be quite large differences between the laser OFF conditions for the different groups (which presumably one would not expect to be different). For example, compare laser OFF for the Inhibition group for time in open arms of EPM in Figure 5C (> 40%) versus laser OFF for the Inhibition group for time in open arms of EPM in Fig. 2C (< 20%). This could potentially result in ceiling effects, such that it is very hard to see a further increase in time in the open arms from a level already above 40% when the laser is then switched on. This could complicate the interpretation of the laser ON condition.

      Likewise, there is a big difference between the behavioral performance of the two SHAM groups in Figure 3 (compare SHAM in 3 B, C and SHAM in 3 D, E). How is this explained? Could this generate a ceiling effect? This may also merit some discussion. More details on the SHAM procedure(s) in the main manuscript may also be helpful.

      According to Figure 3A, the test of freezing response to the trace Tone CS is conducted in a different context from the conditioning context. The data presented in Figure 3 for tone fear are the levels of freezing during the presentation of this cue in the different contexts. It would be important to present both pre-CS and CS freezing levels here to determine how much of the freezing is actually driven by the punctate tone CS. The pre-CS freezing levels in this different context would also provide a nice control for the contextual fear conditioning.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors identify Leiomodin-1 (LMOD1) as a key regulator of early myogenic differentiation, demonstrating its interaction with SIRT1 to influence SIRT1's cellular localization and gene expression. The authors propose that LMOD1 translocates SIRT1 from the nucleus to the cytoplasm to permit the expression of myogenic differentiating genes such as MYOD or Myogenin.

      Strengths:

      A major strength of this work lies in the robust temporal resolution achieved through a time-course mass spectrometry analysis of in vitro muscle differentiation. This provides novel insights into the dynamic process of myogenic differentiation, often under explored in terms of temporal progression. The authors provide a strong mechanistic case for how LMOD1 exerts its role on muscle differentiation which opens avenues to modulate.

      Weaknesses:

      In the revised manuscript, the authors begin to translate their in vitro findings to an in vivo context by examining SIRT1 expression across a regeneration time course (Fig. 4I). They observe an increase in SIRT1 expression concomitant with LMOD1, supporting a potential role for SIRT1 in myogenic differentiation. Future studies will be required to provide deeper mechanistic insight into SIRT1 function in vivo.

      Discussion:

      Overall, the study emphasizes the importance of understanding the temporal dynamics of molecular players during myogenic differentiation and provides valuable proteomic data that will benefit the field. Future studies should explore whether LMOD1 modulates the nuclear-cytoplasmic shuttling of other transcription factors during muscle development and how these processes are mechanistically achieved. Investigating whether LMOD1 can be therapeutically targeted to enhance muscle regeneration in contexts such as exercise, aging, and disease will be critical for translational applications. Additionally, elucidating the interplay among LMOD1, LMOD2, and LMOD3 could uncover broader implications for actin cytoskeletal regulation in muscle biology. The authors have nicely updated their discussion.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      This manuscript by Carmona, Zagotta, and Gordon is generally well-written. It presents a crude and incomplete structural analysis of the voltage-gated proton channel based on measured FRET distances. The primary experimental approach is Förster Resonance Energy Transfer (FRET), using a fluorescent probe attached to a noncanonical amino acid. This strategy is advantageous because the noncanonical amino acid likely occupies less space than conventional labels, allowing more effective incorporation into the channel structure.

      Fourteen individual positions within the channel were mutated for site-specific labeling, twelve of which yielded functional protein expression. These twelve labeling sites span discrete regions of the channel, including P1, P2, S0, S1, S2, S3, S4, and the dimer-connecting coiled-coil domain. FRET measurements are achieved using acridon-2-ylalanine (Acd) as the acceptor, with four tryptophan or four tyrosine residues per monomer serving as donors. In addition to estimating distances from FRET efficiency, the authors analyze full FRET spectra and investigate fluorescence lifetimes on the nanosecond timescale.

      Despite these strengths, the manuscript does not provide a clear explanation of how channel structure changes during gating. While a discrepancy between AlphaFold structural predictions and the experimental measurements is noted, it remains unclear whether this mismatch arises from limitations of the model or from the experimental approach. No further structural analysis is presented to resolve this issue or to clarify the conformational states of the protein.

      The manuscript successfully demonstrates that Acd can be incorporated at specific positions without abolishing channel function, and it is noteworthy that the reconstituted proteins function as voltage-activated proton channels in liposomes. The authors also report reversible zinc inhibition of the channel, suggesting that zinc induces structural changes in certain channel regions that can be reversed by EDTA chelation. However, this observation is not explored in sufficient depth to yield meaningful mechanistic insight.

      Overall, while the study introduces an interesting labeling strategy and provides valuable methodological observations, the analysis appears incomplete. Additional structural interpretation and mechanistic insight are needed.

      Major Points

      (1) Tryptophan and tyrosine exhibit similar quantum yields, but their extinction coefficients differ substantially. Is this difference accounted for in your FRET analysis? Please clarify whether this would result in a stronger weighting of tryptophan compared to tyrosine.

      (2) Is the fluorescence of acridon-2-ylalanine (Acd) pH-dependent? If so, could local pH variations within the channel environment influence the probe's photophysical properties and affect the measurements?

      (3) Several constructs (e.g., K125Tag, Y134Tag, I217Tag, and Q233Tag) display two bands on SDS-PAGE rather than a single band. Could this indicate incomplete translation or premature termination at the introduced tag site? Please clarify.

      (4) In Figure 5F, the comparison between predicted FRET values and experimentally determined ratio values appears largely uninformative. The discussion on page 9 suggests either an inaccurate structural model or insufficient quantification of protein dynamics. If the underlying cause cannot be distinguished, how do the authors propose to improve the structural model of hHV1 or better describe its conformational dynamics?

      (5) Cu²⁺, Ru²⁺, and Ni²⁺ are presented as suitable FRET acceptors for Acd. Would Zn²⁺ also be expected to function as an acceptor in this context? If so, could structural information be derived from zinc binding independently of Trp/Tyr?

      (6) The investigated structure is most likely dimeric. Previous studies report that zinc stabilizes interactions between hHV1 monomers more strongly than in the native dimeric state. Could this provide an explanation for the observed zinc-dependent effects? Additionally, do the detergent micelles used in this study predominantly contain monomers or dimers?

      (7) hHV1 normally inserts into a phospholipid bilayer, as used in the reconstitution experiments. In contrast, detergent micelles may form monolayers rather than bilayers. Could the authors clarify the nature of the micelles used and discuss whether the protein is expected to adopt the same fold in a monolayer environment as in a bilayer?

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The paper by Stephens and co-workers provides important mechanistic insight into how hyaluronan synthase (HAS) coordinates alternating GlcNAc and GlcA incorporation using a single Type-I catalytic centre. Through cryo-EM structures capturing both "proofreading" and fully "inserted" binding poses of UDP-GlcA, combined with detailed biochemical analysis, the authors show how the enzyme selectively recognizes the GlcA carboxylate, stabilizes substrates through conformational gating, and requires a priming GlcNAc for productive turnover.

      These findings clarify how one active site can manage two chemically distinct donor sugars while simultaneously coupling catalysis to polymer translocation.

      The work also reports a DDM-bound, detergent-inhibited conformation that possibly illuminates features of the acceptor pocket, although this appears to be a purification artefact (it is indeed inhibitory) rather than a relevant biological state.

      Overall, the study convincingly establishes a unified catalytic mechanism for Type-I HAS enzymes and represents a significant advance in understanding HA biosynthesis at the molecular level.

      Strengths:

      There are many strengths.

      This is a multi-disciplinary study with very high-quality cryo-EM and enzyme kinetics (backed up with orthogonal methods of product analysis) to justify the conclusions discussed above.

      Comments on revisions:

      The suggestions made in the initial comments have all been responded to very well.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      This manuscript presents a macroevolutionary approach to identification of novel high-level antibiotic resistance determinants that takes advantage of the natural genetic diversity within a genus (mycobacteria, in this case) by comparing antibiotic resistance profiles across related bacterial species and then using computational, molecular, and cellular approaches to identify and characterize the distinguishing mechanisms of resistance. The approach is contrasted with "microevolutionary" approaches based on comparing resistant and susceptible strains of the same species and approaches based on ecological sampling that may not include clinically relevant pathogens or related species. The potential for new discoveries with the macroevolution-inspired approach is evident in the diversity of drug susceptibility profiles revealed amongst the selected mycobacterial species and the identification and characterization of a new group of rifamycin-modifying ADP-ribosyltransferase (Arr) orthologs of previously described mycobacterial Arr enzymes. Additional findings that intra-bacterial antibiotic accumulation does not always predict potency within this genus, that M. marinum is a better proxy for M. tuberculosis drug susceptibility than the commonly used saprophyte M. smegmatis, and that susceptibility to semi-synthetic antibiotic classes is generally less variable than susceptibility to antibiotics more directly derived from natural products strengthen the claim that the macroevolutionary lens is valuable for elucidating general principles of susceptibility within a genus.

      There are some limitations to the work. The argument for the novelty of the approach could be better articulated. While the opportunities for new discoveries presented by identification of discrepant susceptibility results between related species is evident, it is less clear how the macroevolutionary approach is further leveraged for the discovery of truly novel resistance mechanisms. The example of the discovery of Arr-X enzymes presented here relied upon foundational knowledge of previously characterized Arr orthologs. There is less clarity about what the pipeline would look like for discovery of previously unknown determinants when one is agnostic to putative mechanisms. From the point at which interspecies differences in susceptibility are noted, does the framework still remain distinct from other discovery frameworks and approaches?

      While the experimentation and analyses performed are generally well designed and rigorous, there are a few instances in which broad claims are based on inferences from sample sets or data sets that are, at present, too limited to provide robust support. For example, the claim that rifampicin modification, and precisely ADP-ribosylation, is the dominant mechanism of resistance to rifampicin in mycobacteria is still a bit premature or at least an over-generalization, as other enzymatic modification mechanisms and other mechanisms such as helR-mediated dissociation of rifampicin-stalled RNA polymerases, efflux, etc were not examined. CRISPR interference was used in a demonstrative example to support this assertion, but would need to be applied more systematically to be more conclusive. The general claim that intra-bacterial antibiotic accumulation does not predict potency in mycobacteria may be another over-generalization based on the limited set of drugs and species studied.

      Comments on revisions:

      Discussion, lines 321-323: "We found that resistance to these antibiotics in mycobacteria do not correlate with by uptake/efflux mechanisms in the species tested..." is an over-generalization and conflicts with the following statement on lines 199-201: "for BDQ we could observe some correlation between antibiotic potency and [BDQ]IB which could be indicative of efflux playing a role in antibiotic efficacy. Given that the current statement in the Discussion only applies to 2 of 3 drugs tested, a more specific or nuanced interpretation seems warranted.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, submitted to Review Commons (journal agnostic), Coward and colleagues report on the role of insulin/IGF axis in podocyte gene transcription. They knocked out both the insulin and IGFR1 mice. Dual KO mice manifested a severe phenotype, with albuminuria, glomerulosclerosis, renal failure and death at 4-24 weeks.

      Long read RNA sequencing was used to assess splicing events. Podocyte transcripts manifesting intron retention were identified. Dual knock-out podocytes manifested more transcripts with intron retention (18%) compared wild-type controls (18%), with an overlap between experiments of ~30%.

      Transcript productivity was also assessed using FLAIR-mark-intron-retention software. Intron retention w seen in 18% of ciDKO podocyte transcripts compared to 14% of wild-type podocyte transcripts (P=0.004), with an overlap between experiments of ~30% (indicating the variability of results with this method). Interestingly, ciDKO podocytes showed downregulation of proteins involved in spliceosome function and RNA processing, as suggested by LC/MS and confirmed by Western blot.

      Pladienolide (a spliceosome inhibitor) was cytotoxic to HeLa cells and to mouse podocytes but no toxicity was seen in murine glomerular endothelial cells.

      The manuscript is generally clear and well-written. Mouse work was approved in advance. The four figures are generally well-designed, bars/superimposed dot-plots.

      Methods are generally well described.

      Comments on revised version:

      Coward and colleagues have done an excellent job of responding to all the reviewer comments.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors revisit the role of DR6 in axon degeneration following physical injury (Wallerian degeneration), examining both its effects on axons and its role in regulating the Schwann cell response to injury. Surprisingly, and in contrast to previous studies, they find that DR6 deletion does not delay the rate of axon degeneration after injury, suggesting that DR6 is not a mediator of this process.

      Overall, this is a valuable study. As the authors note, the current literature on DR6 is inconsistent, and these results provide useful new data and clarification. This work will help other researchers interpret their own data and re-evaluate studies related to DR6 and axon degeneration.

      Strengths:

      (1) The use of two independent DR6 knockout mouse models strengthens the conclusions, particularly when reporting the absence of a phenotype.

      (2) The focus on early time points after injury addresses a key limitation of previous studies. This approach reduces the risk of missing subtle protective phenotypes and avoids confounding results with regenerating axons at later time points after axotomy.

      Comments on revisions:

      I thank the authors for their thorough responses to my previous comments. The revisions have addressed the points raised and have improved the clarity and overall quality of the manuscript. I appreciate the effort taken to strengthen the presentation of the work.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors set out to determine how a contact-dependent bacterial antagonistic system contributes to the ability of specific bacterial strains to persist within a complex, native gut community derived from wild animals. Rather than focusing on simplified or artificial models, the authors aimed to examine this system in a biologically realistic setting that captures the ecological complexity of the gut environment. To achieve this, they combined controlled laboratory experiments with animal colonization studies and sequencing-based tracking approaches that allow individual strains and mobile genetic elements to be followed over time.

      Strengths:

      A major strength of the work is the integration of multiple complementary approaches to address the same biological question. The use of defined but complex communities, together with in vivo experiments, provides a strong ecological context for interpreting the results. The data consistently show that the antagonistic system is not required for initial establishment but plays a critical role in long-term strain persistence. This insight that moves beyond traditional invasion-based views of microbial competition. The observation that transferable genetic elements can confer only temporary advantages, and may impose longer-term costs depending on community context, adds important nuance to current understanding of microbial fitness.

      Weaknesses:

      Overall, there is not a lack of evidence, but a deliberate trade-off between ecological realism and mechanistic resolution, which leaves some causal pathways open to interpretation.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Aranaz-Novaliches describes a study of Tent5a knockout (KO) mice. The authors demonstrate a severe enamel phenotype in these mice, characterized by hypoplastic enamel with markedly disturbed organization of enamel rods. Additionally, they report that Amelx expression is reduced in the mutant compared to wild type (WT) at both mRNA and protein levels. The authors also examine the distribution and co-localization of Amelx and Ambn in ameloblasts and the enamel matrix. These findings are novel and provide important insights into the role of polyadenylation in regulating enamel matrix protein translation and its downstream effects on protein trafficking, secretion, and enamel formation. However, I have multiple concerns regarding the data and its analysis that need to be addressed.

      Specific comments:

      (1) Introduction

      The structure of the introduction is unconventional. The first sentence of the third paragraph states that the goal of this study is to investigate the role of TENT5A in enamel formation, but the rest of the paragraph focuses on enamel in general. The following paragraph claims that the authors discovered the effects of Tent5a deficiency on enamel formation for the first time, yet most of the paragraph discusses enamel proteins and amelogenesis. The choice of references is problematic. The authors cite Sire et al. (2007), which focuses on the origin and evolution of enamel mineralisation genes, a poor fit for this context. A more appropriate source would be a recent review, e.g., Lacruz R et al., Physiol Rev. 2017;97(3):939-993. Ambn constitutes ~5% of the enamel matrix, not 10%. Reference 16 (Martin) is not ideal for murine enamel; more detailed studies exist, e.g., Smith CE et al., J Anat. 2019;234(2):274-290. References on protein-protein interactions (17-19) are also off: Wald et al. studied Ambn-Ambn and Amelx-Amelx interactions separately; Fang et al. focused on Amelx self-assembly only; Kawasaki and Weiss addressed gene evolution. The authors should cite work from Moradian-Oldak's lab, which clearly demonstrates Amelx-Ambn interactions. The last paragraph contains confusing statements, e.g., "TENT5a localized in rER promotes the expression of AmelX and other secreted protein transcripts." Also, the manuscript does not convincingly show disruption of self-assembly beyond overall enamel disorganization.

      (2) Results

      (a) microCT

      Quantitative microCT analyses of WT and KO enamel are needed. At a minimum, enamel thickness and density should be measured from at least three biological replicates per genotype. Severe malocclusion in KO mice is not discussed. The mandibular incisor appears abraded, while the maxillary incisor is overgrown. Is maxillary enamel as affected as mandibular? The age of the mice is not specified. High-resolution scans of isolated mandibular incisors described in Materials and Methods should be included.

      (b) SEM

      The term "disorganized crystal structure" is incorrect - SEM cannot reveal crystal structure. This requires electron/X-ray diffraction or vibrational spectroscopy. Likely, the authors meant disorganized rods and interrod enamel. The phrase "weak HAP composition" is unclear. Can the increase in interprismatic matrix volume and reduction in rod diameter be quantified? Since rods are secreted by distal Tomes' processes and interrod by proximal Tomes' processes, an imbalance may indicate alterations in the ameloblast secretory apparatus. TEM studies of demineralized incisors are recommended to assess ameloblast ultrastructure.

      (c) EMP expression

      There is a discrepancy between WB images and data in Figure S2a. In Figure 2b, Amelx band is stronger than Ambn (expected, as Amelx is ~20× more abundant), but in Figure S2a, Ambn appears higher. How was protein intensity in Fig. S2a calculated? Optical density? Was normalization applied? Co-localization in Figure 2d was performed on LS8 cells, which lack a true ameloblast phenotype. Amelx expression in LS8 cells is ~2% of actin (Sarkar et al., 2014), whereas in murine incisors, it is ~600× higher than actin (Bui et al., 2023). Ambn signal is weaker than Amelx, which may affect co-localization results.

      (d) Splicing products in Figure 2e

      All isoforms except one contain exon 4. The major functional splice product of Amelx lacks exon 4 (Haruyama et al. J Oral Biosci. 2011;53(3):257-266), and there are some indications that the presence of exon 4 can lead to enamel defects. Can it be that the observed phenotype is due to the presence of exon 4?

      (e) Co-localization studies

      The presented co-localization studies do not demonstrate self-assembly defects; they reflect enamel microstructural defects observed by SEM. Self-assembly occurs at the nanoscale and cannot be assessed by light microscopy except with advanced optical methods. Conclusions based on single images are weak. The authors should perform experiments at least on three biological replicates per genotype, quantify results (e.g., total gray values per ROI of equal pixel size), and use co-localization metrics such as Mander's coefficient. Claims about alternative secretory pathways require much stronger evidence.

      The authors should avoid implying that mRNA is inside the ER lumen. It is likely associated with the outer rER surface, which is expected. The resolution of the methods used is insufficient to confirm ER lumen localization.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors studied cognitive control and attention in response to mnemonic prediction errors (MPEs): situations in which the external reality violates internal memory-based predictions. The behavioral task first established strong versus weak predictions, and then either confirmed or violated these predictions. The authors examined markers of cognitive control (frontal theta) and attention (posterior alpha suppression, pupil response) while strong and weak predictions were confirmed or violated. They found increased cognitive control (frontal theta) for strong MPEs, which correlated with subsequent memory. Markers of attention (alpha suppression, pupil response) also accompanied strong MPEs but did not correlate with subsequent memory. Pupil response was investigated using an interesting approach that decomposes the response into different components, finding that different components respond earlier or later and show different correlations with MPEs and their strength. The authors also investigated how EEG, reaction time, and pupil responses correlated with one another, providing further insight into the mechanism underlying the response to MPEs. Together, the study points toward multiple control and attention mechanisms involved in MPE response and memory.

      Strengths:

      The study has a clear behavioral paradigm with multiple measures - behavioral, EEG, and pupillometry that offer an investigation into different aspects of MPE response and memory.

      The study is also very comprehensive in looking at multiple phases in processing MPEs: the prediction phase (prior to the violation), the response to MPEs, and subsequent memory of MPEs, all within one study. Specifically, the link between neural mechanisms and subsequent memory is a major advancement, as most prior studies did not include this component. Mechanisms underlying subsequent memory of MPEs are theoretically important, as a primary function of MPEs is to promote learning and memory. As the authors mention, the different neural and pupillary signals are not robustly correlated, suggesting multiple mechanisms underlying MPE detections, which is interesting, offers avenues for future research, and can facilitate a better theory of how MPEs are processed in the brain. Finally, the decomposition of pupil response into different components and their correlation with behavior (RT during match/MPE detection) is interesting.

      Weaknesses:

      The methods are rigorous, and the claims are mostly supported by the data, but there are a few weaknesses or places that could be improved:

      (1) The authors conduct PCA analysis to identify different components of the pupillary response to MPE and relate them to behavior. Specifically, the authors identify components PC3 and PC4, which they interpret as related to MPE. However, some parts of the interpretation could be clearer or better justified:

      (a) The authors refer to PC4 as "post-decision cognitive processing". But, given that RT was between .5-.7s, and PC3 peaked after more than 1s, wouldn't it be cautious to interpret PC3 as post-decision as well?

      (b) MPEs overall elicit longer RTs in this study, suggesting that long RT is a behavioral marker of MPE. Nonetheless, the authors argue on p. 12: "Altogether, these findings indicate that when stronger mnemonic predictions (as indexed by shorter RTs) were violated." And, PC3 is correlated with shorter RTs for mismatches, meaning that behaviorally, these trials were more similar to matches. Thus, how do the authors interpret shorter versus longer RTs for MPEs, and what processes do these RT reflect?

      (2) The brain to pupil relationship (p. 13-14): If I understand correctly, this was done on a trial-by-trial basis, but the high temporal resolution allows doing the analysis in a time-resolved manner - does brain activity at a certain time point preceding/following the pupil response correlate with the pupil response? It might be that cognitive control influences attention mechanisms or vice versa (because there is some overlap in the response). Although not testing causality, this temporally resolved correlation would be an interesting way to start probing how signals might influence each other.

      (3) The relationships the authors find between brain measures and pupil components were largely not specific to mismatches/matches. However, are they specific to this task? I think it would benefit the paper to show that these relationships are potentially specific to making match/mismatch memory decisions, versus, e.g., any stimulus processing. For example, the authors could run the same analyses locked to stimuli in the study phase, anticipating a different pattern, if indeed these findings are specific to the associative memory task.

      (4) During memory retrieval (i.e., before the probe), the authors find that frontal theta, a marker of cognitive control, was associated on a trial-by-trial basis with more posterior alpha (i.e., less alpha suppression, potentially reflecting less attention), and that this association was stronger for weaker predictions. The authors interpreted this as weaker predictions necessitating more cognitive control, and that more cognitive control was recruited specifically in trials where retrieval included less content (memory reinstatement) to attend to. Generally, cognitive control is recruited to facilitate memory retrieval. If so, one possible interpretation is that this correlation reflects cognitive control effort that has failed to produce enough memory reinstatement. The other possibility is that this correlation reflects more specific retrieval of the correct probe, without retrieval of interfering items (i.e., overall less content). I believe that the former explanation predicts that this correlation would be associated with longer RTs (more difficult decisions), while the latter predicts shorter RTs (easier decisions due to successful retrieval), at least for matches.

      (5) In section 3, the authors found a positive relationship between alpha during memory retrieval and PC3 during MPE. If I understood correctly, this means that less attention during retrieval (less suppression) is correlated with a stronger PC3 response. How do the authors interpret this? Maybe along the same lines as in (5), specifically retrieving the correct information (i.e., less retrieved content to attend to) means a stronger prediction, leading to a stronger MPE, and a stronger MPE response, as reflected by PC3?

      (6) The results with subsequent memory are important and address a major gap in the field that largely did not relate neural effects of MPE to subsequent memory. However, one major limitation of the study is that the authors did not test memory for matches. I understand the logic of avoiding testing matches. Because matches were repeated more times in the study, it's not a fair comparison, and could change participants' overall criterion for old/new decisions. However, one possibility would have been to test only the weak prediction; this could have given some specificity to the neural subsequent memory findings.

      (7) The authors nicely characterized the different PC of pupillary MPE response. But, with respect to subsequent memory, they only present pupil size. Unless there is some methodological reason that prevents testing subsequent memory on the PC, I think this will be very informative about the potential mechanisms underlying memory of MPE.

      (8) This paper includes many interesting findings, and I am not sure how they all come together into a cohesive mechanistic understanding of MPE response and subsequent memory. I think the paper would benefit from either a conceptual mechanism figure or, in the Discussion, have a summary of a proposed mechanism integrating the findings together.

      (9) Relatedly, the section "Immediate, strength-sensitive neurocognitive impacts of MPEs" does not link the arguments to specific data points, so it's hard to follow which data specifically the authors are interpreting.

      (10) If I understand correctly, the authors did not find improved memory for strong compared to weak MPE. First, I think this behavioral result should be incorporated in the main paper and in the interpretation of the results. Second, given that the neural effects the authors tested either correlated with memory for strong MPE or did not show a relationship with memory, what neural/pupil response could explain memory for weak MPE?