On 2016 Sep 13, Josh Bittker commented:

@Christopher Southan- Thanks, we're going to try to resolve the PubChem links by adding aliases in Pubchem of the short names used in the paper (BRD####); the compounds are registered in Pubchem with their full IDs but not the shortened IDs.

On 2016 Sep 10, Christopher Southan commented:

This post resolves the PubChem links https://cdsouthan.blogspot.se/2016/09/structures-from-latest-antimalarial.html

On 2016 Sep 16, Jonathan Eisen commented:

The first author Erica Hartmann wrote a blog post about this work at microBEnet. See http://microbe.net/2016/09/13/antimicrobial-chemicals-and-antibiotic-resistance-in-dust-now-open-access/.

On 2016 Sep 09, Cristiane N Soares commented:

The question regarding CHIK tests mentioned by Thomas Jeanne is really relevant in this case. In fact, we were concerned about co-infections, and after the paper acceptance we performed IgM and IgG CHIK tests in serum and CSF. All samples were negatives for CHIKV.

On 2016 Sep 08, Thomas Jeanne commented:

In their case report, Soares et al. do not mention testing for chikungunya virus (CHIKV), which has considerable overlap with Zika virus (ZIKV) in both epidemiologic characteristics and clinical presentation. Brazil experienced a large increase in chikungunya cases in early 2016 (Collucci C, 2016), around the time of this patient's illness, and recent case series in Ecuador (Zambrano H, 2016) and Brazil (Sardi SI, 2016) have demonstrated coinfection with ZIKV and CHIKV. Moreover, a recently published study of Nicaraguan patients found that 27% of those who tested positive for any of ZIKV, CHIKV, or DENV (dengue virus) with multplex RT-PCR also tested positive for one or both of the other viruses (Waggoner JJ, 2016). CHIKV itself has previously been linked to encephalitis including fatal encephalitis (Gérardin P, 2016), and some have speculated that adverse interactions could result from coinfection with two or more arboviruses (Singer M, 2017). Coinfection with chikungunya as a contributing factor in this case cannot be ruled out without appropriate testing.

On 2017 Mar 07, Xiaoping Liu commented:

The program and source code can be obtained in https://github.com/xp-liu/SSN.git

On 2016 Sep 08, Clive Bates commented:

This paper does not actually address the question posed in the title: Should electronic cigarette use be covered by clean indoor air laws?

The question it does address is more like "how much discomfort do vapers say they experience when the same law is applied to them as to smokers?".

The authors do not show that this is the foundation on which a justification for applying clean indoor air laws to vaping should rest. There is no basis to assume that it is.

Addressing the question set in the title is ultimately a matter of property rights. The appropriate question is: "what is the rationale for the state to intervene using the law to override the preferred vaping policy of the owners or managers of properties?".

The authors cannot simply assume that everyone and at all times shares their preference for 'clean indoor air'. Vapers may prefer a convivial vape and a venue owner may be pleased to offer them a space to do it. Unless this is creating some material hazard to other people, why should the law stop this mutually agreed arrangement? Simply arguing that it doesn't cause that much discomfort among that many vapers isn't a rationale. If the law stops them doing what they would like to do there is a welfare or utility loss to consider.

It is likely that many places will not allow vaping - sometimes for good reasons. But consider the following cases:

1. A bar wants to have a vape night every Thursday

2. A bar wants to dedicate one room where vaping is permitted

3. In a town with three bars, one decides it will cater for vapers, two decide they will not allow vaping

4. A bar manager decides on balance that his vaping customers prefer it and his other clientele are not that bothered – he’d do better allowing it

5. A hotel wants to allow vaping in its rooms and in its bar, but not in its restaurant, spa, and lobby

6. An office workplace decides to allow vaping breaks near the coffee machine to save on wasted smoking break time and encourage smokers to quit by switching

7. A care home wants to allow an indoor vaping area to encourage its smoking elderly residents to switch during the coming winter instead of going out in the cold

8. A vape shop is trying to help people switch from smoking and wants to demo products in the shop…

9. A shelter for homeless people allows it to make its clients welcome

10. A day centre for refugees allows it instead of smoking

These are all reasonable accommodations of vaping for good reasons. But the law is much too crude to manage millions of micro-judgments of this nature. It can only justify overruling them with a blanket prohibition if it is preventing harm to bystanders or workers who are exposed to hazardous agents at a level likely to cause a material risk.

A much better role for the state is to advise owners and managers on how to make these decisions in an informed way. This is what Public Health England has done [1], and that, in my view, is a more enlightened and liberal philosophy. Further, I suspect it is more likely help to convert more smokers to vaping, giving a public health dividend too.

[1] Public Health England, Use of e-cigarettes in public places and workplaces, July 2016.

On 2017 Apr 07, Anita Bandrowski commented:

This paper is the basis of part of an example Authentication of Key Biological Resources document that we and the UCSD library has put together.

Please find it here: http://doi.org/10.6075/J0RB72JC

On 2016 Dec 20, Huang Nan commented:

This paper introduced a very peculiar observation, which states that 18% and 42% of rural and urban Beijing female, with avaerge age in the early 60s, are sunbed users (Table 1). This is highly counter-intuitive as there would be less than 1% sunbed user exists in any Chinese population. Despite this observation, the authors claimed in the text that: "Only a few individuals had a sunburn history or used sunbeds."

On 2017 Aug 08, Christopher Tench commented:

Could you possibly provide the coordinates analysed otherwise it is difficult to interpret the results.

On 2016 Nov 26, Atanas G. Atanasov commented:

Excellent work, many thanks to the authors for the great overview.

On 2018 Jan 03, Thomas Hünig commented:

Thank you for bringing this up in the Commons. Yes, it is unfortunate that somewhere in production process, the "µ" symbols were converted to "m", which sometimes happens when fonts are changed. Fortunately, the mistake becomes obvious by its sheer magnitude (1000x off), and the corresponding paper in Eur. J. Immunol. with the original, correct data is referenced. My apologies that we did not spot this mistake before publication.

On 2017 Dec 31, Mark Milton commented:

The article includes several unfortunate typos in a vital piece of information. The article states that "These encouraging findings led to the design of a new healthy volunteer trial, which started at 0.1 mg/kg, i.e. a 1000- fold lower dose than the one applied in the ill-fated trial of 2006 (Clinical trials identifier: NCT01885624). After careful monitoring of each patient, the dose was gradually increased to a maximum of 7 mg/kg, still well below what had been applied in the first HV trial." The units listed for the dose are mg/kg but should have been µg/kg. The starting dose was 0.1 µg/kg and the highest dose evaluated was 7 µg/kg (Tabares et al 2014). The dose administered in the TGN1412 FIH study was 100 µg/kg. Although this typo does not detract from the overall conclusions from the study, it is sad to see that this error was not noticed by the authors or reviewers given the near tragic circumstances of the FIH clinical trial for TGN1412.

On 2016 Dec 02, Pierre Fontana commented:

Tailored antiplatelet therapy in patients at high cardiovascular risk: don’t prematurely throw the baby out with the bathwater

The clinical impact of a strategy based on a platelet function assay to adjust antiplatelet therapy has been intensively investigated. However, large prospective interventional studies failed to demonstrate the benefit of personalizing antiplatelet therapy. One of the concerns was that the interventions were delayed and partially effective, contrary to earlier smaller trials that employed incremental clopidogrel loading doses prior to PCI Tantry US, 2013 Bonello L, 2009.

Cayla and co-workers should be commended for their efforts in the ANTARCTIC trial. Although the trial is pragmatic, important limitations may account for the neutral effect of the intervention, including an antiplatelet adjustment performed between D14 and D28 after randomization. Early personalization is also supported by data from the TRITON-TIMI38 trial where half of the ischemic events (4.7/9.9%) of the prasugrel-treated arm occurred 3 days after randomization. Stratifying the analysis on the timing of events before and after D28 may provide some insight, though underpowered for a definitive conclusion.

The prognostic value of the platelet function assay and cut-off used would also be of great interest in the control group. If, the assay and cut-off values were not prognostic in this elderly population, personalization would be bound to fail.

Finally, the results of ANTARCTIC restricted to the subgroup of patients with hypertension (73% of patients), thus accumulating 3 of the risk factors related to the clinical relevance of high platelet reactivity Reny JL, 2016 would also be very interesting. Further research should not only evaluate other pharmacological approaches but also early personalization and measurement of platelet reactivity in the control group.

J.-L. Reny, MD, PhD and P. Fontana, MD, PhD

On 2016 Dec 16, Leon van Kempen commented:

RNA in FFPE tissue is commonly degraded. NanoString profiling will still yield reliable results when RNA is degraded to 200nt fragments.

On 2016 Sep 03, Adrian Barnett commented:

I should have cited this paper which shows how random funding can de-centralise funding away from ingrained ideas and hence increase overall efficiency: Sharar Avin "Funding Science by Lottery", volume 1, European Studies in Philosophy of Science

On 2016 Sep 19, G L Francis commented:

I have read your publication in PNAS titled ‘Metabolic features of chronic fatigue syndrome’ with much interest, this significant contribution has at last provided a definitive publication of a realistic evidence based diagnostic test based on a panel of blood metabolites - this could provide a more robust diagnostic base for future rational treatment studies in ‘CFS’.

Athough there are many more complex and critical questions to be asked, I will keep mine simple. I took particular note of the authors comments “When MTHFD2L is turned down in differentiated cells, less mitochondrial formate is produced and one-carbon units are directed through Methylene-THF toward increased SAM synthesis and increased DNA methylation” (from Figure S6. Mitochondrial Control of Redox, NADPH, Nucleotide, and Methylation Pathways legend). I recently read the paper, 'Association of Vitamin B12 Deficiency with Homozygosity of the TT MTHFR C677T Genotype, Hyperhomocysteinemia, and Endothelial Cell Dysfunction' Shiran A et al. IMAJ 2015; 17: 288–292, and wondered whether the gene variations in the individuals described within that publication, could be over represented in your subjects, mind you the size of your study population probably answers my own question; and no doubt many mechanisms that lead to a perturbation of this pathway exist, of which this could conceivable be just one of many, even if a minor contributor. Moreover, there does seem to be a difference between the two papers in terms of the particular pertubations on incidence of cardiovascular disease and outcomes?

On 2016 Dec 18, Laura Williams commented:

Our online journal club discussed this paper on February 22, 2016. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z_tWLjjahGY

On 2016 Dec 18, Laura Williams commented:

Our online journal club discussed this paper on March 28, 2016. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hR96uLrta7w

On 2017 Feb 19, james brophy commented:

The authors conclude prophylactic ICD implantation "was not associated with a significantly lower long-term rate of death from any cause than was usual clinical care”. Given the observed hazard rate for death was 0.87; 95% confidence interval [CI], 0.68 to 1.12; P=0.28), this conclusion is quite simply wrong, unless a potential 32% reduction in death is considered clinically unimportant. The aphorism "Absence of proof is not proof of absence" is worth recalling.

On 2016 Aug 29, David Keller commented:

If the investigators were not blinded, how was bias excluded from their scoring of the balance, stability and TUG tests?

The placebo, nocebo, Pygmalion and other expectation effects can be substantial in Parkinson's disease. Unblinded investigators can transmit cues regarding their own expectations to patients, thereby affecting the patients' response to therapy. In addition, unblinded investigators are affected by bias in their subjective evaluations of patient response to therapy, and even in their measurement of patient performance on relatively objective tests. What was done to minimize these sources of bias from contaminating the results of this single-blinded study? Were the clinicians who scored the BBS, TUG and LOS tests aware of the randomization status of each patient they tested?

In addition, I question whether the results reported for the LOS test in the Results section of the abstract are statistically significant. The patients assigned to exergaming scored 78.9 +/- 7.65 %, which corresponds to a Confidence Interval of [71.25 - 86.55] %, while the control patient scores of 70.6 +/- 9.37 % correspond to a confidence interval of [61.23 - 79.97] %. These two confidence intervals overlap from 71.25 % to 79.97 %, a range which includes the average score of the exergaming patients.

If a follow-up study is planned, the blinding of investigators, especially those who score the patients' test performances, would reduce bias and expectation effects. Increasing the number of subjects assigned to active treatment and to control treatment would improve the statistical significance of the results.

On 2017 Jan 13, Craig Brown commented:

I would welcome more research in this matter, also. As a clinician, for many years I have found this to yield significant visual and cognitive functional improvement in many patients with mild to moderate cerebral atrophy and vascular dementia, particularly those with MTHFR polymorphisms.

Over several years, the benefit has been reliable. Patients who quit it, often come back and and restart it, because they notice loss of functional improvements that returns upon resumption.

Because Folic acid does not cross the Blood Brain Barrier, it can build up blocking active l-methylfolate transport into the brain and retina, also impairing DHFR, Dihydrofolate Reductase which impairs methylation and BH4 recycling- essential for serotonin, dopamine, and norepinephrine production- which in turn are essential for mood, attention,sleep and memory.

I find it works optimally when combined with Folic Acid avoidance- to reduce BBB blockade, riboflavin to enhance MTHFR methylation, and Vitamin D to enhance folate absorption. It has a long record of safety, with few serious side effects, for a condition that has few effective treatments. All this is to say, more research is surely a good thing here, but excessive skepticism deprives patients of a chance to try a low risk frequently helpful but not magic option.

It is classified as a Medical Food, in part, because our FDA does not encourage formulating drug products that have multiple active ingredients, particularly ingredients that occur naturally in foods and in human metabolism. Medical Foods were implemented by the FDA specifically for higher concentrations of natural food based substances important to address genetic metabolic impairments, in this case, impairment of DFHR and MTHFR; which may contribute to cerebral ischemia, atrophy, and dementia.

A final thought, double blind experiments are the ideal gold standard, however, the elderly, and the demented are considered high risk populations and have such strong protections in place at the NIH, that placebo studies are difficult to justify to, or get approval from, any Institutional Review Board IRB, when previous benefit has been shown, because that amounts to knowingly withholding treatment. We may have to content ourselves with non-placebo trials.

On 2016 Nov 09, Gayle Scott commented:

This company (Nestle Health Science - Pamlab, Inc)-sponsored study was neither randomized nor blinded. Tests of cognitive function and QOL were not included.The study will certainly be cited in advertising for CerefolinNAC.

It is important to note CerefolinNAC is a "medical food," an FDA designation for products designed to meet the nutritional needs of patients whose needs cannot be met through foods, such as inborn errors of metabolism, eg PKU (patients must avoid phenylalanine), maple syrup urine disease (patients must avoid branched chain amino acids).

Another medical food for Alzheimer's disease is Axona, caprylic triglyceride, a medium chain triglyceride found in coconut oil. Unlike dietary supplements, medical foods can be labeled for medical conditions such as Alzheimer’s disease. Dietary supplements must be labeled for so-called “structure and function claims” and cannot make claims to treat or prevent disease. For example, ginkgo may be labeled “supports memory function,” but not “for treatment of dementia.” A drug or medical food could be labeled “for treatment of dementia associated with Alzheimer’s disease.”

Think of medical foods as hybrids of prescription drugs and dietary supplements, more closely resembling dietary supplements in terms of regulation. Packaging for medical foods is similar to prescription products with package inserts, NDC numbers, and usually “Rx only” on the labels. But like dietary supplements, medical foods are not required to be evaluated for safety or efficacy, and the FDA does not require approval before marketing. "Caution: Federal law prohibits dispensing without prescription" is not required on product labeling. The FDA specifies only that these products are for use with medical supervision;. however, a medical food manufacturer may market a product to be dispensed only on physician request.

Message to patients regarding CerefolinNAC: much more research is needed.

On 2017 May 16, Michael Stillman commented:

I read this article with great interest. And with significant concern.

A sweeping review by the Department of Health and Human Services' Office for Human Research Protections of Dr. Harkema's spinal cord injury research program (https://www.hhs.gov/ohrp/compliance-and-reporting/determination-letters/2016/october-17-2016-university-louisville/index.html accessed May 16, 2017) documented numerous instances of sloppy methodologies and potential frank scientific misconduct. This report included evidence of: a) missing source documents, leading to an inability to verify whether protocols had been followed or captured data was valid; b) multiple instances of unapproved deviations from experiments protocols; c) participants having been injured while participating in translational research experiments; d) a failure to document and adjudicate adverse events and to report unanticipated problems to the IRB; and e) subjects being misled about the cost of participating in research protocols. Dr. Harkema's conduct was so concerning that the National Institute of Disability, Independent Living, and Rehabilitation Research (NIDILRR) prematurely halted and defunded one of her major research projects (http://kycir.org/2016/07/11/top-u-of-l-researcher-loses-federal-funding-for-paralysis-study/ accessed May 26, 2017).

I approached the editors of "Journal of Neurotrauma" with reports from both Health and Human Services (above) and University of Louisville's IRB and asked them three questions: a) were they adequately concerned with this study's integrity to consider a retraction; b) were they adequately concerned to consider publishing a "concerned" letter to the editor questioning the study's integrity and reliability; and c) were they interested in reviewing adverse events associated with the experiments. Their response: "no," "no," and "no."

I call on the editorial board of "Journal of Neurotrauma" to carefully inspect all documents and data sets related to this work. I would further expect them to review all adverse events reports, and to demand evidence that they've been reviewed and adjudicated by an independent medical monitor or study physician. Short of this, this work remains specious.

On 2016 Nov 03, Mohammad Al-Daydamony commented:

Excellent job my dear colleague. Keep going.

On 2016 Sep 07, Donald Forsdyke commented:

PATERNITY OF INNATE IMMUNITY?

The accolades cast on scientists we admire include that of paternity. Few will dispute that Gregor Mendel was the father of the science we now call genetics. At the outset, this paper (1) hails Metchnikoff (1845-1916) as “the father of innate immunity.” However, an obituary of US immunologist Charles Janeway (1943-2003) hails him similarly (2). Can a science have two fathers? Well, yes. But not if an alternative of Mendelian stature is around. While paternity is not directly ascribed, a review of the pioneering studies on innate immunity of Almroth Wright (1861-1947) will perhaps suggest to some that he is more deserving of that accolade (3).

1.Gordon S (2016) Phagocytosis: the legacy of Metchnikoff. Cell 166:1065-1068 Gordon S, 2016

2.Oransky I (2003) Charles A Janeway Jr. Lancet 362:409.

3.Forsdyke DR (2016) Almroth Wright, opsonins, innate immunity and the lectin pathway of complement activation: a historical perspective. Microbes & Infection 18:450-459. Forsdyke DR, 2016

On 2016 Aug 27, Martine Crasnier-Mednansky commented:

Thanks, the movies are a must-see!

On 2017 Jun 10, Shawn McGlynn commented:

With the trees from this phylogeny paper now available, we can resolve the discussion between myself and the authors (below) and conclude that there is no evidence that nitrogenase was present in the LUCA as the authors claimed in their publication.

In their data set, the authors identified two clusters of proteins which they refer to as NifD; clusters 3058 and 3899. NifD binds the metal cluster of nitrogenase and is required for catalysis. In the author's protein groups, cluster 3058 is comprised of 30 sequences, and 3899 is comprised of 10 sequences. Inspection of these sequences reveals that neither cluster contains any actual NifD sequences. This can be said with certainty since biochemistry has demonstrated that the metal cofactor coordinating residues Cys²⁷⁵ and His⁴⁴² (using the numbering scheme from the Azotobacter vinelandii NifD sequence) are absolutely required for activity. NONE of the 40 sequences analyzed by the authors contain these residues. Therefore, NONE of these sequences can have the capability to bind the nitrogenase metal cluster, and it follows that none of them would have the capacity to reduce di-nitrogen. The authors have not analyzed a single nitrogenase sequence in their analysis and are therefore disqualified from making claims about the evolution of the protein; the claims made in this paper about nitrogenase cannot be substantiated with the data which have been analyzed. The sequences contained in the author's "NifD" protein clusters are closely related homologs related to nitrogenase cofactor biosynthesis and are within a large family of related proteins (which includes real NifD proteins, but also proteins involved in bacteriochlorophyll and Ni porphyrin F430 biosynthesis). While the author's analyzed proteins are more related to nitrogen metabolism than F430 or bacteriochlorophyll biosynthesis, they are not nitrogenase, but are nitrogenase homologs that complete assembly reactions.

Other than not having looked at any sequences which would be capable of catalyzing nitrogen reduction, the presentation of two "NifD" clusters highlights important problems with the methods used in this paper which affect the entire analysis and conclusions. First, two clusters were formed for one homologous group, which should not have occurred if the goal was to investigate ancestry. Second, by selecting small clusters from whole trees, the authors were able to prune the full tree until they recovered small sub trees which show monophyly of archaea and bacteria. However it was incorrect to ignore the entire tree of homologs and present only two small clusters from a large family. This is "cherry" picking to the extreme - in this case it is "nitrogenase" picking, but it is very likely that this problem of pruning until the desired result sullies many if not all of the protein families and conclusions in the paper; for example the radical SAM tree was likely pruned in this same way with the incorrect conclusion being reached (like nitrogenase, a full tree of radical SAM does not recover the archaea bacteria split in protein phylogenies either). Until someone does a complete analysis with full trees the claims of this paper will remain unproven and misleading since they are based on selective sampling of information. It would seem that the authors have missed the full trees whilst being lost in mere branches of their phylogenetic forest of 286,514 protein clusters.

In a forthcoming publication, I will discuss in detail the branching position of the NifD homologs identified by the authors, as well as the possible evolutionary trajectory of the whole protein family with respect to the evolution of life and the nitrogen cycle on this planet in more detail, including bona fide NifD proteins which I have already made comment on below in this PubMed Commons thread.

On 2017 Mar 20, Madeline C Weiss commented:

The trees and also the alignments for all 355 proteins are available on our resources website:

http://www.molevol.de/resources/index.html?id=007weiss/

On 2016 Dec 25, Shawn McGlynn commented:

Unfortunately, the points raised by Professor Martin do not address the problem I raised in my original comment, which I quote from below: "nitrogenase protein phylogeny does not recover the monophyly of the archaea and bacteria." As I wrote, the nitrogenase protein is an excellent example of violating the author's criterion of judging a protein to be present in the LUCA by virtue that "its tree should recover bacterial and archaeal monophyly" (quoted from Weiss et alia). Therefore it should not be included in this paper's conclusions.

Let's be more specific about this and look at a phylogenetic tree of the nitrogenase D peptide (sometimes referred to as the alpha subunit). This peptide binds the catalytic metal-sulfur cluster and its phylogeny can be viewed on my google site https://sites.google.com/site/simplyshawn/home.

I colored archaeal versions red and bacterial black. You can see that this tree does not recover the monophyly of the archaea and bacteria and therefore should not be included in the author's set of LUCA proteins.

Is what I display the result of a tree construction error? Probably not, this tree looks pretty much the same to every other tree published by various methods, so it seems to correctly reflect sequence evolution as we understand it today. The tree I made just has more sequences; it can be compared directly with Figure 1 in Leigh 2000, Figure 2 in Raymond et alia 2004, and Figure 2 in Boyd et alia 2011. Unfortunately, Weiss and others do not include any trees in their paper, so it is impossible to know what they are deriving their conclusions from, but it would be very difficult to imagine that they have constructed a tree different from all of these.

Could it be that all these archaea obtained nitrogenase by horizontal gene transfer after the enzyme emerging in bacteria? Possibly, although this would imply that it was not in the LUCA as the authors claim.

Could it be that the protein developed in methanogens and was then transferred into the bacterial domain? Yes, and Boyd and others suggested just this in their 2011 Geobiology paper. This would also mean that the protein was not in the LUCA.

Could it be that the protein was present in the LUCA as Weiss and co-authors assert? Based on phylogenetic analysis, no.

As Prof. Martin writes - there certainly is more debate to be had about nitrogenase age than was visible in my first comment. However, we can be sure that the protein does not recover the archaea bacteria monophyly, and should have not been included in the authors paper.

Prof. Martin might likely counter my arguments here by saying something about metal dependence and treating different sequences separately (for example Anf, Vnf, MoFe type). However let us remember that the sequences are all homologous. Metal binding is one component of the nitrogenase phenotype, but all nitrogenase are homologous and descend from a common ancestor.

Now that we can be sure that the nitrogenase does not conform to the author's second criterion for judging presence in the LUCA, let us examine if the protein conforms to the first criterion: "the protein should be present in at least two higher taxa of bacteria and archaea". In fact, all nitrogenase in archaea that are found in the NCBI and JGI databases are only within the methanogenic euryarchaeota. Unfortunately, Weiss and coauthors do not define what "higher taxa" means to them in their article, but it should be questioned if having a gene represented by members of a single phylum actually constitutes being present within "two higher taxa". Archaea are significantly more diverse than what is observed in the methanogenic euryarchaeota. Surely, if a protein was present in the LUCA, it would be a bit more widely distributed, and it would be easy to argue that the presence of nitrogenase in only one phylum provides evidence that it does not conform to the authors criterion number one. Thus, the picture that emerges from a closer look at nitrogenase phylogeny and distribution is that the protein violates both of the authors criteria for inclusion in the LUCA protein set.

Let me summarize:

1) Nitrogenase does not recover the bacterial and archaeal monophyly and therefore violates the author's criterion number 2.

2) Nitrogenase in archaea is only found within the methanogenic euryarchaeota and is not broadly distributed, and therefore also seems to violate the authors criterion number 1.

3) From a phylogenetic perspective, the nitrogenase protein should not be included as a candidate to be present in the LUCA.

On 2016 Oct 12, William F Martin commented:

There is an ongoing debate in the literature about the age of nitrogenase.

In his comment, McGlynn favours published interpretations that molybdenum nitrogenase arose some time after the Great Oxidation Event 2.5 billion years ago (1). A different perspective on the issue is provided by Stüecken et al. (2) who found evidence for Mo-nitrogenase before 3.2 billion years ago. Our recent paper (3) traced nitrogenase to LUCA, but also suggested that methanogens are the ancestral forms of archaea, in line both with phylogenetic (4) and isotope (5) evidence for the antiquity of methanogens, and with a methanogen origin of nitrogenase (6).

Clearly, there had to be a source of reduced nitrogen at life’s origin before the origin of nitrogenase or any other enzyme. Our data (3) are consistent with the view that life arose in hydrothermal vents and independent laboratory studies show that dinitrogen can be reduced to ammonium under simulated vent conditions (7,8). There is more to the debate about nitrogenase age, methanogen age, and early sources of fixed nitrogen than McGlynn’s comment would suggest.

1. Boyd, E. S., Hamilton, T. L., and Peters, J. W. (2011). An alternative path for the evolution of biological nitrogen fixation. Front. Microbiol. 2:205. doi:10.3389/fmicb.2011.00205

2. Stüeken EE, Buick R, Guy BM, Koehler MC. Isotopic evidence for biological nitrogen fixation by molybdenum-nitrogenase from 3.2 Gyr. Nature 520, 666–669 (2015)

3. Weiss MC, Sousa FL, Mrnjavac N, Neukirchen S, Roettger M, Nelson-Sathi S, Martin WF: The physiology and habitat of the last universal common ancestor. Nat Microbiol (2016) 1(9):16116 doi:10.1038/nmicrobiol.2016.116

4. Raymann, K., Brochier-Armanet, C. & Gribaldo, S. The two-domain tree of life is linked to a new root for the Archaea. Proc. Natl Acad. Sci. USA 112, 6670–6675 (2015).

5. Ueno, Y., K. Yamada, N. Yoshida, S. Maruyama, and Y. Isozaki. 2006. Evidence from fluid inclusions for microbial methanogenesis in the early archaean era. Nature 440:516-519.

6. Boyd, E. S., Anbar, A. D., Miller, S., Hamilton, T. L., Lavin, M., and Peters, J. W. (2011). A late methanogen origin for molybdenum-depen- dent nitrogenase. Geobiology 9, 221–232.

7. Smirnov A, Hausner D, Laffers R, Strongin DR, Schoonen MAA. Abiotic ammonium formation in the presence of Ni-Fe metals and alloys and its implications for the Hadean nitrogen cycle. Geochemical Transactions 9:5 (2008) doi:10.1186/1467-4866-9-5

8. Dörr M, Kassbohrer J, Grunert R, Kreisel G, Brand WA, Werner RA, Geilmann H, Apfel C, Robl C, Weigand W: A possible prebiotic formation of ammonia from dinitrogen on iron sulfide surfaces. Angew Chem Int Ed Engl 2003, 42(13):1540-1543.

On 2017 Mar 09, Tanai Cardona commented:

I agree with Shawn regarding the fact that "Nitrogenase does not recover the bacterial and archaeal monophyly and therefore violates the author's criterion number 2."

I have a different explanation for why nitrogenase was recovered in LUCA. And this has to do with the tetrapyrrole biosynthesis enzymes related to nitrogenases that, in fact, do recover monophyly for Archaea and Bacteria. Namely, the enzyme involved in the synthesis of the Ni-tetrapyrrole cofactor, Cofactor F430, required for methanogenesis in archaea; and the enzymes involved in the synthesis of Mg-tetrapyrroles in photosynthetic bacteria. Still to this date, the subunits of the nitrogenase-like enzyme required for Cofactor F430 synthesis are annotated as nitrogenase subunits.

So, what Weiss et al interpreted as a nitrogenase in LUCA, might actually include proteins of the tetrapyrrole biosynthesis enzymes.

Bill, I think you should make all the trees for each one of the 355 proteins available online. That would be really useful for all of us interested in early evolution! Thank you.

On 2016 Oct 08, Shawn McGlynn commented:

This paper uses a phylogenetic approach to "illuminate the biology of LUCA" and uses two criteria to assess if a given protein encoding gene was in the LUCA:

"the protein should be present in at least two higher taxa of bacteria and archaea, respectively, and (2) its tree should recover bacterial and archaeal monophyly"

The authors later conclude that "LUCA accessed nitrogen via nitrogenase", however the nitrogenase protein is an excellent example of violating the author's criterion (2) above, and therefore cannot be included in the LUCA protein set based on the author's own criterion.

Upon phylogenetic analysis, the nitrogenase alpha subunit protein - which ligates the active site - branches into five clusters. One of these clusters is not well resolved, yet four of the five clusters contain both archaea and bacteria, therefor a nitrogenase protein phylogeny does not recover the monophyly of the archaea and bacteria.

Other claims in this paper may deserve scrutiny as well.

Suggested Reading below - if there are others to add someone please feel free:

Raymond, J., Siefert, J. L., Staples, C. R., and Blankenship, R. E. (2004). The natural history of nitrogen fixation. Mol. Biol. Evol. 21, 541–554

Boyd, E. S., Anbar, A. D., Miller, S., Hamilton, T. L., Lavin, M., and Peters, J. W. (2011a). A late methanogen origin for molybdenum-depen- dent nitrogenase. Geobiology 9, 221–232.

Boyd, E. S., Hamilton, T. L., and Peters, J. W. (2011b). An alternative path for the evolution of biological nitrogen fixation. Front. Microbiol. 2:205. doi: 10.3389/fmicb.2011.00205

On 2016 Oct 19, DP Zhou commented:

China's fragile health insurance system can not serve the health system. Patients are forced to spend all their savings to buy medicines in cash with no insurance coverage. For most families, one cancer patient means the bankruptcy of the whole family. In such despair, many patients choose to extort the doctors and the hospitals as the last option to recover some cost of medicines.

The health insurance system in China is a sensitive issue. The state-provided insurance is not covering major illnesses. The private insurance is poor-quality and mostly abused by finance institutions in real estate investment and other speculations.

On 2016 Aug 30, Peter Hajek commented:

The length of exposure would be relevant if the dosing was comparable, but the damage to mice lungs was caused by doses of nicotine that were many times above anything a human vaper could possibly get. It is the dose that makes the poison. Many chemicals produce damage at large enough doses while lifetime exposure to small enough doses is innocent.

To justify the conclusions about toxicity of vaping, the toxic effect would need to be documented with realistic dosing, and then shown to actually apply to humans (who have much better nicotine tolerance than mice).

I agree that mice studies with realistic dosing could be useful, though data on changes in lung function in human vapers would be much more informative; and I do appreciate that the warnings of risks in the paper were phrased with caution.

On 2016 Aug 30, Robert Foronjy commented:

The study is NOT reassuring to e-cigarette consumers. On the contrary, it shows that nicotine exposure reproduced the lung structural and physiologic changes present in COPD. These changes occurred after only four months of exposure. Even adjusting for the differences in lifespans, this exposure in mice is much briefer than that of a lifelong e-cigarette consumer. I do agree, however, that carefully conducted studies are needed to determine whether there is a threshold effect of nicotine exposure.

On 2016 Aug 29, Peter Hajek commented:

Thank you for the explanation. The exposure however was not equivalent. Mice have much faster nicotine metabolism than humans which means that nicotine exposure in mice must be many times higher than in humans to produce the same blood cotinine levels. See the reference below that calculated that mice with comparable cotinine levels were exposed to an equivalent of at least 200 cigarettes per day. In addition to this, mice also have much lower tolerance to nicotine than humans which means that their organs would be much more severely affected even if the levels were comparable.

On 2016 Aug 29, Robert Foronjy commented:

Mortality was not reported in the manuscript since no deaths occurred. The exposure was well tolerated by the mice and no abnormal behavior or physiologic stress was noted. At the time of euthanasia, all the internal organs were grossly normal on exam. Cotinine levels in the mice were provided in the study and they are similar to what has been documented in humans who vape electronic cigarettes. We agree that both the mice and human consumers are exposing their lungs to toxic concentrations of nicotine. This is one of the essential points that is expressed by the data presented in the manuscript.

On 2016 Aug 26, Peter Hajek commented:

The authors propose a hypothesis that deserves attention, but the study findings need to be interpreted with caution.

The mice were severely overdosed with nicotine, up to the lethal levels for mice, and a huge amount above what any human vaper would get - see this comment on a previous such study:

http://journals.plos.org/plosone/article/comment?id=info:doi/10.1371/annotation/5dfe1e98-3100-4102-a425-a647b9459456

The report does not say how many mice were involved and if any died during the experiment; and whether effects of nicotine poisoning were detected in other organ systems. This could perhaps be clarified.

Regarding the relevance to human health, nicotine poisoning poses normally no risk to vapers or smokers because if nicotine concentrations start to rise above their usual moderate levels, there is an advance warning in the form of nausea which makes people stop nicotine intake long before any dangerous levels can accrue. (Mice in these types of experiments do not have that option).

The study actually provides a reassurance for vapers, to the extent that mice outcomes have any relevance for humans, in that in the absence of nicotine overdose, chronic dosing with the standard ingredients of e-cigarette aerosol (PG and VG) had no adverse effects on mice lungs.

Peter Hajek

On 2016 Sep 17, Jonathan Eisen commented:

Katehine Dahlhausen wrote a brief blog post about this paper at microBEnet. See http://microbe.net/2016/08/30/journal-club-factors-influencing-early-life-gut-microbial-communities/.

On 2016 Sep 04, Egon Willighagen commented:

This paper raises a number of interesting points about contemporary research. The choice of word "selfies" is a bit misleading, IMHO, particularly because the article also discusses the internet.

The problem of selfies is partly because the liberal ideas that research is a free market where researchers have to sell their research and compete for funding. Indeed, I was trained to do so by the generation of researchers above me, and I learned what role conferences (talks, posters), publication lists (amount, where, etc) have in this. Using the Internet is just an extension of this, and nothing special; this idea of selfies was introduced before the internet, not after.

Unfortunately, the Internet is used more for these selfies (publication lists, CVs, announcements) than for actual research: exchange of research data is still very limited. That is indeed a shame and must change. But I guess it can only really change after the current way research is funded has changed.

On 2017 Apr 13, Andrew R Kniss commented:

There is a correction to this article that includes corrected yield data for haylage, and an updated overall estimate for the organic yield gap (updated figure is 67%, rather than the originally reported 80%). Correction is here: https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/27824908

A pdf of the article with corrections made in-line (in blue font) can be downloaded here: https://figshare.com/articles/journal_pone_0161673-CORRECTED_PDF/4234037

On 2016 Aug 28, Jaime A. Teixeira da Silva commented:

There are at least two extremely serious - and possibly purposefully misleading - errors in the terms used in this paper. Or perhaps, as I argue, they are not errors, but reflect a seismic shift in "predatory" publishing ideology eschewed by Jeffrey Beall.

Beall refers to such "deceitful" publishers as "predatory" publishers. He even refers to his original paper incorrectly [1]. The original term that Beall coined in 2010 was "predatory" open-access scholarly publishers, referring specifically to open access (OA) publishers. His blog, named “scholarlyoa” also reflects this exclusive focus on OA.

His purposeful omission of the term OA in this paper published by J Korean Med Sci reflects not only the omission of the term OA from the entire title and text, and even from the original definition, it also reflects very lax editorial oversight in the review of this paper. For the past 6 years, Beall has focused exclusively on OA, and has indicated, on multiple occasions on his blog, that he does not consider traditional (i.e., print or non-OA) journals or publishers.

Why then has Beall purposefully omitted the term OA?

Why has there been an apparent seismic shift in this paper, and in Beall’s apparent position in 2016, in the definition of "predatory"? By purposefully (because it is inconceivable that such an omission by Beall, a widely praised scholar, could have been accidental) removing the OA limit, and allowing any journal or publisher to be considered "predatory", Beall is no longer excluding the large publishers. Such publishers include Elsevier, SpringerNature, Nature Publishing Group, Taylor & Francis / Informa, or Wiley, which include the largest oligopolic publishers that dominate publishing today [2].

Does this shift in definition also reflect a shift in Beall's stance regarding traditional publishers? Or does it mean that several of these publishers, who publish now large fleets of OA journals, can no longer be excluded from equal criticism if there is evidence of their “predatory” practices, as listed by Beall [3]?

The second misleading aspect is that Beall no longer refers to such OA journals as simply "predatory". His definition evolved (the precise date is unclear) to characterize such publishers as "Potential, possible, or probable predatory scholarly open-access publishers" [4] and journals as "Potential, possible, or probable predatory scholarly open-access journals" [5]. Careful examination of this list of words reflects that almost any journal or publisher could be classified as “predatory”, provided that it fulfilled at least one of the criteria on the Beall list of “predatory” practices.

So, is Beall referring exclusively to the lists in [4] and [5] in his latest attack on select members of the OA industry, or does his definition also include other publishers that also publish print journals, i.e., non-OA journals?

Beall needs to explain himself carefully to scientists and to the public, because his warnings and radical recommendations [6] have to be carefully considered in the light of his flexible definitions and swaying lists.

The issue of deceitful publishers and journals affects all scientists, and all of us are concerned. But we should also be extremely concerned about the inconsistency in Beall's lists and definitions, and the lack of clear definitions assigned to them. Because many are starting to call on the use of those lists as "black lists" to block or ban the publication of papers in such publishers and journals. I stand firmly against this level of discriminatory action until crystal clear definitions for each entry are provided.

We should also view the journals that have approved these Beall publications with caution and ask what criteria were used to approve the publication of these papers with faulty definitions?

Until then, these "warnings" by Beall may in fact represent a danger to freedom of speech and of academics' choice to publish wherever they please, with or without the explicit permission or approval of their research institutes, even though the Beall blog provides some entertainment value, and as a crude “warning system”.

[1] Beall J. "Predatory" open-access scholarly publishers. Charleston Advis 2010;11:10–17. [2] Larivière V, Haustein S, Mongeon P (2015) The Oligopoly of Academic Publishers in the Digital Era. PLoS ONE 10(6): e0127502. doi:10.1371/journal.pone.0127502 [3] https://scholarlyoa.files.wordpress.com/2015/01/criteria-2015.pdf [4] https://scholarlyoa.com/publishers/ [5] https://scholarlyoa.com/individual-journals/ [6] Beall J. Predatory journals: Ban predators from the scientific record. Nature 534, 326. doi: 10.1038/534326a (also read some pertinent criticism in the comments section of that paper)

On 2017 Nov 28, Natalie Clairoux commented:

Free version of this article available at https://papyrus.bib.umontreal.ca/xmlui/handle/1866/19573

On 2016 Oct 01, Lydia Maniatis commented:

The logic of this study hinges on the following statement:

"The perceptual distance between colors was calculated using the receptor-noise limited model of Vorobyev and Osorio (1998; see also Table 1; Supplementary Figure S1), which has recently been validated experimentally (Olsson, Lind, & Kelber, 2015)."

In no sense is it legitimate to say that Olsson, Lind & Kelber have validated any models, as their own conclusions rest on unvalidated and implausible assumptions, specifically the assumption that the relevant discrimination thresholds " are set by photoreceptor noise, which is propagated into higher order processing."

This idea (versions of which Teller, 1984, described as the "nothing mucks it up" proviso), is not only untested, it is bizarre, as it leaves open the questions of a. how and why this "noise" is directly propagated unchanged by a highly complex feedback and feedforward system whose outcomes (e.g. lightness constancy, first demonstrated by W. Kohler to exist in chicks) resemble logical inference (and which are not noisy in experience), and b. even if we wanted to concede that the visual system is "noisy," (which is a bad idea) on what basis do we decide, using behavioral data, that this noise originates at the photoreceptor, and only the photoreceptor level? Many psychophysicists (equally illegitimately) prefer to cite V1 in describing their results.

The concept of "noise" is related to the also-illegitimate ideas that neurons act as "detectors" of specific stimuli and that complex percepts are formed by summing up simpler ones.

On 2017 May 31, Thomas Ferguson commented:

Other than VEGF, there are no solid data to support the idea that the other cytokines tested in this study are involved in human AMD. When the levels of the cytokines are lowered by ranibizumab plus dexamethasone treatment, there was no effect on disease course. It seems that the conclusion of this studying should be the opposite: that inflammatory proteins (other than VEGF) are not involved in the pathogenesis of chronic macular edema due to AMD

On 2016 Oct 31, Lydia Maniatis commented:

I think the authors have overlooked a major confound in their stimuli. This is the structure of the collection of items. If we have three items, for example, they will always form a triangular structure, except if they’re in a line. If they’re in a line, they still have a structure, with a middle and two flanking items. Our visual system is sensitive to structure, including that of a collection of items; Gestalt experiments have also shown this is also clearly the case with much “lower” animals, such as birds. I don’t think the authors can discuss this issue meaningfully without taking this factor into account.

On 2016 Oct 13, Andy Collings commented:

Jeffrey Friedman and colleagues' response to Markus Meister's paper, Physical limits to magnetogenetics, is available here, https://elifesciences.org/content/5/e17210#comment-2948691685, and is reproduced below:

On the Physical Limits of Magnetogenetics

In a recent paper, Markus Meister comments on data published by our groups (and a third employing a different approach) [1] showing that cells can be engineered to respond to an electromagnetic field [2-4]. Based on a set of theoretical calculations, Meister asserts that neither the heat transfer nor mechanical force created by an electromagnetic field interacting with a ferritin particle would be of sufficient magnitude to gate an ion channel and then goes on to question our groups’ findings altogether.

One series of papers (from the Friedman and Dordick laboratories) employed four different experimental approaches in cultured cells, tissue slices and animals in vivo to show that an electromagnetic field can induce ion flow in cells expressing ferritin tethered to the TRPV1 ion channel [2,3]. This experimental approach was validated in vitro by measuring calcium entry, reporter expression and electrophysiological changes in response to a magnetic field. The method was validated in vivo by assaying magnetically induced changes in reporter expression, blood glucose and plasma hormones levels, and alterations in feeding behavior in mice.

These results are wholly consistent with those in an independent publication (from the Guler and Deppmann laboratories) in which the investigators fused ferritin in frame to the TRPV4 ion channel [4]. In this report, magnetic sensitivity was validated in vitro using calcium entry and electrophysiological responses as outputs. Additionally, in vivo validation was demonstrated by analyzing magnetically induced behaviors in zebrafish and mice, and through single unit electrophysiological recordings.

In his paper, Meister incorrectly states our collective view on the operative mechanism [1]. While we are considering several hypotheses, we agree that the precise mechanism is undetermined. Lastly, although mathematical calculations can often be used to model biologic phenomena when enough of the relevant attributes of the system are known, the intrinsic complexity of biologic processes can in other instances limit the applicability of purely theoretical calculations [5]. It is our view that mathematical theory needs to accommodate the available data, not the other way around. We are thus surprised that Meister would stridently question the validity of an extensive data set published by two independent groups (and a third using a different method) without performing any experiments. However, we too are interested in defining the operative mechanism(s) and welcome further discussion and experimentation to bring data and theory into alignment.

Jeffrey Friedman, Sarah Stanley, Leah Kelly, Alex Nectow, Xiaofei Yu, Sarah F Schmidt, Kaamashri Latcha

Department of Molecular Genetics, Rockefeller University

Jonathan S Dordick, Jeremy Sauer

Department of Chemical and Biological Engineering, Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute

Ali D Güler, Aarti M Purohit, Ryan M Grippo

Christopher D Deppmann, Michael A Wheeler

Sarah Kucenas, Cody J Smith

Department of Biology, University of Virginia

Manoj K Patel, Matteo Ottolini, Bryan S Barker, Ronald P Gaykema

Department of Anesthesiology, University of Virginia

(Laboratory Heads in Bold Lettering)

References

1) Meister, M, Physical limits to magnetogenetics. eLife, 2016. 5. http://dx.doi.org/10.7554/eLife.17210

2) Stanley, SA, J Sauer, RS Kane, JS Dordick, and JM Friedman, Corrigendum: Remote regulation of glucose homeostasis in mice using genetically encoded nanoparticles. Nat Med, 2015. 21(5): p. 537. http://dx.doi.org/10.1038/nm0515-537b

3) Stanley, SA, L Kelly, KN Latcha, SF Schmidt, X Yu, AR Nectow, J Sauer, JP Dyke, JS Dordick, and JM Friedman, Bidirectional electromagnetic control of the hypothalamus regulates feeding and metabolism. Nature, 2016. 531(7596): p. 647-50. http://dx.doi.org/10.1038/nature17183

4) Wheeler, MA, CJ Smith, M Ottolini, BS Barker, AM Purohit, RM Grippo, RP Gaykema, AJ Spano, MP Beenhakker, S Kucenas, MK Patel, CD Deppmann, and AD Guler, Genetically targeted magnetic control of the nervous system. Nat Neurosci, 2016. 19(5): p. 756-61. http://dx.doi.org/10.1038/nn.4265

5) Laughlin, RB and D Pines, The theory of everything. Proc Natl Acad Sci U S A, 2000. 97(1): p. 28-31. http://dx.doi.org/10.1073/pnas.97.1.28

On 2017 Jan 05, Alan Roger Santos-Silva commented:

The spectrum of oral squamous cell carcinoma in young patients

We read with interest the current narrative review published by Liu et al [1], in Oncotarget. The article itself is interesting, however, they appear to have misunderstood our article [2] because they seem to believe that there was a cause-effect relationship between orthodontic treatment and tongue squamous cell carcinoma (SCC) at young age. This idea might provide anecdotal information about the potential of orthodontic treatment to cause persistent irritation on oral mucosa and lead to oral SCC. Thus, we believe that it is relevant to clarify that the current understanding about the spectrum of oral SCC in young patients points out three well-known groups according to demographic and clinicopathologic features: (1). 40-45 years old patients highly exposed to alcohol and tobacco diagnosed with keratinizing oral cavity SCC; (2). <45 years old patients, predominantly non-smoking males, diagnosed with HPV-related non-keratinizing oropharyngeal SCC; and (3). Younger than 40-year-old patients, mainly non-smoking and non-drinking females diagnosed with keratinizing oral tongue SCC (HPV seems not to be a risk factor in this group) [3-5]. Therefore, chronic inflammation triggered by persistent trauma of the oral mucosa must not be considered an important risk factor in young patients with oral cancer.

References: 1. Liu X, Gao XL, Liang XH, Tang YL. The etiologic spectrum of head and neck squamous cell carcinoma in young patients. Oncotarget. 2016 Aug 12. doi: 10.18632/oncotarget.11265. [Epub ahead of print]. 2. Santos-Silva AR, Carvalho Andrade MA, Jorge J, Almeida OP, Vargas PA, Lopes MA. Tongue squamous cell carcinoma in young nonsmoking and nondrinking patients: 3 clinical cases of orthodontic interest. Am J Orthod Dentofacial Orthop. 2014; 145: 103-7. 3. Toner M, O'Regan EM. Head and neck squamous cell carcinoma in the young: a spectrum or a distinct group? Part 1. Head Neck Pathol. 2009; 3: 246-248. 4. de Castro Junior G. Curr Opin Oncol. 2016; 28: 193-194. 5.Santos-Silva AR, Ribeiro AC, Soubhia AM, Miyahara GI, Carlos R, Speight PM, Hunter KD, Torres-Rendon A, Vargas PA, Lopes MA. High incidences of DNA ploidy abnormalities in tongue squamous cell carcinoma of young patients: an international collaborative study. Histopathology. 2011; 58: 1127-1135.

Authors: Alan Roger Santos-Silva [1,2]; Ana Carolina Prado Ribeiro [1,2]; Thais Bianca Brandão [1,2]; Marcio Ajudarte Lopes [1]

[1] Oral Diagnosis Department, Piracicaba Dental School, University of Campinas (UNICAMP), Piracicaba, São Paulo, Brazil. [2] Dental Oncology Service, Instituto do Câncer do Estado de São Paulo (ICESP), Faculdade de Medicina da Universidade de São Paulo, São Paulo, Brazil.

Correspondence to: Alan Roger Santos-Silva Department of Oral Diagnosis, Piracicaba Dental School, UNICAMP Av. Limeira, 901, Areão, Piracicaba, São Paulo, Brazil, CEP: 13414-903 Telephone: +55 19 2106 5320 alanroger@fop.unicamp.br

On 2016 Aug 30, Olga Krizanova commented:

We are aware that there are some papers showing ineffectivity of Xestospongin C on IP3 receptors. Nevertheless, Xest is a widely accepted inhibitor of IP3 receptors (IP3R), as documented by majority IP3R papers and also by companies selling this product (e.g. Sigma-Aldrich, Cayman Chemical, Abcam, etc.). Since Xest also inhibits voltage-dependent Ca2+ and K+ currents at concentrations similar to those which inhibit the IP3R, it can be regarded as a selective blocker of the IP3R in permeabilized cells. Cell type used in experiments might be of a special importance. In our paper we observed the effect of Xest on IP3R1 on four different cell lines -A2780, SKOV3, Bowes and MDA-MB-231. Moreover, we verified results observed by Xest by another IP3R blocker -2-APB and also by IP3R1 silencing. All these results imply that Xest acts as IP3R inhibitor. Recently, paper with more specific Xestospongin B was published, but unfortunately, this compound is not yet commercially available.

On 2016 Aug 22, Darren Boehning commented:

Xestospongin C (Xest) does not inhibit IP3R channels. See PMID: 24628114 PMCID: PMC4080982 DOI: 10.1111/bph.12685 There are other well-documented examples in the literature.

On 2016 Nov 27, Atanas G. Atanasov commented:

This is indeed a very promising research area… thanks to the authors for the good work

On 2016 Aug 16, Ellen M Goudsmit commented:

It should be noted that the PACE trial did not assess pacing as recommended by virtually all patient groups. This behavioural strategy is based on the observation that minimal exertion tends to exacerbate symptoms, plus the evidence that many with ME and CFS cannot gradually increase activity levels for more than a few days because of clinically significant adverse reactions [1]. It does not make any assumptions about aetiology.

The authors state that “It should be remembered that the moderate success of behavioural approaches does not imply that CFS/ME is a psychological or psychiatric disorder.” I submit that this relates to CBT and GET and not to strategies such as pacing. It might be helpful here to remind readers that the GET protocol for CFS/ME (as tested in most RCTs) is partly based on an operant conditioning theory, which is generally regarded as psychological [2]. The rehabilitative approaches promoted in the UK, i.e. CBT and GET, tend to focus on fatigue and sleep disorders, both of which may be a result of stress and psychiatric disorders e.g. depression. A review of the literature from the 'medical authorities' in the UK shows that almost without exception, they tend to limit the role of non-psychiatric aetiological factors to the acute phase and that somatic symptoms are usually attributed to fear of activity and the physiological effects of stress.

I informed the editor that as it read, the paper suggests that 1. patients have no sound medical source to support their preference for pacing and that 2. the data from the PACE trial provides good evidence against this strategy. I clarified that the trial actually evaluated adaptive pacing therapy (a programme including advice on stress management and a version of pacing that permits patients to operate at 70% of their estimated capability.) The editor chose not to investigate this issue in the manner one expects from an editor of a reputable journal. In light of the above issues, the information about pacing in this paper may mislead readers.

Interested scientists may find an alternative analysis of the differing views highly illuminating [3].

[1]. Goudsmit, EM., Jason, LA, Nijs, J and Wallman, KE. Pacing as a strategy to improve energy management in myalgic encephalomyelitis/chronic fatigue syndrome: A consensus document. Disability and Rehabilitation, 2012, 34, 13, 1140-1147. doi: 10.3109/09638288.2011.635746.]

[2]. Goudsmit, E. The PACE trial. Are graded activity and cognitive-behavioural therapy really effective treatments for ME? Online 18th March 2016. http://www.axfordsabode.org.uk/me/ME-PDF/PACE trial the flaws.pdf

[3]. Friedberg, F. Cognitive-behavior therapy: why is it so vilified in the chronic fatigue syndrome community? Fatigue: Biomedicine, Health & Behavior, 2016, 4, 3, 127-131. http://www.tandfonline.com/doi/full/10.1080/21641846.2016.1200884

On 2016 Sep 15, Lily Chu commented:

As a member of the Institute of Medicine Committee, I talked to multiple patients, caregivers, clinicians, and researchers. The problem they have with the name "CFS" goes beyond psychological stigma. For one, fatigue is only one symptom of the disease but not even the most disabling one for patients. Post-exertional malaise and cognitive issues are. Secondly, most patients and families are concerned about psychological implications not because of stigmatization but simply because CFS is NOT a psychological or psychiatric condition. Some patients experience co-morbid depression, acknowledge its presence, and receive treatment for it. In support groups, patients discuss depression and anxiety without fear of stigma. The problem comes when clinicians or researchers conflate patients' depression with their CFS and conclude that they can treat the latter condition with cognitive behavioral therapy or with SSRIs. An analogy would be if tomorrow, patients experiencing myocardial infarcts and major depression were told aspirin, B-blockers, cholesterol medication, etc. would no longer be the treatments for myocardial infarcts but instead SSRIs would be. Could you imagine how patients would feel in that circumstance? That is why they are concerned.

On 2016 Sep 10, ROBERT COMBES commented:

Robert Combes and Michael Balls

In a recent exchange of views, in PubMed Commons, with Simon Chapman on the effectiveness and safety of vaping for achieving the cessation of tobacco smoking, provoked by a paper published by Martin McKee [and comments therein], Clive Bates has criticised one of our publications. The paper in question urges caution concerning any further official endorsement of electronic cigarettes (ECs), at least until more safety data (including results from long-term tests) have become available. Bates questions why we should write on such issues, given our long-standing focus on ‘animal rights’, as he puts it, and from this mistaken assumption he makes the remarkably illogical deduction that our paper is without merit. Bates also implies that our views should not be taken seriously, because we published in Alternatives to Laboratory Animals (ATLA), a journal owned by FRAME (Fund for the Replacement of Animals in Medical Experiments), an organisation with which we have been closely associated in the past.<br> We have written a document to correct Bates' misconceptions about who we are, what our experience is, why we decided to write about this topic in the first place, what we actually said, and why we said it. In addition, we have elaborated on our views concerning the regulatory control of e-cigarettes, in which we explain in detail why we believe the current policy being implemented by PHE lacks a credible scientific basis. We make several suggestions to rectify the situation, based on our careers specialising in cellular toxicology: a) the safety of electronic cigarettes should be seen as a problem to be addressed, primarily by applying toxicological principles and methods, to derive relevant risk assessments, based on experimental observations and not opinions and guesswork; b) such assessments should not be confused with arguments in favour of vaping based on how harmful smoking is, and on the results of chemical analysis; c) it would be grossly negligent if the relevant national regulatory authorities were to continue to ignore the increasingly convincing evidence suggesting that exposure to nicotine can lead to serious long-term, as distinct from acute, effects, related to carcinogenicity, mutagenicity (manifested as DNA and chromosomal damage) and reproductive toxicity; and d) only once such information has been analysed, together with the results of other testing, should risks from vaping be weighed against risks from not vaping, to enable properly informed choice.<br> Due to space limitations, the pre-publication version of the complete document has to be downloaded from: https://www.researchgate.net/publication/307958871_Draft_Response_regarding_comments_made_by_Clive_Bates_about_one_of_our_publications_on_the_safety_of_electronic_cigarettes_and_vaping and our original publication is available from: https://www.researchgate.net/publication/289674033_On_the_Safety_of_E-cigarettes_I_can_resist_anything_except_temptation1

We hope that anyone wishing to respond will carefully read these two documents before doing so.

On 2016 Aug 24, Clive Bates commented:

In response to Professor Daube, I am pleased to have the opportunity to explain a different and less authoritarian approach to the public health challenges of smoking.

1. But let me start with a misunderstanding. Professor Daube accuses me of a personal attack on Professor McKee. In fact, I made five specific substantive comments on Professor McKee's short letter, to which Professor Stimson added a further two. These are corrections of fact and understanding, not a 'personal attack'. It is important that academics understand and recognise this distinction.

2. Professor Daube draws the reader's attention to a link to an investor presentation by Imperial Tobacco. I am unsure what point he is trying to make. Nevertheless, the presentation paints a rosy picture of life in Australia for this tobacco company: it is "on track" (p6); it has "continued strong performance in Australia" (p15); in Australia it is "continuing to perform strongly - JPS equity driving share, revenue and profit growth" (p31). It may be a hard pill to swallow, but tobacco companies in Australia are very profitable indeed, in part because the tax regime allows them to raise underlying pre-tax prices easily.

3. It's a common error of activists to believe that harm to tobacco companies is a proxy for success in tobacco control (an idea sometimes known as 'the scream test'). If it that was the case, the burgeoning profitability of tobacco companies would be a sign of utter failure in tobacco control [1]. We should instead focus on what it takes to eliminate smoking-related disease. If that means companies selling products that don't kill the user instead of products that do, then so be it - I consider that is progress. If your alternative is to use coercive policies to stop people using nicotine at all, then you may make progress... but it will be slow and laborious, smoking will persist for longer and many more people will be harmed as a result. These are the unintended consequences of taking more dogmatic positions that seem tougher, but are less effective.

4. In any event, my concerns are not about the welfare of the tobacco industry in Australia or anywhere else. My concern, as I hope I made clear in my response to Professor Chapman, is the welfare of the 2.8 million Australians (16% adults) who continue to smoke despite Australia's tobacco control efforts. For them, the serious health risks of smoking are compounded by some Australian tobacco control policies that are punitive (Australia is not alone in this) while being denied low-risk alternatives. All the harms caused by both smoking and anti-smoking policies can be mitigated and the benefits realised by making very low-risk alternatives to combustible cigarettes (for example, e-cigarettes or smokeless tobacco) available to smokers to purchase with their own money and of their own volition. Professor Daube apparently opposes this simple liberal idea - that the state should not intervene to prevent people improving their own health in a way that works for them and harms no-one else.

5. Professor Daube finishes his contribution with what I can only assume is an attempted smear in pointing out that I sometimes speak at conferences where the tobacco industry is present, as if this is somehow, a priori, an immoral act. I speak at these events because I have an ambitious advocacy agenda about how these firms should evolve from being 'merchants of death' into supplying a competitive low-risk recreational nicotine market, based on products that do not involve combustion of tobacco leaf, which the source of the disease burden. So I, and many others, have a public health agenda - the formation of a market for nicotine that will not kill one billion users in the 21st Century, and that will perhaps avoid hundreds of millions of premature deaths [2]. There is a dispute about how to do this, and no doubt Professor Daube has ideas. However, the policy proposals for the so-called 'tobacco endgame' advanced by tobacco control activists do not withstand even cursory scrutiny [3]. The preferred approach of advocates of 'tobacco harm reduction', among which I include myself, involves a fundamental technology transformation, a disruptive process that has started and is synergistic with well-founded tobacco control policies [4]. If, like me, you wish to see a market change fundamentally, then it makes sense to talk to and understand every significant actor in the market, rather than only those whose convictions you already share.

References & further reading

[1] Bates C. Who or what is the World Health Organisation at war with? The Counterfactual, May 2016 [link].

[2] Bates C. A billion lives? The Counterfactual, November 2015 [link] and Bates C. Are we in the endgame for smoking? The Counterfactual, February 2015 [link]

[3] Bates C. The tobacco endgame: a critique of the policy ideas. The Counterfactual, March 2015 [link]

[4] Bates C. A more credible endgame - creative destruction. The Counterfactual, March 2015 [link].

On 2016 Aug 25, Clive Bates commented:

As I think Professor Daube's comment contains inappropriate innuendo about my motives, let me repeat the disclosure statement from my initial posting:

Competing interests: I am a longstanding advocate for 'harm reduction' approaches to public health. I was director of Action on Smoking and Health UK from 1997-2003. I have no competing interests with respect to any of the relevant industries.

My hope is that prominent academics and veterans of the struggles of the past will adopt an open mind towards the right strategy for reducing the burden of death and disease caused by smoking as we go forward. While he may not like the idea, Professor Daube can surely see that 'tobacco harm reduction' is a concept supported by many of the top scientists and policy thinkers in the field, including the Tobacco Advisory Group of the Royal College of Physicians. It is not the work of the tobacco industry and cannot be dismissed just by claiming it is in their interests.

On 2016 Aug 24, Mike Daube commented:

As part of his lengthy and personalised attacks on Martin McKee, Clive Bates argues that “we certainly should not” look to Australia for policy inspiration.

This view, and some of his other comments, would have strong support from the global tobacco industry, which has ferociously opposed the evidence-based action to reduce smoking taken by successive Australian governments, and reports that we are “the darkest market in the world”. (1)

No doubt Mr Bates will be able to discuss these issues further with tobacco industry leaders at the Global Tobacco & Nicotine Forum (“the annual industry summit”) in Brussels later this year, where as in previous years he is listed as a speaker.(2)

References 1. Brisby D, Pramanik A, Matthews P, Kutz O, Kamaras A. Imperial Brands PLC Investor Day: Jun 8 2016. Transcript – Quality Growth: Returns and Growth – Markets that Matter [p.6] & Presentation Slides – Quality Growth: Returns and Growth – Markets that Matter [slide 16]. http://www.imperialbrandsplc.com/Investors/Results-centre.

1. http://gtnf-2016.com/

On 2016 Aug 22, Clive Bates commented:

Some responses to Professor Simon Chapman:

1. Professor Chapman criticises the Public Health England and Royal College of Physicians consensus on the relative risk of smoking and e-cigarette use by referring to a comment piece Combes RD, 2015 in the journal Alternatives to Laboratory Animals. The piece is written by a commentator whose affiliation is an animal welfare rights campaign (FRAME), for which ATLA is the house journal, and an independent consultant. How these two came to be writing about e-cigarettes at all is not stated, but this is less important than the fact that their commentary provides little of substance to challenge the robust expert-based PHE and RCP analysis, and it provides even less to justify the colourful dismissive pull-out quotes chosen by Professor Chapman. Even though the work can be dismissed on its merits, surely the authors should have disclosed that FRAME has pharmaceutical funders [Our supporters], including companies who make and sell medical smoking cessation products.

2. Professor Chapman confirms my view that the appropriate statistic to use for comparing Australian prevalence of current smoking is 16.0 percent based on the Australian Bureau of Statistics, National Health Survey: First Results, 2014-15 (see table 9.3). This is the latest data on the prevalence of current adult smoking.

3. Unless it's to make the numbers look as low as possible, I am unsure why Professors Chapman and McKee choose to refer to a survey from 2013 or why Professor Chapman didn't disclose in his response that he is citing a survey of drug use, including illicit drug use: [see AIHW, National Drug Strategy Household Survey detailed report 2013]. Surely a neutral investigator would be concerned that a state-run survey asking about illicit drug use might have a low response rate? And further, that non-responders would be more likely to be drug users, and hence also more likely to be smokers - so distorting the prevalence systematically downwards? In fact, the response rate in this survey is just 49.1% [Explanatory notes]. While this might be the best that can be done to understand illicit drug use, it is an unnecessarily unreliable way to gauge legal activity like smoking, especially as a more recent and more reliable survey is available.

4. The figure of 11% given for smoking in Sweden is not 'daily smoking' as asserted by Professor Chapman. With just a little more research before rushing out his reply, Professor Chapman could have checked the source and link I provided. The question used is: "Regarding smoking cigarettes, cigarettes, cigars, cigarillos or a pipe, which of the following applies to you?" 11% of Swedes answer affirmatively to the response: "You currently smoke".

5. If we are comparing national statistics, it is true that measured smoking prevalence in Britain is a little higher than in the Australia - the latest Office for National Statistics data suggests 17.5 percent of adults age 16 and over were current smokers in 2015 (derived from its special survey of e-cigarette use: E-cigarette use in Great Britain 2015). So what? The two countries are very different both today and in where they have come from and many factors explain smoking prevalence - not just tobacco control policy. But if one is to insist on such comparisons, official data from the (until now) vape-friendly United States suggests that American current adult smoking prevalence, at 15.1 percent, is now below that of Australia [source: National Center for Health Statistics, National Health Interview Survey, 1997–2015, Sample Adult Core component. Figure 8.1. Prevalence of current cigarette smoking among adults aged 18 and over: United States, 1997–2015]

6. Regressive taxes are harmful and so is stigmatisation - I shouldn't need to reference that for anyone working in public health. Any thoughtful policy maker will not only try to design policies that achieve a primary objective (reduce the disease attributable to smoking) but also be mindful that the policies themselves can be a source of harm or damaging in some other way. Ignoring the consequences of tobacco policies on wider measures of wellbeing is something best left to fanatics. In public health terms, these consequences may be considered 'a price worth paying' to reduce smoking, but they create real harms for those who continue to smoke, and in my view, those promoting them have an ethical obligation to mitigate these wider harms to the extent possible.

7. The approach, favoured by me and many others, of supporting (or in Australia's case of not actively obstructing) ways in which smokers can more easily move from the most dangerous products to those likely to cause minimal risk has twin advantages:

• (1) it helps to achieve the ultimate goal of reducing cancer, cardiovascular disease, and respiratory illnesses by improving the responsiveness of smokers to conventional tobacco control policy. It does this by removing the significant barrier of having to quit nicotine completely, something many cannot do easily or choose not to do.

• (2) It does this in a way that goes with the grain of consumer preferences and meets people where they are. This is something for public health to rediscover - public health should be about 'enabling', not bullying or nannying, and go about its business with humility and empathy towards those it is trying to help.

On 2016 Aug 22, Clive Bates commented:

As an aside, it's disappointing to see Professor Chapman spreading doubt about e-cigarettes with reference to the filters and 'light and mild' cigarette fiasco (see the 1999 report by Martin Jarvis and me on this fiasco). This 'science-by-analogy' fails because it misunderstands the nicotine-seeking behaviour that underpins both smoking and vaping.

With light and mild cigarettes, health activists were fooled into believing that these cigarettes would much be less risky, even though they are no less risky. It would be wrong to compound this error by implying that e-cigarettes are not much less risky, even though they are sure to be.

The underlying reason for both errors is the same - nicotine users seek a roughly fixed dose of nicotine (a well-understood process, known as titration). If a vaper can obtain their desired nicotine dose without exposure to cigarette smoke toxins, then they will not suffer the smoking-related harms. With light and mild cigarettes, both nicotine and toxins were diluted equally with air to fool smoking machines. However, human smokers adjusted their behaviour to get the desired dose of nicotine and so got almost the same exposures to toxins. This is another well-understood process known as 'compensation'. I am sure a global authority of Professor Chapman's stature would be aware these mechanisms, so it is all the more perplexing that he should draw on this analogy in his campaign against e-cigarettes.

On 2016 Aug 22, Simon Chapman commented:

Clive Bates' efforts to correct points made in Martin McKee’s letter in turn require correction and comment. Bates disputes that there was not a single source for the claim that e-cigarettes are “95% safer” than smoking (in fact Public Health England stated “95% less harmful” [1], a critical difference). Bates cites two references in support of his claim, but both of these are nothing but secondary references, with both citing the same Nutt et al [2] 95% less harmful estimate as their primary source.

Two toxicologists have written an excoriating critique of the provenance of the “95% less harmful” statement, describing its endorsement as “reckless”[3] and nothing but the consensus of the opinions of a carefully hand-picked group. The 95% estimate remains little more than a factoid – a piece of questionable information that is reported and repeated so often that it becomes accepted as fact.

We will not have an evidence-based comparison of harm until we have cohort data in the decades to come comparing mortality and morbidity outcomes from exclusive smokers versus exclusive vapers and dual users. This was how our knowledge eventually emerged of the failure other mass efforts at tobacco harm reduction: cigarette filters and the misleading lights and milds fiasco.

Bates challenges McKee’s statement that Australian smoking prevalence is “below 13%” and cites Australian Bureau of Statistics (ABS) data from 2014-15 derived from a household survey of 14,700 dwellings that shows 16% of those aged 18+ were “current” smokers (14.5% smoking daily). McKee was almost certainly referring to 2013 data from the Australian Institute of Health and Welfare’s (AIHW) ongoing national surveys based on interviews with some 28,000 respondents which showed 12.8% of age 14+ Australians smoked daily, with another 2.2% smoking less than daily[4]. The next AIHW survey will report in 2017 and with the impact of plain packaging, several 12.5% tobacco tax increases, on-going tobacco control campaigning and a downward historical trend away from smoking, there are strong expectations that the 2017 prevalence will be even lower.

Bates cites a 2015 report saying that Sweden has 11% smoking prevalence. This figure is almost certainly daily smoking prevalence data, not total smoking prevalence that Bates insists is the relevant figure that should be cited for Australia. If so, the comparable figure for Sweden should also be used. In 2012 the Swedish Ministry of Health reported to the WHO that 22% of Swedish people aged 16-84 currently smoked (11% daily and 11% less than daily) [5]. It is not credible that Sweden could have halved its smoking prevalence in three years.

Meanwhile, England with current smoking prevalence in 2015 of 18.2% in July 2016 [6 – slide 1] trails Australia, regardless of whether the ABS or AIHW data are used. Also, the proportion of English smokers who smoked in the last year and who tried to stop smoking is currently the lowest recorded in England since 2007 [6 slide 4].

Bates says that the UK and the USA where e-ecigarette use is widespread have seen “recent sharp falls” in smoking prevalence. In fact in smoking prevalence has been falling in both nations for many years prior to the advent of e-cigarettes, as it has in Australia where e-cigarettes are seldom seen. Disturbingly in the USA, the decline in youth smoking has come to a halt after 2014 [7], following continuous falls for at least a decade – well before e-cigarette use became popular. The spectacular increase in e-cigarette use in youth particularly between 2013-2015 (see Figure 1 in reference 7] was either coincident or possibly partly responsible with that halting.

Finally Bates makes gratuitous, unreferenced remarks about “harms” arising from Australia’s tobacco tax policy and “campaigns to denormalise smoking”. There are no policies or campaigns to denormalise smoking in Australian that are not also in place in the UK or the USA, as well as many other nations. When Bates was director at ASH he vigourously campaigned for tobacco taxes to be high and to keep on increasing [8]. His current views make an interesting contrast with even the CEO of British American Tobacco Australia who agrees that tax has had a major impact on reducing smoking, telling an Australian parliamentary committee in 2011 “We understand that the price going up when the excise goes up reduces consumption. We saw that last year very effectively with the increase in excise. There was a 25 per cent increase in the excise and we saw the volumes go down by about 10.2 per cent; there was about a 10.2 per cent reduction in the industry last year in Australia.” [9].

References

1 Public Health England. E-cigarettes: a new foundation for evidence-based policy and practice. Aug 2015. https://www.gov.uk/government/uploads/system/uploads/attachment_data/file/454517/Ecigarettes_a_firm_foundation_for_evidence_based_policy_and_practice.pdf

2 Nutt DJ et al. Estimating the harms of nicotine-containing products using the MCDA approach. Eur Addict Res 2014;20:218-25.

3 Combes RD, Balls M. On the safety of e-cigarettes.: “I can resists anything except temptation.” ATLA 2015;42:417-25. https://www.researchgate.net/publication/289674033_On_the_Safety_of_E-cigarettes_I_can_resist_anything_except_temptation1

4 Australian Institute of Health and Welfare. National Drug Household Survey. 2014 data and references. http://www.aihw.gov.au/WorkArea/DownloadAsset.aspx?id=60129548784

5 Swedish Ministry for Health and Social Affairs. Reporting instrument of the WHO Framework Convention on Tobacco Control 2012 (13 April) http://www.who.int/fctc/reporting/party_reports/sweden_2012_report_final_rev.pdf

6 Smoking in England. Top line findings STS140721 5 Aug 2016 http://www.smokinginengland.info/downloadfile/?type=latest-stats&src=13 (slide 1)

7 Singh T et al. Tobacco use among middle and high school students — United States, 2011–2015. http://www.cdc.gov/mmwr/volumes/65/wr/mm6514a1.htm MMWR April 15, 2016 / 65(14);361–367

8 Bates C Why tobacco taxes should be high and continue to increase. 1999 (February) http://www.ash.org.uk/files/documents/ASH_218.pdf

9 The Treasury. Post-implementation review: 25 per cent tobacco excise increase. Commonwealth of Australia 2013; Feb. http://ris.dpmc.gov.au/files/2013/05/02-25-per-cent-Excise-for-Tobacco.doc p15

On 2016 Aug 21, Gerry Stimson commented:

Clive Bates (below) identifies five assertions by Martin McKee that need correction: there are two more, making seven in McKee's eleven lined letter.

First, McKee states that ‘It is misleading to suggest that there is a consensus on e-cigarettes in England, given that many members of the health community have continuing reservations’ and quotes one short BMA statement that calls for medical regulation of e-cigarettes.

He ignores the ‘public health consensus statement’ from English public health, medical, cancer and tobacco control organisations that supports e-cigarettes for quitting smoking. The consensus statement says that ‘We all agree that e-cigarettes are significantly less harmful than smoking.’ [1, 2]. The first edition of this statement [1] explicitly challenges McKee’s position on the evidence. The consensus statement is endorsed by Public Health England, Action on Smoking and Health, the Association of Directors of Public Health, the British Lung Foundation, Cancer Research UK, the Faculty of Public Health, Fresh North East, Healthier Futures, Public Health Action, the Royal College of Physicians, the Royal Society for Public Health, the UK Centre for Tobacco and Alcohol Studies and the UK Health Forum. McKee and the BMA are minority outliers in England and the UK.

The PHE report on e-cigarettes faced a backlash but this was from a few public health leaders including McKee who organised a behind-the-scenes campaign against the report including a critical editorial and comment in the Lancet, and an editorial in the BMJ backed up by a media campaign hostile to PHE. Emails revealed as a result of a Freedom of Information request show that this backlash was orchestrated by McKee and a handful of public health experts [3, 4].

Second, McKee misrepresents and misunderstands drugs harm reduction. He cites Australia, and it was indeed in Australia (as in the UK) that the public health successes in preventing the spread of HIV infection and other adverse aspects of drug use were driven by harm reduction – including engaging with drug users, outreach to drug users, destigmatisation, provision of sterile needles and syringes, and methadone [5, 6, 7]. Drugs harm reduction was a public health success [4, 6]. The UK and other countries that implemented harm reduction avoided a major epidemic of drug related HIV infection of the sort that has been experienced in many countries. Drugs harm reduction was implemented despite drugs demand and supply and reduction measures, not as McKee asserts because it was part of a combined strategy including supply demand and supply reduction. McKee’s position is out of step with the Open Society Institute, of which he chairs the Global Health Advisory Committee; OSI has resourced drugs harm reduction and campaigns against the criminalisation of drugs ie those demand and supply reduction measures that maximise harm.

1 Public health England (2015) E-cigarettes: a developing public health consensus. https://www.gov.uk/government/news/e-cigarettes-an-emerging-public-health-consensus

2 Public health England (2016) E-cigarettes: a developing public health consensus. https://www.gov.uk/government/publications/e-cigarettes-a-developing-public-health-consensus

3 Puddlecote D, (2016/) Correspondence between McKee and Davies Aug 15 to Oct 15. https://www.scribd.com/doc/296112057/Correspondence-Between-McKee-and-Davies-Aug-15-to-Oct-15. Accessed 07 03 2016

4 Stimson G V (2016) A tale of two epidemics: drugs harm reduction and tobacco harm reduction, Drugs and Alcohol Today, 16, 3 2016, 1-9.

5 Berridge V (1996) AIDS in the UK: The Making of Policy, 1981-1994. Oxford University Press.

6 Stimson G V (1995) AIDS and injecting drug use in the United Kingdom, 1988-1993: the policy response and the prevention of the epidemic. Social Science and Medicine, 41,5, 699-716

7 Wodak A, (2016) Hysteria about drugs and harm minimisation. It's always the same old story. https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2016/aug/11/hysteria-about-drugs-and-harm-minimisation-its-always-the-same-old-story

On 2016 Aug 20, Clive Bates commented:

The author, Martin McKee, makes no less than five assertions in this short letter that demand correction:

First, that there was only one source for the claim that e-cigarettes are "95% safer" than smoking. In fact, this claim does not rely on a single source but is the consensus view of Public Health England's expert reviewers [1] and a close variation on this claim is the consensus view of the Tobacco Advisory Group of the Royal College of Physicians and is endorsed by the College [2]:

Although it is not possible to precisely quantify the long-term health risks associated with e-cigarettes, the available data suggest that they are unlikely to exceed 5% of those associated with smoked tobacco products, and may well be substantially lower than this figure. (Section 5.5 page 87)

Second, that PHE's work was in some way compromised by McKee's "concerns about conflicts of interest". To support this largely self-referential claim, he cites a piece of very poor journalism in which every accusation was denied or refuted by all involved. Please see Gornall J, 2015 including my PuBMed Commons critique of this article and a more detailed critique on my blog [3].

Third, that "other evidence, some not quoted in the review, raised serious questions about the safety of these products". The citation for this assertion is Pisinger C, 2014. This review does not, in fact, raise any credible questions about the safety of these products, and suffered numerous basic methodological failings. For this reason, it was reviewed but then ignored in the Royal College of Physicians' assessment of e-cigarette risk [2 - page 79]. Please see the PubMed Commons critiques of this paper [4].

Fourth, that adult smoking prevalence in Australia is "below 13%, without e-cigarettes". Both parts of this claim are wrong. The latest official data shows an adult smoking prevalence of 16.0% in Australia [5]. No citation was provided by the author for his claim. E-cigarettes are widely used in Australia, despite a ban on sales of nicotine liquids. Australians purchase nicotine-based liquids internationally over the internet or buy on a thriving black market that has been created by Australia's wholly unjustified de facto prohibition.

Fifth, that we "should look to Australia" for tobacco policy inspiration. We certainly should not. Australia has a disturbingly unethical policy of allowing cigarettes to be widely available for sale but tries to deny its 2.8 million smokers access to much safer products by banning nicotine-based e-cigarettes. These options have proved extremely popular and beneficial for millions of smokers in Europe and the United States trying to manage their own risks and health outcomes. Further, the author should consider the harms that arise from Australia's anti-smoking policies in their own right, such as high and regressive taxation and stigma that arises from its campaigns to denormalise smoking.

If the author wishes to find a model country, he need not travel as far as Australia. Sweden had a smoking prevalence of 11% in 2015 - an extreme outlier in the European Union, which averages 26% prevalence on the measure used in the only consistent pan-European survey [6]. The primary reason for Sweden's very low smoking prevalence is the use of alternative forms of nicotine (primarily snus, a smokeless tobacco) which pose minimal risks to health and have over time substituted for smoking. This exactly what we might expect from e-cigarettes and, given the recent sharp falls in adult and youth smoking in both the UK and the US, this does seem likely. Going with grain of consumers' preferences represents a more humane way to address the risks of smoking than the battery of punitive and coercive policies favoured in Australia.

Though not specialised in nicotine policy or science, the author is a prolific commentator on the e-cigarette controversy. If he wishes to contribute more effectively, he could start by reading an extensive critique of his own article in the BMJ (McKee M, 2015), which is at once devastating, educational, and entertaining [7].

References

[1] McNeill A. Hajek P. Underpinning evidence for the estimate that e-cigarette use is around 95% safer than smoking: authors’ note, 27 August 2015 [link]

[2] Royal College of Physicians (London) Nicotine without smoke: tobacco harm reduction 28 April 2016 [link]

[3] Bates C. Smears or science? The BMJ attack on Public Health England and its e-cigarettes evidence review, November 2015 [link]

[4] Pisinger C, 2014 Bates C. comment [here] and Zvi Herzig [here]

[5] Australian Bureau of Statistics, National Health Survey: First Results, 2014-15. Table 9.3, 8 December 2015 [link to data]

[6] European Commission, Special Eurobarometer 429, Attitudes of Europeans towards tobacco, May 2015 [link] - see page 11.

[7] Herzig Z. Response to McKee and Capewell, 9 February 2016 [link]

Competing interests: I am a longstanding advocate for 'harm reduction' approaches to public health. I was director of Action on Smoking and Health UK from 1997-2003. I have no competing interests with respect to any of the relevant industries.

On 2016 Sep 17, Jonathan Eisen commented:

I wrote a blog post about this paper at microBEnet. See http://microbe.net/2016/08/04/interesting-paper-on-innate-immunity-asthma-risk-and-amish-vs-hutterite-families/.

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On 2016 Sep 21, Daniel Himmelstein commented:

Thanks Dr. Seulbe Lee for you response. My apologies for the unit mistake. For the record, I had incorrectly used milliliters rather than liters in the denominator of stream concentrations.

I updated my notebook to fix the error. To avoid confusion, I changed the notebook link in my first comment to be version specific. I also performed another analysis which speculated on potential sewage contentrations of AMPH under the following assumptions:

• 1 in 4 people orally consume 30 mg of AMPH daily
• 40% of the consumed AMPH is excreted into the sewage
• Each person creates 80 gallons of sewage per day

Under these assumptions, fresh sewage was estimated to contain 9.91 ug/L of AMPH, which is ~10 times higher than the artificial streams. Granted there is likely additional dilution and degradation I'm not accounting for, but nonetheless this calculation shows it's possible that sewage streams from avid amphetamine communities could result in the doses reported by this study.

Our research group is continuing work on the ecological effects of multiple contaminants found in these streams.

Glad to hear. As someone who's swam in both Cresheim Creek and the Mississippi River just this summer, I can appreciate the need to study and reduce the contamination of America's waterways.

On 2016 Sep 17, Sylvia Seulbe Lee commented:

Daniel,

Thank you for your comments on the paper. We appreciate your skepticism and critical observations. Although the CNN story mentions that the source of amphetamine in Baltimore streams could be linked to the excrement of illicit drug users, we clarify that our study made no claims about the major source of the amphetamine in the streams we sampled. Illicit or recreational drug use is one potential source of amphetamine. We are unable to distinguish between recreational and prescription drug use in Baltimore, but prescription use of amphetamine (e.g., for the treatment of ADHD, illicit use by college students prior to exams) may be the primary cause for increased loading, especially given the increasing trend in number of diagnoses and prescription of medication for treatment of ADHD and similar conditions. Another source of amphetamine is improper disposal of prescription medication (flushing down the toilet).

We have to point out that your reading of the amphetamine concentrations is incorrect. We measured 0.630 ug/L amphetamine in Gwynns Falls, which is equivalent to 630 ng/L or 0.630 ng/mL. Additionally, we added 1 ng/mL (equivalent to 1 ug/L reported in the paper) amphetamine into the artificial streams, not 1000 ng/mL. Thus, the actual concentrations of amphetamine measured in the field and used in the experiment were 1000 times less than the concentrations you reported.

With respect to dilution of pharmaceutical products from sewage to the watershed, we would like to note that the stream we sampled is small (http://www.beslter.org/virtual_tour/Watershed.html) and the wastewater entering these streams is mostly raw, untreated sewage leaking from failing infrastructure. Baltimore has a population of more than 600,000 people and the large number of people feeding waste into that river could create quite a load. In addition, we note that amphetamine degraded by over 80% in the artificial streams. Thus, we noted in the discussion section that the high concentrations found in the field may indicate that the loading of amphetamine into the Baltimore streams is actually higher than the concentrations we measured, or that there is pseudo-persistence of amphetamine because of continuous input into the streams. Our finding that there were ecological effects even with 80% degradation of the parent amphetamine compound in the artificial streams is noteworthy.

Furthermore, we acknowledge that the concentrations of drugs in streams is spatially and temporally variable. As shown in our paper, the concentrations of drugs differed quite a bit between our sampling in 2013 and in 2014. The differences were likely due to high flow events prior to our sampling date in 2013. However, the environmental relevance of 1 ug/L amphetamine concentration was clearly supported in the paper by higher concentrations found in streams and rivers in other locations (e.g., Spain, India, etc.).

Finally, we agree completely that there are many pressing and detrimental contaminants in urban streams in Baltimore and elsewhere. Our research group is continuing work on the ecological effects of multiple contaminants found in these streams.

Regards, Sylvia - on behalf of my co-authors.

On 2016 Aug 26, Daniel Himmelstein commented:

Preamble: I'm far from an expert on environmental science, just a critical observer skeptical of claims that excrement from recreational drug users harms aquatic environments. Given the ongoing war on drugs, these topics are bound to political. For example, CNN covered this study with the title "Your drain on drugs: Amphetamines seep into Baltimore's streams." The CNN story concludes that excrement of illicit meth users is of environmental concern.

Premise: By the time pharmaceutical products in excrement reach the watershed, they will be extremely diluted. Humans safely tolerate the undiluted dosage, so in general I don't envision the extremely diluted dose harming aquatic life. In cases where the watershed contains high concentrations of pharmaceuticals, I suspect the contamination vector was not the excrement of users, but rather runoff from manufacturing or distribution processes.

Specifics:

This study observed the following six concentrations of amphetamine in Baltimore's streams: 3, 8, 13, 28, 101, 630 ng/ml (Table 1). They constructed four artificial streams where they introduced 1000 ng/ml of AMPH (D-amphetamine). Note that the controlled experiment evaluated an AMPH concentration 49 times that of the median concentration in Baltimore streams.

Furthermore, the Cmax (max concentration in plasma) of D-amphetamine resulting from prescription Adderall is 33.8 ng/ml (McGough JJ, 2003). Accordingly, the artificial streams used an AMPH concentration 30 times that of the blood of an active user. Note that AMPH has a high bioavailability: 75% of the consumed dose enters the blood according to DrugBank. It's unreasonable that runoff from excrement of users could result in a higher concentration than in the blood of the active user.

However, the study frames the contamination as a result of excrement. The introduction states:

Unfortunately, many of the same chemicals are also used illicitly as narcotics. After ingestion of AMPH approximately 30−40% of the parent compound plus its metabolites are excreted in human urine and feces, and these can be transported into surface waters directly or through wastewater treatment facilities. On the basis of increases in both medical and illicit usage, there is cause to speculate that the release of stimulants to various aquatic environments across the globe may be on the rise.

And the discussion states:

Our study demonstrates that illicit drugs may have the potential to alter stream structure and function.

Conclusion:

Evidence is lacking that excrement from recreational drug users has anything to do with environmentally harmful levels of AMPH in Baltimore streams. There seems to be a bigger issue with pollution in the Baltimore streams, with the study stating:

As much as 65% of the average flow in the Gwynns Falls can be attributed to untreated sewage from leaking infrastructure

In such a polluted aquatic environment, I suspect there are several more pressing and detrimental contaminants than recreational drugs. Finally, there are related studies, such as Jiang JJ, 2015, that I haven't had time to investigate.

Update 2016-09-01:

Here is more evidence that the 630 ng/ml of amphetamine observed in Gwynns Run at Carroll Park is extremely high. At that concentration, only 7.94 liters of stream water contain an effective dose of AMPH (5 mg). At 1000 ng/ml, 5.0 liters of water contain an effective dose of AMPH.

On 2016 Oct 31, Daniela Drandi commented:

Dr. Kumar S. and Colleagues gave a comprehensive description of the role of the ancestors (MFC and ASOqPCR) and the new high-throughput (NGF and NGS) MRD techniques in MM. However, in the “molecular methods for MRD detection” section, the Authors briefly refer to our original work, (Drandi D et al. J Mol Diagn. 2015;17(6):652-60), in a way that misinterprets our findings. Infact, in their review the Authors concluded that ddPCR is a “less applicable and more labor intensive” method compared to qPCR. This statement is in contrast to what was observed in our original work, where the comparison between qPCR and ddPCR showed that: 1) ddPCR has sensitivity, accuracy, and reproducibility comparable to qPCR; 2) ddPCR allows to bypass the standard curve issue, ensuring the quantification of samples with low tumor invasion at baseline or lacking MFC data; 3) ddPCR has a substantial benefit in terms of reduced costs, labor intensiveness and waste of precious tissue (see Drandi D et al., supplemental table S3). Notably, according to these findings, a standardization process is currently ongoing, both in the European (ESLHO-EuroMRD group) and in the Italian (Italian Lymphoma Foundation (FIL)-MRD Network) context. We agree that ddPCR does not overcome all the limitation of qPCR including the need, in IGH-based MRD, of patients-specific ASO-primers. However, as we showed, ddPCR is a feasible and an attractive alternative method for MRD detection, especially in term of applicability and labor intensiveness.

On 2017 May 24, Jordan Anaya commented:

I think readers of this article will be interested in a comment I posted at F1000Research, which reads:

I would like to clarify and/or raise some issues with this article and accompanying comments.

One: Reviewers Prachee Avasthi and Cynthia Wolberger both emphasized the importance of being able to sort by date, and in response the article was edited to say: "Currently, the search.bioPreprint default search results are ordered by relevance without any option to re-sort by date. The authors are aware of the pressing need for this added feature and if possible will incorporate it into the next version of the search tool."

However, it has been nearly a year and this feature has not been added.

Two: The article states: "Until the creation of search.bioPreprint there has been no simple and efficient way to identify biomedical research published in a preprint format..."

This is simply not true as Google Scholar indexes preprints. This was pointed out by Prachee Avasthi and in response the authors edited the text to include an incorrect method for finding preprints with Google Scholar. In a previous comment I pointed out how to correctly search for preprints with Google Scholar, and it appears the authors read the comment given they utilize the method at this page on their site: http://www.hsls.pitt.edu/gspreprints

Three: In his comment the author states: "We want to stress that the 'Sort by date' feature offered by Google Scholar (GS) is abysmal. It drastically drops the number of retrieved articles compared to the default search results."

This feature of Google Scholar is indeed limited, as it restricts the results to articles which were published in the past year. However, if the goal is to find recent preprints then this limitation shouldn't be a problem and I don't know that I would classify the feature as "abysmal".

Four: The article states: "As new preprint servers are introduced, search.bioPreprint will incorporate them and continue to provide a simple solution for finding preprint articles."

New preprint servers have been introduced, such as preprints.org and Wellcome Open Research, but search.biopreprint has not incorporated them.

Five: Prachee Avasthi pointed out that the search.biopreprint search engine cannot find this F1000Research article about search.biopreprint. It only finds the bioRxiv version. In response the author stated: "The Health Sciences Library System’s quality check team has investigated this issue and is working on a solution. We anticipate a quick fix of this problem."

This problem has not been fixed.

Competing Interests: I made and operate http://www.prepubmed.org/, which is another tool for searching for preprints.

On 2017 May 25, Cicely Saunders Institute Journal Club commented:

This paper was discussed on 12 May 2017 by the MSc students in Palliative Care at the KCL Cicely Saunders Institute.

The study, that we read with great interest, is a retrospective cohort study examining the association between palliative homecare services and the number of emergency department visits (in regards to both high and low acuity). Previous studies have shown that palliative care homecare services help reduce patients’ consecutive visits to emergency department. Therefore, in this study the authors tested the hypothesis that life-threatening visits could be reduced with the induction of palliative homecare services and education in treating high acuity symptoms at home.

The study used data from the Ontario Cancer Registry, including a large number of patients (54,743). The study showed that palliative homecare services could reduce the emergency department visit rate in both high and low-acuity groups, which could be considered a benefit of palliative homecare services. However, more information on the definition and the way of addressing palliative homecare services would allow better understanding of the generalizability of this finding. The authors used the Canadian Triage and Acuity Scale national guidelines as the classification, but we would have liked more information on the triage system and the allocation of patients according to their symptoms. For example, pain throat, malaise and fatigue are subjective symptoms which are less commonly classified as emergency or resuscitation-required, but in the study these were allocated in both acuity levels (high and low). We considered that this classification might affect the result significantly, therefore we would have appreciated further explanations.

Ka Meng Ao, Ming Yuang Huang, Pamela Turrillas, Myongjin Agnes Cho

On 2016 Aug 13, Richard Jahan-Tigh commented:

Might just be a case of Grover's disease? Good place for it clinically and in the right age group.

On 2016 Aug 10, Gerry Stimson commented:

In addition to the comments made by Clive Bates about the limitations of the study, a further fault is that the research measured e-cigarette use, and did not establish whether the e-cigarettes actually contained nicotine. As the paper reports 'Students were selected as ever e-cigarette users if they responded “yes” to the question “have you ever tried an e-cigarette”'. But the majority of youth vapers in the US do NOT use nicotine-containing e-cigarettes. The Monitoring the Future study reported that about 60% of youth vapers use e-cigarettes without nicotine. Lax scrutiny by the editor and reviewers means that this crucial issue is overlooked - indeed the article authors do not appear to have identified that this is as a limitation. This further undermines the rather facile policy recommendations to limit e-cigarette availability to young people.

On 2016 Aug 10, Clive Bates commented:

The authors appear to have discovered that people want to use e-cigarettes instead of smoking. For anyone taking a public health perspective, that is a positive development given they are likely to be at least 95% lower risk than smoking and nearly all e-cigarette users are currently (or otherwise would be) smokers.

The authors' policy proposals as stated in their conclusion do not follow from the observations they have made. The paper is insufficiently broad to draw any policy conclusions as it does not consider the interactions between vaping behaviour and smoking behaviour or wider effects on adult or adolescent welfare from increasing costs or reducing access. The paper does not give any insights into the effectiveness, costs, and risks of the proposed policies, so the authors have no foundation on which to make such recommendations.

The authors appear to be unaware of the potential for unintended consequences arising from their ideas. For example raising the cost of e-cigarettes may cause existing users to relapse to smoking or reduce the incentive to switch from smoking to vaping. They believe their policies will "be important for preventing continued use in youth", but the reaction may not be the one they want - complete abstinence. It may be a continuation of, or return to, smoking.

Finally, editors and peer reviews should be much firmer in disallowing policy recommendations based on completely inadequate reasoning and, in this case, on a misinterpretation of their own data in which they mischaracterize a benefit as a detriment and an opportunity as a threat.

On 2016 Aug 14, Haider Al-Darraji commented:

Figure 1 doesn't seem to reflect its provided legend! It is the Andersen framework rather than the research sites.

On 2016 Nov 05, Peter H. Asdahl commented:

I read with interest the study by Villani et al., who reported findings of a cancer surveillance program among TP53 mutation carriers. The authors analysed data from 89 TP53 mutation carriers diagnosed and followed at three tertiary cancer care centres in North America. Villani et al. concluded that their surveillance program is feasible, detects early tumour stages, and confers a sustained survival benefit. I emphasize a more conservative interpretation of the results because of biases common to observational studies of screening effects.

The primary outcome of the study was incident cancers. If the surveillance and non-surveillance groups were exchangeable at baseline (i.e. had similar distribution of known and unknown factors that affect cancer incidence), we would expect either higher frequency or earlier detection of cancer in the surveillance group because of differential detection attributable to systematic cancer surveillance. The results reported by Villani et al. are counterintuitive: 49% and 88% of individuals in the surveillance and non-surveillance groups, respectively, were diagnosed with at least one incident cancer (crude risk ratio for the effect of surveillance=0.56, 95% confidence limits: 0.41, 0.76. – n.b. risk time distribution is not included in the manuscript). This inverse result suggests that the groups were not exchangeable, and thus confounding is a concern. The potential for confounding is further supported by baseline imbalances in age, sex, and previous cancer diagnosis, which favour higher cancer incidence in the non-surveillance group (the P-values in Table 1 are misleading because of low power to detect differences).

The baseline imbalance between groups is exacerbated by lead time and length time biases when comparing survival. Detection of asymptomatic tumours by surveillance invariably adds survival time to the surveillance group and gives a spurious indication of improved survival. (Croswell JM, 2010) The effects of this bias are well-documented, and depending on the time from detection to symptom onset, the bias may be substantial. The survival analysis is further invalidated by the inclusion of non-cancerous lesions (e.g. fibroadenoma and osteochondroma, which are unlikely to affect survival) and pre-cancerous lesions (e.g. colonic adenoma and dysplastic naevus). Such lesions accounted for 40% and 16% of the incident neoplasms in the surveillance group and non-surveillance group, respectively.

Annual MRI was included in the surveillance protocol. Many of the malignancies among TP53 mutation carriers are rapidly growing, and thus more often detected by symptoms rather than annual follow-up. For example, most medulloblastoma recurrences are detected by symptoms a median of four months after the last imaging. (Torres CF, 1994)

In summary, the study by Villani et al. is not immune to biases common to observational studies of screening effects (Croswell JM, 2010) and the results should not be interpreted as a benefit of surveillance of TP53 mutation carriers as it uncritically has been done by many, which is well described in the accompanying editorial. The benefit, if any, of the proposed surveillance program cannot be assessed without a more rigorous study design to reduce known biases. For example, a study based on random allocation of individuals to surveillance and no surveillance would reduce the potential for confounding assuming that randomization is successful. In addition, adjustment for lead and length time biases is recommended regardless of randomized or non-randomized study design.

I would like to acknowledge Rohit P. Ojha, Gilles Vassal, and Henrik Hasle for their contributions to this comment.

On 2016 Oct 01, Serina Stretton commented:

We read with interest Vera-Badillo and colleagues’ recent publication entitled Honorary and Ghost Authorship in Reports of Randomised Clinical Trials in Oncology [1], which appears to show that these unethical practices are highly prevalent in oncology trial publications. While we applaud the authors for conducting original research in this field, we are concerned that the nonstandard definitions used for ghost authorship may have skewed the results.

Vera-Badillo and colleagues assessed oncology trial publications where the trial protocol was available and contained a list of investigators. They defined ghost authorship as being present if an individual met one of the following criteria: “(i) investigators listed in the protocol were neither included as authors nor acknowledged in the article; (2) the individual who performed the statistical analyses was neither listed as an author nor acknowledged; (3) assistance of a medical writer was acknowledged in the publication.” No rationale or references were provided in support of this definition. However, while similar definitions have been used in some surveys of unethical authorship practices [2, 3], the definition provided by Vera-Badillo and colleagues is not uniformly accepted [4-7] and is not consistent with the International Committee of Medical Journal Editors (ICMJE) authorship criteria [8] or with the Council of Science Editors (CSE) definition of ghost authorship [9].

There may be many valid reasons why participating investigators or statisticians may not be eligible for authorship of publications arising from a trial [8]. Here, we would like to respond to Vera-Badillo and colleagues’ assertion that medical writers who ARE acknowledged for their contributions are ghost authors. As specified by the ICMJE, medical writing is an example of a contribution that alone does not merit authorship and, therefore, should be disclosed as an acknowledgement. Also according to ICMJE, appropriate disclosure of medical writing assistance in the acknowledgements is not ghost authoring unless the medical writer was also involved in the generation of the research or its analysis, was responsible for the integrity of the research, or was accountable for the clinical interpretation of the findings. In their publication, Vera-Badillo and colleagues reported evidence of ghost authorship in 66% of evaluated studies. Of these, 34% had acknowledged medical writer assistance. Clearly, inclusion of declared medical writing assistance as ghost authorship has inflated the prevalence of ghost authoring reported in this study. Failure to apply standardised definitions of ghost authorship, guest (or honorary) authorship, and ghostwriting, limits the comparability of findings across studies and can mislead readers as to the true prevalence of these distinct practices [10-12].

As recognised by the ICMJE [8], the CSE [9], and the World Association of Medical Editors [13], professional medical writers have a legitimate and valued role in assisting authors disclose findings from clinical trials in the peer-reviewed literature. Vera-Badillo and colleagues state in the discussion that medical writers either employed or funded by the pharmaceutical industry are “likely to write in a manner that meets sponsor approval”. No evidence is cited to support this claim. If sponsor approval requires accurate and robust reporting of trial results in accordance with international guidelines on reporting findings from human research [8, 14, 15], then yes, we agree. Professional medical writers employed or funded by the pharmaceutical industry routinely work within ethical guidelines and receive mandatory training on ethical publication practices [16-19]. Although medical writers may receive requests from authors or sponsors that they believe to be unethical, findings from the Global Publication Survey, conducted from November 2012 to February 2013, showed that most requests (93%) were withdrawn after the need for compliance with guidelines was made clear to the requestor [19].

By expanding the definition of ghost authorship to include disclosed medical writing assistance, Vera-Badillo and colleagues have inflated the prevalence of ghost authorship in oncology trial publications. Such an unbalanced approach has the potential to detract from the true prevalence of ghost authorship where an individual who is deserving of authorship is hidden from the reader.

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Serina Stretton, ProScribe – Envision Pharma Group, Sydney, NSW, Australia; Jackie Marchington, Caudex – McCann Complete Medical Ltd, Oxford, UK; Cindy W. Hamilton Virginia Commonwealth University School of Pharmacy, Richmond; Hamilton House Medical and Scientific Communications, Virginia Beach, VA, USA; Art Gertel, MedSciCom, LLC, Lebanon, NJ, USA

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On 2018 Jan 16, Amanda Capes-Davis commented:

This paper has problems with its authentication testing, resulting in at least three misidentified cell lines (HeLa) being used as models for liver cancer.

The Materials and Methods of the paper state that "All cell lines were regularly authenticated by morphologic observation under microscopy". This is consistent with the policy of the journal, Cancer Research, which strongly encourages authentication testing of cell lines used in its publications.

However, morphologic observation is not a suitable method for authentication testing. Changes in morphology can be subtle and difficult to interpret; cultures can be misidentified before observation begins. To investigate the latter possibility, I examined publicly available datasets of STR genotypes to see if the cell lines listed in the paper are known to be misidentified.

Three of the cell lines used in this paper (Bel-7402, L-02, SMMC-7721) had STR genotypes published by Bian X, 2017 and Huang Y, 2017. All three "liver" cell lines correspond to HeLa and are therefore misidentified.

HeLa and its three misidentified derivatives were used in the majority of figures (Figures 2, 3, 5, and 6). Although the phosphorylation data appear to be unaffected, the conclusions regarding liver cancer metastasis must be re-examined.

What can we learn to improve the validity of our research publications?

For authors and reviewers:

• Morphologic observation is not suitable for authentication testing and, in this case, missed at least three misidentified cell lines.
• STR genotyping is effective for authentication of human cell lines and is the consensus method for comparison of human cell line samples (American Type Culture Collection Standards Development Organization Workgroup ASN-0002., 2010).
• A checklist for cell lines in manuscripts and grant applications is available at http://iclac.org/resources/cell-line-checklist/.

For journal editors and funding bodies:

• Encouragement of authentication testing is a step forward, but is insufficient to stop use of misidentified cell lines.
• Mandatory testing using an accepted method is effective (Fusenig NE, 2017) and would have detected and avoided this problem prior to publication.
• Policy on authentication testing requires oversight and ongoing review in light of such examples. This is important for NIH and other funding bodies who have recently implemented authentication of key resources as part of grant applications.

I am grateful to Rebecca Schweppe, Christopher Korch, Douglas Kniss, and Roland Nardone for their input to this comment and much helpful discussion.

On 2016 Sep 30, Paul Brookes commented:

I submitted a response to this opinion piece to the journal (Circ. Res.), but unfortunately was informed that they do not accept or publish correspondence related to this type of article. So, here's my un-published letter, which raises a number of issues with the article...

A recent Circ. Res. viewpointLoscalzo J, 2016 discussed the complex relationships between redox biology and metabolism in the setting of hypoxia, with an emphasis on the use of biochemically correct terminology. While there is broad agreement that the field of redox biology is often confounded by use of inappropriate methods and language Kalyanaraman B, 2012,Forman HJ, 2015, concern is raised regarding some ideas on reductive stress in the latter part of the article.

In discussing the fate of glycolytically-derived NADH in hypoxia, the reader is urged to “Remember that while redirecting glucose metabolism to glycolysis decreases NADH production by the TCA cycle and decreases leaky electron transport chain flux, glycolysis continues to produce NADH". First, glucose undergoes glycolysis regardless of cellular oxygenation status; this simply happens at a faster rate in hypoxia. As such, glucose is not redirected but rather its product pyruvate is. Second, regardless a proposed lower rate of NADH generation by the TCA cycle (which may not actually be the case Chouchani ET, 2014,Hochachka PW, 1975) NADH still accumulates in hypoxic mitochondria because its major consumer, the O2-dependent respiratory chain, is inhibited. It is clear that both NADH consumers and producers can determine the NADH/NAD+ ratio, and in hypoxia the consumption side of the equation cannot be forgotten.

While the field is in broad agreement that NADH accumulates in hypoxia, the piece goes on to claim that “How the cell handles this mounting pool of reducing equivalents remained enigmatic until recently.” This is misleading. The defining characteristic of hypoxia, one that has dominated the literature in the nearly 90 years since Warburg's seminal work Warburg O, 1927, is the generation of lactate by lactate dehydrogenase (LDH), a key NADH consuming reaction that permits glycolysis to continue. Lactate is “How cells handle the mounting pool of reducing equivalents.”

Without mentioning lactate, an alternate fate for hypoxic NADH is proposed, based on the recent discovery that both LDH and malate dehydrogenase (MDH) can use NADH to drive the reduction of 2-oxoglutarate (α-ketoglutarate, α-KG) to the L(S)-enantiomer of 2-hydroxyglutarate (L-2-HG) under hypoxic conditions Oldham WM, 2015,Intlekofer AM, 2015. We also found elevated 2-HG in the ischemic preconditioned heart Nadtochiy SM, 2015, and recently reported that acidic pH – a common feature of hypoxia – can promote 2-HG generation by LDH and MDH Nadtochiy SM, 2016.

While there can be little doubt that the discovery of hypoxic L-2-HG accumulation is an important milestone in understanding hypoxic metabolism and signaling, the claim that L-2-HG is “a reservoir for reducing equivalents and buffers NADH/NAD+” is troublesome on several counts. From a quantitative standpoint, we reported the canonical activities of LDH (pyruvate + NADH --> lactate + NAD+) and of MDH (oxaloacetate + NADH --> malate + NAD+) are at least 3-orders of magnitude greater than the rates at which these enzymes can reduce α-KG to L-2-HG Nadtochiy SM, 2016. This is in agreement with an earlier study reporting a catalytic efficiency ratio of 10⁷ for the canonical vs. L-2-HG generating activities of MDH Rzem R, 2007. Given these constraints, we consider it unlikely that the generation of L-2-HG by these enzymes is a quantitatively important NADH sink, compared to their native reactions. It is also misleading to refer to the α-KG --> L-2-HG reaction as a "reservoir for reducing equivalents", because even though this reaction consumes NADH, it is not clear whether the reverse reaction regenerates NADH. Specifically, the metabolite rescue enzyme L-2-HG-dehydrogenase uses an FAD electron acceptor and is not known to consume NAD+ Nadtochiy SM, 2016,Rzem R, 2007,Weil-Malherbe H, 1937.

Another potentially important sink for reducing equivalents in hypoxia that was not mentioned, is succinate. During hypoxia, NADH oxidation by mitochondrial complex I can drive the reversal of complex II (succinate dehydrogenase) to reduce fumarate to succinate Chouchani ET, 2014. This redox circuit, in which fumarate replaces oxygen as an electron acceptor for respiration, was first hinted at over 50 years ago SANADI DR, 1963. Importantly (and in contrast to L-2-HG as mentioned above), the metabolites recovered upon withdrawal from a fumarate --> succinate "electron bank" are the same as those deposited.

Although recent attention has focused on the pathologic effects of accumulated succinate in driving ROS generation at tissue reperfusion Chouchani ET, 2014,Pell VR, 2016, the physiologic importance of hypoxic complex II reversal as a redox reservoir and as an evolutionarily-conserved survival mechanism Hochachka PW, 1975 should not be overlooked. Quantitatively, the levels of lactate and succinate accumulated during hypoxia are comparable Hochachka PW, 1975, and both are several orders of magnitude greater than reported hypoxic 2-HG levels.

While overall the article makes a number of important points regarding reductive stress and the correct use of terminology in this field, we feel that the currently available data do not support a quantitatively significant role for L-2-HG as a hypoxic reservoir for reducing equivalents. These quantitative limitations do not diminish the potential importance of L-2-HG as a hypoxic signaling molecule Nadtochiy SM, 2016,Su X, 2016,Xu W, 2011.

Paul S. Brookes, PhD.

On 2017 May 04, Cicely Saunders Institute Journal Club commented:

This paper was discussed on 2.5.17, by students on the KCL Cicely Saunders Institute MSc in Palliative Care

We read with interest the systematic review article by Cahill et al on the evidence for conducting palliative care family meetings.

We congratulate the authors on their effort to include as many papers as possible by using a wide search strategy. Ultimately, only a small number of papers were relevant to this review and were included. The authors found significant heterogeneity within the various studies, in terms of the patient settings, interviewer background, and country of origin and culture. Study methods included both qualitative and quantitative designs, and a range of outcome measures, but there was a notable lack of RCT studies.

Two studies found a benefit of family meetings using validated outcome measures. A further four found a positive outcome of family meetings, but with non-validated outcome measures. We felt that the lack of validated outcome measures does not necessarily exclude their value.

We agree with the conclusions of the authors that there is limited evidence for family meetings in the literature and that further research would be of value. The small and diverse sample size leads to the potential for a beta error (not finding a difference where one exists). We were surprised by the final statement of the abstract that family meetings should not be routinely adopted into clinical practice, and we do not feel that the data in the paper support this: the absence of finding is not synonymous to the finding of absence. Further, our experience in three health care settings (UK, Canada, Switzerland) is that family meetings are already widely and routinely used.

Aina Zehnder, Emma Hernandez-Wyatt, James W Tam

On 2016 Nov 15, John Roger Andersen commented:

Read publishers pdf version in ReaderCube for free: click here.

On 2017 Feb 03, Alfonso Leiva commented:

I would like to remark this study is the first prospective cohort to analyse the assotiation between time to diagnosis and stage. Fiona Walter et al studied the factors related to longer time to diagnosis and tried to explain the lack of assotiation between longer time to diagnosis and stage. We have recently published an article to explain this paradox and suggest confounding by an unknown factor as a posible explination. We have suggested the stage when symptoms appear is the main confounder in the assotiation between time to diagnosis and stage of diagnosis and propose a graphic representation for the progression of CRC fron an preclinical asymtomatic stage to a clinical symptomatic stage.

Leiva A, Esteva M, Llobera J, Macià F, Pita-Fernández S, González-Luján L, Sánchez-Calavera MA, Ramos M. Time to diagnosis and stage of symptomatic colorectal cancer determined by three different sources of information: A population based retrospective study. Cancer Epidemiol. 2017 Jan 23;47:48-55.

On 2016 Nov 17, BSH Cancer Screening, Help-Seeking and Prevention Journal Club commented:

The HBRC discussed this paper during the journal club held on November 15th 2016. This paper fits well with research conducted within our group on early diagnosis and symptomatic presentation. We considered this paper to be a useful addition to the literature and the paper raises some interesting findings which could be investigated further.

The study examined the factors associated with a colorectal cancer (CRC) diagnosis and time to diagnosis (TDI). These factors included symptoms, clinical factors and sociodemographic factors. Due to the important role early diagnosis plays in survival from CRC, it is pertinent to investigate at which point diagnosis may be delayed. Early diagnosis of CRC can be problematic due to many of the symptoms being able to be associated with other health problems or being benign. The authors acknowledge that most cases of CRC present symptomatically.

The group was interested in the finding that less specific symptoms such as indigestion or abdominal pain were associated with shorter patient intervals and that specific classic symptoms, such as rectal bleeding were associated with shorter health system intervals (HSI). So what patients might perceive to be alarm symptoms differs from perceptions of healthcare professionals. It was also highlighted that there was a discrepancy in the patient interval found in this study with a previous study, with this study showing 35 days as the median patient interval, compared to a primary care audit conducted by Lyratzopoulos and colleagues (2015) which showed a patient interval of 19 days. It was also interesting that family history of cancer was associated with a longer HSI, given that family history is a risk factor for cancer.

The main advantage of this study is the prospective design, with the recruitment of patients prior to their diagnosis. Patients reported their symptoms and so provided insight into what they experienced, but the group did acknowledge that this was retrospective as symptoms were those experienced before they presented at the GP, with these being up to 2 years before diagnosis. The group felt the authors’ use of multiple regression models was a benefit to the study, allowing an investigation into time-constant and duration-varying effects, as in line with previous research, it was shown that rectal bleeding becomes normalised over time.

We discussed limitations of the study and recognised that the authors did not acknowledge the Be Clear on Cancer Awareness Campaigns which took place during the data collection (Jan-March 2011, Jan-March 2012, Aug-Sept 2012) and could have had an impact by shortening patient interval and increasing referral rates. We also discussed that there could be an inherent bias in GPs and that HSI could be due to this bias of GP’s wanting to reassure patients that their symptom is likely to be the sign of something other than cancer. This could also help explain the longer time to diagnosis and HSI in those with depression and anxiety, as GP’s may feel the need to over reassure these patients, recognising that they are already anxious. However, when symptoms have been shown to be a ‘false alarm’, overreassurance and undersupport from healthcare professionals has been shown to lead patients to interpret subsequent symptoms as benign and express concern about appearing hypochondriacal (Renzi, Whitaker and Wardle, 2015). It may also be due to healthcare professionals attributing symptoms to some of the side effects related to medication for depression and anxiety such as diarrhoea, vomiting, and constipation. The authors suggest also that healthcare professionals might not take these patients physical symptoms seriously. There was also a small number of CRC patients given the amount of patients approached, with the authors recognising the study is underpowered. There may also have been an overestimate of the number of bowel symptoms in non-cancer patients, which was recognised by the authors. It was also unclear that the authors had also conducted univariate analyses and that these were included in the supplementary material until they were mentioned at the end of the results.

There may also be differences in TDI depending on the type of referral e.g. two week wait, safety netting, and the group would have liked some more information about this. The group would also have liked to see some discussion about the median HSI being longer (58 days) than the 31 days currently recommended for diagnosis from the day of referral and the new target for 2020 of 28 days from referral to diagnosis. It would have also been useful to have some information about how many consultations patients had before being referred, as the authors state in the introduction that 1/3 of CRC patients have three or more consultations with the GP before a referral is made. It would also have been informative for the data on how long participants took to return their questionnaire, with the authors stating that most were completed within 2 weeks, but that some were within 3 months.

It would be interesting to look further into the factors affecting patients presenting to their GP straight away with symptoms and those which delay. We discussed possible explanations being personality, extreme individual differences in how symptoms are perceived as serious or not and external factors such as being too busy. It would also be interesting to consider whether these symptoms were mentioned by patients as an afterthought at the end of a consultation about something else, or whether this was the symptom that patients primarily presented to the doctor with.

In conclusion, the HBRC group read the article with great interest and would encourage further studies in this area.

Conflicts of interest: We report no conflict of interests and note that the comments produced by the group are collective and not the opinion of any one individual.

References

1) Lyratzopoulos G, Saunders CL, Abel GA, McPhail S, Neal RD, Wardle J, Rubin GP (2015) The relative length of the patient and the primary care interval in patients with 28 common and rarer cancers. Br J Cancer 112(Suppl 1): S35–S40.

2) Renzi C, Whitaker KL, Wardle J. (2015) Over-reassurance and undersupport after a 'false alarm': a systematic review of the impact on subsequent cancer symptom attribution and help seeking. BMJ Open. 5(2):e007002. doi: 10.1136/bmjopen-2014-007002.

On 2017 May 29, Michael Goard commented:

We thank the Janelia Neural Circuit Computation Journal Club for taking the time to review our paper. However, we wish to clarify a few of the points brought up in the review.

1) Off-target effects of inactivation. The authors of the review correctly point out that off-target effects can spread laterally from an inactivated region, potentially complicating the interpretation of the V1/PPC inactivation experiments. We have since carried out (not yet published) electrophysiology experiments in V1 during PPC photoinactivation and find there is some suppression (though not silencing) of V1 excitatory neurons through polysynaptic effects. The suppression is moderate and the V1 neurons maintain stimulus selectivity, so it is unlikely off-target suppression in V1 is responsible for the PPC inactivation effects, but the results do need to be interpreted with some caution.

Notably, the suppression effect is not distance-dependent; it instead appears heterogeneous and is likely dependent on connectivity, as has been recently demonstrated in other preparations (Otchy et al, Nature, 2015). Given these findings, describing off-target effects as a simple function of power and distance is likely misleading. Indeed, even focal cortical silencing is likely to have complex effects on subcortical structures in addition to the targeted region. Instead, we suggest that while photoinactivation experiments are still useful for investigating the role of a region in behavior, the results need to be interpreted carefully (e.g., as demonstrating an area as permissive rather than instructive; per Otchy et al., 2015).

2) Silencing of ALM in addition to M2. The photoinactivation experiments were designed to discriminate between sensory, parietal, and motor contributions to the task, rather than specific regions within motor cortex. We did not intend to suggest that ALM was unaffected in our photoinactivation experiments (this is the principal reason we used the agnostic term “fMC” rather than referring to a specific region). Although the center of our window was located posterior and medial to ALM, we used a relatively large window (2 x 2.5 mm), so ALM was likely affected.

3) Rebound activity contributing to fMC photoinactivation effects. Rebound effects are not likely to be responsible for the role of fMC during the stimulus epoch. First, our photostimulus did not cause consistent rebound excitation (e.g., Figure 8B). This is likely due to the use of continuous rather than pulsed photoinactivation (see Figure 1G in Zhao et al., Nat Methods, 2011). Second, we did run several inactivation experiments with a 100-200 ms offset ramp (as in Guo et al., 2014), and found identical results (we did not include these experiments in the publication since we did not observe rebound activity). We suspect the discrepancy with Guo et al. is due to the unilateral vs. bilateral photoinactivation (Li, Daie, et al., 2016), as the reviewers suggest.

On 2017 Apr 07, Janelia Neural Circuit Computation Journal Club commented:

Highlight/Summary

This is one of several recent papers investigating cortical dynamics during head-restrained behaviors in mice using mostly imaging methods. The questions posed were:

Which brain regions are responsible for sensorimotor transformation? Which region(s) are responsible for maintaining task-relevant information in the delay period between the stimulus and response?

These questions were definitely not answered. However, the study contains some nice cellular calcium imaging in multiple brain regions in a new type of mouse behavior.

The behavior is a Go / No Go behavioral paradigm. The S+ and S- stimuli were drifting horizontal and vertical gratings, respectively. The mouse had to withhold licking during a delay epoch. During a subsequent response epoch the mouse responded by licking for a reward on Go trials.

Strengths

Perhaps the greatest strength of the paper is that activity was probed in multiple regions in the same behavior (all L2/3 neurons, using two-photon calcium imaging). Activity was measured in primary visual cortex (V1), ‘posterior parietal cortex’ (PPC; 2 mm posterior, 1.7 mm lateral), and fMC. ‘fMC' overlaps sMO in the Allen Reference Atlas, posterior and medial to ALM (distance approximately 1 mm) (Li/Daie et al 2016). This location is analogous to rat 'frontal orienting field’ (Erlich et al 2011) or M2 (Murakami et al 2014). Folks who work on whiskers refer to this area as vibrissal M1, because it corresponds to the part of motor cortex with the lowest threshold for whisker movements.

In V1, a large fraction (> 50 %) of neurons were active and selective during the sample epoch. One of the more interesting findings is that a substantial fraction of V1 neurons were suppressed during the delay epoch. This could be a mechanism to reduce ‘sensory gain’ and ’distractions' during movement preparation. Interestingly, PPC neurons were task-selective during the sample or response epochs; consistent with previous work in primates (many studies in parietal areas) and rats (Raposo et al 2014), individual neurons multiplexed sensory and movement selectivity. However, there was little activity / selectivity during the delay epoch. This suggests that their sequence-like dynamics in maze tasks (e.g. Harvey et al 2012) might reflect ongoing sensory input and movement in the maze tasks, rather than more cognitive variables. fMC neurons were active and selective during the delay and response epoch, consistent with a role in movement planning and motor control, again consistent with many prior studies in primates, rats (Erlich et al 2011), and mice (Guo/Li et al 2014).

Weaknesses

Delayed response or movement tasks have been used for more than forty years to study memory-guided movements and motor preparation. Typically different stimuli predict different movement directions (e.g. saccades, arm movements or lick directions). Previous experiments have shown that activity during the delay epoch predicts specific movements, long before the movement. In this study, Go and No Go trials are fundamentally asymmetric and it is unclear how this behavioral paradigm relates to the literature on movement preparation. What does selectivity during the delay epoch mean? On No Go trials a smart mouse would simply ignore the events post stimulus presentation, making delay activity difficult to interpret.

The behavioral design also makes the interpretation of the inactivation experiments suspect. The paper includes an analysis of behavior with bilateral photoinhibition (Figure 9). The authors argue for several take-home messages (‘we were able to determine the necessity of sensory, association, and frontal motor cortical regions during each epoch (stimulus, delay, response) of a memory-guided task.'); all of these conclusions come with major caveats.

1.) Inactivation of both V1 and PPC during the sample epoch abolishes behavior, caused by an increase in false alarm rate and decrease in hit rate (Fig. 9d). The problem is that the optogenetic protocol silenced a large fraction of the brain. The methods are unlikely to have the spatial resolution to specifically inactivate V1 vs PPC. The authors evenly illuminated a 2 mm diameter window with 6.5mW/mm² light in VGat-ChR2 mice. This amounts to 20 mW laser power. According to the calibrations performed by Guo / Li et al (2014) in the same type of transgenic mice, this predicts substantial silencing over a radius (!) of 2-3 mm (Guo / Li et al 2014; Figure 2). Photoinhibiting V1 will therefore silence PPC and vice versa. It is therefore expected that silencing V1 and PPC have similar behavioral effects.

2.) Silencing during the response window abolished the behavioral response (licking). Other labs labs have also observed total suppression of voluntary licking with frontal bilateral inactivation (e.g. Komiyama et al 2010; and unpublished). However, the proximal cause of the behavioral effect is likely silencing of ALM, which is more anterior and lateral to ‘fMC’. ALM projects to premotor structures related to licking. Low intensity activation of ALM, but not more medial and posterior structures such as fMC, triggers rhythmic licking (Li et al 2015) The large photostimulus used here would have silenced ALM as well as fMC.

3.) Somewhat surprisingly, behavior is perturbed after silencing fMC during the sample (stimulus) and delay epochs. In Guo / i et al 2014, unilateral silencing of frontal cortex during the sample epoch (in this case ALM during a tactile decision task, 2AFC type) did not cause a behavioral effect (although bilateral silencing is likely different; see Li / Daie et al 2016). The behavioral effect in Goard et al 2016 may not be caused by the silencing itself, but by the subsequent rebound activity (an overshoot after silencing; see for example Guo JZ et al eLife 2016; Figure 4—figure supplement 2). Rebound activity is difficult to avoid, but can be minimized by gradually ramping down the photostimulus, a strategy that was not used here. The key indication that rebound was a problem is that behavior degrades almost exclusively via an increase in false alarm rate -- in other words - mice now always lick independent of trial type. Increased activity in ‘fMC’, as expected with rebound, is expected to promote these false alarms. More experiments are needed to make the inactivation experiments solid.

On 2017 May 18, Jen Herman commented:

I would like to offer a possible alternative interpretation to explain the gain of interaction variants we identified for both SirA and DnaA that we did not conceive of at the time of publication.

In the gain of interaction screen (bacterial two-hybrid - B2H) we obtained the surprising result that none of the variants we identified (either in SirA or DnaA) occurred near the known SirA-DnaA interaction interface. The DnaA gain of interaction substitutions occurred primarily in the region of DnaA important for DnaA oligomerization (Domain III). If these variants are defective for DnaA self interaction, then they might also be more available to interact with SirA in the B2H.

If SirA, like DnaA, is also capable of forming higher order oligomers (at least at the higher copy numbers likely present in the B2H), then it is also conceivable that the gain of interaction variants we identified within SirA are also defective in this form of self-interaction. One piece of data to suggest this hypothesis might be correct is that truncating several amino acids from SirA's C-terminus (including the critical P141T residue) increases SirA solubility following overexpression. Previously, we and others were unable to identify conditions to solubilize any overexpressed wild-type SirA. Of course, this could simply be due to a propensity of SirA to form aggregates/inclusion bodies; however, another possibility is that SirA has an intrinsic tendency to oligomerize/polymerize at high concentrations, and that SirA's C-terminal region facilitates this particular form of self-interaction.

If any of this is true, one should be able to design B2H gain of interaction screens to identify residues that likely disrupt the suspected oligomerization of any candidate protein suspected to mutltimerize (as we may have inadvertently done). This could be potentially useful for identifying monomer forms that are more amenable to, for example, protein overexpression or crystallization.

In the bigger picture, one wonders how many proteins that are "insoluble" are actually forming ordered homomers of some sort due to their chiral nature. Relatedly, would this tendency be of any biological significance or simply a consequence of not being selected against in vivo (especially for proteins present at low copy number in the cell)? (see PMID 10940245 for a very nice review related to this subject).

On 2018 Jan 01, Tanya Halliday commented:

A letter to the editor (and response) have been published indicating failure to account for regression to the mean in the article. Thus, the conclusion regarding effectiveness of the SHE program is not supported by the data.

See: http://www.tandfonline.com/doi/full/10.1080/08952841.2017.1407575

On 2016 Dec 11, Sudheendra Rao commented:

Would be glad to get more info on the PKA. What exactly was detected? total, regulatory/cat sub unit? phosphorylation status etc. Or just providing info on antibodies used will also do. Thanks.

On 2016 Nov 18, Julia Romanowska commented:

Sounds interesting, but I couldn't find an option in the R package to run on several cores - and this is an important feature when using GWAS or EWAS.

On 2016 Aug 19, Mayer Brezis commented:

The study shows a correlation between low albumin and mortality - which makes sense and confirms previous literature. Is the relationship CAUSAL? The authors suggest causality: "Maintaining a normal serum albumin level may not only prolong patient survival but also may prevent medical complications...". Couldn't low albumin simply be A MARKER of more severe morbidity? If a baseline higher albumin BEFORE initiation of the tube feeding predicts lower mortality, how could this feeding mediate the improved survival? Are the authors suggesting that low albumin should a consideration AGAINST tube feeding because of predicted poorer prognosis?<br> Similarly, stable or increased albumin predicts long term survival not necessarily because of tube feeding, but simply as a marker of healthier people who survived the gastrostomy procedure. Causality cannot be implied in the absence of a control group and missed follow up in a third of the patients in the study.

On 2017 Mar 19, Harri Hemila commented:

Two unpublished trials bias the conclusions on vitamin C and atrial fibrillation

In their meta-analysis on vitamin C and postoperative atrial fibrillation (POAF), Polymeropoulos E, 2016 state that “no significant heterogeneity was observed among [nine] included studies” (p. 244). However, their meta-analysis did not include the data of 2 large US trials that found no effect of vitamin C against POAF and have thus remained unpublished. If those 2 trials are included, there is significant heterogeneity in the effects of vitamin C. Vitamin C had no effects against POAF in 5 US trials, but significantly prevented POAF in a set of 10 trials conducted outside of the USA, mainly in Iran and Greece, see Hemilä H, 2017 and Hemilä H, 2017. Although the conclusion by Polymeropoulos E, 2016 that vitamin C does have effects against POAF seems appropriate, the effect has been observed only in studies carried out in less wealthy countries.

On 2016 Aug 16, Jon Simons commented:

Thank you for alerting us to this problem with the GingerALE software. We will look into it and, if necessary, consult the journal about whether a corrective communication might be appropriate.

On 2016 Aug 09, Christopher Tench commented:

The version of GingerALE (2.3.2) has a bug in the FDR algorithm that resulted in false positive results. This bug was fixed at version 2.3.3.

On 2016 Aug 19, Lydia Maniatis commented:

Please find comments on this article on PubPeer.

On 2016 Aug 01, Christopher Southan commented:

This link http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1471489216300625 was providing a free download, but alas no longer :(

On 2017 Oct 21, Anju Anand commented:

http://www.thelancet.com/journals/lanres/article/PIIS2213-2600(16)30318-6/abstract

This is our twitter #rsjc discussion on this article

On 2016 Jul 30, Christopher Southan commented:

Updated PubChem CID mappings for all 400 compounds https://cdsouthan.blogspot.se/2013/07/a-peek-into-malaria-box.html

On 2016 Jul 29, Inge Seim commented:

Please note that GHRL (derived from genome sequencing data) in 31 bird species, including Columba livia, was reported in late 2014 (http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/25500363). Unfortunately, Xie and colleagues did not cite this work.

On 2016 Aug 02, MA Rodríguez-Cabello commented:

Dear sirs, It is a wrong translation of the original text. Where this text says "prostate-specific antigen level" the original abstract says ASA classification. I apologize for the error in the translation done from the original abstract provided by Elsevier.

On 2016 Dec 28, Lydia Maniatis commented:

Followers of the school of thought to which the authors of this article belong believe, among other odd things, in the notion that visual perception can be studied without reference to form. Thus, the reference made in the title of this paper to "regular sparse micro-patterns." There are (micro)-patterns and there are (micro)-patterns; do the present conclusions apply to any and all "regular, sparse micro-patterns?" Or only selected ones?

Among the other beliefs of this school is the notion that different retinal projections trigger processing at different levels of the visual system, such that, for example, the activities of V1 neurons may be directly discerned in a “simple” percept. These supposed V1 (etc) signatures, of course, only apply to restricted features of a restricted set of stimuli (e.g. "grid-textures") under restricted contexts. The supposed neural behaviors and their links to perception are simple, involving largely local summation and inhibition.

The idea that different percepts/features selectively tap different layers of visual processing is not defensible, and no serious attempt has ever been made to defend it. The problem was flagged by Teller (1984), who labeled it the “nothing mucks it up proviso” highlighting the failure to explain the role of the levels of the visual system (whose processes involved unimaginably complex feedback effects) not invoked by a particular “low-level” explanation. With stunning lack of seriousness Graham (e.g 1992, see comments in PubPeer) proposed that under certain conditions the brain becomes transparent through to the lower levels, and contemporary researchers have implicitly embraced this view. The fact is, however, that even the stimuli that are supposed to selectively tap into low-level processes (sine wave gratings/Gabor patches) produce 3D percepts with the impression of light and shadow; these facts are never addressed by devotees of the transparent brain, whose models are not interested in and certainly couldn’t handle them.

The use of “Gabor patches” is a symptom of the other untenable assumption that “low-levels” of the visual system perform a Fourier analysis of the luminance structure of the retinal projection at each moment. There is no conceivable reason why the visual system should do this, or how, as it would not contribute to use of luminance patterns to construct a representation of the environment. There is also no evidence that it does this.

In addition, it is also, with no evidence, asserted that the neural “signal” is “noisy.” This assumption is quite convenient, as the degree of supposed “noise” can be varied ad lib for the purposes of model-fitting. It is not clear how proponents of a “signal detecting mechanism with noise” conceive of the distinction between neural activity denoting “signal” and neural activity denoting “noise.” In order to describe the percept as the product of “signal” and “noise,” investigators have to define the “signal,” i.e. what should be contained in the percept in the absence of (purely hypothetical) “noise;” But that means that rather than observing how the visual process handles stimulation, they preordain what the percept should be, and describe (and "model") deviations as being due to “noise.”

Furthermore, observers employed by this school are typically required to make forced, usually binary, choices, such that the form of the data will comply with model assumptions, as opposed to being complicated by what observers actually perceive, (and by the need to describe this with precision).

Taken together, the procedures and assumptions employed by Baker and Meese (2016) and many others in the field are very convenient, insofar as “theory” at no point has to come into contact with fact or logic. It is completely bootstrapped, as follows: A model of neural function is constructed, and stimuli are selected/discovered which are amenable to an ad hoc description in terms of this model; aspects of the percepts produced by the stimulus figure (as well as percepts produced by other known figures) that are not consistent with the model are ignored, as are all the logical problems with the assumptions (many of which Teller (1984), a star of the field, tried to call attention to with no effect); the stimulus is then recursively treated as evidence for the model. Variants of the restricted set of stimulus types may produce minor inconsistencies with the models, which are then adjusted accordingly, refitted, and so on. (Here, Baker and Meese freely conclude that perception of their stimulus indicates a "mid-level" (as they conceive it) contribution). It is a perfectly self-contained system - but it isn’t science. In fact, I think it is exactly the kind of activity that Popper was trying to propose criteria for excluding from empirical science.

On 2017 Sep 08, Harald HHW Schmidt commented:

This paper is poorly validated. The detection of NOX4 relies on a poorly validated antibody, or in fact no one in the field believes that it is specific. Others have shown that siRNAs can be highly unspecific. We and others cannot detect NOX4 in macrophages. Thus the title and conclusions appear to be invalid.

On 2016 Aug 18, Daniel Weeks commented:

Relative effect sizes of FTO variants and rs373863828 on body mass index in Samoans

We would like to thank Dr. Janssens for making these helpful comments about the presentation and interpretation of our findings. And we welcome this opportunity to present our results more precisely and clearly.

Regarding the suggestion that we should have compared standardized effects, there exists some literature that argues that comparison of standardized effects can be misleading (Cummings P, 2004, Cummings P, 2011). Indeed, Rothman and Greenland (1998, p. 672) recommend that "effects should be expressed in a substantively meaningful unit that is uniform across studies, not in standard-deviation units." While the argument for comparing standardized effects may be more compelling when different studies used different measurement scales, in this case, body mass index (BMI) has been measured in prior studies and our current one using a common scale.

As recommended, we have now assessed the effect of variants on BMI in the FTO region to allow for direct comparison in our Samoan population. As Table 1 indicates, while the effects of these FTO variants are not statistically significant in our discovery sample, the estimates of the effect size of the FTO variants are similar in magnitude to previous estimates in other populations, and the non-standardized effect of the missense variant rs373863828 in CREBRF is approximately 3.75 to 4.66 times greater than the effects of the FTO variants in our discovery sample.

We concur with the important reminder that the odds ratio overestimates the relative risk when the outcome prevalence is high.

Thank you,

Daniel E. Weeks and Ryan Minster on behalf of all of the co-authors.

Department of Human Genetics, Graduate School of Public Health, University of Pittsburgh, Pittsburgh, PA, USA.

References:

Cummings P. (2004) Meta-analysis based on standardized effects is unreliable. Arch Pediatr Adolesc Med. 158(6):595-7. PubMed PMID: 15184227.

Cummings P. (2011) Arguments for and against standardized mean differences (effect sizes). Arch Pediatr Adolesc Med. 165(7):592-6. doi: 10.1001/archpediatrics.2011.97. PubMed PMID: 21727271.

Rothman, K.J. and Greenland S. (1998) Modern epidemiology, second edition. Lippincott Williams & Wilkins, Philadelphia.

On 2016 Aug 03, Cecile Janssens commented:

This study showed that a variant in CREBRF is strongly associated with body mass index (BMI) in Samoans. The authors write that this gene variant is associated with BMI with “a much larger effect size than other known common obesity risk variants, including variation in FTO.” The risk variant was also “positively associated with obesity risk” and with other obesity-related traits. For a correct interpretation of these findings, two methodological issues need to be considered.

Much larger effect size

The effect size of the CREBRF variant (1.36-1.45 kg/m2 per copy of the risk allele) is indeed larger than that of FTO (0.39 kg/m2 per copy), but this comparison is not valid to claim that the gene variant has a stronger effect.

The effect size for the FTO gene comes from a pooled analysis of studies in which the average BMI of the population was below 28kg/m2 with standard deviations lower than 4kg/m2. In this study, the mean BMI was 33.5 and 32.7 kg/m2 in the discovery and replication samples and the standard deviations were higher (6.7 and 7.2 kg/m2). To claim that the CREBRF has a stronger effect than FTO, the researchers should have compared standardized effects that take into account the differences in BMI between the study populations, or they should have assessed the effect of FTO to allow for a direct comparison in the Samoan population.

It is surprising that the authors have not considered this direct comparison between the genes, given that an earlier publication had reported about the relationship between FTO and BMI in the replication datasets of this study (Karns R, 2012) That study showed no association between FTO and BMI in the smallest, but a higher effect size in the largest of the two replication samples (0.55-0.70 kg/m2). The effect of the CREBRF gene may still be stronger than that of the FTO gene, but the difference may not be as large as the comparison of unstandardized effect sizes between the populations suggests.

Impact on obesity risk

The authors also investigate the “impact of the gene variant on the risk of obesity” and found that the odds ratio for the gene variant was 1.44 in the replication sample. This value is an odds ratio and indicates the impact on the odds of obesity, not on the risk of obesity. The difference between the two is essential here.

The value of the odds ratio is similar to the relative risk when the outcome of interest is rare. In this study, the majority of the people were obese, 55.5% and 48.8% in the discovery and replication samples had BMI higher than 32kg/m2. When the prevalence of the outcome is this high, the odds ratio overestimates the relative risk. When the odds ratio is 1.44, the relative risk is 1.43 when the prevalence of obesity in noncarriers is 1%, 1.32 when it is 20%, 1.22 when it is 40%, 1.18 when it is 50%, and 1.16 when 55% of the non-carriers is obese. Regarding the impact on obesity risk, the gene variant might be more ordinary as suggested.

On 2016 Aug 21, David Keller commented:

Goulden's data actually confirms that minimum mortality occurs with light-to-moderate alcohol intake

Goulden's study concludes: "Moderate alcohol consumption is not associated with reduced all-cause mortality in older adults", a finding he admits is contrary to that of many prior studies. He bases his analysis on a new category he designates as "occasional drinkers", but he gives two differently worded definitions of an "occasional drinker" in different parts of his paper. Goulden states he intends "occasional drinkers" to consume less alcohol than "light drinkers", a standard category of drinkers who consume 1 to 6 standard drinks per week, each containing about 14 grams of ethanol. Unfortunately, both of his definitions of "occasional drinker" can include heavy binge alcohol abusers, clearly not what he intends. By ignoring this new and superfluous group of drinkers, we see that his remaining data confirms that the minimum risk for mortality is associated with light to moderate alcohol intake (the familiar J-shaped curve).

In his reply to my letter, Goulden wrote: "Keller raises the possibility that the 'occasional drinkers' group is, in fact, a group of light drinkers who have under-reported their level of consumption."

Or worse, as we shall see. In addition, both of the definitions he gives for "occasional drinker" do not make physiological sense, are superfluous, and confusing. This new category does not contribute to understanding the data, and it increases the possibility of erroneous classification of drinkers.

In the abstract, Goulden defines an "occasional drinker" as one who reports drinking "at least once, but never more than less than once a week [sic]". In the body of the paper, he defines an "occasional drinker" as one who reports drinking on at least 1 occasion, but always less than once per week. By failing to specify the amount of alcohol consumed on each occasion, Goulden's definitions classify both of the following as "occasional drinkers": a subject who drinks a glass champagne once a year on New Year's eve; and another who drinks an entire bottle of whiskey in one sitting every 8 days. These very different kinds of drinkers are both included in Goulden's definitions of "occasional drinker", by which I think he means those who have tried alcohol at least once, but only drink less than one drink per week. This definition rules out the heavy binge drinker, but it is easier to understand, and thus might reduce errors when classifying drinkers.

Now, for my main point: Look at these hazard ratios (from Table 2) for all-cause mortality with their confidence limits removed for improved visibility, and the "occasional drinker" column removed because of reasons cited above. We are left with 5 columns of data, in 3 rows, which all exhibit a minimum hazard ratio for mortality at <7 drinks per week, which increases when you shift even 1 column to the left or right:

Drinks/week..................zero.....<7.....7-13....14-20...>20

Fully adjusted...............1.19....1.02....1.14....1.13....1.45

Fully adjusted, men..........1.21....1.04....1.16....1.17....1.53

Fully adjusted, women........1.16....1.00....1.13....1.11....1.59

Note that the data in every row approximates a J-shaped curve with the minimum harm ratio in the column labeled <7 [drinks per week], which is light drinking. The next-lowest point is in the 7-13 drinks per week column, or about 2 drinks per day, which is moderate drinking. Although in some instances the confidence intervals overlap, we still have a set of trends which are consistent with past studies, demonstrating the typical J-shaped association between daily ethanol dose and mortality harm ratios. Such trends would likely become statistically significant if the study power were increased enough. The bottom line is that the data tend to support, rather than contradict, the often-observed phenomenon that all-cause mortality is minimized in persons who consume mild-to-moderate amounts of alcohol.

On 2016 Aug 21, David Keller commented:

Goulden's results confirm the J-shaped relationship of all-cause mortality with alcohol intake

In my recent letter about Goulden's study, I pointed out that his data actually confirm the benefit of mild alcohol ingestion for reducing all-cause mortality. I supply the text of my letter below, exactly as it was published, for convenient reference. Goulden should have titled his paper, "Yet more data confirming that a "J-shaped" relationship exists between the amount of alcohol consumed daily and the risk of all-cause mortality." My detailed rebuttal of Goulden's reply is at the following URL:

http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/27453387#cm27453387_26107

Here is the text of my letter:

"Goulden's conclusion that moderate alcohol consumption is not associated with reduced all-cause mortality in older adults conflicts with the findings of other studies, which he attributes mainly to residual confounding and bias. However, Goulden's own Table 2 indicates that regular drinkers who consume less than 7 drinks per week (whom I shall call “light drinkers”) actually do exhibit the lowest average mortality hazard ratio (HR), compared with nondrinkers or heavy drinkers (>21 drinks per week), even when fully adjusted by Goulden, for all 11 categories of subjects, based on age, sex, health, socioeconomic, and functional status.

"Likewise, for those who consume 7 to 14 drinks per week (“moderate drinkers”), Table 2 reveals that their average mortality HR is less than that of nondrinkers or heavy drinkers, with only 1 outlying category (of 11 categories). This outlier data point is for subjects aged less than 60 years, which may be explained by the fact that the ratio of noncardiovascular mortality (particularly automobile accidents) to cardiovascular mortality is highest in this youngest age category. Thus, the trends exhibited by Goulden's average data are consistent with the previously reported J-shaped beneficial relationship between light-to-moderate ethanol ingestion and mortality, with the single exception explained above.

"Goulden defines a new category, “occasional drinkers” as those who “report drinking at least once, but never more than ‘less than once per week,’” and assigns them the mortality HR of 1.00. Because occasional drinkers consume alcohol in amounts greater than nondrinkers, but less than light drinkers, their mortality should be between that of nondrinkers and that of light drinkers.

"However, for 5 of the 11 categories of subjects analyzed, the mortality HR for occasional drinkers is less than or equal to that of light drinkers. This may be due to subjects who miscategorize their light alcohol intake as occasional. The effects of this error are magnified because of the small amounts of alcohol involved, and thereby obscure the J-shaped curve relating alcohol intake and benefit.

"The only way to determine with certainty what effect ethanol ingestion has on cardiovascular and total mortality is to conduct a randomized, controlled trial, which is long overdue."

Reference

1: Goulden, R. Moderate alcohol consumption is not associated with reduced all-cause mortality. Am J Med. 2016; 129: 180–186.e4

On 2017 Aug 15, Varshil Mehta commented:

Completely agree!

On 2016 Aug 11, Clive Bates commented:

I should add that the authors are writing about the FDA ("FDA" appears 70 times in the paper), yet this work is funded in part by the FDA Center for Tobacco Products. It's no surprise then that it takes a wholly uncritical approach to FDA's system for consumer risk information. Somehow they managed to state:

The authors of this manuscript have no conflicts of interest to declare.

While the funding is made clear, the failure to acknowledge the COI is telling - perhaps a 'white hat bias'?

On 2016 Aug 11, Clive Bates commented:

It may not be what the authors intended, but the paper offers a troubling insight into the ingrained pedantry of a regulatory bureaucracy and how this can obscure the truth and cause harm. The authors have approached their work without considering the wider implications for health of FDA's system for assessing risk communication.

The core weakness in the paper is the assumption that nothing can be true unless the FDA says it is, and that the FDA has a way of efficiently establishing what is true. No evidence supports either contention.

Some observations.

1. The paper was published before FDA had deemed e-cigs to be within its jurisdiction, so the retailers involved were free to make true and non-misleading claims - if they did that, they have not broken any laws.

2. Some of the vendors' claims documented in the paper are reasonable and true and some would benefit from more nuanced language - all are broadly communicating substantially lower risk. This is, beyond any reasonable doubt, factually correct. The makers of these products are trying to persuade people to take on much lower risk products than cigarettes, but the authors and appear to believe this should be prevented. This is indistinguishable from a regulatory protection for the cigarette trade, with all that implies.

3. If the public bodies like CDC and FDA in the U.S. had been candid about these products from the outset instead of creating fear and confusion, vendors would not need to make claims or could quote them as reliable authorities. However, they have not done this in the way that their English equivalents have: see, for example, the Royal College of Physicians [1] and Public Health England [2]. These bodies have assessed the evidence and made estimates aiming to help consumers gain a realistic appreciation of relative risk of smoking and vaping. They estimate that e-cigarette use, while not guaranteed entirely safe, is likely to be at least 95% lower risk than smoking.

4. This contrasts with the FDA route to providing consumers with appropriate risk information - the Modified Risk Tobacco Product (MRTP) application. This approach already appears dysfunctional. It is now two years since Swedish Match filed a 130,000-page application to make a claim for snus (a form of smokeless tobacco) that is so obviously true it does not even justify the wear and tear on a rubber stamp: WARNING: No tobacco product is safe, but this product presents substantially lower risks to health than cigarettes. If a snus vendor cannot say that, then no claim is possible under this system.

5. In contrast with its reluctance to allow manufacturers to state the obvious, FDA does not subject its own claims or risk communications to the public health test that it requires of manufacturers or vendors. FDA intends to require the packaging of e-cigarettes to carry the following: WARNING: This product contains nicotine. Nicotine is an addictive chemical. But how does it know this will not deter smokers from switching and therefore continuing to smoke? How does it know that it is not misleading consumers by the absence of realistic information on relative risk?

6. FDA (and the authors) take no responsibility for, and show no interest in, the huge misalignment between consumers' risk perceptions and expert judgement on the relative risks of smoking and vaping Only 5.3% Americans correctly say vaping is much less harmful than smoking, while 37.5% say it is just as harmful or more harmful [3] - a view no experts anywhere would support. By allowing these misperceptions to flourish, they are in effect indifferent to the likely harms arising from maintaining that smoking and vaping are of equivalent risk unless FDA says otherwise.

7. It is a perverse system that requires tobacco or e-cigarette companies to go through a heavily burdensome and expensive MRTP process before the consumer can be provided with truthful information about risks. Why should the commercial judgements of nicotine or tobacco companies on the value of going through this process be what determines what the consumer is told? For the most companies, the cost and burden of the process will simply be too great to guarantee a return through additional sales, so no applications will be made and consumers will be left in the dark.

8. The FDA's restriction on communicating true and non-misleading information to consumers is part of the Nicopure Labs v FDA case - the challenge is made under the Constitutional First Amendment protection of free speech. The authors should not assume that the FDA that is acting lawfully, and FDA (and the authors) should have the burden of proof to show a vendor's claim is false or misleading.

To conclude, the authors should return to the basic purpose of regulation, which is to protect health. They should then look carefully at how the legislation and its institutional implementation serve or defeat that purpose. If they did that, they would worry more about the barrier the FDA creates to consumer understanding and informed choice and less about the e-cigarette vendors' efforts, albeit imperfect, to inform consumers about the fundamental and evidence-based advantages of their products.

[1] Royal College of Physicians, Nicotine with smoke: tobacco harm reduction. April 2016 [link]

[2] Public Health England, E-cigarettes: an evidence update. August 2015 [Link]

[3] Risk perception data from the National Cancer Institute HINTS survey, 2015).

On 2016 Aug 09, Christopher Tench commented:

The version of GingerALE used (2.0) had a bug that resulted in false positive results. This bug was fixed at version 2.3.3

On 2016 Dec 22, Holger Schunemann commented:

Error in author listing; the correct citation for this article is http://www.bmj.com/content/354/bmj.i3507: BMJ. 2016 Jul 20;354:i3507. doi: 10.1136/bmj.i3507. When and how to update systematic reviews: consensus and checklist. Garner P, Hopewell S, Chandler J, MacLehose H, Akl EA, Beyene J, Chang S, Churchill R, Dearness K, Guyatt G, Lefebvre C, Liles B, Marshall R, Martínez García L, Mavergames C, Nasser M, Qaseem A, Sampson M, Soares-Weiser K, Takwoingi Y, Thabane L, Trivella M, Tugwell P, Welsh E, Wilson EC, Schünemann HJ

On 2016 Aug 19, Lydia Maniatis commented:

Please find a comment on this article on Pubpeer.

On 2016 Jul 22, Stephen Tucker commented:

This version corrects labels missing from Fig1 and Fig 5 of the original article

On 2016 Nov 24, Maruti Singh commented:

Thanks for your interest. Actually Caustic soda is a common household powder meant for washing clothes especially white. It is very cheap and usually easily available in villages of India. It is not used for birth control. The reason it was used here was to control the PPH following delivery- which may have been due to a tear in vagina or cervix. Packs soaked in Caustic Soda is often used by untrained birth attendants to control PPH and to cauterise any vaginal or cervical tear. However patient was not very clear on what happened except that she was bleeding post delivery.

On 2016 Jul 24, Judy Slome Cohain commented:

Would the authors please comment on the reasons for packing caustic soda in the patient's vagina? Was it meant as future birth control?