One of the goals of the first three steps of the counseling process is to prepare the patient for a discussion of how and why counseling will be helpful in addressing the problems that have been uncovered and validated.
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One of the goals of the first three steps of the counseling process is to prepare the patient for a discussion of how and why counseling will be helpful in addressing the problems that have been uncovered and validated.
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Step 3: Empathic Witnessing: “I Am So Impressed With How Well You Are Doing Despite …”
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Step 1: Assessing the Family: “Bringing the Pain Into the Room”
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first, although patients often experience and describe their problems as a conflict or problem with one person, for example, “my wife,” “my kid,” “my mom,” these conflicts between two people inevitably draw others in and “triangulate.” Second, families that are having difficulty, are stuck in circular patterns of behavior (as reflected in the family therapists’ saying, “What do families in trouble do? The same, thing but harder”).
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Getting the patient to talk about their feelings often requires gentle persistence. This is a good situation to use the request, “Tell me more about feeling sad … angry … disgusted.” Patients often use vague descriptors of negative emotion such as “upset” or “it got to me.”
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Patient-centered emotion-supporting interviewing techniques are instrumental in “bringing the pain into the room.” Simply asking about the patient’s feelings when they are recounting a distressing situation is a powerful technique, “That must have been very distressing. How did it make you feel?”
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Table 11-8.Family intervention.
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owever, it is often necessary to proceed to the next level of family intervention in order to make the referral a success.
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CASE ILLUSTRATION 2 A 36-year-old man with hypertension presents to a walk-in clinic with tension headaches that have been going on for 2 weeks. The genogram interview (see Figure 11-2 and Table 11-6) reveals that he is distressed by ongoing conflict between his wife and teenage daughter about rules governing her behavior with peers outside the home. At home, the father remains silent until the fights between mother and daughter become intolerable. Their fights stop only when he complains about the headaches the fights have given him. He has never discussed his own ideas about rules for his daughter’s behavior—or of family arguments—or negotiated a common position with his wife.
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Table 11-6.Family life cycle screening questions for families with young children and adolescents.
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Table 11-5.Family assessment screening questions.
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Table 11-4.Presentations and problems associated with family dysfunction that should trigger screening for family dysfunction.
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The cycle usually “begins” with the separation of the individual from the family of origin (stage 1), followed by the formation of a new family (stage 2), the raising and “launching” of children into the world (stages 3, 4, and 5), and the family later in life (stage 6).
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Figure 11-2. Genogram of the family in Case Illustration 2.
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However, skillful parsimony is acquired with experience, and efficiency is produced by following three principles: ++ Engage patients and encourage active participation—they will take you to the heart of the story. Focus the interview on family life cycle tasks and issues—they are almost always the focal point of stress and dysfunction. Draw and examine the genogram—a picture is worth thousand words (e.g., picture a single mother, six children, parents, and siblings in another country; three different fathers in various places; and a new boyfriend).
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Begin with the core members of the family, that is, household members, parents, children, and past and present partners and spouses. Identify the family life cycle stage of the patient’s family from the ages, relationships, and household composition of the nucleus of the patient’s family. As described below, the family life cycle stage will almost always predict the locus of stress, challenge, or conflict in the patient’s family system.
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CASE ILLUSTRATION 1 Ariana is a 40-year-old Italian-American woman with multiple somatic complaints. She has complained of chronic diarrhea, dyspepsia, and “asthma” but has had a thorough normal gastrointestinal and pulmonary evaluation. She has made multiple visits to her primary provider and to an urgent care clinic, has been hospitalized two times, and has been seen in several subspecialty clinics. She has made an average of 15 visits per year for the past several years.
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clinicians need to learn to infer what is going on at home—to “see the family over the patient’s shoulder”—by imagining how members of the patient’s family might be reacting or behaving in ways that the patient does not understand or will not report.
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Table 11-3.Goals of basic family assessment and intervention.
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he authority to prescribe changes in role function for the patient further involves the physician in the life of the entire family. In effect, the physician and patient develop an alliance that compensates for the dysfunction and deficit at home. Hahn, Feiner, and Bellin have termed this a compensatory alliance.
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The physician’s role in determining that the patient is entitled to the special prerogatives and dispensations of the “sick role” makes the physician a central and powerful member of these family systems.
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Physicians play a critical role in establishing the legitimacy of the sick role by certifying the prerequisite illness or disability, and attesting to adequate adherence to treatment.
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Table 11-2.The family life cycle.
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Feedback maintains the integrity of the family system as a unit, establishes and maintains hierarchies, and regulates the function of boundaries in accordance with the individual family’s norms and style. This tendency toward maintaining “homeostasis” is critical. All family systems must learn to balance the desire for stability with the inevitable need to evolve and change.
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Families as systems are characterized by the following: ++ External and internal boundaries An internal hierarchy Self-regulation through feedback Change with time, specifically family life cycle changes
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Table 11-1.The role of the family: a partial list.
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So, rather than define the family in terms of its members, we describe it as a system having certain functional roles.
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The first is to understand that the principal goal for the medical clinician is not to fix the problems that they encounter when they explore the patient’s psychosocial context.
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The second remedy is to understand that a semistructured four-step family-systems-based assessment described in this chapter, can be an effective strategy that can be applied in the context of primary care clinical practice.
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Practicing “family-centered care,” that is, making the patient’s social context an explicit part of medical care, will affect every step of the clinical process, from basic assumptions about who the patient is to the conceptual framework for the database, theories of causality of symptoms, and the implementation of treatment.
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It is worth noting that the main feature of AI technologies is the ABSENCE of the human factor. Therefore, we can talk about the use of artificial intelligence only from the point of view of learning a foreign language, but not of teaching, which cannot take place without a teacher.
In short, AI is made to solve problems, not to teach others how to solve problems. (Both of these things it has flaws in, but this is another problem because of the design of AI.)
Next question revealed the disconnect between believing something is necessary and acting on it now. The respondents were asked when they plan to focus on improving foreign language skills for professional development. The key finding was that the 14% who were confident in the need of foreign language predominantly selected option “I plan to do it after I graduate...”. This created the contrast: they see the value but are postponing the action.
To summarize: Procrastination is a wicked beast.
Analysis of academic performance has shown a significant decrease in the level of foreign language knowledge over the past 3 years. The non-educational use of AI is sponsored naturally by a lack of motivation to learn a foreign language. This fact was obvious from the survey results as the second part of the questionnaire for students was composed of the questions to measure student motivation and future intentions regarding foreign language learning.
As logic would dictate, not truly learning the content one is being taught (In this case, language.) means that one's performance in that given task would be subpar at best.
Thus, the use of AI technologies hinders language learning by encouraging passive learning and not developing critical thinking and analytical skills. AI gives the student false confidence in language proficiency, hides actual gaps, which leads to further difficulties during oral examinations.
The results of the test. This is concise as is, so I cannot add much, but it is useful as a short summary.
The percentage of respondents who selected “Agree” or “Strongly Agree” was calculated and gave the result that more than 70% of respondents are completely confident in the accuracy and correctness of the results offered by the programs and the absence of factual errors in the tasks completed.
I am deeply concerned over this. Speaking from direct experience messing around with AI in my free time. Artificial Intelligence in its current state is often so riddled with errors and mistakes and misinterpretations that I would have trouble believing even 20% of people think it's free of error, let alone 70%. Not to mention how stubborn some variations of it can get when you call out said incorrect information. Perhaps AI in the future will get far better at this, but to say it's completely correct in the current day and age is just an insane take if one has interacted with an AI for any moderately lengthy amount of time. The less known ones tend to be even worse about this.
This might not be important to mention, or it might, but it had to be said. The fact that more than 70% of respondents believe AI is entirely trustworthy implies many things about those who use ai to work for them instead of as a tool. I will not elaborate further for the sake of politeness and brevity.
Most often, both machine translation and text generation tools are used by students intentionally incorrectly in the educational process only to achieve the goals of quickly completing exercises and passing tests. Machine translation is often used by students to translate not only texts that are intended for skimming and scanning, but also for basic lesson texts that involve comprehensive detailed reading and mastering active vocabulary. The text comprehension tasks themselves are also subject to machine translation, which allows students to complete the exercises without any effort associated with foreign language skills development. Thus, any work with text loses its educational meaning. Text generators are used by students when completing exercises aimed at developing the skills of composing texts for written or oral presentation. Such programs allow students to easily generate essays or abstracts on a given topic. This type of non-educational use of AI is proved by the results of the interview of students of a Russian non-linguistic university.
When given the chance, a lot of people will take the route that seems easier, such as using AI to write one's work for them, without actually learning the content. If the AI is the one writing, learning, and practicing, (Not to imply this usage will result in a major improvement for the AI) then what is the student learning?
It is worth noting that AI text generators cannot generate creative or original content, therefore, the resulting text may be plagiarism. Another limitation of such programs is their lack of understanding of context, which means that they can create a text that is incorrect or inappropriate in certain situations. In addition, they are not able to understand the emotions or intentions of the linguistic personality. As a result, the text may not be convincing, and may not correspond to the tone or intentions of the author.
AI text generators are notoriously bad at context. In their current state, it would likely be more efficient to simply make the text in question yourself, rather than spending a lot more time fixing the errors of an AI.
Additionally, the work of an artificial intelligence is quite possibly a form of plagiarism, given that it relies on a truckload of other works in order to produce what it does.
There are several obvious possibilities for using machine translation tools in language learning.Machine translation systems allow for quickly grasping the general information from the text, and some cases it’s enough for the learning process. Some machine translation tools have built-in dictionaries and thesauruses, so learners can highlight a word to select the most appropriate translation option. It can help enlarge the vocabulary. But in many instances, the learner's own language knowledge remains essential as machine translation systems often lack the linguistic intuition to recognize the nuanced meaning of a word in context or to ensure textual coherence. This is particularly evident in technical and medical fields, where accurate translation requires a deep understanding of highly specialized terminology. Thus, while machine translation is a convenient tool, it is not advisable to rely on it completely for language learning.
Of course, the possibility of error or the context being misinterpreted when using machine translation systems is always there. Even in something that is less like what people see when they think of AI today, words often change meaning, and some are used in different ways depending on the person.
Low academic performance sponsored by non-educational use of AI technologies by students forced the teachers to revise the teaching materials in order to exclude the possibility of students to use AI to solve educational problems. The teachers developed workbooks for foreign language students.
As I have mentioned before, AI should at most be used as something to help, not something to do the work entirely. Because of the use of AI here to bypass said work, it had to either be made useless for the work or be simply unallowed.
The research process of this part was inherently cyclical and iterative, following a spiral of planning an action, implementing it, observing the effects, and reflecting on the results to inform the next cycle. The outcome is tangible change and empowerment within the local context.
To simplify: They did something, saw how it affected their location of study, then repeated this cycle while considering the effect of their action(s).
MethodologyTo achieve the objectives of the study, the pedagogical experience of teaching a foreign language in a Russian non-linguistic (medical) university was analyzed, AI technologies used in language education were described, their educational potential was identified, and possible methods of non-educational use were determined.
This section is where most of the methods used in the study are listed.
As the paper is deeply rooted in the specifics of the Russian state education system this study is subject to several important limitations that must be considered when interpreting its findings. The primary constraint stems from its design as a single-institution investigation. The results are inherently shaped by the unique structural, administrative, and resource-based characteristics of the specific setting in which the research was conducted. However the results were publicly partially announced and non-officially discussed with the teachers of different Russian universities and almost all proved the presence of such a problem like non-educational use of AI. Of course the findings should therefore be viewed as preliminary and context-specific, highlighting the need for future replication across a broader range of sites to establish their wider applicability. Furthermore, the research was conducted within a specific cultural context, which presents a significant limitation regarding the cross-cultural validity of the results. The participants (students) are drawn from a single pool, which is rather homogenous in terms of socioeconomic status (the University is situated not in the capital of Russia), education level, and professional specifics (medical sphere). This limits the variability within the data and makes it difficult to know if the results would hold for a more diverse group.Local socio-cultural norms, values, and behavioral patterns undoubtedly influence the manifestation of the phenomena under investigation. The findings are best understood as reflective of the dynamics, and further cross-cultural comparative research is essential.
For the study in question, the paper is based on the Russian state education system, and not any other. Other systems may differ, so it would be useful to get more data from those systems to confirm or disprove any information gained.
Additionally, it is said that "The participants (students) are drawn from a single pool" and "This limits the variability within the data and makes it difficult to know if the results would hold for a more diverse group."
prompting, and the AI's generative output is presented as their own. This constitutes a fundamental breach of authenticity, what Phil Race calls “passing off someone else's work as your own” (Race, 2001), thereby undermining the purpose of assessment.
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Non-educational AI use challenges these principles when the learner's contribution is limited to
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Asking an AI to simply give the user an answer, then claiming said answer is from the user, goes against the purpose of learning in the first place. For all intents and purposes, one may as well just be asking someone else to answer for them.
Metacognition, defined as “one's knowledge concerning one's own cognitive processes and products or anything related to them” (Flavell, 1976), is the learner's ability to monitor their understanding and identify knowledge gaps. When a student substitutes an AI-generated translation for the arduous process of deciphering a text, they bypass the crucial struggle that solidifies learning. As John Hattie asserts, “The core of metacognition is when students become aware of how they learn, and can set goals for themselves and self-monitor their progress” (Hattie, 2012). The AI provides a product, not a process, thereby starving the metacognitive engine of the feedback it requires to develop. This directly corrodes self-regulated learning (SRL), the cyclical process wherein students plan, monitor, and reflect on their progress. Barry J. Zimmerman, a leading SRL theorist, describes it as “the self-directive process through which learners transform their mental abilities into academic skills” (Zimmerman, 2002). A self-regulated learner plans a writing task, attempts a draft, and identifies errors. Non-educational AI collapses this cycle; the planning and monitoring are outsourced, and reflection becomes superficial. The learner becomes a curator of AI-generated content rather than an active constructor of knowledge, leading to what Robert Bjork terms “illusory competence” where the “ability to procure a correct answer masks a fundamental lack of understanding” (Bjork, 1994).
Without the process of learning, one will find memorizing content to be an especially unlikely result. Googling "Where to find oak trees" does not teach one what trees are safe, what environments are conductive for finding oak trees naturally, or if those oak trees will produce food of some kind. It simply shows the end result. Similarly, asking an AI to "Translate this from language 1 to language 2" will not teach one the nuances of that language, why one word translates to another, or if there are important grammar rules that caused that result.
It is also important to again consider that the AI translation may be inaccurate, resulting in any learning actually done also being inaccurate, which would cause problems in the future.
Furthermore, the rise of generative AI poses a direct challenge to student development by undermining the ability to construct a line of reasoning, being the essence of critical thinking. The focus shifts from the process of learning and thinking to the production of a correct-looking output, making learning a transactional rather than a transformational experience. Of course, all limitations and risks of AI technologies come out when they are used purposely or unconsciously non-educationally.
As this journal makes clear, it cannot be overstated that allowing AI to take the place of one's own thinking is a bad idea. This could perhaps be part of the main idea.
Artificial Intelligence could serve some benefit in education, if used as a tool.
It should be noted that the above mentioned advantages and benefits of AI technologies refer only to language learning which is a motivated and purposeful process of mastering new competencies. In the absence of a goal and motivation, the use of AI becomes a barrier to the acquisition of new knowledge and skills.
Once again, improper use of AI will not produce good results. One should use it like a hammer instead of a crutch.
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Feel like an imposter. There is actually a name for this condition: imposter syndrome. Students who feel like an imposter are worried that they don’t belong, that someone will “expose them for being a fake.” This feeling is pretty common for anyone who finds themselves in a new environment and is not sure if they have what it takes to succeed. Trust the professionals who work with first-year college students: you do have what it takes, and you will succeed. Just give yourself time to get adjusted to everything.
this stood out to me because i felt it was speaking directly to me. this will help me be more successful because i know im not the only one starting over from being out of school for so many years. what tip was interesting? we all have what it takes. i will use this info to remind myself to keep going and not give up.
Simply put, procrastination is the act of delaying some task that needs to be completed. It is something we all do to greater and lesser degrees. For most people, a little minor procrastination is not a cause for great concern. But there are situations where procrastination can become a serious problem with a lot of risk. These include: when it becomes a chronic habit, when there are a number of tasks to complete and little time, or when the task being avoided is very important.
I think this passage is important because we all procrastinate. well, most of us anyway. this stood out to me because i do this all the time with even the smallest things. practice makes perfect. this passage will help me be successful because i know its only human and we have to make good habits to change it or not prolong it for such long periods of time.
If the distribution is uncertain, the data can be plotted as a normal probability plot and visually inspected, or tested for normality using one of a number of goodness of fit tests, such as the Kolmogorov–Smirnov test.
One thing I want to clarify is the assumption of normality when using parametric tests like the two-sample t-test. The article mentions using tests like Kolmogorov–Smirnov or Shapiro–Wilk, but it also says large samples (n > 30 or even 100) can approximate normality. This makes me wonder how strict researchers need to be in practice. If a dataset is slightly skewed but has a large sample size, is it still appropriate to proceed with a t-test? It seems like there is a balance between theory and practical application that isn’t always clearly defined.
The main intention of this circuit is designed to enhance the low-level signal power.
The main intention of an op amp is to enhance the low level signal power. There are many types but it will take a low level signal power and make it bigger
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Hypothesis comments got lost, maybe in a page change because it changed the URL?
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Is this what we talked about with tracking those emails if the offer have a certain name (Miah)
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Yes once an offer is signed they will see more details . What fields to be visible to follow
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Rejects and lets MTL know.
Adobe has an out set up right now the get an Adobe reminder daily. MTL Admin sends out up to 4 reminder email on top of that ( 1 per week) the 4th or final reminder will say "FINAL REMINDER ' two days left
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Yes candidates will be assigned to a certain job & interviewer.
Offer : right now we get an email or a comment after the interview like "send offer cook & pay rate " or no thank you . maybe it could be prompted to give the employer some interview close out options like: - no thank & no offer - no show -waiting list / unsure ( but we dont really like this option . the candite will be gone by the time the employer decides ) - send offer ( this will require job tilt & pay rate that has to match job order )
Interview side note: we somehow need to be able to disable candidates for various reasons ( found spot , terminated , and so on ) by the end of recruitment employers reach out to candidates that are unavailable. ( (Might have to explain this Miah )
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this should be - updated profile notification / MTL Admin for final release . We cross check important various visa & eligibility dates that the applicants just don't enter correct. I don't expect them to know the correct regulations. <br /> This is why we have two "visa type " fields right now . One is the visa type requested by the candidate . and the one we use is the one the MTL admin assigns after cross checking . This MTL admin filed incudes the visa type + regulation issues ( see MTL Visa assigned filed in airtable)
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Dysrhythmias can be demonstrated by finger or toe tapping.
Dysdiadochokinesia is the inability to perform rapid, alternating movements (e.g., flipping hands over quickly) due to cerebellar dysfunction.
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Birds that feed on berries, mammals that rely on nuts, and insects that depend on flowering plants all experience population declines
Pollination is the biological process by which pollen is transferred from the male parts of a flower to the female parts, enabling fertilization and seed production.
“When pollinators decline, the first visible impact is reduced plant reproduction. Flowers may bloom, but without pollinators, they fail to produce fruits and seeds”
Ce qui montre que ce qui est appelé la révolution numérique n’est pas une révolution en termes de volume d’emplois, mais parce qu’elle se diffuse à travers toute l’économie.
Fallacieux: on voit mal en quoi la taille (5% des emplois privés) prouve quoi que ce soit de son impact sur le volume d'emplois. Si la technologie détruit de nombreux emplois, ou permet avec 5% des actifs du secteur privé de remplacer de très nombreuses personnes, les force à changer de secteur etc, l'impact en volume d'emplois est énorme.
Un article de l’IREF souligne que l’emploi dans le numérique ne représente que 5 % du total de l’emploi privé aux États-Unis, selon les chiffres du Bureau of Labor Statistics.
IREF (https://fr.irefeurope.org/): think tank libéral conservateur qui édite la revue Contrepoints. Oorientation claire de la publication, qui infuse l'article. Sur l'argument épistémique s'appuyant sur les chiffres du BLS: La part du numérique dans l'emploi global aux Etats-Unis a peu augmenté en 2026 (son poids économique et les salaires, si). C'est possiblement consubstantiel à ces technologies qui automatisent beaucoup de tâches et nécessitent moins de main d'oeuvre
le big data est le traitement de données
L'auteur oublie une étape, celle de la collecte des données, personnelles ou protégées par un droit de propriété. Dans le cas des données de masse, c'est un des aspects les plus délicats car il touche à la notion de consentement, dont les contours traditionnels en droit et la force contraignante sont fortement adaptés aux nécessités de rapidité de ces traitements. Avant l'utilisation sans contrepartie des données par les LLM, Google faisait déjà face à des critiques similaires.
Précédemment, ce sont les capacités physiques qui ont été augmentées, la machine faisant ce qui n’est pas possible à l’homme, ce qui entraîne de nouvelles possibilités pour l’individu. Il peut fabriquer des choses de plus en plus complexes
Argument séduisant mais incomplet. L'outil, qu'il soit "physique" ou "numérique'" pour reprendre la distinction de l'auteur, ne fait pas qu'augmenter l'homme, il le contraint aussi, et transforme son activité. Lorsque l'industrialisation de certains métiers est apparue, le travailleur en a t il été augmenté? C'est l'objet d'un débat qu'on ne peut pas trancher en quelques lignes. En revanche, l'activité médiatisée par l'outil était aussi contrainte par la complexité de l'outil, sa capacité à le maitriser, sa destination très spécifique etc.
Mais ce n’est pas une révolution.
Il serait intéressant de savoir si l'auteur pense qu'une IA en mode agentique qui mène un projet de manière autonome effectue un "travail". La question serait alors: a-t-on ici une révolution dans la nature même du travail?
On constate ainsi une autonomisation du travailleur.
Contenu dialectique. Argument rhétorique par ethos (les positions théoriques de base sont très claires, cf note 1). Autonomisation dans une acception très étroite du terme: Cet argument ne semble pas s'appliquer aux employés des services client qui aimeraient vous aider, mais le système ne leur permet pas. Ce qui est vrai du service client s'est d'ailleurs aussi du travailleur autonome: Le chauffeur Uber est il vraiment maître à bord? En dehors des considérations sociales, peu révélatrices d'autonomie, ses choix sont limités à ce que son application propose.;
Mais selon la théorie autrichienne, l’entrepreneur saisit des opportunités
La question est aussi celle de la libre concurrence: Certains outils comme Uber ne laissent que très peu de place à leurs concurrents sur le marché. De quelle opportunité parle t-on ici (à part celle de changer de métier)?
On ne peut pas parler vraiment d’augmentation des capacités intellectuelles. Car seule la simple mise à disposition de l’information est concernée. Un juriste par exemple n’utilisera pas une application informatique pour rédiger un mémoire, mais il utilisera l’information dont il peut désormais disposer avec facilité.
Evidemment, cette partie est très datée, depuis l'arrivée des LLM
Aujourd’hui, ce sont les capacités de traitement et de mise à disposition de l’information qui sont augmentées chez les individus.
Confusion conceptuelle: Augmenter l'accès à l'information n'est pas la même chose qu'augmenter la capacité à la traiter intelligemment...
Le livreur de pizza utilise aussi une application de traitement et de mise à disposition de l’information. Il entre une adresse, une application analyse une carte avec les sens de circulation, et ressort un itinéraire. Tout comme le chauffeur de VTC. Tout comme le restaurateur qui scrute les variations de météo sur son smartphone.
Rhétorique type logos. Même remarque que plus haut. L'auteur choisit les utilités qui l'intéressent. L'auteur présente deux situations radicalement différentes comme équivalentes en proposant une comparaison. Le restaurateur ne risque pas grand chose à consulter la météo (l'envoi d'informations par son smartphone à Google est paramétrable, au moins). En revanche, les destinataires de l'information de livraison ne sont pas seulement le livreur et le client: L'employeur du livreur aussi, dans le cadre d'une relation de travail peu équilibrée
Enfin, on a aujourd’hui toutes sortes d’informations mises à disposition. Là où il fallait posséder une grande bibliothèque, renouvelée tous les ans pour être à jour des codes juridiques en tout genre, il suffit d’aller sur internet. Une information gratuite, ou moins onéreuse que l’information-papier d’autrefois, est disponible. Sans compter qu’elle est actualisée beaucoup plus souvent.
Purement rhétorique. Gratuité toute relative. L'auteur fait simplement l'économie du calcul des coûts indirects. Sans parler du fameux "si c'est gratuit, c'est vous le produit", qui illustre la monétisation de l'information sur les habitudes de consommation, les coûts environnementaux de la cloud based economy sont faramineux.
Vers quoi tend cette technologie qui se diffuse à toute l’économie ? Elle tend au traitement et à la mise à disposition de l’information
L'auteur parle de la destination des TIC, "le traitement et la mise à disposition de l'information". Commencer par une définition permet de donner l'illusion de la cohérence et de l'homogénéité. Suit encore une fois une liste de situations très différentes.
Les nouvelles technologies de l’information et de la communication irriguent toute l’économie
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eLife Assessment
This important study addresses the contribution of pericytes to the organization and permeability control of the zebrafish blood-brain barrier (BBB). By analyzing pdgfrb mutant zebrafish that lack brain pericytes, the authors reveal that the resulting cerebrovascular network is abnormally patterned. Remarkably, however, the barrier retains its restrictive permeability during larval and juvenile stages. More pronounced vascular defects become evident in adults, where localized BBB leakage coincides with hemorrhages and aneurysm formation. Based on convincing and beautifully documented imaging data, the authors argue that, unlike what has been reported in rodent systems, pdgfrb-dependent pericytes are not essential for maintaining BBB integrity in the zebrafish brain.
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
The study investigates the role of vascular mural cells, specifically pericytes and vascular smooth muscle cells (vSMCs), in maintaining blood-brain barrier (BBB) integrity and regulating vascular patterning. Analyzing zebrafish pdgfrb mutants that lack brain pericytes and vSMCs, the show that mural cell deficiency does not impair BBB establishment or maintenance during larval and early juvenile stages. However mural cells seem to be crucial for preventing vascular aneurysms and hemorrhage in adulthood as focal leakage, basement membrane disruption and increased caveolae formation are observed in adult zebrafish at aneurysm hotspots. The authors challenge the paradigm that mural cells are essential for BBB regulation in early development while highlighting their importance for long-term vascular stability.
Strengths:
Previous studies have established that the zebrafish BBB shares molecular and morphological homology with e.g. the mammalian BBB and therefore represents a suitable model. By examining mural cell roles across different life stages-from larval to adult zebrafish-the study provides an unprecedented comprehensive developmental analysis of brain vascular development and of how mural cells influence BBB integrity and vascular stability over time. The use of live imaging, whole-brain clearing, and electron microscopy offers high-resolution insights into cerebrovascular patterning, aneurysm development, and structural changes in endothelial cells and basement membranes. By analyzing "leakage hotspots" and their association with structural endothelial defects in adults the presented findings add novel insights into how mural cell loss may lead to vascular instability.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
The authors generated a zebrafish mutant of the pdgfrb gene. The presented analyses and data confirm previous studies demonstrating that Pdgfrb signaling is necessary for mural cell development in zebrafish. In addition, the data support previously published studies in zebrafish showing that mural cell deficiency leads to hemorrhages later in life. The authors presented quantified data on vessel density and branching, assessed tracer extravasation, and investigated the vasculature of adult mice using electron microscopy.
Strengths:
The strength of this article is that it provides independent confirmation of the important role of Pdgfrb signaling for the development of mural cells in the zebrafish brain. In addition, it confirms previous literature on zebrafish that provides evidence that, in the absence of pericytes/VSMC, hemorrhages appear (Wang et al, 2014, PMID: 24306108 and Ando et al 2021, PMID: 3431092)".
The Reviewing Editor has carefully reviewed the revised manuscript and is fully satisfied with the authors' revisions.
Author Response:
The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.
Public Reviews:
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
The study investigates the role of vascular mural cells, specifically pericytes and vascular smooth muscle cells (vSMCs), in maintaining blood-brain barrier (BBB) integrity and regulating vascular patterning. Analyzing zebrafish pdgfrb mutants that lack brain pericytes and vSMCs, they show that mural cell deficiency does not impair BBB establishment or maintenance during larval and early juvenile stages. However, mural cells seem to be crucial for preventing vascular aneurysms and hemorrhage in adulthood as focal leakage, basement membrane disruption, and increased caveolae formation are observed in adult zebrafish at aneurysm hotspots. The authors challenge the paradigm that mural cells are essential for BBB regulation in early development while highlighting their importance for long-term vascular stability.
Strengths:
Previous studies have established that the zebrafish BBB shares molecular and morphological homology with e.g. the mammalian BBB and therefore represents a suitable model. By examining mural cell roles across different life stages - from larval to adult zebrafish - the study provides an unprecedented comprehensive developmental analysis of brain vascular development and of how mural cells influence BBB integrity and vascular stability over time. The use of live imaging, whole-brain clearing, and electron microscopy offers high-resolution insights into cerebrovascular patterning, aneurysm development, and structural changes in endothelial cells and basement membranes. By analyzing "leakage hotspots" and their association with structural endothelial defects in adults the presented findings add novel insights into how mural cell loss may lead to vascular instability.
Weaknesses:
The study uses quantitative tracer assays with multiple molecular weight dyes to evaluate blood-brain barrier (BBB) permeability. The study normalizes the intensity of tracer signals (e.g., 10 kDa, 70 kDa dextrans) in the brain parenchyma to the vascular signal of a 2000 kDa dextran tracer (assumed to remain within vessels). Intensity normalization is used to control for variations in tracer injection efficiency or vascular density. This method doesn't directly assess the absolute amount of tracer present in the parenchyma, potentially underestimating leakage severity. As the lack of BBB impairment is a "negative" finding, more rigorous controls or other methods might be needed to corroborate it.
In response to these and comments from other reviewers, we have now performed further carefully controlled analysis to test leakage of tracers using molecular weights ranging from 1 to 2000 kDa. We have performed additional normalisation approaches (new data in Fig. 2a–d) imaging tracer extravasation together with vascular reporters (Tg(kdrl:EGFP)<sup>s843</sup> or Tg(kdrl:Hsa.HRAS-mCherry)<sup>s916</sup>) and used this transgenic reporter for normalisation (as suggested by Reviewer #2). The results of these experiments all supported our initial conclusions (revised Extended Data Fig. 3a–d) further validating the reliability of our method. Furthermore, as suggested by the reviewer analysis of the raw tracer intensity amounts in the parenchyma were also performed with no normalization at all (see Author response image 1). This also supports our conclusion that the BBB is intact in young animals. Finally, we now use our methods to demonstrate that we can detect an immature leaky BBB at 3 dpf and a mature functional BBB at 7 dpf (Fig. 2e-f), a suitable positive control to show that our methods and analyses are reliable.
Author response image 1.
Raw intensity values from the parenchyma confirm findings in Figure 2 and Extended Data Figure 3.a–d, Raw mean fluorescence intensity values of extravasated tracers in the midbrain.(a–b) show unnormalized values corresponding to Extended Data Fig. 3a–d, and (c–d) show unnormalized values corresponding to Fig. 1a–d. Unpaired t-tests for 70 and 10 kDa at 14 dpf in (a–b), for 10 kD at 7 dpf, and for 70 kDa at 14 dpf in (c–d). Mann-Whitney tests for 70 and 10 kDa at 7 dpf in (a–b), for 70 kDa at 7 dpf, and for 10 kDa at 14 dpf (c–d), due to non-normal distribution. These data were all generated in genotype blind assays, display variance in signal that is generated between embryos due to injection differences and show no difference between the genotypes analysed in BBB integrity. Comparison of this to normalised data using 2000 kDa tracer or kdrl expression in endothelial cells (Fig. 2 and Extended Data Fig. 3) confirms that normalisation improves the analysis, effectively controlling for embryo-to-embryo differences in delivery of tracer and imaging.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
The authors generated a zebrafish mutant of the pdgfrb gene. The presented analyses and data confirm previous studies demonstrating that Pdgfrb signaling is necessary for mural cell development in zebrafish. In addition, the data support previously published studies in zebrafish showing that mural cell deficiency leads to hemorrhages later in life. The authors presented quantified data on vessel density and branching, assessed tracer extravasation, and investigated the vasculature of adult mice using electron microscopy.
Strengths:
The strength of this article is that it provides independent confirmation of the important role of Pdgfrb signaling for the development of mural cells in the zebrafish brain. In addition, it confirms previous literature on zebrafish that provides evidence that, in the absence of pericytes/VSMC, hemorrhages appear (Wang et al, 2014, PMID: 24306108 and Ando et al 2021, PMID: 3431092). The study by Ando et al, 2021 did not report experiments assessing BBB leakage in pdgfrb mutants but in the review article by Ando et al (PMID: 34685412) it is stated that "indicating that endothelial cells can produce basic barrier integrity without pericytes in zebrafish."
We thank the reviewer for their comments and pointing out literature that we had not cited (this has been corrected in our revised manuscript).
As noted by other reviewers, our study goes beyond simply confirming previous literature. The quoted section by the reviewer from Ando et al 2021 regarding intact barrier integrity in pdgfrb mutants is a conclusion based on apparent lack of haemorrhages in pdgfrb mutants[1]. Our work shows haemorrhages in older animals and as such is in line with these previously published results, but it also extends previous work, for the first time reporting detailed functional analysis to assess BBB integrity. Our study uses definitive tracer assays (now including extensive revisions) to identify intact the BBB in pdgfrb mutants in live animals. This has not been previously described and is important because it offers a new perspective on the evolutionary conservation (or otherwise) of pericyte control of BBB function. Furthermore, our study investigates the nature of hotspot leakage and haemorrhages in more detail than in previous work.
Weaknesses:
(1) The authors should avoid using violin plots, which show distribution. Instead, they should replace all violin plots in the figures with graphs showing individual data points and standard deviation. For Figure 2f specifically, the standard deviation in the analyzed cohort should be shown.
This is a good point and we have replaced the violin plots with individual data points and shown all data as mean±SEM.
(2) The authors have not shown the reduced PDGFRB protein or the effect of mutation on mRNA level in their zebrafish mutant.
Our pdgfrb<sup>uq30bh</sup> mutant allele introduces a mutation predicted to generate a truncated protein very similar to previously validated alleles (see detail in revised Extended Data Fig. 1a and methods). Our pdgfrb<sup>uq30bh</sup> mutant also phenocopies previous pdgfrb mutants (sa16389 and um148 alleles)[2,3], displaying mural cell loss with multiple markers (Fig. 1a, new data in Extended Data Fig. 1b–c, Fig. 3b–c; Extended Data Fig. 4c–d) and the same typical morphological defects and survival rates (new data in Extended Data Fig. 1d–f). Thus our mutant phenocopy gives confidence it is most likely a null allele, in line with previous papers studying presumed null alleles[1].
We believe this provides sufficient confidence in this allele of pdgfrb. Moreover, considering that our manuscript focusses on loss of mural cells and we show definitively that this mutant has robust loss of mural cells in the brain, our mutant is suitable for this study.
(3) Statistical data analysis: Did the authors perform analyses to investigate whether the data has a normal distribution (e.g., Figures 1d, e)?
We thank the reviewer for raising this and apologise for this oversight. All data have now been assessed for normality using Shapiro-Wilk test and further statistical analyses have been performed accordingly. The specific quantifications referred to by the reviewer in Extended Data Fig. 3a–d (previously Fig. 1d-e), have normal distribution except for quantification measuring 70 kDa extravasation at 7 dpf, therefore Mann-Whitney test has been used for this comparison. Further information can be found in figure legends and methods.
(4) Analysis of tracer extravasation. The use of 2000 kDa dextran intensity as an internal reference is problematic because the authors have not provided data demonstrating that the 2000 kDa dextran signal remains consistent across the entire vasculature. The authors have not provided data demonstrating that the 2000 kDa dextran signal in vessels exhibits acceptable variance across the vasculature to serve as a reliable internal reference. The variability of this signal within a single animal remains unknown. The presented data do not address this aspect.
We thank the reviewer for their comment and agree that analysis was needed for showing 2000 kDa dextran as a reliable normalization signal.
We now show the data in the following Figures that demonstrate the consistency of signal throughout the vasculature using this 2000-kDa tracer: Extended Data Fig. 2b, Extended Data Fig. 3a and c, Extended Data Fig. 5a, Extended Data Fig. 6. In fact, we observe that this 2000 kDa tracer provides a very reliable marker of large and small calibre vessels in larval, juvenile and adult animals, even in fixed and cleared whole tissues and animals (e.g. Extended Data Fig. 2d-e, Extended Data Fig. 5 and 6).
Our further experiments and analysis support the use of this tracer as an ideal way to normalise for variation between animals and coupled with improved masking of vessels using transgenic labels (e.g. Extended Data Fig. 2b) we can quantify across whole vascular networks to reduce the concern about variation within individual animals. We also find 2000 kDa shows negligible leakage through the brain vessels Extended Data Fig. 2b–c (new data) at 2 hours post-injection (hpi) and provided images in Extended Data Fig. 6b–b′′ showing detectable signals even at 6 hpi. Finally, results generated with this approach, normalisation to transgenic markers or even raw parenchymal values of tracer intensity, generate the same conclusions. In addition, we point the reviewer to a recent pre-print that further validates this method from our team[4].
Overall, we find the use of this tracer an ideal way to normalise for differences in injection volumes between animals and we recommend the use of this method to other groups assessing BBB leakage in zebrafish.
Additionally, it's intriguing that the signal intensity in the parenchyma of the tested tracers presents a substantial range, varying by 20-30% in the analysed cohort (Figure 1g, Extended Figure 1e). Such large variability raises the question of its origin. Could it be a consequence of the normalization to 2000 kDa dextran intensity which differs between different fish? Or is it due to the differences in the parenchymal signal intensity while the baseline 2000 kDa intensity is stable? Or is the situation mixed?
This is a good point raised by the reviewer.
To address this, we have used the following approaches:
(1) We provide additional experiments and normalisation methods that support the utility of our tracer studies (new data in Fig 2a–f and Extended Data Fig. 2b–c), discussed in detail below.
(2) We provide graphs of the raw parenchymal distribution of tracer not normalised at all (also requested by reviewer 1). This is provided in Author response image 1 and further supports all our conclusions, showing that our normalisation methods generate meaningful data.
Overall, the range of parenchymal intensity that we see after tracer injection and live imaging shows variations introduced during microinjection. However, these ranges are in-line with previous publications using similar methods (see studies by O’Brown et al 2019 and 2023)[5,6], allow reliable statistical comparisons to be drawn between control and mutants and allow us to detect both immature and functional BBB states during zebrafish development (new data in Fig. 2e-f).
Of note, the variability we see is likely introduced during the injection process into tiny larval blood vessels and is the reason why we perform normalization of parenchymal tracers to a vascular dextran signal that doesn’t leak from brain vessels. In our studies, 2000-kDa dextran has been co-injected with the smaller size tracers, therefore any potential differences in injection volumes as well as imaging conditions (however consistent) should be reduced by this method.
An alternative and potentially more effective approach would be to cross the pdgfrb mutant line with a line where endothelial cells are genetically labeled to define vessels (e.g. the line kdrl used in acquiring data presented in Figure 2a). Non-injected controls could then be used as a baseline to assess tracer extravasation into the parenchyma.
We thank the reviewer for this suggestion.
In response, we have performed new tracer leakage experiments at 7 and 14 dpf in siblings and pdgfrb mutants and quantified parenchymal tracer extravasation by normalizing to vascular reporters (Tg(kdrl:EGFP)<sup>s843</sup> or Tg(kdrl:Hsa.HRAS-mCherry)<sup>s916</sup>). The results were in-line with the previously presented and independent experiments and showed indistinguishable phenotypes between siblings and pdgfrb mutants (new data, Fig. 2a–d). We also used uninjected controls to assess baseline and saw consistent values approaching zero in these images and did not include this in the revised paper.
Furthermore, we have also used this approach in wild-type larvae at 3 dpf (immature BBB) and 7 dpf (functional BBB)[5]. We detected significantly higher parenchymal extravasation of 10 and 70 kDa tracers at 3 dpf compared to 7dpf, demonstrating that our method can detect leakage (new data, Fig. 2e–f).
We believe that both normalization approaches have advantages (as discussed above), therefore showing the same results with these two different approaches has further strengthened our findings.
How is the data presented in Figure 3e generated? How was the dextran intensity calculated? It looks like the authors have used the kdrl line to define vessels. Was the 2000 kDa still used as in previous figures? If not, please describe this in the Materials and Methods section.
We have moved this data to Fig. 4e (previously Fig. 3e).
Previously, we had plotted raw data due to the nature of the experiment being conducted on a vibratome sectioned tissue. The 2000 kDa tracer was not used. In response to this query and to be consistent with the new approach suggested by the reviewer, we have revised the quantification by normalizing the 10 kDa tracer extravasation to Tg(kdrl:Hsa.HRAS-mCherry)<sup>s916</sup>) for this and the new experiments on juveniles (Fig. 5h–i). Please see the corresponding figure legends or revised methods (lines 464–472).
(5) The authors state that both controls and mutants show extravasation of 1 kDa NHS-ester into the parenchyma. However, the presented images do not illustrate this; it is not obvious from these images (Extended Data Figure 1c). Additionally, the presented quantification data (Extended Data Figure 1e) do not show that, at 7 dpf, the vasculature is permeable to this tracer. Note that the range of signal intensity of the 1 kDa NHS-ester is similar to the 70 kDa dextran (Figure 1g and Extended Figure 1e). Would one expect an increase in the ratio in case of extravasation, considering that the 2000 kDa dextran has the same intensity in all experiments? Please explain.
We thank the reviewer for raising this important point.
To clarify, we have never claimed that “2000-kDa dextran has the same intensity in all experiments”. On the contrary, vascular 2000 kDa normalization has been used to account for potential differences caused by injection, as stated in the submitted supplementary materials and now made more clear in the revision.
In response to this query, we conducted more detailed analysis on tracer extravasation patterns based on molecular weight (new data, Extended Data Fig 2b–c). This analysis showed that 1- and 10-kDa tracers have much higher extravasation rate compared to 70- and 2000-kDa tracers. Interestingly, we did not find a significant difference between 1 and 10 kDa extravasation. Therefore, in the revised manuscript we used only 10 kDa in further experiments and have removed 1 kDa from the figures.
To assess the tracers individually (new data in Extended Data Fig. 2c), parenchymal extravasation of individual tracers was normalised to their own vascular signal (eg. Mean intensity of 10 kDa in midbrain/mean intensity of 10 kDa in vasculature), to account for potential differences in injection volume. This provides a suitable method to assess leakage in wild-type animals and is now in line with how previous studies have analysed such tracer injections[5,6]. Please see revised figure legends and supplementary materials for details.
(6) The study would be strengthened by a more detailed temporal analysis of the phenotype. When do the aneurysms appear? Is there an additional loss of VSMC?
We thank the reviewer for this suggestion, and we have now performed staged imaging of the pdgfrb mutants and siblings between 7 and 21 dpf using TgBAC(acta2:EGFP)<sup>uq17bh</sup> transgene (new data, Fig. 3b-c; Extended Data Fig. 4a–d). Consistent with previous results, acta2:EGFP-positive cells surrounding the middle mesencephalic central arteries (MMCtA) were missing in pdgfrb mutants. At 21 dpf, we have also observed a mild dilation of these vessels, likely the earliest changes to generate aneurysms (new data, Fig. 3c).
To extend the number of stages analysed in this study, we have also performed new tracer leakage experiments in juveniles (30 dpf) and found that aneurysms can be detected at this age when the 10 kDa tracer is used (new data in Fig. 5b–b′). Consistent with the adult stage phenotype, aneurysms were limited to the larger calibre vessels (arteries) in the brain. We have also observed hotspots, and upon quantification, we found fewer numbers in juveniles compared to adults, suggesting that severity of aneurysms and hotspots increase with age.
Taken together, our results show that the aneurysms in pdgfrb mutants start appearing at late larval/early juvenile stages (~21 dpf) with observable dilations. By 30 dpf, aneurysms accompanied by small numbers of hotspots are observed, which exhibits significantly increased numbers by adulthood. This also correlates with reduced development and survival rate of pdgfrb mutants after 30 dpf (new data, Extended Data Fig. 1d–e).
(7) The authors intended to analyze the BBB at later stages (line 128), but there is not a significant time difference between 2 months (Figure 2) and 3 months (Figure 3) considering that zebrafish live on average 3 years. Therefore, the selection of only two time-points, 2 and 3 months, to analyze BBB changes does not provide a comprehensive overview of temporal changes throughout the zebrafish's lifespan. How long do the pdgfb mutants live?
Respectfully, zebrafish transition from juvenile stages to adulthood between 2 and 3 months and there are many significant differences in the physiology of this organism at these two ages. At 2 months, zebrafish are still juveniles undergoing metamorphosis with rapid growth and ongoing skeletal and vascular development. By 3 months, they are sexually mature adults and have much more developed cranioskeletal and vascular systems. Having said that, we take the reviewers important point that further temporal resolution would improve the study.
We have performed new experiments in 1-month-old animals and provided comprehensive analysis of the vascular phenotypes occurring in pdgfrb mutants. These were very informative experiments analysing leakage using 10-kDa tracer injections and have significantly improved the study. We had previously provided experiments at 5-month-old adults as well (previously Fig. 4a–b and Extended Data Fig. 4a) and so now the study includes larval stages (7, 14 dpf), juveniles at 1 and 2 months and adults at 3 and 5 months. While the additional timepoints did not offer up any new conclusions, they significantly enhanced the body of work overall.
Of further note, we provided survival data up to 90 dpf where survival of the pdgfrb mutants is significantly reduced compared to siblings (Extended Data Fig. 1e). We believe this is associated with the severity of the aneurysms and haemorrhages which probably lead to lethality in these mutants.
(8) Why is there a difference in tracer permeability between 2 and 3 months (Figures 2 and 3)? Are hemorrhages not detected in 2-month-old zebrafish?
In response to this and other queries, we have added new additional experiments that provide more detailed temporal analysis on tracer accumulation (new data in Fig. 5b–c, Fig. 5f–g).
In short, we do not see obvious haemorrhages in 1- or 2-month fish at a gross level during dissections (not shown). We find that using 10-kDa tracer, we can detect small hotspots at aneurysms as early as 1 month, likely representing the earliest loss of integrity. We do not see obvious hotspots in 2-month-old animals when we use the 70-kDa tracer, this suggests to us that it is less sensitive for hotspot detection (in line with new Extended Data Fig. 2c). Finally, we find that the number of hotspots increases dramatically from Juvenile to Adult stages in our datasets, which we take as indicative of a progressive phenotype.
Overall, tracer size matters for detecting hotspots and they become more apparent in older animals - we have added a note in the main text to cover these points (lines 200–205)
(9) Figure 3: The capillary bed should be presented in magnified images as it is not clearly visible. Figure 3e shows that in the pdgfb mutant the dextran intensity is higher also in regions 6-10. How do the authors explain this?
We thank the reviewer for raising this important point.
Firstly, we now include enlarged views of the capillary beds for this experiment (Fig. 4d′) and new experiments mentioned below.
Secondly, in relation to why there is higher tracer in lateral locations and not just medial sites of haemorrhage, we believe that this is most likely due to the progressive spread of tracer from the medial hotspots. To test if this is likely, we performed additional experiments and tested tracer accumulation at 2 different timepoints in brains collected at 0.5 or 6 hpi (new data in Fig. 5f–g, Extended Data Fig. 6a–b′′). Tracer accumulation at 0.5 hpi was very minimal and was primarily limited to hotspots and nearby regions new data in (Fig. 5h), whereas a higher tracer accumulation in brains was observed across medial to lateral regions at 6 hpi (new data in Fig. 5i) in pdgfrb mutants. Comparing the data in Figure 4 (2 hpi) and new data in Figure 5i (6 hpi), the 10 kDa-tracer appears to have spread to more lateral locations given the increased time allowed post injection.
We cannot formally exclude the possibility that tracer leakage does occur slower through capillaries than at major hotspots, which might fit with the proposed model of slow leakage via increased EC transcytosis[7-9]. However, considering that we cannot detect increased tracer accumulation in pdgfrb mutants that lack aneurysms and haemorrhages at 7 and 14 dpf, such a scenario would require capillary transcytosis to be active at later juvenile and adult stages but not in larval and late larval animals. Thus, we believe the most plausible explanation is that aneurysm/haemorrhage associated leakage is the primary cause of the vascular integrity defects in zebrafish pdgfrb mutants.
We have added discussions addressing this in the revised manuscript (lines 220–230, 300–302).
(10) In general, the manuscript would benefit from a more detailed description of the performed experiments. How long did the tracer circulate in the experiments presented in Figures 2, 3, and 4?
We thank the reviewer for this suggestion and have now ensured that this is clearly described for in figure legends and methods (lines 391–395).
(11) How do the authors explain the poor signal of the 70 kDa dextran from the vasculature of 5-month-old zebrafish presented in Extended Data Figure 3?
We agree that the dextran signal was reduced compared to the other experiments in that Figure. This is likely due to sample preparation and clearing causing reduced fluorescence. Upon consideration of the presented data and the additional experiments using 10 kDa tracers providing further validations for our claims, we decided to remove this data from the paper.
(12) The study would benefit from a clear separation of the phenotypes caused by the loss of VSMC. The title eludes that also capillaries present hemorrhages which is not the case. How do vascular mural cells differ from mural cells? Are there any other mural cells?
We take the reviewers point and have now updated the title as "Mural cells protect the adult brain from haemorrhage but do not control the blood-brain barrier in developing zebrafish."
(13) I have a few comments about how the authors have interpreted the literature and why, in my opinion, they should revise their strong statements (e.g., the last sentence in the abstract).
Scientists have their own insights and interpretations of data. However, when citing published data, it should be clearly indicated whether the statement is a direct quote from the original publication or an interpretation. In the current manuscript, the authors have not correctly cited the data presented in the two published papers (references 5 and 6). These papers do not propose a model where pericytes suppress "adsorptive transcytosis" (lines 73-76). While increased transcytosis is observed in pericyte-deficient mice, the specific type of vesicular transport that is increased or induced remains unknown.
Similarly, lines 151-152 refer to references 5 and 6 and use the term "adsorptive transcytosis," but the authors of both papers did not use this term. Attributing this term to the original authors is inaccurate. Additionally, lines 152-153 do not accurately represent the findings of references 5 and 6. These papers do not state that there is an induction of "caveolae" in endothelial cells in pericyte-deficient mice. In the absence of pericytes, many vesicles can be observed in endothelial cells, but these vesicles are relatively large. It is more likely that there is some form of uncontrolled transcytosis, perhaps micropinocytosis. Please refer to the original papers accurately.
We thank the reviewer for these comments. We take the point and have rewritten the manuscript carefully to improve accuracy and avoid misrepresenting any previous claims made in specific papers.
Also, the authors have missed the fact that in mice, the extent of pericyte loss correlates with the extent of BBB leakage. To a certain extent, the remaining pericytes, can compensate for the loss by making longer processes and so ensure the full longitudinal coverage of the endothelium. This was shown in the initial work of Armulik et al (reference 5) and later in other studies.
We certainly did not miss this important point (as we are also working with these mouse models) and we now include reference to this in our expanded discussion. Of note, we do think it would be worthwhile assessing if the extent of BBB leakage and pericyte coverage also correlates with the presence of microhaemorrhages in these hypomorphic mouse models, although this is more challenging to do in mice than in zebrafish.
The bold assertion on lines 183 -187 that a lack of specific BBB phenotype in pdgfrb zebrafish mutant invalidates mouse model findings is unfounded. Despite the notion that zebrafish endothelium possesses a BBB, I present a few examples highlighting the differences in brain vascular development and why the authors' expectation of a straightforward extrapolation of mouse BBB phenotypes to zebrafish is untenable.
In mice Pdgfrb knockout is lethal, but in zebrafish, this is not the case. In marked contrast to mice, however, zebrafish pdgfrb null mutants reach adulthood despite extensive cerebral vascular anomalies and hemorrhage. Following the authors' argumentation about the unlikely divergence of zebrafish and mice evolution, does it mean that the described mouse phenotype warrants a revisit and that the Pdgfrb knockout in mice perhaps is not lethal? Another example where the role of a gene product is not one-to-one, which relates to pericyte development, is Notch3. Notch3-null mice do not show significant changes in pericyte numbers or distribution, suggesting a less prominent role in pericyte development compared to zebrafish.
Although many aspects of development are conserved between species, there are significant differences during brain vascular development between zebrafish and mice. These differences could reveal why the BBB is not impaired in zebrafish pdgfrb mutants. There is a difference in the temporal aspect when various cellular players emerge. The timing of microglia colonization in the brain differs. In mice, microglia colonization starts before the first vessel sprouts enter the brain, while in zebrafish, microglia enter after. Additionally, microglia in zebrafish and mice have a different ontogeny. In mice, astrocytes specialize postnatally and form astrocyte endfeet postnatally. In zebrafish, radial glia/astrocytes form at 48 hpf, and as early as 3 dpf, gfap+ cells have a close relationship with blood vessels. Thus, these radial glia/astrocyte-like cells could play an important role in BBB induction in zebrafish. It's worth noting that in Drosophila, the blood-brain barrier is located in glial cells. While speculative, these cells might still play a role in zebrafish, while the role of pericytes does not seem to be crucial. Pericytes enter the brain and contact with developing vasculature (endothelium) relatively late in zebrafish (60 hpf). In mice, the situation is different, as there is no such lag between endothelium and pericyte entry into the brain. I suggest that the authors approach the observed data with curiosity and ask: Why are these differences present? Are all aspects of the BBB induced by neural tissue in zebrafish? What is the contribution of microglia and astrocytes?"
Another interesting aspect to consider is the endothelial-pericyte ratio and longitudinal coverage of pericytes in the zebrafish brain, and how this relates to what is observed in mice. How similar is the zebrafish vasculature to the mouse vasculature when it comes to the average length of pericytes in the zebrafish brain? Does the longitudinal coverage of pericytes in the zebrafish brain reach nearly 100%, as it does in mice?
Based on the preceding arguments, it is recommended that the authors present a balanced discussion that provides insightful discussion and situates their work within a broader framework.
Overall, we agree with most of the points made by the reviewer above. As we have now extended the format of this paper to be a full article, we have space to provide an extended discussion and introduction. We now try to capture many of the points made by the reviewer and we think that this has significantly improved the paper. We thank the reviewer for this contribution.
We do want to point out that we did not state that our findings using zebrafish pdgfrb mutants invalidate mouse model findings. We suggest that a deeper analysis to understand the nature of the hotspots in mural cell deficient mammalian models could be very interesting in light of the zebrafish observations. We hope that the revised discussion better reflects this.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
This manuscript examines the role of pdgfrb-positive pericytes in the establishment and maintenance of the blood-brain barrier (BBB) in the zebrafish. Previous studies in PDGFB- or PDGFRB-deficient mice have suggested that loss of pericytes results in disruption of the BBB. The authors show that zebrafish pdgfrb mutant larvae have an intact BBB and that pdgfrb mutant adult fish show large vessel defects and hemorrhage but do not exhibit substantial leakage from brain capillaries, suggesting loss of pericytes is not sufficient to "open" the BBB. The authors use beautiful and compelling images and rigorous quantification to back up most of their conclusions. The imaging of the adult brain is particularly nice. The authors rigorously document the lack of BBB leakage in pdgfrbuq30bh mutant larvae and large vessel phenotypes (eg, enlargement and rupture) in pdgfrbuq30bh mutant adults. A few points would help the authors to further strengthen their findings contradicting the current dogma from rodent models.
We appreciate the reviewer's comments on the manuscript overall and agree that addressing the raised points was needed to strengthen our findings. We have addressed the main points below and believe that this revision greatly improves this study.
Major point:
The authors document pericyte loss using a single TgBAC(pdgfrb:egfp)ncv22 transgenic line driven by the promoter of the same gene mutated in their pdgfrbuq30bh mutants. Given their findings on the consequences of pericyte loss directly contradict current dogma from rodent studies, it would be useful to further validate the absence of brain pericytes in these mutants using one of several other transgenic lines marking pericytes currently available in the zebrafish. This could be done using pdgfrb crispants, which the authors show nicely phenocopy the germline mutants, at least in larvae. This would help nail down the absence of any currently identifiable pericyte population or sub-population in the loss of pdgfrb animals and substantially strengthen the authors' conclusions.
We thank the reviewer and agree that examination of pdgfrb<sup>uq30bh</sup> mutants using another transgenic line labelling pericytes would further validate the absence of brain pericytes. We generated a transgenic line, TgBAC(abcc9:abcc9-T2A-mCherry)<sup>uom139</sup>, to visualise pericytes and validated the absence of brain pericytes in the pdgfrb mutants (revised Extended Data Fig. 1b). The loss of brain pericytes matched our findings using TgBAC(pdgfrb:egfp)<sup>uq15bh</sup> line as well as previously published data by Ando et al 2016-2021, where the brain pericytes except for metencephalic artery were missing[2,3].
Other issues:
The authors should provide more information about the pdgfrbuq30bh mutant and how it was generated (including a diagram in a supplemental figure would be useful).
We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. In addition to the explanations provided in supplementary materials, we have added a schematic, provided sanger sequencing results showing the mutation as well as predicted effect of the mutation on the protein domains (Extended Data Fig. 1a).
It would be helpful to show some data on whether mutants show morphological phenotypes or developmental delay at 7 and 14 dpf, to provide some context to better assess the reduced branching and vessel length vascular phenotypes (see Figures 1c-e).
We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. We have provided further details on body length and survival of the pdgfrb mutants until 90 dpf. As reported by Ando et al 2021, we did not observe any distinguishing feature until about 30 dpf[1,3]. The adult anatomy of our mutant allele matches that of previously described null mutants and is now shown (Extended Data Fig. 1f).
If available, it would be helpful to have a positive control for the tracer leakage experiments - a genetic manipulation that does cause disruption of the BBB and leakage at 2 hours post-tracer injection (see Figures 1f and g).
We thank the reviewer for this suggestion and agree that a positive control would validate reliability of our method. We have performed new experiments at 3 dpf when BBB integrity is not yet established and at 7 dpf when BBB is functional in zebrafish[5], testing both 10 and 70 kDa tracers (new data in Fig. 2e–f). We detected significantly higher tracer accumulation at 3 dpf, showing that our methods can detect tracer leakage in the brain.
Quantification of the findings in Figure 4c, d would be useful, as would the use of germline fish for these experiments if these are now available. If this is not possible, it would be helpful to document that the crispants used in these experiments lack pdgfrb:egfp pericytes at adult stages (this is only shown for 5 dpf larvae, in Extended Data Figure 4b).
We thank the reviewer for this comment. Using TgBAC(pdgfrb:egfp)<sup>uq15bh</sup> line, we have imaged coronal brain sections collected from 10-week old pdgfrb crispants and uninjected siblings (age-matched animals used in Fig. 5d–e, previously Fig. 4c–d). We have now included data showing that adult pdgfrb crispants lack brain mural cells, phenocopying pdgfrb<sup>uq30bh</sup> mutants (new data, Extended Data Fig. 6f). These particular crispants are very reliable in our hands and nicely reproduce stable mutant phenotypes, giving us confidence to use the faster F0 approach in this experiment.
Adult mutants clearly show less dye leakage in the more superficial capillary regions than WT siblings, but dextran intensity is a bit higher, although this could well be diffusion from more central brain regions where overt hemorrhage is occurring. Along similar lines though, the authors' TEM data in Extended Data Figure 4d hints that there may be more caveolae in mutant brain capillaries, although the N number was lower here than for the measurements from TEM of larger central vessels (Figure 4g). It would be useful to carry out additional measurements to increase the N number in Figure 4d to see whether the difference between wild-type sibling and mutant capillary caveolae numbers remains as not significant.
We thank the reviewer for these raising important points and suggestions.
Firstly, in relation to signal in capillary regions and likely diffusion from hotspots, please see the response to reviewer 3 point 9 above.
Secondly, we have imaged and analysed more capillaries in both pdgfrb mutants and siblings (Extended Data Fig. 7a–b, previously Extended Data Fig. 4d). The results showed no significant difference between these groups, suggesting that capillary EC transcytosis is unchanged in our pdgfrb mutants.
It might be helpful to include some orienting labels and/or additional descriptions in the figure legends to help readers who are not used to looking at zebrafish brain vessels have an easier time figuring out what they are looking at and where it is in the brain.
We thank the reviewer for this suggestion and agree that adding further information in the figure legends and illustrations about orientation would make it easier for readers. In addition to the information provided in the figure legends in the submitted version, we have added an illustration, more labels on the revised figures, extended the descriptions in figure legends, main text and methods.
We have added a schematic depicting the tracer leakage assay workflow, orientation of live imaging and analysed region of interest (Extended Data Fig. 1a–b).
All figure legends have been updated with the anatomical position and microscopy view.
Additional labels on figures have been added to understand the referenced vessel names (new data in Fig. 3c and Extended Data Fig. 4a–b′).
Recommendations for the authors:
Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):
The study uses the intensity of tracer signals within the vessels to analyze BBB permeability, potentially underestimating leakage severity. The dye intensity is measured 2 hours after injection, however, other studies have already observed leakage after 30 Minutes, by imaging directly in the brain parenchyma. The overall intensity should also decrease through leakage from the other vessels of the body, e.g. in the trunk and tail. Probably the loss of intra-vascular dye intensity from leakage in barrier-free vessels is already so high (after 2 hours) that the smaller amount of leakage across the BBB cannot be observed.
We thank the reviewer for this comment and suggestion. We agree that small sized tracers leak from vasculature, particularly through fenestrated vessels in the trunk and tail. We have based our timing on previous studies and our own experience. In zebrafish, the study by O’Brown et al 2019 also used 2 hpi[5] for detection of leakage in mfsd2aa mutants, which also has been proposed to regulate BBB integrity by controlling EC transcytosis. Therefore, we believe that performing experiments at 2 hpi is appropriate to investigate roles of pericytes in BBB integrity. Our data would suggest that this timing works.
In response to this and other comments, we performed further experiments and analyses to test leakage of tracers testing molecular weights ranging from 1 to 2000 kDa individually. We showed that these tracers can reliably be detected in brain parenchyma and vasculature when imaged at 2 hpi. In another study, we showed that medium size tracers such as 40 kDa Dextran can be reliably detected in the vasculature in similar timepoints[10]. Considering we have performed experiments using 10 and 70 kDa tracers do detect parenchymal tracer accumulation and tracer still within the vessels, we believe this timepoint is appropriate for assessing BBB integrity in zebrafish.
In addition to these experiments, see our tracer leakage experiments in 1-month-old animals, at 0.5 and 6 hpi to test leakage pattern described above (Fig. 5 and Extended Data Fig. 6).
Therefore, the authors will need to validate their method of choice, showing an impairment of the BBB, caused by other agents (known to affect the BBB), and at 48hpf, when the BBB is not tightened yet. One example for BBB impairment can be found in O'Brown et al (2019), eLife 8e47326. doi: 10.7554/eLife.47326
We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. As shown by O’Brown et al 2019, we have performed experiments at 3 dpf when BBB integrity is not mature and at 7 dpf when BBB is functional[5], testing both 10 and 70 kDa tracers. We detected significantly higher tracer accumulation at 3 dpf, showing our new additional method (see below) can detect tracer leakage in the brain (new data in Fig. 2e–f).
Ideally, the authors would also supplement the method with additional approaches in the younger developmental stages to validate their findings.
The validation of the method and the findings is particularly important for the claims of lack of BBB impairment in the absence of mural cells, as this is a "negative" finding.
In response to this and comments from other reviewers, we performed additional tracer leakage experiments (new data in Fig. 2a–d) where we imaged 10 and 70 kDa tracers with a vascular reporter (Tg(kdrl:EGFP)<sup>s843</sup> or Tg(kdrl:Hsa.HRAS-mCherry)<sup>s916</sup>) and used this reporter for normalisation. Both this approach as well as the experiments provided in the first submission (updated as Extended Data Fig. 3a–d) showed that pdgfrb mutants at 7 and 14 dpf have indistinguishable BBB integrity compared to siblings. See also Author response image 1 that further addresses this.
I also strongly suggest to rephrase and downtown the claim that vascular mural cells do not control the blood-brain barrier in developing zebrafish.
As a negative finding cannot be proven completely and lots of the previously shown effects on murine BBB impairment are rather weak (when caused by single agents such as Claudin5 deficiency or Sphingosine-phosphate receptor1 knockout), it might be important to only claim that in zebrafish no strong impairment (as observed in the mural cell-deficient mouse) could be observed. Or rephrase it to "no impairment as severe as/comparable to ... could be observed" and then provide an impairment control for the developmental stages.
We thank the reviewer for this comment and agree that negative findings are very challenging to prove. However, we find no evidence of leakage of the BBB in animals lacking mural cells at 7 and 14 dpf and believe that our data is robust on this point. As such, we believe we show that a vertebrate with a largely conserved EC BBB, can have intact barrier function in the absence of mural cells.
We have as suggested revised our claims throughout the manuscript to provide more further nuanced discussion of this, but we do not want to water down our claims too much as we believe they are important. We hope that the reviewer will appreciate our carefully worded and expanded discussion section.
Additional items of interest to the readers and therefore suggestions to improve the manuscript could be
(1) To include more molecular analysis: while the study identifies caveolae induction and basement membrane thickening as potential contributors to focal leakage, the exact molecular mechanisms linking mural cell loss to these structural changes are not deeply investigated.
(2) Also, the study primarily associates BBB disruption in the adult with aneurysms. Therefore other subtle or diffuse changes to BBB permeability that might occur even without overt vascular lesions are potentially underrepresented.
However, following up experimentally on these might exceed the scope of the manuscript.
We thank the reviewer for these suggestions and agree with both points. However, as stated by the reviewer, these experiments are beyond the scope of the manuscript and represent future directions for our lab and others.
Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):
(1) Mouse genes should be written as follows: Pdgfb, Pdgfrb and be in italics. See line line 70: it should be written "Pdgfb and Pdgfrb (italics)" and not "PdgfB and Pdgfrβ".
We have updated the text according to the reviewer’s suggestion.
(2) Please state the age of the fish analyzed in Figure 1f and 1g.
We have moved this data to Extended Fig. 3a–d (previously Fig. 1f-g) and have placed age information on the images and in the figure legends.
(3) Is the reduced vascular complexity in pdgfb mutant due to reduced angiogenesis or due to excessive pruning?
This is a good question, and we do not know at this stage. We have unpublished data that suggest pericytes secrete angiogenic growth factors, but this question warrants a thorough investigation that we believe is beyond the scope of this current study.
(4) Please check that the figure legends state the correct number of fish analysed. For example, Figure 1 d, e N=8 but there seem to be 9 data points per group - 14dpf.
We apologise for this mistake and thank the reviewer for raising this. We have updated the graphs and figure legends accordingly.
(5) Please indicate in the figures the genotypes (wt, het) of a sibling presented alongside a pdgfb mutant.
Wild-type and heterozygous mutants are commonly used together in zebrafish research as a collective control group termed siblings. Since we didn’t see any difference between wild-type and pdgfrbuq30bh/- groups in any experiments, we reported these groups together. This is now stated in the supplementary materials.
One exception to this was examination of the growth and survival rates where we show the genotypes separately (new data in Extended Data Fig. 1b-f).
(6) Please explain clearly what region is shown in Figure 2B. I do not understand the explanation "approximate location of dotted line". Is the image in the panel "a" top view of a brain?
We have moved this data to Fig. 3a′ (previously Fig. 2b) and replaced the dotted line in Figure 3a (previously Fig. 2a) with a white box indicating the location of the restricted region in the whole brain image.
We have revised the text as below:
“Subset of z-slices from the whole brain imaging in (a) and (b) (white boxes) indicating mural cell loss and abnormal capillary network patterning. 100-μm-thick maximum intensity projections (MIP) were generated using the continuation of the left middle mesencephalic central artery (MMCtA, arrow) as an anatomical landmark.”
In addition, we have updated all our figure legends clearly stating the view and anatomical position of the imaged sample.
(7) Figure 2e: Note that- the dotted areas do not correspond to the areas magnified. Please adjust.
We have moved this data to Extended Data Fig. 5a (previously Fig. 2e–e′) and updated the location of the white box in 5a shown in enlarged view in 5a′.
(8) Lines 112 and 114 - Should the indicated figure be Figure 2b-d and Figure 2c-d, respectively, and not Figure 1?
We thank the reviewer for pointing out this mistake. All the figure legends are now referred to appropriately in the revised manuscript.
(9) Data presented in Figure 2 and Figure 3 can be consolidated and presented as one Figure.
We thank the reviewer for this suggestion. After addition of new data and revising the manuscript we have decided to keep these data presented separately.
(10) Note that Figure 2a,b shows 5-month-old fish, not 2-month-old fish. Additionally, Extended Data Figure 3 shows 5-month-old fish, not 3-month-old fish.
The stages noted by the reviewer were correctly indicated.
(11) Figure 2d: Please clarify the definition of a "large vessel".
We have observed normal morphology in capillaries and noted aneurysms and hotspots in large calibre vessels such as arteries, which become more severe over time. We have revised this across the manuscript accordingly.
(12) Figure 4a, b: Please explain how the hotspots of leakage were defined based on the extravasated tracer.
Hotspots of leakage are scored when fluorescent tracer aggregates are clearly observed outside the vessels. Vessel borders were defined using the transgenic lines (Tg(kdrl:EGFP)<sup>s843</sup> or Tg(kdrl:Hsa.HRAS-mCherry)<sup>s916</sup>). We have added a clear description in the methods section (lines 473–475).
Figure 4c: Why were Pdgfrb crispants used and not the mutant line?
They were used as pdgfrb crispants phenocopy the lack of brain mural cells (Extended Data Fig. 5e, previously Extended Data Fig. 4b) and mutant phenotype reliably and for practical reasons, because they allow faster experiments and reduce fish usage.
Figure 4e: The magnification of the electron microscopy images does not make it possible to clearly identify caveolae. What was the magnification of the collected images for caveolae analysis? How did the authors ensure that they quantified only caveolae and not other types of vesicles?
Respectfully, we disagree that the magnification is insufficient as our images were captured and analysed consistent with previous ultrastructural descriptions[11,12]. We based our quantification of caveolae on the size of vesicles observed and define them as circular profiles of less than 100 nm in diameter and were scored as luminal or abluminal based on proximity to each surface membrane (within 500 nm of each surface or in a thin-walled vessel the caveolae closest to each surface) (lines 398–409). Importantly, comparable analyses at similar magnifications have been independently validated in multiple caveola-deficient zebrafish genetic models[4,13]. Interestingly given the reviewers comments above, we do see increased vesicular structures that are larger than caveolae, but we only provide quantification of the caveolae here.
Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):
Congratulations to the authors on their really beautiful imaging and rigorous quantitative documentation of phenotypes - this is a really nicely done study, and could be very important to the field with just a few additional experiments to buttress the key conclusions.
We thank the reviewer for their kind comments.
In addition to the comments noted in the public review, I would only point out that there are two mislabeled call-outs in the text (Lines 112 and 114; says Figure 1, should say Figure 2).
We thank the reviewer for this point and have now revised the text accordingly.
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I've always wanted an Olivetti Valentine and recently purchased one. To my surprise, there is a metal commemorative marker on the back that reads, in English, "Commemorative Edition. 31st Anniversary. 1965-1996. Special Anniversary Edition. 179/250". This was surprising because 1) the Valentine was released in 1969 and 2) production ended in 1975. From the reading I've done online, it seems like production lingered in Mexico, but 1996 seems very late.
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eLife Assessment
The authors aim to understand why Kupffer cells (KCs) die in metabolic-associated steatotic liver disease (MASLD). This is a valuable study using in vitro studies and an in vivo genetic mouse model, suggesting that increased glycolysis contributes to KC death in MASLD. The data presented are now convincing and adequately revised. This work will be of interest to researchers in the immunology and metabolism fields.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
This manuscript provides novel insights into altered glucose metabolism and KC status during early MASLD. The authors propose that hyperactivated glycolysis drives a spatially patterned KC depletion that is more pronounced than the loss of hepatocytes or hepatic stellate cells. This concept significantly enhances our understanding of early MASLD progression and KC metabolic phenotype.
Through a combination of TUNEL staining and MS-based metabolomic analyses of KCs from HFHC-fed mice, the authors show increased KC apoptosis alongside dysregulation of glycolysis and the pentose phosphate pathway. Using in vitro culture systems and KC-specific ablation of Chil1, a regulator of glycolytic flux, they further show that elevated glycolysis can promote KC apoptosis.
However, it remains unclear whether the observed metabolic dysregulation directly causes KC death or whether secondary factors, such as low-grade inflammation or macrophage activation, also contribute significantly. Nonetheless, the results, particularly those derived from the Chil1-ablated model, point to a new potential target for the early prevention of KC death during MASLD progression.
The manuscript is clearly written and thoughtfully addresses key limitations in the field, especially the focus on glycolytic intermediates rather than fatty acid oxidation. The authors acknowledge the missing mechanistic link between increased glycolysis and KC death. A few things require clarification.
Strengths:
• The study presents the novel observation of profound metabolic dysregulation in KCs during early MASLD and identifies these cells as undergoing apoptosis. The finding that Chil1 ablation aggravates this phenotype opens new avenues for exploring therapeutic strategies to mitigate or reverse MASLD progression.
• The authors provide a comprehensive metabolic profile of KCs following HFHC diet exposure, including quantification of individual metabolites. They further delineate alterations in glycolysis and the pentose phosphate pathway in Chil1-deficient cells, substantiating enhanced glycolytic flux through 13C-glucose tracing experiments.
• The data underscore the critical importance of maintaining balanced glucose metabolism in both in vitro and in vivo contexts to prevent KC apoptosis, emphasizing the high metabolic specialization of these cells.
• The observed increase in KC death in Chil1-deficient KCs demonstrates their dependence on tightly regulated glycolysis, particularly under pathological conditions such as early MASLD.
Weaknesses:
• The TUNEL staining in the overview in Figure 2 is not convincing. Typically the signal overlaps with DAPI, which is mostly not the case in the figures shown.
• The mechanistic link between elevated glycolytic flux and KC death remains unclear.
• Figure S5: shows deltadelta CT values, not relative values. What are the housekeeping genes? There should be at least 2, and they should not have metabolically related functions such as Gapdh.
• Figure 1C: shows WT and KO gating side by side
• The following point has not been answered: "While BMDMs from Chil1 knockout mice are used to demonstrate enhanced glycolytic flux, it remains unclear whether Chil1 deficiency affects macrophage differentiation itself." Expression of certain genes that indicate function does not show whether BMDMs isolated from these KO mice are fully differentiated. Here, counting BM input/ BMDM output, flow cytometry on BMDMs, morphology etc. should be tested.
Reviewer #4 (Public review):
Summary:
In this study, He et al. investigate the mechanisms underlying Kupffer cell (KC) loss during metabolic stress. It has long been observed that embryonically derived KCs decline in obesity and liver disease, a loss that is compensated by monocyte recruitment, although the underlying mechanisms remain unclear. The authors propose that metabolic reprogramming, particularly excessive glycolysis, drives KC death. Using an original murine genetic model to modulate glycolysis, they further demonstrate that enhanced glycolytic activity exacerbates KC damage.
Strengths:
Overall, the study is extremely clearly presented, with a convincing and simple message destined to a vast audience.
Weaknesses:
This manuscript has already undergone one round of revisions in which I was not involved. The authors have tried to address several points raised by the previous reviewers, notably regarding the unexpectedly high level of TUNEL staining observed in KCs. However, I share these concerns expressed by the three reviewers that the reported levels remain difficult to reconcile with the biology. A TUNEL positivity rate of ~60% at week 16 of the HFHC diet would imply massive KC death, which should have led to a near-complete depletion of the KC population, something that is not observed. While I agree that the KC compartment is clearly affected under this dietary challenge, I would strongly encourage the authors to carefully rule out potential technical biases that could account for this implausibly high rate of cell death.
Considering the new in-vivo experiment with 2-DG, it is definitely convincing and clearly adds some value to the full study.
So the full story deserves publication.
Author response:
The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.
Public Reviews:
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
The authors aim to investigate the mechanisms underlying Kupffer cell death in metabolic-associated steatotic liver disease (MASLD). The authors propose that KCs undergo massive cell death in MASLD and that glycolysis drives this process. However, there appears to be a discrepancy between the reported high rates of KC death and the apparent maintenance of KC homeostasis and replacement capacity.
Strengths:
This is an in vivo study.
Weaknesses:
There are discrepancies between the authors' observations and previous reports, as well as inconsistencies among their own findings.
Before presenting the percentage of CLEC4F<sup>+</sup>TUNEL<sup>+</sup> cells, the authors should have first shown the number of CLEC4F<sup>+</sup> cells per unit area in Figure 1. At 16 weeks of age, the proportion of TUNEL<sup>+</sup> KCs is extremely high (~60%), yet the flow cytometry data indicate that nearly all F4/80<sup>+</sup> KCs are TIMD4<sup>+</sup>, suggesting an embryonic origin. If such extensive KC death occurred, the proportion of embryonically derived TIMD4<sup>+</sup> KCs would be expected to decrease substantially. Surprisingly, the proportion of TIMD4<sup>+</sup> KCs is comparable between chow-fed and 16-week HFHC-fed animals. Thus, the immunostaining and flow cytometry data are inconsistent, making it difficult to explain how massive KC death does not lead to their replacement by monocyte-derived cells.
We thank the reviewer for the insightful comment and the opportunity to clarify this important point. To ensure consistency between our methodologies, we replaced Clec4f staining with TIM4 staining results as requested by the reviewer. We first showed the number of TIM4<sup>+</sup> cells per unit area in Figure 1B. The results showed a significant and progressive loss of TIM4<sup>+</sup> cells per unit area in the liver parenchyma, decreasing from approximately 60 cells/FOV at baseline (0w) to nearly 50 at 4w and further to about 30 at 16w post-HFHC diet. This finding is fully consistent with our flow cytometry data. The percentage of the embryonically derived KC population (CD11blow F4/80hi TIM4hi) among CD45<sup>+</sup> cells dropped from 30.2% (0w) to 24.3% (4w) and 17.6% (16w) (Revised Figure 1C). The absolute number per gram of liver decreased from roughly 12 x 10<sup>5</sup> (1w) to 9 x 10<sup>5</sup> (4w) and 5 x 10<sup>5</sup> (16w) (Revised Figure 1D).
These data suggest that despite the reported high rate of cell death among CLEC4F<sup>+</sup>TIMD4<sup>+</sup> KCs, the population appears to self-maintain, with no evidence of monocyte-derived KC generation in this model, which contradicts several recent studies in the field.
We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful comment. We agree that our data show no substantial generation of monocyte-derived Kupffer cells (MoKCs) within the 16-week HFHC model. However, we do not believe the remaining embryonic KCs(EmKCs) are maintained through self-renewal, as the proportion of Ki67<sup>+</sup>TIM4<sup>+</sup> cells remains low at all time points (Revised Figure S2D). Instead, our observations align with a phased replacement model: recruited monocytes first differentiate into monocyte-derived macrophages (MoMFs), which we see accumulate (Revised Figure S2B, S2C), and only later adopt a KC phenotype. Consistent with this, our 16-week model shows significant EmKC loss and MoMF expansion, but not yet the emergence of TIM4-MoKCs. This timing is supported by prior studies, where TIM4-KCs were observed at 24 weeks, but not at 16 weeks, on similar diets (Ref. 1,2). Therefore, we interpret our findings as capturing an earlier phase of MASLD progression, characterized by EmKC death and MoMF accumulation, prior to their full differentiation into MoKCs.
Moreover, there is no evidence that TIM4<sup>+</sup>CLEC4F<sup>+</sup> KCs increase their proliferation rate to compensate for such extensive cell death. If approximately 60% of KCs are dying and no monocyte-derived KCs are recruited, one would expect a much greater decrease in total KC numbers than what is reported.
Thank you for raising this point, which allows for an important clarification. The interpretation that approximately 60% of KCs are dying is correct, but this refers to the proportion of the remaining KC population at 16 weeks that is TUNEL<sup>+</sup>, not to 60% of the original KC pool. Since our data show that over half of the EmKCs are lost by 16 weeks (Revised Figure 1B), the 60% of dying cells at this late time point corresponds roughly to only 25-30% of the total original KC population at baseline. This distinction reconciles the high rate of apoptosis observed late in disease with the overall progressive depletion of the EmKC pool.
It is also unexpected that the maximal rate of KC death occurs at early time points (8 weeks), when the mice have not yet gained substantial weight (Figure 1B). Previous studies have shown that longer feeding periods are typically required to observe the loss of embryo-derived KCs.
We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful observation. We think KC death is a continuous event during MASLD. To induce MASH, previous studies typically assess the loss of EmKCs after longer feeding periods, which might leave us an impression that longer feeding periods are required to observe substantive loss of embryonically derived KCs. In our HFHC model, the proportion of dying KCs was already elevated by 8 weeks, and this high rate was sustained through the 16-week endpoint. In a separate MCD dietary model characterized by rapid MASLD progression, a high rate of KC death was detectable as early as 6 weeks (Revised Figure 1F). Collectively, these data suggest that the onset of significant KC death is dependent on the pace of MASLD pathogenesis, more likely an early-initiated event that is through MASLD progression.
Furthermore, it is surprising that the HFD induces as much KC death as the HFHC and MCD diets. Earlier studies suggested that HFD alone is far less effective than MASH-inducing diets at promoting the replacement of embryonic KCs by monocyte-derived macrophages.
We appreciate the reviewer’s insightful comment. In our study, we observed significant KCs death under both HFD and HFHC feeding for 20, 16 weeks, respectively. Moreover, both HFHC and HFD induced similar stages of MASLD (characterized by significant lipid accumulation without fibrosis development) by these time points (Authir response image 1). Therefore, these data support that the onset of substantial KCs death may be an early MASLD event, before the progression to MASH. Additionally, this finding aligns with existing literature showing that 16 weeks of HFD feeding alone is sufficient to cause a marked reduction in the TIM4<sup>+</sup>KCs population (Ref. 1).
Author response image 1.
Detection of liver fibrosis in MASLD mouse models. Male wild-type C57BL/6J mice were fed a high-fat, high-cholesterol (HFHC) diet for 16 weeks or a high-fat diet (HFD) for 20 weeks to induce MASLD. Mice fed a normal chow diet (NCD) served as controls. (A) Sirius Red staining of liver sections was performed to assess collagen deposition and fibrosis during MASLD progression. Scale bar, 20 μm. (B) Western blot analysis of liver tissue lysates showing α-smooth muscle actin (α-SMA) expression as a marker of hepatic stellate cell activation and liver fibrosis.
In Figure 2D, TIMD4 staining appears extremely faint, making the results difficult to interpret. In contrast, the TUNEL signal is strikingly intense and encompasses a large proportion of liver cells (approximately 60% of KCs, 15% of hepatocytes, 20% of hepatic stellate cells, 30% of non-KC macrophages, and a proportion of endothelial cells is also likely affected). This pattern closely resembles that typically observed in mouse models of acute liver failure. Given this apparent extent of cell death, it is unexpected that ALT and AST levels remain low in MASH mice, which is highly unusual.
Thank you for this important feedback. To address concerns about the clarity of our imaging, we have provided high-resolution split-channel raw images for Figure 2D (Revised Figure 2D), which distinctly show the localization of TIM4, TUNEL, and GS. These confirm the progressive reduction of TIM4<sup>+</sup>KCs and the increase in TUNEL<sup>+</sup> TIM4<sup>+</sup>cells over time. We agree that the high proportion of TUNEL<sup>+</sup>cells seems at odds with the modest ALT/AST elevation. This discrepancy might be explained by the distinct nature of cell death in MASLD. Unlike the acute necrosis with membrane rupture seen in acute liver failure—which causes massive, rapid enzyme release— obesity-related liver injury is a chronic process dominated by apoptosis (Ref. 4,5). Apoptosis preserves membrane integrity until late stages (Ref. 6), with dying cells packaged into apoptotic bodies for efficient phagocytic clearance by neighboring macrophages (Ref. 7,8). This controlled disposal system minimizes the leakage of intracellular enzymes. Therefore, the coexistence of widespread apoptosis (high TUNEL signal) with limited enzyme release (low ALT/AST) is a recognized feature of chronic MASLD pathogenesis.
No statistical analysis is provided for Figure 5D, and it is unclear which metabolites show statistically significant changes in Figure 5C.
We thank the reviewer for raising this statistical problem. We have now included statistical analysis in Revised Figure 5D.
In addition, there is no evaluation of liver pathology in Clec4f-Cre × Chil1flox/flox mice. It remains possible that the observed effects on KC death result from aggravated liver injury in these animals. There is also no evidence that Chil1 deficiency affects glucose metabolism in KCs in vivo.
We thank the reviewer for these important points. We previously characterized the liver pathology of Clec4f<sup>ΔChil1</sup> mice in detail (preprint: eLife 2025, DOI: 10.7554/eLife.107023.1, Fig. 2). On a normal chow diet, these mice showed no differences in body weight, hepatic lipid deposition, metabolic parameters, or glucose tolerance compared to controls. However, on an HFHC diet, Clec4f<sup>ΔChil1</sup> mice developed significantly worse metabolic and histological phenotypes. Crucially, our in vitro data demonstrate that recombinant Chi3l1 directly reduces KC death (preprint, Fig. 6E-F), indicating that the aggravated MASLD in knockout mice is a consequence of increased KC loss, not its cause.
Regarding glucose metabolism, we have previously shown that Chi3l1 deficiency leads to increased glucose uptake by KCs in vivo using the fluorescent glucose analog 2-NBDG. This effect was reversed by supplementing knockout mice with recombinant Chi3l1 (preprint Fig. 6G-H). This provides direct evidence that Chi3l1 modulates glucose uptake in KCs in vivo.
Finally, the authors should include a more direct experimental approach to modulate glycolysis in KCs and assess its causal role in KC death in MASH.
We thank the reviewer for this constructive suggestion. To more directly evaluate the role of glycolysis in KCs death in vivo, we performed pharmacological inhibition of glycolysis using 2-deoxy-D-glucose (2-DG) in the HFHC-induced MASLD model (Revised Figure 4E–G). Wild-type mice were fed an HFHC diet for four weeks, and 2-DG (50 mg/kg) or vehicle was administered intraperitoneally every other day beginning at week 3. This short intervention period and modest dosing were chosen to limit potential systemic metabolic effects while modulating glycolytic activity during active disease development. KCs apoptosis was assessed by TIM4/TUNEL co-staining. 2-DG treatment significantly reduced the proportion of TUNEL<sup>+</sup>KCs compared with vehicle controls, indicating protection against KCs death. These data together with our complementary in vitro gain-of-function experiments, support a contributory role for excessive glycolytic activity in promoting KC apoptosis in MASLD. We have incorporated these findings into the revised manuscript to strengthen the causal link between glycolytic reprogramming and KCs loss in vivo (Revised manuscript, page 7, line 267-282).
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
In this manuscript, He et al. set out to investigate the mechanisms behind Kupffer Cell death in MASLD. As has been previously shown, they demonstrate a loss of resident KCs in MASLD in different mouse models. They then go on to show that this correlates with alterations in genes/metabolites associated with glucose metabolism in KCs. To investigate the role of glucose metabolism further, they subject isolated KCs in vitro to different metabolic treatments and assess cleaved caspase 3 staining, demonstrating that KCs show increased Cl. Casp 3 staining upon stimulation of glycolysis. Finally, they use a genetic mouse model (Chil1KO) where they have previously reported that loss of this gene leads to increased glycolysis and validate this finding in BMDMs (KO). They then remove this gene specifically from KCs (Clec4fCre) and show that this leads to increased macrophage death compared with controls.
Strengths:
As we do not yet understand why KCs die in MASLD, this manuscript provides some explanation for this finding. The metabolomics is novel and provides insight into KC biology. It could also lead to further investigation; here, it will be important that the full dataset is made available.
Weaknesses:
Different diets are known to induce different amounts of KC loss, yet here, all models examined appear to result in 60% KC death. One small field of view of liver tissue is shown as representative to make these claims, but this is not sufficient, as anything can be claimed based on one field of view. Rather, a full tissue slice should be included to allow readers to really assess the level of death.
Thank you for raising this point regarding data presentation. We analyzed full tissue slices and found that including a view of the entire slice at a standard magnification makes individual KC difficult to resolve (Author response image 2). To clearly represent the extent and distribution of KCs death across the liver tissue slice, we now include lower-magnification images that provide a wider field of view, allowing readers to assess the pattern across a larger tissue area (Revised Figures 1, 2, 6F).
Author response image 2.
Assessment of KCs death on full liver tissue slice. (A) Immunofluorescence staining was performed to detect Kupffer cell (KC) death in liver sections from mice fed an MCD diet for 6 weeks. Cell death was assessed by TUNEL staining (green), and KCs were identified by TIM4 staining (red). Nuclei were counterstained with DAPI (blue). Representative whole-tissue view is shown. Scale bars, 1mm.
Additionally, there is no consistency between the markers used to define KCs and moMFs, with CLEC4F being used in microscopy, TIM4 in flow, while the authors themselves acknowledge that moKCs are CLEC4F+TIM4-. As moKCs are induced in MASLD, this limits interpretation. Additionally, Iba1 is referred to as a moMF marker but is also expressed by KCs, which again prevents an accurate interpretation of the data. Indeed, the authors show 60% of KCs are dying but only 30% of IBA1+ moMFs, as KCs are also IBA1+, this would mean that KCs die much more than moMFs, which would then limit the relevance of the BMDM studies performed if the phenotype is KC specific. Therefore, this needs to be clarified.
We thank the reviewer for the constructive comments. For consistency, we have standardized our KC marker to TIM4 for all immunostaining data, aligning it with our flow cytometry analysis (Revised Figures 1, 2D, 6F). We have also clarified that IBA1 is expressed by hepatic macrophages (both KCs and MoMFs)(Revised Figure 2C, Revised manuscript, page 5, lines 182-183). Moreover, we also included the clarification that 60% of TIM4<sup>+</sup> KCs are TUNEL<sup>+</sup> versus 30% of total IBA1<sup>+</sup> cells further supports that KCs undergo death more readily than MoMFs (Revised manuscript, page 5, lines 186-189). We also acknowleged the limitation of BMDM studies in the Revised manuscript, page 8, line 332-340.
The claim that periportal KCs die preferentially is not supported, given that the majority of KCs are peri-portal. Rather, these results would need to be normalised to KC numbers in PP vs PC regions to make meaningful conclusions.
We thank the reviewer for this important point. We included the normalized data. At 8 weeks, the normalized death rate was significantly higher in periportal versus pericentral regions (p = 0.041), supporting increased periportal KC susceptibility during early MASLD. By 16 weeks, proportional death rates became comparable between zones (Revised Figure 2D, Revised manuscript, page 6, lines 194-201).
Additionally, KCs are known to be notoriously difficult to keep alive in vitro, and for these studies, the authors only examine cl. Casp 3 staining. To fully understand that data, a full analysis of the viability of the cells and whether they retain the KC phenotype in all conditions is required.
We appreciate the reviewer’s suggestions. To confirm the identity and health of isolated KCs in our in vitro studies, we showed that ~95% of primary isolated KCs are TIM4<sup>+</sup> (Revised Figure S3A). Furthermore, Calcein-AM staining confirmed that the remaining KCs under our experimental conditions are viable and healthy (Revised Figure S4A).
Finally, in the Cre-driven KO model, there does not seem to be any death of KCs in the controls (rather numbers trend towards an increase with time on diet, Figure 6E), contrary to what had been claimed in the rest of the paper, again making it difficult to interpret the overall results.
We thank the reviewer for this comment. During our analysis, we indeed observed no reduction in KCs in the Clec4f cre control mice. This prompted us to consider that Cre insertion itself might influence KCs mainteinence. To investigate this, we performed TIM4/Ki67 co-staining, which revealed significantly higher numbers of proliferating KCs in Clec4f cre mice compared with C57BL/6J mice under NCD. Following HFHC feeding, KCs proliferation in Clec4f cre mice increased even further. These results indicate that Cre insertion enhanced KCs self-renewal in Clec4f cre mice,which contributes to maintenance of the KCs pool during MASLD (Revised Figures S8A and S8B). (Revised manuscript, page 9, line 363-370).
Additionally, there is no validation that the increased death observed in vivo in KCs is due to further promotion of glycolysis.
We thank the reviewer for this constructive suggestion. To more directly evaluate the role of glycolysis in KCs death in vivo, we performed pharmacological inhibition of glycolysis using 2-deoxy-D-glucose (2-DG) (Revised Figure 4E–G). Wild-type mice were fed an HFHC diet for five weeks, and 2-DG (50 mg/kg) or vehicle was administered intraperitoneally every other day beginning at week 3. This short intervention period and modest dosing were chosen to limit potential systemic metabolic effects while modulating glycolytic activity in KCs. KCs apoptosis was assessed by TIM4/TUNEL co-staining. 2-DG treatment significantly reduced the proportion of TUNEL<sup>+</sup>KCs compared with vehicle controls, indicating protection against KCs death. These data, together with our complementary in vitro gain-of-function experiments support a contributory role for excessive glycolytic activity in promoting KCs death in MASLD. We have incorporated these findings into the revised manuscript to strengthen the causal link between glycolytic reprogramming and KCs loss in vivo (Revised manuscript, page 7, line 267-282).
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
This manuscript provides novel insights into altered glucose metabolism and KC status during early MASLD. The authors propose that hyperactivated glycolysis drives a spatially patterned KC depletion that is more pronounced than the loss of hepatocytes or hepatic stellate cells. This concept significantly enhances our understanding of early MASLD progression and KC metabolic phenotype.
Through a combination of TUNEL staining and MS-based metabolomic analyses of KCs from HFHC-fed mice, the authors show increased KC apoptosis alongside dysregulation of glycolysis and the pentose phosphate pathway. Using in vitro culture systems and KC-specific ablation of Chil1, a regulator of glycolytic flux, they further show that elevated glycolysis can promote KC apoptosis.
However, it remains unclear whether the observed metabolic dysregulation directly causes KC death or whether secondary factors, such as low-grade inflammation or macrophage activation, also contribute significantly. Nonetheless, the results, particularly those derived from the Chil1-ablated model, point to a new potential target for the early prevention of KC death during MASLD progression.
The manuscript is clearly written and thoughtfully addresses key limitations in the field, especially the focus on glycolytic intermediates rather than fatty acid oxidation. The authors acknowledge the missing mechanistic link between increased glycolysis and KC death. Still, several interpretations require moderation to avoid overstatement, and certain experimental details, particularly those concerning flow cytometry and population gating, need further clarification.
Strengths:
(1) The study presents the novel observation of profound metabolic dysregulation in KCs during early MASLD and identifies these cells as undergoing apoptosis. The finding that Chil1 ablation aggravates this phenotype opens new avenues for exploring therapeutic strategies to mitigate or reverse MASLD progression.
(2) The authors provide a comprehensive metabolic profile of KCs following HFHC diet exposure, including quantification of individual metabolites. They further delineate alterations in glycolysis and the pentose phosphate pathway in Chil1-deficient cells, substantiating enhanced glycolytic flux through 13C-glucose tracing experiments.
(3) The data underscore the critical importance of maintaining balanced glucose metabolism in both in vitro and in vivo contexts to prevent KC apoptosis, emphasizing the high metabolic specialization of these cells.
(4) The observed increase in KC death in Chil1-deficient KCs demonstrates their dependence on tightly regulated glycolysis, particularly under pathological conditions such as early MASLD.
Weaknesses:
(1) The novelty is questionable. The presented work has considerable overlap with a study by the same lab, which is currently under review (citation 17), and it should be considered whether the data should not be presented in one paper.
We appreciate the reviewer for the opportunity to clarify the relationship between the two studies. In our previous work (citation 17), we focused on the transcriptional metabolic differences between Kupffer cells (KCs) and monocyte-derived macrophages (MoMFs) and identified Chi3l1 as a selective protective factor that limits glucose uptake and shields KCs from metabolic stress–induced cell death, with minimal effects on MoMFs. That study directly motivated the current work. The observation that KCs are uniquely protected from metabolic stress led us to hypothesize that excessive glycolytic activation itself may be a primary driver of KCs death, which forms the central question of the present study. Accordingly, the current manuscript shifts the focus from Chi3l1-mediated protection to the mechanistic role of hyperglycolysis in driving KCs mortality, using distinct experimental approaches and addressing a different biological question. Because the two studies address conceptually distinct aims—one defining a protective regulator of KCs survival and the other dissecting glycolysis-driven KCs death mechanisms—we believe they are best presented as separate manuscripts. Combining them into a single study would dilute the mechanistic depth and clarity of each story.
(2) The authors report that 60% of KCs are TUNEL-positive after 16 weeks of HFHC diet and confirm this by cleaved caspase-3 staining. Given that such marker positivity typically indicates imminent cell death within hours, it is unexpected that more extensive KC depletion or monocyte infiltration is not observed. Since Timd4 expression on monocyte-derived macrophages takes roughly one month to establish, the authors should consider whether these TUNEL-positive KCs persist in a pre-apoptotic state longer than anticipated. Alternatively, fate-mapping experiments could clarify the dynamics of KC death and replacement.
We thank the reviewer for this astute observation. As shown in revised Figure 2D, the proportion of TIM4<sup>+</sup>TUNEL<sup>+</sup>KCs peaks at 8 weeks after HFHC feeding and remains elevated at 16 weeks. However, examination of the corresponding single-channel TIM4 staining during this period reveals that the overall density of TIM4<sup>+</sup> KCs does not undergo abrupt or synchronous depletion. This temporal dissociation between sustained TUNEL positivity and relatively gradual KCs loss suggests that TUNEL-positive KCs do not undergo immediate clearance. Based on these observations, we agree with the reviewer that a substantial fraction of TUNEL-positive KCs likely persists in a prolonged pre-apoptotic or stressed state rather than undergoing rapid cell death. This interpretation is consistent with the absence of extensive KCs depletion or compensatory monocyte infiltration at these time points. Importantly, previous studies (Ref. 1,2) indicate that KCs are eventually lost as MASLD progresses, supporting the notion that KC death is a gradual process that unfolds over an extended time frame rather than acutely.
(3) The mechanistic link between elevated glycolytic flux and KC death remains unclear.
We thank the reviewer for this constructive suggestion. To more directly evaluate the role of glycolysis in KCs death in vivo, we performed pharmacological inhibition of glycolysis using 2-deoxy-D-glucose (2-DG) (Revised Figure 4E–G). Wild-type mice were fed an HFHC diet for five weeks, and 2-DG (50 mg/kg) or vehicle was administered intraperitoneally every other day beginning at week 3. This short intervention period and modest dosing were chosen to limit potential systemic metabolic effects while modulating glycolytic activity of KCs. KCs apoptosis was assessed by TIM4/TUNEL co-staining. 2-DG treatment significantly reduced the proportion of TUNEL<sup>+</sup>KCs compared with vehicle controls, indicating protection against KCs death. These data, together with our complementary in vitro gain-of-function experiments, support a contributory role for excessive glycolytic activity in promoting KC apoptosis in MASLD. We have incorporated these findings into the revised manuscript to strengthen the causal link between glycolytic reprogramming and KCs loss in vivo (Revised manuscript, page 7, line 267-282).
(4) The study does not address the polarization or ontogeny of KCs during early MASLD. Given that pro-inflammatory macrophages preferentially utilize glycolysis, such data could provide valuable insight into the reason for increased KC death beyond the presented hyperreliance on glycolysis.
We thank the reviewer for this insightful comment. Regarding KCS ontogeny, flow cytometry analysis (Revised Figure 1C) shows that KCs remain uniformly TIM4<sup>hi</sup> during early MASLD, indicating that monocyte-derived KCs (TIM4<sup>low</sup>) have not yet emerged at these stages. To address KCs polarization, we assessed the expression of M1-type (pro-inflammatory) markers (Nos2, Cxcl9, CIITA, Cd86, Ccl3, and Ccl5) and M2-type (anti-inflammatory) markers (Chil3, Retnla, Arg1, and Mrc1) in KCs isolated from WT mice fed a HFHC diet for 0, 8, and 16 weeks. As shown in revised Figure S5A, M1 markers progressively increase over time, whereas M2 markers remain unchanged or slightly decrease. This polarization shift is consistent with the increased glycolytic activity observed in KCs during early MASLD. Together, these data indicate that embryonically derived KCs undergo a pro-inflammatory polarization accompanied by enhanced glycolytic metabolism during early MASLD, providing mechanistic context for their increased susceptibility to metabolic stress–induced cell death beyond hyperreliance on glycolysis alone (Revised manuscript, page 7-8, line 307-321).
(5) The gating strategy for monocyte-derived macrophages (moMFs) appears suboptimal and may include monocytes. A more rigorous characterization of myeloid populations by including additional markers would strengthen the study's conclusions.
We thank the reviewer for raising this important point. To improve the rigor of our analysis, we adopted gating strategies established in previous studies (PMID: 41131393; PMID: 32562600). Specifically, Kupffer cells were defined as CD45<sup>+</sup>CD11b<sup>+</sup>F4/80<sup>hi</sup> TIM4<sup>hi</sup> cells, while monocyte-derived macrophages (MoMFs) were defined as CD45<sup>+</sup>Ly6G<sup>-</sup>CD11b<sup>+</sup>F4/80<sup>low</sup> TIM4<sup>low/−</sup> cells, thereby excluding contaminating neutrophils and minimizing inclusion of circulating monocytes. Using this refined gating strategy, we observed a progressive reduction of KCs accompanied by a corresponding increase in MoMFs in WT mice during HFHC feeding (Revised Figures 1C and S2B–C), (Revised manuscript, page 4, line 154-163).
(6) While BMDMs from Chil1 knockout mice are used to demonstrate enhanced glycolytic flux, it remains unclear whether Chil1 deficiency affects macrophage differentiation itself.
We thank the reviewer for this important question. To determine whether Chi3l1 deficiency affects macrophage differentiation, we analyzed the expression of M1-type (pro-inflammatory) markers (Nos2, Cxcl9, CIITA, Cd86, Ccl3, and Ccl5) and M2-type (anti-inflammatory) markers (Chil3, Retnla, Arg1, and Mrc1) in Kupffer cells isolated from WT and Chil1<sup>-/-</sup> mice fed a HFHC diet for 0, 8, and 16 weeks. At baseline (0 weeks), Chi3l1 deficiency was associated with elevated expression of multiple M1 markers, whereas M2 marker expression was comparable between WT and Chil1<sup>-/-</sup> KCs. During MASLD progression, the pro-inflammatory signature in Chil1<sup>-/-</sup> KCs was further enhanced, while anti-inflammatory marker expression became dysregulated (revised Figure S5C). Together, these data indicate that Chi3l1 deficiency does not impair macrophage differentiation per se but biases KCs toward a partially pro-inflammatory, M1-like phenotype, providing additional context for the enhanced glycolytic flux observed in Chi3l1-deficient macrophages (Revised manuscript, page 7-8, line 307-321).
(7) The authors use the PDK activator PS48 and the ATP synthase inhibitor oligomycin to argue that increased glycolytic flux at the expense of OXPHOS promotes KC death. However, given the high energy demands of KCs and the fact that OXPHOS yields 15-16 times more ATP per glucose molecule than glycolysis, the increased apoptosis observed in Figure 4C-F could primarily reflect energy deprivation rather than a glycolysis-specific mechanism.
We thank the reviewer for highlighting this important point. We agree that KCs are highly metabolically active and that perturbations of OXPHOS can influence overall cellular energy balance. As noted in our response to comment #3, we further performed glycolysis inhibition assay by 2-DG in vivo, the protection of KCs observed following 2-DG in vivo (Revised Figure 4E-G) further provides evidence that increased glycolytic flux is not merely correlated with, but functionally contributes to KCs loss in
MASLD.
(8) In Figure 1C, KC numbers are significantly reduced after 4 and 16 weeks of HFHC diet in WT male mice, yet no comparable reduction is seen in Clec4Cre control mice, which should theoretically exhibit similar behavior under identical conditions.
We thank the reviewer for this comment. During our analysis, we indeed observed no reduction in KCs in the Clec4f cre control mice. This prompted us to consider that Cre insertion itself might influence KCs mainteinence. To investigate this, we performed TIM4/Ki67 co-staining, which revealed significantly higher numbers of proliferating KCs in Clec4f cre mice compared with C57BL/6J mice under NCD. Following HFHC feeding, KCs proliferation in Clec4f cre mice increased even further. These results indicate that Cre insertion enhanced KCs self-renewal in Clec4f cre mice,which contributes to maintenance of the KCs pool during MASLD (Revised Figures S8A and S8B). (Revised manuscript, page 9, line 363-370).
Recommendations for the authors:
Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):
To address the concerns raised in the public review, the authors should:
(1) Reassess their conclusions using the same panels in flow and microscopy, e.g., the combination of CLEC4F, TIM4, and IBA1. This will allow resKCs (CLEC4F+TIM4+IBA1+), moKCs (CLEC4F+TIM4-IBA1+), and moMFs (CLEC4F-TIM4-IBA1+) to be accurately defined and hence their viability and numbers correctly assessed.
We thank the reviewer for this insightful suggestion. In our flow cytometry analysis, we did not detect a CD45<sup>+</sup>CD11b<sup>low</sup>F4/80<sup>hi</sup>TIM4<sup>low</sup> population, indicating that monocyte-derived KCs (moKCs) have not emerged in our model at this stage. To more accurately quantify resident KCs (resKCs) in the current study, we replaced CLEC4F with TIM4 staining and enumerated TIM4<sup>+</sup>as well as TIM4<sup>+</sup>TUNEL<sup>+</sup> cells. These data were highly consistent with CLEC4F<sup>+</sup>TUNEL<sup>+</sup>cell counts, confirming that moKCs are not involved in KCs death during early MASLD (Revised Figure 1A,B,E,F).
(2) Investigate why the number of KCs in controls and MASLD are so distinct between Figures 1 and 6.
We appreciate the reviewer’s suggestions. Like we explained above, Cre insertion promotes KCs self-renewal (Revised manuscript, Figure S8). This enhanced proliferative capacity likely accounts for the relative preservation of KCs numbers in Clec4f-Cre mice during HFHC feeding, explaining the apparent discrepancy with WT mice (Revised manuscript, Figure 6D-E).
(3) Normalise the tunel+ cells based on the number of KCs in PP vs PC regions.
After normalizing KCs death to KCs numbers in periportal (PP) versus pericentral (PC) regions, we found the proportion was significantly higher in PV regions compared to CV regions at 8 weeks of HFHC feeding. We have therefore revised our texts. (Revised manuscript, page 5, lines 194-201).
(4) Demonstrate the viability of KCs in vitro across conditions.
To confirm the identity and health of isolated KCs in our in vitro studies, we show that ~95% of primary isolated KCs are TIM4<sup>+</sup> (Revised Figure S3A). Furthermore, Calcein-AM staining confirmed that the remaining KCs under our experimental conditions are viable and healthy (Revised Figure S4A).
(5) Confirm previous studies demonstrating different degrees of KC loss depending on the model of MASLD.
We thank the reviewer for highlighting this point. Consistent with previous studies, KCs loss has been reported to varying degrees depending on the MASLD model used, reflecting the heterogeneity of hepatic macrophages, marker choice, mouse husbandry, and diet regimen. For example, in a 6-week MCD feeding model, ~10% of CLEC4F<sup>+</sup> KCs were TUNEL<sup>+</sup> (Figure 4A, Ref. 9). Another 6-week MCD study reported a drop from 66% to 26% TIM4<sup>+</sup> KCs (Figure 2A, Ref. 12). In an HFD model, TIM4<sup>+</sup> KCs decreased by ~20% after 16 weeks (Figure 1G, Ref. 1). In a Western diet model, TIM4<sup>+</sup>KCs decreased by >50% at 36 weeks (Figures 1J and 2C, Ref. 2). Together, these studies underscore the model-dependent nature of KCs loss and highlight the importance of experimental context and marker selection when assessing KCs dynamics in MASLD. We have included these studies in our discussion section (Revised manuscript, page 9-10, line 393-402)
(6) Demonstrate in vivo that loss of CHIL1 drives further glycolysis in KCs.
In Figure 6G-H of our previous study, we showed that Chi3l1 deficiency leads to more glucose uptake by KCs in vivo whereas suppelementing KO mice with recombinant Chi3l1 will significantly reduced glucose uptake by KCs through treating mice with a fluorescent glucose analog 2-NBDG. We included the related figure here as Author response image 3.
Author response image 3.
Chi3l1 limits glucose uptake by Kupffer cells in vivo. (A) Measurement of 2-NBDG (a fluorescent glucose analog) uptake by KCs in vivo. WT and Chil1<sup>-/-</sup> mice, either untreated or supplemented with rChi3l1, were injected intraperitoneally with 12 mg/kg 2-NBDG. After 45mins, KCs were isolated and glucose uptake assessed by spectrophotometry. (B) Representative immunofluorescence images of liver sections stained for TIM4 (red) and 2-NBDG uptake (green) to visualize glucose uptake by KCs in situ. Scale bar = 10 µm (zoom). Quantification is shown as the percentage of TIM4<sup>+</sup> cells that are also 2-NBDG<sup>+</sup>. Representative images were shown in B. One-way ANOVA was performed in A, B. P value is as indicated.
(7) There is no mention of the publication of the metabolomics dataset; this should be released with the manuscript.
We included the raw metabolomics dataset as Table S1 and S2 now.
Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):
(1) Methods: Reconsider which methods are described in the main text versus the Supplementary Information to improve readability and consistency.
Thank you for your valuable suggestion. We have reevaluated and adjusted the placement of the methods section between the main text and the supplementary materials.
(2) Line 34: Check for grammar issues.
L34 has been revised as follows : Additionally, using Chi3l1-deficient mice, we further demonstrated that increased glucose utilization accelerates KCs death in vivo.
(3) Lines 101, 110: Explicitly reference the corresponding Supplementary Methods sections.
We have included the references for these two methods sections (Revised supplementary materials and methods, Line 30, 65, respectively).
(4) Figure 2: Iba1 marks all macrophages, not only monocyte-derived macrophages; both figure and text (line 205) require correction.
We have corrected Iba1 represent hepatic macrophages including both KCs and MoMFs (Revised Figure 2C, manuscript page 5, line 182).
(5) Line 218-219: Avoid overinterpretation, as only KCs, hepatocytes, and hepatic stellate cells were assessed - not all hepatic populations.
We appreciate the reviewer’s valuable suggestion and rephrased our description accordingly (Revised manuscript, page 5, line 186-189).
(6) Line 262: Use abbreviations consistently throughout the manuscript.
We have gone through the whole manuscript and double checked the abbreviations.
(7) Line 264: Include the palmitic acid (PA) concentration used.
We included 800 µM PA in the revised manuscript (Revised manuscript, page 6, line 250).”
(8) Lines 316-317: Check for grammar errors.
Grammar errors are checked (Revised manuscript, page 8, line 340-341).
(9) Line 337-338: See comment above on gating strategy.
We updated gating strategy accordingly (Revised manuscript, page 9, line 361-362).
(10) Line 343-344: Note that Chi3l1 is not exclusively expressed by KCs.
We rephrased our words accordingly (Revised manuscript, page 9, line 374-378).
(11) Lines 355-358: The statement that "sustained glycolytic hyperactivation culminates not in sustained activation, but in apoptotic cell death" is unsupported by data or literature, as macrophage polarization was not analyzed in this study.
We removed the statement from the revised manuscript.
(12) Lines 375-379: Rephrase to clarify that while KCs are metabolically active and glucose-demanding, excessive glycolytic flux accelerates apoptosis.
We have rephrased to clarify (Revised Manuscript, page 10, lines 405-407).
(13) Lines 375-385 & 387-397: Consolidate overlapping statements for conciseness and coherence.
We have consolidate the overlapping statements (Revised manuscript, page 10, lines 405-425).
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eLife Assessment
The present manuscript by Cordeiro et al., shows convincing evidence that α-mangostin, a xanthone obtained from the fruit of the Garcinia mangostana tree, behaves as a strong activator of the large-conductance (BK) potassium channels. The authors suggest that α-mangostin activation of the BK channel is state-independent, and molecular docking and mutagenesis suggest that α-mangostin binds to a site in the internal cavity. Additionally, the authors show that α-mangostin can relax arteries, further suggesting the plausibility of the proposed effects of this compound. These are valuable findings that should be of interest to channel biophysicists and physiologists alike.
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
In this manuscript, the authors aimed to identify the molecular target and mechanism by which α-Mangostin, a xanthone from Garcinia mangostana, produces vasorelaxation that could explain the antihypertensive effects. Building on on prior reports of vascular relaxation and ion channel modulation, the authors convincingly show that large-conductance potassium BK channels are the primary site of action. Using electrophysiological, pharmacological, and computational evidence, the authors achieved their aims and showed that BK channels are the critical molecular determinant of mangostin's vasodiltory effects, even though the vascular studies are quite preliminary in nature.
Strengths:
(1) The broad pharmacological profiling of mangostin across potassium channel families, revealing BK channels - and the vascular BK-alpha/beta1 complex - as the potently activated target in a concentration-dependent manner.
(2) Detailed gating analyses showing large negative shifts in voltage-dependence of activation and altered activation and deactivation kinetics.
(3) High-quality single-channel recordings for open probability and dwell times.
(4) Convincing activation in reconstituted BKα/β1-Caᵥ nanodomains mimicking physiological condition and functional proof-of-concept validation in mouse aortic rings.
Weaknesses are minor:
(1) Some mutagenesis data (e.g., partial loss at L312A) could benefit from complementary structural validation.
The author's rebuttal provides alphafold3 models for mutants. While there are interesting preliminary observations, the authors decided not to include these in the main manuscript, awaiting further structual validation. I concur.
(2) While Cav-BK nanodomains were reconstituted, direct measurement of calcium signals after mangostin application onto native smooth muscle could be valuable.
In their response, the authors acknowledge the importance of measuring Ca2+ sparks in smooth muscle cells to further validate their findings. However, this is not provided in the manuscript. Part of my earlier comment alludes to the possibility of α-Mangostin directly affecting Cav1.2 or ryanodine receptor activity, and therefore BK activity would go up. With the current provided evidence, these possibilities cannot be excluded and need to be acknowledged.
(3) The work has impact for ion channel physiology and pharmacology, providing a mechanistic link between a natural product and vasodilation. Datasets include electrophysiology traces, mutagenesis scans, docking analyses, and aortic tension recordings. The latter however are preliminary in nature.
The authors acknowledge that additional vascular physiology experiments would strengthen the argument they make. They are however unable to provide such evidence in the present manuscript. Therefore, I strongly suggest that the authors tune down the physiological implications of α-Mangostin that they include in the manuscript. I'd also suggest that "vasorelaxation" is removed from the manuscript title, given the preliminary nature of the findings.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
In the present manuscript, Cordeiro et al. show that α-mangostin, a xanthone obtained from the fruit of the Garcinia mangostana tree, behaves as an agonist of the BK channels. The authors arrive at this conclusion by examining the effects of mangostin on macroscopic and single-channel currents elicited by BK channels formed by the α subunit and α + β1 subunits, as well as αβ1 channels coexpressed with voltage-dependent Ca2+ (CaV1,2) channels. The single-channel experiments show that α-mangostin produces a robust increase in the probability of opening without affecting the single-channel conductance. The authors contend that α-mangostin activation of the BK channel is state-independent, and molecular docking and mutagenesis suggest that α-mangostin binds to a site in the internal cavity. Importantly, α-mangostin (10 μM) alleviates noradrenaline-induced contracture. Mangostin is ineffective if the contracted muscles are pretreated with the BK toxin iberiotoxin.
In this revised version of the manuscript by Cordeiro et al., the authors have adequately answered my previous concerns. However, as I stated in my comments, without determining the probability of opening across a wide range of voltages, any conclusion about the drug's mechanism of action can be questioned. For example, the statement in Discussion line 481: "The higher shift observed in 1 μM Cai 2+ may reflect the steep Cai2+-dependence of the closed-open equilibrium (Cui, Cox and Aldrich, 1997) and the allosteric coupling of voltage and Cai2+ signals (Horrigan and Aldrich, 2002; Magleby, 2003; Clay, 2017), which are effective in this concentration range, which may lead to a higher apparent activation when voltage activation is facilitated by Cai 2+ (Sun and Horrigan, 2022)." has no support in the data and is not predicted by the allosteric model. In order to have a larger shift induced by the drug in the presence of Ca2+, you need either to alter the Ca2+ binding or the allosteric coupling factor C.<br /> Please note that in the manuscript, there are several problems with the English in this sentence.
Minor
In Figure 1E, BKa should read BKalpha.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Summary:
This research shows that a-mangostin, a proposed nutraceutical, with cardiovascular protecting properties, could act through the activation of large conductance potassium permeable channels (BK). The authors provide convincing electrophysiological evidence that the compound binds to BK channels and induces a potent activation, increasing the magnitude of potassium currents. Since these channels are important modulators of the membrane potential of smooth muscle in vascular tissue, this activation leads to muscle relaxation, possibly explaining cardiovascular protecting effects.
Strengths:
The authors have satisfactorily answered my previous comments and present evidence based on several lines of experiments that a-mangostin is a potent activator of BK channels. The quality of the experiments and the analysis is high and represents an appropriate level of analysis. This research is timely and provides a basis to understand the physiological effects of natural compounds with proposed cardio protective effects.
Weaknesses:
The identification of the binding site continues to be the least developed point of the manuscript. The authors show that the binding site is probably located in the hydrophobic cavity of the pore and show that point mutations reduce the magnitude of the negative voltage shift of activation produces by a-mangostin. This binding site should be demonstrated in the future using structural techniques such as cryo-EM.
Author response:
The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.
Public Reviews:
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
In this manuscript, the authors aimed to identify the molecular target and mechanism by which α-Mangostin, a xanthone from Garcinia mangostana, produces vasorelaxation that could explain the antihypertensive effects. Building on prior reports of vascular relaxation and ion channel modulation, the authors convincingly show that large-conductance potassium BK channels are the primary site of action. Using electrophysiological, pharmacological, and computational evidence, the authors achieved their aims and showed that BK channels are the critical molecular determinant of mangostin's vasodilatory effects, even though the vascular studies are quite preliminary in nature.
Strengths:
(1) The broad pharmacological profiling of mangostin across potassium channel families, revealing BK channels - and the vascular BK-alpha/beta1 complex - as the potently activated target in a concentration-dependent manner.
(2) Detailed gating analyses showing large negative shifts in voltage-dependence of activation and altered activation and deactivation kinetics.
(3) High-quality single-channel recordings for open probability and dwell times.
(4) Convincing activation in reconstituted BKα/β1-Ca<sub>v</sub> nanodomains mimicking physiological conditions and functional proof-of-concept validation in mouse aortic rings.
We thank the reviewer for acknowledging the strength of the different aspects investigated in our study.
Weaknesses are minor:
(1) Some mutagenesis data (e.g., partial loss at L312A) could benefit from complementary structural validation.
In the attempt to improve structural insight for the presented mutagenesis data, we have used Alphafold3 (AF3; Abramson et al., 2024) to generate models of the I308A, L312M and A316P substitutions and repeated the docking for each (Fig. R1). According to these predictive models,
The I308A substitution considerably straightens the S6 helix starting at this residue. Hence, all residues are displaced relative to the WT: C<sub>a</sub> of L312, F315, and A316 are displaced by 2.8 Å, 4.2 Å, and 4.6 Å, respectively, widening the bottom of the binding pocket. However, the prediction confidence is rated lower as in the other AF3 models for all helices (70 > plDDT > 50). In the docking, poses in the binding pocket comparable to these observed in the WT (i.e. involving I308A, L312 and A316) and with the same molecule orientation have higher binding energies (-7.13 to -6.66 kcal mol<sup>-1</sup>). Additionally, poses without contact to I308A arise that have a more vertical position, indicating that the structural change affects the binding region.
The changes induced by L312M are localized to residues 313-323, where S6 bends towards S5. Binding energies are lower especially in the best 2 poses that are also most comparable to the WT docking (-9.88 kcal mol<sup>-1</sup>), but clustering overall is poor and poses are more heterogeneous. Interactions with L312M are completely abolished, while interactions with I308 (in 11/20 poses), F315 (in all poses), and A316 (in 5/20 poses) persist. Because of the rather small structural alteration induced by the substitution and the variable poses one could speculate that the reduced V<sub>½</sub> shift is due to the observed loss in binding to L312M; however, retained interactions to the other residues would still allow α-Mangostin to activate.
A316P induces a displacement of the S6 helix compared to the WT while the other pore helices are not affected. S6 shows an enhanced outward bending around A316, which results in displacements of residues where a-Mangostin would bind, i.e., the C<sub>a</sub> of F315 and L312M are displaced by 2.4 Å and 2.8 Å (I308 is not affected). Residues below are moved in a more rotational way, resulting in a C<sub>a</sub> displacement of 3.1 Å for Y318 and even 5.7 Å for V319, before displacements decrease again towards the intracellular helix end. While interactions with A316P are present in 10/20 analyzed poses, the helix displacement seems to hinder I308 and L312 interactions, as the best docked a-Mangostin pose (-8.41 kcal mol<sup>-1</sup>) is predicted to only contact F315 and Y318, and overall, any I308 or L312 contacts only occurred in 3/20 and 7/20 poses (wildtype: 17/20 and 20/20 poses). This may hint at a mechanism where A316P probably has a substantial allosteric share in reducing the V<sub>½</sub> shift induced by a-Mangostin and underlines the exceptional effect of this mutation (i.e., complete loss of a V<sub>½</sub> shift).
Author response image 1.
Alphafold3 models of BK I308A, L312M, and A316P with α-Mangostin docked to the mutant structures. The upper row shows an overview of the mutant pore helices (AF3 models) used for molecular docking. The lower row shows the binding region with the wildtype structure overlaid in gray. Only 3 helices are shown for clarity.
Although these results provide interesting tentative explanations for the effect of the mutations and conclusions from AF3 models become increasingly robust, we think that definitive statements of their mechanistic contributions would require experimental studies of mutant channels, i.e., cryo-EM or crystallography, that are beyond our means. Therefore, we have decided not to include this data in the manuscript; however, it is accessible for the interested reader within the public review. Hopefully, as cryo-EM structures have been obtained for the wildtype channel, there will be studies on mutations of this gating-relevant S6 segment in the future.
(2) While Cav-BK nanodomains were reconstituted, direct measurement of calcium signals after mangostin application onto native smooth muscle could be valuable.
We are not sure if a global elevation of cellular calcium concentration would be informative. We rather expect that the relevant local Ca<sup>2+</sup> elevation would occur as sparks in the BK-Ca<sub>v</sub> nanodomains, close to the membrane. We would anticipate a change in spark duration, as the Ca<sup>2+</sup> inward current would be stopped faster by the enhanced repolarization via a-Mangostin activated BKα/β1 channels. This would require fast Ca<sup>2+</sup> imaging acquisition speed to capture spark activity. We concur that this would be an informative experiment to investigate a more native situation. However, we would have to accomplish such methodologically challenging measurements in a separate project, which could fruitfully be combined with a more extensive characterization of aortic contraction as also suggested in the following remark (3).
(3) The work has an impact on ion channel physiology and pharmacology, providing a mechanistic link between a natural product and vasodilation. Datasets include electrophysiology traces, mutagenesis scans, docking analyses, and aortic tension recordings. The latter, however, are preliminary in nature.
We completely agree with the reviewer that there is ample room for further studies that could characterize different tissues important in blood pressure regulation (such as resistance arteries), elucidate even more physiological detail (such as modulatory effects of the endothelium), or look deeper into the pharmacology using chemically altered Mangostin derivatives. While we very much like this to happen in future projects, in this study we focused on the functional aspects of a-Mangostin in BK channel gating. We present our tension recordings as a proof-of-concept to underline the activity of a-Mangostin in native tissues, and we clearly show the importance of the BK channel by using iberiotoxin as a specific inhibitor which impressively abolished relaxation.
References:
Abramson, J. et al. (2024) “Accurate structure prediction of biomolecular interactions with AlphaFold 3,” Nature, 630(8016), pp. 493–500. Available at: https://doi.org/10.1038/s41586-024-07487-w.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
In the present manuscript, Cordeiro et al. show that α-mangostin, a xanthone obtained from the fruit of the Garcinia mangostana tree, behaves as an agonist of the BK channels. The authors arrive at this conclusion through the effect of mangostin on macroscopic and single-channel currents elicited by BK channels formed by the α subunit and α + β1 sununits, as well as αβ1 channels coexpressed with voltage-dependent Ca2+ (CaV1,2) channels. The single-channel experiments show that α-mangostin produces a robust increase in the probability of opening without affecting the single-channel conductance. The authors contend that α-mangostin activation of the BK channel is state-independent and molecular docking and mutagenesis suggest that α-mangostin binds to a site in the internal cavity. Importantly, α-mangostin (10 μM) alleviates the contracture promoted by noradrenaline. Mangostin is ineffective if the contracted muscles are pretreated with the BK toxin iberiotoxin.
Strengths:
The set of results combining electrophysiological measurements, mutagenesis, and molecular docking reveals α-mangostin as a potent activator of BK channels and the putative location of the α-mangostin binding site. Moreover, experiments conducted on aortic preparations from mice suggest that α-mangostin can aid in developing drugs to treat a myriad of diverse diseases involving the BK channel.
We thank the reviewer for pointing out the significance of our study.
Weaknesses:
Major:
(1) Although the results indicate that α-mangostin is modifying the closed-open equilibrium, the conclusion that this can be due to a stabilization of the voltage sensor in its active configuration may prove to be wrong. It is more probable that, as has been demonstrated for other activators, the α-mangostin is increasing the equilibrium constant that defines the closed-open reaction (L in the Horrigan, Aldrich allosteric gating model for BK). The paper will gain much if the authors determine the probability of opening in a wide range of voltages, to determine how the drug is affecting (or not), the channel voltage dependence, the coupling between the voltage sensor and the pore, and the closed-open equilibrium (L).
We would like to take the opportunity to clarify this potential misunderstanding. In our manuscript, we have discussed three mechanistic explanations for the Mangostin activation: (1) an electrostatic effect at the selectivity filter, (2) structural and electrostatic changes of S6 that facilitate the opening of a putative lower gate, and (3) hydrophobic gating, i.e., counteracting dewetting of the pore. All possibilities would impact S6 and lower the free energy for pore opening, and we concur that therefore Mangostin most likely affects the closed-open equilibrium (L) of the BKα channel.
The sentence at the original lines 470-471, “(…) caused by an enhanced shift of the closed-open equilibrium toward the open state, such as the stabilization of the voltage sensor in an active conformation” refers to the observation that the presence of the β1 subunit enhances this closed-open shift. The stabilization of the voltage sensor domain was mentioned as one example of how it achieves this. We recognize that this example was an unfortunate choice, as β1 rather facilitates Ca<sup>2+</sup>-dependent allosteric pore opening unrelated to the discussed mechanisms of Mangostin. We have therefore removed this statement.
As to the suggestion to dissect the effect of Mangostin on C, D, and L, we agree with the reviewer that this would surely add to a full biophysical characterization. However, in our project, we strove towards including more experiments showing the physiological implications of Mangostin activation to emphasize the implication for vasodilation. We hope the reviewer understands that, with limited resources, this came at the expense of a full investigation of the different gating components, which could pose a separate project by itself.
(2) Apparently, the molecular docking was performed using the truncated structure of the human BK channel. However, it is unclear which one, since the PDB ID given in the Methods (6vg3), according to what I could find, corresponds to the unliganded, inactive PTK7 kinase domain. Be as it may, the apo and Ca2+ bound structures show that there is a rotation and a displacement of the S6 transmembrane domain. Therefore, the positions of the residues I308, L312, and A316 in the closed and open configurations of the BK channel are not the same. Hence, it is expected that the strength of binding will be different whether the channel is closed or open. This point needs to be discussed.
We apologize for the typing error and thank the reviewer for indicating this erroneous PDB ID. (“6vg3”). It should have read PDB ID 6v3g as in the legend to Fig. 4B. The reviewer appropriately points out that there are differences in the S6 segment addressed in our study between the two available cryo-EM structures obtained in the presence (PDB ID 6v38) and absence of Ca<sup>2+</sup> (PDB ID 6v3g) (Tao and MacKinnon, 2019).
We had actually performed the docking with both structures, but chosen to show the Ca<sup>2+</sup>-free structure to better visualize the I308 position. a-Mangostin is found in the same S6 region in both, not obstructing the K<sup>+</sup> conduction pathway. The binding energies of the favored poses are very similar; the binding energy in the best-ranking conformational cluster in the Ca<sup>2+</sup>-bound structure even was slightly lower (-8.64 kcal mol<sup>-1</sup>) than in the docking with the Ca<sup>2+</sup>-free channel (-8.58 kcal mol<sup>-1</sup>; Fig. 4B), which may not be a relevant difference.
We compared the residue interactions in both dockings (Author response table 1). S317 and Y318, which did not reduce the shift in V<sub>½</sub> upon substitution, were not predicted to contact a-Mangostin in either structure. In both structures, L312 and F315 were predicted to interact in virtually all poses analyzed. In the docking to the Ca<sup>2+</sup>-free state, also I308 was predicted to interact in 17/20 poses, while contacts to A316 occurred in 5/20 poses. In the Ca<sup>2+</sup>-bound state, predicted interactions shifted from I308 (which is expected as it is buried in the protein) to A316, and the isoprenyl moiety close to I308 rotated downwards. This could indicate that a-Mangostin adopts a more horizontal position following the upward reorientation of S6 in the Ca<sup>2+</sup>-bound state when the channel moves from one to the other conformation (Fig. S4).
Author response table 1.
Number of interactions of S6 residues in 20 analyzed α-Mangostin poses in the molecular dockings to the Ca2+-free and Ca2
These docking results are consistent with our functional measurements. Recent structures of the BK/γ1 complex showed that the VSD and Ca<sup>2+</sup>-bowl are stabilized in an active-like conformation that corresponds to the conformation seen in the Ca<sup>2+</sup>-bound state (Kallure et al., 2023; Yamanouchi et al., 2023; Redhardt, Raunser and Raisch, 2024), indicating that very likely the Ca<sup>2+</sup>-bound and Ca<sup>2+</sup>-free structures indeed represent open and closed conformations of the channel. We observed that α-Mangostin can bind to both of these states to activate the channel (Fig. 3C, D), showing the presence of a binding site in both conformations. Further, α-Mangostin induced a left-shift in V<sub>½</sub> also in higher Ca<sup>2+</sup> concentration (Fig. 2D), indicating that it still binds to and activates the channel after the conformational change in S6. As we could not determine affinity for the mutants due to limited solubility, we have no information on the nature of the contribution of the substitutions, i.e., reduced binding or allosteric effect. As I308 is buried in the Ca<sup>2+</sup>-bound state, its contribution is likely mostly allosteric. We have also proposed dewetting as possible activation mechanism, which we expect to be less sensitive to the exact pose of a molecule (as shown for NS11021, Nordquist et al., 2024). Therefore, α-Mangostin could, e.g., change solvent accessibility of the I308 sidechain, energetically favoring the buried (open) state.
We have now included both dockings and Author response table 1 in Fig. S4, and we have added passages to the results section (starting at line 373) and discussion section (starting at lines 544, 588).
Minor:
(1) From Figure 3A, it is apparent that the increase in Po is at the expense of the long periods (seconds) that the channel remains closed. One might suggest that α-mangostin increases the burst periods. It would be beneficial if the authors measured both closed and open dwell times to test whether α-mangostin primarily affects the burst periods.
We thank the reviewer for this valuable suggestion, which we have implemented. In our single channel measurements shown in our original Fig. 3 we have not observed burst behavior of the BKɑ channels. This can be explained by the fact that we measured in resting condition (100 nM free Ca<sub>i</sub></sup>2+</sup>) and with rather mild depolarisation (+40 mV) where Po was very low. We have therefore analyzed measurements in 5 µM free a<sub>i</sub></sup>2+</sup> where we recorded sufficient burst activity also in the basal state.
The burst analysis showed that ɑ-Mangostin indeed prolongs bursts and shortens the interburst closures. Within bursts, both closed times and open times were increased, and we recorded a higher number of opening events per burst. We conclude that ɑ-Mangostin acts in both the closed and the open state, where it slows open-closed transitions resulting in less flicker, and stabilizes the open state via longer open times and a higher probability for closed-open transitions.
We now show this data in Fig. 3D-F and Table S8, and have accordingly added passages to the results section (starting at line 285), the discussion (line 510), and the methods section (starting at line 746).
(2) In several places, the authors make similarities in the mode of action of other BK activators and α-mangostin; however, the work of Gessner et al. PNAS 2012 indicates that NS1619 and Cym04 interact with the S6/RCK linker, and Webb et al. demonstrated that GoSlo-SR-5-6 agonist activity is abolished when residues in the S4/S5 linker and in the S6C region are mutated. These findings indicate that binding of the agonist is not near the selectivity filter, as the authors' results suggest that α-mangostin binds.
We will gladly clarify our ideas concerning the binding sites of other activators and ɑ-Mangostin. We first hypothesized that ɑ-Mangostin may share characteristics and mode of action with the class of negatively charged activators (NCA) that we have described before (Schewe et al., 2019). NCA were found to occupy a common fenestration site that is located close to the selectivity filter in TREK K2P channels, and in this manuscript we have shown by THexA competition and mutagenesis experiments that ɑ-Mangostin also binds in this fenestration region in TREK-1 channels (Fig. S3).
The existence of this common NCA binding site was also proposed for BK channels, as a docking placed the NCA NS11021 in an equivalent binding region, and, among others, NS11021 and GoSlo-SR-5-6 competed with THexA for binding in the pore (Schewe et al., 2019). These results were indeed not fully in agreement with the proposed binding site of GoSlo-SR-5-6 in Webb et al. (2015), although the most effective (double) mutants were located at S317 and I323, at the intracellular end of the cleft between neighboring S6 segments. In this manuscript, we have shown that α-Mangostin is present in the pore of BK channels by molecular docking, a THexA competition assay, and two mutations that reduced the shift in V<sub>½</sub> induced not only by ɑ-Mangostin but also by GoSlo-SR-5-6 (Fig. 4). While the docking was rather a starting point, both functional tests argue against a binding site in the S4/5 linker/S6C region; however, allosteric mechanisms could still reduce activation also in mutants in the S4/5 linker/S6C region far from the pore binding region proposed by us in the 2019 study and the present manuscript.
To summarize, we did not mean to imply that all BK activators should bind to this site, especially if they are not part of the NCA class (as NS1619, Cym4, as well as BC5, whose different binding site enabled us to use it as a control in our THexA competition assay). However, the cleft close to gating relevant S6 residues may well pose a region especially susceptible to modulator binding (as BL-1249, GoSlo-SR-5-6, and ɑ-Mangostin). We have moved, respectively separated, the initial GoSlo references from the reference to the pore binding site in the paragraph (lines329, 358) to improve clarity.
(3) The sentence starting in line 452 states that there is a pronounced allosteric coupling between the voltage sensors and Ca2+ binding. If the authors are referring to the coupling factor E in the Horrigan-Aldrich gating model, the references cited, in particular, Sun and Horrigan, concluded that the coupling between those sensors is weak.
We are grateful for the opportunity to improve this passage. We intended to express that observed effects (in this case the shift in V<sub>½</sub>) are pronounced around 1 µM Ca<sup>2+</sup>. As the reviewer states, the coupling factor between the voltage and calcium sensors (E; 2.4) is weak compared to the coupling of Ca<sup>2+</sup> (C; 8) and voltage (D; 25) to the pore in the Horrigan-Aldrich model. However, the shape of the Ca<sup>2+</sup>-dependence of V<sub>½</sub> cannot be completely described when E is neglected, with the highest difference around 1-2 µM Ca<sup>2+</sup> (Horrigan and Aldrich, 2002). Deletion of the gating ring underlines the allosteric sensor coupling (Clay, 2017). This together with the steep Ca<sup>2+</sup>-dependence in this concentration range (meaning high Po changes upon occupancy increase; Cui, Cox and Aldrich, 1997) explains the higher apparent activation, visible as the higher shift in V<sub>½</sub> observed at the 1 µM Ca<sup>2+</sup>. Speaking with the model of Sun and Horrigan (2022), the suppressing “molecular logic gate” is already relieved by the presence of intermediate Ca<sup>2+</sup>, and the direct “gating lever” pathway via voltage acts synergistically and achieves the observed higher V<sub>½</sub> shift upon depolarization. We have adapted the sentence and separated the citations for better understanding (lines 503-507).
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Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Summary:
This research shows that a-mangostin, a proposed nutraceutical, with cardiovascular protective properties, could act through the activation of large conductance potassium permeable channels (BK). The authors provide convincing electrophysiological evidence that the compound binds to BK channels and induces a potent activation, increasing the magnitude of potassium currents. Since these channels are important modulators of the membrane potential of smooth muscle in vascular tissue, this activation leads to muscle relaxation, possibly explaining cardiovascular protective effects.
Strengths:
The authors present evidence based on several lines of experiments that a-mangostin is a potent activator of BK channels. The quality of the experiments and the analysis is high and represents an appropriate level of analysis. This research is timely and provides a basis to understand the physiological effects of natural compounds with proposed cardio-protective effects.
We sincerely thank the reviewer for appraising the achievements of our study.
Weaknesses:
The identification of the binding site is not the strongest point of the manuscript. The authors show that the binding site is probably located in the hydrophobic cavity of the pore and show that point mutations reduce the magnitude of the negative voltage shift of activation produced by a-mangostin. However, these experiments do not demonstrate binding to these sites, and could be explained by allosteric effects on gating induced by the mutations themselves.
We are aware that our functional data are unfortunately not sufficient to clearly distinguish between effects due to affinity loss or due to allosteric mechanisms. Our attempts to generate complete dose–response curves for the mutants to determine accurate apparent IC<sub>50</sub> values were unfortunately limited by the solubility of the compound. Consequently, we have avoided making claims about affinity loss in the mutant analysis, and have instead only reported the reduction in potency, expressed as the shift in V<sub>½</sub>. To reduce confounding effects from the mutations themselves, we selected substitutions that preserved the most wildtype-like GV-relationships, based on the extensive mutagenesis work of (Chen, Yan and Aldrich, 2014). We address this matter also in our answer to Recommendation (6) below, and we have replaced the word “binding” in the title of the manuscript. Nevertheless, we consider the proposed binding region to be well supported by the THexA competition experiments in combination with molecular docking, even though the specific mechanistic contributions of individual residues cannot yet be resolved.
Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):
(1) Natural xanthones as α-Mangostin induce vasorelaxation via binding to key gating residues in the S6 domain of BK channels.
(2) If α-Mangostin occupies a similar binding site to quaternary ammoniums, what is the explanation for not observing a reduction in the single-channel current (fast blocking effect)? The α-Mangostin site proposed here is in a region of the channel that should occlude ion permeation. The authors should discuss possible explanations for this apparently contradictory observation.
As the reviewer states, we indeed have not observed a reduced single channel amplitude in any measurement. The THexA competition assay showed that ɑ-Mangostin is present in the pore cavity and interferes with THexA access to its binding site. However, we do not think that their binding sites are similar, as QA ions bind directly below the filter entrance to block permeation, while our studies suggest that ɑ-Mangostin binds in the upper portion of the cleft between S6 helices. In this position, it would clearly overlap with the QA binding site and hinder access, but not block permeation. We would therefore not expect to see an amplitude reduction by intermittent α-Mangostin block. Consistently, all binding poses in our dockings were close to the cavity wall, without interfering with the central ion conduction pathway. To better illustrate this, we have added updated intracellular views of the dockings in the Ca<sup>2+</sup>-free and Ca<sup>2+</sup>-bound state (which we have also now included as suggested by another reviewer) to the supplementary information (Fig. S4A).
(3) In Figure 2D, it is difficult to appreciate the differences between the symbols representing the G-V relationships of BKa channels at different intracellular Ca concentrations, before and after activation with 10 μM a-Mangostin. A clearer distinction between the curves would help to interpret the data more easily.
We thank the reviewer for the suggestion to improve figure accessibility. We have changed the line appearance for better discrimination of the overlying portions.
(4) Both THexA and TPA block BK channels through voltage and state-dependent mechanisms. Therefore, their apparent affinity could change if a-Mangostin simply increases open probability or alters dwell times rather than physically blocking access to the binding site.
The reviewer addresses valid limitations that can affect the meaningfulness of competition experiments under certain conditions. However, we think that this does not apply to our results:
Previous studies have shown that the voltage dependence of quaternary ammonium blockers up to C<sub>10</sub> is rather weak in BK channels, and only a slight increase in block is present in the voltage range +30 mV to +100 mV (Li and Aldrich, 2004; Thompson and Begenisich, 2012). Hence, THexA voltage dependence has already reached a plateau in the competition assay (at +40 mV), and its voltage dependence would have little effect on our results.
Controversy exists about the nature of the state dependence of different quaternary ammonium blockers, but TBA is often recognized as an open channel blocker of BK channels, which probably also applies to THexA (Wilkens and Aldrich, 2006; Tang, Zeng and Lingle, 2009; Thompson and Begenisich, 2012; Posson, McCoy and Nimigean, 2013). Assuming such an open-channel block, apparent IC<sub>50</sub> values would be inversely proportional to Po. The THexA IC<sub>50</sub> was about 80 nM in the basal state, when Po is very low (0.024 at +40 mV as derived from the GV-relationship); an increase of open dwell times, respectively Po, in the presence of α-Mangostin to, e.g., 0.3 would therefore lead to a ≈10-fold decrease in apparent IC<sub>50</sub>. However, the apparent THexA IC<sub>50</sub> strongly increased rather than decreased (more than 20-fold to around 1.6 µM). This cannot arise from Po change and must reflect the altered access of THexA to its binding site caused by α-Mangostin. Assuming a pure closed channel block where apparent IC<sub>50</sub> would correlate with the closed times, an increase of about 1.4-fold is expected. However, we recorded a much stronger 20-fold increase. Therefore, we are convinced that we have conclusively shown that α-Mangostin is present in the BK pore irrespective of the state dependence of THexA block.
(5) The pH dependence of the V1/2 shift supports the idea that α-Mangostin becomes more negatively charged at higher pH (enhancing its effect.) However, although the data are consistent with this interpretation, additional controls such as using a non-ionizable analog or assessing solubility changes with pH would be needed to confirm that the shift is caused specifically by ionization of α-Mangostin and not by indirect pH effects on channel gating.
We agree with the reviewer that the pH experiment by itself is not sufficient to clearly tie the existence of a charge to a possible activation mechanism. We still think that this is an interesting observation and should be made known, as we have investigated the mechanism of negatively charged activators in different K<sup>+</sup> channel families before (Schewe et al., 2019). Unfortunately, we do not have access to uncharged derivatives mimicking the 3D conformation. From the commercially available substances, the bare xanthone backbone is completely insoluble in water. We have therefore tested the derivative 3-hydroxyxanthone as example with a minimal number of hydroxyl substituents (Author response image 2, Author response table 2 ). The 3-hydroxyxanthone indeed shows reduced activation compared to α-Mangostin. The shift in V<sub>½</sub> induced by 10 µM 3-hydroxyxanthone was only 14.99 ± 5.67 mV (≈50 mV for α-Mangostin). This supports that the presence of several (potentially) charged substituents is important for the activation mechanism. However, we have no knowledge about the efficacy of the compound or the local pK<sub>a</sub> of the different hydroxyl groups. As the reviewer stated, systematic chemical modifications would be necessary to elucidate the importance of the charged substituent number and positions, which is not within our capabilities.
Author response image 2.
Activation of BKα by 3-hydroxyxanthone. (A) GV-relationship before and after application of 10 µM 3-hydroxyxanthone. (B) V<sub>½</sub> before and after application of 10 µM 3-hydroxyxanthone compared to α-Mangostin and the resulting difference in V<sub>½</sub> (ΔV<sub>½</sub>). Measurements were conducted as described in the main manuscript with 100 nM free Ca<sub>i</sub><sup>2+</sup>.
Author response table 2.
Comparison of the V<sub>½</sub> ± SEM and ΔV<sub>½</sub> ± SEM before and after activation by 10 µM α-Mangostin or 10 µM 3-hydroxyxanthone in BKα channels. Unpaired t-test, two-tailed P values (α=0.05)
(6) The reduced V1/2 shifts observed in the I308A, L312M, and A316PP mutants may result from intrinsic gating alterations rather than a true loss of a-Mangostin binding. The GoSlo-SR-5-6 control is informative, but the persistence of activation in A316P does not fully resolve this. A more convincing test would be employing double or triple mutants.
As stated above, we acknowledge that our functional data do not allow us to definitively separate effects arising from a true loss of binding affinity from those due to potential allosteric effects. We tried to minimize intrinsic gating alteration brought by substitutions by not conducting a pure alanine or cysteine scanning mutagenesis. Instead, substitutions were chosen to be closest to the wildtype GV-relationship in (Chen, Yan and Aldrich, 2014) where possible. While L312M was virtually identical to the wildtype, A316P showed a change in slope in high Ca<sup>2+</sup> concentrations, which could indicate a changed voltage sensitivity. Additionally, A316P completely abolished α-mangostin activation. We therefore also used A316G to ensure that the channel is functional and retains voltage sensitivity, even if its V<sub>½</sub> was shifted stronger. As we have conducted paired measurements and assessed the V<sub>½</sub> before and after activation, we are confident that we can attribute a reduced shift to the reduced action of α-mangostin.
Following the reviewer’s suggestion, we have generated and measured the double mutants I308A/L312M, I308A/A316G, and L312M/A316G (the triple mutant I308A/L312M/A316G did not produce measurable currents). The mutants I308A/L312M and I308A/A316G showed a moderate energy-additive effect and reduced the shift in V<sub>½</sub> by further ≈7 mV compared to the single mutation with the stronger shift. The combination L312M/A316G, however, did not further reduce the shift seen in the single mutations and did not even produce the shift induced by A316G alone.
Author response image 3.
Double Mutants I308A/L312M, I308A/A316G and L312M/A316G compared to the single mutations in the main manuscript. The V½ before and after activation with 10 µM α-Mangostin, the resulting shift in V½, and the GV-relationships are shown (n=6-7), measurements were made as in Fig. 4.
Author response table 3.
Summary of the V<sub>½</sub> before and after Mangostin activation and the resulting shifts in V<sub>½</sub> for the double mutants compared to the single mutants shown in the main manuscript.
Following a suggestion by another reviewer, we have generated Alphafold3 (AF3) models for I308A, L312M and A316P and repeated the Mangostin docking. We learned that the mutations are all predicted to substantially impact the structure of the S6 helix, therefore altering the binding region, and A316P especially impacted the nature of residue interactions. This could be an explanation why the double mutants do not show a clear and consistent additive effect.
Unfortunately, this outcome is not conclusive and the double mutants do not reveal further information compared to the single mutants. We have therefore decided not to include these measurements in the manuscript.
As we do not know if our answers will be sent to all reviewers, we repeat the relevant part about the AF3 models here:
(…) According to these predictive models,
The I308A substitution considerably straightens the S6 helix starting at this residue. Hence, all residues are displaced relative to the WT: C<sub>a</sub> of L312, F315, and A316 are displaced by 2.8 Å, 4.2 Å, and 4.6 Å, respectively, widening the bottom of the binding pocket. However, the prediction confidence is rated lower as in the other AF3 models for all helices (70 > plDDT > 50). In the docking, poses in the binding pocket comparable to these observed in the WT (i.e. involving I308A, L312 and A316) and with the same molecule orientation have higher binding energies (-7.13 to -6.66 kcal mol<sup>-1</sup>). Additionally, poses without contact to I308A arise that have a more vertical position, indicating that the structural change affects the binding region.
The changes induced by L312M are localized to residues 313-323, where S6 bends towards S5. Binding energies are lower especially in the best 2 poses that are also most comparable to the WT docking (-9.88 kcal mol<sup>-1</sup>), but clustering overall is poor and poses are more heterogeneous. Interactions with L312M are completely abolished, while interactions with I308 (in 11/20 poses), F315 (in all poses), and A316 (in 5/20 poses) persist. Because of the rather small structural alteration induced by the substitution and the variable poses one could speculate that the reduced V<sub>½</sub> shift is due to the observed loss in binding to L312M; however, retained interactions to the other residues would still allow α-Mangostin to activate.
A316P induces a displacement of the S6 helix compared to the WT while the other pore helices are not affected. S6 shows an enhanced outward bending around A316, which results in displacements of residues where a-Mangostin would bind, i.e., the C<sub>a</sub> of F315 and L312M are displaced by 2.4 Å and 2.8 Å (I308 is not affected). Residues below are moved in a more rotational way, resulting in a C<sub>a</sub> displacement of 3.1 Å for Y318 and even 5.7 Å for V319, before displacements decrease again towards the intracellular helix end. While interactions with A316P are present in 10/20 analyzed poses, the helix displacement seems to hinder I308 and L312 interactions, as the best docked a-Mangostin pose (-8.41 kcal mol<sup>-1</sup>) is predicted to only contact F315 and Y318, and overall, any I308 or L312 contacts only occurred in 3/20 and 7/20 poses (wildtype: 17/20 and 20/20 poses). This may hint at a mechanism where A316P probably has a substantial allosteric share in reducing the V<sub>½</sub> shift induced by a-Mangostin and underlines the exceptional effect of this mutation (i.e., complete loss of a V<sub>½</sub> shift). (…)
(7) The subtraction approach used to isolate BK currents (difference before and after a-Mangostin) assumes that the compound affects only BK channels. However, a-Mangostin could also modulate Cav currents directly, as reported for other polyphenolic compounds. No vehicle (DMSO) control is shown.
We agree with the reviewer that α-Mangostin could also modulate Ca<sub>v</sub> currents; however, this would not interfere with the conclusions drawn from this nanodomain experiment. We intended to show the overall current modulation by ɑ-Mangostin in the voltage range relevant for Ca<sub>v</sub>-BK coupling, as this would be the determinant for the membrane potential mediating the vasoactive effect. In native tissue, BK and Ca<sub>v</sub> channels (among others) would likewise contribute to the net membrane conductance, with BK channels being a major contributor when activated. In fact, a concomitant inhibition of Ca<sub>v</sub> channels could act synergistically in favor of vasodilation. This could therefore be a subject for the further investigation of potential ɑ-Mangostin targets. However, the fact that iberiotoxin prevented relaxation in aortic preparations conclusively showed that BK channels are the major player in native tissue.
We have reformulated some sentences to prevent misunderstandings that we refer to isolated BK currents instead of α-Mangostin activated currents.
DMSO controls were conducted and did not impact BK or Ca<sub>v</sub>1.2 currents or the aortic tissue contraction. We have added representative measurements as Fig. S6 and stated the DMSO concentration in the Methods section (line 655).
(8) Most kinetic fits were obtained at strong depolarizations (around +100 mV), which limits how well these results can be extrapolated to physiological voltages. Although the BK-Cav experiments show facilitation between -50 and +50 mV, providing plots for activation and deactivation in that range would strengthen the physiological relevance.
We thank the reviewer for this valuable suggestion. We now additionally show that the impact of ɑ-Mangostin on activation is high at lower depolarisation, indeed underlining its physiological relevance. To address the activation time course in a more physiological voltage range, we have used our measurements of BKɑ channels in 10 µM Ca<sub>i</sub></sup>2+</sup> (where the V<sub>½</sub> shift induced by ɑ-Mangostin is equal to 100 nM ca<sub>i</sub><sup>2+</sup>+; Fig. 2D). The outward currents already present in the lower voltage range under these conditions allowed us to fit a monoexponential function to the traces of 0 mV to 100 mV prepulses. The τ of activation decreased from 29.6 ± 3.1 ms at 0 mV to 2.4 ± 2 ms at +100 mV. After ɑ-Mangostin activation, the time course was accelerated, with a τ of activation of 9.5 ± 4.7 ms at 0 mV to 2 ± 0.6 ms at +100 mV. This faster activation was particularly effective in the lower voltage range far from high Po, e.g., ɑ-Mangostin caused a decrease of more than half of the τ of activation at +20 mV (from 12.2 ± 0.6 ms to 4.98 ± 1.6 ms).
Our data consists of families of different prepulse voltages and a fixed repolarisation step (to -50 mV for 100 nM free Ca<sub>i</sub><sup>2+</sup>, and to -100 mV for 10 µM free Ca<sub>i</sub><sup>2+</sup>). Thus, we are not able to add plots for the voltage-dependence of deactivation in the same way as for activation. However, we can present the deactivation time constants of lower prepulse voltage steps that produce outward currents in symmetrical ion conditions with 10 µM free Ca<sub>i</sub></sup>2+</sup>. For -20 mV and +20 mV prepulse voltages, which better reflect physiological depolarisation, the deactivation time constant shows a 3-to 5-fold increase after ɑ-Mangostin activation.
We now show the plot for the voltage dependence of activation in Fig. S2A and a bar graph for activation/ deactivation time constants at +20 mV as Fig. S2B; data are summarized in Table S5. We hope this adds to illustrating the effect of ɑ-Mangostin under physiological conditions.
(9) Minor: In several parts of the paper, induced shifts to negative voltages are referred to "leftward shifts". It would be useful to be consistent and employ a more specific reference to negative or positive directions.
We thank the reviewer for the careful reading and have harmonized the terminology.
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The difference between analysis automation—inference—anddecision automation is that in the latter the system must make implicit or explicit assump-tions about costs and values inherent in all decisions.
Examples of decisionautomation include route planning and adaptation, such as to avoid bad weather, and systems pro-viding medical diagnosis support.
Decision automation means deciding and selecting appropriate actions among alternatives.This type of automation corresponds to the third human information processing state, decision-making, which the machine is either augmenting or replacing altogether.
An example of low-level automation is the extrapolation or prediction of data over time,such as a system predicting a trend for the output of an industrial plant based on historical sensordata. An example of moderate- to high-level automation is a system integrating multiple sources orinput variables. This could be a display with emergent perceptual features, such as an optical see-through display with a landing strip intended to assist a pilot in landing an aircraft. An exampleof high-level automation is a context-dependent summary of data.
Analysis automation refers to the automation of information analysis and involves inferentialprocesses. It corresponds to the second human information processing state: perception/workingmemory.
An example of low-level automation is assistance in sensor adjustment, such as a system mechanically moving a radarsensor to lock on a detected target. An example of moderate automation is a system organizinginformation according to criteria such as a priority list or highlighting information based on staticor dynamic criteria. This could be, for example, a display highlighting the rate of change in somevariable of interest. This could be indicated by increasing the intensity of some pixels more rapidlythan others in the display.
Acquisition automation corresponds to the first human information processing stage, sensoryprocessing, and it is realized by the system sensing and registering input data.
Types of automation: The types of automation can be understood by viewing a human operatoras a simple four-stage model of human information processing:1. Sensory processing2. Perception and working memory3. Decision-making4. Response selection.
The framework uses two sets of evaluation criteria to help designers determine the appropri-ate type and level of automation for each application. The primary evaluation criteria concernthe impact of the chosen types and levels of automation on human performance. The secondaryevaluation criteria include automation reliability and the cost of decisions or outcomes.
For thisreason, designers can benefit from frameworks that support system design that involves automa-tion. We now discuss one such framework: the types and levels of automation framework [639].Downloaded from https://academic.oup.com/book/60808 by Helsinki University Library user on 01 December 2025
All three strategies have a common deficiency in that they may not always be able to adhereto the principle of human-centered automation, whereby a human has final control. This is alsocalled the authority problem.
The third allocation strategy is to allocate each function in a way that maximizes economicefficiency.
The second allocation strategy is assigning each function to the most capable agent, which canbe either a human or a machine.
Therefore, this automation strategy definesthe roles and responsibilities of users in terms of automation instead of the other way around.
First, byautomating everything that can be automated, the user is left with functions that, by definition, thedesigners find hard, expensive, or difficult to automate.
The first strategy is called maximum automation. Here, each task that can be automated is allo-cated to a machine.
The aim is to increase efficiency, reduce costs, or both.
Which system functions should beautomated, and to what extent should they be automated?
Task allocation is a central challenge in HCI and automation.
Four levels of shared control can be distinguished [1]: strategic (e.g.,setting a destination), tactical (e.g., doing a specific maneuver like merging into a lane), oper-ational (e.g., maintaining a certain distance from another car), and execution (lowest-level ofcontrolling locomotion, steering, and so on).
Control does not need to be either/or like in many semi-autonomous vehicles.
When two agents sharing control have asymmetric capa-bilities, both loose and tight rein control should be available.
First, control can be shared via an extensionthat allows a machine to amplify human ability.
When riding a horse, the rider communicates high-level information (e.g., the goal) to thehorse but must be ready to guide the horse at a lower level. When the horse knows what to do,for example, if the route is familiar, the rider may not need to engage in low-level control. Thisform of control, called loose rein control, is possible if the horse knows what the rider wants.
It has been defined as “a device or system that accomplishes (partially or fully) a function that waspreviously, or conceivably could be, carried out (partially or fully) by a human operator” [638].
First, communication is vital for sharingcontrol, and this can happen at different levels; second, both agents must have internal modelsof each other to understand what those communicative acts mean.
The H-metaphor is a metaphor for understanding shared control [246]. Here, the “H” standsfor “horse”: the horse metaphor. In short, it means that shared control is like riding a horse.
Shared control is about carrying out a task together with a competent partner [1, p. 511]:“In shared control, human(s) and robot(s) are interacting congruently in a perception–actioncycle to perform a dynamic task that either the human or the robot could execute individuallyunder ideal circumstances.”
The question of shared control is timely; semi-autonomous vehicles are only partiallyautonomous. They need the human to assist them and, therefore, some way of handing controlover to the human driver. They also need to have guidance from the driver, for example, onthe choice of route.
Independently of the chosen strategy, some tasks are to be done by the interactive system andsome by the user. The allocation of such tasks is called functional allocation.
An example of such control sharing is powersteering in a car: The car provides additional work to allow the driver to turn the wheels withless effort. An HCI example is mouse acceleration, which allows a user to move the cursor on thescreen farther than the physical movement of the mouse.
Second, control can be shared via relief, which means that the overall burden on the humanis reduced by the machine. An example is automatic shift transmission, which relieves the driverof the task of changing gears in a car. An HCI example is text entry using autocomplete, whichprevents the user from correcting typing mistakes as they type.
Third, control can be shared via partitioning. In this case, a task is decomposed into parts thatcan be addressed by humans and machines separately. An example of such control sharing is semi-automatic parallel parking, which provides the driver with some braking ability while the machinecontrols the speed and steering of the car. An HCI example is automatic spell checking, where thesystem detects and highlights incorrectly spelled words but does not change them. Instead, theuser has to take an explicit corrective action, such as selecting a misspelled word and choosing analternative.
In a task-switching situation,the user must activate resources for the second task and inhibit resources for the first task. If theuser fails to do so efficiently, performance is reduced, sometimes dramatically.
Successful time-sharing depends on the strategy and difficulty of the task in terms of tempo-ral constraints—how many tasks are processed in a given interval—and task complexity—thequantity of information that needs to be processed for a given task.
The first is called thesingle channel theory, which posits that there is limited capacity in the human information pro-cessing system in a time-sharing scenario. When the channel capacity is exceeded, multiple taskstransition from parallel processing to serial processing.
If both tasks demandcontrolled processing, then the strategy in processing is split into two mechanisms: facilitationand inhibition.
The implementation of such a strategy requires attentional resources, which canlead to task interference when the demand exceeds the available capacity.
eLife Assessment
This study resolves a cryo-EM structure of the GPCR, human GPR30, which responds to bicarbonate and regulates cellular responses to pH and ion homeostasis. Understanding the ligand and the mechanism of activation is important to the field of receptor signaling and potentially facilitates drug development targeting this receptor. Structures and functional assays provide solid evidence for a potential bicarbonate binding site.
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
[Editors' note: this version has been assessed by the Reviewing Editor without further input from the original reviewers.]
Summary:
This study resolves a cryo-EM structure of the GPCR, GPR30, in the presence of bicarbonate, which the author's lab recently identified as the physiological ligand. Understanding the ligand and the mechanism of activation is of fundamental importance to the field of receptor signaling. This solid study provides important insight into the overall structure and suggests a possible bicarbonate binding site.
Strengths:
The overall structure, and proposed mechanism of G-protein coupling are solid. Based on the structure, the authors identify a binding pocket that might accommodate bicarbonate. Although assignment of the binding pocket is speculative, extensive mutagenesis of residues in this pocket identifies several that are important to G-protein signaling. The structure shows some conformational differences with a previous structure of this protein determined in the absence of bicarbonate (PMC11217264). To my knowledge, bicarbonate is the only physiological ligand that has been identified for GPR30, making this study an important contribution to the field. However, the current study provides novel and important circumstantial evidence for the bicarbonate binding site based on mutagenesis and functional assays.
Weaknesses:
Bicarbonate is a challenging ligand for structural and biochemical studies, and because of experimental limitations, this study does not elucidate the exact binding site. Higher resolution structures would be required for structural identification of bicarbonate. The functional assay monitors activation of GPR30, and thus reports on not only bicarbonate binding, but also the integrity of the allosteric network that transduces the binding signal across the membrane. However, biochemical binding assays are challenging because the binding constant is weak, in the mM range.
The authors appropriately acknowledge the limitations of these experimental approaches, and they build a solid circumstantial case for the bicarbonate binding pocket based on extensive mutagenesis and functional analysis. However, the study does fall short of establishing the bicarbonate binding site.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
In this manuscript, "Cryo-EM structure of the bicarbonate receptor GPR30," the authors aimed to enrich our understanding of the role of GPR30 in pH homeostasis by combining structural analysis with a receptor function assay. This work is a natural development and extension of their previous work on Nature Communications (PMID: 38413581). In the current body of work, they solved the cryo-EM structure of the human GPR30-G-protein (mini-Gsqi) complex in the presence of bicarbonate ions at 3.15 Å resolution. From the atomic model built based on this map, they observed the overall canonical architecture of class A GPCR and also identified 3 extracellular pockets created by ECLs (Pockets A-C). Based on the polarity, location, size, and charge of each pocket, the authors hypothesized that pocket A is a good candidate for the bicarbonate binding site. To identify the bicarbonate binding site, the authors performed an exhaustive mutant analysis of the hydrophilic residues in Pocket A and analyzed receptor reactivity via calcium assay. In addition, the human GPR30-G-protein complex model also enabled the authors to elucidate the G-protein coupling mechanism of this special class A GPCR, which plays a crucial role in pH homeostasis.
Strengths:
As a continuation of their recent Nature Communications publication, the authors used cryo-EM coupled with mutagenesis and functional studies to elucidate bicarbonate-GPR30 interaction. This work provided atomic-resolution structural observations for the receptor in complex with G-protein, allowing us to explore its mechanism of action, and will further facilitate drug development targeting GPR30. There were 3 extracellular pockets created by ECLs (Pockets A-C). The authors were able to filter out 2 of them and hypothesized that pocket A was a good candidate for the bicarbonate binding site based on the polarity, location, and charge of each pocket. From there, the authors identified the key residues on GPR30 for its interaction with the substrate, bicarbonate. Together with their previous work, they mapped out amino acids that are critical for receptor reactivity.
Weaknesses:
When we see a reduction of a GPCR-mediated downstream signaling, several factors could potentially contribute to this observation: 1) a reduced total expression of this receptor due to the mutation (transcription and translation issue); 2) a reduced surface expression of this receptor due to the mutation (trafficking issue); and 3) a dysfunctional receptor that doesn't signal due to the mutation.
Altogether, the wide range of surface expression across the different cell lines, combined with the different receptor function readouts, makes the cell functional data only partially support their structural observations.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Summary
GPR30 responds to bicarbonate and plays a role in regulating cellular pH and ion homeostasis. However, the molecular basis of bicarbonate recognition by GPR30 remains unresolved. This study reports the cryo-EM structure of GPR30 bound to a chimeric mini-Gq in the presence of bicarbonate, revealing mechanistic insights into its G-protein coupling. Nonetheless, the study does not identify the bicarbonate-binding site within GPR30.
Strengths
The work provides strong structural evidence clarifying how GPR30 engages and couples with Gq.
Weaknesses
Several GPR30 mutants exhibited diminished responses to bicarbonate, but their expression levels were also reduced. As a result, the mechanism by which GPR30 recognizes bicarbonate remains uncertain.
Author Response:
The following is the authors’ response to the previous reviews
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
This study resolves a cryo-EM structure of the GPCR, GPR30, in the presence of bicarbonate, which the author's lab recently identified as the physiological ligand. Understanding the ligand and the mechanism of activation is of fundamental importance to the field of receptor signaling. This solid study provides important insight into the overall structure and suggests a possible bicarbonate binding site.
Strengths:
The overall structure, and proposed mechanism of G-protein coupling are solid. Based on the structure, the authors identify a binding pocket that might accommodate bicarbonate. Although assignment of the binding pocket is speculative, extensive mutagenesis of residues in this pocket identifies several that are important to G-protein signaling. The structure shows some conformational differences with a previous structure of this protein determined in the absence of bicarbonate (PMC11217264). To my knowledge, bicarbonate is the only physiological ligand that has been identified for GPR30, making this study an important contribution to the field. However, the current study provides novel and important circumstantial evidence for the bicarbonate binding site based on mutagenesis and functional assays.
Weaknesses:
Bicarbonate is a challenging ligand for structural and biochemical studies, and because of experimental limitations, this study does not elucidate the exact binding site. Higher resolution structures would be required for structural identification of bicarbonate. The functional assay monitors activation of GPR30, and thus reports on not only bicarbonate binding, but also the integrity of the allosteric network that transduces the binding signal across the membrane. However, biochemical binding assays are challenging because the binding constant is weak, in the mM range.
The authors appropriately acknowledge the limitations of these experimental approaches, and they build a solid circumstantial case for the bicarbonate binding pocket based on extensive mutagenesis and functional analysis. However, the study does fall short of establishing the bicarbonate binding site.
We thank the reviewer for this thoughtful and constructive assessment of our revised manuscript. We are grateful for the recognition of the overall quality of the cryo-EM structure and the proposed mechanism of G-protein coupling, as well as for highlighting the importance of identifying bicarbonate as a physiological ligand for GPR30 and the contribution this work makes to the receptor signaling field. We also appreciate the reviewer’s careful and balanced discussion of the inherent challenges posed by bicarbonate as a low-affinity, small, negatively charged ligand, and we fully agree that, given current experimental limitations, our data provide circumstantial—rather than definitive—evidence for the binding site and that higher-resolution structures would be required for direct visualization. Importantly, we value the reviewer’s acknowledgement that we transparently describe these limitations and that our extensive mutagenesis and functional analyses nonetheless build a solid case for the proposed bicarbonate-binding pocket, which we believe will serve as a useful framework for future biochemical and structural investigation
Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):
Overall, the authors do a good job responding to the previous review, with updated structures and experimental data. I have two comments on the current version:
(1) When the authors compare their structure to a previously published structure of the same receptor, they say that the previous structure came out while the current manuscript was in revision (line 255). This is not correct. The previous manuscript was published May 14, 2024, and the current manuscript was received by eLife on May 20, 2024. This sentence should be corrected to "During the preparation of this manuscript..."
We corrected the sentence accordingly (line 259).
(2) Line 173: what other structures are the authors referring to? Citations should be included here.
Is Line 193 correct? We added citations (line 190).
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
In this manuscript, "Cryo-EM structure of the bicarbonate receptor GPR30," the authors aimed to enrich our understanding of the role of GPR30 in pH homeostasis by combining structural analysis with a receptor function assay. This work is a natural development and extension of their previous work on Nature Communications (PMID: 38413581). In the current body of work, they solved the cryo-EM structure of the human GPR30-G-protein (mini-Gsqi) complex in the presence of bicarbonate ions at 3.15 Å resolution. From the atomic model built based on this map, they observed the overall canonical architecture of class A GPCR and also identified 3 extracellular pockets created by ECLs (Pockets A-C). Based on the polarity, location, size, and charge of each pocket, the authors hypothesized that pocket A is a good candidate for the bicarbonate binding site. To identify the bicarbonate binding site, the authors performed an exhaustive mutant analysis of the hydrophilic residues in Pocket A and analyzed receptor reactivity via calcium assay. In addition, the human GPR30-G-protein complex model also enabled the authors to elucidate the G-protein coupling mechanism of this special class A GPCR, which plays a crucial role in pH homeostasis.
Strengths:
As a continuation of their recent Nature Communications publication, the authors used cryo-EM coupled with mutagenesis and functional studies to elucidate bicarbonate-GPR30 interaction. This work provided atomic-resolution structural observations for the receptor in complex with G-protein, allowing us to explore its mechanism of action, and will further facilitate drug development targeting GPR30. There were 3 extracellular pockets created by ECLs (Pockets A-C). The authors were able to filter out 2 of them and hypothesized that pocket A was a good candidate for the bicarbonate binding site based on the polarity, location, and charge of each pocket. From there, the authors identified the key residues on GPR30 for its interaction with the substrate, bicarbonate. Together with their previous work, they mapped out amino acids that are critical for receptor reactivity.
Weaknesses:
When we see a reduction of a GPCR-mediated downstream signaling, several factors could potentially contribute to this observation: 1) a reduced total expression of this receptor due to the mutation (transcription and translation issue); 2) a reduced surface expression of this receptor due to the mutation (trafficking issue); and 3) a dysfunctional receptor that doesn't signal due to the mutation. In the current revision, based on the gating strategy, the surface expression of the HA-positive WT GPR30-expressing cells is only 10.6% of the total population, while the surface expression levels of the mutants range from 1.89% (P71A) to 64.4% (D111A). Combining this information with the functional readout in Figure 3F and G, as well as their previous work, the authors concluded that mutations at P71, E115, D125, Q138, C207, D210, and H307 would decrease bicarbonate responses. Among those sites,
E115, Q138, and H307 were from their previous Nature Comm paper.
Authors claim P71 and C207 make a structural-stability contribution, as their mutations result in a significant reduction in surface expression: P71A (1.89%) and C207A (2.71%). However, compared to 10.6% of the total population in the WT, (P71A is 17.8% of the WT, and C207A is 25.6% of the WT), this doesn't rule out the possibility that the mutated receptor is also dysfunctional: at 10 mM NaHCO3, RFU of WT is ~500, RFU of P71 and C207 are ~0.
The authors also interpret "The D125ECL1A mutant has lost its activity but is located on the surface" and only mention "D125 is unlikely to be a bicarbonate binding site, and the mutational effect could be explained due to the decreased surface expression". Again, compared to 10.6% of the total population in the WT, D125A (3.94%) is 37.2% of the WT. At 10 mM NaHCO3, the RFU of the WT is ~500, the RFU of D125 is ~0. This doesn't rule out the possibility that the mutated receptor is also dysfunctional. It is not clear why D125A didn't make it to the surface.
Other mutants that the authors didn't mention much in their text: D111A (64.4%, 607.5% of WT surface expression), E121A (50.4%, 475.5% of WT surface expression), R122 (41.0%, 386.8% of WT surface expression), N276A (38.9%, 367.0% of WT surface expression) and E218A (24.6%, 232.1% of WT surface expression) all have similar RFU as WT, although the surface expression is about 2-6 times more. On the other hand, Q215A (3.18%, 30% of WT surface expression) has similar RFU as WT, with only a third of the receptor on the surface.
Altogether, the wide range of surface expression across the different cell lines, combined with the different receptor function readouts, makes the cell functional data only partially support their structural observations.
We sincerely thank the reviewer for their careful reading and thoughtful evaluation of our manuscript on the cryo-EM structure of the bicarbonate receptor GPR30. We greatly appreciate the reviewer’s positive assessment of the overall significance of combining structural determination with extensive mutagenesis and functional assays to advance understanding of bicarbonate–GPR30 interactions and G-protein coupling, as well as their recognition that these atomic-level insights will be valuable for future mechanistic studies and drug-development efforts. We are also grateful for the reviewer’s constructive critique regarding the interpretation of reduced signaling in the context of variable surface expression across mutants, which highlights an important point about disentangling effects of expression/trafficking from intrinsic receptor dysfunction; these comments are highly insightful and will help us strengthen the clarity and rigor of our presentation and conclusions in the revised manuscript.
Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):
In this revision, the authors have made a significant effort to improve and validate the structural observations, as well as address the comments in the previous submission. They updated the functional assays and evaluated the receptor function by measuring intracellular calcium mobilization, which is a more direct measurement for the downstream signaling of hGPR30-Gq signaling. They also used flow cytometry with an HA-antibody for a more direct measurement of the surface expression of the receptor, replacing their previous assay that normalized to the housekeeping gene Na-K-ATPase.
I appreciate the effort the authors made to address the previous comments made by the reviewers. However, there are still some concerns about the current data.
(1) The authors have addressed my previous comment on untangling the mixture of their previous and new data in the "insights into bicarbonate binding" section. They have made it clear that the importance of E115, Q138, and H307 in the receptor-bicarbonate interaction was shown in their Nature Communications paper.
(2) The authors have addressed my previous comment on adding some content about the physiological concentration of HCO3, or referring more to their previous work about the rationale to select the bicarbonate dose in their functional assay.
(3) The authors have updated Figure 3
(4) The authors have updated Supplemental Figure 1 to show the full gel with molecular weight markers in the supplemental data to demonstrate the sample purity.
(5) The authors have updated the predicted model using AF3
(6) The authors added E218A as suggested before.
Some new suggestions for this R1:
(1) The wide range of surface expression across the different cell lines, combined with the different receptor function readouts, makes the cell functional data only partially support their structural observations.
We acknowledge this limitation. The wide range of surface expression among cell lines, together with differences in assay modalities, may introduce variability that complicates direct quantitative comparisons and therefore only partially supports the structural observations. Future work using more standardized expression systems and matched functional readouts will be important to strengthen the structure–function linkage.
(2) Line 101, "ICL1 and ECL1 contain short α helices", no α helix of ICL1 is shown in Figure 2C
We removed the word “ICL1” (line 98).
(3) For the unsolved region of ECL2, could the author put a dashed line connecting ECL2 with TM4? In the current Figure 2B, it looks like ECL2 connects TM3 and TM5.
According to the suggestion, we corrected Figure 2B.
(4) I appreciate that the authors updated the predicted model with AF3, but they didn't make it clear why they had the comparison between their cryo-EM structure (bicarbonate-activated G-protein-incorporated GPR30) and the predicted AF3 model (inactive GPR30)
We wish to assert the usefulness of experimental structures, not merely predictions. These include structures independent of receptor activation, such as SS bonds.
(5) I appreciate that the authors have addressed my previous comment on adding some content about the physiological concentration of HCO3, but it was still not clear to me why they picked 11 mM in Figure 3G for the bar graph. Also, since a dose-response curve was made in Figure 3F, why not just calculate and report the EC50 of NaHCO3 for each mutant?
Thank you for your comment. Thank you for the comment. We’ve calculated the EC50 of the calcium response and assessed its correlation with receptors’ cell surface expression. We chose 11 mM in Fig .3G since our previous paper in Nature Communications showed the EC50 value of IPs assay was around 11 mM. However, the calcium response was more sensitive and gave a lower value than expected. Therefore, according to your advice, we deleted the bar graph with 11 mM responses, calculated EC50, and drew pictures of the correlation among cell surface expression, EC50, and maximum responses (Figure 3F-I, Supplementary File 1). Moreover, we revised the explanation about this mutagenesis study (lines139-154 and 217-230).
(6) In the previous submission and comments, E218 was in close contact with bicarbonate in the previous Figure 4D (the bicarbonate is deleted in the new structure). I thank the authors for making an E218A mutant and performing the functional assay. As mentioned above, E218A (24.6%, 232.1% of WT surface expression) has a similar functional readout as WT. Doesn't this also indicate that E218A is partially broken, so you will need twice as much as WT to have the same downstream signal?
Thank you for your comment. In our revised manuscript, we described the correlation between cell surface expression and EC50 and found that cell surface expression and the response to bicarbonate are not correlated, which you mentioned in your review comment (Figure 3F-I, Supplementary File 1). There are many possibilities that could explain this: GPR30 localization in specific spots on the plasma membrane might limit the response stoichiometry, GPR30 might also work intracellularly to blunt the increased response because of more GPR30 expression on PM, redundant GPR30 on PM might be broken, or E118A might be less functional and need twice as much as WT. We will examine cell surface expression of GPR30 and its response to bicarbonate in a future study.
I would suggest that the authors in future studies consider using the Tet-on inducible cell lines, such as HEK293 Flp-In Trex. These cell lines will allow the authors to fine-tune the surface expression of their mutants to the same level with different doses of Tetracycline in their stable cell lines.
We appreciate your advice. We’ll introduce Tet-on inducible cell lines for future research.
Reviewer #3 (Public review):
Summary
GPR30 responds to bicarbonate and plays a role in regulating cellular pH and ion homeostasis. However, the molecular basis of bicarbonate recognition by GPR30 remains unresolved. This study reports the cryo-EM structure of GPR30 bound to a chimeric mini-Gq in the presence of bicarbonate, revealing mechanistic insights into its G-protein coupling. Nonetheless, the study does not identify the bicarbonate-binding site within GPR30.
Strengths
The work provides strong structural evidence clarifying how GPR30 engages and couples with Gq.
Weaknesses
Several GPR30 mutants exhibited diminished responses to bicarbonate, but their expression levels were also reduced. As a result, the mechanism by which GPR30 recognizes bicarbonate remains uncertain, leaving this aspect of the study incomplete.
We sincerely thank the reviewer for this thoughtful and balanced assessment of our manuscript, including the clear summary of the central advance and the constructive identification of remaining limitations. We particularly appreciate the recognition that our cryo-EM analysis provides strong structural evidence for how GPR30 engages and couples with Gq, and we agree that pinpointing the bicarbonate-binding site remains a critical open question. In the revised manuscript, we will make this point more explicit, clarify the interpretation of the mutagenesis results in light of reduced receptor expression for some variants, and further strengthen the presentation and discussion of what our current data do—and do not—allow us to conclude regarding bicarbonate recognition by GPR30
Reviewer #3 (Recommendations for the authors):
The authors have removed the bicarbonate assignment from their model and have addressed all of my concerns. In this study, or in future work, it would be advisable for the authors to explore the use of bicarbonate mimetics with higher binding affinity to facilitate more definitive structural characterization.
Thank you for this constructive suggestion. We agree that exploring bicarbonate mimetics with higher binding affinity would be an important next step to enable more definitive structural characterization of GPR30 and to strengthen mechanistic conclusions. In future work, we plan to pursue the identification and/or design of such mimetics, guided by the architecture and mutational landscape of the extracellular pocket described here, and to combine these ligands with optimized cryo-EM sample preparation and complementary functional assays to better stabilize and visualize the bound state.
eLife Assessment
This study introduces a valuable toolkit for zebrafish transgenesis, significantly enhancing the flexibility and efficiency of transgene generation for immunological applications. The authors provide convincing evidence through well-designed experiments, demonstrating the toolkit's utility in generating diverse and functional transgenic lines.
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
The authors introduce ImPaqT, a modular toolkit for zebrafish transgenesis, utilizing the Golden Gate cloning approach with the rare-cutting enzyme PaqCI. The toolkit is designed to streamline the construction of transgenes with broad applications, particularly for immunological studies. By providing a versatile platform, the study aims to address limitations in generating plasmids for zebrafish transgenesis.
Strengths:
The ImPaqT toolkit offers a modular method for constructing transgenes tailored to specific research needs. By employing Golden Gate cloning, the system simplifies the assembly process, allowing seamless integration of multiple genetic elements while maintaining scalability for complex designs. The toolkit's utility is evident from its inclusion of a diverse range of promoters, genetic tools, and fluorescent markers, which cater to both immunological and general zebrafish research needs. Even small DNA fragements, such as the viral 2a sequence, can be cloned into a multi-component plasmid in one step. The components can be assembled from PCR fragments or synthesized DNA fragments, forgoing the need for "entry" vectors. Further, the authors show that the exisiting PaqCI sites can be domesticated to improve the versatility of the system. The validation provided in the manuscript is Convincing, demonstrating the successful generation of several functional transgenic lines. These examples highlight the toolkit's efficacy, particularly for immune-focused applications.
Comments on revisions:
The authors have addressed all the concerns raised in the first review. Congratulations to the authors for their effort.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
Hurst et al. developed a new Tol2-based transgenesis system, ImPaqT, an Immunological toolkit for PaqCl-based Golden Gate Assembly of Tol2 Transgenes, to facilitate the production of transgenic zebrafish lines. This Golden Gate assembly-based approach relies on only a short 4-base-pair overhang sequence in the final construct, and the insertion construct and backbone vector can be assembled in a single-tube reaction using PaqCl and a ligase. This approach can also be expandable by introducing new overhang sequences while maintaining compatibility with existing ImPaqT constructs, allowing users to add fragments as needed.
The generation of several transgenic zebrafish lines for immunological studies demonstrates the feasibility of the ImPaqT in vivo. Lineage tracing of macrophages via LPS injection demonstrates the approach's functionality and validates its use in vivo.
Comments on revisions:
The authors have addressed all my concerns.
Author Response:
The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.
We thank the reviewers and editors for their careful reading of our manuscript and thoughtful comments on it. We appreciate the overall positive opinion on our manuscript and helpful comments and suggestions from the reviewers. Overall, the main points identified by reviewers were 1) further broadening of the system to a range of inputs as well as the construct types that can be generated with the system and 2) Further consideration of any off-target joining or off-target effects on genes/proteins and the limits to the expandability of the kit. To address these concerns, we have added new data in Figure 6, illustrating the generation of a new construct using PCR and dsDNA fragments, new constructs for mpeg1.1 and for CRISPR gRNA expression and have revised the text to further address concerns and limitations of the toolkit. We thank the reviewers and editors for these suggestions and feel that they have substantially improved the manuscript.
Public Reviews:
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
The authors introduce ImPaqT, a modular toolkit for zebrafish transgenesis, utilizing the Golden Gate cloning approach with the rare-cutting enzyme PaqCI. The toolkit is designed to streamline the construction of transgenes with broad applications, particularly for immunological studies. By providing a versatile platform, the study aims to address limitations in generating plasmids for zebrafish transgenesis.
Strengths:
The ImPaqT toolkit offers a modular method for constructing transgenes tailored to specific research needs. By employing Golden Gate cloning, the system simplifies the assembly process, allowing seamless integration of multiple genetic elements while maintaining scalability for complex designs. The toolkit's utility is evident from its inclusion of a diverse range of promoters, genetic tools, and fluorescent markers, which cater to both immunological and general zebrafish research needs. Furthermore, the modular design ensures expandability, enabling researchers to customize constructs for diverse experimental designs. The validation provided in the manuscript is solid, demonstrating the successful generation of several functional transgenic lines. These examples highlight the toolkit's efficacy, particularly for immune-focused applications.
We appreciate the overall positive evaluation of our toolkit and the time and effort in evaluating it.
Weaknesses:
While the toolkit's technical capabilities are well-demonstrated, there are several areas where additional validation and examples could enhance its impact. One limitation is the lack of data showing whether the toolkit can be directly used for rapid cloning and testing of enhancers or promoters, particularly cloning them directly from PCR using PaqCI overhangs without needing an entry vector. Similarly, the feasibility of cloning genes directly from PCR products into the system is not demonstrated, which would significantly increase the utility for researchers working with genomic elements.
This is an excellent point. Given the increased use of gene synthesis and dsDNA fragments, we also thought it was good to demonstrate incorporation of these as well. We have added a new figure, Figure 6, which demonstrates generation of two new transgene constructs constructed by direct cloning of three PCR products along with a synthetic dsDNA fragment into a Tol2 flanked backbone plasmid as an alternative, rapid approach to generation of transgenes. The resulting plasmids, encoding the mpeg1.1. promoter, a separate p2a, and a tdTomato fluorescent protein along with either wildtype or dominant negative rac2 were properly assembled and in transient transgenic zebrafish injected with these constructs, dominant negative rac2 prevented macrophage recruitment to tail wounds, indicating that this approach worked for the generation of functional transgenes. These results are discussed in new text (lines 304-391) describing this new experiment and the finding that both PCR products and synthesized dsDNA could be efficiently incorporated in constructions generated with our approach as well as in the discussion (lines 494-499).
The authors discuss potential applications such as using the toolkit for tissue-specific knockout applications by assembling CRISPR/Cas9 gRNA constructs. However, they do not demonstrate the cloning of short fragments, such as gRNA sequences downstream of a U6 promoter, which would be an important proof-of-concept to validate these applications. Furthermore, while the manuscript focuses on macrophage-specific promoters, the widely used mpeg1.1 promoter is not included or tested, which limits the toolkit's appeal for researchers studying macrophages and microglia.
Yes, in the new figure described above, we have now shown that this method works with shorter PCR fragments such as the p2a fragment cloned within the tdTomato-p2a-rac2 constructs described above. This fragment is ~70 bp and while this is somewhat longer than a simple gRNA targeting sequence (though smaller than a complete sgRNA), we believe that this indicates that smaller size fragments can still be incorporated within these constructs. We also agree with the general idea of increasing functionality to incorporate CRISPR/Cas9 and now include a 3E encoding the zebrafish U6 promoter. As CRISPR expression constructs frequently incorporate complex construction, for instance, expression of tagged Cas9 along with the U6 driven gRNA as in Zhou et al., 2018 or along with rescue constructs as in Wang et al., 2021, we have given these constructs the non-standard 5’ end O3c, to enable multiplexing in these complex constructs.
We agree that it is important to include mpeg1.1, given the broad use of this promoter within the field, we’ve now included an 5E mpeg1.1 construct within the toolkit.
Another potential limitation is the handling of sequences containing PaqCI recognition sites. Although the authors discuss domestication to remove these sites, a demonstration of cloning strategies for such cases or alternative methods to address these challenges would provide practical guidance for users.
Absolutely, we have now included a new figure (Supplementary Figure 6) that illustrates one domestication approach using PCR and homology-based cloning as an easy approach to domestication. In addition, we have also mentioned alternative approaches for domestication in the discussion (lines 439-444).
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
Hurst et al. developed a new Tol2-based transgenesis system ImPaqT, an Immunological toolkit for PaqCl-based Golden Gate Assembly of Tol2 Transgenes, to facilitate the production of transgenic zebrafish lines. This Golden Gate assembly-based approach relies on only a short 4-base pair overhang sequence in their final construct, and the insertion construct and backbone vector can be assembled in a single-tube reaction using PaqCl and ligase. This approach can also be expandable by introducing new overhang sequences while maintaining compatibility with existing ImPaqT constructs, allowing users to add fragments as needed.
Strengths:
The generation of several lines of transgenic zebrafish for the immunologic study demonstrates the feasibility of the ImPaqT in vivo. The lineage tracing of macrophages by LPS injection shows this approach's functionality, validating its usage in vivo.
We appreciate the positive sentiments for our toolkit and the effort put into reviewing our manuscript.
Weaknesses:
(1) There is no quantitative data analysis showing the percentage of off-target based on these 4bp overhang sequences.
While we agree that this is an important variable for the method, we feel that previous studies that have broadly tested off-target effects of all potential 4 bp overhang sequences have already given an effective overview of interactions between each of these overhangs (Potapov et al., 2018; Pryor et al., 2020). The results from these studies were incorporated into the NEB ligase fidelity viewer that we used to predict the overhangs that would have minimal off-target with each other: the tool also reports the expected off-target ligation of individual 4 bp overhangs. In all cases, we selected overhangs that would have minimal off-target efficiency, with each of the overhangs showing 1% or less off-target ligation with any of the other overhangs chosen. We have added new text, lines 119-124, that further clarifies that our selection for these ends.
(2) There is no statement for the upper limitation of the expandability.
Yes, we’ve been curious as well. While our cloning of 6 distinct fragments in Figure 5 and a new 5 fragment cloning added in revision seen in Figure 6, suggests that 5-6 fragments can be readily assembled, in the course of revisions we also attempted to generate a larger product of 11 fragments that ultimately failed. While the 11 fragment construct was unsuccessful, it is unclear whether this is due to the constructs chosen, the potential size of the plasmid or due to a failure of the technique/enzymes themselves. Given that published descriptions of PaqCI Golden Gate cloning approaches have found that PaqCI can assemble at least 32 fragments and can produce large sequences (e.g. in Sikkema et al., 2023, where they assemble the ~40 kbp T7 genome from 12, 24 and 32 distinct fragments using a PaqCI Golden Gate reaction), we suspect that our issues with the 11 fragment assembly are likely due to complications with the specific group of constructs that were combined, however, we have not been able to exhaustively test a range of constructs and assemblies of varying complexity levels. To recognize this, we have added additional text (lines 490-493) to the discussion describing that we have only combined 6 constructs, but that we think that this likely encompasses many of the applications that may be needed for this system, while recognizing that expansion beyond this number may be possible.
(3) There is no data about any potential side effect on their endogenous function of promoter/protein of interest with the ImPaqT method.
Absolutely, we have added new text (lines 457-470) to our discussion describing the potential side effects on protein function. For instance, the need to be aware of whether N- or C-termini of proteins can be modified and recognition of the potential for affecting/creating ectopic transcription factor binding sites as potential pitfalls to keep in mind.
Recommendations for the authors:
Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):
The data presented in the manuscript is robust and well-supported. However, to fully demonstrate the broad applicability of the toolkit and strengthen its impact, a few additional experiments could be beneficial. Specific suggestions for these experiments and areas of improvement are outlined in the 'Weaknesses' section of the Public Review. Additionally, Figures 2-4 illustrate the same concept - cloning three fragments from entry vectors-which comes across as repetitive. Incorporating a more diverse range of use cases would better highlight the versatility of the toolkit.
As we described in our replies to your public points above, we have now added new Figure 6 and new Supplementary Figure 6 addressing the cloning of PCR fragments, short fragments as well as a mechanism of domestication. We have also included the mpeg1.1 promoter within the toolkit. In addition, your point on the repetition of assay is fair and in our new Figure 6, we instead used wild type and dominant-negative Rac2 expression and failure of macrophage recruitment to the tail wound.
Reviewer #2 (Recommendations for the authors):
Hurst et al. developed a new Tol2-based transgenesis system ImPaqT, it is interesting and potentially efficient, but I have a few concerns:
(1) The author claimed that the ImPaqT system is more efficient than other existing systems. The authors should provide such data to support their claim.
Our argument wouldn’t be that the ImPaqT system is strictly speaking more efficient, but rather that the combination of minimal added sequence, the ability to expand or contract the fragments used, and, in our new Figure 6, the ability to directly utilize PCR products and dsDNA fragments, while retaining the ability to combinatorially build constructs from a suite of existing sequences is the main point of the method. We now explicitly state that Golden Gate cloning isn’t more efficient than existing techniques in the text (lines 534-537), but rather the particular strength of the method is the flexibility and minimal added sequence.
(2) The ImPaqT is theoretically less prone to have off-target effects than existing systems, the authors should provide such data to validate their claim.
Good point, we have now searched the zebrafish genome for PaqCI sites as well as for BsaI and BsmBI which are the 6-base cutters most commonly used for Golden Gate cloning. We found that PaqCI cuts every ~17 kb in the zebrafish genome while BsaI and BsmBI cut every ~9 kb or ~13 kb respectively, further supporting that PaqCI sites are rarer in the genome and should generally require domestication less often. We have now added new text describing this in lines 129-132.
(3) The authors should mention any potential side effects of this system on the endogenous function of the promoter/protein of interest, at least in their discussion part.
Yes, this should absolutely be expanded, as we said in your public comments above, we have now added new text describing potential pitfalls that this method may have on promoter or gene expression.
(4) The authors are suggested to provide a balanced discussion about the expandable usage of this system beyond the immune system.
We agree, this is also a good point that we should have emphasized more. We’ve added new text (lines 537-541) recognizing that in principle, many of the components we’ve derived should be useful in non-immune systems, but we also recognize that adapting this to new tissues will require the development of new promoters within the Golden Gate system which can be combined with these already developed tools.
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hoollaa ninos
Murthy (2018) dans la Harvard Business Review montre que le taux de solitude a doublé depuis les années 1980.
argument faisant ref au domaine privé pour étayer son propos : chercher à convaincre par le scientifique.
Télétravail/réseaux sociaux : paradoxe.
Ainsi, tout se confond entre vie privée et vie professionnelle. D’un côté, les salariés frappés de blurring (le floutage des frontières entre les deux sphères) adeptes du « live now, work later » (ou le fait de s’accomplir en dehors de la sphère professionnelle), de l’autre ceux pris dans les filets du « fear of missing out », ou FOMO (soit la peur de louper une information importante). La crise économique de 2008 et l’inaltérable liste des entreprises sans éthique contribuent à un désenchantement du travail et une sérieuse crise de confiance envers les patrons.
2 types d'employés : - blurring = confusion 2 sphères car épanouissement par des activités extra - FOMO = peur de louper une info argument dialectique
Droit de déconnection, mise à part, entreprise et législation + acteurs sociaux.
D’ailleurs, l’ennui gronde durant les réunions d’équipe et les collaborateurs se laissent tenter par des micro-leisure, soit des micro-pauses consacrées aux loisirs durant le temps de travail (achat en ligne, SMS, post sur les réseaux sociaux, etc.). Impuissants, les chefs d’équipes raccourcissent et dynamisent au maximum ces temps collectifs mais le fond n’y est pas. Et durant leurs voyages d’affaires, les talents s’adonneront au bleisure en s’octroyant des temps de loisirs.
Baisse du temps des réunions et les rendre + dynamique. Temps de travail + hachuré > // loi de Carlson et slashing cérébral.
renforce l'idée que les personnes sont maintenant multitâches mais cela a des conséquences. Attention prise de pouvoir machines.
Les travaux de Melissa Hunt et coll. (2018) montrent qu’une limitation à 30 minutes par jour de l’utilisation des réseaux sociaux conduit à une baisse significative du sentiment de solitude et de la peur des occasions manquées. D’autres solutions, simples mais bougrement efficaces, existent comme établir des plages horaires pour traiter ses e-mails ou se rendre disponible aux collègues, fermer sa porte et couper son téléphone lorsque l’on veut se concentrer, travailler sa pleine conscience, animer des réunions collectives strictement pour des réflexions d’équipe, organiser des évènements sociaux pour combattre la solitude ou implémenter des systèmes d’informations intégrateurs afin d’éviter la dispersion digitale… sinon gare alors aux hordes de digital zombies !
Propositions de solutions pour lutter contre les méfaits de l'hyperconnection. 1 de Mélissa Hunt et coll, 2018 > épistémique 2. propositions de l'auteur + note d'humour personnelle à la fin > rhétorique
Le work-life balance restera certainement un vœu pieux de la DRH au bénéfice du work-life blending qui privilégie la fusion, et non plus l’équilibre, entre vie professionnelle et vie privée.
nouvelle aire = nouveau paradigme : basculement vers work-life blending au détriment du work-life balance. Argument dialectique
Capacités d’adaptation
Seul point positif sans contre partie énoncé par l'auteur.
D’ailleurs, l’ennui gronde durant les réunions d’équipe et les collaborateurs se laissent tenter par des micro-leisure, soit des micro-pauses consacrées aux loisirs durant le temps de travail (achat en ligne, SMS, post sur les réseaux sociaux, etc.). Impuissants, les chefs d’équipes raccourcissent et dynamisent au maximum ces temps collectifs mais le fond n’y est pas. Et durant leurs voyages d’affaires, les talents s’adonneront au bleisure en s’octroyant des temps de loisirs.
babys boomers = 1946-1964 gen X = 1965-1979 gen Y = 1980-1994 gen Z = 1995-2009 A en croire le schéma qui suit, les baby-boomers et génération X encore en activité ne sont pas du tout touchés par les micros pauses et le bleisure.
Argument dialectique.
du multitasking
culture urgence totale, monde de l'instantanéité, traiter simultanément divers sujets : quelque chose de négatif pour l'auteur qui submerge le cerveau. > rhétorique pathos.
l’hypermodernité traduit un usage croissant des technologies digitales, une fragmentation de l’individu dans ses différents domaines de vie (cadre supérieur le jour, bénévole en soirée et écrivain la nuit) et un renforcement du lien clanique via les réseaux sociaux. Cette nouvelle ère d’hyperconnexion n’est pas sans conséquence comportementale.
Argument rhétorique, logos, il cherche à persuader en enchainant les conséquences comportementales.
clanique = un clan.
Comme le prédit le physicien américain Michio Kaku (2011) dans Une brève histoire du futur, les grands perdants seront les ouvriers parfaitement remplaçables par un robot qui, de surcroît, excellera dans des travaux répétitifs.
En 2030, nos enfants exerceront des métiers qui n'existent pas encore > TIC. Grands perdants = ceux remplaçables par robots.
Argument dialectique qui vient d'un scientifique en 2011 mais ce n'est qu'une prédiction de sa part.
odels to obsolesce
passive voice is interesting here. I'm also not entirely sure that all of this activity is nomadic.
esource e"ciency.
Is this true??
the ability to directlymanipulate model weights allows users to bypass safety training entirely, modifying models so that they no longerrefuse any request
open models may not even have safety training, in that they may just be base model releases, rather than RLHFd ones.
Em 1994, no Hospital Pedro II, no Rio de Janeiro, Nise da Silveira se deparou com uma psiquiatria diferente do que ela estava habituada a praticar. A “nova” onda de tratamentos vigente de distúrbios neurológicos e psiquiátricos baseava-se em práticas que corroboravam uma abordagem invasiva, medicalizante
Muitas pessoas morriam, dessa chamada sindrome hospitalocêntrica, que é na verdade um momento de época. O que é essa "sindrome", e como podemos relacionar com a Nise?
eLife Assessment
This study maps the genotype-phenotype landscapes of three E. coli transcription factors and the topographical features of these landscapes. It shows that ruggedness and epistasis do not hinder the evolution of strong transcription factor binding sites. These convincing findings contribute important insights into fitness landscape theories and highlight the role of chance, contingency, and evolutionary biases in gene regulation. The authors then study the topographical features of these landscapes, especially the number and distribution of local maxima, as well as the statistical properties of evolutionary paths on these landscapes.
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
For each of three key transcription factor (TF) proteins in E. coli, the authors generate a large library of TF binding site (TFBS) sequences on plasmids, such that each TFBS is coupled to the expression of a fluorescence reporter. By sorting the fluorescence of individual cells and sequencing their plasmids to identify each cell's TFBS sequence (sort-seq), they are able to map the landscape of these TFBSs to the gene expression level they regulate. The authors then study the topographical features of these landscapes, especially the number and distribution of local maxima, as well as the statistical properties of evolutionary paths on these landscapes. They find the landscapes to be highly rugged, with about as many local peaks as a random landscape would have, and with those peaks distributed approximately randomly in sequence space. This is quite different from previous work on landscapes for eukaryotic TFBSs, which tend to be rather smooth. The authors find that there are a number of peaks that produce regulation stronger than that of the wild-type sequence for each TF, and that it is not too unlikely to reach one of those "high peaks" from a random starting sequence. Nevertheless, the basins of attraction for different peaks have significant overlap, which means that chance plays a major role in determining which peak a population will evolve to.
Strengths:
(1) The apparent differences in landscape topography between prokaryotic TFBSs and other molecular landscapes is a fascinating discovery to add to the field of genotype-phenotype maps. I am really excited to learn the molecular mechanisms of this in the future.
(2) The experiments and analysis of this paper are very well-executed and, by and large, very thorough. I appreciated the systematic nature of the project, both the large-scale experiments done on three TFs with replicates, and the systematic analysis of the resulting landscapes. This not only makes the paper easy to follow, but also inspires confidence in their results since there is so much data and so many different ways of analyzing it. It's a great recipe for other studies of genotype-phenotype landscapes to follow.
(3) Considering how technical the project was, I am really impressed at how easy to read I found the paper, and the authors deserve a lot of credit for making it so. They do a great job of building up the experiments and analyses step-by-step, and explaining enough of the basics of the experimental design and essence of each analysis in the main text without getting too complicated with details that can be left to the Methods or SI.
Weaknesses:
(1) Regarding the effect of measurement uncertainties, one way in which they attempt to test their effect is to simulate dynamics on noisy and noise-free versions of the landscape and measure visitation frequencies. While they show that visitation frequencies are highly correlated between these cases, I'd prefer a more direct test of epistasis or navigability (e..g, number of local peaks), since that's how they are characterizing the landscapes, and the connection between that and visitation frequency of individual states is unclear.
(2) I am still a little concerned about the fraction of sequences missing from the data due to filtering, although I appreciate the difficulties in testing the importance of this (requiring additional assumptions) and the authors' good-faith efforts to do their best with the data they have.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
The authors aim to investigate the ability of evolution to create strong transcription factor binding sites (TFBSs) de novo in E. coli. They focus on three global transcriptional regulators: CRP, Fis, and IHF, using a massively parallel reporter assay to evaluate the regulatory effects of over 30,000 TFBS variants. By analyzing the resulting genotype-phenotype landscapes, they explore the ruggedness, accessibility, and evolutionary dynamics of regulatory landscapes, providing insights into the evolutionary feasibility of strong gene regulation. Their experiments show that de novo adaptive evolution of new gene regulation is feasible. It is also subject to a blend of chance, historical contingency, and evolutionary biases that favor some peaks and evolutionary paths.
(1) Strengths of the methods and results:
The authors successfully employed a well-designed sort-seq assay combined with high-throughput sequencing to map regulatory landscapes. The experimental design ensures reliable measurement of regulation strengths. Their system accounts for gene expression noise and normalizes measurements using appropriate controls.
Comprehensive Landscape Mapping:<br /> The study examines ~30,000 TFBS variants per transcription factor, providing statistically robust and thorough maps of the regulatory landscapes for CRP, Fis, and IHF. The landscapes are rigorously analyzed for ruggedness (e.g., number of peaks) and epistasis, revealing parallels with theoretical uncorrelated random landscapes.
Evolutionary Dynamics Simulations:<br /> Through simulations of adaptive walks under varying population dynamics, the authors demonstrate that high peaks in regulatory landscapes are accessible despite ruggedness. They identify key evolutionary phenomena, such as contingency (multiple paths to peaks) and biases toward specific evolutionary outcomes.
Biological Relevance and Novelty:<br /> The author's work is novel in focusing on global regulators, which differ from previously studied local regulators (e.g., TetR). They provide compelling evidence that rugged landscapes are navigable, facilitating de novo evolution of regulatory interactions. The comparison of landscapes for CRP, Fis, and IHF underscores shared topographical features, suggesting general principles of global transcriptional regulation in bacteria.
(2) Weaknesses of the methods and results:
Undersampling of Genotype Space:<br /> Approximately 40% of the theoretical TFBS genotype space remains uncharacterized after quality filtering. The authors now discuss this limitation more explicitly and provide analyses suggesting that undersampling does not strongly bias their conclusions at the landscape level. Nevertheless, predictive modeling approaches could further extend these landscapes in future work.
Simplified Regulatory Architecture:<br /> The study considers a minimal system consisting of a single TFBS upstream of a reporter gene. While this simplification allows clean interpretation and high-throughput measurement, natural promoters often involve combinatorial regulation and chromosomal context effects that may alter landscape topography.
Lack of Experimental Evolution Validation:<br /> The evolutionary conclusions are based on simulations rather than direct experimental evolution. The authors provide a reasonable justification for this choice and frame their conclusions at the statistical level rather than for specific trajectories, but experimental validation would be a valuable future extension.
Impact on the Field:<br /> This study advances our understanding of adaptive landscapes in gene regulation and offers a critical step toward deciphering how global regulators evolve de novo binding sites. The findings provide foundational insights for synthetic biology, evolutionary genetics, and systems biology by highlighting the evolutionary accessibility of strong regulation in bacteria.
Utility of Methods and Data:<br /> The sort-seq approach, combined with landscape analysis, provides a robust framework that can be extended to other transcription factors and systems. If made publicly available, the study's data and code would be valuable for researchers modeling transcriptional regulation or studying evolutionary dynamics.
Additional Context:<br /> The study builds on a growing body of work exploring regulatory evolution. For instance, recent studies on local regulators like TetR and AraC have revealed high ruggedness and epistasis in TFBS landscapes. This study distinguishes itself by focusing on global regulators, which are more complex biologically and more influential in bacterial gene networks. The observed evolutionary contingency aligns with findings in other biological systems, such as protein evolution and RNA folding landscapes, underscoring the generality of these evolutionary principles.
Conclusion:<br /> The authors successfully mapped the genotype-phenotype landscapes for three global regulators and simulated evolutionary dynamics to assess the feasibility of strong TFBS evolution. They convincingly demonstrate that ruggedness and epistasis, while prominent, do not preclude the evolution of strong regulation. Their results support the notion that gene regulation evolves through a blend of chance, contingency, and evolutionary biases.
This paper makes a significant contribution to the understanding of regulatory evolution in bacteria. While minor limitations exist, the authors' methods are robust, and their findings are well-supported. The work will likely be of broad interest to researchers in molecular evolution, synthetic biology, and gene regulation.
Author Response:
The following is the authors’ response to the original reviews.
Public Reviews:
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Weaknesses:
(1) The main weakness of this paper, in my view, is that it felt disconnected from the larger body of work on fitness and genotype-phenotype landscapes, including previous data on TFBSs in E. coli, genotype-phenotype maps of TFBSs in other systems, protein sequence landscapes (e.g., from mutational scans or combinatorially-complete libraries), and fitness landscapes of genomic mutations (e.g., combinatorially-complete landscapes of antibiotic resistance alleles). I have no doubt the authors are experts in this literature, and they probably cite most of it already given the enormous number of references. But they don't systematically introduce and summarize what was already known from all that work, and how their present study builds on it, in the Abstract and Introduction, which left me wondering for most of the paper why this project was necessary. Eventually, the authors do address most of these points, but not until the end, in the Discussion. Readers who have no familiarity with this literature might read this paper thinking that it's the first paper ever to study topography and evolutionary paths on genotype-phenotype landscapes, which is not true.
There were two points that made this especially confusing for me. First, in order to choose which nucleotides in the binding sites to vary, the authors invoke existing data on the diversity of these sequences (position-weight matrices from RegulonDB). But since those PWMs can imply a genotype-phenotype map themselves, an obvious question I think the authors needed to have answered right away in the Introduction is why it is insufficient for their question. They only make a brief remark much later in the Results that the PWM data is just observed sequence diversity and doesn't directly reflect the regulation strength of every possible TFBS sequence. But that is too subtle in my opinion, and such a critical motivation for their study that it should be a major point in the Introduction.
The second point where the lack of motivation in the Introduction created confusion for me was that they report enormous levels of sign epistasis in their data, to the point where these landscapes look like random uncorrelated landscapes. That was really surprising to me since it contrasts with other empirical landscape data I'm familiar with. It was only in the Discussion that I found some significant explanation of this - namely that this could be a difference between prokaryotic TFBSs, as this paper studies, and the eukaryotic TFBSs that have been the focus of many (almost all?) previous work. If that is in fact the case - that almost all previous studies have focused on eukaryotic TFBSs or other kinds of landscapes, and this is the first to do a systematic test of prokaryotic TFBS, then that should be a clear point made in the Abstract and Introduction. (I find a comparable statement only in the very last paragraph of the Discussion.) If that's the case, then I would also find that point to be a much stronger, more specific conclusion of this paper to emphasize than the more general result of observing epistasis and contingency (as is currently emphasized in the Abstract), which has been discussed in tons of other papers. This raises all sorts of exciting questions for future studies - why do the landscapes of prokaryotic TFBSs differ so dramatically from almost all the other landscapes we've observed in biology? What does that mean for the evolutionary dynamics of these different systems?
We thank the reviewer for this thoughtful and detailed critique. We agree that the original version of the manuscript did not sufficiently motivate the study early on, nor did it clearly position our work within the broader literature on genotype–phenotype (GP) and fitness landscapes. We also agree that two specific issues, the role of PWMs and the unexpectedly high levels of sign epistasis, were insufficiently explained early on, which could lead to confusion for readers not already familiar with this field.
Positioning within the broader landscape literature
In response, we have substantially revised the Abstract and Introduction to explicitly situate our work within existing empirical studies of GP and fitness landscapes, including TFBS landscapes in bacteria, eukaryotic TFBS genotype–phenotype maps, in vitro TF–DNA binding studies, deep mutational scans of proteins, and combinatorially complete fitness landscapes such as antibiotic resistance alleles (Abstract; Introduction, lines 64–85). We now make clear that our study builds directly on this extensive body of work, rather than introducing the landscape framework itself. For example, we write in the introduction:
“Over the last decade, genotype–phenotype (GP) maps and fitness landscapes have become central tools for understanding how molecular systems evolve under mutation and selection[22–25]. Such maps and landscapes have been experimentally studied for DNA[6,8,18,19,26,27], protein[28–32] and RNA[33–35] molecules, revealing key topographical properties that shape evolutionary outcomes, including epistasis[24,36]—the non-additive effects of multiple mutations on phenotype—landscape ruggedness, reflected in the number and distribution of fitness peaks, and constraints on adaptive evolution.”
At the same time, we clarify what remains rare in the literature: large-scale, in vivo genotype–phenotype landscapes for bacterial transcription factor binding sites that are sufficiently dense to support explicit evolutionary analyses. While numerous high-throughput studies have characterized bacterial regulatory elements, these datasets typically do not provide quantitative regulatory phenotypes across large genotype spaces, nor do they analyze evolutionary accessibility. To our knowledge, only one such in vivo TFBS landscape had previously been characterized at comparable resolution for a bacterial local regulator (TetR). Our work extends this approach to three global regulators, enabling systematic comparisons across prokaryotic systems (Abstract, Introduction, lines 64–85). For example, we write in the introduction:
“For transcription factor binding sites, most pertinent large-scale studies are based on in vitro binding assays, such as protein-binding microarrays (PBMs), and they focus predominantly on eukaryotic transcription factors[6]. While these studies have been instrumental in characterizing transcription factor binding preferences, they typically do not measure regulatory output in a native cellular context. In contrast, comprehensive in vivo data for bacterial TFBSs remain extremely rare. To our knowledge, only two high-resolutionin vivo landscapes have been previously mapped for bacterial regulators, those of the local regulators TetR[18] and LacI[27]. As a result, it remains unclear whether principles inferred from protein landscapes, eukaryotic TFBSs, or in vitro binding assays generalize to transcriptional regulation in bacteria, particularly for global regulators[11] that integrate multiple physiological signals.”
Why PWMs are insufficient for our question.
We agree with the reviewer that our original explanation of the role of PWMs was too cursory and should have been addressed explicitly in the Introduction. We have now revised the Introduction to clearly explain why PWMs derived from RegulonDB cannot substitute for empirical GP landscapes in our study (Introduction, lines 102–113).
In this passage we now explain that, first, PWMs are inferred from a limited number of naturally occurring binding sites—typically on the order of hundreds of sequences—whose diversity reflects evolutionary history and genomic context rather than systematic exploration of sequence space. As a result, PWMs sample only a small and biased subset of the possible TFBS variants, whereas our libraries probe tens of thousands of sequences in a controlled manner, providing substantially broader and more uniform coverage of genotype space (Introduction, lines 102–113).
Second, PWM scores are not direct measurements of regulatory strength. Instead, they represent probabilistic or heuristic scores that are primarily used for identifying candidate binding sites in genomes. Numerous studies have shown that PWM scores often correlate weakly with in vivo binding affinity or regulatory output, where DNA shape, cooperative interactions, and chromosomal context play important roles. As such, PWMs do not provide quantitative genotype–phenotype relationships for regulation strength (Introduction, lines 102–113).
Third, PWMs assume independent and additive contributions of individual nucleotide positions. This assumption excludes epistatic interactions by construction. Because epistasis is central to landscape ruggedness, peak structure, and evolutionary accessibility, PWM-based models are fundamentally unsuited to address the evolutionary questions we study here (Introduction, lines 102–113). We now explicitly state this limitation early in the manuscript, rather than only alluding to it later in the Results.
Sign epistasis and contrast with prior TFBS landscapes.
We also agree with the reviewer that the extensive sign epistasis we observe—approaching levels expected for uncorrelated random landscapes—is surprising in light of much of the existing empirical landscape literature. Importantly, as the reviewer notes, most previous TFBS landscape studies have focused on in vitro binding systems or on eukaryotic transcription factors, which tend to exhibit smoother and more additive landscapes.
To address this concern, we have revised the Abstract and Introduction to explicitly frame this contrast as a central result of the study (Abstract; Introduction, lines 151-153, Discussion, lines 652–668). For example, we write in the discussion:
“We showed that the regulatory landscapes of all three TFs are highly rugged and have multiple peaks. The ruggedness of all three landscapes is also supported by the prevalence of epistasis between pairs of TFBS mutations (Supplementary Table S5). A particularly important form of epistasis is sign epistasis[24,93,94], because it can lead to multiple adaptive peaks [24,93,94] (see Supplementary Methods 7.5). Our landscapes contain up to 65% of mutation pairs with sign epistasis, a value that is especially high compared to the almost exclusively additive interactions of mutations in eukaryotic TFs[6,125].”
We now emphasize that prokaryotic TFBS landscapes, particularly for global regulators, appear to be substantially more rugged and epistatic than most previously characterized TFBS landscapes, and that this difference likely reflects fundamental biological distinctions between regulatory systems.
Revised emphasis and conclusions.
Following the reviewer’s suggestion, we have adjusted the emphasis of the manuscript accordingly. Rather than highlighting epistasis and contingency as generic evolutionary phenomena, we now present the extreme ruggedness of prokaryotic TFBS landscapes as a system-specific finding with important implications for the evolution of gene regulation. We explicitly note that this raises new questions for future work—such as why prokaryotic regulatory landscapes differ so markedly from eukaryotic ones, and how these differences shape evolutionary dynamics—which we now highlight in the Introduction and Discussion (Abstract; Introduction, lines 151-153, Discussion, lines 652–668). For example, we write in the discussion:
“… A possible reason for this greater incidence of epistasis lies in the nature of prokaryotic TFBSs. Specifically, prokaryotic TFBSs are at approximately 20bps twice as long as eukaryotic TFBSs[80,128] and exhibit symmetries that reflect the dimeric state of their cognate TFs[129–131]. These factors may increase the likelihood of intramolecular epistasis. Our observations raise important questions for future work, such as why the landscapes of prokaryotic TFBSs differ so dramatically from those of eukaryotic ones. And what do these differences imply for the evolutionary dynamics of gene regulation?”
We believe that these revisions substantially improve the clarity, motivation, and positioning of the manuscript, and directly address the reviewer’s concerns by making both the necessity and the novelty of the study clear from the outset.
(2) I am a bit concerned about the lack of uncertainties incorporated into the results. The authors acknowledge several key limitations of their approach, including the discreteness of the sort-seq bins in determining possible values of regulation strength, the existence of a large number of unsampled sequences in their genotype space, as well as measurement noise in the fluorescence readouts and sequencing. While the authors acknowledge the existence of these factors, I do not see much attempt to actually incorporate the effect of these uncertainties into their conclusions, which I suspect may be important. For example, given the bin size for the fluorescence in sort-seq, how confident are they that every sequence that appears to be a peak is actually a peak? Is it possible that many of the peak sequences have regulation strengths above all their neighbors but within the uncertainty of the fluorescence, making it possible that it's not really a peak? Perhaps such issues would average out and not change the statistical nature of their results, which are not about claiming that specific sequences are peaks, just how many peaks there are. Nevertheless, I think the lack of this robustness analysis makes the results less convincing than they otherwise would be.
We thank the reviewer for raising this important concern. We fully agree that uncertainties arising from experimental resolution, measurement noise in fluorescence and sequencing, and incomplete sampling of genotype space should be incorporated explicitly into the analysis. While these limitations were acknowledged qualitatively in the original manuscript, we recognize that a direct, quantitative assessment of their impact on our conclusions is essential to strengthen the robustness of the study.
We first clarify that regulation strength is not discretized in our analysis. For each TFBS, regulation strength is calculated as a continuous weighted average of fluorescence across all sorting bins, based on the sequencing read-count distribution of each sequence across bins. We clarified this information in the main text (Results, lines 201-203). Nevertheless, finite binning resolution and experimental noise introduce uncertainty in these estimates, which could in principle affect the identification of local peaks.
Importantly, our study does not aim to assert that specific TFBS sequences are definitively peaks. Rather, our focus is on landscape-level statistical and topological properties—such as ruggedness, the abundance and distribution of peaks, and the evolutionary accessibility of strong regulation. We therefore centered our new analyses on testing whether these conclusions are robust to experimentally plausible sources of uncertainty, rather than on the identity of individual peaks.
To address the reviewer’s concern, we performed two complementary analyses. The first evaluates whether the observed ruggedness of the landscapes could arise as an artifact of incomplete sampling. It addressed the effects of missing genotypes and the possibility of spurious peak identification due to unsampled neighbors. Sparse sampling can introduce opposing biases: true peaks may be missed, while other genotypes may be falsely classified as peaks because fitter neighbors are absent. As shown for uncorrelated random (House-of-Cards) landscapes (Kauffman & Levin, 1987), these effects can partially cancel.
In this analysis, we constructed a null model by randomly permuting regulation strengths across the mapped genotype network while preserving its topology. The number of peaks in these randomized landscapes is only modestly higher than in the empirical data, indicating that the measured landscapes are close to the maximal ruggedness compatible with the sampled network (Results, lines 308–320).
In addition, we quantified potential sampling bias by analyzing genotype connectivity. Here we defined the relative connectivity of a genotype as the fraction of possible single-mutant neighbors for which we had measured regulation strength. We observed only a very weak correlation between connectivity and regulation strength (R=-0.1, -0.1, 0.01 for the CRP, Fis, and IHF landscapes, Figures S13-S15). Similarly, the relative connectivity of peak genotypes is only weakly correlated with their regulation strength (R=-0.05, -0.04, 0.06 for the CRP, Fis, and IHF landscapes). (Results, lines 321–330), indicating that strongly regulating genotypes are not preferentially oversampled or undersampled (Results, lines 321–330).
The second, and most important, analysis directly addresses the reviewer’s concern that experimental uncertainty could affect peak classification and, consequently, landscape navigability. We explicitly incorporated experimentally measured, genotype-specific noise estimates from biological replicates when comparing fitness values between neighboring genotypes. Using these uncertainty-aware comparisons, we then recomputed adaptive-walk dynamics and genotype visitation frequencies on the resulting noisy landscapes.
We observe strong correlations between visitation frequencies in the noise-free and noisy landscapes across all three transcription factors (new Supplementary Figure S35), indicating that evolutionary accessibility patterns are robust to realistic levels of experimental uncertainty. These analyses are described in the revised Results (lines 622–636) and in a new Supplementary Methods section (“Incorporation of experimental uncertainty into adaptive walks”).
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
The authors aim to investigate the ability of evolution to create strong transcription factor binding sites (TFBSs) de novo in E. coli. They focus on three global transcriptional regulators: CRP, Fis, and IHF, using a massively parallel reporter assay to evaluate the regulatory effects of over 30,000 TFBS variants. By analyzing the resulting genotype-phenotype landscapes, they explore the ruggedness, accessibility, and evolutionary dynamics of regulatory landscapes, providing insights into the evolutionary feasibility of strong gene regulation. Their experiments show that de novo adaptive evolution of new gene regulation is feasible. It is also subject to a blend of chance, historical contingency, and evolutionary biases that favor some peaks and evolutionary paths.
(1) Strengths of the methods and results:
The authors successfully employed a well-designed sort-seq assay combined with high-throughput sequencing to map regulatory landscapes. The experimental design ensures reliable measurement of regulation strengths. Their system accounts for gene expression noise and normalizes measurements using appropriate controls.
Comprehensive Landscape Mapping:
The study examines ~30,000 TFBS variants per transcription factor, providing statistically robust and thorough maps of the regulatory landscapes for CRP, Fis, and IHF. The landscapes are rigorously analyzed for ruggedness (e.g., number of peaks) and epistasis, revealing parallels with theoretical uncorrelated random landscapes.
Evolutionary Dynamics Simulations:
Through simulations of adaptive walks under varying population dynamics, the authors demonstrate that high peaks in regulatory landscapes are accessible despite ruggedness. They identify key evolutionary phenomena, such as contingency (multiple paths to peaks) and biases toward specific evolutionary outcomes.
Biological Relevance and Novelty:
The author's work is novel in focusing on global regulators, which differ from previously studied local regulators (e.g., TetR). They provide compelling evidence that rugged landscapes are navigable, facilitating de novo evolution of regulatory interactions. The comparison of landscapes for CRP, Fis, and IHF underscores shared topographical features, suggesting general principles of global transcriptional regulation in bacteria.
(2) Weaknesses of the methods and results:
Undersampling of Genotype Space:
While the quality filtering of the data ensures robustness, ~40% of the TFBS space remains uncharacterized. The authors acknowledge this limitation but could improve the analysis by employing subsampling or predictive modeling.
We thank the reviewer for raising this point. We agree that undersampling of genotype space is an important limitation of our dataset and that, in principle, subsampling or predictive modeling approaches could be used to address missing genotypes. We have now clarified in the manuscript why these approaches are not straightforward in the context of our analyses and why we did not pursue them here.
Although approximately 40% of TFBS genotypes were removed during the filtering step due to lack of reliable measurements, this filtering step was necessary to ensure robust estimation of regulation strength from sort-seq data. Importantly, random subsampling of the genotypes in our data set would not alleviate this limitation, because many of our key analyses—such as peak identification, quantification of epistasis, and assessment of evolutionary accessibility—require combinatorially complete local neighborhoods in genotype space. Subsampling would remove mutational neighbors from many neighborhoods, and thus further limit our ability to characterize landscape topology.
Predictive modeling approaches could, in principle, be used to infer missing genotypes and reconstruct more complete landscapes. However, developing, experimentally validating, and benchmarking such models would not only substantially expand the scope of an already long paper, it would also require additional assumptions about genotype–phenotype relationships that entail their own limitations. Our primary goal in this work was to provide the first large-scale empirical in vivo regulatory landscapes for global bacterial transcription factors, comprising tens of thousands of experimentally measured variants. We view these empirical landscapes as a necessary foundation upon which predictive modeling and landscape completion can be built in future, complementary studies.
We have now revised the Discussion (lines 760-770) to explicitly articulate these points and to clarify that, while undersampling remains a limitation, it does not invalidate the landscape-level conclusions we draw from the combinatorially complete neighborhoods present in our data. There we also outline predictive modeling as an important directions for future work.
For a more detailed answer regarding subsampling and peak classification, please also see our response to comment (2) of Reviewer #1.
Simplified Regulatory Architecture:
The study considers a minimal system of a single TFBS upstream of a reporter gene. While this may have been necessary for clarity, this simplification may not reflect the combinatorial complexity of transcriptional regulation in vivo.
Point well taken. We have added paragraph to state explicitly that the system we use to study gene regulation is much simpler than most in vivo regulatory circuits (Discussion, lines 797-802)
Lack of Experimental Validation of Simulations:
The adaptive walks are based on simulated dynamics rather than experimental evolution. Incorporating in vivo experimental evolution studies would strengthen the conclusions. Although this is a large request for the paper, that would not prevent publication.
We thank the reviewer for this important point. We fully agree that in vivo experimental evolution would provide a valuable and complementary way to validate the evolutionary dynamics inferred from our simulations. However, we ask for the reviewer's understanding that adding experimental evolution to an (already long) paper would go far beyond the scope of our study.
Also, the goal of our study was not to reproduce evolutionary trajectories experimentally, but to characterize the structure of large empirical regulatory landscapes, and to use these landscapes as a data-driven basis for exploring evolutionary accessibility under well-defined population-genetic assumptions. The adaptive walks we employ are parameterized directly from experimentally measured genotype–phenotype maps, and incorporate established fixation probabilities. Such walks have been widely used to study evolutionary dynamics on empirical landscapes when experimental evolution is not tractable, because it would involve tens of thousands of genotypes that represent small mutational targets and would thus take a long time to evolve.
An additional issue related to the feasibility of experimental evolution is that performing in vivo experimental evolution for the regulatory landscapes analyzed here would require tracking large populations across a combinatorially vast TFBS space, while simultaneously measuring regulatory phenotypes for thousands of evolving lineages, which is currently not experimentally feasible. This is another reason why simulation-based approaches have been the standard method for linking large-scale empirical landscapes to evolutionary dynamics in both theoretical and experimental studies.
Furthermore, our conclusions are intentionally framed at the level of statistical and landscape-wide properties (e.g., accessibility of high peaks, contingency, and evolutionary bias), rather than at the level of specific mutational trajectories. As such, they do not rely on the precise reproduction of any single evolutionary path, but on aggregate patterns that are robust to reasonable variation in population-genetic parameters.
In sum, we do not view experimental evolution as essential for the conclusions we draw, but as an important and exciting direction for future work that may be enabled by the landscapes we have experimentally mapped.
Impact on the Field:
This study advances our understanding of adaptive landscapes in gene regulation and offers a critical step toward deciphering how global regulators evolve de novo binding sites. The findings provide foundational insights for synthetic biology, evolutionary genetics, and systems biology by highlighting the evolutionary accessibility of strong regulation in bacteria.
Utility of Methods and Dat
The sort-seq approach, combined with landscape analysis, provides a robust framework that can be extended to other transcription factors and systems. If made publicly available, the study's data and code would be valuable for researchers modeling transcriptional regulation or studying evolutionary dynamics.
Additional Context:
The study builds on a growing body of work exploring regulatory evolution. For instance, recent studies on local regulators like TetR and AraC have revealed high ruggedness and epistasis in TFBS landscapes. This study distinguishes itself by focusing on global regulators, which are more biologically complex and influential in bacterial gene networks. The observed evolutionary contingency aligns with findings in other biological systems, such as protein evolution and RNA folding landscapes, underscoring the generality of these evolutionary principles.
Conclusion:
The authors successfully mapped the genotype-phenotype landscapes for three global regulators and simulated evolutionary dynamics to assess the feasibility of strong TFBS evolution. They convincingly demonstrate that ruggedness and epistasis, while prominent, do not preclude the evolution of strong regulation. Their results support the notion that gene regulation evolves through a blend of chance, contingency, and evolutionary biases.
This paper makes a significant contribution to the understanding of regulatory evolution in bacteria. While minor limitations exist, the authors' methods are robust, and their findings are well-supported. The work will likely be of broad interest to researchers in molecular evolution, synthetic biology, and gene regulation.
We thank the reviewer for their thorough evaluation and for their supportive opinion of this paper.
Recommendations for the authors:
Reviewer #1 (Recommendations for the authors):
(1) Line 28 (Abstract): "Landscape ruggedness does not prevent the evolution of strong regulation, because more than 10% of evolving populations can attain one of the highest peaks." I did not find this interpretation very convincing; only 10% of populations being able to achieve strong regulation sounds to me like ruggedness DOES impede adaptation in the vast majority of cases.
We thank the reviewer for this thoughtful comment and agree that our original phrasing in the Abstract overstated this conclusion. We did not intend to imply that landscape ruggedness has only a minor effect on adaptation. On the contrary, our results clearly show that ruggedness strongly constrains evolutionary outcomes and prevents the majority of evolving populations from reaching the globally highest regulatory peaks. We have therefore toned down the wording in both the Abstract and the Discussion (lines 670-679) to reflect this more accurately. For example, in the abstract we now state
“Nonetheless, evolutionary simulations show that ~10% of evolving populations can reach a peak of strong regulation, a proportion that is significantly greater than in comparable random landscapes.”
In the discussion we state:
“… Specifically, our evolutionary simulations show that 10% of populations with a size typical of E. coli reach one of the highest peaks. This percentage is significantly higher than in randomized landscapes (Supplementary Methods 9; Supplementary Figure S30)"
Our intended interpretation was more limited: namely, that ruggedness does not fully preclude the evolution of strong regulation. In highly rugged landscapes with extensive sign epistasis—whose topological properties approach those of uncorrelated random landscapes—the a priori expectation is that access to the strongest peaks could be vanishingly rare or effectively impossible under Darwinian evolution. In this context, observing that a non-negligible fraction of populations (on the order of 10%) can reach one of the highest peaks suggests that strong regulation remains evolutionarily attainable, even though it is far from guaranteed.
Motivated by the reviewer’s suggestion, we also added a null-model analysis that makes this point more explicitly and quantitatively. Specifically, we constructed randomized landscapes by permuting regulation-strength values across genotypes while preserving the experimentally sampled genotype network topology and all parameters of the evolutionary simulations (Supplementary Methods 9, “Randomized landscape null model for peak accessibility”). We then repeated the adaptive-walk simulations on these shuffled landscapes. This null model provides an expectation for peak accessibility in landscapes with identical sampling, neighborhood structure, and evolutionary dynamics, but without genotype–phenotype correlations.
Using this null model, we find that the fraction of populations that reach high peaks in the empirical landscapes is substantially higher than expected by chance alone (new Supplementary Figure S30; Results, lines 504–516). Specifically, across the three transcription factors, empirical landscapes exhibit on average a ~3-fold higher accessibility of high regulatory peaks than shuffled landscapes. This comparison does not weaken the conclusion that ruggedness strongly impedes adaptation; rather, it shows that the structure of the measured genotype–phenotype landscapes enables greater accessibility of strong regulation than would be expected in equally rugged but unstructured landscapes.
In response to the reviewer’s concern, we have revised the abstract and main text to avoid the phrase “does not prevent” and to more accurately convey this balance between constraint and accessibility. We now emphasize that ruggedness strongly constrains adaptation, while still allowing access to strong regulatory peaks at rates that exceed null expectations. (Discussion, lines 512-516). For example, in the discussion we state:
“… In sum, rugged regulatory landscapes strongly constrain evolutionary trajectories, yet do not render the evolution of strong regulation vanishingly rare. Instead, strong regulatory phenotypes remain evolutionarily attainable at levels that exceed null expectations, even though they are reached by only a minority of evolving populations.”
We believe that the revised wording, together with the added null-model analysis more faithfully represents our results and strengthens the quantitative interpretation of accessibility in these landscapes.
(2) Line 123: I found the explanation of the plasmid system and the accompanying SI figures (Figures S1 and S2) confusing in terms of how many plasmids there were. In particular, the Figure S1 graphics show the plasmid specifically with CRP but the text in the graphic and in the caption refers to the plasmid pCAW-Sort-Seq-V2 (which, according to Table S1, isn't that just the base plasmid without any TF?). Figure S2 also shows the plasmid with CRP and does specify pCAW-Sort-Seq-V2-CRP-CRP0 in the graphic, but then the caption refers again only to the base plasmid pCAW-Sort-Seq-V2. I recommend the authors clarify these items for readers who might want to reproduce or build upon their system. In particular, I recommend the main text explain more explicitly that they generate three versions of this plasmid (one for each TF), and then on the backgrounds of each of those three plasmids, a whole library with all the binding site variants.
We thank the reviewer for pointing out this lack of clarity. We agree that the original description of the plasmid system and the accompanying Supplementary Figures S1 and S2 could be confusing with respect to how many plasmids were used and how they differ.
To clarify the experimental design, we start from a common backbone plasmid, pCAW-Sort-Seq-V2, which contains all shared regulatory and reporter elements but does not encode any transcription factor. From this backbone, we generated three distinct TF-specific plasmids, each carrying one of the transcription factors studied here—CRP, Fis, or IHF—resulting in pCAW-Sort-Seq-V2-CRP, pCAW-Sort-Seq-V2-Fis, and pCAW-Sort-Seq-V2-IHF. On the background of each TF-specific plasmid, we then constructed a complete library of plasmids containing all variants of the corresponding TF binding site cloned upstream of the reporter gene.
We have revised the main text to explicitly describe this plasmid hierarchy and library construction strategy and to clarify that three TF-specific plasmids were generated prior to TFBS library construction (Results, Landscape mapping section; lines 159–193). In addition, we have redesigned Supplementary Figures S1 and S2 to facilitate understanding of the plasmid system. Specifically, these figures now clearly distinguish between the base plasmid backbone and the TF-specific plasmid derivatives. Also, the plasmid names shown in the graphics and captions are now consistent with those listed in Supplementary Table S1. Upon final publication, we will also deposit the sequences of all plasmids in Addgene to further facilitate reproducibility.
(3) Line 135: Can the authors clarify whether these TFs are essential in these media conditions and, if not, why? I was expecting them to be so given the core functions of these TFs as described in the Introduction, but then Figure S3 appears to show that all knockouts are viable.
We thank the reviewer for raising this important point and apologize for the lack of clarity in the original version of the manuscript. The transcription factors CRP, Fis, and IHF are not essential for viability under the growth conditions used in this study, but they are important for optimal growth and cellular fitness, consistent with their roles as global regulators.
Under our experimental conditions, single-gene knockout strains (Δcrp, Δfis, and Δihf) are viable but exhibit slower growth dynamics compared to the wild-type strain, reflecting impaired regulation of core cellular processes (Supplementary Figure S3). This behavior is consistent with previous work showing that many global transcriptional regulators in E. coli are conditionally essential or strongly fitness-affecting, rather than absolutely essential under standard laboratory conditions.
Importantly, while single knockouts remain viable, double mutants involving these global regulators are not viable, indicating substantial functional redundancy and network-level essentiality among global transcription factors. This explains why each TF can be studied individually in isolation, while combinations of deletions cannot be maintained.
We have now clarified this point in the Results section by explicitly stating that the knockout strains show reduced growth rates but reach comparable cell densities during late exponential or early stationary phase, the growth phase at which all measurements were performed (Results, Landscape mapping section; lines 185–193). This clarification reconciles the apparent discrepancy between the biological importance of these transcription factors discussed in the Introduction and the viability of the single-knockout strains shown in Supplementary Figure S3.
(4) Lines 141 and 227: The authors appear to refer to two different citations for different versions of RegulonDB (refs. 47 and 66). Did they actually use both versions for different purposes (if so, why?), or is this a typo?
We thank the reviewer for noticing this inconsistency. We did not use two different versions of RegulonDB. The two separate references were an error. We have now corrected this by using a single, consistent RegulonDB citation in both locations.
(5) Line 166 (Figure 1 caption): I think 2^8 here should be 4^8.
Thank you. We have corrected “2<sup>8</sup>” to “4<sup>8</sup>” in the Figure 1 caption.
(6) Figure 2Are the distributions in Figure 2a (regulation strengths across all TFBSs in the libraries) equivalent to the distributions in Figures S4-S6 (direct fluorescence readout from cell sorting), just transformed from fluorescence to regulation strength? If so I think that would be helpful to clarify, perhaps in the captions to Figures S4-S6 so that it's clear these contain the same information.
No. Figures S4–S6 and Figure 2a do not show the same distributions. Figures S4–S6 display the raw fluorescence distributions obtained from cell sorting, whereas Figure 2a shows regulation strengths (S), which are derived quantities computed from these fluorescence data. Specifically, regulation strength is calculated as a weighted average over fluorescence bins using the sequencing read distribution for each TFBS (see Methods, “Regulation strengths”).
To clarify this relationship, we have revised the main text (lines 201-203 and Figure 1b-c), to explicitly state how regulation strengths (S) were calculated.
(7) Figure 2b: Can the authors label each logo/frequency matrix with its corresponding TF name in the graphic itself? I think this is only implied in the caption.
We have updated Figure 2b to label each sequence logo / frequency matrix directly in the graphic with its corresponding transcription factor name (CRP, Fis, or IHF), in addition to mentioning these names in the caption. This change clarifies the figure and makes the TF identity immediately apparent to the reader.
(8) Lines 290 and 298 (Figure 2 caption): The labels for panels b and c appear to be swapped in the caption.
We thank the reviewer for pointing this out. The labels for panels b and c in the Figure 2 caption were indeed swapped. This has now been corrected.
(9) Line 379: There is a missing period at the end of this line.
We have added the missing period at the end of this line.
(10) Line 400 (Figure 3 caption): There is a missing subtitle for panel c in the caption for this figure (all other panels seem to have bolded subtitles in their captions).
We have added the missing subtitle for panel c in the Figure 3 caption to match the formatting of the other panels.
(11) Line 583: There is a missing period after "Methods 7.5)".
We have added the missing period after “Methods 7.5)”.
(12) Line 641: "All three landscapes highly rugged" should probably be "All three landscapes are highly rugged".
We have corrected the sentence to read “All three landscapes are highly rugged.”
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