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  1. May 2025
    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Batra, Cabrera and Spence et al. present a model which integrates histone posttranslational modification (PTM) data across cell models to predict gene expression with the goal of using this model to better understand epigenetic editing. This gene expression prediction model approach is useful if a) it predicts gene expression in specific cell lines b) it predicts expression values rather than a rank or bin, c) if it helps us to better understand the biology of gene expression or d) it helps us to understand epigenome editing activity. Problematically for points a) and b) it is easier to directly measure gene expression than to measure multiple PTMs and so the real usefulness of this approach mostly relates to c) and d).

      Other approaches have been published that use histone PTM to predict expression (e.g. PMID 27587684, 36588793). Is this model better in some way? No comparisons are made, although a claim is made that direct comparisons are difficult. I appreciate that the authors have not used the histone PTM data to predict gene expression levels of an "average cell" but rather that they are predicting expression within specific cell types or for unseen cell types. Approaches that predict expression levels are much more useful, whereas some previous approaches have only predicted expressed or not expressed or a rank order or bin-based ranking. The paper does not seem to have substantial novel insights into understanding the biology of gene expression.

      The approach of using this model to predict epigenetic editor activity on transcription is interesting and to my knowledge novel although only examined in the context of a p300 editor. As the author point out the interpretation of the epigenetic editing data is convoluted by things like sgRNA activity scoring and to fully understand the results likely would require histone PTM profiling and maybe dCas9 ChIP-seq for each sgRNA which would be a substantial amount of work.

      Furthermore from the model evaluation of H3K9me3 is seems the model is performing modestly for other forms of epigenetic or transcriptional editing- e.g. we know for the best studied transcriptional editor which is CRISPRi (dCas9-KRAB) that recruitment to a locus is associated with robust gene repression across the genome and is associated with H3K9me3 deposition by recruitment of KAP1/HP1/SETDB1 (PMID: 35688146, 31980609, 27980086, 26501517).

      One concern overall with this approach is that dCas9-p300 has been observed to induce sgRNA independent off target H3K27Ac (https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC8349887/ see Figure S5D) which could convolute interpretation of this type of experiment for the model.

      Comments on revisions: This resubmission adds a comparison to existing gene prediction methods, but add no new confirmation experiments with predicting epigenome editing efficiency and had only one minor text edit.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In the present study, the authors examined the possibility of using phosphatidyl-inositol kinase 3-kinase alpha (PI3Ka) inhibitors for heterotopic ossification in fibrodysplasia ossificans progressiva. Administration of BYL719, a chemical inhibitor of PI3Ka, prevented heterotopic ossification in a mouse model of FOP that expressed a mutated ACVR1 receptor. Genetic ablation of PI3Ka also suppressed heterotopic ossification in mice. BYL719 blocked osteo/chondroprogenitor specification and reduced inflammatory responses by reducing the number of fibro-adipogenic progenitors (FAPs) and promoting muscle fibre regeneration in vivo. The authors claimed that inhibition of PI3Ka is a safe and effective therapeutic strategy for heterotopic ossification.

      Strengths:

      Taking together previous reports on the specificity of BY718 in PI3K, it was suggested that BYL719 inhibits heterotopic ossification by reducing FAPs and promoting muscle regeneration through the PI3K pathway in vivo.

      Weaknesses:

      In the original manuscript, there was the possibility that BYL719 inhibited heterotopic ossification through non-specific and toxic effects rather than the PI3k pathway.

      However, the authors added new data and explanations in the revision to solve the possibility. The findings of the authors would be useful and would provide an additional direction to develop a therapeutic strategy for heterotopic ossification.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In a previous work Prut and colleagues had shown that during reaching, high frequency stimulation of the cerebellar outputs resulted in reduced reach velocity. Moreover, they showed that the stimulation produced reaches that deviated from a straight line, with the shoulder and elbow movements becoming less coordinated. In this report they extend their previous work by addition of modeling results that investigate the relationship between the kinematic changes and torques produced at the joints. The results show that the slowing is not due to reductions in interaction torques alone, as the reductions in velocity occur even for movements that are single joint. More interestingly, the experiment revealed evidence for decomposition of the reaching movement, as well as an increase in the variance of the trajectory.

      Strengths:

      This is a rare experiment in a non-human primate that assessed the importance of cerebellar input to the motor cortex during reaching.

      Weaknesses:

      None

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study characterized the dependence of spike timing-dependent long-term depression (tLTD) on presynaptic NMDA receptors and the intracellular cascade after NMDAR activation possibly involved in the observed decrease in glutamate probability release at L5-L5 synapses of the visual cortex in mouse brain slices.

      Strengths:

      The genetic and electrophysiological experiments are thorough. The experiments are well reported and mainly support the conclusions. This study confirms and extends current knowledge by elucidating additional plasticity mechanisms at cortical synapses, complementing existing literature.

      Weaknesses:

      No direct testing for ions passing trough standard NMDAR, mainly sodium and calcium is shown.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The paper by Graff et al. investigates the function of foxf2 in zebrafish to understand the progression of cerebral small vessel disease. The authors use a partial loss of foxf2 (zebrafish possess two foxf2 genes, foxf2a and foxf2b, and the authors mainly analyze homozygous mutants in foxf2a) to investigate the role of foxf2 signaling in regulating pericyte biology. They find that the number of pericytes is reduced in foxf2a mutants and that the remaining pericytes display alterations in their morphologies. The authors further find that mutant animals can develop to adulthood, but that in adult animals, both endothelial and pericyte morphologies are affected. They also show that mutant pericytes can partially repopulate the brain after genetic ablation.

      Strengths:

      The paper is well written and easy to follow.

      Weaknesses:

      The results are mainly descriptive, and it is not clear how they will advance the field at their current state, given that a publication on mice has already examined the loss of foxf2 phenotype on pericyte biology (Reyahi, 2015, Dev. Cell).

      (1) Reyahi et al. showed that loss of foxf2 in mice leads to a marked downregulation of pdgfrb expression in perivascular cells. In contrast to expectation, perivascular cell numbers were higher in mutant animals, but these cells did not differentiate properly. The authors use a transgenic driver line expressing gal4 under the control of the pdgfrb promoter and observe a reduction in pericyte (pdgfrb-expressing) cells in foxf2a mutants. In light of the mouse data, this result might be due to a similar downregulation of pdgfrb expression in fish, which would lead to a downregulation of gal4 expression and hence reduced labelling of pericytes. The authors show a reduction of pdgfrb expression also in zebrafish in foxf2b mutants (Chauhan et al., The Lancet Neurology 2016). It would be important to clarify whether, also in zebrafish, foxf2a/foxf2b mutants have reduced or augmented numbers of perivascular cells and how this compares to the data in the mouse. The authors should perform additional characterization of perivascular cells using marker gene expression (for a list of markers, see e.g., Shih et al. Development 2021) and/or genetic lineage tracing.

      (2) The authors motivate using foxf2a mutants as a model of reduced foxf2 dosage, "similar to human heterozygous loss of FOXF2". However, it is not clear how the different foxf2 genes in zebrafish interact with each other transcriptionally. Is there upregulation of foxf2b in foxf2a mutants and vice versa? This is important to consider, as Reyahi et al. showed that foxf2 gene dosage in mice appears to be important, with an increase in foxf2 gene dosage (through transgene expression) leading to a reduction in perivascular cell numbers.

      (3) Figures 3 and 4 lack data quantification. The authors describe the existence of vascular defects in adult fish, but no quantifiable parameters or quantifications are provided. This needs to be added.

      (4) The analysis of pericyte phenotypes and morphologies is not clear. On page 6, the authors state: "In the wildtype brain, adult pericytes have a clear oblong cell body with long, slender primary processes that extend from the cytoplasm with secondary processes that wrap around the circumference of the blood vessel." Further down on the same page, the authors note: "In wildtype adult brains, we identified three subtypes of pericytes, ensheathing, mesh and thin-strand, previously characterized in murine models." In conclusion, not all pericytes have long, slender primary processes, but there are at least three different sub-types? Did the authors analyze how they might be distributed along different branch orders of the vasculature, as they are in the mouse? Which type of pericyte is affected in foxf2a mutant animals? Can the authors identify the branch order of the vasculature for both wildtype and mutant animals and compare which subtype of pericyte might be most affected? Are all subtypes of pericytes similarly affected in mutant animals? There also seems to be a reduction in smooth muscle cell coverage.

      (5) Regarding pericyte regeneration data (Figure 7): Are the values in Figure 7D not significantly different from each other (no significance given)?

      (6) In the discussion, the authors state that "pericyte processes have not been studied in zebrafish". Ando et al. (Development 2016) studied pericyte processes in early zebrafish embryos, and Leonard et al. (Development 2022) studied zebrafish pericytes and their processes in the developing fin.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this manuscript, Pagano and colleagues test the idea that the protein GMCL1 functions as a substrate receptor for a Cullin RING 3 E3 ubiquitin ligase (CUL3) complex. Using a pulldown approach, they identify GMCL1 binding proteins, including the DNA damage scaffolding protein 53BP1. They then focus on the idea that GMCL1 recruits 53BP1 for CUL3-dependent ubiquitination, triggering subsequent proteasomal degradation of ubiquitinated 53BP1.

      In addition to its DNA damage signalling function, in mitosis, 53BP1 is reported to form a stopwatch complex with the deubiquitinating enzyme USP28 and the transcription factor p53 (PMID: 38547292). These 53BP1-stopwatch complexes generated in mitosis are inherited by G1 daughter cells and help promote p53-dependent cell cycle arrest independent from DNA damage (PMID: 38547292). Several studies show that knockout of 53BP1 overcomes G1 cell cycle arrest after mitotic delays caused by anti-mitotic drugs or centrosome ablation (PMID: 27432897, 27432896). In this model, it is crucial that 53BP1 remains stable in mitosis and more stopwatch complex is formed after delayed mitosis.

      Pagano and coworkers suggest that 53BP1 levels can sometimes be suppressed in mitosis if the cells overexpress GMCL1. They carry out a bioinformatic analysis of available public data for p53 wild-type cancer cell lines resistant to the anti-mitotic drug paclitaxel and related compounds. Stratifying GMCL1 into low and high expression groups reveals a weak (p = 0.05 or ns) correlation with sensitivity to taxanes. It is unclear on what basis the authors claim paclitaxel-resistant and p53 wild-type cancer cell lines bypass the mitotic surveillance/timer pathway. They have not tested this. Figure 3 is a correlation assembled from public databases but has no experimental tests. Figure 4 looks at proliferation but not cell cycle progression or the length of mitosis. The main conclusions relating to cell cycle progression and specifically the link to mitotic delays are therefore not supported by experimental data. There is no imaging of the cell cycle or cell fate after mitotic delays, or analysis of where the cells arrest in the cell cycle. Most of the cell lines used have been reported to lack a functional mitotic surveillance pathway in the recent work by Meitinger. To support these conclusions, the stability of endogenous 53BP1 under different conditions in cells known to have a functional mitotic surveillance pathway needs to be examined. A key suggestion in the work is that the level of GMCL1 expression correlates with resistance to taxanes. For the mitotic surveillance pathway, the type of drug (nocodazole, taxol, etc) used to induce a delay isn't thought to be relevant, only the length of the delay. Do GMCL1-overexpressing cells show resistance to anti-mitotics in general?

      Importantly, if GMCL1 specifically degrades 53BP1 during prolonged mitotic arrests, the authors should show what happens during normal cell divisions without any delays or drug treatments. How much 53BP1 is destroyed in mitosis under those conditions? Does 53BP1 destruction depend on the length of mitosis, drug treatment, or does 53BP1 get degraded every mitosis regardless of length? Testing the contribution of key mitotic E3 ligase activities on mitotic 53BP1 stability, such as the anaphase-promoting complex/cyclosome (APC/C) is important in this regard. One previous study reported an analysis of putative APC/C KEN-box degron motifs in 53BP1 and concluded these play a role in 53BP1 stability in anaphase (PMID: 28228263).

      There is no direct test of the proposed mechanism, and it is therefore unclear if 53BP1 is ubiquitinated by a GMCL1-CUL3 ligase in cells, and how efficient this process would be at different cell cycle stages. A key issue is the lack of experimental data explaining why the proposed mechanism would be restricted to mitosis. Indirect effects, such as loss of 53BP1 from the chromatin fraction during M phase upon GMCL1 overexpression, do not necessarily mean that 53BP1 is degraded. PLK1-dependent chromatin-cytoplasmic shuttling of 53BP1 during mitotic delays has been described previously (PMID: 38547292, 37888778). These papers are cited in the text, but the main conclusions of those papers on 53BP1 incorporation into a stopwatch complex during mitotic delays have been ignored. Are the authors sure that 53BP1 is destroyed in mitosis and not simply re-localised between chromatin and non-chromatin fractions? At the very least, these reported findings should be discussed in the text.

      The authors use a variety of cancer cell line models throughout their study, most of which have been reported to lack a functional mitotic surveillance pathway. U2OS and HCT116 cells do not respond normally to mitotic delays, despite being annotated as p53 WT. Other studies have used p53 wild-type hTERT RPE-1 cells to study the mitotic surveillance pathway. If the model is correct, then over-expressing GMCL1 in hTERT-RPE1 cells should suppress cell cycle arrest after mitotic delays, and GMCL1 KO should make the cells more sensitive to delays. These experiments are needed to provide an adequate test of the proposed model.

      To conclude, while the authors propose a potentially interesting model on how GMCL1 overexpression could regulate 53BP1 stability to limit p53-dependent cell cycle arrest, it is unclear what triggers this pathway or when it is relevant. 53BP1 is known to function in DNA damage signalling, and GMCL1 might be relevant in that context. The manuscript contains the initial description of GMCL1-53BP1 interaction but lacks a proper analysis of the function of this interaction and is therefore a preliminary report.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Strengths:

      Sarpaning et al. provide a thorough characterization of putative Rnt1 cleavage of mRNA in S. cerevisiae. Previous studies have discovered Rnt1 mRNA substrates anecdotally, and this global characterization expands the known collection of putative Rnt1 cleavage sites. The study is comprehensive, with several types of controls to show that Rnt1 is required for several of these cleavages.

      Weaknesses:

      Formally speaking, the authors do not show a direct role of Rnt1 in mRNA cleavage - no studies were done (e.g., CLIP-seq or similar) to define direct binding sites. Is the mutant Rnt1 expected to trap substrates? Without direct binding studies, the authors rely on genetics and structure predictions for their argument, and it remains possible that a subset of these sites is an indirect consequence of rnt1. This aspect should be addressed in the discussion.

      The comprehensive list of putative Rnt1 mRNA cleavage sites is interesting insofar as it expands the repertoire of Rnt1 on mRNAs, but the functional relevance of the majority of these sites remains unknown. Along these lines, the authors should present a more thorough characterization of putative Rnt1 sites recovered from in vitro Rnt1 cleavage.

      The authors need to corroborate the rRNA 3'-ETS tetraloop mutations with a northern analysis of 3'-ETS processing to confirm an ETS processing defect (which might need to be done in decay mutants to stabilize the liberated ETS fragment). They state that the tetraloop mutation does not yield a growth defect and use this as the basis for concluding that rRNA cleavage is not the major role of Rnt1 in vivo, which is a surprising finding. But it remains possible that tetraloop mutations did not have the expected disruptive effect in vivo; if the ETS is processed normally in the presence of tetraloop mutations, it would undermine this interpretation. This needs to be more carefully examined.

      To support the assertion that YDR514C cleavage is required for normal "homeostasis," and more specifically that it is the major contributor to the rnt1∆ growth defect, the authors should express the YDR514C-G220S mutant in the rDNA∆ strains with mutations in the 3'-ETS (assuming they disrupt ETS processing, see above). This simple experiment should provide a relative sense of "importance" for one or the other cleavage being responsible for the rnt1∆ defect. Given the accepted role of Rnt1 cleavage in rRNA processing and a dogmatic view that this is the reason for the rnt1∆ growth defect, such a result would be surprising and elevate the functional relevance and significance of Rnt1 mRNA cleavage.

      Given that some Rnt1 mRNA cleavage is likely nuclear, it is possible that some of these targets are nascent mRNA transcripts, as opposed to mature but unexported mRNA transcripts, as proposed in the manuscript. A role for Rnt1 in co-transcriptional mRNA cleavage would be conceptually similar to Rnt1 cleavage of the rRNA 3'-ETS to enable RNA Pol I "torpedo" termination by Rat1, described by Proudfoot et al (PMID 20972219). To further delineate this point, the authors could e.g., examine the poly-A tails on abundant Rnt1 targets to establish whether they are mature, polyadenylated mRNAs (e.g., northern analysis of oligo-dT purified material). A more direct test would be PARE analysis of oligo-dT enriched or depleted material to determine the poly-A status of the cleavage products. Alternatively, their association with chromatin could be examined.

      While laboratory strains of budding yeast have a single RNase III ortholog Rnt1, several other budding yeast have a functional RNAi system with Dcr and Ago (PMID 19745116), and laboratory yeast strains are a derived state due to pressure from the killer virus to lose the RNAi system (PMID 21921191). The current study could provide new insight into the relative substrate preferences of Rnt1 and budding yeast Dicer, which could be experimentally confirmed by expressing Dcr in RNT1 and rnt1∆ strains. In lieu of experiments, discussion of the relevance of Rnt1 cleavage compared to yeast RNAi should be included in the discussion before the "human implications" section.

      For SNR84 in Figure S3D, it appears that the TSS may be upstream of the annotated gene model. Does RNA-seq coverage (from external datasets) extend upstream to these additional mapped cleavages? The assertion that the mRNA is uncapped is concerning; an alternative explanation is that the nascent mRNA has a cap initially but is subsequently cleaved by Rnt1. This point should be clarified or reworded for accuracy.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Genome-wide association studies have been an important approach to identifying the genetic basis of human traits and diseases. Despite their successes, for many traits, a substantial amount of variation cannot be explained by genetic factors, indicating that environmental variation and individual 'noise' (stochastic differences as well as unaccounted for environmental variation) also play important roles. The authors' goal was to address whether gene expression variation in genetically identical individuals, driven by historical environmental differences and 'noise', could be used to predict reproductive trait differences.

      Strengths:

      To address this question, the authors took advantage of genetically identical C. elegans individuals to transcriptionally profile 180 adult hermaphrodite individuals that were also measured for two reproductive traits. A major strength of the paper is its experimental design. While experimenters aim to control the environment that each worm experiences, it is known that there are small differences that each worm experiences even when they are grown together on the same agar plate - e.g. the age of their mother, their temperature, the amount of food they eat, and the oxygen and carbon dioxide levels depending on where they roam on the plate. Instead of neglecting this unknown variation, the authors design the experiment up front to create two differences in the historical environment experienced by each worm: 1) the age of its mother and 2) 8 8-hour temperature difference, either 20 or 25 {degree sign}C. This helped the authors interpret the gene expression differences and trait expression differences that they observed.

      Using two statistical models, the authors measured the association of gene expression for 8824 genes with the two reproductive traits, considering both the level of expression and the historical environment experienced by each worm. Their data supports several conclusions. They convincingly show that gene expression differences are useful for predicting reproductive trait differences, predicting ~25-50% of the trait differences depending on the trait. Using RNAi, they also show that the genes they identify play a causal role in trait differences. Finally, they demonstrate an association with trait variation and the H3K27 trimethylation mark, suggesting that chromatin structure can be an important causal determinant of gene expression and trait variation.

      Overall, this work supports the use of gene expression data as an important intermediate for understanding complex traits. This approach is also useful as a starting point for other labs in studying their trait of interest.

      Weaknesses:

      There are no major weaknesses that I have noted. Some important limitations of the work (that I believe the authors would agree with) are worth highlighting, however:

      (1) A large remaining question in the field of complex traits remains in splitting the role of non-genetic factors between environmental variation and stochastic noise. It is still an open question which role each of these factors plays in controlling the gene expression differences they measured between the individual worms.

      (2) The ability of the authors to use gene expression to predict trait variation was strikingly different between the two traits they measured. For the early brood trait, 448 genes were statistically linked to the trait difference, while for egg-laying onset, only 11 genes were found. Similarly, the total R2 in the test set was ~50% vs. 25%. It is unclear why the differences occur, but this somewhat limits the generalizability of this approach to other traits.

      (3) For technical reasons, this approach was limited to whole worm transcription. The role of tissue and cell-type expression differences is important to the field, so this limitation is important.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Even though mutations in LRRK2 and GBA1 (which encodes the protein GCase) increase the risk of developing Parkinson's disease (PD), the specific mechanisms driving neurodegeneration remain unclear. Given their known roles in lysosomal function, the authors investigate how LRRK2 and GCase activity influence the exocytosis of the lysosomal lipid BMP via extracellular vesicles (EVs). They use fibroblasts carrying the PD-associated LRRK2-R1441G mutation and pharmacologically modulate LRRK2 and GCase activity.

      Strengths:

      The authors examine both proteins at endogenous levels, using MEFs instead of cancer cells. The study's scope is potentially interesting and could yield relevant insights into PD disease mechanisms.

      Weaknesses:

      Many of the authors' conclusions are overstated and not sufficiently supported by the data. Several statistical errors undermine their claims. Pharmacological treatment is very long, leading to potential off-target effects. Additionally, the authors should be more rigorous when using EV markers.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper seeks to understand the upstream regulation and downstream effectors of glycolysis in retinal progenitor cells, using mouse retinal explants as the main model system. The paper presents evidence that high glycolysis in retinal progenitor cells is required for their proliferation and timely differentiation into photoreceptors. Retinal glycolysis increases after deletion of Pten. The authors suggest that high glycolysis controls cell proliferation and differentiation by promoting intracellular alkalinization, beta-catenin acetylation and stabilization and consequent activation of the canonical Wnt pathway.

      Strengths:

      - The experiments showing that PFKFB3 overexpression is sufficient to increase proliferation of retinal progenitors (which are already highly dividing cells) and photoreceptor differentiation are striking and the result unanticipated. It suggests that glycolytic flux is normally limiting for proliferation in embryos.<br /> - Likewise the result that an increase in pH from 7.4 to 8.0 is sufficient to increase proliferation implies that pH regulation may have instructive roles in setting the tempo of retinal development and embryonic cell proliferation. Similarly for the results showing that acetate supplementation increases proliferation (I think this result should be moved to the main figures).

      Weaknesses:

      - Epistatic experiments to test if changes in pH mediate the effects of glycolysis on photoreceptor differentiation, or if Wnt activation is the main downstream effector of glycolysis in controlling differentiation are not presented.<br /> - It is likely that metabolism changes ex vivo vs in vivo, and therefore stable isotope tracing experiments in the explants may not reflect in vivo metabolism.<br /> - The retina at P0 is composed of both progenitors and differentiated cells. It is not clear if the results of the RNA-seq and metabolic analysis reflect changes in the metabolism of progenitors, or of mature cells, or changes in cell type composition rather than direct metabolic changes in a specific cell type.<br /> - The biochemical links between elevated glycolysis and pH and beta-catenin stability are unclear. White et al found that higher pH decreased beta-catenin stability (JCB 217: 3965) in contrast to the results here. Oginuma et al found that inhibition of glycolysis or beta-catenin acetylation does not affect beta-catenin stability (Nature 584:98), again in contrast to these results. Another paper showed that acidification inhibits Wnt signaling by promoting the expression of a transcriptional repressor and not via beta-catenin stability (Cell Discovery 4:37). There are also additional papers showing increased pH can promote cell proliferation via other mechanisms (e.g. Nat Metab 2:1212). It is possible that there is organ-specificity in these signaling pathways however some clarification of these divergent results is warranted.<br /> - The gene expression analysis is not completely convincing. E.g. expression of additional glycolytic genes should be shown in Fig. 1. It is not clear why Hk1 and Pgk1 are specifically shown, and conclusions about changes in glycolysis are difficult to draw from expression of these two genes. The increase in glycolytic gene expression in the Pten-deficient retina is generally small.<br /> - Is it possible that glycolytic inhibition with 2DG slows down development and production of most new differentiated cells rather than specifically affecting photoreceptor differentiation?<br /> - Are the prematurely-born cells caused by PFKFB3 overexpression photoreceptors as assessed by morphology or markers (in addition to position)?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The paper describes the cryoEM structure of RAD51 filament on the recombination intermediate. In the RAD51 filament, the insertion of a DNA-binding loop called the L2 loop stabilizes the separation of the complementary strand for the base-pairing with an incoming ssDNA and the non-complementary strand, which is captured by the second DNA-binding channel called the site II. The molecular structure of the RAD51 filament with a recombination intermediate provides a new insight into the mechanism of homology search and strand exchange between ssDNA and dsDNA.

      Strengths:

      This is the first human RAD51 filament structure with a recombination intermediate called the D-loop. The work has been done with great care, and the results shown in the paper are compelling based on cryo-EM and biochemical analyses. The paper is really nice and important for researchers in the field of homologous recombination, which gives a new view on the molecular mechanism of RAD51-mediated homology search and strand exchange.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors need more careful text writing. Without page and line numbers, it is hard to give comments.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work contributes several important and interesting observations regarding the heterotolerance of non-growing Escherichia coli and Pseudomonas aeruginosa to the antimicrobial peptide tachyplesin. The primary mechanism of action of tachyplesin is thought to be disruption of the bacterial cell envelope, leading to leakage of cellular contents after a threshold level of accumulation. Although the MIC for tachyplesin in exponentially growing E. coli is just 1 ug/ml, the authors observe that a substantial fraction of a stationary phase population of bacteria survives much higher concentrations, up to 64 ug/ml. By using a fluorescently labelled analogue of tachyplesin, the authors show that the amount of per-cell intracellular accumulation of tachyplesin displays a bimodal distribution, and that the fraction of "low accumulators" correlates with the fraction of survivors. Using a microfluidic device, they show that low accumulators exclude propidium iodide, suggesting that their cell envelopes remain largely intact, while high accumulators of tachyplesin also stain with propidium iodide. They show that this phenomenon holds for several clinical isolates of E. coli with different genetic determinants of antibiotic resistance, and for a strain of Pseudomonas aeruginosa. However, the bimodal distribution does not occur in these organisms for several other antimicrobial peptides, or for tachyplesin in Klebsiella pneumoniae or Staphylococcus aureus, indicating some degree of specificity in the interaction between AMP and bacterial cell envelope. They next explore the dynamics of the fluorescent tachyplesin accumulation and show interestingly that a high degree of accumulation is initially seen in all cells, but that the "low accumulator" subpopulation manages to decrease the amount of intracellular fluorescence over time, while the "high accumulator"subpopulation continues to increase its intracellular fluorescence. Focusing on increased efflux as a hypothesised mechanism for the "low accumulator" phenotype, based on transcriptomic analysis of the two subpopulations, the authors screen putative efflux inhibitors to see if they can block the formation of the low accumulator subpopulation. They find that both the protonophore CCCP and the SSRI sertraline can block the formation of this subpopulation and that a combination of sertraline plus tachyplesin kills a greater fraction of the stationary phase cells than either agent alone, similar to the killing observed when growing cells are treated with tachyplesin.

      Strengths:

      This study provides new insight into the heterogeneous behaviours of non-growing bacteria when exposed to an antimicrobial peptide, and into the dynamics of their response. The single-cell analysis by FACS and microscopy is compelling. The results provide a much-needed single cell perspective on the phenomenon of tolerance to AMPs and a good starting point for further exploration.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors have substantially improved the clarity of the manuscript and have added additional experiments to probe further the location of the AMP relative to low and high accumulators, and the physiological states of these sub-populations. These experiments strengthen the assertion that low accumulators keep the AMP at the cell surface while high accumulators permit intracellular access to the AMP.

      However, many questions still remain about the physiological characterisation of the "low accumulator" cells. While the evidence presented does support an induced response that removes the AMP from the interior of the cell, no clear mechanism for this is favoured by the experiments presented.

      A double deletion of acrA and tolC (two out of the three components of the major constitutive RND efflux pump) reduces the appearance of the low accumulator phenotype, but interestingly, the single deletions have no effect, and a well-characterised inhibitor of RND efflux pumps also has no effect. The authors identify a two-component system, qseCB, that appears necessary for the appearance of low accumulators, but this system has pleiotropic effects on many cellular systems, with only tenuous connections to efflux. The selected pharmacological agents that could prevent the appearance of low accumulators do not offer clear insight into the mechanism by which low accumulators arise, because they have diverse modes of action.

      The transcriptomics data collected for low and high accumulator sub-populations are interesting, but in my opinion, the conclusions that can be drawn from these data remain overstated. It is not possible to make any claims about the total amount of "protein synthesis, energy production, and gene expression" on the basis of RNA-Seq data. The reads from each sample are normalised, so there is no information about the total amount of transcript. Many elements of total cellular activity are post-transcriptionally regulated, so it is impossible to assess from transcriptomics alone. Finally, the transcriptomic data are analysed in aggregated clusters of genes that are enriched for biological processes, for example: "Cluster 2 included processes involved in protein synthesis, energy production, and gene expression that were downregulated to a greater extent in low accumulators than high accumulators". However, this obscures the fact that these clusters include genes that are generally inhibitory of the process named, as well as genes that facilitate the process.

      The authors have added an experiment to attempt to assess overall metabolic activity in the low accumulator and high accumulator populations, which is a welcome addition. They apply the redox dye resazurin and observe lower resorufin (reduced form) fluorescence in the low accumulator population, which they take to indicate a lower respiration rate. This seems possible, however, an important caveat is that they have shown the low accumulator population to retain substantially lower amounts of multiple different fluorescent molecules (tachyplesin-NBD, propidium iodide, ethidium bromide) intracellularly compared to the high accumulator population. It seems possible that the low accumulator population is also capable of removing resazurin or resorufin from the intracellular space, regardless of metabolic rate. Indeed, it has previously been shown that efflux by RND efflux pumps influences resazurin reduction to resorufin in both P. aeruginosa and E. coli. By measuring only the retained redox dye using flow cytometry, the results may be confounded by the demonstrated ability of the low accumulator population to remove various fluorescent dyes. More work is needed to strongly support broad conclusions about the physiological states of the low and high accumulator populations.

      The phenomenon of the emergence of low accumulators, which are phenotypically tolerant to the antimicrobial peptide tachyplesin, is interesting and important even if there is still work to be done to understand the mechanism by which it occurs.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is a very well-written paper presenting interesting findings related to the recovery following the end-Permian event in continental settings, from N China. The finding is timely as the topic is actively discussed in the scientific community. The data provides additional insights into the faunal, and partly, floral global recovery following the EPE, adding to the global picture.

      Strengths:

      The conclusions are supported by an impressive amount of sedimentological and paleontological data (mainly trace fossils) and illustrations.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors found that IL-1b signaling is pivotal for hypoxemia development and can modulate NETs formation in LPS+HVV ALI model.

      Strengths:

      They used IL1R1 ko mice and proved that IL1R1 is involved in ALI model proving that IL1b signalling leads towards ARDS. In addition, hypothermia reduces this effect, suggesting a therapeutic option.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have addressed this Reviewer's concerns. The manuscript is much stronger in the current form and can be published.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript presents a significant and rigorous investigation into the role of CHMP5 in regulating bone formation and cellular senescence. The study provides compelling evidence that CHMP5 is essential for maintaining endolysosomal function and controlling mitochondrial ROS levels, thereby preventing the senescence of skeletal progenitor cells.

      Strengths:

      The authors demonstrate that the deletion of Chmp5 results in endolysosomal dysfunction, elevated mitochondrial ROS, and ultimately enhanced bone formation through both autonomous and paracrine mechanisms. The innovative use of senolytic drugs to ameliorate musculoskeletal abnormalities in Chmp5-deficient mice is a novel and critical finding, suggesting potential therapeutic strategies for musculoskeletal disorders linked to endolysosomal dysfunction.

      Comments on the latest version:

      My concerns were addressed.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Ferreiro et al. present a method to simulate protein sequence evolution under a birth-death model where sequence evolution is constrained by structural constraints on protein stability. The authors then use this model to explore the predictability of sequence evolution in several viral structural proteins. In principle, this work is of great interest to molecular evolution and phylodynamics, which have struggled to couple non-neutral models of sequence evolution to phylodynamic models like birth-death. Unfortunately, though, the model shows little improvement over neutral models in predicting protein evolution, and this ultimately appears to be due to fundamental conceptual problems with how fitness is modeled and linked to the phylodynamic birth-death model.

      Major concerns:

      (1) Fitness model: All lineages have the same growth rate r = b-d because the authors assume b+d=1. But under a birth-death model, the growth r is equivalent to fitness, so this is essentially assuming all lineages have the same absolute fitness since increases in reproductive fitness (b) will simply trade off with decreases in survival (d). Thus, even if the SCS model constrains sequence evolution, the birth-death model does not really allow for non-neutral evolution such that mutations can feed back and alter the structure of the phylogeny.

      (2) Predictive performance: Similar performance in predicting amino acid frequencies is observed under both the SCS model and the neutral model. I suspect that this rather disappointing result owes to the fact that the absolute fitness of different viral variants could not actually change during the simulations (see comment #1).

      (3) Model assessment: It would be interesting to know how much the predictions were informed by the structurally constrained sequence evolution model versus the birth-death model. To explore this, the authors could consider three different models: 1) neutral, 2) SCS, and 3) SCS + BD. Simulations under the SCS model could be performed by simulating molecular evolution along just one hypothetical lineage. Seeing if the SCS + BD model improves over the SCS model alone would be another way of testing whether mutations could actually impact the evolutionary dynamics of lineages in the phylogeny.

      (4) Background fitness effects: The model ignores background genetic variation in fitness. I think this is particularly important as the fitness effects of mutations in any one protein may be overshadowed by the fitness effects of mutations elsewhere in the genome. The model also ignores background changes in fitness due to the environment, but I acknowledge that might be beyond the scope of the current work.

      (5) In contrast to the model explored here, recent work on multi-type birth-death processes has considered models where lineages have type-specific birth and/or death rates and therefore also type-specific growth rates and fitness (Stadler and Bonhoeffer, 2013; Kunhert et al., 2017; Barido-Sottani, 2023). Rasmussen & Stadler (eLife, 2019) even consider a multi-type birth-death model where the fitness effects of multiple mutations in a protein or viral genome collectively determine the overall fitness of a lineage. The key difference with this work presented here is that these models allow lineages to have different growth rates and fitness, so these models truly allow for non-neutral evolutionary dynamics. It would appear the authors might need to adopt a similar approach to successfully predict protein evolution.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Ledamoisel et al. examined the evolution of visual and chemical signals in closely related Morpho butterfly species to understand their role in species coexistence. Using an integrative, state-of-the-art approach combining spectrophotometry, visual modeling, and behavioral mate choice experiments, they quantified differences in wing iridescence and assessed its influence on mate preference in allopatry and sympatry. They also performed chemical analyses to determine whether sympatric species exhibit divergent chemical cues that may facilitate species recognition and mate discrimination. The authors found iridescent coloration to be similar in sympatric Morpho species. Furthermore, male mate choice experiments revealed that in sympatry, males fail to discriminate conspecific females based on coloration, reinforcing the idea that visual signal convergence is primarily driven by predation pressure. In contrast, the divergence of chemical signals among sympatric species suggests their potential role in facilitating species recognition and mate discrimination. The authors conclude that interactions between ecological pressures and signal evolution may shape species coexistence.

      Strengths:

      The study is well-designed and integrates multiple methodological approaches to provide a thorough assessment of signal evolution in the studied species. I appreciate the authors' careful consideration of multiple selective pressures and their combined influence on signal divergence and convergence. Additionally, the inclusion of both visual and chemical signals adds an interesting and valuable dimension to the study, enhancing its importance. Beyond butterflies, this research broadens our understanding of multimodal communication and signal evolution in the context of species coexistence.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The broader significance of the findings needs to be better articulated. While the authors emphasize that comparing adaptive traits in sympatry and allopatry provides insights into selective processes shaping reproductive isolation and coexistence, it is unclear what key conceptual or theoretical questions are being addressed. Are these patterns expected under certain evolutionary scenarios? Have they been empirically demonstrated in other systems? The authors should explicitly state the overarching research question, incorporate some predictions, and better contextualize their findings within the existing literature. If the results challenge or support previous work, that should be highlighted to strengthen the study's importance in a broader context.

      (2) The motivation for studying visual signals and mate choice in allopatric populations (i.e., at the intraspecific level) is not well articulated, leaving their role in the broader narrative unclear. In particular, the rationale behind experiments 1, 2, and 3 is not well defined, as the authors have not made a strong case for the need for these intraspecific comparisons in the introduction. This issue is further compounded by the authors' primary focus on signal evolution in sympatry throughout both the results and the discussion. For instance, the divergence of iridescence in allopatry is a potentially interesting result. But the authors have not discussed its implications.

      Overall, given that the primary conclusions are based on results and analyses in sympatry, the role of allopatric populations in shaping these conclusions needs to be better integrated and justified. Without a stronger link between the comparative framework and the study's key takeaways, the use of allopatric populations feels somewhat peripheral rather than central to the study's aim. Since the primary conclusions remain valid even without the allopatric comparisons, their inclusion requires a clearer rationale.

      (3) While the authors demonstrate that iridescence is indistinguishable to predators in sympatry, they overstate the role of predation in driving convergence. The present study does not experimentally demonstrate that iridescence in this species has a confusion effect or contributes to evasive mimicry. Alternatively, convergence could result from other selective forces, such as signal efficacy due to environmental conditions, rather than being solely driven by predation.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this work, the authors have developed SPLASH+, a micro-assembly and biological interpretation framework that expands on their previously published reference-free statistical approach (SPLASH) for sequencing data analysis.

      Strengths:

      (1) The methodology developed by the authors seems like a promising approach to overcome many of the challenges posed by reference-based single-cell RNA-seq analysis methods.

      (2) The analysis of the RNU6 repetitive small nuclear RNA provides a very compelling example of a type of transcript that is very challenging to analyze with standard reference-based methods (e.g., most reads from this gene fail to align with STAR, if I understood the result correctly).

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The manuscript presents a number of case studies from very diverse domains of single-cell RNA-seq analysis. As a result, the manuscript has been challenging to review, because it requires domain expertise in centromere biology, RNA splicing, RNA editing, V(D)J transcript diversity, and repeat polymorphisms.

      (2) Although the paper focuses on SmartSeq2 full-length single-cell RNA-seq data analysis, the vast majority of single-cell RNA-seq data that is currently being generated comes from droplet-based methods (e.g., 10x Genomics) that sequence only the 3' or 5' ends of transcripts. As a result, it is unclear if SPLASH+ is also applicable to these types of data.

      (3) The criteria used for the selection of the 10 'core genes' have not been sufficiently justified.

      (4) It is currently unclear how the splicing diversity discovered in this paper relates to the concept of noisy splicing (i.e., there are likely many low-frequency transcripts and splice junctions that are unlikely to have a significant functional impact beyond triggering nonsense-mediated decay).

      (5) The paper presents only a very superficial discussion of the potential weaknesses of the SPLASH+ method.

      (6) The cursory mention of metatranscriptome in the conclusion of the paper is confusing, as it might suggest the presence of microbial cells in sterile human tissues (which has recently been discredited in cancer, see e.g. https://www.science.org/content/article/journal-retracts-influential-cancer-microbiome-paper).

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Nielsen et al have identified a new disease mechanism underlying hypoplastic left heart syndrome due to variants in ribosomal protein genes that lead to impaired cardiomyocyte proliferation. This detailed study starts with an elegant screen in stem-cell-derived cardiomyocytes and whole genome sequencing of human patients and extends to careful functional analysis of RP gene variants in fly and fish models. Striking phenotypic rescue is seen by modulating known regulators of proliferation, including the p53 and Hippo pathways. Additional experiments suggest that the cell type specificity of the variants in these ubiquitously expressed genes may result from genetic interactions with cardiac transcription factors. This work positions RPs as important regulators of cardiomyocyte proliferation and differentiation involved in the etiology of HLHS, although the downstream mechanisms are unclear.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript assesses the differences between young and aged chondrocytes. Through transcriptomic analysis and further assessments in chondrocytes, GATA4 was found to be increased in aged chondrocyte donors compared to young donors. Subsequent mechanistic analysis with lentiviral vectors, siRNAs, and a small molecule was used to study the role of GATA4 in young and old chondrocytes. Lastly, an in vivo study was used to assess the effect of GATA4 expression on osteoarthritis progression in a DMM mouse model.

      Strengths:

      This work linked the overexpression of GATA4 to NF-kB signaling pathway activation, alterations to the TGF-b signaling pathway, and found that GATA4 increased the progression of OA compared to the DMM control group. This indicates that GATA4 contributes to the onset and progression of OA in aged individuals.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) A couple of sentences should be added to the introduction, to emphasize the role GATA4 plays, such as the alterations to the TGF-b signaling pathway and the increased activation of the NF-kB pathway.

      (2) Figure 1F, the GATA4 histology image should be bigger.

      (3) Further discussion should be conducted regarding the reasoning as to why GATA4 increases the phosphorylation of SMAD1/5.

      (4) More information should be included to clarify why GATA4 is thought to be linked to DNA damage and the pathway that is associated with that.

      (5) Please add further information regarding the limitations of the animal study conducted in this work and future plans to assess this.

      (6) In Figure 5, GATA4 should be changed to Gata4 in the graphed portions for consistency.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This foundational study builds on prior work from this group to reveal the complexities underlying ligand-dependent RXRγ-Nur77 heterodimer formation, offering a compelling re-evaluation of their earlier conclusions. The authors examine how a library of RXR ligands influences the biophysical, structural, and functional properties of Nur77. They find that although the Nur77-RXRγ heterodimer shares notable functional similarities with the Nurr1-RXRα complex, it also exhibits unique features, notably, both dimer dissociation and classical agonist-driven activities. This work advances our understanding of the nuanced behaviors of nuclear receptor heterodimers, which have important implications for health and disease.

      Strengths:

      (1) Builds on previous work by providing a comprehensive analysis that examines whether Nur77-RXRγ heterodimer formation parallels that of the Nurr1-RXRα complex.

      (2) Systematic evaluation of a library of RXR ligands provides a broad survey of functional outputs.

      (3) Careful reanalysis of previous work sheds new light on how NR4A heterodimers function.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Some conclusions appear overstated or are not well substantiated by the work presented. It's unclear how the data support a non-classical mode of agonism, for example, based on the data shown.

      (2) Some assays have relatively few replicates, with only two in some cases.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors take a closer look at whether AID-mediated SHM occurs at stalled RNA polII complexes. Through experimental and bioinformatic overlaps, authors observe that AID target sites really do not overlap with RNA polII stalling, convergent transcription, or H3K27Ac marks. Rather, AID target sites just exist around transcription start sites. The authors thus bring up an important argument, that RNA poll II stalling is not the driving mechanism for AID targeting. This is important since research groups work with the assumption that transcription stalling drives AID access to single-strand DNA. The authors are also clarifying their previous studies, where they suggested that stalled Spt5-associated RNA polII recruits AID DNA deamination activity.

      Comments:

      Transcription start sites (TSS) of promoter genes. Most AID mutations occur at the first 500 pbs to 1 kb from the TSS of promoters or enhancers, but not in the rest of the transcription module or gene body. To this end, existing literature (including work done by the author(s)) has suggested that transcription stalling or pausing of elongating RNA polymerase and/or chromatin modifications such as H3K27Ac (markers of promoters and enhancers) have something to do with helping AID see single-strand DNA substrates for SHM. These conclusions, initially being drawn from AID's functional interaction with Spt5 and RNA exosome -two factors involved in the resolution of stalled RNA polII - and further supported through co-relative data of AID SHM sites overlapping S2-P RNA polII. As with genomics data, these observations were drawn through the bioinformatic window of overlap by the respective authors of the previously published studies.

      In this study, the authors take a closer look at these overlaps and observe that AID target sites really do not overlap with RNA polII stalling, convergent transcription, or H3K27Ac marks. Rather, AID target sites just exist around transcription start sites that accumulate promoter-proximal terminated transcripts. The authors thus bring up an important argument, that RNA poll II stalling is not the driving mechanism for AID targeting. This is important since research groups work with the assumption that transcription stalling drives AID access to single-strand DNA.

      The authors are clarifying the models and literature that they themselves had set earlier, and are doing this with quite detailed analyses, with some well-done experiments. I feel they need to be heard. The experiments are well done, and the text is well written. Since the study is associative (versus being directly mechanistic) due to constant use of bioinformatics overlaps of SHM genomics data with ChIP data, some concerns will remain (and have been outlined by the authors), but that will be future work.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This paper investigates the dynamics of excitatory synaptic weights under a calcium-based plasticity rule, in long (up to 10 minutes) simulations of a 211,000-neuron biophysically detailed model of a rat cortical network.

      Strengths

      (1) A very detailed network model, with a large number of neurons, connections, synapses, etc., and with a huge number of biological considerations implemented in the model.

      (2) A carefully developed calcium-based plasticity rule, which operates with biologically relevant variables like calcium concentration and NMDA conductances.

      (3) The study itself is detailed and thorough, covering many aspects of the cellular and network anatomy and properties and investigating their relationships to plasticity.

      (4) The model remains stable over long periods of simulations, with the plasticity rule maintaining reasonable synaptic weights and not pushing the network to extremes.

      (5) The variety of insights the authors derive in terms of relationships between the cellular and network properties and dynamics of the synaptic weights are potentially interesting for the field.

      (6) Sharing the model and the associated methods and tools is a big plus.

      Weaknesses

      (1) Conceptually, there seems to be a missed opportunity here in that it is not clear what the network learns to do. The authors present 10 different input patterns, the network does some plasticity, which is then analyzed, but we do not know whether the learning resulted in anything functionally significant. Did the network learn to discriminate the patterns much better than at the beginning, to capture or anticipate the timing of pattern presentation, detect similarities between patterns, etc.? This is important to understand if one wants to assess the significance of synaptic changes due to plasticity. For example, if the network did not learn much new functionally, relative to its initial state, then the observed plasticity could be considered minor and possibly insufficient. In that case, were the network to learn something substantial, one would potentially observe much more extensive plasticity, and the results of the whole study could change, possibly including the stability of the network. While this could be a whole separate study, this issue is of central importance, and it is hard to judge the value of the results when we do not know what the network learned to do, if anything.

      (2) In this study, plasticity occurs only at E-to-E connections but not at others. However, it is well known that inhibitory connections in the cortex exhibit at the very least a substantial short-term plasticity. One would expect that not including these phenomena would have substantial consequences on the results.

      (3) Lines 134-135: "We calibrated layer-wise spontaneous firing rates and evoked activity to brief VPM inputs matching in vivo data from Reyes-Puerta et al. (2015)."

      (4) Can the authors show these results? It is an important comparison, and so it would be great to see firing rates (ideally, their distributions) for all the cell types and layers vs. experimental data, for the evoked and spontaneous conditions.

      (5) That being said, the Reyes-Puerta et al. paper reports firing rates for the barrel cortex, doesn't it? Whereas here, the authors are simulating a non-barrel cortex. Is such a comparison appropriate?

      (6) Comparison with STDP on pages 5-7 and Figure 2: if I got this right, the authors applied STDP to already generated spikes, that is, did not run a simulation with STDP. That seems strange. The spikes they use here were generated by the system utilizing their calcium-based plasticity rule. Obviously, the spikes would be different if STDP was utilized instead. The traces of synaptic weights would then also be different. The comparison therefore is not quite appropriate, is it?

      (7) Section 2.3 and Figure 5: I am not sure this analysis adds much. The main finding is that plasticity occurs more among cells in assemblies than among all cells. But isn't that expected given what was shown in the previous figures? Specifically, the authors showed that for cells that fire more, plasticity is more prominent. Obviously, cells that fire little or not at all won't belong to any assemblies. Therefore, we expect more plasticity in assemblies.

      (8) Section 2.4 and Figure 6: It is not clear that the results truly support the formulation of the section's title ("Synapse clustering contributes to the emergence of cell assemblies, and facilitates plasticity across them") and some of the text in the section. What I can see is that the effect on rho is strong for non-clustered synapses (Figure 6C and Figure S8A). In some cases, it is substantially higher than what is seen for clustered synapses. Furthermore, the wording "synapse clustering contributes to the emergence of cell assemblies" suggests some kind of causal role of clustered synapses in determining which neurons form specific cell assemblies. I do not see how the data presented supports that. Overall, it appears that the story about clustered synapses is quite complicated, with both clustered and non-clustered synapses driving changes in rho across the board.

      (9) Section 2.5 and Figure 7: Can we be certain that it is the edge participation that is a particularly good predictor of synaptic changes and/or strength, as opposed to something simpler? For example, could it be the overall number of synapses, excitatory synapses, or something along these lines, that the source and/or target neurons receive, that determine the rho dynamics? And then, I do not understand the claim that edge participation allows one to "delineate potentiation from depression". The only related data I can find is in Figure 7A3, about which the authors write "this effect was stronger for potentiation than depression". But I don't see what they mean. For both depression and facilitation, the changes observed are in the range of ~12% of probability values. And even if the effect is stronger, does it mean one can "delineate" potentiation from depression better? What does it mean, to "delineate"? If it is some kind of decoding based on the edge participation, then the authors did not show that.

      (10) "test novel predictions in the MICrONS (2021) dataset, which while pushing the boundaries of big data neuroscience, was so far only analyzed with single cells in focus instead of the network as a whole (Ding et al., 2023; Wang et al., 2023)." That is incorrect. For example, the whole work of Ding et al. analyzes connectivity and its relation to the neuron's functional properties at the network level.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors addressed all my concerns from the previous review, primarily via textual changes such as improved Discussion. Thus, most of the weaknesses raised in the original review are not eliminated - in particular, points 1, and 5-9 - but they are acknowledged and described better. This remains a useful study that should be of interest to researchers in the field.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this study, the authors conducted a single-cell RNA sequencing analysis of the cellular and transcriptional landscape of the gastric cancer tumor microenvironment, stratifying patients according to their H. pylori status into currently infected, previously infected and non-infected patients. The authors comprehensively dissect various cellular compartments, including epithelial, stromal and immune cells and describe specific cell types and signatures to be associated with H. pylori infection, including i) inflammatory and EMT signatures in malignant epithelial cells, ii) inflammatory CAFs in stromal cells, iii) Angio-TAMs, TREM2+ TAMs, exhausted and suppressive T cells in immune cells. Looking at ligand-receptor interactions as well as correlations between cell type abundances, they suggest that iCAFs interact with immunosuppressive T cells via a NECTIN2-TIGIT axis, as well as Angio-TAMs through a VEGFA/B-VEGFR1 axis and thereby promote immune escape, tumor angiogenesis and resistance to immunotherapy.

      The authors conduct a comprehensive and thorough analysis of the complex tumor microenvironment of gastric cancer, both single-cell RNA sequencing data as well as the analysis seem of high quality and according to best practices. The authors validate their findings using external datasets and include some prognostic value of the identified signatures and cell types. Furthermore, they validate some of their findings using immunofluorescence. While the authors confirm key transcriptional signatures in external cohorts comparing HP infected and non-infected cases, the main conclusions drawn from their own patient cohort are based on the comparison between HPGC and healthy controls. This approach does not fully resolve which signatures and cell types are specifically driven by H. pylori infection. As the authors also acknowledge in the limitations of their studies, their conclusions would benefit from functional validation.

      In summary, this study provides a valuable resource of the cellular and transcriptional heterogeneity of the tumor microenvironment in gastric cancers, distinguishing between positive, negative and previously positive HP infected gastric cancer patients. Given that HP is the main risk factor for gastric cancer development, the study provides valuable insights into potential HP driven transcriptional signatures and how these might contribute to this increased risk. However, the study would highly benefit from a clearer and more systematic comparison between HPGC and non-HPGC to better delineate infection-specific effects.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript discusses the role of phosphorylated ubiquitin (pUb) by PINK1 kinase in neurodegenerative diseases. It reveals that elevated levels of pUb are observed in aged human brains and those affected by Parkinson's disease (PD), as well as in Alzheimer's disease (AD), aging, and ischemic injury. The study shows that increased pUb impairs proteasomal degradation, leading to protein aggregation and neurodegeneration. The authors also demonstrate that PINK1 knockout can mitigate protein aggregation in aging and ischemic mouse brains, as well as in cells treated with a proteasome inhibitor. While this study provided some interesting data, several important points should be addressed before being further consideration.

      Strengths:

      (1) Reveals a novel pathological mechanism of neurodegeneration mediated by pUb, providing a new perspective on understanding neurodegenerative diseases.

      (2) The study covers not only a single disease model but also various neurodegenerative diseases such as Alzheimer's disease, aging, and ischemic injury, enhancing the breadth and applicability of the research findings.

      Comments on revisions:

      This study, through a systematic experimental design, reveals the crucial role of pUb in forming a positive feedback loop by inhibiting proteasome activity in neurodegenerative diseases. The data are comprehensive and highly innovative. However, some of the results are not entirely convincing, particularly the staining results in Figure 1.

      In Figure 1A, the density of DAPI staining differs significantly between the control patient and the AD patient, making it difficult to conclusively demonstrate a clear increase in PINK1 in AD patients. Quantitative analysis is needed. In Fig 1C, the PINK1 staining in the mouse brain appears to resemble non-specific staining.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript entitled "Phosphodiesterase 1A Physically Interacts with YTHDF2 and Reinforces the Progression of Non-Small Cell Lung Cancer" explores the role of PDE1A in promoting NSCLC progression by binding to the m6A reader YTHDF2 and regulating the mRNA stability of several novel target genes, consequently activating the STAT3 pathway and leading to metastasis and drug resistance.

      Strengths:

      The study addresses a novel mechanism involving PDE1A and YTHDF2 interaction in NSCLC, contributing to our understanding of cancer progression.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      IKK is the key signaling node for inflammatory signaling. Despite the availability of molecular structures, how the kinase achieves its specificity remains unclear. This paper describes a dynamic sequence of events in which autophosphorylation of a tyrosine near the activate site facilitates phosphorylation of the serine on the substrate via a phosphor-transfer reaction. The proposed mechanism is conceptually novel in several ways, suggesting that the kinase is dual specificity (tyrosine and serine) and that it mediates a phospho-transfer reaction. While bacteria contain phosphorylation-transfer enzymes, this is unheard of for mammalian kinases. However, what the functional significance of this enzymatic activity might remain unaddressed.

      The revised manuscript adequately addresses all the points I suggested in the review of the first submission.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this study, Brickwedde et al. leveraged a cross-modal task where visual cues indicated whether upcoming targets required visual or auditory discrimination. Visual and auditory targets were paired with auditory and visual distractors, respectively. The authors found that during the cue-to-target interval, posterior alpha activity increased along with auditory and visual frequency-tagged activity when subjects were anticipating auditory targets. The authors conclude that their results disprove the alpha inhibition hypothesis, and instead implies that alpha "regulates downstream information transfer." However, as I detail below, I do not think the presented data irrefutably disproves the alpha inhibition hypothesis. Moreover, the evidence for the alternative hypothesis of alpha as an orchestrator for downstream signal transmission is weak. Their data serves to refute only the most extreme and physiologically implausible version of the alpha inhibition hypothesis, which assumes that alpha completely disengages the entire brain area, inhibiting all neuronal activity.

      (1) Authors assign specific meanings to specific frequencies (8-12 Hz alpha, 4 Hz intermodulation frequency, 36 Hz visual tagging activity, 40 Hz auditory tagging activity), but the results show that spectral power increases in all of these frequencies towards the end of the cue-to-target interval. This result is consistent with a broadband increase, which could simply be due to additional attention required when anticipating auditory target (since behavioral performance was lower with auditory targets, we can say auditory discrimination was more difficult). To rule this out, authors will need to show a power spectral density curve with specific increases around each frequency band of interest. In addition, it would be more convincing if there was a bump in the alpha band, and distinct bumps for 4 vs 36 vs 40 Hz band.<br /> (2) For visual target discrimination, behavioral performance with and without the distractor is not statistically different. Moreover, the reaction time is faster with distractor. Is there any evidence that the added auditory signal was actually distracting?<br /> (3) It is possible that alpha does suppress task-irrelevant stimuli, but only when it is distracting. In other words, perhaps alpha only suppresses distractors that are presented simultaneously with the target. Since the authors did not test this, they cannot irrefutably reject the alpha inhibition hypothesis.<br /> (4) In the abstract and Figure 1, the authors claim an alternative function for alpha oscillations; that alpha "orchestrates signal transmission to later stages of the processing stream." In support, the authors cite their result showing that increased alpha activity originating from early visual cortex is related to enhanced visual processing in higher visual areas and association areas. This does not constitute a strong support for the alternative hypothesis. The correlation between posterior alpha power and frequency-tagged activity was not specific in any way; Fig. 10 shows that the correlation appeared on both 1) anticipating-auditory and anticipating-visual trials, 2) the visual tagged frequency and the auditory tagged activity, and 3) was not specific to the visual processing stream. Thus, the data is more parsimonious with a correlation than a causal relationship between posterior alpha and visual processing.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Hearing and balance rely on specialized ribbon synapses that transmit sensory stimuli between hair cells and afferent neurons. Synaptic adhesion molecules that form and regulate transsynaptic interactions between inner hair cells (IHCs) and spiral ganglion neurons (SGNs) are crucial for maintaining auditory synaptic integrity and, consequently, for auditory signaling. Synaptic adhesion molecules such as neurexin-3 and neuroligin-1 and -3 have recently been shown to play vital roles in establishing and maintaining these synaptic connections ( doi: 10.1242/dev.202723 and DOI: 10.1016/j.isci.2022.104803). However, the full set of molecules required for synapse assembly remains unclear.

      Karagulan et al. highlight the critical role of the synaptic adhesion molecule RTN4RL2 in the development and function of auditory afferent synapses between IHCs and SGNs, particularly regarding how RTN4RL2 may influence synaptic integrity and receptor localization. Their study shows that deletion of RTN4RL2 in mice leads to enlarged presynaptic ribbons and smaller postsynaptic densities (PSDs) in SGNs, indicating that RTN4RL2 is vital for synaptic structure. Additionally, the presence of "orphan" PSDs-those not directly associated with IHCs-in RTN4RL2 knockout mice suggests a developmental defect in which some SGN neurites fail to form appropriate synaptic contacts, highlighting potential issues in synaptic pruning or guidance. The study also observed a depolarized shift in the activation of CaV1.3 calcium channels in IHCs, indicating altered presynaptic functionality that may lead to impaired neurotransmitter release. Furthermore, postsynaptic SGNs exhibited a deficiency in GluA2/3 AMPA receptor subunits, despite normal Gria2 mRNA levels, pointing to a disruption in receptor localization that could compromise synaptic transmission. Auditory brainstem responses showed increased sound thresholds in RTN4RL2 knockout mice, indicating impaired hearing related to these synaptic dysfunctions.

      The findings reported here significantly enhance our understanding of synaptic organization in the auditory system, particularly concerning the molecular mechanisms underlying IHC-SGN connectivity. The implications are far-reaching, as they not only inform auditory neuroscience but also provide insights into potential therapeutic targets for hearing loss related to synaptic dysfunction.

      Comments on the Latest Version:

      In the revised manuscript, the authors have addressed my previous comments and incorporated my recommendations by adding missing experimental details, using color-blind-friendly figure colors, and discussing the differences between GluA3 KO and RTN4RL2 KO phenotypes. They also clarified why the animals needed for additional experiments are no longer available. Although these specific animals are unavailable, the authors made an effort to address my concerns by performing

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors used a multi-alternative decision task and a multidimensional signal-detection model to gain further insight into the cause of perceptual impairments during the attentional blink. The model-based analyses of behavioural and EEG data show that such perceptual failures can be unpacked into distinct deficits in visual detection and discrimination, with visual detection being linked to the amplitude of late ERP components (N2P and P3) and discrimination being linked to coherence of fronto-parietal brain activity.

      Strengths:

      The strength of this paper lies in the fact that it presents a novel perspective on the cause of perceptual failures during the attentional blink. The multidimensional signal-detection modelling approach is explained clearly, and the results of the study show that this approach offers a powerful method to unpack behavioural and EEG data into distinct processes of detection and discrimination. The discussion of the paper addresses how the findings of separable neural processes involved in detection and discrimination might be linked to extant findings on object recognition and the question of whether the attentional blink involves an all-or-none or gradual impairment in perception.

      Weakness:

      A minor, unnecessary weakness of the paper is that the authors introduce their study with the aim of determining whether the attentional blink might be due to a criterion shift or to reduced sensitivity in the perceptual process. The criterion shift account remains to be no more than a strawman as the argumentation for this account is weak and easily refuted based on many previous findings. Specifically, the authors suggest that criterion shift might explain the lag-dependent AB effect because participants might be able to infer the lag of a specific trial, thus raising their criterion in case of a short-lag trial, based on factors such as the length of the trial sequence. Importantly, however, attentional blinks have also been observed in many studies in which the sequence length was not indicative of the T1-T2 lag, including - for instance - the many experiments reported in the seminal study by Chun and Potter (1995). The criterion shift account was and remains, therefore, highly implausible and should not have deserved such a prominent role in describing the theoretical motivation for the study.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Chromosomal inversions have been predicted to play a role in adaptive evolution and speciation because of their ability to "lock" together adaptive alleles in genomic regions of low recombination. In this study, the authors use a combination of cutting-edge genomic methods, including BioNano and PacBio HiFi sequencing, to identify six large chromosomal inversions segregating in over 100 species of Lake Malawi cichlids, a classic example of adaptive radiation and rapid speciation. By examining the frequencies of these inversions present in species from six different linages, the authors show that there is an association between the presence of specific inversions with specific lineages/habitats. Using a combination of phylogenetic analyses and sequencing data, they demonstrate that three of the inversions have been introduced to one lineage via hybridization. Finally, genotyping of laboratory crosses suggests that two inversions are associated with XY sex determination systems in a subset of species. The data add to a growing number of systems in which inversions have been associated with adaptation to divergent environments. However, like most of the other recent studies in the field, this study does not go beyond describing the presence of the inversions to demonstrate that the inversions are under sexual or natural selection or that they contribute to adaptation or speciation in this system.

      Strengths:

      All analyses are very well done, and the conclusions about the presence of the six inversions in Lake Malawi cichlids, the frequencies of the inversions in different species, and the presence of three inversions in the benthic lineages due to hybridization are well-supported. Genotyping of 48 individuals resulting from laboratory crosses provides strong support that the chromosome 10 inversion is associated with a sex-determination locus.

      Weaknesses:

      The evidence supporting a role for the chromosome 11 inversion is based on relatively few individuals and therefore remains suggestive. The authors are mostly cautious in their interpretations of the data, although there are places where the language is imprecise and therefore a little misleading.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The current work explored the link between the pulvinar intrinsic organisation and its functional and structural connectivity patterns of the cortex using different dimensional reduction techniques. Overall they find relationships between pulvinar-cortical organization and cortico-cortical organization, and little evidence for clustered organization. Moreover they investigate PET maps to understand how neurotransmitter/receptor distributions vary within the pulvinar and along its structural and functional connectivity axes.

      Strengths:

      (1) There is a replication dataset and different modalities are compared against each other to understand the structural and functional organisation of the pulvinar complex

      In their revision, the authors further detailed the motivation of their study and performed various robustness checks, answering my concerns. Nevertheless, further work is needed to fully understand the role of the pulvinar nuclei and the rest of the thalamic nuclei as well as the rest of the brain, including more diverse datasets and techniques.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In the revision of their paper, N'Guessan et al have improved the report of their study of expression QTL (eQTL) mapping in yeast using single cells. The authors make use of advances in single cell RNAseq (scRNAseq) in yeast to increase the efficiency with which this type of analysis can be undertaken. Building on prior research led by the senior author that entailed genotyping and fitness profiling of almost 100,000 cells derived from a cross between two yeast strains (BY and RM) they performed scRNAseq on a subset of ~5% (n = 4,489) individual cells. To address the sparsity of genotype data in the expression profiling they used a Hidden Markov Model (HMM) to infer genotypes and then identify the most likely known lineage genotype from the original dataset. To address the relationship between variance in fitness and gene expression the authors partition the variance to investigate the sources of variation. They then perform eQTL mapping and study the relationship between eQTL and fitness QTL identified in the earlier study.

      This paper seeks to address the question of how quantitative trait variation and expression variation are related. scRNAseq represents an appealing approach to eQTL mapping as it is possible to simultaneously genotype individual cells and measure expression in the same cell. As eQTL mapping requires large sample sizes to identify statistical relationships, the use of scRNAseq is likely to dramatically increase the statistical power of such studies. However, there are several technical challenges associated with scRNAseq and the authors' study is focused on addressing those challenges. My main suggestion from my review of the revised version of the manuscript has been addressed in the revised figure 3. I agree with the authors that they have successfully demonstrated their stated goal of developing, and illustrating the benefit of, a one-pot scRNA-seq experiment and analysis for eQTL mapping.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This work provides a new Python toolkit for combining generative modeling of neural dynamics and inversion methods to infer likely model parameters that explain empirical neuroimaging data. The authors provided tests to show the toolkit's broad applicability and accuracy; hence, it will be very useful for people interested in using computational approaches to better understand the brain.

      Strengths:

      The work's primary strength is the tool's integrative nature, which seamlessly combines forward modelling with backward inference. This is important as available tools in the literature can only do one and not the other, which limits their accessibility to neuroscientists with limited computational expertise. Another strength of the paper is the demonstration of how the tool can be applied to a broad range of computational models popularly used in the field to interrogate diverse neuroimaging data, ensuring that the methodology is not optimal to only one model. Moreover, through extensive in-silico testing, the work provided evidence that the tool can accurately infer ground-truth parameters, which is important to ensure results from future hypothesis testing are meaningful.

      Weaknesses:

      Although the tool itself is the main strength of the work, the paper lacked a thorough analysis of issues concerning robustness and benchmarking relative to existing tools.

      The first issue is the robustness to the choice of features to be included in the objective function. This choice significantly affects the training and changes the results, as the authors even acknowledged themselves multiple times (e.g., Page 17 last sentence of first paragraph or Page 19 first sentence of second paragraph). This brings the question of whether the accurate results found in the various demonstrations are due to the biased selection of features (possibly from priors on what worked in previous works). The robustness of the neural estimator and the inference method to noise was also not demonstrated. This is important as most neuroimaging measurements are inherently noisy to various degrees.

      The second issue is on benchmarking. Because the tool developed is, in principle, only a combination of existing tools specific to modeling or Bayesian inference, the work failed to provide a more compelling demonstration of its added value. This could have been demonstrated through appropriate benchmarking relative to existing methodologies, specifically in terms of accuracy and computational efficiency.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Donofrio et al. investigated cerebellar Purkinje cell (PC) degeneration during normal aging using both mouse and human samples. They found that PC loss followed a stripe pattern rather than occurring randomly. Although this pattern resembled the pattern of zebrin II expression in the anterior cerebellum, the overall pattern was different from zebrin II expression. Surviving PCs exhibited severe degeneration, including thickened axons, axonal torpedoes, and shrunken dendrites. These structural changes were accompanied by functional deficits in motor coordination and tremor. Understanding why certain PC subpopulations are more vulnerable than others may provide insight into regional susceptibility (or resilience) to aging and inform potential therapeutic strategies for age-related neurological disorders. Overall, the findings are novel and significant, supported by compelling evidence from structural and functional analyses. However, I have several concerns about the results and hope that my comments will help improve the clarity and impact of this paper.

      Strengths:

      The cerebellum is often overlooked in aging research, despite its increasingly recognized role in motor and non-motor functions. This study, which examines the pattern of PC loss during normal aging, offers a new perspective on the aging process.

      The finding that PC loss follows a stripe pattern is a major conceptual advance, challenging the previous assumption that PC loss occurs uniformly in the cerebellum.

      The analyses using wholemount immunohistochemistry, PC-specific reporter mice, and light-sheet imaging of cleared brain tissue are meticulous. By visualizing PCs in three dimensions, this study provides strong evidence for the patterned loss of PCs across different cerebellar subdivisions during aging.

      The inclusion of human samples along with the animal model strengthens the impact and translational relevance of these findings.

      The data are clearly presented, and the manuscript is very well written.

      Weaknesses:

      While the authors have largely ruled out zebrin II as the key protein underlying PC vulnerability or resistance to age-related loss, the molecular basis of this phenomenon remains unidentified. This reviewer acknowledges the complexity of this investigation and considers it a minor issue, as the manuscript thoughtfully discusses the gap and highlights it as a future direction.

      In cases where no PC loss is observed in aged mice (Figure 1F), it is unclear whether these PCs undergo morphological degeneration, such as thickened axons and shrunken dendrites. Further characterization of these resilient PCs would help understand why the aged mice without PC loss still exhibit motor deficits (Figure 7).

      The histologic analysis is based on mice with different genetic backgrounds. For example, the PC-specific reporter mice include two strains: Pcp2-Cre; Ai32 and Pcp2-Cre; Ai40D. These genetic variations may contribute to the heterogeneity of PC loss (Figure 1). To improve clarity, please add the genetic background details to Table 1.

      Please indicate from which lobule in the anterior or posterior human cerebellum the images in Figure 8 were taken.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors note that there is a large corpus of research establishing the importance of LC-NE projections to the medial prefrontal cortex (mPFC) of rats and mice in attentional set or 'rule' shifting behaviours. However, this is complex behavior, and the authors were attempting to gain an understanding of how locus coeruleus modulation of the mPFC contributes to set shifting.

      The authors replicated the ED-shift impairment following NE denervation of mPFC by chemogenetic inhibition of the LC. They further showed that LC inhibition changed the way neurons in mPFC responded to the cues, with a greater proportion of individual neurons responsive to 'switching', but the individual neurons also had broader tuning, responding to other aspects of the task (i.e., response choice and response history). The population dynamics were also changed by LC inhibition, with reduced separation of population vectors between early-post-switch trials, when responding was at chance, and later trials when responding was correct. This was what they set out to demonstrate, and so one can conclude they achieved their aims.

      The authors concluded that LC inhibition disrupted mPFC "encoding capacity for switching" and suggest that this "underlie the behavioral deficits."

      Strengths:

      The principal strength is the combination of inactivation of LC with calcium imaging in the mPFC. This enabled detailed consideration of the change in behavior (i.e., defining epochs of learning, with an 'early phase' when responding is at chance being compared to a 'later phase' when the behavioral switch has occurred) and how these are reflected in neuronal activity in the mPFC, with and without LC-NE input.

      Weaknesses:

      Methodologically, some improvement could be made in terms of the statistical descriptions. Supplementary Figure 2: For the peripheral CNO, the 'control group' (saline) was n=4 and the test group (CNO), n=5. For the central CNO, the test group was n = 8 and the control was n = 7. The authors explain that the group sizes were not statistically determined and mice were assigned to groups 'arbitrarily', but why did they not at least make the group sizes equal?

      In Figure 1 (e), given the small sample size, it would be helpful if all the data points were included on the bar charts. As a t-test was performed on only the ED stage of the test, seeing all the data points would reassure that there would not have been a statistically significant 'improvement' in the ID stage in the group given mPFC CNO. It would also be helpful to give effect sizes for all statistical tests.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study presents compelling evidence for a novel treatment approach in a challenging patient population with MSS/pMMR mCRC, where traditional immunotherapy has often fallen short. The combination of SBRT and tislelizumab not only yielded a high disease control rate but also indicated significant improvements in the tumor's immune landscape. The safety profile appears favorable, which is crucial for patients who have already undergone multiple lines of therapy.

      Strengths:

      The results underscore the potential of leveraging radiation therapy to enhance the effectiveness of immunotherapy, especially in tumor environments previously deemed hostile to immune interventions. Future research should focus on larger cohorts to validate these findings and explore the underlying mechanisms of immune modulation post-treatment.

      Comments on revisions:

      The author provided satisfactory responses to my queries, offering clarifications and additional explanations to address potential points of confusion. The supplementary experimental data further corroborate the author's conclusions. Although a more in-depth and detailed analysis did not yield significant results, this does not undermine the overall integrity of the article's structure or the reliability of its conclusions. Based on the content and the supporting evidence presented, I believe this article meets the necessary criteria for publication.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The Authors investigated the anatomical features of the excitatory synaptic boutons in layer 1 of the human temporal neocortex. They examined the size of the synapse, the macular or the perforated appearance and the size of the synaptic active zone, the number and volume of the mitochondria, the number of the synaptic and the dense core vesicles, also differentiating between the readily releasable, the recycling and the resting pool of synaptic vesicles. The coverage of the synapse by astrocytic processes was also assessed, and all the above parameters were compared to other layers of the human temporal neocortex. The Authors conclude that the subcellular morphology of the layer 1 synapses is suitable for the functions of the neocortical layer, i.e. the synaptic integration within the cortical column. The low glial coverage of the synapses might allow the glutamate spillover from the synapses enhancing synpatic crosstalk within this cortical layer.

      Strengths:

      The strengths of this paper are the abundant and very precious data about the fine structure of the human neocortical layer 1. Quantitative electron microscopy data (especially that derived from the human brain) are very valuable, since this is a highly time- and energy consuming work. The techniques used to obtain the data, as well as the analyses and the statistics performed by the Authors are all solid, strengthen this manuscript, and support the conclusions drawn in the discussion.

      Comments on latest version:

      The third version of this paper has been substantially improved. The English is significantly better, there are only few paragraphs and sentences which are hard to understand (see my comments and suggestions below). Almost all of my suggestions were incorporated.

      Remaining minor concerns:<br /> About epileptic and non-epileptic (non-affected) tissue. I am aware that temporal lobe neocortical tissue derived from epileptic patients is regarded as non-affected by many groups, and they are quite similar to the cortex of non-epileptic (tumour) patients in their electrophysiological properties and synaptic physiology. But please, note, that one paper you cited did not use samples from epileptic patients, but only tissue from non-epileptic tumor patients (Molnár et al. PLOS 2008).<br /> When you look deeper, and make thorough comparison of tissues derived from epileptic and non-epileptic patients, there are differences in the fine structure, as well as in several electrophysiological features. See for example Tóth et al., J Physiol, 2018, where higher density of excitatory synapses were found in L2 of neocortical samples derived from epileptic patients compared to non-epileptic (tumor) patients. Furthermore, the appearance of population bursts is similar, but their occurrence is more frequent and their amplitude is higher in tissue from epileptic compared to non-epileptic patients. So, I still cannot agree, that temporal neocortex of epileptic patients with the seizure focus in the hippocampus would be non-affected. Therefore I suggested to use the term biopsy tissue.

      It is still not emphasized in the first paragraph of the Discussion, that only excitatory axon terminals were investigated.

      The text in the Results and the Discussion are somewhat inconsistent.<br /> The last two paragraphs of the Results section ends with several sentences which should be part of the discussion, such as line 328: This finding strongly supports multivesicular release... or line 344: --- pointing towards a layer-specific regulation of the putative RRP. Moreover, the results suggest that... and line 370: ... it is most likely... Please, correct this.<br /> The first paragraph of the Discussion summarizes the work of the quantitative EM work and gives one conclusion about the astrocytic coverage. This last sentence is inconsistent with the other parts of the paragraph. I would either write that "astrocytic coverage was also investigated" (or something similar), or move this sentence to the paragraph which discusses the astrocytic coverage.<br /> Results line 180-183. "Special connections" between astrocytic processes and synaptic boutons are mentioned, but not shown. Either show these (but then prove with staining!), or leave out this paragraph.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Fecal virome transfer (FVT) has the potential to take advantage of microbiome-associated phages to treat diseases such as NEC. However, FVT is also associated with toxicity due to the presence of eukaryotic viruses in the mixture, which are difficult to filter out. The authors use a chemostat propagation system to reduce the presence of eukaryotic viruses (these become lost over time during culture). They show in pig models of NEC that chemostat propagation reduces the incidence of diarrhea induced by FVTs.

      Strengths:

      The authors report an innovative yet simple approach that has the potential to be useful for future applications. Most of the experiments are easy to follow and are performed well.

      Weaknesses:

      The biggest weakness is that the authors show that their technique addresses safety, but they are unable to demonstrate that they retain efficacy in their NEC model. This could be due to technical issues or perhaps the efficacy of FVT reported in the literature is not robust. If they cannot demonstrate the efficacy of the chemostat-propagated virome mixture, the value of the study is compromised.

      The above issue is especially concerning because the chemostat propagation selected for bacteria that may not necessarily be the ones that harbor the beneficial phages. Without an understanding of exactly how FVT works, is it possible to make any conclusion about the usefulness of the chemostat approach?

      Finally, can the authors rule out that their observations in THP-1 cells are driven by LPS or some other bacterial product in the media?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Mackie and colleagues compare chemosensory preferences between C. elegans and P. pacificus, and the cellular and molecular mechanisms underlying them. The nematodes have overlapping and distinct preferences for different salts. Although P. pacificus lacks the lsy-6 miRNA important for establishing asymmetry of the left/right ASE salt sensing neurons in C. elegans, the authors find that P. pacificus ASE homologs achieve molecular (receptor expression) and functional (calcium response) asymmetry by alternative means. This work contributes an important comparison of how these two nematodes sense salts and highlights that evolution can find different ways to establish asymmetry in small nervous systems to optimize the processing of chemosensory cues in the environment.

      Strengths:

      The authors use clear and established methods to record the response of neurons to chemosensory cues. They were able to show clearly that ASEL/R are functionally asymmetric in P. pacificus, and combined with genetic perturbation establish a role for che-1-dependent gcy-22.3 in the asymmetric response to NH4Cl.

      Weaknesses:

      The mechanism of lsy-6-independent establishment of ASEL/R asymmetry in P. pacificus remains uncharacterized.

      Comments on revisions: Looks good - all the best

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors sequenced emm89 serotype genomes of clinical isolates from patients in Japan, where the number of invasive Group A Streptococcus (GAS), especially those of the emm89 serotype, has drastically increased over the past 10-15 years. The sequences from this cohort were compared against a large collection of publicly available global isolates, yielding a total of almost 1000 genomes in the analysis. Because the researchers focused on the emm89 serotype, they could construct a common core genome, with subsequent ability to analyze genomic differences in accessory genes and intergenic regions that contributed to the invasive phenotype using multiple types of GWAS analysis (SNP, k-mer). Their analysis demonstrates some mutations responsible for invasiveness are specific to the Japanese strains, and that multiple independent virulence factors can contribute to invasiveness. None of the invasive phenotypes were correlated with new gene acquisition. Together, the data support that synergy between bacterial survival and upregulation of virulence factors contribute to the development of severe infection.

      Strengths:

      • The authors verify their analysis by confirming that covS is one of the more frequently mutated genes in invasive strains of GAS, as has been shown in other publications.

      • A mutation in one of the SNPs attributed to invasiveness (SNP fhuB) was introduced into an invasive strain. The authors demonstrate that this mutant strain survives less well in human blood. Therefore, the authors have experimental data to support their claims that their analysis uncovered a new mutation/SNP that contributed to invasiveness.

      Weaknesses:

      • It would be helpful for the authors to highlight why their technique (large scale analysis of one emm type) can yield more information than a typical GWAS analysis of invasive vs. non-invasive strains. Are SNPs easier to identify using a large-scale core genome? Is it more likely evolutionarily to find mutations in non-coding regions as opposed to the core genome and accessory genes, and this is what this technique allows? Did the analysis yield unexpected genes or new genes that had not been previously identified in other GWAS analyses? These points may need to be made more apparent in the results and deserves some thought in the discussion section.

      • The Alpha-fold data does not demonstrate why the mutations the authors identified could contribute to the invasive phenotype. It would be helpful to show an overlay of the predicted structures containing the different SNPs to demonstrate the potential structural differences that can occur due to the SNP. This would make the data more convincing that the SNP has a potential impact on the function of the protein. Similarly, the authors discuss modification of the hydrophobicity of the side chain in the ferrichrome transporter (lines 317-318) due to a SNP, but this is not immediately obvious in the figure (Fig. 5).

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed the concerns from reviewers. The implemented revisions have improved the manuscript's clarity.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The authors introduces DIPx, a deep learning framework for predicting synergistic drug combinations for cancer treatment using the AstraZeneca-Sanger (AZS) DREAM Challenge dataset. While the approach is innovative, I have following concerns and comments, and hopefully will improve the study's rigor and applicability, making it a more powerful tool in real clinical world.

      (1) The model struggles with predicting synergies for drug combinations not included in its training data (showing only Spearman correlation 0.26 in Test Set 2). This limits its potential for discovering new therapeutic strategies. Utilizing techniques such as transfer learning or expanding the training dataset to encompass a wider range of drug pairs could help to address this issue.

      (2) The use of pan-cancer datasets, while offering broad applicability, may not be optimal for specific cancer subtypes with distinct biological mechanisms. Developing subtype-specific models or adjusting the current model to account for these differences could improve prediction accuracy for individual cancer types.

      (3) Line 127, "Since DIPx uses only molecular data, to make a fair comparison, we trained TAJI using only molecular features and referred to it as TAJI-M.". TAJI was designed to use both monotherapy drug-response and molecular data, and likely won't be able to reach maximum potential if removing monotherapy drug-response from the training model. It would be critical to use the same training datasets and then compare the performances. From Figure 6 of TAJI's paper (Li et al., 2018, PMID: 30054332) , i.e., the mean Pearson correlation for breast cancer and lung cancer are around 0.5 - 0.6.

      The following 2 concerns have been included in the Discussion section which are great:

      (1) Training and validating the model using cell lines may not fully capture the heterogeneity and complexity of in vivo tumors. To increase clinical relevance, it would be beneficial to validate the model using primary tumor samples or patient-derived xenografts.

      (2) The Pathway Activation Score (PAS) is derived exclusively from primary target genes, potentially overlooking critical interactions involving non-primary targets. Including these secondary effects could enhance the model's predictive accuracy and comprehensiveness.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors performed bidirectional two-sample Mendelian randomization using publicly available GWAS summary data to assess the directional causal association between atherosclerosis and intracranial aneurysms. They have used a similar strategy to identify the role of matrix metalloproteinases (MMP), especially MMP12, in mediating the above causal association. They finally substantiated these results by measuring and comparing the MMP12 levels in the plasma samples collected from carotid atherosclerosis and intracranial aneurysm patients with those of healthy controls. Local tissue levels of MMP12 were also measured in experimental mouse models.

      Strengths:

      The authors have chosen to address an important problem that could be of interest to many researchers and clinicians in the subfield.

      Weaknesses:

      Mendelian Randomization (MR) is a powerful approach to explore the directional causal relationship between comorbid conditions using genetic variants as instrumental variables. The validity of causal inference derived from MR strongly depends on genetic instruments satisfying the three core assumptions- relevance, independence, and exclusion restriction. The violation of these assumptions is hard to verify in many real-world situations and may result in spurious results. Rigorous sensitivity analysis is essential to ensure the robustness of the results. The sensitivity analysis presented in the current manuscript is incomplete. The key points are as follows:

      (1) The GWAS summary datasets used by the authors for assessing the causal relationship between atherosclerosis and intracranial aneurysms were all from the FinnGen study and thus may have overlapping samples which is known to introduce bias into the causal estimates and inflate type 1 error rates.

      (2) Both atherosclerosis and aneurysms share common risk factors (mentioned by the authors as well) such as hypertension, cholesterol, diabetes, smoking, etc., which could lead to correlated pleiotropy while performing Mendelian randomization. MR-PRESSO may not effectively account for the same.

      (3) The authors explored the role of matrix metalloproteinases as intermediate biomarkers mediating the risk of atherosclerosis in the intracranial aneurysms. Separating the exposure to biomarker MR from biomarker to outcome MR limits the interpretation of the results. The effect size of the indirect effect cannot be assessed.

      (4) The scatter plots presented in Supplementary Figures 1-3 are neither cited nor discussed in the manuscript. Some of the plots show variability in the direction and magnitude of the causal estimates from MR-Egger and MR-IVW methods, indicating either masking of the causal estimates or directional pleiotropy. Discussing these results is crucial to inform the readers of the limitations of the derived causal estimates.

      (5) When there is substantial evidence available for the frequent coexistence of atherosclerosis and aneurysms, the additional value of the cross-sectional data showing the increased prevalence of atherosclerosis in patients with intracranial aneurysms without adjusting for confounding risk factors is not clear.

      (6) It is also not clear from the manuscript whether the authors are projecting the MMP12 as a shared biomarker or as a mediator between atherosclerosis and intracranial aneurysms. As also noted by the authors, assessment of plasma MMP12 levels in a cross-sectional sample is not sufficient to substantiate the role of MMP12 as an intermediate biomarker connecting atherosclerosis to the increased risk of intracranial aneurysms.

      Impact:

      The findings from this study can form the basis for a more systematic analysis towards identifying molecular intermediates mediating the risk of atherosclerosis in patients with intracranial aneurysms or vice versa, which in turn helps develop novel strategies to manage these comorbid conditions.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors, Dalal, et. al., determined cryo-EM structures of open, closed, and desensitized states of the pentameric ligand-gated ion channel ELIC reconstituted in liposomes, and compared them to structures determined in varying nanodisc diameters. They argue that the liposomal reconstitution method is more representative of functional ELIC channels, as they were able to test and recapitulate channel kinetics through stopped-flow thallium flux liposomal assay. The authors and others have described channel interactions with membrane scaffold proteins (MSP), initially thought to be in a size-dependent manner. However, the authors reported that their cryo-EM ELIC structure interacts with the large nanodisc spNW25, contrary to their original hypotheses. This suggests that the channel's interactions with MSPs might alter its structure, possibly not accurately representing/reflecting functional states of the channel.

      Strengths:

      Cryo-EM structural determination from proteoliposomes is a promising methodology within the ion channel field due to their large surface area and lack of MSP or other membrane mimetics that could alter channel structure. Comparing liposomal ELIC to structures in various-sized nanodiscs gives rise to important discussions for other membrane protein structural studies when deciding the best method for individual circumstances.

      Weaknesses:

      The overarching goal of the study was to determine structural differences of ELIC in detergent nanodiscs and liposomes. Including comparisons of the results to the native bacterial lipid environment would provide a more encompassing discussion of how the determined liposome structures might or might not relate to the native receptor in its native environment. The authors stated they determined open, closed, and desensitized states of ELIC reconstituted in liposomes and suggest the desensitization gate is at the 9' region of the pore. However, no functional studies were performed to validate this statement.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study presents compelling evidence for a novel treatment approach in a challenging patient population with MSS/pMMR mCRC, where traditional immunotherapy has often fallen short. The combination of SBRT and tislelizumab not only yielded a high disease control rate but also indicated significant improvements in the tumor's immune landscape. The safety profile appears favorable, which is crucial for patients who have already undergone multiple lines of therapy.

      Strengths:

      The results underscore the potential of leveraging radiation therapy to enhance the effectiveness of immunotherapy, especially in tumor environments previously deemed hostile to immune interventions. Future research should focus on larger cohorts to validate these findings and explore the underlying mechanisms of immune modulation post-treatment.

      Weaknesses:

      I believe the author's work is commendable and should be considered with some minor modifications:

      (1) While the author categorized patients based on the type of RAS mutation and the location of colorectal cancer metastasis, the article does not adequately address how these classifications influence treatment outcomes. Such as whether KRAS or NRAS mutations, as well as the type of metastatic lesions, affect the sensitivity to gamma-ray treatment and lead to varying responses.

      (2) In Figure 2, clarification is needed on how the author differentiated between on-target and off-target lesions. I observed that some images depicted both lesion types at the same level, which could lead to confusion.

      (3) The author performed only a basic difference analysis. A more comprehensive analysis, including calculations of markers related to treatment efficacy, could offer additional insights for clinical practice.

      (4) The transcriptome sequencing analysis provides insights into how stereotactic radiotherapy sensitizes immunotherapy; however, it currently relies on a simple pre- and post-treatment group comparison. It would be beneficial to include additional subgroups to explore more nuanced findings.

      (5) The author briefly discusses the effects of changes in tumor fibrosis and angiogenesis on treatment outcomes. Further experiments may be necessary to validate these findings and investigate the underlying mechanisms of immune regulation following treatment.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Ning et al. reported that Bcas2 played an indispensable role in zebrafish primitive hematopoiesis via sequestering β-catenin in the nucleus. The authors showed that loss of Bcas2 caused primitive hematopoietic defects in zebrafish. They unraveled that Bcas2 deficiency promoted β-catenin nuclear export via a CRM1-dependent manner in vivo and in vitro. They further validated that BCAS2 directly interacted with β-catenin in the nucleus and enhanced β-catenin accumulation through its CC domains. They unveil a novel insight into Bcas2, which is critical for zebrafish primitive hematopoiesis via regulating nuclear β-catenin stabilization rather than its canonical pre-mRNA splicing functions. Overall, the study is impressive and well-performed, although there are also some issues to address.

      Strengths:

      The study unveils a novel function of Bcas2, which is critical for zebrafish primitive hematopoiesis by sequestering β-catenin. The authors validated the results in vivo and in vitro. Most of the figures are clear and convincing. This study nicely complements the function of Bcas2 in primitive hematopoiesis.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have nicely answered all my questions, I have no problem.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Du et al. address the cell cycle-dependent clearance of misfolded protein aggregates mediated by the endoplasmic reticulum (ER) associated Hsp70 chaperone family and ER reorganisation. The observations are interesting and impactful to the field.

      Strength:

      The manuscript addresses the connection between the clearance of misfolded protein aggregates and the cell cycle using a proteostasis reporter targeted to ER in multiple cell lines. Through imaging and some biochemical assays, they establish the role of BiP, an Hsp70 family chaperone, and Cdk1 inactivation in aggregate clearance upon mitotic exit. Furthermore, the authors present an initial analysis of the role of ER reorganisation in this clearance. These are important correlations and could have implications for ageing-associated pathologies. Overall, the results are convincing and impactful to the field.

      Weakness:

      The manuscript still lacks a mechanistic understanding of aggregate clearance. Even though the authors have provided the role of different cellular components, such as BiP, Cdk1 and ATL2/3 through specific inhibitors, at least an outline establishing the sequence of events leading to clearance is missing. Moreover, the authors show that the levels of ER-FlucDM-eGFP do not change significantly throughout the cell cycle, indicating that protein degradation is not in play. Therefore, addressing/elaborating on the mechanism of disassembly can add value to the work. Also, the physiological relevance of aggregate clearance upon mitotic exit has not been tested, nor have the cellular targets of this mode of clearance been identified or discussed.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors quantified information in gesture and speech, and investigated the neural processing of speech and gestures in pMTG and LIFG, depending on their informational content, in 8 different time-windows, and using three different methods (EEG, HD-tDCS and TMS). They found that there is a time-sensitive and staged progression of neural engagement that is correlated with the informational content of the signal (speech/gesture).

      Strengths:

      A strength of the paper is that the authors attempted to combine three different methods to investigate speech-gesture processing.

      Comments on revisions:

      I thank the authors for their careful responses to my comments. However, I remain not convinced by their argumentation regarding the specificity of their spatial targeting and the time-windows that they used.

      The authors write that since they included a sham TMS condition, that the TMS selectively disrupted the IFG-pMTG interaction during specific time windows of the task related to gesture-speech semantic congruency. This to me does not show anything about the specificity of the time-windows itself, nor the selectivity of targeting in the TMS condition.

      It could still equally well be the case that other regions or networks relevant for gesture-speech integration are targeted, and it can still be the case that these timewindows are not specific, and effects bleed into other time periods. There seems to be no experimental evidence here that this is not the case.

      To be more specific, the authors write that double-pulse TMS has been widely used in previous studies (as found in their table). However, the studies cited in the table do not necessarily demonstrate the level of spatial and temporal specificity required to disentangle the contributions of tightly-coupled brain regions like the IFG and pMTG during the speech-gesture integration process. pMTG and IFG are located in very close proximity, and are known to be functionally and structurally interconnected, something that is not necessarily the case for the relatively large and/or anatomically distinct areas that the authors mention in their table.

      But also more in general: The mere fact that these methods have been used in other contexts does not necessarily mean they are appropriate or sufficient for investigating the current research question. Likewise, the cognitive processes involved in these studies are quite different from the complex, multimodal integration of gesture and speech. The authors have not provided a strong theoretical justification for why the temporal dynamics observed in these previous studies should generalize to the specific mechanisms of gesture-speech integration.

      Moreover, the studies cited in the table provided by the authors have used a wide range of interpulse intervals, from 20 ms to 100 ms, suggesting that the temporal precision required to capture the dynamics of gesture-speech integration (which is believed to occur within 200-300 ms; Obermeier & Gunter, 2015) may not even be achievable with their 40 ms time windows.

      I do appreciate the extra analyses that the authors mention. However, my 5th comment is still unanswered: why not use entropy scores as a continous measure?

      In light of these concerns, I do not believe the authors have adequately demonstrated the spatial and temporal specificity required to disentangle the contributions of the IFG and pMTG during the gesture-speech integration process. While the authors have made a sincere effort to address the concerns raised by the reviewers, and have done so with a lot of new analyses, I remain doubtful that the current methodological approach is sufficient to draw conclusions about the causal roles of the IFG and pMTG in gesture-speech integration.

      Reference:<br /> Obermeier, C., & Gunter, T. C. (2015). Multisensory Integration: The Case of a Time Window of Gesture-Speech Integration. Journal of Cognitive Neuroscience, 27(2), 292-307. https://doi.org/10.1162/jocn_a_00688

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is a significant study because it adapts current methods to develop an approach for identifying promising targets for therapeutics in viral genomic RNA. The authors provide a wide array of data from different methods to help support their findings.

      Strengths:

      There are a number of strengths to highlight in this manuscript.

      (1) The study uses a sophisticated technique (SHAPE-MaP) to analyze the PEDV RNA genome in situ, providing valuable insights into its structural features.

      (2) The authors provide a strong rationale for targeting specific RNA structures for antiviral development.

      (3) The study includes a range of experiments, including structural analysis, compound screening, siRNA design, and viral proliferation assays, to support their conclusions.

      (4) Finally, the findings have potential implications for the development of new antiviral therapies against PEDV and other RNA viruses.

      Overall, this interesting study highlights the importance of considering RNA structure when designing antiviral therapies and provides a compelling strategy for identifying promising RNA targets in viral genomes.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This is a very interesting paper addressing the hierarchical nature of the mammalian auditory system. The authors use an unconventional technique to assess brain responses -- functional ultrasound imaging (fUSI). This measures blood volume in the cortex at a relatively high spatial resolution. They present dynamic and stationary sounds in isolation and together, and show that the effect of the stationary sounds (relative to the dynamic sounds) on blood volume measurements decreases as one ascends the auditory hierarchy. Since the dynamic/stationary nature of sounds is related to their perception as foreground/background sounds (see below for more details), this suggests that neurons in higher levels of the cortex may be increasingly invariant to background sounds.

      The study is interesting, well conducted, and well written. I am broadly convinced by the results. However, I do have some concerns about the validity of the results, given the unconventional technique. fUSI is convenient because it is much less invasive than electrophysiology, and can image a large region of the cortex in one go. However, the relationship between blood volume and neuronal activity is unclear, and blood volume measurements are heavily temporally averaged relative to the underlying neuronal responses. I am particularly concerned about the implications of this for a study on dynamic/stationary stimuli in auditory cortical hierarchy, because the time scale of the dynamic sounds is such that much of the dynamic structure may be affected by this temporal averaging. Also, there is a well-known decrease in temporal following rate that is exhibited by neurons at higher levels of the auditory system. This means that results in different areas will be differently affected by the temporal averaging. I would like to see additional control models to investigate the impact of this.

      I also think that the authors should address several caveats: the fact that their measurements heavily spatially average neuronal responses, and therefore may not accurately reflect the underlying neuronal coding; that the perceptual background/foreground distinction is not identical to the dynamic/stationary distinction used here; and that ferret background/foreground perception may be very different from that in humans.

      Major points

      (1) Changes in blood volume due to brain activity are indirectly related to neuronal responses. The exact relationship is not clear, however, we do know two things for certain: (a) each measurable unit of blood volume change depends on the response of hundreds or thousands of neurons, and (b) the time course of the volume changes are are slow compared to the potential time course of the underlying neuronal responses. Both of these mean that important variability in neuronal responses will be averaged out when measuring blood changes. For example, if two neighbouring neurons have opposite responses to a given stimulus, this will produce opposite changes in blood volume, which will cancel each other out in the blood volume measurement due to (a). This is important in the present study because blood volume changes are implicitly being used as a measure of coding in the underlying neuronal population. The authors need to acknowledge that this is a coarse measure of neuronal responses and that important aspects of neuronal responses may be missing from the blood volume measure.

      (2) More importantly for the present study, however, the effect of (b) is that any rapid changes in the response of a single neuron will be cancelled out by temporal averaging. Imagine a neuron whose response is transient, consisting of rapid excitation followed by rapid inhibition. Temporal averaging of these two responses will tend to cancel out both of them. As a result, blood volume measurements will tend to smooth out any fast, dynamic responses in the underlying neuronal population. In the present study, this temporal averaging is likely to be particularly important because the authors are comparing responses to dynamic (nonstationary) stimuli with responses to more constant stimuli. To a first approximation, neuronal responses to dynamic stimuli are themselves dynamic, and responses to constant stimuli are themselves constant. Therefore, the averaging will mean that the responses to dynamic stimuli are suppressed relative to the real responses in the underlying neurons, whereas the responses to constant stimuli are more veridical. On top of this, temporal following rates tend to decrease as one ascends the auditory hierarchy, meaning that the comparison between dynamic and stationary responses will be differently affected in different brain areas. As a result, the dynamic/stationary balance is expected to change as you ascend the hierarchy, and I would expect this to directly affect the results observed in this study.

      It is not trivial to extrapolate from what we know about temporal following in the cortex to know exactly what the expected effect would be on the authors' results. As a first-pass control, I would strongly suggest incorporating into the authors' filterbank model a range of realistic temporal following rates (decreasing at higher levels), and spatially and temporally average these responses to get modelled cerebral blood flow measurements. I would want to know whether this model showed similar effects as in Figure 2. From my guess about what this model would show, I think it would not predict the effects shown by the authors in Figure 2. Nevertheless, this is an important issue to address and to provide control for.

      (3) I do not agree with the equivalence that the authors draw between the statistical stationarity of sounds and their classification as foreground or background sounds. It is true that, in a common foreground/background situation - speech against a background of white noise - the foreground is non-stationary and the background is stationary. However, it is easy to come up with examples where this relationship is reversed. For example, a continuous pure tone is perfectly stationary, but will be perceived as a foreground sound if played loudly. Background music may be very non-stationary but still easily ignored as a background sound when listening to overlaid speech. Ultimately, the foreground/background distinction is a perceptual one that is not exclusively determined by physical characteristics of the sounds, and certainly not by a simple measure of stationarity. I understand that the use of foreground/background in the present study increases the likely reach of the paper, but I don't think it is appropriate to use this subjective/imprecise terminology in the results section of the paper.

      (4) Related to the above, I think further caveats need to be acknowledged in the study. We do not know what sounds are perceived as foreground or background sounds by ferrets, or indeed whether they make this distinction reliably to the degree that humans do. Furthermore, the individual sounds used here have not been tested for their foreground/background-ness. Thus, the analysis relies on two logical jumps - first, that the stationarity of these sounds predicts their foreground/background perception in humans, and second, that this perceptual distinction is similar in ferrets and humans. I don't think it is known to what degree these jumps are justified. These issues do not directly affect the results, but I think it is essential to address these issues in the Discussion, because they are potentially major caveats to our understanding of the work.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The ventral nerve cord (VNC) of organisms like Drosophila is an invaluable model for studying neural development and organisation in more complex organisms. Its well-defined structure allows researchers to investigate how neurons develop, differentiate, and organise into functional circuits. As a critical central nervous system component, the VNC plays a key role in controlling motor functions, reflexes, and sensory integration.

      Particularly relevant to this work, the VNC provides a unique opportunity to explore neuronal hemilineages-groups of neurons that share molecular, genetic, and functional identities. Understanding these hemilineages is crucial for elucidating how neurons cooperate to form specialized circuits, essential for comprehending normal brain function and dysfunction.

      A significant challenge in the field has been the lack of developmentally stable, hemilineage-specific driver lines that enable precise tracking and measurement of individual VNC hemilineages. The authors address this need by generating and validating a comprehensive, lineage-specific split-GAL4 driver library.

      Strengths and weaknesses:

      The authors select new marker genes for hemilineages from previously published single-cell data of the VNC. They generate and validate specific and temporally stable lines for almost all the hemilineages in the VNC. They successfully achieved their aims, and their results support their conclusions. This will be a valuable resource for investigating neural circuit formation and function.

      Comments on revisions:

      The manuscript has been amended, and the points raised by the reviewers have been addressed.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Oor et al. report the potentially independent effects of the spatial and feature-based selection history on visuomotor choices. They outline compelling evidence, tracking the dynamic history effects based on their clever experimental design (urgent version of the search task). Their finding broadens the framework to identify variables contributing to choice behavior and their neural correlates in future studies.

      Strengths:

      In their urgent search task, the variable processing time of the visual cue leads to a dichotomy in choice performance-uninformed guesses vs. informed choices. Oor et al. did rigorous analyses to find a stronger influence of the location-based selection history on the uninformed guesses and a stronger influence of the feature-based selection history on the informed choices. It is a fundamental finding that contributes to understanding the drivers of behavioral variance. The results are clear, and the authors convincingly addressed all previously raised concerns, strengthening their conclusions.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is a very well-written paper presenting interesting findings related to the recovery following the end-Permian event in continental settings, from N China. The finding is timely as the topic is actively discussed in the scientific community. The data provides additional insights into the faunal, and partly, floral global recovery following the EPE, adding to the global picture.

      Strengths: The conclusions are supported by an impressive amount of sedimentological and paleontological data (mainly trace fossils) and illustrations.

      Weaknesses: [eliminated in revision]

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The paper by Papagiannakis et al is an elegant, mostly observational work detailing observations that polysome accumulation appears to drive nucleoid splitting and segregation. Overall I think this is an insightful work with solid observations.

      Strengths:

      The strengths of this paper are the careful and rigorous observational work that leads to their hypothesis. They find the accumulation of polysomes correlates with nucleoid splitting, and that the nucleoid segregation occurring right after splitting correlates with polysome segregation. These correlations are also backed up by other observations:

      (1) Faster polysome accumulation and DNA segregation at faster growth rates.<br /> (2) Polysome distribution negatively correlating with DNA positioning near asymmetric nucleoids.<br /> (3) Polysomes form in regions inaccessible to similarly sized particles.

      These above points are observational, I have no comments on these observations leading to their hypothesis.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have satisfied all of my concerns.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript is a focused investigation of the phosphor-regulation of a C. elegans kinesin-2 motor protein, OSM-3. In C-elegans sensory ciliary, kinesin-2 motor proteins Kinesin-II complex and OSM-3 homodimer transport IFT trains anterogradely to the ciliary tip. Kinesin-II carries OSM-3 as an inactive passenger from the ciliary base to the middle segment, where kinesin-II dissociates from IFT trains and OSM-3 gets activated and transports IFT trains to the distal segment. Therefore, activation/inactivation of OSM-3 plays an essential role in its ciliary function.

      Strengths:

      In this study, using mass spectrometry, the authors have shown that the NEKL-3 kinase phosphorylates a serine/threonine patch at the hinge region between coiled coils 1 and 2 of an OSM-3 dimer, referred to as the elbow region in ubiquitous kinesin-1. Phosphomimic mutants of these sites inhibit OSM-3 motility both in vitro and in vivo, suggesting that this phosphorylation is critical for the autoinhibition of the motor. Conversely, phospho-dead mutants of these sites hyperactivate OSM-3 motility in vitro and affect the localization of OSM3 in C. elegans. The authors also showed that Alanine to Tyrosine mutation of one of the phosphorylation rescues OS-3 function in live worms.

      Weaknesses:

      Collectively, this study presents evidence for the physiological role of OSM-3 elbow phosphorylation in its autoregulation, which affects ciliary localization and function of this motor. Overall, the work is well performed, and the results mostly support the conclusions of this manuscript. During revision, the authors further supported conclusions and ruled out alternative explanations by filling some logical gaps with new experimental evidence and in-text clarifications.

      Comments on revisions: I have no additional comments or concerns.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Ma & Yang et al. report a new investigation aimed at elucidating one of the key nutrients S. Typhimurium (STM) utilizes with the nutrient-poor intracellular niche within macrophage, focusing on the amino acid beta-alanine. From these data, the authors report that beta-alanine plays important roles in mediating STM infection and virulence. The authors employ a multidisciplinary approach that includes some mouse studies, and ultimately propose a mechanism by which panD, involved in B-Ala synthesis, mediates regulation of zinc homeostasis in Salmonella.

      Strengths and weaknesses:

      The results and model are adequately supported by the authors' data. Further work will need to be performed to learn whether the Zn2+ functions as proposed in their mechanism. By performing a small set of confirmatory experiments in S. Typhi, the authors provide some evidence of relevance to human infections.

      Impact:

      This work adds to the body of literature on the metabolic flexibility of Salmonella during infection that enable pathogenesis.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In contrast to the recent findings reported by Schuster S et al., this brief paper presents evidence suggesting that the stumpy form of T. brucei is likely the most pre-adapted form to progress through the life cycle of this parasite in the tsetse vector.

      Strengths:

      One significant experimental point is that all fly infection experiments are conducted in the absence of "boosting" metabolites like GlcNAc or S-glutathione. As a result, flies infected with slender trypanosomes present very low or nonexistent infection rates. This provides important experimental evidence that the findings of Schuster S and colleagues may need to be revisited.

      In the revised submission the authors also compared trypanosome midgut infection levels in tsetse flies when either young (teneral) or mature adult flies received infected bloodmeals, with or without 60 mM GlcNAc. The data clearly show that, unlike in teneral flies, the addition of GlcNAc to the trypanosome-infected bloodmeal does not enhance midgut infection in mature adult flies. This is now convincingly demonstrated in Figure 2 and provides strong experimental support for the suggestion that the effect reported by Schuster S. et al. may have been influenced by both fly age and the inclusion of metabolic "boosters" in the bloodmeal.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors performed an integration of 48 scRNA-seq public datasets and created a single-cell transcriptomic atlas for AML (222 samples comprising 748,679 cells). This is important since most AML scRNA-seq studies suffer from small sample size coupled with high heterogeneity. They used this atlas to further dissect AML with t(8;21) (AML-ETO/RUNX1-RUNX1T1), which is one of the most frequent AML subtypes in young people. In particular, they were able to predict Gene Regulatory Networks in this AML subtype using pySCENIC, which identified the paediatric regulon defined by a distinct group of hematopoietic transcription factors (TFs) and the adult regulon for t(8;21). They further validated this in bulk RNA-seq with AUCell algorithm and inferred prenatal signature to 5 key TFs (KDM5A, REST, BCLAF1, YY1, and RAD21), and the postnatal signature to 9 TFs (ENO1, TFDP1, MYBL2, KLF1, TAGLN2, KLF2, IRF7, SPI1, and YXB1). They also used SCENIC+ to identify enhancer-driven regulons (eRegulons), forming an eGRN, and found that prenatal origin shows a specific HSC eRegulon profile, while a postnatal origin shows a GMP profile. They also did an in silico perturbation and found AP-1 complex (JUN, ATF4, FOSL2), P300, and BCLAF1 as important TFs to induce differentiation. Overall, I found this study very important in creating a comprehensive resource for AML research.

      Strengths:

      (1) The generation of an AML atlas integrating multiple datasets with almost 750K cells will further support the community working on AML.

      (2) Characterisation of t(8;21) AML proposes new interesting leads.

      Weaknesses:

      Were these t(8;21) TFs/regulons identified from any of the single datasets? For example, if the authors apply pySCENIC to any dataset, would they find the same TFs, or is it the increase in the number of cells that allows identification of these?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors use gene functional analysis, pharmacology and live imaging to develop a proposed model of diverse G protein family signalling that takes place in the papillae during the ascidian Ciona larval adhesion to regulate the timing of initiation of the morphological changes of metamorphosis. Their experiments provide solid evidence that antagonistic G protein signalling regulates cAMP levels in the papillae, which provides a threshold for triggering metamorphosis that is reflective of a larva keeping a strong and sustained level of contact with a substrate for a minimum period of approximately half an hour. The authors discuss their reasoning and address different specific aspects of their proposed timing mechanism to provide a logical flow to the manuscript. The results are nicely linked to the ecology of Ciona larval settlement and will be of interest to developmental biologists, neurobiologists, molecular biologists, marine biologists as well as provide information relevant to antifouling and aquaculture sectors.

      First, the authors knock down the G proteins Gaq and Gas to show that these genes are important for Ciona larval metamorphosis. They then provide evidence that the Gaq protein acts through a Ca2+ pathway mediated by phospholipase C and inositol triphosphate by showing that inositol phosphate and phospholipase C gene knockdown also inhibits metamorphosis, while overexpression of Gaq or phospholipase C allows larvae to undergo metamorphosis even in the absence of their mechanosensory cue, which is deprived by removing the posterior half of the tail and culturing the larvae on agar-coated dishes. The authors used calcium imaging with a genetically encoded fluorescent calcium sensor to show that Gq knockdown larvae lack a Ca2+ spike in their papillae after mechanostimulation, confirming that Gaq acts through a Ca2+ pathway. Similarly the authors show that overexpression of Gas also enables larvae to metamorphose in the absence of mechanostimulation, suggesting a role for both Gaq and Gas in this process.

      To confirm that Gas acts through cAMP signalling, the authors use pharmacological treatment or overexpression of a photoactivating adenylate cyclase to increase cAMP, and show that this also enables larvae to metamorphose in the absence of mechanostimulation, but only when their adhesive papillae are still present. Transcriptome data indicate that both Gs and Gq pathway genes are expressed in the adhesive papillae of the Ciona larva. The authors use a fluorescent cAMP indicator, Pink Flamindo, to show that cAMP increases in the papillae upon adhesion to a substrate, and this increase is lost in Gs and Gq knockdown larvae. Complementary to this, larvae that fail to undergo metamorphosis lack a cAMP increase in papillae.

      The authors then provide evidence that GABA signalling within the papillae is acting downstream of the G proteins to induce metamorphosis. Transcriptome data shows that the genes for the GABA-producing enzyme (GAD), and for GABAb receptors, are both expressed in papillae. Pharmacological experiments show that GABA induces metamorphosis in the absence of mechanosensory cues, but only in larvae that retain their papillae. To show that GABA signalling within the papillae, rather than from the brain of the larva is important, the authors also demonstrate that anterior segments of larvae lacking the brain, can also be stimulated to metamorphose by GABA, and show changes in gene expression caused by GABA.

      The authors then use a combination of pharmacology and knockdown experiments in the presence or absence of mechanosensory cues to show that Gq/Ca2+ signalling acts upstream of Gs/cAMP signalling. As elevation of cAMP by pharmacology or photoactivating adenylate cyclase rescued GABA pathway mutant larvae, the Gq and Gs pathways were concluded to be downstream of GABA signaling. However, as GABA treatment could still induce Gaq- and Gas-knockdown larvae to metamorphose, suggesting an alternative pathway to metamorphosis, which the authors deduce to be through a third G protein, Gai. They identify an unusual Gai protein that based on transcriptome data is strongly expressed in the papillae. Gai knockdown larvae fail to metamorphose but are rescued by GABA treatment, which can be explained by a potential additional Gai protein being still present (this is confirmed experimentally with MO knockdown experiments). The authors then use overexpression and knockdown experiments to show that the Gai protein acts through Gβγi complex to activate phospholipase C. Their experiments also indicate potential for a complementary or compensatory role for Gai and Gaq signalling through Gβγi. By inhibiting the potassium channel GIRK through knockdown, and the MAPK pathway gene MEK1/2 by pharmacology, the authors also establish a role for these in their proposed model of signalling, allowing GABA and cAMP to compensate or interact with each other.

      The strength of this paper is the meticulous and extensive experiments, which are carefully designed to be able to precisely target specific genes in the putative signalling pathway to build step by step a complex model that can demonstrate how metamorphosis of the ascidian larva is timed so as to only occur when strongly attached to a suitable substrate. The unique possibility of inhibiting mechanosensory-induced metamorphosis by removing some of the tail and smoothing the attachment substrate allows the authors to investigate potential effects on both activation and inhibition of metamorphosis, and to confirm that specific signalling pathways are clearly downstream of the initial mechanosensory stimulation. The study is also clear about which aspects of the model still remain unknown, such as which ligands and receptors may be responsible for the binding and activation of Gaq and Gas. Experiments testing metamorphosis of just the anterior region of the larvae nicely demonstrate the need for signalling in the region of the papillae, as do experiments where the papillae are removed, which then block metamorphosis in treatments that would otherwise stimulate it. The final model makes a clear summary of how the extensive experiments all fit together into a cohesive potential signalling network, which can be built upon in the future to potentially integrate the role of sensory cues additional to mechanosensation.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript details the results of a small pilot study of neoadjuvant radiotherapy followed by combination treatment with hormone therapy and dalpiciclib for early stage HR+/HER2-negative breast cancer.

      Strengths:

      The strengths of the manuscript include the scientific rationale behind the approach, and the inclusion of some simple translational studies.

      Weaknesses:

      The main weakness of the manuscript is that a study this small is not powered to fully characterize efficacy or safety of a treatment approach, and can, at best, can demonstrate feasibility. These data need validation in a larger cohort before they can have any implications for clinical practice, and the treatment approach outlined should not yet be considered a true alternative to standard evidence-based approaches.

      I would urge the readers exercise caution when comparing results of this 12-patient pilot study to historical studies, many of which were much larger, and had different treatment protocols and baseline patient characteristics. Cross-trial comparisons like this are prone to mislead, even when comparing well powered studies. With such a small sample size, the risk of statistical error is very high, and comparisons like this have little meaning.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary

      In their paper Zhan et al. have used Pf genetic data from simulated data and Ghanaian field samples to elucidate a relationship between multiplicity of infection (MOI) (the number of distinct parasite clones in a single host infection) and force of infection (FOI). Specifically, they use sequencing data from the var genes of Pf along with Bayesian modeling to estimate MOI individual infections and use these values along with methods from queueing theory that rely on various assumptions to estimate FOI. They compare these estimates to known FOIs in a simulated scenario and describe the relationship between these estimated FOI values and another commonly used metric of transmission EIR (entomological inoculation rate).

      This approach does fill an important gap in malaria epidemiology, namely estimating force of infection, which is currently complicated by several factors including superinfection, unknown duration of infection, and highly genetically diverse parasite populations. The authors use a new approach borrowing from other fields of statistics and modeling and make extensive efforts to evaluate their approach under a range of realistic sampling scenarios. However, the write-up would greatly benefit from added clarity both in the description of methods, and in the presentation of the results. Without these clarifications, rigorously evaluating whether the author's proposed method of estimating FOI is sound remains difficult. Additionally, there are several limitations that call into question the stated generalizability of this method that should at minimum be further discussed by authors and in some cases require a more thorough evaluation.

      Major comments:

      (1) Description and evaluation of FOI estimation procedure.

      a. The methods section describing the two-moment approximation and accompanying appendix is lacking several important details. Equations on line 891 and 892 are only a small part of the equations in Choi et al. and do not adequately describe the procedure notably several quantities in those equations are never defined some of them are important to understand the method (e.g. A, S as the main random variables for inter-arrival times and service times, aR and bR which are the known time average quantities, and these also rely on the squared coefficient of variation of the random variable which is also never introduced in the paper). Without going back to the Choi paper to understand these quantities, and to understand the assumptions of this method it was not possible to follow how this works in the paper. At minimum, all variables used in the equations should be clearly defined.

      b. Additionally, the description in the main text of how queueing procedure can be used to describe malaria infections would benefit from a diagram currently as written it's very difficult to follow.

      c. Just observing the box plots of mean and 95% CI on a plot with the FOI estimate (Figures 1, 2 and 10-14) is not sufficient to adequately assess the performance of this estimator. First, it is not clear whether authors are displaying the bootstrapped 95%Cis or whether they are just showing the distribution of the mean FOI taken over multiple simulations, and then it seems that they are also estimating mean FOI per host on an annual basis. Showing a distribution of those per host estimates would also be helpful. Second, a more quantitative assessment of the ability of the estimator to recover the truth across simulations (e.g. proportion of simulations where the truth is captured in the 95% CI or something like this) is important in many cases it seems that the estimator is always underestimating the true FOI and may not even contain the true value in the FOI distribution (e.g. figure 10, figure 1 under the mid IRS panel). But it's not possible to conclude on way or the other based on this visualization. This is a major issue since it calls into question whether there is in fact data to support that these methods give good and consistent FOI estimates.

      d. Furthermore authors state in the methods that the choice of mean and variance (and thus second moment) parameters for inter arrival times are varied widely, however, it's not clear what those ranges are there needs to be a clear table or figure caption showing what combinations of values were tested and which results are produced from them, this is an essential component of the method and it's impossible to fully evaluate its performance without this information. This relates to the issue of selecting the mean and variance values that maximize the likelihood of observing a given distribution of MOI estimates, this is very unclear since no likelihoods have been written down in the methods section of the main text, which likelihood are the authors referring to, is this the probability distribution of the steady state queue length distribution? At other places the authors refer to these quantities as Maximum Likelihood estimators, how do they know they have found the MLE? There are no derivations in the manuscript to support this. The authors should specify and likelihood and include in an appendix why their estimation procedure is in fact maximizing this likelihood preferably with evidence of the shape of the likelihood, and how fine the grid of values they tested are for their mean and variance since this could influence the overall quality of the estimation procedure.

      (2) Limitation of FOI estimation procedure.

      a. The authors discuss the importance of duration of infection to this problem. While I agree that empirically estimating this is not possible, there are other options besides assuming that all 1-5 year olds have the same duration of infection distribution as naïve adults co-infected with syphilis. E.g. it would be useful to test a wide range of assumed infection duration and assess their impact on the estimation procedure. Furthermore, if the authors are going to stick to the described method for duration of infection, the potentially limited generalizability of this method needs to be further highlighted in both the introduction, and the discussion. In particular, for an estimated mean FOI of about 5 per host per year in the pre-IRS season as estimated in Ghana (Figure 3) it seems that this would not translate to 4 year old being immune naïve, and certainly this would not necessarily generalize well to a school-aged child population or an adult population.

      b. The evaluation of the capacity parameter c seems to be quite important, and is set at 30, however, the authors only describe trying values of 25 and 30, and claim that this does not impact FOI inference, however it is not clear that this is the case. What happens if carrying capacity is increased substantially? Alternatively, this would be more convincing if the authors provided a mathematical explanation of why the carrying capacity increasing will not influence the FOI inference, but absent that, this should be mentioned and discussed as a limitation.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have adequately responded to all comments.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Cellulose is the major component of the plant cell wall and as such is a major component of all plant biomass on the planet. It is made at the cell surface by a large membrane-bound complex known as the cellular synthase complex. It is the structure of the cellulose synthase complex that determines the structure of the cellulose microfibril, the unit of cellulose found in nature. Consequently, while understanding the molecular structure of individual catalytic subunits that synthesise individual beta 1-4 glucose chains is important, to really understand cellulose synthesis it is necessary to understand the structure of the entire complex.

      In higher plants cellulose is synthesised by a large membrane-bound complex composed of three different CESA proteins. During cellulose synthesis in the primary cell wall this is composed of members of groups CESA1, CESA3 and CESA6. While the authors have previously presented structural data on CESA8, required for cellulose synthesis in the secondary cell wall, here they provide structural and enzymatic analysis of CESA1, CESA3 and CESA6 from soybean.

      The authors have utilised their established protocol to purify trimers for all three classes of CESA proteins and obtain structural information using electron microscopy. The structures reveal some subtle, but interesting differences between the structures obtained in this study and that previously obtained for CESA8. In particular, they identify a change in the position of transmembrane helices 7 that in previous structures formed part of the transmembrane channel. In the structure of CESA1 TM7 is shifted laterally to a position more towards the periphery of the protomer where is stabilised by inter protomer interactions. This creates a large lipid exposed channel opening that is likely encountered by the growing cellulose chain. In the discussion the authors speculate this channel might facilitate lateral movement of cellulose chains in the membrane what would allow them to associate to form the microfibril. There is, however, no explanation for why this might be different for CESA proteins involved in primary and secondary cell wall CESA proteins.

      Interactions within the trimer as stabilised by the plant conserved regions (PCR), while in common with previous studies that class-specific regions (CSR) is not resolved, likely of it being highly disordered as has been suggested in previous studies. As the name suggests these regions are likely to be important for determining how different CESA proteins interact, but it remains to be seen how they achieve this. Similarly, the N-terminal domain (NTD) remains rather intriguing. In the CESA3 structure, the NTD forms a stalk that protrudes into the cytoplasm that was previously observed for CESA8, while it remains unresolved in CESA1 and CESA6. The authors suggest the inability to resolve this region is likely the result of the NTD being able to form multiple conformations. Loss of the NTD does not prevent the formation of trimers and CESA1 and CESA3 are still able to interact. Previous bioinformatic studies suggest that the CSR part of the NTD is also highly class-specific (Carrol et al. 2011 Frontiers in Plant Science 2, 5-5) suggesting it is also likely to participate in interactions between different CESA proteins. This analysis provides little new information on the structure of the NTD or how it functions as part of the cellulose synthase complex.

      The other important point regarding cellulose synthesis is how the different CESA trimers function during cellulose synthesis and complex assembly. The authors provide biochemical evidence that mixed complexes of two different CESA proteins are able to synergistically increase the rate of cellulose synthesis. This increase is not dramatic, around 2-fold as it is unclear what brings about this increase and whether it results from the ability to form larger complexes favouring greater rates of cellulose synthesis.

      It is clear however from electron microscopy that mixing of CESA proteins can lead to the formation of large aggregates not seen with single CESA proteins. The aggregates observed do not form rosette type shapes but appear to be much more random aggregates of different CESA trimers. The authors suggest that this is likely a result of the fact that the complexes are not constrained in two dimensions by the membrane, however if these are biologically relevant interactions that form aggregates is somewhat surprising that they do not form hexameric structures, particularly since that are essentially forming as a single layer.

      Overall the study provides some important data and raises a number of important questions.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Using lineage tracing and single-cell RNA sequencing, Li et al. reported brain ECs can differentiate into pericytes after stroke. This finding is novel and important to the field.

      Strengths:

      Detailed characterization of each time point and genetic manipulation of genes for study role of ECs and E-pericyte.

      Weaknesses:

      Genetic evidence for lineage tracing of ECs and E-pericytes requires more convincing data that include staining, FACS, and scRNA-seq analysis.

      Comments on revisions:

      Authors have addressed some of my concerns and questions, and also plan to include more convincing data to support the conclusion. Some unpublished data should be included in the online supporting files.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The paper by Tolossa et al. presents classification studies that aim to predict the anatomical location of a neuron from the statistics of its in-vivo firing pattern. They study two types of statistics (ISI distribution, PSTH) and try to predict the location at different resolutions (region, subregion, cortical layer).

      Strengths:

      This paper provides a systematic quantification of the single-neuron firing vs location relationship.

      The quality of the classification setup seems high.

      The paper uncovers that, at the single neuron level, the firing pattern of a neuron carries some information on the neuron's anatomical location, although the predictive accuracy is not high enough to rely on this relationship in most cases.

      Weaknesses:

      As the authors mention in the Discussion, it is not clear whether the observed differences in firing is epiphenomenal. If the anatomical location information is useful to the neuron, to what extent can this be inferred from the vicinity of the synaptic site, based on the neurotransmitter and neuromodulator identities? Why would the neuron need to dynamically update its prediction of the anatomical location of its pre-synaptic partner based on activity when that location is static, and if that information is genetically encoded in synaptic proteins, etc (e.g., the type of the synaptic site)? Note that the neuron does not need to classify all possible locations to guess the location of its pre-synaptic partner because it may only receive input from a subset of locations. Ultimately, the inability to dissect whether the paper's findings point to a mechanism utilized by neurons or merely represent an epiphenomenon is the main weakness of the curious, though somewhat weak, observations described in this paper.

    1. Joint Public Review:

      This study presents novel insights into the formation and characterization of a penetration ring during host infection by Magnaporthe oryzae. Based on the solid genetic evidence and localization data, the authors demonstrate the structural presence of the penetration ring and the contribution of Ppe1 to fungal virulence. Nevertheless, the mechanisms through which the penetration ring influences host-pathogen interaction, including its potential function in effector translocation, remain only partially resolved. Further work using higher-resolution imaging and functional assays will help address this knowledge gap. Overall, the findings are valuable for advancing our understanding of plant-pathogen interactions, though important mechanistic questions remain open.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper proposes a neural mechanism underlying the perception of ambiguous images: neuromodulation changes the gain of neural circuits promoting a switch between two possible percepts. Converging evidence for this is provided by indirect measurements of neuromodulatory activity and large-scale brain dynamics which are linked by a neural network model. However, both the data analysis as well as the computational modeling are incomplete and would benefit from a more rigorous approach.

      This is a revised version of the manuscript which, in my view, is a considerable step forward compared to the original submission.

      In particular, the authors now model phasic gain changes in the RNN, based on the network's uncertainty. This is original and much closer to what is suggested by the phasic pupil responses. They also show that switching is actually a network effect because switching times depend on network configuration (Fig 2). This resolves my main comments 1 and 2 about the model.

      The mechanism, as I understand it, is different from what the authors described before in the RNN with tonic gain changes. As uncertainty increases, the network enters a regime in which the two excitatory populations start to oscillate. My intuition is that this oscillation arises from the feedback loop created by the new gain control mechanism. If my intuition is correct, I think it would be worth to explain this mechanism in the paper more explicitly.

      Comments on revisions:

      This is a second revision. I have no further comments. The authors have not answered the question that I had in the previous round (about the origin of oscillations in the RNN). I think this topic deserves to be explored in more detail but perhaps that is beyond the scope of the current paper.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript reports that expression of the E. coli operon topAI/yjhQ/yjhP is controlled by the translation status of a small open reading frame, that authors have discovered and named toiL, located in the leader region upstream of the operon. Authors propose the following model for topAI activation: Under normal conditions, toiL is translated but topAI is not expressed because of Rho-dependent transcription termination within the topAI ORF and because its ribosome binding site and start codon are trapped in an mRNA hairpin. Ribosome stalling at various codons of the toiL ORF, prompted in this work by some ribosome-targeting antibiotics, triggers an mRNA conformational switch which allows translation of topAI and, in addition, activation of the operon's transcription because presence of translating ribosomes at the topAI ORF blocks Rho from terminating transcription. The model is appealing and several of the experimental data mainly support it. However, it remains unanswered what is the true trigger of the translation arrest at toiL and what is the physiological role of the induced expression of the topAI/yjhQ/yjhP operon.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors reveal that GIF/MT-3 regulates the zinc homeostasis depending on the cellular redox status. The manuscript technically sounds, and their data concretely suggest that the recombinant MTs, not only GIF/MT-3 but also canonical MTs such as MT-1 and MT-2, contain sulfane sulfur atoms for the Zn-binding. The scenario proposed by the authors seems to be reasonable to explain the Zn homeostasis by the cellular redox balance.

      Strengths:

      The data presented in the manuscript solidly reveal that recombinant GIF/MT-3 contains sulfane sulfur.

      Weaknesses:

      It remains unclear whether native MTs, in particular induced MTs in vivo contain sulfane sulfur or not.

      Comments on revisions:

      Although the authors have revealed the sulfane sulfur content in native MT-3, my question, namely, whether canonical MT-1 and MT-2 contained sulfane sulfur after the induction has been left.<br /> The authors argue that the biological significance of sulfane sulfur in MTs lies in its ability to contribute to metal binding affinity, provide a sensing mechanism against oxidative stress, and aid in the regulation of the protein. Due to their biological roles, induced MT-1 and MT-2 could contain sulfane sulfur in their molecules. Thus, I expect the authors to evaluate or explain the sulfane sulfur content in induced MT-1 and MT-2.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Laura Morano and colleagues have performed a screen to identify compounds that interfere with the formation of TopBP1 condensates. TopBP1 plays a crucial role in the DNA damage response, and specifically the activation of ATR. They found that the GSK-3b inhibitor AZD2858 reduced the formation of TopBP1 condensates and activation of ATR and its downstream target CHK1 in colorectal cancer cell lines treated with the clinically relevant irinotecan active metabolite SN-38. This inhibition of TopBP1 condensates by AZD2858 was independent from its effect on GSK-3b enzymatic activity. Mechanistically, they show that AZD2858 thus can interfere with intra-S-phase checkpoint signaling, resulting in enhanced cytostatic and cytotoxic effects of SN-38 (or SN-38+Fluoracil aka FOLFIRI) in vitro in colorectal carcinoma cell lines.

      Major comments from the first round of peer review:

      Overall the work is rigorous and the main conclusions are convincing. However, they only show the effects of their combination treatments on colorectal cancer cell lines. I'm worried that blocking the formation of TopB1 condensates will also be detrimental in non-transformed cells. Furthermore it is somewhat disappointing that it remains unclear how AZD2858 blocks self-assembly of TopBP1 condensates, although I understand that unraveling this would be complex and somewhat out-of-reach for now. Here are some specific points for improvement:

      1) The authors conclude that "These data supports [sic] the feasibility of targeting condensates formed in response to DNA damage to improve chemotherapy-based cancer treatments". To support this conclusion the authors need to show that proliferating non-transformed cells (e.g. primary cell cultures or organoids) can tolerate the combination of AZD2858 + SN-38 (or FOLFIRI) better than colorectal cancer cells.

      2) Page 19 "This suggests that the combination... arrests the cell cycle before mitosis in a DNA-PKsc-dependent manner." I find the remark that this arrest would be DNA-PKcs-dependent too speculative. I suppose that the authors base this claim on reference 55 but if they want to support this claim they need to prove this by adding DNA-PKcs inhibitors to their treated cells.

      3) When discussing Figure S5B the authors claim that SN-38 + AZD2858 progressively increases the fractions of BrdU positive cells, but this is not supported by statistical analysis. The fractions are still very small, so I would like to see statistics on these data. Alternatively, the authors could take out this conclusion.

      Comments on revised version:

      I have reviewed the revised manuscript and read the rebuttal. The authors have carefully addressed my concerns. There is however one point that needs further work:

      This follows up on my major point #1 in my initial review. I had I asked the authors to demonstrate that FOLFIRI + AZD are less toxic to untransformed colorectal cells than colorectal cancer cell lines.

      It is good to see that the authors took my advice and show effects of the drug treatments on the untransformed colorectal cell line CCD841. It seems to be less sensitive to AZD and FOLFIRI in the figure in the rebuttal. What surprises me is that I cannot find these new figures anywhere in the revised manuscript. Also, the data seem preliminary, because I do not see any standard errors in the graphs, and I cannot find a description of the time of drug incubation. I ask the authors to make sure that the CCD841 data are reproducible, and make sure they incorporate the data in the revised manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors present a thorough mechanistic study of the J-domain protein Apj1 in Saccharomyces cerevisiae, establishing it as a key repressor of Hsf1 during the attenuation phase of the heat shock response (HSR). The authors integrate genetic, transcriptomic (ribosome profiling), biochemical (ChIP, Western), and imaging data to dissect how Apj1, Ydj1, and Sis1 modulate Hsf1 activity under stress and non-stress conditions. The work proposes a model where Apj1 specifically promotes displacement of Hsf1 from DNA-bound heat shock elements, linking nuclear PQC to transcriptional control.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the work is highly novel - this is the first detailed functional dissection of Apj1 in Hsf1 attenuation. It fills an important gap in our understanding of how Hsf1 activity is fine-tuned after stress induction, with implications for broader eukaryotic systems. I really appreciate the use of innovative techniques, including ribosome profiling and time-resolved localization of proteins (and tagged loci) to probe the Hsf1 mechanism. The overall proposed mechanism is compelling and clear - the discussion proposes a phased control model for Hsf1 by distinct JDPs, with Apj1 acting post-activation, while Sis1 and Ydj1 suppress basal activity.

      The manuscript is well-written and will be exciting for the proteostasis field and beyond.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Strengths:

      This is an interesting topic and a novel theme. The visualisations and presentation are to a very high standard. The Introduction is very well-written and introduces the main concepts well, with a clear logical structure and good use of the literature. The Methods are detailed and well described and written in such a fashion that they are transparent and repeatable.

      Weaknesses:

      I only have one major issue, which is possibly a product of the structure requirements of the paper/journal. With the Results and Discussion, line 91 onwards. I understand the structure of the paper necessitates delving immediately into the results, but it is quite hard to follow due to lack of background information. In comparison to the Methods, which are incredibly detailed, the Results in the main section read quite superficial. They provide broad overviews of broad findings but I found it very hard to actually get a picture of the main results in its current form. For example, how the different species factor in, etc.

      The authors have done a good job of responding to the reviewer's comments, and the paper is now much improved.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study considers learning with brain-computer interfaces (BCIs) in nonhuman primates, and in particular, the high speed and flexibility with which subjects learn to control these BCIs.

      The authors raise the hypothesis that such learning is based on controlling a small number of input or control variables, rather than directly adapting neural connectivity within the network of neurons that drive the BCI. Adapting a small number of input variables would circumvent the issue of credit assignment in high dimensions and allow for quick learning, potentially using cognitive strategies ("re-aiming"). Based on a computational model, the authors show that such a strategy is viable in a number of experimental settings and reproduces previous experimental observations:

      (1) Differences in learning with decoders either within or outside of the neural manifold (the space spanned by the dominant modes of neural activity).

      (2) A novel, theory-based prediction on biases in BCI learning due to the positivity of neural firing rates, which is then confirmed in data from previous experiments.

      (3) An example of "illusory credit assignment": Changes in neurons' tuning curves depending on whether these neurons are affected by changes in the BCI decoder, even though learning only happens on the level of low-dimensional control variables.

      (4) A reproduction of results from operant conditioning of individual neurons, in particular, the observation that it is difficult to change the firing rates of neurons strongly correlated before learning in different directions (up vs down).

      Taken together, these observations yield strong evidence for the plausibility that subjects use such a learning strategy, at least during short-term learning.

      Strengths:

      Text and figures are clearly structured and allow readers to understand the main concepts well. The study presents a very clear and simple model that explains a number of seemingly disparate or even contradictory observations (neuron-specific credit assignment vs. low-dimensional, cognitive control). The predicted and tested bias due to positivity of firing rates provides a neat example of how such a theory can help understand experimental results. The idea that subjects first use a small number of command variables (those sufficient in the calibration task) and later, during learning, add more variables provides a nice illustration of the idea that learning takes place on multiple time scales, potentially with different mechanisms at play. On a more detailed level, the study is a nice example of closely matching the theory to the experiment, in particular regarding the modeling of BCI perturbations.

      Weaknesses:

      Overall, I find only two minor weaknesses. First, the insights of this study are, first and foremost, of feed-forward nature, and a feed-forward network would have been enough (and the more parsimonious model) to illustrate the results. While using a recurrent neural network (RNN) shows that the results are, in general, compatible with recurrent dynamics, the specific limitations imposed by RNNs (e.g., dynamical stability, low-dimensional internal dynamics) are not the focus of this study. Indeed, the additional RNN models in the supplementary material show that under more constrained conditions for the RNN (low-dimensional dynamics), using the input control alone runs into difficulties.

      Second, explaining the quantitative differences between the model and data for shifts in tuning curves seems to take the model a bit too literally. The model serves greatly for qualitative observations. I assume, however, that many of the unconstrained aspects of the model would yield quantitatively different results.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this manuscript, Kerlin et al. introduce a novel and conceptually important framework for analyzing allelic transcriptional heterogeneity using single-molecule microscopy. The authors aim to distinguish regulatory interactions occurring in cis-between genes on the same allele-from those in trans, between alleles, thereby extending classical models of transcriptional noise into the spatial and allelic domain. They apply this approach to three genes within the FOS locus in MCF7 cells, under both basal and estrogen-induced conditions, and report distinct patterns of transcriptional coordination that depend on gene proximity and chromatin insulation.

      A major strength of this work lies in its innovative methodology and the clarity with which the analytical framework is described. The authors effectively build on foundational ideas in gene expression variability and adapt them to resolve a previously underexplored question - how nearby genes on the same allele may influence each other's transcriptional activity. The imaging data are of high quality, the mathematical derivation is comprehensive, and the overall presentation is strong. The study makes a compelling argument for the value of allele-resolved analysis, highlighting that failure to account for allelic and chromatin context may lead to inaccurate or incomplete interpretations of regulatory mechanisms.

      That said, the scope of the data is currently limited to a single locus in one cell type. As such, some of the general conclusions, particularly those in the abstract and discussion, may be overstated. The evidence supports the findings within the FOS locus, but it remains unclear whether the observed patterns apply broadly across the genome. The utility and generality of the method would be significantly strengthened by additional validation.

      One specific area where the analysis could be improved is through the inclusion of randomized control comparisons. For example, the results presented in Figure 2D and analyzed in Figure 3 could be compared against randomized datasets to establish a baseline of what would be expected by chance. This would help determine the significance of the observed correlations and strengthen confidence in the model's specificity.

      Additionally, the framework should be tested on simulated datasets with a known ground truth to evaluate the robustness of its assumptions and the reliability of its outputs. Testing the approach against existing allele-specific single-cell datasets from other studies would also help assess its generalizability. While the authors suggest the framework could be extended to transcriptomics and spatial omics, these possibilities are not explored in the current study, and future work in this direction should be clearly marked as such.

      In summary, this manuscript presents a methodologically rigorous and biologically significant advance in the study of gene regulation. The approach fills an important gap by enabling allele-resolved, locus-specific analysis of transcriptional coordination, with implications for both basic science and clinical applications. The conclusions are well supported within the studied context, but further validation - particularly through randomized data comparison, simulations, and broader application - would be valuable in assessing the broader utility of the framework.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors hypothesized that the lung immune landscape in mice with diabetes and TB comorbidity is different from that of mice with DM-only or TB-only, or healthy mice. Systematically, the authors established the 'basal' lung immune landscape in DM or healthy animals before infection with Mycobacterium tuberculosis, allowing them to tease out changes in cell types with TB infection and focused subsequent studies on DM-TB and TB comparisons. The authors chose day 21 post-Mtb infection as the point of analysis since this is the peak of immune responses to Mtb infection as per an earlier study (Das et al. 2021). As expected, the authors found differences in the cellular composition of the DM mice with or without TB or TB-only mice, including reduced IFNg response, elevated Th17 cells, increased IL-16 signaling, and altered naive CD4+ and naive CD8+ T cell numbers. The authors have used a series of techniques for methodological and analytical approaches to identify potential pathways that can be targeted for therapies against DM-TB. However, the authors have failed to propose a model that could explain their observations at the time point tested, lowering enthusiasm for the conclusions of the study.

      Strengths:

      The strength of the study is the use of a validated model of mouse DM-TB and a meticulous approach to establish and define a 'baseline" lung cellular landscape in DM and healthy mice before Mtb infection. The use of an up-to-date analytical pipeline by the authors is commendable.

      The literature review is exhaustive, and the authors have put considerable effort into borrowing from other conditions where the identified genes of pathways have been implicated.

      Weaknesses:

      The key limitations of the study include:

      (1) The authors have failed to link a specific cell type, that is, Th17 cell activation, to or with IL-16 signaling as the drivers regulating conditions that contribute significantly to the dysregulated immune responses in DM-TB. For context, naive CD4+ and naive CD8+ T cells cannot be considered "specific cell types" because they have no determined cell fate; they could mature to any other cell type - cytotoxic T cells, Th1, or even Th17 or Tc17 cells.

      (2) Since day 21 post-Mtb infection is an earlier timepoint, the authors should have provided data on cellular composition in the experiments in Figure 7. From the work of Kornfeld and colleagues, there is delayed cell recruitment in DM-TB, but it is likely that later on, due to persistent inflammation (from chronic hyperglycemia), DM-TB mice have more or equal cell numbers in the lung. Anecdotally, the authors found differences in CFU at a later time point but not at 21 days post-infection. This fits with human studies where there is a higher prevalence of cavities in DM-TB compared to TB-only patients. The authors missed the opportunity to clarify this important point by excluding cellular data from the 56-day post-infection experiments.

      (3) The power of the study would be improved by the direct comparisons of three groups: DM vs DM-TB vs TB to recapitulate the human populations and allow the authors to address the question of 'why does DM worsen TB outcome?'. The current analysis of DM-TB vs TB is not fit for this because the TB is on a healthy background, while DM-TB is a result of two conditions that independently perturb immune homeostasis.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The paper is well written and investigates the cross-species insemination of fish eggs with mouse sperm. I have a few major and minor comments.

      Strengths:

      The experiments are well executed and could provide valuable insights into the complex mechanisms of fertilization in both species. I found the information presented to be very interesting,

      Weaknesses:

      The rationale of some of the experiments is not well defined.

      Major Comments:

      (1) Figure 5<br /> I do not understand the rationale for performing experiments using CatSper-null sperm and CD9-null oocytes. It is well established that CatSper-null sperm are unable to penetrate the zona pellucida (ZP), so the relevance of this approach is unclear.

      (2) Micropyle penetration and sperm motility<br /> CatSper-null sperm are reportedly unable to cross the micropyle, but this could be due to their reduced motility rather than a lack of hyperactivation per se. Were these experiments conducted using capacitated or non-capacitated spermatozoa? What was the observed motility of CatSper-null sperm during these assays? Clarifying these conditions is essential to avoid drawing incorrect conclusions from the results.

      (3) Rheotaxis and micropyle navigation<br /> Previous studies have shown that CatSper-null sperm fail to undergo rheotaxis. Could this defect be related to their inability to locate and penetrate the micropyle? Exploring a potential shared mechanism could be informative.

      (4) Lines 61-74<br /> This paragraph omits important information regarding acrosomal exocytosis, which occurs prior to sperm-egg fusion. Including this detail would strengthen the discussion.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study investigates how chronic stress may contribute to LC dysfunction in AD by examining the mechanisms underlying NA accumulation and α2A-AR internalization. Using electrophysiological recordings and molecular analyses, the authors propose that stress-induced receptor internalization impairs autoinhibition, leading to excessive NA accumulation and increased MAO-A activity. The findings have potential implications for understanding the progression of AD-related neurodegeneration and targeting noradrenergic dysfunction as a therapeutic strategy.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study integrates electrophysiology and molecular approaches to explore the mechanistic effects of chronic stress on LC neurons.

      (2) The evidence supporting NA accumulation and α2A-AR internalization as contributing factors to LC dysfunction is novel and relevant to AD pathology.

      (3) The electrophysiological findings, particularly the loss of spike-frequency adaptation and reduction in GIRK currents, provide functional insights into stress-induced changes in LC activity.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The manuscript's logical flow is challenging and hard to follow, and key arguments could be more clearly structured, particularly in transitions between mechanistic components.

      (2) The causality between stress-induced α2A-AR internalization and the enhanced MAO-A remains unclear. Direct experimental evidence is needed to determine whether α2A-AR internalization itself or Ca2+ drives MAO-A activation, and how they activate MAO-A should be considered.

      (3) The connection between α2A-AR internalization and increased cytosolic NA levels lacks direct quantification, which is necessary to validate the proposed mechanism.

      (4) The chronic stress model needs further validation, including measurements of stress-induced physiological changes (e.g., corticosterone levels) to rule out systemic effects that may influence LC activity. Additional behavioral assays for spatial memory impairment should also be included, as a single behavioral test is insufficient to confirm memory dysfunction.

      (5) Beyond b-arrestin binding, the role of alternative internalization pathways (e.g., phosphorylation, ubiquitination) in α2A-AR desensitization should be considered, as current evidence is insufficient to establish a purely Ca²⁺-dependent mechanism.

      (6) NA leakage for free NA accumulation is also influenced by NAT or VMAT2. Please discuss the potential role of VMAT2 in NA accumulation within the LC in AD.

      (7) Since the LC is a small brain region, proper staining is required to differentiate it from surrounding areas. Please provide a detailed explanation of the methodology used to define LC regions and how LC neurons were selected among different cell types in brain slices for whole-cell recordings.

      Impact:

      This study provides valuable insights into the impact of chronic stress on LC function and its relevance to AD pathogenesis. The proposed mechanism linking NA dysregulation and receptor internalization may have implications for developing therapeutic strategies targeting the noradrenergic system in neurodegenerative diseases. However, additional validation is needed to strengthen the mechanistic claims before the findings can be fully integrated into the field.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Kostanjevec et al. investigates the mechanism behind spiral pattern formation in the cornea. The authors demonstrate that the spiral motion pattern on the mammalian corneal surface emerges from the interaction between the limbus position, cell division, extrusion, and collective cell migration. Using LacZ mosaic murine corneas, they reveal a tightening spiral flow pattern and show that their cell-based, in silico model accurately reproduces these patterns without global guidance cues. Additionally, they present a continuum model that extends the XYZ hypothesis to describe cell flux on the cornea, offering a quantitative explanation for tissue-scale processes on curved surfaces.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript is well-written, with a systematic approach that clearly explains experimental setups, model construction, assumptions, parameter selection, and predictions. The discussion also provides insightful perspectives on the broader implications of the results for both physics and biology.

      Weaknesses:

      The central premise of the manuscript, that the spiral patterning of epithelial corneal cells occurs without guidance cues, is not fully supported. The authors overlook the potential role of axons in guiding epithelial cells, despite clear evidence of spiral axon patterns in their own Fig. 1b. Previous literature indicates that axon patterning precedes epithelial cell patterning, suggesting that epithelial migration might be influenced by pre-existing neural structures (e.g., Leiper et al. 2002, IOVS 2013). The authors need to address this point, possibly by exploring whether axonal patterns serve as a template for epithelial cell migration, or by providing experimental evidence to rule out axon-based guidance.

      While the model is well-constructed, it currently falls short of its stated goal of elucidating the mechanisms of spiral formation. Key questions remain unanswered:<br /> Is the curvature of the cornea necessary for spiral formation, or would a simpler disk geometry suffice?<br /> What role do boundary conditions play?<br /> How well do the model's predictions quantitatively match experimental data?<br /> The current comparisons in Fig. 4c-f lack quantitative agreement, and this discrepancy should be discussed with possible explanations.

      The authors emphasize polar alignment as a key feature of the spiral pattern based on simulation results. However, they do not provide experimental evidence for this polar alignment. The manuscript includes discussions of polar and nematic symmetries that, without supporting data, feel somewhat distracting. If direct experimental evidence for polar alignment is not available, the authors could instead quantify nematic alignment as the spiral forms. This would also allow them to explore potential crosstalk between nematic cell orientation and the polar alignment of self-propulsion, especially considering recent studies showing alternative mechanisms for vortex formation in similar systems.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript from Azeroglu et al. presents the application of END-Seq to examine the sequence composition of chromosome termini, i.e., telomeres. END-seq is a powerful genome sequencing strategy developed in Andre Nussesweig's lab to examine the sequences at DNA break sites. Here, END-Seq is applied to explore the nucleotide sequences at telomeres and to ascertain (i) whether the terminal end sequence is conserved in cells that activate the ALT telomere elongation mechanism and (ii) whether the processes responsible for telomere end sequence regulation are conserved. With these aims clearly articulated, the authors convincingly show the power of this technique to examine telomere end-processing.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors effectively demonstrate the application of END-seq for these purposes. They verify prior data that 5'terminal sequences of telomeres in HeLa and RPE cells end in a canonical ATC sequence motif. They verify that the same sequence is present at the 5' ends of telomeres by performing END-seq across a panel of ALT cancer cells. As in non-ALT cells, the established role of POT1, a ssDNA telomere binding protein, in coordinating the mechanism that maintains the canonical ATC motif is likewise verified. However, by performing END-Seq in mouse cells lacking POT1 isoforms, POT1a and POT1b, the authors uncover that POT1b is dispensable for this process. This reveals a novel, important insight relating to the evolution of POT1 as a telomere regulatory factor.

      (2) The authors then demonstrate the utility of S1-END-seq, a variation of END-Seq, to explore the purported abundance of single-stranded DNA at telomeres within telomeres of ALT cancer cells. Here, they demonstrate that ssDNA abundance is an intrinsic aspect of ALT telomeres and is dependent on the activity of BLM, a crucial mediator of ALT.

      Overall, the authors have effectively shown that END-seq can be applied to examine processes maintaining telomeres in normal and cancerous cells across multiple species. Using END-Seq, the authors confirm prior cell biological and sequencing data and the role of POT1 and BLM in regulating telomere termini sequences and ssDNA abundance. The study is nice and well-written, with the experimental rationale and outcomes clearly explained.

      Weaknesses:

      This reviewer finds little to argue with in this study. It is timely and highly valuable for the telomere field. One minor question would be whether the authors could expand more on the application of END-Seq to examine the processive steps of the ALT mechanism? Can they speculate if the ssDNA detected in ALT cells might be an intermediate generated during BIR (i.e., is the ssDNA displaced strand during BIR) or a lesion? Furthermore, have the authors assessed whether ssDNA lesions are due to the loss of ATRX or DAXX, either of which can be mutated in the ALT setting?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study investigates the role of asymptomatic pertussis carriage in transmission between mothers and their infants, in particular. The authors used a longitudinal cohort study that involved 1,315 mother-infant dyads in Lusaka, Zambia, and they utilized qPCR-based detection of IS481 to track Bordetella pertussis transmission over time. Insights from the study suggest that minimally symptomatic or asymptomatic mothers may act as a reservoir for B. pertussis transmission in the infants, thus challenging the traditional surveillance methods that focus on symptomatic cases. Additionally, the study also identified a subgroup of persistently colonized individuals where mothers were majorly asymptomatic despite sustained bacterial presence.

      The authors aimed to improve comprehension of pertussis transmission dynamics in high-burden low-resource settings, and they advocated for enhanced molecular surveillance strategies to capture full pertussis infection, including those that might have gone undetected.

      Strengths:

      The strengths are the use of innovative study design, especially the longitudinal approach and routine sampling, rather than symptom-driven testing that minimizes bias in the study. The methodology was also rigorous and transparent by evaluating the IS481 signal strength to classify pertussis detection and conducting retesting to assess qPCR reliability. There were also important epidemiological insights, and the findings challenge the traditional wisdom by suggesting that pertussis transmission may frequently occur outside of symptomatic cases. The findings also showed its relevance to global health and policy by arguing for the incorporation of molecular tools like qPCR for surveillance of pertussis in low-resource settings.

      Weaknesses:

      These include reliability on qPCR-based detection without additional validation measures like confirmatory culture or serology. There are also potential alternate explanations for transmission patterns observed in the study such as shared environmental exposure or household transmission. Additionally, there is limited generalizability as the study was done in a single urban site in Zambia. There is also a lack of functional immune data.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This study uses structural and functional approaches to investigate regulation of the Na/Ca exchanger NCX1 by an activator, PIP2 and an inhibitor, SEA0400. Previous functional studies suggest both of these compounds interact with the Na-dependent inactivation process to mediate their effects.

      State of the art methods are employed here, and the data are of high quality and presented very clearly. While there is merit in combining structural studies on both compounds as they relate to Na-dependent activation, in the end it is somewhat disappointing that neither is explored in further depth.

      The novel aspect of this work is the study on PIP2. Unfortunately, technical limitations precluded structural data on binding of the native PIP2, and so an unnatural short-chained analog, di-C8 PIP2, was used instead. This raises the question of whether these two molecules, which have similar but very distinctly different profiles of activation, actually share the same binding pocket and mode of action. The authors conduct a "competition" experiment, arguing the effect of di-C8-PIP2 addition subsequent to PIP2 suggests competition for a single binding site. In this scenario, PIP2 would need to vacate the binding site prior to di-C8-PIP2 occupying it. However, the lack of an effect of washout alone, suggests PIP2 does not easily unbind. This raises the possibility (probability?) of a non-competitive effect of di-C8-PIP2 at a different site. An additionally informative experiment would be to determine if a saturating concentration of di-C8-PIP2 could prevent the full activation induced by subsequent PIP2 addition. However, the relative affinities of the two ligands might make such an experiment challenging in practice.

      In an effort to address the binding site directly, the authors mutate key residues predicted to be important in liganding the phosphorylated head group of PIP2. However, the only mutations that have a significant effect in PIP2 activation also influence the Na-dependent inactivation process independently of PIP2. While these data are consistent with altering PIP2 binding (which cannot be easily untangled from its functional effect on Na-dependent inactivation), a primary effect on Na-inactivation, rather than PIP2 binding, cannot be fully ruled out. A more extensive mutagenic study, based on other regions of the di-C8 PIP2 binding site, would have given more depth to this work and might have been more revealing mechanistically.

      The SEA0400 aspect of the work does not integrate particularly well with the rest of the manuscript. This study confirms the previously reported structure and binding site for SEA0400 but provides little further information. While interesting speculation is presented regarding the connection between SEA0400 inhibition and Na-dependent inactivation, further experiments to test this idea are not included here.

      Comments on revisions:

      (1) The competition assay data for di-C8-PIP2 and PIP2 is a nice addition, but in its description in the text, the authors should be a bit more circumspect about their conclusions, based on the possibility/probability that the effect observed is actually non-competitive (as detailed above).<br /> (2) The authors should acknowledge the formal possibility that the functional effects of the mutations studies are a consequence of a direct effect on Na-dependent inactivation, independent of PIP2 binding.<br /> (3) The authors might strengthen their arguments for combining studies on PIP2 and SEA0400.<br /> (4) The authors could be clearer where their work on SEA0400 extends beyond the previously published observations.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors present the repurposing of cipargamin (CIP), a known drug against plasmodium and toxoplasma against babesia. They proved the efficacy of CIP on babesia in the nanomolar range. In silico analyses revealed the drug resistance mechanism through a single amino acid mutation at amino acid position 921 on the ATP4 gene of babesia. Overall, the conclusions drawn by the authors are well justified by the data presented. I believe this study opens up a novel therapeutic strategy against babesiosis.

      Strengths:

      The authors have carried out a comprehensive study. All the experiments performed were carried out methodically and logically.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This study examined the interaction between two key cortical regions in the mouse brain involved in goal-directed movements, the rostral forelimb area (RFA) - considered a premotor region involved in movement planning, and the caudal forelimb area (CFA) - considered a primary motor region that more directly influences movement execution. The authors ask whether there exists a hierarchical interaction between these regions, as previously hypothesized, and focus on a specific definition of hierarchy - examining whether the neural activity in the premotor region exerts a larger functional influence on the activity in the primary motor area, than vice versa. They examine this question using advanced experimental and analytical methods, including localized optogenetic manipulation of neural activity in either region while measuring both the neural activity in the other region and EMG signals from several muscles involved in the reaching movement, as well as simultaneous electrophysiology recordings from both regions in a separate cohort of animals.

      The findings presented show that localized optogenetic manipulation of neural activity in either RFA or CFA resulted in similarly short-latency changes of the muscle output and in firing rate changes in the other region. However, perturbation of RFA led to a larger absolute change in the neural activity of CFA neurons. The authors interpret these findings as evidence for reciprocal, but asymmetrical, influence between the regions, suggesting some degree of hierarchy in which RFA has a greater effect on the neural activity in CFA. They go on to examine whether this asymmetry can also be observed in simultaneously recorded neural activity patterns from both regions. They use multiple advanced analysis methods that either identify latent components in the population level or measure the predictability of firing rates of single neurons in one region using firing rates of single neurons in the other region. Interestingly, the main finding across these analyses seems to be that both regions share highly similar components that capture a high degree of the variability of the neural activity patterns in each region. Single units' activity from either region could be predicted to a similar degree from the activity of single units in the other region, without a clear division into a leading area and a lagging area, as one might expect to find in a simple hierarchical interaction. However, the authors find some evidence showing a slight bias towards leading activity in RFA. Using a two-region neural network model that is fit to the summed neural activity recorded in the different experiments and to the summed muscle output, the authors show that a network with constrained (balanced) weights between the regions can still output the observed measured activities and the observed asymmetrical effects of the optogenetic manipulations, by having different within-region local weights. These results emphasize the challenges in studying interactions between brain regions with reciprocal interactions, multiple external inputs, and recurrent within-region connections.

      Strengths:

      The experiments and analyses performed in this study are comprehensive and provide a detailed examination and comparison of neural activity recorded simultaneously using dense electrophysiology probes from two main motor regions that have been the focus of studies examining goal-directed movements. The findings showing reciprocal effects from each region to the other, similar short-latency modulation of muscle output by both regions, and similarity of neural activity patterns, are convincing and add to the growing body of evidence that highlight the complexity of the interactions between multiple regions in the motor system and go against a simple feedforward-like hierarchy.

      The neural network model complements these findings and adds an important demonstration that the observed asymmetry can, in theory, also arise from differences in local recurrent connections and not necessarily from different input projections from one region to the other. This sheds an important light on the multiple factors that should be considered when studying the interaction between any two brain regions, with a specific emphasis on the role of local recurrent connections, that should be of interest to the general neuroscience community.

      Weaknesses:

      While the reciprocal interaction and similarity in neural activity across RFA and CFA is an important observation that is supported by the authors' findings, the evidence for a hierarchical interaction between the two regions appears to be weaker. The primary evidence for a hierarchical interaction comes from a causal optogenetic manipulation, carried out at the onset of the reaching movement and conducted with n = 3 in each experimental group, which shows an effect in both regions, yet the effect is greater when silencing the activity in RFA and examining the resulting change in CFA, than vice versa. Analysis of the simultaneously recorded neural activity, on the other hand, reveals mostly no clear hierarchy with leading or lagging dynamics between the regions. The findings of the optogenetic manipulation might be more compelling if similar effects were observed when the same manipulation was applied at different stages of movement preparation and execution, indicating a consistent interaction that is independent from the movement phase.

      The methods used to investigate hierarchical interactions through analysis of simultaneously recorded activity yielded inconsistent results. For instance, CCA and PLS showed no clear lead-lag relationship, while DLAG provided some evidence suggesting RFA leads CFA. Overall, these methods largely failed to demonstrate a clear hierarchical interaction. Assuming a partial hierarchy exists, this inconsistency may indicate that the hierarchy is not reflected in the activity patterns or that these analytical methods are inadequate for detecting such interactions within complex neural networks that are influenced by multiple external inputs, reciprocal inter-regional connections, and dominant intra-regional recurrent activity.

      As is also argued by the authors, these inconsistent findings underscore the need for caution when interpreting results from similar analyses used to infer inter-regional interactions from neural activity patterns alone. However, the study lacks sufficient explanation for why different methods yielded different results and more elaborate clarification is needed for the findings presented. For example, in the population-level analyses using CCA and PLS, the authors show that both techniques reveal components that are highly similar across regions and explain a substantial portion of each region's variance. Yet, shifting the activity of one region relative to the other to explore potential lead-lag relationships does not alter the results of these analyses. If the regions' activities were better aligned at some unknown true lead-lag time (or aligned at zero), one would expect a peak in alignment within the tested range, as is observed when these same analyses are applied to activity within a single region. It is thus unclear why shifting one region's activity relative to the other does not change the outcome. The interpretation of these results therefore, remains ambiguous and would benefit from further clarification.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this paper, the authors reveal that the MK2 inhibitor CMPD1 can inhibit the growth, migration and invasion of breast cancer cells both in vitro and in vivo by inducing microtubule depolymerization, preferentially at the microtubule plus-end, leading to cell division arrest, mitotic defects, and apoptotic cell death. They also showed that CMPD1 treatment upregulates genes associated with cell migration and cell death, and downregulates genes related to mitosis and chromosome segregation in breast cancer cells, suggesting a potential mechanism of CMPD1 inhibition in breast cancer. Besides, they used the combination of an MK2-specific inhibitor, MK2-IN-3, with the microtubule depolymerizer vinblastine to simultaneously disrupt both the MK2 signaling pathway and microtubule dynamics, and they claim that inhibiting the p38-MK2 pathway may help to enhance the efficacy of MTAs in the treatment of breast cancer.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this study, Marocco and colleages perform a deep characterization of the complex molecular mechanism guiding the recognition of a particular CELLmotif previously identified in hepatocytes in another publication. Having miR-155-3p with or without this CELLmotif as initial focus, authors identify 21 proteins differentially binding to these two miRNA versions. From these, they decided to focus on PCBP2. They elegantly demonstrate PCBP2 binding to miR-155-3p WT version but not to CELLmotif-mutated version. miR-155-3p contains a hEXOmotif identified in a different report, whose recognition is largely mediated by another RNA-binding protein called SYNCRIP. Interestingly, mutation of the hEXOmotif contained in miR-155-3p did not only blunt SYNCRIP binding, but also PCBP2 binding despite the maintenance of the CELLmotif. This indicates that somehow SYNCRIP binding is a pre-requisite for PCBP2 binding. EMSA assay confirms that SYNCRIP is necessary for PCBP2 binding to miR-155-3p, while PCBP2 is not needed for SYNCRIP binding. Then authors aim to extend these finding to other miRNAs containing both motifs. For that, they perform a small-RNA-Seq of EVs released from cells knockdown for PCBP2 versus control cells, identifying a subset of miRNAs whose expression either increases or decreases. The assumption is that those miRNAs containing PCBP2-binding CELLmotif should now be less retained in the cell and go more to extracellular vesicles, thus reflecting a higher EV expression. The specific subset of miRNAs having both the CELLmotif and hEXOmotif (9 miRNAs) whose expressions increase in EVs due to PCBP2 reduction is also affected by knocking-down SYNCRIP in the sense that reduction of SYNCRIP leads to lower EV sorting. Further experiments confirm that PCBP2 and SYNCRIP bind to these 9 miRNAs and that knocking down SYNCRIP impairs their EV sorting.

      In the revised manuscript, the authors have addressed most of my concerns and questions. I believe the new experiments provide stronger support for their claims. My only remaining concern is the lack of clarity in the replicates for the EMSA experiment. The one shown in the manuscript is clear; however, the other three replicates hardly show that knocking down SYNCRIP has an effect on PCBP2 binding. Even worse is the fact that these replicates do not support at all that PCBP2 silencing has no effect on SYNCRIP binding, as the bands for those types of samples are, in most of the cases, not visible. I think the authors should work on repeating a couple of times EMSA experiment.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This fundamental work employed multidisciplinary approaches and conducted rigorous experiments to study how a specific subset of neurons in the dorsal striatum (i.e., "patchy" striatal neurons) modulates locomotion speed depending on the valence of the naturalistic context.

      Strengths:

      The scientific findings are novel and original and significantly advance our understanding of how the striatal circuit regulates spontaneous movement in various contexts.

      Weaknesses:

      This is extensive research involving various circuit manipulation approaches. Some of these circuit manipulations are not physiological. A balanced discussion of the technical strengths and limitations of the present work would be helpful and beneficial to the field. Minor issues in data presentation were also noted.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors use the teleost medaka as an animal model to study the effect of seasonal changes in day-length on feeding behaviour and oocyte production. They report a careful analysis how day-length affects female medakas and a thorough molecular genetic analysis of genes potentially involved in this process. They show a detailed analysis of two genes and include a mutant analysis of one gene to support their conclusions

      Strengths:

      The authors pick their animal model well and exploit the possibilities to examine in this laboratory model the effect of a key environmental influence, namely the seasonal changes of day-length. The phenotypic changes are carefully analysed and well controlled. The mutational analysis of the agrp1 by a ko-mutant provides important evidence to support the conclusions. Thus this report exceeds previous findings on the function of agrp1 and npyb as regulators of food-intake and shows how in medaka these genes are involved in regulating the organismal response to an environmental change. It thus furthers our understanding on how animals react to key exogenous stimuli for adaptation.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors are too modest when it comes to underscoring the importance of their findings. Previous animal models used to study the effect of these neuropeptides on feeding behaviour have either lost or were most likely never sensitive to seasonal changes of day-length. Considering the key importance of this parameter on many aspects of plant and animal life it could be better emphasised that a suitable animal model is at hand that permits this.<br /> The molecular characterization of the agrp1 ko-mutant that the authors have generated lacks some details that would help to appreciate the validity of the mutant phenotype. Additional data would help in this respect.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors dealt adequately with the comments and suggestions of this reviewer.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This paper presents a computational model of the evolution of two different kinds of helping ("work," presumably denoting provisioning, and defense tasks) in a model inspired by cooperatively breeding vertebrates. The helpers in this model are a mix of previous offspring of the breeder and floaters that might have joined the group, and can either transition between the tasks as they age or not. The two types of help have differential costs: "work" reduces "dominance value," (DV), a measure of competitiveness for breeding spots, which otherwise goes up linearly with age, but defense reduces survival probability. Both eventually might preclude the helper from becoming a breeder and reproducing. How much the helpers help, and which tasks (and whether they transition or not), as well as their propensity to disperse, are all evolving quantities. The authors consider three main scenarios: one where relatedness emerges from the model, but there is no benefit to living in groups, one where there is no relatedness, but living in larger groups gives a survival benefit (group augmentation, GA), and one where both effects operate. The main claim is that evolving defensive help or division of labor requires the group augmentation; it doesn't evolve through kin selection alone in the authors' simulations.

      This is an interesting model, and there is much to like about the complexity that is built in. Individual-based simulations like this can be a valuable tool to explore the complex interaction of life history and social traits. Yet, models like this also have to take care of both being very clear on their construction and exploring how some of the ancillary but potentially consequential assumptions affect the results, including robust exploration of the parameter space. I think the current manuscript falls short in these areas, and therefore, I am not yet convinced of the results. Much of this is a matter of clearer and more complete writing: the Materials and Methods section in particular is incomplete or vague in some important junctions. However, there are also some issues with the assumptions that are described clearly.

      Below, I describe my main issues, mostly having to do with model features that are unclear, poorly motivated (as they stand), or potentially unrealistic or underexplored.

      One of the main issues I have is that there is almost no information on what happens to dispersers in the model. Line 369-67 states dispersers might join another group or remain as floaters, but gives no further information on how this is determined. Poring through the notation table also comes up empty as there is no apparent parameter affecting this consequential life history event. At some point, I convinced myself that dispersers remain floaters until they die or become breeders, but several points in the text contradict this directly (e.g., l 107). Clearly this is a hugely important model feature since it determines fitness cost and benefits of dispersal and group size (which also affects relatedness and/or fitness depending on the model). There just isn't enough information to understand this crucial component of the model, and without it, it is hard to make sense of the model output.

      Related to that, it seems to be implied (but never stated explicitly) that floaters do no work, and therefore their DV increases linearly with age (H_work in eq.2 is zero). That means any floaters that manage to stick around long enough would have higher success in competition for breeding spots relative to existing group members. How realistic is this? I think this might be driving the kin selection-only results that defense doesn't evolve without group augmentation (one of the two main ways). Any subordinates (which are mainly zero in the no GA, according to the SI tables; this assumes N=breeder+subordinates, but this isn't explicit anywhere) would be outcompeted by floaters after a short time (since they evolve high H and floaters don't), which in turn increases the benefit of dispersal, explaining why it is so high. Is this parameter regime reasonable? My understanding is that floaters often aren't usually high resource holding potential individuals (either b/c high RHP ones would get selected out of the floater population by establishing territories or b/c floating isn't typically a thriving strategy, given that many resources are tied to territories). In this case, the assumption seems to bias things towards the floaters and against subordinates to inherit territories. This should be explored either with a higher mortality rate for floaters and/or a lower DV increase, or both.

      When it comes to floaters replacing dead breeders, the authors say a bit more, but again, the actual equation for the scramble competition (which only appears as "scramble context" in the notation table) is not given. Is it simply proportional to R_i/\sum_j R_j ? Or is there some other function used? What are the actual numbers of floaters per breeding territory that emerge under different parameter values? These are all very important quantities that have to be described clearly.

      I also think the asexual reproduction with small mutations assumption is a fairly strong one that also seems to bias the model outcomes in a particular way. I appreciate that the authors actually measured relatedness within groups (though if most groups under KS have no subordinates, that relatedness becomes a bit moot), and also eliminated it with their ingenious swapping-out-subordinates procedure. The fact remains that unless they eliminate relatedness completely, average relatedness, by design, will be very high. (Again, this is also affected by how the fate of the dispersers is determined, but clearly there isn't a lot of joining happening, just judging from mean group sizes under KS only.) This is, of course, why there is so much helping evolving (even if it's not defensive) unless they completely cut out relatedness.

      Finally, the "need for division of labor" section is also unclear, and its construction also would seem to bias things against division of labor evolving. For starters, I don't understand the rationale for the convoluted way the authors create an incentive for division of labor. Why not implement something much simpler, like a law of minimum (i.e., the total effect of helping is whatever the help amount for the lowest value task is) or more intuitively: the fecundity is simply a function of "work" help (draw Poisson number of offspring) and survival of offspring (draw binomial from the fecundity) is a function of the "defense" help. As it is, even though the authors say they require division of labor, in fact, they only make a single type of help marginally less beneficial (basically by half) if it is done more than the other. That's a fairly weak selection for division of labor, and to me it seems hard to justify. I suspect either of the alternative assumptions above would actually impose enough selection to make division of labor evolve even without group augmentation.

      Overall, this is an interesting model, but the simulation is not adequately described or explored to have confidence in the main conclusions yet. Better exposition and more exploration of alternative assumptions and parameter space are needed.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript presents a practical modification of the orthogonal hybridization chain reaction (HCR) technique, a promising yet underutilized method with broad potential for future applications across various fields. The authors advance this technique by integrating peptide ligation technology and nanobody-based antibody mimetics - cost-effective and scalable alternatives to conventional antibodies - into a DNA-immunoassay framework that merges oligonucleotide-based detection with immunoassay methodologies. Notably, they demonstrate that this approach facilitates a modified ELISA platform capable of simultaneously quantifying multiple target protein expression levels within a single protein mixture sample.

      Strengths:

      The hybridization chain reaction (HCR) technique was initially developed to enable the simultaneous detection of multiple mRNA expression levels within the same tissue. This method has since evolved into immuno-HCR, which extends its application to protein detection by utilizing antibodies. A key requirement of immuno-HCR is the coupling of oligonucleotides to antibodies, a process that can be challenging due to the inherent difficulties in expressing and purifying conventional antibodies.

      In this study, the authors present an innovative approach that circumvents these limitations by employing nanobody-based antibody mimetics, which recognize antibodies, instead of directly coupling oligonucleotides to conventional antibodies. This strategy facilitates oligonucleotide conjugation - designed to target the initiator hairpin oligonucleotide of HCR -through peptide ligation and click chemistry.

      Weaknesses:

      The sandwich-format technique presented in this study, which employs a nanobody that recognizes primary IgG antibodies, may have limited scalability compared to existing methods that directly couple oligonucleotides to primary antibodies. This limitation arises because the C-region types of primary antibodies are relatively restricted, meaning that the use of nanobody-based detection may constrain the number of target proteins that can be analyzed simultaneously. In contrast, the conventional approach of directly conjugating oligonucleotides to primary antibodies allows for a broader range of protein targets to be analyzed in parallel.

      Additionally, in the context of HCR-based protein detection, the number of proteins that can be analyzed simultaneously is inherently constrained by fluorescence wavelength overlap in microscopy, which limits its multiplexing capability. By comparison, direct coupling of oligonucleotides to primary antibodies can facilitate the simultaneous measurement of a significantly greater number of protein targets than the sandwich-based nanobody approach in the barcode-ELISA/NGS-based technique.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study puts forth the model that under IFN-B stimulation, liquid-phase WTAP coordinates with the transcription factor STAT1 to recruit MTC to the promoter region of interferon stimulated genes (ISGs), mediating the installation of m6A on newly synthesized ISG mRNAs. This model is supported by strong evidence that the phosphorylation state of WTAP, regulated by PPP4, is regulated by IFN-B stimulation, and that this results in interactions between WTAP, the m6A methyltransferase complex, and STAT1, a transcription factor that mediates activation of ISGs. This was demonstrated via a combination of microscopy, immunoprecipitations, m6A sequencing, and ChIP. These experiments converge on a set of experiments that nicely demonstrate that IFN-B stimulation increases the interaction between WTAP, METTL3, and STAT1, that this interaction is lost with knockdown of WTAP (even in the presence of IFN-B), and that this IFN-B stimulation also induces METTL3-ISG interactions.

      Strengths:

      The evidence for the IFN-B stimulated interaction between METTL3 and STAT1, mediated by WTAP, is quite strong. Removal of WTAP in this system seems to be sufficient to reduce these interactions and the concomitant m6A methylation of ISGs. The conclusion that the phosphorylation state of WTAP is important in this process is also quite well supported. The authors have now also provided substantial evidence that phase separation of WTAP upon interferon stimulation facilitates m6A-methylation of multiple interferon stimulated genes.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      TDP-43 mislocalization occurs in nearly all of ALS, roughly half of FTD, and as a co-pathology in roughly half of AD cases. Both gain of function and loss of function mechanisms associated with this mislocalization likely contribute to disease pathogeneisis.

      Here, the authors describe a new method to induce TDP-43 mislocalization in cellular models. They endogenously-tagged TDP-43 with a C-terminal GFP tag in human iPSCs. They then expressed an intrabody - fused with a nuclear export signal (NES) - that targeted GFP to the cytosol. Expression of this intrabody-NES in human iPSC derived neurons induced nuclear depletion of homozygous TDP-43-GFP, caused its mislocalization to the cytosol, and at least in some cells appeared to cause cytosolic aggregates. This mislocalization was accompanied by induction of cryptic exons in well characterized transcripts known to be regulated by TDP-43, a hallmark of functional TDP-43 loss and consistent with pathological nuclear TDP-43 depletion. Interestingly, in heterozygous TDP-43-GFP neurons, expression of intrabody-NES appeared to also induce the mislocalization of untagged TDP-43 in roughly half of the neurons, suggesting that this system can also be used to study effects on untagged endogenous TDP-43 as well as TDP-43-GFP fusion protein.

      Strengths:

      A clearer understanding of how TDP-43 mislocalization alters cellular function, as well as pathways that mitigate clearance of TDP-43 aggregates, is critical. But modeling TDP-43 mislocalization in disease-relevant cellular systems has proven to be challenging. High levels of overexpression of TDP-43 lacking an NES can drive endogenous TDP-43 mislocalization, but such overexpression has direct and artificial consequences on certain cellular features (e.g. altered exon skipping) not seen in diseased patients. Toxic small molecules such as MG132 and arsenite can induce TDP-43 mislocalization, but co-induce myriad additional cellular dysfunctions unrelated to TDP-43 or ALS. TDP-43 binding oligonucleotides can cause cytosolic mislocalization as well. Each system has pros and cons, and additional ways to induce TDP-43 mislocalization would be useful for the field. The method described in this manuscript could provide researchers with a powerful way to study the combined biology of cytosolic TDP-43 mislocalization and nuclear TDP-43 depletion, with additional temporal control that is lacking in current method. Indeed, the author see some evidence of differences in RNA splicing caused by pure TDP-43 depletion versus their induced mislocalization model. Finally, their method may be especially useful in determining how TDP-43 aggregates are cleared by cells, potentially revealing new biological pathways that could be therapeutically targeted.

      Weaknesses:

      The method and supporting data have some limitations.

      • Tagging of TDP-43 with a bulky GFP tag may alter its normal physiological functions, for example, phase separation properties and functions within complex ribonucleoprotein complexes. The authors show that normal splicing function of GFP-TDP-43 is maintained, suggesting that physiology is largely preserved, but other functions and properties of TDP-43 that were not directly tested could be altered.

      • Potential differences in splicing and micro RNAs between TDP-43 knockdown and TDP-43 mislocalization are potentially interesting. However, different patterns of dysregulated RNA splicing can occur at different levels of TDP-knockdown and can differ in different batches of experiments, thus it is difficult to asses whether the changes observed in this paper are due to mislocalization per se, or rather just reflect differences in nuclear TDP-43 abundance or batch effects.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper reports an intracranial SEEG study of speech coordination, where participants synchronize their speech output with a virtual partner that is designed to vary its synchronization behavior. This allows the authors to identify electrodes throughout the left hemisphere of the brain that have activity (both power and phase) that correlates with the degree of synchronization behavior. They find that high-frequency activity in secondary auditory cortex (superior temporal gyrus) is correlated to synchronization, in contrast to primary auditory regions. Furthermore, activity in inferior frontal gyrus shows a significant phase-amplitude coupling relationship that is interpreted as compensation for deviation from synchronized behavior with the virtual partner.

      Strengths:<br /> (1) The development of a virtual partner model trained for each individual participant, which can dynamically vary its synchronization to the participant's behavior in real time, is novel and exciting.<br /> (2) Understanding real-time temporal coordination for behaviors like speech is a critical and understudied area.<br /> (3) The use of SEEG provides the spatial and temporal resolution necessary to address the complex dynamics associated with the behavior.<br /> (4) The paper provides some results that suggest a role for regions like IFG and STG in the dynamic temporal coordination of behavior both within an individual speaker and across speakers performing a coordination task.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The main weakness of the paper is that the results are presented in a largely descriptive and vague manner. For instance, while the interpretation about predictive coding and error correction is interesting, it is not clear how the experimental design or analyses specifically support such a model, or how they differentiate that model from the alternatives. It's possible that some greater specificity could be achieved by a more detailed examination of this rich dataset, for example by characterizing the specific phase relationships (e.g., positive vs negative lags) in areas that show correlations with synchronization behavior. However, as written, it is difficult to understand what these results tell us about how coordination behavior arises.<br /> (2) In the results section, there's a general lack of quantification. While some of the statistics reported in the figures are helpful, there are also claims that are stated without any statistical test. For example, in the paragraph starting on line 342, it is claimed that there is an inverse relationship between rho-value and frequency band, "possibly due to the reversed desynchronization/synchronization process in low and high frequency bands". Based on Figure 3, the first part of this statement appears to be true qualitatively, but is not quantified, and is therefore impossible to assess in relation to the second part of the claim. Similarly, the next paragraph on line 348 describes optimal clustering, but statistics of the clustering algorithm and silhouette metric are not provided. More importantly, it's not entirely clear what is being clustered - is the point to identify activity patterns that are similar within/across brain regions? Or to interpret the meaning of the specific patterns? If the latter, this is not explained or explored in the paper.<br /> (3) Given the design of the stimuli, it would be useful to know more about how coordination relates to specific speech units. The authors focus on the syllabic level, which is understandable. But as far as the results relate to speech planning (an explicit point in the paper), the claims could be strengthened by determining whether the coordination signal (whether error correction or otherwise) is specifically timed to e.g., the consonant vs the vowel. If the mechanism is a phase reset, does it tend to occur on one part of the syllable?<br /> (4) In the discussion the results are related to a previously described speech-induced suppression effect. However, it's not clear what the current results have to do with SIS, since the speaker's own voice is present and predictable from the forward model on every trial. Statements such as "Moreover, when the two speech signals come close enough in time, the patient possibly perceives them as its own voice" are highly speculative and apparently not supported by the data.<br /> (5) There are some seemingly arbitrary decisions made in the design and analysis that, while likely justified, need to be explained. For example, how were the cutoffs for moderate coupling vs phase-shifted coupling (k ~0.09) determined? This is noted as "rather weak" (line 212), but it's not clear where this comes from. Similarly, the ROI-based analyses are only done on regions "recorded in at least 7 patients" - how was this number chosen? How many electrodes total does this correspond to? Is there heterogeneity within each ROI?

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have generally responded to the critiques from the first round of review, and have provided additional details that help readers to understand what was done.

      In my opinion, the paper still suffers from a lack of clarity about the interpretation, which is partly due to the fact that the results themselves are not straightforward. For example, the heterogeneity across individual electrodes that is obvious from Fig 3 makes it hard to justify the ROI-based approach. And even the electrode clustering, while more data-driven, does not substantially help the fact that the effects appear to be less spatially-organized than the authors may want to claim.

      I recognize the value of introducing this new mutual adaptation paradigm, which is the main strength of the paper. However, the conclusions that can be drawn from the data presented here seem incomplete at best.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors set out to explore the role of upstream open reading frames (uORFs) in stabilizing protein levels during Drosophila development and evolution. By utilizing a modified ICIER model for ribosome translation simulations and conducting experimental validations in Drosophila species, the study investigates how uORFs buffer translational variability of downstream coding sequences. The findings reveal that uORFs significantly reduce translational variability, which contributes to gene expression stability across different biological contexts and evolutionary timeframes.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study introduces a sophisticated adaptation of the ICIER model, enabling detailed simulation of ribosomal traffic and its implications for translation efficiency.<br /> (2) The integration of computational predictions with empirical data through knockout experiments and translatome analysis in Drosophila provides a compelling validation of the model's predictions.<br /> (3) By demonstrating the evolutionary conservation of uORFs' buffering effects, the study provides insights that are likely applicable to a wide range of eukaryotes.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Although the study is technically sound, it does not clearly articulate the mechanisms through which uORFs buffer translational variability. A clearer hypothesis detailing the potential molecular interactions or regulatory pathways by which uORFs influence translational stability would enhance the comprehension and impact of the findings.<br /> (2) The study could be further improved by a discussion regarding the evolutionary selection of uORFs. Specifically, it would be beneficial to explore whether uORFs are favored evolutionarily primarily for their role in reducing translation efficiency or for their capability to stabilize translation variability. Such a discussion would provide deeper insights into the evolutionary dynamics and functional significance of uORFs in genetic regulation.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have adequately addressed my previous concerns.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study aimed at replicating two previous findings that showed (1) a link between prediction tendencies and neural speech tracking, and (2) that eye movements track speech. The main findings were replicated which supports the robustness of these results. The authors also investigated interactions between prediction tendencies and ocular speech tracking, but the data did not reveal clear relationships. The authors propose a framework that integrates the findings of the study and proposes how eye movements and prediction tendencies shape perception.

      Strengths:

      This is a well-written paper that addresses interesting research questions, bringing together two subfields that are usually studied in separation: auditory speech and eye movements. The authors aimed at replicating findings from two of their previous studies, which was overall successful and speaks for the robustness of the findings. The overall approach is convincing, methods and analyses appear to be thorough, and results are compelling.

      Weaknesses:

      Eye movement behavior could have presented in more detail and the authors could have attempted to understand whether there is a particular component in eye movement behavior (e.g., blinks, microsaccades) that drives the observed effects.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study tests the conservation of imprinting of the ZBDF2 locus across mammals. ZDBF2 is known to be imprinted in mouse, human and rat. The locus has a unique mechanism of imprinting: although imprinting is conferred by a germline DMR methylated in oocytes, the DMR is upstream to ZDBF2 (at GPR1) and monoallelic methylation of the gDMR does not persist beyond early developmental stages. Instead, a lncRNA (GPR1-AS, also known as Liz in mouse) initiating at the gDMR is expressed transiently in embryos and sets up a secondary DMR (by mechanisms not fully elucidated) that then confers monoallelic expression of ZDBF2 in somatic tissues.

      In this study, the authors first interrogate existing placental RNA-seq datasets from multiple mammalian species, and detect GPR1-AS1 candidate transcripts in human, baboon, macaque and mouse, but not in about a dozen other mammals. Because of the varying depth, quality and nature of these RNA-seq libraries, the ability to definitely detect the GPR1-AS1 lncRNA is not guaranteed; therefore, they generate their own deep, directional RNA-seq data from tissues/embryos from five species, finding evidence of GPR1-AS in rabbit, chimpanzee, but not bovine, pig or opossum. From these surveys, the authors conclude that the lncRNA is present only in Euarchontoglires mammals. To test the association between GPR1-AS and ZDBF2 imprinting, they perform RT-PCR and sequencing in tissue from wallabies and cattle, finding biallelic expression of ZDBF2 in these species that also lack a detected GPR1-AS transcript. From inspection of the genomic location of the GPR1-AS first exon, the authors identify an overlap with a solo LTR of the MER21C retrotransposon family in those species in which the lncRNA is observed, except for some rodents, including mouse. However, they do detect a degree of homology (46%) to the MER21C consensus at the first exon on Liz in mouse. Finally, the authors explore public RNA-seq datasets to show that GPR1-AS is expression transiently during human preimplantation development, an expression dynamic that would be consistent with the induction of monoallelic methylation of a somatic DMR at ZDBF2 and consequent monoallelic expression.

      Strengths:

      The analysis uncovers a novel mechanism by which a retrotransposon-derived LTR may be involved in genomic imprinting.<br /> The genomic analysis is very well executed.<br /> New directional and deeply-sequenced RNA-seq datasets from placenta or trophectoderm of five mammalian species and marsupial embryos, which will be of value to the community.

      Weaknesses:

      Although the genomic analysis is very strong, the study remains entirely correlative. All of the data are descriptive, and much of the analysis is performed on RNA-seq and other datasets from the public domain; a small amount of primary data is generated by the authors.<br /> Evidence that the residual LTR in mouse is functionally relevant for Liz lncRNA expression is lacking.

      Comments on revision:

      The authors have responded very constructively to all points raised by me and the other reviewers. For example, the authors have gone to further, extensive efforts in seeking to identify an LTR at the mouse Liz locus - which is not found - but additional multiple genome alignments provide evidence for sequence conservation consistent with retention of a functional relic of the MER21C in rodent genomes. Moreover, they demonstrate the promoter activity of this mouse sequence region in transfections. They have also demonstrated imprinted expression of ZDBF2 in two additional species - rabbit and rhesus macaque - consistent with their model.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public Review):

      Summary:

      Glaser et al present ExA-SPIM, a light-sheet microscope platform with large volumetric coverage (Field of view 85mm^2, working distance 35mm ), designed to image expanded mouse brains in their entirety. The authors also present an expansion method optimized for whole mouse brains, and an acquisition software suite. The microscope is employed in imaging an expanded mouse brain, the macaque motor cortex and human brain slices of white matter.

      This is impressive work, and represents a leap over existing light-sheet microscopes. As an example, it offers a ~ fivefold higher resolution than mesoSPIM (https://mesospim.org/), a popular platform for imaging large cleared samples. Thus while this work is rooted in optical engineering, it manifests a huge step forward and has the potential to become an important tool in the neurosciences.

      Strengths:

      -ExA-SPIM features an exceptional combination of field of view, working distance, resolution and throughput.

      -An expanded mouse brain can be acquired with only 15 tiles, lowering the burden on computational stitching. That the brain does not need to be mechanically sectioned is also seen as an important capability.

      -The image data is compelling, and tracing of neurons has been performed. This demonstrates the potential of the microscope platform.

      Review of the revised manuscript:

      The authors have carefully addressed my previous concerns and suggestions.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this paper Weber et al. investigate the role of 4 dopaminergic neurons of the Drosophila larva in mediating the association between an aversive high-salt stimulus and a neutral odor. The 4 DANs belong to the DL1 cluster and innervate non-overlapping compartments of the mushroom body, distinct from those involved in appetitive associative learning. Using specific driver lines for individual neurons, the authors show that activation of the DAN-g1 is sufficient to mimic an aversive memory and it is also necessary to form a high-salt memory of full strength, although optogenetic silencing of this neuron has only a partial phenotype. The authors use calcium imaging to show that the DAN-g1 is not the only DAN responding to salt. DAN-c1 and d1 also respond to salt, but they seem to play no role for the associative memory. DAN-f1, which does not respond to salt, is able to lead to the formation of a memory (if optogenetically activated), but it is not necessary for the salt-odor memory formation in normal conditions. However, when silenced together with DAN-g1, it enhances the memory deficit of DAN-g1. Overall, this work brings evidence of a complex interaction between DL1 DANs in both the encoding of salt signals and their teaching role in associative learning, with none of them being individually necessary and sufficient for both functions.

      Overall, the manuscript contributes interesting results that are useful to understand the organization and function of the dopaminergic system. The behavioral role of the specific DANs is accessed using specific driver lines which allow to test their function individually and in pairs. Moreover, the authors perform calcium imaging to test whether DANs are activated by salt, a prerequisite for inducing a negative association to it. Proper genetic controls are carried across the manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Setogawa et al. employ an auditory discrimination task in freely moving rats, coupled with small animal imaging, electrophysiological recordings, and pharmacological inhibition/lesioning experiments to better understand the role of two striatal subregions: the anterior Dorsal Lateral Striatum (aDLS) and the posterior Ventrolateral Striatum (pVLS), during auditory discrimination learning. Attempting to better understand the contribution of different striatal subregions to sensory discrimination learning strikes me as a highly relevant and timely question, and the data presented in this study are certainly of major interest to the field. The authors have set up a robust behavioral task, systematically tackled the question about a striatal role in learning with multiple observational and manipulative techniques. Additionally, the structured approach the authors take by using neuroimaging to inform their pharmacological manipulation experiments and electrophysiological recordings is a strength.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed some concerns raised in the initial review but some remain. In particular it is still unclear what conclusions can be drawn about task-related activity from scans that are performed 30 minutes after the behavioral task. I continue to think that a reorganization/analysis data according to event type would be useful and easier to interpret across the two brain areas, but the authors did not choose to do this. Finally, switching the cue-response association, I am convinced, would help to strengthen this study.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In Causal associations between plasma proteins and prostate cancer: a Proteome-Wide Mendelian Randomization, the authors present a manuscript which seeks to identify novel markers for prostate cancer through analysis of large biobank-based datasets and to extend this analysis to potential therapeutic targets for drugs. This is an area that is already extensively researched, but remains important, due to the high burden and mortality of prostate cancer globally.

      Strengths:

      The main strengths of the manuscript are the identification and use of large biobank data assets, which provide large numbers of cases and controls, essential for achieving statistical power. The databases used (deCODE, FinnGen, and the UK Biobank) allow for robust numbers of cases and controls. The analytical method chosen, Mendelian Randomization, is appropriate to the problem. Another strength is the integration of multi-omic datasets, here using protein data as well as GWAS sources to integrate genomic and proteomic data.

      Weaknesses:

      The main weaknesses of the manuscript relate to the following areas:

      (1) The failure of the study to analyse the data in the context of other closely related conditions such as benign prostatic hyperplasia (BPH) or lower urinary tract symptoms (LUTS), which have some pathways and biomarkers in common, such as inflammatory pathways (including complement) and specific markers such as KLK3. As a consequence, it is not possible for readers to know whether the findings are specific to prostate cancer or whether they are generic to prostate dysfunction. Given the prevalence of prostate dysfunction (half of men reaching their sixth decade), the potential for false positives and overtreatment from non-specific biomarkers is a major problem, resulting in the evidence presented in this manuscript being weak. Other researchers have addressed this issue using the same data sources as presented here, for example, in this paper, looking at BPH in the UK Biobank population.<br /> https://www.nature.com/articles/s41467-018-06920-9

      (2) There is no discussion of Gleason scores with regard to either biomarkers or therapies, and a general lack of discussion around indolent disease as compared with more aggressive variants. These are crucial issues with regard to the triage and identification of genomically aggressive localized prostate cancers. See, for example, the work set out in: https://doi.org/10.1038/nature20788 .

      (3) An additional issue is that the field of PCa research is fast-moving. The manuscript cites ~80 references, but too few of these are from recent studies, and many important and relevant papers are not included. The manuscript would be much stronger if it compared and contrasted its findings with more recent studies of PCa biomarkers and targets, especially those concerned with multi-omics and those including BPH.

      (4) The Methods section provides no information on how the Controls were selected. There is no Table providing cohort data to allow the reader to know whether there were differences in age, BMI, ethnic grouping, social status or deprivation, or smoking status, between the Cases and Controls. These types of data are generally recorded in Biobank data, so this sort of analysis should be possible, or if not, the authors' inability to construct an appropriately matched set of Controls should be discussed as a Limitation.

      Assessing impact:

      Because of the weaknesses of the approach identified above, without further additions to the manuscript, the likely impact of the work on the field is minimal. There is no significant utility of the methods and data to the community, because the data are pre-existing and are not newly introduced to the community in this work, and Mendelian randomization is a well-described approach in common use, and therefore, the assets and methods described in the manuscript are not novel. With regard to the authors achieving their aims, without assessing specificity and without setting their findings in the context of the latest literature, the authors (and readers) cannot know or assess whether the biomarkers identified or the druggable targets will be useful in the clinic.

      In conclusion, adding additional context and analysis to the manuscript would both help readers interpret and understand the work and would also greatly enhance its significance. For example, the UK Biobank includes data on men with BPH / LUTS, as analysed in this paper, for example, https://doi.org/10.1038/s41467-018-06920-9. By extending this analysis to identify which biomarkers and druggable targets are specific to PCa, and which are generic to prostate dysfunction, the authors would substantially reduce the risks of diagnostic false positives. This would help to manage the risks of inappropriate treatment or overtreatment.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This meta-analysis synthesized data from 79 studies across 22 African countries, encompassing over 27,000 breast cancer patients, to estimate 5-year survival rates. The pooled survival rate was 48%, with substantial regional variation, ranging from 64% in Northern Africa to 32% in Western Africa. Survival outcomes were associated with socioeconomic indicators such as education level, Human Development Index (HDI), and Socio-demographic Index (SDI). Although no significant differences in survival were observed between sexes, non-Black Africans had better outcomes. Despite global advances in cancer care, breast cancer survival in Africa has largely stagnated since the early 2010s, underscoring the need for improved healthcare infrastructure, early detection, and equitable access to treatment.

      Strengths:

      The study has several strengths. It features a comprehensive literature search, adherence to the PRISMA reporting guideline, and prospective registration on PROSPERO, including documentation of protocol deviations. The authors employed rigorous meta-analytic techniques, including subgroup analyses and meta-regression, allowing for a nuanced investigation of potential effect modifiers.

      Weaknesses:

      Analyses of crude 5-year survival rates are inherently difficult to interpret, particularly in the absence of key clinical variables such as stage at diagnosis or whether cancers were detected through screening programs. This omission raises concerns about lead time bias, where earlier diagnosis (e.g., via screening) may falsely appear to improve survival without affecting actual mortality. The higher survival seen in North Africa, for example, may reflect earlier diagnosis rather than improved prognosis or care quality. In this context, the age of the study population is another important aspect.

      Relatedly, the representativeness of the included study populations is unclear. The data sources for individual studies - whether from national cancer registries or single tertiary hospitals -are not systematically reported. This distinction is crucial, as survival outcomes differ significantly between population-based and hospital-based cohorts. Without this contextual information, the generalizability of the findings is limited.

      The meta-regression analyses further raise concerns. The authors use study-level covariates (e.g., national HDI, average years of schooling) to explain variation in survival, yet they do not acknowledge the risk of ecological bias. Inferring individual-level effects from aggregated data is methodologically flawed, and the authors' causal interpretation of these associations is inappropriate, especially given the potential for confounding by unmeasured variables at both the individual and study levels.

      The assessment of publication bias is similarly problematic. While funnel plot asymmetry and a significant Egger's test are interpreted as evidence of bias, such methods are unreliable in meta-analyses of observational studies. Smaller studies may differ meaningfully from larger ones, not due to selective reporting, but because they may recruit patients from specialized tertiary centers where outcomes are poorer. The observed relationship between study size and survival may therefore reflect true differences in patient populations, not publication bias.

      Despite claiming to search for gray literature via Google Scholar, no such studies appear in the PRISMA flowchart. This is a missed opportunity. Gray literature - especially reports from cancer registries - could have enhanced the quality and completeness of the data. While cancer registration systems are not available in all African countries, several do exist, and the authors should have made greater efforts to incorporate routine surveillance data where available. Mortality data from vital statistics systems, available in some countries, could also have provided useful context or validation.

      The study's approach to quality assessment is limited. The scoring tool, adapted from Ssentongo et al., conflates completeness of reporting with risk of bias and fails to address key domains such as study population representativeness, selection bias, and lead time bias. Rather than calculating an overall quality score, the authors should have used a structured tool that evaluates risk of bias across defined domains-such as ROBINS-I, ROBINS-E, or tools developed for prevalence studies (e.g., Tonia et al., BMJ Mental Health, 2023). Cochrane guidance and the textbook by Egger, Higgins, and Davey Smith (DOI:10.1002/9781119099369) provide valuable resources for this purpose.

      The cumulative meta-analysis is not particularly informative, considering the massive heterogeneity in survival rates. It would be more meaningful to stratify the analysis by calendar period. In general, with such important heterogeneity, the calculation of an overall estimate does not add much.

      The authors spend quite some time discussing differences in survival between men and women and between the current and the 2018 estimates, despite the fact that the survival rates are similar, with widely overlapping confidence intervals. The use of a Z-test in this context is inappropriate as it ignores the heterogeneity between studies.

      Minor point:

      The terms retrospective and prospective are not particularly helpful - every longitudinal study of survival is retrospective. What the authors mean is whether or not the data were collected within a study designed to address this question, or whether existing data were used that were collected for another purpose. See also DOI: 10.1136/bmj.302.6771.249.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study uses mesoscale simulations to investigate how membrane geometry regulates the multiphase organization of postsynaptic condensates. It reveals that dimensionality shifts the balance between specific and non-specific interactions, thereby reversing domain morphology observed in vitro versus in vivo.

      Strengths:

      The model is grounded in experimental binding affinities, reproduces key experimental observations in 3D and 2D contexts, and offers mechanistic insight into how geometry and molecular features drive phase behavior.

      Weaknesses:

      The model omits other synaptic components that may influence domain organization and does not extensively explore parameter sensitivity or broader physiological variability.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The authors present a substantial improvement to their existing tool, MorphoNet, intended to facilitate assessment of 3D+t cell segmentation and tracking results, and curation of high-quality analysis for scientific discovery and data sharing. These tools are provided through a user-friendly GUI, making them accessible to biologists who are not experienced coders. Further, the authors have re-developed this tool to be a locally installed piece of software instead of a web interface, making the analysis and rendering of large 3D+t datasets more computationally efficient. The authors evidence the value of this tool with a series of use cases, in which they apply different features of the software to existing datasets and show the improvement to the segmentation and tracking achieved.

      While the computational tools packaged in this software are familiar to readers (e.g., cellpose), the novel contribution of this work is the focus on error correction. The MorphoNet 2.0 software helps users identify where their candidate segmentation and/or tracking may be incorrect. The authors then provide existing tools in a single user-friendly package, lowering the threshold of skill required for users to get maximal value from these existing tools. To help users apply these tools effectively, the authors introduce a number of unsupervised quality metrics that can be applied to a segmentation candidate to identify masks and regions where the segmentation results are noticeably different from the majority of the image.

      This work is valuable to researchers who are working with cell microscopy data that requires high-quality segmentation and tracking, particularly if their data are 3D time-lapse and thus challenging to segment and assess. The MorphoNet 2.0 tool that the authors present is intended to make the iterative process of segmentation, quality assessment, and re-processing easier and more streamlined, combining commonly used tools into a single user interface.

      One of the key contributions of the work is the unsupervised metrics that MorphoNet 2.0 offers for segmentation quality assessment. These metrics are used in the use cases to identify low-quality instances of segmentation in the provided datasets, so that they can be improved with plugins directly in MorphoNet 2.0. However, not enough consideration is given to demonstrating that optimizing these metrics leads to an improvement in segmentation quality. For example, in Use Case 1, the authors report their metrics of interest (Intensity offset, Intensity border variation, and Nuclei volume) for the uncurated silver truth, the partially curated and fully curated datasets, but this does not evidence an improvement in the results. Additional plotting of the distribution of these metrics on the Gold Truth data could help confirm that the distribution of these metrics now better matches the expected distribution.

      Similarly, in Use Case 2, visual inspection leads us to believe that the segmentation generated by the Cellpose + Deli pipeline (shown in Figure 4d) is an improvement, but a direct comparison of agreement between segmented masks and masks in the published data (where the segmentations overlap) would further evidence this.

      We would appreciate the authors addressing the risk of decreasing the quality of the segmentations by applying circular logic with their tool; MorphoNet 2.0 uses unsupervised metrics to identify masks that do not fit the typical distribution. A model such as StarDist can be trained on the "good" masks to generate more masks that match the most common type. This leads to a more homogeneous segmentation quality, without consideration for whether these metrics actually optimize the segmentation

      In Use case 5, the authors include details that the errors were corrected by "264 MorphoNet plugin actions ... in 8 hours actions [sic]". The work would benefit from explaining whether this is 8 hours of human work, trying plugins and iteratively improving, or 8 hours of compute time to apply the selected plugins.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This in situ cryo-ET workflow of selected plant structures provides several detailed strategies using plunge-freezing and the HPF waffle method and lift-out for notoriously difficult samples (compared to cell culture, yeast, and algae, which are far more prevalent in the literature).

      Strengths:

      A very difficult challenge whereby the authors demonstrate successful vitrification of selected plants/structures using waffle and lift-out approaches for cryoET. Because there are relatively few examples of multi-cellular plant cryo-ET in the literature, it is important for the scientific community to be motivated and have demonstrated strategies that it is achievable. This manuscript has a number of very helpful graphics and videos to help guide researchers who would be interested in undertaking that would help shorten the learning curve of admittedly tedious and complex workflows. This is a slow and tedious process, but you have to start somewhere, and I applaud the authors for sharing their experiences with others, and I expect will help other early adopters to come up to speed sooner.

      Weaknesses:

      While important, the specific specimen and cell-types selected that were successful (perhaps other plant specimen and tissues tried were unsuccessful and thus not reported) in this approach did not demonstrate success to broadly applicable to other much more prevalent and interesting and intensive areas plant biology and plant structures (some mentioned in more detail below).

      This manuscript is essentially a protocol paper and in its paragraph form, and even with great graphics, will definitely be difficult to follow and reproduce for a non-expert. Also considering the use of 3 different FIB-SEM platforms and 2 different cryo-FLM platforms, I wonder if a master graphic of the full workflow(s) could be prepared as a supplementary document that walks through the major steps and points to the individual figures at the critical steps to make it more accessible to the broader readership.

      Multiple times in the manuscript, important workflow details seemed to point to and be dependent on two "unpublished" manuscripts:

      (1) Line 583, 755, 790, 847-848, (Poge et al., will soon be published as a protocol).

      (2) Lines 140, 695, 716 (Capitanio et al., will soon be described in a manuscript).

      It is not clear if/when these would be publicly available. It may be important to wait until these papers can be included in published form.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This is a well-designed and very interesting study examining the impact of imprecise feedback on outcomes in decision-making. I think this is an important addition to the literature, and the results here, which provide a computational account of several decision-making biases, are insightful and interesting.

      I do not believe I have substantive concerns related to the actual results presented; my concerns are more related to the framing of some of the work. My main concern is regarding the assertion that the results prove that non-normative and non-Bayesian learning is taking place. I agree with the authors that their results demonstrate that people will make decisions in ways that demonstrate deviations from what would be optimal for maximizing reward in their task under a strict application of Bayes' rule. I also agree that they have built reinforcement learning models that do a good job of accounting for the observed behavior. However, the Bayesian models included are rather simple, per the author's descriptions, applications of Bayes' rule with either fixed or learned credibility for the feedback agents. In contrast, several versions of the RL models are used, each modified to account for different possible biases. However, more complex Bayes-based models exist, notably active inference, but even the hierarchical Gaussian filter. These formalisms are able to accommodate more complex behavior, such as affect and habits, which might make them more competitive with RL models. I think it is entirely fair to say that these results demonstrate deviations from an idealized and strict Bayesian context; however, the equivalence here of Bayesian and normative is, I think, misleading or at least requires better justification/explanation. This is because a great deal of work has been done to show that Bayes optimal models can generate behavior or other outcomes that are clearly not optimal to an observer within a given context (consider hallucinations for example) but which make sense in the context of how the model is constructed as well as the priors and desired states the model is given.

      As such, I would recommend that the language be adjusted to carefully define what is meant by normative and Bayesian and to recognize that work that is clearly Bayesian could potentially still be competitive with RL models if implemented to model this task. An even better approach would be to directly use one of these more complex modelling approaches, such as active inference, as the comparator to the RL models, though I would understand if the authors would want this to be a subject for future work.

      Abstract:

      The abstract is lacking in some detail about the experiments done, but this may be a limitation of the required word count. If word count is not an issue, I would recommend adding details of the experiments done and the results.<br /> One comment is that there is an appeal to normative learning patterns, but this suggests that learning patterns have a fixed optimal nature, which may not be true in cases where the purpose of the learning (e.g. to confirm the feeling of safety of being in an in-group) may not be about learning accurately to maximize reward. This can be accommodated in a Bayesian framework by modelling priors and desired outcomes. As such, the central premise that biased learning is inherently non-normative or non-Bayesian, I think, would require more justification. This is true in the introduction as well.

      Introduction:

      As noted above, the conceptualization of Bayesian learning being equivalent to normative learning, I think requires further justification. Bayesian belief updating can be biased and non-optimal from an observer perspective, while being optimal within the agent doing the updating if the priors/desired outcomes are set up to advantage these "non-optimal" modes of decision making.

      Results:

      I wonder why the agent was presented before the choice, since the agent is only relevant to the feedback after the choice is made. I wonder if that might have induced any false association between the agent identity and the choice itself. This is by no means a critical point, but it would be interesting to get the authors' thoughts.

      The finding that positive feedback increases learning is one that has been shown before and depends on valence, as the authors note. They expanded their reinforcement learning model to include valence, but they did not modify the Bayesian model in a similar manner. This lack of a valence or recency effect might also explain the failure of the Bayesian models in the preceding section, where the contrast effect is discussed. It is not unreasonable to imagine that if humans do employ Bayesian reasoning that this reasoning system has had parameters tuned based on the real world, where recency of information does matter; affect has also been shown to be incorporable into Bayesian information processing (see the work by Hesp on affective charge and the large body of work by Ryan Smith). It may be that the Bayesian models chosen here require further complexity to capture the situation, just like some of the biases required updates to the RL models. This complexity, rather than being arbitrary, may be well justified by decision-making in the real world.

      The methods mention several symptom scales- it would be interesting to have the results of these and any interesting correlations noted. It is possible that some of the individual variability here could be related to these symptoms, which could introduce precision parameter changes in a Bayesian context and things like reward sensitivity changes in an RL context.

      Discussion:

      (For discussion, not a specific comment on this paper): One wonders also about participants' beliefs about the experiment or the intent of the experimenters. I have often had participants tell me they were trying to "figure out" a task or find patterns even when this was not part of the experiment. This is not specific to this paper, but it may be relevant in the future to try and model participant beliefs about the experiment especially in the context of disinformation, when they might be primed to try and "figure things out".

      As a general comment, in the active inference literature, there has been discussion of state-dependent actions, or "habits", which are learned in order to help agents more rapidly make decisions, based on previous learning. It is also possible that what is being observed is that these habits are at play, and that they represent the cognitive biases. This is likely especially true given, as the authors note, the high cognitive load of the task. It is true that this would mean that full-force Bayesian inference is not being used in each trial, or in each experience an agent might have in the world, but this is likely adaptive on the longer timescale of things, considering resource requirements. I think in this case you could argue that we have a departure from "normative" learning, but that is not necessarily a departure from any possible Bayesian framework, since these biases could potentially be modified by the agent or eschewed in favor of more expensive full-on Bayesian learning when warranted.

      Indeed, in their discussion on the strategy of amplifying credible news sources to drown out low-credibility sources, the authors hint at the possibility of longer-term strategies that may produce optimal outcomes in some contexts, but which were not necessarily appropriate to this task. As such, the performance on this task- and the consideration of true departure from Bayesian processing- should be considered in this wider context.

      Another thing to consider is that Bayesian inference is occurring, but that priors present going in produce the biases, or these biases arise from another source, for example, factoring in epistemic value over rewards when the actual reward is not large. This again would be covered under an active inference approach, depending on how the priors are tuned. Indeed, given the benefit of social cohesion in an evolutionary perspective, some of these "biases" may be the result of adaptation. For example, it might be better to amplify people's good qualities and minimize their bad qualities in order to make it easier to interact with them; this entails a cost (in this case, not adequately learning from feedback and potentially losing out sometimes), but may fulfill a greater imperative (improved cooperation on things that matter). Given the right priors/desired states, this could still be a Bayes-optimal inference at a social level and, as such, may be ingrained as a habit that requires effort to break at the individual level during a task such as this.

      The authors note that this task does not relate to "emotional engagement" or "deep, identity-related issues". While I agree that this is likely mostly true, it is also possible that just being told one is being lied to might elicit an emotional response that could bias responses, even if this is a weak response.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The authors identified five complex amacrine cell (CAM) subtypes based on their morphology and synaptic connectivity. It's suggested that the differences in structure may be directly correlated with different functional roles. The authors also describe synaptic compartmentalization in the SFL tract relating to three types of CAM input regions, again implying a specialized role for these cells. The authors also identified neural progenitor cells, which suggests that the octopus's vertical lobe can undergo neurogenesis throughout its life.

      The work presented here is valuable and convincing. Below are some suggestions the authors may wish to incorporate:

      a) Quantitative measurements to define the CAM subtypes<br /> I think the categorization of the CAMs into five subtypes is convincing, however, I wonder how easily these categories could be identified by other researchers. Would it be possible for the authors to include additional quantitative measurements of these cell types to make their categorization less qualitative and more quantitative? For example, density, volume, and orientation of their dendritic fields?

      b) The definition of the neuritic backbone is included in the methods, but I found the term confusing when I first encountered it in the results, so I would suggest adding the definition to the results too.

      c) The authors wrote, 'Note that given the pronounced difference in diameters between the neuritic backbones (208.27 +/-87.95 nm) and axons (121.55 +/- 21.28 nm)'. What figure is this in?

      d) I am slightly confused about how the authors decided on the specific cubes to reflect the different synaptic compartments in the SFL tract. Is this organisation arranged/repeated vertically or horizontally throughout the SFL tract? The location of the cubes looks to me to be chosen at random, so more information here would be helpful.

      e) In Figure 2, could the authors plot the number of synapses per cube to make the result clearer, so that cube 1 has the lowest synaptic density and cube 2 has the highest?

      f) SAMs are ACh and excitatory<br /> The authors refer to SAMs as excitatory cholinergic. They should provide more detailed explanations/citations to back up this claim. Could SAMs be synthesizing any other neurotransmitters? Could there be a subpopulation of inhibitory SAMs?

      g) CAMs are GABA and inhibitory

      The 5 subtypes of CAMs described here have never been directly confirmed to be GABAergic. Could CAMs be synthesizing any other neurotransmitters? Could a subpopulation of CAMs be excitatory? I believe the authors should make this clearer to readers when referring to CAMs, perhaps by saying, 'hypothesized to be inhibitory neurons', or 'putative inhibitory neurons'.

      h) Fast neurotransmitters and neuromodulators<br /> The authors refer to neuromodulatory connections in their summary in Figure 4, however, cephalopod receptors have yet to be extensively functionally characterized, therefore, the role different molecules play as neurotransmitters or neuromodulators is not yet known. For example, many invertebrates are known to have functional diversity in their receptors: C. elegans has both excitatory and inhibitory receptors for a range of neurotransmitters, anionic ACh- and glutamate-gated channels, and cationic peptide-gated channels have also been identified in some molluscs. So, probably the authors should be cautious in speculating about how a particular transmitter/modulator acts in the octopus brain.

      i) In the methods, the authors refer to "an adult Octopus", what age and size was it? I also know this is Octopus vulgaris, but it would be good to specify it here.

      j) A general comment about all figures. All panels should have a letter associated with them to make it easier to refer to them in the text. For example, in Figure 4, please also add letters to the main schematic, the CAM subtypes, and the VL wiring diagram. In addition, D and E are missing boxes on the main schematic. It's also not immediately obvious that A-E are zooms of the larger schematic; perhaps this could be made clearer with colours or arrows. Please also add names to the CAM subtypes.

      a) Typo: 'Additionally, the unique characteristics of LTP in the octopus VL, such as its reliance on a NO-dependent mechanism, independent of de novo protein synthesis, persistent activation of (Turchetti-Maia et al., 2018).'

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Parise presents another instantiation of the Multisensory Correlation Detector model that can now accept stimulus-level inputs. This is a valuable development as it removes researcher involvement in the characterization/labeling of features and allows analysis of complex stimuli with a high degree of nuance that was previously unconsidered (i.e., spatial/spectral distributions across time). The author demonstrates the power of the model by fitting data from dozens of previous experiments, including multiple species, tasks, behavioral modalities, and pharmacological interventions.

      Strengths:

      One of the model's biggest strengths, in my opinion, is its ability to extract complex spatiotemporal co-relationships from multisensory stimuli. These relationships have typically been manually computed or assigned based on stimulus condition and often distilled to a single dimension or even a single number (e.g., "-50 ms asynchrony"). Thus, many models of multisensory integration depend heavily on human preprocessing of stimuli, and these models miss out on complex dynamics of stimuli; the lead modality distribution apparent in Figures 3b and c is provocative. I can imagine the model revealing interesting characteristics of the facial distribution of correlation during continuous audiovisual speech that have up to this point been largely described as "present" and almost solely focused on the lip area.

      Another aspect that makes the MCD stand out among other models is the biological inspiration and generalizability across domains. The model was developed to describe a separate process - motion perception - and in a much simpler organism - Drosophila. It could then describe a very basic neural computation that has been conserved across phylogeny (which is further demonstrated in the ability to predict rat, primate, and human data) and brain area. This aspect makes the model likely able to account for much more than what has already been demonstrated with only a few tweaks akin to the modifications described in this and previous articles from Parise.

      What allows this potential is that, as Parise and colleagues have demonstrated in those papers since our (re)introduction of the model in 2016, the MCD model is modular - both in its ability to interface with different inputs/outputs and its ability to chain MCD units in a way that can analyze spatial, spectral, or any other arbitrary dimension of a stimulus. This fact leaves wide open the possibilities for types of data, stimuli, and tasks a simplistic, neutrally inspired model can account for.

      And so it's unsurprising (but impressive!) that Parise has demonstrated the model's ability here to account for such a wide range of empirical data from numerous tasks (synchrony/temporal order judgement, localization, detection, etc.) and behavior types (manual/saccade responses, gaze, etc.) using only the stimulus and a few free parameters. This ability is another of the model's main strengths that I think deserves some emphasis: it represents a kind of validation of those experiments, especially in the context of cross-experiment predictions (but see some criticism of that below).

      Finally, what is perhaps most impressive to me is that the MCD (and the accompanying decision model) does all this with very few (sometimes zero) free parameters. This highlights the utility of the model and the plausibility of its underlying architecture, but also helps to prevent extreme overfitting if fit correctly (but see a related concern below).

      Weaknesses:

      There is an insufficient level of detail in the methods about model fitting. As a result, it's unclear what data the models were fitted and validated on. Were models fit individually or on average group data? Each condition separately? Is the model predictive of unseen data? Was the model cross-validated? Relatedly, the manuscript mentions a randomization test, but the shuffled data produces model responses that are still highly correlated to behavior despite shuffling. Could it be that any stimulus that varies in AV onset asynchrony can produce a psychometric curve that matches any other task with asynchrony judgements baked into the task? Does this mean all SJ or TOJ tasks produce correlated psychometric curves? Or more generally, is Pearson's correlation insensitive to subtle changes here, considering psychometric curves are typically sigmoidal? Curves can be non-overlapping and still highly correlated if one is, for example, scaled differently. Would an error term such as mean-squared or root mean-squared error be more sensitive to subtle changes in psychometric curves? Alternatively, perhaps if the models aren't cross-validated, the high correlation values are due to overfitting?

      While the model boasts incredible versatility across tasks and stimulus configurations, fitting behavioral data well doesn't mean we've captured the underlying neural processes, and thus, we need to be careful when interpreting results. For example, the model produces temporal parameters fitting rat behavior that are 4x faster than when fitting human data. This difference in slope and a difference at the tails were interpreted as differences in perceptual sensitivity related to general processing speeds of the rat, presumably related to brain/body size differences. While rats no doubt have these differences in neural processing speed/integration windows, it seems reasonable that a lot of the differences in human and rat psychometric functions could be explained by the (over)training and motivation of rats to perform on every trial for a reward - increasing attention/sensitivity (slope) - and a tendency to make mistakes (compression evident at the tails). Was there an attempt to fit these data with a lapse parameter built into the decisional model as was done in Equation 21? Likewise, the fitted parameters for the pharmacological manipulations during the SJ task indicated differences in the decisional (but not the perceptual) process and the article makes the claim that "all pharmacologically-induced changes in audiovisual time perception" can be attributed to decisional processes "with no need to postulate changes in low-level temporal processing." However, those papers discuss actual sensory effects of pharmacological manipulation, with one specifically reporting changes to response timing. Moreover, and again contrary to the conclusions drawn from model fits to those data, both papers also report a change in psychometric slope/JND in the TOJ task after pharmacological manipulation, which would presumably be reflected in changes to the perceptual (but not the decisional) parameters.

      The case for the utility of a stimulus-computable model is convincing (as I mentioned above), but its framing as mission-critical for understanding multisensory perception is overstated, I think. The line for what is "stimulus computable" is arbitrary and doesn't seem to be followed in the paper. A strict definition might realistically require inputs to be, e.g., the patterns of light and sound waves available to our eyes and ears, while an even more strict definition might (unrealistically) require those stimuli to be physically present and transduced by the model. A reasonable looser definition might allow an "abstract and low-dimensional representation of the stimulus, such as the stimulus envelope (which was used in the paper), to be an input. Ultimately, some preprocessing of a stimulus does not necessarily confound interpretations about (multi)sensory perception. And on the flip side, the stimulus-computable aspect doesn't necessarily give the model supreme insight into perception. For example, the MCD model was "confused" by the stimuli used in our 2018 paper (Nidiffer et al., 2018; Parise & Ernst, 2025). In each of our stimuli (including catch trials), the onset and offset drove strong AV temporal correlations across all stimulus conditions (including catch trials), but were irrelevant to participants performing an amplitude modulation detection task. The to-be-detected amplitude modulations, set at individual thresholds, were not a salient aspect of the physical stimulus, and thus only marginally affected stimulus correlations. The model was of course, able to fit our data by "ignoring" the on/offsets (i.e., requiring human intervention), again highlighting that the model is tapping into a very basic and ubiquitous computational principle of (multi)sensory perception. But it does reveal a limitation of such a stimulus-computable model: that it is (so far) strictly bottom-up.

      The manuscript rightly chooses to focus a lot of the work on speech, fitting the MCD model to predict behavioral responses to speech. The range of findings from AV speech experiments that the MCD can account for is very convincing. Given the provided context that speech is "often claimed to be processed via dedicated mechanisms in the brain," a statement claiming a "first end-to-end account of multisensory perception," and findings that the MCD model can account for speech behaviors, it seems the reader is meant to infer that energetic correlation detection is a complete account of speech perception. I think this conclusion misses some facets of AV speech perception, such as integration of higher-order, non-redundant/correlated speech features (Campbell, 2008) and also the existence of top-down and predictive processing that aren't (yet!) explained by MCD. For example, one important benefit of AV speech is interactions on linguistic processes - how complementary sensitivity to articulatory features in the auditory and visual systems (Summerfield, 1987) allow constraint of linguistic processes (Peelle & Sommers, 2015; Tye-Murray et al., 2007).

      References

      Campbell, R. (2008). The processing of audio-visual speech: empirical and neural bases. Philosophical Transactions of the Royal Society B: Biological Sciences, 363(1493), 1001-1010. https://doi.org/10.1098/rstb.2007.2155<br /> Nidiffer, A. R., Diederich, A., Ramachandran, R., & Wallace, M. T. (2018). Multisensory perception reflects individual differences in processing temporal correlations. Scientific Reports 2018 8:1, 8(1), 1-15. https://doi.org/10.1038/s41598-018-32673-y<br /> Parise, C. V, & Ernst, M. O. (2025). Multisensory integration operates on correlated input from unimodal transient channels. ELife, 12. https://doi.org/10.7554/ELIFE.90841<br /> Peelle, J. E., & Sommers, M. S. (2015). Prediction and constraint in audiovisual speech perception. Cortex, 68, 169-181. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.cortex.2015.03.006<br /> Summerfield, Q. (1987). Some preliminaries to a comprehensive account of audio-visual speech perception. In B. Dodd & R. Campbell (Eds.), Hearing by Eye: The Psychology of Lip-Reading (pp. 3-51). Lawrence Erlbaum Associates.<br /> Tye-Murray, N., Sommers, M., & Spehar, B. (2007). Auditory and Visual Lexical Neighborhoods in Audiovisual Speech Perception: Trends in Amplification, 11(4), 233-241. https://doi.org/10.1177/1084713807307409

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Identifying drugs that target specific disease phenotypes remains a persistent challenge. Many current methods are only applicable to well-characterized small molecules, such as those with known structures. In contrast, methods based on transcriptional responses offer broader applicability because they do not require prior information about small molecules. Additionally, they can be rapidly applied to new small molecules. One of the most promising strategies involves the use of "drug response signatures"-specific sets of genes whose differential expression can serve as markers for the response to a small molecule. By comparing drug response signatures with expression profiles characteristic of a disease, it is possible to identify drugs that modulate the disease profile, indicating a potential therapeutic connection.

      This study aims to prioritize potential drug candidates and to forecast novel drug combinations that may be effective in treating triple-negative breast cancer (TNBC). Large consortia, such as the LINCS-L1000 project, offer transcriptional signatures across various time points after exposing numerous cell lines to hundreds of compounds at different concentrations. While this data is highly valuable, its direct applicability to pathophysiological contexts is constrained by the challenges in extracting consistent drug response profiles from these extensive datasets. The authors use their method to create drug response profiles for three different TNBC cell lines from LINCS.<br /> To create a more precise, cancer-specific disease profile, the authors highlight the use of single-cell RNA sequencing (scRNA-seq) data. They focus on TNBC epithelial cells collected from 26 diseased individuals compared to epithelial cells collected from 10 healthy volunteers. The authors are further leveraging drug response data to develop inhibitor combinations.

      Strengths:

      The authors of this study contribute to an ongoing effort to develop automated, robust approaches that leverage gene expression similarities across various cell lines and different treatment regimen, aiming to predict drug response signatures more accurately. There remains a gap in computational methods for inferring drug responses at the cell subpopulation level, which the authors are trying to address.

      Weaknesses:

      The major deficiencies in this revised manuscript are a lack of benchmarking against established methods, clarification of method limitations, and experimental validation.

      (1) The manuscript still lacks a direct comparison between the retriever tool and well-established methods. How does it perform compared to metaLINCS? Evaluating its performance relative to existing approaches is essential to demonstrate its added value and robustness.<br /> (2) The study remains limited by the absence of experimental validation. Are there supporting data from biological models or clinical trials? Figure 5F is important as this is the validation of the identified compounds in three cell lines. In the previous review, it was noted that the identified drugs had only a modest effect on cell viability. Furthermore, the efficacy of QL-XII-47 and GSK-690693 was found to be cell-line specific-showing activity against BT20 (the cell line used for LINCS transcriptional signature generation) but not against CAL120 and DU4475, which were not included in the signature derivation process. This raises concerns about the tool's ability to predict effective drugs. Additionally, the combination may have an effect because the drugs were tested at high concentrations. How does this effect compare in non-TNBC or normal immortalized breast cell lines? Finally, the DU4475 data were not reproducible, and the experiment must be repeated to ensure reliable comparisons.<br /> (3) A previous review requested a discussion on the limitations of the retriever tool, but the authors instead focused on the well-documented constraints of the LINCS dataset. Clearly defining limitations of the retriever will be critical for evaluating its potential applications and reliability.<br /> (4) Description of the database that the authors used should be corrected. Two examples are below:<br /> "The LINCS-L1000 project published transcriptional profiles of several cell lines." Exploring LINCS metadata will help to introduce the reader to this impressive catalog.<br /> "The portal then returns a ranked list of compounds that are likely to have an inverse effect on disease-associated gene expression levels". When selecting small molecules for use in LINCS-L1000 platform, no link was established between the compounds and disease-associated gene expression levels.<br /> (5) Fig. 3 presents data on differentially expressed genes. However, without indicating whether these genes are up- or downregulated, it is difficult to assess their relevance to TNBC phenotypes and cancer burden.<br /> Additionally, presenting the new Biological Process Gene Ontology analysis in a format similar to Fig. 3C would be beneficial. The statement that these processes are closely related to cancer deregulation is somewhat vague. Instead, the findings may be discussed in relation to each enriched pathway, specifically in the context of TNBC biology and available treatments.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      In this study, the authors aim to investigate habituation, the phenomenon of increasing reduction in activity following repeated stimuli, in the context of its information theoretic advantage. To this end, they consider a highly simplified three-species reaction network where habituation is encoded by a slow memory variable that suppresses the receptor and therefore the readout activity. Using analytical and numerical methods, they show that in their model the information gain, the difference between the mutual information between the signal and readout after and before habituation, is maximal for intermediate habituation strength. Furthermore, they demonstrate that the Pareto front corresponding to an optimization strategy that maximizes the mutual information between signal and readout in the steady-state and minimizes dissipation in the system also exhibits similar intermediate habituation strength. Finally, they briefly compare predictions of their model to whole-brain recordings of zebrafish larvae under visual stimulation.

      The author's simplified model serves as a good starting point for understanding habituation in different biological contexts as the model is simple enough to allow for some analytic understanding but at the same time exhibits most basic properties of habituation in sensory systems. Furthermore, the author's finding of maximal information gain for intermediate habituation strength via an optimization principle is, in general, interesting. However, the following points remain unclear:

      (1) How general is their finding that the optimal Pareto front coincides with the region of maximal information gain? For instance, what happens if the signal H_st (H_max) isn't very strong? Does it matter that in this case, H_st only has a minor influence on delta Q_R? In the binary switching case, what happens if H_max is rather different from H_st (and not just 20% off)? Or in a case where the adapted value corresponds to the average of H_max and H_min?

      (2) The comparison to experimental data isn't very convincing. For instance, is PCA performed simultaneously on both the experimental data set and on the model or separately? What are the units of the PCs in Fig. 6(b,c)? Given that the model parameters are chosen so that the activity decrease in the model is similar to the one in the data (i.e., that they show similar habituation in terms of the readout), isn't it expected that the dynamics in the PC1/2 space look very similar?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This is a simple and potentially valuable approach to reduce Cre leak in amplified systems designed to improve CreER use across alleles. The revised work is improved with a direct comparison to the Benedito iSure-Cre line, providing some practical guidance for investigators. The authors do not address the issue of Cre toxicity or mosaic efficiency with low Tamoxifen use.

      The major improvement in my mind is the inclusion of Supp Fig 7 where the authors compare their loxCre to iSureCre. The discussion is somewhat improved, but still fails to discuss significant issues such as Cre toxicity in detail. As noted by most reviewers, without a biological question, the paper is entirely a technical description of a couple of new tools. Whether and to what extent journals such as eLife should publish every new technical innovation without rigorous functional comparison to prior tools is an important question raised by this study. There is already a plethora of available techniques, most of which look better on paper than they function in mice.

      However, I do feel that these tools will be of potential use to the field.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This noteworthy paper examines the role of planar cell polarity and Wnt signalling in body axis formation of the hydrozoan Clytia. In contrast to the freshwater polyp Hydra or the sea anemone Nematostella, Clytia represents a cnidarian model system with a complete life cycle (planula larva-polyp-medusa). In this species, classical experiments have demonstrated that a global polarity is established from the oral end of the embryos (Freeman, 1981). Prior research has demonstrated that Wnt3 plays a role in the formation of the oral organiser in Clytia and other cnidarians, acting in an autocatalytic feedback-loop with β-catenin. However, the question of whether and to what extent an oral-aboral gradient of Wnt activity is established remained unanswered. This gradient is thought to control both tissue differentiation and tissue polarity. The planar cell polarity (PCP) pathway has been linked to this polarity, although it is generally considered to be β-catenin independent.

      Comments on major strengths and weaknesses:

      Beautiful and solid experiments to clarify the role of canonical Wnt signalling and PCP core factors in coordinating planar cell polarity of Clytia. The authors have conducted a series of sophisticated experiments utilising morpholinos, mRNA microinjections and immunofluorescent visualisation of PCP. The objective of these experiments was to address the function of Wnt3, β-catenin and PCP core proteins in the coordination of the global polarity of Clytia embryos. The authors conclude that PCP plays a role in regulating polarity along the oral-aboral axis of embryos and larvae. This offers a conceivable explanation for how polarity information is established and distributed globally during Clytia embryogenesis, with implications for our understanding of axis formation in cnidarians and the evolution of Wnt signalling in general. - While the experiments are well-designed and executed, there are some criticisms, questions or suggestions that should be addressed.

      (i) Wnt3 cue and global PCP. PCP has been described in detail in a previous paper on Clytia (Momose et al, 2012): its orientation along the oral-aboral body axis (ciliary basal body positioning studies), and its function in directional polarity during gastrulation (Stbm-, Fz1-, and Dsh-MO experiments). I wonder if this part could be shortened. What is new, however, are the knockdown and Wnt3-mRNA rescue experiments, which provide a deeper insight into the link between Wnt3 function in the blastopore organiser as a source or cue for axis formation. These experiments demonstrate that the Wnt3 knockdown induces defects equivalent to PCP factor knockdown, but can be rescued by Wnt3-mRNA injection, even at a distance of 200 µm away from the Wnt-positive area. The experimental set-up of these new molecular experiments follows in important aspects those of Freeman's experiments of 1981 (who in turn was motivated to re-examine Teissier's work of 1931/1933 ...). Freeman did not use the term "global polarity" but the concept of an axis-inducing source and a long-range tissue polarity can be traced back to both researchers.

      (ii) PCP propagation and β-catenin. The central but unanswered question in this study focuses on the interaction between Wnt3 and PCP and the propagation of PCP. Wnt3 has been described in cnidarians but also in vertebrates and insects as a canonical Wnt interacting with β-catenin in an autocatalytic loop. The surprising result of this study is that the action of Wnt3 on PCP orientation is not inhibited in the presence of a dominant-negative form of CheTCF (dnTCF) ruling out a potential function of β-catenin in PCP. This was supported by studies with constitutively active β-catenin (CA-β-cat) mRNA which was unable to restore PCP coordination nor elongation of Wnt3-depleted embryos but did restore β-catenin-dependent gastrulation. Based on these data, the authors conclude that Wnt3 has two independent roles: Wnt/β-catenin activation and initial PCP orientation (two step model for PCP formation). However, the molecular basis for the interaction of Wnt3 with the PCP machinery and how the specificity of Wnt3 for both pathways is regulated at the level of Wnt-receiving cells (Fz-Dsh) remains unresolved. - Also, with respect to PCP propagation, there is no answer with respect to the underlying mechanisms. The authors found that PCP components are expressed in the mid-blastula stage, but without any further indication of how the signal might be propagated, e.g., by a wavefront of local cell alignment. Here, it is necessary to address the underlying possible cellular interactions more explicitly.

      (iii) The proposed two step model for PCP formation has important evolutionary implications in that it excludes the current alternate model according to which a long-range Wnt3-gradient orients PCP ("Wnt/β-catenin-first"). Nevertheless, the initial PCP orientation by Wnt3 - as proposed in the two-step-model - is not explained at all on the molecular level. Another possible, but less well discussed and studied option for linking Wnt3 with PCP action could be a role of other Wnt pathways. The authors present compelling evidence that Wnt3 is the most highly expressed Wnt in Clytia at all stages of development. The authors convincingly show that Wnt3 is the most highly expressed Wnt in Clytia at all stages of development (Fig. S1). However, Wnt7 is also more highly expressed, which makes it a candidate for signal transduction from canonical Wnts to PCP Wnts. An involvement of Wnt7 in PCP regulation has been described in vertebrates (http://dx.doi.org/10.1016/j.celrep.2013.12.026). This would challenge the entire discussion and speculation on the evolutionary implications according to which PCP Wnt signaling comes first (PCP-first scenario") and canonical Wnt signaling later in metazoan evolution.

      (iv) The discussion, including Figure 6, is strongly biased towards the traditional evolutionary scenario postulating a choanzoan-sponge ancestry of metazoans. Chromosome-linkage data of pre-metazoans and metazoans (Schulz et al., 2023; https://doi.org/10 (1038/s41586-023-05936-6) now indicate a radically different scenario according to which ctenophores represent the ancestral form and are sister to sponges, cnidarians and bilaterians (the Ctenophora-sister hypothesis). This also has implications for the evolution of Wnt signalling, as discussed in the recent Nature Genetics Review by Holzem et al. (2024) (https://doi.org/10.1038/s41576-024-00699-w). Furthermore, it calls into question the hypothesis of a filter-feeding multicellular gastrula-like ancestor as proposed by Haeckel (Maegele et al., 2023). These papers have not yet been referenced, but they would provide a more robust discussion.

      General appraisal:

      The authors have carefully addressed all important points raised in this review. Aims and results support their conclusions.

      Impact of the work, utility of methods and data:

      As stated above, there will be a major impact on our understanding of the role of Wnt signaling in gradient formation and particularly the role of non canonical wnt signaling. As mentioned above, this will have a major impact on our understanding of the role of Wnt signalling in gradient formation, particularly the role of non-canonical Wnt signalling. - It will also be important to better understand the role of Wnt-Frizzled interactions in these basal organisms, as cnidarians have a smaller repertoire of Frizzled receptors compared to the relatively complete repertoire of Wnt subfamilies. This may imply that Wnt 3 is active in both canonical and PCP.

      Additional context:

      With regard to the question of the evolution of the body plan and Wnt signalling, it would be helpful and important for readers unfamiliar with cnidarians to know that the Hydrozoa/Medusozoa, to which Clytia belongs, are an "evolutionary derived group" within the Cnidaria, as opposed to the Anthozoa (e.g. sea anemone Nematostella). Hydrozoans possess planula larvae that are devoid of a mouth and any form of feeding mechanism, relying instead on the yolk of a fertilised egg for sustenance. The substantial divergence between the Anthozoa and Medusozoa was accompanied by significant gene reductions within the Medusozoa, which likely exerts an influence on the evolution of Wnt signalling in this group as well. This should not detract from the value of the work, but may help to put it in perspective.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Compelling and clearly described work that combines two elegant cell fate reporter strains with mathematical modelling to describe the kinetics of CD4+ TRM in mice. The aim is to investigate the cell dynamics underlying maintenance of CD4+TRM.

      The main conclusions are that 1) CD4+ TRM are not intrinsically long-lived 2) even clonal half lives are short: 1 month for TRM in skin, even shorter (12 days) for TRM in lamina propria 3) TRM are maintained by self-renewal and circulating precursors.

      Strengths:

      (1) Very clearly and succinctly written. Though in some places too succinctly! See suggestions below for areas I think could benefit from more detail.

      (2) Powerful combination of mouse strains and modelling to address questions that are hard to answer with other approaches.

      (3) The modelling of different modes of recruitment (quiescent, neutral, division linked) is extremely interesting and often neglected (for simpler neutral recruitment).

      Comments on revised version: This reviewer is satisfied with the author responses and the changes made in the manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Wang et al. identify Hamlet, a PR-containing transcription factor, as a master regulator of reproductive development in Drosophila. Specifically, the fusion between the gonad and genital disc that is necessary for development of a continuous testes and seminal vesicle tissue essential for fertility. To do so, the authors generate novel Hamlet null mutants by CRISPR/Cas9 gene editing and characterize the morphological, physiological, and gene expression changes of the mutants using immunofluorescence, RNA-seq, cut-tag, and in-situ analysis. Thus, Hamlet is discovered to regulate a unique expression program, which includes Wnt2 and Tl, that is necessary for testis development and fertility.

      Strengths:

      This is a rigorous and comprehensive study that identifies the Hamlet dependent gene expression program mediating reproductive development in Drosophila. The Hamlet transcription targets are further characterized by Gal4/UAS-RNAi confirming their role in reproductive development. Finally, the study points to a role for Wnt2 and Tl as well as other Hamlet transcriptionally regulated genes in epithelial tissue fusion.

      Weaknesses:

      None noted.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript the Treisman and colleagues address the question of how protein phosphatase 1 (PP1) regulatory subunits (or PP1-interacting protein (PIPs)) confer specificity on the PP1 catalytic subunit which by itself possesses little substrate specificity. In prior work the authors showed that the PIP Phactrs confers specificity by remodelling a hydrophobic groove immediately adjacent to the PP1 catalytic site through residues within the RVxF- ø ø -R-W string of Phactrs. Specifically, the residues proximal and including the 'W' of the RVxF- ø ø -R-W string remodel the hydrophobic groove. Other residues the of the RVxF- ø ø -R-W string (i.e. the RVxF- ø ø -R) are not involved in this remodelling.

      The authors suggest that the RVxF- ø ø -R-W string is a conserved feature of many PIPs including PNUTS, Neurabin/spinophilin and R15A. However from a sequence and structural perspective only the RVxF- ø ø -R- is conserved. The W is not conserved in most and in the R15A structure (PDB:7NZM) the Trp side chain points away from the hydrophobic channel - this could be a questionable interpretation due to model building into the low resolution cryo-EM map (4 A).

      In this paper the authors convincingly show that Neurabin confers substrate specificity through interactions of its PDZ domain with the PDZ domain-binding motif (PBM) of 4E-BP. They show the PBM motif is required for Neurabin to increase PP1 activity towards 4E-BP and a synthetic peptide modelled on 4E-BP and also a synthetic peptide based on IRSp53 with a PBM added. The PBM of 4E-BP1 confers high affinity binding to the Neurabin PDZ domain. A crystal structure of a PP1-4E-BP1 fusion with Neurabin shows that the PBM of 4E-BP interacts with the PDZ domain of Neurabin. No interactions of 4E-BP and the catalytic site of PP1 are observed. Cell biology work showed that Neurabin-PP1 regulates the TOR signalling pathway by dephosphorylating 4E-BPs.

      Strengths:

      This work demonstrates convincingly using a variety of cell biology, proteomics, biophysics and structural biology that the PP1 interacting protein Neurabin confers specificity on PP1 through an interaction of its PDZ domain with a PDZ-binding motif of 4E-BP1 proteins. Remodelling of the hydrophobic groove of the PP1 catalytic subunit is not involved in Neurabin-dependent substrate specificity, in contrast to how Phactrs confers specificity on PP1. The active site of the Neurabin/PP1 complex does not recognise residues in the vicinity of the phospho-residue, thus allowing for multiple phospho-sites on 4E-BP to be dephosphorylated by Neurabin/PP1. This contrasts with substrate specificity conferred by the Phactrs PIP that confers specificity of Phactrs/PP1 towards its substrates in a sequence-specific context by remodelling the hydrophobic groove immediately adjacent to the catalytic. The structural and biochemical insights are used to explore the role of Neurabin/PP1 in dephosphorylation 4E-BPs in vivo, showing that Neurabin/PP1 regulates the TOR signalling pathway, specifically mTORC1-dependent translational control.

      Weaknesses:

      The only weakness is the suggestion that a conserved RVxF- ø ø -R-W string exists in PIPs. The 'W' is not conserved in sequence and 3-dimensions in most of the PIPs discussed in this manuscript. The lack of conservation of the W would be consistent with the finding based on multiple PP1-PIP structures that apart from Phactrs, no other PIP appears to remodel the PP1 hydrophobic channel.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed my comments.

      One aspect of the manuscript and response to reviewers is misleading regarding the statement: 'Like many PIPs, they interact with PP1 using the previously defined "RVxF", "ΦΦ", and "R" motifs (Choy et al, 2014).' This statement, and similar in the authors' response, implies that Choy et al discovered the "RVxF" and "ΦΦ" motifs. The Choy et al, 2014 paper reports the discovery of the "R" motif. The "RVxF" and "ΦΦ" motifs were discovered and reported in earlier papers not cited in the authors' manuscript. Perhaps the authors can correct this.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This article presents an analysis that challenges established abundance-occupancy relationships (AORs) by utilizing the largest known bird observation database. The analysis yields contentious outcomes, raising the question of whether these findings could potentially refute AORs.

      Strengths:

      The study employed an extensive aggregation of datasets to date to scrutinize the abundance-occupancy relationships (AORs).

      Weaknesses:

      The authors should thoroughly address the correlation between checklist data and global range data, ensuring that the foundational assumptions and potential confounding factors are explicitly examined and articulated within the study's context.

      In the revision, the authors have refined their findings to birds and provided additional clarifications and discussion. However, the primary concerns raised by reviewers remain inadequately addressed. My main concern continues to be whether testing AOR at a global scale is meaningful given the numerous confounding factors involved. With the current data and analytical approach, these confounders appear inseparable. The study would be significantly strengthened if the authors identified specific conditions under which AORs are valid.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper investigates the physical mechanisms underlying cell intercalation, which then enables collective cell flows in confluent epithelia. The authors show that T1 transitions (the topological transitions responsible for cell intercalation) correspond to the unbinding of groups of hexatic topological defects. Defect unbinding, and hence cell intercalation and collective cell flows, are possible when active stresses in the tissue are extensile. This result helps to rationalize the observation that many epithelial cell layers have been found to exhibit extensile active nematic behavior.

      Strengths:

      The authors obtain their results based on a combination of active hexanematic hydrodynamics and a multiphase field (MPF) model for epithelial layers, whose connection is a strength of the paper. With the hydrodynamic approach, the authors find the active flow fields produced around hexatic topological defects, which can drive defect unbinding. Using the MPF simulations, the authors show that T1 transitions tend to localize close to hexatic topological defects.

      Weaknesses:

      Citations are sometimes not comprehensive. Cases of contractile behavior found in collective cell flows, which would seemingly contradict some of the authors' conclusions, are not discussed.

      I encourage the authors to address the comments and questions below.

      (1) In Equation 1, what do the authors mean by the cluster's size \ell? How is this quantity defined? The calculations in the Methods suggest that \ell indicates the distance between the p-atic defects and the center of the T1 cell cluster, but this is not clearly defined.

      (2) The multiphase field model was developed and reviewed already, before the Loewe et al. 2020 paper that the authors cite. Earlier papers include Camley et al. PNAS 2014, Palmieri et al. Sci. Rep. 2015, Mueller et al. PRL 2019, and Peyret et al. Biophys. J. 2019, as reviewed in Alert and Trepat. Annu. Rev. Condens. Matter Phys. 2020.

      (3) At what time lag is the mean-squared displacement in Figure 3f calculated? How does the choice of a lag time affect these data and the resulting conclusions?

      (4) The authors argue that their results provide an explanation for the extensile behavior of cell layers. However, there are also examples of contractile behavior, such as in Duclos et al., Nat. Phys., 2017 and in Pérez-González et al., Nat. Phys., 2019. In both cases, collective cell flows were observed, which in principle require cell intercalations. How would these observations be rationalized with the theory proposed in this paper? Can these experiments and the theory be reconciled?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This manuscript uses a well-validated behavioural estimation task to investigate the degree to which optimistic belief updating was attenuated during the 2020 global pandemic. Online participants estimated how likely different negative life events were to happen to them in the future and were given statistics about these events. Belief updating (measured as the degree to which estimations changed after viewing the statistics) was less optimistically biased during the pandemic (compared to outside of it). This resulted from reduced updating from "good news" (better than expected information). Computational models were used to try to unpack how statistics were integrated and used to revise beliefs. Two families of models were compared - an RL set of models where "estimation errors" (analogous to prediction errors in classic RL models) predict belief change and a Bayesian set of models where an implied likelihood ratio was calculated (derived from participants estimations of their own risk and estimation of the base rate risk) and used to predict belief change. The authors found evidence that the former set of models accounted for updating better outside of the pandemic, but the latter accounted for updating during the pandemic. In addition, the RL model provides evidence that learning was asymmetrically positively biased outside of the pandemic but symmetric during it (as a result of reduced learning rates from good news estimation errors).

      Strengths

      Understanding whether biases in learning are fixed modes of information processing or flexible and adapt in response to environmental shocks (like a global pandemic or economic recession) is an important area of research relevant to a wide range of fields, including cognitive psychology, behavioural economics, and computational psychiatry. The study uses a well-validated task, and the authors conduct a power analysis to show that the sample sizes are appropriate. Furthermore, the authors test that their results hold in both a between-group analysis (the focus of the main paper) and a within-group analysis (mainly in the supplemental).

      The finding that optimistic biases are reduced in response to acute stress, perceived threat, and depression has been shown before using this task both in the lab (social stress manipulation), in the real world (firefighters on duty), and clinical groups (patients with depression). However, the work does extend these findings here in important ways:

      (1) Examining the effect of a new real-world adverse event (the pandemic).<br /> (2) The reduction in optimistic updating here arises due to reduced updating from positive information (previously, in the case of environmental threat, this reduction mainly arose from increased sensitivity to negative information).<br /> (3) Leveraging new RL-inspired computational approaches, demonstrating that the bias - and its attenuation - can be captured using trial-by-trial computational modelling with separate learning rates for positive and negative estimation errors.

      The authors now take great care to caveat that the findings cannot directly attribute the observed lack of optimistically biased belief updating during lockdown to psychological causes such as heightened anxiety and stress.

      The authors have added model recovery results. Whilst there are some cases within a family (RL or Bayesian) of models where they can be confused (e.g., Bayesian model 10-the winning model during the pandemic-sometimes gets confused with Bayesian model 9), there is no confusion between families of models (RL models don't get confused with Bayesian models and vice versa), which is reassuring.

      Weaknesses

      The authors now conduct model recovery (SI Figure 5) and show how the behaviour of the two best-fitting models (Rational Bayesian model and optimistically biased RL-like model) approximates the actual data observed by showing them alongside each other (Figure 1b). It seems from Figure 1b that the 2 models predict similar behaviour for bad news but diverge for good news, with the optimistically biased RL-like model predicting greater updates than the rational Bayesian model. However, it is difficult to tell from the figure (partly because of the y-axis scale) how much of a divergence this is and how distinctive a pattern relative to the other models. I think the interpretation could be improved further by a clearer sense of the behavioural signatures of each model, enabling them to be reliably teased apart from one another in the model recovery.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This study presents valuable findings on the GABA and BOLD changes induced by continuous theta burst stimulation (cTBS) and on the relationships between ATL GABA level and performance in a semantic task. However, I'm afraid that the current results are incomplete to support some primary claims of the paper, for example, the purported inverted-U-shaped relationship between GABA levels in the ATL and semantic task performance. The influence of practice effects also complicates the interpretation of the results. Additional concerns include potential double dipping in the analysis depicted in Figure 3A and the use of inconsistent behavioral measures (IE and accuracy) across various analyses.

      The authors have made two beneficial revisions in this round: (1) acknowledging the insufficient data points supporting the inverted U-shaped curve; (2) attempting to control for practice effects. However, I believe unresolved issues remain:

      (1) The authors have not addressed my specific concern about Figure 4D - the analysis attempts to fit an inverted U-shaped curve to the data without distinguishing between data points influenced by practice effects and those unaffected, rendering its reliability questionable.

      (2) The authors appear to have misunderstood my question regarding Figure 3A. This issue is unrelated to practice effects. My point was that even if we randomly generated pre- and post-test data points and grouped/analyzed them according to the authors' methodology, we would still likely reproduce the pattern in Figure 3A due to the double dipping problem. Thus, this statistical analysis and its conclusions currently lack methodological validity.

      (3) Regarding the inconsistency in behavioral measures, the authors' explanation fails to remove my concerns. If the authors argue that accuracy is the most appropriate behavioral dependent variable for this study, why did they employ inverse efficiency in some of their analyses? My understanding is that a study should either consistently use the single most suitable measure or report multiple measures while providing adequate discussion of inconsistent results.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The results offer compelling evidence that L5-L5 tLTD depends on presynaptic NMDARs, a concept that has previously been somewhat controversial.

      It documents the novel finding that presynaptic NMDARs facilitate tLTD through their metabotropic signaling mechanism.

      Strengths:

      The experimental design is clever and clean.

      The approach of comparing the results in cell pairs where NMDA is deleted either presynaptically or postsynaptically is technically insightful and yields decisive data.

      The MK801 experiments are also compelling.

      Weaknesses:

      No major weaknesses were noted by this reviewer.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors describe a role of sumoylation at K81 in p66Shc which affects endothelial dysfunction. This explores a new mechanism for understanding the role of PTMs in cellular processes.

      Strengths:

      The experiments are well planned and the results are well represented.<br /> Vascular tonality experiments were carried out nicely, given the amount of time and effort one needs to put in to get clean results from these experiments.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The production of ROS has been measured in a very superficial way.<br /> The term "ROS" confers a plethora of chemical species which exerts different physiological effects on different cells and situations.<br /> Mitochondria through one of the source , but not the only source of ROS production. Only measuring ROS with mitosox do not reflect the cellular condition of ROS in a specific condition. I would suggest authors consider doing IF of oxidative stress specific markers , carbonyl group and also, maybe, Amplex red for determining average oxidative stress and ros production in the cells.<br /> (2) 8-OHG signal seems very confusing in Figure 7E. 8-ohg is supposed to be mainly in the nucleus and to some extent in mitochondria. The signal is very diffused in the images. I would suggest a higher magnification and better resolution images for 8-ohg. Also, the VWF signal is pretty weak whereas it should be strong given the staining is in aorta. Authors should redo the experiments.<br /> (3) PCA analysis is quite not clear. Why is there a convergence among the plots? Authors should explain. Also, I would suggest that the authors do the analysis done in Figure 8B again with R based packages. IPA, though being user-friendly, mostly does not yield meaningful results and the statistics carried out is not accurate. Authors should redo the analysis in R or Python whichever is suitable for them.<br /> (4) The MS analysis part seems pretty vague in methods. Please rewrite.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript assesses the utility of spatial image correlation spectroscopy (ICS) for measuring physiological responses to DNA damage. ICS is a long-established (~1993) method, similar to fluorescence correlation spectroscopy, for deriving information about the fluorophore density that underlies the intensity distributions of images.

      The revisions to the current manuscript have improved the understanding of the strengths and limitations of the spatial ICS method. In particular, since the measurements are obtaining complementary information to traditional focus counting, one does not expect a simple linear relationship between the quantities obtained by ICS and by immunostaining. The explanations are satisfactory to me and, I expect, to the interested reader.

      Additionally, I am satisfied with the code availability now that it is placed on Github.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study aims to explore the ferroptosis-related immune landscape of TNBC through the integration of single-cell and bulk RNA sequencing data, followed by the development of a risk prediction model for prognosis and drug response. The authors identified key subpopulations of immune cells within the TME, particularly focusing on T cells and macrophages. Using machine learning algorithms, the authors constructed a ferroptosis-related gene risk score that accurately predicts survival and the potential response to specific drugs in TNBC patients.

      Strengths:

      The study identifies distinct subpopulations of T cells and macrophages with differential expression of ferroptosis-related genes. The clustering of these subpopulations and their correlation with patient prognosis is highly insightful, especially the identification of the TREM2+ and FOLR2+ macrophage subtypes, which are linked to either favorable or poor prognoses. The risk model thus holds potential not only for prognosis but also for guiding treatment selection in personalized oncology.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this revised report, Yamanaka and colleagues investigate a proposed mechanism by which testosterone modulates seminal plasma metabolites in mice. Based on limited evidence in previous versions of the report, the authors softened the claim that oleic acid derived from seminal vesicle epithelium strongly affects linear progressive motility in isolated cauda epididymal sperm in vitro. Though the report still contains somewhat ambiguous references to the strength of the relationship between fatty acids and sperm motility.

      Strengths:

      Often, reported epidydimal sperm from mice have lower percent progressive motility compared with sperm retrieved from the uterus or by comparison with human ejaculated sperm. The findings in this report may improve in vitro conditions to overcome this problem, as well as add important physiological context to the role of reproductive tract glandular secretions in modulating sperm behaviors. The strongest observations are related to the sensitivity of seminal vesicle epithelial cells to testosterone. The revisions include the addition of methodological detail, modified language to reflect the nuance of some of the measurements, as well as re-performed experiments with more appropriate control groups. The findings are likely to be of general interest to the field by providing context for follow-on studies regarding the relationship between fatty acid beta oxidation and sperm motility pattern.

      Weaknesses:

      The connection between media fatty acids and sperm motility pattern remains inconclusive.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This work introduces and describes a useful curation pipeline of antibody-antigen structures downloaded from the PDB database. The antibody-antigen structures are presented in a new database called AACDB - with associated website - alongside annotations that were either corrected from those present in the PDB database, or added de-novo with solid methodology. Sequences, structures and annotations can be very easily downloaded from the AACDB website, speeding up the development of structure-based algorithms and analysis pipelines to characterize antibody-antigen interactions. However, AACDB is missing some important annotations that I believe would greatly enhance its usefulness, such as binding affinity annotations.

      I think the potentially most significant contribution of this database is the manual data curation to fix errors present in the PDB entries, by cross-referencing with the literature. The authors also seem to describe, whenever possible, the procedures they took to correct the annotations.

      I have personally verified some of the examples presented by the authors, and found that SAbDab appears to fix the mistakes related to mis-identification of antibody chains, but not other annotations.

      "(1) the species of the antibody in 7WRL was incorrectly labeled as "SARS coronavirus B012" in both PDB and SabDab" → I have verified the mistake and fix, and that SAbDab does not fix is, just uses the pdb annotation.<br /> "(2) 1NSN, the resolution should be 2.9 , but it was incorrectly labeled as 2.8" → I have verified the mistake and fix, and that saabdab does not fix it, just uses the PDB annotation.<br /> "(3) mislabeling of antibody chains as other proteins (e.g. in 3KS0, the light chain of B2B4 antibody was misnamed as heme domain of flavocytochrome b2)" → SAbDab fixes this as well in this case.<br /> "(4) misidentification of heavy chains as light chains (e.g. both two chains of antibody were labeled as light chain in 5EBW)" → SAbDab fixes this as well in this case.

      I believe the splitting of the pdb files is a valuable contribution as it standardizes the distribution of antibody-antigen complexes. Indeed, there is great heterogeneity in how many copies of the same structure are present in the structure uploaded to the PDB, generating potential artifacts for machine learning applications to pick up on. That being said, I have two thoughts both for the authors and the broader community. First, in the case of multiple antibodies binding to different epitopes on the same antigen, one should not ignore the potentially stabilizing effect that the binding of one antibody has on the complex, thereby enabling the binding of the second antibody. In general, I urge the community to think about what is the most appropriate spatial context to consider when modeling the stability of interactions from crystal structure data. Second, and in a similar vein, some antigens occur naturally as homomultimers - e.g. influenza hemagglutinin is a homotrimer. Therefore, to analyze the stability of a full-antigen-antibody structure, I believe it would be necessary to consider the full homo-trimer, whereas in the current curation of AACDB with the proposed data splitting, only the monomers are present.

      I think the annotation of interface residues is a very useful addition to structural datasets.

      I am, however, not convinced of the utility of *change* in SASA as a useful metric for identifying interacting residues, beyond what is already identified via pairwise distances between the antibody and antigen residues. If we had access to the unbound conformation of most antibodies and antigens, then we could analyze the differences in structural conformations upon binding, which can be in part quantified by change in SASA. However, as only bound structures are usually available, one is usually force to approximate a protein's unbound structure by computationally removing its binding partner - as it seems to me the authors of this work are doing.

      Some obvious limitations of AACDB in its current form include:

      AACDB only contains entries with protein-based antigens of at most 50 amino-acids in length. This excludes non-protein-based antigens, such as carbohydrate- and nucleotide-based, as well as short peptide antigens.<br /> AACDB does not include annotations of binding affinity, which are present in SAbDab and have been proven useful both for characterizing drivers of antibody-antigen interactions (cite https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0969212624004362?via%3Dihub) and for benchmarking antigen-specific antibody-design algorithms (cite https://www.biorxiv.org/content/10.1101/2023.12.10.570461v1))

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In their manuscript, Papadopoli et al explore the role of ETFDH in transformation. They note that ETFDH protein levels are decreased in cancer, and that deletion of ETFDH in cancer cell lines results in increased tumorigenesis, elevated OXPHOS and glycolysis, and a reduction in lipid and amino acid oxidation. The authors attribute these effects to increased amino acid levels stimulating mTORC1 signaling and driving alterations in BCL6 and EIF4EBP1. They conclude that ETFDH1 is epigenetically silenced in a proportion of neoplasms, suggesting a tumor-suppressive function. Overall, the authors logically present clear data and perform appropriate experiments to support their hypotheses. I only have a few minor points related to the semantics of a few of the author's statements.

      Minor Points

      Authors state, "we identified ETF dehydrogenase (ETFDH) as one of the most dispensable metabolic genes in neoplasia." Surely there are thousands of genes that are dispensable for neoplasia. Perhaps the authors can revise this sentence and similar sentiments in the text.

      Authors state, " These findings show that ETFDH loss elevates glutamine utilization in the CAC to support mitochondrial metabolism." While elevated glutamine to CAC flux is consistent with the statement that increased glutamine, the authors have not measured the effect of restoring glutamine utilization to baseline on mitochondrial metabolism. Thus, the causality implied by the authors can only be inferred based on the data presented. Indeed, the increased glutamine consumption may be linked to the increase in ROS, as glutamate efflux via system xCT is a major determinant of glutamine catabolism in vitro.

      Authors state that the mechanism described is an example of "retrograde signaling". However, the mechanism seems to be related to a reduction in BCAA catabolism, suggesting that the observed effects may be a consequence of altered metabolic flux rather than a direct signaling pathway. The data presented do not delineate whether the observed effects stem from disrupted mitochondrial communication or from shifts in nutrient availability and metabolic regulation.

      The authors should discuss which amino acids that are ETFDH substrates might affect mTORC1 activity, or consider whether other ETFDH substrates might also affect mTORC1 in their discussion. Along these lines, the authors might consider discussing why amino acids that are not ETFDH substrates are increased upon ETFDH loss.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      To elucidate the mechanisms and evolution of animal biomineralization, Voigt et al. focused on the sponge phylum - the earliest branching extant metazoan lineages exhibiting biomineralized structures - with a particular emphasis on deciphering the molecular underpinnings of spicule formation. This study centered on calcareous sponges, specifically Sycon ciliatum, as characterized in previous work by Voigt et al. In S. ciliatum, two morphologically distinct spicule types are produced by a set of two different types of cells that secrete extracellular matrix proteins, onto which calcium carbonate is subsequently deposited. Comparative transcriptomic analysis between a region with active spicule formation and other body regions identified 829 candidate genes involved in this process. Among these, the authors focused on the calcarine gene family, which is analogous to the Galaxins, the matrix proteins known to participate in coral calcification. The authors performed three-dimensional structure prediction using AlphaFold, examined mRNA expression of Calcarin genes in spicule-forming cell types via in situ hybridization, conducted proteomic analysis of matrix proteins isolated from purified spicules, and carried out chromosome arrangement analysis of the Calcarin genes.

      Based on these analyses, it was revealed that the combination of Calcarin genes expressed during spicule formation differs between the founder cells-responsible for producing diactines and triactines-and the thickener cells that differentiate from them, underscoring the necessity for precise regulation of Calcarin gene expression in proper biomineralization. Furthermore, the observation that 4 Calcarin genes are arranged in tandem arrays on the chromosome suggests that two rounds of gene duplication followed by neofunctionalization have contributed to the intricate formation of S. ciliatum spicules. Additionally, similar subtle spatiotemporal expression patterns and tandem chromosomal arrangements of Galaxins during coral calcification indicate parallel evolution of biomineralization genes between S. ciliatum and aragonitic corals.

      Strengths:

      (1) An integrative research approach, encompassing transcriptomic, genomic, and proteomic analyses as well as detailed FISH.

      (2) High-quality FISH images of Calcarin genes, along with a concise summary clearly illustrating their expression patterns, is appreciated.

      (3) It was suggested that thickener cells originate from founder cells. To the best of my knowledge, this is the first study to demonstrate trans-differentiation of sponge cells based on the cell-type-specific gene expression, as determined by in situ hybridization.

      (4) The comparison between Calcarins of Calcite sponge and Galaxins of aragonitic corals from various perspective-including protein tertiary structure predictions, gene expression profiling during calcification, and chromosomal sequence analysis to reveal significant similarities between them.

      (5) The conclusions of this paper are generally well supported by the data; however, some FISH images require clearer indication or explanation.

      (6) Figure S2 (B, C, D): The fluorescent signals in these images are difficult to discern. If the authors choose to present signals at such low magnification, enhancing the fluorescence signals would improve clarity. Additionally, incorporating Figure S2A as an inset within Figure S2E may be sufficient to convey the necessary information about signal localization.

      (7) Figure S3A: The claim that Cal2-expressing spherical cells are closely associated with the choanoderm at the distal end of the radial tube is difficult to follow. Are these Cal2-expressing spherical cells interspersed among choanoderm cells, or are they positioned along the basal surface of the choanoderm? Clarifying their precise localization and indicating it in the image would strengthen the interpretation.

      (8) To further highlight the similarities between S.ciliatum and aragonitic corals in the molecular mechanisms of calcification, consider including a supplementary figure providing a concise depiction of the coral calcification process. This would offer valuable context for readers.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors investigated factors required for neural progenitors to exit the cell cycle before the adult stage. They first show that Kr is turned on in pupal stage MBNBs, and depletion of Kr from pupal stage NBs leads to retention of MBNBs into the adult stage. Then they demonstrate that these retained NBs maintain the expression of Imp, and co-depletion of Imp abolishes the extended neurogenesis. Further, they show that co-depletion of kr-h1 significantly reduces the retained MBNBs caused by loss of kr, suggesting antagonistic genetic interactions between these two. In addition, they demonstrate that over-expressing Kr-h1 leads to the striking phenotype of tumor-like neuroblast overgrowth in adult brains.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors leveraged well-controlled, powerful genetic tools (including temporal control of RNAi knockdown using the Gal80ts system), and provided strong evidence that Kr expression in pupal stage MBNBs is required to repress Imp and promote the end of neurogenesis. Similarly, the experimental result of co-depleting Kr-h1 and Kr, and the striking phenotype upon Kr-h1 mis-expression, support the antagonistic roles played by Kr-h1 and Kr in this process.

      (2) The sample sizes, quantification methods, and p-values are well documented for all experiments. In most parts, the data presented strongly support their conclusions.

      (3) Identification of two transcription factors with opposite roles in controlling cell cycle exit, and their possible interactions with the Imp/Syp axis, is highly significant for the study on how the proliferation of neural progenitors is regulated and limited before the adult stage.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The nature of the KrIf-1 allele is not clear. It is mentioned that this allele leads to misexpression of Kr in various tissues. However, it is not clear if Kr is mis-expressed or lost in MBNBs in the KrIf-1 mutant. If Kr is mis-expressed in MBNBs in the KrIf-1 mutant, then it would be difficult to explain why both loss of Kr and mis-expression of Kr in MBNBs lead to the same NB retention phenotype. The authors should examine Kr expression in MBNBs in the KrIf-1 mutant.

      (2) Some parts of the regulations and interactions between Kr, Kr-h1, Imp, Syp, and E93 are not well-defined. For example, the data suggest that Kr is turned on in the pupal stage MBNBs, and is required to end neurogenesis through repressing Imp and Kr-h1. To further support this conclusion, the authors can examine if Kr-h1 expression is up-regulated in kr-RNAi. The authors suggested that Kr-h1 may act upstream or in parallel to Imp/Syp, but also suggested that Kr-h1 may repress E93. The expression of Imp, Syp, and E93 can be examined in brains with Kr-h1 mis-expression to determine where Kr-h1 acts. If Imp expression is elevated when Kr-h1 is mis-expressed, then Kr-h1 may act upstream of Imp. If Imp/Syp expression does not change, then Kr-h1 may act on the E93 level.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript by Garcia et al. describes how the expression of a respiratory chain alternative oxidase (AOX) from the tunicate Ciona intestinalis, capable of transferring electrons directly from reduced coenzyme Q (CoQ) to oxygen, is able to induce an increase in the mass of Drosophila melanogaster larvae and an accelerated development, especially when the larvae are kept at low temperatures. In order to explain this phenomenon, the paper addresses the modifications in the activity and levels of the 'canonical' electron transfer system (ETS), i.e., complexes I-IV and of the ATP synthase. In addition, the abundance of different metabolites as well as the NAD+/NADH ratios are measured, finding significant differences between the larvae.

      Strengths:

      The observations of differences in growth, body mass and food intake in the wt D. melanogaster larvae vs. those expressing the AOX transgene are solid. The evidence that mild uncoupling of the ETS might accelerate development of the fly larvae is convincing.

      Weaknesses:

      Some of the observations, especially those concerning the origin of the metabolic remodelling in AOX-expressing larvae, are left unexplained, and the argumentation is somewhat speculative. What the authors mean by "reconfiguration" of the mitochondrial electron transfer system is not clear. If this implies that there is an actual change in ETS function and/or structural organisation in the presence of AOX, this conclusion is not supported by the experimental data. In addition, the influence of AOX activity in the mitochondrial ETS system is tested in vitro in the presence of saturating concentrations of substrates. The real degree to which AOX activity is actually influencing ETS activity in vivo remains unknown.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors have used gene deletion approaches in zebrafish to investigate the function of genes of the hox clusters in pectoral fin "positioning" (but perhaps more accurately pectoral fin "formation").

      Strengths:

      The authors have employed a robust and extensive genetic approach to tackle an important and unresolved question.

      The results are largely presented in a very clear way.

      Weaknesses:

      The Abstract suggests that no genetic evidence exists in model organisms for a role of Hox genes in limb positioning. There are, however, several examples in mouse and other models (both classical genetic and other) providing evidence for a role of Hox genes in limb position, which is elaborated on in the Introduction.

      It would perhaps be more accurate to state that several lines of evidence in a range of model organisms (including the mouse) support a role for Hox genes in limb positioning. The author's work is not weakened by a more inclusive introduction that cites the current literature more comprehensively.

      It would be helpful for the authors to make a clear distinction between "positioning" of the limb/fin and whether a limb/fin "forms" at all, independent of the relative position of this event along the body axis.

      Discussion of why the zebrafish is sensitive to Hoxb loss with reference to the fin, but mouse Hoxb mutants do make a limb?

      Is this down to exclusive expression of Hoxbs in the zebrafish pectoral fin forming region rather than a specific functional role of the protein? This is important as it has implications for the interpretation of results throughout the paper and could explain some apparently conflicting results.

      Why is Hoxba more potent than Hoxbb? Is this because Hoxba has Hox4/5 present, while Hoxbb has only Hoxb5? Hoxba locus has retained many more Hox genes in cluster than hoxbb; therefore, one might expect to see greater redundancy in this locus).

      Deletion of either Hoxa or Hoxd in the background of the Hoxba mutant does have some effect. Is this a reflection of protein function or expression dynamics of Hoxa/Hoxd genes?

      Can we really be confident that there is a "transformation of pectoral fin progenitor cells into cardiac cells"?

      The failure to repress Nkx2.5 in the posterior (pelvic fin) domain is clear, but have these cells actually acquired cardiac identity? They would be expected to express Tbx5a (or b) as cardiac precursors, but this domain does not broaden. There is no apparent expansion of the heart (field)/domain or progenitors beyond the 16 somite stage. The claimed "migration" of heart precursors in the mutant is not clear. The heart/cardiac domain that does form in the mutant is not clearly expanded in the mutant. The domain of cmlc2 looks abnormal in the mutant, but I am not convinced it is "enlarged" as claimed by the authors. The authors have not convincingly shown that "the cells that should form the pectoral fin instead differentiate into cardiac cells."

      The only clear conclusion is the loss of pectoral fin-forming cells rather than these fin-forming cells being "transformed" into a new identity. It would be interesting to know what has happened to the cells of the pectoral fin-forming region in these double mutants.

      It is not clear what the authors mean by a "converse" relationship between forelimb/pectoral fin and heart formation. The embryological relationship between these two populations is distinct in amniotes.

      The authors show convincing data that RA cannot induce Tbx5a in the absence of Hob clusters, but I am not convinced by the interpretation of this result. The results shown would still be consistent with RA acting directly upstream of tbx5a, but merely that RA acts in concert with hox genes to activate tbx5a. In the absence of one or the other, Tbx5a would not be expressed. It is not necessary that RA and hoxbs act exclusively in a linear manner (i.e., RA regulates hoxb that in turn regulates tbx5a).

      The authors have carried out a functional test for the function of hoxb6 and hoxb8 in the hemizygous hoxb mutant background. What is lacking is any expression analysis to demonstrate whether Hoxb6b or Hoxb8b are even expressed in the appropriate pectoral fin territory to be able to contribute to pectoral fin development, either in this assay or in normal pectoral fin development.

      (The term "compensate" used in this section is confusing/misleading.)

      The authors' confounding results described in Figures 6-7 are consistent with the challenges faced in other model organisms in trying to explore the function of genes in the hox cluster and the known redundancy that exists across paralogous groups and across individual clusters.

      Given the experimental challenges in deciphering the actual functions of individual or groups of hox genes, a discussion of the normal expression pattern of individual and groups of hox genes (and how this may change in different mutant backgrounds) could be helpful to make conclusions about likely normal function of these genes and compensation/redundancy in different mutant scenarios.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The manuscript by Ivan et al aimed to identify epitopes on the Abeta peptide for a large set of anti-Abeta antibodies, including clinically relevant antibodies. The experimental work was well done and required a major experimental effort, including peptide mutational scanning, affinity determinations, molecular dynamics simulations, IP-MS, WB, and IHC. Therefore, it is of clear interest to the field. The first part of the work is mainly based on an assay in which peptides (15-18-mers) based on the human Abeta sequence, including some containing known PTMs, are immobilized, thus preventing aggregation. Although some results are in agreement with previous experimental structural data (e.g. for 3D6), and some responses to disease-associated mutations were different when compared to wild-type sequences (e.g. in the case of Aducanumab) - which may have implications for personalized treatment - I have concerns about the lack of consideration of the contribution of conformation (as in small oligomers and large aggregates) in antibody recognition patterns. The second part of the study used full-length Abeta in monomeric or aggregated forms to further investigate the differential epitope interaction between Aducanumab, donanemab, and lecanemab (Figures 5-7). Interestingly, these results confirmed the expected preference of these antibodies for aggregated Abeta, thus reinforcing my concerns about the conclusions drawn from the results obtained using shorter and immobilized forms of Abeta. Overall, I understand that the work is of interest to the field and should be published without the need for additional experimental data. However, I recommend a thorough revision of the structure of the manuscript in order to make it more focused on the results with the highest impact (second part).

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The manuscript "Targeted Protein Degradation by KLHDC2 Ligands Identified by High Throughput Screening" by Zhou, H. et al. describes the development of a high-throughput FP-based screen and the identification of a KLHDC2 ligand from a small molecule library. A counter screen and other filtering criteria led to the identification of lead compounds that contained a tetrahydroquinoline scaffold. Commercially available analogs (52 compounds) that shared this scaffold were characterized by a KLHDC2 competitive binding assay. Optimized compounds were obtained that demonstrated improved potency and increased binding affinity by SPR. Docking of a lead candidate (compound 6) suggested it bound at a distal lipophilic site within the SelK binding pocket of KLHDC2. Based on this model, the authors then synthesized PROTACs that linked the KLHDC2 binder to a BRD4-binding molecule, JQ1. These PROTAC candidates possessed different linker configurations, and PROTAC 8 was able to cause BRD4 degradation in cells, with a half-maximal degradation concentration (DC50) of 80 nM. The authors demonstrate the identification and characterization of small-molecule KLHDC2 ligands that can be used to generate PROTACs that result in BRD4 degradation in cells.

      Strengths:

      The study by Zhou, H. et al. expands the E3 ligase toolkit by targeting KLHDC2 to identify ligands for PROTAC development, which has predominantly relied on VHL and CRBN. This was accomplished using a described FP-based high-throughput screening strategy (high Z' values in 1536 well format). Both target-specific and counter-specific assays were performed, along with subsequent stringent follow-up assays designed to address non-specific binding/specificity concerns. Label-free direct binding validations by SPR were used to determine binding affinity/kinetics. A strength of the study is the characterization of the interaction between candidate compounds and KLHDC2 versus related KEAP1.

      Structural insight into the potential mode of binding was inferred by computational docking studies of the newly discovered KLHDC2 ligands. This was performed to identify where the identified scaffolds could be modified by linker incorporation for the design of PROTACs. The computational predictions were evaluated by linking a solvent-exposed site on the KLHDC2 ligand to JQ1. Three linkers were tested, and two compounds were found to result in BRD4 degradation in cells by HiBiT degradation assay and western blot. These findings demonstrate the feasibility of these compounds for the design of PROTAC-based degraders.

      The authors present compelling KLHDC2 binding data for their lead compounds and demonstrate degradation of a target using a PROTAC strategy. Accordingly, the screening approach and compounds identified are likely to be of interest to the field and are likely to be generalizable to other PROTAC targets of interest.

      Weaknesses:

      The specificity of compounds for KLHDC2 was assessed by using a counter screen against KEAP1 and in vitro binding assays. However, off-target effects might occur in a cellular context, which weren't fully explored in the study. Notably, the authors do not demonstrate that the degradation induced by their PROTACs in cells is KLHDC2-dependent. A requirement for KLHDC2-mediated degradation could be evaluated, for example, by using knockout/knockdown of KLHDC2, or other means, to demonstrate specificity. Addressing specificity is deemed important to evaluate the proposed PROTAC mechanism of action in a cellular context that results in the degradation of BRD4. Specificity is important when considering the utility of these new compounds for PROTAC design.

      Additional rationale behind the selection of linkers used to generate candidate PROTACs would be informative and would benefit from additional discussion and/or citation. The reasons for the lack of activity, such as for compound 9, were not fully explored or discussed, such as whether complex assembly is potentially affected by linker choice. Perhaps related to this point, the authors note that a trifluoromethoxy group increased the binding affinity of compound 6. However, the subsequent docking analysis revealed this moiety to be solvent-exposed. The relationship between this site of functionalization, linker selection, and the resulting binding affinity or effect on DC50 was not clear and/or could be developed further.

      Minor issues related to the presentation of the manuscript include sections that would benefit from either additional citation and/or description, such as the KI-696 inhibitor used and the BRD4 HiBiT degradation assay that was used to assess PROTAC potency. Figure captions should be reviewed to ensure that the number of independent experiments is indicated, and what data points and error bars represent, as these are not indicated in several figures. BRD4 levels were quantified in 4E; however, error/reproducibility (n) is not indicated.

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      The study aims to determine the role of Slit-Robo signaling in the development and patterning of cardiac innervation, a key process in heart development. Despite the well-studied roles of Slit axon guidance molecules in the development of the central nervous system, their roles in the peripheral nervous system are less clear. Thus, the present study addresses an important question. The study uses genetic knockout models to investigate how Slit2, Slit3, Robo1, and Robo2 contribute to cardiac innervation.

      Using constitutive and cell type-specific knockout mouse models, they show that the loss of endothelial-derived Slit2 reduces cardiac innervation. Additionally, Robo1 knockout, but not Robo2 knockout, recapitulated the Slit2 knockout effect on cardiac innervation, leading to the conclusion that Slit2-Robo1 signaling drives sympathetic innervation in the heart. Finally, the authors also show a reduction in isoproterenol-stimulated heart rate but not basal heart rate in the absence of endothelial Slit2.

      The conclusions of this paper are mostly well supported by the data, but some should be modified to account for the study's limitations and discussed in the context of previous literature.

      (1) It is well established that Slit ligands undergo proteolytic cleavage, generating N- and C-terminal fragments with distinct biological functions. Full-length Slit proteins and their fragments differ in cell association, with the N-terminal fragment typically remaining membrane-bound, while the C-terminal fragment is more diffusible. This distinction is crucial when evaluating the role of Slit proteins secreted by different cell types in the heart. However, this study does not examine or discuss the specific contributions of different Slit2 fragments, limiting its mechanistic insight into how Slit2 regulates cardiac innervation.

      (2) The endothelial-specific deletion of Slit2 leads to its loss in endothelial cells across various organs and tissues in the developing embryo. Therefore, the phenotypes observed in the heart may be influenced by defects in other parts of the embryo, such as the CNS or sympathetic ganglia, and this possibility cannot be ruled out.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Lysosomal damage is commonly found in many diseases including normal aging and age-related disease. However, the transcriptional programs activated by lysosomal damage have not been thoroughly characterized. This study aimed to investigate lysosome damage-induced major transcriptional responses and the underlying signaling basis. The authors have convincingly shown that lysosomal damage activates a ubiquitination-dependent signaling axis involving TAB, TAK1, and IKK, which culminates in the activation of NF-kB and subsequent transcriptional upregulation of pro-inflammatory genes and pro-survival genes. Overall, the major aims of this study were successfully achieved.

      Strengths:

      This study is well-conceived and strictly executed, leading to clear and well-supported conclusions. Through unbiased transcriptomics and proteomics screens, the authors identified NF-kB as a major transcriptional program activated upon lysosome damage. TAK1 activation by lysosome damage-induced ubiquitination was found to be essential for NF-kB activation and MAP kinase signaling. The transcriptional and proteomic changes were shown to be largely driven by TAK1 signaling. Finally, the TAK1-IKK signaling was shown to provide resistance to apoptosis during lysosomal damage response. The main signaling axis of this pathway was convincingly demonstrated.

      Weaknesses:

      One weakness was the claim of K63-linked ubiquitination in lysosomal damage-induced NF-kB activation. While it was clear that K63 ubiquitin chains were present on damaged lysosomes, no evidence was shown in the current study to demonstrate the specific requirement of K63 ubiquitin chains in the signaling axis being studied. Clarifying the roles of K63-linked versus other types of ubiquitin chains in lysosomal damage-induced NF-kB activation may improve the mechanistic insights and overall impact of this study.

      Another weakness was that the main conclusions of this study were all dependent on an artificial lysosomal damage agent. It will be beneficial to confirm key findings in other contexts involving lysosomal damage.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This work by Govorunova et al. identified three naturally blue-shifted channelrhodopsins (ChRs) from ancyromonads, namely AnsACR, FtACR, and NlCCR. The phylogenetic analysis places the ancyromonad ChRs in a distinct branch, highlighting their unique evolutionary origin and potential for novel applications in optogenetics. Further characterization revealed the spectral sensitivity, ionic selectivity, and kinetics of the newly discovered AnsACR, FtACR, and NlCCR. This study also offers valuable insights into the molecular mechanism underlying the function of these ChRs, including the roles of specific residues in the retinal-binding pocket. Finally, this study validated the functionality of these ChRs in both mouse brain slices (for AnsACR and FtACR) and in vivo in Caenorhabditis elegans (for AnsACR), demonstrating the versatility of these tools across different experimental systems.

      In summary, this work provides a potentially valuable addition to the optogenetic toolkit by identifying and characterizing novel blue-shifted ChRs with unique properties.

      Strengths:

      This study provides a thorough characterization of the biophysical properties of the ChRs and demonstrates the versatility of these tools in different ex vivo and in vivo experimental systems. The mutagenesis experiments also revealed the roles of key residues in the photoactive site that can affect the spectral and kinetic properties of the channel.

      Weaknesses:

      While the novel ChRs identified in this work are spectrally blue-shifted, there still seems to be some spectral overlap with other optogenetic tools. The authors should provide more evidence to support the claim that they can be used for multiplex optogenetics and help potential end-users assess if they can be used together with other commonly applied ChRs. Additionally, further engineering or combination with other tools may be required to achieve truly orthogonal control in multiplexed experiments.

      In the C. elegans experiments, partial recovery of pharyngeal pumping was observed after prolonged illumination, indicating potential adaptation. This suggests that the effectiveness of these ChRs may be limited by cellular adaptation mechanisms, which could be a drawback in long-term experiments. A thorough discussion of this challenge in the application of optogenetics tools would prove very valuable to the readership.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors assess the role of map3k1 in adult Planaria through whole body RNAi for various periods of time. The authors' prior work has shown that neoblasts (stem cells that can regenerate the entire body) for various tissues are intermingled in the body. Neoblasts divide to produce progenitors that migrate within a "target zone" to the "differentiated target tissues" where they differentiate into a specific cell type. Here the authors show that map3k1-i animals have ectopic eyes that form along the "normal" migration path of eye progenitors (Fig. 1), ectopic neurons and glands along the AP axis (Fig. 2) and pharynx in ectopic anterior positions (Fig. 3). The rest of the study show that positional information is largely unaffected by loss of map3k1 (Fig. 4,5). However, loss of map3k1 leads to premature differentiated of progenitors along their normal migratory route (Fig. 6). They also show that an ill-defined "long-term" whole body depletion of map3k1 results in mis-specified organs and teratomas.

      Strengths:

      (1) The study has appropriate controls, sample sizes and statistics.<br /> (2) The work appears to be high-quality.<br /> (3) The conclusions are supported by the data.<br /> (4) Planaria is a good system to analyze the function of map3k1, which exists in mammals but not in other invertebrates.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The paper is largely descriptive with no mechanistic insights.<br /> (2) Given the severe phenotypes of long-term depletion of map3k1, it is important that this exact timepoint is provided in the methods, figures, figure legends and results.<br /> (3) Fig. 1C, the ectopic eyes are difficult to see, please add arrows.<br /> (4) line 217 - why does the n=2/12 animals not match the values in Fig. 3B, which is 11/12 and 12/12. The numbers don't add up. Please correct/explain.<br /> (5) Figure panels do not match what is written in the results section. There is no Fig. 6E. Please correct.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript investigated the mechanism underlying boundary formation necessary for proper separation of vestibular sensory end organs. In both chick and mouse embryos, it was shown that a population of cells abutting the sensory (marked by high Sox2 expression) /nonsensory cell populations (marked by Lmx1a expression) undergo apical expansion, elongation, alignment and basal constriction to separate the lateral crista (LC) from the utricle. Using Lmx1a mouse mutant, organ cultures, pharmacological and viral-mediated Rock inhibition, it was demonstrated that the Lmx1a transcription factor and Rock-mediated actomyosin contractility is required for boundary formation and LC-utricle separation.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the morphometric analyses were done rigorously and revealed novel boundary cell behaviors. The requirement of Lmx1a and Rock activity in boundary formation was convincingly demonstrated.

      Weaknesses:

      However, the precise roles of Lmx1a and Rock in regulating cell behaviors during boundary formation were not clearly fleshed out. For example, phenotypic analysis of Lmx1a was rather cursory; it is unclear how Lmx1a, expressed in half of the boundary domain, control boundary cell behaviors and prevent cell mixing between Lmx1a+ and Lmx1a- compartments? Well-established mechanisms and molecules for boundary formation were not investigated (e.g. differential adhesion via cadherins, cell repulsion via ephrin-Eph signaling). Moreover, within the boundary domain, it is unclear whether apical multicellular rosettes and basal constrictions are drivers of boundary formation, as boundary can still form when these cell behaviors were inhibited. Involvement of other cell behaviors, such as radial cell intercalation and oriented cell division, also warrant consideration. With these lingering questions, the mechanistic advance of the present study is somewhat incremental.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Taujale et al describe an interdisciplinary approach to mine the human channelome and further discover orthologues across diverse organisms, culminating in delineating co-conserved patterns in an example ion channel: CALHM. Overall, this paper comes in two sections, one where 419 human ion channels and 48,000+ channels from diverse organisms are found through a multidisciplinary data mining approach, and a second where this data is used to find co-conserved sequences, whose functional significance is validated via experiments on CALHM1 and CALHM6. Overall, this is an intriguing data-first approach to better understand even understudied ion channels like CALHM6. However, more needs to be done to pull this story together into a single, coherent narrative.

      Strengths:

      This manuscript takes advantage of modern-day LLM tools to better mine the literature for ion channel sequences in humans and other species with orthologous ion channel sequences. They explore the 'dark channome' of understudied ion channels to better reveal the information evolution has to tell us about our own proteins, and illustrate the information this provides access to in experimental studies in the final section of the paper. Finally, they provide a wealth of information in the supplementary tables (in the form of Excel spreadsheets) for others to explore. Overall, this is a creative approach to a wide-reaching problem that can be applied to other families of proteins.

      Weaknesses:

      Overall, while a considerable amount of work has been done for this manuscript, the presentation, both in terms of writing and figures, leaves much to be desired. One can imagine a story that clearly describes the need for a better-curated sequence database of ion channels, and clearly describes how existing resources fall short, but here this is not very clearly illustrated.

      One question that arises with the part of the manuscript that discusses the identification and classification of ion channels is whether they plan to make these sequences available to the wider public. For the 419 human sequences, making a small database to share this result so that these sequences can be easily searched and downloaded would be desirable. There are a variety of acceptable formats for this: GitHub/figshare/zenodo/university website that allows a wider community to access their hard work. The authors have included enough information in the supplementary tables that this could be done by a motivated reader, but providing such a resource would greatly expand the impact of this paper. The same question can be asked of the 48,000+ ion channels from diverse organisms. For these, one is even worried that these are not properly sequenced genes? What checks have been done to confirm this? Uniport contains a good deal of unreviewed sequences, especially from single-celled organisms. Potentially, this is covered in the sentence in the Methods: "Finally, the results obtained from both the full-length and pore domains were retained as true orthologous relationships to remove extraneous hits." But this process could be discussed in more detail, clearly illustrating that the risk of gene duplicates and fragments in this final set of ion channel orthologues has been avoided. Related to this, does this analysis include or exclude isoforms?

      Another aspect of the identification and classification of ion channel genes that could be improved is the figures for this section. One is relatively used to seeing trees as shown in Figures 3 and 4, which show relationships between genes as distances or evolutionary relationships. The decision to show the families of ion channels in Figure 1 as pie charts within a UMAP embedding is intriguing but somewhat non-intuitive and difficult to understand. Illustrating these results with a standard tree-like visualization of the relationship of these channels to each other would be preferred.

      One aspect of the pie-chart/UMAP visualization that works well is the highlighting of the 'dark' ion channels according to the status as designated by IDG, which highlights a strength of this whole paper. However, throughout the paper, this could be emphasized more as the key advantage of this approach and how this or similar approaches could be used for other families of proteins. Specifically, in the initial statement describing 'light' vs 'dark channels', the importance of this distinction and the historical preference in science to study that which has already been studied can be discussed more, even including references to other studies that take this kind of approach. An example of a relevant reference here is to the Structural Genomics Consortium and its goals to achieve structures of proteins for which functions may not be well-characterized. Furthermore, this initial statement mentioning 'light channels' was initially confusing -- does this mean light-sensing channels? As one reads on this is clearly not the case, but for such an important central focus of this paper, these kinds of misunderstandings do not serve the authors well. Clarifying these motivations throughout the entire paper would strengthen it considerably.

      Additionally, since the authors have generated this UMAP visualization, it would be interesting to understand how the human vs orthologue gene sets compare in this space. Furthermore, Figure 1, for just the human analysis, should say more clearly that this is an analysis of the human gene set and include more of the information in the text: 419 human ion channel sequences, 75 sequences previously unidentified, 4 major groups and 55 families, 62 outliers, etc. Clearer visualizations of these categories and numbers within the UMAP (and newly included tree) visualization would help guide the reader to better understand these results.

      One of the most peculiar aspects of this paper is that it feels like two papers, one about better documenting the ion channel genes across species, and another with well-executed experiments on CALHM channels. One suggestion for how to link these two sections together better is to show that previous methods to analyze conserved residues in CALHM were significantly lacking. What results would that give? Why was this not enough? Were there just not enough identified CALHM orthologues to give strong signals in conservation analysis?

      Some of the analysis pipeline is unclear. Specifically, the RAG analysis seems critical, but it is unclear how this works - is it on top of the GPT framework and recursively inquires about the answer to prompts? Some example prompts would be useful to understand this. Furthermore, the existence of 76 auxiliary non-pore containing 'ion channel' genes in this analysis is a little confusing, as it seems a part of the pipeline is looking for pore-lining residues. Furthermore, how many of these are picked up in the larger orthologues search? Are these harder to perform checks on to ensure that they are indeed ion channel genes? A further discussion of the choice to include these auxiliary sequences would be relevant. This could just be further discussion of the literature that has decided to do this in the past.

      Overall, this manuscript is a valuable contribution to the field, but it requires a few main things to make it truly useful. Namely, how has this approach really improved the ability to identify conserved residues over a less-involved approach? A better description of their methods and results is required in the first section of the paper, as well as some cosmetic improvements.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This useful work extends a prior study from the authors to observe distance changes within the CNBD domains of a full-length CNG channel based on changes in single photon lifetimes due to tmFRET between a metal at an introduced chelator site and a fluorescent non-canonical amino acid at another site. The data are excellent and convincingly support the authors' conclusions. The methodology is of general use for other proteins. The authors also show that coupling of the CNBDs to the rest of the channel stabilizes the CNBDs in their active state, relative to an isolated CNBD construct.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript is very well written and clear.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The authors investigate how the viscoelasticity of the fingertip skin can affect the firing of mechanoreceptive afferents and they find a clear effect of recent physical skin state (memory), which is different between afferents. The manuscript is extremely well-written and well-presented. It uses a large dataset of low threshold mechanoreceptive afferents in the fingertip, where it is particularly noteworthy that the SA-2s have been thoroughly analyzed and play an important role here. They point out in the introduction the importance of the non-linear dynamics of the event when an external stimulus contacts the skin, to the point at which this information is picked up by receptors. Although clearly correlated, these are different processes, and it has been very well-explained throughout. I have some comments and ideas that the authors could think about that could further improve their already very interesting paper. Overall, the authors have more than achieved their aims, where their results very much support the conclusions and provoke many further questions. This impact of the previous dynamics of skin affecting current state can be explored further in so many ways and may help us in understanding skin aging and the effects of anatomical changes of the skin better.

      Comments on revised submission:

      The authors have taken all my considerations into account and provided excellent responses to them. They have modified their paper accordingly, which improves its clarity even more. Very interesting work and I have no further comments.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors demonstrate that two human preproprotein human mutations in the BMP4 gene cause a defect in proprotein cleavage and BMP4 mature ligand formation, leading to hypomorphic phenotypes in mouse knock-in alleles and in Xenopus embryo assays.

      Strengths:

      They provide compelling biochemical and in vivo analyses supporting their conclusions, showing the reduced processing of the proprotein and concomitant reduced mature BMP4 ligand protein from impressively mouse embryonic lysates. They perform excellent analysis of the embryo and post-natal phenotypes demonstrating the hypomorphic nature of these alleles. Interesting phenotypic differences between the S91C and E93G mutants are shown with excellent hypotheses for the differences. Their results support that BMP4 heterodimers act predominantly throughout embryogenesis whereas BMP4 homodimers play essential roles at later developmental stages.

      Weaknesses:

      In the revision the authors have appropriately addressed the previous minor weaknesses.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This study investigates the role of microtubules (MT) in regulating insulin secretion from pancreatic islet beta cells. This is of great importance considering that controlled secretion of insulin is essential to prevent diabetes. Previously, it has been shown that KIF5B plays an essential role in insulin secretion by transporting insulin granules to the plasma membrane. High glucose activates KIF5B to increase insulin secretion resulting in cellular uptake of glucose. In order to prevent hypoglycemia, insulin secretion needs to be tightly controlled. Notably, it is known that KIF5B plays a role in MT sliding. This is important, as the authors described previously that beta cells establish a peripheral sub-membrane MT array, which is critical for withdrawal of excessive insulin granules from the secretion sites. At high glucose, the sub-membrane MT array is destabilized to allow for robust insulin secretion. Here the authors aim to answer the question how the peripheral array is formed. Based on the previously published data the authors hypothesize that KIF5B organizes the sub-membrane MT array via microtubule sliding.

      General comment:<br /> This manuscript provides data that indicate that KIF5B, like in many other cells, mediates MT sliding in beta cells to establish a non-radial sub-membrane MT array. This study is based mainly on in vitro assays and one cell line. To demonstrate the importance of KIF5B in vivo/under physiological conditions, the MT pattern and directionality in beta cells within whole isolated pancreatic islets from KIF5B KO mice was analyzed in comparison to their WT littermates. While the presented effects appear often rather small, it is important to note that small changes in MT configuration can have strong effects. However, the authors provide no link to insulin secretion and glucose uptake. Finally, it remains unclear whether a KIF5B-dependent mechanism regulating microtubule sliding plays a major role in controlling insulin secretion.

      Specific comments:<br /> (1) It is difficult to appreciate that there is a "peripheral sub-membrane microtubule array" as it is not well defined in the manuscript. This reviewer assumes that this is in the respective field clear. Yet, while it is appreciated that there is an increased amount of MTs close to the cytoplasmic membrane, the densities appear very variable along the membrane. Please provide a clear description in the Introduction what is meant with "peripheral sub-membrane microtubule array".<br /> (2) The authors described a "consistent presence of a significant peripheral array in the C57BL/6J control mice, while the KO counterparts exhibited a partial loss of this peripheral bundle. Specifically, the measured tubulin intensity at the cell periphery was significantly reduced in the KO mice compared to their wild-type counterparts". In vitro "control cells had convoluted non-radial MTs with a prominent sub-membrane array, typical for β cells (Fig. 2A), KIF5B-depleted cells featured extra-dense MTs in the cell center and sparse receding MTs at the periphery (Fig. 2B,C)". Please comment/discuss why in vivo there are no "extra-dense MTs in the cell center".<br /> (3) Authors should include in the Discussion a paragraph discussing the fact that small changes in MT configuration can have strong effects.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This short report shows that the transcription factor gene mirror is specifically expressed in the posterior region of the butterfly wing imaginal disk, and uses CRISPR mosaic knock-outs to show it is necessary to specify the morphological features (scales, veins, and surface) of this area.

      Strengths:

      The data and figures support the conclusions. The article is swiftly written and makes an interesting evolutionary comparison to the function of this gene in Drosophila. Based on the data presented, it can now be established that mirror likely has a similar selector function for posterior-wing identity in a plethora of insects.

      Comments on revisions:

      The revision is satisfactory. I agree with the authors that this article provides interesting insights on the evolution of insect wings. Of note, butterfly and fly wing imaginal disks differ in their mode of development: while fly wing disks grow as epithelial sacs that evaginate during metamorphosis, butterfly wing disks develop as relatively flat epithelial sheets that expand and differentiate progressively. This makes the similar role of mirror all the more interesting.

      The revised text appropriately discuss how selector genes like mirror regionalize the wing during larval and pupal development. This article makes a reasonable use of CRISPR mosaic knock outs and uses contralateral controls to show the nature of the phenotypic transformations.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The study addresses how faces and bodies are integrated in two STS face areas revealed by fMRI in the primate brain. It is building upon recordings and analysis of the responses of large populations of neurons to three sets of images, that vary face and body positions. These sets allowed the author to thoroughly investigate invariance to position on the screen (MC HC), to pose (P1 P2), to rotation (0 45 90 135 180 225 270 315), to inversion, to possible and impossible postures (all vs straight), to presentation of head and body together or in isolation. By analyzing neuronal responses, they find that different neurons showed preferences for body orientation, or head orientation or for the interaction between the two. By using a linear support vector machine classifier, they show that the neuronal population can decode head-body angle presented across orientations, in the anterior aSTS patch (but not middle mSTS patch), except for mirror orientation. On the contrary, mSTS neurons show less invariance for head-body angle and more specialization for head or body orientation.

      Strengths:

      These results expand prior work on the role of Anterior STS fundus face area in face-body integration and its invariance to mirror symmetry, with a rigorous set of stimuli revealing the workings of these neuronal populations in processing individuals as a whole, in an important series of carefully designed conditions.

      It also raises questions for future investigations comparing humans and monkeys expertise with upright and inverted configurations, in light of monkey-specific hanging upside-down behavior. Further, using two types of body postures (sitting, standing), they show a correlation in head-body angle between postures, suggesting that monkey orientation might be more meaningful to these neurons than precise posture.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Kv2 subfamily potassium channels contribute to delayed rectifier currents in virtually all mammalian neurons and are encoded by two distinct types of subunits: Kv2 alpha subunits that have the capacity to form homomeric channels (Kv2.1 and Kv2.2), and KvS or silent subunits (Kv5,6,8.9) that can assemble with Kv2.1 or Kv2.2 to form heteromeric channels with novel biophysical properties. Many neurons express both types of subunits and therefore have the capacity to make both homomeric Kv2 channels and heteromeric Kv2/KvS channels. Determining the contributions of each of these channel types to native potassium currents has been very difficult because the differences in biophysical properties are modest and there are no Kv2/KvS-specific pharmacological tools. The authors set out to design a strategy to separate Kv2 and Kv2/KvS currents in native neurons based on their observation that Kv2/KvS channels have little sensitivity to the Kv2 pore blocker RY785 but are blocked by the Kv2 VSD blocker GxTx. They clearly demonstrate that Kv2/KvS currents can be differentiated from Kv2 currents in native neurons using a two-step strategy to first selectively block Kv2 with RY785, and then block both with GxTx. The manuscript is beautifully written; takes a very complex problem and strategy and breaks it down so both channel experts and the broad neuroscience community can understand it.

      Strengths:

      The compounds the authors use are highly selective and unlikely to have significant confounding cross-reactivity to other channel types. The authors provide strong evidence that all Kv2/KvS channels are resistant to RY785. This is a strength of the strategy - it can likely identify Kv2/KvS channels containing any of the 10 mammalian KvS subunits and thus be used as a general reagent on all types of neurons. The limitation then of course is that it can't differentiate the subtypes, but at this stage, the field really just needs to know how much Kv2/KvS channels contribute to native currents and this strategy provides a sound way to do so.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors are very clear about the limitations of their strategy, the most important of which is that they can't differentiate different subunit combinations of Kv2/KvS heteromers. This study is meant to be a start to understanding the roles of Kv2/KvS channels in vivo. As such, this is a minor weakness, far outweighed by the potential of the strategy to move the field through a roadblock that has existed since its inception.

      The study accomplishes exactly what it set out to do: provide a means to determine the relative contributions of homomeric Kv2 and heteromeric Kv2/KvS channels to native delayed rectifier K+ currents in neurons. It also does a fabulous job laying out the case for why this is important to do.

      Comments on revisions:

      I liked this manuscript the first time and thought it was a great attempt to address a difficult problem, made more difficult by confusing background literature and conventions. The authors have kept all the strong points I liked from the first round and made it even stronger with their thoughtful and substantive responses to reviews. My first review was strongly supportive, and my initial short assessment/public review was written with the assumption that they would be public and the paper would be published essentially in its original form. All those points still apply so I am going to leave the initial reviews as is. The paper is a pleasure to read and a nice contribution to the field.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      I found this an interesting manuscript describing a study investigating the role of MC4R signalling on kisspeptin neurons. The initial question is a good one. Infertility associated with MC4 mutations in humans has typically been ascribed to the consequent obesity and impaired metabolic regulation. Whether there is a direct role for MC4 in regulating the HPG axis has not been thoroughly examined. Here, the researchers have put together an elegant combination of targeted loss of function and gain of function in vivo experiments, specifically targeting MC4 expression in kisspeptin neurons. This excellent experimental design should provide compelling evidence for whether melanocortin signalling has a direct role in arcuate kisspeptin neurons to support normal reproductive function. There were definite effects on reproductive function (irregular estrous cycle, reduced magnitude of LH surge induced by exogenous estradiol). However, the magnitude of these responses and the overall effect on fertility were relatively minor. The mice lacking MC4R in kisspeptin neurons remained fertile despite these irregularities. The second part of the manuscript describes a series of electrophysiological studies evaluating the pharmacological effects of melanocortin signalling in kisspeptin cells in ex-vivo brain slides. These studies characterised interesting differential actions of melanocortins in two different populations of kisspeptin neurons. Collectively, I think the study provides novel insights into how direct actions of melanocortin signalling, via the MC4 receptor in kisspeptin neurons, contribute to the metabolic regulation of the reproductive system. Importantly, however, it is clear that other mechanisms are also at play.

      Strengths:

      The loss of function/gain of function experiments provide a conceptually simple but hugely informative experimental design. This is the key strength of the current paper - especially the knock-in study that showed improved reproductive function even in the presence of ongoing obesity. This is a very convincing result that documents that reproductive deficits in MC4R knockout animals (and humans with deleterious variants of the MC4R gene) can be ascribed to impaired signalling in the hypothalamic kisspeptin neurons and not necessarily simply caused as a consequence of obesity. As concluded by the authors: "reproductive impairments observed in MC4R deficient mice, which replicate many of the conditions described in humans, are largely mediated by the direct action of melanocortins via MC4R on Kiss1 neurons and not to their obese phenotype." This is important, as it might change the way such fertility problems are treated.

      Limitation:

      The mechanistic studies evaluating melanocortin signalling in kisppetin neurons were all completed in ovariectomized animals (with and without exogenous hormones). This reductionist approach allowed a focus on the direct actions of estradiol to regulate responses but missed an opportunity to evaluate how cyclical changes in hormones might impact the system. Such cyclical changes are fundamental to how these neurons function in vivo and may dynamically alter the way they respond to hormones and neuropeptides. However, the inclusion of gonad-intact animals would have significantly increased the complexity of experiments and can reasonably be considered outside of the scope of the present study.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors track the motion of multiple consortia of Multicellular Magnetotactic Bacteria moving through an artificial network of pores and report a discovery of a simple strategy for such consortia to move fast through the network: an optimum drift speed is attained for consortia that swim a distance comparable to the pore size in the time it takes to align the with an external magnetic field. The authors rationalize their observations using dimensional analysis and numerical simulations. Finally, they argue that the proposed strategy could generalize to other species by demonstrating the positive correlation between the swimming speed and alignment time based on theoretical analysis and parameters derived from literature.

      Strengths:

      The underlying dimensional analysis and model convincingly rationalize the experimental observation of an optimal drift velocity: the optimum balances the competition between the trapping in pores at large magnetic fields and random pore exploration for weak magnetic fields.

      Weaknesses:

      The convex pore geometry studied here creates convex traps for cells, which I expect enhances their trapping. Natural environments may create a much smaller concentration of such traps. In this case, whether a non-monotonic dependence of the drift velocity on the Scattering number would persist is unclear.

      Comments on revisions:

      Thank you very much for addressing my comments. I think the revisions have improved the paper.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript reports the investigation of PriC activity during DNA replication initiation in Escherichia coli. It is reported that PriC is necessary for growth and control of DNA replication initiation under diverse conditions where helicase loading is perturbed at the chromosome origin oriC. A model is proposed where PriC loads helicase onto ssDNA at the open complex formed by DnaA at oriC. Reconstituted helicase loading assays in vitro are consistent with the model.

      Strengths:

      The complementary combination of genetics in vivo and reconstituted assays in vitro provide solid evidence to support the role of PriC at a replication origin.

      The manuscript is well written and has a logical narrative.

      The data provide new insight to how bacteria might load helicase at the replication origin when the wild-type DnaA-dependent loading pathway is perturbed.

      Weakness:

      It has not yet been established whether PriC localises at oriC in vivo under the conditions tested.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper focuses on understanding how covalent inhibitors of peroxisome proliferator-activated receptor-gamma (PPARg) show improved inverse agonist activities. This work is important because PPARg plays essential roles in metabolic regulation, insulin sensitization, and adipogenesis. Like other nuclear receptors, PPARg, is a ligand-responsive transcriptional regulator. Its important role, coupled with its ligand-sensitive transcriptional activities, makes it an attractive therapeutic target for diabetes, inflammation, fibrosis, and cancer. Traditional non-covalent ligands like thiazolininediones (TZDs) show clinical benefit in metabolic diseases, but utility is limited by off-target effects and transient receptor engagement. In previous studies, the authors characterized and developed covalent PPARg inhibitors with improved inverse agonist activities. They also showed that these molecules engage unique PPARg ligand binding domain (LBD) conformations whereby the c-terminal helix 12 penetrates into the orthosteric binding pocket to stabilize a repressive state. In the nuclear receptor superclass of proteins, helix 12 is an allosteric switch that governs pharmacologic responses, and this new conformation was highly novel. In this study, the authors did a more thorough analysis of how two covalent inhibitors, SR33065 and SR36708 influence the structural dynamics of PPARg LBD.

      Strengths:

      (1) The authors employed a compelling integrated biochemical and biophysical approach.

      (2) The cobinding studies are unique for the field of nuclear receptor structural biology, and I'm not aware of any similar structural mechanism described for this class of proteins.

      (3) Overall, the results support their conclusions.

      (4) The results open up exciting possibilities for the development of new ligands that exploit the potential bidirectional relationship between the covalent versus non-covalent ligands studied here.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The major weakness in this work is that it is hard to appreciate what these shifting allosteric ensembles actually look like on the protein structure. Additional graphical representations would really help convey the exciting results of this study.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript by Harris and Gallistel investigates how the rate of learning and strength of conditioned behavior post learning depend on the various temporal parameters of Pavlovian conditioning. They replicate results from Gibbon and Balsam (1981) in rats to show that the rate of learning is proportional to the ratio between the cycle duration and the cue duration. They further show that the strength of conditioned behavior post learning is proportional to the cue duration, and not the above ratio. The overall findings here are interesting, provide context to many conflicting recent results on this topic, and are supported by reasonably strong evidence. Nevertheless, there are some major weaknesses in the evidence presented for some of the stronger claims in the manuscript.

      Strengths:

      This manuscript has many strengths including a rigorous experimental design, several different approaches to data analysis, careful consideration of prior literature, and a thorough introduction and discussion. The central claim-that animals track the rates of events in their environment, and that the ratio of two rates determine the rate of learning-is supported with solid evidence.

      Weaknesses:

      Despite the above major strengths, some key aspects of the paper need major improvement. These are listed below.

      (1) A key claim made here is that the same relationship (including the same parameter) describes data from pigeons by Gibbon and Balsam (1981) and the rats in this study. I think the evidence for this claim is weak as presented here. First, the exact measure used for identifying trials to criterion makes a big difference in Fig 3. As best as I understand, the authors do not make any claims about which of these approaches is the "best" way. Second, the measure used for identifying trials to criterion in Fig 1 appears different from any of the criteria used in Fig 3. If so, to make the claim that the quantitative relationship is one and the same in both datasets, the authors need to use the same measure of learning rate on both datasets and show that the resultant plots are statistically indistinguishable. Currently, the authors simply plot the dots from the current dataset on the plot in Fig 1 and ask the readers to notice the visual similarity. This is not at all enough to claim that both relationships are the same. In addition to the dependence of the numbers on the exact measure of learning rate used, the plots are in log-log axis. Slight visual changes can mean a big difference in actual numbers. For instance, between Fig 3 B and C, the highest information group moves up only "slightly" on the y-axis but the difference is a factor of 5. The authors need to perform much more rigorous quantification to make the strong claim that the quantitative relationships obtained here and in Gibbon and Balsam 1981 are identical.

      (2) Another interesting claim here is that the rates of responding during ITI and the cue are proportional to the corresponding reward rates with the same proportionality constant. This too requires more quantification and conceptual explanation. For quantification, it would be more convincing to calculate the regression slope for the ITI data and the cue data separately and then show that the corresponding slopes are not statistically distinguishable from each other. Conceptually, I am confused why the data used to the test the ITI proportionality come from the last 5 sessions. Specifically, if the model is that animals produce response rates during the ITI (a period with no possible rewards) based on the overall rate of rewards in the context, wouldn't it be better to test this before the cue learning has occurred? Before cue learning, the animals would presumably only have attributed rewards in the context to the context and thus, produce overall response rates in proportion to the contextual reward rate. After cue learning, the animals could technically know that the rate of rewards during ITI is zero. Why wouldn't it be better to test the plotted relationship for ITI before cue learning has occurred? Further, based on Fig 1, it seems that the overall ITI response rate reduces considerably with cue learning. What is the expected ITI response rate prior to learning based on the authors' conceptual model? Why does this rate differ pre and post cue learning? Finally, if the authors' conceptual framework predicts that ITI response rate after cue learning should be proportional to contextual reward rate, why should the cue response rate be proportional to cue reward rate instead of cue reward rate plus contextual reward rate?

      (3) I think there was a major conceptual disconnect between the gradual nature of learning shown in Figs 7 and 8 and the information theoretic model proposed by the authors. To the extent that I understand the model, the animals should simply learn the association once the evidence crosses a threshold (nDKL > threshold) and then produce behavior in proportion to the expected reward rate. If so, why should there be a gradual component of learning as shown in these figures? In terms of the proportional response rule to rate of rewards, why is it changing as animals go from 10% to 90% of peak response? I think the manuscript would be much strengthened if these results are explained within the authors' conceptual framework. If these results are not anticipated by the authors' conceptual framework, please do explicitly state this in the manuscript.

      (4) I find the idea stated in the Conclusion section that any model considering probability of reinforcement cannot be correct because it doesn't have temporal units to be weak. I think the authors might mean that existing models based on probability do not work and not that no possible model can work. For any point process, the standard mathematical treatment of continuous time is to compute the expected count of events as p*dt where p is the probability of occurrence of the event in that time bin and dt is an infinitesimal time bin. There is obviously a one-to-one mapping between probability of an event in a point process and its rate. Existing models use an arbitrary time bin/trial and thus, I get the authors' argument in the discussion. However, I think their conclusion is overstated.

      (5) The discussion states that the mutual information defined in equation 1 does not change during partial reinforcement. I am confused by this. The mean delay between reinforcements increases in inverse proportion to the probability of reinforcement, but doesn't the mean delay between cue and next reinforcement increase by more than this amount (next reinforcement is greater than or equal to the cue-to-cue interval away from the cue for many trials)? Why is this ratio invariant to partial reinforcement?

      Comments on revisions:

      Update following revision

      (1) This point is discussed in more detail in the attached file, but there are some important details regarding the identification of the learned trial that require more clarification. For instance, isn't the original criterion by Gibbon et al. (1977) the first "sequence of three out of four trials in a row with at least one response"? The authors' provided code for the Wilcoxon signed rank test and nDkl thresholds looks for a permanent exceeding of the threshold. So, I am not yet convinced that the approaches used here and in prior papers are directly comparable. Also, there's still no regression line fitted to their data (Fig 3's black line is from Fig 1, according to the legends). Accordingly, I think the claim in the second paragraph of the Discussion that the old data and their data are explained by a model with "essentially the same parameter value" is not yet convincing without actually reporting the parameters of the regression. Related to this, the regression for their data based on my analysis appears to have a slope closer to -0.6, which does not support strict timescale invariance. I think that this point should be discussed as a caveat in the manuscript.

      (2) The authors report in the response that the basis for the apparent gradual/multiple step-like increases after initial learning remains unclear within their framework. This would be important to point out in the actual manuscript. Further, the responses indicating the fact that there are some phenomena that are not captured by the current model would be important to state in the manuscript itself.

      (3) There are several mismatches between results shown in figures and those produced by the authors' code, or other supplementary files. As one example, rat 3 results in Fig 11 and Supplementary Materials don't match and neither version is reproduced by the authors' code. There are more concerns like this, which are detailed in the attached review file.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The manuscript by Zhang et al describes the use of a protein language model (pLM) to analyse disordered regions in proteins, with a focus on those that may be important in biological phase separation. While the paper is relatively easy to read overall, my main comment is that the authors could perhaps make it clearer which observations are new, and which support previous work using related approaches. Further, while the link to phase separation is interesting, it is not completely clear which data supports the statements made, and this could also be made clearer.

      Major comments:

      (1) With respect to putting the work in a better context of what has previously been done before, this is not to say that there is not new information in it, but what the authors do is somewhat closely related to work by others. I think it would be useful to make those links more directly. Some examples:

      (1a) Alderson et al (reference 71) analysed in detail the conservation of IDRs (via pLDDT, which is itself related to conservation) to show, for example, that conserved residues fold upon binding. This analysis is very similar to the analysis used in the current study (using ESM2 as a different measure of conservation). Thus, the approach (pages 7-8) described as "This distinction allows us to classify disordered regions into two types: "flexible disordered" regions, which show high ESM2 scores and greater mutational tolerance, and "conserved disordered" regions, which display low ESM2 scores, indicating varying levels of mutational constraint despite a lack of stable folding." is fundamentally very similar to that used by Alderson et al. Thus, the result that "Given that low ESM2 scores generally reflect mutational constraint in folded proteins, the presence of region a among disordered residues suggests that certain disordered amino acids are evolutionarily conserved and likely functionally significant" is in some ways very similar to the results of that paper.

      (1b) Dasmeh et al (https://doi.org/10.1093/genetics/iyab184), Lu et al (https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pcbi.1010238) and Ho & Huang (https://doi.org/10.1002/pro.4317) analysed conservation in IDRs, including aromatic residues and their role in phase separation

      (1c) A number of groups have performed proteomewide saturation scans using pLMs, including variants of the ESM family, including Meier (reference 89, but cited about something else) and Cagiada et al (https://doi.org/10.1101/2024.05.21.595203) that analysed variant effects in IDRs using a pLM. Thus, I think statements such as "their applicability to studying the fitness and evolutionary pressures on IDRs has yet to be established" should possibly be qualified.

      (2) On page 4, the authors write, "The conserved residues are primarily located in regions associated with phase separation." These results are presented as a central part of the work, but it is not completely clear what the evidence is.

      (3) It would be useful with an assessment of what controls the authors used to assess whether there are folded domains within their set of IDRs.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Systemic and partial Tcf7l2 repression is effective in protecting cancer mice from cachexia-induced death. Hence, this is a promising treatment strategy for cancer patients suffering from cachexia.

      Strengths:

      The method is well-designed and clearly explained.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Abbreviations should be mentioned in full terms for the first time.

      (2) Relatively old or even very old references in the Introduction and Discussion.

      (3) The result section contains discussion with references, as well.

      (4) The number of mice in individual groups is relatively small (3 mice in some groups).

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This is a very elegant and convincing study. Using systematic screening of actin tail formation in two bacterial strains and employing a panel of CRISPR-CAS ko cell lines, the authors identify a novel dynamin-related GTPase GVIN, which forms an oligomeric coat around an intracellular Burkholderia strain. The bacterial O-antigen LPS layer is required for the formation of the GVIN coat, which disturbs the polar localization of the bacterial actin-polymerizing BimA protein.

      I am not an expert in infection studies, but the experiments appear to be of high quality, the figures are well prepared, and clean and statistically significant results are provided. I have no criticism of the presented approaches.

      The identification of a novel GBP1-independent pathway targeting intracellular bacteria is not only of fundamental importance for the immunity field but also of high interest to researchers in other areas, for example, evolutionary or structural biologists.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript describes a novel magnetic steering technique to target human adipose derived mesenchymal stem cells (hAMSC) or induce pluripotent stem cells to the TM (iPSC-TM). The authors show delivery of the stem cells lowered IOP, increased ouflow facility, and increased TM cellularity.

      Strengths:

      The technique is novel and shows promise as a novel therapeutic to lower in IOP in glaucoma. hAMSC are able to lower IOP below baseline as well as increase outflow facility above baseline with no tumorigenicity. These data will have a positive impact on the field and will guide further research using hAMSC in glaucoma models.

      Weaknesses:

      The transgenic mouse model of glaucoma the authors used did not show ocular hypertensive phenotypes as previously reported; therefore, the Tg-MYOCY437H model should be used with caution in the future. However, the results presented here clearly show magnetically steered cell therapy as a viable treatment strategy to lower intraocular pressure even from baseline. Future studies are needed to demonstrate the effects in ocular hypertensive eyes.

    1. Örsted hat das derzeit weltweit größte Windenergieprojekt Harnz-ZV unterbrochen. Die Pause stellt die Realisierung des britischen Ziels, Bis 2030 50 Gigawatt Strom durch Auf Schrahr, Windenergie Windenergie zu produzieren in Frage. Der Windpark Hornzzi vor hätte alleine oder soll alleine 2400 Megawatt Strom produzieren. Für die Unterbrechung wurden vor allem kostengründelverantwortlich gemacht. In den USA wurden von der Trump-Administration mehrere Windenergieprojekte aus Tanz gestorpt.

      https://www.connaissancedesenergies.org/afp/eolien-offshore-le-geant-orsted-met-en-pause-lexpansion-du-plus-grand-parc-du-monde-250507?utm_source=newsletter&utm_medium=fil-info-energies&utm_campaign=/newsletter/cde-aujourdhui-7-mai-2025&sstc=u36579nl166 571

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The authors attempted to replicate previous work showing that counterconditioning leads to more persistent reduction of threat responses, relative to extinction. They also aimed to examine the neural mechanisms underlying counterconditioning and extinction. They achieved both of these aims, and were able to provide some additional information, such as how counterconditioning impacts memory consolidation. Having a better understanding of which neural networks are engaged during counterconditioning may provide novel pharmacological targets to aid in therapies for traumatic memories. It will be interesting to follow up by examining the impact of varying amounts of time between acquisition and counterconditioning phases, to enhance replicability to real world therapeutic settings.

      Major strengths

      • This paper is very well written and attempts to comprehensively assess multiple aspects counterconditioning and extinction processes. For instance, the addition of memory retrieval tests is not core to the primary hypotheses, but provides additional mechanistic information on how episodic memory is impacted by counterconditioning. This methodical approach is commonly seen in animal literature, but less so in human studies.

      • The Group x Cs-type x Phase repeated measure statistical tests with 'differentials' as outcome variables are quite complex, however the authors have generally done a good job of teasing out significant F test findings with post hoc tests and presenting the data well visually. It is reassuring that there is convergence between self-report data on arousal and valence and the pupil dilation response. Skin conductance is a notoriously challenging modality, so it is not too concerning that this was placed in the supplementary materials. Neural responses also occurred in logical regions with regards to reward learning.

      • Strong methodology with regards to neuroimaging analysis, and physiological measures.

      • The authors are very clear on documenting where there were discrepancies from their pre-registration and providing valid rationales for why.

      Major Weaknesses

      • The statistics showing that counterconditioning prevents differential spontaneous recovery are the weakest p values of the paper (and using one tailed tests, although this is valid due to directions being pre-hypothesised). This may be due to relatively small number of participants and some variability in responses.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Audio et al. present an interesting study examining cerebral blood volume (CBV) across cortical areas and layers in non-human primates (NHPs) using high-resolution MRI. While with contrast agents are frequently employed to improve fMRI sensitivity in NHP research, its application for characterizing baseline CBV distribution is less common. This study quantifies large-vessel distribution as well as regional and laminar CBV variations, comparing them with other metrics.

      Strengths:

      (1) Noninvasive mapping of relative cerebral blood volume is novel for non-human primates.<br /> (2) A key finding was the observation of variations in CBV across regions; primary sensory cortices had high CBV, whereas other higher areas had low CBV.<br /> (3) The measured relative CBV values correlated with previously reported neuronal and receptor densities, potentially providing valuable physiological insights.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) A weakness of this manuscript is that the quantification of CBV with postprocessing approaches to remove susceptibility effects from pial and penetrating vessels is not fully validated, especially on a laminar scale.<br /> (2) High-resolution MRI with a critical sampling frequency estimated from previous studies (Weber 2008, Zheng 1991) was performed to separate penetrating vessels. However, this approach depends on multiple factors, including spatial resolution, contrast agent dosage, and data processing methods. This raises concerns about the generalizability of these findings to other experimental setups or populations.<br /> (3) Baseline R2* is sensitive to baseline R2, vascular volume, iron content, and susceptibility gradients. Additionally, it is sensitive to imaging parameters; higher spatial resolution tends to result in lower R2* values (closer to the R2 value). Although baseline R2* correlates with several physiological parameters, drawing direct physiological inferences from it remains challenging.<br /> (4) CBV-weighted deltaR2*, which depends on both CBV and contrast agent dose, correlates with various metrics (cytoarchitectural parcellation, myelin/receptor density, cortical thickness, CO, cell-type specificity, etc.). While such correlations may be useful for exploratory analyses, all comparisons depend on measurement accuracy. A fundamental question remains whether CBV-weighted ΔR2* can provide reliable and biologically meaningful insights into these metrics, particularly in diseased or abnormal brain states.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study explores how heterozygosity for specific neurodevelopmental disorder-associated Trio variants affects mouse behavior, brain structure, and synaptic function, revealing distinct impacts on motor, social, and cognitive behaviors linked to clinical phenotypes. Findings demonstrate that Trio variants yield unique changes in synaptic plasticity and glutamate release, highlighting Trio's critical role in presynaptic function and the importance of examining variant heterozygosity in vivo.

      Strengths:

      This study generated multiple mouse lines to model each Trio variant, reflecting point mutations observed in human patients with developmental disorders. The authors employed various approaches to evaluate the resulting behavioral, neuronal morphology, synaptic function, and proteomic phenotypes.

    1. Reviewer #2 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This manuscript is about using different analytical approaches to allow ancestry adjustments to GWAS analyses amongst admixed populations. This work is a follow-on from the recently published ITHGC multi-population GWAS (https://doi.org/10.7554/eLife.84394), with the focus on the admixed South African populations. Ancestry adjustment models detected a peak of SNPs in the class II HLA DPB1, distinct from the class II HLA DQA1 loci signficant in the ITHGC analysis.

      Strengths:

      Excellent demonstration of GWAS analytical pipelines in highly admixed populations. Particularly the utility of ancestry adjustment to improve study power to detect novel associations. Further confirmation of the importance of the HLA class II locus in genetic susceptibility to TB.

      Weaknesses:

      Limited novelty compared to the group's previous existing publications and the body of work linking HLA class II alleles with TB susceptibility in South Africa or other African populations. This work includes only ~100 new cases and controls from what has already been published. High resolution HLA typing has detected significant signals in both the DQA1 and DPB1 regions identified by the larger ITHGC and in this GWAS analysis respectively (Chihab L et al. HLA. 2023 Feb; 101(2): 124-137).<br /> Despite the availability of strong methods for imputing HLA from GWAS data (Karnes J et Plos One 2017), the authors did not confirm with HLA typing the importance of their SNP peak in the class II region. This would have supported the importance of this ancestry adjustment versus prior ITHGC analysis.

      The populations consider active TB and healthy controls (from high-burden presumed exposed communities) and do not provide QFT or other data to identify latent TB infection.

      Important methodological points for clarification and for readers to be aware of when reading this paper:

      (1) One of the reasons cited for the lack of African ancestry-specific associations or suggestive peaks in the ITHGC study was the small African sample size. The current association test includes a larger African cohort and yields a near-genome-wide significant threshold in the HLA-DPB1 gene originating from the KhoeSan ancestry. Investigation is needed as to whether the increase in power is due to increased African samples and not necessarily the use of the LAAA model as stated on lines 295 and 296?

      Authors response - The Manhattan plot in Figure 3 includes the results for all four models: the traditional GWAS model (GAO), the admixture mapping model (LAO), the ancestry plus allelic (APA) model and the LAAA model. In this figure, it is evident that only the LAAA model identified the association peak on chromosome 6, which lends support the argument that the increase in power is due to the use of the LAAA model and not solely due to the increase in sample size.<br /> Reviewer comment - This data supports the authors conclusions that increase power is related to the LAAA model application rather than simply increase sample size.

      (2) In line 256, the number of SNPs included in the LAAA analysis was 784,557 autosomal markers; the number of SNPs after quality control of the imputed dataset was 7,510,051 SNPs (line 142). It is not clear how or why ~90% of the SNPs were removed. This needs clarification.

      Authors response:<br /> In our manuscript (line 194), we mention that "...variants with minor allele frequency (MAF) < 1% were removed to improve the stability of the association tests." A large proportion of imputed variants fell below this MAF threshold and were subsequently excluded from this analysis.

      Reviewers additional comment: The authors should specify the number of SNPs in the dataset before imputation and indicate what proportion of the 784,557 remaining SNPs were imputed. Providing this information might help the reader better understand the rationale behind the imputation process.

      (3) The authors have used the significance threshold estimated by the STEAM p-value < 2.5x10-6 in the LAAA analysis. Grinde et al. (2019 implemented their significance threshold estimation approach tailored to admixture mapping (local ancestry (LA) model), where there is a reduction in testing burden. The authors should justify why this threshold would apply to the LAAA model (a joint genotype and ancestry approach).

      Authors response: We describe in the methods (line 189 onwards) that the LAAA model is an extension of the APA model. Since the APA model itself simultaneously performs the null global ancestry only model and the local ancestry model (utilised in admixture mapping), we thus considered the use of a threshold tailored to admixture mapping appropriate for the LAAA model.

      Reviewers additional comment: While the LAAA model is an extension of the APA model, the authors describe the LAAA test as 'models the combination of the minor allele and the ancestry of the minor allele at a specific locus, along with the effect of this interaction,' thus a joint allele and ancestry effects model. Grinde et al. (2019) proposed the significance threshold estimation approach, STEAM, specifically for the LA approach, which tests for ancestry effects alone and benefits from the reduced testing burden. However, it remains unclear why the authors found it appropriate to apply STEAM to the LAAA model, a joint test for both allele and ancestry effects, which does not benefit from the same reduction in testing burden.

      (4) Batch effect screening and correction (line 174) is a quality control check. This section is discussed after global and local ancestry inferences in the methods. Was this QC step conducted after the inferencing? If so, the authors should justify how the removed SNPs due to the batch effect did not affect the global and local ancestry inferences or should order the methods section correctly to avoid confusion.

      Authors response: The batch effect correction method utilised a pseudo-case-control comparison which included global ancestry proportions. Thus, batch effect correction was conducted after ancestry inference. We excluded 36 627 SNPs that were believed to have been affected by the batch effect. We have amended line 186 to include the exact number of SNPs excluded due to batch effect.<br /> The ancestry inference by RFMix utilised the entire merged dataset of 7 510 051 SNPs. Thus, the SNPs removed due to the batch effect make up a very small proportion of the SNPs used to conduct global and local ancestry inferences (less than 0.5%). As a result, we do not believe that the removed SNPs would have significantly affected the global and local ancestry inferences. However, we did conduct global ancestry inference with RFMix on each separate dataset as a sanity check. In the tables below, we show the average global ancestry proportions inferred for each separate dataset, the average global ancestry proportions across all datasets and the average global ancestry proportions inferred using the merged dataset. The SAC and Xhosa cohorts are shown in two separate tables due to the different number of contributing ancestral populations to each cohort. The differences between the combined average global ancestry proportions across the separate cohorts does not differ significantly to the global ancestry proportions inferred using the merged dataset.

      This is an excellent response and should remain accessible to readers for clarifying this issue.

      Comments on revisions:

      Thank you for addressing my other recommendations to authors. These have all been satisfactorily addressed.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study reveals that TRPV1 signaling plays a key role in tympanic membrane (TM) healing by promoting macrophage recruitment and angiogenesis. Using a mouse TM perforation model, researchers found that blood-derived macrophages accumulated near the wound, driving angiogenesis and repair. TRPV1-expressing nerve fibers triggered neuroinflammatory responses, facilitating macrophage recruitment. Genetic Trpv1 mutation reduced macrophage infiltration, angiogenesis, and delayed healing. These findings suggest that targeting TRPV1 or stimulating sensory nerve fibers could enhance TM repair, improve blood flow, and prevent infections. This offers new therapeutic strategies for TM perforations and otitis media in clinical settings. This is an excellent and high-quality study that provides valuable insights into the mechanisms underlying TM wound healing.

      Strengths:

      The work is particularly important for elucidating the cellular and molecular processes involved in TM repair. However, there are several concerns about the current version.

      Weaknesses:

      Major concerns

      (1) The method of administration will be a critical factor when considering potential therapeutic strategies to promote TM healing. It would be beneficial if the authors could discuss possible delivery methods, such as topical application, transtympanic injection, or systemic administration, and their respective advantages and limitations for targeting TRPV1 signaling. For example, Dr. Kanemaru and his colleagues have proposed the use of Trafermin and Spongel to regenerate the eardrum.

      (2) The authors appear to have used surface imaging techniques to observe the TM. However, the TM consists of three distinct layers: the epithelial layer, the fibrous middle layer, and the inner mucosal layer. The authors should clarify whether the proposed mechanism involving TRPV1-mediated macrophage recruitment and angiogenesis is limited to the epithelial layer or if it extends to the deeper layers of the TM.

      Minor concerns

      In Figure 8, the schematic illustration presents a coronal section of the TM. However, based on the data provided in the manuscript, it is unclear whether the authors directly obtained coronal images in their study. To enhance the clarity and impact of the schematic, it would be helpful to include representative images of coronal sections showing macrophage infiltration, angiogenesis, and nerve fiber distribution in the TM.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This paper presents results from four independent experiments, each of which tests for rhythmicity in auditory perception. The authors report rhythmic fluctuations in discrimination performance at frequencies between 2 and 6 Hz. The exact frequency depends on the ear and experimental paradigm, although some frequencies seem to be more common than others.

      Strengths:

      The first sentence in the abstract describes the state of the art perfectly: "Numerous studies advocate for a rhythmic mode of perception; however, the evidence in the context of auditory perception remains inconsistent". This is precisely why the data from the present study is so valuable. This is probably the study with the highest sample size (total of > 100 in 4 experiments) in the field. The analysis is very thorough and transparent, due to the comparison of several statistical approaches and simulations of their sensitivity. Each of the experiments differs from the others in a clearly defined experimental parameter, and the authors test how this impacts auditory rhythmicity, measured in pitch discrimination performance (accuracy, sensitivity, bias) of a target presented at various delays after noise onset.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors find that the frequency of auditory perception changes between experiments. I think they could exploit differences between experiments better to interpret and understand the obtained results. These differences are very well described in the Introduction, but don't seem to be used for the interpretation of results. For instance, what does it mean if perceptual frequency changes from between- to within-trial pitch discrimination? Why did the authors choose this experimental manipulation? Based on differences between experiments, is there any systematic pattern in the results that allows conclusions about the roles of different frequencies? I think the Discussion would benefit from an extension to cover this aspect.

      (2) The Results give the impression of clear-cut differences in relevant frequencies between experiments (e.g., 2 Hz in Experiment 1, 6 Hz in Exp 2, etc), but they might not be so different. For instance, a 6 Hz effect is also visible in Experiment 1, but it just does not reach conventional significance. The average across the three experiments is therefore very useful, and also seems to suggest that differences between experiments are not very pronounced (otherwise the average would not produce clear peaks in the spectrum). I suggest making this point clearer in the text.

      (3) I struggle to understand the hypothesis that rhythmic sampling differs between ears. In most everyday scenarios, the same sounds arrive at both ears, and the time difference between the two is too small to play a role for the frequencies tested. If both ears operate at different frequencies, the effects of the rhythm on overall perception would then often cancel out. But if this is the case, why would the two ears have different rhythms to begin with? This could be described in more detail.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study by Cao et al. provides a compelling investigation into the role of mutational input in the rapid evolution of pesticide resistance, focusing on the two-spotted spider mite's response to the recent introduction of the acaricide cyetpyrafen. This well-documented introduction of the pesticide - and thus a clearly defined history of selection - offers a powerful framework for studying the temporal dynamics of rapid adaptation. The authors combine resistance phenotyping across multiple populations, extensive resequencing to track the frequency of resistance alleles, and genomic analyses of selection in both contemporary and historical samples. These approaches are further complemented by laboratory-based experimental evolution, which serves as a baseline for understanding the genetic architecture of resistance across mite populations in China. Their analyses identify two key resistance-associated genes, sdhB and sdhD, within which they detect 15 mutations in wild-collected samples. Protein modeling reveals that these mutations cluster around the pesticide's binding site, suggesting a direct functional role in resistance. The authors further examine signatures of selective sweeps and their distribution across populations to infer the mechanisms - such as de novo mutation or gene flow-driving the spread of resistance, a crucial consideration for predicting evolutionary responses to extreme selection pressure. Overall, this is a well-rounded, thoughtfully designed, and well-written manuscript. It shows significant novelty, as it is relatively rare to integrate broad-scale evolutionary inference from natural populations with experimentally informed bioassays, however, some aspects of the methods and discussion have an opportunity to be clarified and strengthened.

      Strengths:

      One of the most compelling aspects of this study is its integration of genomic time-series data in natural populations with controlled experimental evolution. By coupling genome sequencing of resistant field populations with laboratory selection experiments, the authors tease apart the individual effects of resistance alleles along with regions of the genome where selection is expected to occur, and compare that to the observed frequency in the wild populations over space and time. Their temporal data clearly demonstrates the pace at which evolution can occur in response to extreme selection. This type of approach is a powerful roadmap for the rest of the field of rapid adaptation.

      The study effectively links specific genetic changes to resistance phenotypes. The identification of sdhB and sdhD mutations as major drivers of cyetpyrafen resistance is well-supported by allele frequency shifts in both field and experimental populations. The scope of their sampling clearly facilitated the remarkable number of observed mutations within these target genes, and the authors provide a careful discussion of the likelihood of these mutations from de novo or standing variation. Furthermore, the discovered cross-resistance that these mutations confer to other mitochondrial complex II inhibitors highlights the potential for broader resistance management and evolution.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) Experimental Evolution:

      - Additional information about the lab experimental evolution would be useful in the main text. Specifically, the dose of cyetpyrafen used should be clarified, especially with respect to the LD50 values. How does it compare to recommended field doses? This is expected to influence the architecture of resistance evolution. What was the sample size? This will help readers contextualize how the experimental design could influence the role of standing variation.

      - The finding that lab-evolved strains show cross-resistance is interesting, but potentially complicates the story. It would help to know more about the other mitochondrial complex II inhibitors used across China and their impact on adaptive dynamics at these loci, particularly regarding pre-existing resistance alleles. For example, a comparison of usage data from 2013, 2017, and 2019 could help explain whether cyetpyrafen was the main driver of resistance or if previous pesticides played a role. What happened in 2020 that caused such rapid evolution 3 years after launch?

      (2) Evolutionary history of resistance alleles:

      - It would be beneficial to examine the population structure of the sampled populations, especially regarding the role of migration. Though resistance evolution appears to have had minimal impact on genome-wide diversity (as shown in Supplementary Figure 2), could admixture be influencing the results? An explicit multivariate regression framework could help to understand factors influencing diversity across populations, as right now much is left to the readers' visual acuity.

      - It is unclear why lab populations were included in the migration/treemix analysis. We might suggest redoing the analysis without including the laboratory populations to reveal biologically plausible patterns of resistance evolution.

      - Can the authors explore isolation by distance (IBD) in the frequency of resistance alleles?

      - Given the claim regarding the novelty of the number of pesticide resistance mutations, it is important to acknowledge the evolution of resistance to all pesticides (antibiotics, herbicides, etc.). ALS-inhibiting herbicides have driven remarkable repeatability across species based on numerous SNPs within the target gene.

      - Figure 5 A-B. Why not run a multivariate regression with status at each resistance mutation encoded as a separate predictor? It is interesting that focusing on the predominant mutation gives the strongest r2, but it is somewhat unintuitive and masks some interesting variation among populations.

      (3) Haplotype Reconstruction (Line 271-):

      - We are a bit sceptical of the methods taken to reconstruct these haplotypes. It seems as though the authors did so with Sanger sequencing (this should be mentioned in the text), focusing only on homozygous SNPs. How many such SNPs were used to reconstruct haplotypes, along what length of sequence? For how many individuals were haplotypes reconstructed? Nonetheless, I appreciated that the authors looked into the extent to which the reconstructed haplotypes could be driven by recombination. Can the authors elaborate on the calculations in line 296? Is that the census population size estimate or effective?

      (4) Single Mutations and Their Effect (line 312-):

      - It's not entirely clear how the breeding scheme resulted in near-isogenic lines. Could the authors provide a clearer explanation of the process and its biological implications?

      - If they are indeed isogenic, it's interesting that individual resistance mutations have effects on resistance that vary considerably among lines. Could the authors run a multivariate analysis including all potential resistance SNPs to account for interactions between them? Given the variable effects of the D116G substitution (ranging from 4-25%), could polygenic or epistatic factors be influencing the evolution of resistance?

      - Why are there some populations that segregate for resistance mutations but have no survival to pesticides (i.e., the green points in Figure 5)? Some discussion of this heterogeneity seems required in the absence of validation of the effects of these particular mutations. Could it be dominance playing a role, or do the authors have some other explanation?

      - The authors mention that all resistance mutations co-localized to the Q-site. Is this where the pesticide binds? This seems like an important point to follow their argument for these being resistance-related.

      (5) Statistical Considerations for Allele Frequency Changes (Figure 3):

      - It might be helpful to use a logistic regression model to assess the rate of allele frequency changes and determine the strength of selection acting on these alleles (e.g., Kreiner et al. 2022; Patel et al. 2024). This approach could refine the interpretation of selection dynamics over time.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Felipe and colleagues try to answer an important question in Sarbecovirus Orf9b-mediated interferon signaling suppression, given that this small viral protein adopts two distinct conformations, a dimeric β-sheet-rich fold and a helix-rich monomeric fold when bound by Tom70 protein. Two Orf9b structures determined by X-ray crystallography and Cryo-EM suggest an equilibrium between the two Orf9b conformations, and it is important to understand how this equilibrium relates to its functions. To answer these questions, the authors developed a series of ordinary differential equations (ODE) describing the Orf9b conformation equilibrium between homodimers and monomers binding to Tom70. They used SPR and a fluorescent polarization (FP) peptide displacement assay to identify parameters for the equilibrium and create a theoretical model. They then used the model to characterize the effect of lipid-binding and the effects of Orf9b mutations in homodimer stability, lipid binding, and dimer-monomer equilibrium. They used their model to further analyze dimerization, lipid binding, and Orf9b-Tom70 interactions for truncated Orf9b, Orf9b fusion mutant S53E (blocking Tom70 binding), and Orf9b from a set of Sars-CoV-2 VOCs. They evaluated the ability of different Orf9b variants for binding Tom70 using Co-IP experiments and assessed their activity in suppressing IFN signaling in cells.

      Overall, this work is well designed, the results are of high quality and well-presented; the results support their conclusions.

      Strengths:

      (1) They developed a working biophysical model for analyzing Orf9b monomer-dimer equilibrium and Tom70 binding based on SPR and FP experiments; this is an important tool for future investigation.

      (2) They prepared lipid-free Orf9b homodimer and determined its crystal structure.

      (3) They designed and purified obligate Orf9b monomer, fused-dimer, etc., a very important Orf9b variant for further investigations.

      (4) They identified the lipid bound by Orf9b homodimer using mass spectra data.

      (5) They proposed a working model of Orf9b-Tom70 equilibrium.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) It is difficult to understand why the obligate Orf9b dimer has similar IFN inhibition activity as the WT protein and obligate Orf9b monomer truncations.

      (2) The role of Orf9b homodimer and the role of Orf9b-bound lipid in virus infection, remains unknown.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Meunier et al. investigated the functional role of IL-10 in avian mucosal immunity. While the anti-inflammatory role of IL-10 is well established in mammals, and several confirmatory knockout models are available in mice, IL-10's role in avian mucosal immunity is so far correlative. In this study, the authors generated two different models of IL-10 ablation in Chickens. A whole body knock-out model and an enhancer KO model leading to reduced IL10 expression. The authors first performed in vitro LPS stimulation-based experiments, and then in vivo two different infection models employing C. jejuni and E. tenella, to demonstrate that complete ablation of IL10 leads to enhanced inflammation-related pathology and gene expression, and enhanced pathogen clearance. At a steady-state level, however, IL-10 ablation did not lead to spontaneous colitis.

      Strengths:

      Overall, the study is well executed and establishes an anti-inflammatory role of IL-10 in birds. While the results are expected and not surprising, this appears to be the first report to conclusively demonstrate IL-10's anti-inflammatory role upon its genetic ablation in the avian model. Provided this information is applicable in combating pathogen infection in livestock species in sustainable industries like poultry, the study will be of interest to the field.

      Weaknesses:

      The study is primarily a confirmation of the already established anti-inflammatory role of IL-10.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      By applying a laser scanning photostimulation (LSPS) approach to a novel slice preparation, the authors aimed to study the degree of convergence and divergence of cortical inputs to individual striatal projection neurons (SPNs).

      Strengths:

      The experiments were well-designed and conducted, and data analysis was thorough. The manuscript was well written, and related work in the literature was properly discussed. This work has the potential to advance our understanding of how sensory inputs are integrated into the striatal circuits.

      Weaknesses:

      This work focuses on the connection strength of the corticostriatal projections, without considering the involvement of synaptic plasticity in sensory integration.

    1. Joint Public Review:

      Following up on their previous work, the authors investigated whether HIV-1 cell-to-cell transmission activates the CARD8 inflammasome in macrophages, a key question given that inflammasome activation in myeloid cells triggers proinflammatory cytokine release. Co-cultures of HIV-infected T cells with macrophages led to viral spreading, resulting in IL1β release and cell death, with CARD8 playing a crucial role in this inflammasome response, triggered by HIV protease. The authors also found that HIV isolates resistant to protease inhibitors showed differences in CARD8 activation and IL1β production, highlighting the clinical relevance of their findings. Overall, this well-written study provides strong evidence for the role of CARD8 in protease-dependent sensing of viral spread, with implications for understanding chronic inflammation in HIV infections and its potential contribution to systemic immune activation, especially under ART. The authors have addressed initial weaknesses and verified effects in cocultures of primary T cells and macrophages. They now also provide evidence that CARD8 is activated by protease from incoming viral particles. Further studies are needed to clarify how much this mechanism contributes to systemic immune activation in untreated infections and whether this mechanism drives chronic inflammation under ART.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Gruskin and colleagues use twin data from a movie-watching fMRI paradigm to show how genetic control of cortical function intersects with the processing of naturalistic audiovisual stimuli. They use hyperalignment to dissect heritability into the components that can be explained by local differences in cortical-functional topography and those that cannot. They show that heritability is strongest at slower-evolving neural time scales and is more evident in functional connectivity estimates than in response time series.

      Strengths:

      This is a very thorough paper that tackles this question from several different angles. I very much appreciate the use of hyperalignment to factor out topographic differences, and I found the relationship between heritability and neural time scales very interesting. The writing is clear, and the results are compelling.

      Weaknesses:

      The only "weaknesses" I identified were some points where I think the methods, interpretation, or visualization could be clarified.

      (1) On page 16, the authors compare heritability in functional connectivity (FC) and response time series, and find that the heritability effect is larger in FC. In general, I agree with your diagnosis that this is in large part due to the fact that FC captures the covariance structure across parcels, whereas response time series only diverge in terms of univariate time-point-by-time-point differences. Another important factor here is that (within-subject) FC can be driven by intrinsic fluctuations that occur with idiosyncratic timing across subjects and are unrelated to the stimulus (whereas time-locked metrics like ISC and time-series differences cannot, by definition). This makes me wonder how this connectivity result would change if the authors used intersubject functional connectivity (ISFC) analysis to specifically isolate the stimulus-driven components of functional connectivity (Simony et al., 2016). This, to me, would provide a closer comparison to the ISC and response time series results, and could allow the authors to quantify how much of the heritability in FC is intrinsic versus stimulus-driven. I'm not asking that the authors actually perform this analysis, as I don't think it's critical for the message of the manuscript, but it could be an interesting future direction. As the authors discuss on page 17, I also suspect there's something fundamentally shared between response time series and connectivity as they relate to functional topography (Busch et al., 2021) that drives part of the heritability effect.

      (2) The observation that regions with intermediate ISC have the largest differences between MZ, DZ, and UR is very interesting, but it's kind of hard to see in Figure 1B. Is there any other way to plot this that might make the effect more obvious? For example, I could imagine three scatter plots where the x- and y-axes are, e.g., MZ ISC and UR ISC, and each data point is a parcel. In this kind of plot, I would expect to see the middle values lifted visibly off the diagonal/unity line toward MZ. The authors could even color the data points according to networks, like in Figure 3C. (They also might not need to scale the ISC axis all the way to r = 1, which would make the differences more visible.)

      (3) On page 9, if I understand correctly, the authors regress the vector of ISC values across parcels out of the vector of heritability values across parcels, and then plot the residual heritability values. Do they center the heritability values (or include some kind of intercept) in the process? I'm trying to understand why the heritability values go from all positive (Figure 2A) to roughly balanced between positive and negative (Figure 2B). Important question for me: How should we interpret negative values in this plot? Can the authors explain this explicitly in the text? (I also wonder if there's a more intuitive way to control for ISC. For example, instead of regressing out ISC at the parcel/map level, could they go into a single parcel and then regress the subject-level pairwise ISC values out when computing the heritability score?).

      (4) On page 4 (line 155), the authors say "we shuffled dyad labels"- is this equivalent to shuffling rows and columns of the pairwise subject-by-subject matrix combined across groups? I'm trying to make sure their approach here is consistent with recommendations by Chen et al., 2016. Is this the same kind of shuffling used for the kinship matrix mentioned in line 189?

      (5) I found panel A in Figure 4 to be a little bit misleading because their parcel-wise approach to hyperalignment won't actually resolve topographic idiosyncrasies across a large cortical distance like what's depicted in the illustration (at the scale of the parcels they are performing hyperalignment within). Maybe just move the green and purple brain areas a bit closer to each other so they could feasibly be "aligned" within a large parcel. Worth keeping in mind when writing that hyperalignment is also not actually going to yield a one-to-one mapping of functionally homologous voxels across individuals: it's effectively going to model any given voxel time series as a linear combination of time series across other voxels in the parcel.

      (6) I believe the subjects watched all different movies across the two days, however, for a moment I was wondering "are Day 1 and Day 2 repetitions of the same movies?" Given that Day 1 and Day 2 are an organizational feature of several figures, it might be worth making this very explicit in the Methods and reminding the reader in the Results section.

      References:

      Busch, E. L., Slipski, L., Feilong, M., Guntupalli, J. S., di Oleggio Castello, M. V., Huckins, J. F., Nastase, S. A., Gobbini, M. I., Wager, T. D., & Haxby, J. V. (2021). Hybrid hyperalignment: a single high-dimensional model of shared information embedded in cortical patterns of response and functional connectivity. NeuroImage, 233, 117975. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.neuroimage.2021.117975

      Chen, G., Shin, Y. W., Taylor, P. A., Glen, D. R., Reynolds, R. C., Israel, R. B., & Cox, R. W. (2016). Untangling the relatedness among correlations, part I: nonparametric approaches to inter-subject correlation analysis at the group level. NeuroImage, 142, 248-259. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.neuroimage.2016.05.023

      Simony, E., Honey, C. J., Chen, J., Lositsky, O., Yeshurun, Y., Wiesel, A., & Hasson, U. (2016). Dynamic reconfiguration of the default mode network during narrative comprehension. Nature Communications, 7, 12141. https://doi.org/10.1038/ncomms12141

    1. science tells us that kids learn better from one from zero from the birth to five years old they're the fastest they're the best at learning model them then just do what they do you can't get better than that

      for - stats - natural language acquisition - 1 to 2 year old is age of fastest and best learning

      comment - ALG philosophy - replicate the experiences that 1 to 2 year olds have

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors report that activation of excitatory DREADDs in the mid-cervical spinal cord can increase inspiratory activity in mice and rats. This is an important first step toward an ultimate goal of using this, or similar, technology to drive breathing in disorders associated with decreased respiratory motor output, such as spinal injury or neurodegenerative disease. Strengths to this study include a comparison of non-specific DREADD expression in the mid-cervical spinal cord versus specific targeting to ChAT-positive neurons, and the measurement of multiple respiratory-related outcomes, including phrenic inspiratory output, diaphragm EMG activity and ventilation. The data show convincingly that DREADDs can be used to drive phrenic inspiratory activity, which in turn increases diaphragm EMG activity and ventilation.

      Comments on revisions: All of my prior comments have been sufficiently addressed.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study provides an in-depth analysis of syncytiotrophoblast (STB) gene expression at the single-nucleus (SN) and single-cell (SC) levels, using both primary human placental tissues and two trophoblast organoid (TO) models. The authors compare the older TO model, where STB forms internally (STBin), with a newer model where STB forms externally (STBout). Through a series of comparative analyses, the study highlights the necessity of using both SN and SC techniques to fully understand placental biology. The findings demonstrate that the STBout model shows more differentiated STBs with higher expression of canonical markers and hormones compared to STBin. Additionally, the study identifies both conserved and distinct gene expression profiles between the TO models and human placenta, offering valuable insights for researchers using TOs to study STB and CTB differentiation.

      Strengths:

      The study offers a comprehensive SC- and SN-based characterization of trophoblast organoid models, providing a thorough validation of these models against human placental tissues. By comparing the older STBin and newer STBout models, the authors effectively demonstrate the improvements in the latter, particularly in the differentiation and gene expression profiles of STBs. This work serves as a critical resource for researchers, offering a clear delineation of the similarities and differences between TO-derived and primary STBs. The use of multiple advanced techniques, such as high-resolution sequencing and trajectory analysis, further enhances the study's contribution to the field.

      Weaknesses were addressed during the revision.

      The authors effectively addressed my critiques in the rebuttal letter and made corresponding changes in the manuscript. Specifically, they: 1) emphasized the importance of TO orientation in influencing STB nuclear subtype differentiation by adding text to the introduction; 2) clarified the differences in cluster numbers and names between primary tissue and TO data, explaining that each dataset was analyzed independently with separate clustering algorithms and adding clarifying text to the results section; 3) included additional rationale for using SN over SC sequencing, particularly for studying the multinucleated STB; 4) acknowledged that their original evidence was insufficient to definitively determine STBout nuclei differentiation status and removed language suggesting STB-3 as a terminally differentiated subtype, presenting alternative hypotheses in the discussion; and 5) incorporated new figures and clarifications, including RNA-FISH experiments, to validate subtype-specific marker gene expression. Overall, the authors' revisions strengthened the manuscript and aligned well with my critiques.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The study characterises an RNA polymerase (Pol) I mutant (RPA135-F301S) named SuperPol. This mutant was previously shown to increase yeast ribosomal RNA (rRNA) production by Transcription Run-On (TRO). In this work, the authors confirm this mutation increases rRNA transcription using a slight variation of the TRO method, Transcriptional Monitoring Assay (TMA), which also allows the analysis of partially degraded RNA molecules. The authors show a reduction of abortive rRNA transcription in cells expressing the SuperPol mutant and a modest occupancy decrease at the 5' region of the rRNA genes compared to WT Pol I. These results suggest that the SuperPol mutant displays a lower frequency of premature termination. Using in vitro assays, the authors found that the mutation induces an enhanced elongation speed and a lower cleavage activity on mismatched nucleotides at the 3' end of the RNA. Finally, SuperPol mutant was found to be less sensitive to BMH-21, a DNA intercalating agent that blocks Pol I transcription and triggers the degradation of the Pol I subunit, Rpa190. Compared to WT Pol I, short BMH-21 treatment has little effect on SuperPol transcription activity, and consequently, SuperPol mutation decreases cell sensitivity to BMH-21.

      I'd suggest the following points to be taken into consideration:

      Major comments:

      (1) The differences in the transcriptionally engaged WT Pol I and SuperPol profiles (Figure 2) are very modest, without any statistical analyses. What is the correlation between CRAC replicates? Are they separated in PCA analyses? Please, include more quality control information. In my opinion, these results are not very convincing. Similarly, the effect of BMH-21 on WT Pol I activity (Figure 7) is also very subtle and doesn't match the effect observed in a previous study [1]. Could the author comment on the reasons for these differences? These discrepancies raise concerns about the methodology. In addition, according to the laboratory's previous work [2], Pol I ChIP signal at rDNA is not significantly different in cells expressing WT Pol I and SuperPol. How can these two observations be reconciled? I would suggest using an independent methodology to analyse Pol I transcription, for example, GRO-seq or TT-seq.

      (2) While the experiments clearly show SuperPol mutant increases nascent transcription and decreases the production of abortive promoter-proximal transcripts compared to WT Pol I. RPA135-F301S mutation has a minor impact on total rRNA levels, at least those shown in Figure 3B. Are steady-state rRNA levels higher in cells expressing SuperPol mutant? It would be interesting to know if SuperPol mutant produces more functional rRNAs.

      Significance:

      The work further characterises a single amino acid mutation of one of the largest yeast Pol I subunits (RPA135-F301S). While this mutation was previously shown to increase rRNA synthesis, the current work expands the SuperPol mutant characterisation, providing details of how RPA135-F301S modifies the enzymatic properties of yeast Pol I. In addition, their findings suggest that yeast Pol I transcription can be subjected to premature termination in vivo. The molecular basis and potential regulatory functions of this phenomenon could be explored in additional studies.

      Our understanding of rRNA transcription is limited, and the findings of this work may be interesting to the transcription community. Moreover, targeting Pol I activity is an open strategy for cancer treatment. Thus, the resistance of SuperPol mutant to BMH-21 might also be of interest to a broader community, although these findings are yet to be confirmed in human Pol I and with more specific Pol I inhibitors in future.

    1. Joint public review:

      Summary:

      This study investigates the hypoxia rescue mechanisms of neurons by non-neuronal cells in the brain from the perspective of exosomal communication between brain cells. Through multi-omics combined analysis, the authors revealed this phenomenon and logically validated this intercellular rescue mechanism under hypoxic conditions through experiments. The study proposed a novel finding that hemoglobin maintains mitochondrial function, expanding the conventional understanding of hemoglobin. This research is highly innovative, providing new insights for the treatment of hypoxic encephalopathy.

      Overall, the manuscript is well organized and written, however, the authors have only partially answered the reviewers comments.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      In this study, the authors introduced an essential role of AARS2 in maintaining cardiac function. They also investigated the underlying mechanism that through regulating alanine and PKM2 translation are regulated by AARS2. Accordingly, a therapeutic strategy for cardiomyopathy and MI was provided.

      Comments on revised version:

      The authors have completely addressed my concerns.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this paper, Manley and Vaziri investigate whole-brain neural activity underlying behavioural variability in zebrafish larvae. They combine whole brain (single cell level) calcium imaging during the presentation of visual stimuli, triggering either approach or avoidance, and carry out whole brain population analyses to identify whole brain population patterns responsible for behavioural variability. They show that similar visual inputs can trigger large variability in behavioural responses. Though visual neurons are also variable across trials, they demonstrate that this neural variability does not degrade population stimulus decodability. Instead, they find that the neural variability across trials is in orthogonal population dimensions to stimulus encoding and is correlated with motor output (e.g. tail vigor). They then show that behavioural variability across trials is largely captured by a brain-wide population state prior to the trial beginning, which biases choice - especially on ambiguous stimulus trials. This study suggests that parts of stimulus-driven behaviour can be captured by brain-wide population states that bias choice, independently of stimulus encoding.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have revised their manuscript and provided novel analyses and figures, as well as additions to the text based on our reviewer comments.

      As stated in my first review, the strength of the paper principally resides in the whole brain cellular level imaging - using a novel fourier light field microscopy (Flfm) method - in a well-known but variable behaviour.

      Many of the authors' answers have provided additional support for their interpretations of results, but the new analysis in Figure 3g - further exploring the orthogonality of e1 and wopt - puts into question the interpretation of a key result: that e1 and wopt are orthogonal in a non-arbitrary way. This needs to be addressed. I have made suggestions below to address this:

      Reviewer 3 had correctly highlighted the issue that in high-dimensional data, there is an increasingly high chance of two vectors being orthogonal. The authors address this by shuffling the stimulus labels. They then state (and provide a new panel g in Fig. 3) that the shuffled distribution is wider than the actual distribution, and state that a wilcoxon rank-sum test shows this is significant. Given the centrality of this claim, I would like the authors to clarify what exactly is being done here, as it is not clear to me how this conclusion can be drawn from this analysis:

      In lines 449:453 the authors state:<br /> 'While it is possible to observe shuffled vectors which are nearly orthogonal to e1, the shuffled distribution spans a significantly greater range of angles than the observed data (p<0.05, Wilcoxon rank- sum test), demonstrating that this orthogonality is not simply a consequence of analyzing multi-dimensional activity patterns. '<br /> I don't understand how the authors arrive at the p-value using a rank-sum test here. (a) What is the n in this test? Is n the number of shuffles? If so, this violates the assumptions of the test (as n must be the number of independent samples and not the arbitrary number of shuffles). (b) If the shuffling was done once for each animal and compared with actual data with a rank-sum test, how likely is that shuffling result to happen in 10000 shuffle comparisons?<br /> I am highlighting this, as it looks from Figure 3g that the shuffled distribution is substantially overlapping with the actual data (i.e., not outside of the 95 percentile of the shuffled distribution), which would suggest that the angle found between e1 and wept could happen by chance.

      I would also suggest the authors instead test whether e1 is consistently aligned with itself when calculated on separate held out data-sets (for example by bootstrapping 50-50 splits of the data). If they can show that there is a close alignment between independently calculated e1's across separate data sets (and do the same for wopt), and then show e1 and wopt are orthogonal, then that supports their statement that e1 and wopt are orthogonal in a meaningful way. Given that e1 captures tail vigor variability (and Wopt appears to not) then I would think this could be the case. But the current answer the authors have given is not supporting their statement.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Jin et. al., describe SMARTTR, an image analysis strategy optimized for analysis of dual-activity ensemble tagging mouse reporter lines. The pipeline performs cell segmentation, then registers the location of these cells into an anatomical atlas, and finally, calculates the degree of co-expression of the reporters in cells across brain regions. The authors demonstrate the utility of the method by labeling two ensemble populations during two related experiences: inescapable shock and subsequent escapable shock as part of learned helplessness.

      Strengths:

      - We appreciated that the authors provided all documentation necessary to use their method, and that the scripts in their publicly available repository are well commented. Submission of the package to CRAN will, as the other reviewer pointed out, ensure that the package and its dependencies can be easily installed using few lines of code in the future. Additionally, we particularly appreciate the recently added documentation website and vignettes, which provide guidance on package installation and use cases.<br /> - The manuscript was well-written and very clear, and the methods were generally highly detailed.<br /> - The authors have addressed our previous concerns, and we appreciate their revised manuscript.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study provides new insights into the role of miR-19b, an oncogenic microRNA, in the developing chicken pallium. Dynamic expression pattern of miR-19b is associated with its role in regulating cell cycle progression in neural progenitor cells. Furthermore, miR-19b is involved in determining neuronal subtypes by regulating Fezf2 expression during pallial development. These findings suggest an important role for miR-19b in the coordinated spatio-temporal regulation of neural progenitor cell dynamics and its evolutionary conservation across vertebrate species.

      Strengths:

      The authors identified conserved roles of miR-19 in the regulation of neural progenitor maintenance between mouse and chick, and the latter is mediated by the repression of E2f8 and NeuroD1. Furthermore, the authors found that miR-19b-dependent cell cycle regulation is tightly associated with specification of Fezf1 or Mef2c-positive neurons, in spatio-temporal manners during chicken pallial development. These findings uncovered molecular mechanisms underlying microRNA-mediated neurogenic controls.

      Weaknesses:

      Although the authors in this study claimed striking similarities of miR-19a/b in neurogenesis between mouse and chick pallium, a previous study by Bian et al. revealed that miR-19a contributes the expansion of radial glial cells by suppressing PTEN expression in the developing mouse neocortex, while miR-19b maintains apical progenitors via inhibiting E2f2 and NeuroD1 in chicken pallium. Thus, it is still unclear whether the orthologous microRNAs regulate common or species-specific target genes.

      The spatiotemporal expression patterns of miR-19b and several genes are not convincing. For example, the authors claim that NeuroD1 is initially expressed uniformly in the subventricular zone (SVZ) but disappears in the DVR region by HH29 and becomes detectable by HH35 (Figure 1). However, the in situ hybridization data revealed that NeuroD1 is highly expressed in the SVZ of the DVR at HH29 (Figure 4F). Thus, perhaps due to the problem of immunohistochemistry, the authors have not been able to detect NeuroD1 expression in Figure 1D, and the interpretation of the data may require significant modification.

      It seems that miR-19b is also expressed in neurons (Figure 1), suggesting the role of miR19-b must be different in progenitors and differentiated neurons. The data on the gain- and loss-of-function analysis of miR-19b on the expression of Mef2c should be carefully considered, as it is possible that these experiments disturb the neuronal functions of miR19b rather than in the progenitors.

      The regions of chicken pallium were not consistent among figures: in Figure 1, they showed caudal parts of the pallium (HH29 and 35), while the data in Figure 4 corresponded to the rostral part of the pallium (Figure 4B).

      The neurons expressing Fezf2 and Mef2 in the chicken pallium are not homologous neuronal subtypes to mammalian deep and superficial cortical neurons. The authors must understand that chicken pallial development proceeds in an outside-in manner. Thus, Mef2c-postive neurons in a superficial part are early-born neurons, while FezF2-positive neurons residing in deep areas are later-born neurons. It should be noted that the expression of a single marker gene does not support cell type homology, and the authors' description "the possibility of primitive pallial lamina formation in common ancestors of birds and mammals" is misleading.

      Overexpression of CDKN1A or Sponge-19b induced ectopic expression of Fezf2 in the ventricular zone (Figure 3C, E). Do these cells maintain progenitor statement or prematurely differentiate to neurons? In addition, the authors must explain that the induction of Fezf2 is also detected in GFP-negative cells.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, the authors aim to understand the neural basis of implicit causal inference, specifically how people infer causes of illness. They use fMRI to explore whether these inferences rely on content-specific semantic networks or broader, domain-general neurocognitive mechanisms. The study explores two key hypotheses: first, that causal inferences about illness rely on semantic networks specific to living things, such as the 'animacy network,' given that illnesses affect only animate beings; and second, that there might be a common brain network supporting causal inferences across various domains, including illness, mental states, and mechanical failures. By examining these hypotheses, the authors aim to determine whether causal inferences are supported by specialized or generalized neural systems.

      The authors observed that inferring illness causes selectively engaged a portion of the precuneus (PC) associated with the semantic representation of animate entities, such as people and animals. They found no cortical areas that responded to causal inferences across different domains, including illness and mechanical failures. Based on these findings, the authors concluded that implicit causal inferences are supported by content-specific semantic networks, rather than a domain-general neural system, indicating that the neural basis of causal inference is closely tied to the semantic representation of the specific content involved.

      Strengths:

      - The inclusion of the four conditions in the design is well thought out, allowing for the examination of the unique contribution of causal inference of illness compared to either a different type of causal inference (mechanical) or non-causal conditions. This design also has the potential to identify regions involved in a shared representation of inference across general domains.

      - The presence of the three localizers for language, logic, and mentalizing, along with the selection of specific regions of interest (ROIs), such as the precuneus and anterior ventral occipitotemporal cortex (antVOTC), is a strong feature that supports a hypothesis-driven approach (although see below for a critical point related to the ROI selection).

      - The univariate analysis pipeline is solid and well developed.

      - The statistical analyses are a particularly strong aspect of the paper.

      Weaknesses:

      After carefully considering the authors' response, I believe that my primary concern has not been fully addressed. My main point remains unresolved:

      The authors attempt to test for the presence of a shared network by performing only the Causal vs. Non-causal analysis. However, this approach is not sufficiently informative because it includes all conditions mixed together and does not clarify whether both the illness-causal and mechanical-causal conditions contribute to the observed results.

      To address this limitation, I originally suggested an additional step: using as ROIs the different regions that emerged in the Causal vs. Non-causal decoding analysis and conducting four separate decoding analyses within these specific clusters:<br /> (1) Illness-Causal vs. Non-causal - Illness First<br /> (2) Illness-Causal vs. Non-causal - Mechanical First<br /> (3) Mechanical-Causal vs. Non-causal - Illness First<br /> (4) Mechanical-Causal vs. Non-causal - Mechanical First

      This approach would allow the authors to determine whether any of these ROIs can decode both the illness-causal and mechanical-causal conditions against at least one non-causal condition. However, the authors did not conduct these analyses, citing an independence issue. I disagree with this reasoning because these analyses would serve to clarify their initial general analysis, in which multiple conditions were mixed together. As the results currently stand, it remains unclear which specific condition is driving the effects.

      My suggestion was to select the ROIs from their general analysis (Causal vs. Non-causal) and then examine in more detail which conditions were driving these results. This is not a case of double-dipping from my perspective, but rather a necessary step to unpack the general findings. Moreover, using ROIs would actually reduce the number of multiple comparisons that need to be controlled for.

      If the authors believe that this approach is methodologically incorrect, then they should instead conduct all possible analyses at the whole-brain level to examine the effects of the specific conditions independently.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The paper addresses the knowledge gap between the representation of goal direction in the central complex and how motor systems stabilize movement toward that goal. The authors focused on two descending neurons, DNa01 and 02, and showed that they play different roles in steering the fly toward a goal. They also explored the connectome data to propose a model to explain how these DNs could mediate response to lateralized sensory inputs. They finally used lateralized optogenetic activation/inactivation experiments to test the roles of these neurons in mediating turnings in freely walking flies.

      Strengths:

      The experiments are well-designed and controlled. The experiment in Figure 4 is elegant, and the authors put a lot of effort into ensuring that ATP puffs do not accidentally activate the DNs. They also have explained complex experiments well. I only have minor comments for the authors.

      Comments on revisions:

      I am happy with the revised manuscript and authors' response to our concerns. The addition of Figure S8, makes it more transparent and the revised text is now more accessible to the non-experts.

    1. Reviewer #3 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The hippocampal CA3 region is generally considered to be the primary site of initiation of sharp wave ripples-highly synchronous population events involved in learning and memory-although the precise mechanism remains elusive. A recent study revealed that CA3 comprises two distinct pyramidal cell populations: thorny cells that receive mossy fiber input from the dentate gyrus, and athorny cells that do not. That study also showed that it is athorny cells in particular which play a key role in sharp wave initiation. In the present work, Sammons, Masserini and colleagues expand on this by examining the connectivity probabilities among and between thorny and athorny cells. Using whole-cell patch clamp recordings, they find an asymmetrical connectivity pattern, with athorny cells receiving the most synaptic connections from both athorny and thorny cells, and thorny cells receiving fewer.

      The authors then use a spiking network model to show how this assymmetrical connectivity is consistent with a preferential role of athorny cells in sharp wave initiation. Essentially, thorny and athorny cells are put into a winner-takes-all scenario in which athorny cells always win initially. Thorny cells can only become active after athorny cells decrease their firing rate due to adaptation, leading to a delay between the activation of athorny and thorny cells. As far as I understand, the initial victory of athorny cells in the winner-takes-all is doubly determined: it is both due to their intrinsic properties (lower rheobase and steeper f-I curve), and due to the bias in connectivity towards them. It appears to me that either of these two mechanisms (i.e., different intrinsic properties and symmetrical self- and cross-connections, or the same intrinsic properties and asymmetrical connectivity) would suffice to explain the sequential activation of the two cell types. From a theoretician's perspective, this overdetermination is not very elegant, but biology often isn't...

      Strengths:

      The authors provide independent validation of some of the findings by Hunt et al. (2018) concerning the distinction between thorny and athorny pyramidal cells in CA3 and advance our understanding of their differential integration in CA3 microcircuits. The properties of excitatory connections among and between thorny and athorny cells described by the authors will be key in understanding CA3 functions including, but not limited to, sharp wave initiation.

      As stated in the paper, the modeling results lend support to the idea that the increased excitatory connectivity towards athorny cells plays an important role in causing them to fire before thorny cells in sharp waves. More generally, the model adds to an expanding pool of models of sharp wave ripples which should prove useful in guiding and interpreting experimental research.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study utilises fNIRS to investigate the effects of undernutrition on functional connectivity patterns in infants from a rural population in Gambia. fNIRS resting-state data recording spanned ages 5 to 24 months, while growth measures were collected from birth to 24 months. Additionally, executive functioning tasks were administered at 3 or 5 years of age. The results show an increase in left and right frontal-middle and right frontal-posterior connections with age and, contrary to previous findings in high-income countries, a decrease in frontal interhemispheric connectivity. Restricted growth during the first months of life was associated with stronger frontal interhemispheric connectivity and weaker right frontal-posterior connectivity at 24 months of age. Additionally, the study describes some connectivity patterns, including stronger frontal interhemispheric connectivity, which is associated with better cognitive flexibility at preschool age.

      Strengths:

      - The study analyses longitudinal data from a large cohort (n = 204) of infants living in a rural area of Gambia. This already represents a large sample for most infant studies, and it is impressive, considering it was collected outside the lab in a population that is underrepresented in the literature. The research question regarding the effect of early nutritional deficiency on brain development is highly relevant and may highlight the importance of early interventions. The study may also encourage further research on different underrepresented infant populations (i.e., infants not residing in Western high-income countries) or in settings where fMRI is not feasible.

      - The preprocessing and analysis steps are carefully described, which is very welcome in the fNIRS field, where well-defined standards for preprocessing and analysis are still lacking.

      Weaknesses:

      - While the study provides a solid description of the functional connectivity changes in the first two years of life at the group level and investigates how restricted growth influences connectivity patterns at 24 months, it does not explore the links between adverse situations and developmental trajectories for functional connectivity. Considering the longitudinal nature of the dataset, it would have been interesting to apply more sophisticated analytical tools to link undernutrition to specific developmental trajectories in functional connectivity. The authors mention that they lack the statistical power to separate infants into groups according to their growing profiles. However, I wonder if this aspect could not have been better explored using other modelling strategies and dimensional reduction techniques. I can think about methods such as partial least squares correlation, with age included as a numerical variable and measures of undernutrition.

      - Connectivity was asses in 6 big ROIs. While the authors justify this choice to reduce variability due to head size and optode placement, this also implies a significant reduction in spatial resolution. Individual digitalisation and co-registration of the optodes to the head model, followed by image reconstruction, could have provided better spatial resolution. This is not a weakness specific to this study but rather a limitation common to most fNIRS studies, which typically analyse data at the channel level since digitalisation and co-registration can be challenging, especially in complex setups like this. However, the BRIGHT project has demonstrated that it is possible and that differences in placement affect activation patterns, which become more localised when data is co-registered at the subject level (Collins-Jones et al., 2021). Could the co-registration of individual data have increased sensitivity, particularly given that longitudinal effects are being investigated?

      - I believe that a further discussion in the manuscript on the application of global signal regression and its effects could have been beneficial for future research and for readers to better understand the negative correlations described in the results. Since systemic physiological changes affect HbO/HbR concentrations, resulting in an overestimation of functional connectivity, regressing the global signal before connectivity computation is a common strategy in fNIRS and fMRI studies. However, the recommendation for this step remains controversial, likely depending on the case (Murphy & Fox, 2017). I understand that different reasons justify its application in the current study. In addition to systemic physiological changes originating from brain tissue, fNIRS recordings are contaminated by changes occurring in superficial layers (i.e., the scalp and skull). While having short-distance channels could have helped to quantify extracerebral changes, challenges exist in using them in infant populations, especially in a longitudinal study such as the one presented here. The optimal source-detector distance that minimises sensitivity to changes originating from the brain would increase with head size, and very young participants would require significantly shorter source-detector distances (Brigadoi & Cooper, 2015). Thus, having them would have been challenging. Under these circumstances (i.e., lack of short channels and external physiological measures), and considering that the amount the signal is affected by physiological noise (either coming from the brain or superficial tissue) might change through development, the choice of applying global signal regression is justified. Nevertheless, since the method introduces negative correlations in the data by forcing connectivity to average to zero, I believe a further discussion of these points would have enriched the interpretation of the results.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Building on previous in vitro synaptic circuit work (Yamawaki et al., eLife 10, 2021), Piña Novo et al. utilize an in vivo optogenetic-electrophysiological approach to characterize sensory-evoked spiking activity in the mouse's forelimb primary somatosensory (S1) and motor (M1) areas. Using a combination of a novel "phototactile" somatosensory stimuli to the mouse's hand and simultaneous high-density linear array recordings in both S1 and M1, the authors report evoked activity in S1 was biased to middle layers, whereas it was biased to upper layers in M1. They report that M1 responses are delayed and attenuated relative to S1. Further analysis revealed a 20-fold difference in subcortical versus corticocortical propagation speeds. They also find that PV interneurons in S1 are strongly recruited by hand stimulation, and their selective activation can produce a suppression and rebound response similar to "phototactile" stimuli. Silencing S1 through local PV cells was sufficient to reduce M1 response to hand stimulation, suggesting S1 may directly drive M1 responses.

      Strengths:

      The study was technically well done, with convincing results. The data presented are appropriately analyzed. The author's findings build on a growing body of both in vitro and in vivo work examining the synaptic circuits underlying the interactions between S1 and M1. The paper is well-written and illustrated. Overall, the study will be valuable to those interested in forelimb S1-M1 interactions.

      Weaknesses:

      The authors have addressed my concerns

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, the authors discovered MYL3 of marine medaka (Oryzias melastigma) as a novel NNV entry receptor, elucidating its facilitation of RGNNV entry into host cells through macropinocytosis, mediated by the IGF1R-Rac1/Cdc42 pathway.

      Strengths:

      In this manuscript, the authors have performed in vitro and in vivo experiments to prove that MnMYL3 may serve as a receptor for NNV via macropinocytosis pathway. These experiments with different methods include Co-IP, RNAi, pulldown, SPR, flow cytometry, immunofluorescence assays and so on. In general, the results are clearly presented in the manuscript.

      Weaknesses:

      For the writing in the introduction and discussion sections, the author Yao et al mainly focus on the viral pathogens and fish in Aquaculture, the meaning and novelty of results provided in this manuscript are limited, not broad in biology. The authors should improve the likely impact of their work on the viral infection field, maybe also in the evolutionary field with fish model.

      Additionally, detailed comments are as follows:

      (1) Myosin is a big family, why did authors choose MYL3 as a candidate receptor for NNV?

      (2) What's the relationship between MmMYL3 and MmHSP90ab1 and other known NNV receptors? Why dose NNV have so many receptors? Which one is supposed to serve as the key entry receptor?

      (3) In vivo knockout of MYL3 using CRISPR-Cas9 should be conducted to verify whether the absence of MYL3 really inhibits NNV infection. Although it might be difficult to do it in marine medaka as stated by authors, the introduce of zebrafish is highly recommended, since it has already been reported that zebrafish could be served as a vertebrate model to study NNV (doi: 10.3389/fimmu.2022.863096).

      (4) The results shown in Figure 6 are not enough to support the conclusion that "RGNNV triggers macropinocytosis mediated by MmMYL3". Additional electron microscopy of macropinosomes (sizes, morphological characteristics, etc.) will be a more direct evidence.

      (5) MYL3 is "predominantly found in muscle tissues, particularly the heart and skeletal muscles". However, NNV is a virus mainly causes necrosis of nervous tissues (brain and retina). If MYL3 really acts as a receptor for NNV, how does it balance this difference so that nervous tissues, rather than muscle tissues, have the highest viral titers?

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed most of my concerns in the revised manuscript, but still one question need to further improve to strengthen the study's rationale and conclusions.

      Specificity of MYL3 Selection:<br /> My previous question focused on why MYL3 was prioritized over other myosin family members. While the response broadly implicates myosins in viral entry, it does not justify why MYL3 was specifically chosen. For clarity, the "Introduction sections" should explicitly state the unique features of MYL3 (e.g., domain structure, binding affinity, or prior evidence linking it to NNV) that distinguish it from other myosins.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Diarrheal diseases represent an important public health issue. Among the many pathogens that contribute to this problem, Salmonella enterica serovar Typhimurium is an important one. Due to the rise in antimicrobial resistance and the problems associated with widespread antibiotic use, the discovery and development of new strategies to combat bacterial infections is urgently needed. The microbiome field is constantly providing us with various health-related properties elicited by the commensals that inhabit their mammalian hosts. Harnessing the potential of these commensals for knowledge about host-microbe interactions as well as useful properties with therapeutic implications will likely to remain a fruitful field for decades to come. In this manuscript, Wang et al use various methods, encompassing classic microbiology, genomics, chemical biology, and immunology, to identify a potent probiotic strain that protects nematode and murine hosts from S. enterica infection. Additionally, authors identify gut metabolites that are correlated with protection, and show that a single metabolite can recapitulate the effects of probiotic administration.

      Strengths:

      The utilization of varied methods by the authors, together with the impressive amount of data generated, to support the claims and conclusions made in the manuscript is a major strength of the work. Also, the ability the move beyond simple identification of the active probiotic, also identifying compounds that are at least partially responsible for the protective effects, is commendable.

      Weaknesses:

      No major weaknesses noted.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Shin et al. conduct extensive electrophysiological and behavioral experiments to study the mechanisms of short-term synaptic plasticity at excitatory synapses in layer 2/3 of the rat medial prefrontal cortex. The authors interestingly find that short-term facilitation is driven by progressive overfilling of the readily releasable pool, and that this process is mediated by phospholipase C/diacylglycerol signaling and synaptotagmin-7 (Syt7). Specifically, knockdown of Syt7 not only abolishes the refilling rate of vesicles with high fusion probability, but it also impairs the acquisition of trace fear memory.

      Overall, the authors offer novel insight to the field of synaptic plasticity through well-designed experiments that incorporate a range of techniques.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have adequately addressed my earlier comments and questions.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study provides comprehensive instructions for using the chromatophore tracking software, Chromas, to track and analyse the dynamics of large numbers of cephalopod chromatophores across various spatiotemporal scales. This software addresses a long-standing challenge faced by many researchers who study these soft-bodied creatures, known for their remarkable ability to change colour rapidly. The updated software features a user-friendly interface that can be applied to a wide range of applications, making it an essential tool for biologists focused on animal dynamic signalling. It will also be of interest to professionals in the fields of computer vision and image analysis.

      Strengths:

      This work provides detailed instructions for this toolkit along with examples for potential users to try. The Gitlab inventory hosts the software package, installation documentation, and tutorials, further helping potential users with a less steep learning curve.

      Weaknesses:

      The evidence supporting the authors' claims is solid, particularly demonstrated through the use of cuttlefish and squid. However, it may not be applicable to all coleoid cephalopods yet, such as octopuses, which have an incredibly versatile ability to change their body forms.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      This paper presents a set of tools that will pave the way for a comprehensive understanding of the circuits that control wing motion in flies during flight or courtship. These tools are mainly focused on wing motor neurons and interneurons, as well as a few motor neurons of the haltere. This paper and the library of driver lines described within it will serve as a crucial resource in the pursuit of understanding how neural circuits give rise to behavior. Overall, I found the paper well-written, the figures are quite nice, and the data from the functional experiments convincing. I do not have many major concerns, but a few suggestions that I think will make the paper easier to understand.

      I think the introduction could use some reorganization, as right now I found it quite difficult to follow. For example, lines 85-88 seem to fit more naturally at the end of the next paragraph, compared to the current location of those sentences, which feels rather disjointed. I would suggest introducing the organization of the wing motor system (paragraphs 3 and 4) and then discussing the VNC (paragraph 2) before moving on to describe the neurons within the VNC that may control wing motion. Additionally, lines 141-144, which describe the broad subdivisions of the VNC, can be moved up to where the VNC is first introduced.

      One of my major takeaways from the paper is the call to examine the premotor circuits that govern wing motion. For that reason, I was surprised that there was little mention of the role of sensory input to these circuits. As the authors point out in the discussion, the haltere, for example, provides important input to the wing steering system. I recognize that creating driver lines for the sensory neurons that innervate the VNC is well beyond the scope of this project. I would just like some clarification in the text of the role these inputs play in structuring wing motion, especially as some act at rapid timescales that possibly forgo processing by the very circuits detailed here. This brings up a related issue: if the roles of the interneurons that are presynaptic to the wing motor neurons are "largely unexplored," with how much confidence can we say that they are the key for controlling behavior? To be sure, this has been demonstrated quite nicely in the case of courtship, but in flight, I think the evidence supporting this argument is less clear. I suggest the authors rephrase their language here.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      The authors validate the contribution of RAP2A to GB progression. RAp2A participates in asymmetric cell division, and the localization of several cell polarity markers, including cno and Numb.

      Strengths:

      The use of human data, Drosophila models, and cell culture or neurospheres is a good scenario to validate the hypothesis using complementary systems.

      Moreover, the mechanisms that determine GB progression, and in particular glioma stem cells biology, are relevant for the knowledge on glioblastoma and opens new possibilities to future clinical strategies.

      Weaknesses:

      While the manuscript presents a well-supported investigation into RAP2A's role in GBM, several methodological aspects require further validation. The major concern is the reliance on a single GB cell line (GB5), which limits the generalizability of the findings. Including multiple GBM lines, particularly primary patient-derived 3D cultures with known stem-like properties, would significantly enhance the study's relevance.

      Additionally, key mechanistic aspects remain underexplored. Further investigation into the conservation of the Rap2l-Cno/aPKC pathway in human cells through rescue experiments or protein interaction assays would be beneficial. Similarly, live imaging or lineage tracing would provide more direct evidence of ACD frequency, complementing the current indirect metrics (odd/even cell clusters, Numb asymmetry).

      Several specific points raised in previous reviews still require attention:

      (1) The specificity of Rap2l RNAi needs further confirmation. Is Rap2l expressed in neuroblasts or intermediate neural progenitors? Can alternative validation methods be employed?

      (2) Quantification of phenotypic penetrance and survival rates in Rap2l mutants would help determine the consistency of ACD defects.

      (3) The observations on neurosphere size and Ki-67 expression require normalization (e.g., Ki-67+ cells per total cell number or per neurosphere size). Additionally, apoptosis should be assessed using Annexin V or TUNEL assays.

      (4) The discrepancy in Figures 6A and 6B requires further discussion.

      (5) Live imaging of ACD events would provide more direct evidence.

      (6) Clarification of terminology and statistical markers (e.g., p-values) in Figure 1A would improve clarity.

      (7) Given the group's expertise, an alternative to mouse xenografts could be a Drosophila genetic model of glioblastoma, which would provide an in vivo validation system aligned with their research approach.

  2. Apr 2025
    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Cording et al. investigated how deletion of CNTNAP2, a gene associated with autism spectrum disorder, alters corticostriatal engagement and behavior. Specifically, the authors present slice electrophysiology data showing that striatal projection neurons (SPNs) are more readily driven to fire action potentials in response to stimulation of corticostriatal afferents, and this is due to increases in SPN intrinsic excitability rather than changes in excitatory or inhibitory synaptic inputs. Specifically, these changes seem to be due to preferential reduction of Kv1.2 in dSPNs. The authors separately show that CNTNAP2 mice display repetitive behaviors, enhanced motor learning and cognitive inflexibility. Overall, the authors' conclusions are supported by their data, but a few claims could use some more evidence to be convincing.

      Strengths:

      The use of multiple behavioral techniques, both traditional and cutting-edge machine learning-based analyses, provides a powerful means of assessing repetitive behaviors and behavioral transitions/rigidity. Characterization of both excitatory and inhibitory synaptic responses in slice electrophysiology experiments offers a broad survey of the synaptic alterations that may lead to increased corticostriatal engagement of SPNs.

      Weaknesses:

      As it stands, the reported changes in dorsolateral striatum SPN excitability are only correlative with reported changes in repetitive behaviors, motor learning and cognitive flexibility. The authors do broach this in the text (particularly in "Limitations and future directions").

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      I was glad to see that the other reviewer and I had similar takeaways on the subjects of historical literature and paedomorphism. While the authors have adequately considered a more historical body of literature, they have not addressed the concerns we had with statements about paedomorphism. I'm inclined to agree with the other reviewer that the discussion on paedomorphism should be cut entirely. My comments below are to seek clarity and make sure you are saying what you intend to say.

      Strengths:

      Table 1 is the beginning of a useful glossary and possible character definitions with character states that can be coded for phylogenetic analyses. This is particularly important because the goal of the paper is to define terms for chondrichthyan skeletal features in order to unify research questions in the field, and add novel data on how these features might be distributed among chondrichthyan clades, starting with ratfish and little skate.

      Opportunities:

      Table 1 should be translated into a format reflecting 0s and 1s etc that can be coded and referred back to the matrix that is in Figure 7 (or a standalone matrix as an appendix). Right now, they do not correspond and thus it is challenging to follow and interpret the mapped characters on the tree. You are presuming reversals when you could just list the state and let the data show you the possibility of character transitions.

      Figure 1 essentially shows two datapoints Holocephali and Elasmobranchi where holocephali have low TMD and Elasmobranchi have high TMD, therefore nothing directional from an ancestral to derived state. Also, because you drop the catshark from later figures/analysis, you are treating the ratfish and the little skate as sister taxa so you cannot determine which is paedomorphic and which is peramorphic. Unfortunately, the position of where the characters were mapped on Figure 7 is not able to help you determine ancestral states and therefore actually test for paedomorphism. Two sister taxa with two different conditions and no outgroup doesn't explain the TMD in Ratfishes is statistically different from that of little skates. But there is no direction. So you need to be able to reconstruct that state.

      Paedomorphosis implies juvenile ancestral organization in actual existing adult stages of modern descendants. You haven't shown that yet. Only that there might be different rates of mineralization in little skates. I suggested that you datamine the literature for other stages if you think you can fill in gaps.

      In the response to reviewers, the authors stated that: "... we had reported that the TMD of centra from little skate did significantly increase between stage 32 and 33. Supporting our argument that ratfish had features of little skate embryos, TMD of adult ratfish centra was significantly lower than TMD of adult skate centra (Fig 1). Also, it was significantly higher than stage 33 skate centra, but it was statistically indistinguishable from that of stage 33 and juvenile stages of skate centra. While we do agree that more samples from these and additional groups would bolster these data, we feel they are sufficiently powered to support our conclusions for this current paper."

      I will respond to that. In Figure 6L, yes, A little skate stage 33 is significantly different than stage 32, though the SD bars for ratfish appear to overlap with the range for little skate 32. Also, ratfish values are not significantly different than state 33 or juvenile ratfish. You can add the adult little skate data from figures 1 to 6L and then state, "centra of adult ratfish have a TDM within the range of juvenile LS33 little skates." As per conversation earlier, it still doesn't account for paedomorphism, however, it does indicate different amounts of mineralization, and could indicate you hypothesize about rates of mineralization. I think you have a different discussion waiting to replace this one.

    1. Joint Public Review:

      Carabalona and colleagues investigated the role of the membrane-deforming cytoskeletal regulator protein Abba (MTSS1L/MTSS2) in cortical development to better understand the mechanisms of abnormal neural stem cell mitosis. The authors used short hairpin RNA targeting Abba20 with a fluorescent reporter coupled with in utero electroporation of E14 mice to show changes to neural progenitors. They performed flow cytometry for in-depth cell cycle analysis of Abba-shRNA impact to neural progenitors and determined an accumulation in S phase. Using culture rat glioma cells and live imaging from cortical organotypic slides from mice in utero electroporated with Abba-shRNA, the authors found Abba played a prominent role in cytokinesis. They then used a yeast-two-hybrid screen to identify three high confidence interactors: Beta-Trcp2, Nedd9, and Otx2. They used immunoprecipitation experiments from E18 cortical tissue coupled with C6 cells to show Abba requirement for Nedd9 localization to the cleavage furrow/cytokinetic bridge. The authors performed an shRNA knockdown of Nedd9 by in utero electroporation of E14 mice and observed similar results as with the Abba-shRNA. They tested a human variant of Abba using in utero electroporation of cDNA and found disorganized radial glial fibers and misplaced, multipolar neurons, but lacked the impact of cell division seen in the shRNA-Abba model.

      [Editors' note: the authors have responded to two sets of reviews, which can be found here, https://doi.org/10.7554/eLife.92748.2, and here, https://doi.org/10.7554/eLife.92748.1]

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      Qi and colleagues investigated the role of Kallistatin pathway in increasing hippocampal amyloid-β plaques accumulation and tau hyperpholphorylation in Alzheimer's disease, linking the increased Kallistatin level in diabetic patients with a higher risk of Alzheimer's disease development. A Kallistatin overexpressing animal model was utilized, and memory impairment was assessed using Morris water maze and Y-maze. Kallistatin-related pathway protein levels were measured in the hippocampus, and phenotypes were rescued using fenofibrate and rosiglitazone. The current study provides evidence of a novel molecular mechanism linking diabetes and Alzheimer's disease, and suggests the potential use of fenofibrate to alleviate memory impairment. However, several issues need to be addressed before further consideration.

      Strengths:

      The finding of this study is novel. The finding will have great impacts on diabetes and AD research. The studies were well conducted, and results convincing.

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The mechanism by which fenofibrate rescues memory loss in Kallistatin-transgenic mice is unclear. As a PPARα agonist, does fenofibrate target the Kallistatin pathway directly or indirectly? Please provide discussion based on literature supporting either possibility.<br /> (2) The current study exclusively investigated hippocampus. What about other cognitive memory-related regions, such as prefrontal cortex? Including data from these regions or discussing the possibility of their involvement could provide a more comprehensive understanding of the role of Kallistatin in memory impairment.<br /> (3) Fenofibrate rescued phenotypes in Kallistatin-transgenic mice while rosiglitazone, a PPARα agonist, did not. This result contradicts the manuscript's emphasis on a PPARα-associated mechanism. Please address this inconsistency.<br /> (4) Most of the immunohistochemistry images are unclear. Inserts have similar magnification to the original representative images, making judgments difficult. Please provide larger inserts with higher resolution.<br /> (5) The immunohistochemistry images in different figures were taken from different hippocampal subregions with different magnifications. Please maintain consistency, or explain why CA1, CA3 or DG was analyzed in each experiment.<br /> (6) Figure 5B is missing a title. Please add a title to maintain consistency with other graphs.<br /> (7) Please list statistical methods used in the figure legends, such as t-test or One way ANOVA with post-hoc tests.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have addressed the issues raised from the review. The manuscript has been revised accordingly.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      The authors investigated the role of the C. elegans Flower protein, FLWR-1, in synaptic transmission, vesicle recycling, and neuronal excitability. They confirmed that FLWR-1 localizes to synaptic vesicles and the plasma membrane and facilitates synaptic vesicle recycling at neuromuscular junctions. They observed that hyperstimulation results in endosome accumulation in flwr-1 mutant synapses, suggesting that FLWR-1 facilitates the breakdown of endocytic endosomes. Using tissue-specific rescue experiments, the authors showed that expressing FLWR-1 in GABAergic neurons restored the aldicarb-resistant phenotype of flwr-1 mutants to wild-type levels. By contrast, cholinergic neuron expression did not rescue aldicarb sensitivity at all. They also showed that FLWR-1 removal leads to increased Ca2+ signaling in motor neurons upon photo-stimulation. From these findings, the authors conclude that FLWR-1 helps maintain the balance between excitation and inhibition (E/I) by preferentially regulating GABAergic neuronal excitability in a cell-autonomous manner.

      Overall, the work presents solid data and interesting findings, however the proposed cell-autonomous model of GABAergic FLWR-1 function may be overly simplified in my opinion.

      Most of my previous comments have been addressed; however, two issues remain.

      (1) I appreciate the authors' efforts conducting additional aldicarb sensitivity assays that combine muscle-specific rescue with either cholinergic or GABergic neuron-specific expression of FLWR-1. In the revised manuscript, they conclude, "This did not show any additive effects to the pure neuronal rescues, thus FLWR-1 effects on muscle cell responses to cholinergic agonists must be cell-autonomous." However, I find this interpretation confusing for the reasons outlined below.

      Figure 1 - Figure Supplement 3B shows that muscle-specific FLWR-1 expression in flwr-1 mutants significantly restores aldicarb sensitivity. However, when FLWR-1 is co-expressed in both cholinergic neurons and muscle, the worms behave like flwr-1 mutants and no rescue is observed. Similarly, cholinergic FLWR-1 alone fails to restore aldicarb sensitivity (shown in the previous manuscript). These observations indicate a non-cell-autonomous interaction between cholinergic neurons and muscle, rather than a strictly muscle cell-autonomous mechanism. In other words, FLWR-1 expressed in cholinergic neurons appears to negate or block the rescue effect of muscle-expressed FLWR-1. Therefore, FLWR-1 could play a more complex role in coordinating physiology across different tissues. This complexity may affect interpretations of Ca2+ dynamics and/or functional data, particularly in relation to E/I balance, and thus warrants careful discussion or further investigation.

      [Editor's note: The authors edited the text of the manuscript to acknowledge potential complexities in the interpretations of these results.]

      (2) The revised manuscript includes new GCaMP analyses restricted to synaptic puncta. The authors mention that "we compared Ca2+ signals in synaptic puncta versus axon shafts, and did not find any differences," concluding that "FLWR-1's impact is local, in synaptic boutons." This is puzzling: the similarity of Ca2+ signals in synaptic regions and axon shafts seems to indicate a more global effect on Ca2+ dynamics or may simply reflect limited temporal resolution in distinguishing local from global signals due to rapid Ca2+ diffusion. The authors should clarify how they reached the conclusion that FLWR-1 has a localized impact at synaptic boutons, given that synaptic and axonal signals appear similar. Based on the presented data, the evidence supporting a local effect of FLWR-1 on Ca2+ dynamics appears limited.

      [Editor's note: The authors acknowledged that some wording in the previous version was misleading and inaccurate. In the revised version, the authors have withdrawn the conclusion that FLWR-1 function is local in synaptic boutons.]

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this study, Xiao et al. conducted a comprehensive analysis of retroperitoneal liposarcoma (RPLS) by classifying patients into two distinct molecular subgroups based on whole transcriptome sequencing data from 88 cases. The G1 subgroup demonstrated a metabolic activation signature, whereas the G2 subgroup was characterized by enhanced cell cycle regulation and DNA damage repair pathways. Notably, the G2 subgroup exhibited more aggressive molecular profiles and poorer clinical prognosis compared to the G1 subgroup. Through the application of machine learning algorithms, the authors established a streamlined classification system, identifying LEP and PTTG1 as pivotal molecular biomarkers for differentiating between these two RPLS subgroups. The manuscript presents a well-structured and methodologically sound study, with particular significance attributed to its substantial sample size and the development of a clinically applicable classification framework. This innovative model holds considerable promise for advancing personalized treatment strategies and improving clinical outcomes for RPLS patients.

      Comments on revisions:

      The authors have adequately addressed all my concerns, and I have no further comments.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript, Dong et al. study the directed cell migration of tracheal stem cells in Drosophila pupae. The migration of these cells which are found in two nearby groups of cells normally happens unidirectionally along the dorsal trunk towards the posterior. Here, the authors study how this directionality is regulated. They show that inter-organ communication between the tracheal stem cells and the nearby fat body plays a role. They provide compelling evidence that Upd2 production in the fat body and JAK/STAT activation in the tracheal stem cells plays a role. Moreover, they show that JAK/STAT signalling might induce the expression of apicobasal and planar cell polarity genes in the tracheal stem cells which appear to be needed to ensure unidirectional migration. Finally, the authors suggest that trafficking and vesicular transport of Upd2 from the fat body towards the tracheal cells might be important.

      Strengths:

      The manuscript is well written. This novel work demonstrates a likely link between Upd2-JAK/STAT signalling in the fat body and tracheal stem cells and the control of unidirectional cell migration of tracheal stem cells. The authors show that hid+rpr or Upd2RNAi expression in a fat body or Dome RNAi, Hop RNAi, or STAT92E RNAi expression in tracheal stem cells results in aberrant migration of some of the tracheal stem cells towards the anterior. Using ChIP-seq as well as analysis of GFP-protein trap lines of planar cell polarity genes in combination with RNAi experiments, the authors show that STAT92E likely regulates the transcription of planar cell polarity genes and some apicobasal cell polarity genes in tracheal stem cells which appear to be needed for unidirectional migration. Moreover, the authors hypothesise and provide some supporting evidence that extracellular vesicle transport of Upd2 might be involved in this Upd2-JAK/STAT signalling in the fat body and tracheal stem cells, which is quite interesting. Overall, the work presented here provides some novel insights into the mechanism that ensures unidirectional migration of tracheal stem cells that prevents bidirectional migration. This might have important implications for other types of directed cell migration in invertebrates or vertebrates including cancer cell migration.

      Weaknesses:

      It remains somewhat unclear how Upd2 transported in extracellular vesicles would bind to the Dome receptor found on the surface of the tracheal cells? How Upd2 would be released from vesicles to bind Dome extracellularly and activate the JAK-STAT pathway?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In their manuscript, Li and colleagues introduce a pioneering investigation into the molecular and epigenetic foundations of neuroendocrine transdifferentiation in prostate cancer. By employing a genetically engineered cellular reprogramming approach, they elucidate the pivotal roles of ASCL1 and NeuroD1 as pioneer transcription factors that suppress AR signaling and orchestrate lineage plasticity toward NEPC. Their integrative multi-omics methodology delineates dynamic transcriptional and chromatin reorganization processes, offering profound insights into mechanisms of therapeutic resistance.

      Strengths:

      (1) The development of a reproducible in vitro reprogramming platform to transition ARPC cells into NEPC represents a significant technical achievement. This model enables high-resolution temporal analysis of NEtD, addressing constraints inherent in traditional PDX systems.

      (2) The authors reveal that ASCL1 and NeuroD1 suppress AR signaling through chromatin structural modifications at somatically amplified AR enhancers, a significant discovery that clarifies the longstanding ambiguity surrounding AR pathway inactivation during lineage plasticity.

      (3) The integration of RNA sequencing, CUT&RUN, and single-cell multiomic profiling delivers a holistic perspective on dynamic epigenetic and transcriptional reprogramming during NEtD. Their observation that AR suppression precedes NE marker activation provides chronological insights into this process.

      (4) By delineating the distinct roles of ASCL1/NeuroD1-driven NE lineage programs versus REST inactivation, the study critiques the excessive dependence on limited immunohistochemical indicators for NEPC classification, directly informing improvements in molecular diagnostics.

      (5) The association of ASCL1/NeuroD1 with MHC class I suppression mediated by PRC2 unveils opportunities for combining agents targeting epigenetic modifiers with immune-based therapies to counteract immune evasion in NEPC.

      Weaknesses:

      While the study is methodologically robust, a modest limitation lies in its primary reliance on established cell lines for mechanistic exploration. Although key observations are corroborated with clinical samples, additional validation in PDX models or organoid systems could enhance translational applicability. Furthermore, while the role of ASCL1/NeuroD1 in AR enhancer silencing is convincingly demonstrated, the upstream regulatory mechanisms governing ASCL1/NeuroD1 induction under therapeutic stress remain unaddressed, a compelling avenue for future research.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This is an interesting manuscript by Kirk and colleagues describing a highly valuable knock-down system that leverages CRISPRi in order to further elucidate the role of the Kruppel-Like Factor (KLF) transcription factor family in regulating the maturation of postnatal cortical projection neurons. The authors firstly use RNA-Seq and ATAC-Seq data in order to identify the KLF TF family as a potential regulator of cortical neuron maturation in the postnatal brain and subsequently knock down four KLF family members; KLF9, KL13, KLF6 and KLF7, in order to ascertain the functions of specific KLF genes in the developing cortex. The described CRISPRi knock down strategy is highly robust and penetrant as evidenced by a KD efficiency > 95% (assessed by both qPCR and single molecule FISH) and demonstrates that KLF6 and KLF7 play an activating role in driving the expression of target genes relating to axonal growth whereas KLF9 and 13 play a repressive role that inhibits the expression of overlapping gene targets. Together, the authors propose a model where the KLF TF family acts as a regulatory "switch" from activation to repression in the postnatal cortex as a mechanism to control a shift in projection neuron function from axonal growth to circuit refinement. The findings and conclusions of the manuscript offer a valuable contribution to the field of postnatal cortical development and further our understanding of the regulatory mechanisms that govern neuron maturation.

      The conclusions of this manuscript are generally supported by the data, but some aspects of the data collection and analysis require some further clarification. Specifically:

      (1) The authors comprehensively assess the molecular effects of KLF TF knock-down, however, the authors do not deeply address the cellular effects of these knock-downs. The authors conclude that knockdown of KLF6/7 and KLF9/13 cause downregulation and upregulation, respectively, of a common set of genes involved in cytoskeletal or axon regulation such as Tubb2 and Dpysl3. How is the morphology of the cells affected by these knockdowns? For example, does KLF9/13 knockdown cause neurite/axonal outgrowth? The authors should perform some basic experiments to assess changes in cell morphology following KLF TF KD. This is the one key point that needs addressing, in my opinion.

      (2) The authors identify 374 DEGs in P10 Klf6/7 KD neurons and 115 DEGs at P20 (figure 6B). Have the authors looked to see what proportion of these DEGs are upregulated in the KLF9/13 KDs in order to get a more global understanding of the degree of overlap in the genes regulated by the KLF family members? Along similar lines, the authors later indicate that there are 144 shared targets between the KLF activator and repressor pairs (Figure 7C). What percentage does this represent of the total number of DEGs between the KLF pairs. This could further illustrate the degree to which the KLF pairs regulate the same set of genes. If it is already indicated in the manuscript, it should be made a bit more clear to the reader.

      (3) Figures 5B and 6D2 are very interesting as they relate the changes in gene expression over time in neurons from P2 to P30 to the functions of KLF9/13 and KLF6/7, respectively. I would be curious to see how these two forms of analyses overlap with one another. For example, in Figure 6D2, where would the KLF9/13 upregulated genes fall on the plot shown in Figure 6D2? And would those overlapping genes fit a similar correlation?

      (4) Figure 7E shows expression levels of shared KLF TF targets in control or KD conditions. Interestingly, the expression of Tubb2b, shows higher expression in ScrGFP P10 when compared to KLF9/13 P20, suggesting that derepression of KLF9/13 does not fully restore the expression level of Tubb2b seen at P10. This may suggest that other repressive regulators may be involved in the downregulation of Tubb2b from P10 to P20. Can the authors further comment on this, perhaps in the discussion, and speculate if there are other regulatory factors at play that may be controlling some of the shared targets by KLF6/7 and KLF9/13?

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      It is well established that many potivirids (viruses in the Potiviridae family), particularly potyviruses (viruses in the Potyvirus genus), recruit (selectively) either eIF4E or eIF(iso)4E, while some others can use both of them to ensure a successful infection. CBSD caused by two potyvirids, i.e., ipomoviruses CBSV and UCBSV, severely impedes cassava production in West Africa. In a previous study (PBI, 2019), Gomez and Lin (co-first authors), et al. reported that cassava encodes five eIF4E proteins, including eIF4E, eIF(iso)4E-1, eIF(iso)4E-2, nCBP-1 and nCBP-2, and CBSV VPg interacts with all of them (Co-IP data). Simultaneous CRISPR/Cas9-mediated editing of nCBp-1 and -2 in cassava significantly mitigates CBSD symptoms and incidence. In this study, Lin et al further generated all five eIF4E family single mutants as well as both eIF(iso)4E-1/-2 and nCBP-1/-2 double mutants in a farmer-preferred casava cultivar. They found that both eIF(iso)4E and nCBP double mutants show reduced symptom severity, and the latter is of better performance. Analysis of mutant sequences revealed one important point mutation, L51F of nCBP-,2 that may be essential for the interaction with VPg. The authors suggest that the introduction of the L51F mutation into all five eIF4E family proteins may lead to strong resistance. Overall I believe this is an important study enriching knowledge about eIF4E as a host factor/susceptibility factor of potyvirids and proposing new information for the development of high CBSD resistance in cassava. I suggest the following two major comments for authors to consider for improvement:

      (1) As eIF(iso)4e-1/-2 or nCBP-1/-2 double mutants show resistance, why not try to generate a quadruple mutant? I believe it is technically possible through conventional breeding.

      (2) I agree that L51F mutation may be important. But more evidence is needed to support this idea. For example, the authors may conduct a quantitative Y2H assay on the binding of VPg to each of the eIF4E (L51F) mutants. Such data may add as additional evidence to support your claim.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      In this manuscript the authors test the hypothesis that gonadal steroid signaling influences the transcriptional development of specific neurons in the mPOA during adolescence, and that such adolescent development of the mPOA is necessary for mating behaviors.

      Strengths:

      The authors establish a role GABAergic-Esr1 neurons in mating behaviors of both male and female mice. Differentially expressed genes are compared across adolescent development and between sexes. Single-cell sequencing is used to resolve clusters of cells based on transcript levels, and in situ hybridization is used to visualize anatomical expression patterns. The research presented is thorough and rigorous and contributes new insight into hormone-sensitive transcriptional profiles within genetically defined neuron clusters in the mPOA during adolescence.

      Weaknesses: Two minor comments

      (1) Fig 4 (hormone treatment): In this experiment, testosterone is given to males, yet in Sup Fig 6 it is argued that Esr1 is more influential in driving transcriptional changes compared to AR. Does DHT treatment have the same outcome as testosterone? Or, does estrogen treatment in males have the same outcome as testosterone?

      (2) Fig 3i: There appears to be an age-dependent transcriptional change in male Vgat HR-low cells. Can the authors comment on age-dependent (hormone-independent) transcriptional changes in males versus females.

    1. Reviewer #1 (Public review):

      Summary:

      This study presents a valuable contribution of NO signaling in zebrafish retinal regeneration in larval animals. The data on NO signaling are solid; however, the link to cxcl118b is inadequate. There are significant concerns that the RNA-seq studies largely repeat the work of a previous study done in adult animals, which is a more relevant biological variable for translational insights.

      Strengths:

      New data on NO signaling are valuable to the field, but may be limited to larval "regeneration".

      Weaknesses:

      (1) The authors state that more is known about glial reactivation than cell-cycle re-entry. They are confusing many points here. More gene networks that require cell-cycle re-entry are known. Some of the genes listed for "reactivation" are, in fact, required for cell cycle re-entry/proliferation. And the authors confuse gliosis vs glial reactivation.

      (2) A major weakness of the approach is testing cone ablation and regeneration in early larval animals. For example, cones are ablated starting the day that they are born. MG that are responding are also very young, less than 48 hrs old. It is also unclear whether the immune response of microglia is a mature response. All of these assays would be of higher significance if they were performed in the context of a mature, fully differentiated, adult retina. All analysis in the paper is negatively affected by this biological variable.

      (3) Related to the above point, the clonal analysis of cxcl18b+ MG is complicated by the fact that new MG are still being born in the CMZ (as are new cones for that matter).

      (4) A near identical study was already done by Hoang et al., 2020, in adult zebrafish, a more relevant biological timepoint. Did the authors check this published RNA-seq database for their gene(s) of interest?

      (5) KD of cxcl18b did not affect MG proliferation or any other defined outcome. And yet the authors continually state such phrases as "microglia-mediated inflammation is critical for activating the cxcl18b-defined transitional states that drive MG proliferation." This is false. Cxcl18b does not drive MG proliferation at all.

      (6) A technical concern is that intravitreal injections are not routinely performed in larval fish.