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  1. Nov 2025
    1. My experience as a college writing instructor for 32 years, and as a writer, editor, and consultant for nearly 20 years

      Method/evidence: Essayistic argument using experiential and anecdotal evidence (teaching tenure, professional roles, stories).

      What this lets the author prove (and what it can’t): It shows practitioner perspective and patterns he’s observed, but not generalized causal proof from empirical studies.

    2. My experience as a college writing instructor for 32 years, and as a writer, editor, and consultant for nearly 20 years, suggests that one of the best things we can do for students is to help them master standard English.

      Jenkins argues that students should master Standard American English (SAE) because it is essential for professional communication and success.

      Keywords the author leans on: standard American English, workplace, norms, professionalism.

    3. In short, standard American English is not inherently racist. It is not merely a “tool of the patriarchy.” It is a tool for anyone who wishes to use it

      Why this quote matters to my theme: It directly rebuts claims that SAE is inherently discriminatory and frames it as an open tool.

      Signal phrase I might use: Jenkins concludes, “In short, standard American English is not inherently racist…”

    4. Later that day I received a reply from a young bank employee offering further details. Actually, I have no idea if she was young — I just assumed she was because her long e-mail was full of emoticons and text-messaging abbreviations — including, I kid you not, “LOL.”

      Gatekeeping vs. pragmatics: Jenkins frames SAE as practical for credibility with unknown audiences, while Young critiques “Standard English” as gatekeeping that marginalizes nonstandard varieties. (Used for concept-map edge between Jenkins / Young.)

    5. Later that day I received a reply from a young bank employee offering further details. Actually, I have no idea if she was young — I just assumed she was because her long e-mail was full of emoticons and text-messaging abbreviations — including, I kid you not, “LOL.”

      What the example demonstrates: Informal dialect/features can undermine perceived professionalism and lead to lost business.

      How I will connect it later: workplace expectations for tone/register (Jenkins) / critique of gatekeeping (Young).

    6. A good friend of mine grew up in a very small town in the Deep South.

      Limitation: The argument relies heavily on anecdotes (friend’s accent, mortgage email, class vignettes) rather than empirical workplace studies; this invites counter-evidence in synthesis.

      Why this matters for my synthesis: I’ll weigh experiential authority against research-based claims from other sources.

    7. In the workplace, we’re communicating with people we don’t know personally or even have never met. All they know about us is what they can infer from reading an email or a report we wrote. And on that basis, they will make inferences — about our competence, our intelligence, our level of education.

      Paraphrase: In professional settings, unfamiliar audiences judge competence and education from language alone, so using SAE affects perceived credibility.

      Which part of the theme this supports: Audience diversity and stakes of impression management justify SAE.

    8. In one class, my 24 students spoke 17 languages. I can tell you from experience that those students were eager to master standard American English — once I explained to them what it is (and isn’t) and how it could benefit them. They saw it as a key that could unlock the world of higher-paying employment.

      What the example demonstrates: Multilingual students treat SAE as economic access and actively pursue it.

      How I will connect it later: access via SAE (Jenkins) to/from identity/voice via code-meshing (Lysicott).

    9. . In one class, my 24 students spoke 17 languages. I can tell you from experience that those students were eager to master standard American English — once I explained to them what it is (and isn’t) and how it could benefit them. They saw it as a key that could unlock the world of higher-paying employment.

      Access vs. identity: Jenkins emphasizes SAE as a key to employment, while Lysicott foregrounds code-meshing to honor identity and agency within academic/professional spaces. (Used for concept-map edge between Jenkins/Lysicott.)

    10. The only purpose of language is to communicate, and if the language or dialect you use in a particular situation allows you to do so, then it is effective.

      Why this quote matters to my theme: It centers communication effectiveness as the standard, supporting SAE as situationally pragmatic.

      Signal phrase I might use: According to Jenkins, “The only purpose of language is to communicate…”

    11. That’s why we have a standardized language in the first place.

      Term + my working definition:

      Standardized language = shared norms that enable mutual understanding across diverse dialect users.

      Why this matters for my theme: It grounds the claim that SAE reduces cross-audience miscommunication.

    12. The word “standard” here is not prescriptive. It does not refer to a flag we must all salute. Rather, it simply describes accepted norms — in this case, accepted in the workplace by college-educated professionals.

      Term + my working definition:

      Standard American English = the accepted workplace dialect among college-educated professionals.

      Why this matters for my theme: It frames SAE as pragmatic convention, not moral superiority.

    13. My experience as a college writing instructor for 32 years, and as a writer, editor, and consultant for nearly 20 years, suggests that one of the best things we can do for students is to help them master standard English.

      Jenkins argues that mastering Standard American English is essential for professional success and is not inherently discriminatory.

      Angle most relevant to my theme: SAE as pragmatic, workplace-driven convention for cross-audience communication.

    1. A people at the center of the Western world, and in the midst of so hostile a population, has not endured and transcended by means of what is patronizingly called a “dialect.”

      Implication: Challenges “dialect” framing; positions recognition as a matter of justice and historical truth. Synthesis will weigh recognition vs. gatekeeping.

    2. There was a moment, in time, and in this place, when my brother, or my mother, or my father, or my sister, had to convey to me, for example, the danger in which I was standing from the white man standing just behind me, and to convey this with a speed, and in a language, that the white man could not possibly understand

      What this shows: Communicative function of Black English for safety/solidarity; opacity to dominant listeners.

      How I’ll connect it later: purpose-driven language (Baldwin) / Young’s claim that “It’s ATTITUDES,” not dialect deficits.

    3. Subsequently, the slave was given, under the eye, and the gun, of his master, Congo Square, and the Bible — or, in other words, and under these conditions,.the slave began the formation of the black church, and it is within this unprecedented tabernacle that black English began to be formed.

      Baldwin’s historical account of Black English’s formation complements Heller’s analysis of AAVE as identity/agency in Bambara—both center vernaculars as purposeful, not deficient.

    4. Subsequently, the slave was given, under the eye, and the gun, of his master, Congo Square, and the Bible — or, in other words, and under these conditions,.the slave began the formation of the black church, and it is within this unprecedented tabernacle that black English began to be formed.

      What this shows: Specific historical sites (church/community) where Black English coalesced.

      How I’ll connect it later: historical formation (Baldwin) / AAVE-as-agency in literature (Heller).

    5. A language comes into existence by means of brutal necessity, and the rules of the language are dictated by what the language must convey.

      Languages form under pressure to communicate urgent realities; their structures follow communicative needs.

      Supports: Functional/necessity-based account of Black English.

    6. It is the most vivid and crucial key to identity: It reveals the private identity, and connects one with, or divorces one from, the larger, public, or communal identity.

      Where Jenkins argues SAE mastery for workplace power, Baldwin reframes power as already embedded in Black English’s identity/politics—setting up a productive tension for synthesis.

    7. It is the most vivid and crucial key to identity: It reveals the private identity, and connects one with, or divorces one from, the larger, public, or communal identity.

      Why this quote matters: States language–identity linkage for synthesis. Signal phrase I might use: Baldwin maintains that language is “the most vivid and crucial key to identity…”

    8. People evolve a language in order to describe and thus control their circumstances, or in order not to be submerged by a reality that they cannot articulate.

      Method/evidence: Historical-cultural reasoning + sociolinguistic examples (France, Basque/Welsh, U.S. slavery/church).

      What this shows / can’t show: Explains functional origins and politics of language; not a quantitative study.

    9. Black English is the creation of the black diaspora.

      Term + my working definition:

      Black English = a language formed within the Black diaspora in the U.S., emerging from shared necessity and community, not merely a “dialect.”

      Why this matters: Centers origin and legitimacy for concept map.

    10. It goes without saying, then, that language is also a political instrument, means, and proof of power.

      Baldwin contends that Black English is a legitimate language forged by historical necessity and bound to power and identity, and that contempt for it is contempt for Black experience.

      Angle most relevant to my theme: Language as power/identity vs. “neutral standard.”

    11. It goes without saying, then, that language is also a political instrument, means, and proof of power.

      Baldwin argues that the debate over Black English is about power, history, and identity—not “correctness”—and that Black English is a legitimate language formed by necessity.

      Keywords: power, identity, history, Black English, legitimacy.

    1. the idea of standard English powerfully maintainsour unequal realities, erasing and/or exoticizing our highly multilingualworld.

      Implication: Adopting translingual practices is framed as part of broader work against inequality; synthesis will weigh institutional standards vs. justice-oriented pedagogy.

    2. This chapter shares how we, as writers and scholars, and what Dr.Ofelia García, Professor Emerita of Urban and Bilingual Education, callsemergent and experienced bilinguals, work as language architects, and re-sist those critical feelings that push us to suppress our own voices.

      Genre: Pedagogical chapter in a college writing anthology (Writing Spaces).

    3. Ourgoal is to support students in recognizing the value of their own languagepractices and to provide strategies that students can use to rethink theirown relationships with writing.

      Purpose: Validate students’ language practices and equip them with strategies to use them in academic writing.

    4. To start writing this chapter, for example, one of the first things we didwas read previous contributions to Writing Spaces to get a sense of the ex-pected tone and the structure.

      What the example demonstrates: Audience/design analysis as part of language-architect work.

      How I will connect it later: situational design (Alvarez/Wan/Lee) / Jenkins’s emphasis on audience expectations (contrast in aims).

    5. Once we havesome words, ideas, frustrations on paper, we give ourselves small writingtasks, like “just write whatever you can or feel about X topic for 5 minutes.”

      Pedagogy in action: The authors’ translingual strategies (freewriting, revision cycles) complement Young’s call to teach descriptively and embrace code meshing in the same paper.

    6. Once we havesome words, ideas, frustrations on paper, we give ourselves small writingtasks, like “just write whatever you can or feel about X topic for 5 minutes.”

      What the example demonstrates: A concrete technique that surfaces authentic voice before later shaping.

      How I will connect it later: practice-level support for translingual composing / Young’s classroom stance on descriptive teaching.

    7. Dr. Flores (mentioned earlier) and Dr. Jonathan Rosa, Professor ofLinguistic Anthropology, have crucially pointed out how the idea of stan-dardized English (both written and spoken) as the “appropriate” languagerelies on the racialization of students, regardless of their actual languageuse (157-158)

      Appropriateness standards are tied to raciolinguistic biases that judge students independent of how they actually use language.

      Which part of the theme this supports: Links language standards to structural inequity.

    8. What we mean bythis is that your voice and all the ways you use it—as part of who you are—makes all the difference, and therefore, should be amplified and cultivated.

      Why this quote matters to my theme: Centers student voice as a positive resource to develop, not suppress.

      Signal phrase I might use: The chapter emphasizes that “your voice… should be amplified and cultivated.”

    9. In this section, we offer specific ways of using our rich language practicesto understand how they might contribute to our academic writing.

      Method/evidence: Scholarly essay + strategy toolkit; blends research framing with concrete classroom practices.

      What this lets the authors prove (and what it can’t): Shows actionable pedagogy and rationale; not a quantitative outcomes study.

    10. as designers of meaning, language architects carefully considerhow to work with their own languages and voice for the most successfulcommunication in a specific situation (25).

      Term + my working definition:

      Language architects = writers who intentionally design with multiple language resources for a given audience/situation.

      Why this matters for my theme: Positions students as intentional designers, not error-correctors.

    11. An approach that resists monolingual ideology,translingualism views our different and varied language practices as crit-ical in inquiring, supporting, and sustaining the full range of richness inour voices (Horner and Alvarez).

      Term + my working definition:

      Translingualism = resisting one-language norms by leveraging the full range of a writer’s language practices.

      Why this matters for my theme: It names the orientation that re-frames “academic writing” around plurality.

    12. Orienting practices around translingual-ism and envisioning students’ language work as that of “language archi-tects” creates opportunities to uplift, value, and sustain students’ richlanguage practices, as well as ways to critically understand their academicwriting experiences.

      Alvarez, Wan, and Lee advocate a translingual orientation that treats students as “language architects,” offering concrete strategies to bring full language resources into academic writing.

      Angle most relevant to my theme: Pedagogy that legitimizes multilingual voice and challenges monolingual standards.

    13. Orienting practices around translingual-ism and envisioning students’ language work as that of “language archi-tects” creates opportunities to uplift, value, and sustain students’ richlanguage practices, as well as ways to critically understand their academicwriting experiences.

      The authors argue that centering translingual practices and treating students as “language architects” strengthens academic writing and builds critical understanding.

      Keywords the authors lean on: translingualism, language architects, value, sustain, academic writing.

    1. But some would say, “You cant mix no dialects at work; how would peeps whoaint from yo hood understand you?”

      Implication: Raises audience-design and clarity concerns that the synthesis will address (how to mesh codes while ensuring mutual intelligibility).

      Why this matters for my synthesis: I’ll weigh inclusivity/justice against practical comprehension and gatekeeping.

    2. Teachers frequently encounter him on panels with titles like“The Expanding Canon: Teaching Multicultural Literature InHigh School.” But the dude is also hella down to earth.

      Vernacular as agency: Young’s code meshing aligns with Heller’s claim that AAVE conveys identity, confidence, and critique; both position vernacular forms as tools of voice and resistance.

    3. Teachers frequently encounter him on panels with titles like“The Expanding Canon: Teaching Multicultural Literature InHigh School.” But the dude is also hella down to earth.

      What the example demonstrates: Journalistic prose mixing formal description with vernacular insertions—live code meshing in print.

      How I will connect it later: identity/voice via vernacular (Young) / AAVE-as-agency (Heller).

    4. (1) Iowa Republican Senator Chuck Grassley sent two tweets to President Obamain June 2009 (Werner).

      What the example demonstrates: Public, professional communication already blends registers/abbreviations—evidence of code meshing beyond classrooms.

      How I will connect it later: real-world register mixing (Young) / workplace register expectations (Jenkins).

    5. We shouldteach how to let dialects comingle, sho nuff blend together, like blending the dia-lect Fish speak and the black vernacular that, say, a lot—certainly not all—blackpeople speak.

      Paraphrase: Instruction should train students to blend mainstream and vernacular dialects within the same piece of writing.

      Which part of the theme this supports: Pedagogy that operationalizes code meshing.

    6. Code meshing be everywhere. It be used by all types of people.

      Method/evidence: Essayistic argument using concrete contemporary examples (tweets, journalism, scholarship) to demonstrate widespread practice.

      What this lets the author prove (and what it can’t): Shows real-world usage across domains; not a controlled empirical study.

    7. Code meshing is the new code switching; it’s mulitdialectalism and pluralingual-ism in one speech act, in one paper.

      Term + my working definition:

      Code meshing = blending dialects/languages/rhetorical styles together in the same utterance or paper.

      Why this matters for my theme: It’s the central practice Young advances.

    8. Standard language ideologyis the belief that there is one set of dominant language rules that stem from a singledominant discourse (like standard English) that all writers and speakers of Englishmust conform to in order to communicate effectively.

      Term + my working definition:

      Standard language ideology = the belief in one dominant, mandatory set of English rules everyone must follow.

      Why this matters for my theme: Names the system Young critiques.

    9. Code meshing is the new code switching; it’s mulitdialectalism and pluralingual-ism in one speech act, in one paper.

      Young argues that teachers should teach and value code meshing—blending dialects and languages within the same text—and reject a single “standard” as the only acceptable academic or professional English.

      Angle most relevant to my theme: Language plurality as both pedagogy and justice.

    10. Code meshing is the new code switching; it’s mulitdialectalism and pluralingual-ism in one speech act, in one paper.

      Young argues for code meshing—using multiple dialects/languages together in the same text—as the preferred approach, rejecting a single “standard” as the only acceptable academic/workplace code.

      Keywords the author leans on: code meshing, multidialectalism, pluralingualism.

    1. In "The Lesson," the have-not children speak AAVE. This vernacular dialect emphasizes the children's distance from mainstream white bourgeois culture and economic power.

      Tension: Linking AAVE with “have-not” status can risk reinforcing deficit associations even as the article celebrates AAVE’s power; this tension is key for synthesis.

      Why this matters for my synthesis: I will address how valorizing AAVE avoids deficit framing while critiquing structural inequality.

    2. "Who are these people that spend that much for performing clowns and $1,000 for toy sailboats? What kinda work they do and how they live and how come we ain't in on it?" (94).

      What the example demonstrates: AAVE voice frames incisive social/economic questioning at the story’s climax.

      How I will connect it later: AAVE questioning/critique (Heller) / Jenkins’s workplace-norms argument (contrast).

    3. In the opening sentence of "The Lesson," Bambara clearly indicates that Sylvia is narrating in AAVE. Here, Sylvia describes Miss Moore as an adult with "nappy hair" (87).

      Identity/agency: Heller’s framing of AAVE as pride and resistance aligns with Lysicott’s argument that vernacular resources carry identity and should be leveraged within academic spaces.

    4. In the opening sentence of "The Lesson," Bambara clearly indicates that Sylvia is narrating in AAVE. Here, Sylvia describes Miss Moore as an adult with "nappy hair" (87).

      What the example demonstrates: Early lexical cue grounds narrator’s voice in AAVE and signals cultural stance.

      How I will connect it later: AAVE as identity marker (Heller) / code-meshing/voice (Lysicott).

    5. AAVE fits the story's main theme: wealth is unequally and unfairly distributed in American society.

      Paraphrase: Heller links AAVE to the story’s critique of economic inequality, showing how the dialect highlights distance from mainstream wealth and power.

      Which part of the theme this supports: Language choice as social critique.

    6. Such writing implies resistance to the dominant culture, destabilizes the privileged dialect/discourse, and portrays "subversive voices" that present "alternative versions of reality" (11, 13, 46).

      Why this quote matters to my theme: Captures the resistance function of dialect literature and aligns with Bambara’s use of AAVE.

      Signal phrase I might use: Heller, citing Jones, notes that dialect writing “destabilizes the privileged dialect/discourse…”

    7. However, Bambara also celebrates AAVE as a vehicle for conveying black experience: Sylvia uses AAVE to express her self-confidence, assertiveness, and creativity as a young black woman.

      Why this quote matters to my theme: Names AAVE’s expressive and identity-affirming functions directly.

      Signal phrase I might use: According to Heller, “Bambara also celebrates AAVE as a vehicle for conveying black experience…”

    8. The young narrator's language makes her ethnicity quite clear in its phonology, morphology, lexicon, and syntax.

      Literary linguistic analysis: close reading of phonology, morphology, lexicon, and syntax, supported by scholarship.

      What this lets the author prove (and what it can’t): Demonstrates how form (AAVE features) builds theme/identity; not an empirical workplace or survey study.

    9. Dialect literature questions "sociolinguistic wholeness" (51).

      Term + my working definition:

      Dialect literature = writing that uses non-standard varieties to challenge the idea of a single, unified “proper” language.

      Why this matters for my theme: Supports the claim that Bambara’s AAVE disrupts linguistic hierarchy.

    10. In Toni Cade Bambara's short story, "The Lesson" (1972), the narrator, Sylvia, speaks in African American Vernacular English (AAVE).

      Term + my working definition:

      AAVE = a vernacular dialect associated with African American communities that carries cultural identity and rhetorical power in the story.

      Why this matters for my theme: Establishes AAVE as the story’s linguistic frame and vehicle for meaning.

    11. AAVE also embodies Sylvia's and Bambara's ability to question their society and to resist pressure to conform to the dominant culture.

      Heller argues that Bambara’s use of AAVE in “The Lesson” constructs realism, affirms Black identity, and equips the narrator to critique inequality and resist dominant norms.

      Angle most relevant to my theme: Vernacular as a tool of critique and agency.

    12. AAVE also embodies Sylvia's and Bambara's ability to question their society and to resist pressure to conform to the dominant culture.

      Term + my working definition:

      AAVE = a vernacular dialect associated with African American communities that carries cultural identity and rhetorical power in the story.

      Why this matters for my theme: Establishes AAVE as the story’s linguistic frame and vehicle for meaning.