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He talks mostly about time and how rare yet valuable it is.
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In Collins’ Commencement Address, the genre is a graduation speech.
okay--good, clear statement. But do you want to insert a topic sentence to give your reader a heads up about the rest of the paragraph's focus?
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There are three sources that I’ve read that stand out when it comes to genre, audience, and purpose. They are the Commencement Address by Billy Collins, How to Tame a Wild Tongue by Gloria Anzaldua, and Spoken Word Commencement spoken by Donovan Livingston.
This is a helpful introduction
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in which you’re writing in
in which you are writing
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These terms are all rhetorical situations.
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we don’t
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Anzaldua, Gloria. “How to Tame a Wild Tongue.” Everettsd, www.everettsd.org/cms/lib07/WA01920133/Centricity/Domain/965/Anzaldua-Wild-Tongue.pdf. Collins, Billy. “Commencement Address.” Poet Laureate Billy Collins Gives Brilliand and Witty Commencement Address at Colorado College, 2008, http://www.graduationwisdom.com/speeches/0135-Billy-Collins-Gives-Brilliant-Witty-Commencement-Speech-Address-At-Colorado-College-2008.htm. Livingston, Donovan “Donovan Livingston’s Harvard Graduate School of Education Student Speech.” Youtube, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9XGUpKITeJM&t=268s
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(I.E people who have felt the same kind of discrimination)
Can you be more precise: future educators
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In Donovan Livingston’s commencement address at Harvard,
can you work on giving transitions and more informative topic sentences--to assist your reader?
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reach everyone with their remarks
can you be more precise?
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by Susan Blau and Kathryn Burak, It explains
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That leaves us with the present, the elusive moment where everything takes place but is moving to fast to comprehend”(Bil
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work of writing.
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I believe that part of her purpose in this piece was to inform the Americans
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, her audience is her fellow Chicanos.
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I would classify this work as a memoir,
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How to Tame a Wild Tongue
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Another piece of writing that may be less known
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To a reader today, this may seem confusing, however, we must take into consideration that King was writing to clergymen, who knew exactly who Jesus, Amos, and Paul were, and would be able to understand the analogy of considering them extremists.
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We can determine that this is a letter because King is specifically writing a response to the eight clergymen and not to the population as a whole.
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Writing In the Works, genre is defined as “a type of writing – from informative report to a blog posting – and each type of writing requires particular rhetorical moves.”
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The first, and most popular piece, is “The Letter from Birmingham Jail,” written by Martin Luther King Jr. The second is called, How to Tame a Wild Tongue,written by Gloria Anzaldua. Finally, I will be discussing the commencement address given by Billy Collins at Colorado College in 2008. Each of these works brings forth a different genre, and purpose, and was written for a different audience. Let’s dive deeper and discover how these elements affect a piece of writing.
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are so important, however, having
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nzaldua, Gloria. “How to Tame a Wild Tongue.” Anzaldua, Gloria. Borderlands/La Frontera. 1987. 33-44. Collins, Billy. n.d. —. Billy Collins. 28 May 2008. 22 September 2019. Jr., Martin Luther King. Letter From Birmingham Jail. August 1963. 22 September 2019. Susan Blau, Kathryn Burak. “Writing in the Works.” Susan Blau, Kathryn Burak. Boston : Wadsworth Cengage Learning, 2015. 2-44.
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for Anzaldua to tell the audience about past experiences in her life
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Spanish speaking individuals
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genre presented is a memoir
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Collins speech as listed in its title, is the genre
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Some example of how blacks were treated differently include not being able to sleep in a hotel, signs above certain objects saying white and black, being called “nigger”, and daily never know what will happen next/what to expect. “When you take a cross-country drive and find it necessary to sleep night after night in the uncomfortable corners of your automobile because no motel will accept you.” “When you are humiliated day in and day out by nagging signs reading “white” and “colored”. “When your first name becomes “nigger”. ” Living constantly at tiptoe stance, never knowing what to expect next.”
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was to express that he wante
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King wrote this letter to Birmingham with a purpose.
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King’s letter to Birmingham has the genre of a letter, formal
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ting to is the eight white religious leaders of the south. Those eight religious people are the eight Clergy
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to whom King
whom King
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then stories
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a letter, formal
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Composition is what tells a story
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Collins is seeking to inspire and to challenge.
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Moving on to a piece fairly different than King’s
Can you work on this transition to improve? And can you provide a focusing topic sentence?
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His purpose was to justify his actions
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King makes several references to the Bible; using what his audience understands. For example, this quote: “…and just as the Apostle Paul left his little village of Tarsus and carried the gospel of Jesus Christ to practically every hamlet and city of the Greco-Roman world, I too am compelled to carry the gospel of freedom beyond my particular hometown.” (King).
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Men well-versed in the Holy Scriptures.
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Perhaps more of a professional letter, but a letter, nonetheless
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Firstly, is Martin Luther King Jr.’s Letter from Birmingham Jail.
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They are the most basic components of a work. This essay will explain these three components through the writings of Martin Luther King Jr., poet Billy Collins, and writer Gloria Anzaldua
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example of Anzalduas purpose and audience is paragraph
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“i remember being caught speaking spanish
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threw out
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Throughout this letter King manages to hit all of the key elements of making a successful work of writing, giving his audience a straightforward understanding of his purpose.
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The next piece of discussion was, “Letter from Birmingham Jail” written by Martin Luther King Jr. I
do you want to insert a topic sentence to help focus the paragraph and assist your reader?
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n this short quote Collins hits each key element, showing us he understands that the audience is a “group of young strangers”. The purpose of this speech is also told in this quote, “dispensing advice”(Collins1)
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Mr. Collins understands his audience and purpose.
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This is important when meeting the appeal of your audience, allowing the reader a smooth experience when grasping your main idea.
you're on to something here: seeing a link between genre and audience. Perhaps you make more of this in your Theory of Writing section?
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Let’s break down each key term that we discussed in the first paragraph that makes a successful composition
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help you
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is a hard task to do in writing, we
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how to compose my own piece of successful writing!
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“Commencement Speech Transcript” (may 19 2008) Billy Collins “How Tame a Wild Tongue” (1987) Gloria Anzaldua “Letter from Birmingham Jail” (august 1963) Martin Luther King Jr.
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the audiences attention
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Collins’ purpose of this was to bring his contemporary poetry into the world so more people could use it during rough times.
wouldn't his purpose be to teach and inspire these young people?
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Billy Collins Commencement Address was about a depressing topic: death
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“when you suddenly find your tongue twisted and your speech stammering as you seek to explain to your six year old daughter why she can’t go to the public amusement park that has just been advertised on television, and see tears welling up in her eyes when she is told that Funtown is closed to colored children, and see ominous clouds of inferiority beginning to form in her little mental sky, and see her beginning to distort her personality by developing an unconscious bitterness toward white people;” (King 12)
a powerful passage but how does it fit your needs in this paragraph? how does it support your analysis of genre, audience, and purpose?
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Martin Luther King Jr’s “Letter from Birmingham Jail” was a letter that responded to a letter in the newspaper
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audience is anyone who has experienced alienation due to the language they speak
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Those three components will be examined with Gloria Anzaldua’s “How to Tame a Wild Tongue”, Martin Luther King Jr.’s “Letter from Birmingham Jail” and Billy Collins Commencement Address at Colorado College.
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as a whole
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Collin’s Audience are younger students
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Billy Collin “poet laureate” demonstrating illustration to be profoundly understanding through a clearer observation
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Anzaldua’s Genre is based on racism
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Anzaldúa engages the Audience in “How To Tame a Wild Tongue.” by providing and displaying different scenarios from her point of view showing her audience what it feels like to live through situations as a Chinaco
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Martin Luther King “ Letters From Birmingham Jail” the audience is the eight Clergymen we become aware of all the hardships Martin Luther King and everyone in Birmingham encounters which includes racism and slavery.
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The ability to learn from challenges you’ve experienced and motivate others, giving them a hope that there’s a better destiny even if that means facing resentment
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The authors focus on the main three key terms Genre, Audience and Purpose will be defined throughout the articles including the main idea of what makes these authors successful writers
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facing resentment.
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King, Martin Luther, Jr. “Letter from Birmingham Jail.” 16 Apr, 1963. Anzaldua, Gloria. “How to Tame a Wild Tongue”. Borderlands / La Frontera: The New Mestiza. Aunt Lute Books, 2012. Blau, Susan, and Kathryn Burak. Writing in the Works. Boston, Wadsworth/Cengage Learning, 2017 Collins, William James “Poet laureate”. The New York Public Library (1992)
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In conclusion, a thorough work of writing, always factors in the three key terms. The artistic composition characterized by a specific form, content and style. The person to whom the writer is writing and the purpose it is serving.
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When speaking he wanted every graduate to hear his message and take it in a way that would change the way they saw the world. He was asking them to see in light, the things that had been hidden from existence for so long.
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is pushing his audience to question
identify his audience more precisely? future educators? Show how he is thinking of educators in. his poems?
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Livingston opened his speech with a powerful verse, “At the time of his remarks I couldn’t read- couldn’t write. Any attempt to do so, punishable by death… we have known of knowledge’s infinite power. Yet somehow, we’ve never questioned the keeper of the keys- The guardians of information.”
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In Donovan Livingston’s speech,
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By explaining that this is something unusual for him to do it opens the door to say things that are typically left unsaid. When writing this MLK Jr. wanted to directly address the religious leaders involved in degrading him and his movement.
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n the “Letter from Birmingham Jail” by MLK Jr., his purpose
In his letter, Martin Luther King . . .
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In Billy Collins commencement address his audience is clear.
Can you insert a topic sentence that will inform you reader as to the point of the entire paragraph?
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The piece is written with the purpose of entertaining and informing
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choose from, in our situation today
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you focus
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Livingston, Donovan. “Donovan Livingston’s Student Speech.” Facebook Watch, https://www.facebook.com/HarvardEducation/videos/10153893399331387. King, Martin Luther, and Jr. “Letter From Birmingham City Jail.” CIVIL DISOBEDIENCE in Focus, https://web.cn.edu/kwheeler/documents/Letter_Birmingham_Jail.pdf. Collins, Billy. “Commencement Address .” Poet Laureate Billy Collins Gives Brilliand and Witty Commencement Address at Colorado College, 2008, https://www.graduationwisdom.com/speeches/0135-Billy-Collins-Gives-Brilliant-Witty-Commencement-Speech-Address-At-Colorado-College-2008.htm.
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The person to whom the writer is writing and the purpose it is serving.
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When you
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persuade children and even adults to embrace their culture instead of hiding form it
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Purpose.
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In my personal opinion audience is a very significant term.
I'm confused. Is this your topic sentence? If so, will the entire paragraph focus on audience? And will you be discussing all three sources in terms of audience? I see only Collins referenced. And I think I see you mention genre and purpose, too? I'd like you to work on sharpening your organization and focus, okay?
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please an audience for example, Collins Commencement speech.
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who you
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when writing
when one is writing
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connected, they all
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Genre, defined as the type of piece being written based off of style and tone.
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Genre, Audience, and purpose. Three simple words, with a much more complex meaning than the average would define.
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*revising conclusion*
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Billy Collins presented a commencement speech in 2008 for the graduating class of Colorado Colleg
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ell it was for them directly. He wanted to make his speech mean something and to be memorable to his audience
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During Donovan Livingston’s spoken word commencement address, his audience was Harvard’s graduating class of 2016
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Martin Luther King Junior is seen as an activist but he can also be seen as a writer.
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When he wrote he referred to religion by using comparisons between religion and law, the religious leaders
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Letters are a form of writing that is more direct to one person or group of people. King wrote this in the form of a letter so it would be directed towards the eight white religious leaders. H
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For example, the letter from Birmingham jail when he was sentenced for participating in a non-violent protest against segregation.
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letter from Birmingham jail
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What is the purpose of authors choosing the genre, purpose, and audience of their writing? What are they in the first place?
I can see that you are trying to set this essay up but I wonder if you might begin with statements rather than questions: For example, "Authors work hard at understanding their purpose, genre, and audience"?
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you can
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works
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you’re
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American’s
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that every day their world changes and having a diploma or education doesn’t secure you anything. They must learn how to use their knowledge to meet the needs of society because just having an education doesn’t solidify anything.
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his graduation class,
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His genre is a commencement speech
Yes: but might you also add "spoken word poetry"? Can you draw evidence to show the poetic qualities of the talk?
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King, 2019
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Disturbed
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King wanted to justify that his nonviolent campaign
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ntended for his audience to be the eight white clergymen,
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King’s genre was a freedom letter.
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The first piece of literature I will asses is Martin Luther King’s Letter to Birmingham. K
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Letter to Birmingham
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determine their purposes for writing
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A more than exceptional piece of literature,
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King, Martin Luther, Jr. “Letter from Birmingham Jail.” 16 Apr. 1963. Web. 22 Sept. 2019. Education, Harvard Graduate School. “Donovan Livingston’s Harvard Graduate School of Education Student Speech.” YouTube, YouTube, 25 May 2016, http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9XGUpKITeJM. Anzaldua, Gloria. “How to Tame a Wild Tongue”. Borderlands / La Frontera: The New Mestiza. Aunt Lute Books, 2012. Print. Blau, Susan, and Kathryn Burak. Writing in the Works. Boston, Wadsworth/Cengage Learning, 2017.
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he Future off the metaphorical table, Collins presents the idea of appreciating the present above stressing what will never arrive. That this is a time of growth and change, where once outside the regimented school courses and independent, that these students will better themselves.
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manner of doing so coming from how he’s chosen to make his address.
use the key term genre?
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A commencement address is a tradition going back many years and as such has a formula for those being paid to go on stage an
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With the sense of being apart of a group, the strength and reassurance that there are other than understand and are like you, uncertainties and isolation will begin to occur. Spanish is a highly regulated language with a book treated as sacred among purists. If a person’s dialect is not there,
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The Spanish language has been a prominent language for cultures all over the world,
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There was a complacency present in the South when it came to the matter of rights for the African Americans who were free yet bore social chains as degrading as their ancestors. Leaders of communities as the eight who wrote MLK Jr. were not acquainted with how their advice was just one contribution to the problem
Can you provide a topic sentence that points to your rhetorical analysis of the source?
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himself to Paul, “I too am compelled to carry the gospel of freedom beyond my particular hometown. Like Paul, I must constantly respond to the Macedonian call for aid. .
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hat there are just and unjust laws, the latter of which is not truly one at all (MLK Jr. , Page 3). This reference to St. Augustine shows King’s inherit grasp of how the religious leaders would know this figure and the significance of his insight. Drawing from the writings of an unchallengeable author to align with King’s explained motives makes counter argument almost impossible as well as adding credibility to the protests. King’s choice to write a letter while in jail e
focus: is this paragraph supposed to be about audience? I don't see that word used often enough in this paragraph (see earlier comment about need for topic sentence)
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At the time of 1968, the United States was a nation divided by prejudice which was at the beginning of a movement that would bring the issue into the forefront for all to face. The infancy of the Civil Rights Movement was guided most famously by the well-spoken Martin Luther King Jr., a well educated man with a background in religion. As he was in the town of Birmingham for a peaceful protest, police confronted the group, leading to MLK Jr. going to jail willingly for his part in the demonstration.
I appreciate the context but can you start your analysis earlier with a clear topic sentence?
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purpose of a piece is what the writer is intending to get across,
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is who
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To show how each source of writing utilizes the three concepts, definitions are in order.
I appreciate what you are trying to do here in terms of orienting your reader but I wonder if you might be a bit less formal (without necessarily using the first person)
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Collins, Billy. “Commencement Speech.” 19 May 2008, Colorado Springs, Colorado College. “How to Tame a Wild Tongue.” Borderlands/La Frontera, by Gloria Anzaldua, Aunt Lute Books, 1987, pp. 33–45. King Jr., Martin Luther. “Letter from Birmingham Jail.” Received by Eight white religious leaders of the South, Birmingham Jail, Aug. 1963, Birmingham, Alabama.
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How was the Intro and Conclusion? Did the transitions work or were they too vague? Is this a mess? Was there sufficient analysis or too much summarizing?
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if you
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was telling the graduates to live in the present and compose your life of moments
Are you confusing purpose with message?
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xpressed the fact that Jesus was an extremist of love and Amos an extremist of justice
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speaks to her natives
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It was his response to a public statement of concern and caution issued by eight white religious leaders of the South”
yes: but can you quote from the letter itself to show that King is mindful of his audience?
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intended audience were the eight-white religious’ leaders of the South.
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is intended for.
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audience is for whom
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could be seen as many genres due to the fact that she starts the writing with a story, then continues talking about her life, and writes in an essay format.
can you provide evidence from the source?
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because it could be seen as a memoir, a personal narrative, and an essay
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Martin Luther King Jr.’s piece, his writing
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a speech
a commencement speech? try to be more precise, okay?
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First, the genre is the category of a composition.
This opening seems abrupt to me. Might you define the terms in a separate paragraph?
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The three key points that will be discussed for each writing will be genre, audience, and purpose. These terms will be defined within each writing piece and how the pieces differ from each other, or how they may be similar.
This is a helpful introduction.
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Source Citations
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being a speech
it is also a spoken word poem: what evidence in terms of style do we have for this?
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Donovan Livingston’s’ commencement address “Lift Off”, is a speech that was given to graduates from Harvard’s Graduate school of Education. T
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deliver his core message, which is to seize the day, to the students.
I think you forgot to consider Collins' purpose?
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the Graduates
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Billy Collins’ commencement address to Colorado college is effective in delivering a message to his audience.
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The purpose of King’s letter was to convince the clergymen to stop waiting, to act now, and that peaceful protest is the best way to cause change.
yes: the purpose is to inform/persuade but you are confusing purpose with message at the end of this sentence--be more precise, okay?
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As a result, King uses many religious references throughout his letter because he knows that a religious argument will work particularly well on the clergymen because of their knowledge of, and devotion to faith. For example, the clergymen said that peaceful protest will cause violence in response Martin Luther King states “Isn’t this like condemning Jesus because His unique God consciousness and never-ceasing devotion to His will precipitated the evil act of crucifixion?” (King pg. 3).
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a specific audience that he’s writing too
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ll three efficiently and effectively use genre to deliver a message to their audience and ultimately achieve their purpose.
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purpose, the goal of the writing
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How does the audience pertain to the genre, of course if you don’t categorize literature, movies and entertainment you don’t know what to expect and then the ‘audience’ will not be drawn into the piece of writing.
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I felt like the analogy was comparing the matter as to our lives and the particles as moments from your past, a
is this metaphor suggestive of poetry? Does poetry enter in this speech?
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Collins ‘purpose’ was to encourage and motivate
Collins' "purpose" Good observation
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Graduation speeches can be motivating and inspirational.
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”Love your enemies, bless them that curse you pray for them that despitefully use you. Was not Paul an extremist for the gospel of Jesus Christ?” “Was not Martin Luther King an extremist?”(pg.4
might you move this earlier when discussing audience?
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he genre of this writing is a letter in response to the eight religious leaders that wrote to him firs
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Martin Luther King Jr. is one of the most influential people of the twentieth century, even though he was assassinated.
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This sentence revealed the ‘purpose’ to me because it entailed nationality, racism and discrimination
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The ‘audience’ that
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this is a memoir/autobiography.
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Gloria explains
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Gloria Anzaldua’s “How To Tame A Wild Tongue” is a chapter in her book published in 1987 ‘Borderlands/la Frontera’.
please substitute with a true topic sentence: insert key terms?
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The ‘purpose’ is what or who the author is writing about.
not really: please make a distinction between purpose and message
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clear, what you want
edit for punctuation why the shift to "you"?
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When a Writer sits down to write, they need to consider what they want to communicate and to whom. This falls under the rhetorical situation which includes choices about genre, purpose, and audience. I will be explaining the meaning and importance of these three important guidelines writers use. I will also analyze three authors and how they used these terms in their writing and show examples from their own words too. First author will be Gloria Anzaldua’s memoir, “How To Tame A Wild Tongue”. Second author will be Martin Luther King Jr.’s, letter from Birmingham Alabama Jail and, lastly Billy Collin’s commencement address.
a useful introduction--thanks
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there wouldn’t be a systematic flow of words to be understood.
no post write?
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Notes Gloria Anzaldua “How To Tame A Wild Tongue” 1987 published book ‘Borderlands/la Frontera Martin Luther King Jr ‘Birmingham Alabama Jail Letter’ written August 1963 Billy Collins Colorado State College commencement address May 19 2008
Not in MLA format
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myveryspecialblog.edublogs.org myveryspecialblog.edublogs.org
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Of which, his commencement speech was not conventional.
fragment
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Collins writing
Collins'
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Unlike both, King and Anzalduas having large obstacles in their path in regards of issues, such as inequality, Billy Collins did not have a writing similar to theirs.
not really sure what this is saying
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What Anzalduas is doing is reinforcing the purpose to have people keep on using their native language.
I think you confuse purpose with message: please be precise
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That position would be for people who went through or are currently going through being forced
good: Chicanos?
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is because throughout the writing Anzaldua provides us first hand experiences to inform us, the reader, of what’s happening along the Mexican/Texan border
I don't follow the logic: might it be a memoir/autobiography?
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Just as King was able to get his message across about inequality and the injustice that was happening, Anzaldua also did a fantastic job of getting her message across in her book,
I appreciate the effort at transition
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Even though King has done nothing but be a promoter of peace, he was compared to being an extremist. In response King states “Was not Jesus an extremist in love?”(4) He does a great job writing that because not only is Jesus a religious figure, he is also a figure of peace
move earlier when discussing audience?
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wants to justify his approach
okay: good--evidence?
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When it comes to Kings letter, his purpose
transition?
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