question what are the reasons they are shutting down?

o question why are malls

are Malls

Work Cited

Questions when drafting my paper: How is my work Cited page? How are my transitions, are they flowing from one paragraph to the next? Did I stay on topic or did I go off topic a little bit? Did I introduce my paper with some good hypothesis? Did I introduce my sources? Did I paraphrase my quotes well?

On my 2nd draft I decided to delete the paragraphs for redevelopment because I believe that did not relate to my question on why malls are closing

peoples perception

Ashley Graham a model, and activist who was first identified by a “plus-size model.” A

Maybe your flaws are your best asset. Appreciate your body for what it can do and respect what it can’t. Instead of concentrating on weight loss, set healthy positive goals. Recognize what is realistic, and  attainable achievements. Admire the beauty of others and avoid comparing yourself.

Rejection from how they perceive themselves

dissatisfied People

others point

2-3 years old , through pretend

Your body image

body, affective is how you feel about your body, cognitive is how you think about your body, behavioral is the way you behave as a result of these aspects. (McShirley)

perceptual is how

You can’t, everyone’s physiology is their own unique body image.

Burmeister, Kristin.“What Influences Body Image?” Melainie Rogers January 17, 2019

Graham, Ashley. “Plus-size? More like my size”. Ashley Graham·TEDxBerkleeValencia April 2015

Field, A. E., Sonneville, K. R., Micali, N., Crosby, R. D., Swanson, S. A., Laird, N. M., … Horton, N. J. (2012). Prospective association of common eating disorders and adverse outcomes. Pediatrics, 130 (2), e289 – e295. https://www.bristolcc.edu:2242/10.1542/peds.2011-3663

positives and struggles

lot of my sites

research essays before but not in a rhetorical question.

there is positive side effects

might, or might not be greatly noticed.

Robert Shmerling a MD from Harvard says

On the TED media website, Suchitra Krishnan gives a speech/lecture,

the number of vaping related illnesses has increased to 1300 cases in 49 states, 70% being male, 80% being younger than 35 years old, and that half were younger than 25.

makes me

Vaping also known as e-cigarettes is

ora Jones from BBC News says, the number of people vaping has been increasing very quickly, and the number of people vaping in 2011 was only seven million, the numbers have jumped quickly though, to 41 million in 2018

“Common e-cigarette components include an aerosol generator, a flow sensor, a battery and a nicotine containing solution storage area. e-cigarettes currently include many interchangeable parts, enabling users to modify the character of the delivered aerosol and, therefore, the product’s ‘effectiveness’ as a nicotine delivery product,” (Brown, Cheng).

e-liquid juice known as propylene glycol or vegetable glycerin oil, which is all assembled in the tank.

works is by heating the coil, it then va

most of all the cases were because of the black market THC e-juice, because they are putting vitamin e, pesticides and other harmful ingredients in the e-juice, which is causing these deaths and lung disease” (Vidinha).

their not knowledgeable

and a half

I conducted interview with my uncle Flavio Vidinh

gests that e-cigarettes might be less harmful than cigarettes when people who regularly smoke switch to them as a complete replacement (Brazier).”

to NIDA,

that you

are body’s,

Electronic cigarettes known as e-cigs that produce vapor which allows smokers to avoid all the damage that tobacco does, but is this really a safer alternative to smoking.

But wait no more as technology has progressed there is now a better alternative, electronic cigarettes.

What Are The Consequences Of Vaping?

Works Cited

which might be better or no

This answers my own question of, yes I do think CBD oil roll on’s help to reduce physical and mental pain.

has studies that prove, that

few cons

There still needs to be more research done on this product, to see  long term data

Spondylitis, this is a type

I interviewed my cousin Kate

which is,

, etc.

and the article was called, “Does CBD oil work for chronic pain management?” Johnson published this on July 29th, 2018.

I found two peer reviewed sources and two academic sources, I also put them in MLA format on my citation page

etc

roll on’s

does roll on CBD oil products, really help decrease physical pain or is it just in your head?

in your head

Sources:

the State

kyphosis scoliosis

The boys parents

first hand

f these children, they developed

Wollin shared her personal experience, she recalls

attachment disorders were discussed

states that it is caused by a connection between a child and a parent is broken whether it be that they were neglected or abused

the topic of foster care and adoption is said to be linked to attachment disorders.

staring

hand in hand

that children in unfit environmental conditions then they are more likely to end up with an attachment disorder.

the research also revealed that it was most common in boys

They discovered that “each genetic factor influencing human behavior is presumed to contribute only a small amount” (Minnis).

Helen Minnis conducted research to investigate the causes of attachment disorders in children.

resulting in attachment disorder. 

There are children

There are many aspects to the deveopement of an attachment disorder, there are different theories to the main cause of attachment disorders from experienced and educated individuals. 

deveopement

describes

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rsRsmEDuqy8   https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C-ZIUtJr8nE (TedTalk)   https://docs.google.com/document/d/1R4RJojKHQn2PqfBZc1XSYrd0WisqQ_-6g9V1O3sb6Tc/edit (Interview With A Previous Foster Parent) 

It was difficult to be unbiased and censor the opinion making aspect 

because of the searching of sources in databases and across social media. 

“The question why do we stress?” may never be able to be answered because it varies depending on the person.

stressed, it’s very important

Every person has different ways of dealing with it, but some ways are exercise, meditating, trying to say positive, going out with friends, and many more ways. Eating healthy and working out often also helps create a more positive lifestyle and keep some of the stress away. Also, one of the most important things is to make sure you’re getting enough sleep. Without enough sleep your body must exert itself to pay attention which in turn causes more stress.

3 different kinds of stress,

as ranged

The cause and effects

Also known as fight or flight reaction.

bodies was

is your

that is the definition of stress.

(Google

Works cited

Buzz, Lifestyle. “4 Self-Care Tips ForFirst-Year Students.” BuzzFeed Community, BuzzFeed, 13 Oct. 2019, www.buzzfeed.com/arielleduke/4-self-care-tips-for-first-year-students-2iizc

Andersen-Parrado, Patricia. “An understanding of stress and its causes + homeopathy can spell relief.” Better Nutrition, Oct. 1997, p. 18. Health & Wellness Resource Center, http://link.galegroup.com/apps/doc/A19846973/HWRC?u=mlin_s_bristcc&sid=HWRC&xid=3818d0cf. Accessed 15 October 2019.

through a certain criterion

According to studies, “…trait mindfulness may benefit job satisfaction, performance, and interpersonal relations, while also reducing burnout and work withdrawal. Meta-analytic regressions also suggest trait mindfulness adds incremental predictive variance over more traditional predictors of employee burnout and work performance (Mesmer-Magnus, Jessica, Human Performance. Apr-Aug2017).”

In Nicholas Carr’s Is Google Making Us Stupid? He

that as educators, you’re

classmates, they called

in the 2014 vol. Of New Directions for Youth Development,

The way we as educators, teach

school age

Mindfulness: How does it affect others? 

“> Five Facet Mindfulness Questionnaire FFMQ – observing, describing, acting with awareness, non-judging, and non-reactivity  > Kentucky Inventory of Mindfulness Skills KIMS – observe, describe, act with awareness, and non-reactive stance, based on FFMQ  >Cognitive and Affective Mindfulness Scale CAM-S – based on four facets (attention, present focus, awareness, and acceptance), each represented by three items (12 in total). The items are rated on a 4-point Likert scale from 1 (Rarely/Not at all) to 4 (Almost Always)  >The Big Five Inventory – selected as a measure of the FFM. Forty-four brief descriptive items are responded to on a 5-point scale, ranging from 1 (disagree strongly) to 5 (agree strongly). Internal reliabilities were 0.85 for Neuroticism, 0.85 for Extraversion, 0.81 for Openness, 0.71 for Agreeableness, and 0.79 for Conscientiousness.  > Mindful attention awareness scale MAAS – focuses exclusively on attentional aspects of mindfulness, whereas other scales also incorporate emotional aspects. Fifteen items are responded to on a 6-point Likert scale ranging from 1 (Almost Always) to 6 (Almost Never). (Vago, David R., Measures of Mindfulness)” 

Measuring Mindfulness 

whereas modern scientists’ research revolves around trait mindfulness, which refers to a person’s baseline or average mindfulness

Buddhist teachings have always been specific to the present in the sense that they focus on letting go, focusing on now, and bettering yourself.

(Andres Fossas, The Basics Of Mindfulness.)’

term mindful

oots bac

You can’t quite

as the practice of maintaining a nonjudgmental state of heightened or complete awareness of one’s thoughts, emotions, or experiences on a moment-to-moment basis.

mindful

you could

within psychologists.

What is it? 

 SOURCES  Fossas, Andres – The Basics of Mindfulness: Where Did it Come From?  https://welldoing.org/article/basics-of-mindfulness-come-from   

pathos, ethos, and logos

the more I learned, the more questions I had and that hasn’t happened before with any papers I’ve done in school. 

I have managed to interview a list of scientists

Leaving it outside of an empty shore of ocean water, and waiting to see it fade away.

Outcomes that could be harmful to the global climate, spark a fallout, or crumble our planet apart.

Taking the idea of preventing hurricanes to the next level

it could reveal us the solution of launching missiles at hurricanes.

that the weather can elude us in our endless human quest to control everything.

I went with bombing the storm as the first top tier solution according to public opinion.

working around towards

(Barnett 2017).

An article poster for National Geographic (2017) named merely as “Cynthia Barnett” is requested to putting their own scientific research and skills in geoengineering to the ultimate test

have for my interview

Since we have everything about the formation of a hurricane,

Nordahl)

For my hypothesis, an idea I have for preventing hurricanes is by decreasing the temperature inside of warm ocean waters.

If I want to get a close up at the hidden logic of hurricanes, we

his affection

For people who are living near the event of a storm are barricading their house or moving somewhere safe.

o start off my essay, I will be asking the question about hurricanes and how to prevent them from ever forming.

Hollingsæter. (2017). [Interview with Aidan Nordahl, author of Hurricane Prevention]. Personal interview.

Georgiou, Aristos, et al. “Scientists Are Devising a Radical Plan to Stop Hurricanes by Blowing Bubbles into the Sea.” Tech & Science, Newsweek, 21 Mar. 2018, https://www.newsweek.com/scientists-are-planning-stop-hurricanes-their-tracks-blowing-air-bubbles-sea-855623.

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Another question that I feel inquisitive about is any thoughts about placing a border wall across beaches in the U.S., Cuba, and in the Bahamas. Would it be possible if the wall is resistant to future hurricanes, even the ones that fall under a Category 5 storm? If the wall was placed on the beach, would it be fine to have steel doors built into the wall so that people can enter and exit any beach with no trouble?

Another point is that my audience mostly consists of scientific engineers and weather enthusiasts since their interest relates to my order of business with preventing hurricanes.

nerve give up

did not remembered

when a litter son

but to eight white religious leaders who were on opposite side of him

Martin Luther King’s Letter from Birmingham Jail.

Welcome to our second stop

Just like her say:

her pass experience

is Gloria Anzaldúa’s “How to Tame a Wild Tongue”.

Such as, the people were living between Mexico and Texas of the United State; the people were raising by  two or more type of cultures; the people were discriminated by accents, culture, language or gender

helped her

Because her knows

Our first stop

First key-genre i

I want to show you

How to Tame a Wild Tongue, Martin Luther King’s Letter from Birmingham Jail,

your three

it must has

give you

Blau, Susan, and Kathryn Burak. Writing in the Works. Wadsworth/Cengage Learning, 2017. pp.2-3. Anzaldúa Gloria. How to Tame a Wild Tongue. Borderlands / La Frontera: The New Mestiza, by Anzaldúa Gloria, Aunt Lute Books, 1987.pp. 53-64. King, Martin Luther. “Letter from Birmingham Jail.” Aug. 1963. Web. 21 Sept. 2019. Collins Bill. Commencement Speech. Colorado College. 19 May 2008. https://www.graduationwisdom.com/speeches/0135-Billy-Collins-Gives-Brilliant-Witty-Commencement-Speech-Address-At-Colorado-College-2008.htm Accessed 2 October 2013

Anzaldua’s memoir’s purpose is that language unites people and should not be changed

purpose is that peaceful protest is the most effective way of achieving a goal

Whether it is to speak up for injustice, inspire others or challenge an idea that one language is better than another.

She even addresses her fellow hispanic population

he also uses religious rhetoric.

white clergy men

or whom the composition is meant for. I

genre of her piece is a memoir

she is addressing any English speaker who shamed her for speaking her language

He is telling his students to live one day at a time, instead of reflecting on the past or looking t

Collin’s speech is a piece of writing

The genre of a piece When focusing on genre, it is important to know what the genre is as it contributes to the message greatly

In his eloquent speech, Collin’s used humor to engage

whitney’s

When focusing on a specific example of a piece of writing in which I will examine in order to give an example to these three key terms.

When looking at a piece of writing or literature, there is always a genre that can summarize the work.

Works Cited King, Martin Luther. Letter from the Birmingham Jail. San Francisco: Harper San Francisco, 1994. https://www.graduationwisdom.com/speeches/0135-Billy-Collins-Gives-Brilliant-Witty-Commencement-Speech-Address-At-Colorado-College-2008.htm Anzaldua, Gloria. How to Tame a Wild Tongue. www.everettsd.org/cms/lib07/WA01920133/Centricity/Domain/965/Anzaldua-Wild-Tongue.pdf.

one day at a time.

Martin Luther King Jr. wrote on business note pads while in jail;

ight white men

Impact… not much in modern history has had similar impact as the words of Martin Luther King Jr., his Letter from Birmingham Jail being a noteworthy example

addresses educators directly,

ide audience of similarly-raised people – those born in-between. Between cultures, between languages, between geographies, and between generations

Finally, in respect to written genre choice, Martin Luther King Jr. had none. Being imprisoned unjustly for non-violent demonstration,

By writing from the first person perspective, and doing so in an informative yet persuasive manner, Anzaldúa’s personal essay

I would like to take a moment to discuss Genre,

Each of these are from different periods, have different genres, different purposes, different audiences, and all are powerful and effective in accomplishing the goals of the creator.

the purpose is what prompted the author to do the writing.

Sources: Anzaldúa Gloria. “How to Tame a Wild Tongue.” Borderlands / La Frontera: the New Mestiza, by Anzaldúa Gloria, Aunt Lute Books, 2012, pp. 33–45. Blau, Susan, and Kathryn Burak. Writing in the Works. Wadsworth/Cengage Learning, 2017. King, Martin Luther. “Letter from Birmingham Jail.” Aug. 1963. Web. 21 Sept. 2019. Livingston, D. (2016). Lift Off. Available at: https://www.gse.harvard.edu/news/16/05/lift [Accessed 21 September 2019]. “What Is the Dream Act and Who Are the Dreamers?” Anti-Defamation League, 2019, https://www.adl.org/education/educator-resources/lesson-plans/what-is-the-dream-act-and-who- are-the-dreamers

The audience that she was trying to reach was anyon

Anzaldua’s genre is the genre that deals with political and cultural differences

This explains his purpose of showing that the students should take every advantage they can.

He uses wit and self-deprecating humor to keep his audience engaged