CEUs
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n methods of a poster with our findings, as well as a Zoom presentation where we walked the class through our process.
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At Encompass Health, they use a documentation program that while lengthy, it helps gather all
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Encompass Health used a lengthy documentation program that helped me gather....etc.
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seen that
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hen you place something of value onto one's treatment, their participation increases.
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It also became a great activity to write out grandkids names and send them a picture for my older adult
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e suction toys
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t was a great activity for kids to learn how their letters
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patient was getting
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There are many different diagnoses that come in and out of the therapy gym each day
Nope. People come in an out. Change to person-first language! You were treating people, not diagnoses!
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was a bundle of nerve
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(IRF),
unnecessary since you don't use the acronym again. Only place the abbreviation in parentheses if you plan to use it going forward, otherwise, just spell it out.
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As I mentioned,
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ollaborate with
discuss? talk about? debate? converse?
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One of the more beneficial workshops I had the opportunity to be apart of were Journal Club Meetings.
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Participating in Journal Club meetings was beneficial to me as a student.
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It was
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cond reason being that if they are unable to interpret their instructions, it could affect their dignity which is a core value in the AOTA Code of E
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One reason being that if they can't read or understand the instructions, this could put them at risk at home for safety.
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means that my patient needs to be able to und
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helps you underst
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pediatric caseload
a caseload of pediatric patients--after all, you were treating the patients, not the caseload.
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treat a full case load
you were treating people on your caseload, you weren't treating the caseload.
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and do so
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(PEO)
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it
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it was always
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fluctuate from
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pull suction toy
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Covid
See this website for the correct way to reference the pandemic virus
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cally.
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I'm so thankful to be in a position where I can make efforts to help those who aren't able to help themselves just yet.
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post d
this is jargon. Perhaps--life after discharge
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he
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exponentially better than he was
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t's like you hear of this existing, but it was if I didn't believe it.
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profi
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mind.
? mine? If so, reword--advocating for others is my passion
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ttle
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nd hope
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the increase in determination
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could do it.
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e pretended to be our own superhero, saving the day as we propelled ourselves on the scooter boards and flew across the trampoline for proprioceptive and vestibular inpu
who is "we"? Are you referring to you and your FWE, or to the child? Please clarify
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no matter what you have to do to get there.
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Pinteresting
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disorders
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two (see APA for guidelines about using numerals or words)
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courses
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knew
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couldn't
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did swing
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here's a time and a place for it all, but whatever you need to do to avoid spilt milk is always the best method in my book.
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you too have success
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you see
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evel II fieldwork is when you really start to see a difference in your abilities and therefore your confidence.
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these things
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mpleted.
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ADLs
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onversation piece
conversations
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want to
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l and a
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ven minima
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I think this question is speaking to feedback from a professor or fieldwork educator, but
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I was presented with several scenarios in learning from my fieldwork educator that weren't exactly the type of model that I learn best from
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this
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Creating rapport upfront leads to your patient cooperating and participating in the plan of care you create.
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worked every time.
Love this! See previous comment about the photo and make sure that anyone reading your website knows they were taken and posted with permission.
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all was
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determine their emotion
each of their emotions
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contained pages
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at home.
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involved patient
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sfers.
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this
what is "this" referring to?
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getting to
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make therapy play
turn therapy into play
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and
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t Frozen
for someone reading this who is unfamiliar with the movie, perhaps you can rephrase, 'my 90-year old patients were much less about the movie Frozen and much more...
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Fabulous reflection. Alex, what is the image below? Does it relate to this criteria? If so, please provide a brief synopsis to the reader.
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rehab.
So wonderful that you got to collaborate with a dietitian.
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this
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influences were involved i
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ofession itself.
This is such a beautiful reflection, Alex. Makes my heart swell with pride and gratitude.
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acronym=spell out in the first instance, and if you intend to use going forward, place in parentheses.
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I needed to be confident in how the activities I chose were addressing the child's goals to discuss this with the parent.
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ay.
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to efficiently complete
on efficiently completing
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discussed this
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eviewing
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During one session within a busy day
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tay
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For the group members' growth, asking follow up questions and providing comments on their sharing allowed them to further reflect and develop necessary skills to utilize in their recovery and post-discharge
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12 weeks
12 week rotation
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at inpatient psychiatric
at an inpatient psychiatric facility
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day
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ement.
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helps to
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described below
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and how
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Mr. J diligently took notes throughout my groups on things I discussed and what other group members shared.
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The example used above
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The image above is a screenshot from a blog post in which I discussed the impact of leisure activities on the overall mood of two patients. Etc. Etc. Etc.
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they can use similar activitie
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Great pictures, so wonderful to see your smiling shining face!
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find joy in finding
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under- and uninsured
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I begin my Level II Fieldwork experiences.
Perhaps this sentence needs to be removed since this is no longer relevant, it is in the past.
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don't use any acronyms before you have spelled them out first, then placed in parentheses--only if you intend to use the acronym going forward on this page. Acronyms should be written out on each page at the first instance used followed by parentheses but only if the acronym will be used again on the page.
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second
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B.S.
Bachelor of Science
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benefit.
Very thoughtful post!
You are correct--you weren't in the room during the evaluation, and there could have been other effects of medication, delirium, weakness, disorientation, post-surgery anesthesia, etc. which might have explained the lower scores compared to the following day.
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