that relate wit
relevant to the setting in which I choose to work.
4,682 Matching Annotations
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y therapeutic use of self
my ability to be therapeutic as a future occupational therapist.
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my
me
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myself
me
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student
this is confusing--a student in the classroom? or an SLP student?
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went
came
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first-year speech language pathology (SLP).
this does not make sense
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es
past tense
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when I worked in the intensive care unit (ICU)
Put this at the beginning of the sentence followed by a comma
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was able to use
used
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ply occup
does not make sense. Do you mean that you applied the domain of OT?
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nt info. –
Nice work
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with
when
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nt
one or several?
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providing assessments to
assessing
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grow my clinical expertise
become better at administering standardized assessments.
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tients
What is the image below? Provide a synopsis
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mobilization early
reverse order
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t a
plural
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mobility rat
is this accurate? does it decrease mobility rate?
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that there was
about
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alongside
and
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was able to educate
educated
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even if they were on the vent
delete--you already stated they were on ventilators
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for our patients to the doctors
to advocate to the doctors on behalf of our patients to decrease or discontinue sedation so that we could mobilize them.
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pis
plural
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was able to explain
explained
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I would explain what happened during our zoom sessions.
This sentence seems misplaced, disconnected to the rest, and unnecessary.
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your
my
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you
I
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is
will never be
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o do things in the future like this program
to participate in programs like these
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well as
as well as improve
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to grow my
to meet new people
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of health on infants children, and adolescents with disabilities.
Please rephrase, this doesn't make sense
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LEND
Describe what this stands for
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I had great clinical instructors and looked up to both of them as role models throughout my rotations.
You previously stated this
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ring my evaluation as evidence of how I upheld ethics in practice.
this looks like it is part of a different sentence
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Lexie has a great foundation for the code of ethics and federal etc regulations. She adheres to all of these and asks questions when she has them regarding. –
Is this accurate? It appears cut off
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d w
the Code of Ethics
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This is a skill that
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feel like
know that
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code of ethics
Capitalize
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their
the patient if they wanted their guest to stay or leave the room
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would see
saw
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is
past tense
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do
past tense
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tha
when
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are
past tense
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as much as you can
delete--there should be no limit on respecting privacy--"as much as you can" implies there's a limit to the amount of respect you can give someone.
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spect
past tense
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a skill
it is not a skill, rather, a commitment to a code of conduct.
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hese rule
which rules? The Code of Ethics is a set of values.
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important skill
This is not a skill
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my
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have built
built
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well
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nd se
in this
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by the end of my rotation
Place this at the beginning of the sentence
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different age populations, diagnosis,
people of different ages, diagnoses, cultures...
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you
we
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o
singular or plural?
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was able to use some of my
used some of the
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wel
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by the time I finished my fieldwork rotations
Begin the sentence with this clause
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r
plural
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was able to feel
felt
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elay the information clearly for the parents
able to clearly relay the information to the parents.
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It was my responsibility to discuss the progress and goals for their child during occupational therapy services
It was my responsibility to discuss how occupational therapy services related to their child's goals.
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’s
grammar
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.
remove period before quotation marks
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hologist
plural
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be able to grow my knowledge in each field
so that I could learn from them
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that I had to interact with
with whom I interacted
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t
plural
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t,
discussion post below,
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to help grow and develop my own knowledge for occupational therapy.
I don't understand this last part of the sentence. Perhaps start a new sentence: It helped me deepen my appreciation for OT (or ST). Not sure what you meant so just throwing out a suggestion.
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to benefit both occupational therapy and speech therapy
to benefit therapy, or benefit the patient? Or lead to better outcomes for the student?
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are
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myself
me
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st t
plural
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School Bas
remove capitalization school-based needs a hyphen
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at t
What is the image below? Please provide a brief synopsis.
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serve
Lovely
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I showed what all he could now
rather rephrase to show what the patient could do, rather than what you did (since he is the one who did the work)
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plan
level
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have not been
had not been
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one
spelling
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CI
acronym alert
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this patient during rounds
was he there? Were you reviewing the patient, or reviewing the information?
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MVC
spell out
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one of our patients
a patient
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During rounds
Since you are referring to a specific case, write, During one of our rounds
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N
remove capitalization, and perhaps write neurologists
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T
no capitalization
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and what their goals were
delete, otherwise it sounds as though they didn't know what their goals were to begin with, which negates a client-centered plan of care.
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herapeutic relationships better
better therapeutic relationships
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using
did you use or consider client factors?
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out
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was able to talk
talked
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what evaluations
of the appropriate assessments and interventions I needed to perform.
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hat would be more appropriate than others
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that
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r goa
Lovely
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was able to create
created
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t,
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was able to gain
gained
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st
singular or plural?
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they
students
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g
singular or plural?
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tion
Is the image below related to this criterion? If so, please provide a brief synopsis in the narrative.
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By developing a long-term plan, it helped him understand the importance of preventing another injury to his abdomen
Rephrase, this doesn't make sense
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he had
remove words
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was able to
listened
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promote health and prevention
what is health and prevention? Please clarify or use different words.
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d a
is a skill
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diverse
well-versed
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I worked with the parents to develop an Individualized Education Plan (IEP) and get permission to evaluate their child
Reorder--didn't you first get permission to evaluate before developing the plan?
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was able to provide
provided
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peech Language Pathologist (SLP), Physical Therapist
remove capitalization in written words (not abbreviations)
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ith
one or many? if singular, use the word "a"; if plural, then specify speech language pathologists, physical therapists, etc.
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Nice
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to integrate it into our practice.
unnecessary part of the sentence--doesn't make sense here
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We would integrate sessions that pertained to what they wanted to be able to do once they left the hospital.
Rephrase. Perhaps, we would focus our treatments on...
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through their own language
reposition in sentence
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plain
in their language
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slate.
FYI (you didn't do anything wrong--this is just FYI) the law requires a translator be present in person or via phone (i.e., a real person, not an app). It is possible your CI didn't know.
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g
capitalize
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1. Appr
See my comment on the page labeled Professional Development
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ent
See if you can eliminate this as a web page and rather use the heading as a menu item for the four pages under this heading--otherwise there's nothing here to see
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second
Reframe in the past tense.....by the time you send this to a potential employer, you will have graduated.
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ome!!
This is wonderful. I think you can combine this page with the About Me page to make the portfolio a little more concise, but you don't have to.
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second y
third
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7 4 7
Not sure you need the "Contact" page at the end--it's a fillable form and you've already provided the information here.
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EA L L I S O N . N A N C E @ I C L O U D . C O M
Very impressive!
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oner.
Please use an example to explain how.
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A, 1993
Place reference at the end of this paragraph.
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ted
So proud of you!
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Microaggressions and implicit biases within the professional setting.
see previous comment
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among
among or within?
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a
spelling
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TSU
acronym alert
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s
comma
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have
I
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He also had poor coping strategies when it came to losing a game or trouble completing a task.
Rephrase: the end clause is misplaced
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w. I
spelling
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IG
spell it out
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e asked
I can't help feeling nosy about the outcome: did she indeed have conversion disorder? Was she able to get any better?
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ROM
Acronym--please spell out or make sure it is already spelled out previously
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senting
Great example, great reflection.
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COTAD
spell it out
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d, and giv
Can you give a specific example from your FW experiences?
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ed.
I can only imagine....it's such a tough start to the program! But you did it!
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ty
WOW!! How come I didn't know any of this? Mazel tov. I am so proud of you!
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weakness
singular or plural?
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an
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pic.
showing how I improved....etc.
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as well.
Great reflection. I really am enjoying reading this portfolio.
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I
the more I was...
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pi
briefly describe what is included
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ry
This is a great reflection
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e.
So proud of you!
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Microaggressions and implicit biases within the professional setting
Capitalize each word in a title
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CEU
acronym
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h.
Stellar!
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nt
see previous comment
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BSC
acronym
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te
past tense
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eel relaxed and provide encouragement
change order
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moderate complexity patients
person-first language
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DME
acronym--has this been previously spelled out?
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ADLs for
unnecessary
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Once there is an order for an OT evaluation, I visit patients to
Use past tense
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ROM and MMT
If not previously spelled out, please do so
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occasionally I would have the opportunity to do a treatment with that patient/client
not sure what you mean--you had enough time left over after the evaluation to perform treatment? Otherwise I don't understand. Please clarify
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n
plural
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tmeal!
This is a great example.
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rapy
should this be plural, therapies?
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My CI had a sensory integration certification and working with the kiddos in the clinic, I desired more training in that area.
Rephrase
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opic.
Please provide synopsis.
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means, the
resulted in the children having
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become integrated, many of the problems we saw in children become resol
past tense
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MORO, ANTR, TLR,
Moro reflex is named for the person who first described it, and therefore is a proper noun. The others are acronyms--please spell out. Please correct Moro in the remainder of this section.
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vidence-based practice was utilized in the outpatient pediatric setting where I completed my Level II fieldwork through a major focus on evaluation of primitive reflexes and creating intervention treatments designed to facilitate the integration of primitive reflexes in young children.
This is a very long sentence--can you break it up?
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PEDS
is this an acronym? or abbreviation? please clarify
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have
remove the word--the portfolio should be presented in past tense. By the time you show it to a potential employer, all of the events will have taken place in the past and you will no longer be a student.
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sion
Please provide an example. It's not good enough to state that you met the standard; you have to specify how you met it.
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—Dennis Prager
Is this a quote? If so, place in quotation marks.
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opic.
Provide a synopsis--see previous comment regarding use of images with text.
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care.
This is wonderful
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CU and CVICU
Please spell out acronyms.
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ssion
This is a broad generalization--can you provide a specific example?
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nd languag
Please provide an example of how you met this standard.
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ol. 74
Where will I find these references located on your website? Perhaps include them at the bottom of the section, before the next item.
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It is easy to disregard some patients as complainers, but when our goal is to address the whole person, I believe I did that by advocating for his meals to be adjusted so that he could heal and move on to the next level of care.
This sentence needs to be revised--the last part doesn't make sense.
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several many
choose one
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efor
You write so well
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OT
acronym alert! Spell it out the first time followed by parentheses
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IV
spell it out
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commands
not sure I understand what you meant--barriers?
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